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A journey of a lifetime
begins with a forgiveness kiss
an eagles blessing from a widows bounty
wisdom that can be learned from angels above
good on you the soldiers and heros
the men we turn to in times of strife
hark hark it's the year of the cowboy
a sterile child to strike the bold
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>>74327912
doesn't rhyme 0/10
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>>74327912
>A journey of a lifetime
begins with a forgiveness kiss
No it doesn't. It starts when you're born.
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>>74327912
>heros
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>>74327974
do you like it though
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>>74327958
lmao you think it's bad because it doesn't rhyme, you must be simple
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>>74328639
why
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Almost all lyrics come off as dumb when not in the context of the music. Very seldom does an artists lyrics stand out as good on their own.
Yours are no exception.
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>>74329237
>tfw try to write joanna newsom inspired lyrics
>they sound like angsty pretentious bullshit every time
how does she do it
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>>74327912
pretty shitty imo
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>>74328639
can i think it's bad because there is no interesting or creative use/abandonment of form?
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>>74329392
yes
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>>74327912
you've made me personally hate you
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