Any critic to my photo? I really want to improve

>>3024102
Your subject's stiff pose (or your not bursting enough to get a better one from them), your shooting angle (you know, both with regards to your subjects and to the background), weak makeup, poor taste in glasses & male clothing, slightly weak lighting or other things. Its subtly to quite wrong, all of it.

And thats before we even get to what this shot was supposed to "achieve" (engagement? stock photo shot with goofy guy and beauty?).

PS: Lens/body might also have been a little weak.

>>3024102
i dont what this shot is supposed to achieve. it just seems generic and a little bland to me in every way

>>3024102
>another solo picture with absolutely no contextual information
>PLS CRITIQUE XDDDDD

Like the playful style although it's a bit simple/generic. Composition is off though. The couple should be in the centre of the image. Have you cropped the right side off?

>>3024102
It's a badly composed fat manchild and a woman that doesn't want to be there in an awful crop.

What more do you want us to say?

>>3024272
kek

>>3024102
The dude has no skin. People normally have skin, and it is distracting. Also, he looks somehow strange, childish maybe? This may not be a problem and actually an interesting feature in the photograph.

Look at composition. It isn't balanced. You need to crop it more, or (better) less.

>>3024102
>Bottom button buttoned

REEEEEEEE When will you faggots fucking learn?