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>What is this thread about?
This thread revolves around stories about ponies being enslaved.

>Can you elaborate more?
Sure! SPG (Slave Pony General) is mostly about characters dealing with the actual implications of the horrifying thing that is chattel slavery. It's more looking at how people with modern sensibilities deal with the ownership of another sentient being, and how most people aren't total cunts.
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First for no boat Celly and thirsty Rainbows.
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First for pony mom
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First for Lyra is a popular pony in green.
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>>30648685
I want a slave mare who's only purpose is to be my warm, plush cuddle pillow.
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>>30648707
Cuddle pony pillow slave green would be adorable.
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>>30648707
I want to start a business removing mare's limbs so that they can more effectively be cuddle pillows.
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>>30648697
Anyone written something like that yet?
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>>30648743
You mean managing to get your poner preggers?
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>>30648751
That or even one where Anon gets a pony because he's a single father, and the pony mom has to raise a child or something to that effect?
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>>30648759
>fug your poner
>she gets pregnant
>government's face when
Imagine the panic and push back against slavery
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>>30648751
I want one where an Anon manages to buy a mom and her foal together and he looks after them as she slowly starts to trust Anon more and he becomes like a father to the foal.
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>>30648807
It better have foalcon.
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>>30648813
Mom and daughter "snuggle" time
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>>30648822
Why not daddy daughter time?
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>mares can only get pregnant if they genuinely love the father
Love IS a very powerful magic to ponies.
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>>30648696
>Rainbow will never accidentally wake the rest of the boat up with her orgasmic screaming
>They won't congratulate her later for finally confessing to Anon.
>She won't have trouble sitting in the morning on her freshly spanked behind.
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>>30643420
> The fact she seems to have this odd "privilege" of being sharp with Anonymous and sharing her feelings in a blunt way with him is fascinating.
I think it's because Anonymous really does genuinely feel bad about what happened to her - if you look back at when Crescent got whipped, Anonymous seemed pretty uncomfortable with with that too. Yeah, she broke the rules badly but he kind of fucked up on what lead to that point.

But the thing is, he seems to be connecting it solely to his own past mistakes. He still doesn't seem to get why a pony would be unhappy in slavery period, provided they aren't being mistreated. That's a huge blind spot for him.
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>>30648697
Really love this adorable picture make for one russian artist
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Deal is a deal update someday?

Or Moondancer story anyway?
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Corona is a dead mare.
A DEAD MARE
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>>30648998
how adorable
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>>30648998
Fuck
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>>30648685
PEE IN SLAVE
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>ywn raise a horde of ponies away from their parents, never teaching their customs and language, molding them into broken cattle
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>>30649130
Przewalski horse, the prototype of the modern horse
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>>30648831
i'd believe it. does this transcend species lines?
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>>30649302
OF COURSH
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>>30648831
>>30649336
theyd be too good for earth
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>>30649354
The Earth is fine for the ponies.

Not the humans.
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>>30649377
Conversion Bureau fags kill yourselves
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>>30641325
Hah, that's a cute batspeedhorse.

>How can I be a good slave
I think there are two main points to reinforce here: One, Lyra is a not a sadist or a heartless bastard; if Bash is obedient and helpful Lyra will be kind to her, including offering a shoulder to cry on or an ear to listen. But she is not Dash's friend, certainly not her lover, and to a certain degree she will have to continue to hold her slave at arms' length. Dash can be a good slave by remembering to balance that; be open with us, but understand there are things we cannot do and times when we'll have to be a master first.

Second, more directly building on that: We are going to be using her for dangerous tasks, and because of that if she sees something we need to know or feels we're endangering either of us she needs to let us know. BUT, that is not a license to argue or be disobedient; again, she is still our slave first and foremost.

>Also provide the lecture on why its wrong for Bash to try and offer to pleasure us.
Simply put, we didn't want it. We didn't buy her for that, we don't think of her that way, and she doesn't need to try and suck up to us by offering that. Lyra "knows who she wanted" (not sure what that means - is she still hanging on to the memory of an old lover?), so she could explain that too. Be gentle, but clear - it's not that we dislike her, we just want someone else.
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>>30649354
>>30649377
Lies and slander.

Ponies' proper place is at the feet of their human masters, serving their superiors with all their heart and soul. We will fit together perfectly: Human ambition and neverending desire to reshape the world into something better lifting ponies to heights they could never achieve on their own, freeing them from their stubborn dependency on magic. In return ponies' caring and open-hearted nature will temper our tempestuous, schismatic urges - softening our rough edges where needed and leaving us to focus on true, grand objectives.

Earth and Equestria alike will be rewritten in our image. Their service will propel us both to mastery of the world, and then perhaps even the stars.
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>>30649384

You first
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>>30649425
You funny anon
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>>30648998
I really hope SWF is ok.
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>>30648850
Is it weird that I could plausibly see Rainbow Dash being a total spankslut?
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>>30649628
I see it more with Rarity.
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>>30649628
It's a shame Wind Rider didn't beat her ass a little then, isn't it?

Seriously, Rainbow is a pony that's been tortured for, what, five years? And suffers from severe PTSD because of it. I think she'd do anything to avoid pain instead of trying to find pleasure in it.
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>>30650263
>It's a shame Wind Rider didn't beat her ass a little then, isn't it?
sounds kinda hot.
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How to get rid of writers block?
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>>30651374
CYOS.
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>>30651374
By writing.
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>>30651406
This motherfucker is so right. If you force yourself to start writing anything, even what you consider a turd, the automatics will get back up eventually.
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>>30649398
I tried to figure out how to say Lyra is after the stallion dick, but ran into trouble.
Previously she had a lover from the Pony emancipation movement, but he was a colt in bed.
Now she just wants some loose sex without attachments and will be renting a stallion for herself.
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>>30651374
Stab deeply into the middle finger of your left hand and let the demon out.
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>>30651442
Was she with the PEM colt before or after she was free herself? What did he think of her betrayals at the hospital?
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>>30651458
After she was free.
The stallion hoped to woo her to give up on being a slave owner through sex and love.
Lyra has some issues with such a betrayal.

He was abhorred.
The idea of selling out a being, much less 30, for yourself is evil.
Its the reverse of the saying, killing a killer changes nothing, but killing two makes the world better.
Lyra took ponies that would have been free and put them into slavery for her own gain.

Lyra argues the other way, that as a free pony from birth, he has no idea what its like and what it means to be a slave.
What anyone would do to get out.
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I miss old writefags...
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>>30651492
Yeah these new ones suck.
I want more fetish fuel and despondent suffering ponies.
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>>30651496
>more fetish fuel
>despondent suffering ponies

>not what we have now

>wut
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> Still no Mocha Cream edit of this
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>>30651374
Pee in the slave
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>>30651496
SiM is dead, get over it.
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>>30651536
>download GIMP (or pirate Photoshop)
>get to work
>post your abomination
>get laughed at for your crayon-scribble level skilz
>get better next time
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>>30651543
I can confirm this works. I had some awful writers block, and then I had Anon pee in Rainbow's mouth, and it cleared right up.
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>>30651511
What slave story is suffering?
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>>30651511
"you're wrong and you're a grotesquely ugly freak."
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>>30631683

> ~~~~

> Your heart was hammering, almost drowning out your own words. It took an effort of will to keep your wings folded against your body.
> Why were you doing it? What could be gained from poking the monster?
> But you couldn't let things stand, not any longer. However perverse your reasoning, you needed absolution from him.
> Anger was part of it. You had been happy in your ignorance. If Lavender hadn't shown you the truth, you could have lived out the rest of your life blissfully oblivious.
> You could have enjoyed your time with this kind, new Master. You would have been glad of the tidbits he gave you.
> So what if he was only nice to you out of guilt?!
> But more than the anger, you needed to find a way to live with yourself.
> You had blamed yourself for their deaths even before Master had beaten it into you. That feeling had come right back with the memory.
> Every night was a circle of what-if's and could-have's.
> What if you had been paying more attention? Maybe you could have been faster.
> They needn't have died.
> It was tearing you apart; the pain had not dulled in the slightest despite the time that had passed.
> You had merely taken a holiday from the guilt and horror.
"I wa- want to talk about t-them."
> You heard the Master's breath catch and saw his knuckles whiten as he balled up his fists.
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>>30652729

> Maybe he would beat you again. You were fine with that. The physical agony would mask the emotional turmoil.
> It still made you flinch and close your eyes in expectation.
> But what landed on your head was not a hit. It was a gentle caress.
> You looked up at the human in surprise.
> It took you a moment to understand. You had never seen the Master cry before.
"I- I'm sorry. I didn't mean to-"
> Your own tears were flowing again and you backed away from the touch.
> Tried backing away. He grabbed a fistful of your mane, trapping you. However hard you pulled, there was no breaking his hold.
> The human slid from the couch, landing on his knees before you. His arm was completely extended and you were almost ready to rip your mane out, just to get away.
> "Please don't go," he whispered. You almost hadn't heard it over the cacophony of your heartbeat in your ears.
> You froze. The human tugged and you took a slow step forward.
> Then another.
> The grip in your mane was like iron. You had no doubt it would drag you across the floor if you hadn't moved.
> Soon, you were mere inches from his face. You stared into his eyes, unable to understand what was happening. You didn't know what he would do.
> Then his hold on you released. You could have fled, but you didn't, mesmerised by his stare.
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>>30652737

> The human brought his arms around your neck.
> You let him pull you into a hug.
> Then the Master began talking.
> "You loved them," he said, making you flinch as if struck. "They were your family, too."
> He was echoing your thoughts exactly. It was impossible to prevent the anguish from rising anew.
> You began crying in earnest.
> It had been denied you for too long. The simple act of weeping for your loss. Not out of guilt, or anger or fear; you wept simply out of sorrow for the first time since the accident.
> And throughout it all, the Master shared your burden like he had never before.
> And finally the words came.
"They were my family! Mel was like a mother! And Sara was a younger sister I never had!"
> By making you guilty of their deaths, the human monster had taken even that away from you.
> No, he hadn't made you guilty. He had merely used what was already in your heart. You had believed it and he had seen that.
> "It wasn't your fault," he said now.
> You froze, every muscle locking into place. Your breath caught. Even your heart seemed to stop for an instant.
"W-what?"
> It had to have been a mistake. You had heard wrong.
> "The accident... it wasn't your fault, Pearl. There was nothing you could have done."
> The human pushed away and looked at you.
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>>30652741

> His eyes were wet, too. His pupils were large and his face was haggard. There was sweat on his brow.
> He was so close that you could see your reflection in his gaze. A dishevelled mess.
> The pony you saw looked exactly how you felt. Stunned. Overjoyed. Afraid. Hopeful.
"You mean that?"
> He almost smiled and his hands cupped your face.
> "It's the truth, Pearl. It took me this long to finally see it."
> Something else was bothering him. His eyes slid aside and his hands fell away from you. The beginning of his smile faded.
> "Can you ever forgive me?"
> It was a big question. It included everything that had happened to you in the years since the accident. All the pain and misery. All the beatings.
> Everything was his fault.
> Every twist of the pliers on your wings. Each lash of the whip.
> All the anguish you had inflicted upon yourself in the long, sleepless nights.
> And in the end, the uncountable masses of fat, stinking humans, crushing you beneath their sweaty bodies in that Tartarus.
"No."
> A small answer, but it sufficed.
> His hand was suddenly in your mane again. You felt it grasp your hair and prepared yourself for the beating.
> But nothing happened. You looked at each other for a long while. Finally, the human let you go and broke the silence.
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>>30652751

> "I understand. But I want a chance to make it up to you."
> You were tempted to try. It would have been beautiful, you knew. The Master would treat you well and make sure you wanted for nothing.
> Maybe, in time, you would be able to forget his betrayal.
"I... don't know."
> The human smiled at your words. His hope, nearly dashed, bloomed again.
> "Would you be willing to try?" he asked, cautiously.
> Your tears were flowing freely again. What you wanted was to kick the human and curse his name. And then leave and never see him again.
> But he was the only connection you had left to your adoptive family. The memory of Mel and Sara demanded better of you.
"I DON'T KNOW!"
> You screamed that at him. It made him flinch, but he quickly recovered.
> "I understand, Pearl. Look, Linda will come to visit soon. She will take you, if you'd like. All I'm asking is that you give me a chance, okay?"
> You vaguely remembered the woman and you knew she was nice. Every time she had visited, Mel's sister had brought cookies for you and Sara.
> Chocolate chip had come a long way toward earning your trust.
"If- if I like?"
> The human quickly nodded. "Whenever you want, just say it and I'll call Linda to come and get you. You have a way out, okay?"
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>>30652755

> There had to be a catch. You couldn't believe that the Master had changed that much. It was some kind of a trick.
"I need to think about it."
> That would give you some time. You couldn't put your thoughts in order, not with the memory fresh in your mind and the Master staring at you like that.
> You saw him nod. "Sure. As long as you need, Pearl."
> There was a shadow beside you. You turned to look and saw the crystal pony standing just behind. She was glaring at the human.
> "Leave her alone," Lavender said, vehemently.
> The Master quickly raised up his hands. "We were just talking."
> The mare slowly stepped around you, bumping you back, away from the human.
> "You're done now. Come, Pearl."
> But you refused to move. It was true that you had sneaked out of the room while Lavender was sleeping. But you were a grown mare and could make your own decisions.
> You didn't like being treated like her filly. Not when it originated from guilt.
> Her tone toward the human made you understand. Suddenly you saw Lavender in a new light.
> It all made sense. And it made you angry.
"Stop!"
> Both of them looked at you, surprised at your outburst.
> You tapped Lavender with a trembling hoof.
"Stop treating me like a child!"
> Then you pointed at Anon.
"And you! I'm not your redemption!"
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>>30652762

> You took a quick breath and went on, now that you had their attention.
"You both want me to be something I'm not! I get it - you're sorry, both of you. You apologized. Fine. Apology accepted! Is that what you wanted?"
> They looked at each other.
> "Pearl," the crystal pony began, but you just spoke over her.
"Let me tell you what I want. I want to grieve and then move on. Got it? No 'forgiveness this' or bucking 'redemption that'! Sara and Mel died and I bucking hate that. I loved them and it broke my heart to lose them!"
> You felt a hot tear slide down your cheek and fall to the floor.
"And no amount of 'forgiveness' will make it better!"
> With surprising ease, Lavender was pushed away and you rounded up on Anon.
"You're a bucking monster, straight out of Tartarus! I hope you know that. Maybe someday I'll forgive you, but that won't be anytime soon. Call Linda and let me go, please? Or was that a lie, too?"
> He shook his head, eyes wide and fearful before your rage. "F-fine, I'll call," he promised.
"Good! Thank you!"
> You were trembling worse than ever, but you made yourself stand and turn on Lavender next.
"And you! Why do you care so much about me?"
> She swallowed before answering. "I- I'm just sorry I made you go through it again. You- you weren't ready and I-"
"Bullshit!"
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>>30652767

> You had interrupted her with the swear.
"Before! You wanted me to remember! You simply had to show me who Anon really was. Why?"
> She looked away, trying to think of an answer. "I- wanted you to know the truth. Please, Pearl, I just-"
> You interrupted her nonsense again.
"Liar! You were angry at Anon and wanted him to suffer. You wanted me to make him feel guilty. All I meant to you was revenge!"
> Your words had come out of nowhere. You hadn't considered that before, but the way Lavender flinched when you said them convinced you they were the truth.
> She just looked back at you in silence, tears running down her face.
"That's what I thought! You two are perfect for each other! Just rut each other already and leave me out of it!"
> You spat on the floor between them and left, ignoring their shocked glances.
> No one followed you into the room. You stopped in the middle, breathing heavily. A part of you was still expecting a beating from the human, but you pushed that thought away and threw yourself on the bed.
> You were nothing but a toy in their battle. How could you not have seen it before?
> Lavender and the human both hated and loved each other. And they needed a pawn to bounce between them; to evoke feelings of guilt and regret in the opponent.
> You were done being their plaything!
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>>30652773

> And, more importantly, you were done with their disrespect for Mel and Sara.
> The thought made you cry again, but it didn't hurt so badly anymore. Anon's admission had made all the difference.
> Finally, you could heal.
> You embraced the tears and let them flow freely.


> ~~~~

Somewhat short today. Sorry about that - there has been an unplanned death in the family and the funeral stuff took quite some time.

And aside from that, I'm going very slowly lately, putting a lot of thought into each piece - I'm trying to make the ending decently good.
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>>30652786
Condolences.
Holy shit you're getting fantastic at this writing thing.
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>>30652773
>"Liar! You were angry at Anon and wanted him to suffer. You wanted me to make him feel guilty. All I meant to you was revenge!"
DAAAAMN
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>>30651492
Me too anon.
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Why does Pearl blame anon for the brothel?
She was taken from him during his stay in the sanitarium.
Given to the old man.
Then when old man died, sent to the brothel.
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>>30652773
> That's what I thought! You two are perfect for each other!
At first I thought this would be another boring apologetic part but daaaaayuuuum, hot loads of sweet acid, it just could not have been better. All this mutual guilty revengeful unease and self-hatred for all of them, it's just so beautiful. Could not think of a better position for a fresh start and true redemption. Just make them stuck together for a couple of weeks longer so they would really know what others feel and mean to say, I'm sure they'll have enough time to work up a strategy to make up for each other.
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>>30653151
It was never about the brothel, it was about her being not as useful as she thought in the grand scheme
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this place has become edgy as hell and you are all cancer, I am never coming back and shining and corona is permanently cancelled
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>>30653477
Till tomorrow, lad.
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>>30653477
Dubs demand that Corona be fed through the wood chipper and rectally fed to Shiny!
Its not gay if its a mare in you.
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>>30653477
>this place has become edgy as hell
Oh shut up. This place isn't nearly as edgy as it was back in 2012.
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>>30653565
We have a fic starring a bat pony now.
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>>30653151
If he had never tortured/sold her, she would have never had ended up there.

>>30652773
God tier update. I really loved seeing Pearl breaking down from her perspective and finally getting the opportunity she needed for so long denied to mourn and let her emotions free. Anon breaking down as well and admitting he had wronged her
>No
So small and yet so powerful. I also really really liked her going off on BOTH lavender and Anon for both of their bullshit and standing up for herself, finally gaining back a bit of who she was instead of a broken mess. Like >>30653417 said, I really want to see the mutual hate/love between these three explored a bit longer and letting them all come out better from each other for it.

Though, as a personal opinion bit, I do think she's being a bit too harsh on Lavender. Her desiring revenge on Anon certainly must have played some role, perhaps subconcious even, but I really think Lavender was coming from a good place. She was horrified and saddened at the way Pearl had been treated. She saw how Anon had completely misunderstood her own grief for cowardice and wanted him to fix things, not for his own redemption, but because it was the only right thing to do. I think she definitely cares more for Pearl's well being than getting back at Anon (he was tortured enough as he was before getting Pearl back if that was her goal), and in the end she was the catalyst that pushed for her to be taken from that hell and, despite the hardships, bring her back to reality and give her the condolence and closure she AND anon needed so much. But we'll see how that direction takes them, Lavender being a little self-reflective on her motives is good for her as well.

I also wonder how Pearl might provide input on Lavender/Anon's realtionship once she is made aware of the suicide attempt and Anon saving Lavender's life from her own endless depression. The three here are great together, you're quickly going up there with my favorite writers here, GJ
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>30653631
> a bit too harsh on Lavender
Like she was anything but a little bitch about everything she doubts. Totally deserved this, you wanna make someone suffer - you do it yourself, not with "clever" plotting around other folks. Thinking creatures are too unstable for that.

They have a long way untill they realize the other side did not want to be an asshole in the first place, they're just failures at what they're doing and it all just dominoed together. I hope the plot forces them together like rats in the barrel so they would HAVE to dig in other's minds untill they overcome their prejudices.
> once she is made aware of the suicide attempt and Anon saving Lavender's life
This. This exactly.
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>>30648685
You wouldn't ride a filly
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I want to know more of how Pearl was tortured.
Tortued slaves are a feature of the filly brothel.
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>>30653690
Some fillies are big enough
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>>30653685
I just get the impression she cares more about saving Pearl than she does hurting Anon. The goal to do whatever it took to make it up to Pearl drove her to a point she forgot her own deep desire to die and get her magic back, though putting Pearl on some sort of pedestal and making it her own life goal to help can be pretty self-centered and neglectful / unhealthy as well. But still I think she wanted it for right reasons more deep down

Totally in agreement with the idea of forcing these three like rats in a barrel though, there is a lot of drama and heartache to pull from the three of them digging deep into one another and themselves
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If she cares, then she does her retardest way to show it. Instead she just throws everything at her, not even wishing to take it slow. Hobbies that keep you from suicide tend to get you places, I agree, but I did not see the slightest sign of thinking what would become of Pearl when she knows.

Especially when they realize that this here asshole just did a nice thing for someone or for you, and you either hate the token you are unable to return, or hate yourself for admiring this here asshole. This is my favourite part.
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I want to make my colt slaves feel the Ice-cold, refreshing taste of Coca-Cola™ down their anuses
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>>30654119
I want to then kick them in the perenium as they drink.
Colt slaves are for abuse.
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>>30652773
>"That's what I thought! You two are perfect for each other! Just rut each other already and leave me out of it!"

Damn Pearl, you really hit the target!

>>30652786

Ok AWF, the family is first, take you time and return when you feel ready to continue.
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>>30653477
WRONG. FUCKING. TRIP.

COME ON PEOPLE.
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>>30653511
Dubs confirm.
We must place a mare inside Shiny.
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>>30654384
>ywn feed Shiny Corona after saying it's "Uma delicia"
>ywn rub his tummy as you tell him what he really just ate
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>>30654315
Was suspicious when I saw it on my phone; Somewritefag just doesn't sound like that. Now that I'm home, ya fake. Hope he's OK...
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If someone writes a green with tantrum throwing RD getting her little rump whacked by her master you will have my eternal gratitude.
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Short update finally, lot of action in it and even more to come in the next part which hopefully I'll have up at the weekend.

>It was finally the weekend which you had been looking forward to, but you felt like shit
>You'd had a fitful sleep, being woken frequently by Lyra's screaming and your own nightmares
>You felt groggy as you groaned and dragged yourself off the couch
>After a quick cup of coffee you went to get a shower and hopefully wake yourself up a bit
>The shower was in the en-suite in your bedroom where Lyra was sleeping, so you pulled the door open carefully to check if she was awake
>She was curled up on the bed, but the twitch of her ears showed she was awake
>Slowly she lifted her head up and turned to look at you through bleary eyes
>There were large bags under her eyes, a result from the restless night
"I'm gonna get a shower. Get some more sleep if you want, or go make yourself some breakfast"
>Her head flopped back down on the pillow as you shambled into the small bathroom
>Your shower was brief but served its purpose, and you felt a little more human once you were finished
>Lyra was still curled up in bed when you stepped out so you went to the kitchen to go make breakfast
>You figured it might perk her up a bit to have breakfast in bed so you set some cereal, toast and juice on a tray and carried it in for her
>She looked up at you quizzically as you set it all down on the night stand next to her head
>"You made me breakfast... in bed?"
"Yeah, you look like you need it. You still up for going into town later on?"
>She instantly brightened up at that
>"Today? It's the weekend already?"
>"Sure is, I'll take that as a 'yes' then" You chuckled
>The two of you made some idle chatter whilst she ate
>You noticed that her eating pace had slowed down considerably already
>She no longer demolished everything in the blink of an eye, instead taking time to savour the meal and actually taste it
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>>30654608
>You hoped that was a sign her body was beginning to recover from starvation, and that she trusted you not to take food away as a form of punishment
>After she had eaten she too got a shower though you didn't need to help her this time in cleaning herself
>Her various wounds and injuries seemed to be healing well enough, but there was nothing you could do to get rid of the scars
>Or bring back her horn
>They would be a constant reminder of her suffering
>You got your stuff ready to go out whilst you waited for her, mainly just your wallet and some bags
>Lyra didn't take long in the shower and when she finished she seemed more than eager to go
>Clearly the fatigue of the morning had worn off and things were once again looking up to be a decent day again
>You slammed the door shut and locked it behind you and saw Lyra already setting off without you

