/warpone/ #2

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>>30769481
>Asian_Cutie_sandwiched_by_two_Euro_studs.png

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>>30769481

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>>30769481
All of the war ponies vs Sergeant Lewellyn Chilson

Who would win?

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>>30769567
man, i love how simultaneously qt and thicc this artist makes his pones. i wish he made more of our cute sergeant

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>>30770645
Plunger drew like half of the art that exists for Sgt. Reckless.

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>>30770736
well yeah, how do you think i got the picture? im talking about the post that i replied to.
you know, like most people who click on a post number do.

>>30770802
Oh, I thought you were talking about the picture you had posted. I dunno who did the extra fluffy Reckless, but I hope they return.

>>30769567
Marengo was Egyptian

>>30771775
So are a lot of Europeans these days.

>>30771799
Savage.

>>30771322
If you mean >>30769567, that's duop-qoub.

>>30772038
well he needs to do moar. cute, thicc fluffy pones are my fetish

>>30772124
I just think they are cute.

Personally, I'm hoping to see these horses interact more with the mane 6 or other ponies.
>Twilight won't stop asking them questions.
>Raining Dash wants to race all of them.
>Fluttershy is afraid of them due to their violent histories.
>Rarity and Laili are getting along perhaps a little too well.
>Applejack is happy to see hard workers and hopes to earn their respect.
>Pinkie is already throwing them a "Sorry You Had To Leave Your Home Because You're Dead Or Something But Welcome To Equestria We Hope You Like It Here" (or SYHTLYHBYDOSBWTEWHYLIH for short) party

>>30772368
>Reckless gets into an eating contest with Pinkie
>It's a surprisingly close competition

>Marengo, Lalli, Incitatus, and Rarity have a tea party
>Ponyville never recovers from the sheer amount of posh concentrated at that one table

>Bucephalus recognizes the warrior spirit in Rainbow Dash
>Rainbow Dash gains a father figure that she neither needed nor asked for
>At least this one isn't constantly stroking her ego

>Robert E. Lee's horses are taken on as farmhands (farmhooves?) by the apple family after making a very pleasant first impression
>They're well mannered and polite to every pony
>Cows, sheep, and Spike the Dragon (among others) are not ponies
>AJ has to shepherd them away from situations where they'd make things awkward

>>30772368
>>30773098
All of these are great.

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>>30773098

>>30773276
>Lucy comes back to the farm, complaining about how some filthy donkeys tried to talk to her at the market
>Later that night, a family of donkeys look out their living room window, wondering why there's a giant upright horseshoe on fire on their front lawn

>>30773098
They are literally not ponies, you fucking yankee.

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Would like feedback on this. Wrote this in a state of "I Can't Sleep" levels of delirium.

>>30774326
That's the point, they were nice to everyone, except for subponies.

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>>30774837
Excessively British people are one of my favorite comedy archetypes, so I'm a bit biased when I say I liked it.

>>30773276
Thank you, I couldn't remember their names.

more green when

>>30774837
I think I commented on it in the last thread, but I liked it pretty well. The borderline incomprehensible RAF jargon and tea jokes were funny.

>>30769481
Link to the last thread,

>>30769481
>>30778621
Oops
Previous thread: >>30623804

We were discussing Russian warhorses towards the then of the last thread, more specifically if Cathrinethe great had any known horses. I found this article online . . .

http://webpages.charter.net/webman/Articles/Proud%20Black%20Horse%20of%20the%20Czars.html

Interesting read in and of itself, about the history of one particular breed of Russian horses, but it also gives us this.

>Drakon, an Oriental stallion said to be Arabian (but probably a Turkoman, today's Akhal-Teke) previously presented to Catherine by the Shah of Persia.

We have a named horse belonging to Cathrine the Great.

>>30778962
Nice work.

>>30778962
Great. We're casting him as a male Lyra, right?

>>30769481
>>30769579
These are cute.

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>>30779486
IKR

>>30779378
I was thinking of a male Lyra with a large dose of pre-Casino Royale James Bond. He'll flirt with anything that has a vagina and passes the Harkness test, but strongly prefers bipeds. He's suave, impossible to overwhelm, and is an expert at what he does.

Puns and one-liners are optional.

>>30780401
>He'll flirt with anything that has a vagina
does pvt. anon's boipucci count

>>30780433
Probably not. He'll steal Anon's waifu, though.

>>30780465
like hell he will

>>30780401
What would Lyra think of him? Would they be instant soulmates? Rivals, somehow? Maybe they'd be each other's wingponies?

>>30781969

Lyra would admire him. He could be a mentor to her, and maybe a friend with benefits. I'm liking the wingpony idea as well. Bon Bon would hate him for a lot of reasons but secretly be tsundere as fuck about him.

>>30782001
She'd probably have quite a few question for all of the warpones, pertaining to their interactions with the Hoo-mans.

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>>30779378
>>30780401
Slav pony fights for glorious mother Equestria!!

>>30773276

i like these pommy horses

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From PQs tumblr.

>>30782791
>Laili naked
L-lewd

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>>30779378
>>30780401
>>30782001
>>30782049
>Lyra meets meets Drakon, and, being an anthropology geek, asks him a fuckload of questions pertaining to his interactions with hoomans
>Is led to believe that horses fornicating with hoomans is a completely normal thing

Would any historical horses be reincarnated as anything other than earth ponies?

>>30783868
horses ridden by the Winged Hussars would make sense as pegasi.

>>30783868
Does anybody know if the Kim's have any horses? If so I'd like to think the entered equestria as Kirin.

Which is, of course, to say they are earth ponies with obviously fake antlers duct taped to their heads.

>>30782791
We never came up with Lalli's mark. What should it be?

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>>30784145
I suggested a golden apple in the last thread, but now I'm thinking a heart with two crossed swords might work better.

>>30782791
>Reckless helps the other ponies undress by eating their clothes off of them

unf

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>>30784247
>the irresistible golden apple
>Symbol of beauty, desire, perfection, tragedy, and the faults of humanity in multiple different cultures
I like the golden apple idea: it brings up multiple classical thematic tropes, and is meaningful, although subtle. I compared her to Helen of Troy in the last thread, and I think a golden apple fits the theme.

>>30784274
i want her to eat my boxers off

>>30784247
>>30784300
I like the golden apple.

It'd also confuse Applejack.

>>30784300
Hail Eris!

>>30784300
>>30784529
As much as I like the symbolism of the golden apple we do already have an entire family of ponies with apple cutiemarks. That's why I recommended the heart thing.

>>30782791
>antacid
I remember an anon asking if anybody knew the Korean onomatopoeia for a rumbling stomach. I wonder if that was PQ?

