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My Little Jojo: Stand battles are Magic #16 - Thus Spoke Rohan Faust

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Ever wanted to concentrate your autism by mixing colorful magic horses and high school girls with posing, rock references and bizarre superpowers? Here's your chance to do it vicariously, through characters who totally aren't self-inserts, we swear!

Previous Thread: >>30195159

>Writefags/Pastebins (Alphabetized):

Ace_Sorou: http://pastebin.com/u/Ace_Sorou

A-nonMoose: http://pastebin.com/u/A-nonMoose

AusAnon: http://pastebin.com/u/AusAnon

Cameo: http://pastebin.com/u/Creamymemedaddy

Ditherer: http://pastebin.com/u/Ditherer

FrenchAnon: http://pastebin.com/u/JosefJoestar

FriskyBits: http://pastebin.com/QivjKsiH (embed)

FuckFaceMcGee: http://pastebin.com/u/FuckfaceMcGee

Omnee: http://pastebin.com/u/Omnee_Potent

Phase 2: http://pastebin.com/DNZ6FD9q (embed)

StarAnon: http://pastebin.com/u/StarAnon

Superkeaton: http://pastebin.com/jLVdFdQV (embed)

Writroplex (JoeJoe): http://pastebin.com/Tz6dVnwJ (embed)
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>>30362273
For easy Stand-making and free bumps, here's the automatic one-of-a-kind Stand Generator.

http://www.pages.drexel.edu/~dft29/Stand_Generator/Stand-Generation-Overdrive.html

And now that you have a stand of your own, why not put it to the test in an All Star Battle?

Lots of Stands have come out of these threads, both powerful and creative, so what's so wrong with a little competition? Let's see who comes out on top!

>Pick any stands from these threads and come up with a battle!
>Example: [Planisphère] vs.「Timbuk Three」
>And if you're feeling really creative, you could write multiple stand users fighting, either in groups or be a huge battle royal.
>Example: The 「SHADOWBOLTS」 vs The 「WONDERCOLTS」
>And in true JoJo fashion, feel free to get creative with it. Maybe write a conflict that isn't a straight up battle.
>Example: Rarity attends a fashion show in Manehattan only to discover that one of her competitors is using an unfair advantage by using the insidious power of their stand to sabotage to competition!

We've had a lot of ASBs so far.
A four Anon free-for-all: http://pastebin.com/nYizqLre
Or the Triple Pink Ponkdown!: http://pastebin.com/0GKTJbDC
We've even seen a team-up to save the world: http://pastebin.com/AUjwjBcF

But we still ask ourselves... do we stand a chance against the Joestars themselves?

>Jonathan vs. [Fire in the Church] http://pastebin.com/si7M9A9f
>Giorno Giovanna VS Erich Rammstein http://pastebin.com/Atks9007
>Jolyne Cujoh Vs. [Saturn's Children] https://pastebin.com/YbMARP67
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>>30362335
And speaking of All Star Battles, there's one being written right now by FrenchAnon; 「Brave New World」 vs. 「Little Prince」.

>>30339388

Stay tuned for the thrilling conclusion!
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>>30362376
Finally if you're new to the thread here's an index of all the main stories written thus far, for your browsing pleasure:

>Rammstein's Bizarre Adventure: (Ace_Sorou)
Erich Rammstein is a NatSoc and stand user living in Canterlot that gets often dragged to battles against other stand users.And his sister is a cute. A CUTE!
Status: ONGOING
All chapters here: http://pastebin.com/u/Ace_Sorou

>Dimensional Link: (A-non moose)
Pinkie Pie stabs Anon with the Stand Arrow, thus granting him a stand. And everything is fine and dandy, until said arrow becomes Twilight's stand. Now Anon and his pony friends need to find a way to create a new arrow and give it back to Pinkie's family because tradition... or is that all?
Status: ONGOING
All chapters here: http://pastebin.com/u/A-nonMoose

>Stan(d)on in Equestria:(AusAnon)
Rainbow Dash misteriously develops the stand of 「ANONYMOUS」, which has its own will, and quickly become friends. But when the 「NIGHTMARE」 returns to Equestria, it is up to them to fight it and any other stand user that gets in their way.
Status: ONGOING Infact I may have to repost the latest chapter because I dropped it right before the thread died...
All chapters here: http://pastebin.com/u/AusAnon

>MY LITTLE JOJO: STANDS ARE MAGIC: (Cameo)
After Twilight and Starlight prod Anon's soul in an attempt to give him magic, his "Soul Stone" shatters everywhere, granting anypony in contact with it a stand. Anon also develops a stand, but a new threat comes to Equestria, trying to get a hold of the soul shards and get rid of Anon and his friends in the process...
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Creamymemedaddy
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>Care Root's Bizarre Adventure: (Ditherer)
When Stands become normal in CHS, the antisocial loser Care Root gets one that burns up his own future with every use. After a chance encounter with his soulmate, that future suddenly changes, making him one of the most dangerous Stand users in play. Will he survive the conspiracies raging across Canterlot when even victory can burn up his reason for fighting?
Status: ONGOING
All Parts: http://pastebin.com/u/Ditherer

>Coco's Bizarre Adventure: Nothing's Kingdom (Ditherer)
On the night King Sombra reconquers Equestria and sends the Elements into comas, Coco Pommel falls off her balcony, sorts out her life, and gets saved by a mysterious power before she hits the ground. With the power of Stand, she ventures beyond Manehattan to foil Sombra's plans, save civilization, and - most importantly - revive Rarity.
Status: ONGOING
All Parts: http://pastebin.com/u/Ditherer or http://www.fimfiction.net/story/328442/cocos-bizarre-adventure-nothings-kingdom

>Bon Bon's Bizarre Badventure (Ditherer)
Ponyville's resident grump Bon Bon gets dragged by Lyra Heartstrings to Fillydelphia's chintzy Alternate History Museum, and discovers the fringe science really has something to it when they both wind up in an apocalyptic universe, and find they're not alone.
Status: Complete
All Parts: https://pastebin.com/C7rsbsjk

>Marble Pie's Bizarre Adventure (Ditherer)
The Pie Family has prospered for generations through the magical energy of a strange meteorite. When rogue author-adventurer A.K. Yearling steals it for the good of the world, Maud, Limestone and Marble have one week to recover it before the farm goes bust.
Status: ONGOING
All Parts: https://pastebin.com/Xbqcj7qn

>French Anon's Bizarre Adventure: (FrenchAnon)
Anon is an intern in the SpeedWagon Foundation, but after a terrorist attack during an experiment with a stand arrow, he is transported to Canterlot High...
Status: ONGOING
All Parts: http://pastebin.com/u/JosefJoestar
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>>30362467
>Stand by Me: (FuckFaceMcGee)
Anon Y. Mous, your slacker green weeb, becomes really close with his purple neighbour Twilight Sparkle. After watching Jojo toghether, Twilight develops an "Evoker", which is capable of granting a stand to whomever is shot by it. Flash Sentry, in a fit of jealousy, steals the Evoker and starts creating an army of stand users to get in the way of Twilight and Anon's relationship.
The OG story!
Status: The author is on a hiatus.
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/515d4KLQ (embed)

>Anon's Stando Adventure: (Omnee)
Anon gets invited by Celestia to check the "Sovereign Arrow", an ancient relic said to grant powers to whomever survives being stabbed by it. After messing with it, Anon is able of weilding the power of stand, but apparently a shady group is coming for his life. And either by bad luck or destiny, his friends get stabed with the arrow and get stands of their own.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Omnee_Potent

>Kira Visits Horseland: I Want It All (Omnee)
Yoshikage Kira, after the events of Part 4, awakens in Equestria with a downgraded version of his stand. Now, under a false identity, he plans to get back his powers and his quiet life.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Omnee_Potent

>Friendship's Bizarre Adventure Part one! The Dark Side of the Moon (Phase 2)
Jovial Journey, a.k.a. Jojo, is a talented psychiatrist in Equestria assigned to council Princess Luna. But after she becomes Nightmare Moon, it is up to Jojo, Celestia and other ponies to stop her from resurrecting Discord.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/DNZ6FD9q (embed)

>Daring Do and the Arrows of Marapore.feat Ziggy (StarAnon)
Mild-mannered Ziggy Stardust is sent to negotiate with A.K. Yearling on behalf of her publisher, only to become embroiled in a Daring Do adventure featuring some especially magical arrows.
Status: Complete
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/9fSMNBDh (embed)
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>>30362481
>Interview with a Stand User (StarAnon)
Featherweight is a sick child staying in Canterlot's Hospital.His condition gets worse quickly and so does his hopes of living, until one day his mother brings a quirky character to visit him.
Set after the events in "Daring Do and the Arrows of Marapore"
Status: Complete
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/dqnGFj3m (embed)

>Cat Armed Phenomena (StarAnon)
Flitter and Cloudchaser, the Stand-wielding Storm Sisters, find their occupational luck changing when they get a job tracking down a very special missing cat. Unfortunately, they're not the only Stand users trying to get their hands on "Princess Blue"...
Set before the events in "Daring Do and the Arrows of Marapore"
Status: Complete
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/WP4W1KNm (embed)

>JoJo Green? It might be a thing: (Superkeaton)
Anon, a self proclaimed PSIE-ntist, wants to uncover the misteries of Canterlot City, but he may be in more than he can handle.
The story is supposed to feature the stand [Beautiful Liar].
Status: This story has not been updated in a long while...
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/jLVdFdQV (embed)

>JoJo's bizarre adventure part 9: Cars & Chaos... and JoeJoe: (Writroplex)
JoeJoe is a student in Canterlot High that doesn't get along with anyone else, but after discovering he is part of the Joestar linage, bizarre events may happen.
Status: This story has not been updated in a while.

>Shizuka Joestar in Canterlot High (not the official title): (FightingPen)
Anon, a normal student in Canterlot High, is tasked to show the new student around the school. But not long after meeting Shizuka, he gets involved in a stand battle...
Status: This story has not been updated in awhile.
All chapters: None yet provided.
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>>30362273
thank you Aus, I was just about to make on too lol

also, made a pastebin for all of DreamAnon's stand's from last thread:
https://pastebin.com/ruFqeWGL


also a pastebin for the ASB I'm gonna finish in this thread:
https://pastebin.com/xYJpFFD1
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I posted an idea last thread to get anons brainstorming
>Your favorite stand user (in the show or in the greentexts) just got hit by the arrow again and their abilities have reached Gold Experience Requiem levels of OP. What does their stand do now?
All musings from the previous thread are now here: https://pastebin.com/LkDppmpc

Another anon suggested stands based off video games or works in other mediums. What do you guys think?
Those musings from last thread can be found here: https://pastebin.com/2HNfpyfU
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>>30362823
>Another anon suggested stands based off video games or works in other mediums. What do you guys think?

Personally I like to name Stands after music, and then all the separate powers described in the novel Jorge Joestar after different mediums, those being;

>Wounds are created from repeated damage to the mind and body, are less controllable than Stands are, and tend to serve a purpose of stopping the user's source of pain.
Which I name after video games
>Bounds are forces taken directly from the environment that the user manipulates.
Being named after movies, and
>Beyonds are, as their name implies, abilities that extend beyond time and space.
Being named after TV shows.

Also story-repost dump incoming.
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>The vaulted halls of Canterlot castle echo with Dash’s and your combined voices as you cry out Bon Bon’s name, but it’s for naught.
>Her body expels the last dregs of darkness hiding within her and remains still, her eyes unfocused and staring into infinity.
>An un-natural laugh from above draws your gaze to Bon Bon’s killer; the rouge stand known as 「NIGHTMARE」.
“Damn it. You bastard!”
>Kicking off with your foot you launch yourself through the air towards him.
>You draw back you fist and strike right at the shadowy mass that makes up his ‘body’ only to over-extend as your hit goes straight through him.
>”Tisk tisk. Let me help you there 「ANONYMOUS」.”
>The shadow around your arm solidifies, and your vision is jarred as he whips you backwards into one of the colossal pillars lining the hall.
>Though she hasn’t moved Dash feels the impact all the same, bruises already forming under the fur of her back.
>「NIGHTMARE」 snears at you, each sylable of his accented speech dripping with malice.
>”Leave us be. This is between me and Luna.”
“At least have the balls to fight someone who can see you.”
>”Fight? Do try to pay attention 「ANONYMOUS」.”
>His shadowy form dissipates, snaking through the air before solidifying once more before the only other occupant of the room.
>”Princess! Run!”
>Luna stands her ground, casting her gaze around in a vain attempt to discern some trace of the stand baring down on her.
>”No. I’d never fight with my Luna.”
>「NIGHTMARE」 reaches out a gaunt hand towards Luna’s cheek only to jerk it away on contact, his serine expression changing to one of confusion in an instant.
>”No…”
>He reaches out, and again the moment he touches her he flinches away as if he’s touched a live wire.
>”NO!”
>Luna, seeing Dash’s disbelieving expression, takes a deep breath and affords herself a small smile.
>”So. I suppose you’ve tried, for naught, to bond with me 「NIGHTMARE」.”
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>>30363106
>His expression turns to one of, of all things, betrayal as he take a step backwards.
>”What did you do!”
>Though she can’t hear him, Luna seems to know what he’ll say, and responds accordingly.
>”A breathing technique developed by the Griffons, older than either of us. It may not let me observe you, but I can repel your attempts to take me over all the same.”
>Luna takes another breath, and you swear you see golden sparks dance across her hoof as she raises it in front of her.
>”Never again will I let you be the dissenting voice in my ear! And with this power; Hamon, I can assure it!”
>”No.”
>Luna strikes with the precision of a cobra, right into 「NIGHTMARE」’s center of mass, and unlike your blow hers connects, knocking the stand back.
>”NO!”
>「NIGHTMARE」 disolves into his shadowy form and lashes out at a nearby pillar, carving a chunk out of the polished marble that flies into the wall with a crash.
>”After all those years trapped on the moon by your sister! I was there for you when no-one else WAS!”
>His tirade falls on deaf ears, not that it stops him from continuing.
>“And after all the meticulous planning to reunite us after the ‘precious’ elements of harmony tore us apart, das ist, wie du mich belohnst?!” THIS is how you reward me?!
“It’s over 「NIGHTMARE」! Give up.”
>”Over? No 「ANONYMOUS」, this isn’t over.”
>He turns back to address Luna, even if she can’t hear him.
>”If this is how you treat the ones who love you then so be it. Auf Wiedersehen, my precious moon.”
>「NIGHTMARE」 shoots backwards, the windows lining the hallway shattering in his wake and filling the air with a thousand dangerous glittering shards to cover his retreat.
>You and Rainbow Dash speed after him, the quiet tone of Luna’s magic the only reassurance you need that you’ll be able to traverse the glass filled hallway safely.
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>>30363122
>You run through the halls of Canterlot castle, past ponies in equal part confusion and distress as you chase 「NIGHTMARE」.
“Princess, were-”
>”-is he headed?”
>”I don’t… wait. No…”
>Luna takes off with a beat of her deep, navy blue wings as she follows in the wake of 「NIGHTMARE」’s flight through the halls.
>”Get back here 「NIGHTMARE」!”
>You round a corner just in time to see 「NIGHTMARE」 shatter a pair of great oak doors to splinters and dive inside.
>A scream echoes out from within and Luna cries out in return, only for her words to be swallowed up as wave of fire and heat erupts from the doorway, knocking all of you back.
>Hoofsteps draw your attention as you rise back to your feet, only to be stopped cold by what you see.
>Princess Celestia, only… not.
>Her normally tranquil mane is a raging inferno, dancing with all the colour and life of an out of control blaze.
>Her golden crown and other accessories have ceded to the intensity of the heat, melting and clinging to her formerly alabaster fur, now burnt black.
“Princess-”
>”-Celestia?”
>”Sister…”
>”No…”
>Despite her terrifying appearance her low, honeyed tone is evident even from a single word.
>”No. They are no more. We are something new…”
>The pony that was once Celestia pauses, ponderment crossing over her scorched features.
>”We are… I am...”
>A smile cracks its way across her lips and she takes a step forward, the splinters of what was once the door turning to cinder beneath her hooves.
>”「BLACKHOLE SUN」!”

