Yay or nay? How can i do it better?

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Needs a bit more interest. Try to get a person crossing frame or closer into the foreground for that extra kick. For example this shot, it's not great, but I took another one without the people and it was a lot more boring.

>>3042802
Looks more blue than bw

>>3042809
blue? I don't see even a hint of blue.

>>3042813
fuck off you son of a bitch

>>3042809
it's b&w idiot

>>3042799
Bring up the white point and crop in a bit. Tony taught me this

>>3042816
tell me who hurt you...

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>>3042799
The biggest flaw is the bottom part, it shouldn't be there.

Color wise it's always a matter of taste, but your shot looks dull.

And of course the burnt sky doesn't help, if you shot raw, you can solve that one easily.

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>>3042799
Why is this image not at all sharp? Did you fuck up doing manual focus or shoot this on a Fuji 1.4 wide open or something?

Getting everything in focus is important for the image composition on a shot like this. Framing also needs more work.