https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W8AaCuMdMM0
i know pol is not the right place for this but i needed some feedback on my propaganda video
out of 10 how would you rate it?
is the sound good enough, what should i improve?
i know the sound is the biggest issue, but is my english clear enough??
i am thinking about starting a series of propaganda videos, so i wanted to know what should be improved & how people perceive it
>>139119823
I didn't even watch it but if you are telling things that are true don't call it propaganda, it is often used to define something untrue
>>139119968
i just called it propaganda in order to make it sound more interesting, basically so people would click on the thread
>>139119823
I understood your English pretty well, despite the strong accent.
>>139119823
You need to speak with more conviction. your mesage is good, but your presentation is lacking
>>139122262
The audio was my biggest concern
i also had some difficulties pronouncing certain words so i had to edit the file with Adobe audition
next time i will try to focus on my accent & improve the sound file
would the video be within acceptable standards or is it just cringeworthy??
basically is the quality good enough? or should i delete it & make a new one
>>139122796
Its good. Don't be a perfectionist.
>>139122796
Do it in Danish, redpill your own folk. There are enough English goys on the subject. I find your English accent unbearable
>>139119968
Propaganda doesn't mean lying you kike enabler.
>>139123121
Next time i will make a manuscript and then read it so i don¨t have to repeat myself & mess up the sentences
Tips:
You need contrast. Show what Denmark was so that the video footage of what it is now is more stark.
The audio a not great. If you're going with your voice, the accents not a problem but the white noise and the "ums" and such detract from it.
I'd suggest instead going with music and just text on the screen. Or audio of the shitskins if appropriate.
Also why do all Danes naturally sound like they have marble mouth? Natt Danelaw sounds the same way (if you don't know him, find him, he's the most red pilled person in your country even if he is a drunk edgetarian)
>>139119823
OP add some orchestral music in the background and for fuck's sake cut the low ends of the audio of your voice. If you plan on making videos regularly, I would highly recommend buying a pop filter. Your p's fuck my ears.
>>139123558
i know i just used that word to make people click on the thread & make it sound more interesting
>>139123685
I think his voice is a good touch and is more engaging than just text. I think his English is pretty clear and there's something about a Nordic accent that does it for me. But you're right about everything else. OP needs to edit his voice audio more.
On a side note, do all Nords speak in the same monotonous manner? The Golden One is the same way. It would be nice to hear you work with tonality more. Speaking is making music, OP.
>>139123685
I know Natt Danelaw
i find it a bit funny because when i listen to my recorded voice it actually sounds a bit similiar to Natt´s voice we both have the accent stuff going on
i will take it into consideration
Stop saying basically.
>>139123747
>https://www.voltairenet.org/IMG/pdf/Bernays_Propaganda_in_english_.pdf
Good read if you want to be doing this.
>>139124451
i had to say "basically" because i didn¨t write a script so i had to think for a few moments that´s when i say that word
i will remove it next then