Super Humans and Power Ponies! Issue #19

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Sunset! You need to rape the Joker!

>>30631325
Greg, when have your plans ever worked?

Rogue writefag here. I remember following this thread when it first started, I'm happy that it took off.

Is there any prompts or ideas for green that you guys want to see?

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>>30631747
something something pic related
people mostly do carbon copies of marvel heroes, make up your more original ideas

>>30631817
So hero, villain or damsel?
And her powers?

>>30631975
something tells me you're not a rogue writefag

>>30631985
Look here >>30631311 and you'll get your answer

>>30631992
I was being sarcastic

>>30632008
It's how i deal with sarcasm

>>30631817
I can work with that, anything else? Do we want a villain anon or a hero? Maybe a little something in between

>>30632136
cat burglar anon's father was an art collector and involved with the mafia, after a raid all paintings and statues were seized by the FBI, but he had hid hints on them

>>30632177
Sounds cool, what are we hinting at

>>30632283
If you ask me, I'm getting a Carmen Sandiego vibe from this

>>30632353
It's Cat's eye, actually. A kaito manga.

>>30632416
Ohhhh.
Is it any good?

>>30632353
>>30632416
Hrm, I'm piecing together a story from this. Hopefully it'll be interesting. I'm trying to come up with a more original power, but you must know that it's virtually impossible to be original with superheroes. We have dog welder for fucks sake

>>30632524
you don't have to be original, you just don't have to care about not copying anything.
Make a character because you want to make a character
don't copy one, and don't avoid traits just because it's something another char has
things don't need to be very original, it all depends on how a story is delivered, and I would read the 100th "good vs evil, hero saves world and damsel in distress" story

>>30631311
I deliver a drunk update

>Be Anon and right now you’re relaxing after dealing with a drugged Sunset for two days.
>It was a challenge to keep her in that bedroom.
>She got free at one point and got a hankering for tiger meat or was it loin meat.
>Point is that Sunset wanted to dine and dash at the local zoo and that wasn’t a good thing.
>Luckily Sour was able to help you stop her.
>Once you and Sour were able to drag Sunset back home, you tied her up with your backup restraints.
>Should have used them first, but what’s done is done.
>Now that Sunset isn’t drugged anymore, life can go back to normal.
“A now for a moment of peace,” you praised, leaning back in your chair and sipping your hot chocolate.
>The very next moment, the news jingle came from the TV.
> “We interrupt our currently scheduled program for breaking news. I’m Pixel Pizzaz and I’m here to report the news. We just got news that Spider-Woman has been sighted once more,” a new reporter announced, the camera showing a fairly attractive woman with blue hair in pigtails.
“And the moment has passed,” you groaned, putting down your drink and grabbed the remote.
>While you had enough to make the video, it doesn’t hurt to have a few more scenes.
>The video changes to show Spider-woman web swinging around a gazebo, but she wasn’t alone.
>Swinging with her was another woman in a red bodysuit with a tight blue hoodie.
>That was Scarlet Spider, one of Spider-Woman’s partners.
>Unknown to nearly everyone, Scarlet Spider was a woman named Evening Gleam and she was Sunset’s clone.
>She looked exactly like Sunset, but there were a few key differences.
>Mainly Evening had shorter hair and was more aggressive than Sunset.
>When you were told this, you almost called her a liar that there’s no way that clones could exist.
>To prove their point, Evening show you her organic web shooters which you knew were impossible to have.

>>30632542
>You instantly believed them since the chances of a twin getting the same exact powers were near impossible.
“This isn’t gonna end well,” you sighed, debating on whether or not to record the video.
>After a small mental argument, you decided to just record the video and see what happens.
>You don’t have to use the video if it goes south.
>Anyways the two spider heroes continued to use the gazebo as a swinging carousel.
> “WEEEEEEE,” they cheered.
>And they were enjoying themselves.
> “We’re queens of the world,” Spider-Woman yelled, letting go of her web ad launching herself towards a tree.
>It looked like she was gonna hit the tree, but was able to grab a branch at the last moment.
>Scarlet Spider released her hold on her web and crashed into Spider-Woman, sending them tumbling to the soft ground in a fit of giggles.
“At least they’re having fun,” you chuckled, watching them stumble to their feet.
>You watched as they made their way towards an open area of the park just as a blue haired woman landed in front of them.
>The person in front of the spider heroes was wearing a black bodysuit with a fur swimsuit, leg warmers and a soft looking tail.
> “Hi Spideys,” the new woman cheered, waving at them.
> “Hi Squirrel Girl,” Spider-Woman slurred, giving the squirrel themed hero a big hug.
>Scarlet Spider fell to the ground and tried to shoot webs in any direction.
> “Why can’t I touch anything?” Scarlet Spider wondered, flailing around.
>Squirrel Girl looked at the fallen hero and just shrugged.
> “What’cha doin?” Squirrel Girl asked, being released and set back on the ground.
> “Having fun, humiliating bad girls and getting new members for Girl Power,” Spider-Woman declared, raising her fists into the air in celebration.
>That sentence alone made you wonder why Sunset was set on making this group.
>You couldn’t remember anything that would explain her fascination with making a group.

>>30632552
>Turning your attention back to the TV, you watched as Squirrel Girl bounce around Spider-Woman.
> “Please let me join. Please please pretty please,” Squirrel girl begged, grabbing Spider-Woman’s arms.
>Said hero looked at the girl questioningly.
>Well as much as a person wearing a mask can look like.
> “Sure,” Spider-Woman answered, swaying side to side.
> “For realsies? Yay,” Squirrel Girl cheered, letting go of Spider-Woman and picking up Scarlet Spider.
>Scarlet Spider groaned loudly as Squirrel Girl started to dance with her.
>That caused you and Spider-Woman to laugh at how ridiculous the scene was.
>This went on for awhile before Scarlet Spider was released from the younger hero’s grip.
> “I’ve got a great idea. Let’s raid Doom’s castle and steal his stuff,” Squirrel Girl suggested.
“What? No,” you groaned, registering what she said.
> “Do it,” Spider-Woman giggled.
> “Do it,” Scarlet Spider slurred, getting up on shaky legs.
> “Doing it. Let’s get going and fast. I want to be home in time to show Dagi what I got,” Squirrel Girl announced, running off towards wherever.
>Spider-Woman shot a web and started to swing away with Scarlet Spider following her.
>The video ends once Pixel appears back on screen saying a few other things.
>You didn’t hear any of this as you leapt from your seat and rushed out the door, locking it.
>It didn’t take long for you to reach your car and pull out your phone.
>Once you were in your car, you instantly speed dialed a number.
>Luckily it only took a couple of seconds before the person picked up.
> “Hello?” the voice asked.
“Hey Sour. I need your help and fast. Sunset’s about to try and get into Doom’s castle. We need to stop her pronto,” you explained, starting your car and driving down the road.
> “I'll meet you at the park in two minutes. You got a way to track her?” Sour inquired, something rustling on the other side of the line.

>>30632562
>Must be changing or something.
“I got something, don't worry. Just get there asap,” you groaned, speeding past a cargo truck.
> “Got it asshole. You don't have to repeat yourself like a jackass,” Sour growled. “See you in a bit, Anon,” she gushed, hanging up on the other end.
>With that in mind, you high tailed it to the park too stop your girlfriend.

New installment of Drunk Spider-Woman has been delivered.