Be Lyra
>During your enslavement time had escaped you
>You didn't know the date or how long you had actually been here, only how long it felt like
>An eternity
>That's why it came as a surprise when Anon said it was the weekend already
>Instantly the haze of your nightmares and sleep deprivation had dissipated and you now hummed a happy tune as you and Anon walked together
>Being outside always lifted your spirits, now more than ever
>Your other master had kept you locked up all day- literally
>You were kept in one room which was always locked when you were left alone in it, and quite often chained to the radiator
>Being outside felt like proper freedom, even though you were still technically a slave
>Anon was nice though, not like your other master
>He didn't even feel like a master- he didn't beat you or say mean things to you, didn't even get you to do chores except the cooking, and that's only because you wanted to do it
>In all aspects he seemed more like a... friend?
>Maybe not quite yet, but he certainly wasn't an enemy
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>>30654751
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>>30654751
>The walk into the city took almost 2 hours and went down a forested hillside from Anon's house until it gradually flattened out and the buildings became more densely packed
>The city was intimidating and nothing like you had in Equestria
>The buildings were tall and imposing and the dull stone and concrete contrasted with the glaring adverts that seemed to be plastered to every available surface
>There was a lot of bomb damage, and most buildings had their windows boarded up making the place feel even more claustrophobic
>It was as if humans built their cities to be deliberately oppressive and uncomfortable
>Regardless, there was still a lot of activity on the streets and the vendors who's stores were too badly damaged simply set up stalls in the streets
>You remembered the first time you had experienced a bombing raid first hoof back in Equestria
>The utter disbelief that anyone could be so monstrous as to just carpet bomb civilians
>most of the ponies were paralysed by fear, just staring up at the bombers as they blotted out the sun and rained death on the world below them
>The destruction of the first raid had been catastrophic and Celestia only knows how you survived
>You were found after the raid huddled in a corner in a puddle of your own piss, shaking and babbling incoherently
>your stomach turned at the memories but you pushed them away
>You weren't going to let your past ruin your day
>You spent a great deal of time buying groceries with Anon, getting to select everything you wanted
>It was strange for a human to be asking what you wanted and felt a little unnerving even though you welcomed it
>Anon was the only person so far who had treated you like a pony rather than a piece of shit
>Even the random passers by on the street scowled down at you, cold hatred and despise in their eyes
>To these people you were the monster, you were the ones bombing them every night
>They had every right to hate you
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>>30654856
That's coming in the next part I think
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>>30654886
cool.
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>>30654879
>You stopped at a more or less intact bakery for a late lunch at around 2pm to get a bite to eat, though your rest was brief
>You had to finish shopping and walk all the way back home in time for dinner which gave very little time to break
>Once the grocery shopping was completed, Anon took you into a different store
>"A pet store? You don't have any pets"
"Figured they'd have some better products for your mane and stuff in here, can't have you using half a bottle of my shampoo every time you jump in the shower"
>Still, a pet store
>That was more than a little demeaning, but there was no such thing as a free pony in human land you guessed except for in the war zones
>It didn't take long to find some decent shampoo, though from Anon's wince at the price tag it cost rather an extortionate amount
>He still forked out for it though
>As you left the store you noticed another man follow you outside, his glare focused on you
>This wasn't really out of the ordinary, you had been enduring glares and condemning looks all day from random people
>This man however decided to make a confrontation of it as he walked up and spat on you in disgust
>"Fucking animals!" He spat
>Anon spun round to see what was going on
"Hey what gives? Don't spit on her!"
>"That thing belongs on a leash, better yet down the mines!"
"She can handle herself, she knows how to behave- she's not a fucking wild beast you know?!"
>The man sneered at Anon, his self righteousness dripping from every word he said
>"That's exactly what it is! A wild animal, the fucking enemy! There's a war going on you know?!"
>Anon looked gobsmacked, ripping his trouser leg up and gesturing at the prosthetic leg beneath
>His face was a mask of shock and rage
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>>30648685
I already miss the old image so I'm posting it here.
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>>30654963
"You see this? I was fighting on the Equestrian front watching my friends die whilst you were... what? Cowering here letting young men die to protect your freedom? Look at her- what's she going to do to anyone? She's half starved and not even half your height. Don't you dare talk to me about who the enemy is!"
>A brief moment of doubt flickered across the man's face before he steeled his resolve and retorted again
>"Then don't act surprised when she stabs you in the back, or cuts your throat whilst you sleep"
>In a flash Anon was on him, seeing red and screaming bloody murder as he drove his fist into his face
>You'd never actually seen Anon angry, and now he was downright psychotic on your behalf
>You never expected a human would fight to protect a pony, much less yourself. But here Anon was beating some guy's face into a bloody pulp because he spat on you
>You barely even noticed the wailing in the air as the sirens started up
>"Anon! Anon!" You yelled, pulling at his sleeve with your teeth and trying to drag his attention away from the pummelling he was unleashing
>He turned around to look at you, still glaring daggers and holding the man by his neck
"What?"
>"The sirens!"
>Surprise dawned on his face as he immediately began trying to scramble to his feet
>You helped him up as the man he had been beating ran for his life
"Shit, I think the shelter is this way, come on!"
>You both took off in a sprint, noticing that most others had already fled whilst Anon was busy
>"I thought they only bombed at night!" You gasped between breaths as you panted
"Pegasus dive bombers!" He shouted back
"They ride on clouds until it takes them over a city, then they swoop down and unleash hell. Almost impossible to detect until it's too late and equally as hard to catch or shoot down"
>The two of you rounded a corner as you neared the shelter, only for your faces to droop immediately
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>>30655100
>The street was packed with people trying to get in, the fact that the raid was in the day meaning that there were hundreds more people in the city who now needed shelter
>If they really were Pegasus dive bombers you wouldn't have time to get in, you had mere minutes at the best
>The shaking of explosions was already beginning, startlingly close
>You felt an overwhelming feeling of despair as you began to quake in fear
>You had survived a bombing before, and only a miracle saw you through
>You wouldn't be that lucky twice
>And to be killed by your own side, in bombing which you believed wasn't happening, there was some bitter irony in that
>You heard your name being called in a distant voice, somewhere far away, but your body refused to move to acknowledge it
>This was how you died, on an alien world, a slave, ripped apart by one of your own bombs
>At least you got to meet Anon before you died
>You liked him, he was the only human who was ever nice to you- nicer than a lot of ponies in fact- and he was going to die here too
>You didn't want him to die, not like this. He didn't deserve it
"Lets fucking move!"
>Reality came crashing back as Anon scooped you up in his arms and began sprinting for his life- both of your lives
>"W-where are we going?" You screamed, your voice trembling
"I don't know, anywhere but here!"
>You looked over Anon's shoulder as he ran, the world behind him disappearing in fire and smoke
>"Oh sweet Celestia..." You whispered in horror under your breath
>"They're almost on top of us!"
>As you stared, your mouth agape, a single bomb plummeted straight into the remnants of the people who were still struggling to get into the shelter
>Your heart seemed to stop as they were vaporised, reduced to paste in the blink of an eye
>Then, swooping through the plume of smoke you spotted another Pegasus, a bomb grasped between his hooves
>He was headed straight for you
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>>30655120
>You didn't even notice as you wet yourself, your piss streaking down the front of Anon's shirt
>The momentary distraction caused Anon to stumble and trip over a crack as you both went sprawling on the tarmac, just as the Pegasus dropped his payload
>The bomb went hurtling past you, detonating some way down the street and showering both of you with rubble and dust
>You struggled to your hooves, expecting Anon to do the same but he wasn't moving
>"Oh Celestia, oh fuck!" You shouted as white hot terror burned in your mind
>His head was bleeding where a chunk of rubble had landed on him, knocking him out cold, though the ride and fall of his breathing meant he was still alive
>With all your strength you hooked your front hooves under his armpits and bit your teeth into his collar and dragged for all you were worth
>You screamed in anguish and panic as you dragged him into a side alley, havoc raining from the skies all around you
>Your muscles bulged, burning in agony but you refused to leave him out here to die, just as he had refused to leave you behind outside of the shelter even though he easily could have
>Probably should have, you slowed him down and made him trip
>His blood was on your hooves if he died, as you had once thought it was
>Celestia herself must have been watching over you for as you glanced backwards over your shoulder you noticed an overturned dumpster laying on its side
>As quickly as you could you dragged Anon inside, tucking his legs in and climbing in after him
>Your body then completely gave out and you clung to his unconscious body for dear life, crying into his piss soaked shirt as debris clanged off the side of your shelter and explosions tore through the air
>Thankfully Pegasi can't carry many bombs, especially not large ones, so the raid was relatively short
>Soon enough the only sound that could be heard was your own crying as you begged Anon to wake up
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>>30655233
That's it so far, but Anon and Lyra's day is only going to get worse when he wakes up after being domed by a brick which hopefully will be this weekend.

Pastebin here:
https://pastebin.com/psQ4gdXJ

At last I've started writing the action bits, it's so much more enjoyable to write compared to all the shit filler I've included.
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>>30655286
>shit filler
But that comfie character development stuff IS the story!
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>>30655286
I'm really enjoying the action in this update. Very... emotionally energizing. Kinda hard to believe that little pony pegasi could ever be so brutal in war. I don't want to think about the things they seen, and have been told to change them into who they are now.
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>>30648685
Just finished reading "Something, at least"

What an amazing story... Amazing writing skills.
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>>30655346
Still it's shit to write and feels kinda cheap to upload without any action to go with it, probably a lot less boring to read but writing that stuff sucks.

>>30655489
The Pegasi are the most militaristic race of the ponies so I reckon if any of them could be capable of dive bombing civilians it would be them. Pretty shit job though whoever gets it.
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>>30655656
desu, constant action and no time for characters to reflect and evaluate can be worse than feeling cheap.
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>>30655286
Excellent story Britanon , we really need more bellicose elements that favor the ponies instead of the repetitive argument that humans conquer without problems, between discrimination and the specificity of ungrateful humans, the rage of a veteran for feeling that he lost so much for someone who does not deserve his sacrifice and his ability to defend an enemy that is no longer a threat reminds me of the terrible discrimination suffered by the Japanese Americans during the war, the sudden and terrifying pegasus bombing and the shelters remind me of the attack on London and the sense of terror of civilians when realizing that the war is at home and not in a distant place where it cannot harm them, that kind of situations are the ones that make the people oppose to continue the conflict in spite of the military plans.

Now it is to wait until the situation normalizes and the survivors see what they cost the war, there will be much rage and pain for the losses and ponies like Lyra will be the target of the revenge of the humans, hope that Anon returns in itself to time to protect it and to return home, although, how about if they find ponies down or injured that were attacked by the army during the bombing? How would Lyra react when she saw a comrade in trouble, wounded or struggling to survive humans?

What could Lyra do in that situation?

What could Anon do?

I hope the ponies will not learn to create mega-spells, because this would become Fallout: Equestria
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>>30655489
>Kinda hard to believe that little pony pegasi could ever be so brutal in war. I don't want to think about the things they seen, and have been told to change them into who they are now.
>>30655656
>The Pegasi are the most militaristic race of the ponies so I reckon if any of them could be capable of dive bombing civilians it would be them. Pretty shit job though whoever gets it.


Just imagine armies of Pegasus forming ef 5 Tornadoes in places where it does not usually happen, denying rain in agricultural areas or manipulating electrical storms that paralyze all flights, one can fight against other beings, but you cannot fight against the weather
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Lemon is for punish.
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>>30657252
Do they just sit still all the time, or they tend to run around everywhere?
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>>30655100
>Pegasi bombers almost impossible to detect
>Meanwhile,military radars capable of detecting 0.1m2 targets have been around since the late-90s minimum
Give 'em the old flak attack
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>>30658009
m-muh magic bird hores and plot device
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>>30658013
>pegasus flys into shrapnel cloud
>gets jacked up fierce but living
>ends up crashing through your window, conveniently wrapping herself up in the drapes for you.
>now have to decide what to do before she bleeds out
>dick votes fuck
>hands have knife
>heart says help
>stomach says throw out window
>brain says take slave
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>>30658136
> brain says take slave
That is if you are able to turn suicide squad bomber into a cute maid. Or it is convenient dungeon 2 stages down included?
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>>30658194
>That is if you are able to turn suicide squad bomber into a cute maid.
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>>30658194
You have a personal air raid shelter.
You can use that as a secure dungeon in which to rape her to death as an enemy, to hide your attempts at diplomacy and trying to bring peace between your worlds, or simply and utterly break her by putting her in a confined space underground where no one looks for her and everyone thinks she is dead.
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>>30658252
Did I say something wrong? Horses generally obey a horde leader, and military ones are loyal to their command. Wild horses are successfully transferred to obeying a farmer, why can we not introduce some of them to a new authority?

>>30658289
Your cases look overkill, just shutting in improvised jail with no space to stretch wings would be enough to cool a prisoner to a dialog. Noone enjoys the war anyway, and if she shares the thought, you just offer her a shelter untill the war is over, just do some easy chores. You can always mention this crowd of women and children she just bombed and ask how she feels about it, if she doubts and leave her to cook with that thought for another couple of days. THEN dialogue, assimilation, mutual respect, blah-blah, cute awkward moments, and when the war is at halt she refuses to go back since she is OK right there with you and had nowhere to return in the first place.
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>>30655944
There will be time for reflection between the action so hopefully it will be well balanced out by the time I've written it.

>>30656003
I actually have plans to include some of the Pegasi in the next bit but I'm still writing that part
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>>30658370
>pegasus thinks you love her, finally gets some courage to ask you out
>it is time
>call up friend, tell him you succeeded.
>you never cared for the pegasus, you were just grooming her.
>friend comes over, its a lonely griffon
>pegasus meekly follows, pleading she still loves you.
>enjoy the 50 talons of gold you got
>year later grifbro is playing with baby hippogriffs
>know you did the right thing
>pull out picture, hopeful to see her someday
>vow to keep searching for your love, Whoa Nelly
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>>30658387
I'll send you back to Korriban, you goddam Ludo Kressh.
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>>30658387
>not saying yes
>not fucking her pussy every night henceforth
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>>30657252
Adorables furballs
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>>30658421
>>30658665
>skyrat pussy being good.
Yeah , sure.
The only thing to like them for is the built in handle bars to drag them down your dick.
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>>30656050
this. I always laugh at people who think unironically we can conquer equestria even with our advanced technology. Ponies have superior train denial and seige ability. at some point the humans are going to have to stop. then all they can look forward to is watching their tanks and tends sink under flash floods and tornados sent from afar. poners can grow dense pricle bushes instead of barbed wire for fortification, and haul more ass than humans in terms of work done on fortification walls.

unicorns have any number of spells and their telekenesis gives them advantage comparible to humans for fine manipulated tasks.

They definately wouldn't be able to take us. but they would be more than able to laugh off any invasion. their defensive abilities could only be reduced through nuclear war, and even then, i think it would be pretty dangerous to show them that technology if they figure out how to replicate it. unlike the real world the way to poner land is limited, any nuclear installment in a GATE style situation would not be hard to fortify against unlike the real world, where unlimited numbers can come out from any angle of attack.

The cold fact is, tanks and mechanized forces would be inadiquate. only marines could have a shot at taking and holding equestria. mostly because they have enough training that they aren't completely reliant on mechanized forces to operate.
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>>30658009
dampen presence, stealth effects, etc. These are basic magical ideas that are necissary when you want to explore a cave filled with ecolocation terrorizing monsters. Poners have plenty of plausible room to develop technology that thwarts the senses used by fantastical monsters, constructs or not.
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>>30659006
> Implying humans won't just nuke the shit out of Canterlot and main military bases, while spitting cassette bombs all over Cloudsdale
> implying they won't just gas last standing shelters with chloroform of just go full WWI with easily crafted soman
> implying UAV won't be only thing humans actually need for this
> implying equestria even considers past-medieval level of warfare
> implying ponies will have a chance when its not only about infantry
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I want my shellshicked warrior pone slave that cries in her sleep from everything she did and saw.
I want her to mount me every morning and thank me for the privlege of being my slave.
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>>30659105
Yeah, this. Considering that the ponies job to fucking everything and everyone, I find it hard to believe they wouldn't be quickly overwhelmed and beaten with ease.

Remember in Half life 2 how the Combine beat the earth's forces in just 7 days? That'd be what it'd be in with the ponies, just replace the Combine with the Humans and the humans with the ponies.
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>>30659208
The combine won in 7 hours
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>>30659374
He wasn't old enough to play it when it came out and came of age too late.
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>>30659105
>cassette bombs
Dope af mix tapes?
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>>30659374
Ah, my bad. It's been years since I played through HL2.

My point still stands.
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>> 30626255
>Bedtime rolls around before you know it.
>Thankfully you don't have to go back to your shared bedroom where Rarity is hiding.
>Instead Anon tosses you into his bed before climbing in after you.
>Literally tosses, good thing you have cat like reflexes and are oddly used to being lightly thrown.
>Just gotta do a few quick circles to make your spot nice and soft and ok nevermind guess you're going over here now!
>He makes you his little spoon as if it were the most natural thing in the world.
>When he'd told you he'd let you sleep in his bed you figured it was just that, sleeping.
>Not that you mind a little cuddling. Ponies are pretty much always down for a that, herd instincts or something like that.
>"We're going to have to work on the rooming situation if you two can't get along."
"What you don't like this?"
>You turn your head to the side and look up at him so as to not stab him with your horn.
>"I'm sure you'd get tired of having to share a room with me."
"Nah your bed is really soft."
>And his arms are really strong.
>Not saying that though.
>Nope nope nope.
>"You know you're always welcome to be my bunk buddy. You're like a cute snarky plushy."
>He better move that finger away from your face!
>He better not try to boop you!
>You snap at his finger but he moves it away at the last moment.
>"A plushy with teeth."
"Just shut up and hold me, I'm sleepy."
>Aw yeah those strong arms both wrap around you and pull you close.
>Be still my beating heart it's just your human.
>There are many like it but this one is yours.
>He falls asleep fast, always does.
>Today sucked but he did come through for you.
>Not only saved you from the rest of your lesson via Rarity but took away her authority then turned the tables on her.
>You feel bad about enjoying watching her suffer but it had been a long time coming.
>Hopefully tomorrow she'll be a bit more reasonable and you can all talk it out.
>Still, gotta reward your gallant knight.
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>>30659925
>He's asleep right? Yeah must be.
>You lift your head and give him a quick kiss on the underside of his jaw.
>Every protector deserves a rewards from their beautiful princess after all.

>Mmmmm you swear his bed is softer than yours.
>You should make him trade you, he doesn't need a queen size for just him.
>Better plan its both your beds from now on.
>The idea of permanently moving into his bed makes you blush a little.
>So maybe you're a cuddle slut big deal, better than a true bed mare.
>The horror stories from the auction told of mares permanently chained to their masters beds.
>Forced to live off scraps and seed alone.
>What a silly idea, sperm isn't nutritious enough for that and you know it.
>Why you know that isn't important.
>Anyway time to get up, you rarely feel well rested so this is a nice change of pace.
>Only this is this weird poking pressure at your lower back.
>The more awake you get the more it occurs to you just what could be poking you in the back.
>Your face threatens to catch the bed on fire as you very calmly scramble out of the bed and directly onto the floor.
>Face first.
>You're his benevolent princess but he hasn't earned that.
>Yet.
>No no don't think about that, bad filly!
>You manage to reorient yourself on all four hooves.
>The good news is you are NOT at all flustered by being that close to his... maleness.
>Time to poke him, yes that's the right thing to do.
"Wake up. Wakeupwakeupwakeupwakeupwakeup."
>He pushes your hoof away and mumbles something that sounds vaguely like "I'm up". Vaguely.
>"Time is it?"
"Almost 10. I'm gonna take a shower but you need to get out of bed you bum."
>He sits up and rubs his eyes.
>Lord man put on a shirt.
>This could take some getting used to if you're gonna sleep in his bed long term.
>You're about to go before he speaks.
>"Hey let me see."
>He does the little turn around motion with his hand.
>He just wants to see how you've recovered from yesterday.
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>>30659932
>Good thing you aren't flustered from earlier.
>Just relax, breath, don't wink. Holy Celestia don't wink!
>Lifting your tail for him doesn't help the situation but you manage to contain yourself.
>Thank goodness he just looks and doesn't touch, you think your forehooves might have given out.
>"Still looks bad, do you want more lotion?"
>You barely manage to cover yourself and turn back around before you wink hard!
>The idea of laying over his lap and having him rub your backside is too much right now!
>"No no I'm good thanks! Just need a shower is all!"
>Out out out!
>That was too close. You aren't really sure if he would understand horse signals the same way a stallion would but it's not a risk you want to take.
>Also praise the nine that humans have awful noses.
>Not to worry you can fix all this in the shower.
>Oh wait someone is in your room. Your room where all your good toys are. Shit.
>Maybe a cold shower then, boo.
>You're almost to the bathroom when you hear clattering in the kitchen.
>Is Rares already in there?
>You cautiously poke your head around the corner.
>Waffles! Pancake's equally delicious cousin!
>You must have made an excited noise as Rarity turns her head to catch you.
>Oh shit! You back up a little just in case.
>"No no don't go."
"Sorry, I didn't expect to find your in here."
>"That's quite alright. I'm afraid it's more apology cooking. I was a bit over the line yesterday with you and I had lots of time to think about it last night. I've felt very out of sorts lately. Are you alright?"
>You turn to try and inspect your own flanks.
>It's of course hard to see but nonetheless you can see a couple oval brush marks still plainly visible.
>"A little sore still."
"Sorry, if it helps I'm no better off."
>She shakes her hips and moves her tail ever so slightly.
>The red underneath really shines through a white coat, anon busted that backside for sure.
>"Thank you by the way, for stopping him. You really saved me."
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>>30659934
"He was just really really mad."
>She chuckles a little.
>"I could tell. I didn't know he was so protective of you, it must be nice."
>That puts a stupid grin on your face, it really is.
>She walks a bit closer to you to grab something from the fridge but stops to sniff the air.
>Uh oh, she follows her nose until she's sniffing you directly.
>"So you slept in his bed? Was he gentle?"
"I... He... Well yeah. I mean cuddle wise that is."
>No no no wrong idea!
>Though you imagine he would be gentle with you. Gentle and kind as he...
"Anyway those look great let me just grab a quick shower!"
>Hightailing it out of here!
>Shower! Cold shower! Oh wow that's awful!
>A few minutes of cold misery later you hop out.
>Not fun but had the desired effect.
>You magic the water away from your coat but take a few minutes to blow dry your hair just for the feel of it.
>Ok totally calm and collected now.
>You're gonna go in there, eat your pancakes then you Anon and Rarity are going to have a nice long conversation about everything.
>Anon is already at the table when you get there.
>Looks like he took a shower as well in his adjoined bathroom.
>"There she is. We thought you fell back asleep."
>Wow funny guy, he gets a raspberry blown at him.
>You go to climb up to the kitchen table and notice both remaining seats have cushions in them.
>Thoughtful, it barely even hurts to sit.
>Rarity brings the plate of finished waffles to the table and takes her seat to your right leaving Anon on your left.
>"Thanks Rarity these are great."
>That gets her to smile at least a little.
>"You're welcome sir. As I told Twilight I wish to make up for yesterday. I've been so restless lately and I was wrong to take it out on her."
>"Yes, you were. I think I drove that point home last night though."
>She nods and breaks eye contact to look at her plate.
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>>30659938
>"I guess now is as good a time as ever to talk about all this. You already learned your lesson so no more lecturing or anything but everything I said last night still stands. You're no longer in charge of Twilight, none of this head mare business for either of you."
>"Sir please can't we talk about-"
>Anon cuts her off with a pointed finger.
>"No, absolutely not. I think you learned enough last night Rarity and I'm proud of your for taking initiative to apologize like this so don't argue with me now. I'm told you're both adults here-"
>Is that a jab at you? That's so a jab at you.
>Note to self: delete something important off Anon's computer.
>-So I want you both handling yourselves. Everyone will be responsible for their own chores, maybe Twilight can do laundry and cleaning and Rarity can do cooking and shopping? You two can hash it out between yourselves just let me know because that's what you'll be held responsible for. That means if something's not done then that's the one that will be in trouble alright?"
"I hate shopping so that works for me. There's a few other things to talk about if we're splitting chores but we can figure it out in a bit."
>"If you think that's best..."
>She doesn't sound convinced but also not willing to argue.
>"Good. I trust you two can figure this out, Twilight was doing a fine job before and Rarity you have experience runnings things a lot more complicated than a household."
>See? You did do a great job before, not the time to rub it in to some ponies though.
>"Which brings me to the second order of business, we need more space. When I moved here it was just me then when Twilight got here she took the guest bedroom. You two need your own space mostly because I'm tired of hearing you argue. With all the money Rarity brought in there's no reason we can't start looking for a new place."
"Oh oh can I help?! Are we looking here for closer to your work? Can we get a pool? What's our budget?"
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>>30659550
Ponies can't resist human sick beats, tasty riffs and wicked hooks.

Don't even get me started on human dancing. Ponies are mesmerized by our razzle dazzle, leaves them breathless and weak in the knees.
So many ponies got served by human dance crews, it was horrible.
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>>30659943
>the news seem to even perk up Rarity.
>"Oh that's perfect master, I need something else to keep busy with and I love interior design! I have a lot of experience with decoration I'm sure I can find a look everyone will enjoy!"
>Psh needing more work to entertain her. Not surprising given the pace she's used to keeping but not something can sympathize with either.
>"You two will get to help don't worry. You've still got all that furniture in storage too right Rarity?"
>Even when her life was falling apart Rarity had been calm and collected.
>She'd hadn't just gotten the other mares squared away with their new homes when she'd gone home that night.
>She'd also taken everything she could practically move and stored it offsite.
>Since the legal owner of all her property and belongings, aka Rarity the slaver, was going to vanish in a puff of legal smoke it was a good call.
>"Yes sir, I'm sure we can use quite a bit of it."
>"Great, we can talk about it later I just wanted you give you guys a heads up. We've got other plans for today that you're both gonna like a lot less than house shopping."
>Not ominous at all.
"Do I even want to know?"
>He walks to the fridge and pulls some small business card off.
>Oh no!
>no no no!
>It's a reminder card but not just any reminder!
>"Sorry Twi it's that time of year."
"No Anon no not Angie! Not the vet!"
>Anything but the vet!
>"Calm down, I know you hate it but we both know you have to go."
"Anon no Anon you don't understand Angie has no sense of personal space. She's used to dealing with dogs not things that can feel shame!
Please Anon I'm perfectly healthy let's just skip it! It's a waste of money I can take care of myself I swear!"
>You desperately grab his arm and give him the sad eyes.
>He can't resist the sad eyes usually but he's pretty strict when it comes to your health.
>Like those nasty vitamins she made you take for months last time you went there. Bleh.
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>>30659950
>"Sorry Twi were going, all of us. According to the paperwork Rarity hasn't been in years either right?"
>She perks up at the mention of her name.
>"Ah yes I was rather lax about it, I just so busy all the time."
>No no no! You're gonna get poked and prodded!
>Angie's obsessed with breaking your number one rule: No putting stuff in the unicorn!
"No Rarity You don't understand! The tools! The fingers! You'll never be the same!"
>"Twi she's a very good at her job."
>"Are you sure you aren't overreacting darling?"
>They don't understand! None of them understand!
>But Rarity will know the terror soon enough! Nothing will be able to save her from Angie's grabby hands! Nothing!

Little big of cute, little bit of setup, not a lot of actual plot. Should be more real plot next update but poe 3.0 launches in 15 minutse sooooooo it'll be done eventually.
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>>30659961
yo senpai whats your pastebin
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>>30660016
https://pastebin.com/rJhtA082
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>>30660025
thanks
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>>30659961
Is Anon still gonna dress Twilight up?
Or was he just playing around.
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>>30659006
They are not forgetting the use of biological weapons; Swarms of Parasprites that must from the rations of the army to the same weapons and spare parts, viruses and bacteria for which there are no defenses, and if the ponies are allied with other nations the problem will be worse, the Diamond Dogs could make tunnels under the bases Of humans and allow the ponies to surprise attacks or simply sink their tanks and planes into deep pits, Griffins attacking patrols and Dragons burning cities on Earth.

And we do not even talk about Discord.
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>>30660042
>They are not forgetting the use of biological weapons
You mean like the kind of shit that we have that can decimate entire city centers with invisible, odorless toxins? If you're going to pull 'biological weapons' into things then humanity has tiny horses massively fucking outclassed.
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>>30659961
Oh yes. My peepee.
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>>30660042
Human wave attack would work on them.
Not to mention suicide bombers, ieds, mines, napalm, rpg, striker missiles and helicopter sky raids.