https://youtu.be/aaojFmFnNKE

Chapter 14: Tainted 「LOVE」

>The thunder of hooves fills the air as a troop of royal guards round the corner, only to balk at the sight of the corrupted princess.
>Blackhole Sun turns her gaze to the new arrivals, and from the depths of her mane emerges her stand.
>Much like Celestia, her stand’s radiance has been burnt away, leaving its crystal like body dull and smokey.
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>>30363135
>With a strangled cry it takes to the air, and Blackhole Sun’s horn lights up as she fires a beam of magic at the ceiling.
>The stone itself seems to melt away, permitting a beam of sunlight to enter, illuminating the troop of guard ponies.
>The stand flies into this beam of light, causing it to filter through its clouded body, and at once the guard ponies start to scream in pain.
>You watch, frozen, as under the fur of the closest guard his skin starts to blister and peel away.
>”「NIGHTMARE」! Stop this.”
>”I am not 「NIGHTMARE」, Luna. I was born his sense of… betrayal. Yes. His and Celestia’s both.”
>”You’re lying! I would never betray my sister!”
>”What else was she supposed to feel when you kept the secret of 「NIGHTMARE」’s return from her?”
>”Wh-”
“-at?”
>You cast a glance at Luna, who flinches under her twisted sister’s words.
>”I couldn’t. I… I didn’t want her to worry.”
>You’re not sure who Luna is trying to explain herself to, but it doesn’t matter.
>”How selfless you are, protecting your sister, or were you just protecting yourself.”
>Blackhole Sun never once raises her voice, keeping her sickly sweet tone flat and stating each accusation as if it’s fact.
>Luna tries to grasp for some response only to come up short, and instead looks away.
>Blackhole Sun’s own gaze meanwhile turns towards you and Dash, and her horn ignites, blasting another chunk out of the ceiling.
>”As for you two, I cannot allow you to interfere.”
“Interfere with what?”
>Blackhole Sun gives you no response as her stand manifests and flies towards the ceiling.
>You’ve seen enough of its ability to know that letting it get there is a bad idea, and wordlessly Dash agrees, taking off to let you get close enough to tackle it out of the air.
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>>30363142
>You’re not sure whether it's a reflection of Celestia’s current state or that you never got a close look at her stand in the first place, but what you thought was the smooth surface of her stand is actually covered in imperfections, with razor sharp ridges and minute cracks that dig into your palms as you grasp it.
>It lets out an indignant squawk as its diverted from its course and swipes its ‘beak’ towards you, catching you on the chin.
>You wind your arm back to clock it in the head only to be yanked backwards.
>Or rather, it’s Rainbow Dash that has been yanked backwards by Blackhole Sun’s magic, which has unfortunately dragged you along for the ride.
>”You can’t beat me, Rainbow Dash.”
>”I don’t have to. Anon easily overpowers your stand, even with its weird heat powers.”
>”It seems you don’t understand my dear. In a battle you use every power available to you.”
>A blinding beam arcs across the room, and though she’s fast Rainbow isn’t fast enough to dodge it entirely, and you both cry out as her wing is half burnt away.
>”I have all the power of an Alicorn at my disposal, and now you lack your flight.”
>”She doesn’t fight alone, however.”
>Luna takes a step forward, placing herself in front of Blackhole Sun, who just smiles.
>”We both know you won’t fight me Luna. And I won’t fight you.”
>Blackhole Sun leans forward, her voice dropping to barely above a whisper.
>”I love you, after all.”
>She attempts to nuzzle Luna’s neck, only for the lunar princess to slap her muzzle away.
>Blackhole Sun scowls and her horn ignites, her fiery mane growing more intense as a swirling, undulated mass of fire forms above her head.
>Spots appear in your vision as it’s overtaken by white and you find yourself falling, temporarily, only to find your footing on the immaculately kept pavers of a park outside, giving you a clear view as the west wing of Canterlot castle is engulfed in what you can only describe as a supernova.
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>>30363153
>Not that it holds your attention for long as you rush to Dash’s side.
>”Is it bad? It feels bad.”
>One look at the charred, blackened stump of her wing is all you need to see, and you put on a brave face as you turn away from it.
“You ponies have some mad good healing magic right? You’ll be fine.”
>”Y-yea, I’ll be flying again in no time.”
>”Not if we don’t stop that… thing 「NIGHTMARE」 has turned my sister into.”
>”But how? With my busted wing I don’t know if I can get close enough for Anon to fight her.”
>Luna pouts, casting a gaze at the smoldering castle as she considers…
>”There’s a spell. A derivative of the one that allows me to dreamwalk.”
>She turns back to the two of you, uncertainty etched across her features.
>”But if I am to maintain the spell, you two must be the ones to step inside her corrupted mind.”
“What do you need-”
>”-us to do, Princess?”
>She smiles, and steels herself as she responds.
>”If you can drive 「NIGHTMARE」’s poision from my sister’s mind… we may be able to defeat him.”
>”But I am unsure of what you will face within her psyche, or how 「NIGHTMARE」 will defend himself.”
>”Those sounds like the sort of odds we can handle.”
>Dash rises, with your assistance, to her hooves, wincing as she flexes her wings.
>The three of you cast your gaze to smoldering facade of Canterlot castle, and try to ignore the cries of alarm rising from the city proper.
>Luna’s horn lights up, and in a moment you find yourself standing back in Canterlot castle.
>Ash swirls around your feet, the remnants of once proud banners and flower arrangements.
>The ornate windows have melted into brittle puddles, allowing gusts of wind to kick up draughts of ash and sending embers from still smoldering furniture dancing through the air.
>And the smell.
>It’s eerily familiar, and you try to grasp at the right word, digging deep into your memory until it comes to you.
>Barbeque.
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>>30363169
>”Stay close to me. The spell will require you to touch both my horn and Bl- Celestia’s to work.”
>Luna leads the way through the devastated halls, her horn shimmering with magic, and as you turn to say something to Dash you jump, finding that she’s not there.
>”My magic will hopefully hide the two of you from sight, and let us approach my sister with impunity.”
>”Hopefully?”
>”I’m not sure if 「ANONYMOUS」’s state will reflect your own, Rainbow Dash, but we will have to hope that it does.”
>What was left of the great oak doors of the throne room have been reduced to cinders and charcoal that clings desperately to Luna’s and Dash’s fur as the three of you enter the throne room itself.
>The thin crust of melted glass caking the floor cracks with each hoofstep as you approach the throne and the sole occupant of the room; Blackhole Sun.
>”I have to say I’m getting mixed signals here Luna. You reject my love, yet here you are crawling back to me.”
>”I’ve let enough harm befall Equestria. If I have to sacrifice my well being to save it then so be it.”
>”And here I thought you were starting to warm up to me.”
>Blackhole Sun rises from her throne and steps towards Luna, each hoofstep muffled by the layer of ash atop the stairs.
>”But if that’s what you want then who am I to say no. We’ll be together forever.”
>Blackhole Sun stops in front of Luna, before turning her head and staring straight at you.
>”Just the two of us.”
>Her stands manifests and shoots towards you like an arrow, leaving you barely enough time to bring your hands up to defend yourself.
>The stand’s beak pierces straight through your palms, leaving your staring at its smokey, imperfect surface.
>At Dash’s cry of pain Blackhole Sun whips her head around, her horn igniting as she fires a blast of magic at the sound.
>Dash’s illusion shatters and you watch as she slumps to the ground, her fur matted with a combination of blood and ash from the ragged hole in her side.
>”NO!”
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>Luna’s own horn surges with magic, surprising Blackhole Sun and giving the princess of the night enough time to close the distance between the two of them.
>You follow suit, remembering Luna’s words, and fling away the stand impaling your hands.
>Luna’s horn becomes charged to the point of blinding, and as she brings it into contact with Blackhole Sun’s you grab the both of them.
>Your world goes black, and takes you a few moments to realize you’re not unconscious.
“Dash? Luna?”
>You climb to your feet and look around, trying to some feature from the void surrounding you and eventually settling on a single, distant speck of light.
>Your footsteps make no echo as you walk towards the light, and really the only way you know for sure that you’re moving is the fact that your goal slowly grows in size, from a pinprick, to a ball, and then resolving itself as the shape of a pony; Celestia.
>She’s laying in a cage, but as your approach you see that apart from that she looks fine.
“Princess Celestia?”
>You reach out to touch the bars, only to jerk your hand away as liquid darkness rolls down them, collecting on the floor.
>If moves, black on black, between your legs and you turn as it takes the form of 「NIGHTMARE」.
>Before even coalescing a mouth, the stand begins to speak.
>”So this is Luna’s final defiance? Ironic, that she would rely on you of all people.”
>「NIGHTMARE」’s mouth forms in a grin, followed shortly by his cold grey eyes.
“I’d say I’m just the right guy for the job. I’m the only one with enough height to look you in the eyes as I knock your teeth out.”
>「NIGHTMARE」 just smiles wider, showing off his pearly whites.
>”We’re not so different, 「ANONYMOUS」. I-”
>You make good on your word and slam your first into that shit eating grin of his, sending him sprawling.
“Should've know if that’s the case then hurting Rainbow Dash was the last thing you should have done if you didn’t want to piss me off.”
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>「NIGHTMARE」 rubs his jaw and spits, jet black ichor splattering against the ground.
>”And you should know the lengths I would go to to be reunited with mein liebling.”
>A tendril lashes out from the darkness, slamming into your stomach and battering you against the cage behind you.
>”What’s the first thing you remember, 「ANONYMOUS」?”
“Go to hell.”
>You go to stand only find the bars wrapping around your arms and chest, holding you fast.
>”I remember being alone. Falling, with naught but my thoughts to keep me company.”
>”And then there was Luna. My precious, shining moon. The only thing I had left of my world were my powers as a stand, but with her it didn’t matter. She kept me company, and I returned the favor all those lonely nights in the realm of her sleeping subjects.”
“And you turned her into a crazy megalomaniac that tried to take over Equestria.”
>”That was HER!”
>「NIGHTMARE」 stabs a finger over your shoulder at Celestia.
>”She didn’t appreciate Luna, not like I did. Working night in, night out and for what? To be shunted away from the public eye so her sister could take the spotlight? I helped her become what she deserves to be!”
“All without even thinking about her feelings.”
>”Her feelings are the only thing I think about!”
>You feel one of the bars snake its way around your throat, and take a deep breath as you feel it start to constrict.
>”I am sorry, but you’ve been a persistent thorn in my side for too long, and you need to be removed.”
>You feel heat on your back, and a bright flash burns away your constraints.
>”Oh for… I can’t leave you alone for a second can I?”
>「NIGHTMARE」 shoots forward, crashing over you like a wave before another wave of heat pushes you forward.
>When you rise, Blackhole Sun stands in Celestia's place.
>”You can’t win, 「ANONYMOUS」. I have powers immeasurable at my beck and call, and you?”
>Blackhole Sun’s fires a blast of scalding magic, and you throw yourself to the ground to avoid it.
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>>30363205
>”You’re just a wayward soul trapped in this world like so many others. The only one of us in Equestria that can’t access his own abilities!”
>Another bolt of magic forces you to roll to the side, then you kick to your feet and launch yourself forwards, tackling the corrupted princess.
>Her charred fur is coarse against your hands, and with the element of surprise you manage to knock her to the ground, only for her horn to ignite again.
>Unable to fire directly at you, a sphere forms on the tip of her horn, and expands outwards.
>You throw up your hands to defend yourself, only to cry out in pain as they’re enveloped by the sphere and start to sizzle.
>As the pain creeps up your forearms you realize that they’re right; you can’t match them with your physical strength alone.
>You reach within yourself, trying to determine if there’s any truth to 「NIGHTMARE」’s words, willing some part of you to reveal itself.
>The sphere envelops your entire body, and you cry out, jerking away from Blackhole Sun as you collapse, pleading with whoever and whatever you can for the pain to go away.
>Through your own shaking cries you hear the clop of hooves, signalling Blackhole Sun climbing to her feet.
>”Odd, that spell should have incinerated you.”
>While it certainly feels like it, a frantic glance at your body reveals that despite the pain you’re perfectly fine.
>And then the answer resolves itself in your mind, plain as if you’ve known it all your life.
>You 「SPLIT」 the effects of her attack; the pain and the damage, keeping the former and transfering the latter to the ground below you.
>You lock eyes with Blackhole Sun as you shakily rise, and before she can react you grab her horn.
>Her eyes widen as she realizes, in part, how you survived and what you intend to do.
>”No!”
>The world blinks back into existence, and you're thrown away as a thunderclap echos through the devastated throne room.
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>Celestia stands there, shaking, alongside a confused looking 「NIGHTMARE」.
>His expression however changes to anger in an instant, and he lashes out towards Celestia only to be encased in a bubble of her shimmering golden magic.
>”Luna! Your hamon!”
>Luna acknowledges her sister's request and brings her hooves to the sides of the shining bubble, causing 「NIGHTMARE」 to cry out as sparks of light play across its surface.
>Celestia’s magic carves away a chunk of the roof, allowing a spear of sunlight to illuminate the trapped stand.
>”「WALKING ON THE SUN」!”
>Her stand, restored to its former brilliance, flies upwards and spreads its crystalline wings.
>「NIGHTMARE」 screams, and you watch, unable to turn away as he begins to burn away from his extremities.
>He reaches a hand towards Luna, only for it to crumble and burn away, and he slumps as his legs follow suite.
>”Luna…”
>The skin of his face burns away, and for a moment all he possesses is a skull bleached whiter than white, dripping with inky darkness, before that too is burnt away.
>The bubble compresses to the size of a pinpoint, then with a blinding flash blinks out of existence.
>When your vision clears, you see Celestia slumped on the stairs of the throne, looking smaller than you’ve ever seen her.
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>>30363229
>Her normally ethereal mane has been rendered monochromatic and still, the pink locks of her mane lying limp against her tear streaked face.
>Luna kneels next to her, and wraps a comforting hoof around her.
>”Sister. It’s ok.”
>”I’m sorry Luna. I let Equestria down. I- I let you down.”
>Celestia looks out across the throne room, eliciting another bout of tears.
>”All those ponies. How can I ever lead them now.”
>”Remember what you told me after Twilight and her friends freed me from Nightmare’s clutches? We were meant to rule together, big sister.”
>”But-”
>”But nothing. This was 「NIGHTMARE」’s doing, not yours.”
>You make your way over to Dash and slump next to her, exhausted.
“How’s your side?”
>”Just a scratch.”
>Dash lifts her blood matted hoof, wincing as she does so, and you carefully reach down and split the pain from the wound, transferring it to the ground.
>”What did you…?
>Dash, from the unseen connection that binds the two of you, realizes the answer to her own question.
>”I knew you had to have some kickass power.”
“You know me. One of a kind.”
>One of a kind.
>That’s certainly true from one point of view, but…
>「NIGHTMARE」, and the stand you fought in the maze; 「THE TROOPER」.
>Both humans, trapped as stands.
>And 「NIGHTMARE」’s words still ring in your ears; ‘like so many others’, ‘the only one of us’...
>How many more are there, like you, in Equestria.
>How many of them are good?
>How many of them aren’t?
>”Do you think it’s too soon to ask the princess if she can heal my wing?”
>You can’t help but smile, and shake your head in disbelief.
“Maybe give it a couple of minutes.”
>One thing at a time.


<=To=Be=Continued==

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Chapter 15: 「FIENDS」 Will Be 「FRIENDS」


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Here's that LoodStandAnon pastebin, finally.
https://pastebin.com/XgxjwV62

I'm still updating it as I crawl through the archives, so bear with me for a bit.

Lood, do you have anything to do with that Librarianon guy? His pastebins are here: https://pastebin.com/9m7A0vYX
https://pastebin.com/LCK6iBft
https://pastebin.com/rBkmrwmu

I'm sorry if I forgot what you've posted,
my memory is absolute dogshit these days.
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ok, gonna continue writing the ASB in a bit. Also, I made this shitty edit for the OP pic for the thread, but Aus already made it so fug it
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>>30362552
Thanks bud, i owe you one

Now, for the first stand bump of the thread

Stand name: [Enjoy The Silence] (alternate name: [Twisted Transistor])
User: ???

[Enjoy The Silence] is a humanoid stand with glossy, black, metallic skin, with large, goggle-like green eyes, and i/o cables sprouting from it's head that resemble dreadlocks; a series of volume nobs line both of it's arms, and a large speaker is present on it's stomach; it's legs end in sharp points instead of feet

[Enjoy The Silence] is capable of altering the volume and intensity of sound, reducing it to the point that it's imperceptible or increasing it to the point that it becomes a deafening explosion of concussive force
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>>30364064
Oh, whoops, didn't see the thread get bumped and forgot my name too
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Stand Name: [LINKIN PARK]
Appearance: A shadowy figure clothed in a black trench coat It wears a matching black fedora that hides its face, though a pair of slanted eyes can be see if the stand breaks it's perpetual stare at the ground. It carries a mid length katana on it's back

Abilities:
[LINKIN PARK]'s katana causes those struck by it to feel increasingly depressed. Repeated cuts by the blade can cause a person to lose all will to fight, forcing them to think of only the most depressing aspects of their lives. The stand also allows it's user to teleport directly behind their current target, but this ability cannot be used frequently.

Shorter stand idea today, I'm on the move rn.
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Finally found the motherfucking JoJo reference
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Coco’s Bizarre Adventure, Episode 12: Schoolhouse Rock!

In the Castle of the Princesses, a number of ponies were gathered. The guards were in comas, but those from across the mirror had come around it again to feed it more of them. There were still people left to summon, people it was vital for Sombra to get across into this reality.

There were strict rules to running the portal. Pushing too many people through without reciprocating their number would threaten uncoupling the universes, or worse. And their newfound King’s magic couldn’t reach too far into Jupiter without willing hosts.

So it was a delicate balance, dependent not just on power there but on their potential in this virginal magic-soaked kingdom. In this case, they had to tie the limp guard-horses like cordwood and throw them through in great heaving three-person tosses.

There were three left to summon, and the first two came bursting through at the same time. The man had gained wings, and gasped with sudden relief at the solid ground beneath him. The woman was native, but tricky. She’d been an effort to subvert, but strong enough to be worth it. Most of the assembled knew her at least by reputation, and she smirked and nudged her companion.

“Look, Flash,” Sunset said. “My alma mater.”

* * *

With her camera, Photo could create worlds.

It was still around her neck, even as she was on the ground. She also had the mask in an emergency, but that would hardly need her Stand. Raw violence was not something she countenanced, when she could simply remove people from life’s canvas. It was like a betrayal of her gift.

She closed her limb around it, and with a burst of will, upturned it towards Cheese Sandwich. He looked at her with crooked eyebrows as she punched the flash.
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And yet, for all of the willingness of the shutter and the bulb and the complicated printing system, her own legs didn’t obey her! She kicked against the grass and spun away from him, catching the school in her lens instead.

In defeat, the image printed and fell like overripe fruit from her neck, hitting the ground.

“You’re pretty tough-headed,” he said, conversationally, only keeping one eye on her. “I never really got the real you, to be honest. I mean, you wore sillier things than me half the time, but it wasn’t to make anypony laugh. It was just… putting on a show for yourself. Don’t you think that’s a sad way to be?”

She fell back into the grass, and he waited. 「Feel Good Inc」 could spread through the building, but it couldn’t discriminate if he couldn’t see the ponies it was targeting. At best, he’d only be able to feel out the number of ponies affected, and that was only if their enemies didn’t have some kind of immunity or trick to get around it.

This Photo Finish was a spunky character, for sure. Strong and silent type, maybe.

“Hey, how does a pony with colored goggles on take such good photos anyway?” he asked.

And then, in front of him, a chunk of the school wall blinked out of existence. Behind the brick was now a rectangular cross-section, a science lab made of rubbery black tabletops and perchable stools and carefully rationed glassware. Posters plastered the wall with diagrams that were perfect for cheating tests with, and moderately expensive machinery stood against the wall, evenly spaced.

He blinked, then looked at Photo. Under her, clipping through the grass, was the very edge of her Stand. The photo she’d taken had fallen between it and her, giving her just enough room to manipulate it.
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>>30365469
“「ARTPOP」!” she shouted in that unplaceable accent, and it rose from the ground, kicking her upwards, still holding a bottle of some supernatural chemical. She was facing him again, reaching for her camera, but with a burst of concentration he threw her hoof back. The motion made the bottle go wild, and she fell back to the ground breathing heavily.

Then, with one deep breath, she was calm.

Beneath her the bench swung around a fixed radius, catching the bottle. In its momentum it slammed into her, and Cheese watched as she sailed through the air and straight for the room. In his shock, he didn’t have the wherewithal to stop her from reaching for her camera, and he threw a hoof in front of his face as the light overtook him.

As her Stand dissipated, and she thumped into the far wall, he ran after her. Then he fell, tripping on nothing, as one of his hooves disappeared.

As he thrusted himself back into a galloping position, he made contact with those goggles and that perpetual frown, and saw her rip a photograph in half. The deliberate tear took both hooves, and then between them the wall rematerialized.

* * *

“I… don’t understand.” Coco said, staring at the flying tortoise.

The mare, Twilight, opened her mouth. Then she shook her head. “There’s no time right now. Who else is in this building?”

Coco put a hoof to her muzzle and thought, still transfixed by whatever 「Mr. President」 was. “Three Stand users and two more friends. There were four of each of us when we got here, but-”

“Is there anyone in the hallway?” Twilight asked, almost but not quite daring to look out of the door herself. She might have been a decade older than Coco or twice her age, in that light, but she moved with the wincing care of a mother regardless.