>>30632542
>or was it loin meat
I choose to believe that typo was intentional

>>30632585
It was since Sunset was drugged last updaye

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>>30632665
CAPES when?

>>30633436
Will start to work on it tomorrow.
Need to take a breather from Drunk to figure out how i end it

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>>30633600
this'll do

>>30631817
I wonder if she tastes like mint when you eat her out.

>>30633644
Also who's the artist?

>>30633694
Better question
>>30633644
Is there more?

>>30633733
I'll give you that

>>30633755
Holy shit dude, how are you so blessed by Lord Kek?

>>30633694
http://qosic.tumblr.com/archive/filter-by/photo

>>30633778
he's using up all the numbers again!

>>30633778
I don’t know. It seems i get doubles a least 3 or 4 times in a thread.
I'm starting to think I'm cursed.
Never do a thing were you ask for dubs cause i might win

So if Sunset and her clone fuck would it be masturbating? Or taking "Go fuck yourself" to a whole new level.

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>>30633811
And now you are too, MUAH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!
>>30633821
True.
>>30633838
....both?

>>30633838
Are you talking about my update?

>>30633844
Yes. And clones in general.

>>30633878
I say it's masturbation since they do it sometimes and don't invite Anon

>>30633886
Who's top in the clone masturbation setting?
Sunset or Evening?

>>30633904
They flip a coin to see who's on top the night.

I'm willing to bet I get a lot of Dubs in this thread

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>>30633838
>>30633878
let me answer that
it depends on how aligned the clone is with the original or how long it has been since they shared the same memories.
If it's like Sunset and Scarlet in my story, they are entirely different people and are kinda pissed about the fact that they share similarities.
if they'd fuck it would be sex

if it's a clone who got created 5 minutes ago and only exists for sex and who'll disappear after, where you can't even be sure if you're the clone or not.
Then it's masturbation since that's the clone's purpose.
if they'd fuck it would be masturbation

now if that's not the clone's purpose and they will sooner or later want an identity of their own it's not masturbation anymore.
it'll be a bit weird, but if one has that desire, the other will do. And if one does not, the other won't either, so it'll never be awkward.
not just relating to the act itself, but also to certain practices.
yet still, they'd get to be separate entities, in my book...
if they'd fuck it would be sex

captcha:
I finally did it.
I got the elusive double calle

>>30633991
Nope and that's a good observation

>>30634048
>Nope
hmm? what?
sorry, I should read your update now. I saw the other guy asking who's top saying "Evening", so i guess you have clones now, huh?

I was just rambling on about what my stance on the thing is.

>>30634085
I just added a clone for the hell of it. I figured it could be fun to do.
My nope was for you getting doubles

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bump

>>30634133
I still can't believe my luck

>>30635271
The dubs demand doubles in return.

>>30632542
>“A now for a moment of peace,”
And*
>>30632562
>Squirrel Girl bounce around Spider-Woman.
bounced*
> “For realsies? Yay,” Squirrel Girl cheered, letting go of Spider-Woman and picking up Scarlet Spider.
Sonata makes a cute squirrel girl...though I cant help but imagine her in a fur bikini now.
>>30632567
Oh god, is someone going to die?

>>30635434
thanks and i'll have to get back to you on that.

>>30635362
At this point, I might as well make it a challenge to see who many I get and make a prize

>>30635521
What's the prize going to be?

>>30635623
I was gonna just commission a pic of whichever character for the thread

>>30635638
Ohhh, sweet. Actually, who do we not have yet? Because the only one I can think of off the top of my head is Infamous Anon.

>>30635646
What're you talking about?

>>30635655
He is the only one that I can think of that we hadn't had a main character pic done for. Though I can see doing some more of the Villain girls from Therapist Anon getting some love would be nice.

>>30635662
I haven't done any main character pics involving Anon.
The only ones I had done were Spider Sunset and Sunny Succubus

>>30635676
Well they are main character pics, so they still count. Though now that you mention it, how many hero Anon's do we have pics for? Just the cheasy Captain Anon right?

>>30635706
That's the only one we got.

>>30635712
Huh....weird.

>>30635722
a bit

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>>30635733
Aside from this pic I cant think of any other pic that could be Anon, besides that Captain America Anon. Why do we not have more of that?

>>30635772
I can't speak for the others, but for me it's the simple fact that I don't have an idea oh what I would do.
I could commission a pic based on one of my greens, but I don't know which I would pick

>>30635804
Yeah, that would be a problem from having so many. Roll some dice?

>>30635835
Oh it's easy enough to get a scene figured out.
Like Tonic, I would have Tonic fight someone. The problem is who to choose.
The same with Infamous.
With Anon md, I need to pick the patient.
C.A.P.E.S. is still a bit early to pick art for it

>>30635854
I wasn't talking about the difficultly of finding a scene, I meant the difficulty of picking which one to get a pic made for.

>>30635864
oh but yeah maybe. Just need to remember who was what in each

Hey Trep, have you ever thought of the origin story where Sunset meets Evening for the first time?

>>30636302
>asking about deeper lore of a gag story

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>>30636380
Why not?
>"I'm the only clone who survived."
>"What happened to the others?"
>Evening shows pic related
>"This is one of my sisters."
>"Oh my Moon.."
>At that moment Anon's phone rings
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K2rwxs1gH9w
>Sunset's clone gives him a death glare.

>>30636457
So, we talking about grooming supers into becoming more powerful by killing in active combat?

Rogue here, got some good ideas for this story, and I'm almost ready to write.

I thought I was being clever, thought I'd give Anon the smoke powers from Infamous, but then I look at the thread more closely and realize it's been done already. F

Have any ideas for powers, guys?

>>30636481
No it's just a reference to the spider clones in the comics.

>>30636506
An Anon that can jump multiple dimensions?

>>30636506
Do it anyways, the Infamous story is dead and I wanted more of it for awhile now. Carry on new writefag.

>>30635804
Wait, what's all this going on about commissioning?

>>30636826
Well i seem to get doubles way too much so I'm kinda doing a challenge. If i get too much then i'll commission a pic

>>30636506
What did I just tell you here >>30632537 ?
Do what you're comfortable with
Even though I like a powerless anon, or at least a gizmo based one. Tech/techwear/magic artifact

“So you’re saying that I need a car. A super-car. A so-called ‘Spider-Mobile’ to travel through town quicker,” you say dully.
>“Yeah! Think about it! I mean, it’s gotta be quicker to drive in a super fast car than to swing, right?”
>You sigh at Anon and lean against your locker.
“Um, not really…”
>“Well why not?” Anon asks. “I mean, swinging sure sounds fun and all, but if you gotta get somewhere fast you can just hop in your handy-dandy Spider-Mobile and — ”
“And what, get stuck in traffic?” you say, scoffing.
>“No, you don’t, ‘cause it’s a super-car,” says Anon as he folds his arms. “And since it’s a super-car, it can stick to walls and grapple from buildings and stuff.”
>You grimace.
“That’s just…No. Just no, Anon.”
>“No, really, just think about it for a sec! If you had a super-car that can drive up skyscrapers and fires grappling lines from building to building, wouldn’t that be freakin’ awesome?”
>You shrug.
>“I mean, not really. I’d be fast enough as I am, so why bother? I mean, unless it can fly then I…”
>You stop for a second as a random thought comes to you.
“Wait a minute, would humans consider a car that can fly to even be a car at all?”
>Anon’s eyes open just a tad bit more, the question taking him by surprise.
>Still, despite its abrupt and out-of-nowhere nature, it still intrigues him enough so that he thoughtfully places his hand on his chin.
>“Whoa,” he says, but then shakes himself out of his thoughtful trance. “B-but say this one doesn’t. This Spider-mobile. Why wouldn’t you use it? How’d you still be faster without it?”
>sigh.jpg
“Anon, do you know how fast I go when I normally swing?” you ask.
>As you expected, Anon shakes his head ‘no’.
“I can swing at sixty miles per hour. Maybe more if I’m actually TRYING,” you say.
>Again, his eyes widen.

