How could've I improved this picture?
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>>3042993
the thing on the left is very distracting, you should cut it off
>>3042995
This a million times this.
Also, better processing would of been nice. Looks a bit under exposed and could benefit from a bit of clarity and contrast.
>>3042993
Sell your camera and find a new hobby.
Crop jetty on left out, takes away distraction and centres the main point of focus. Possibly also lift the shadows a little and add a little contrast to compensate.
More tits.
Crop 1/2
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