My Strange Relationship

>>1470363
>It's a little while later.
>The living room is dark with dim orange light coming from the other room just barely enough to see.
>You're enjoying some blueberry muffins and tea Olivia lovingly prepared for you as you stand in the living room in the dark.
>They're so sweet and tasty.
>Olivia isn't in the room right now.
>This house is pretty spacious for just the two of you.
>Big kitchen, two bedrooms, two bathrooms, a sizable living room and a basement.
>In the living room is where you keep all the trinkets from yours and Olivia's outings.
>There are a lot of pictures of the two of you together.
>She insisted on getting pictures and putting them up here.
>Not that you object to it.
>You yawn getting bored as you walk over to the coffee table in the living room.
>You pick up the remote for the t.v and sit down on the couch.
>After clicking it the t.v comes on.
>"Still to report, two missing girls from the area have yet to be found. They are, Allison, and Sharon. If you have any information as to their whereabouts please call the number on your screen."
>Why are they doing this now? After this long do they really think they'll be found?
>Seems like a curse almost.
>Sharon was this girl you met in high school. She was blonde, her dad was rich, and she was beautiful.
>She disappeared about 8 months ago though.
>You had a thing for her but she disappeared before you could really clinch it with her.
>Allison was another acquaintance of yours, but she seemed to vanish too about 6 months ago.
>You hope Olivia doesn't just vanish like them too.
>You suddenly get a text.
>It's from your friend Dainah.
>"Sup?"
>She's another friend of yours, one that hasn't mysteriously vanished.
>"You're still up aren'tcha?"
"It's 7, of course I'm still awake."
>"If you got some time tomorrow I'd love to come chill with you."
>Hmm..
"Yeah, sure, why not?"
>"Cool, meet me at the skatepark, we'll chill then."
>"Sweetie.. Aren't you coming you bed?"
>You turn around, Olivia is staring at you from the corner of the room.
"Yeah."

>>1470364
>It's sunny the next day as you're at the Skatepark.
>Dainah rides up to you on her skateboard.
>Her body is slim and toned.
>She has blue eyes and fluffy unkempt brown hair with split ends.
>"It's been like 3 months man.. You totally dipped on us without even saying anything."
"I know I know.. I've just been caught up with college and stuff."
>She gives you a curious look.
>"Well, me and the others are worried."
"Its.. It's more than school Dainah, its-"
>"Come on, come watch me pull of this sick trick!"
>You sigh.
>An hour or so passes as you sit there in the skatepark watching her perform various tricks.
>"Yeah, woo!"
>How does she have this much energy?
>She stops in front of you.
>"Wanna come back to my place? I'm all sweaty and I think I forgot deodorant this morning."
"Uh.. You're not making it sound very appealing."
>The sweat is making her shirt stick to her body.
>"You know what I meant. I'll order pizza, my treat."
>You aught to avoid pizza but well..
"Yeah sure, why not?"
-
>You're on the couch eating pizza with Dainah.
>"Mmm, man, I think I got like a mountain of homework that I totally didn't do today."
>You give her a flat look.
"Why didn't you just work on it today?"
>"Meh, didn't feel like it. Studyings for nerds."
"It's literally the current year, nerds are the cool people nowadays."
>"Only the ones who actually do stuff. The nerds that just learn pointless stuff really don't fit in anywhere."
>What an outdated worldview she has.
>Although it's probably just her excuse not to do homework.
>Looking at the state of her room, you can see garbage, laundry, dishes stacked up.
"I'm not one to harp, but when was the last time you cleaned up around here?"
>"Aww come on, not you too."
"You need a hand?"
>"W-what?"
"Yeah, might as well help you clean."
>She smiles.
>"That'd be great."
>And so you begin the process of cleaning her room.
>"I've been texting you for months. I can't believe just out of the blue you decided to respond."
"Out of the blue?"
>"Yeah, musta sent you like a dozen texts dude. Was starting to feel like your crazy ex stalker or something haha."
"What are you talking about, I never got any texts from you before."
>She sighs walking over.
>She pulls up her text chatlog.
>There are a dozen messages sent to you.
"Woah, what the heck?"
>You pull up your chatlog.
"Huh.. Thats weird, nothing here."
>She scratches her thigh.
>"Huh.. Weird cellphone error I guess."
>You sigh.
"Useless phone. I aught to get a new one."
>"Maybe so huh? I've had mine for a few years myself, maybe I aught to upgrade mine too."
>She's putting her dirty clothes in the hamper.
"Yeah."

