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About a distopic story of a brilliant person that discovers interdimentional travel to pkmn world. But had genocidal and cruel tendences in order of science.
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Why did this science require genocidal and cruel tendencies
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>No named test subject in non-descript lab
>You are guinnipig for tons of weird expirements
>One of them makes you (Insert personallity here)
>A few tests later (possibly gaining or losing status effects along the way
>Every other subject has been vaporized
>We have used up this subject throw him/her in the thing
>Perfect configuration after tons of testing so you dont die
>Your "Happy place" through all the tests was when you were young playing (insert game here)
>The thing scans your head
>It creates said dimension based from the memory you had of (game)
>Boom you are in (game )now with a valid reason for being cruel and twisted in the head
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>>931279
>One of the tests make you "brilliant"

I didn't read that part
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>>931279

Grim + Pokemon sounds like a recipe for sadness. However, even if it weren't for that, cruelty and ruin has to have a specific aim, or else the story quickly devolves into nonsense. My suggestion, take a long step back, and think about what greater goal you can dangle in front of the MC to push them into taking a meaningful journey.
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>>931279
1, did you need help, or did you need someone to write the whole story for you?

2, maybe you should start with your english.
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>>931279

If you make the brilliant person bring robots and weapons to enslave the people of the pokemon world due they absolutely, complete rely in pokemon for everything, even personal defense, we're gold.
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Change "Brilliant Person" to "Rogue Ad-Mech of any strand" and you'll have something interesting.
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