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>>30785325
The Apple family doesn't hold the sole right to apple-based cutie marks.

>>30785893
>implying the Flim-Flam Bros aren't from a far-removed branch of the Apple clan

>>30784011
good idea

>>30785325
In the end, it's up to the drawfags. If we simply must avoid the apple thing, I don't recommend swords... That'd give the implication that she's a fighter. I think jewelery of some kind would work better. Something with Arabian flair, perhaps.

>>30788771
>Arabian flair
She's a Paki/Sikh though.

>>30788786
Oh. Well something with Paki/Sikh flair, then.

>>30786004
> not "far-removed branch of the apple tree"
Show me your pun-papers. You're off-quota.

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Not really a drawfag but I am trying to learn how to draw ponies. So here's my take on Drakon and Copenhagen. If some real artists come along with different looks for them I'm all for it.

Drakon's mane is styled after the crazy looking plumage on a rider's helmet I found while looking for images of Russian horses.

I tried to make Copenhagen's temples look gray like they were going gray.

>>30792474
Copenhagen is actually looking pretty good here. I like that.

>>30792474
Is that a track suit?

>>30792505
Yeah, I thought it would be funny, slav pony and all.

>>30794420
Whew, thanks Sarge. I thought I was a goner.

>>30792474
>dat adidas tracksuit
kek

>>30780401
I had an idea, what if Drakon had major political ambitions and was constantly trying to ingratiate himself with the equestrian citizens and downplay his sexual misadventures. Kind of like Cathrine herself, but unlike her was always failing in hilarious ways. Getting the names of cities wrong while on tour and mailing private love letters to the newspapers by mistake.

>>30796568
>Drakon desperately trying to cover-up his past sex-scandals to save face as a politician
This is a pretty cool way to go too.

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I can't wait to get home and clean these up. Laili cutie mark idea.

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Civil war pony.

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Eating contest.

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Bucephalus and Reckless

>>30798662
I like that idea. I clearly understood that it meant before I read the caption. It's a very good design, probably better than the golden apple.

>>30798679
>>30798694
>>30798737
These are all excellent.

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And now I'm just making fun of myself.

>>30798744
Kek, I remember that.

>>30798744
It's importantand good to have a sense of humor about yourself.

>>30798662
This is too perfect, easily the best suggestion so far.

>>30798662
>>30798679
>>30798694
>>30798737
>>30798744
These are all so freaking good!

I started writing a story based off a prompt a while ago, but never finished it. It's only tangentially related to warpones. Should I post it?

>>30801576
Give us those greens!

>>30801576
Post it, fucker

>>30801735
>>30802155
I'll have to wait until I'm off work. I'll post it later this afternoon.

>>30769481
I sort of missed the whole /warpone/ thing. is there a backstory for Reckless?

>>30802458
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sergeant_Reckless

>>30784126
I've seen pics of Un riding a horse

>>30802750
wow..just wow..Reckless truly is best pony

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>You are on an expedition to find resources to fuel your nation's industrial boom
>Establish trading post colony within carting distance of Ponyville
>Business is going well
>Befriend the friggin viceroy of this town
>Over time, you two become considerably close
>Nigh inseperable during your off-time
>You both profess your love for each other
>One week later, you find out the Ponyville and the surrounding area has a shitton of iron under it.

>Be Iron Hoof, an earth pony ore miner and, currently, general trader.
>You have a deep gray coat and a jet black mane.
>At least, that's what you want everyone to think.
>You hate your natural orange mane. It makes you look silly.
>Dyes are top-bit commodities, but the respect your look demands is worth it.
>Most miners have a pickaxe or mine cart as their cutie mark, but yours depicts a hammer crushing a mineral. It looks far more imposing then the other cutie marks.
>You love it.
>You established Foreleg Station a few miles from the new settlement of Ponyville.
>Your unicorn business partner, Deep Dowse, declared this to be the perfect spot. His iron-detection spell had discovered a large deposit of ore nearby.
>Dowse couldn't determine exactly where the deposits were, which meant they were likely buried extraordinarily deep underground.
>You quickly develop a reputation for the quality of your stock and reliability of your word.
>It overshadows the reputation of your harsh and strict nature.
>Ponyville loves your goods. You bring fabrics, dyes, tools, paper, the occasional rare stone, and whatever else you know you can sell.
>You'd rather be mining, hauling, and trading ore, but you are patient. You know that will come later.
>For now, you only have whatever Manehatten ships to you. They seem to know what Ponyvillians want, and you can't argue with the results.
>Once you find the deposits, you fully intend to ditch this trading post.
>Someone else will take over, surely. Those Shim Sham brothers, probably.
>But for now, you are enjoying the authority that comes with this job.

>>30803262
>While discussing the potential location of the iron ore with Deep Dowse in your cabin, a pegasus mare bursts through the door.
>"Iron Hoof, sir!"
>You turn to directly face the mare and maintain sharp eye contact.
"What is it?"
>"The fabric couriers from Manehattan led their cart into a ditch," she declares.
>You angrily stomp a hoof. Your voice raises.
"The fabric couriers are always barely on time with their deliveries."
>"What do we do?" asks the messenger pony.
>You waste no time on making the decision.
"Send Lickety Split to repair the cart immediately. Then, find Long Haul and tell him to gather his crew. I want him to take over the delivery so we can avoid another sloppy mistake. Split is fast - by the time Long Haul's crew arrives, the repairs will be finished."
>You look away from her for a moment to walk over to a large toolbox.
>From the toolbox, you produce a small hammer that matches the one on your flank.
>You engage eye contact with the messenger pony again, and approach her.
"I want you to take this and accompany Long Haul to the couriers."
>Her demeanor shifts to reveal her weak nerves. Her voice trembles. "M-me? You want me to-"
>You roll your eyes.
"Calm yourself. No, you only need to give it to them. They will know where to find me."
>Relieved, she collects herself, takes the hammer, and flies out the door.
>"Iron Hoof," Dowse says, "why didn't you have her deliver the punishment? This is unusual."
"You saw her, she couldn't do it. Besides, I have been meaning to speak with those fabric couriers about their work. Now, let's get some work done before they return to the Station."
>Truthfully, this was also your favorite part of merchantry.
>Not that it affected your decision. You firmly believe in choosing the right pony for a job.
>You are simply very good at this job.

