Dead Woman's Quest 1

>>1208338
>-look around

As you look past the rough sackcloth covering your face you can see you are clearly an old wooden crate of some kind. With rough unvarnished planks a but a meter in front of you.
The crate is large and very dusty. There are some scrapes along the bottom of the crate like things have been moved around but the dust covers them like a blanket. Looking around feels weird and so does breathing. Crap you think you just inhaled some of that dust
"A-Achoo" you sneeze accidentally inhaling the stuff- it smells like old wood and hay in here along with something musty you can't identify.
(Chose one, many or in what order)

-Try to figure out how you got here
-Look at what's holding you
-Wait... How can you see? There is no light in here.
-write in

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Screw it- If I'm reading this right there is no one here, plus my current draft for this is meh and I need to go buy groceries later.
I'l try doing a quest thread again some other time once I've finished catching up on PGQ, MGLQ, USQ, PRQ, HDFQ and a few others. I also probably need to consider how to write this better as currently it is absolute garbage.

>>1208451
This doesn't seem to be that terribly written technically. It is lacking anything to really draw a reader's attention though and draw them out of their ADHD fugue. Currently it reads as a "wake up, what do?" quest. While there is clearly more to it than that (why did we jump, who's holding us where, didn't I see this quest last week) think about the options someone would write in at this point (look around, check inventory, look for exposed nail to break bindings, screech autisticly), they are so fucking generic. Where's the identity, the passion? Where's the option for lazy people that doesn't require any deep thinking. You could have wrote the result of the "you can see in the dark?!" option into the opening to highlight a new ability to play with or something. idk, I'm no writer.

Yes qst is fucking dead. I think there are more people here I weekends (try asking in qtg). You could try one of the other shitty questing sites.

>>1208809
Is there any other questing site other than this and akun

>>1208868
Sufficient velocity, space battles, questionable questing.

>>1208382
-Look at what's holding you
-Try to figure out how you got here
>>1208451
Continue your story annon don't chicken out because i want to see where this thing that you have going goes and i want to get to the bottom of it.

You have twitter or Discord? Update me when new quest pls. I like these kind of quests and I think /qst/ needs more of this with dynamics and things.