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TEAR ME APART / PHOTO CRITIQUE

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If you think one of these photos sucks, please explain why it sucks as concisely and clearly as you can.

Thanks, asshole. :)

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>>3096134

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>>3096134

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>>3096134

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>>3096134

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>>3096134

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>>3096134

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>>3096134

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>>3096134
i have no reason to remember this. It's a black and white photo of nothing
>>3096136
it's a neato bug but the focus and crop makes me lose most of said neato bug
>>3096138
the tree going through her head is p distracting
>>3096141
i have no real thoughts or feelings about this
>>3096144
same neato bug, same problems as before
>>3096148
are eye photos a meme yet
>>3096150
the idea of a tiny sailboat against NYC (I think?) is nice but this doesn't really capture it. I don't really get a sense of the vastness of the city vs the tiny sailboat which is what I assumed this is going for

unless you just wanted a photo of a sailboat with no real reason to emotionally connect with it in which case 10/10
>>3096154
10/10 children's toy
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>>3096134
>He fell for the white frame meme
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>>3096134

For these last

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>>3096134

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>>3096134

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>>3096160

Thanks! It's Chicago, by the way. For the two bug pictures, I was trying to focus on the flower and the butterfly's proboscis as it enters the flower to gather nectar -- not on the butterfly itself.
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>>3096134

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>>3096134

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>>3096134

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Why are you posting a bunch of random photos. There's no cohesion or point to them en masse.
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>>3096134

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>>3096189

You don't think individual photos can be critiqued? Do photographs really need to be contextualized within a larger thematic set for them to have merit?
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>>3096136
gay>>3096138
also gay>>3096141
shit>>3096144
gay>>3096148
generic >>3096150
>>3096150
crap>>3096154
kys

can't go on they are all garbage
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>>3096134

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>>3096197
nigger that's a picture of a lamp
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>>3096243
lmfao
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>>3096191
Not that anon, but I think what he's trying to say is that your subjects are boring.
Themes and stories aside, I feel like none of your shots have visual elements that would draw me in.
And on a technical side, why the FUCK are you using such large apertures like f/1.0-3.5 for almost all your shots?
It made wide shots like the boat out of focus.
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Sometimes weird crops. Especially the macro shots somehow seem to lack a little sharpness for the subject. Try sharpen for 25% and set detail to 100% - worked well for my X-E1 in LR. >>3096186 missed focus by less than 1cm, but the bee also shows its butt - otherwise a shot everybody shooting macro has taken. Nothing bad, but also nothing outstanding, keep going and find your subject matter.

>>3096276
f/1.0 = adapted lens

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