Bad idea but...

>>72940787
Time for the Smith & Wesson retirement plan bud.

why was this transcribed onto an ancient scroll

>>72940787
Cringe

Give me your riff. That's more important. If you legit came up with a lyric before the riff that's just hopeless.

>>72940787
just do slam tier growls and no on will be able to tell that you're saying anyway

>>72940787
if it doesn't carry any meaning then anything work really as long as it sounds cool
if its coming from your pains or some shit then I feel like you could put more into it. im not saying be more original but im sure you can arrange something better

>>72940822
dark edginess ;_(

I wish I was fucking joking.

How do I get better? What is an example of a good death metal lyric?

or is it not actually possible?

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>>72940787
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0EC1z5u5vj2

Enjoy nerd

If I deliver it tounge-in-cheek like Wednesday 13 or Rob Zombie, would it not be cringey?

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>chained
>sweating
>throbbing
>crying

>>72940940
Check out Death Spiritual Healing

>>72940787
Does it matter?
The audience isn't gonna be able to tell what you're singing anyway.

>>72941065
Depends on how he sings it man

>>72940787
these are more like Black Metal lyrics than Death desu
Death Metal lyrics go more along the lines of
>KNIFE IN ASS
>FUCKED TO DEATH
>EAT THE BRAIN
>FEEL THE PAIN
>OOOOOOUGUHUGHUGUGHGUHUGHUGHUHGUHGUHUGHUGH
while black metal is more like what you wrote + some autistic screeching thrown in for muh atmosphere and in Norwegian even if the band is from mexico or some shit

shrieking>growling anyhow

>>72941020
fuck. I didn't realise that

lol great don't tell me I'm a faggot as well as a shit writer. What a day it's been.

>>72941138
It's nothing like black metal, it's some weird athiest emo shit

>>72940787
dying of laughter desu

>>72941176
>41176▶
>>>72941138
>weird atheist emo shit
you literally just described black metal

>>72941176
>weird athiest emo shit
so black metal right?

>>72941138
its sung midtone shrieking, like devildriver?

I guess until we finish the demo nobody really knows?

>>72941215
devildriver is more like a light growl, not a shriek
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JHRhm_fBJuQ
these are shrieks

>>72941196
>>72941201
hly fuck fa m fucking EPIC

>>72941251
Ok, got ya. It's light growls with some screams thrown in here and there for variety