/clyp thread/

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https://clyp.it/2d0j4ncc
>lofi trap (I guess)

https://clyp.it/lkjm42gj
>synthwave

https://clyp.it/wmy3u3ob
>something purposefully over-the-top 80s

>>70527567
The ONLY thing I wold suggest is changing the kick sample. It's too, for lack of a better word, "clicky". Change it to something with some thump, or even a vinyl sampled kick. I got some if you want them.

>>70527930
(OP) there is actually an eq on the kick bumping up the highs that i might lower a bit

>trap wip
there needs to be a bit more interplay between the drums and the synths, it feels like they are both just doing their own thing - there's a good idea in the song though

>synthwave
maybe lower the distortion on that lead in the middle section, and make the snare a bit more snappy

>80's
nice guitars, bass synth is pretty cool, but some of the melodies are hard to make out, or lack a sense of rhythm

overall some pretty good stuff

>>70528030
>(OP) there is actually an eq on the kick bumping up the highs that i might lower a bit
Either way, it needs more punch. I don't think you raising the high end too much fucked that up. I think it's the sample itself.

>there needs to be a bit more interplay between the drums and the synths, it feels like they are both just doing their own thing - there's a good idea in the song though
I put a random acapella on it to just to be funny and it made everything come together really well. I guess it just needs a rap on it.
>https://clyp.it/ryfebtwc

Also, I forgot one.
>https://clyp.it/qoh4g5qi

>>70528111
track works better with the vocals

bino remix instrumental is cool, there are a couple of spots where the acapella doesn't quite fit in

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https://clyp.it/rjlrcr4v

>pop

rate

https://clyp.it/n5pbiqib

Can I get some feedback on this mix?

has /mu/ ever made something good?

Here is a clip of me playing Fly Me To The Moon. Any critiques is welcomed!

https://clyp.it/khkofwox

>>70529611
I guess. One of my tracks is in a shit load of YouTube videos, some of them with half a million views. If that counts for anything.

let this thread die, and make it a prerequisite to critique others if you want to post. this is retarded.