Music critique

This be my shitty music, please shit on me with some honest shitting

https://soundcloud.com/user-795393179/receding-hairline-slacker-danish-accent

https://soundcloud.com/asebailey/wave


Rate me brehs

>>72262978

its alright

>>72263177
I like it, you're flow is pretty good, the sound could be more clean, but thats more a matter of your gear maybe not being high tech. You're talented, and I'll probably listen to a couple more songs.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kvT6NQ4nPno

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https://soundcloud.com/ivysly/140-public-sq
https://soundcloud.com/ivysly/phluid

>>72263657
140 PS was quite chill but as the comment already mentions the part at 2:26 had good potential for a transition and a beat to kick in, but you kinda only chose to add some fart sounds and go back.

phluid - went in with too much too quickly there wasn't a connection with the intro and when the beat kicked in. needed much more variation and again the transition part needed more work, and for the second part, you didn't alter that much to keep me intrigued
But the overall beat was quite good i liked it. but got kinda bored after while.

Just me rapping 2nd verse from lupe fiasco's I'm beaming and a bit from eminems lose yourself

http://vocaroo.com/i/s0XMNx8z2ffc

https://SoundCloud.com/eljhbrrs/springfevermeilin I'll gladly give feeback in return

>>72264416
https://soundcloud.com/eljhbrrs/springfevermeilin

>implying it's not just gonna be bitter anon shit talking everything

https://soundcloud.com/xxgoodmorningmidnight/sets/basket-of-flowers-final-mixes/s-WkvZn

let me know what you think

https://soundcloud.com/senseisendling-1

Ambient & Trap combined

https://bestregardsnj.bandcamp.com/releases

Some good ol' New Jersey pop punk

https://willsmith.bandcamp.com/track/propaganda

glitch hop