>>1470365
>You come home.
>The spacious home feels like a cavern.
>"You're back Anon."
"Ah!"
>"I made you dinner.. Roast beef and homemade mashed potatoes.."
>Olivia is standing next to you.
"I'm uh.. Sorry I'm late, some stuff just came up."
>You go into the kitchen and sit at the table.
>Olivia heats up your meal in the microwave.
>"My sister said she'd be coming over soon so don't be alarmed if someone new shows up at the house all of a sudden."
>What am I, a kid?
"Sure."
>"How was your day today? Were you out running errands? Did you get me a secret gift?"
"Gift?"
>She sets the hot plate in front of you.
>Even reheated it smells great.
>She makes a pouty face.
>"Nothing? And you were gone all day?"
"Don't be such a spoiled brat."
>"Meanie. I still love you though Anon."
>You bite into your food.
"You're sure acting weird."
>She sighs.
>"Whatever you say Anon."

>>1470367
>It's later in the bedroom.
>Olivia is grinning as she slides down to your waist.
>Her hand slides over your package on your briefs.
>"Am I acting weird now Anon?"
>You nod.
"If this is weird, I don't want normal heh."
>She chuckles.
>"Lets see mmm.."
>She pulls down your briefs sliding them down and off your legs.
>Your cock is exposed before her.
>She puts her bare hand on your cock and begins to stroke.
>You feel the gentle stroking of her soft fingers massage your member.
>You're at full mast as she lustfully eyes your cock.
>She rubs her face against it.
>"Mmm.. This is the kind of thing a wife loves to do for her husband."
"H-husband? Wait you wanna get-"
>Her mouth slides over the tip.
>You feel her wet warm mouth gently suck.
>Cock throbbing as little waves of pleasure shot through you.
>"Mmm. MMMM.."
>Shes sucking harder now,
>Her eyes looking up at you as her mouth bobs up and down on your cock.
>She continues sucking.
>Still maintaining eye contact.
>You can her the lewd sound of her suction as she solely gives her attention to the worship of your cock.
>Every little motion of her bobbing makes you throb like crazy.
>Her mouth getting a little more and more toward the base of the shaft.
>You run your hand through her hair as she continues to take it deeper in her mouth.
>You pull on her hair a little and bite your lip feeling yourself riding the edge of a major climax.
>Still hanging in there, her eyes are still on you.
>From the sound of her breathing you can tell she's getting excited too.
>It makes you throb more as she gets her lips to the base of your shaft.
>The soft wet warmth of her mouth now fully enveloping your cock.
>And as your cock hits the back of her throat you feel yourself swell and cum inside her mouth.
>She coughs but tries to keep all the cum in her mouth as she coughs.
>Your cock slides out of her mouth and a trail of semen dribbles down her lip.
>She hastily licks it up.
>She smiles.
>"Feel better?"
"Y-yeah.. Thanks."

>>1470368
>It's the next morning.
>Olivia is the little spoon.
>Your arms wrapped around her soft warm body.
>Just waking up to her like this every morning is a blessing in and of itself.
>Your life before this was just an ordinary college student.
>Some luck here and there, but mostly it was just friends.
>Nothing as intense as this relationship has turned out to be.
>She cooks for you, does your homework, cleans, and goes to work, and fucks you on a regular basis.
>You'd have to be out of your mind not to like someone like that.
>Still, with all the disappearances and the growing feeling of isolation from your peers you can't help but feel a little uneasy.
>It seemed like one minute you had your social life at least somewhat together.
>You hung out with people.
>Now it seems like no one wants to talk and every trace of your former life has begun to vanish.
>As the day begins thoughts form in your mind.

>I should hang out with Dainah and get her opinion
>I should hang out with Dainah but I shouldn't tell her about whats happened with Olivia
>I should get up and make Olivia a nice breakfast, afterwards I should go shopping for her and pick out a gift.

Are you the same guy who did that shitty slave fetish quest

>>1470406
Walks like a Duck, Quacks like a Duck...

so can we skip ahead to where the MC knows about the yandere, or do you mostly get off on this forced obliviousness?

>>1470369
>>I should get up and make Olivia a nice breakfast, afterwards I should go shopping for her and pick out a gift.
What could possibly go wrong?

Just take it to Anonkun already, OP, you'll get more readers that enjoy your work and fewer angry dudes too.

>>1470369
>KYS and spare yourself the embarassment of getting killed by a frail little girl.
IRL, I mean

>>1470406
>>1470444
>>1470494
>>1470615
I just can't do anything without getting harassed by you?

I know my writing isn't perfect, but why the hell am I getting bullied just for writing about the things I want to write about? How come I can't just write a story that I enjoy writing for once?

Whatever. I guess I'll just leave since everyone hates me so much.

>>1470807
I mean, A-kun was put up for this kind of quest because they weren't allowed on /tg/.

I'm just giving you advice, dude, they'd love you over there.

>>1470807
Cause not only is your writing shit and stupid painful wish fulfillment, you use the worst form of questing,
>hint, it's greentext
you don't know how to write dialogue, it's obviously all just a lead up for whatever you want to wank to, and it reeks of shit. It's just shit. Akun is the place to run smut, if you want it so badly run there. Wait, you can't, cause you can't greentext to cover up your lack of writing ability.

Either learn how to make better quests, or don't cry when everyone hates the shit you clutter the board up with.