“Yes, one stallion, unicorn, with sunglasses and a star cutie mark. He might have gone for help, but I don’t know.”
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>>30365483
Twilight Velvet became frantic at the description, and was now enthusiastically piling desks around the door. “His Stand’s probably already active.”

“I didn’t have any trouble getting past him.” Coco said, although partly she knew better than to underestimate one of these powers.

Twilight reached for the pencil sharpener by the door and ripped it off of its spindle. Coco cringed; she hadn’t seen a pencil sharpener until adulthood, when Suri entered her life and her sketches had to become erasable, and she remembered the week’s salary it took to get one with a warranty.

With a few hearty shakes, ashy half-blackened wood-matter dusted the air. And, suddenly, began to float in different directions on some invisible current of air. Coco gave the room a once-over, but the many windows were closed, and the shavings weren’t heading for the only moving propeller.

“He’s coming in.” Twilight said, and then, You’ll have to take the window. If I throw 「Mr. President」 outside and you hide inside, we can regroup when he touches solid ground again.”

Coco just looked at her.

“I know it’s not the best plan, but it’s necessary! We can’t let Cloudsdale fall into their hooves!” She was already opening up a window, peering out onto the courtyard, and then galloping from it to the tortoise. “The coast is clear. Now go! I’ll stay behind and deal with him!”

Coco shook her head. “I don’t know what you’re asking, but I’m not leaving you beehind! Come on!”

“Don’t arg-” Twilight said, not looking back, and then the newly-placed fabric on her hoof tugged her towards the window. She stumbled backwards, turning, and Coco was already poking halfway out, conjuring the bulky plain-white form of a parachute.
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Between them, the ground looked mightily distant, and pencil shavings flew out over it like tumbleweeds in utero. Coco, who was more used to falls, regarded it with a kind of numbness. Twilight’s face took on a courage that wasn’t entirely there, and placed the tortoise in the crook of her leg, pressing it between herself and her newfound ally.

Then they leapt, and the harnesses wove themselves around their bodies as the parachute pulled against the wind. Twilight’s mane went wild above her with unremembered life, and the gentle green plane of the ground marched steadily closer in her swaying vision. Coco stared instead at the city, and at all of the buildings she still couldn’t see over from her position. Through their gaps she could see the rest of the metropolis in broad brushstrokes, almost as far as the restaurants.

“Nice try,” called an unfamiliar but boyish voice from above them.

Coco turned, and made a hole in the parachute with 「Something for Nothing」. Leaning out of the window, like a filly watching a parade, was the Stand user she’d passed. Grayish-blue coat, sunglasses undamaged and back on their perch, and a grin that showed every tooth he could manage. Whether he made eye contact with her, she couldn’t tell.

Then, something shifted.

“Nice job leading 「Jefferson Airplane」 straight after you,” he shouted. And then slammed the window shut.

Then, in a corner of her vision, the propeller attached to the tortoise disappeared. Then part of the shell, leaving behind air and inky darkness, like there was nothing inside of it, or something was eating it in small bites.

Twilight noticed at the same time, shocked, as another piece disappeared and she grabbed the unfazed remains of the animal. “「Mr. President」!”
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>>30365496
Then, in a moment, both of them were gone, and Coco was alone, descending into the courtyard. Then, close enough she could feel the shift on her right ear, part of the harness disappeared into nothingness. With vicious suddenness, her descent became a spiral, and then the other string popped away, and it was deja vu all over again.

* * *

Scootaloo’s first instinct was to lash out. She ignored it. This user’s Stand could overpower her 「Go Zone」 in a straight fight, and she didn’t understand why.

Colgate stared down at her, smiling thinly to herself. Neither blinked, the filly standing crouched close to the ground and the mare tall and confident against the dim ceiling lights and the distant path toward Coco and Diamond.

Colgate lunged first, using only her hoof in one blistering motion. Scootaloo stopped it before it could reach her. 「Go Zone」 didn’t face any problem, and she examined it. No weapon, no mark, just the hoof. A touch-based Stand?

The mare didn’t give her time to ponder. When the next hoof came, Scootaloo was already leaping off of the lockers, soaring through the air and hitting the floor. She slid on contact, down and away. Behind her, Colgate giggled to herself.

If this was a touch-based Stand, Scootaloo knew she was at a disadvantage. Her range seemed only slightly further, and that was only assuming that it only worked close-up. How had the first attack worked, and why had it yo-yoed back past her Stand’s defenses? Had this poseur-mare gained some power over 「gravity」? Over the giggling, the filly tried to run through her options.

Wait. The giggling was closer, not further away. It was approaching rapidly, in fact! Scootaloo turned and the mare was upon her, sailing through the air like something bewitched!
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>>30365506
「Go Zone」 flew out without being called, pounding against the mare. Another Stand clashed against it, solid metallic blue, bone-thin and bipedal, with a single oval sapphire taking up the entirety of its face. Its spideresque limbs crunched persistently and quickly against the orange hooves, and finally it loosed a haymaker against the goggled orange head.

Scootaloo’s entire body snapped back and tumbled away, her Stand retreating back into her. She fell against the floor and stayed motionless, groaning, as a few hooves away Colgate landed and approached her.

“This is pretty good exercise,” is all she said, and then she kicked the filly in the wing. She cringed and rolled away partly, still reeling from the first attack, and Colgate nodded.

Scootaloo heard the hoofsteps running further down the hallway, back to where they’d been and then past that. Why? There was no door or anything down there. She was sure she’d been touched, and the Stand activated, but why stop there?

As she struggled back to her hooves and got her breathing back under control, 「Go Zone」 appeared next to her, holding her steady again. Down the hallway the mare had reached the end, and smacked a hoof against the window.

“「January 28, 1986」!” The voice boomed and clapped down the hallway, filling the environment. Next to the window she stood, smiling patiently.

Scootaloo’s center shifted, her sense of balance suddenly existing two hooves in front of her body, and she tilted forward unintentionally. Her stumbling and trying not to headbutt the floor was helped along by the fact that her hooves stopped making contact with it, and she dangled in the air above it in a kind of sideways free-fall.
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>>30365516
She was heading straight for the window. The broken glass that she’d navigated so luckily before yawned at her eagerly, pulling her towards it. The pain in her side flared in sympathy with the picture that formed in her head, and her Stand caught a wall, digging in and forcing her to slow. She dangled from it as the tug became more and more powerful, threatening to rip her ribs out of her body if she didn’t give in.

Colgate didn’t move.

Scootaloo fell toward a door, and her Stand kicked it off of its hinges. She gritted her teeth as she judged the opening, and sweated with the precision of what came next.

Her front hooves were the first things to fall towards it, and turning her head against that force took too much effort for the middle of a fight. She let the doorway leave her periphery, and then for her first back hoof to be pulled away.

Then, a moment of intense friction, of her final leg against the very edge of the door! She took a breath and swung with it, grasping the other side of the doorframe and anchoring herself in it for leverage. Then, with one ultimate swing, she flung herself inside and 「Go Zone」 held her against the nearest wall. She huffed in its flypaper embrace.

But the tug continued, stronger and more persistent. She’d barely been able to investigate the empty desks or the blackboard or the projector in the corner, let alone recover, and now it was pulling her again.

“You’re not going to escape that way,” Colgate sing-songed.

She took a deep breath and prepared herself. She’d figured out that the Stand moved things the user touched to other things they touched in straight lines, which meant she could overcome it! Taking the advantage was the important thing! She trained her mind on her heartbeat, tensing her muscles like coils of energy, and took off.
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>>30365528
A couple hooves away from the wall, where the pull started to bring her back to the door, she summoned up 「Go Zone」 and shut her eyes tight. A single smashing hoof connected with her side, and she flew past the doorway. Maintaining her Stand through the pain was an effort as the world clenched around her, but it was back by the time she’d flown past the doorway.

She clung to the corner closest to Colgate, still in the direction of the pull, which drew through the wall and pressed her against it. With a breath of relief she felt the tug weaken, and she considered the room.

Nothing sharp, just desks and a teacher’s podium at the front of the class. It was a lot like the schoolhouse in Ponyville, although there was a lot less open air and sunlight. The door was on the floor where her Stand had smashed it in, and the windows were closed.

She hadn’t noticed anything tactically useful when the pull returned, just as strong, but not behind her. It was stringing her back to the doorway, just like before! She was still heading for the window!

「Go Zone」 gripped the wall weakly, slowly her descent, and she realized her mistake. It was a Stand that made things collide, even if they weren’t in straight lines! That was why her opponent hadn’t bothered coming after her; her Stand couldn’t be resisted!

She frantically scanned the room for something, moving like a snail inexorably against the wall, and then the doorframe was upon her.

* * *

Diamond ran after Amethyst as fast as her legs would carry her. The mare could hear her coming, and was perfectly aware of her besides, but if she could land a single hit it would be over.

Amethyst’s head turned from side to side, surveying the doors. This hallway led back into the rest of the school, which gave her a lot to check. Diamond hoped that she was tripping up in her haste.
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A mask flew at her and 「Misery Business」 vaporized it with a single chop. Amethyst didn’t react, only seizing the slight advantage to get further ahead. There was a corner ahead of them, and while she turned it she took the opportunity to throw another mask at Diamond.

It was obliterated, and Diamond barreled through the cloud of it. There was no fork here, no opportunity for a tricky escape or a double-back, so she rounded the corner after her opponent.

Amethyst stood tight against the wall just around it, holding a wrathful and twisted mask in her hoof, and jabbed it forward for the filly. Diamond wasn’t fazed. A pair of pink limbs grabbed the stone on either side, shaking with Diamond’s momentum, and pulled them forward. Amethyst stumbled, and the Stand headbutted her.

Evasive on instinct, Amethyst ignored the pain, let go of the mask and kicked off of the wall, cartwheeling out of range. She was out of masks now, but Diamond could tell she was planning to make another one at the first opportunity. Somber, despondent, unable to do anything, instead of the violent and angry ones she’d been throwing up to that point. At no point during any of this had her expression changed.

Diamond pressed her advantage and ran forward, Stand skimming the air above her, rearing a strike. Just one hit and it would be over!

She stumbled as the ground beneath her shifted, and she glanced to see a mask forming in the tile. Pushing away from it, she tried to bridge the small remaining gap, and another appeared under her back hoof, sending her reeling. As her heart nearly stopped, 「Misery Business」 slammed a hoof into the floor, and the shockwave lifted her off of the surface.

Then, as she rolled in the air, Amethyst’s hoof caught her in the stomach, and the air rushed out of her. With a deft motion the mare guided her muzzle-first into the floor, where another mask had already formed.

It fit, and sealed itself coldly against her face.
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>>30365548
* * *

Neon Lights felt a surge of pride as the last piece of the turtle assembled under him. Picking it up excited him a lot less; he liked hooves, but they were definitely a pain to get used to.

A moment’s fidgeting, and he’d grabbed it. The propeller was turning now, and it was wriggling in slow motion, but that wasn’t important. 「Jefferson Airplane」 shifted the propeller into the hallway he’d come from, and then it was just struggling limply like a green infant.

He’d left two mares to crash into the ground, which was a waste. Maybe the lovely Ms. Star would be a little sweeter with him now, a little gentler in the right corners of his anatomy. Or, more likely, he’d just have to pursue fame and women from the subjugated masses. He didn’t really like ultra-dour ladies anyway. Had Colgate been making eyes at him the last time they were walking, or had he imagined it when he moved his eyes to her face too quickly?

Speaking of that, they were still under attack. He had what they came for, which meant he had to round them all up and return, or else make his way alone. Since his Stand made him impossible to hit, he shrugged and decided to try collecting his teammates.

Just then, an adult hoof reached out of the turtle-shell and collided with his jaw.

He fell on his ass, shocked, as the older of the two mares he’d sent crashing down climbed out of the reptile, angry. It was on its side on the floor now, undamaged for the moment. If it were broken then everything inside might try to occupy the rest of the room, and Neon’s taste for drowning in flesh wasn’t quite that adventurous.
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He regained his cool and looked her over, still on his back. 「Jefferson Airplane」 moved the back of his body back into its original standing position, and then the front, and she definitely looked familiar. A little old, maybe, but he didn’t like being so choosy about the pleasures of life. Seeing the same pony twice in such a short time made him feel like the world might be small and conquerable after all.

“Aren’t you the lady who made the chairs talk?” he asked, head cocked.

She didn’t answer, except by having her Stand hover over her head. It was pink, bulbous and elephantine, composed of pearlish orbs of various sizes, like a conglomerate of soap bubbles. It looked like it should be keeping a mantle company somewhere.

Neon looked at it. “Yup, that’s you.”

“「Tales of Brave Ulysses」!” she shouted, and a kick arrived with his name on it. He kicked away backwards and it splintered the floor, which rumbled from the impact.

And then began, in an at-first croaking voice, to speak.

“I came from the Everfree in the days when it was vibrant and untamed, during the endless rule of Discord when the trees lived and died by the whim of his humor and not by the order of nature, and the tree that was me survived his reign until eventually the forest was reduced and I was collected. Generations of robins lived in my boughs, just as endless children are now supported by myself and my everlasting siblings. All of us are-”

It was a nasty Stand, and it was already working. If left unchecked, the words became impossible to ignore, and then they became so annoying the listener couldn’t deal with them. Already they filled his ears as if they were being whispered directly into both at the same time.

Neon waved a hoof, and 「Jefferson Airplane」 removed that section of floor, sending it out the way he’d come, and out of her range.
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>>30365567
She responded by crossing the gap and kicking at him again. Instead of sidestepping, he simply shifted her leg a few inches further away from his face, and then delivered a kick of his own into her barrel.

She was knocked back a little, the leg moving synchronously although it was now glitched and separate from her body. With another use of his Stand, she’d shifted the pittance needed to be right over the hole they’d made, and her fall carried her straight through.

Resisting a need to strut, he scooped up the turtle and began clearing debris from his exit.

* * *

Photo had made a rushed job of it, but she had to. Fate had been her ally; one of the machines in the lab had been a microscope, which was exactly what she’d needed.

When Cheese opened the correct door, leaning on it, the first thing he saw was the camera. With new reflexes he dove for the desks, facing away. She didn’t take the shot, if only to avoid the opening it would give him.

“「Feel Good Inc」!” he shouted from cover, and she kept still. Then he popped his head up to look at her, and the camera flashed straight into his eyes.

It had been easy to cure his fever, she’d seen. Just kill some of it and reintroduce it, and you were clean completely. A few individuals who he’d gone after personally couldn’t dodge the sickness that way, but by all accounts - including hers, now - it provided perfect immunity to the airborne virus. A tiny amount of the disease, photographed under a microscope, half-removed by 「ARTPOP」 and quickly reintroduced into her body killed it in under a minute.

But still she had to be careful. As the latest image printed, she slammed it onto her Stand and began to remove him. Just the center of the head would do, and he’d collapse and not get up again. She make the necessary strokes with cutthroat speed, as he cried out, broke cover and ran for her.

His head disappeared from his body in a sudden acidic flash, and that was the end of him.
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>>30365601
Photo exhaled. She hadn’t even needed to use the mask, and the deed was done. So it went. She looked down at her headless opponent, and felt like a slayer of beasts in a land far from home. She lifted the camera to preserve him for all time.

And then, with sudden impossible vigor, the body sprang up and towards her, its limbs gyrating wildly in the air. She shrieked, and the ghoulish wheeling smacked up against 「ARTPOP」, its front limb seizing in the air and then against the table, breaking bottles and knocking over chemicals as the knees bucked into the table and extended outwards away from her.

The photograph, which she’d abandoned on the table, began dissolving from the noxious combination of agents and chemicals. As it faded, Cheese’s head appeared from all angles, and he gulped in air, head thrown back to the ceiling. Photo watched him from behind her goggles, almost trembling as she reached up for her camera again.

“Dare to be stupid,” he said, grinning at her like an animal. “You were smart to find a way to resist 「Feel Good Inc」, but you’re not the only pony my Stando could infect!”

She raised the camera again, shakily, and he tossed one of her Stand’s bottles in her direction. The bench swung around into her shot, blocking the view.

With her heart crawling up her throat and an urge to grab the mask and defend herself, she mustered the effort to withdraw her Stand. Its potential writhed under the surface of her, and then she had a clear shot to the Feindbild and he was already on top of her.

As her rushed for her on his three legs, she let out the flash and then rolled as fast as she could. It was too late; his kick smashed into the lens. There was no time for 「ARTPOP」, only second-by-second movements. The mask would be necessary, she realized as the photo still printed around her neck and she beelined for the other end of the room. He was still coming after her, and she kicked a stool in his path.
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>>30365613
He’d been reaching out to smash her camera when she’d taken the picture. His hoof took up the frame, blocking out any other details. A moment and 「ARTPOP」 was with her.

Cheese caught up to her on the far side of the room, the wall she’d destroyed which was now sparsely peopled with big windows and posters, and he ignored her, balancing on his back legs and using his front hoof to push at the glass of a window. After a moment it gave, and he slid it upwards, adjusting his grip to shove it the rest of the way.

Photo stared at him. Trying to escape, now? It wouldn’t do him any good. His other front hoof disappeared, and he stumbled with half of a leg, reeling back into a wall and slumping.

She regarded him. With the camera smashed, she only had the mask left. That meant Amethyst would have to collect her later to remove it, but that was fine as long as this was finished. Wordlessly she cast her goggles into the recesses of the room and set the stone onto her face.

From the moment the grotesque image touched her, she felt invigorated. Boiling blood, wasn’t that the phrase? She felt like she could overpowered a tank, with enough ferocity. Like she would only make herself complete by removing something from the world.

「Goldfrapp」, she’d been told, worked as a filter. It removed all things outside of its emotion, destroying the mental palette of its victims and enhancing the strength of the users able to embrace it. She turned all of her thoughts onto killing her enemy, and her heartbeat raced somewhere far away from her mind.

She bounded for him, an animal herself now, a mongoose for the snake. Time slowed. He looked up at her, then, acknowledging the end.

“For a cameramare, it looks like you still need to develop.” His face broke out in a smile.
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>>30365629
She was running, charging straight for him, ready to kill, but the room wasn’t cooperating. The environment wasn’t bringing her any closer! She stopped to get her bearings, and then found that she couldn’t! Her legs were making running motions without moving anywhere at all!

“There are ways to stop my Stand in small doses, but not when it’s all in one place. And I put almost the whole kit and caboodle right on that mask before we even started fighting.” He stood, leaning back, and pointed his half-a-leg at her. “Your focus was off from the very beginning!”

She snarled, and tried to bridge the gap to finish him finally. Her muscles obeyed.

And then her hooves sailed her out of the open window, and she was running away from the building altogether. In fact, she was heading toward the gates, into the city. It occurred to her, in her anger, that she didn’t know when she’d stop, or where. His Stand didn’t have range, only patience.

As she ran past the gates, faintly, she heard him call, “Enjoy your exposure!”