>>30638141
>“Whoa,” says Anon once again, though this time with truer conviction. “That’s…How do you do that?”
>You shrug lightly.
“Ate my veggies, did my homework, practiced adapting to the massive pressure that you face when your body is accelerating down the city skyline as you’re forced to learn how to swing using the speed from the acceleration that builds up with the velocity…”
>You grin at him.
“You know. The usual.”
>“Ain’t nothing usual about you, Shimmy,” says Anon, and he proceeds to open his locker and place his books he had put on the floor back inside it.
>Just before he swings the locker door shut, he pauses for a second, and returns his gaze to you.
>“What’s it like?”
>You smile.
“I might as well be flying. Imagine being in the sky, having been flung or swung forward, soaring through the very air itself like a missile. There’s nothing holding you and there’s nothing to catch you; all there is is the wind blowing your hair back and causing the wrinkles of your clothes to ripple in the powerful breeze. It’s weird. It’s liberating.”
>Anon blinks.
>“...But you still don’t have a car.”
“Oh shut up.”

That's all. Just had a free moment and wanted to bump the thread with something

>>30638154
I count 9 "say"s
You don't have to avoid "say" at all cost, it has it's purpose.
You can use it like punctuation, the mind just reads over it without recognizing it when used right, but if you become repetitive it can get annoying

otherwise, that's a nice way to bump

>>30637134
If you do a commission a pic make sure it's Drunk Twi and Sunny doing the Macarena.

>>30638582
It'll be that or Anon md with a patient or a Tonic pic

>>30638154
>>30638460
Better read than nothing.

>>30638620
who'll lie on the freudshean chair of Anon md.

>>30633671
No. It tastes like pussy. If it tastes like mint she may have an STD

>>30638634
Don’t know. I would most likely have a vote on who to go for

>>30638634
We should put Beans in the freudian chair for wanting to fuck his sister.

>>30638671
>unwarranted Beans abuse
hilarious
All he did this thread was namefag for no reason once

>>30638708
Are we abusing Beans? We should abuse Beans.

especially since keaton's gone

>>30638725
What happened to Keaton anyways?

>>30636543
>>30637292
>People are cool with it.

Sweet, muh fan fic is saved. Though I have to admit, doing a powerless anon that's like a watchdogs thing would be lit af. I might do that sometime in the future.

>>30636521
Dimension jumping. Sounds a bit too complex for me at least, I'm still rather new at the writing game, but it would be fun to talk about. What kind of dimensions are we talking about here? The "earth 2" kind or the spooky /x/ kind?

>>30638950
>A Watchdog Anon where even though he doesn't have powers can still fight powered humans using the city's utilities to his advantage.
>Electro is siphoning power so Anon puts a citywide blackout in order to weaken him.
F U N D I T

>>30638868
I miss him.

>>30638620
Or doctor anon with tonic anon in the chair, put all your anon's in one picture.

>>30639010
Me too, anon. He was, and is, my favorite writefag.

>>30639052
That could be fun

>>30639072
He was my favorite slut.

>>30639279
He was a slut for Untitled's feminine penis.

>>30639309
if he really does he'll show up today when he gets off work in about 2 hours

>>30639406
>when he gets off work in about 2 hours
H-how do you know this?

>>30639901
Keaton always announced when he was getting off work in earlier threads

>>30639901
I have mystical powers called "research", which allowed me to find him within like 15 minutes and get him to answer a direct message soon after
seriously, he wasn't that hard to find

.... Hi?

>>30640345
What’s up

>>30640427
Um, not much, just got off work and got home.
I was surprised to see someone asking after me in the /qst/ thread I do some work for.

>>30640501
You know how it is.
People want to hold your hand and stuff.
We got green as well. You know the whole shebang

>>30640524
Honestly, I was surprised that anyone remembered me at all.
I'll have to take a look around and see what's new!

>>30640538
Ah, dropping my trip, how have I missed thee
Let me count the ways

>>30640538
>>30640548
I hear you and i found out I'm cursed

>>30640555
Uhhhh cursed?

>>30640561
Yeah. Been getting dubs a lot

>>30640561
Trepp is using up all the dubs and trips

>>30640570
Goodness, I could think of a worse curse.

>>30640578
Yeah. Made a bet that if i got a lot in this thread, then i'll commission a pic for the thread

>>30640345
H E ' S
A L I V E

>>30640585
Do you count the trips you just got >>30640555
?

>>30640596
I'm gonna count every dubs and trips i get

>>30640594
I know, and I'm terribly sorry for being away for so long

>>30640628
Are you going to work on any short greens?

>>30640634
Almost certainly for Mutant Lover Anon.
If anyone has any ideas to spitball at me, I'm very game.

>>30640663
Did you do mutant lover Anon or is it a new idea?

>>30640687
Yeah, or rather, Genetic Fever Anon.
He's the Anon from the pyromancer Sunset and mermaid Sonata greens.

>>30640701
Cool. It's been awhile since I read your stuff so i forgot.
We got a few new guys as well

>>30640663
There was an idea last thread where Anon learned that Sunset can get easily scared causing her to fall on her butt and shoot webs at the same time.

>>30640726
Hahaha, I could do something for that

>>30640711
Oh? Name them?

>>30640770
Sea urchin, roorooroo and defiant

>>30640726
>>30640770
And her spidy sense doesn't go off because she knows Anon isn't dangerous.

>>30640782
>And her spidy sense doesn't go off because she knows Anon isn't dangerous.

Oh, I can think of many fun applications of that
In fact, that was sort of going to be the basis for why Sunset couldn't detect Venomnon from Shimmering.

>>30640855
Can't wait to see what you come up with

>>30640538
>implying we'd ever forget you
You were here with us from the beginning, senpai. Ain't no way we'd forget you.

>>30641175
Weren't you the one who started before Keaton?

>>30641175
I was here even before this became a thread, good times man.

>>30641175
D'aaw, thanks, Beans.

>>30641234
Well, yeah, but he was one of the OGs too.

>>30641726
I was just asking. I know who started in this thread, just had a brain fart

Are you guys playing any vidya recently?

>>30643141
Injustice 2, RWBY and Final fantasy 15

>>30643179
Nice, I'm working Injustice 2 myself, also Pokemon White 2 and Hitman Blood Money.

>>30643141
Bloodborne and Berzerk: Band of the Hawk

>>30643403
How are Black and White 2? They're the only Pokemon games I haven't played.

>>30643410
Truth be told, this is my first time playing BW2, but so far it's a lot better than BW1. I'm having a lot of fun so far.

>>30643454
Hmm. I did feel that black and white were the weakest entries in the series.

>>30638950
>We got Smoker Anon
Sweet.

>>30640501
>/qst/ thread?
Elaborate please.

>>30643489
IMO BW2 is a vast improvement, if you ever get a chance go play it.