>>30803288
>An orange earth pony stallion wearing saddlebags stands alone with you in your cabin.
>Maps and plans are still scattered across the table. Dowse had stayed until the couriers arrived, leaving no time to clean up your work.
>You sent the other three couriers away. The blame belonged solely to this one.
"Give me the hammer, Quick Step."
>Managing to keep his composure, Quick Step removes it from his saddlebag and places it in your hoof.
>You pace across the floor for about a minute before speaking again.
"A cockatrice. You ran your cart off of the road, because you thought you saw a cockatrice."
>"Yes, Iron Hoof, sir."
>You admire Quick Step for his integrity.
>He knows what it means when Iron Hoof sends you a hammer. Everyone does.
>Yet he walked into your cabin and made no attempt to shift blame to his crew.
>But that is where your admiration ends. He is useless.
>You approach him.
"You know that cockatrices only live in the Everfree Forest, which is miles away from Manehattan. So why did you think you saw a cockatrice?"
>You take the hammer in your mouth.
>He cannot hide his nerves anymore.
>"I-it really looked like a cockatrice for a moment. I guess my imagination-"
>You slam the hammer into his front left knee.
>As Quick Step wails, you spit the hammer into your hoof so you can speak.
>You return to pacing while he holds up his injured leg and his breathing speeds up.
"Quick Step... This is not the first time this has happened. Twice now, I have had to send a repairpony to rescue you."
>"I am very sor-"
>You sharply look directly into his fearful eyes.
"Actually, they are rescuing ME. Every delivery you delay puts MY reputation on the line!"

>>30803327
>You maintain your glare for a moment before returning once again to pacing.
"But you knew that. I've told you this before. You know that the only reason I maintain a good reputation is because I have ponies I can depend on. Ponies like Long Haul and Lickety Split, who know they have a job to do, and know how to do it."
>You turn to glance at him from across the room.
"They don't need reminding. So why do you?"
>Quick Step shifts his gaze to the floor.
>You turn your eye to his flank to remind yourself of his cutie mark.
>It's a short sequence of hoofprints and arrows, like dance steps.
>He opens his mouth to speak, but hesitates.
"Perhaps it's your imagination. I know you like to dance. I'm sure you're very good at it, aren't you?"
>He can't look you in the eye.
>"Y-yes, sir."
"But dancing is not your job. Delivery is. And as long as you're working for me, I am going to ensure that you deliver. Is that clear?"
>Quick Step finally looks up to make eye contact.
>"Yes, Iron Hoof, sir..." His voice trails off.
>He looks away nervously.
>"But-"
>You hate that word. Almost nothing good comes after someone starts with that word.
>It means someone isn't listening to you. They are about to defy you.
>Instantly, Quick Step looks ten times more foolish in your eyes.
>You can't stand his stupid orange coat.
>You take the hammer in your mouth again and put your entire body into swinging it, aiming for his nearest knee.
>It was the same knee as last time.
>Quick Step collapses with a deafening shriek.
>He holds his knee in his hoof, yelping with each short, sharp breath.
>You stand over him.
"I said: is that clear?"
>"YES!" he instantly shouts, pitifully.

>>30803660
>You watch him writhe for a few minutes.
>Yes, you are sure Quick Step will fall in line now.
>But he's not very good at this job, and he likely never will be. It's not his special talent.
>You feel better knowing that he will remember this, but you can't have him fail you again with your reputation being at stake.
>More imporantly, you absolutely must keep Foreleg Station running. It needs to thrive until you can start mining the iron.
>You're all for supporting Manehattan, but the acquisition of the iron itself isn't what drives you.
>You deeply enjoy mining. It makes you feel powerful. But even so, that is only part of your motivation.
>What really fulfills you is respect, and with the success of Foreleg Station, you have been reaping quite a lot of it.
>Merchantry isn't even your special talent, so you can only imagine how much better you will run an iron mine.
>You can imagine how much repect you will demand after having pulled off both of these projects with aplomb.
>Taking all this into consideration, your brand of punishment is completely necessary. It is effective, and that is what matters.
>Quick Step is still quivering in pain on the floor.
"Now, Quick Step, I want you to listen to me. I don't want to see you in here a fourth time, so I will give you a job that even you can't mess up."
>He is looking at you attentively. You like it.

>>30803705
>You stand over him.
"You will now be tasked with unloading shipments as they arrive at the Station. It is less work than pulling a cart, and of course your pay will reflect that. It also happens that you will have more spare time."
>Quick Step's face perks up a little. You know he is thinking about dancing.
"But if I find that your little dancing hobby is getting in the way of your work, rest assured that you will find yourself here again. Your knee will heal this time, but you won't want to risk it again."
>You turn to look at your favorite hammer, which rests upon a couple pegs on the wall.
>It's a mallet with an iron head and wooden handle. Its face is slightly larger than the average pony's hoof.
>It looks exactly like the one smashing the rock on your cutie mark.
>You hear Quick Step's breath become more panicked. You know he followed your gaze.
"Everyone here at Foreleg Station has a job to do, including you. I have made my expecations clear. Now get up, go see the nurse, and return to work once your knee recovers."
>You intentionally did not ask him if he understands. He does not have a choice.
>You extend your hoof to help him up.
>After a bit of struggling and adjusting, Quick Step takes it, grunting as he stands.
>You open the door, and he silently limps out.
>He takes one last glance back inside.
>Seeing your glare, he dares not speak, and he makes his way to the medical hut.
>This went well.
>Of course it did. Iron Hoof is good at his job.

That's all for now. No war yet, and there won't be for a while. Am I close enough to on-topic to stay?

>>30803764
Yes, but maybe you should add one of the warpones to the story later, so it fits into the thread more.

>>30803812
Hmm... With the story I had in mind, that won't fit. I'll see what I can do, but don't be mad if none of them show.

>>30803927
Sad, maybe start a green general or the like.For people who have stories but no related thread.

>>30803960
There are lots of threads starved for greens as it is though. I have a feeling my green would be the only one there.

boop

>>30803717
>>30803764
I fucking love this thread and writerfag or artfag.

boop

>>30798737
Poor Bucephalus. Maybe that's why he's so conquer-happy, he just wants his best bro Alex to be proud of him.

>>30811614
Don't do that. I'm a sucker for sad ponies who need a hug.

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>>30811624
>All he needs in order to conquer Equestria is a hug from his bro.
Friendship is still magic.

>>30803717
>The next morning, you arrive in Ponyville with your merchant associates Big Bits and Fair Deal.
>You had insisted on leaving at the crack of Princess Celestia's dawn.
>Not because you are a morning pony - at least, no more than you are a night pony.
>No, it is because you understand how to get things done.
>The time of day itself makes no difference to you, but when you start earlier, there is more time to work with.
>Today, you have to go to Town Hall to talk trade with the Ponyville merchants.
>Big Bits and Fair Deal handle the mercantile side of things, but you have to be there because these details are important to the livelihood of Foreleg Station.
>You tolerated it.
>On your way to Town Hall, however, a scene catches your eye.
>From a distance, you see a mare berating a stallion who was standing next to a box that was about his size.
>You can't make out what she's saying, but you can tell that she is furious.
>The stallion's posture droops, and the mare turns to shout at a nearby pegasus, who then dashes away through the sky.
>The mare then moved to the stallion's side as the stallion used his unicorn magic to lift the box onto both of their shoulders, and they begin to trudge forward.
>It was a refreshing sight.