Kinda hard to beat 7.5 billion
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>>30659925
It's just so cute when she tries to blame the instincts when she wants to cuddle.
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>>30660041
Well shes covered in brush marks and they are going to the vet so she has to wear something. School girl outfit when?
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poner
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So how big is Vega's Twily?
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>>30661865
I remember that Vega mentioned that Rarity had been at least 10 years on Earth

The ponies are adults at age 15 in this story.
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>>30662072
In terms of age Rarity has been here for 5 years and Twilight for 3, she was on the run for a couple. Twi is now 18 and Rarity probably about 19 which is well into adulthood for ponies like that anon said, mid to late 20s human equivalent. In terms of size they're rather tiny. Twilight is maybe 3' and 125lbs? Rarity a few inches taller. Basically small enough to pick up and carry with a bit of effort but large enough to do lewd things to without breaking them in half.
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Weld pone is for foal bearing and breeding
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>>30662772
>Rarity a few inches taller.

I believed you
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>>30662908
I wish to feed a pony an iron heavy diet then weld them to a building
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>>30663583
What the fuck? That's not how that works.
That's not how any of that works.
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>>30662908
I like to imagine her bent over her new machine while her master fucks her into a squealing moaning mess using the grounding clamp to pinch her perky earth pony nipples
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>>30663708
>welding fetish
The internet is truly infinite.
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>>30642415
>Suggest they go speak to Mellowheart, expecting that she will be honest with them?
Take this as a learning model to see if Cadance isn't just spinning bulshit from our side of things, if Mellow Heart tries to lie or get us into any undue trouble? WE know we have to tighten up a bit again

>Crescent Moon
I love here and Anon's interractions. She clearly makes no secret that she doesn't like him but the freedom to express that openly is proof he's trying to change, and at the same time she has to realize that despite the horrible pain he's put her through. It's adorable.

>Flying lessons
looking forward to this as well, more time between Flurry and Cadance is very much warranted at this point
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>>30662772
Too small, i reject your reality and replace with my own ~1,3m poners
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The ponies in Maiden Voyage are only a foot tall. They're very cute to watch as they run across the deck and carry things several times bigger than them on their backs. When they work in unison to gut fish, it's almost like a song could break out at any time. Because of this, Anon is able to sleep next to every single one when he lays down, and they all snuggle up against him.
This is a lie, but it's a cute lie.
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>>30664324
Size of a police dog would be perfect. Body sized as yours, and still fur and hooves.
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>>30664899
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>>30664913
I don't speak S.T.A.L.K.E.R., what is this
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>>30664927
Sorry, wrong version.
General "wanna hug?" chitchat and watching tv
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>>30664927
Fluttershy is telling Anon to Rush B.

https://derpibooru.org/1196370
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>>30652786

> ~~~~

> You watched the sleeping pegasus for a long while before finally working up the nerve to wake her. For a brief moment, your horn lit up as you prepared to shake her, but then you thought better of it.
> Instead, you gently put your hooves on her shoulders and turned her toward you.
"Wake up, Pearl."
> Her eyes fluttered open and she quickly recognized your silhouette in the dark room. "L-lavender?" she asked, sleepily.
"I'm sorry, but I really need to talk to you."
> The pegasus flinched as a tear fell on her leg. "Lavender? What's wrong?" Despite her earlier outburst, the mare was worried about you. It warmed your heart.
> She sat up and scooched away. Then she patted the bed, inviting you to sit with her.
> You dragged yourself up and settled on your haunches, but you didn't look at her, not even when you felt her wing drape around your back.
> It was a surprisingly pleasant gesture, actually.
> "Go on, tell me what happened," Pearl asked. "This isn't because of what I said, is it?"
> You detected a hint of regret in her voice.
"N-no. It's Anon. We..."
> The words you were about to say suddenly seemed stupid. But out of the corner of your eye, you saw the pegasus looking at you expectantly. You made yourself continue.
"We had an argument. A bad one."
> There was silence for long moments. You were waiting for Pearl to laugh at you. 'That's all?' she would ask, derisively. Why did you even care what Anon thought or did?
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>>30665044

> You shouldn't. But things had changed. So slowly that you hadn't even noticed it, you had grown a little closer to the human. Maybe Pearl had been the common ground you two had needed?
> There had been an understanding between you, or at least that was what you had thought. The incident with the horrid old woman had shaken that belief and tonight's argument had finally shattered it.
> You had convinced yourself that the human somehow respected you.
> It was a big, fat lie.
> Pearl's wing rustled as your shoulders shook with sobs.
> "Go on," she said at last, "tell me what happened."
> You didn't even remember how it began. After the pegasus had said her piece, you and Anon had simply stared at each other for long moments.
> You were the first to break the ice, unable to stand the accusations Pearl had made. Her words rang too true for your comfort.
"I don't remember exactly. I asked him if he believed the things you- what you said."
> The human hadn't known either. But he came out with the stupidest question imaginable.
"He asked me if you were right - about us. If there really was something between us?"
> Pearl laid her hoof on your shoulder. "Is there?"
> You turned away, shaking off her pegasus embrace, and wrapped your legs around your midriff. Of course there wasn't. But how could you convince her?
"No! Never! Pearl, he drove me to try and kill myself, for Celestia's sake!"
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>>30665048

> Her wing was back immediately as the mare hugged you again, this time with both hooves and feathers. You glanced at her face, but all you could see were her large eyes, reflecting the sliver of moonlight which filtered through the window.
> "Oh!" she exclaimed and her grip around your barrel tightened. "I'm so sorry, Lavender! I- I didn't know."
> You pushed on, suddenly anxious to get it all off your chest.
"He was training me."
> You shook your head and corrected your own words.
"Buck it, he was *breaking* me so I'd be an obedient little slave for some rich, fat human who gets off on pony maids or something!"
> The memory still stung. You were nothing but a piece of furniture to these monsters!
"But I wouldn't. He couldn't get to me, not really. But every time he beat me, I lost a bit of hope. Eventually, I just-"
> You heaved a deep sigh and looked at the pegasus. She was watching you in silence, waiting for you to get it all out.
"I didn't want it to go on. I just wanted it to stop. So, one day, I took a beer bottle I had hidden and broke it. Then I-"
> Pearl averted her gaze, but her legs around you never wavered. Her wing was trembling around your shoulders, the mare unable to control it.
> You had to swallow a lump before you could finish.
"I cut my throat open. Just to get away from him."
> Both you an the pegasus let your breath out at the same time. You hadn't even realized she had been holding hers.
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>>30665049

> "Buck, Lavender. I'm- I'm sorry. That's messed up," she whispered. It sounded as if she was about to cry, the way her voice was breaking.
> She heaved another sigh, but she still wouldn't look at you.
> "I can't even imagine," she went on, working through her shock. "That's- I don't even know what to say."
"He saved my life. He found me just in time and called help. I hadn't done it right, so they were able to keep me alive."
> The failure hurt.
"I wasn't even good enough for that, Pearl! I've never been good for anything!"
> The pegasus hushed you, extending her other wing and placing the tips of the feathers on your lips.
> "Don't say that. It's not true, Lavender.
> You wanted to push her aside, but you just jerked your face away from the wing so you could talk.
"It is! I told myself I wanted you here so I could help you! So I'd be there for you and try to give you closure. I thought if you saw how sorry Anon was, it would help."
> The next part was bitter in your mouth and you all but spat it out.
"Instead, I just wanted you so I could get back at Anon. You were right - I only saw you as a tool to hurt him! I'm just as bad as he is."
> Pearl thought about it for a long time. Finally, she opened her mouth to agree with you.
> "No, Lavender," she said quietly. Her wing feathers brushed your cheek with exquisite precision. "I spoke rashly, out of hurt. Maybe-"
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>>30665052

> She saw your eyes widen in surprise, so the pegasus placed the primaries against your lips again to forestall your comment.
> "Maybe that was a part of it. But it's natural. I don't blame you for it, not anymore. I hadn't known."
> You were finally able to unwrap your hooves from your belly. They shook badly when you put them around the pegasus.
> "I don't doubt that your intentions, deep down, were noble. You wanted to help. I appreciate it."
> You sniffed, trying to keep yourself from messing up her fur with your snot and tears. Then you leaned your face against her barrel and closed your eyes.
"I'm so sorry, Pearl. I should have handled it better. I'm sorry."
> You heard the air filling her lungs as she took a breath.
> "It's okay, I forgive you," she said, her voice resonating deeply through her chest. "By the way, you still hadn't told me what the fight with Anon was about."
> That was right. You pulled away and tried to look her in the eye. It took an effort, but you managed to keep your gaze still.
"He said- he said he loves all his ponies and wants them to have happy lives. But I don't believe that. What kind of twisted, bucked up love is that?!"
> A bit of your earlier anger returned and your voice became harder, more urgent.
"I mean- beating ponies up until they forget who they were? Crushing their hopes and dreams only to replace them? And with WHAT? A sick desire to serve humans. The day they don't get beaten for making a small mistake is a good day, Pearl!"
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>>30665055

> The pegasus lowered her gaze before your rage, but she still held you in both hooves and wings.
"I told him if that's his idea of love, then I'd rather he hate me! At least then I could still be myself! He said 'fine'! For a second I thought he was going to beat me again. But he just told me to get out - that he didn't want to see me anymore!"
> You were breathing rapidly. With a start you realized you had been shouting. There was no doubt the human had heard that. But you told yourself that you were beyond caring. Let him think whatever he wanted.
> "I understand. I agree with you, Lavender," the mare said as she fanned her wings, tickling your shoulders and the back of your head.
> "But I knew him before- before he became like this. He was a good person, I promise you."
"So what? We're supposed to remind him of what he used to be? That's not my responsibility, Pearl. And it's not yours, either, not after he pinned the guilt of that accident on you! You owe him nothing! At best, *he* owes *you* an apology!"
> The pegasus smiled. "I know. He told me."
"He's just a- What?! When?"
> "Before you had your... lecture. He told me he was sorry and it wasn't my fault. The accident. He wanted a chance to earn my forgiveness."
> It was not something you had expected. From his earlier contrition, you had seen the human falling back into his old role as slaver.
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>>30665059

> You were starting to believe that his remorse had been just a phase. Or worse - an act.
"I- I don't know why he'd do that..."
> Pearl seemed to have all the answers again. "He's... how do I explain it?" She looked away for a while, getting her thoughts in order.
> "He's split in half. Of course he's sorry about losing his mind and the-"
> She had to pause and swallow at the memory. "The things he did to me. But he has been doing this slavery thing for a long time now. He doesn't know who he is anymore, I think."
"I don't understand."
> She sighed and tried again. "Look- when you're around, he's reminded of being a trainer. He needs to make you behave. I don't know why. Maybe it's money, or maybe it's just a job. But it's hard for him not to try and make you into a pony he believes you should be. A meek, obedient *slave* pony."
> You interjected, filling up the gap in her reasoning.
"I think he believes he's doing us a favor. He says that ponies who behave have good lives, and those who don't are killed. Horribly."
> Despite yourself, you couldn't stop the memory of the red mare in the snuff film from surfacing. It made you shiver and Pearl nuzzled you briefly, even if she didn't know the cause.
> "Exactly!" she confirmed. "He thinks he's doing good. Anyway, that's who he thinks he should be around you. But then I'm here, and he can't help but remember what it was like, back when we were-"
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>>30665061

> It was her turn to shudder and you tightened your grip on her barrel. In response, her wings wrapped more closely around your shoulders.
> "When we were still a family. He remembers me almost like a daughter. And he wants to be a better person. He needs me to forgive him."
> You tried to reconcile the two things and it felt like a light had turned on in your head.
"Oh..."
> What Pearl was saying made perfect sense. She was a reminder of Anon's past life and you made him think about his new one. No wonder the human seemed conflicted. One moment he was your friend, the next a slaver. He flipped between discipline and indulgence.
"I think I see it. Why hadn't I seen it before? I think you're right, Pearl."
> You saw her smiling. She slowly pulled you down to the bed, still keeping you wrapped up in soft feathers.
"But what do we do? Which one is the 'real' Anon? How do we help him?"
> A more important question rose in your mind.
"Do we even *want* to help him?"
> Her smile faded and she heaved a sigh. As you both laid your heads down and stared at each other across the pillow, you could see Pearl had finally run out of answers.
> "I don't know, Lavender. I just don't know. Maybe we can't solve it. Maybe it's not up to us? I know which Anon I'd like, but if that only makes him miserable with guilt-"
> She tugged the wing on which you were lying and you shifted so she could pull it back.
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>>30665066

> "I still care for him a little. I don't want him to hurt. It's messed up, I know. I'm angry - I'll probably never forgive him. But I still care."
> Then the mare barked a short laugh. "You and Anon are not the only ones who are conflicted. Maybe it's contagious or something."
> The explanation made you chuckle as well. It lightened the mood, together with the relaxed way you were huddled together.
> You still didn't know what to do about Anon, but at least you've made a friend.
> A real friend, this time. You reached out a hoof and brushed a few stray strands of her mane out of her face.
"Thanks, Pearl."
> She leaned closer to touch your nose with hers. "Goodnight, Lavender," she said, closing her eyes.
> You didn't think you'd be able to sleep, not with the way your mind raced. But little by little, the turmoil receded. You were just about to doze off when Pearl spoke again.
> "Lavender? Why did you hide an empty beer bottle? Were you planning to- to do it for a while?"
> You blinked your eyes open to gazed in her thoughtful expression.
"No, nothing like that. I... got drunk one day."
> It was good that the darkness hid your blush.
> Pearl giggled in delight. "I want that story. Now!"
> You were about to say no and try to sleep, but a bit of laughter would do you both good. You just had to remember to stop in the right place.
"Okay, okay. Anon and I ended up with a deal. I'd try to be a good slave and he wouldn't beat me for every small mistake."
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>>30665073

> Pearl's eyebrows rose and she opened her mouth to ask a question. You quickly plugged it with a hoof.
"Later! Just- it happened, okay? Anyway, I realized he was succeeding with his... training and it drove me bonkers! One day I just couldn't take it anymore, so I snuck some bears out of the fridge and drank them."
> Pearl giggled into our hoof, tickling the sensitive frog. That and the story you were telling made you laugh as well.
"I hid the bottles behind the cupboard because Anon was right there in the living room and I didn't want to alert him by dropping them in the bin. I thought I could get them out of the house later."
> This time, the pegasus managed to contain her laugh, but the twinkle in her eyes showed you she was amused.
"Well, I hid two of them. The third one I just left out in the open. Celestia, I got wasted quickly..."
> The mare couldn't hold back anymore. She was giggling again. Your next admission was bound to make it worse.
"Then I went and yelled at him. And I think I threw up all over his shirt. It's all a bit of a blur."
> Her snickering turned into a full-on guffaw. Tears were streaming down her face as she laughed. "T-three beers?" she managed to hasp out.
"Well, yes."
> You tried your best to sound indignant while the mare slowly wound down.
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>>30665077

> "Lightweight!" Pearl said with a mischievous grin as soon as she was able to talk again. Then she stuck her tongue out at you.
"Well, you try starving for a week or two, then downing a couple of those all at once. I'd like to see how well *you'd* think!"
> The crazy mare was actually considering it! "You know, maybe..."
"Out of the question!"
> "It could be just what we need. Cut loose and really talk. Open up. Maybe, if Anon..."
"Absolutely not! Pearl, look at me!"
> She did so, but you could see she was still thinking it.
"Read my lips. No! N-O! Got it?"
> It took her too long to nod. You hoped she wouldn't do something stupid.
> You couldn't stop her if she really wanted to. But you were determined never to have a part in that again. Getting drunk with Anon was out of the question.
> He had promised you and Pearl new homes. It couldn't come soon enough for you. Until then, you'd tolerate his presence, but you didn't have to talk to him.
> And you certainly couldn't have a party with the human!
> You sighed in exasperation and turned away.
"Fine. Good night, Pearl."
> "Good night."
> You kept your mouth firmly shut until sleep came. Luckily, Pearl had no more questions.
> But the story had lightened the mood significantly. You felt a lot better. At least that much you had to admit.
> The conversation with Pearl had almost felt... normal.

> ~~~~
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>>30665082

That's the today's bit. Not much to say about it because it's *hot* here and I'm too lazy to type any more.

But, as always, any responses are very welcome. A big thank you to all who've replied and helped me shape this story into what it's become. Hope the ending won't disappoint!
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>>30665088
I hope Pearl sneakily makes them both sit and drink and jist drunkenrage at each other, they really need to sync their data. Maybe pretending she drinks just with Lavender and then when strolling to fridge for a refill toss Anon some. And then just shove two drunk bodies into a closet untill they talk.
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>>30664913
This size for one pony is almost perfect
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>>30665049
But Lavender is a crystal pony, as might hurt her a glass bottle?
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Slaveventure when?
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>>30657484
They are fairly active in their pig pen, but they don't ever leave it. The sides are only 6", it would be an easy hop to escape and run around the house, but they never do. They are more interested in escaping back into their cozy shelters than exploring, guineas just have no sense of adventure!
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>>30665088
>sends them to a new home in a week
>promptly blows his brains out right afterwards
the end
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>>30665088
Anon snaps and goes on a rampage ending in suicide by cop.
Nobody shows up to his funeral

Lavender new family does not like her attitude and sells her off to the brothel.
After being used as a cum bucket, Lavender takes a bunch of pills and slits her wrist.
Her body is thrown in the dumpster like common trash.
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>>30665088
Thanks, good reading. Nice to have a calming break after all that action and exposition. It's worth noting that Pearl and Anon are well equipped to survive on Earth, but Lavender is not. How will she find her place in the world, without Anons help? Looking forward to answers whatever they turn out to be.
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>>30665088
I just hope Anon's sister not appears accompanied by staff of a mental institution, and she worried that her brother fall into a relapse decides to hospitalize for a while.

Pearl has the opportunity to live with the sister and her family, but Lavender, not being accredited as a pony trained to serve is returned to auctions and eventually bought by the sick guy of the snuff videos
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>>30666763
PIGGIE SO CUTE
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>>30667556
We had snuff talk before.
It ended up as Highlander.
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>ywn be your slave's slave
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>>30668357
>Ywn be the mutual snuff victim as your slave rapes you to death then dies of a heart attack.
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>>30667257
>Lavender takes a bunch of pills and slits her wrist
>slits her wrist
>wrist
Rest in pieces anthro trash
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>>30668752
In the trash is where lavender belongs
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>You get sent to war against Equestria
>Your squad is caught off guard by the Equestrian forces
>Finds out why other troops cannot be found after defeated
>They get turned into ponies
>Just like you just have been
>At least the ponies are free do live a normal equestria life
>Well, depending on their cutie mark that is
>Being turned into an earth pony filly with a question mark cutie mark made the princessess crazy on what to do with you
>In the end you were sent back to the front, now as an Equestrian marine
>You could always betray them
>But their talk about what would you do after when found by humans made you stop
>Now as a pony you couldnt possibly simply show up in their doorstep
>Yet that s pretty much what happened
>Your troops are sent on a recon mission
>Yet as the group was leaving they decided on taking revenge on humans
>Knowing that you were human, they decided to take revenge on you
>And that s how you were found tied down with your muzzle shut in front of an officer door

If anyone could expand on this or some other role reversal it d be based
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>>30668915
Conversion Bureau fags pls go.
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>>30668915
>Conversion Bureau
cancer
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>>30668915
LEAVE THIS PLACE!
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>>30668915
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>>30668915
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>Your little Pearl comes up, hinds shaky
"Mmaster, I need to goooo"
>"You're a pony, they go where ever they please."
"b-but it says I can't on the sign"
>Darn new park rules.
>"Okay, uh, here let's use this trash can."
>You pick Pearl, your beloved slave pegasus who you could never see hurting or having any issues with fire, up and cradle her in your arms
>You'd give a little squeeze to this family member of a slave, but you worry about how it could go badly
>You hold her over the open park trash can, her wings keeping her stable as you hold her fores
>Soon she has relaxed and a hiss of sweet mare pee is streaming into the can
>well its a can and that's what you should use with a dog right?
>Pearl finishes quickly, but you need to make sure
>Shifting your grip you gently pat he head and give her a little shake, making sure all the slave's urine is gone
>Done, you set her down and let her walk alongside you, collar loosely gripping her neck
>She was a good slave, a happy one, youwished all slaves would be as happy as she someday
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>>30669171
>ywn keep your little slavemare's bladder full to put out any potential house fires
Extinguisher slave when
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>>30669212
>anon tortures pearl because his family died in the fire
"Why was your bladder empty, Pearl!?!?!?!?"
"They died in that fire because you couldn't hold it for a few hours!!!!"

Damn it this shouldn't be as funny as it is.
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>>30669171
>hinds shaky
why does she have russian attack helicopters
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>>30668915
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>>30659105
>Implying humans won't just nuke the shit out of Canterlot and main military bases,
you're retarded senpai. nuking the land they hope to take willy nilly isn't in their best interest, and theyre not going to have any major understanding of poner defenses until the poners get a chance to employ them, unless you are suggesting we blanket the portal's exterior with nukes and glass the place, there really is no chance of success, casset bombs are irrelevant, you have to know to attack a cloud to shoot bombs at it.

>> implying UAV won't be only thing humans actually need for this
you cant hold any place with UAV, never mind the fact that UAV would be trivial to destroy
>equestria considering past medeival level warfare
they have flying aircraft and trains, they just don't have weaponized gunpowder, not that they need it. again, they can seige anyone that brings weapons their way like tanks.

>> implying ponies will have a chance when its not only about infantry
you are a moron, infantry is probably the only thing we've got that they'd have a hard time defending against, armored settlements and Mechanized infantry would be damn near worthless though. airfields, troop stations, etc would all be easy targets once hostile.

>>30659208
>. Considering that the ponies job to fucking everything and everyone, I find it hard to believe they wouldn't be quickly overwhelmed and beaten with ease.
no matter how retarded you are I cant believe you honestly think ponies defense policy is to fuck everything

>>30660042
viruses and infections would have a low chance of interacting, but everything else is right.

>burning and attacking earth.
while this is possible the ponies have no real way to take earth either, its just that we couldn't take them. It's like the apocryphal account of the american vessel telling a canadian one to get out of the way, boasting about their superior forces, only for the canadian guy to respond hes in a light house. attempting to take poners
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>>30670224
>>>30660053
>>giving the poners nerv gas
>this works on humans because they cant control the weather. using nerve gas on poners is like using grenades on the enemy that can be exploded more than once
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>>30670221
You don't nuke the land you intend to take, retard. You lay waste to the areas beyond it making logistics and reinforcements from surrounding territories impossible for the enemy. You're treating creatures with tech fifty years or more behind us who haven't had any semblance of experience with warfare for roughly a thousand years as our equals. Not even accounting for the no doubt massive population disparity, us chugging towards eight billion while I'd be surprised if they were even five hundred million strong.

The only, ONLY, limiting factor for us would be how much infantry and equipment we could shove through any given portals at a time. As soon as a beachhead is established and the portal(s) secured, that would be game over if it was a total war scenario.
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>>30670317
Humans are selfish and stupid animals who prefer to destroy what they can not have, they may think to lose Equestria is a reasonable price to pay for owning whole new world, but because of the dimensional proximity between both worlds is no guarantee that they do in Equestria does not end up affecting the Earth as well.

If they were to devastate the kingdom with what you imagine may awaken a greater evil ravaging your own planet
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>>30670221
>nuking the land they hope to take willy nilly isn't in their best interest, and theyre not going to have any major understanding of poner defenses until the poners get a chance to employ them, unless you are suggesting we blanket the portal's exterior with nukes and glass the place, there really is no chance of success, casset bombs are irrelevant, you have to know to attack a cloud to shoot bombs at it.
Of course you don't /want/ to nuke everything, but when your opponent is a walking nuclear fusion furnace it may become necessary. Even failing that, widescale deployment of Fuel-Air Explosives or even just conventional munitions in sufficient scale would have functionally the same effect.

>you cant hold any place with UAV, never mind the fact that UAV would be trivial to destroy
You can't hold a place... but you sure can decapitate their leadership and then sweep in while they're trying to figure out who's in charge now. Also, I'm really glad ponies have an effective way to locate, track, and engage a target ~35 miles away without knowing what they're looking for.

>they have flying aircraft and trains
Neither of those are relevant to their warfare, though. When it comes to fighting, they're still marching around with spears, bows, and the odd cannon.

>armored settlements and Mechanized infantry would be damn near worthless though. airfields, troop stations, etc would all be easy targets once hostile.
How the actual fuck are you getting to this? Do you not understand the hilarious reach that modern weapons have? Are you just kind of assuming we'd sit there twiddling our thumbs while they chuck storms at us?
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>>30670246
You seem to assume nerve gas is kind of just dumped in the air and allowed to drift over the enemy. This has not been true since World War I; nowadays it's delivered straight to the enemy within the warhead. By the time gas is on you, unless you have protective gear already in place you're fucked. This is why hunting and finding it beforehand is such a big deal these days.

The only thing we really have to fear is Discord, and that's because he's basically a roving I-win button.
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To Discord and the "Rainbow Power" of the mane six
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So

My late story, Famous in Infamous Lands. I do not remember where I was going with that story, and to make it worse, I left it on a massive cliffhanger that, again, I don't remember the conclusion to. This obviously puts me in a bit of a tough spot.

My question is, are there people at all still waiting for that story's continuation, or can I sideline it for now and move on to something fresh? I suppose I can figure something out for the story given more time, but I'd prefer to start work on a fresh tale now.
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>>30670824
I'm still waiting for continuation, yes.
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>>30670824
I like Dash and Buster, but what else were you thinking of?
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>>30670824
You haven't done a bad story yet.

Let's hear what you've got planned.
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>>30670649
>The only thing we really have to fear is Discord, and that's because he's basically a roving I-win button.
Which would just lead to mass 'throw bodies everywhere until victory is achieved' aka human waves. He can't be everywhere at once.
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>>30670839
>>30670861
>>30670895
>>30670985
>Contrary to popular belief, the government does indeed notice and care about the abuses of slavery (if only to ensure its continuation). Out of the public eye, teams have been formed to keep order among the most vicious slaveholders.

Something like that. Starring a few known characters, a few created ones. This would be a long story, perhaps even double length.
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>>30671149
Do the new story now, because it sounds like you're fishing for an excuse anyway. But give Buster and Dash (and Glimmer etc?) at least a cameo in it to keep their story alive too.
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>>30670824
I was really looking forward to reading more of Buster and RD. But I guess if you don't want to write it we can't force you.
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>>30670221
> isn't in their best interest
Remember what happened to Hiroshima and Nagasaki? They were rebuilt and populated the same year nukes fell. And modern nukes are even not so dirty and powerful. They are used for goddam mining.

> you have to know to attack a cloud
You know what intelligence has scouts for. Do you?

