My first work, rate it

>>15153346

Way better than my first work!

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I like it. I'd say an 8/10. Looks a little thick tho. Could you try this one?

I dont have time now because I am amateur and need some time but you can contact me on mail
[email protected]

dont worry she is over 18 :)

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How about her?

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I'd say a solid 9/10.
Could you try it on her?

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7.5/10
If you want to practice can you do her?

Contact me on mail
[email protected]
and see if pictures can be without efects and as better as posibile.

>>15153346
Needs a lot more transparency, it'll look more convincing

>>15153346
3/10
you have a long way to go