>>30606034
>“Hey- ahh... What I wanted to talk to you about.”
>He takes his hand and begins to draw on your belly.
>Your juices still on him.
>Wait, that’s a letter.
>What was it?
>An O?
>Next one.... Another O?
>N... T
>Hmmm. “Don’t”?
>T... R... U... S... T...
>Ah, shit...
>S... O... M... B...
>Somebody? No, there was no ‘E’.
>R... A...
>Sombra.
>As in your professor?
>The celebrity scientist your university can justify the crazy tutoring costs for?
>You thought he’s a small fry in the Wonderbolts, but he was there from minute one of your diplomatic immunity talks.
>“So... you are right. Or you had the right hunch what I wanted to say, but then...”
>You’re not exactly following his line of thought anymore.
>“I wanted to break up with you, again-”
“Wha-!?”
>“Wanted to! Wanted to! But you convinced me. You’re right, of course. I mean- we should make the most of it while we still can, should we not?”
“Mhm...”, you nod slightly.
>Knowing he did want to break up with you saddens you a little.
>You convinced him though.
>Not that you have given him much of a choice.
>“I have found that... few things are in my control these days, and... the few things that are – like being with you – I want them to be made for the right reasons.”
>He hugs you tighter, smearing the letters in the process with more of your... juices.
>You blush.
>You really had been producing a lot for him to be that-
>And you never took of your pants.
>The uncomfortable feeling is slowly setting in.
>You don’t really have a change of clothes with you.

>>30643590
>It wouldn’t surprise you though if they would have clothes at the ready for you.
>Hmm...
>You could feel Anon’s manhood at your back, even through the layers of botth your clothes.
>That’s right, he didn’t get any yet.
>You had only been focused on your own pleasure.
>And now you had been talking about not trusting Sombra and how he had planned to break up with you.
>...
>It’s out of your system, and for you the moment had passed.
>But he deserves to get some stimulation of his own.
>Well, he didn’t need to make you cum immediately, he could have...
>Could have, should have, would have... these don’t matter.
>What matters is what happened.
>You need to turn this so it’ll be nice for you too, because you’re not in the horny mood where giving a blow job sounds hot.
“Hey, I’m kinda... sticky,” you turn your head back to him, “I want to scratch shower sex of my list as well.”
>As much as it pains oyu to leave his embrace you take his hand off of you and stand up.
>Yeah, you can’t use those pants anymore.
>“Shower sex? That’s- ahh... sure, why not?”
>You look back over your shoulder.
“Then come.”
>You slap your ass slightly, giving him the slightest show.
>Walking towards the bathroom you feel like never before have you paid as much attention to your hip swing as you are doing right now.
>Feet in almost a line before the other.
>Not too much, you want to feel sexy while not appearing slutty.
>He was behind you, so you don’t see him; the sudden rustling of the sheet tells you enough, though.
>He had been staring and only realized too late he was supposed to come after you, even though you specifically said so.
>“Coming.”

>>30643499
A quest thread on, well, /qst/ that I've been having fun with and writing little fics for. It's based off the Star vs The Forces of Evil cartoon.

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>>30643596

>>30643645
Got a link to said thread?
>>30643656
Kek

>>30643717
http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive.html?tags=Star%20Vs.%20Quest

>>30643596
>the layers of botth your clothes.
both*
>“I want to scratch shower sex of my list as well.”
off*
>As much as it pains oyu to
you*
>“Coming.”
Soon*tm.
We get the reason for the typos man. Its cool.
>>30643739
Will start reading soon.

>>30643751
Go for it, friend

Rogue here, expect a little intro to this green I have in mind at some point tomorrow. We'll see if the idea is worth a damn

>>30643808
You need to namefag.

>>30643939
Give him time

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>>30643808
Every idea is worth a damn, Anon.

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I have to go the hospital again. They called me just now; I'm going under tomorrow. Super nervous. Post Shim Shams for luck, please.

>>30643596
>Be Anon.
>What the fuck has gotten into Sunset?
>First she’s trying to get you to finger her in a conference room, then she’s almost jumping your bone the second you’re alone, even though you had technically broken up.
>And she’s super strong, she could totally overpower you easily.
>You didn’t exactly feel safe.
>And she pressured you into it.
>She had been crying, basically begging you to continue the relationship, and jumped you without warning.
>On the surface you had a hot girl on you carving dick.
>On the inside you were guilt tripped, slightly scared, pressured, and the mood hadn’t been right.
>Needless to say your small friend had remained small until you felt more secure.
>Namely when you took control of the situation again and started with some foreplay to keep her at ease until you were ready yourself.
>However, your mad skills and your full lethality built made her melt away within seconds.
>She must have been pent up a lot, because you barely even started with your treatment, nor did you pick up any speed.
>When you realized she was about to cum it was too late already.
>Then you just took the opportunity to get a personal record of how quick you can make a girl cum.
>She was spent.
>Utterly defeated.
>You think passing out cause of an orgasm was a myth, but you made her do it.
>You don’t even believe it had been that good of an orgasm...
>She must really have issues.
>Anyway, you didn’t think she’d be able to go again after that and you just started to talk.
>She needed to be warned about Sombra.
>It wasn’t the most romantic thing to do, and then you even confessed that you did plan to rebuke her for her behavior in the conference room, and that you had planned to break up with her again.
>And then she dropped the bomb.
>Just as the erection you had been fighting for was about to die down, she said she’s sticky.
>She wants to try shower sex because it’s on the list.
>There is a list.
>Sunset has a list.

>>30645047
just a little something to keep your dicks wet

>>30643751
Thanks, Internet Explorer Anon

>Its cool
*it's

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>>30644999
Oh, and good luck, have the only pic I have on my phone.
I didnt see you earlier while the train was passing through a station with free wifi.

>>30645048
Please, my penis can only take so much!

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Didn't know that I didn't update my pastebin for C.A.P.E.S. https://pastebin.com/1Ae9AFN4

>>30644999
The only pic I can give
I really need a new Sunset pic

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>>30644999
She'll be waiting for you when you get out!

I counted the dubs i got so far and decided to end the challenge early.
I owe the thread 1 lic

>>30631311
I want to fuck Twilight while she eeps and moans like Raven.

>>30646073
Pic i meant pic

>>30646085
>not wanting to make her breakfast because she sounds like Raven in the mornings

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>>30635004
>all the blushing
>from both of them
im not saying i dont like it, because i do. im just thinking from the perspective of actually being therein this situation. if i were there with her and this was happening in front of me, i would be pretty distracted. almost to the point of annoyance.
>"twilight...focus!"
>"stop getting off on this, you are literally having the life squeezed out of you!"

>>30646465
Blushing is caused by the sympathetic nervous system which triggering your 'fight or flight' reflex. It triggers when we are under stress or angry, but also when we want to hide due to, say, an embarrassing situation.

know your human lore, mate

>>30645047
>On the surface you had a hot girl on you carving dick.
craving*
>>30645048
STOP WITH THE COCK TEASING YOU MADMAN!

>>30646590
>craving
why do I always write it wrong?

>STOP WITH THE COCK TEASING YOU MADMAN!
nah

>>30646497
>implying they both aren't getting off
though you may have a point. i mean, the artist could not possibly be thinking and portraying lewdness for what im assuming is a commission peace.
though your knowledge is impressive, you fail to take into account the artistic dimension of the discussion.