> UAV would be trivial to destroy
It is a little expendable aircraft, which ponies cannot even detecw without radars, and when they have a visual (even when it's not cloudy), it's already too late.
> flying aircraft and steam locomotive of candy colors
Hot air balloons? Ohmygosh, guys, we cannot consider them medieval, they are at least Renaissance, what could we possibly do against it? Our only chance is to shoot the fucking thing with single bullet and end their entire air force park

> armored settlements and Mechanized infantry would be damn near worthless
Against what, spears? Do you even pose? Do you even remember how many unicorns are actually trained to at least create a shield, not mentioning ability to handle something heavier than spoon and food plate?

> viruses and infections would have a low chance of interacting
Since the same food preferences it is at least a possibility to destroy orchards and fields. Remember a fucking colorado potato beetle, Europe has no birds to eat it and desperately trying to gas this motherfucker, and he constantly evolves against next poison. Losing half of crops is a luck when you catch it on your field. And here you tell me viruses would be futile, they had a smallpox paralyzed Ponyville in a day for fuck's sake. You look like a man who only lives by manual and fears to death to try and think for himself.
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>>30671764
>And modern nukes are even not so dirty and powerful. They are used for goddam mining.
And you lost me, that's complete horseshit. The mining part, that is.
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>>30671793
Do you even google?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Operation_Plowshare
https://ru.wikipedia.org/wiki/Пpoгpaммa_№_7

And here guys at Urta-Bulak stopping gas leak with the calculated blast
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cp1ZLVObADE

Clearly humanity moved to more efficient mining explosives since 80s, but you can already see how safe can nukes be. It is not necessarily hard nuclear waste size of small country, if it's from 80s and uses word "nuclear", stop using Chernobyl stereotype everywhere.
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>>30671300
>>30671733
I honestly do want to continue the story, I just don't know how without making it subpar quality. The most recent slew of events seem weak now that I don't know where they were ultimately leading, but I know they did have a solid conclusion. I'll take some more time to see if I can find an appropriate continuation, but if that effort fails to bear fruit, expect a new start within the week.

Perhaps I could write over some of the more recent bits. Might make things a bit easier.
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So what is the advantage of a unicorn slave if they are always demagicked?
It seems like you are wasting what makes them useful.
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>>30672705
As if earthpony would suck your cock any worse.
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>>30671764
>>30670644
This shit makes me want to read the story of a Royal Guard taken as a slave early on in the conflict by a PMC or some shit, and has to get dragged along with the frontline and watch as his/her nation and beloved comrades are obliterated with every marching step forwards.
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You get to live in slaveponyland but you become the slave pony
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>>30672705
you can still use the horn as a dildo
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>>30672946
Bin?
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>>30673071
No bin. I was saying it'd be nice to read that, if it were written.
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>>30672705
This is Slaveventure Anons big idea. Uncontrolled magic has risk, but you can't expect a human to work in handcuffs, and you can't expect a unicorn slave to generate any real profit with a horn ring.

>Where are you, Slaveventure?
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>>30673031
Can I work at Filly Brothel?
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>>30673325
yes
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>>30671894
>mining
>russians
Yeah okay
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>>30673711
> not mining with nukes
> not nuking everything preventively
> not wanting nukes to power your cities
Why do you people even exist?
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>Be fancy Anon
>Tailored suits and silk ascots
>Diamonds and gold
>Flawless posture, skin and hair
>Own several pony slaves but treat them right
>Built them a servants quarters tailored to their needs
>Make them all wear clothes even underwear because you can and it looks more professional.
>They work with your head butler Mr. Cheval and listen to him if you're not around.
>An older gentleman with a air of dignity around him
>He has been with the family for generations and when your father died asked to serve under you while your two other brothers split the maids with Innominate staying with your mother
>While you are very lenient you will discipline but you never touch them that's Mr. Cheval's duty
>Every once and awhile you take one of your ponies with you on a outing
>You like to know all your servants as more than servants but as their true selves.
>If they see you as a friend they wont half ass work around the manor.
>This time it's a earth pony mare named named Cinnamon Swirl
>You asked the other ponies but they don't like opera and she did
>She smells like cinnamon too
>Which is great, as you first thought ponies would all smell like horses.
>Anyway, with balcony seats to see La traviata you take your seats and watch the performance.
>Cinnamon starts to mumble and get fidgety as time goes on
>You ignore it until she gets out of her seat and goes to the railing puts her forelegs on them and lifts her tail
>very uncouth
>She turns to look at you with lidded eyes and says she wont make much noise
>You get out of your seat reach down and pull her dress over her rump and gently but firmly lead her back to her seat
>It's then that you notice her smell has changed
>She's in heat
>You have a few stallion ponies just for this sort of thing but it looks like Cinnamon here didn't want them to scratch her itch.
>You smile and say while you're flattered you can't do that while petting her mane.
>Her little shiver and moan says not to do that again
>No more touching
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>>30674269
>>No more touching
what a faggot
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>>30674269
>You tell her she's a thinking creature not some mindless beast that can't control its urges
>She licks her lips and nods in understanding
>The rest of the evening goes on without a hitch and Cinnamon really did like the show
>Afterwards you pick up something to eat for the both of you and head home
>When you do get home Cinnamon paws at the ground a bit before asking you not to tell anyone what happened
>You promise not to tell and she hugs you and nuzzles your face
>Kinda tickles
>She says her goodbyes and leaves to her quarters
>You watch her leave before doing the same
>You call Mr. Cheval over and ask him to tell you when the ponies have their heat
>He raises an eyebrow and ask if you're going to indulge in some less the reputable actions
>You laugh and say nothing like that you just wanna make sure you don't accidentally take another mare in heat with you.
>With that Mr. Cheval bows and carries out your order.
>back at the ponies servants quarters
>"So did he mate with you?"
>"Did
"No, I even wore lifted my tail and gave him a wink"
>"Nothing? Not even a finger rub?"
"Nothing, I think Mr. Anon could be gay"
>"What a shame"

Just a shitty green to change topics hopefully
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>>30674365
>"Did
"Wore lifted"
Pls ignore my mistakes
No bully
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>>30674365
And thats the story of why all the stallions in the house started trying to fuck Anon
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>>30674450
hijinks and shenanigans ensue
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>>30673329
>A pony who turned into a human owns a pony who used to BE a human

Is there ANY writefags out there willing to do something with this? There's a lack of Sunset stories as well
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>>30665082
Sorry it's taken me a bit to get back to this fic but just wanted to say another really nice update from you. I really liked Lavender having to confront the possibilities of what Pearl said, and Pearl realizing she may have spoken a bit out of too much anger when she said. The reconciliation between both of them is really sweet here, think the two of them are starting to understand each other a little more.

Also gives us a better look into Anon's psyche and how it switches off between the two mares of his present and his past, so still looking forward to where this is going next
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>>30674365
>"Nothing, I think Mr. Anon could be gay"
>could be
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>>30674659
I can already see how Anon would chew her neck in her sleep in the first week.
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Pastebin says AWF has no public pastes. What gives?
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>>30643084
>>30643287
>>30645653

> Interrupting the woman's continued speech-
> Closer to a rant, you briefly think.
> -you raise your voice to make yourself heard by both:
"There's something else you might want to consider looking at, if I could interject? An autopsy has already been performed by a medic here; you may want to examine that as well."
> "We will be conducting our own investigation, thank you very much-"
> This woman.
> Had you done something to piss her off already, or was she always like this?
> Judging by the expression of her partner, it seems like the latter.
"Undoubtedly you will be; however, perhaps you would at the very least like to look at it to guide your own examination of the body?"
> "The body isn't buried yet?"
"No. I - was going to soon enough.
> After
> "That would be very much appreciated, yes."
> Thank God for this guy - Weller, he said his name was?
"I'll instruct my medical staff to let you take a look at it. If necessary, I suppose I could pull the one who wrote off for you to speak to as well, though I don't think you'll get much else out of her."
> With any luck they wouldn't have to speak to Mellowheart directly, the report being plenty enough.
> ...with any more like, there'd be nothing in the report to arouse their suspicion.
"As for the rest - I'll make my chief of security and all the other guards who were present when she died available for interview, as well as the reports on the matter."
> "Appreciated. I realize you're probably not to happy to see us, but we're just like to verify all the details and then hopefully be out of your hair too."
> You know, if this guy is the one who is in the lead you might just be able to deal with this.
> Especially if Arlene keeps looking like she just swallowed a mouthful of raw sewage.
"I don't suppose you can tell me where exactly this report came from?"
> "Afraid not, I'm sorry."
"Even if the matter is resolved?"
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>>30675108

> "The reports line is absolutely detached from everything else, I'm afraid. We can't reveal anything about it, except what was reported."
"Hmm."
> Spotting your frown, he gives a sympathetic smile.
> "I know, I know. We're not the most welcome sight. Just let us work through this, and we'll be gone soon enough."
"Of course. Why don't I show you the right way to the medical building..."
> You hadn't ever taken a look at Chrysocolla's body.
> Now, you can't help but wonder if it would have been better to steel yourself in advance.
> The results of her method of suicide were none too pretty; the arcing electricity had scorched her face - burning back her lips and cheeks to expose her teeth in a rictus death-grin.
> Blackened streaks ran down her coat, in places split open as well to reveal the cooked flesh beneath.
> If there was any consolation for your obvious queasiness on viewing the body, it was that both of them could clearly see how uncomfortable you were with it.
> "What happened?"
> Even Jack - Mr. Weller? You don't know how to think of him - sounds surprised by the twisted corpse laying on the cold metal tray.
"She bit a power line. My security teams had cornered he; we had good information she was one of a group responsible for the beating of a filly. She decided death was a better option than punishment."
> "And what punishment would make a pony that desperate, I wonder?"
> Again you force yourself not to roll your eyes at Arlene's aggressive tone.
"Sale. The other three were all sold for their roles in that bit of violence - although I made sure one who cooperated went to a retraining facility rather than general sale."
> Jack nods again, seeming to understand where a pony with that sort of record would be going.
> On the other hand, Arlene simply seems to want to get out of there as soon as possible.
> "Well, I suppose I'll leave the rest of this up to you and start doing interviews of the other witnesses..."
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>>30675115

> "Yeah, go do that - I'll take a look at this. Mr. Anonymous, you said a report had already been done on this?"
"Yes. Let me go get a copy..."
> Barely has he begun to glance through it before Jack looks up in surprise, one eyebrow raised.
> "A pony did this work?"
"Mellowheart..."
> You crack a small grin.
"...isn't particularly fond of me. You can question the others to confirm that. But she is one of the best trained medical staff I have here, so if I wanted the truth really confirmed..."
> "Or she could be following your orders and excluding anything to incriminate you... but we'll have to determine that later. Can I question her?"
"If you have to. She might be a bit busy, though."
> "I understand. I'll start my own look through of the body-"
> As he speaks, a shoulder-bag is opened and a white smock taken from a plastic bag within it.
> "-and confirm what this report says?"
> Noting your expression, he shrugs apologetically.
> "Sorry. Procedure."
"Yes, I'll have this room turned over to you."
> "Thank you. I'll be as fast as I can."

> In all honesty, the security building isn't really somewhere you want to be so quickly again.
> Just the thought of guards, prisoners, and punishment was enough to draw back up-
> -Comet Tail's defiance turning to fear and then fugue as the implant was inserted, Autumn Frost's scream as the incandescent iron pressed to her hide, the iron's own heat and weight in your magical grip-
> -everything that you had been trying to push down and forget.
> But there was work to be done here - someone apparently wanted to talk to you - and even if the mere sight of the fortress-like building was enough to turn your stomach you could not simply abandon it.
> Even as you slip in through the main doors, however, your ears cock forward to focus in on the sound of raised voices.
> One male - Gene, his recognizable accent carrying through - but the other an unfamiliar woman's.
> It isn't hard to guess roughly to who it belongs.
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>>30675123

> Word of the investigators had been circling in the camp since they'd arrived that morning.
> Quickening into a trot, you pull open a door into the main office and are promptly assaulted by the discordant noise of two voices raised to their maximum against each other.
> "He is clearly not well! You have been 'interviewing' him for two hours now; at least let him have a break!"
> "You are interfering with an official inquery. It is my job to-"
> "To inquire, not to torment him!"
> "The report we received clearly indicated that pony was responsible for-"
> Yes, judging by her unusually formal outfit this woman had to be one of the investigators.
> Coughing softly, you raise your voice just enough to interject in the politest tone you can manage:
"Excuse me, but I was told that I was needed here. May I ask what the problem is?"
> She glances down briefly, then back up - only for her eyes to return again a moment later, staring in surprise as if she hadn't expected you to be... you.
> Gene, by contrast, barely spares you a glance and reserves his ire-filled gaze for the other human in the room.
> "The investigator has been /interviewing/ Thunderlane, and apparently fails to notice that the topic she seems so focused on is rather rough on him."
> Topic-
> Brushing past both of them you proceed on through to the next room.
> Shutting - and locking - the door behind you, your attention then turns fully to the stallion despondantly slumped over the table.
> He was the very essence of unhappiness, wings spread to rest on the table to either side and golden eyes barely visible beneath half-fallen lids.
> Even your entrance goes unnoticed until you approach him, brushing his withers with the your feather-tips.
> "Cadance?"
"Yes. Thunderlane..."
> Seating yourself next to him, you drop your head to rest on the table at the same level as his.
> A rather more awkward position, given that you are somewhat taller than he is.
> Still, it gets the point across.
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>>30675072

Oh, you're right. I made them unlisted, completely forgetting they wouldn't then show up on my profile. Sorry about that. Fixed now.

https://pastebin.com/u/AWF
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>>30675134

"What happened to Chrysocolla wasn't your fault, Thunderlane."
> "I know."
> He speaks without even moving as if to do so would cost him to much.
> "That doesn't mean much if I can't stop thinking about how she just reached up and - and bit down..."
"...that woman out there-"
> "Arlene Donovan."
"-is she pushing you?"
> Weakly, Thunderlane nods.
> "I've told the story five times now. I don't understand what she's looking for. I think she wants me say I killed Chrysocolla... keeps asking me questions with answers that lead to that."
"Just her? Not her partner?"
> "Yeah. He's... somewhere else. I don't know where."
> Somewhere else.
> You can guess what her reason is, though.
> Pinning a crime on Anonymous would be a proud feather for an investigator like her.
> Growling softly, you lift yourself from the table and turn back to face the door.
> The argument you'd left behind had not resumed - at least not at the same volume as before.
"...go back to duty, Thunderlane. Or take the rest of your shift off. I'll deal with this."
> Except that, when you trot back out, Arlene is nowhere to be found.
> Gene is still there, though, and nods in greeting.
> "I told her to shove off, she wasn't going back in there with him. She didn't like that, and went to go find her supervisor."
"That was good of you. I've told Thunderlane not to bother with her anymore - I'm going to find Anonymous."
> Barely have you exited the security building before you take to wing, carrying yourself up on several long beats to reach the manor much more quickly than any gallop could have carried you.
> With each beat of your wings, you feel a familiar fire building in your chest:
> The same anger, the same fury at the raw injustice of it and at your need - your obligation - to do something about it that you'd felt back when you discovered Cloudy Cotton being assaulted by a guard.
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>>30675141

> Touching down on its front step, you stride in with a furious presence that sends servants and ponies alike scattering before you.
> The charge continues as you march up the stairs towards Anonymous' office.
> Investigate - yes, they could investigate.
> But there was no need for them to torment a pony like that!
> They would have to go over your body before-
> "Dear me, you seem to be in quite the hurry. Is something wrong, Cadance?"
> That voice.
> That smug, self-satisfied, perfectly-controlled voice.
> And of course, the pony it originated from had firmly planted herself seated on her haunches in the doorway to Anonymous' study.
"Haute Glamour. I'm sorry, I'm afraid I don't have time right now - I need to speak to-"
> Nothing in your tone had suggested you were actually sorry, but the unicorn doesn't seem remotely bothered by it.
> "And I'm afraid that won't be possible right now. He is in a meeting with Randall and some others - and we aren't welcome to take part in it."
"You will get out of my way. I am going to speak with him."
> Yet, Haute does not move.
> If anything, her smile only grows.
> "Apparently someone else has finally taken notice of how dangerous the way this place is being run and decided to investigate. Such a shame; I do hope they don't find anything wrong with your decisions - or the degree of freedom Anonymous has given all of you here. I understand they're quite interested in uncovering Thunderlane's actions..."
> Instinctual responses boil up from somewhere deep inside of you, the most basic actions of a pony meeting a challenge:
> Ears pin back, head dropping to point straight at her, and teeth baring as your wings spread in a classic gesture of Pegasus aggression.
"You did this."
> Your growled tone and eyes narrowed to violet slits similarly have little affect on her.
> "I? Oh, no no no Cadance dear. I did nothing."
> That plea of innocence, however, is starkly contracted by her tone.
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>>30675145

> Rarely have you heard a pony sound so incredibly satisfied with herself; any doubt that she was merely taking advantage of the situation and not directly responsible is rapidly evaporating.
"Do not lie to me, Haute Glamour. You are responsible for this-"
> "If you do not believe me, you are welcome to ask the investigators. Though, they may not be able to tell you; I am told the tips line is completely incognito..."
> Snarling, you light your horn with a vicious snap-pop.
> To your complete and total surprise, Haute does the same - her horn coming alive with a pale red light, magic flaring to counter yours.
> To say you are taken totally by surprise is an understatement.
> Not one pony had dared raise their magic against you from the moment you'd arrived; even certain as you now were that she was a foe this was not something you'd been prepared for.
> But even if your unicorn magic is not the strongest, you are still an alicorn.
> Still head-and-shoulders above this traitor.
> Ruthlessly clamping down, your magic encircles Haute's and constricts to squeeze that light out.
"You will not destroy what I have worked so hard to build here!"
> Rather than respond, she spreads her hooves, grits her teeth, and fights back - flanks heaving with effort.
> A low hum permeates the air as magic writhes and crashes, until at last you find a weakness in her field and snuff it out entirely.
> Haute Glamour goes tumbling back against the wall with a yelp and thud before your magic finds her again and pins the mare in place.
"You should not have done that, Haute."
> "Doesn't - matter!"
> Winded, she still manages to push out a hacking laugh.
> "Stupid. So stupid. No - no friendship anymore. No P-Princesses... Just slaves - and masters."
> The anger you'd already carried within flares up anew:
"You will not be master here!"
> "Not - your choice!"
> Face splitting into a twisted smile, Haute opens one eye to meet yours.
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>>30675153

> "If you won't learn, I'm sure F-Flurry will be more-"
> With a furious roar you drag her from the wall, skidding across the floor in a tangle of legs and mane to halt at your hooves.
> There you pin Haute with a hoof driven into her ribs, dropping your head to snarl at her:
"Lay a hoof on my daughter, and I will tear you limb from rutting li-"
> "Cadance!"
> Your name - roared by Anonymous at the top of his lungs - shatters the moment.
> "What the FUCK are you doing?!"
> And you look up-
> -into the shocked faces in the door way of Anonymous' office.
> Your master, of course, and some of his staff - and of course Randall, guided by his cane to the edge of the crowd, Posey appearing a moment later at his side.
> Before you can respond, Haute Glamour croaks out two words:
> "Master - help..."
> Anonymous is on top of you in a moment, seizing a fistful of your mane and hauling you up off of her.
> Despite your earlier fury, for some reason you find yourself utterly unable to resist him and go tumbling head over hooves.
> Free of your weight, Haute scrambles upright and runs to cower at Randall's feet:
> "She's mad! Insane! I told her you didn't want to be disturbed, and she tried to kill me!"
> Suddenly you are aware of how mad you must look - wings spread, a crazed glint in your eye, appearing nearly ready to crush another pony beneath you.
"She - is responsible for this investigation. She sent in a report to draw them here! This entire mess is of her making - she is trying to destroy this place so she can take over!"
> As the words leave your lips, you are all to aware of how frantic, how insane they must sound.
"She threatened my daughter!"
> How unconvincing.
> In that moment, you understand.
> Haute had never meant to keep you from the room.
> Maybe never even meant the investigators to find anything.
> This entire thing had been a trap for you and you alone.
> To destroy their trust in you.
> To make you vulnerable.
> "Haute?"
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>>30675159

> Randall's voice is soft, yet full of danger.
> "What happened out there?"
> "I don't know!"
> It was like she had become an entirely different pony - angry, yes, but full of innocence, righteous anger, and even a little fear towards you.
> "She hates me, I think - I just told her you didn't want anyone coming in, but you heard her! She's insane!"
"You lying-"
> Anonymous' fist again grips your mane, forcing your head back down to the floor.
"I know it! She called the investigators, fed them her lies! She bragged about what she would do to my daughter when I am gone!"
> "I didn't do anything!"
> Haute's plaintive reply provokes Randall to tuck his can in the crook of an arm and drop his hand protectively to her neck.
> Slipping - everything is slipping away, second by second.
> There is no way this will be forgotten.
> The same crime you'd just condemned ponies to sale for, now you were made guilty of.
> Haute blinks, and in that moment you see the spark of victory in her eyes.
"No! I won't let you-"
> "She's lying!"
> Everyone freezes, no one having realized who it came from at first.
> After all, few of them had ever heard Posey speak - and no one, not even yourself, heard her yell.
> But yell she had, stepping forward with trembling legs but a clear, strong voice:
> "Haute Glamour is lying. She is trying to ruin Miss Cadance, because Miss Cadance has a-"
> Overriding her, Haute snaps angrily:
> "You will shut your mouth when your betters are talking; I will deal with you later!"
> "No, Haute."
> In contrast, Randall's voice had dropped dangerously low.
> "Posey... do you swear you are telling the truth?"
> Shaking so fiercely her mane and the guide-handle on her harness sway back and forth, Posey nods.
> "I swear, master... I heard her placing the call. You were out, but I don't think she knew I was there, or..."
> Or believed Posey would ever tell, you finish in your head.
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>>30675169

> Once more Haute had undergone a fresh transformation, eyes narrowing and lips drawing back in an angry expression.
> Stepping forward, she lights her horn again - clamping Posey's mouth shut with a band of magic.
> Her eyes bug out, but a moment later the shimmering muzzle is gone.
> Randall's hand had left Haute's neck, instead finding her horn and clamping down tight over it.
> "Posey... tell me everything."
> It takes the timid mare a moment to find herself again, but she manages.
> "Haute Glamour is - is wretched! She terrorizes all of us, beats us when we won't play along-"
> "Why didn't you tell me?"
> Despite his blindness, Randall's expression matches the pain in his voice.
> "I - I d-didn't know. She s-said you approved and I thought all m-masters were like this..."
> Posey's head droops, mane falling over her face to hide it.
> "I didn't know there was another w-way until I saw this place, and now Haute is trying to destroy it too."
> "You swear this is true...?"
> Again he asks, and again Posey nods.
> "I do. You can ask the others at home, I..."
> Searching for something more, a light suddenly comes on in her eyes.
> "Your phone! Haute used your phone to place the report, knew you wouldn't - wouldn't see it, so she just used your own phone! The number will still be there, right?"
> "...Master, Cadance has clearly been twisting Pos-aauuuh!"
> Also despite his blindness, Randall has impeccable aim with his cane.
> Throwing Haute to the floor and interrupting her protest, he had grabbed the stick and laid into her with frightening accuracy - blows raining on her flank, shoulder, and haunches with heavy, meaty thwacks.
> "I knew it! I knew something was wrong, but I trusted you!"
> Despite that catching the falling cane would surely be within her abilities, Haute does not.
> Instead she lays shrieking, hooves raised to cover her head.
> "No! Mercy, Master! Please!"
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>>30675174

> "Mercy?! I brought you into my home, let you run my house - I trusted you! And now I find out you've not just been terrorizing all my other ponies, but sabotaging my work too?!"
> "No! Please!
> On and on the beating goes, and somewhere along the line the fire in your chest begins to dim.
> No longer was Haute the confident mastermind, but now a tearful wreck huddled beneath the raining blows.
> You could stop this.
> Maybe should stop this.
> Monstrous as she was, Randall was clearly acting in anger.
> ...or maybe, a dark part of your heart whispers, you could do even worse.
> If Haute feared to be a slave without power, then you could use your magic to twist her heart and make her a slave to it instead.

So, what is our course of action here?
> Intercede with Randall to stop beating Haute, offering her a fresh chance.
> Do nothing; she is an irredeemable monster and deserves whatever he sends her way
> Use your magic to twist Haute's heart and make her humiliate herself
> Something else?
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>>30675179
Humiliate her.
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>>30675193
This, she's clearly only sorry she's been caught, if she hadn't she would have fucked this up for everyone else just to grab a bit of power.
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>>30675179
Make that bitch pay! She tried to fuck everything up and almost succeeded! No mercy!
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>>30675179
Get Randall to stop beating her senselessly but don't let him offer her a fresh chance. She should be sold off in the same manner as Autumn and Comet.
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>>30675179
>What is our course?
Mostly nothing.

Thanks to Posey, we are already winning here. We have much to loose and little to gain at this moment, so we are not taking unnecessary risk. If Randall does not stop soon we will ask mercy for Haute, but to intervene physically would be a big mistake. Using our magical talent as a weapon on an already beaten foe would be a much bigger mistake: madness! We're saving that for true emergencies or when it can make a real difference, not for petty vengeance on this petty pony.

>YAY POSEY! You are such a brave pony; sometimes the whole world can pivot on these spontaneous decisions.
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>>30675179
If we use our magic rather than let Randall beat her...

Oh god. Think about it; we get caught altering her mind with magic, then firstly, we'll show ourselves to be EXTREMELY dangerous. And two, what's to say that we haven't done this before, or done something like it to Haute herself? Too risky.

Let Randall break her.
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>>30675431
>>30675597
Probably best to let the old man handle it then.
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>>30675179
Stop Randall...

And suggest having her publicly flogged. Severely.
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>>30675179
Fuck me. I was not prepared for Cadance to lose it like that. Haute hit just the right combination of buttons with the princess, threatening both the livelihood of the camp and her own daughter in the most smug self-satisfied punchable tone possible, and nearly made Cadance lose everything through her own actions. I have to admit, I was sort of hoping to see Cadance out-play Haute intentionally herself, rather than through sheer luck of Posey being there and Sunburst having had enough time to get through, but in the end I guess it is still technically her victory, albeit one she couldn't plan for. Her sending Sunburst to convince Posey to come out of her shell paid off at just the right time and now the tables have turned.

Based Posey: I'm willing to bet more than a few people were already going to lose it when he told her to shut it and forcibly closed her mouth with her magic, but it's so great to see her finally manage to stand up for herself and others when she sees what's truly at stake at this place. Randall himself seems devastated: knowing that he allowed Posey to be beaten by Haute without suspecting a thing, and worse her imagining HE approved it, has clearly hit him where it hurts. HIs anger and pain is understandable. And now you have Haute who's overplayed her hand without realizing where Cadance was keeping in hers, and a clear mistake she left wide open to be investigated.

