Music making thread

I don't know music enough to provide any detailed feedback but I like your stuff.

Sounds good, man. Keep up the good work!

Oregenamen.

k, first of all, this shit goes in /mu/.
secondly, don't just make a new thread in /mu/ because it'll only get deleted anyway. go to the soundcloud general thread and post it there. there, you'll be able to get honest feedback from people who also make music.

thirdly, I hate to say it but the track is bad. sorry.

>>34719938
>thirdly, I hate to say it but the track is bad. sorry.
scratch that. I was listening to the wrong track. listening to thermal imaging bath now...

>>34719945
nope, still sucks. very bad/muddy mixing. it seems like there's a total lack of consistency -- it seems like you were just aimlessly building a track and didn't really seem to know where to go with it and this just kind of happened.

just kind of an unfocused mess generally. idk if the Radiohead sample helps much, either.

I like your use of effects though. lots of attention to detail there.