>>30812626
>"We were assured that she would be here in about fifteen minutes," said Stinkin' Rich.
>Ridiculous.
>What could she be doing that would make her so late to this meeting?
>You had never met this Tough Break mare, but you weren't looking forward to it.
>You decided to spend the fifteen minutes making introductions.
>There's no sense in wasting time.
>This is the first time you had attended one of these.
>Fair Deal and Big Bits had made the preliminary trade agreements that established the current trade route between the town and the station, but now is the time for more advanced discussion.
>Among the chatter, you overhear that Tough Break is the viceroy of Ponyville.
>When the Apple settlement devleoped into a town, Princess Celestia noticed it needed governing and sent Tough Break, a high-ranking Canterlot official.
>You find yourself questioning the princess' selection.

>>30811614
I like this characterization.

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http://www.artbycrane.com/thesupremewarhorseofspain.html
>bullied in youth.
>became a memetic badass.
> still kicking ass well into old age.

This is basically the Chuck Norris of horses.

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>>30798662
Kinda tired only the one for now.

>>30815071
The blue squiggles and gold stars are a really great subtle touch. It matches her color scheme well.

Also, I really like this cutie mark because Laili typically conceals it with clothes. That way, stallions wouldn't know to expect her shenanigans.

>>30815071
That rump... it's doing things to my naughty bits.

>>30815051
Basically a Spanish Bucephalus.

close call.

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>>30798679

>>30815071
Hawt

>>30817961
Nice picture, but wouldn't the warplanes miss their former owners?

>>30818420
*warpones, fucking autocorrect

>>30817961
>Do a fact check to see if Brown-Roan was blind and if Ajax died by running into a fence
>It's true
>Also learn that Ajax was too big to ride comfortably
http://www.stratfordhall.org/meet-the-lee-family/general-robert-e-lee-1807-1870/general-lees-horses/

Goodness, PQ, you've really done your research on these horses. Were you a horse history buff before this thread?

>>30818439
Heck no. Google is my friend.

>>30815071
The question of her cutie mark is settled . . .

Although, my pants are now very unsetteled.

>>30817961
What does Ajax's cutie mark mean? I don't know a lot about Civil War era military stuff.

>>30819110
More of a place holder, really. I just don't like drawing blank flacks.

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>>30819371
I suggest something about his size or strength. Maybe weights of some kind? He's definitely an oafish giant... Maybe a couple of those ton weights? I know that Traveller was 1.1 tons, maybe Ajax weighed a lot more.

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>>30798694

>>30818439
>Ajax was too big to ride comfortably
So he was a big horse, and riding him was extremely painful?

>>30819944
>Reckless missing the sock on her right foreleg
Finally. That detail has been bothering me since the beginning but I never said anything. Thank you for getting it right.

>>30820072
You ride for miles while doing the splits.

>>30819944
Adorable!

>>30820072
U U
U U

>>30815071
10/10 would go to war for that plot

>>30815071
Gosh, that dreass is pretty on her.
>dat ass

>>30815071
Holy shit this is beautiful

You're the GOAT PQ

>>30812643
>A blue pegasus mare with a purple mane finally comes through the door and takes a seat at the head of the table.
>"Sorry I'm late," she says, scowling. "Welcome to Ponyville, Foreleg Station representatives. I am Viceroy Tough Break. Let's get started. Stinkin' Rich?"
>She seems strangely familiar, but you can't put your hoof on it.
>Stinkin' Rich officially introduces himself, briefly explains the origin of the town, and expresses trade desires.
>It's mostly pretty mundane, although you take special note of their Zap Apple specialties.
>Magic food must be rather valuable.
>"...and we'd like to trade shipments of Zap Apple Jam for some of your precious stones. It is the finest jam in Equestria - a true luxury - and we understand you have some of the finest diamonds in Equestria. What do you say?"
>Big Bits releases a hardy laugh.
>"Diamonds for jelly? Hahaha, are you serious? No no no, that won't do!"
>He wipes a tear from his eye and finishes his chuckling.
>"We really do have the finest diamonds in Equestria. The only way we're going to trade those for APPLES is if you give us the rights to the Zap Apple farm! Maybe that will generate enough revenue to equal the worth of our gems. Haha, how about that?"
>He roars with laughter again.
>Fair Deal shrinks back.
>You are furious. You can't believe he would be so ignorant and pompous.
>He should know better than to say something that would sever ties with a trade partner like that.
>But before you can speak up, you are startled by hooves slamming on the table.
>Bits' laughter ceases abruptly.

>>30822087
>"Enough! You, tell me your name," Tough Break barks, pointing at Big Bits.
>She is fuming.
>The feeling of familiarity pains you now. You swear you've seen her before...
>Bits' frustration mixes with his nerves.
>"I'm Big Bits, ma'am." He attempts to act angry and tough, but his voice wavers slightly.
>"Alright, Big Bits," she says with sarcastic emphasis on his name. "Just who do you think you are? Do you think you can just come over here and dominate just because you hail from Manehattan?"
>She waits for a response.
>Once Bits realizes her question was not rhetorical, he pipes up.
>"W-well, I just thought our diam-"
>She slams the table again, then puts both front hooves on the table, leans forward, and unfurls her wings.
>You're certain you've met her... but where?
>"No, you didn't think! Stinkin' Rich explained just how valuable our Zap Apples are, and if Foreleg Station thinks they're so important that they don't have to pay attention, I see no reason to do business with them. Our jam is top-bit, and we believe in fair deals around here."
>Fair Deal beams.
>Tough Break continues. "If you're not interested in that, then you can quit wasting my time and get out of here." She points to the door.
>That's it! You remember - she was the mare with the box from earlier!
>The way she pointed her hoof, her attitude... yes, it was certainly her.
>You didn't give her colors a second thought before, but now that you're thinking of it, she was indeed blue and purple.
>No wonder she was late.

>>30819546
Ajax, being named after a giant, could certainly have a CM in reference to his size.

>>30815071
>Laili enter Equestria
>Everypony wants to be her stud
>Makes them decide via battle royale

>>30823828
Laili wouldn't even care about who's the strongest: she'd just want to watch the fight.

>>30822087
>>30822110
Cool.

>>30819944
Reckless has got some god-like innards.

>>30779592
I like how you draw Reckless's eyelashes more similar to a Crystal pony: she looks much more Asian this way.

