give eachother feedback / constructive criticism in this thread

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new H E A T bois!
prod by GFBEATS!
from the collab project coming nov!

https://soundcloud.com/nathanoriginal/noggin-luggin

>hip hop
>boom baps

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https://soundcloud.com/stream_error

https://streamerror.bandcamp.com/

total rec
>>74907067

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>>74907067
I already gave you feedback in another thread. do I have to do it again?

>Lo-Fi
https://soundcloud.com/tantanishere/sets/lo-fi

>VGM 1
https://soundcloud.com/tantanishere/sets/bhd

>VGM 2
https://soundcloud.com/tantanishere/sets/video-game-2

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https://soundcloud.com/toybreaker

>beats

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https://soundcloud.com/westcoastsavage-558435837/phvntom

>dark trap
>eerie & heavy
>sample

check out my other beats if u like

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=41a_vaVuuE8

Hi, this is my band

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I made this track, here's the video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U3t4eaIt_sY

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sup everyone it's ur buddy dvd.gnome.
i had a bunch of songs i made this week i was gonna release one-per-day,, but really fuck that.. who cares even!
ill put them all up tonight. 6 songs with visuals
i'll post back again when it's up
here's some from last month:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YcMW3LHsp5U
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CA1I473AfmA
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m7rxOaD4mfQ
>sample based beats
>i put popular vocals over the music so you can get a f u ll experience
>sample based videos
>amidoinitright?
>[]-[] [] []D = []-[] [[]] []D

highly recccomondod
>>74907248
>>74907249
>>74907052
>>74907384

It's getting more and more apparent that at the current rate of technological progress, artificial intelligence will eventually supercede the human species.

Being alive in such an important time for mankind is thought provoking. This is a toast to life during one of humanity's final chapters.

https://soundcloud.com/jblarts/saf10-artificial-intelligence

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>>74907704
>>74907704
i didn't mean to rec OP, i meant to click >>74907067 instead
also dig this >>74907756

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https://armsdealer.bandcamp.com/album/manny-tha-white

Arms Dealer-MANNY, THA WHITE

>industrial hip hop, electronic, footwork, techno, remixes of trap bangers

New Arms Dealer release. First track is 3 consecutive remixes of Bobby Shmurda's Hot Boy, Princess Loko's verse on Tommy Wright III's Still Pimpin, and A$AP Ferg's Work (Remix).

Second song is a dance track sampling French Montana's verse on A$AP Ferg's East Coast Remix.

Third track is done in the theme of Gucci Mane's First Day Out with ambient-esque synths and choir voices.

I'll be keeping an eye out for the peeps postin' their work in this thread. Have a good Friday night.

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https://soundcloud.com/briars2623/grace

rock alternative, indie

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=06_uhBAPUmE
top 40 pop

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>>74907052

https://soundcloud.com/mwgli

>electronic
>analog
>spacey
>dreamy
>warm

Recs
>>74907249
I prefer your vgm projects to the lofi, if the mix was a bit tighter they'd sound awesome.
>>74907704
Some cool sounds but feels a bit lackluster otherwise
>>74908483
Your composition is a lot stronger than youre voice, your voice isnt necessarily bad but it detracts from the rest of the piece. If you sung with a bit more confidence/worked the levels a bit better it could sound pretty could.

All just my 2 cents

>>74908626
hey, thanks man i appreciate the honest feedback

shouuld i pastebin my entire music library?

>>74908727
Yes

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https://soundcloud.com/najandmori/sutra
>soul
>hiphop

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https://youtu.be/NVmlfDyntTs
>Indie pop
>pop rock
>punk rock

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>Industrial Hip-Hop
>Noise
>Ambient

https://soundcloud.com/sun-at-midnight/shades-ov-pink

>>74907493
Already gave my thoughts on this the other day, think it's solid math-rock, but needs some more work.
>>74907756
Really like the bassline, and the sampling is nice, noticing a Kanye influence, but I could be wrong on that one. My only issue (which I keep saying a lot in these threads) is that it's not really a fully developed song, it's nice for what it is, it really is, but it needs variety, and leaving 1:30 minute ideas won't leave too much of an impression, unless you're going for that.
>>74908483
It has the potential to be a catchy song, but the vocals need work, and I'd also suggest if you worked a bit more on the arrangements, doesn't have to be anything spectacular, but it could sound more full.
Another thing that kinda doesn't stick are the drums. In my opinion, either go full authentic drums, or use the synthetic tone more, because this is somewhere in the middle and it doesn't really sound all too pleasant, it kills it for me at least.