She howled, and was gone.

* * *

Colgate waited as her Stand drew the filly closer and closer. Over the last minute she’d flip-flopped on what her final plan was, like she was a child again choosing whether to switch her spot in hide and seek. It put sugar in her pulse to argue between the window and her Stand.

If she just threw her out, then she might still be some threat later on. If her Stand simply barraged the girl and kept forcing her to collide with its fists, she wouldn’t be able to pull anything else. Either way, 「January 28th, 1986」 was only able to affect two things at a time, and it took a certain amount of patience not to rush over and switch them so she could smash herself into her opponent, or a piece of tile, or a pen or something.
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>>30365632
This was a mission. She couldn’t be sloppy and get a victory that wasted her energy, when there were two more revolutionaries to handle deeper in the building. Until the scrapper was down and out, there was no sense in moving her range around and trying to use her Stand anywhere else.

“「Go Zone」!” The voice was strained, from just inside the room, and made mostly with the throat. Glass shattered, a window. She was trying to fly away! Colgate snorted.

In the doorway, the door swung back into view, becoming stuck in the frame and splintering slightly on one corner. Trying to keep her out and make a daring escape! Or maybe the last punch had just set off all of her alien horse survival instincts. Ha.

She waited for the thump of the body against the door, the telekinetic smash. She might bash her bones in trying to avoid meeting her destiny, which would be messy and annoying to check. But even if she didn’t make it out of the room alive, she’d still go through the window, one way or another.

Suddenly, something crashed through that same window behind her. She only caught a glimpse of it as she startled and turned: a desk, flying sideways at high speed! And attached to it, an orange blur!

“「GO ZONE」!” the filly shouted, and the Stand was too close to dodge.

“「Janu-!” Colgate’s head was snapped sideways by the force of the punch, and then the next four that followed brought her to the ground. Her Stand was slower than it should’ve been, pushed against on all sides by the air around her, and it fell back into her with a few more blows.
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>>30365640
Looking at the filly and the window behind her, the injured Stand user guessed what had happened. And she was correct: Scootaloo had slammed the door and made another opening through a window, so that the Stand effect would carry her around the building and to the window from the outside! Then she’d stuck herself to a desk as a shield from the glass, and let the power put her in the perfect position for a surprise attack!

Well, she still had a chance to retreat and recuperate, if she could just get this filly off of her for a minute! She kicked off of the ground, wheeling for the window again, and made contact with the edge of it.

Her opponent watched silently as she lifted herself up, and coughed out, “「January 28, 1986」.”

She’d touched the traffic-cone Stand, which was as good as the person. And now she’d touched the window again. There wasn’t a lot of glass to worry about - she’d stepped in some of it, she realized distantly - but it would push her away!

The filly’s serious expression didn’t change as she was lifted off of the ground and pulled toward the window. Her Stand hung beside her, patiently. They might get a hit or two in, but they couldn’t have that much strength left, and then they’d be outside! Colgate mustered up her Stand’s fists to protect herself, and then stepped out of the way of the window.

Except her hooves didn’t move from their surfaces. She was stuck.

Alarmed, she stared down at them, and then 「Go Zone」 was batted backwards a little by her Stand, the user floating back a little before the gravity pulled her back. 「Go Zone」 smashed into 「January 28, 1986」 with jackhammer velocity, over and over until her Stand finally couldn’t keep up to block it!

And then, with a final ferocious kick to her face, it punted her out of the window.

“And THAT'S what I think of your Stand!” Scootaloo shouted after her, perched in the window, as the Stand’s effects wore off.

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Amethyst Star regarded her situation with immaculate sobriety. She’d lost time, her team had been split up, Finish had probably been compromised and they still didn’t have their target in hand. She was close to bugging out, smacking on one of the masks herself, but it was pointless for her. She could already control her emotions, and let them out when she needed to, with whatever intensity she desired.

The filly, clearly no civilian, laid on the ground. Amethyst left her there, half-hoping for suffocation as she glanced through the nearby doors. Their opponent could be slippery when she wanted, but her Stand was fundamentally about commanding attention. If they couldn’t hear her, she wasn’t out of hiding just yet. And she had to still be in the building if people were fighting in it.

Suddenly, with a great cracking strike, she was thrown into a wall. Things snapped, and she slid down its length, trying to get off of the pain and back to observing things. She was in danger, damn it!

In front of her was the girl, still wearing the mask. Its sleepy groaning expression stared at her, and yet the pink pony was on her hind legs with her arms crossing. Was this some kind of hidden Stand ability?

Amethyst swallowed her questions; she didn’t want the enemy to notice her confusion and take any more of an advantage.

“You want to know why your Stand’s mask didn’t knock me out?” came the voice, slightly muffled.

Amethyst winced. She had to keep her body language under better control, and figure out what was going on here. Information in, never out. Maybe the mask had been blocked by something, possibly her hair...

“Wrong. Your power’s affecting me completely. It’s just that I’ve cancelled it out! I used the effects of one mask to balance this one’s!” she gestured her hoof downwards in the air in front of her face.
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That wasn’t possible. Amethyst got up, and fell over again, back against the wall. If she put one of the rage-masks on her face first, it wouldn’t stack against the depression model, it would just bounce it away. She must be using some trick to make the features look different, and adjusting very well to the anger properties.

But then how was she speaking?!

“I’m wearing both masks.”

No. No, it was some kind of trick. 「Goldfrapp」 brought another depression-mask to Amethyst’s hooves, and she latched onto it, taking off in a limping sprint. She’d rip off the girl’s mask and replace it with the real thing!

Her opponent didn’t move, but her Stand appeared next to her, pink and sharp-looking. On its face, the rage-mask looked out onto the world.

Oh.

And then, swiftly, 「Misery Business」 knocked her legs out from under her. The mask went wild, and the Stand caught it, pushing it from the air directly onto her face.

As her motivation began to drain, and her ability to remove the mask herself dwindled with it, the Stand gave one more precise chop, and she was out.

* * *

Coco completed her swing, her Stand pulling her back up to the window. It was shut, but 「Something for Nothing」 spun in the air and kicked with both hind legs to herald her. She padded the edges of the window to keep the glass off of herself, and then her hoof made contact with something that wasn’t air, and all of the weight of her body wrenched against that contact. A little magic, in boots materializing around her hooves, and she had the leverage to wrap another hoof into the building, and then her head.

Tumbling, she reentered the room she’d just escaped, her body complaining over how much easier it had been to leave than to come back. The stallion watched her, half-impressed.

She took three breaths, pushed herself up from the ground, and sent her Stand after him.
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>>30365664
「Something for Nothing」 galloped out of her aura and aimed for his head, only for its punch to pass through empty air. His head had shifted a hoof to the right, and he delivered a kick that appeared under Coco, knocking her back to the ground.

The Stand flew around him in a tight circle, trailing a line of fabric like an impossibly long tail extension. He tried to anticipate where it would strike, clutching onto the tortoise, but Coco ran at him separately, ready to get in a hit of her own. He didn’t bother looking at her; his Stand could redirect the punch without an issue.

“「Something for Nothing」!” she shouted, and the fabric trailing after her Stand rose madly into the air, slicing through it with an intense artificial wind as it spiraled around him. He had to return his head to its correct position to avoid being clipped by it, but otherwise it was a weak attempt to trap him, and she didn’t seem to understand his power. While he was working out an escape route, her cream-colored hoof smashed through the swirling ribbon -

And directly into his muzzle.

He stumbled at that, mouth open and smarting, and realized that his Stand’s gas had been dissipated. It was all around the room, but not around him! His aura exuded a little more in response, now, but he was defenseless enough to actually be hit!

Not playing around any longer, he reached out with his ability, as far back as it would go. The hallway he’d come down still had a little of his Stand lingering in it, and he latched onto that. If he sent only the turtle, it would only take one trip. As Coco threw another punch, he slammed a hoof on the shell to get inside of it.

But he didn’t.
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>>30365679
As he looked into the beady, narrowed eyes of 「Mr. President」, he felt the Stand pushing against him, resisting entrance. He fumbled to hold onto it as Coco’s hit drew him further back, trying to remove the floor underneath of her and failing. He was spread too thinly!

Another hit incoming, and he held up the turtle in front of himself. Coco hesitated, and he seized the opportunity to shift part of the turtle to the hallway. The push of the Stand weakened, and he sweated as he wrestled with it.

A bundle of fabric wrapped itself around 「Mr. President」, and nearly ripped it from Neon’s hooves. But luck was on his side; he pushed into it desperately, and it gave way! In seconds he’d passed into it, and the rest of it was shunted into the hallway beyond.

Inside the turtle was a kaleidoscoping environment, green and hilly but filled with endless layers of stable clouds. He could see the pegasi flitting towards the edge of the diet landscape, and focused on being closer to the surface so he could climb back out again. As he searched for a way to do just that, he discovered that focusing on it was all he needed to do; the sky narrowed above him, and he tumbled back through.

Out in the hallway, he caught his breath. It was much stuffier outside of the turtle, ironically. He checked his surroundings, and he was facing down the same hallway he ran, right on track! Nearly whistling in relief, he spun around.

And saw two fillies, pink and bruised-orange, standing and staring up at him. Surprised melted into scowling, and both of them stood shoulder-to-shoulder, their Stands rising up out of them.

Neon slumped.

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>>30365685
“The rest haven’t come back.” Flash said, inspecting the unconscious pony who was a walking lapse in the nature of Photo Finish. Not that he knew her too well.

Sunset sniffed. “Amateurs.” Then, after a moment, “Our numbers are too low, we’re out of sleeping guards, and we don’t have time to wait for them to bring Cloudsdale to us. We’ll have to go ahead.”

And with raw magic alone, she picked up Photo’s body and threw her through the portal.

Then she glanced around the room. “Any volunteers?”

Most of them were there, and nervousness crowded the air and pooled in the shadows. No one raised a hoof.

One mare asked, “Why don’t we use the white one?” Some murmuring souls agreed with her.

“Don’t ask questions.” Sunset said, and her horn lit up. Each person who’d agreed was plucked from the assembled and flung through the portal at unhealthy speed.

There was a short, stunned silence, and half of the room summoned their Stands. They hung in the air in droves, staring at her. Sunset shook her head and smiled tightly against her own judgment; she had to test out her power eventually anyway.

“「Pepper」.”

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>>30365705
Coco, Scootaloo, Diamond and Cheese headed back. Twilight, who had been unconscious when they found her, was resting inside of the tortoise Scootaloo was holding. Tank, apparently. The four were battered, tired, and yet in some ways more invigorated than ever before.

“You sent her into the city?!” Diamond asked, incredulous.

Cheese shrugged, quietly. “She’ll have made it out by now. I made sure she couldn’t do anything but run and tire herself out.”

A shadow appeared, as of a city-sized cloud being thrown in front of the sun. The shadows around them didn’t stretch so much as swing, and vindictively. All turned their heads upwards.

Above them, the moon had thundered into the apex of the sky. They looked around for a Stand user somewhere, and saw nothing but empty streets and mumbling windows. 「Go Zone」 hugged the tortoise closer to itself.

Overhead, the stars did not appear.

The group hustled for the restaurant district.

「To Be Continued」

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=78yioWJhUJA [Rush - Something for Nothing]
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>>30365722
Stand Name: Jefferson Airplane
User: Neon Lights
Stats
Power: E
Speed: D
Range: C
Durability: B
Precision: E
Potential: E
Abilities: Fills air around the user with a gas which is colorless, odorless, tasteless, and otherwise unnoticeable. Anything surrounded by the gas can be twisted, chopped and moved around within it without permanent damage.

Stand Name: January 28, 1986
User: Colgate
Stats
Power: C
Speed: A
Range: E
Durability: D
Precision: B
Potential: E
Abilities: Activates when the user touches and designates two targets; the first flies at increasing speed around any intervening objects until it touches the second.

Stand Name: Tales of Brave Ulysses
User: Twilight Velvet
Stats
Power: A
Speed: E
Range: C
Durability: E
Precision: C
Potential: C
Abilities: Causes inanimate objects in range to speak, in endless streams of language. The speech cannot be blocked out by other sounds or hearing impairments, and dominates any listener’s thoughts. If activated on more than a handful of objects in range, the sheer noise becomes incomprehensible and debilitatingly painful.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/328442/12/

http://pastebin.com/kGh5Kwe8
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>>30365767
Man I love all the write fags in this thread from Fuckface to ausanon, starsanon, frenchanon, dith, omnee everyone there's just so many and every story is unique and a breath of fresh air compared to most of /mlp/
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Boop
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I want to cum inside Loliyne
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>>30365767
My penis is unbelievably erect right now. Not only did you give us 4 phenomenal simultaneous Stand battles and resolve most of them, but your characters took advantage of things that I never saw coming, you gave us a glimpse of Sunset Shimmer's side of the story and Stand, you left us on a fucking cliffhanger, and you helped snap me out of the writing funk I've been in for the past week.

I can't wait for more.
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Fuck, sorry about last night y'all, I fell asleep, my bad

>>30365767

another fucking banger, well done m8, All the fights felt really well executed and honestly were each exciting and hype inducing in various ways, that fucking trick against amethyst and Diamond Tiara was the best, and 「Go Zone」 fucking up Colgate's cunt face was amazing man, all in all, 10/10 as usual.

>>30366261
IDK if I've said this before here, but I honestly think that this thread IS definitively the best writefag general on this board, and all for the reasons you've stated. we have such a diverse bunch of writefags, each with their own unique ways of storytelling, and not only that, unlike other writefags generals, we all get along with each other really well. I love these guys man, And I hope this shit last for at least forever
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>>30367610
Bumping because i couldn't think of anything on the spot
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>>30365767
Cool episode Dith.
>“For a cameramare, it looks like you still need to develop.”
>“Your focus was off from the very beginning!”
>“Enjoy your exposure!”
Step aside Coco, I have a new favourite.

I really like how each point of view reveals a bit more of information of what is going on, letting the reader understand a bit better what is going on not only with the fight or the abilities in play, but also the world around it. That, I believe, is the strongest asset in this story. The focus of the episode was the battle in the school, and yet I feel the world around it still moves forward, regardless of what is being shown to the reader.
I'm looking forward to how you'lll surprise us next.

>And their newfound King’s magic couldn’t reach too far into Jupiter without willing hosts.
Should I read too much into this? Does Sombra know about the power of "THE POWER"? Jokes aside, I'm intrigued.[/spoiler[
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>>30368557
Didn't mean to comment, sorry
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>>30367610
I love you guys.

You're all like my internet friends away from my internet friends, and I'm glad I've gotten to hear from the writefags and anons ITT. This is one of the most positive general threads I've ever been in and I'm glad I get to share it with you.

>Born too late to explore the planet
>Born too early to explore space
>Born just in time to make anonymous friends on an Uzbekistani pipe-smoking forum over extremely autistic horse-based fanfiction
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>>30367610
>that picture
>SMOKEY'S INTERNALLY
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Who's ready to read Part 5 like Araki and Faust above intended?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VN_FzPlXZuQ
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>>30363364
Oh wow Omnee, thats real nice of you! Heck I forgot I wrote some of those myself so I appreciate you gathering them.
Also, I am the Librarianon guy. I just go by a different name here since it makes more sense and LoodStandAnon is more recognizable than Librarianon.


Also, >>30365767 fucking kickass update as always dude!

Anyway, I thought up some more nonlewd stands on the train home.

[1/?]
[SIT IN SILENCE]
Appearance: A skinny humanoid wrapped in a black and red straight jacket and a black. The jacket itself is tattered and ragged by large claw-like gouges, but the straps are perfectly untouched. The stand constantly twitches at every noise and is mostly silent save for the occasional pained groan.

Abilities:
Sound absorption: [SIT IN SILENCE] is an automatic stand. If summoned it will sit at the exact location it’s user was occupying and remain there until it is recalled. In this seated state, all sound within 5 meters of [SIT IN SILENCE] is absorbed. If a person comes within 2 meters of [SIT IN SILENCE] and makes any loud noise, they will startle the stand and cause it to release the stored sound as close-mid range scream that stuns all within earshot. It will then attack and pursue the person who triggered it. If the target breaks line of sight with [SIS] for ten seconds the stand will return to it's dormant state and absorb the sound around it again.

[HEARTBEAT]
A heart made of a pair of hands.

Abilities: [HEARTBEAT] allows it’s user to see the immediate relationships of a single target at a time, along with said target’s recent hopes, intentions, and actions. [HEARTBEAT] can also detect stand users within a 100 meters of the user though it doesn't reveal what their stands are.

[X]
Appearance: ???
Abilities: A mysterious location that allows two stand users to boost their abilities by becoming one. Not much is known about this location and the full extent of it’s abilities are unknown.
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[HEARTBEAT X SIT IN SILENCE]
Appearance: [HEARTBEAT X SIT IN SILENCE] looks very similar to [SIT IN SILENCE] but with a few changes. The straight jacket is ripped down the middle and flows behind [HEARTBEAT X SIT IN SILENCE] like a cape. [HSIS]’s hands are no longer bound and each bears one half of [HEARTBEAT]’s heart. Heart shaped nubs grow all along it’s body, including its jacket.

Improvements:
While still largely an automatic stand [HSIS] is now more receptive to it’s users commands, allowing for more varied and less predictable combat abilities.

Abilities:
Sound absorption: [HSIS] still has it’s original silencing ability but it no longer has to be sitting to absorb sound. [HSIS] can now use this absorbed sound as a ranged attack via it’s punches, though it has lost I’s initial sound burst. A direct punch from [HSIS] has the potential to be lethal, as the stored sound will reverberate through the target’s body and damage internal organs. This is contingent on how much sound is currently stored within [HSIS].

Target detection: [HSIS] can now locate any stand user within 30 meters by pressing it’s fists together. Once it locates a stand user it will mark it as a target begin to pursue it. [HSIS]will only stop chasing the target if said target is killed, it’s user is endangered, or if it gets incapacitated/defeated.

And thats that. I had this idea for fusion stands ever since that bit in part 8 and I thought this up after listening to a few song mixes. And in a colossal example of forgetfulness I named the stand [SIT IN SILENCE] instead of [CAR RADIO]. Heck if I get around to it I could probably think up a better design for [CR] based on cars.