>>30819546 >>30822310
He's a big horse.

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>>30815051
>Spanish hoers
He's got potential.

>>30824142
We are not giving a Bane-related cutie mark to Ajax.

>>30824348
>Not wanting to give him four identical horseshoes in a -
U U
U U
>-shaped pattern
U sure about that, m8?

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>>30824372
This idea demands justice!

>>30824372
That's not bad.
It's fun in a plausibly deniable way, like something the show animators could sneak in on a background pony if they were into that sort of thing.

>>30824411
IKR.
Subtle but meaningful CM's are the best.

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>>30823828
Are Humans allowed to enter?

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>>30824550
Only if you're willing to escalate the violence.

>>30824324
>"Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition!"
- Would be his first decree upon arriving in Equestria. (time period is fucked beyond relief, but it's just humor)

>>30824372
>big guy
>Always fourth pick (cuz too big)
>Nobody cared who he was
>Until he put on the shoes
I like it!

>>30798737
>>30811614
Aww...

>>30824411
>Plausibly deniable
As if everyone here wouldn't know what 4 U's mean. What are you trying to do? Crash this thread?

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>>30824783
With no survivors!

>>30824835
Was shitposting part of your plan?

>>30824550
No, humans already had their victor.

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>>30825100
Maybe two could slip through anyway, if they cooperated.

>>30824672
kek

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>>30825272
Greetings fellow ponies! I am here for the battle.

>>30825272
>>30825645
>"Wanna get together in a horse costume and risk our lives fighting in an arena full of desperate stallions?"
>"For a chance to double-team THAT? Sign me up!"

>>30815071
I want to send twelve thousand men to their deaths so I can cum inside Laili.

>>30826308
Anyone with the power to would in a heartbeat.

>>30824372
This

>>30822110
You know, the more I write this, the more I'm realizing this is hardly war-related. It'd take a while to even get to that point; I've written more than I've posted, and I'm not even close to that point. I'll keep writing it on my own, but I'll find another place for it.

Sorry to waste posts in here.

>>30827940
Thank you.

>>30824835
That is a very nicely detailed cockpit!

Bamp

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>>30798737

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>>30829101

>>30803717
>>30827940
Man, Quick Step is doomed to suffer isn't he? Never gets to dance, leg keeps getting fucked up, always roughed up... invasion or not, poor guy can't catch a break.

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>>30824835
This picture is terrible.

It shows the altitude as 30000 feet but on the PFD the glideslope for an ILS approach/landing is clearly showing them on a standard 3.5 degree descent.

Immersion ruined.

>>30829271
kek
I'm surprised you could even make that out.

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>>30829271

>>30829228
Maybe if he just did his job...

>>30829101
Bern?

>>30829321
>Not celebrating the autists Who drive the fandom
And people wonder why this board has contracted
>>30829101
Looks great!
Poor Bucephallus... It must be sad to lose your best friend and master...

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Some of the faggots on /mlpol/ have begun work on another warpone from the Civil War / Native American wars era. reposting it here.

This is Comanche, He was named after his bravery and service in the American-Comanche Wars where he was wounded several times but kept carrying his rider, Captain Myles Keogh, Throughout the battles, but Comanche is best known as being the lone survivor of the Battle for Little Big Horn where he was wounded, Even after being wounded and left to die by the combined Lakota, Dakota, Cheyenne, and Arapaho force He was recovered by the US Army and promoted to honorary second commanding officer of the 7th Calvary Until he finally died 15 years later. He is one of only two horses in american history to be given a military funeral.

A fictional film was made by Walt Disney inspired by Comanche's story, "Tonka" but it also went by the title "A Horse Named Comanche" As well as inspiring a song made by Johnny Horton simply named "Comanche"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dkIlxZxeK1s

He is also regarded as the second most famous American Military horse just behind our beloved Sargent Reckless.

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>>30831842
>A little more history about the horse that adds more character to him

>2:43 to skip background on the speakers
https://youtu.be/UMT-jpMHbFs?t

>added to this post is the possible cutie mark in progress

>>30831842
Interesting.

>>30831842
>promoted to honorary second commanding officer
Fits the ticket for me. Only the most iconic horses get promoted.
>He is also regarded as the second most famous American Military horse just behind our beloved Sargent Reckless.
So he had the badass crown until Reckless took the spotlight, eh..

>>30831850
>>30831842
Do you suppose his cutie mark should relate to Little Big Horn? Or perhaps something about being a survivalist. Sounds like he has survived many wounds, so being a survivalist, having figurative tough skin, or having strong willpower/spirit would suit him.

I bet he's great at boosting morale and inspiring his allies with his will to keep fighting, even with wounds.

>>30832423
I think the mark they are using has to do with him being part of many conflicts between american cavalry forces (the revolver) and Native american ones (the Tomahawk) as well as it relating to his name since he was named after one of the tribes.

>>30832455
Survivalism fits with native American themes too. You could slip a feather in there.

tbqh I'm just against the revolver, since earth ponies couldn't even use one of those.

>>30832497
perhaps a bayonet in the place of the revolver
also
a personality quirk of his HAS to be a general hatred for buffalo

>>30832512
>"Listen, friend-"
>"Don't you 'friend' me, you redskin varmint! Y'all may of changed shape, but I know a dirty Injun whens I see one! You make a move an' I'll skin ya so fast Sittin' Bull would've been jealous"
>"...what? Who?"
>"..what does

>>30833064
>is named after what he hates
oh the irony.

I imagine Comanche and Lee's horses might have a interesting dynamic considering they were "rebel army" horses and he's a reunited Americas Army horse. Probably getting into arguments just as often as they agree.

>>30833188
It would actually be hilarious to me if they didn't even have the slightest idea what the war was about, they just knew they were on opposing sides.

>>30833235
Comanche wasn't brought into service until the civil war ended, so he would be the literal next generation of soldiers immediately after the war but it would be dramatically different from the previous because it was a civil war.

old vs new arguments would be frequent

not to mention not knowing how to treat each other

>>30831850
This looks pretty good.

>>30829271
Cannot unsee.

>>30824835
>>30834864
Not to mention that the autopilot has APP set to on for an approach.

Also the APU is set to on. Usually at cruising altitude the APU is turned off and is only turned on shortly after landing.

Lyra still a cute tho.

>>30835245
I wonder what Lyra would think of the warpones?

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>>30830790

>>30835468
>scared of his own shadow
Just noticed that. Very nice touch.

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I think I'd like to introduce the not so well know horse of a very well known cavalry officer.