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>surf rock with a metal twist
https://towerofbabel.bandcamp.com/track/send-me-on-my-merry-way

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>>74907052


Get your daily fix of Exotica!
Today in Extendo-vision:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4tZamFKyPwM
> Complete Permutation of G7#9
>Beefheadian Free-Jazz

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5kubSsm5l6k&t=1s
> Sceneries of Decay
>Rural Folk

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rM2WDjWaI4Y
>Trip to the Batcave
>Exotica

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3iJskyzt-B4
>Tokyo Basement Transmissions
>Electroacoustic / Noise

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YOe0d0VhAgA&t=5s
>Can't get no Hawaii
>(clean)Drone


Full album on Bandcamp
https://aoftheh.bandcamp.com/

>>74910520
Send Me on My Merry Way is pretty nice overall. Love the bass work and and of course the twang. The surfrock/metal mix is definitely something you should explore more.
But production and mixing need some work in my opinion.

>>74907493
Love the way it is mixed and produced - sounds super oldschool. The playful bass is another good part. But, in total the record gets pretty boring - although the noisy-parts at the end of the record spice things up

recs:
>>74907704
>>74908626

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BPa2QefPXGg

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y62yJe8UxI8&t=61s

my bandcamp :

https://svccy.bandcamp.com/


>Vaporinet
>Dream
>Vaportrap
>Chillwave

REC:
>>74907248
as always
>>74907249
Nice tracks !!!!

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https://ivonnevancleef.bandcamp.com/album/ivonne-van-cleef-4

> rural psychedelia, lo fi, portastudio, drone, ambient, bedroom recordings, loops, noise

recc>>74911080
>>74911862

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oc russian black metal

https://soundcloud.com/ursusmax/sklep-4-wvocals

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>stoner, doom, fuzz, metal etc
https://soundcloud.com/sengaija

>electronic, industrial, space
https://soundcloud.com/deepspacetransmission-1

bamp

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soundcloud:

https://soundcloud.com/neocafe

youtube:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ldmEuJUjmfs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F3qWmqNK6pk

bandcamp: https://eccogangrecords.bandcamp.com

>blushcore

reccs:

<3

>>74907067
>>74907248
>>74907704
>>74908626
>>74911080
>>74911862

morning fellows

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https://soundcloud.com/therevengermusic/the-revenger-hes-comin-for-you

>synthwave
>retro electro

https://soundcloud.com/tsilverwatob/hopeless

>Novice, first draft.

I can't tell if the beginning vocals sounds completely out of place or not compared to the chorus near the end.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2MVoLF-xqIs

>fun trap
>posted up in germany
>hyphy Trap

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>>74907052

https://soundcloud.com/ydoubler/overkill-interlude-prod-santos-santana

YRR - OverKill Interlude (Prod. by SANTOS SANTANA)

A little interlude from my P4P Mixtape comin soon :)

>Trap
>Rap
>Hip-Hop
>meh

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https://epiglottis.bandcamp.com/album/the-dance
>FINAL EPIGLOTTIS ALBUM
>Loop-based ambient music
>A concept release about love and decay
>World's falling apart as the years pass you by

Don't forget to review these thing on RYM
http://rateyourmusic.com/release/album/epiglottis/the-dance/

