Thoughts on this song I wrote? https://clyp.it/dqnyczur

the chord progression is very generic

but your voice is full of emotion, so it's not too bad.

some of your lyrics are pretty generic

but overall it's not bad, but I feel like you also took the "new york" from that beyonce song, which isn't that good if you're trying to establish an identity.

if this was fully produced, I could see like maybe i dunno a 6/10

>>72713117
sounds like a counting crows song

>>72713287
Thanks for listening and for the feedback.

I didn't even notice the similarity to Empire State of mind, but now that you mention it, I notice that it is the same three words and the same three notes. Either it's a coincidence or I somehow unconsciously stole it. I haven't even listened to that song in years. Huh

>>72713389
Interesting. Can't say that counting crows is an influence on me though

>>72713437
Nevermind. They're actually not the same notes. Just the same words

lol sounds like no 1 party anthem by the artic monkeys or something meets counting crows

>>72713495
Yep I borrow the descending chord pattern from Something

>>72713117
>guy spills his spaghetti in text convo with girl
>girl takes screenshot, posts it online, and everyone makes fun of him
>girl spills her spaghetti in text convo with guy
>guy invites her over, they fuck, and girl goes home in the morning happy and satisfied

existence is a series of injustices and but i'll see to it before my final breath that justice is served

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>>72714039
Nah if a girl unironically talked to me like that I would probably cut all contact with her.

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>>72713117
>https://clyp.it/dqnyczur
This is you isn't it? From your pic related it shows you at least have self awareness