Louis (or Lewis) Nolan was a captain in the British Army, most famous for instigating the infamous Charge of the Light Brigade when he delivered inaccurate orders to Lord Lucan concerning which "guns" his cavalry was expected to advance towards. Rather than attacking the Russians attempting to recover captured Turkish batteries, the Light Brigade committed to a full scale attack against a heavily defended Don Cossack battery further to the east. The charge was a failure, and Nolan himself was its first casualty.

The horse that Nolan took into the charge also carried his body the entire distance back to the British lines, where he was recovered. Out of ignorance of any other specific information pertaining to the captain's horse at any one period, I've chosen to assume that Nolan's horse, a small Arabian, was the same horse which he rode during his service in India exactly ten years earlier, named Arab Beauty. Assuming this, Arab Beauty would have also accompanied him during his travels throughout Europe, studying the continent's many cavalry regiments.

While Nolan is a controversial figure for his role in the failure at Balaclava, he was also an influential captain of cavalry, arguably ahead of his time. It's unfortunate that so little is available concerning his horse during the battle, but I hope to read up more about Nolan, and might eventually learn more valuable info. For now though, I think the story of a horse who went through so much and whose rider met such a tragic end would have an interesting dynamic.

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>>30835987
Also, due to 19th century artistic standards, this painting is very inaccurate, and I used it because it was useful it in establishing Arab Beauty's colors. In reality, Nolan's chest had been ripped open by a splinter from a Russian cannonball, and he died hanging from the horse, screaming and in intense agony.

>>30829101
Bacephalus is such a good boy. I hope he finds friendship.

>>30836361
he and Fluttershy would make great friends

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Reckless is hardest and hottest of histoeical horses.

>>30835468

If anyone needs the magic of friendship, it's someone who lost their best friend.

>>30831842
Im going to have a go drawing Comanche. Just give me a while to read the wiki so i can get a sence of his personality.

>>30831842
>>30837257
Hes a gelding poor sod. Oh also
>At Fort Riley, he became something of a pet, occasionally leadingparadesand indulging in a fondness forbeer.
Man after Reckless' heart.

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>>30837712
i want her to make gourmet meals for me

>>30838068
I want to feed her bottles of Coke, and candy bars.

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>>30838122
>bottles of Coke
i hope you just mean the drink itself.

Sgt. Reckless is cool. Whyfor does she speak in the broken englishes?

>>30838130
She's Korean.

>>30838122
Would she eat glass?

>>30838165
Well, I wouldn't feed it to her...

>>30838137
This.
She was a korean hoers bought by the Marines in the War, only landing in America after her term was served; thus she speaks like a Korean-American immigrant, because ingrish is cute.

>>30838183
So how did she die?

Agreed on Engrish, adorable when most asian women do it.

>>30838250
She developed arthritis in her old age, and ended up hurting herself on a barbed wire fence. They operated on her, but she died under sedation. She was about 19 or 20.

>>30838250
Barbed wire fence accident during her retirement: She died on the operating table.
This Wiki should've been posted earlier:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sergeant_Reckless
https://www.sgtreckless.com/
https://www.sgtreckless.com/Reckless/About_Reckless.html

This place is comfy. Think I'll stay awhile.

So we have Reckless, and I know of Laila from history classes way back when I was in school, who else do we got?

>>30838334
>Bucephallus: the magical hoers that only the Great Alexander could tame
>Marengo: the Well-trained and noble hoers of Napoleon
>Nelson and Blueskin: the horses of George Washington
>Traveler, Ajax, Richmond, Brown-Roan, and Lucy Long: the hoers of Robert E. Lee
>Drakon: A hoers of Catherine the great (fugged her irl)
>Copenhagen: see above
>Comanche Civil war / Native American War era
And that seems to be all the ones who already have art.
There are many moar good ideas though. Scroll through the thread to see them.
>>30769579
>>30773276
>>30792474
>>30817961
>>30829101
>>30831850

>>30838383
Also Arab Beauty (Light Brigade / Lewis Norlon's hoers), and Babieca (Supreme Warhoers of Spain)
>>30815051
>>30835987

>>30838383
>Drakon
That is just a rumor isn't it? We're running with it though.

>>30838383
You forgot Incitatus, Emperor Nero's horse who almost became a senator.

>>30837285
or is Reckless a mare if his own heart?

>>30838484
Cathrine had a fondness for horses and would hang out in the royal stables. She was also known for illicit trysts. So her political enemies put that together to create the rumor.

>>30838510
I wonder what he would be like. Perhaps 'brilliant but crazy', or would he just fake being insane but is really a brilliant politician/statespony

>>30838484
>>30838960
>rumor

>>30838964
I'm thinking he'd be spoiled. Nero suggested the horse to humiliate the nobility.
>My horse can do this job better than you

The intelligence of the horse is unknown. But I'm sure he's used to a lavish lifestyle.

>>30838964
He'd probably be pretty spoiled and pompous, considering how he was treated.

>>30838334
>I know of Laila from history classes way back when I was in school

If you don't mind my asking, where did you go to school? This seems like the kind of subject that wouldn't get covered in the American school system.

>>30839955
Seconded.
School never taught me interesting/obscure stories like this.

>>30839955
Living in Scotland. Our History covered all sorts, from Egyptian to American history.

Recoilless Bump

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Sexy Reckless Bump

>>30841073
The rising sun cutie mark really is the best.

>>30841073
dont do it anon. Fugging an enlisted woman (or mare) will only turn out bad trust me on this it aint worth it.

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>>30841112
>Not wanting to bury your face in your Sergeant's delicious plot
You looking for a Section 8, Private?

>>30841242
its better than getting hit with sexual misconduct or sexual assault while enlisted. You'd be dishonorably discharged and be tried before a military court which is not lenient in the least. Not to mention she would be able to simply claim you did anything and have you thrown out because even in the military this is usually seen as a guilty until proven innocent case. Its one of the biggest reasons I am vehemently against females in the military at all.

>>30841073
>>30841112
>>30841242
>>30841264

>Sgt Reckless desperately tires to get the men to help her "pass the time"
>everyone refuses because they are too worried that they will be punished
>Reckless continues trying over and over again without success
>Sexual_frustration_intensifies.gif

>>30841264
>I am vehemently against females in the military
>Main character in warpone thread is female in the military
NIGGER LEAVE

>>30841295
sorry, I should rephrase it then. Female Humans.

>>30841301
Oh, well of course.
Human grills are shitheads.
But Reckless would never rat you out.
Unless you're trying to tell us you don't trust her...

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>>30841264
>>30841295
>>30841301
Agreed my man. I read the story on /k/ about the dudes that got a female combat unit attached to them and all the special shit they had to do so they were 'comfortable' and such.