>>30646682
my knowledge says it's a regular response, but my wisdom lets me know with absolute certainty it's meant to be lewd

>>30646705
myes, quite

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>>30645047
>mfw I realize my hot gf has a list

>>30646840
>has a hot girlfriend
>Implying
Kek m8, grea8 bai8

>>30646861
what if I /am/ the hot gf with a list?

>>30646873
That is a technicality, and does not count. As you, me, and everyone else here, doesn't exist.

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>>30631311

>>30646873
Then Beans will try and fuck you.

>>30647362
I'm pretty sure it's his sister that he wants to fuck.

>>30647547
Sister Beans is a dude

>>30647547
I mean, I did write that one thing...

>>30647547
Boy, there ain't nothing I wanna do to my sister. She's my sister. If you fuck your sister, great. I don't. We're just friends.

>>30647362
I don't even know how to respond to that.

>>30648052
My skeleton still shivers in disgust because of that.

>>30648074
Hahahaha

>>30648074
But aren't you a sex addict? Shouldn't you still be aroused by your sister.

>>30648195
Mot a sister but a brother

>>30648195
Can we let the incest thing go please?

If you really need to talk about that then go here
>>30647792

Rogue here, here's the start.

>To any other person, this cool autumn night would feel as peaceful as any other. The moon casts its faint glow through the cloudless sky and onto the damp grass and dying trees as the multi colored leaves fall soundlessly to the ground.
>A wolf howls in the distance, but the forested area is otherwise quiet as the indigenous creatures have already prepared themselves for the frigid chill to come.
>To any other person the night is unthreatening, but for the security guards stationed at Filthy Rich's private estate, conflict is in the air.
>They're sure of it, the lot of them. A sort of sixth sense, a feeling in their guts brought on by years of service to a man with many enemies and shady allies.
>Though the air is thick with the perceived malice of some anomalous victimized party, the guards can't quite pin point the source of the tension. Despite this, they clutch their weapons to their chests and try their best to shake off the feeling of dread.
>They increase patrols and double check entrances and exits, staring out into the night and daring anyone to attempt to gain entry, unaware of the shit-storm headed their way...
>Anon grumbles to himself as he runs through the woods toward his destination, the only sounds filling his ears being his footfalls on the dampening leaves and his heavy panting.
>He had grown some since his birthday, and his tailored suit was beginning to fit rather poorly. Why he decided to take on such a mission in a suit is beyond him, but hind sight is always 20/20.
>He quickly overcomes his frustration with his tight shoes and the limited play in his shoulders when through the gaps in the weft of bare branches, he sees the light of Filthy Rich's mansion glowing like a beacon of destiny in the distance.
>The cold air stings his cheeks as he picks up his pace, and the words of his father, Nito, echo in his mind.

>>30648785
>"The three families are in danger, Anon. Our confederacy is only as strong as its weakest link, and we have a very weak link on our hands. There's going to be a change in management."
>The mafia consists of three families: The Rich's, the Blueblood's and the Ymous's. Being the son of one of the family heads, Anon Ymous is a high ranking member of the triad. Even more significant is his roll considering his curious dominion over smoke that developed in his early childhood.
>Ever since his powers appeared, Anon has trained and honed his abilities into a dangerous and efficient weapon, with which he enforces the syndicate's will.
>His father was always protective of him, never wanting notoriety for his only child, so there are scarce few who know of Anon's talents, and even scarcer have ever lived to tell the tale should they cross him.
>Anon has seen his share of action over the past few years. Brutalizations, assassinations, subterfuge and espionage, but this mission was special.
>Filthy Rich is a fuckin' rat. He gets full immunity, witness protection, safety for his own assets, countless benefits to give the family over to the Feds.
>A few agents caught on to his shifty behavior and caught wind of his plan before he's been able to execute it. This means there's only a small window of opportunity to take care of business before shit goes south.
>Much to his surprise, Anon's father put him in charge of the task. When questioned, Nito explained that this was Anon's opportunity to prove himself to the family, to cement the fact that he isn't just a pawn, but a powerful leader who can make the decisions necessary to do what must be done.
>Anon replays the conversation he and his father had had before he departed over and over again in his head.

>>30648794
>They both stood in Nito's office. The room was decorated in a retro style to imitate the late '30's, a time period that Nito was quite fond of. Anon will never forget the scent of the new leather chairs assaulting his nostrils as his father stared at him intently, resting his open palms on a pile of nondescript papers laying atop his desk.
>"Tell me son, to whom do you answer?"
>After a moment of confused silence, Nito refined the question.
>"Who do you work for?"
"You, father...and the syndicate."
>Nito shook his head in disapproval.
>"Wrong, son. With the passing of your birthday, it is necessary for me to give you the speech that your grandfather gave me."
>Anon's father walked from behind his desk to stand in front of him, symbolizing himself as an equal rather than a superior.
>"You are a man now, and men follow their own rules, they answer to no one. It is my job to point you in what I feel is the right direction, but your values are ultimately yours to choose."
"I think I understand."
>Nito placed his hand on his son's shoulder.
>"Good. I send you alone on this mission because I have full faith in you. From this point forward, Filthy Rich's fate is in your hands, make me proud."
>Satisfied with remembering the conversation for the umpteenth time, Anon again set his thoughts on the task at hand.
"You're going down Rich, you rat bastard."
>Anon's sprint slowed to a stop as he reached the perimeter fence to the estate. A chain link fence topped with barbed wire...no problem at all.
>He lingered at the fence for a moment as he regarded the mansion and its fortifications. This is far from the hardest job he's done, but he needs to be careful anyway. If the guards are alerted to his presence, Rich might fuck out of there before the fun even starts.
>He begins mapping out his plan of attack, when he suddenly sees movement out of the corner of his eye. He whips his head over to see a single security guard on patrol.

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>>30648799
>Anon's brain goes to work computing a way to stay hidden, but half a second later the guard sees him.
>"Hey!" The guard brings his hand up to his radio to alert the others, but Anon is too quick. Tendrils of smoke roil in the palm of Anon's hand, and embers begin to glow in the center. A second later, he shoots his arm out and sends the heated blast at the guard, burning a hole in his vest where his radio had once been.
>The guard falls onto his ass, smoke billowing out of his vest as the fabric begins to catch fire. The man grabs for the sidearm at his hip and points it at Anon.
>In one swift motion, Anon reaches up and behind him for the aluminum baseball bat sticking out of his uni-strap backpack and slashes it down, knocking the gun out of the guard's hand.
>The guard whimpers for a moment as the tendrils of smoke move from Anon's hand to swirl around the bat.
>Anon picks the man up and throws him belly first against the fence.
"Happy Valentine's Day."
>Before the guard can look back, anon cracks him in the back of the head with a loud *ping*.

>>30648802
Go on...

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>>30648802
Good work, no obvious mistakes, but still a few things bothering me.
I'm looking forward to see where this is going.
Analysis needs to wait until I get off work tho and habe the proper time on hand.

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>>30649937
Go easy on me, I'm but a gentle soul

>>30650297
>Go easy on me,
nah

>I'm but a gentle soul
also nah

>>30650297
>Go gentle
>On a board where bullying writefags is encouraged and is a meme at the same time
Where do you think you are?

>>30631311
I just learned that Sunset has a pet lizard named Ray.

Goodnight thread

>>30650696
That’s interesting

>>30650696
there's a Lizard joke in there somewhere, but it's too early for me to be clever

>>30650696
I want to help Sunset feed Ray crickets.