>So, what is our course of action here?
As much as Haute deserves every single stroke she's getting, for all of her selfish goals and heartless actions? I think we should stop it. Not with magic, but ask Randall clearly to stop what he's doing. What punishments Haute has to face, a beating out of anger isn't justice. We'd be hypocrites to let this continue after every lecture we've given Anon, Frost, and Comet. Maybe the smallest act of mercy is what Haute needs to see to learn friendship isn't quite as dead or powerless as she thinks.
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>>30675179
Can I get option A without the offering a fresh chance?

Beating here is kinda against our MO, but threatening Flurry is too far out of line to be forgiven.
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>>30675815
>>30675179
Also on a side note
>Anonymous' fist again grips your mane, forcing your head back down to the floor.
>As you're trying to speak out your side of the story
I understand initially jumping on Cadance from how it looked, his pony on top of his investor's, but for some reason his insistence to keep you laid low in front of her struck me as a sign his trust in Cadance had wavered significantly in a single moment. Which is unfortunate
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>>30675364
>>30675832
Yes, you can intervene to stop him now without offering another chance.

Question is, then, what are you intervening for? To just delay her punishment until he isn't so angry?
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>>30675179
>Humiliate her.
She was willing to use a hostage, a child, and use the suicide of another being in her favor, she deserves no mercy.
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Maybe point out that we were given a second chance and maybe she could shape up as well, just not with nearly the autonomy we have.
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>>30665082
Can you post a pastebin? Wanne read it all at once, without jumping threads.
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Weld pone would make a good mother
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>>30676645
https://pastebin.com/NFvpWPVm
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>>30675153
>> "Stupid. So stupid. No - no friendship anymore. No P-Princesses... Just slaves - and masters."

Hautte is a pony with a broken dreams, true?
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>>30676654
Thanks, man.
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>>30675169
>After all, few of them had ever heard Posey speak - and no one, not even yourself, heard her yell.

Yeah Posey Yeah!!!!!

Finally!

Wait long time for this moment
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Glim Glam has grown fat and lazy since you got her. How do you get her back in shape?
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>>30674886
Shimmy always makes sure to gag her slaves before bed
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>>30675179
>>30675179
She's his pony. She fucked up his property and took advanage of his disability. Its his problem to deal with. No matter how horrible this world has twisted her she still furned into a mare that would threaten a filly of royal birth. Let Randall have his due and give her a chance if she's sorry afterwards.
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>>30676740
intense booping
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Randall beating Haute is justice, but it's gone too far. There are investigators here, and if he goes too hard it could get them all in trouble anyway. Ask if he could stop.

But we aren't giving her a second chance. No mind magic, though, just let her have to accept her new status as regular slave in her current, haughty state of mind. That will be true, just punishment.
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>>30675815
>>30676877
These, not to mention, if you do something nice for an enemy where they're in no position of power they'll remember it. And they may be willing to back you when there's nothing else.

Have Anon talk to Randall about taking her magic until they can think of something better, but stop the senseless beating.
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>>30675179


>>30675193
>>30675352
>>30675364
>>30675695
>>30675994

In this I agree with all of you, she deserves to receive your punishment.

But as much as i wants to see the witch burn, let us not forget that she is still a pony, a broken, upset and sad pony marked by slavery, everything that may have been believed in the past not saved from human evil, nor Princesses, nor the magic of friendship nor harmony, at some point in her past something was lost in her and decided not to be the victim of anyone else, so lied, deceived, betrayed and surrendered to reach a position where none could hurt her, where she could never suffer again.

So she wanted to destroy Candance, because she represented everything that had left her, because she had managed to maintain her status without having to corrupt herself in the process, because she was a threat, the feasible proof that it was possible not to be left defeat the human world and become like him.
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>>30677065
Not sure I like your logic here. Yes she's a twisted pony but she tried to play a game she couldn't have gotten away with forever. Play stupid games, win stupid prizes, as they say on Earth.
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>>30677087
Well, actually I'm not using my own logic here but the logic Candance should think.

pour out my idea of what Candance should be done later
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>>30677087
I know, but even Cadance should know that wasn't a pony's game.
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>rain piterpatted on the side of your bedroom window
>through your heavily veiled conciousness some of the white noise from the window slowly embedded itself in your dream as you slipped back to sleep
>something had shifted in bed you figured but none of that seemed to make any sense as your brain sailed the ether
>after some time you watched as if in third person, your own little world back at highlands
>cold snap had lounged herself in a particularly lewd sprawl as she relaxed on your bed
>despite the sound of rain on glass, the bright sun projecting through the blinds in the window suggested otherwise
>you idle by the bed, slowly twirling a length of her tail as you admire your sweet pony lover
>her perky teats and glistening marehood felt wonderful despite you never observing yourself touching them
>the haze of your dream shrouded these things but all the excitement of seeing her made your heart flutter and made it all too real
>all the memories from the back of your head tingled as they seemed to amalgamate with her voice before your eyes
>"mmp~ don't take so long dork"
>she leaned up and nuzzled herself in the crook of your neck, no doubt enjoying her masters scent
>just as you curled a hand beneath her haunches a figment of reality spiked through like bullet
>a wrench?
>it sounded all too real to be the dream
>your mind searched for it but to no avail
>you were still bothered by it as snap subtly snuck her mouth against yours
>even in your head her lips were divine
>she tilted her muzzle a bit as you enjoyed a deep kiss, her tongue eager to find residence within your mouth
>the energy in the air was electric
>in fact as the feeling of her warmth slipped away you could even hear it
>hear it...


>
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>>30677564
>as you ascended your way to concsiousness your emotions lingered on that kiss
>vacation had put you away from the office for the last week.. from your little mare snap
>your eyes felt acidic and heavy
>the dim light from the hallway was magnified by jumping flashes of light that twisted and pulled wonderfull streaks of phosphorus across the walls
"F-fuck"
>you groaned and rubbed your bed head
>your somewhat oily hair felt good between your hands for whatever reason so you continue to rub as you sit up and leave the bedroom
>as you walk down the hall, using your hand to steady yourself, the sounds of arcing become more clear
>just as you're about to drag yourself into the garage you scrape a bit of your common sense through your head and quickly snag a visor from the wall
>donning your visor you quietly lean against the door and watch your pony at work
>you figured it must have been an odd sight seeing a man wearing nothing but his underwear and a welding mask since it made your other little pony jump like she saw a ghost or something
>it took you a moment to remember that you banned her from using her new equipment until morning
>catching her breaking her promise startled her and for a brief second all you do is stare at each other in scilence
"You're not in trouble, just make sure you close the door if you plan on staying up ok? The light..."
>you took your visor off
>you gesture an abstract spiraling motion as if it made any sense of the issue
"It's... bright ok? Just.."
>fuck
>you sighed, words clearly failing you
"fuck.."
>she seemed to smile as she set her visor down
>you walked in and sat down with her on the cold concrete floor, the chill almost uncomfortable
>"I'm making a gift-"
"A gift for who?"
>"-for you"
>her giggles were adorable
>"I was going to surprise you with it in the morning when you woke up but.."
"Not much of a surprise now is it?"
>scratching her back she promptly scoots closer to you
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>>30677658
"Wait no let me guess.. it's a-"
>a smile creeps up on both of you as you try to guess
>trying is the key word
>your head wasn't very clear yet as you tried to grab the object to aid in your guessing, promptly burning your hand like the neanderthal you are
"Fuck!"
>as you clutch your hand she nuzzles in and hugs you
>she says a few things in horse spanish before making herself a bit more audible
>"maybe it'll still be a surprise after all"
>wincing, you lean into her
"I guess I'll have to wait till morning huh?"
>"I guess"
>you promptly head back to the bedroom, nursing your wounded hand like a limp fish as you shut the door
>before you close it all the way you lean back in and tell her goodnight
>she reciprocates before dawning her visor once more
>with luck you hope to visit cold snap with your memory once you're back within the comfort of your bed
>just a few more days and you'll be back to rutting that sweet little mare into mush on the regular in real life
>you hope she's doing alright without you
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>>30677717
me likey
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>>30677753
>me likey
Fuck off, newfag.
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>>30677717
> horse spanish
*muffled hysterical laugh in the distance*
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>>30674269
>Innominate
Ooooooh boy. Is this thread your next target?
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We need Sweet Pigs Squad to the rescue
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>Escape, that was your goal.
>You wanted to be free, to no longer be a slave.
>foolishly the human oppressors had used rope to hold your wings in.
>plain simple rope, not even a belt and buckle.
>it had been easy to chew through it, no different than preening.
>now you were winging through their building, trying to findan exit
"There he is, net him!"
>and avoid being captured again, but that was easy when they kept shouting
> you flipped over the net, briefly running along the cieling as you did so
>this would be fun almost if it weren't so terrifying.
>and all the doors everywhere, what was it with humans and doors in hallways
>you had to land and push them open, they resisted too much to just shove through
"Gotcha"
>something fell on your neck and you flicked a wing at the human with the stick, you had to keep moving
>you took hard flight again, darting forward when you felt a tightness on your throat
>something cracked and you saw your hinds flip in front of you.
>you hit the ground but didn't feel it, in fact you felt nothing below the thing onyour neck
"I got her, I got her!"
>the stick was in the human's hands pushing you over the floor like a cheap broom
>you were terrified, the human had broken your neck.
>but
>this might be how you go free, death.
>death doesn't come for you, your body is broken but makes you live.
>now you are stuck in a hospital bed, tubes in your muzzle
>you had heard from the doctors you were an experiment now, something to be used for seeing about a machine
>it didn't matter, you had failed to be free, you were now denied even the hope of flight.
>a human in a green coat, like your own came in, a syringe at the ready
>you couldn't plead for death, the tube in your muzzle quieted you
>you couldn't pull away in fear like a good slave, your neck was broken
>you could only plead with your eyes, but the human never looked
>the syringe went into your neck, and everything faded

You are Lightning Dust and this is your story.
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>>30678893
Go on...

Or was that syringe euthanasia poison after all? Paralyzed pony does not give the story much to work with, but it's a well written beginning. Perhaps "seeing about a machine" leads to this. Being Steel Steeds origin story? "Half robot, half alien, all private property".
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I'M ALIVE BITCHES https://pastebin.com/wgaVqQ0u

“Hello, where the fuck are you, Vasya? You and Trixie haven’t contacted me for two days.”
>”Sorry, man, running around, you know. Right now I’m kinda busy too, being hostage and all that shit.”
>Judging by his shaky voice, they interrogated him pretty intensely.
>The fuck?
>”Look, the deal with main shareholder kinda went to…”
>His voice got smaller, and another one appeared.
>”As you can hear, your friends are alive.”
“Are you pranking me or what?”
>”Attitude of this fuck unnerves me too. Looks like he already doesn’t care about his fate. Anyway-”
“Where is Trixie?”
>”She is in safety. You don’t need to worry about her. You two tried to mess with wrong people, so we need to discuss a lot.”
>I definitely heard this voice somewhere. But who is this?
>”I’ll send you address. If you don’t appear there in next hour – your friend will disappear.”
“What do you think of yourself? Who do you think I am?”
>”Well, in this fuck’s phone book you are named “Faggot”, so at least I know most important stuff about you.”
>I definitely heard this voice. Is this…
“Marinovsky, is that you?”
>The other end went silent.
>“Wait, I now recognize your voice too. Stich?”
“Yeah, that is me. Hasn’t Vasya recognized you? Hasn’t he said anything?”
>”Well, no, this partisan was tight lipped.”
“Look, I thought I warned you that I will be doing some stuff on legal market.”
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>>30679244
>”I haven’t thought you will pick oil industry! Jeez, well, at least we first time heard each other on the phone.”
“Yeah, but I still would like to meet right now.”
>”You’re right. Look, just come to the hotel where he lives, my guys will show you the way to our room.”
“And about Trixie?”
>”Shit, man, let’s discuss it person, okay. No need to take your guys, firstly, it wouldn’t help you even if I wanted to sign last deal with you, and second, I respect my protectorates.”
“No need to tell me that, man.”
>”It is just you always act rash in fucked up situation, so just cool off. We will solve this fuck up, okay?”
“Okay, I’m hanging then. Will be in hour or so.”
>I will never got tired with Vasya. How the fuck he messed with Marinovsky? Hasn’t he thought anything?
>”So, boss, what do you think?”
>Owner of car-repairing service still stood before me.
“It is not your problems.”
>”No, I mean gold. As I said, I will have revisal in next week, so…”
“Oh, fuck, couldn’t it wait until that week?”
>”Look, boss, I know about our agreement, but this is not like I made it all up, so…”
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>>30679250
“I’ll get it out in a week, okay? I need to find secure place and secure passage to it firstly.”
>”Okay, then I will place it in new found room, since who knows, maybe I’ll be not here when you come for it.”
“Some troubles?”
>”No, I’ll just be absent for three days. My brother died, so all relatives will be gathering.”
“My sympathies. So don’t worry, gold will be out, I respect my prote… Oh, fuck it, just do your job. Bye.”
>Near the car Roller waited for me.
>”Some troubles?”
“Fucking yes, some problems my ass. I’ll be off for unknown time period, so just finish the deals and don’t do anything else until I return.”
>”How long you will be out, Sticher?”
“Who knows, Roller… This fucking Marinovsky, why he never warns me about his business on MY territory?”
>”Because you are his bitch?”
“Watch your mouth, shithead. After this gold deal you need to work a lot for returning your position.”
>”Sorry, boss, but really – he is your “krisha”. He doesn’t owe you anything.”
“Well, he owes a lot to a lawyer who still has all documents from the cases when he protected him in court.”
>”So it isn’t just a rumor?”
“Just shut up and leave. Do your fucking job!”
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>>30679254
>As I wake up, pink walls surround me.
>Women in underwear bettering themselves nearby mirrors, making hair and lipstick.
>As I stood up, some of them give me strange glance, and one of them runs out of the door.
“Where am I?”
>My head hurts nearby right eye, as some of the women run towards me and help me stand.
>“Are you okay, sweetie?”
“I… don’t know.”
>”Don’t worry, owner is of your kind, she will look out for you. No need to worry for a thing starting today.”
“Of my kind?”
>”She is unicorn, just like you.”
>The fuck?
>As soon as I think about it, door opens, and some unicorn with guards enters the room.
>It is Rarity.
>”Help her! Girls, leave her, you have job to prepare for!”
>One of the girls in underwear, the one who was leaving the room, approached Rarity.
>”And what about Hectahexs?”
>Now finally I noticed, that one of her limbs is metallic one. Rarity gasped and answered.
>”Look, I’ll give them when you got on stage. I don’t need you “glitching” right now.”
>One of the guards took me on hands and went back to the Rarity.
>As we left the room, gray light surrounded us. Bass sounds echoed and grew louder as we moved.
>”Hello, Trixie. Sorry for the head, we already punished fuck that knocked you out. Don’t need to worry, we already treated you. It will be okay in no time.”
>It all is really strange. Am I in dream again?
>Now, thinking about it, Rarity still has a device on her horn.
”Nice to see you… Can you let me go myself?”
>As Rarity gestured, guard landed me carefully.
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>>30679262

>”Are you sure, darling?”
“Yeah, I just… need to adjust.”
>”I mean, you can still have concussion. Trixie, whatever disagreements we had before, now I really care about you.”
“Thanks, a mare who doesn’t know what stage show is.”
>Okay, it looks like I can walk. And what strange, I don’t have any dizziness, just weakness.
>Rarity glanced at me frowning, then gasped and looked other way.
“It feels not like concussion, but painkillers aftereffect.”
>”Oh, yeah, you have been treated on head, you were hit pretty hard, no skull breaks, but flesh were… And your leg! What these brutes have done to it?”
“Oh, it was before, my owners did it.”
>”Ehh, what a filthy creatures!”
“No, I kinda agreed on it.”
>Eyebrows of Rarity widened.
“It is long story. It was treated already. So, how you ended up here? You weren’t serving in military, as I remember?”
>”It is long story too, darling. Let’s just say in human world, legally, I don’t even exist.”
“Oh, you can say it all. Last days I was learning how to fuck with laws 24/7.”
>”Well, it would be easier…”
>Sounds were becoming clearer, and now not only bass echoed, but also some young girl’s moans, speaking unknown language and coming… electric?
>Something similar to tricks Vinyl did on her parties, but overly abused.
>”Trixie, can you handle loud sounds?”
”Not right now. And what these sounds are?”
>”Modern human music. I don’t even know where to start with it, really. Anyway, let’s then come into my room.”
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>>30679269
--Oh, I love my ugly boy, so rough---
>”Yes, darling?”
>Looks strange to operate such small objects with a hoof. Usually it is earthponies who are so able with hooves…
>Well, she is tailor… I don’t know.
>”Yes, she is alright. What? Are you sure?”
>She moved away phone and looked at me.
>”Your owner is Sticher, right?”
“Yes. You found him?”
>She moved phone to ear back.
>”Yes. Look, I don’t know anything, pancake. Okay, I will be waiting you. Kisses.”
>As she hanged the call, she widened her eyebrows and gasped.
“Who was that?”
>”My lo… owner. Anyway, what were you asking.”
>Oh, her story.
“So, you were one of the slave-owners?”
>She gasped dramatically, as always.
>“Oh, you too. Look, it is not slavery. I volunteered to take some for reformation, after all, I’m Element of Harmony. I gave them good conditions, honest work in my boutique, and mentorship on reformation. And I haven’t bought them, I just gave some money as guarantee of return.”
”You do understand that humans have it practically the same with us?”
>”Huh, no… it is just… they own us!.. Oh, goodness…”
“Anyway, Equestria is far away, what happened next?”
>”But I treated them well! Why they would do it?”
“It looks like your owner treats you well too, and just because that it is totally okay?”
>”Look, me and panca- my owner… it is complicated.”
>Oh, it doesn’t look that complicated to me.
“Wait, so you like human cock or what?”
>If she attacks me, well, saying it totally worth it.
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>>30679277
>”And what is wrong with that, you, fake magician? At least I’m honest with my feelings, while you tried to hit on Starlight when Twilight got you turn-around!”
>Trixie. Hold yourself. She didn’t mean tha…
“Oh, so your assumptions on my feelings towards that bitch and my friend totally excuse your degeneracy?”
>”Look, you are here because I let you.”
“And what will you do to me? I don’t think your owner will be nice when his deals with Sticher will be broken because you did anything to me! And more than that…”
>I levitated sofa on which she sat.
“Right now, right there, I can do anything to you, and you can do nothing to stop me.”
>She gulped.
“Also, who is your owner?”
>”M-m-marinovsky…”
>Oh shit. Is this man Anon told me about? Is it…
>Shitshitshit.
>Okay, let’s place her back.
>”L-l-looks like Starlight training improved you.”
“And actual fight, you know. While you were fucking with war prisoners, I fucking defended my country.”
>Easy now, Trixie. Even if she wasn’t really your friend, speaking softly, it is long ago. Relax.
>”Can you be little less rude, please? I haven’t talked to you in such manner.”
>Well, she is right. Action on the field and working with criminals haven’t improved my lexicon.
“I’m sorry. So, you were brought here by some human prisoners?”
>”Yes, in Manehatten portal it is not only military of humans that operate nearby. Some pretty tough organization operates there too. They bought me and artifacts my humans were hiding from me.”
“Manehatten… I heard it connects to Vladivostok. How you ended up in Moscow?”
>”Well, I was bought from them by powerful figure. And now, I rule this club and some of his other stuff.”
”Like what?”
>”Well, he cares about ponies, really. So whenever he finds abused one, he finds a way to get it, and then I look after them. You were brought there in that manner, after all.”
“But I wasn’t abused.”
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>>30679282

>”Well, we couldn’t verify it, since you were knocked out, all we knew is your leg.”
“And that is why you damaged flesh on my head or something, right?”
>”Look, don’t you remember what happened? I was only told about it, but still you tried to mess with my pancake’s business. His operatives acted rashly, you tried to resist and…”
“Wait, what? Last thing I remember – we went to deal with main shareholder of OilProm, then it is kinda shady.”
>”Well, it looks like you tried to mess with his protectorate.”
>Oh.
>Well, of course.
”So that is how this shareholder betrayed Minister of Economic Growth! Shit, since he was one of the attainder from his stock manipulations, the only way to still hold acquired stocks, don’t obey Minister and survive is…”
>”Trixie, what are you talking about?”
“You don’t know anything about business of “your pancake”, right?”
>”I know, but I don’t get into details. And why you know so many details?”
“Well, because I’m the one who tried to make a deal.”
>Rarity doesn’t take me seriously, right?
“Don’t wanna be my own trumpeter, but I own 15% of OilProm.”
>”60%.”
>What?
>Rarity gasped, placed her hoof on forehead for some time and then started.
>”The deal was signed and verified, all documents are in this desk, and I should have been made you rewrite it on needed person, but situation changed, and right now our owners decide what will happen next.”
“Then get me to them! I own the company that owns the stocks!”
>”I’m sorry, but that is not possible right now. Let’s wait for them to come.”
>Thinking of which, she owns something in human world too.
“Also, what is that club?”
>”Do you want me show it to you?”
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>>30679283
>”Maybe you will untie me already?”
“Really, Marinovsky, I’m already here, untie him.”
>”Look, until I get clear picture of what the fuck is happening and what you two are doing, Vasiliy will be tied. So, can you explain why the fuck you threatened my protectorate to sign the deal?”
>Swollen Vasya’s face changed in amazement.
>”The fuck? You are Marinovsky? Shit, I thought you were working on Exile or some shit. Fuck, that explains a lot.”
>”Not to me! So start talking!”
>”Sticher, you sure?”
>As I nod, he starts ranting at full speed.
>”We haven’t threatened him, he almost agreed on the deal as he tried to bitch out, saying he would sell only 20%. Then Trixie, do you hear me, Trixie, I’m just her fucking consultant that got money for her from Exile and got lists of names for OilProm headhunters to trade for a good position in it…”
>”Fucking slower, please!”
>”Sorry. So, she told him that officials got interested in us and offered help for protecting some of their interests.”
“Marinovsky, when we acquire main stocks, we plan on intense work towards partnership with Equestria.”
>Ultimate ”Krisha” softened up, worries went out from his scarred face.
>”But he uses my services, why would he worry about…”
>”That the joke! She then reminded him that “krisha” is mainly protectorate racketeering, racket, you get? That when he has nothing to offer – his “krisha” will bury him alive. And since oil prices no shit will continue to fall, while he is not that good in this business, he could take the money and leave, and that our “krisha”…”
“She probably meant me.”
>”Agrees to ensure his safe passage out of this country.”
>Marinovsky really started to wonder.
>”So you knew he was my protectorate?”
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>>30679290
“Of course not, if I had – I would discuss it with you!”
>”Yeah, Trixie basically was bluffing. Last days show that she really is good with it.”
>After some small silence, Marinovsky continued.
>”So this fuck lied to me to get both money and stocks?”
“Well, you do services like that.”
>”Not for usual pay, let me say. Okay guys, I will let you do your stuff, since Sticher has already proven dozen times his loyalty, if you agree to help me out later too.”
“Shit, man, whatever you want.”
>”Then sorry for troubles. Wanna return him the favor? I will even organize it for you for free. Principles and shit, you know.”
”I would happily participate in that show, Vasya, what do you think?”
>”No, thank you. I’m just a man who wishes be untied.”
“Also, where is Trixie?”
>”In the club, with my pony.”
“You too have a pony?”
>”Yes, but I haven’t thought of using her for such action. I am more classic with that, if you know what I mean.”
>As he untied Vasya himself and stood up, all I could is wonder.
“Sorry if it is personal, but… It wasn’t just rumors that you are horsefucker, right?”
>”Look, if you have little blackmail on me that doesn’t already matter in New Russia, it doesn’t mean I cannot punch the shit out of you.”
“No, man. I don’t judge you for that, I just…”
>”Well yeah, it is true, if that somehow helps you. Are we clear?”
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>>30679299
“Look, all I care is Trixie…”
>”And I am not just “horsefucker”. Have you ever talked to ponies? They are… better than humans. Not so fucked up at least. All I care is my diamond, you know? So stop worrying about “Trixie” or whatever her name is. Can a man have at least some soft spot?”
“Easy, man, I said already, I don’t judge you.”
>As Vasya warmed up muscles after being tied, he asked.
>”Wait, by “Club” you mean the one below there, with entrance on second floor bathroom?”
>”Yes, that one.”
>”So, let me straight. I knew you had in protectorates all Russian big OCGs, but you also had in it one of the main oil companies and fucking Hectahexs?”
“Well, you said OCGs already, so what makes you wonder that he owns trade of this new drug?”
>”Yeah, but… shit. How the fuck officials let you do that?”
“Let’s just say, we have ideological commons with some higher-ups. Plus, FBR always worked with me, not against.”
>Vasya started massaging his face.
>”Fucking Russia. Anarcho-feudalism at its fucking best.”
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>>30679305
“So, how come such cultured pony to run such vile place? I thought it is profile of Pinkie.”
>Rarity and I were sitting on VIP places, from which all shit was seen. Music hit ears loudly, so we are basically shouting to each other.
>”Well, what to ask from pony who has no connections with nobility and Manehatten higher-ups. You see, in animosity sits intrinsic, fundamental beauty which commoners like you will not understand.”
”And these Hectahexs…”
>”They are made with magic. It is basically enchanted amphetamine with painkillers added to not suffer pain shock.”
“Ampheta… What?”
>”One of the human drugs. Stimulant.”
“Wait, how humans enchant them?”
>”That the joke, darling. The group that got me – they sold some artifacts to my pancake, and one of ponies he acquired came up with that use.”
“Who?”
>”Me. I offered him such use of it.”
“It is barbaric use of magic!”
>”You aren’t the one to tell that!”
“There is no Twilight around, stop licking her pussy!”
>”Mind the language!”
>Music consisted of moans of little girls, basses and strange stuff, some of which I heard on Vinyl parties, ormented in chaotic pile of sounds.
“What is that?”
>”It is called “breakcore”. Lolicore specifically, top trend right now in higher society of humans.”
“You call these degradants “higher society”?”
>”As I said, you don’t get it.”
“Also, why the fuck such chaotic music became trend?”
>”Because thanks to Hectahexs, now it is possible to dance under that music.”
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>>30679319

>Women I woke up around were dancing on little podiums around the main hall. Well, dancing… I don’t know if this world fit. They basically changed erotic stances every moment without even moving. It looked just as video of striptease with token out 23 out of every 30 frames. Their limbs were just like teleporting from one place to another, like detached from the other part of body. The chaos of main dancing pool… is indescribable.
>”They call this dance “glitching” out there.”
“So it is trend only for Hectahex users?”
>”Yes, for now, it is only in Russia, but there are already a lot of rumors about clubs like this in music society worldwide. We are basically legend no one sure even exists. Also, of course, such music exists not only in clubs and listened by some people, mainly “gamers”, I assume.”
“Gamers?”
>”Don’t you know anything about human society?”
“At least more than you. And what I know about them useful stuff, like history and basics of their market.”
>”You totally don’t see big picture, darling. Their culture… It went far longer way than ours. Even if they are brutes like Yakistanians, we have a lot to learn from them.”
“You call that culture?”
>”Yes, it is part of their trends, you know! Their culture is wide, there is far more, what you see is just dark bottoms of it, which still has a lot to offer as an idea and personal experience. Until you learn what “metamodernism” is, don’t even try to understand beauty of it, but of course such commoner like you doesn’t even know what “postmodernism” is.”
“And that is why you fuck with worst criminal of Russia?”
>”Mind the language, Trixie!”
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>>30679325
“Look, fuck you and your clubs. You already have two of them on my territory, and I let you open one in Donetsk only for the sake of supporting Reizoko Cj. Your monopoly on this drug is nice and all, but this will damage business of my protectorates. Go to Petersburg and Kaliningrad with that shit.”
>”Already, Sticher. And you are mine protectorate, so stop bitching.”
“Look, our agreement serve interests of both sides, I don’t want it to change, and I assume you don’t want it too.”
>Vasya interfered in our dialog.
>”Look, since we gonna have business with Equestria, maybe you will make Vladivostok gang stop going full “Roadside Picnic” and gain artifacts only from closed official research facilities, plus share some with us, and for that you will get permissi… I mean agreement to help you with making three more clubs you want?”
>Marinovsky got silent for a little.
>”Sticher, what do you think?”
”Well, if it will go like that, I’m fine. I’m ready to return to them even more artifacts if I make some deals with Equestrians.”
>”And what if not?”
“Then they could have part of Caucasus market.”
>”Well, I will talk about that. Consider it done.”
>In meantime, former shareholder stopped digging his grave.
“Are you sure they not gonna search for him?”


