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/pol/ writes a pamphlet 2017-08-21 06:39:01 Post No. 138494445
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Anonymous (ID: !!yvm0QrHZZJQ)
2017-08-21 06:39:01
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So I'm in the process of writing a political pamphlet, right now my subject is "diversity" throughout the west.
This is what I have so far, the format is a bit fucked, my apologies but it is a draft after all.
The astric on the first page is where I intend to insert what's written on the second page (next post)
My main concern is the very last bit on the second page, where I mention Britain, should I leave that out?
>TL;DR excuse the faggotry and offer critique or tips on what I've written as of yet.
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>>138494445
>Not opening with a fact
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>>138494445
Wow this really sucks.
Read a few books before you try writing anything
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>>138494927
What sucks about it, tell me
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>>138494659
Elaborate
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>>138494445
It is you again shit writer.
Go to school or read a book.
Stop coming to us for some English lesson. Fuck off.
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>>138494445
Not gonna find constructive criticism here m8
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>>138497491
I made a thread like this a few days ago, got decent feed back in terms of where and what needed to be improved
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>>138494445
Your writing is lacking in any scholarly rigour or even artistic flourish.
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>>138498206
How so?
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