Hey, /p/ can you tell me where did I fuck up this image, I feel something's off
its very cluttered. idk, kinda boring too. just a big clock tower and some houses.
>>3117713
Law of thirds, tower should be more to the right, and you should have had a lower angle on it, to include more sky for the top third.
>>3117771
Thank you
>>3117713
it's very washed out, don't listen to the "any hint of saturation makes you ken rockwell and ruins your pictures" meme
>>3117713
It looks like it was cloudy. Cloudy days make images like this flat. There's no separation between the tower and the rest. Plus you have this scaffold shit going on (not that you can do much about it besides cropping).
>>3117713
>shot with a sub 2000£ camera
>wrong time of the day, awful light
>portrait orientation
Easy, mate.
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>>3117874
It's actually a very cheap camera but thanks for all the info
>>3117874
How did you take suck an awful picture with such an expensive dive camera?
Do models laugh at your tiny dick?
>>3117892
(you)
also
>A7II
>expensive dive camera
Please elaborate further.
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>>3117951
>Puts name in exif data
Also great garbage photo man
>>3117713
almost cropped the pinion.
scaffolding
>>3117951
sup dave
>>3117713
it's an extremely flat, gray image.
>>3117713
Increase contrast, increase dehaze.
>>3117713
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>>3117798
It needs contrast, not saturation.
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>>3118201
the fuck is this shit
>>3117713
Needs more sky and contrast OP. Love the spatial compression at this fl though. What are you using here, 200?
>>3117874
Get good, son
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>>3117951
Where is this taken?
>>3118206
This guy gets it. Flat overcast light and a crowded scene = bump up the contrast slightly, maybe selectively even on Big Ben to make it stand out.
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>>3118206
why not both?
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>>3117771
Elaborate on the "tower should be on the right" part. Don't know why, but I mirroed the pic, and it does look better
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>>3117713
>washed out
>too cloudy
>eye is led to the upper right and then nothing interesting is here
>>3119198
>eye is led to the upper right
no it isn't lol
>>3117713
The whole pic is a bit washed out, I'm guessing it was cloudy that day. It's an easy fix in Photoshop/Lightroom though, best edit is >>3118431. You needed to make the yellow of the tower pop a little more so it stands out from the background.
But also compositionally it's pretty bad. The balance is poor, the tower (which I'm assuming is the subject) seems pushed off to the side. I'm not sure if it's as shot or cropped but if it's cropped you should change it so the tower centered on the left line (talking about rule of thirds).
Also edit the red on that scaffolding out. It's an eyesore
>>3118201
This hurts my entire body to look at.
>>3117713
Dehaze, little contraste & lowered blacks
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>>3119725
THIS IS GOOD
VERY GOOD
9,7/10
As mentioned, rule of thirds, etc. Not much can do about the scaffolding :(
Biggest fix you can make is bring up the black point and apply a bit of curves.
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