>As he fallen on the ground, I gave back gun to one of the Marinovsky’s employees and taken off the glove.
>”Boys, get this clean!”
>After they started following the order, Marinovsky looked at us.
>”Anyway, since I wanted to excuse you for your troubles, both of you, what about me giving you entertainment for this evening, since we go to my club anyway for Trixie?”
“Look, no problems…”
>”Oh yes, after all these days I definitely need to get wasted, besides, an- Stich, we need to celebrate success of this stage our plan anyway.”
>Last time we were in that club it haven’t ended good, but…
“Fine, whatever. I have a lot to forget too.”
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>>30679330
“Where are you going?”
>”My sweetie will be here in half an hour, so need to get dressed and…”
“Wouldn’t it better in your case to stay naked for you?”
>”Oh fuck you, Trixie.”
“My-my, the language!”
>”Ugh. Boys!”
>As she shouted that, three bodies moved to her.
>”Let her walk around, just make sure she does nothing fancy.”
“Wait, Rarity!”
>”What now?”
“You said you give shelter to ponies. Where they are?”
>”You search for someone?”
“You know, some ponies miss their home at least. I would be happy to meet anyone else.”
>”They are not here. Entrance is closed for use for at least two hours, so…”
“And how “your pancake” gonna go in?”
>”He has special passage, with code only he knows.”
“Fuck. Okay, you go prepare your flank.”
>As she went to her room, I moved from the VIP places on the main floor. Music finally started to sound like music, but still shitty one. Also, windows on the top floor silenced some sound, so now it hit more
than before. How they even handle this noise? And I thought on VIP floors it was already too loud.
>As I approached the bar, people started checking me out. Both men and women.
>I hate these degenerates.
>At least I still had the suit on. Now I understand why humans wear clothes all the time. Without it these animals would just fuck without stopping.
>Thinking about it, how they knew about my leg? Were they undressing me?
>Ugh…
>Finally, bartender noticed me.
>“Oh my, what a guest! Your orders?”
”Shot, no, glass of vodka please.”
>”We serve only in shots.”
“Then give me whole bottle. I’m sorry, I don’t have cash right now, but I can…”
>”No worries, madam, ensurer of your safety will happily take it on himself. After all, you are here because of him.”
“Fuck you, I’m not Marinovsky’s bitch! Give me recipe to sign, idiot!”
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>>30679332
>He called some guard and talked something with him, after which he gave me shot, bottle, pen and recipe.
>”What happened to you?”
“What do you mean?”
>”Your head. It looks recent.”
“Also, I still haven’t looked, what is there?”
>”Bold area nearby ear. With scar.”
>After signing recipe, looks like I can start the bottle.
“Well, it is Marinovsky’s boys who done it.”
>”I am sorry, but are you sure you can talk about this person like that safely?”
>Well, here we go.
>Cheers!
>Ugh, still not enough. One more.
“Look, I haven’t said anything bad about Marinovsky himself. More than that, I don’t even know who he is. All I know is that he needs to take closer look to those he employs.”
>Cheers!
>Ugh, need some food. Where the fuck Anon is?
“So can you at least entertain main shareholder of OilProm, for fuck’s sake? What do you have there besides this jiggling pool of bodies?”
>You know, there is something in that music.
>“Well, if you have enough money, there is some… vile entertainment. But you need to be verified at first.”
>If he know about Marinovsky, maybe… Let’s take a luck.
“I’m Sticher’s pony, have you heard about him?”
>He again approached some guard, then returned.
>”Come after 10 minutes, if it is true, we will let you in.”
>Cheers!
>No, certainly…
“Have you anything to chew?”
>”We don’t serve food.”
>Fuck.
>No, there is really something in this music.
>Let me show these humans about their “glitching”. They can have “stimulants” and shit, but I have true magic!
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>>30679337
“What, pussy? Fucking shoot already!”
>This vile entertainment turned out to be underground fight club. Club inside the c… anyway.
>Fighters took hectahexs, and entertainment was to just watch them and make bets.
>Fuck those pussies, I’ll show them how their handmade magic sucks.
>”Trixie! What the fuck you are doing?”
>Near the door stood amazed Anon. Well, amazed is a soft word for emotion his face showed.
“I’m going to dodge the fucking bullet, so don’t get in my way, this shit needs concentration, you know.”
>He got on the stage and shoved off man with the gun.
>”Five minutes ago I learnt that you have beaten the shit out of some guy…”
“Hey, it was honest fight. With magic, of course, but he was “on” too. Referee can prove my words.”
>”And now you try to… How much you drank?”
“Half a bottle. Wanna continue with me?”
>Anon just grabbed me and went out. People in the room were not happy, since they already made bets on the result.
>As we moved on the stairs, music started echoing.
“Oh, so you wanna dance with me?”
>”Shut the fuck up! Are you thinking what are you doing?”
“Well…”
>”What if you couldn’t dodge? Haven’t you considered the risks? You are drunk already!”
>Oh, he worries about me.
>It is so nice of him.
>Music hit the ears, as I subconsciously started moving.
>There is something in it, after all.
>We moved in VIP places, to one of the tables. Nearby others rich looking persons were resting, while making out. On one of them danced woman I saw at pink room.
>”Trixie, this is Marinovsky. Your new ”krisha”.”
>This man with scar on a forehead leaned toward us.
>”Actually, no, I will just take more from you, Sticher. I like it keeping simple.”
“Nice to meet you, I’m the Great and Powerful Trixie.”
>”Heh, I’m well aware of that.”
“And where is Vasiliy?”
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>>30679337
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>>30679244
kys, senpai
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>>30679344
>”He is in the dancing pool.”
“Oh, shit, then let’s join him!”
>”No, I already heard about what you did, so no. Let’s just small talk.”
“Whatever the fuck you want. Now place me on sofa, my Savior!”
>Face of Anon looks really tired. After he placed me on sofa, he grabbed glass of some green liquid and rested himself.
>”Look, Trixie, I care about you and all, but we have agreements, so the last thing I want is you fucking all this shit up! I need to thank you for solving this deal and shit, but… Look who I needed to bring into just for your sake!”
>”It is fine, Sticher.”
“Ah, sorry. I don’t even remember how I done it, thanks to whoever left this scar.”
>”I already punished this fuck, you can-”
“Yeah, yeah, I heard it, can we leave already?”
>”Wait.”
>Marinovsky placed his big hand on the table.
>”I promised to return you for your troubles. This fuck rented penthouse in hotel above, with him taken out of picture maybe we go there with some… escort of your choice?”
>Anon nodded silently.
>”Trixie, wish to spend night with somepony?”
>Pony, huh?
“Give me top prostitute you have.”
>”Well, we have-”
“Rarity.”
>Marinovsky collected his hand in fist as he heard that.
“I’m joking. Just bring everypony. I… miss company of someone my kind. It was nice to see Rarity, but… we had long story of disagreements, let’s put it this way.”
>Marinovsky relaxed.
>”Understandable. I must assure you, they do it voluntarily, I don’t-”
“Yeah, Rarity already explained it. You just let them be, but do additional gifts for human cock lovers. Actually, you know what? Bring me one human woman too!”
>Anon turned to me.
>”You sound too drunk, Trixie. Are you sure?”
“Ah, no sense of humor in you two. Let’s first leave this place and then decide, okay?”
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>>30679348
That is it for now. I hope to return to usual pace of updating, fic is not dead, don't worry guys(>implying anyone even read this fic, yeah, but still). Pastebin is updated too https://pastebin.com/wgaVqQ0u
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Also, don't wanna steal (you)'s from this guy >>30678893 , so check him out, it is short one.
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>>30678893
>>30679187
>be mad scientist Anon
>pegasus paralyzed from neck down
>buy her on the cheap
>slice her up
>turn into cyborg
>streamlined retractable wings
>jet out of her ass
>goes mach 10 on a good day
>'Eat your heart out, Rainbow Dash!'
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>>30675179
>just stay there Candance, do nothing, just stay looking as the human punishes his slave.
>It's your fault after all is not it?
>She herself caused his own downfall with their dirty plans, their abuses and lies.
>Believing you could take your place, your ponies. . . . . . and your daughter.
>You know well that even in Equestria bad ponies must be punished.
>Nigthmare Moon, Discord, Tirek, Chrysalis. . . . . King Sombra. . . . . all received their due.
>You have defeated King Sombra, you did for the welfare of your Crystal ponies, and even one day regretted their sad fate.

'So Stupid Stupid No -.. No friendship anymore No P-Princesses Just slaves -.... And masters.'

>You're not a tyrant, you do not slavering your subjects, you do not you abused your power to oppress them in pain and fear, you do not put them chains and stole their freedom and their dreams.
>Just stay there Candance, and let the human impose punishment to bad pony.
>And remember:

YOU ARE NOT A MONSTER

>1
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>>30679577
ENOUGH!!!!
>Unexpectedly Candance frees himself from Anon's grip and throws himself on the body of Hautte Glamour, just in time to receive the blow intended for the belligerent mare, the cane blow is different from that of Anon's whip, the blow is more compact, And the most intense pain.
>A lament appeased between the corners of your teeth, a thread of blood gushes and runs from above the eyelid to the length of his snout.
>CANDANCE!!!! Anon screams in astonishment and concern, hurrying over to take her mare by the throat.
>But Candance does not move, clings to Hautte as a cat clings to a branch so as not to fall into the void, its wings expand protecting the body of the defeat unicorn whose trembling makes you remember a filly.
Please, Mr. Randall, no more!
>Pleads the Alicorn, stopping the second blow of the blind man, Posey places his head in the hands of his master seeking to appease him, the man in question seems to shudder to hear the mendicant voice of the old Princess, as pious as strong at the same time, a voice of authority y mercy.

>2
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>>30679606
You're not cyos
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>>30675179
>> Something else?

>>30679775
Obviously, but consider that my suggestion would be too long for just a post so the wrote in parts
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>>30679319
> >”It is called “breakcore”. Lolicore specifically, top trend right now in higher society of humans.”
So, it is 2015 then?
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>>30679606

Finally, Randall asks to Candance because after all what Hautte has caused with his lies and dirty tricks she can still defend who try to destroy it, to which Candance responds that no matter their actions Hautte Glamour is still a pony and as his Princess is his duty to protect them regardless of their own feelings, that at the moment in which she held the misfortune of one of their own will be the moment the legacy of Equestria there will be dead, and at the end it was not nor his former title or his magic that solved everything, but the value of Posey not yield to fear and believe what Anon and she try to do here, reminding to Hautte to at the end as more important for a leader is not power or authority, but the friendship and trust of their ponies.

She can plead mercy for Hautte, but knows that, in the end, Randall has the last word, could use his magic to influence his decision, but do that serious to act like Hautte, finally Randall apologizes for terrible misunderstanding that Anon has passed because of the research and promises to sort things out with the other investors, the two researchers to be realized that it was all a false alarm decide to withdraw and terminate it research in favour of Anon(for frustration of women and alleviation of the man), Candance thanked Posey by have confessed at the time more important and sincerely hopes that the things for her and the other ponies of Randall improve from now on, Randall eventually leads to Hautte Glamour, has placed a muzzle and an inhibitor for its horn which perhaps had in his possession or Anon is the provided which had for their ponies at the last moment Hautte turn and look to Candance, and in his eyes there is an expression:

HATE

>3
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>>30679353
Holy shit, how did I miss your green?
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>>30679957
Have not considered such HautteGlamour to plan this coup against Candance supported by one of the partners of Anon?

Someone who was interested in taking control of the operation and offered to the Mare position of authority of Candance in Exchange for his help. Perhaps the same Hautte approached the person and you suggested the idea, even be offered if same for its help.
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>>30679467
>>30679187
Alright, since peple do wantba cyborg slave, we'll see about makimg something.
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>>30679916
Yep, SPG stories are kinda alternative history anyway, so playing with time periods seemed natural for me.
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>>30679957
>>30679606
>>30679577
I really like this train of thought as an action Cadance would legitimately take but I just had a dark twist on it pop into my head

>Cadance throws herself on top of Haute to take the latest blow and defend her out of pity/desire to protect any pony no matter how rotten
>Haute is laying there looking up at Cadance on top of her
>Has lost everything: all her schemes have fallen through and she knows there is no future for her as anything more than the bottom of the totem pole once more
>Cadance has ruined everything, can only think of getting back at her as a final act of revenge for her destroying her control over Randall and his ponies
Cadance's eyes open wide while conversing with Randall as Haute sends a point-blank magical blast straight into her chest towards her heart while she's conveniently on top of Haute trying to protect her
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>>30680090
Great idea, sincerely do not believe that Hautte can rectify their faults because of the intense hatred that has with the world, she surely knows that your fate is the factory glue so that at least wants to leave with the satisfaction to take with you to the main cause of his downfall

Is not it will really happen, even though in the last time posey reacts and saves to Candance, but she herself receives the attack losing his life, then, to imagine dears readers could spend?:


-Candance uses his magic to control the mind of Hautte Glamour and submit it

-Anon runs to his office, take of his desk a taser and stun Hautte who collapses while loses the control of his sphincter

-Hautte Glamour desperate tries to escape and the guards are alerted to a dangerous Mare and authorized to use lethal force, finally Hautte is shot down a few meters from the entrance of the property
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>>30680181
>Posey pushing Cadance out of the way for a fatal attack
Jesus I couldn't handle the feels of Cadance knowing an innocent pony died sacrificing herself to keep her alive all be cause she tried to spare an enemy pain. Much less the rage that would ensue on Randall's part and the shitstorm that'd cause for the investors that would inevitably all be laid at Cadance's hooves. That might just about push her over the edge
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>>30681112
Is only one idea, based in the commentary of >>30680090, remember, this is only one little exercise of ideas.

But you rigth, the idea is terrific and cruel
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>>30675597
I agree. Let Randall continue the beating.
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Bed
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This one's gonna be fun to write. And long. Enjoy some exposition for this entirely new tale.

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NOTE: I recommend reading my first completed story, A Glimmer of Hope (https://pastebin.com/TnWCRgzK) before this one. They share the same universe and some key background information, but this story is chronologically later than those events. Famous in Infamous Lands also takes place before this, but that story is on indefinite hiatus until I figure out what the hell to do with it.
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>For three years, they tested me. Three years was I put through all manner of searches, experiments, and treatments to study every bit of my unique physiology. Three years did I spend, in various stages of discomfort, as I watched television screens that, on occasion, would show how much worse everyone else had it than me.
>It seemed reasonable, at first. Put the responsibility of employing, housing, feeding, and caring for this new population in the hands of a legal caretaker. In the first months, not a soul used the word “owner”. Better a temporary if unfair system be put into place than risk collapse into anarchy.
>Yet the more corporate-minded individuals and organizations soon came to realize the massive advantage they had over foreign competitors with a completely unpaid labor source. It didn’t take long for their lobbyists to fill political chambers and ideology with thoughts of a more permanent system, and one that would grant even fewer rights to those supposedly being “protected”.
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>>30683434
>Perhaps their hearts would not have turned if anyone understood the sheer scale of the situation. It wasn’t the five, ten, or even twenty million that most government statistics estimated. The true proportion of seventy million ponies was kept secret. I choose to believe this obfuscation a good thing; even still, many cling to hopes that their loved ones might have escaped the cataclysm that brought them to this world. In reality, few outside of Equestria’s core cities were untouched.
>For a time, I thought it was my fault. After all, it had been I and Starlight Glimmer who had pushed for more and more research into this dimension, close enough to see and feel with the correct devices. It was like looking through a stained glass window: there was a whole new world outside, but we couldn’t really get a glimpse until we found a way around. Unfortunately, we never saw the cracks in that window for what they were.
>We punched a hole in the thin wall between dimensions, a hole that soon blossomed into a great rift that pulled our kind into lands unknown. I walked with guilt for a long time, thinking it was my curiosity that killed the cat. But I know now that such a disaster would have been inevitable, and we may even have helped to contain it by being there to reseal the gap.
>There’s no going back, at least not in our lifetimes. The vulnerability that brought us here no longer exists, and the dimensions now once again drift apart. It will be millennia before they once again draw close. When we learned that, I gave up. I settled down and prepared to be tested, examined, and studied for the rest of my life. At least the food was good.
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>>30683439
>Then one day, it stopped. They claimed to have completed their testing cycle, to know all they wished to know about me. I’m not sure how they could have learned so much of alicorn physiology in such a short timespan, but they claimed their data to be solid and were satisfied with their conclusions.
>So, what then? Three years into this wretched world, I suddenly had no place in it. What was the government to do with Twilight Sparkle? They had to keep me in their hands, as I was deemed too volatile and too valuable to be sold to a private interest. And they couldn’t make my existence public, for as far as any of the ponies knew, all of their monarchs were still safely in Equestria.
>Several ideas were proposed. The board of directors at my research facility argued I should be placed in a research position. After all, I have more than enough intellect and education for it. But for reasons unknown, that plan was struck down by the military officers overseeing our operations. They, in turn, wanted to start a new bout of research focused on the possible weaponization of my abilities. But to do that would be to risk my ire, and by then, they knew to stay cautious of my power. Ultimately, I simply ended up floating around in their system, consigned to idle in my underground facility until needed.
>I still remember the day they finally did need me. I was sprawled across a couch, empty energy drinks and snack bags surrounding myself and three companions as we wasted time through video games, as was their habit every Friday afternoon and mine every afternoon. A very irritated-looking officer approached us with a clipboard, impatiently standing by until I finally turned to him.
“Yes?” I asked, as politely as my generally-despondent self could manage at the time.
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>>30683445
>”Look, Sparkle, you’re always complaining about how useless you are sitting around here, yeah? Well guess what, the General finally found a way to get rid of your lazy ass. Come take a look.”
>Suddenly alert, I dropped my controller to the complaints of my work-wearied acquaintances. But they surely understood my desperation for a way out of that depressing underground facility, for no other challenges followed me as I followed the officer out of the room and through the winding, sparsely-decorated hallways to the commander’s office.
>As we walked, he opted to remain silent, perhaps still harboring disdain for a pony he knew to be far more important, intelligent, and valuable than he. I chose to flip through the papers he’d handed me, but most of it was purely documentation related to my departure. Very little hinted at my actual destination or purpose, aside from a general reference to the American Southwest.
>As soon as we arrived at the office, my guide stole away as quickly as his feet could take him. Perhaps it was simply out of a desire to leave my side, or perhaps from some trepidation of his superior officer. Perhaps both. Regardless, I’d had my fair share of talks with important individuals, so it was with little nervousness that I pushed my way into his office and took a seat.
>”Miss Sparkle,” he began, opting to forgo the usual title of ‘pony’ assigned to me by most around the base. “I assume Captain Matthews already briefed you on what’s happening today?”
“I wasn’t aware the man could speak, sir.”
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>>30683453
>”Ah, then don’t mind him. I assure you he’s equally bitter to everyone, his own mother included. Should I give you the rundown, then?” he asked, his eyes unreadable. That was always the trouble with humans: their eyes were tiny in proportion to their heads, and betrayed far less emotion than any sapient Equestrian creature. But at least he wasn’t hostile or annoyed, as so many seemed to be in this facility entirely focused around me.
“That would be lovely, thank you.”
>”Now, I’m sure you’re saddened to leave this wonderful facility,” he said with a chuckle, “but it seems we’ve finally been able to find a place for you elsewhere, and it’s a role I imagine you’d be more than happy filling.
>”I’m not sure if you even know exactly where this facility is, but if you’ll look at this map here,” he mused, gesturing to the country-wide map situated before him, “we’re right about here in New Mexico,” he finished, pointing to a spot well south of Albuquerque.
“And where will I be going, then?” I asked, careful not to let too much excitement seep into my voice.
>”Not far,” he replied, shifting his finger left. “Just on the edges of Phoenix, Arizona. And don’t worry, you’ll actually be aboveground this time.”
>Even as far away as we were from civilization, they rarely permitted me to the surface. Intervals of months at a time often interrupted my breaths of fresh air. It came as no small relief that I’d once again be afforded the luxury of clean air and natural winds.
>”And,” he continued, a smile forming on his lips, “you won’t even have to hide. Whether it’s your wings or your horn, we’ve got a way to properly hide your unique appearance.”
“Then what am I doing,” I asked, cautious as the student of a monarch ought to be, “to earn such accommodations?”
>”You’ll be fighting.”
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>>30683458
“Absolutely not.”
>”Ah ah ah, hear me out. Not fighting crime, or fighting for some cause. You’ll be fighting for your own people.”
>After a few moments of blank stares, he continued, “There is a… task force, of sorts, being created. Seems some folks have taken the concept of indentured servitude too far, and while what they’re doing may not even be illegal, someone’s got to stop them.”
“I either fail to understand or fail to believe you.”
>”It’s simple. There’s bad people out there, doing bad things, but the government can’t do anything about it. But you, you don’t even exist in this world as far as the public is concerned. You and a few other high-value assets across the country are being set up as a team, to fill in the gaps that no legal entity can.”
“So, like, spy stuff?”
>”More like SWAT, or Special Forces, or something. From the looks of the other profiles in your little team, your commander isn’t looking to arrest anyone. He’s looking for more timely solutions.”
>They would fly us around the country, he said, taking down the worst abusers known to intelligence agencies. And over the years, more than a few of them had cropped up. Thousands of ponies were enslaved under their iron fists, and perhaps hundreds more killed through cruelty and negligence. There would be six of us: three ponies, and three humans, all equipped and trained save for myself. But then they assumed, correctly, that an alicorn’s capabilities would more than make up for any training deficiency.
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>>30683459
>At first, I wondered why they would put me in such a seemingly risky position, especially one where I could plausibly enter the public eye. And yet the more I thought on it, the more it made sense. In such a role, I would still be protected by military forces, and kept reasonably covert. If they needed me for another reason, perhaps for more testing or for a more important mission, I would be at hand to snatch back up and carry off to another facility. And, finally, it would keep me satisfied, and eliminate any risk of my power being unleashed on military property. It wouldn’t be until later that I discovered the other reasons for my transfer, but this logic alone was enough to satisfy my skepticism at the time.
>Within hours, my few belongings were neatly packed away, and I was boarding a small plane bound for a tiny airstrip near my destination. I said my goodbyes to the few friends I’d made, took my seat, and flew into the unknown.
>I did well to sleep on the plane; the next few hours were significantly more chaotic.
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>>30683465
And that's it for tonight, fellas. I look forward to once again overfilling this thread with content, and seeing to this story in the coming months. After its completion, I'll hopefully have a fresh storyboard for Buster & Dash, and finish that up as well.

Pastebin for this story: https://pastebin.com/6iL2wQNc

Make sure to come and hang out on Discord, we love new victims/people to chat with. You don't gotta be a content creator, just ask our resident talentless weirdos. https://discord.gg/nVA3wW6
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>>30683475
>discord
Fuck you and fuck off you retarded pencil dicked piece of jewish shit
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>>30675179
>The same crime you'd just condemned ponies to sale for, now you were made guilty of.

Already said my say on the CYOA choice (using powerful, secret, and very scary mind control magic right in front of Anon and everyone for no good reason might not be that great an idea). Whatever happens to Haute, the fact is that Cadance just physically and magically attacked another pony! Buying and selling camp prisoners is at Anons sole discretion, and there is zero chance of it happening to her, but there's no ignoring this. It has become a principle of what passes for justice here that violence is always met with the lash. Can't see a future where she is not lead up to the stage in front of everypone, bound to the post, and given at LEAST one token stroke. Cadance would actually insist on it herself, even if Anon didn't.

>>30683475
>your commander isn’t looking to arrest anyone.

Holy shit: "Twilight Sparkle joins a domestic Death Squad". She has nothing to apologize for as an alien slave, but not seeing the justification for her handlers... And really, she might be protecting individual victims of the worst abuses of slavery, but she is also fighting to protect the institution of pony slavery itself. As an immortal she has to take the long view on these things.

But love your previous work HJ, and I'm certain it will turn out awesome.
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>>30683475
Meh, I was interested until I saw it was a followup to the glimmer story. I couldn't stand any of the characters in that one. Plus I think the special forces / war themes make for boring greentexts, but that's just me
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>>30683534
Mm, not a follow-up. Just within the same universe and I will be exploring the backstory of GoH in this story.