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https://soundcloud.com/buckitbrigade/introduction-to-keen-slick

up

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>hottest song out

https://soundcloud.com/90sneptune/tinashe

>yt

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UEVMavf1Tfo

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NEW music from The dvd gnome!
>fun
>sexy
>naive
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tv-zJfBkTrA
That’s the album ^^^
Those are the singles vw v
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z21uI30HKMQ
>lil uzi bird
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ER9J8DvjTs8
>Jennifer lopz
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OPxyG6cc-Pk
>xxxtemptasions

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>>74907889
>>74917373

a fellow jet set radio fan? you the man


we should collab sometime

https://soundcloud.com/artsic

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>>74917541
Yeah man i mean i dont even know what collaboration entails in this cyberspace future we fund ourselves in but I’m down for all of that. Your music sounds great! I keep pretty low standards for my own stuff

Also recommending:
>>74917081
>>74914244
>>74912626
>>74911862
>>74911080
>>74908626

>>74917373
xxxtemptoton and oozey are real nice

https://soundcloud.com/tsuduku-750264476/asleeps-body-1
>electronic
>shoegaze?

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> hip hop
> industrial
> electropunk
> chamber rap
> acid house

Like if Richard D James had a butt baby with Leonard Cohen and Prodigy.

http://spoti.fi/2vTLbDg

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alternative rap w/ an emphasis on lyrics. hoping to collab more soon and release my 3rd tape.. here are the singles

https://soundcloud.com/milespowers/sets/the-singles

>>74907248
rec

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>underground trap type shit
>cool sounding
>real shiet
will return feedback almost always

hmu

https://soundcloud.com/contrastmane/waitforit/comment-361581044

>>74907067 good rhythm

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https://soundcloud.com/tutenkhamenbeats/curse-beat

>hip hop
>trap beats

>new tracks

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https://soundcloud.com/andrelp

>lo fi

new wip, kind of different from what i usually make

https://clyp.it/4qqsnz0b

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>>74907460
>https://soundcloud.com/najandmori/sutra

sounds sick, something that bones would spit over

>>74919290
The first and third track are good, nice flow

>>74919470
sounds great, the snare and hat rolls are done well


https://soundcloud.com/brenwalsh/sticking-skins-drinking-cans

>chill hip hop beat

https://youtu.be/gEVr2JDMJAU

song I wrote about apocalyptic war

will return all feedback

>>74921353
>https://youtu.be/gEVr2JDMJAU
sounds like a demo, a decent one
up ur production quality, either pay for engineers or learn urself

>> https://soundcloud.com/z3bul0n/mello-cold-summer-freestyle-prod-krisjxnes

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>>74907052
https://soundcloud.com/big-rare/big-rare-good-doctor

>rap
>melancholy
>sing

recs
>>74907249
I love the vibe the song myst. Its chill but noisy and big.

>>74907248
u again is really great. I love the vocal sample and how you chop them place them.

>>74921464
Surrender is a really great idea. I wish you were singing louder and had a more interesting way to present those chords.

ALL SOUNDCLOUD FEEDBACK WILL BE RETURNED

If you want critique just reply to me. I'm here

>>74921464

thanks man I'm working on uping my production quality now

I like the flow at the 1min mark really original and makes your track stand out from other rap artists

Beat is comfy as fuck

overall 8/10 good work my man

>>74921587

damn that was chill man great beat and nice lyrics too

tell me what you think of my track my man

>>74921353

>>74921823
i already did check my post again.

Surrender is a really great idea. I wish you were singing louder and had a more interesting way to present those chords.

>>74921863
think he didnt get it cause u replied to Me with ya review for his my g

>>74921879

yeah that was the case

thanks for the feedback I'll incorporate a louder voice

>>74921863

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https://soundcloud.com/sir_loins/lbd
torontofag here

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New stuff just put up love u fellas xoxox

https://soundcloud.com/fouratnight/yesss-boy

>beats
>trap
>electronic
>synths
>samples

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https://youtu.be/PWp6yNTysvM

released this couple of weeks ago.
in the mid of recording first EP so feedback will be very much appreciated. thanks!