>>30650696
Passage from it.
>"Don't worry Ray, I'll take care of you."
Muh heart.

>>30652641
Very cute.
I'm tempted to have that in one of my greens

got off work at 7 today, had a bad day so no written lewd
now let's take my frustration out on Treasure Mage

>>30653028
I bet Sunset is the type of person that would put a blanket over her lizard's terrarium when Anon and Sunset have sexy times.

>>30653143
I can see that happening

> "Sorry Ray, but you're a little too young to see this," Sunset explained, putting a blanket over Ray's tank.
>the next few hours Ray heard everything.

>>30653070
It happens

>>30653205
>But because Ray is a lizard he forgot all about it due to his tiny reptilian brain.

>>30653219
>Afterwards, Ray was given many dead crickets.
>He was never sure why, but he always enjoyed when Anon would come over.

>>30653274
I should add this in Drunk Sunset

Also should i make a poll for the pic

>>30653219
>>30653274
>>30653341
What kind of lizard would it be?

>>30653359
Does it say? I only know of the blue tongued skewt

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>>30653359
I'm thinking of this.
>Go to Sunset's place for the first time.
>She says that she has a pet.
>You expected that Sunset has a cat or a small dog.
>See this instead.
>That's metal as fuck.

>>30653383
It doesn't say just "A pet lizard named Ray."

>>30653400
What kind is it then?

>>30653437
Sorry I had a mini stroke, I meant to say it doesn't say what kind it is.

>>30653455
Oh ok.
Guess Ray will join Anon in Drunk Sunset

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>>30653393
>>30653464
I vote for this. It's a bearded dragon.
>Even though he can't speak, Ray has unlimited terrors to tell that happened in the bedroom.

>>30653619
Cool lizard

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>>30648794
>Even more significant is his roll considering his curious dominion over smoke that developed in his early childhood.
>roll
I want that roll

>>30653890
That wasn't a typo, Anon is a godly baker. That's his actual power: making baked goods that give you extraordinary talents

>>30653902
『P E A R L J A M』

>>30653902
I never claimed it was a typo.

Look... I'm getting tired here. I leave it be for the time being.
dumping what I found so far.

>>30648785
>>To any other person, this cool autumn night would feel as peaceful as any other.
No comma here.
Two "any other"s in the same sentence makes it sound odd.

>The moon casts its faint glow through the cloudless sky and onto the damp grass and dying trees as the multi colored leaves fall soundlessly to the ground.
Way too long sentence to set the mood. It's getting hard to read, but long sentences will be a theme in your writing style.

>>A wolf howls in the distance, but the forested area is otherwise quiet as the indigenous creatures have already prepared themselves for the frigid chill to come.
Way too long again.
The contradiction is retroactive. You want to point out the silence, not the howl.
You should split it up and completely turn around the pieces of information you are giving out.
"Creatures prepare to rest/for cold. Silence is only interrupted a lone howl."

>>To any other person the night is unthreatening, but for the security guards stationed at Filthy Rich's private estate, conflict is in the air.
You begin with "To any other person this/the (cool autumn) night..." for the second time. Actually you're saying the exact same thing as the first sentence did. The only difference being that you added exposition on the security guards.
The comma after "estate" isn't needed as the subject of the sentence is "security guard stationed at Filthy Rich's private estate". You can make it an attribute clause, like "For the security guards, who are stationed at Filthy Rich's private estate, conflict is in the air."
The sentence is also slightly too long.

>>30648785
>>They're sure of it, the lot of them. A sort of sixth sense, a feeling in their guts brought on by years of service to a man with many enemies and shady allies.
The flow here does not fit. "conflict is in the air. they are sure of it" is still fine, but "the lot of them" feels like a hickup, and when you continue with "A sort of sixth sense, a feeling in their guts [...]" you are seemingly describing something further which you established earlier. But you didn't. "it" in the previous sentence meant the fact that there is conflict in the air. The sureness of it is the sixth sense. so you are missing something or should continue differently. Let me attempt it:
Conflict is in the air, they're sure of it. It's a misgiving, a sort of sixth sense. A feeling in their guts brought on by years of service to a man with many enemies and shady allies.

>Though the air is thick with the perceived malice of some anomalous victimized party, the guards can't quite pin point the source of the tension.
That's a lot of big boy words in a sentence which, once again, is quite long.

>Despite this, they clutch their weapons to their chests and try their best to shake off the feeling of dread.
Why "despite"? What are you contradicting? You've given a reason. You need "due to that", "thus, "therefore" or whatever.

>They increase patrols and double check entrances and exits, staring out into the night and daring anyone to attempt to gain entry, unaware of the shit-storm headed their way...
The sentence should probably start in past tense what already happened: [...] increased patrols, double check of entrances (omit exits, it's the same thing and sounds redundant)
After that what's happening at the moment (maybe in it's own sentence): [...] are staring out, daring anyone [...]
Then... how are they unaware? They ARE preparing for something.
Something something underestimating what could possibly come, I dunno. It just sounds odd.

>>30653928
Thanks Untitled, just got up and getting ready for work. Internet Explorer Anon, out.

>>30648785
>>Anon grumbles to himself as he runs through the woods toward his destination, the only sounds filling his ears being his footfalls on the dampening leaves and his heavy panting.
Too long!
You always run towards your destination (unless you run away from something), so it can be ommitted easily.
Why is he grumbling? The emotion comes out of nowhere, especially considering he is the shitstorm about to go down on the guards.
What his footsteps are is kinda unimportant to the sentence so it can be ommitted as well. And why are you even describing what he hears to begin with? You want to set a mood but you're doing it in too few sentences which then turn out to bee too long. This particular piece of info has no real value to the story, does it? Especially since you go on about his person afterwards. It would flow better if you tell us who he is, then what state he's in. (Unless you skip the personal introduction entirely)
I can tell you want the heavy panthing to lead over into the too tight suit, but you don't connect the sentences in a sensical way.

>He had grown some since his birthday, and his tailored suit was beginning to fit rather poorly.
So maybe skip the "what he can hear" part in the previous sentence and go on with him panting heavily. Then because of the ill fitting suit, and then because he has grown


>Why he decided to take on such a mission in a suit is beyond him, but hind sight is always 20/20.
Here I believe you missed opportunity for characterization.
He took the suit because he wants to look sharp, calculating that, in case he gets caught, he still has style.
In hind sight it's stupid? When has a suit ever been a good idea for a run in the forest and possible infiltration of someones mansion? Without my suggested reason the idea seems like a genuinely stupid decision, in fore- middle- and hind sight.

>>30648785
>He quickly overcomes his frustration with his tight shoes and the limited play in his shoulders when through the gaps in the weft of bare branches, he sees the light of Filthy Rich's mansion glowing like a beacon of destiny in the distance.
long sentence fetishist have a good time with your writing style.
Comma between "when" and "through". You don't really know how attribute clauses work, do you?
The reasoning in this sentence is in an odd order again. After we've been through this reasoning-thing once or twice I do believe that you prefer it this way around. My personal belief is that the effect should follow the cause.
He sees the light and forgets about the minor discomfort the ill fitting suit causes him

>beacon of destiny
really?

>The cold air stings his cheeks as he picks up his pace, and the words of his father, Nito, echo in his mind.
I don't get why this is one sentence. These two things have nothing to do with one another.

>>30648794
>>"The three families are in danger, Anon. Our confederacy is only as strong as its weakest link, and we have a very weak link on our hands. There's going to be a change in management."
I don't quite get if it's meant to be a warning or an opportunity.