Ridiculous. The most women should be allowed to do is carry ammo and supplies, or be nurses in a field hospital. Active combat is no place for women. Men can handle the conditions, woman can't. Men also don't bleed from their arses every month and have mood swings.

Not to mention they lower the scores and difficulty of training for them, which is fucking retarded.

>>30841345
>Men also don't bleed from their arses every month
Besides the Navy, obviously.

>>30841345
women are also considered HVT's by hostile combatants, there is a morale blow that losing a woman has that losing a male cant necessarily compare to, simply because of the nature of males to try and protect females.

>>30841357
Kek

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>>30841357
I knew that was coming.

The picture is just because I hate Nyx.

>>30841345
>they lower the scores and difficulty of training for them, which is fucking retarded.
This part I can agree with.
They should have to perform at the same levels as the men if they want equal treatment or placement.
But this shit
>The most women should be allowed to do is carry ammo and supplies, or be nurses in a field hospital. Active combat is no place for women. Men can handle the conditions, woman can't. Men also don't bleed from their arses every month and have mood swings.
You just need to shut the fuck about.
You sound super retarded here.
>>30841370
>there is a morale blow that losing a woman has that losing a male cant necessarily compare to
Only to idiots.
Everybody on your team should have the same value in your eyes.

>>30841382
They should yes, but that's not what happens, and just saying it doesn't make it true.

>>30841399
>to your morale counter point.

>>30841345
If women want to serve in the military thats great! I have no problem with that. What I do have a problem with (if its true) is the fact special exemptions are afforded to them to make them more comfortable. A military unit must be equal and completely in snyc with eachother.

The ONLY exemption that should be allowed to women is the right to use tampons. That's the only difference im willing to accept.

I know some men in the military who are total shitstains and i would replace with a stronger woman in a fucking heartbeat.

We've created around 15 characters in these threads. And here I was thinking /warpone/ wouldn't take off.

>>30841345
The only good women are in the military is lazarett, or snipers in the case of Finland.

It is a confirmed historical fact that inclusive military excersize preceeds the fall of any nation.

I think we can agree that the reason women don't work in the military is because
>no hooves

So let's get back to warpones.

How do you think these war heroes would get along with other races? Griffons, dragons, donkeys, nu-changelings? Lee's pones would clearly have some trouble, but do you think they'd ever get over it?

>>30847837
According to mythology, all hoers are naturally afraid of griffins.

>>30838964
basically this guy.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kp-bwg6CjRE

>>30847855
Because griffons eat horses.

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i want to cuddle her during a cold night at our camp

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boop

>>30851363
That's a cupcake, if you couldn't tell...

>>30851365
I thought so, but it's good to know that it's not a dog turd on a barrel.

>>30851363
It really does look like a turd. Maybe some sprinkles would help.

>>30852023
>sprinkles
I'll try it.
I'm only just learning to make shoops. I only spoiler-ed it because I have no confidence...

>>30852912
It looks pretty good really. The only problems are the turd-shaped cupcake (if you're just shooping it, that's not even your fault) and that the upper poker chip in her cutie mark seems like it's floating. Imagine decorating this cupcake irl and pushing both of the chips deeper into the frosting. That's what you should go for.

>>30829271
Dammit you ruined that picture for me.

>>30850256
>She's eaten so many blankets that she's absorbed their comfy, snuggly power and made it her own.

>>30857848
kek

boop

>>30849429
Yep. Pretty much every mythological context depicts them that way.

This thread isn't dying on my watch.

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>page 9
not dead yet.

why dont we have any green?

>>30863156
writefag machine broke

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>>30863156
i'd want to writefag for this thread bc the horses are very interesting, but
1. I am absolute garbage at writing about war
2. I can't finish a green that isn't a one-shot for shit
hell, I've been having trouble finishing oneshots lately
kill me pls

>>30863194
what happened to rockatansky

>>30863232
hes off in the wasteland now anon
he lives now only in our memories

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nY1Th6Ia3XA

>>30863226
write a series of unconnected slice-of-life one-shots about the war horses in Equestria

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>>30863226
Greens keeps us alive!

>>30863308
This. The green does not have to be just about fighting a war, It could be about the warpones adjusting to their new life, arguing about who's the best, interacting with the Equestrians, etc.

>>30863472
Ayy the Marengo cutie mark! Looks good.

>>30863472
i ship it

>>30863521
>interacting with the Equestrians
i formally request a green with Bucephalus and Fluttershy

>>30863472
Good! But theres and 'N' on the cavalry hat.

>>30863615
nae, laddie
cutie marks must be kept simple

>>30863593
or a green about Blueblood and Marengo

>ywn get to call Bucephalus Daddy

>>30863156
I wrote the start of some green a couple days ago but never got the chance to post it

>>30863615
Nah, I don't like that.

>>30841370
>>30841399
kek you say that
but i have a feeling a lot of men would cry tears of joy to see the unit female go

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>>30841073
https://ponyquarantine.tumblr.com/image/164921361410

>bugles sound out in Ponyville
>men walk through the streets on two feet
>they're dressed in olive clothes, wear helmets and carry rifles around the town
>there is not a single flag in sight which bears a pony or which stands for Equestria
>in their place, stars and stripes float over the services and above the town hall
>the few ponies who still trot around in the middle of the day do so cautiously
>they keep their heads low and avoid any biped who happens by
>based on reports, news, and rumors, they know that the situation is the same throughout nearly all of Equestria, even in the capital city, Canterlot itself
>the war between the United States and Equestria has reached a point of stagnation
>the princesses Celestia, Luna, Cadence, and Twilight Sparkle, as well as much of their royal guard, have fled, gone into hiding, or otherwise completely disappeared from the intel of the US military
>without their presence, it stands impossible to settle a a treaty of peace with the Equestrians, and so, the occupation must continue
>and a principal issue of this occupation has come to be the containment of those Equestrians who were captured as prisoners of war
>since Equestria lacks an extensive prison system, much to the bewilderment and annoyance of the Americans, they have been forced to build makeshift prisons for the large numbers of prisoners they've taken
>in Ponyville in particular, it was necessary to clear out the entire town hall and store nearly 100 prisoners into its lower floor, where they are guarded by a company of marines
>in the presence of the prisoners, the marines act intimidating; they stand straight and strut about slowly, staring the captured ponies down
>but among them is one soldier who carries herself a bit more like the locals - that is to say, on her hooves

>>30863156
I'm the guy who's been writing the greens about the warpones being incompetent screw-ups and annoying Shining Armor but still saving the day by accident anyway. I actually have two greens in the works but I've been a little starved for free time lately and when I do have time I've kinda rekindled my love hate relationship with Planetside.

I'll find some time to finish one sometime this week.

>>30863308
yeah man, we need more greens.