>post-hardcore
>melodic hardcore

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https://soundcloud.com/derision/helium

>EDM, Hip Hop, Rock and Classical

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https://soundcloud.com/user-357507151/i-wish-i-could-say
>eyo check out my beat
>lofi sampled
>i hope you enjoy any feedback at all is appreciated

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bvTpo-Tv_z4

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J_rcshbrKmg&t=

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yg6qLIoW0q8

>Dreampop
>Soft Rock
>Indie

The first link is a cover of Childish Gambino´s "Redbone". Let me know what you think!

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https://soundcloud.com/sammyt-7

>lo-fi funk
>psychedelic
>sampling
>R&B
>trill

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>>74921353
nice raw work
https://youtu.be/u9LtmFYuCI0
>Simplicitys

What would you say the average amount of plays would be for a song that was released roughly two weeks ago? It's my first release and I think it is doing quite well but I have nothing to compare it to stat wise. Any help would be appreciated.

>>74926856
which is your song?

Here's a video of my playing electric guitar for the first time. Any tips?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8C4GWhIYC3A

>>74927042
have fun

>>74927026
Honestly I haven't posted it in one of these threads, and I'm a little hesitant to. Just from observation the less associated I am with this website as an artist the better, even if you all are mostly well intentioned in these threads. I'm just looking for a little information on statistic averages which might help me plan my next move.

>>74927121
I see, I'm here to promote small artists

>>74926811
these guys xD, they always do interesting things

>>74927213
Well actually this would be my first release, I just want to know if I'm above or below average in terms of play count. It's currently sitting at 96 plays, with a ratio of 43 complete and partial plays, 10 skips. Do you think this is average for a song that has been out two days shy of two weeks?

>>74911080
>>74909722

Thank guys for your comments. I value him.

>>74927296
Pretty low, IMO. My first song was a cover of a small time band and it's over 300 plays. Was at around 250 views after two weeks.

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https://youtube.com/watch?v=HWtxlcXFh2Y

https://chrisreierson.bandcamp.com/releases

>chill
>ambient
>noise

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T H I S
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kOhUcIw1d3I

>>74927403
Ok, that's good to know. Considering I only shared my song with like 10-15 people personally, don't play live, do no advertising and have like zero connections to any other musicians I don't think I'm doing overly bad. I only put my song on Bandcamp as well. Thanks again for your input, it helps a lot.

>>74927565
Yea no problem. I posted a link to my song on here, from bandcamp. Nobody personally, as I have no friends, but I reckon quite a few people ended up clicking it through that. You are doing fine if you didn't post it to a big audience.

>>74927565
You don’t do AdWords? Bro everyone does AdWords go get an AdWords account ;)

>>74927596
I shared it on Facebook for the first time today, which honestly did boost my plays quite a bit. But for the most part it's been a very small audience. I like to think that the ratio of complete as opposed to partial/skipped plays is more important than the overall total. Like the culture of bandcamp kind of encourages skipping through songs that you don't particularly care for on first listen, so having lots of complete plays is more important than just having lots of plays period; it means people are enjoying your stuff, and word gets around. I might be wrong and I don't have much credit in the music scene but I feel like this is just sort of the natural order.

>>74927596
No thanks, Google.

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>>74911979
>I respesct anyone who writes and records black metal highly reck

http://skaldic.bandcamp.com/album/mind-quencher

>experimental black metal project called skaldic
>new album free download

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https://soundcloud.com/allthexmusic/sets/parkviewmall

>hiphop
>trash
>mallsoft


recs:
>>74921017
so chill and so smooth, love this man.

>>74921587
>big rare you always got the fire hits, keep it up bruh.

>>74926161
its always a pleasure to come across your beats homie, love em.

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https://nave40.bandcamp.com/

>Grunge, Alt-Rock

We recently put out our first single. Give it a listen and tell me what you think!

>>74910520 Digging this genre crossover!

Guy’s lets ALL COLLAB on ONE NOTE

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yames.bandcamp.com


watery ambient, temple music, tunes for your moods

rec:
>>74911080