Personal Critique

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>>2982603

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>>2982603

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>>2982603
I will be posting some of my early digital shots as well.

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>>2982603
>>2982612
>>2982623

Finally someone who's really god at portraits!! Nice work on this three OP.
Nice focusing, nice softening, comfy colors

>>2982603
I don't like your photos, but I will say these (and others you've posted before) are some of the best lab scans I've ever seen.

>>2982623
>smoking catlady

get better models.

>>2982669
Thank you for your kindness. I really don't care much for the second one, but the first is one of my favorites.

>>2982672
Thanks for the honesty, if you could elaborate on what you don't like I would greatly appreciate it.

>>2982623
crop this 16:9

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>>2982603

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don't get involved with discord and discordians if you're going to be a /p/oster

>>2982686
>a smoking teenager isn't cliche enough!

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>>2982603

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Pretty basic "college kid with an old film slr and 19 year old girls are pretty" tier. Keep shooting, try not to fall into the "wrinkly old b&w face" trap any more.

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>>2982690
>cliche meme
tard

>>2982730
>photos should be "cinematic"
>crop the forehead in every shot
>negative space is easier for tards to manage when it's just an out of focus strip next to the subject
>how do I get the oval bokeh?

>>2982699
Thank you for the only actual critique.

>>2982713
i like this one. full of details, kind of surreal, and nice interplay between subject background.

>>2982755
Thank you. Not sure why the hell this guy brought his piano all the way to downtown.

>>2982740
>implying all that is negative
i bet your yuropeen too
get off /p/ :<)

oh and this. Bump for personal фtoo вrēd

>>2982679
It's not really kindness, mate. Your portraits are really above /p/ standards. The bw one, you nail it at the contrast and focus.

the first and 3rd, you nailed the light and focus.
I would say to keep that improving in colors. BW portraits are memes.

but, keep it to film portraits. Your street is just meh, you just need to come closer to >>2982693 the comb in his hair has more information than the whole picture.

>>2982765
>i bet your yuropeen too

You're.
If you're going to utilise a european language then you had better learn how to spell with it.

>>2982603
Is she gargling cum? What's up with her lips

>>2982839
> Correcting a described language
you should know better English speaker

>>2982836
I like shooting portraits but I'm trying to move into more up close street shooting. I just shot a roll the other day and will be posting tomorrow, so look out for that.

And thanks for the feedback, it really helps.

>>2982693
hey I remember you

>>2982893
Hey mate, you one of the fellow Florida shooters?

>>2982603
Why is this so cinematic

I love it

>>2982900

Because it's someone looking out of frame.

>>2982900
Thank you, me and my friend ventured off the trail and found a patch of thorns. I found a nice foreground then placed my model behind it and moved around to frame her face how I wanted it.

>>2982899
Nah mate I just remember a few of your photos from a while back

>>2982839

>utilise

Your diction is appalling.

>>2985159
Utilise is British English, dumbass.

>your diction
dont think that means what you think it does either, double dumbass.