What do you think of this song I made? https://youtu.be/-gxuPpIJM7o

Bumpagain

It's okay. The vocals are kinda goofy at times, especially around 'oh night divine'. I'm no expert in vocals, so I don't know what you could do to improve.

>>71526593
But other than that your voice is pretty good, atleast to me.

>>71526593
I could've delivered that more musically, but I decided to add some character. I think I'll work on making the instrumental build to match the intensity of my voice. That'd sound better

AOTY

>>71524840
2/10 couldn't bring myself to finish it desu

nice I like it

>>71527370
Your voice sounds better when you're doing that effeminate (lacking a better word) singing. The 'oh night' type of stuff sounds over the top and sarcastic. Did you ever sing in a pop punk band?

>>71527459
Nah I've never sang for a pop punk band. I think that type of delivery is mostly inspired by Bright Eyes, Bob Dylan, and The Mountain Goats for me