A couple of photos I took over the weekend. All c&c welcome.
1/20
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:31 08:35:16 Exposure Time 1/60 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:31 08:33:40 Exposure Time 1/60 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 250 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control High Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:31 08:33:45 Exposure Time 1/60 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 320 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control High Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:31 08:33:52 Exposure Time 1/60 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 400 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control High Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:31 08:34:00 Exposure Time 1/100 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:31 08:34:07 Exposure Time 1/80 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:31 08:34:30 Exposure Time 1/125 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:31 08:34:36 Exposure Time 1/60 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 640 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control High Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:31 08:34:41 Exposure Time 1/100 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Top, Left-Hand Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:30 20:02:37 Exposure Time 1/60 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 500 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control High Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Top, Left-Hand Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:30 20:02:38 Exposure Time 1/60 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 640 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control High Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Top, Left-Hand Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:30 20:02:50 Exposure Time 1/60 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 400 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control High Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Top, Left-Hand Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:30 20:02:49 Exposure Time 1/160 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Top, Left-Hand Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:30 20:03:02 Exposure Time 1/160 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Top, Left-Hand Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:30 20:03:12 Exposure Time 1/125 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Top, Left-Hand Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:30 20:03:14 Exposure Time 1/80 sec F-Number f/16.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/16.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Top, Left-Hand Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:30 20:03:26 Exposure Time 1/800 sec F-Number f/2.5 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/2.5 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Top, Left-Hand Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:30 20:03:27 Exposure Time 1/800 sec F-Number f/2.5 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/2.5 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Top, Left-Hand Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:30 20:03:39 Exposure Time 1/1600 sec F-Number f/2.5 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/2.5 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
I think I see what you're going for for, but I don't think you're quite there. Thank you posting, anon.
Last one. A bit different from the rest and probably the one I'm least sure of.
[EXIF data available. Click here to show/hide.]
Camera-Specific Properties: Equipment Make Panasonic Camera Model DMC-GX7 Camera Software Adobe Photoshop Lightroom 6.0 (Windows) Maximum Lens Aperture f/2.5 Sensing Method One-Chip Color Area Focal Length (35mm Equiv) 29 mm Image-Specific Properties: Image Orientation Top, Left-Hand Horizontal Resolution 240 dpi Vertical Resolution 240 dpi Image Created 2017:01:30 20:03:40 Exposure Time 1/125 sec F-Number f/9.0 Exposure Program Aperture Priority ISO Speed Rating 200 Lens Aperture f/9.0 Exposure Bias 0 EV Metering Mode Pattern Light Source Fine Weather Flash No Flash, Compulsory Focal Length 14.00 mm Rendering Normal Exposure Mode Auto White Balance Manual Scene Capture Type Standard Gain Control Low Gain Up Contrast Normal Saturation Normal Sharpness Normal
>>3012902
Thanks for the response. Any specific things you think do/don't work?
>>3012907
not that guy, and not an expert by any means, but here's my two cents
many of your images don't 'flow' or read well because there is no negative space. they are relentless and overbearing walls of texture.
an exception to this is >>3012890 and I don't think it's a coincidence that it's one of your strongest shots. some might say it's not 'interesting' but to me that rock has a lot of, well, weight to it.
>>3012896
that tower is the most intriguing thing in half of these and yet it's barely shown
>>3012873
>>3012901
I like these two, they have a sinister quality to them and are thoughtfully composed
>>3012903
again carries some sense of foreboding and is nice to look at, although the two posts(?) on the clifftop are really distracting
most of these just made me say 'meh', even >>3012872 which I wanted to love from the thumbnail. I think it's to do with the framing.
again just my two cents and sorry if it's dumb. just observations.
>>3012952
Yeah I think you're right. A lot of the images are too imposing. That is what I was going for to a degree but the lack of negative space just suffocates the image a bit.
Thanks for the feedback.
>>3012955
no problem man there are some really cool shots. takes balls to post your work here among all the shit flinging and gear threads. pls keep shooting
>>3012958
The shitflinging means you'll at least get honest criticism which is bizarrely hard to find online these days.