post your songs, demos, etc.
give and get feedback.
>>70989319
https://clyp.it/kod0souq
Im trying to practice my lyric/vocal writing ability. did I do well /mu/?
https://clyp.it/zlvbj1ut
low effort beat inspired by nujabes, blank banshee and burial
>>70989327
I really enjoyed that- anon. Your intonation is off once or twice but other than that it was pretty damn good, keep at it
https://clyp.it/b0rtpjvk
I'm just makin some psych pop and I wanna make this the opener- it's kinda animal collective inspired
>>70989327
sounds kinda like youre singing lower than your usual voice. cant say much about the lyrics, was pretty hard to hear
>>70989418
reminds me of those songs from life is strange. might want to replace the piano with guitar and you've yourself a decent indie folk song
>>70989418
Hey good looks man. I'll give you a listen after I shovel my walkway. I'm snowed the fuck in
https://clyp.it/3zzlydeq
Going for a black pus/death grips thing
https://clyp.it/0ktbbzy1
also fucking about with a volca sample and some accapellas I found
recorded this yesterday for a class
https://clyp.it/5swrcy2y
>>70989445
>life is strange
My nigga. I shamelessly loved that game because when are you going get another like it?
>>70989478
sounds like a mix between an indie RPG soundtrack and an indie folk song. the flute is honestly a little bit cheesy, guitar is generic, but since this is classwork i cant really say much.
>>70989472
first track sounds like sunn o))) having sex with angerfist. you should consider putting more spaces in between the sounds to get the death grips feel
second track actually sounds like something made by death grips. consider putting more variations in the parts that have no vocals
>>70989478
should have mentioned this is a recitative from Handel's Messiah if that wasn't clear from the title
Vamp