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>>2949695

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>>2949696
Sweet thread

Okay. Here goes.

FIrst off I'm going to go for the cropping. You didn't get it right in camera so get it right in post, that's the spirit. You didn't though, the right of the frame is choking because between your main subject rear and the edge of the frame there's absolutely no space. This isn't the only issue though, as the subtle tones from the ca behind it's lights are now lost as the edge is cropped. This is because you wanted to crop the bus out. The cropping of the top section is because there was a lot of negative space, and again you had to crop the bus out so you were forced into this.
So how can you improve the framing or cropping? Don't take the picture from eye level next time. Learn to focal length.

As for the processing itself, the new colour temperature is awful, it draws attention to your clipped highlights more by making them a cream field of mess. The car has now lost everything that made it look good previously. The chrome has lost it's unique character and is crushed into a yellow mess. The bonnet of the car now no longer gives a lovely green/blue reflection.

Overall, I rate this crop baby/10.

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Polishing turds

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>>2949764
It wasn't until you pointed out the crop that I realized the 2nd post wasn't the edit.

OP, stick to instagram or kill yourself.

>>2949817
OP here, that's a nice crop actually. Thanks.

whenever you have modern subject matter in your photo these types of post processing effects are pointless. It is also so severe its feels like a parody of instagram shit. You can do much better.

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>>2949695
I don't like your processing, far too warm and faded, this is how I'd rather it look.

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Fucking step aside losers, let me show you what real photography looks like

>>2953427
wew lad my sides are in orbit

>>2953427
jesus fuck

>>2953427

Reminds me of the Becker intro

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=CKN1gTObYE4

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my take

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>>2953541
Kys

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>>2953427
Reminds me of that one sitcom from the 90's of a doctor who's a chain smoking douchebag but everybody loves him. Then theres the token black guy who's blind. Then they have to trashcan-chic 90's bitch who's absolutely useless...good show