Áfram Ísland

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C&C welcome sorry forgot to add

>>2894990

ur composition is ass. you have like 3 type of shots (and they are all bad) and you repeat them through all the set. its so bad that makes the sceneries really generic and unimpressive.

>>2894994
cheers bup
yeah noted, any pointers to improving composition?
this was my second time shooting properly so im on the learning curve

git gud

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>>2896443
looking at those file names I assumed it was actual film (old lab I used to use had almost identical format). Not just that but the glare in the water in >>2894645 screams film to me.

Photos are alright OP. Nothing gripping or interesting. Pleasant travel snaps though.

Straighten your fucking horizons, jesus christ are you even trying?

>>2894644

your heart's in the right place, and you're very close. You just really, really need to make sure your horizons are level.>>2894648 looks like you took it in a fucking bowl.

>>2896453
Yeah shot on an OM 10 (with manual adapter) with Portra 400 and 160

thanks for the feedback

>>2895391
>this was my second time shooting properly so im on the learning curve

yeah, i think youre in very first base. best tip at the stage youre currently in will be: look at good photos, get some books on the greats, educate yourself. you have a very crude understanding of composition at this point, and you dont seem to have an eye for it instintively, either. start learning OP good luck.