>Our confederacy [...] The mafia [...] the triad.
Decide on a term and stick with it. as a nitpick: "Triad" is the name of a specific organization. it's not a term like mafia

>Even more significant is his roll considering his curious dominion over smoke that developed in his early childhood.
I'm having trouble following you again as you're phrasing it oddly again.
curious domain? Are you no native speaker? "curio" for strange? Try "peculiar"
Also: try to avoid "that", try using "which" or "who" depending on where you want to use "that" and replace it if it fits.

Maybe...
His role is even more significant considering he has a peculiar dominion over smoke, an ability which developed in his early childhood.

>>30648794
>>Ever since his powers appeared, Anon has trained and honed his abilities into a dangerous and efficient weapon, with which he enforces the syndicate's will.
trained and honed. dangerous and efficient weapon. Kinda redundant, don't you think?
also maybe omit "his abilities" and go for "Ever since these powers had appeared he honed them [...]"

oh, syndicate! New word for organized crime.

>>His father was always protective of him, never wanting notoriety for his only child, so there are scarce few who know of Anon's talents, and even scarcer have ever lived to tell the tale should they cross him.
Break the sentence up after "only child"
>[...] scarce few [...] even scarcer [...]
[...] a hand full of [...] even fewer [...]
Remove "should they cross him", everyone get's what "even fewer lived to tell the tale" means.

>>[...] to give the family over to the Feds.

family! Only a few more and you've run out of synonyms.
You also introduced the organization as "three families" in the beginning, so just using "family" here doesn't fit really... unless, you know, stick to one term that's not "family"

>>A few agents caught on to his shifty behavior and caught wind of his plan [...]
Caught and caught. Ehhh....
You can find a better way to phrase that.
>before he's been able to execute it.
That's... ahh... a past tense, isn't it? It's after them catching him doing so, but this is still past tense from the present.
not "before he's been" but "before he was able"


All this criticism is through the lens of my personal opinions, and those are not general truths.

>>30650297
>wants to be treated gentle

>>30653928
>>30653934
>>30653942
>>30653946
>>30654066
>is cold hearted bitch with 14 inch strap-on

>>30654066
That's...quite the list sir. I'll be honest I wasn't prepared for there to be this much.

I'm kinda learning as I go. I'll try to improve and take this into consideration, sorry if the illiteracy made the story hard to enjoy.

>>30654169
It's just to help you

>>30654169
Nah dude, your writing isn't as bad as you're making it out to be.
I liked your prose and writing cadence. How you laid out the setting with the syndicate and Ymous family has a lot of potential for development and expansion later on in the story.
Practice is the only way to improve. I wanna see where the plot goes.

>>30654169
Just take it as a way to better yourself

>>30654169
Welcome to 4chan, the land of proper writing and reviews. You want to improve, this is the best place. Fun fact, we are one of the nicest threads on the board.

>>30654169
4chan fugged up yesterday so I hadn't been able to respond anymore.
I enjoyed it, otherwise I wouldn't have bothered to do anything.
You only have tol long sentences and occasionally disrupt the flow of your own story which ends up as being hard to read.
Can I ask if you're a native english speaker?

>sir
Oh boy

>>30654169
>sir
untitled is grill

>>30654169
Don't worry, you're not that bad. Untitled is just keen. You're good, senpai. She's harsh on you because she likes you, unlike Beans.

>>30658080
>>30658192
I never confirmed that

>>30657614

>>30658080
W8 wut?

>>30658585
Nor have you ever denied being a trap, ma'am (male)

>>30659615
ok, let's go back to "sir"

on an unrelated note: I'll be in the trumplands tomorrow and have the chance to buy me some murica merc like twinkies and mountain dew. You know, stuff that we don't have in europe.
Anyone got suggestions on what shit I should buy?

>>30660574
I don't have any products in particular. I'd say to visit a Walmart if the state you're going to has them.
They've got literally everything American being sold in large servings.

>>30660992
I need to clarify:
I'll be visiting an army base/town where people live with their families too, there is shittons of imported goods, I'll not be not real american soil

>>30661012
That sounds cool

>>30661012
Oh okay.
Aside from candies and beverages, American fast food chains. Which chains are available to you depends on what state you're visiting.

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L A D S

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>>30662652
Look at the shampoo bottle it's fucking horse shampoo.

>>30662652
>tfw the magic pone sushi making girl from another universe has a better apartment then anywhere you have ever lived.
Welp, someone shoot me.

>>30662652
>You will never cuddle with her during a comfy Saturday morning after shad a long night of fighting the Sinister Six.

>>30662921
Don't say that. I'm sure you'll get one like that someday

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this is my attempt at a design for sunset as spider-woman.

>>30664312
Cute!

>>30664312
pretty cool

>>30662652
>YWN live the poorfag life with Spider-Shim.

>>30662652
As a struggling actor, this triggers me, but then >>30662669 erases my rage.

>>30664312
I fucking love this. Original design, interesting pattern. The shoes on her costume remind me of Spider-Gwen, and while usually I'm not a fan of coloring the webs/lens of the eyes differently, it seems to work in my opinion despite it being yellow on red (a color pattern that I usually can't stand thanks to McDonald's). I also like how you did her emblem with the bottom legs and the butt of the spider. I'm not exactly a huge fan of the red and yellow pattern stopping at the sleeve, only to be picked back up at her fingers, but at least the web-cartridges cover that up. I like your style.

And as much as I love hips, the build you give her here really makes her seem like an actual teenager and the shorter hair length -- while probably being done to make it believably hide under her mask -- assists in giving her that more youthful appearance. Very good job, man. Would love to see you do more and play around a bit.

Working on a C.A.P.E.S. update and will post later

>>30667899
Cool, can't wait for that and Drunk Shimmer and Ray.

>>30661012
I was misinformed by my friends
It was an american military base but more octoberfest than anything else

I didn't even get twinkies and found that mountain dew baja blast and the 7up cherry don't fit my tastes

But the frustration of a 3 hour car ride can be worked out in some lewd writing now
update whenever

>>30667921
I live in Burgerland I can send twinkies.

>>30667957
It's k, I'll get a business trip to arizona sooner or later

>>30668054
>Rip your intestines
Good luck surviving your inevitable heart attack.

>>30668074
I am aware of the dangers involved of eating a twinkie

>>30668078
Bitch, if you are getting a Twinkie in Arizona then we are deep frying that sucker. Covering it chocolate. Then sticking it between two fresh sugary doughnuts. And if necessary force feeding you it.

>>30668078
If you're in Pheonix, try In-n-Out.

>>30668108
Chandler, actually, so yeah, will do.

>>30668101
my body is ready

>>30668122
Lies, no ones body is EVER ready for the Twinkining.

>>30668122
When you try In-n-Out for the first time, I suggest you get a double double with animal style fries. It's as 'Murican as it gets.

>>30668225
>animal style fries
why am I imagining animal shaped chips?
you know? like crackers?

Anyway, I'll remember this for when the time really comes

>>30668277
>imagining animal shaped chips
You are going to be in for a surprise.

>>30668380
is it regular fries with some puke-looking sauce on top?

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>>30668395
Yes and sweet baby Jesus are they good.

