Critique Thread

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nice troll thread.

>>2854778
First photo the bus on your left you can see a small part of it and its distracting maybe crop after the wing mirror, lots of space on the right without purpose, I would've moved to the right to see more of each bus and fill the frame.

Horizon doesn't look straight and put it on the upper or lower third as a standard rule.

>>2854855
Thanks. I will try that next time.

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>>2854778
The front of the buses (mirrors, bumpers, windshields) forms some nice leading lines but the focal point is missing (which where I marked with a star).
Now look just to the right of the star and imagine if there were a group of kids in athletic gear running toward the buses carrying a trophy, then you'd have a cute little story in your pic.
See what I fucking did right there? I charge a lot of money for these ideas, but the first one's free.