A few weeks ago, I posted a "create a Moonman song" thread. Help me finish this masterpeice.
Son vapes,
Blacks rape
Chimps act
Like apes
The only "white" men that are democrats
Spray them down with my gat
A libcuck told me that not all blacks are bad,
I said "shut up, faggot" and showed him some crime stats.
Nah man Moonman doesn't show people crime stats, he's more direct than that.
I'll show you crime stats with a machine gun
Cut back to me when it's all done.
If you still breathin I'll fuck you up some more
I ain't leavin till every nigga is dead for sure
Pull out my AR-15 on MS-13
Thrown 'em off the border wall
empty my magazine as they scream
race traitor cucks will pay the toll, we take no exception to those that burn coal
if you'd rather take a chimpanzee than a man, you're bound to get a visit from the moon man Klan
oh, gotta watch out i dont get vanned
now hold on while i can this nigger man
>>136099478
well your rhyming scheme is definitely nigger tier. so there's that.
real moonman is a jew with a black gf
garbage
>>136099478
Bump
All of your rhymes occur on the last note of the bar, that shit is annoying and uncreative. You need some double and triple rhymes in the same line for it to sound good.
Instead of:
I search my head for a rhyme
something like:
I try to find the rhyme for this line in my mind
and I do it all the time, but I'm- (ime/ind/iam) etc..
>>136099478
>Chimps act
>Like apes
Chimps are apes. What the fuck is this supposed to mean?
>>136099478
If repeated final digits, the next stanza is:
OP is a massive fag,
Who can't suck enough ball bags.
Neighbours ask "can this decrease?
Will OP's cock sucking ever cease?"
>>136103066
...,but i'ma- dime a dozen, if it wasn't for my russian cousins I'da thrown these kikes in the plug-in oven and I'm not bluffing
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