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Trying to rap. Can you guys give me feedback on my lyrics. Aye,

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2016-10-06 05:03:01 Post No. 68271032
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:03:01 Post No. 68271032 [Report]
Trying to rap. Can you guys give me feedback on my lyrics.

Aye, alright, I'm a motherfucking king.
Ice chain with the 40 carrot ring.
The bitch want my dick she a motherfucking fiend.
You know ima fornicate after I smoke all my weed
I get money all day call me a money machine
I ain't printing out no shit but I'm getting green
I ain't no fucking rat but I'm still getting cheese
Smoked a fat blunt while I sip that purple lean
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:04:16 Post No.68271054
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:04:16 Post No.68271054 [Report]
Can you talk about something else other than whats been said a trillion times. Chances are you're a 16 y/o white kid who can't back up what you spit anyway.
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:04:48 Post No.68271063
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:04:48 Post No.68271063 [Report]
>misspelling karat
>trying to rap
>acting 12
b8
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:04:52 Post No.68271065
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:04:52 Post No.68271065 [Report]
>>68271054
Boyyy you don't even know.
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:05:00 Post No.68271070
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:05:00 Post No.68271070 [Report]
>>68271032
pitchfork:

8.8 BNM
>anon has truly captured the essence of young black americans and their struggle against white patriarchal oppression
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:05:13 Post No.68271074
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>>68271054
>not recognizing talent
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:05:19 Post No.68271078
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:05:19 Post No.68271078 [Report]
>bob wire
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:05:54 Post No.68271089
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:05:54 Post No.68271089 [Report]
>>68271063
>bob wire
>carrot
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 05:09:17 Post No.68271148
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>>68271032
would probly be nominated verse of the year by antonio fandango lets face it
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 06:14:12 Post No.68272189
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Anonymous 2016-10-06 06:14:12 Post No.68272189 [Report]
>>68271032
>bob wire
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