Anon's Pie adventure

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>>30650136
Jesus H Christ Dash!

>>30650136
I'm going to wait for another Anon to ask what I want to ask but I'm too pussy to ask.

>>30650136
AWW YISS BBY

>>30650136
Nice chest fluff on Dash btw

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>>30650136
HHHNnNnGgggh

>>30650136
>that sixth panel
What an absolutely adorable profile. Also Dash is getting pretty low there.

>>30650136
Great work as always senpai

>>30650146
That was my line fag. Is the thread still alive?

>>30650187

Not anymore, the last one didn't even reach the 100 replies

>>30650136
>mares
Good taste, RD.

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>>30650136
W E W
E
W

>>30650136
4th panel: missing "but" right after the coma

Autistic nitpicking about the third panel: I think the use of "must" is a little too formal for Dash (could be the >rape getting to her). Something like "gotta" would fit nicely.

>>30650136
D-Dash, NO! That's rape!

>>30650136
maximum dyke

>>30650136
This might not be entirely necessary, but I feel Dash's line in the second panel should be "Hold it right there" or even "Stop right there".

>>30651035
Also, Solky Strings' line in the last panel should probably read "I've got to" or "I have to".

Does this page mark the end of chapter 6? Will you be working on a cover for it now?

>>30650136
Well, looks like Rainbow is immune to Eros as well.

>>30650136
>rape
Maybe that's why idw hired you. a rape artist on the comic is what they need to finaly kill it so hasbro will stop making them publish it.

>>30651102
>buzzword
There's no limit to your bait is there? Rape artist, really? And where, do tell the OC ever said "no, stop"?

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>>30650136
L-lewd!

>>30650136
That's so fucking hot

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>>30650136

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>>30650136
I'm liking where this is going.

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>>30650136
Your stories are bad and your custom designs are garbage.

Fall on your knees with your pencil dick behind your legs, Pencils. And suck a real thick dick. I know how to design, I know how to storytell, I know dialogue.

Submit to me and I will teach you how to stop sucking.
You will be Adam and I will be Lilith. Let's do it, faggot.

>>30651398
>back to derpibooru

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>>30650136
>it turns out Dash is not under Eros control since the fourth panel
>she's just this much of a dyke that she cannot stop

>>30650136
When is the fluttercord part?

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>>30651429

>>30650136
Is blue dyke destroying the amulet with her pointy hair on the last panel?

>>30650136

Third panel:
>We must correct this right away.

Feels both formal and stilted, especially for Dash. Maybe try on for size:
>We gotta fix that right away

Or maybe even just cut off at "mouth" in that speech bubble. The image and subsequent "Name's Dash, Rainbow Dash..." communicates the idea clearly enough without the additional dialog. Less is more.

>>30651449
Nah, that's the sheer force and weight of her lesbianism.

captcha: stop stop

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>>30650136
Hey Bencils, I just downloaded the RAR pack of this 6th chapter and it's amazing, thanks. But I've also realized I'm missing the 5th chapter one, and I only have the PDF. I can't seem to find it on your Patreon, do you happen to have a link?
Have a Ponk anyway.

>>30651655
oh, right. I'll have to re-host it on patreon, it went over the patreon file size limit when it was revamped or something a while back.

>>30651398
>Lilith
Heretic out.

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>>30650136
>Dashie will never force her horse tongue inside your mouth
Why even live?

>>30650169
Crotchtits adjacent.

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>>30651713
Why indeed

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>>30650136
>Cape is falling apart
What does it all mean?

>>30651850
>The amulet deteriorating
The cape is part of it somehow, I guess

>>30651730

4th panel needs lewd edition asap

The door latch seems to be missing in the fifth panel.

>>30650136
The final panel reminds me of covers of old superhero comics that try to explain the conflict in one thought or speech bubble.

>>30652568

It's behind them, you can see the wood between their faces. Since anon broke it the bar doesn't go all the way but just covers a small part in the middle.

>>30652568

If superhero comics had more lewd ponies maybe they wouldn't be dying?

>>30650136
But what was Anon going to say?

>>30650146
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>>30650187
What thread if i may?