While I'm on the subject, what stands from the writefags or from the original Jojo series would make good/cool fusions? What would their stand do?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uGGIrvWIFKw
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=92XVwY54h5k
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cS5djO3PFsE
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Boop
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Kinda have some ideas for [Bioshock] ad [Dead Rising], but they're not done yet, so bumping for now
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“I can’t.”
>”But you want to, right? That’s the entire reason you’re even doing this.”
“Well yeah, but there’s just no way that I can-“
>”Can what? Match up to the rest of them? Do as well as they can? Pull as much attention as they do?”
“…Yeah.”
>”That’s fuckin’ bullshit and you know it. You’ve done a hell of a lot of work out there, even if it’s slow going, and you’ve gotten a ton of praise and positive criticism based on what you’ve put out so far.”
“Well yeah, but-“
>”Shut up a sec. You’re better than you think you are. We both know that. So why’re you having so much trouble writing?”
“…”
>”Look dude, I can’t help you out unless you tell me what’s going on.”
“I’m having trouble because I know there’s no way I can pull off plots as complex as theirs. No way my characters or writing will ever be as hype, no way my Stands will ever be as interesting. There’s just no way I can be their equal. I should just quit, man.”
>”What!? You can’t quit! What about the updates you’ve teased? What about the promises you made to yourself to catch up to the rest of them? What about the cool guys who always had something to say about your stuff? You can’t let them down like that!”
“Yeah I can. Who cares anyway, they’ve got much more talented people making stories in there. They don’t need someone like me shitting things up. There’s just no point in sticking around.”
>”So you’re gonna give up just like that? Throw in the towel and walk away from something you’ve spent the better part of 12 months on? Let all those plot threads wither and die, leave all those people on an eternal cliffhanger?”
“I can’t do ANYTHING on par with the rest of them: can’t make the plot engaging, can’t develop the characters properly, can’t even write good combat scenes, and you think that I can just go back and write for them like it’s nothing?”
>”Yes I do.”
“…”
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>>30371855
>”Remember that first Stand you made? The very first one? Before you even knew about the thread? It grew into something you never expected, right?”
“Yeah?”
>”Yeah, it became the seed that grew into a brand new story. And after being tended to carefully, that seed is about to bear ripe and juicy fruit. The other works that have branched off from that first story are waiting to enter full bloom. You just need the right circumstances. And look, every so often someone will make a post about how much they enjoy or love the thread, and that enjoyment includes your stories.”
“…I can’t deny that, huh?”
>”Nope. So come on, get up and get moving, cast off the funk you’re in and write to your heart’s content. Create all the plot points and Stands and alternate universes you can think of, then smash ‘em together and find out what works! Creativity is literally infinite in this environment, so keep making things until you’re all tired out, then make some more!”
“Heh, thanks man. You always know what to say.”
>”That’s what I’m here for, my guy. Good luck with your greens. 「Self Vs. Self」 out!”
>Your Stand vanishes as you crack your knuckles in front of the glowing screen, inspiration flowing through your head for the first time in weeks, and begin to write

Stand Name: 「Self Vs. Self」
Stand Master: You, reading this right now
Appearance: 「Self Vs. Self」 takes on the appearance of whoever summons it, right down to the smallest details
Ability: 「Self Vs. Self」 confronts the user with positive aspects of whatever situation they currently feel despair over. It offers advice, points out good feedback/criticism/comments, and comforts those who need it. It will continue to help the user until they make things better, no matter how long that takes.

We each have a 「Self Vs. Self」 inside of us. You just need to let it out. Listen to the positive voice in the back of your head.
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>>30371883
I wrote this real quick the other day when I was feeling down about writing. Needless to say, I'm feeling a lot better now.

Never give up on your writing, no matter how long it takes or how many roadblocks get in your way. As long as you enjoy it, and get enjoyment from posting it in the thread, it's all good.

Pastebin here, if you want it. https://pastebin.com/SjnxJkVe
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>>30370621
Wow that looks so good I can't even find the words to describe that. I can only use >pic related instead it's like reading a new part 5 I mean they take the original Japanese colouring from Araki and re-model and Localise it. It's like looking at a really detailed part 7 / 8 but it's part 5
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>>30370738
Welp I don't know too much about all the writefags stands since I've only read so much of all their stories, now JoJo characters on the other hand nothing could beat Puchi / made in heaven if he collaborated with -D4C love train the two stands would be a force to be reckoned with, I also really like the idea of Dio / the world with King crimsons fast forwarding frozen time sounds epic...
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>>30370738
>Stand Fusions
>[I WANNA GO] X [Year without rain]
>[BLACK SUN] X [January 28, 1986]
>[Rawhide] X [I'M DESIGNER]
>[Planisphere] X [Metropolis]
>[Little Prince] X [MEGATRONIC]
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>>30373642
I like the idea of number 1 2 and 4 the opportunitys they would all create and the way they'd deal with battle scenarios would be very good.
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>>30370738
Damn, fusion stamds sound cool
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>>30374301
*stands
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Glad people liked the stand fusion idea. I'm working rn but once I'm off I'll drop some more stand fusions. Don't hesitate to bump the thread with your own fusion stand ideas, or requiem stand ideas, or video game based stand ideas friends.
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>Regardless of battle capabilities, which is the best stand from the series or the thread for your every day needs?
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>>30373642
>[Benzin] X [The Hand]
>Pic related
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>>30375903
For me my biggest problem is running into encounters where I wish I could turn back time 6 seconds and make a huge come back to win any argument because in my line of work as long as you can out prove the other person you're fine. So [MANDOM] will be perfect for me.
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>>30377156
Weren't people aware of what happened before time turned back?
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>>30377196
Isn't that [Pink]?
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>>30378055
>[Pink] vs [Mandom]
>Outwit vs. The True Man's World.
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We have a lot of fun coming up with stand ideas, but we shouldn't forget the MLP side of the thread.
We post ponies and have the next post come up with a stand for them, and so on...
And for the first candidate we have...
Plaid Stripes!
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>>30378221
For some reason I feel like two ice cream diamond tiara would really piss off part 2 Joseph
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「Bumpdom」
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>>30379171
Stand Name: [They Never Got You]
Stand User: Plaid Stripes
Ability: The user can manipulate the magnetic fields produced by living beings. This is often applied either to [attract] or [repel] others. This ability can work to a lesser degree in a few metals. The user gets extremely uncomfortable around magnets.

I nominate for the next one Sunshine Smiles!
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>[Tom's Diner]'s karaoke Wednesday is suddenly under the influence of the [Feel Good Inc.] virus.
>What dance moves will the characters there perform?
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>>30380895
Stand name: [can you feel the sunshine]
Stand user Sunshine Smiles
Ability: the user can change the mood of any person under the sunlight, more of an everyday stand then combat stand it can be good for situations which require brain then brawn from simple things to stopping a crying foal on the train around busy manehatten to making a criminal start laughing and handing themself in without causing any trouble. Psychology this stand can be very effective and discrete but the main kick back is if there is no sun then their is no stand ability available.

I like this idea of using back ground / minor characters so I nominate Gabby the cutie mark hunting Griffin.
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>have a nice SoL idea
>not good enough to do it myself
>probably too self-inserty for anyone else to write
dreameranon gets rarity's help designing a new costume
possibly involving multiple designs that we could vote on in strawpoll
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>>30384370
Go on...
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>>30384665
Well, aside from deciding whether it's pony or eqg rara there's not much else to decide
Honestly, i probably shouldn't be in charge of design, i'd probably just post character art from elsword and dfo
Also, the story could potentially be used to set up dreamer's relationships with various characters by presenting it as gossip and/or rarity's internal monologue
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>>30384370
>>30384735
I like it.
Maybe he wants something else to dress instead of his hero costume?
Do the strawpoll whenever you feel like it. I'm sure we all want character art despite the source.
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>>30385210
Alright, but before i do, i'll give you guys the choice of addng in your own suggestions
Also, considering rarity's doing the work, i figure she'd make something refined enough to qualify as formal wear, but extravagant enough to qualify as a costume
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Starting from https://pastebin.com/xYJpFFD1


>Wh-what the hell!??
>that thing came from out of nowhere, you didn't even see it!
>"See Sean, I've figured out something about you..you're not use to winning."
>He then turns his blade into a hatchet and throws it at you.
>You deflect It with LP, but soon after you're taking a dropkick from the kid, bringing you to the ground
>"You always think the troubles are over before you've done anything!"
>You try getting up, but Anon swats you aside the head with his sword, which he's now turned into a shovel.
>Anon then changes his blade into a rapier and repeatedly stabs you in your thigh and chest regions.
>The final stab from his rapier sends you flying past the now ground level playground, landing somewhere near the edge of the woods.
「S-sean...Sean..I don't think I can move man」
>Now that you noticing, you really can't feel your legs at all
>He must've pierced you in some vital area's of your legs
>Shit
>Anon walks to your limp, crippled body and smiles
>"Welp, looks like you never did have it in ya man."
"Yeah whatever, fuck off kid. You got a fight from me, now beat it so I can at least crawl my way to a hospital."
>"oh...about that. I...kinda have to kill you."
「Wait, wait, you what?」
>Anon swings at you, but you limp just far enough out of the way to avoid getting sliced in two
"I don't understand, you won, right? What the fuck is this!"
>"Well, In my dream, there was one other thing I had to do that I kinda left out. If you were to lose, I'd have to kill you."
>You're absolutely shocked, no kid can be this naive....maybe he's home-schooled or something, but no way any kid is like this
"Do you really just listen to everything these dreams tell you?"
>He thinks for minute, pondering for any situations where he hasn't
>"Well, yeah. They've given me good advice so far, and if killing you is necessary, than I'm going to carry that task out...one way or another."
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>>30385370
Well fuck, sorry dude
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>>30385370
>He's walking again, straight towards you, sword ready to chop you into pieces
>he's got you, and he knows this too.
>You start thinking what the point of this even was.
>You knew that there was no chance, yet you still went for it.
>You should've just turned yourself in, it would've been better than dying.
「Stop thinking like that」
>Wait, did 「Little Prince」 just..
「I can hear your thoughts dude, Like, all of them」
>o-oh..sorry about that little dude.
「It's fine man..listen....we can't give up now」
>Why? He's got me, we can't move at all, and honestly, everything he's said before is right. I'm a loser...
「No, you're not. If you were a loser, would you have ever been in able to summon me in the first place?」
>...I don't know, I don't think so.
「No, you wouldn't have. A stand is only possible to use through the strength of their user.」
「You're stronger than you know Sean, alot stronger, you don't even know my ability yet and you've still managed to give this kid a run for his money.」
>..Yeah, I did, didn't I?
「You did, and we can do much more..we just have to keep going man, we can survive.」
>..You're right, Let's-
"do this shit!"
>Anon jumped a bit from hearing you go from completely somber to loud and boisterous in only a matter of seconds
>"what on earth are you doing now? Just sit back and except the hand of fate."
"Naw man, not anymore...ya see, I've learned something from this battle with you. You've got it all. You're more experienced, younger, and definitely more athletic, you can run circles around me."
>"I do not care for petty flattery, it will get you no where. What is your point?"
"My point, dear anon, is that by fate's logic, I should've died the minute we met, But I didn't. I kept fighting, I kept going. I may have been meek and miserable in the beginning and destined to perish, but I gave destiny the middle finger, and I stood tall!"
>>30385408
I'm actually sorry for not finishing this.
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>>30385785
>You stand up, against all manner of reasoning, you're still here, you're going to make it, and you're going to do this.
"And I'm going to end this, MY WAY!"
>Anon charges at you with his rapier, aiming for the same areas he hit you before.
>However, 「Little Prince」 guards you from almost every attack, save for some stabs to your thighs that makes you wince a little.
>"See, you're already faltering! Please, just accept your-"
>LP slams a fist into the super teen's face, then, when he's staggered, he gives him a huge slash across his chest.
>"You...YOU RUINED MY SUPER SUIT!"
"Hey man, it's not my fault."
「Yep, maybe you should've...stayed focus a bit back there, yeah?」
>Nice one LP
「thank you, I'm here all night」
>"ENOUGH CHATTER FROM YOU!"
>He changes his sword to be as wide as his entire body. Anon then starts using it as a kind of fan to blast both you and LP away
>You order LP to plant his sword into the ground to resist any of the blowback from the makeshift fans
>"GIVE UP YET ASSHAT? MAYBE YOU SHOULD THINK NEXT TIME BEFORE MESSING UP A GUY'S SUIT!"
"What?! sorry, can't hear you over all that bitching you're doing, try to stop sounding like you're five kiddo."
>He then immediately stops with the fanning and tries to slam the giant blade on upon both you and LP
>You try moving out of the way in time, but part of your foot gets caught in the slam, crushing it into pieces.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG., FUCK!"
>"What??!! can't hear you man, all I'm hearing is the shrill and ear splitting sound of bitch, ya know where that's coming from by chance?"
"heh..funny kid, real funny...But-"
>You pull your foot out from under the blade, hopping on what is now only your right foot.
"I'm still standing."
>He starts visually twitching at the fact you're still standing, which just puts you in an even better mood.
>"Sean, please, just stay down, I don't want this to be painful for you, just sit down and accept fate."
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>>30386075
"No way kid, I'm tired of quitting. If I die, then so be it. I wanna die like this, it's the only real way to go."
>"heh..I guess I was wrong about you, there is a warrior in there..very well then, No holding back!"
>Anon changes his sword back to normal size and back into it's boomerang form. He then hurls it at you to where you can at least see it this time.
>You instruct little prince to jump up and grab the thing by it's hilt, which the only thing he succeeds in doing is getting your left hand sliced open.
>You have to keep going though, no matter what, you have to keep going.
>After that failed attempt, the boomerang comes back again towards you two, but this time, you're not getting hurt.
>you use LP "bat" the boomerang back towards Anon, who dodges it.
>"Ha!, you really think I'd fall for th-"
>He then gets hit in his lower back by the boomerang, It now sticking out of his back.
"h-holy shit kid, you alright?"
>"Yep..absoLUTley, great job Sean.."
>He pulls the boomerang sword out of his back, then turns it into the Urumi sword whip you saw before.
>Anon whips it towards you, however the tip starts to develop some snake like behavior when it reaches near you, trying to strike at you like a cobra.
>You try your best to fight back against it, LP swinging it's sword at it, but your speed has been drastically lowered thanks to the damage you've taken, and it finally grabs you and coils around you, slamming itself into nearby trees and branches before tossing you back to the playground.
>You feel absolutely broken now, you're bones feel like powder, and your limbs can't even move.
>all you can feel is your arm on the playground set behind you..
>and here he comes towards you, anon, looking torn up, but not nearly as much as you are right now.
>"So, I think now is the time we're going to be calling it quits, eh? you've done a great job, but I think it's time we end this."
"..You asked me earlier about how 「Little Prince」's recall worked earlier."
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>>30386240
>"Hmm? what does it matter now? you're going down man."
"I know..Just let me explain this, please? before you send me to the great thereafter?"
>Anon thinks about your proposition for a moment, and then gives you the smuggest smile you've ever seen
>"Sure, why not, it would be useful info for another user who might have an ability like that, bring it."
"Alright..so, I actually do know how it works. Ya see, I learned from the remote incident, that whatever I touched would instantly come back to me or LP, just as long as it was on the same level of elevation as us, we could even recall something the other one touched, like catch or something."
>"Hmmm, interesting, well now that that's over-"
"another fun fact, 「Little Prince」 can be up to 5 meters away from me, but it takes alot of focus to keep him there, something you've told me about all day."
>"...where are you going with this?"
"What I'm saying, "Dreamscape", is that you just broke your biggest rule."
>Anon turns around behind him to find a terrible sight
>Little Prince on the other side of both you and him
>and turns back to you to find the one thing you've placed your hands against
>"oh shit."
"「LITTLE PRINCE」 RECALL!"
>LP raises his hand up and send the playground behind you flying, with you ducking under it and bashing into Anon, causing him to fly towards LP with increasing speed
>It doesn't take long before the playground is going at top speeds towards LP, waiting there in silence, standing up with all the strength you have left
>The playground finally reaches LP, who then ducks out of the way and cancels the recall, causing Anon and the playground he was stuck onto crash into the woods nearby.
>you stare for a few more minutes before you finally realize it
>You won.
>You actually beat him.
".....WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEW, I'M THE GREATEST MAN ALIVE!"

>you then shortly after feint from your own injuries and pass out

WINNER: 「Little Prince」
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and fuck my ass I'm tired, I'm gonna finish the epilogue between these two tomorrow, so tell me what y'all thought of the fight as a whole. What could I have done better in this than I should've? what did I do good on? Honestly, I feel really bad for making dreamanon look like some kinda weirdo kid, I wish I had somehow made the fight switch to his side and see and feel what he's doing, cause I think I focused way more on sean than the actual fight going on, which was fucking stupid of me to do. However, I feel like the final fight between them I did kinda ok, on, it was really touch and go for me on how exactly I wanted it to go down, but I feel like I really got it to click, you guys are the audience though,so tell me how it is familia

also, I wasn't able to get any music in for the last part since the word limit cut me off, so here
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>>30386443
Nah, it's cool dude, you tried to take the character in an interesting direction and it kinda worked
Personally, i think the underdog victory was textbook jojo
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>>30385263
I'll give this until about noon, please submit any suggestions by then
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>when jj returns and drops a bunch of art that would have worked great for you last chapter.

rip
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>>30386443
That was a good battle. You've accomplished a lot with Sean here, he went from responsible loser to badass motherfucker in just one fight, he learned that the stand scene is filled with nutjobs and maybe even earned a bit of [Little Prince]'s respect.
As for Dreamanon, perhaps not seeing the battle from his point of view was a good thing. It helps to keep the character a bit mysterious as well as setting a sort of rivalry between the two if they ever meet again. Why does he wear the cape? What are these [dreams] he keeps mentioning? He was blindly going to kill Sean, so what other things could he had already done? You certainly made an interesting template for DreamAnon although it is up to the actual poster himself to see what aspects of it does he want to pick up, or maybe even retell some of this fight from his own point of view. Who knows, maybe that way his actions would make some sense.
>>30386659
Possible designs:
>The pony costumes Pinkie wears in the comics.
>Jotaro's Part 4 clothes.
>An SS uniform.
>Jolyne's threads.
>A star-patterned hawaiian shirt.
>King Sombra's cape and armor.
>Mysterious Mare Do Well.

>>30386958
Timing with pictures is a problem we all have mate. I've been saving Pic related since ages for the ASB I've benn working since forever, but as French mentioned >>30385785 , whenever one wants to use it they either don't appear or someone has already posted it.
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>>30387579
I'd like to think of it as a causal loop
I already know what i'm supposed to say, do, and wear, and therefore it has to happen exactly like that
Regardless of how i feel about it
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>>30386659
>DIO's outfit
>Diavolo's outfit
>Weather Report's clothes
>Hol Horse's clothes
>Celestia's regalia for shits and giggles
>Cadance pj's/a Cadance onesie
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>>30386659
To keep up with the joke from the other thread, why not have him wear this outfit?
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>>30386958
RIP in penis Ace

>>30386443
Man you pulled through and delivered a damn good climax for this fight. I loved how Sean revealed [LP]'s power to Dreamer at the very end and kicked his ass with a fucking playground. Hell of a comeback and I wouldn't change a thing about it. You done good, French.
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Alright, made the poll, had to stop adding options before it got ridiculously long
http://www.strawpoll.me/13283005
You can vote for more than one option at one time
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Busy this week, but starting on CRBA13. I'll be resolving all of the last episode's cliffhangers and creating a turning point for the rest of the green.