>>30668395
>>30668421
tfw no in-n-out burger in your state

New short:
http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x5w21nt

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>>30669530
>RAY IS A LEPARD GECKO

>>30670270
>Already delicious Spider Sunset gets even thicker after the breeding frenzy her spider and horse hormones gave her
>Anon can now crawl away after pounding that cushion

>>30670259
>TFW Your spider-horse girl owner's bf gives you the giant crickets to eat.

>>30670333
>All you have to do is wait until the creaking and moans stop, and for your owner to take the blanket off your terrarium.

>>30670333
>>30670354
Kek,
>Rey now becomes trained to be happy when they have sex
>Even after having medical waste dropped on him and becoming huge and strong and tall he still waits outside the door to Anon and Sunset's bedroom for crickets when their done fucking.

>>30670354
>Be Ray
>Your owner is getting Snu-Snued right now which means in a few hours you'll get the crunchy cockroaches for dinner.
>Thanks based Green dick man.

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>>30670378
>Ray becomes a 50 story radeoactive-fire breathing Kaiju.
>He also can detect when Sunset and Anon are getting it on from the other side of the planet.
>Every time he crashes through the city about an hour after Sunset climaxes looking for the big crickets.

>>30670397
>pic related

>>30670456
>Kaiju Ray
>All hope seems lost the Sinister Six has beaten Spider Girl and the Power Ponies.
>In one desperate last move Sunset takes a dog whistle and blows it.
>Sinister Six start laughing until the ground starts shaking.
>They look up and see a godzilla with leopard gecko coloring and a smug ass face.

will post the update tomorrow

>>30670715
Hype

>>30669530
people who own reptiles or snakes are freaks in bed
that's a fact

>>30672288
I take it you know from experience?

>>30672364
everybody knows that

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Looks like I've got you right where I want you, Spiderwoman

>>30672440
in bed?

>>30672440
Sunset likes it when Anon plays games with her

>>30672288
This is true. Same goes for people who own animals like that in general. Parrot people are weird as fuck. In fact, most people who get into animal rehab or something like that are usually strange.

>>30672440
There is no way she is not sore after sleeping like that.

>>30673361
>There is no way she is not sore after sleeping like that.
And the pounding last night didn't help.

>>30673898
>inb4 you repost the other as well

>>30673878
>implying if there was any "pounding" Anon wouldn't stay to cuddle afterwards

>>30673933
he has a dayjob

>>30673936
In highschool?

>>30673908
Oh my fucking god you autist I just found it on Derpibooru. Look at the filenames.
Let people post pictures without you screeching.

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spoder

>>30673908
>How dare someone post images on a image board.

>>30673898
>You will never spend time with Sunny on the beach during a quiet day.

>>30675407
>Your quiet day at the beach will never be interrupted by Rayzilla fighting a kaiju cricket.

>>30675577
>You decide to take Sunset to the beach during her quiet day and help her comfort after what happened three nights ago.
>Sunset was taking a bubble bath right when she got to apartment from stopping two bank robberies. She didn't notice that Ray was in the tub with her and only noticed him when she was draining the tub.
>You heard a blood curling scream from her.
>"RRRRAAAYYY!"
>You run in and see Sunset barely wrapped in a towel trying to dig her hand in the drain.
>"No, no, no, NO!"
"What happened Sunny?!"
>"I k-killed Ray, I didn't s-see him when he was in the tUUU-AH!"
>She slumps her body into crying into your shoulder.
>You start stroking her hair, whispering.
"It's not your fault Sunset, you didn't know..."
>Present time.
>Sunset is still really sad on what happened, but today was the first time you saw her laugh in few days.
>Small victories right.
>Overall despite recent events, today at least is good.
>Suddenly you hear what sounds like a bass boosted cricket chirps.
>You turn around and see five huge crickets the size of buildings.
>The chirps are so loud that they broke nearly all windows of the nearby buildings and cars.
>Sunset starts making a run to the car to grab her suit, but one of crickets stepped on the car crushing it.
>Fuck your Switch was in there.
>Sunset can't compromise her identity, so basicly we're sitting ducks until S.H.I.E.L.D pulls their heads out of their ass.
>Sunset sees a crying child about to be crushed, runs and grabs him. She finds his hysteric mother and gives the child to her.
>You look at the water and see big spotted lizard come out of it standing on it's two hind legs.
>Holy fuck it's Ray.
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QnQ-ecP37Kc

>>30675966
This gives me an idea, I'll report back after work.

Sorry it's taking so long to post C.A.P.E.S. update.
Haven't been feeling good, but it's almost done and will post tomorrow

>>30676748
Maybe if you weren't such a dirty slut

>>30676769
If only you weren't such a goddamn whore

>>30552616
Cont. Line 1247 https://pastebin.com/VkBgWFvG

>The fast food restaurant is bustling with conversation and activity.
>The beeping of cash registers and the sizzling of grills play in the background as workers enthusiastically greet the next person in line.
>You grow frustrated with the static line in front you, choosing to cast your gaze over at the people in the seating areas instead.
>Surveying the clusters of people, you’re met with quite the conglomeration of patrons.
>Little kids talking over each other, progressively increasing in volume. Overweight parents scolding their equally overweight children.
>You spot two boys enjoying themselves mixing drinks into a single cup at the soda fountain. Inching along the soda dispenser, they sample equal amounts of each selection in order to create their abomination of a beverage.
>Although these people operate independently, they all come together as a unified identity as the restaurant's customers.
>Kind of similar to how every night guard of a museum covers divided section, forming the gestalt of the building’s security.
>The Canterlot Mall, much like most malls of the world, is the perfect amalgamation of all kinds of places to shop at and restaurants to feast at. Four different clothing shops lie in a row, directly above a GameStop, in proximity to a Bedbath and Beyond and opposite to a comic book store.
>Its universal appeal brings together diverse and strange people, a gathering that is always a spectacle to behold.
>You turn back around to face the queue of people in front of you. The line has shortened by one person.
>You sigh under your breath.
>Inhaling, you take in the unmistakable layer of grease in the air around you. The sensation of the heaviness of the air against your face is accompanied by a subtle waft of oil.

>>30677249
>This place is by no means classy. It can’t be considered decent, even.
>But it is one thing. One thing of utmost importance. And it’s the fact that it is calorie-rich food at a very, very generous price.
>You don’t exactly have the most stable and reliable “income,” so it helps to have a reliability in the food department.
>...
>Although, as much as you want to keep telling yourself that, you have to admit that you particularly enjoy the food.
>They’ve mastered the skill of transforming horribly unhealthy, processed ingredients that have been frozen multiple times into tolerable and edible meals.
>No, not just tolerable.
>Savory, glorious dishes.
>The obvious and right decision should probably be to learn how to cook.
>It’d be both financially viable and not kill your body. A preferable result.
>Perhaps you’ll start when you stop creating half-baked justifications for your poor dietary choices.
>You hear footsteps approaching from behind you. Since you’re the last in line, it’s most likely someone lining up behind you.
>It’s barely audible over the chitter-chatter of the restaurant patrons, but you’re able to make it out.
>They’re light. Measured and rhythmic.
>It doesn’t sound like anyone who belongs in a fast food place.
>Whatever, it’s not your place to judge anyone. Especially in the public environment of a mall.
>The footsteps stop for a brief moment, before continuing in your direction.
>You hear a familiar feminine voice ask, “Excuse me? Have I... seen you before?”
>You don’t respond. They couldn’t possibly be referring to you.
>Nobody knows you. You’ve made sure to keep it like that for a long time.
>”Um, hello?”