As far as the other concern, I actually hold the same reservations. Ultimately, this will still retain heavy slice-of-life qualities, as that is what I prefer to write and to read. It will, however, have significantly more punch than my other stories, and of course some unavoidable action scenes. But no, I'm not writing this to try my hand at combat writing, I'm writing it because I have a story in mind and to avoid such scenes would harm the flow and feel far more.

tl;dr I don't like military-focuses stories either, but you can damn well be sure this'll be worth a read.
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>>30683475
Honestly I kinda want to read a story about her initial time being studied by the humans but this sounds interesting too.
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>>30683656
There will be a long backstory section to explain a good bit about this universe.
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>>30659943
>Is that a jab at you? That's so a jab at you.
>Note to self: delete something important off Anon's computer.
Because nothing says "I'm mature" like petty revenge. This is why I love your story, Vega - the characters are flawed, which makes them seem all the more realistic.
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>>30683434
>“protected”.

See to the Constitution need one new amend


Great "see you" again HJ, great return
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>>30683475

Twiligth lead one group multi-species for help ponies in troubles???

Only think one think:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wyz_2DEah4o

Hope for more green in the future HJ
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boop
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>>30683475
This looks very interesting, and knowing you, I'm sure it will be great.
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>>30684544
The US constitution does not have much to say about the rights of magic talking ponies. They would have the same rights as the non-talking sort without laws explicitly saying otherwise, and in this story there is a strong lobby against such legislation. If anything would need 'amending' it is the Posse Comitatus Act! The A-Team were straight up criminals, Twilights new slavemasters seem to be in a much more dubious legal environment. Perhaps H.J. was lectured about this in Basic?
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AspiringWriteFag when?
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>>30685286
I talked to him
He said something about hating you and left
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>>30685313

Sorry to disappoint. I'm wrapping up something, then I'll need about 45 min for a final edit of the next part and then it's posting time.
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>>30685566
>22min.

EXCITE!
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>>30665082

> The ponies hated my guts with varying intensity. On the one hand, there was Lavender Falls who absolutely couldn't stand the sight of me.
> On the other, Pearl Shine who wasn't entirely sure. She was conflicted and simply fell back to her obedient slave routine more often than not.
> I noticed they were getting along with each other at least. That part was good.
> Trying to stay out of their way as much as possible, I planned for the future.
> As soon as Linda came back from a trip to Europe, Pearl would have a home. It was pretty much settled and the pony was ready to go.
> I still hadn't broken the news to them that Lavender would stay with me. There was no way I was setting my nieces up with a time bomb like that mare.
> It would only take one asshole to rub her the wrong way for the pony to snap and do something drastic in public, probably with her magic. Then Linda and her family would be stuck with the shitstorm that followed.
> No, Lavender would either need to be completely broken, or kept on a very tight leash, however much she hated it. My sister-in-law wasn't the right person for either of those.
> Since I was unwilling to break her or sell her to someone even worse, that left the pony stuck in my care.
> I knew it would be a beautiful mess when she found out, but I kept putting it off.
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>>30685799

> It wasn't even the guilt - sure, part of Lavender's volatility was because of my failed training, but she had always been difficult. I suspected she had been a problematic personality even before her capture.
> Who runs away from their family because they don't like a job they had been offered?
> ...
> I was almost out of days to tell Lavender the bad news, but I still had some left.
> Making my way to their room, I paused in the middle and cleared my throat to get their attention.
> They looked up from what they were doing. Pearl had been examining my album with the letters from my trainees and Lavender had been reading a book.
"We need to talk."
> Cliche, but nevertheless true.
> The crystal pony just rolled her eyes and returned to her novel. At least the pegasus showed some interest. "What about?" she asked.
"About what happens next."
> This got their attention. Even the unicorn looked back at me, expectantly.
"Day after tomorrow, Linda will come to visit with her older daughter."
> I saw Pearl light up at the news. She liked the woman. More importantly, the pony knew about that part of my plan.
> She was probably looking forward to getting away from me and the memories I evoked.
> Even Lavender seemed to brighten up.
> I didn't have the heart to tell her. There was no choice, but I just couldn't do it. Not yet.
"Let's go for a walk."
> The cold air would help clear my head, I hoped.
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>>30685807

> The pegasus nodded, happy to be doing something. But Lavender just stared at me in disdain. "It's half past eight," she said, barely keeping sarcasm out of her voice. "And it's winter."
"I'll dress up warm and you have fur. We won't go far."
> She gave an exasperated sigh, but got to her hooves anyway.
> I dressed in silence while the ponies waited at the front door. They watched impatiently as I tugged on my boots.
> The unicorn's mood soured further when I put the collar on her neck. She stared daggers at me, but managed to endure it without protest.
> Then I went to clip on her leash and the pony stepped away to avoid it.
> "No," she said. Simple and final.
"You know you have to."
> Her hoof stomped down on the floor tiles. "No," she repeated, averting her gaze. Even the pegasus hung her head at the tone.
> I thought about it. It was late and there probably wouldn't be any people around.
"Fine."
> My frustration with her must have been obvious, because the other mare quickly came to bump my hand with her nose.
> "I'm okay with it," Pearl said and cocked her head to the side so her neck would be easier to reach. She allowed me to collar her and attach the leash without fuss.
> The little display removed any trace of indecision from my mind. While the pegasus was well behaved, Lavender on the other hand, could not be trusted with Linda and her family.
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>>30685815

> Her obstinacy was partly my fault, I understood that. My mistakes have left the pony resentful and angry all the time.
> But there was something else. Ever since Pearl had accused us of harboring secret feelings for each other, the unicorn had been especially cold and distant.
> I had jokingly asked her about it, but Lavender had nearly bitten my head off.
> She had refused to have anything to do with me ever since, as if trying to show me just how little she cared.
> Or maybe she was trying to convince herself?
> That was an entirely different can of worms, one I definitely wasn't ready to open.
> I let us out and set off toward the lake. Lavender knew the way and walked a few paces ahead. Her breath left a mist in the air, reminding me of nothing so much as a steam engine.
> It looked as if the crystal pony was doing her best to disassociate herself with me, but I didn't call her out on it.
> Rather than try to engage the recalcitrant unicorn I opted to speak with Pearl.
"Anyway, you remember Linda, right?"
> I saw her nod, briefly, before her eyes returned to the path. There was no snow, so it was easy to slip on an insidious patch of ice.
> Despite her four legs, Pearl wasn't taking any chances.
> "I like her," she admitted. "she makes good cookies."
"Haha, yes! Chocolate chip, right?"
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>>30685820

> The pony smacked her lips. "Delicious! I'll ask her to bring you a batch every now and then."
"Thanks, I look forward to it."
> I was reminded of the pegasus I had known before the accident. I knew sending her away was her best chance to become that happy pony once again.
> "But only if you're good," Pearl added with a small grin.
> It made me laugh out of relief. Even a few days ago, the pegasus would never had made a joke like that.
> Too bad Lavender didn't share in our mirth. I saw her glance back, then blow air out through her nose in a derisive snort.
> I did my best to ignore it. After all, the mare was only digging her own hole.
"Well, I spoke to her and she's willing to take you in."
> Pearl had been expecting as much, but I still saw her perk up when she had confirmation. I could swear her eyes lit up, although that might have been a reflection from a street lamp.
"She's a good person, I think you'll be really happy with her. And her daughters will love you."
> "As long as we're away from you," the unicorn commented without looking back.
> My grin slipped and I took a deep breath. If I didn't tell her the truth right then, I probably never would, not until she found out elsewhere.
> I steeled my resolve and delivered the bad news.
"You're not going, Lavender."
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>>30685827

> She stopped so suddenly that I nearly walked into her. Then she whirled around, the accustomed anger in her eyes already replaced by fear.
> "What?!" she demanded. The pony was trembling, but it wasn't from cold. "Yes I am!"
> I shook my head.
"No. I can't trust you to behave. I don't want you causing trouble for Linda and her family."
> The mare crouched a little and laid her ears flat against her head. It looked like she would either attack me or bolt. She tried to look around surreptitiously and I guessed it was the latter.
"Go on. Run away if you want. But then we're through. You better hope they don't catch you alive, because all you'll get is the work camp."
> I wasn't sure if the threat would work. It hadn't been all that long ago since Lavender had wanted to die.
> The way her lips began to tremble and she lowered her eyes, told me everything I needed. The pony was terrified of torture and death.
> It wasn't my proudest moment, but I didn't know what else to do with her. I barely kept myself from sighing in relief.
"Well? What are you waiting for?"
> The crystal pony knew she wouldn't run. Her head sagged, but only for a moment. She tried something new out of desperation.
> Her eyes seemed to stare straight at my heart from her expression of sorrow and heartache.
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>>30685832

> "Why?" she asked brokenly. "What will happen to me?"
"You'll stay with me, don't worry. You'll still have a good home."
> "Please?" she begged, taking a step closer so I could see the tears forming.
"No. Out of the question. You're not... safe for someone like Linda and her kids."
> "Why?"
> I counted on my fingers, even though the gesture was probably lost on a pony.
"One: you don't obey if you don't feel like it. Sometimes I ask you to do things for a reason and I don't always have time to argue."
> She looked away. Her breath had quickened, I could see that clearly from the clouds of mist that flowed out of her mouth. "I'm not a slave," she muttered.
"It's not black and white, Lavender. And that's not even the biggest issue with you."
> I held up another finger.
"Anyway, two: you're liable to attack people in the street. Remember the old woman in the market?"
> Her eyes snapped back and she almost spat her words. "That was ONE time!"
"Yeah, the first time I took you with me. You started out happy, and we were doing something you enjoyed. It only took her a second to rile you up."
> I stared her down and she slowly lost her fire.
"And you were preparing to use magic, *despite* my warning. Remember point one?"
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>>30685837

> The mare had no answer. She knew as well as I that it would happen again. It had been one incident, true. But with her temper, there would quickly be another.
"Three: You're so adamant about this 'slave' thing that you would cause trouble for Linda."
> "I wouldn't!" the pony argued.
> I lifted up my hand to show her Pearl's leash looping around my wrist.
"Where's your leash? If anyone saw us, there could have been trouble. Even if Linda didn't think of you as a pet, the law would!"
> The unicorn had a haunted expression on her face. She had been so righteously indignant that she hadn't expected me to have valid arguments for my claims.
> I still wasn't done.
"Four: Your magic. You know it isn't allowed. And I know Linda would let you keep it, because she's too nice. One slip up and they put you down. No questions, no trial. And then Linda has to explain your death to her kids."
> As I talked, Lavender's eyes fell to the ground and she began to sniffle. She tried again: "I wouldn't, I swear!"
"What if you felt threatened? We're back at the old lady again."
> There was no response, only her heavy breathing and an occasional muffled sob. The pony was determined not to cry in front of me.
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>>30685842

> I glanced to Pearl, who was looking away with tears dripping down her face. She was taking it harder than her unicorn friend, almost.
"It all comes back to the same thing, Lavender. You're too much trouble. That's why you ended up with me, and that's what I tried to change when I began teaching you."
> I took a step closer and crouched down. I put my hand in her mane. She didn't resist.
"Look, I know now my methods were wrong, but the end goal wasn't. You're stuck here, whether you like it or not. If you won't play by the rules, if you're more trouble than you're worth, they'll just get rid of you."
> Finally, she lifted her head. She stared balefully at me, but didn't comment. She was still fighting back her tears. Her lips parted and I expected a scathing remark, but nothing came.
"It's not a death sentence, Lavender. Pearl will be able to visit us often. I'll give you your garden. If you want, you can pretend I'm not even there. But I can't let you go to anyone else. For their safety and yours."
> She seemed very conflicted. From the ugly look she was giving me, the mare would love nothing more than to rip me apart with her magic. But she couldn't get what she so desperately wanted by attacking me.
> She turned her eyes away as she forced the words out. "I'd like to go home, please."
"Sorry. We're going to finish our walk. I'd like to show Pearl the lake."
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>>30685848

> Lavender closed her eyes and focused on her breathing. For a while, the only movement were her flaring nostrils and the cloud of steam she exhaled.
> "Fine," she said in a tight voice.
> I reached out my hand again, but she moved away from it. I kept my arm outstretched and spoke, my voice tightly controlled.
"It doesn't have to be forever, Lavender. Prove to me that I can trust you and I'll let you go. To Linda, if she will take you, or somewhere else."
> She glanced up at my palm. All she had to do was touch it, briefly. But the mare was too stubborn and too angry. Her eyes narrowed and looked into mine.
> She took a deep breath. "Fuck you!" she swore, using a word she had picked up from humans.
> It made Pearl gasp in shock and press herself closer to me.
> My anger flared up and I felt my fists clench. Suddenly I wasn't in the mood for a walk anymore. Something told me Pearl wouldn't enjoy it either.
> I stood up and began walking back to the house. My retreating footsteps made Lavender look back.
> A few seconds later, Pearl snapped out of her shock and followed me, casting a regretful glance at the unicorn.
> She stood still for a long time. I thought that she was going to leave, rather than come with me. That her hatred was insurmountable.
> But just as we were rounding a corner, I heard Lavender move. She quickly broke into a trot and a brief look confirmed she was following.
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>>30685854

> As I paused to let her catch up, Pearl pressed her chin against my side. I let my hand fall to her mane and ruffled it.
> "I'm sorry she's so difficult, Master," the pegasus whispered to me.
> I didn't doubt my decision to keep Lavender away from Linda in the slightest. But I was starting to regret letting Pearl go that easily.
> The former pony was a nightmare to handle and her disposition was getting worse. The latter was warming up to me with each passing day. In time, I felt, Pearl could once again become the friend I remembered.
> The difference between the two mares could not have been more apparent.
> One thing occurred to me, though. If I really wanted to help Lavender, I would need to earn her trust somehow.

> ~~~~
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>>30685863

No interesting remark for here today - too tired from heat/work. I'll just leave this: https://pastebin.com/NFvpWPVm

Also, let me know if Pearl flipped a little too fast... I couldn't quite decide on that.
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>>30685880
Pearl still seems to have only so much self-dignity in just a couple of days to break old habits, she'd slip to weaseling around her master anyway even if she does not enjoy it. I doubt she's in a mood and has the ability to confront him and here comes vague soothing words, pretty standard way to go.
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>>30685880
I hope Pearl gets leg thumpingly good tummy rubs
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>>30685880
I hope Pearl stays for a while, I doubt Anon can break the ice on his own.
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>>30685880
>Also, let me know if Pearl flipped a little too fast... I couldn't quite decide on that.
I did kind of get that feeling. I was just reading about her screaming her frustrations and anger at Anon and telling him that she doesn't think she will ever forgive him, yet here they're like best friends.
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>>30686092
Probably because she knows she's leaving in a week.

>>30685880
Once the war is over or whatever is going on over in Equestria finishes Lavender can go back home I imagine.
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>>30685880
>Pearl
It did feel like a little bit too fast of a flip, but honestly I don't think that was the real problem. The issue is that you made her out to be to hostile in the previous sections, too opposed to Anonymous. She acts the middle ground between him and Lavender, but half the time she seems to be so hateful of him that she's even further out there than Lavender. Under that characterization, it's tricky to believe she would ever forgive Anonymous in a reasonable timeframe for the story - let alone this fast.

I didn't speak up about this in the last couple sections, and that's my bad - but, you really you need to narrow down Pearl's role and stick to one thing. Half the time she's cursing both of them out, then she's bonding with Lav over hatred of Anonymous the next instant and laughing about getting drunk, then a second later she's okay with Anonymous and shocked by the depths of Pearl's anger towards him.

>Lavender
Honestly, I really wish Pearl had ultimately broken her by desiring to stay in slavery. She repeatedly proves to be such a juvenile character that at this point I just want to see her crack and give in to being a slave. If there's one actual character who genuinely needs a firm guiding hand in this thread, it's fucking Lavender.

What you had in this last section - where Pearl is the one shaken by how obstinate Lavender is? That's good. If we put aside her flipping over so fast, this is the kind of great character contrasts that drive a story; where both their character roles work. The problem is 50% of the time Pearl just seems to be a story mechanism for making Anonymous look bad, and there things suffer.
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>>30685880
She did flip a bit fast, and the suppressed memory thing was a bit hokey, but both serve the plot. Euthanasia, or at least the threat / promise of it, would seem to be the next plot driver.

>>30686223
The war on Equestria will end when the war on drugs, terrorism, Cuba, or any other perpetual war does: when it is no longer profitable. Immortal alicorns can make those sort of plans but Lavender really can't.
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>>30686785
>If there's one actual character who genuinely needs a firm guiding hand in this thread, it's fucking Lavender.
Didn't think i'd see it this way earlier but I gotta agree. Edgy slavery bullshit aside she's really flighty and just need someone to keep her in check.
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>>30685863

I think that despite their personalities and attitudes Pearl is emotionally more stronger than Lavender, while the Crystal pony is rebellious and stubborn at the moment of facing reality crumbles before the pressure and surrenders to its impulses while Pearl to have suffered has the mental strength to appreciate the last opportunity she has to be happy, Lavender believed that going with the sister of Anon could get rid of the need to adapt, that she could remain her in a world that did not bend, but her illusion Was broken when she understood that not changing the sink more and more and the only person who could accept it was the one that hated and needed at the same time, and now also realized that their options are clearer than ever, Change or succumb
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>>30685880
>Also, let me know if Pearl flipped a little too fast
Maybe a bit: she was still pretty angry at Anon for their past together last I saw but, as I understand it's been a few days and things may have smoothed over enough that she may regress to her post-brothel mindset of being super-subservient, but then there was her acting all chummy with Anon concerning the cookies. Her apologizing on Lavender's behalf I could understand to a degree, but you think after that last scene Pearl might understand WHY Lavender is so stalwart in keeping on to her freedom of choice.

> She had refused to have anything to do with me ever since, as if trying to show me just how little she cared.
Did Anon forget that he screamed at Lavender after she told him she'd rather he hate her, or said he didn't want to see HER again? Was Lavender being untruthful in her tearful confession to Pearl?

>You're so adamant about this 'slave' thing
that is a reasonable thing to be adamant about, generally more than a few people would take issue with this

Though all said and done: Anon is right. Lavender can't go to Linda with Pearl (as much as that hurts given how well they're getting along now) because if she won't behave for him how can he expect her to behave for his sister-in-law/nieces? He's completely in the right to be skeptical following her outburst in the store to be wary of her magic and her attitude, and since he doesn't want to send her away and he can't take her home to Equestria, there is little option but for him to keep her, for better or worse. And to his credit: he is being as reasonable as he possibly can. He's making promises that it doesn't need to be permanent, and giving good reasons for each step. Anon's morals may still be skewed but he's learned where he's fucked up in the past, and is treating Lavender was every bit of respect in his decision.
(1/2)
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>>30686950
>>30685880

Lavender's admitted immaturity makes it difficult for some to sympathize with her, I understand, but I still do. The situation she is in sucks and she has a LOT of bad history with this man, whom she can't even be sure is truly changed for the better. She wants to keep her independence desperately and fights with every ounce of vigor to protect every inch of it, which Anon threatens (even for good reasons) almost every day. But, in the end, she has to realize she has limited options and part of growing up is learning to deal with the cards dealt. She can't run away from this like she did her life in the Empire (would love to see them dig more into that before Pearl left as well) and although he's not someone she can forgive yet, she has made Anon a better man, and he is looking out for her well being ultimately. Even having saved her life. The fact that she didn't run away right then means she's found a reason to live, now we just need to see she holds on to it and comes to some understanding with her tormentor. Just because she can't let go of her freedom doesn't mean she can't let go a bit of her pride.
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Man, can you imagine the utter betrayal if Pearl had just decided to refuse to believe what Lavender and Anon were telling and chose to help him break Lavender instead?

The look of total, uncomprehending horror on Lavender's face as Pearl happily helped chain our troublesome little crystal pet back up, picked out a fresh whip for Anonymous to lay into her with? It'd probably completely destroy Lavender's entire world, that a pony could willingly side with the slavers like that.
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>>30687140
Anon does not need Pearls help to physically overpower Lavender. His problem is that he has allowed himself to see her as a person with intrinsic value, rather than a slave with only monetary value. A real slaver would have cut his (already substantial) losses when she attempted suicide.
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>>30685880
Clearly what Lavender needs is in deed a good, firm guiding hand. Particularly to the posterior if need be. The relationship has clearly evolved a bit from traditional master/slave but Lavender's immaturity, evident since before leaving Equestria, is going to land her in hot water. The best way for Anon to save her is to move it more into a guardian/child relationship if she's not going to be a slave but still lives in his house and eats his food. The next time she gets in trouble the good spanking she should get won't be as one used to break her as to remind her of what little bratty children get as punishment when they are acting like bratty children.
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>>30683521
>Whatever happens to Haute, the fact is that Cadance just physically and magically attacked another pony!
Comet and Autumn got the punishment they got for nearly KILLING a pony. What Cadance did was akin to wrestling around with no serious injuries on either side whatsoever, she did far worse to a human guard not so long ago and came out okay. I'm sure there will be some punishment for her letting her emotions get the better of her and snapping (that Posey was there to save her was VERY fortunate but Cadance can't count on being that lucky twice) but I don't think there would need to be any threat of selling her off or a public lashing
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>>30687494
It worked for Last Chance Anon. Lavender is honestly acting like a brat, and weirdly I do think that a controlled, but firm ass whacking in her brattiest moments might be good for her.
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>>30687532
>I don't think there would need to be any threat of selling her off or a public lashing.

Cadance is perfectly safe from sale. As you say, her attack on Haute was not anywhere near what happened to Mocha, and Anon and the story itself need her. When she found a human guard in the act of raping a pony her use of force was excused because Anon wanted to make a specific point to both the guards and the ponies. But Anon can still be a stickler for rules, as he explained to Mocha a while back:

>"Then yes. If you attacked someone or somepony like that out of the blue, not trying to fairly defend yourself... I'd have to. I can't play favorites. If you were just surprised, or actually attacked by someone else first... that's different. That's no crime. But that's not what they did. They went looking for a fight, Mocha, even when warned. If you did that..."
> "...you would whip me."
>"Yes. Nobody is immune, Mocha. I even warned Cadance

But I doubt Anon will even get a chance to make it official. The last time Cadance was whipped it was by her own command; even Anon was taken by surprise. She did it to show solidarity with the herd, to show that unlike Haute or other grasping sell-outs she does not consider herself above them. Now look what she has done:

> This entire thing had been a trap for you and you alone.
> To destroy their trust in you.
> To make you vulnerable.

Posy just saved her from ultimate disaster, but the damage is still there. Cadances power is her credibility with both Anon and the herd: her reputation for judging herself by the same standards she enforces on his behalf. To get it back she must not merely submit to punishment like a beaten slave, but actively seek atonement like a leader. The question is not if she is publicly whipped again, only how many lashes and who gives them. A single token stroke from Randall is my guess. He lands it perfectly despite being blind, 'cause he's just that badass.
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I fucking JUST got Haute Glamour's name.

Haute means like high-class, fancy. But Glamour can be both something that's attractively exciting or exotic, especially beauty or charm, OR a magic spell - especially one used to control someone or disguise something.

So she is a pony who uses charm to disguise her own nature and control others around her - making herself appear high-class and attractive.
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>>30688063
>her use of force was excused
It was not quite excused. Cadances punishment was a course of anti-magic pills, and she did not like them. That was the very lowest Anon thought he himself could get away with, when he felt so bad about it he offered to let her whip him too! Anon is not in such a generous mood today. If Cadance does not face the lash it will be something else instead, not a slap on the fetlock.

>samefag here, was reading through the paste and saw I was wrong.
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>>30688144
>So she is a pony who uses charm to disguise her own nature and control others around her - making herself appear high-class and attractive.