>>30366261
I like how different we are from each other, too, especially since the approach to this crossover elsewhere is mostly to retell Part 3.

>>30367495
I'm glad I'm getting you back in the saddle. Did the voice journal help any? And yeah, this was a nice opportunity to let the characters steer the fights and see what happened. I had a way ready to stop Photo from removing Cheese's head, but when I tried to use it his actual solution hit me just after.

>>30367610
Diamond's fight with Amethyst was fun, although I felt like it was pretty uneventful. This could've been another 2500-5000 words if I'd let it, but it wasn't absolutely vital to the plot, and the Stands and environments weren't very versatile, so I decided to end it when I had the chance. 13's going to be pretty long and try to wrap up most of the Canterlot shenanigans.

>>30368592
I've been trying to make Cheese more likable since his introduction, so I'm glad he's getting through. I'm also glad that there's a feeling of depth to the setting; I try to offset the sameness of my character voices by giving them distinguishing information and quirks.

>>30370681
Thanks!

>>30377196
>mfw people confuse my Stands with Araki's
For the record, though, 「Pink」 doesn't travel in time. It just erases recent mistakes and then acts like you did nothing instead, leaving only the effects your actions had on living things. If you sprain your ankle kicking down a door and then use 「Pink」, you'll be back outside the door and it'll be undamaged, but the sprain and the memory won't change.

>>30371898
Noice Stand. I think you've made leaps and bounds in the last few months, man, and I want to see how far you've gotten when you've finished your greens. Always finish what you start.
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Gonna write the epilogue in a bit, so get ready for that my dudes.

>>30386492
>>30387579
>>30388165

Thanks y'all, It really encourages me to know that I'm actually kinda getting better at this
that self vs. self story you did really brought me back up omnee, I appreciate everything you do here,
that goes for all you guys without saying.



>>30388438
I was actually planning to do a shitty drawing on what your new costume could be, but tbqh, you wearing weather report's clothes just fucking fits perfectly for some reason

>>30388587
Heyyy dith, nice to see you again my man, can't wait to see the next part of CoCo and CRBA, it's gonna be great, I bet my life on it.
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>>30388438
Also, in the event of a tie, i'll just pick the one i like best
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>>30386443
Using the playground was the perfect intersection of creative, clever and bizarre, and the Stand reveal is pretty good. Absolute kudos for showing the "recall" ability early on before it wins the fight. The fact that it was segmented into individual challenges, like escaping the blade, was also very wisely done because it gave Sean a chance to solve problems one at a time and create tension without making each conflict the be-all-end-all of the fight.

Sean developed a lot from his introduction and had the quintessential JoJo moment where he just snaps and turns stone-cold, but I agree Dreamer didn't get much development, and he seems to go from awkward soldier of fate to vindictive aggressor to bolster Sean's reversal. Their final exchange felt pretty scripted because his character wasn't set in stone and he defaulted to being a villain eager to throw in the final blow. If, say, he liked Sean but felt helpless to kill him, or his dreams also involved some other signs of his victory he could point to in a kind of Doppio-「Epitaph」 way, I think he would've been stronger and more individual even if you hadn't given him the point-of-view.

I think you should experiment with ways to plot out characters in advance and find one that works for you. I try to stuff as much distinguishing material as possible into my characters as soon as I introduce them, but I'd also seriously recommend voice journals as cheap dirty ways to get identifying info, and I know people have had success with questionnaires, trait lists and other techniques. When your characters are developed and motivated strongly, they'll help grease the wheels of your plot and keep it moving in the right direction, and you might even find you have to focus on finding things you can put in their way instead of how to keep them alive.
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Also, some Stands:

>>30379171
I agree that we need to carefully balance the JoJo and pone here.

Stand: 「Scars To Your Beautiful」
User: Plaid Stripes
Ability: Automatically assembles, regardless of necessary materials, any machine whose patent has been rejected.

>>30380895
Stand: 「Aquarius」
User: Sunshine Smiles
Ability: Allows the user to perform legitimate astrology.

>>30383658
Stand: 「Help!」
User: Gabby Griffon
Ability: A compass, worn on the user's arm, which points to anyone who is physically distressed within 500 meters.

Nominating Trenderhoof.

>>30370738
Stand: 「Myst」
User: Twilight Sparkle
Ability: By touch, the user can imprint any paper with a "window" into any location they've previously been, which teleports those who touch it.

Stand: 「Available Light」 「Timbuk Three X Spinal Tap」
User: Care & Derpy
Ability: Summons to the users' location things which will make them happier in the future. At first this "borrows against" the future by offering them brochures for houses that haven't been built yet or legal documents they aren't able to understand, but when practiced with can provide things that make their lives better in the present. When one of the users chooses, any of the provided items will be vaporized in exchange for powers analogous to 「Timbuk Three」.

Stand: 「Careless Games」 「Fool's Garden X Lights」
User: Dernier & Wiz
Ability: Allows the users to draw on light sources to summon useful items to themselves, although the larger or more difficult to acquire the item is, the more light will be drained, and the Stand treats basic sunlight in the same way a machine would treat solar power.
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>>30388997
You bring up so many good points in this, I really appreciate the criticism my man.
tbqh with you, I didn't know how to make the "I gotta kill you" thing look good in the slightest, I kinda lost it on that part. I was too damn frustrated with myself, and I apologize for that lazy bit of writing.
the epilogue is basically just the aftermath of the fight from dreamer's POV anyway, so I'm hoping to fix some of the mistakes I made with his character in that.

also, may I ask what exactly a voice journal and trait list are? They sound interesting and I'd honestly try anything to make my characterization skills alot better in the long run. I wanna ask you something though, How do you make your descriptions so vivid? Like, the words you use and the sentences you construct are so descriptive, I wanna know how you come up with that stuff every time.
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>>30389274
I don't know much about listing traits after characters because I think it's a very blocky way to create them, but given how undefined I feel my characters begin you may want to pursue it.

A voice journal is where you free-write from the character's persoective and get them to talk about themselves, their thoughts and feelings, what they hope for in the future, what they're scared of, what they're planning, et cetera. If you don't like something they say, use your godly fiat powers and erase it from their souls. I did five minutes' worth on Care one time and learned that he wanted to go to Everton, and another five on Derpy showed me that she partly sees herself as a way of "delivering" Care to the future.

>description
I'm always relieved to hear people like my descriptions, because they usually feel sparse to me. I'm not very good at picturing things in my head, so I try to throw out as much as I can without going into the colors of the curtains.

Part of it, the part I can hand over easily, comes from the same author who told me to always finish what I start: use and combine words in ways you've never seen before. Language is a limited medium, and stock phrases like "cut through the darkness like a knife through butter" shouldn't be used by a writer when they have an entire personal universe of experience they can put on the table. Focusing on being intuitively meaningful and not just explainable makes exotic phrases palatable. Surrealism's good at this.

The other half of it is that I've had experience describing the same thing a bunch of times in new ways; I had a girlfriend once who loved poetry to death, and I wrote her 400 of the bastards, and years back I wrote non-board erotica. Unlike a lot of aspects of writing, you can improve description separately from everything else, so if you pick up haiku or rap or just compiling a list of awesome words you barely hear, and you care enough to do them well, it'll show through in your other writing.
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Alright, a little challenge for you guys to keep things semi-active
Make any of the following songs into a [Stand]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YcQfiYUXrtI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YjaZNYSt7o0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bUcszN8jRB8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ii5IUihNuno
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SmobkT8IuxM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kQTW7Pd1vqc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VxQwtl_giK4
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BKjn2_Ina5o
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q9aM9Ch97U8
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RySHDUU2juM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k9tgLnI0fFc
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U9t-slLl30E
Bonus points for doing more than one
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>>30390733
This could really work for any of them but I just picked the best name;

「CARL POPPA」 - Causes the target to speak completely random yet comprehendable sentences unrelated to what they actually intend to say.
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>>30391158
Well, it works, but that's more about the videos as a whole rather than the individual songs
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>>30388587
I misunderstood the concept of a voice journal and deleted the result. Now that I know what you mean I'll give it a better try. I was able to write down several plot points and better figure out the story structure of Anon's Stando Adventure, along with fleshing out Anon's character somewhat, so that helped. I wanted to thank you, Ditherer, for all the help and advice you've given me over the past several months. It's really helped me grow as a writer, and I wanted to acknowledge that.

>>30388721
I'm glad I was able to help you out, French. I'm glad even one person got something out of that little short story. Keep doin' what you're doin'.

Also, I've come up with the ending for Anon's Stando Adventure. It's gonna be fucking crazy.
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>>30386410
>".....WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEW, I'M THE GREATEST MAN ALIVE!"

I have the sudden and terrible urge to voice act that line.
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>>30392247
do it.
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>>30390733
STAND NAME: 「Magic Man」
APPEARANCE: 「Magic Man」 is a 3-foot-tall hobbit with a black top hat and bowtie, with pic related on hand.
ABILITY: 「Magic Man」 allows the user to perform any kind of "street magic" for real, which includes turning objects into doves, correctly guessing a card every time, pulling quarters out of people's ears, and removing anything from a projected image, photo, or painting and giving it form in the real world. Since the magic happens without any sleight of hand, regard for the square/cube law, or care for the laws of physics and thermodynamics, the user can become nigh unstoppable if challenged to battle. Their weakness and their strength is that they cannot perform "real" magic, making them essentially a wizard without any mana source or any wide-scale or exceptionally powerful magic.
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>>30392288
In the morning you shall receive what you asked for.
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>>30392329
>[Magic Man] and [Fineshrine] working together
>unlimited mutant birds
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>>30392247
>>30392331
Can't wait to hear it
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Random thing I found online bump
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>>30392968
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1OK3hGYYAoT
It's loud as fuck
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>>30394103
>He made the sound of sean hitting the ground when he feinted too

I'm fucking dead, Good shit omnee, that's 10/10 stuff right there.
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My three days of work might wind up being a whole week, and I'm still trying to think of something crazy enough for this anthology before the pitch deadline. Whatever happens, I'm not ded, and I'll answer anyone who summons me eventually.

>>30394103
This made my day and fit French's style to a fucking tee. And if we're throwing up vocaroos, I'm told I'm not half-bad at dramatic readings, so let me know if there's anything you want me to narrate. Also,

>>30392231
Well, thanks, man. I think the act of writing's probably helped you more than I have, though. And I'm glad it's coming together for you. CRBA runs on my need to get to its ending.

>>30394187
Kek, I didn't notice that. Also, hmu if you have any more questions.
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>>30394103
Omnee should be Sean's oficial VA.
>>30394292
> I'm told I'm not half-bad at dramatic readings, so let me know if there's anything you want me to narrate.
>Anything...
Do a dramatic reading of FuckFace's story from line 1776 to 2003.
Or at least just say the funny parts, you know the ones.>the way her toaster is cooking your bagel, you've got like 30 seconds max until it goes "ding"
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>>30394364
>>30394292
>>30394187
Dudes we need to do some readings for the thread. I'm sure we could do some awesome work there.

Also, you guys flatter me, thank you.
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>>30394103
You should VA polnareff in the English stardust crusaders dub....
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>>30394484
http://vocaroo.com/i/s17zu480g6ko


And here's a Death Grips Stand Cry:
http://vocaroo.com/i/s1kvuA6IJc10
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>>30394534
>That Polnareff
Goddammit, I'm dying. This is some superior Vocaroo skill, and I regret my own already.

>>30394364
>1776 to 2003
Nice years. Here's the whole thing.

http://vocaroo.com/i/s14w05gKhM0Q
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>>30394910
Fucking beautiful Dith. The entire sex scene had me in stitches and the way you moaned and groaned nearly killed me
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>>30394534
Omnee, your Polnareff reminds me of the Abridged Series Polnareff and that is awesome. That fench laugh at the end really got me.
>>30394910
You did the whole thing!
And it was as hilarious as I expected.
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>>30394534
>that death grips sound cry
Imagine going through the same fate as diavolo but just with that noise ringing through your ears every single second never ending.
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>>30394103
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>>30396507
Is this the work of an enemy [Stand]?
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>>30394910
>>30394534
Oh my god, these are both fucking amazing, I'm crying right now, 11/10 stuff from both of y'all.
I would join in on this shit but I don't have a mic, so kill me

>>30394292
also yeah, I do got more questions. What was the first time you've ever done this "voice Journal" thing? does it take time you work, or is it like, just instant. Also, I need a vocaroo of one of those poems m8. holy fuck,
400 of those things, I can't even write one haiku properly, let alone 400 poems, that's some Shakespeare shit
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Last thread we had a short about some Anons making a band to compete in the battle of the bands but ended up only performing anime songs.
>What do you think is the favourite anime of each character from Jojo, MLP and the stories in the thread?
>pic related
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>>30397607
>what do you think is each writefag's favorite anime, aside from jojo?
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>>30398115
I'm gonna sound like a pretentious tool and an entry-level pleb, but it's a three-way tie between Serial Experiments Lain, Evangelion, and Gurren Lagann.

I still need to watch Cowboy Bebop
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>>30398115
honestly, I don't watch alot of anime, but out of all the ones I've seen, Black Lagoon and Boku No Hero really strike my fancy the most, they're fucking wonderful.

also summer wars
watch summer wars fuckers
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>>30398523
>summer wars
4chan got an anime series?
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Kira Visits Horseland Episode 2

>As you shuffle down the hill towards the ugly little village, Twilight and the girls catch up to you and begin barraging you with questions, each biting at your already fraying patience like a swarm of fleas on a dog
>”What’n the hay were those explosions?”
>”W-what happened to Double Diamond?”
>Shut up already
>”Why did Starlight call you Kira and say something about ‘the power of the soul,’ dear?”
>”What was with all that crazy sparkly stuff that appeared out of nowhere and flew out of the cave, Josuke?”
>Shut UP
>”Dude, are you alright?”
>Shut up shut UP SHUT UP SHUT UP JUST SHUT-
>”Just what in the name of Tartarus is going on here, Josuke?!”
>Incensed, you whirl around with fire in your eyes and for a split second your instincts to tear the group apart and flee grasp at the edges of your consciousness
>But before you can put [I Want It All] to use, the shocked and startled faces of the girls register in your mind, and your burning anger fades to a cautious flicker of uncomfortable self-awareness
>Your temper and desires almost took hold of you again, better reign it in and regain control of the situation
“I-I’m sorry. My nerves are frayed, my hopes are dashed, Starlight’s gotten away, and I’ve just lost everything I thought I’d found here. I’m in a bit of a bad mood, but it, ah, wasn’t fair to take that out on you all. Like I said earlier, let’s just head back to the train and I’ll explain myself when we’re en route back to Canterlot. I can tell you a few basic things about me on the way out of the village, but I want to sit down comfortably soon, so let’s go.”
>”Wait, what about the village? What are they going to do now that they’ve all got their cutie marks back?”
“…Why don’t we just ask them? Come on.”
>Confused and uncertain, the girls join you in trudging down the high hill from the mouth of the vault towards the creepy little village
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>>30399314
>The ponies in town shy away from you, fear evident in their eyes
>Not hard to see why, since they all saw you make Double Diamond disappear
>So while you hang out in the alleyway, Twilight and her friends reassure and question the towns…ponies?
>Townsponies
>Yes, that’s a word now
>Now that you’re out of the public eye, you take a minute to reflect on your situation, and the anger inside you threatens to flare up again
>You’re in a bizarre and foreign land without [Killer Queen], which you just lost to some sort of magical bullshit reaction after Starlight stole its head and teleported away
>Now you’ve got no idea how to track it down or where it could have even gone, much less if someone will react to touching it like Starlight did
>If anyone else gets a hold of the shattered pieces of [Killer Queen] you can kiss your Stand goodbye forever, since they seem to bind to whatever touches them
>When you find her you’re going to kill her very, very dead
>Now might be a good time to go over what you’re going to tell the girls
>First and foremost is whether or not you’ll tell them who you really are
>Should you tell them your true name?
>Names may hold power in this magical world, after all
>But if you can continue to hide the truth, or tell them half-truths, then you’ll be in the clear
>Either way, lying like this can only go so far
>Should you reveal Yoshikage Kira to the world?
>Would your companions take that revelation lightly? Or would it blow up in your face?
>Either option could succeed or fail, so you’re going to have to trust your gut on that choice
>Next is the explanation of what happened to Double Diamond
>You’re not going to have fun with that, for sure
>[I Want It All] could be passed off as a Stand that makes things disappear instead of killing them, but even if they bought that lie it would only hold water for so long if you used your Stand in front of them again
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>>30399320
>Besides, everyone in that cave saw what was left of him
>If you're lucky they'll buy any lies you feed them, since they seem like a very peaceful species
>You may very well have to tell the girls about Stands, and considering what you’re going to be doing when you’ve rested up and gotten your act together, it may be beneficial to do so now
>You have no idea how the pieces of your Stand will affect the ponies that touch them
>They could all be running around with varying levels of explosive powers right now
>Or they could detonate themselves by accident in some remote part of the woods where you’d never find the piece of your Stand and it would remain incomplete for the rest of your life and you’d never get revenge on Starlight or have peace of mind again or-
>No, you’ve got to give this some real thought
>What should you tell the girls?

>Tell the girls your real name?
http://www.strawpoll.me/13295374

>Tell the girls the truth about Double Diamond?
http://www.strawpoll.me/13295385

>Tell them of the existence of Stands?
http://www.strawpoll.me/13295380

I'm sorry to leave you with such a short update, but I'm having a little trouble with the next little bit of this chapter and figured having the thread decide the direction of the first part of the story would be a cool little thing to try out. I'll be closing the polls at 10 PM on Friday.

New pastebin has been added here:
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FUCK, added here: https://pastebin.com/khVjJPDE
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>>30397591
I only learned about it recently, and I've only used it a few times, and it's meant to be instant in that you're going to start connecting dots and getting ideas as soon as your character really gets talking. Since it's not thread or board related I sent a vocaroo to your pastebin, but if you want to read only the /mlp/ stuff, it's all in http://pastebin.com/NWwbVXRJ

>>30395212
Listening back, I think my favorite line is "home stretch" or "Buck Me buck me Buck Me, AUGH". And I was laughing at work today because I imagined Joel and Derpy talking in your French voice.

>>30398115
Kaiji, Steins;Gate, Shin Sekai Yori, Trigun, Gurren Lagann, Paranoia Agent, Code Geass, Death Note and Fate/Zero. I don't really watch anime though.

>>30399365
Nice to see more strawpolls in here. Went to vote, deliberated, reconsidered and finally cast my ballots. I hope we steer Kira in the right direction.
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>>30399365
>trying to reform Kira
>people want him to remain a quiet murderous psychopath.

It fits his character best but it would be nice to see a reform-ing Kira someone who has got problems and can find other ways to fix it beside blowing things up.
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This is my stand
Say something nice about him
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>>30400181
He's a very nice shade of blue
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[Killer Bump]
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>>30400166

>Implying someone who's murdered children without hesitation so that he can keep his girl-killing-and-hand-fetish a secret can ever be worthy of any kind of redemption or reformation.

