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Critique general thread 2016-07-17 03:19:39 Post No. 2884518
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Since there was a few threads asking for C&C I thought I'd just make a general.
>post a photo
>tell /p/ what you like about it
>tell /p/ what you dont like about it/unsure of
>ask /p/ why youre such a faggot who cant take good photos
>????
>profit
To kick things off, what do you guys reckon of these photos I shot yesterday? Personally I like the framing of this first one, but I'm not convinced on the edit.
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>>2884518
And I'd love some brutally honest critique on this one too. I like the framing and the contrast of the colours, but i'm still not conviced its actually that interesting of a photo.
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>>2884519
looks like a giant lego man about to eat some old dude
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took these last night working on my compostion
set it to manual but i'm not sure about the exposure, i like the contrast on these though
thoughts?
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>>2884518
i cont see too much wrong with the editing except for maybe the clouds in the upper left corner.
i would have framed this differently tho. walking a bit more to the right (if possible and not falling of a cliff if you do that) plcing the the line of the ocean closer to the corner and removing some of the dark green and brown parts in the lower left, since i think they dont really fit.
>>2884519
since youre going for color here the blue and green are a bit distracting to the eye, i see what youre doing here and its a good moment, i would suggest what >>2884528 said.ยด, tho i think making it a square compisition with more of the house in frame could be better
>>2884682
too much space above your subject
>>2884683
undbalanced distracting white stuff on right edge
>>2884684
distracting dark triangle in the upper right corner
also all lightbeams go to the edge but the first.
all of these are pretty unsharp and grainy. looks like someone shot b&w film and scanned it with one of those 10 bucks supermarket scanners.
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>>2884519
Why the old faggot is not in the middle of the gate
Crop that shitty space on the left. And correct that vignette meme. Fix your shitty shadows.
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