Fantasy RPG

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Those of you who've seen my fallout game know I don't usually play a game with rolling as a prefer roleplay, but I am going to have actual stats and rolling for this. Here's a few pics for character creation and world building

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okay, that's all that out of the way, now I wait for players

Yeah aight i'll take Draco the Cloriph

can i make my own race?

>>1761209
no you cant, this is an established world, if you want to create your own race, the best I can do is let you create another anthropomorphic animal, and we can talk about the stat changes for that animal, but these are the established races, sorry.

>>1761203
cool, that's one party member.

i was talking about another animal, so that's good, can i be a bear anthro named Jaxx

>>1761222
actually, screw it a kolini

>>1761222
you sure? you can do the bear. I'd say that's +2 unarmed, -2 agility and +3 strength. if you wanna make a kolini, just create your character. I tried to make finding out the stats pretty simple by explaining it. you can make your own character sheet, I hope?

>>1761232
im very indecisive...but you put up a fair point,imma be a badass bear

watch the next guy be basically oinkbane lol

>>1761240
you can make your sheet based of the info provided right? I wanna make sure I properly communicated my ideas.

whelp, gotta blast. that was fast

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Looks like your quest's ded friend.

You need to proofread your posts. 4chan underlines misspelled words in the post-box, if you use a text program that doesn't correct spelling mistakes change to one that does. If the text tool of your graphics program doesn't correct spelling; write the text in a text program that does, then copy and paste the text.

Here are a few errors/typos I spotted.

alot
carear
fatefull
streangth
dammage
successfull
treeted
strenth
extreemly
dispells
telekenisis

"Beggers" is a real word but you probably meant "beggars"

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Sometimes I see you alternate between American-English and English-English for a word. Most commonly the word armour/armor. You did this a lot in your Fallout quest.

Endurance is capitalised under the pigmen stat block, no other attributes are capitalised in any other stat block.

There are attributes starting with lowercase letters, in lists that mostly contain attributes starting with capital letters.

There are some grammatical errors. For example:
>Orcs are more stronger than humans

The noun "kings" is capitalised in the middle of a sentence in the OP. (This would be appropriate if you were talking about the Kings in Fallout New Vegas)

>Freeze (Affect: paralisys)
Should read: "Freeze (Effect: paralysis)"
Look up the difference between effect and affect.
>They can photosynthesize using water and dirt.
Woah there, i'm pretty sure plants photosynthesize with sunlight.

I personally prefer the spelling "mana" to "manna"

I think the Link premade was kinda dumb.

Your quest's name is identical to another olders quest in the catalog.

>you can make your sheet based of the info provided right? I wanna make sure I properly communicated my ideas.

As the QM you should handle creating resources like character sheets. It's cool to ask for help but the players main "job" should be decision making and rolling.

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Something went wrong when you were colouring the kolini. There's an unsightly white gap between the colour and the lines. I don't know what drawing software you're using. Maybe you used a drawing tool that has transparent edges? Maybe you normally use a fill bucket tool with antialiasing turned on and you turned it off?

I STRONGLY advise you to attempt to draw contour lines. You decorated the Neanderthals shirt with a line tool, and it looks very bad. I would much rather see a very poorly drawn contour line that attempts to follow the shape of the torso than a perfectly flat line across the shirt. The male orc's hexagonal chest plate looks a little off. The stripes on the male human look perfectly fine because the template you used doesn't have much definition compared to the orcs' template.


This is a draw quest so I automatically rate it higher than every non-draw quest on this board.
Cloriphs were pretty cool.
I liked the idea of a "locked" race.


Good luck with future quests.

>>1762507
I'd just like to say, I create the explanation so they can create their own sheet using the rules and we can play from there. I'm using paint because I'm on a craptop so the pictures might not be the best, sorry.