>>30863472
pretty ponies. new desktop wallpaper.

>>30864205
>Sergeant Reckless marches around the interior of the building, keeping near to the walls and generally away from the prisoners
>her shift has been on for several hours now, and she's becoming impatient
>every now and then she coughs or sniffles, not because she has to, but just to keep herself occupied as the minutes tick by
>suddenly, a voice whispers out from among the prisoners
>"Hey, you! Mare! What are you doing here?"
>Reckless' vision darts inwards to see one prisoner vaguely staring in her direction, although keeping himself somewhat discreet
>distracted from and forgetting her duties, she takes a moment to collect her linguistic skills, and decides to reply
>"Excuse? You speak me?"
>the prisoner is taken back by her terrible English, then shakes his head
>"Yes, you! Are there any other mares out there? Get over here and let me talk to you."
>with even less concern for the task at hand, Reckless complies and trots to the makeshift fence surrounding the center of the room, within which the prisoners are kept
>for the sake of recognition, the Equestrian soldiers are still wearing their uniforms
>unlike some of the others, this prisoner has no wings, nor a supposedly magical horn, which makes him, as the marines like to say, one of the simple ones
>when Reckless gets close, the prisoner whispers to her again
>"Aren't you Equestrian?"
>"No, I am Korea. Who wants know?"
>"Where in the- no nevermind. Point is, ain't you a horse?"
>"Yes."
>"But you're in with the humans!"
>Reckless is noticeably puzzled
>"No, I am in Marines."
>the conversation, to the extent that you can call it that, is broken abruptly by a shout from behind
>"Sergeant Reckless!"

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>>30864271
>>30864205
Yeah, keep it up!

>>30864271
>>30864205
I'm not liking the direction this is taking m8
stop

>>30864365
How do you mean?

>>30864271
>Reckless spins around on all four of her hooves and finds herself staring up at her platoon lieutenant, wearing his most usual face of annoyance when adressing her
>"Sergeant Reckless, can you please explain to me why you are standing around, in the middle of your shift, and speaking openly with a prisoner of war?"
>the other marines look sympathetically in the sergeant's direction as she formulates her response
>"No sir. It was only little. No secrets! Promise!"
>"Have you forgotten your duties, sergeant? Were you ever given the permission to speak with the prisoners?"
>"No sir. I not spoke, was spoken."
>"And did you answer, sergeant?"
>"Yes sir. But only little"
>"Well then I should make it very clear to you that you will never speak to a prisoner unless you are instructed to by myself or by the major. So tell me, is that clear?"
>"Yes clear sir."
>Reckless is very nearly at the point where she can no longer form basic English speech, when the lieutenant backs off
>"Good. Anyway, your shift is up. Stay outside for a while and give yourself a refresher. Your section is anticipating you."
>the lieutenant had hardly turns his head when Reckless, eager to get some air, dashes for the door and out into the town square
>at this point, the town square hardly serves as such, since instead of services, the marines have cleared the entire area to make room for tents and tables
>soldiers walk around all over the place having friendly chats or playing small games, while those that are on duty patrol around the perimeter and watch the rest of the town with careful eyes
>when Reckless leaves the building they all, as they will usually do, raise a loud cheer, sending her blushing as she attempts to keep her composure the whole way to her tent
>the marines are fond of their mare sergeant and, especially in this foreign place, she has become somewhat of a mascot to them, which may either flatter or annoy her, depending on the situation

>>30864423
do I really need to explain it?
>dickhead military
>missing princesses
>prisoner pones
I could go on, but I'm certain you'll see the rest of the problems

>>30864439
dont like it, dont read it. im enjoying it

>>30864449
ay fuck you niggerfaggot
he asked for my opinion

>>30864458
and im giving you a response to that opinion, you cockgoblin

>>30864462
you aren't the one writing the green
your opinion doesn't matter worth shit here

>>30864472
same could be said for you, then.
unless you're responding to yourself like a turbo autist

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>>30864423
Don't stop, no matter what any faggot says.
Looks good so far.

>>30864496
>"this is some pretty good chocolate" he says, eating another bite of dog shit

>>30864203
Unf

>>30864439
I actually don't understand, I'm sorry. If you're making reference to something, I'm ignorant of it right now. This is only a setting idea I had one day.

>>30864423
>the tent of Sergeant Reckless and her comrades stands out the most throughout the entire field
>the tent itself, rather than being of the same olive green sheet as those of all the other marines, is instead a sheet which has been decorated with color and flattering depictions of horses, as well as some gibberish in Korean, or what may seem to the marines to be Korean
>the men inside can always tell, from the noise outside, when the sergeant is coming
>when she enters, the four men in the tent are completely drunk off beer, and the stench of alcohol spreads outside of and far from the tent
>"Oh h-*HG*... hi Sarge! Thassa long shift."
>Reckless is disgruntled to see her men so completely out of their good wits
>"You drink without me?"
>"O-oh, heh, sorry boutit Sar-*HG*-ge. We just about out of it though..."
>she moves forward to grab one of the bottles, but one of the other soldiers snatches it from her before she can touch it
>the other three look at him like he's committed a crime
>Reckless is on the edge of fury
>"Corporal! Beer you give now! I order!"
>the corporal laughs drunkenly
>"But sarge, we don't have enou*GH*... enough. Couldn't ya go downa the market and pick some up for your boys?"
>"Why no get yourself? I might order."
>"C'mon sarge... I'll give ya three quarters of it, or somethin' like that... ain't you always nice like that anyways?"
>at the end of her temper, Reckless finally gives in
>"Fine! I go market and buy beer. But you pay!"
>the corporal agrees and hands her $40 to use at the market
>she leaves to the sound of the soldiers still laughing

Anyway, this is all I've written so far. Will probably continue tomorrow.

>>30864573
nigga I explained the three biggest problems in a clear, concise manner
lemme reiterate
>dickhead military
>missing princesses
>prisoner pones
and a fourth point
>an overall feeling of wrongness
stop
writing

>>30864582
kill yourself boy, we dont care about your shit taste

>>30864589
>"you have shit taste" he says, wolfing down more shit

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>>30864595
>the kid says
ok

>>30864601
>"he doesn't agree with everything I say! he must be underage!"

>>30864611
no more like,
>"he's throwing around insults like a 12 year old!"
enjoy the last (You) though, im not wasting sleep time arguing with a kid.

>>30864616
>"he doesn't act like everyone else! he's got to be underage!"

>>30864582
You'll have to be more specific. Do you think those bad themes in general? Are they overused? You haven't been very clear nor concise.

>>30864660
both
scrap it
and try writing one of the suggestions posted in the thread
like >>30863630 or >>30863593

>>30864203
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