I'd love to hear your critical feedback.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=aXnqWJgDNhE
>>70372617
Really good desu
vocals harmonise to closely, a more characterful approach would be better. The organ and guitar and bass aren't separated enough, bass should be staccato or more rhythmic.
" I refuse I refuse" should be more passionate
guitar plucking again... too mild
each separate part is great but it works less as a whole , more space is needed for individual sounds.
guitar effect is dated, turn off the chorus and reverb or try power chords.
get rid of echo on vocals.
it is all there, , shoot the producer
>>70372745
listen to ocean colour scene , they were good
>>70372665
Really? What do you like/dislike about it?
https://m.youtube.com/watch?list=PLqxREbopyPJPndejiGirr0fXg-F3DwFkF&v=wLv4ior3Ywc
>>70372617
The drumming is out of time, and the hi hats are too loud
>>70372745
Awesome! Love this feedback, 100% critical and technical. My friend needs this kind of info.
>>70372843
Thanks for this. I'm copying all the feedback and will listen to the tracks carefully again.
>>70372831
Reminds me of artists i like
>>70372745
>>70372843
Could you give me your thoughts on the production of this song?
https://m.youtube.com/watch?list=PLqxREbopyPJPndejiGirr0fXg-F3DwFkF&v=qx2TWjh_Yu4
>>70372981
I can pick out the influences pretty easily - almost too easily and I don't think that that's exactly a strength. Joy Divison, style council, stone roses, etc. Also lots of 60s jangle pop.
>>70373014
yeah, your grouting is a mess btw
I like it tbph
>>70373614
>your grouting is a mess btw
What's grouting??