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Just starting really and I suck. First time trying street photography.
I panicked and forgot to focus a lot, and was scared to get up close.
I also panicked in lightroom and slapped filters on everything.

But give me some evil critique please, be as harsh as you like. Help me get better.

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They're not all "street photography" I guess, but I did take them on a street so...

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No, no, they are fine. Just stick to that and don't change anything. Welcome.
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>>2955633

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>>2955634
shut up

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>>2955637

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>>2955638

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>>2955639

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>>2955644

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>>2955645

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>>2955647

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>>2955648

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>>2955649

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No, honestly. I like the artistic expression. You're like a modern Cocteau. The subtle atmosphere is great. Humble yet proud shots with a very chaotic but still balanced eye. A wild combination of artistic spontanousity and cool technical perfection.
Please keep the good work going.
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>>2955667

what the fuck
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>>2955668
I'm serious. Just look at those masterpieces. I just hope he will never change his style and keep everything as it is.
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>>2955667
>>2955670
knock it off, buster
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>>2955624
your doing what everyone does when they first downloaded lightroom (myself included)

and that is weird colours that you think (believe me i was like this too) look good but really just take away from the pictures.

you seem to be using a lot of blue hard lights for no reason.

now if you where like me when i started your not going to take me seriously

>>2955624
but lad if you colour grade and just pay more attention to realistic colours i think your pics would be better.

apart from that some like

>>2955639
shots like this are good just try to think of lines and showing the stuff in front of you in a meaningful way.

show no thought other than i saw a bike, try harder to take better pictures pay attention to your compistion.

im not gonna kid you and say any of these are particularly good but some show effort. just keep shooting dude. and please its very easy to fuck around with the colours and stuff but unless your doing it for a particular reason it comes off shit.
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>>2955672
i messed up the qoutes there.


i meant your first image was good as it showed you at least thought of internal framing

while pics like the bike you shouldnt of wasted your time and bandwith and our time by uploading.
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>>2955635
This for example is gorgeous. We see a unclear scene of colorful illuminated maniquens. On a first look the observer feels like being in a night club. Then the realization occures that the femals were objects. A stunning critic on our today's world, where you sometimes can't differ between women and lifeless things.
Thus, the artist enforces a process in the observer to recognize the objectification - his iwn objectification, which is induced by the geniously catch of the light in the dark environment and the perfect angle which tracks the eye through the scene while our brains can't help jumping between the reality of the puppets and the shameful admitting of seeing them alive, and the counter-contrary mood of guilt and pleasure.
Well done.
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>>2955672
bullshit. don't listen to this OP, your work is perfect. he's just a hater.
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>>2955649
Or let's take this: We see a street scene in the night with pedestrians, houses and a bright light atop.
Then something strange happens to the eye. When hitting the bright light at the left top the scene changes from an ordinary street scene to a classical arranged painting. We suddenly feel the hidden symmetry if the persons. And the three men below the "star" pop out. Who are they? The holy three kings, leaded by the star if betlehem? The three musketiers? Their shadows points towards the observer as they wanted to include us into the scene. We are now part of it. We feel the spirit of the moment and can hear their enlightened conversation which their body language perfectly transport.
A perfect shot in the perfect moment. Only a true genious is capable of waiting for a right moment like this.
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>>2955624
These are actually quite good shots, OP. I doubt this is your first street shooting. You're just fishing for compliments. This is cheap of course ... but still very good shots.
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>>2955672
I think you're right.
I was fucking with the colours for a particular reason though: I was insecure about how shitty my photos were so I wanted to hide them.

here's it is without the colours fucked with. better?

And yeah, I probably wasn't thinking when I took most of these. I was mostly worried I would take the wrong person's picture and trying to get my camera to function at all in low light


>>2955677
>>2955678
>>2955681
>>2955684

stop doing this to me

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>>2955686
>stop doing this to me
Guy from /fgt/ here, I am actually laughing in the 3d world right now, thanks for sharing.
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>>2955686
yeah it is man. i didnt see the girl before and its a nice addition.

like im not saying dont fuck with your pics just be careful how you do it.

less is always more unless your doing a crazy thoughout colour thing.
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It's genious.
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>>2955647
the wide angle creates a surreal atmosphere which fits the subject matter, well done.
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>>2955625
nice grade
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>>2955625
>>2955626
>>2955644
>>2955649
>>2955651
I like these. I especially like the colours in the second and third. 1, 2 and 3 have nice composition IMO. Most of the rest are hit and miss but as good if not better than what I've taken so far
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>>2955645
perfect. urban trapper. i like it.
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>>2955667
al dente as fuck, sen pai
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Okay I went out again today. Pls give constructive criticism.

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>>2955686
LOL some comments are crap. Irony
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>>2957429
could be interesting but something's off. I like the guy, the sign and the leading lines but maybe it would be better at night or different colours like b+w. It feels like the ingredients are there

>>2957430
could be worse

>>2957434
>>2957443
>>2957431
I like this

>>2957432
nicely composed

>>2957438
>>2957441
kinda creepy vibe (not against you, op) but cool shots
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>>2955675
>shouldnt of
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It's marvelous. The new ones are my new favourite ones. Where can I buy prints?

As some other anon said before: al dente as fuck.
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>>2955624
forgot to put my filter for critique back up
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