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Bencils lately

Hypothetical: If Rarity was traveling with the group and thus affected by Eros's magic, and assuming Spike wasn't suffering magic sickness, how would he react to that turn of events?

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The lewdest part of the page

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>>30653727
F L U F F

>>30651398
they have painfully tiny hips

>>30653692
He's not relevant to her and too beta to do anything anyway. He's for Anon only.

>>30653767
I would literally rub my face in all her fluff

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>>30653684
FTFY

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>>30653727
Job Status: Lost

>>30653797
Seems legit.

>>30651035
The line could even just be condensed down to "Hold it!"

>>30651429

No, that's Pinkie Pie. Who used it as an excuse to get it on with her sister.

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BEGONE THOT

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>>30650136
>teat sucking
muh fetish.

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Dash just pretends to be under the spell, clever girl

thank you for this page, Pencils

>>30650136
Yesss, this is beyond what I hoped to see of dash, my dick is so hard from this page, thank you based finbro.

I'm curious, are normie finns aware of Spürdo Spädre?

>>30654702
are you aware that 4chan was offline for finnish IP's for a couple of hours? seems like a shill bump to me.

>>30653970

Dad even let him move out of the basement to a real room with windows.

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>>30650136
GOD HELP US

>>30651398
Wtf did you do with lunas wings, is that supposed to be a bat wing approach?

>>30654718
What.

Will there be more?

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>>30650136
>mfw Bencils draws lewd
Tell me again why you don't do clop?

>>30655791

This comic is the Fairy Tails of /mlp/

>>30653727
MAUDS

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Purging the heritics

dead comic is dead

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>>30650136
Needs a comma after "don't" in the last panel.

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>>30650136

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>>30650136

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>>30650136

>>30651117
I am not saying it would work but they are clearly desprate to kill it.

>>30655791
I think he did draw a vagina once.
Same as j.j

>>30657726
>Once

All the butt shots you have seen, he drew in their vaginas.

Usually Pencils is pretty fast with dialogue edits. Is he just busy right now?

>>30658959

Finland got nuked. Sorry Anon. No more Pencils.

Does this comic have anything truly explicit, or is it just soft-core ecchi shit?

>>30659005
Yes.

>>30650136
>"I like to go fast."
>"T-That's good, your little friend is in urgent need of help."
I always knew RD had a penis!

>>30659005
It gets very lewd but nothing explicit. There are nude edits of various panels floating around, though.

>>30659079
That depends on what you mean by explicit. Sure, there's no sex that show genitalia, but there's been quite a bit of discussion about the subject. Then of course there's Mascara chugging Anon's cum.

>>30659119
>Mascara chugging Anon's cum
Magical Man Batter*

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>>30655902
Is it possible that we will not see her ever again?

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>>30659333
I want to stick my face in her glorious, holy fluff.

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>>30659333
p-praise the sun?

>>30659125
>Magical Man Batter
*Succulent Seminal Supplement

>>30659358
Magical Man Marmalade
Delicious Dong Discharge

>>30651356
It's probably going nowhere, just like every other situation like this so far in the story

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>>30659527
Wasn't this supposed to be the last chapter?

Pencils said it was, but then disappeared for a while, and then we've found out that it's only half way.

>>30659005

Explict are only fanedits, though Pencils doesn't mind that.

He draws occasional explicit shit elsewhere.

>>30660277
A few of the explicit edits are from him.

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>>30655902
she will come and save the day

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>>30661339
havent seen that image before

>>30661339
my sides

>not snatching her right off of it and cradling her to church

>>30661339
I hate that song.

>>30650136
>I noticed the james bond reference

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>>30653772
nigger

p9

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http://vocaroo.com/i/s1ALGNPLxJgB

>>30663937
we need an japanese anime version of this

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>>30650136
d-delete this..

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>>30663937
pure wisdom

>>30650136
I want an entire spin-off comic of this

>>30653797
>Fluttershy
Is that why there is no Discord in the comic? Bencils is an insecure fluttercuck?

>>30655791
He work for official MLP comics. It would take one tweet with one picture of him making porn out of pony to put this career to rest. Bobby may be desperate but he won't turn a clopper into industry for little girls.