Reimi is dissappointed in all of you.
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>>30400181
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uOJFhKriSH8
He's got a nice song attached to his name.

>>30401184
>Implying the polls aren't just to see how the thread wants him to distribute sensitive information that may or may not come back to bite him later

It's all strategic, Anon.

The reformation, if anything were to happen, would come far later.
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>>30399314
>en route back to Canterlot
Fuck, that should say Ponyville. Pastebin has been edited to correct it.
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>>30401509
>Reformation.
That is a tricky subject. While the show has tried to apply it to most of its villains, I'm not sure if the same treatment could be applied to Jojo villains. The same goes for characters from the stories in the thread.
>Do the ponies and humans that help Sombra in "Nothing Kingdom" deserve a second chance?
>What about Anon in CRBA? He murdered Indigo Zap and has no hesitation in attempting to kill children.
>Ziggy Stardust, although by accident, has burned down a jungle, erradicated a species of birds, dropped a meteor on a city and who knows what else. Doesn't this make him a villain that deserves to be punished?
>DreamerAnon was about to kill Sean only because of a dream, and even though he didn't succeed i was still a murder attempt. Is he still able to be reformed?

>inb4 reformation vs. justice
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>>30401681
>>What about Anon in CRBA? He murdered Indigo Zap and has no hesitation in attempting to kill children.

In Anon's defense, all of those people are trying to destroy his chance for a happy future with the girl he loves. Care acted just as ruthlessly in the same circumstances.

>>Do the ponies and humans that help Sombra in "Nothing Kingdom" deserve a second chance?
Coco's a very Stardust Crusaders story, and for the most part I jsut hndwave that the villains are naturally evil, but I did consider putting Berryshine or Drops on the strawpoll of who to add to the party as a joke.
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>>30400293
ty
>>30401509
>He's got a nice song attached to his name.
Didn't even knew that

Now have this file while I look for the stand test I did a while ago
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>>30401681
well I mean, I feel everyone in CRBA should be held responsible for all the bullshit they pull, and yet they all have their own legitimate reasons for doing the things they do, that's one of the reasons it' such an interesting story.

Like Dith is definitely right here with >>30402383
Like let's look at it from anon's POV, he has no friends, no actual family living here with him ,and he's failed school. He doesn't have anyone besides the sirens, and even if some of them are a bit abrasive towards him, they're still the only real "friends" he has, and sonata is literally the only person that he has any strong affection towards him. Take this as someone who's who knows someone currently dealing with something like this, except to a wayyyyyy lesser degree than anon's problem when you've met someone that you actually feel something for and they feel the same, you'd do almost anything for that person, especially in anon's case. But, I do admit, murder is kinda crossing a line..but would the shadowbolts have done the same if they had to? if they had to literally kill anon to get through, you're telling me they would've tried to find a way around it?

wow sorry for that fucking 9th grade psychology analysis lel, didn't mean to type that much about it.


However, when it comes to dreamer and Sean tho, that's something I'm hoping to talk about in the epilouge whenever I get done with the binch
>>30402461
heyyyyyy, that's pretty good.
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>>30401681
>>30402383
I didn't know Indigo zap died in CRBA, I haven't got that far yet

>pic related, thanks guys... Ah I'm just joking I hope I got you though
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I've been going for a few days due to school. What the hell happened since I was gone?

Also, I wrote a few more stands on the train, I can post them in an hour. I have an idea for another fusion stand with two of the most dangerous stands in jojo that I can post later today, hopefully.
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>>30403773
You got me. And if anyone else hasn't caught up, I won't be posting any more spoilers if I can help it. How far in are you? What do you think?

>>30403955
We broke out the vocaroos, Kira's future is being determined democratically, French's ASB is over except for the epilogue, and CRBA13 is still on the horizon until I sort some other shit out. Looking forward to the fusion.
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>>30403955
Hey man. FrenchAnon finished the fight between [Little Prince] and [Brave New World] and is now doing an epilogue.
Omnee also returned with more "Kira Visits Horseland", now with a strawpoll to decide the direction the story will take.
We had some fun anime realted prompts, and we also had a blast with some readings of the greens. You should check them out, they are great.
And last, we seem to be having an ethical debate about [reformation], [justice], [punishment] and which characters deserve what. Although this topic may have spoilers of some stories so read at your own risk.

As for my take on >>30401681
As Ditherer said, those enemies in CoCoBa do seem like the rather simple villains from part 3, so there shouldn't be too much to argue about their moral inclination.
CRBA, on the other hand, presents us with more ambiguous characters. Care and Anon share some similarities. They are both characters that have been pushed too far and ended up becoming more ruthless. The main difference is that Anon was already detached from society and willling to give everything up for the sirens, even if they are obviously using him. While Care has been involved in all this war unwillingly, and we have seen him show moments of weakness and insecurity in the company of Derpy so it is easier to sympathize with him. All things considered, I'd rather side with the one trying to defend his future than the one who willingly takes it away from others to ensure his own.
The Shadowbolts, or rather Sugarcoat from what she has said, even though they've been promised a future in return, don't seem to be able to have a real choice of just stopping or getting out of the battle so one may argue that they are not entirely at fault for their actions.
And then there is the Sirens and the Rainbooms... we we'll have to wait to see how they justify their actions.
I'm looking forward to the epilogue French is making.
As for Ziggy, I'll make sure he gets what he deserves.
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Bump
sorry for slacking on the stands today, i finally downloaded bastion and i've been playing it all day
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A battle between times.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4STLOf4gaQ
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STAND NAME: [Ceremony]
ABILITY: Allows the user to reach across the multiverse and summon any one Stand user to the user’s location. This action kills [Ceremony]’s user. Fortunately, its wielder is extremely stupid and summons Avery Agejo instead of someone like Diavolo or Pucci.
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>>30406219
Who does it summon again? And the user dies after using the ability or does the summon have to kill him?
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>>30406238
It summons the protagonist from this thread: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/qstarchive/25265/
I had the fortune of reading it awhile back on /qst/ and wanted the questfag to continue it so badly, but he never came back to us, so I saved the thread and eventually found you guys. I've wanted to tell more of Avery's story for quite a while now because he has a pretty cool power, so I figured I'd use a Stand as an excuse to pit him against one of my characters.
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came up with some muthafucking fusions and I just wanted to share them with y'all

「Feathery ACT 1」 X 「America」 「Voice Of America」 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I1Kdh8CK0vk
User: FriskyBits please come back
Ability: Allows the User to constantly shift and form the lay of the land depending of the genre, tone, and pitch of the song they're singing.


「I Want It All」 X 「UNPRONOUNCEABLE」 「Careless Whisper」 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4hzMRVY71hk
Ability: Whoever the object/person the user is in their sights, the user can just say it/their name and CW will cause them to explode, however, the size and impact of the explosion is decided by how loud the user yells the name of said person or thing.
「ALL SEEING EYE」 X 「Begin Again」 「Highwayman」 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aFkcAH-m9W0
User
Ability: 「Highwayman」 allows the user to relive any part of their ancestor's lives/and or their own lives in different universes and come back to their present time period/their own universe through different 「Save Files」. The user can also ring back items or people from other files by just touching them, however, they can't bring people farther than when they've died, the user also can't go into the future, no matter if it's his reality or his AU's reality.
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>>30406523
fucking a, the user for HWM would be Geno and Button Mash btw made button mash the user of Begin Again because it didn't really have a user and it fit him.
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>>30406523
>Kira/Toccata with the power to just say something's name to kill them/it
>Shouting loudly enough could produce an explosion that levels a city block
>Pic related
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>>30406624
I JUST FUCKING REALIZED
>Toccata spies on Ponyville from Canterlot with binoculars/a telescope
>Looks at Rarity on a picnic through the scope
>Yells the name at the top of his lungs
>The Elements Of Harmony die instantly and a huge swath of Ponyville is wiped out
>The mysterious villain takes over the world with ease until Anon stands up against him

Holy shit, what a broken-ass Stand. It's literally 「UNPRONOUNCEABLE REQUIEM」
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>>30406523
Honestly, it warms my heart to see peole use my stands
Thanks frenchie
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>>30406523
>the user can just say it/their name and CW will cause them to explode
Bites the Dust already did it, and VOULA! It is the single most overpowered attack in all of JoJo.

>BtD is in your eye
>Turns every single cell of your body into a bomb
>Explode faster than you can possibly regenerate
>And the mind fuckery begins as you explode for no reason in another timeline

And Giorno didn't prevent Made in Heaven from happening, so naturally, once BtD gets inside his eye, there will be nothing he can possibly ever do to undo it
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>>30404298
>>30404053
Thanks for the rundown guis, I'll check those out when I finish summer school hw. Anyway, here are the stands I worked on over the past few days:

Stand Name: [POCKET FULL OF SUNSHINE]
Stand user: Daisy or Fluttershy
Appearance: A swarm of luminescent butterflies.
Stand Power: Activates when it’s user is distressed or directly threatened. Upon activation, it will instantly teleport it’s user to the nearest safe location based on the threat that triggered it. Fluttershy, has no control over where she’s sent to and the new location might still cause her user distress, resulting in a chain of teleportations that lasts until she calms down. Fluttershy is still new to her stand though, and with practice she could gain more control over it and even extend it’s abilities to her friends or enemies.

Stand Name: [SHELTER]
Stand user: Also Daisy or Fluttershy
Appearance: A transparent bubble in the shape of a spaceship. Alt: A transparent sphere with butterflies orbiting around it.
Can only be activated inside a closed space with clear entrances and exits, like a room or a house. Upon activation, [SHELTER] expands to cover the room it’s inside of. Once this happens the room ceases to exist relative to the natural world and all doors that led to it will refuse to open, disappear, or work similar to [ATOMIC HEART FATHER]. All injuries within [SHELTER] heal rapidly and no one can die within it’s confines. Additionally, it’s user is essentially a god inside of [SHELTER] and can alter the environment at will. This effect persists until the user recalls her stand or is incapacitated.
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[THE HAND X CRAZY DIAMOND] alt name: [ULTIMATE BRO TEAM] (Couldn't think of a more song related name but it fits since it's probably something Okyasu would come up with).
Stand user: Josuke and Okyasu
Appearance: A deep violet stand roughly the same height as [Crazy Diamond]. It’s limbs are adorned with the blue streaks of [THE HAND] while it’s torso bears the metal-like plates of [CRAZY DIAMOND]. The stand’s shoulders have heart shaped nubs, a combination of [CD]’s heart theme and [TH]’s shoulder spikes, and a row of tubes that connect to the stand’s head. The stand’s face resembles [CRAZY DIAMOND]’s but it’s right eye is more ovular and resembles [THE HAND]’s. The stand wears a combination of [CD]’s and [TH]’s headgear that both resembles a heart and obscures it’s right eye. The stand’s right hand has [THE HAND]’s circular growths on it’s palm. The back of both hands contain one half of a dollar sign-heart design that form a complete heart when fist bumped.

Abilities:
[ULTIMATE BRO TEAM] has [CRAZY DIAMOND]’s fixing ability and [THE HAND]’s erasing ability but with a slight twist. Anything effected by this stand’s right hand is now “stored”, ceasing to exist in this reality and persisting in an alternate one. Anything stored can be “fixed” back into existence with [CRAZY DIAMOND]’s powers. This effect doesn’t just apply to physical objects. Wounds, space, and non tangible objects can be stored and fixed so long as [ULTIMATE BRO TEAM] touches or erases it. This stand cannot erase time.
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Not sure if I posted this already but I didn't see it in my personal doc so it's going here.

Stand Name: [LINKIN PARK]
Appearance: A lanky figure of average height. It’s figure is hidden under is a black trench coat that is way too big for it and it’s face is hidden by a comically large, matching wide brim hat. A pair of white eyes can be seen in the shadow cast by the hat but only if the stand breaks it’s perpetual starring contest with the ground in front of it. A mid length katana is strapped to it’s back

Abilities:
[LINKIN PARK] causes the temperature of objects cut by it's blade to cool, eventually freezing them. Repeated cuts increase the cooling rate. Additionally, any human being cut by the sword will have the wound and the surrounding skin effected, leading to frostbite if the user isn't defeated quickly enough.

Alternate ability since I thought the idea fit more with the name: The katana causes no physical damage to people cut by it, but instead causes them to question themselves and fosters doubt within them. Repeated cuts cause them to feel emotionally [NUMB], leading to reduced will to fight and suicidal thoughts or actions.

Another alternate ability based on the look of stand: [LINKIN PARK] allows it's user to teleport directly behind anyone in his line of sight. This is often accompanied by a movement from the stand that could pass for dramatic posing but in reality just looks like sad flailing in an attmpt to be cool.
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>>30406763
[Bites The Dust] X [Survivor]: [WE ARE THE CHAMPIONS]
>It's just [BtD] in virus form
>When someone dies from it the Stand gets passed to everyone else in the vicinity, Stand user or not
>It activates when ANYONE talks to the infected
>The amount of people Kira kills when he loops increases exponentially each time
>Eventually everyone on Earth dies from [WATC] and Kira gets his quiet life for about 5 days before he realizes he'll never jerk off onto a severed hand again
>Tries to kill himself but the [BtD] aspect of [WATC] kicks in and saves him
>He has to live the rest of his life with no human contact or girlfriends

Reimi would want it this way
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>>30406844
this is now canonically the bad end to Part 4, no one can tell me otherwise.

>>30406624
>>30406644
>>30406763
thaks, I guess , I didn't mean it to be so overpowered, but it is a fusion so whatevs.
>>30406672
No problem man, I'm glad to help you out dreamer. unless you're frisky then i say please actually come back, I miss you


>>30406765
PFOS and shelter both sound like really good Ideas for both of them, they seem like cool ass support stands unless somehow fluttershy/daisy would be the enemy user in this case, maybe not letting the protagonist go after nearly losing him/her in a battle,
however our hero has to get out of Fluttershy/daisy's stand to save the world/stop the bad guy/ whatever the situation may be.



>>30406779
>>30406821
these are also pretty rad, UBT is the best thing ever, you should feel proud of that one. LP is also pretty funny, being a meme stand, while also being interesting as a stand itself. I'd love to see this thing in a fight.
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>>30407005
Nah, sorry dude, dreamer
I should probably just leave my name on now, huh?
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>>30407058
kek, don't feel sorry, I really am here to help you and everyone else as much as I can, I just wish he could see what we've become, he was pretty cool. also yeah, leave it on,
mostly cause I get confused and I don't wanna mix you up with others, I'm bad at that shit.
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>>30407117
Alright, officially a full-time namefag
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>>30407155
And suddenly the thread is dead silent

Alright, how about this?
Create a stand for your waifu/husbando, and we'll try to guess who it is based on the stand
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>>30407644
Bumpity bumpy bump
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Live!
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I need an mlp version of this. Probably one of the top 5 JoJo panels just two badass super punchy ghost men fighting over the fate of the world and the joestar bloodline. But casually walking towards eachother.
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>>30407644
Stand Name: [Whip It] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IIEVqFB4WUo
Description/Ability: The stand takes the form of a whip wrapped around the user's hip. The whip responds to the user's will and can can extend indefinitely. Living beings that are hit by the stand, besides receiving the same damage as if being hit by a regular whip, will start to develop bruises on the affected areas. These bruises will grow in size, slowly [killing] the area, until enveloping the whole body. Repeated hits speed up the process.
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>>30388438
Do we have a winner yet?
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>>30410063
Yep, looks like i'm dressed as zepeli now
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>>30410466
Are you still going to post character art?
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>>30410739
What, like from the mmos i mentioned?
Because i wasn't planning on doing any actual drawing, i'm complete shit at art
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5HN2TR3Sj_I

Honestly, I'm not a fan of this new design for Koichi.
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>>30410871
Join the club we haven't had any art fag since I believe thread 8? A Hamon sunset if I'm correct...

>>30411079
Honestly im too used to the manga looking part 4 series this one off is nice but I'm worried that this is what David productions is hinting at what part 5's art style is going to be. I can deal with one episode of this for part 4 but not the entirety of part 5...

I'd prefer to watch the Berserk 2016/17 CGI animation flop... or maybe even sword art online and that is bad
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When your friends ask you what your jojonium collection is and start questioning your sexuality...
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>>30407005
Glad you liked it dude! As of now I don't have any plans for where [SHELTER] or [PFoS] would appear but I'm thinking of just making a few one shots for stand battles using the one's I've made. That's not a priority though, gotta finish summer school first.

Anyway, back to your regularly scheduled stand post:

[UNDER YOUR SKIN]/ [FRANK SINATRA]

Appearance: An peach colored, flesh like suit.
[FRANK SINATRA] can turn any living organism it touches into a skin suit, turning contacted areas into limp, sleeve-like cavities.This process starts at the initial area of contact and very slowly spreads to the rest of a victim's body, numbing all areas effected until the victim is immobile. The initial transformation process is incredibly slow but can hastened with prolonged contact. The only way to stop the infection is to get outside of it's users short range.

Once a person succumbs to the stand's effects they are completely paralyzed, though still conscious of their environment. In this state [FRANK SINATRA]'s user can use their body as a suit, essentially becoming them. While in a suit, [FRANK SINATRA]'s user is technically invulnerable, since any damage he takes in this state will only hurt the body of the person he's occupying. Additionally, if the target has a stand, [FRANK SINATRA] gains some control over it.
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I wasn't aware this was a thing.

Is it just Stand fags or is Hamon accepted here?
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>>30412167
Anything and everything, friend. Even Spin, but that hasn't had much success here.
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>>30412167
Hamon, the spin, Wounds, Beyonds...
Whatever floats your boat man. There are no wrong choices.
And feel free to check the greentexts. They are worth it
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>>30412156
Now this is a body horror stand if I ever seen one!
And I love it!
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And non lewd stand:
[CARAVAN PALACE]
Appearance: A mysterious strip bar that seems to appear and disappear at random. It's fully stocked with several types of alcohol and its employees always know just the right drink to get you absolutely smashed. It also appears larger on the inside than it's outside suggests.

Ability: the longer people stay within [CARAVAN PALACE]'s walls the more aggressive they will feel towards anyone else inside it. This effect is increased based on how much alcohol is in a target's system and by how many people are currently inside [CARAVAN PALACE]. Once a fight does break out, all individuals who had consumed a drink from [CP] will be compelled to fight one another in brutal ways. Anyone who dies as a result of [CP] will become one of the [REGULARS], ghosts trapped inside [CP] who can only repeat the actions leading up to their deaths.

I came up with this guy while musing more lewd stands for the lewd stand story. I was struggling for characters to use these stands since I haven't watched any mlp since season 4, so I tabled the entire concept so I could do other stuff for a bit. This is just a quick exercise while I get back to my other stuff.
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>>30413300
heck those were supposed to be posted together
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>>30412276
Thanks! That's what I was going for.