That and raise the tail to each pony and human that could provide him with an opportunity to ascend and acquire more power
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>The propeller sputtered to a stop, the door popped open, a stairwell extended, and I was soon back on the ground. It occurred to me that air travel in this way was somewhat wasteful, given my capacity for flight, but the desire for secrecy was understood.
>The landscape here was entirely unknown to me: whereas other parts of this country exhibited similar flora and appearance to various parts of Equestria, this desert was unique. Covered in cacti tall and small, filled with plant life alien in appearance and inconsistent with the dry air and sweltering heat, and quite obviously inhabited from the expanse of city visible from the airplane window, it was a desert unlike any I’d ever known.
>The airstrip fit into the landscape well. With only a tiny control tower, two rusted hangars, and dirt roads to complement the dirt landing and takeoff strip, it certainly failed to betray any impression of a private-use facility. Through the gate and down a dirt road, another set of buildings was visible, much newer in appearance but still surrounded by the same shining, painful-looking barbed wire.
>More attention-drawing, however, were the individuals gathered in anticipation of our arrival. Clustered around an unassuming black pickup truck were three humans and two unicorns, all dressed in camouflage and engaged in what could be described as neither lively debate nor scathing argumentation.
>”You cannot treat the Princess as some regular old pony!” one of the unicorns barks, grinding his teeth. “She is royalty, not to mention the fabled alicorn magic she possesses!”
>”I know good and well what she’s capable of,” one of the men responds. “You got the dossier too, pal. Doesn’t mean I’m going to let some damn ponies boss me around.”
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>>30688993
>”Princess!” the other unicorn suddenly shouts, silencing the others around her. “It is an honor to meet you. You can’t imagine our relief upon hearing of your survival and safety.”
“Please, no formalities,” I sighed, waving her off. I was not eager to return to the same artificial reverence ponies held for me as a Royal. “There are no crowns here, and no princesses either. Please, just call me Twilight.”
>”Well, Twilight,” the same man interrupted, angrily stressing my name. “Your plane is already an hour and a half late, so can we just hop in the truck and get going?”
“I suppose so, but perhaps we should get introductions in, first?”
>”No.”
>”I’m Glittering Jewel,” the unicorn mare interjects, bowing slightly before catching herself. “But my folks always called me Jewel.” Her coat was a bright turquoise, accented by a cream-colored mane that delicately curled upward at the ends. Her cutie mark, like that of her companion, was obscured by her uniform.
>”Friends call me Chuck,” the stallion added in with disinterest before turning to the truck. A quick glance at his name tape revealed his birth name, Rockheart. He was small for a stallion, smaller than myself and almost as short in stature as Jewel. Yet small was not to say weak: under his maroon coat and light-brown mane were muscles, taught yet not obtrusive. He may well have been an athlete in Equestria.
>”Sergeant Brian Lopez,” the smallest of the three men remarked with a nod. “A pleasure to meet you, ma’am.” He was perhaps a few inches shorter than most human men, but, like the stallion, visibly in near-perfect shape. He, too, quickly stole off to the waiting vehicle, but not without casting a final, welcoming glance back to me.
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>>30689000
>”Major Ryan Johnson,” the next man said with a heavy Boston accent. The largest of the three men, he was the only one I’d seen to betray any sign of aging. His face was a bit more tired, his skin a bit more coarse, and his brown hair laced with barely-noticeable lines of gray. “I’ll be your team leader, Miss Sparkle. You’ve been in our possession for some time now, so I imagine you understand the responsibilities that role comes with.”
“I do, sir.”
>The final man, the one who had been so heated only moments ago, now stood silent as the three of us still present looked to him expectantly. His seemingly permanent scowl was well accented by the dark, thick eyebrows that dominated his large, square face. Beneath them, a set of green eyes blazed out at us. At last, he exploded, “What the fuck do you want? Staff Sergeant Wilcox, you fucking happy?”
>”Alright, Wilcox, what’s your problem today, huh?” the Major bit back at him.
>”Not sure what you mean, sir,” he replied with a roll of his eyes. “Been exactly this pissy since I got handed this assignment. Still not sure what I did to deserve it.”
>”Let’s just get in the damn truck already,” the officer relented, throwing his arms up in the air. “At least we’ll have something else to talk about there.”
>The vehicle had only five seats for six individuals, but any conflict was easily resolved by Chuck’s decision to load up into the truck bed. My small suitcase joined the rest of the luggage in making a rather comfortable-looking bed for the stallion, as I squeezed into the back of the truck’s cabin. Lopez had long seated himself in the shotgun seat, and the Major took his place at the wheel, leaving Wilcox and I on either side of Jewel.
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>>30689010
>”So, Miss Sparkle,” the Major began as the engine roared to life. “Welcome to the Valley of the Sun. It’s an apt name. It’s mid-May now, we’ll be lucky to get any rain before August.”
“I’ve barely seen the sun for over four years, Major. That doesn’t bother me much.”
>”Oh, sure, sure. Ahh, enough talking about the weather, eh? Let’s get down to business. You know what we’re here for, right?”
“Bringing the hammer down on abusers?”
>”Somewhat. Supposedly, we’re supposed to be arresting these folks. But if that was what they expected to happen, they’d be sending a SWAT team. I’ll give it to ya straight: we’re going after the biggest, baddest, toughest slavers our intelligence agencies know of, and if we get found out, the Fed’s gonna disown us like we’re a gay Mormon kid.
>”But on the other hand, it’s a chance for you ponies to do something to really help out your kind. Miss Sparkle, I think you know why you’re here?”
“Mostly because I’m up to the task, and they couldn’t find any other use for me.”
>”That’s about what they told me, yeah. Chuck and Jewel have been in government service from the beginning, some of the only ponies to ever receive any form of military training. There aren’t many out there who wear those uniforms, you two should be proud,” he said, addressing Jewel.
>”Us humans, though,” he continued, “are all here for our experience. Sergeant Wilcox and I are Special Forces, but Sergeant Lopez is the real badass. Isn’t that right, Lopez?”
>”Delta Force,” he said with a smile and a nod. “But that’s classified.”
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>>30689013
>Around that time, we rounded a bend and passed by the gates of the other facility. It consisted of three nondescript buildings arranged in a rectangle, with a guard post at the front gate and a gravel parking area filling in the space in-between. Limited cacti and desert vegetation adorned the sides of walkways and buildings, but aside from that, it appeared as an overall dismal place.
>”To our left,” the Major pointed out, “is home sweet home for the foreseeable future. I know it looks like a dump, especially to you ponies, but the furnishings are nice.”
>”Much better than most other ponies get,” Jewel mused, her voice barely audible.
>A quick wave to the gate guard later, and the truck slowly rolled into the compound. Before it came to a stop, the truck rocked slightly, and a quick look back revealed Chuck had already jumped out and begun unloading the luggage. This prompted a sudden and surprising reaction from the truck’s most irritated occupant, who barged out of the vehicle and began shouting at the unfazed unicorn not to touch his belongings. For his part, Chuck simply shrugged his shoulders and released the magic grip around his current load of bags, which clattered unceremoniously to the ground.
>”Miss Sparkle,” the Major prompted, waving to me as I stepped out of the vehicle.
“Yes?”
>”While the others get settled in, we have some business to attend to in the equipment building. Sergeant Lopez, bring our bags in for us.”
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>>30689020
>The equipment building was unremarkable, identical in appearance to the building opposite it and only slightly thinner than the two-story living quarters the others headed into. But for all its plainness on the exterior, the facility was truly remarkable inside. It was an instant shift in mood: from an unassuming and unappealing attitude to the outside world, the interior featured all manner of high-tech gear, gadgets, and devices of unknown function. Through open doorways I could see walls lined with weapons, armor, uniforms, and spare parts. But in this central, first room, all that could attract attention was the device positioned before us.
>A true mess of pipes, lights, displays, and interfaces, the digital monstrosity seemed as something from a science fiction novel. Placed in front of a convoluted mess of inputs and outputs was a sizable pad, large enough to accommodate a pony of any size or stature. The Major swept his hand across the device, as if to beckon me forward to it.
“What is this?” I asked, my voice carrying equal parts hesitation and fascination.
>”One of the many fruits of the research conducted on you,” he said, something akin to pride seeping into his voice. “It is a self-enchanting device, allowing the user to tap into a unicorn’s magic and apply an enchantment directly to the body. For our purposes, we’ll be doing a simple concealment spell to hide your wings and replace your cutie mark.”
>I was incredulous. Thousands of years of Equestrian research had failed to find any way to enchant a living being, much less on the enchantment’s caster. And these humans, alien to magic before our arrival, had created such technology in just a few years? It was no wonder how far their technology outgrew ours in a much shorter history.
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>>30689024
“So, this device will allow me to cast an enchantment… on myself?”
>”Even better. The machine does the enchantment, you just supply the magic. Want to give it a whirl?”
“I suppose…”
>”Think of it this way,” he remarked cheerily as he moved to one of the machine’s control panels. “Soon as we’re done with this, you don’t have to hide any more. We can give you a proper look at the world you haven’t yet seen.”
>Another moment of hesitation was all I needed before I hesitantly closed the gap between myself and the pad. Sure, Equestrian science had produced its fair share of absurd magic machinery, but our engineers could never hope to manufacture something with the complexity and precision required for such a device as this. It was imposing. But, swallowing my fear, I stepped onto the platform.
>A mechanical whirl and a bright flash later, and my wings were gone.
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>>30689030
Aaaand, we have our main cast. Somewhat. Goddamn it felt clunky to introduce five OC characters in less than 500 words. Oh well, it works well enough, and I imagine we have a good understanding of the character relationships at work here. Obviously, there will be more development as the story gets on, but that should suffice for now.

Right. I just now remembered exactly where Buster & Dash was headed. A bit fucking late, isn't it? Oh well, at least I can guarantee its continuation later.

Anyway. Pastebin updated at https://pastebin.com/6iL2wQNc
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>>30689030
So are her wings magically removed or just invisible? Interesting so far keep up the good work.
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>>30689050
I don't know anon, we'll have to find out
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>>30689030
>”Even better. The machine does the enchantment."
What ELSE did the machine do to her, and her magic?
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>>30689673
She is now preggers with a draconeques
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>>30689058
Are you actually Handsome? Or a Jew?
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>>30690591
All of us are anonymous, even the namefags. Appearance and ethnicity have no place here. Unless you're an anthro-pony, then get out.
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>>30690862
My Starlight is an anthro pone slave bonage drug dog.
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>>30690591
It's an anagram. He's actually a group of jade showmen.
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>>30690591
A Jew? Yes. Handsome? Ehhhhhh
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>>30691466
You clutch the gun too loose to have hereditary trauma.
You have not been oppressed enough

I can oppress you in bed to help
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>9
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>>30679187
>>30678893
>>30679992
>>30679467
>Headaches
>Horrors
>Night Terrors
>This is what your sleep had become ever since master bought you.
>Doctor Master Masters.
>Your neck was broken, but your undead body was insistent on reminding you of this fact.
>You keyed the boot procedure and waited as the recharging cradle spun up your internal components.
>Being a cyborg left you with certain problems not found in robots, you found them enjoyable.
>Not all of them, the need to have your blood cleaned each night was a major flaw, but still you could actually dance digital disco around them all.
>You also had a battery unlike their arcane power cells, the good doctor was worried on the thaumaguric radiation inside of you.
>You opened your eyes, sensor overlays telling you that the world was the same as it had been, nothing ever changed in life.
>But then, everything changed when the human nations attacked.
>Sentimentality, now that was an emotion you could do without.
>You pulled an adjustment dosage of L-371,257 into your blood.
>You didn’t want to dwell on t e p t
>Today master had assigned you the task of ordering the lab.
>You queried the house computer, the lab had been ordered already, what could leave it in an entropic heavy state.
>What you got back set your pinions on edge.
>Master had thrown a party, to celebrate what was a new discovery he had made.
>You
>But a group of antitranshumanity terrorists had attacked.
>The partygoers now made up the bulk of your cleaning task.
>You accepted the task, you were a slave after all.
>You grabbed a bucket and brush, the blood was still fresh according to the climate control processors, you didn’t need to wash it thinner.
>The bodies would prove to be an issue though, you weren’t allowed to touch humans.
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>>30692621
>You queried the central server, it triggered a number of emergency subroutines and disseminated outbound data streams.
>You could wait for the return, the floor could be cleaned in the meantime.
>You pushed through the door to the chamber and were glad you had taken the emotion suppressant today.
>It was carnage, the type you had seen in Equestria when humans came through.
>They weren’t human bodies anymore, your autoprofiling system simply categorized them as meat.
>Blood, bullets, and bodies.
>The ballroom was full of them, piled in some places where they had sought to shelter each other, in others where they fled.
>A few combat modified bodies had terrorists dead with them, but the sight was the same.
>You had a task unfinished, and needed to do it, clean the room.
>You started by moving the furniture around, sorting what was broken, what was salvageable, and what could go straight into storage.
>Your myomer enhanced physique made it foal’s play to simply move around the bodies while hauling the heavy wood tables.
>Had you put the tables out?
>You had to have since you were the only one Master owned.
>Pause, wait, a memory error.
>Why did you not remember setting this all up?
>An interrogation of your memory bank showed an anomalous encrypted file, the certificate unsigned.

Open the file anyway?
Y/N
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>>30689050
>>30689058

Think of it from the quantum point of view, just as the cat in the box may be dead or alive, so its wings and perhaps its horn can also be there without being physically, it is only a hologram using the reality of multiple realities

Good job HJ
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>>30692628
>open mystery file?
Yes.

The file is already in our memory, if it's bad we are already comprised so the additional risk is small. Still, as a machine ourself IT security is more important than ever, so we firmly set the NX bit and open it as a plain text file first. We certainly don't want this thing executing inside our mechanical half!

How would we feel if our emotions weren't suppressed; did we know these humans?
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>>30692996
The cat has to be totally isolated from the rest of the universe: no peeking! Twilights wings are (or are not?) hanging out in open air. They cannot be superimposed.
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>>30693025
Only from our version of the Universe, it is likely that she feels her wings and horns but not others, the "magic" camouflage only serves to make the perception of others be changed from reality
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>>30693141
Look, as long as Twilight can give me a wingjob on demand, I don't care what state they are in.
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>>30693167
Considering that she was in solitary confinement for 4 years and who knows how many heat seasons she was lost and that now directs a response force to protect ponies from abusive humans from asking her kind of services or could take them as a serious offense or as a invitation
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>>30692628
>anomalous encrypted file

Guessing that's a "If you're reading this, I must be dead" emergency note from Steel Steeds creator. Might have the keys to its operating system, or a command to avenge his murder.
Seems an odd CYOA choice: what if people vote to delete the file unread, and just keep cleaning?

>Let's find out. Ignore that file. None of our business what Master wants to insert or remove from our memory, we and our memory belong to him. We are supposed to clean so we clean until we are done, then go off-line until master re activates us.
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>>30693531
>Mercury is still gay btw
No bully jingles.
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>>30694795
So they're really skittish, huh? Your piggies are really cute. Fluttershy's heart would melt.
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>>30689030
>Visibly gone, at least. I could still feel the brush of feathers against my coat and a quick flex of my muscles revealed the appendages to be entirely functional, merely invisible to onlookers. It was strange, at first, losing sight of what had become a core part of my body and my being. But I soon became accustomed to the circumstances, and gladly welcomed them.
>My cutie mark, of course, also had to be replaced. Long discussions with Starlight Glimmer had given me a deep understanding of the magic behind their form and function, and I could easily tell that what now adorned my flank was no more than a mask. The arrangement of stars I’d seen for so long was suddenly gone, replaced by an unremarkable depiction of a slice of cake.
>”Feeling alright?” Johnson asked, genuine if temporary concern apparent on his visage. “It looks like everything went fine, but you never know with untested magic.”
“My wings and cutie mark are still there, if that’s what you’re asking. But, did you say untested?”
>”I may have. But hey, everything worked out fine, didn’t it?” he answered, a nervous grin on his face. I simply sighed and shook my head in response. “Right-o, then,” he continued, shifting his attention to another part of the room. “Over there is the uniform issue room. Since nobody at the poor excuse for a research facility you were at bothered to fit you for one, I’ll leave it to you to find something that fits.”
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>>30695247
>He opted to wait outside the door, giving me suitable privacy to change. Inside were rows of multicam uniforms, both in the typical human fashions and specially-tailored variants for ponies of all shapes and sizes. Included, thankfully, was an arrangement of pegasus-oriented uniforms with buckled covers for wings. These proved remarkably easy to snap off when extending wings, and equally easy to buckle with a quick application of magic. It was with some difficulty that I found a set with a good fit, as by then my body had settled into its more lithe, long alicorn form.
>Upon emerging from the room, my view was immediately darkened as Johnson slapped a cap over my eyes. A quick adjustment later, I found it able to comfortably rest atop my cranium, my horn well-slotted through a stitched opening in its top. “Ironically,” the officer commented, “you won’t really be wearing these too much. Just around here, or when we’re going to another base. Still, gotta have ‘em, and now we have your sizes.”
“I suppose. Anything else to issue, while we’re here?”
>”Nothing I can’t grab myself with your size info. Head over to quarters, you might as well make yourself at home.”
>I left the man to his devices and returned to the compound’s central structure. Just inside the door were two suitcases gently placed beside each other, alone in the empty foyer. I picked mine up and moved for the sole hallway with any activity in it. Each of us had an assigned room, mine situated at the end of the hallway along with those earmarked for the other ponies in our team. Directly above each doorway was a simple yet functional nameplate made of brushed steel, or at least a facsimile of it.
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>>30695252
>Several of the rooms were open as I passed by. At the mouth of the hallway was Wilcox’s room; the man had set up a speaker system and was blasting some very fast, very loud EDM into the hallway. Sprawled across his bed enjoying his tunes, he only gave me a disinterested glance as I passed by. Jewel, with her room situated directly next to mine, had also opted to leave her door open. A quick glance in revealed her to be busily decorating all available surfaces with inexpensive decorations and knick-knacks from her two massive suitcases. The pervasive music seemed not to bother her, as her head bobbed lightly and quickly to its beat. I chose not to bother her, instead opting to see my own quarters.
>To say my room was either spacious or uncomfortable would be a lie. It was just large enough for a sole occupant, with a simple bunk, foot locker, desk space, and wall cabinet. The furnishings appeared new, or at least new enough. I stepped in and quickly shut the door, thankfully muffling the beats roaring down the hallway. It was both peculiar and pleasantly surprising that a wood door should block off so much sound at once.
>My belongings didn’t take long to arrange and store away. Truthfully, I had little reason to collect personal items during my tenure as a research subject. Most of my days and nights were spent in some test chamber, machines carefully monitoring every heartbeat, every fluctuation in my magical aura. There just wasn’t enough time since those days to collect more than a sparse set of belongings to call my own.
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>>30695254
>An inexpensive and inoffensive scarf for colder days or when the heating went out, a few framed pictures of places in this world I’d have liked to visit but never had the chance to, a rather heavy set of spellbooks magically condensed into a folded pocketbook, and of course, my crown. I hadn’t seen the thing in years when they finally gave it back to me, and I’d nearly forgotten its presence in this world. Of course, I never wore the thing, but I couldn’t have left it behind.
>And, ah, of course. A box set of Blu-Ray discs, of a curious television show called Friendship is Magic. While their world manifested broadly in ours, the glance into ours appeared only in this limited form. And yet, like in Equestria, millions flocked to the media, seemingly bewitched by an addictive factor they couldn’t quite place. And of course, it starred my friends and I. The contents of the show were inaccurate at best, and far less colorful than the true tales, but I could never blame the show’s creators. Children would have found real problems, like what to do with Tirek’s massive, rotting corpse, difficult to watch.
>Without a supply of researchers too much money to spend on video games and too little time to play them, I’d have to find entertainment of my own accord. But of course, that would probably imply driving into town and buying something.
>It was a fascinating prospect. I’d not been allowed any contact with the outside world at the research facility, and to finally have the opportunity once more was almost overwhelming. But even more, this world would be entirely different from any I’d known before. Their customs, culture, and cities were very different from those of Equestria. That much I could gather from my limited access to the Internet. But just how different would it be?
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>>30695258
>And what of the ponies? Hell, Chuck and Jewel were the first ponies I’d seen in over four years! But they held the same attitudes, the same dispositions as the other military figures around us – what would a normal pony be like, suffering under the weight of slavery? What looks would be cast my way by the uneducated, undisciplined, unpredictable masses of humans? What would humans in general be like outside of a military context?
>I quickly shook those thoughts away. I’d just arrived here, why would they take me outside so soon? No, they’d probably be watching me, making sure I’d behave myself here, before they ever trusted me enough to-
>”Wilcox you son of a bitch, turn that fucking music off! Thank you. Everyone, listen up! Change into civilian clothes, or nothing for you ponies, I guess. We’re going out to buy supplies in ten minutes.”
>A few muffled calls of “Yes, sir!” made their way through the door. But I paid that little heed; in just ten minutes, I would once again get a look at the outside world, and how it had changed without me.
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>>30695263
Quick update for tonight, to finish out the chapter. It would seem that I forgo the long-memed "bath scene" so prevalent in this thread for a shopping scene. But honestly, having been out of touch with the civilian world for a decent length of time made me realize just how much you anticipate a simple trip to the store. So, it gets thrown in again. No bully pls.

Also, why is thred so ded now? I mean, it's pretty active, but it took like a week for us to hit not even 450 replies. When I left, threads were moving every 3 days or so. It's not nearly as slow as when I joined, but...

Y'all lurkers need to get in Discord and let me convince you to write. Anyone can do it if they just try.

Pastebin at https://pastebin.com/6iL2wQNc
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>>30695258
>and of course, my crown.
awfully kind of them to return it. Then again they didn't just dissect her so it's a surprisingly kind military captivity for her in general. Looking forward to her interacting with the world at large.
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>>30695371
I actually had a pay issue with the military, so I got an idea of how they process pay and belongings. The short version is, there's typically a lot of paperwork and waiting, but you always get what's yours if you wait and do things the proper way. And like you said, she wasn't dissected or any of that shit. I'll be getting more into where exactly Twilight and the others fit into the government later.
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>>30695286
>shopping trip instead of bath scene

B-but, can't it be...
Both?
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>>30685880
Nice.
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>>30687221
>>30687140
i think you're missing the whole point. the point is just to provoke the image of pain and grief such actions would cause emotionally. Ponies and humans are on "different" sides, and someone anon wronged so much supporting the system of slavery with a twist of regret and hope for Lavender's unquestioning obedience. It would be excrutiating, even if anon dropped the whip without even using it. what she wanted was instead trying to collar and chain her.
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>>30688144
you sure shes not a changeling?
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>>30693007
>>30693339
Ooh, off the rails in the first post.
Let's go further, the authorities are summoned by the central server and beleive Lightning Dust went rampant and killed everyone.
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>>30695934
At one point I had actually considered making her a changeling. Ultimately I thought her character worked better if she wasn't doomed to villain status by birth and insatiable hunger for being loved, but rather that her fall was simply a result of being broken in her own way by slavery. It makes her something of a victim too - a wretched cunt of a pony, of course, but still a victim. Haute mentioned back when you first met her, she wasn't like this in Equestria. She used to believe in Friendship and Harmony too.
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Is there any stories about a slave trying to save their master?
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>>30696097
AW is doing one of them
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>>30696105
True, but I mean more like master is going to have their heart melted down by a cult of escaped slaves to forge an amulet that will allow them to destroy slavery.
Perhaps involving a secret moon base run by a joint crew of German and Russians since the 40s and now under constant attack by the Lunar guard.
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>>30696141
> joint crew of German and Russians since the 40s
Where do you even get that bullshit
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>>30696141
Nope. I think I would remember anything like that. Have you seen "Iron Sky"?
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Anyone know any good abuse stories?
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>>30696168
You could look up in SiM archives
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>>30696174
Thanks
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>>30696161
No.
What is it?

>>30696152
Because on the moon, you can shit on the party and they can only accept what happens from their new higher ups.
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>>30696237
Too bad humanity could not get human to stratosphere and back alive and in one piece. Either that's another conspiracy theory or I took it for 1940's and you meant 2040's.
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>>30696261
>stratosphere

Um, I've been there lots. You can buy a ticket for like $200.
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>>30696318
In 1940's, not today with all fancy boeings we have.
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>>30696261
Hitler had the Thule society bring over amenable ponies to aid the Nazi cause.
This is why the Western powers are so permissive of pony slavery, they're enemy combatants.
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>>30696432
> Thule
They were basically eating national money spreading occult bullshittery, they they were not even a thing before they picked random people from streets for random shenanigans for budget frauds.
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>>30695258
>Children would have found real problems, like what to do with Tirek’s massive, rotting corpse, difficult to watch.


No wait for this anon, one bit of reality in the colorfull land de mini horses
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>>30695286
The bath scene can be added after the first mission, a way to wash the blood and the emotions to see the suffering of the ponies result of its investigation on other dimensions
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>>30695286
Interesting premise, I'll look forward to what comes of Twilight in her re-discovery of both the ponies and human world as she moves to fight for the worst victims of slavery.

I was initially reading with some trepidation because I wasn't a fan of Glimmer of Hope's main characters by the end almost at all and I got a bit of deja vu reading Twilight's situation: actively doing nothing for the past 4 years save letting herself be used as an experiment, reduced to a NEET lifestyle by the end of it, while letting her people fall into chains and collars (who are in no clue of the truths of their situation) speaks to a level of defeat/nihilism that just doesn't feel like Twilight. It makes me feel as though she's willfully abandoned her people to the humans upon realizing there is no going back to Equestria.

Going out to help those most in need is a good start but if there is one thing I hope to see from the fic its Twilight truly realizing the sort of plight that goes on even for 'moderate' slave-owners' property and facing the ponies who have thought her absent all this time rather than hiding behind a mask. Own up to the responsibilities of being a princess and all. All that said, enjoying the start and looking forward to where it goes.

>MLP was a show in this universe
Was that a detail in Glimmer of Hope I missed? Usually in Slave stories MLP as a media franchise simply doesn't exist but here the show is a thing and the real-life ponies soooort of match up to it but with a heftier dose of reality to their true world than the show implies?
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>>30697050
>Was that a detail in Glimmer of Hope I missed?
it was mentioned they were expensive because of the show. That's why people know who dash is in dash and buster too.
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>>30697050
MLP is totally a thing in HJs world, and Glimmer lurks 4chan! I think Vega does the same thing.
When all of us are Anonymous, nobody knows I'm a pony.
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>>30697081
I have Sunset Shimmer use Reddit and support the Donald.
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>>30697081
>>30697211
>Female
>Posting on imageboards
Pick one
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>>30697211
As an illegal immigrant I think Sunset would have it in her best interests not to support the Don I think

>"These ponies, I tell you, they're coming through the mirror, NO ONE is checking them out, investigating whose a Siren or whose just out of Tartarus, they come into the country and they don't pay social security, it's a mess, believe me."
>"After we deport them back to Equestria, they're welcome to come back, but they have to come through the mirror LEGALLY."
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>>30697404
The Mirror predates the US.
Doing this violates the NAP and makes humanity the slave.
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>>30697484
by this logic any tree or stone cant be moved by anyone younger than it.
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>>30697531
Good.
Too much construction as is, people should have to live together.
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>>30697553
>people should have to live together
They do. In giant metropolitan cities.

And look what happens, forcing millions of people to live in tight, confined spaces leads to everyone hating everyone and huge murder rates.
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>>30697050
Perhaps I should move the flashback chapter(s) forward to help eliminate some of these questions quickly. Twilight did not willingly subject herself to research, and is not willingly contained by the US government. Any positive outlook from her stems from some combination of tired resignation and Stockholm Syndrome. I can't say much more because you touch on some concepts that are important plot points later.

As for GoH, you aren't supposed to like the main characters. The whole concept I operated on was that the main characters were the bad guys. From most perspectives on the farm, they were anywhere from bad to evil. They did some fucked up shit for, oftentimes, little more than a profit gain or self-serving interest. Personally, the only characters I think who lasted through to the end and legitimately did nothing wrong were Big Mac and Looking Glass. The others are very bad people and ponies.
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>>30697560
Lots of murders happen in cities, but that's just because lots of people live there. Per-capita murder is no higher in city vs country. Making everything happen in the same place is what cities are for.
>but if you fart in my apartment elevator, watch your ass
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>>30697626
>I should move chapters

No need, we trust you. Use those flashbacks to control pacing, no need to tell everything at once.
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>>30697626
I'll look forward to seeing those chapters then but feel free to do the plot as you had intended, no need to rush them on my account. Just stating my initial perspective on Twily at the start

Oh and, yeah no worries I got that GoH was SUPPOSED to be ambiguous / morally questionable, you said as much back then as well. Just that, the job was done well in me not liking them by the end, and this time I hope to find myself with a protagonist I could actually want to root for.
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>>30697560
> huge murder rates
Wtf are you talking about, there's more people so there's obviously more murders per square kilometer. And per hundred of people it's actually less than between rednecks who drunkenfire at will.
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>>30697641
^Right, everyone knows that a higher murder rate per capita has nothing to do with population. just specifically the nigger population.
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>>30697775
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>>30697778
>off by one
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>>30697786
Certainly
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>>30697793
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>>30697793
Thanks!
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Maud crush rocks with his hips when?
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>>30697800
>his
w-what
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Sad life of slave Trixxie story someday?
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Might a pony willingly sell themselves into slavery for a potentially endless supply of belly rubs?
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>>30697815
What if I make clop of Trixie selling herself into slavery to pay debts?
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New >>30697821
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>>30697826
hey you are not jingles
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>>30697827
He's gone today so I'm doing it.
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>>30697820
DO IT.
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>>30697875
Anything more specific?
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