Another one:
[ALL TIME LOW]
Allows it's user to control gravity in a 150 foot radius by holding his breath. As the user inhales, the gravitaitonal pull within it's range lessens, becoming essentially nonexistant once the user's lungs have reached their capacity and causing all objects in it's range to float. Gravity will return to normal once it's user exhales. The user also has control over what is effected by this ability, so he can make himself weightless or immune to his stand's effects at will.
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And one more cause it's what I'm listing to right now.

[ME MYSELF AND I]
On activitation [ME MYSELF AND I] will either create a physical manifstation of it's user's ID or Superego. The ID manifestation is incredibly hard to control, but has incredible destructive capabilities and speed. It is easily destracted though, and if it's user loses control it is very difficult to regain.

The Superego manifestation is incredibly weak but can analyze and detect everything about it's current location. Additionally, it can act automatically to protect it's user with it's incredible defensive abilities. This manifestation can't exist at the same time as the ego manifestation and vice versa.
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here's three [STANDO] ideas I've had

Stand name: [MACHINE MESSIAH]
Stand ability: Allows the user to grow any kind of metal or machinery from their flesh, such as guns, or stuff like that.

Stand name: [CHAOS A.D]
Stand ability: Allows the user to freely manipulate their flesh, blood, and bone, such as regrow limbs, heal wounds, pretty much anything you can think of.

Stand name: [SO FAR AWAY]
Stand ability: Gives the user the ability to manifest a mirror, in any shape or size, that when looked into, shows any event that has happened in the past or will happen in the future. The mirror is also very durable, and can be used as a shield.

Kinda unoriginal but hey
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STAND NAME: 「A Stranger I Remain」
ABILITY: Causes its victim to be treated like a stranger, even by their loved ones. Devastating to pones, whose lives revolve around friendship and social networking. The effect is invoked through touch and will remain on the victim until the user removes it or is defeated.

>Twilight gets affected
>Tries to kill herself when her friends stop talking to her for days on end
>Despair eventually gives way to pure hatred and she almost kills the user when she finds him
>Everyone feels like shit for forgetting her
>There's a schism in the group now that the villains can exploit
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>>30404298
>>30402866
>tfw people notice the parallels between Care and Anon

It runs even deeper. E11 confirms that Care is essentially isolated and violent, as a natural extension of his depressed spiteful outlook in the first chapter, if he doesn't get the right Stand or meet Derpy (neither of which are random events in CRBA's universe). Both of them shove their all into one relationship, with the difference being that Care's learned how to stand on his own feet and make sacrifices when it matters.
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Alright boys, I'm headed back to London tomorrow but I'm taking my laptop with me so hopefully I'll be able to post a proper Stand battle sometime soon. See you all soon.
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>>30416134
Good luck dude, hope they have a nice in-flight movie
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>>30414445
so close
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>>30416297
>Flying United
They ain't got in-flight movies, the cheap bastards. I'll just have to write or listen to music or sleep till we get there.
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>>30416544
Well that sucks
Hopefully it isn't that bad
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>>30415746
>Tries to kill herself.
I'm not too sure about that part, but everything else does fit with a real threat to the MLP characters. Or even some of the characters from the other stories ITT
Are you planning on using it in some of your stories?
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>>30417569
Yes, I'm planning on featuring it midway through one of my greens. It sounds to me like a nice "halfway point" kind of Stand
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>>30417861
>Twilight doing a stand barrage while https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h-rj8HVW3PQ plays during the battle.
Yes! Yes! Yes!
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>>30407644
Stand Name: [Cherry Bomb]
Ability: The ability activates once the user touches two different things. Both of those things will become attached by a stem like fuse. If one of those objects moves 6 metres away from the other, the fuse of the other one will ignite. Once the fuse is consumed, the object implodes. The fuse can only be stopped by returning to the other object's range. This ability can work on both living and non-living things.
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>>30419381
Panko

>>30409155
Aryanne
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>>30407644
Stand Name: [Fêtes] http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XZHrqpG55B4
Ability: A Stand which takes the form of an orange symbol, like a tattoo, on the user's right hand. When active, it glows, and she can raise or lower the vibratory potential of any object or surface in range, causing noises to be blocked out or making sturdy items shatter like glass at loud music. If pushed to the limit to include all surfaces within a maximum range, this Stand can affect the contents of a moderately-sized auditorium.
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>>30419851
Bzzzzzzzzzzt. Nope.
Try again. I'm totally cheating since I don't have a waifu so I posted two stands for two different ponies. Still, have fun guessing!

>>30420534
Is it... Octavia?
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Really like the phantom blood reference in the powerpuff girl reboot really captured Jonathan just right.
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I like to think stands work like this even though they don't.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5EDcODx-Dxc
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>>30420581
No. Good guess, but it's not named after Nocturnes because she's a classicist.
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>>30420534
Princess Luna?
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>>30421034
Johnathan doesn't wear glasses
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>>30423226
You're getting the right idea, but the clue's not the arching name of the movements.

>>30419381
Cherry Jubilee.

>>30409155
Bon Bon?
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>>30424465
>Cherry Jubilee
And we have a winner!
>Bon Bon
Nope. Try again.
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>>30424069
Oh yeah I forgot.
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>>30421034
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>>30425683
Reminder that tonio is best husbando
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>>30427564
>Tonio is best husbando.

>Not picking Care, who would fight a whole bunch of superpowered teens to ensure you both have a happy future.
>Not picking Anon, who would say your kisses taste like how a blowjob feels.
>Not picking that other Anon, who would charm you by singing and then kiss you in a school bus.
>Not wanting to share your life with Erich Rammstein, who would risk his life for you without you even knowing because you are as valuable to him as his mother and sister are.
>Not wanting to have [ANONYMOUS] as your stand, just so that you could both share an even closer bond than other couples.
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>>30427735
Fair point, but you've gotta love a man that can cook
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>>30428401
We should, like make a tier list of characters that can cook, or a story where everyone/pony uses their stand in a cooking competition.
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>>30429259
Well, all i can say for sure is that [Brave New World] can function as any kind of utensil you might need
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>>30415746
>A Stranger I Remain
>picking a Stand name from the weakest villian in the best game

Might as well pick [Stains of Time] and have the user turn into a fucking chrono-mancer, or someshit
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>>30429259
>Zesty is the one judging the competition.
>She has to deal with a wall-eyed girl who uses her stand to bring her ingredients.
>A clearly disguised person that only brought honey.
>A teen with a magic utensil, but lacking good ingredients.
>A man who wants to make a better Romanoff Cream.
>A blonde feeling proud about her sauerkraut.
>And three different varieties of rock soup.
>But then she comes upon the final participant.
>An italian man with a humble demeanor.
>With just one bit of his Abalones she knew she was standing with one of the finests chefs she had ever met.
>And that's also how she fell in love...
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>>30431057
I ship it
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>>30431057
So we went from Jojo to some sort of food war setting? Cool.
What is everyone's favourite meal?
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>>30432559
Not the fanciest dish, but everybody loves a good burger
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>>30432559
Pony pussy
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>>30431447
Which are the superior ships?
A ship where they both share something in common?
>ZestyxTonio
>JotaroxFluttershy
Or a ship where they balance each other out?
>AnonxTwilight
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>>30433267

Is- is there some sort of uncensored version of this drawing, if I may ask?
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>>30433348
That is a good question
Both work well in storytelling, but the first is more likely to happen in real life, so i guess when they have something in common
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[Little Bump]
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>>30436061
Lewd!
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What are some practical, everyday uses for some of the stands in this thread?
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>>30437870
That's a really interesting question. All the stands made here usually can be used in ways that fit the mundane trope to a T. For example:

>Care Root can use the light made by [TIMBUK THREE] in anyway he wants provided he's willing to sacrifices his future for it.
>[Abracadabra] can help Trixie just walk faster if she wants and can be used to retrieve stuff if she's lazing on a couch and the tv remote is too far away.
>[FIRE IN THE CHURCH] basically makes every sexual encounter Anon has amazing and, if this anon was attractive and had natural charisma, could pretty much allow him to talk his way into bed with anyone.
>[BENZIN] gives it's user a short ranged teleport
>[FEATHERY Act 1] Basically make's it's user a god at singing concerts.
>[DOWN ON THE FARM] allows's it's user to never ask for milk with her tea or coffee.

I could go on but I think that's a decent start. I really like the idea of stands being related to or in some way useful in the every day lives of their users. That's something I try to consider when I make the little stands that I post here. Hell half the stands in the lood stand story have practical implications in normal lives and professions of their users.
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>>30433771
I don't possess such a image of that description unfortunately my friend but there most likely is on derpibooru or something

>>30436061
But would part 3 Dio dick just be Jonathan's?
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>>30437870
>>30437870
>[Spinal Tap]: Get a nice present every day if you aren't a picky person.
>[Benzin]: make money by making the best chinese shadows theatre.
>[Starman]: if you don't care about the consecuences, then you can use it for anything you want.
>[I want it all]: good for making holes without a drill.
>[Blackracers]: multitasking at its best.
>[Brave New World]: you'd be surprised by how many things you could solve if you had a good swiss army knife with you at all times.
>[The Wall]: change gravity mass to move objects towards you with no effort.
>[Material Girl]: can't find your keys or the tv remote? Not anymore!
>[Me Myself and I]: good for when hou feel lonely.
>[Hell's Bells]: for when you need a posse to look baller as hell.
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After a quick google search, turns out Brave New World is also the name of an iron maiden album
never actually listened to any on their stuff aside from playing run to the hills on rock band
I always assumed the name was a reference to this is war by 30 seconds to mars
So, gonna listen to that, i'll report back if anything clicks
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>>30438536
For anyone else who wants to listen
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5kaLxpc7rS4&list=PLB0D59C8EC94CED10
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>>30438536
>>30438555
>[Brave New World/Maiden Form]: This form takes away the ability to change the form of the sword, but instead it allows the user to wear a very durable armor. Just like in the previous form, the armor can transform itself into a different one depending on the user's needs.
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Test
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>>30438555
Wow, some of these are weirdly fitting
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>>30439864
Loud and clear
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>>30438536
>Brave New World wasn't an Iron Maiden reference.

Huh. Well fuck me eh?
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>>30442371
To be fair, i might be the one who was wrong on the reference
Dreams are weird
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>>30442505
It's still a reference to a song, so it's not really wrong per say, just a different reference.
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>>30442687
Oh, no, i mean i may have gotten the reference wrong because when the name appeared in my dream i hadn't heard of the song or album yet
it wouldn't be the first time i've dreamt something that hasn't happened yet, and i doubt it will be the last
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>>30442878
>DreamerAnon's stand IRL allows him to have prophetic dreams.
>Chooses to use his powers to post greens on a Canadian Equines Pictures and Jojo board.
The hero we needed.
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>>30443124
No idea how it works, but hey, if it works, why question it?
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Some stands abilities are difficult to grasp when they are first introduced, but some others remain that way even after they've been dealt with.
>Which are some difficult stands to understand?
>inb4 King Crimson just works.

I still don't get what [Beat Street] does.
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>>30443954
Me too anon, me too.
I assume 'covering an object in something it's user owns applies to Flash's body. So if he makes a squart and looks down a hallway, the hallway is technically covered by his fingers and under his stand's effect
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>>30444714
So it just works...
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>>30443954
>>30444714
>>30446413
>I've made the thread's King Crimson

Let me try to clear up some ambiguity. 「Beat Street」 has two effects: one sends an object into a person's past, changing their history, and the other prevents the changes from seriously affecting anyone else's history. These effects only work on targets who aren't Flash, and the way the Stand knows whose past to throw things into is that it can only activate when the item is completely immersed inside of something the target rightfully owns.

So if Flash steals someone's wallet and puts five dollars in it, they'll be able to remember seeing it on the sidewalk when they were a kid. If he puts a stick of lit dynamite into an enemy's backpack, they'll take damage from a mysterious explosion in their youth and have scars or missing limbs in the present. And if he throws a nuke into the house someone owns a deed to, their charred skeleton will appear in the local cemetery.

In all of these cases, the second effect of 「Beat Street」 prevents this change from leaking into the rest of causality. If someone dies because of it, the effects they've had on other people don't change, and the memories others have of them stay the same too. Kids are still born, romances still happen from the lover's perspective, et cetera, but the target is changed.

The weakness of the Stand is twofold: first, if you're trying to do anything subtler than murdering someone, this Stand is deeply unpredictable. Second, the Stand bases the effect on rightful ownership, so you need to be careful about what you use it on: if the target's parents bought them a handbag but feel like it's theirs, then using it will affect the target, but if those same parents make payments on the target's car and feel pretty miffed about it, 「Beat Street」 may affect them instead.
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>>30446749
Ah, so he has the power of retcon?
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>>30447165
Makes you wonder how many things are his fault...
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>[Magic Man] vs [Dirty Spaceman] vs [Russian Unicorn]
Who would win?
It's the battle of the bad lip reading stands!
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>>30447423
I thought we only had [Magicman] made out so far.
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>>30448340
I made the other two last thread, they're in the pastebin frenchie made for me
Glad i checked it, forgot i made [Morning Dew] too
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ayy boys, sorru I've been gone for a while, will be writing epilouge here today, so get readies
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>>30449186
Take your time man.
Also, if Writroplex is reading, just post whenever man.
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>>30449234
Writroplex here (don't worry it is me, just on mobile) the chapter is completed we will see our first enemy stand in my story against the none stand using joejoe and we will also reach the end of the second very long day the third day will be JoeJoe obtaining his stand finally I've had a mass rethink about his stand and it's ability it'll still be badass and smart but youll have to wait and see this Saturday as I'll be occupied Sunday.

(I think I'm going to spend one weekend writing the chapter and make sure I feel it's worthy of posting and the next posting it) I wish I was as good as all the other writers here my story is merely a side story compared to the main writefags.
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>>30447423
Oh, whoops, forgot my name
My bad
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>>30449548
>I wish I was as good as all the other writers here my story is merely a side story compared to the main writefags.
Shut up. You are as top tier as anyone here.
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Stand Name: [Love Me Sexy] https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3jwjS3Ee_SM
Stand User: Dance Fever
Ability: Automatic Stand. Every night, for the amount of 6 hours, everyone and everything in an area of 6 kilometers around the user acts as if it were the 70's. Nobody/pony can remember any of the events that happens during this event. Not even the user.
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Think of your favorite character from any of these greentexts.
No you double nigger, actually think of a character before you look.
You have to write that character's death scene now. Hope you didn't pick someone's self-insert, shit will be awkward!
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>Be Anonymous: The Dream Master
>and you are in some major trouble right now
>You've just awoken to the sight of a collapsed and fragmented playground encapsulating your lower body
>To make matters worst, your upper body felt like a semi rammed into your chest, you could feel that a few of your ribs were definitely broken.
>And don't even start with your costume, It's in utter ruins.
>Where the HELL were you gonna get another costume from? you only had the one.
>Well, All of that can wait, first you gotta get out of this wreck.
>you try to crawl out from under the wreckage, but the minute you try moving your legs, you wince in pain
>You're definitely gonna have be out of commission for a bit, maybe a week or so before your legs heal up
>It is no matter though, all you need is 「Brave New World」 to lift this wreckage up while you crawl out
>you turn to your left to grab it only to see...
>It's not there
>you turn to your right and find a similar sight.
>It must've fallen out of your hands while you were getting your butt kicked by Sean
>Well this is just wonderful, It literally can't get any worse than this.
>"Hey there bud"
>「Sup Dickhead」
>you look in front of you to find Sean With his stand 「Little Prince」, not only holding his own sword, but also yours
"Ohhhh..um..hi there"
>"you seem a little pinned down there, ya need some help?"
"...Yes sir I would. If you would just hand me 「Brave New World」 than maybe I could.."
>You reached out to grab it, but Sean quickly swiped your hand away from it.
>"Haha, naw man. See, this is what's going to happen..."
>He plops himself down right next to you, putting the sword right behind him
>"You're going to explain to me what the fuck all this was for. You're gonna tell me who you are, and you're going tell me what the FUCK is up with the superhero act!"
>「Most importantly, you're gonna tell us about that last part though.」
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>>30452935
Time for answers
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>>30453664
Place your bets boys. What is the real reason for Dreamer's actions:
>Drugs
>Boredom
>Money
>Delusions
>The are two different personalities in one body!
>Propane and Propane accesories
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[Brave New Bump]
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Happy national barbecue and explosions day, everyone
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Bumping for epilogue
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>>30455252
I'm not from the USA, but I still wish you guys a nice day!
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Thread's dying so here's another fusion stand to [BUMP IT UP]!

[THE HAND] X [KILLER QUEEN]= [THE HAND OF FATE]
Stats:
Destructive Power: Infinite
Speed: C
Range: C~A
Durability: C
Precision: B
Potential: E

User: Kira

Stand Power: [THE HAND OF FATE] allows Kira even more flexibility with his bombs via [THE HAND]'s space removing abilities and, given his intellect, makes Kira much deadlier than he was before. [THoF] can be used to erase the space between Kira and a target, brining said target within it's normal contact kill range. [THoF] also lets Kira to bring his bombs to his targets by erasing the space between the two. This allows for long ranged kills without the aid of [STRAY CAT] and can easily catch unwary opponents off guard.

[BITES THE DUST] still works with [THoF] but in a slightly different way. If a person activates [BtD] they will be erased from history. Everyone who knew the victim will forget they existed and their name and will disappear from any record. However, reality will fill in the holes made by the victim's nonexistence so that a paradox doesn't occur. If a father is killed their children won't cease to exist, but they wont remember anything about their father, Rohan's stories would still exist but be attributed to an unknown mangaka, ect. The person carrying [BtD] will remember the victim and Kira will only know who died by noticing the holes in reality they left. Stand user's with strong enough wills can deduce who was lost by noticing the holes left in reality.
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I had an idea for a stand, but i have no name or form in mind
essentially, it separates a stand from it's user without harming either, turning it into a separate person (or pony, griffin, etc.) wih free will and it's own personality, if it didn't alread have one
it's both a test of how well they can work together without direct mental commands, and a test for the writer to personify any stand under it's effects
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>>30458466
「DANCING WITH MYSELF」https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=FG1NrQYXjLU
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>>30458506
Holy fuck, you're a genius!
How did i miss that?
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>>30452935
>Welp, you did say that you'd tell him, and you're a boy of your word
"Alright Sean. You wanna know the truth? then let's have a seat, and begin my tale."
>"I'm...I’m already sitting down."
>Oh
"Alright then...I was born on a rainy in a Hoffersburgh General Hospital, In the Bustling and Narcoleptic city of Manehattan. They said that I was born prematurely, But I came out “alright” as my father put it. Oh, and I almost forgot, my blankets were a mixture of forest green and-“
>” Fucking stop.”
>He quickly raises your sword towards your adams apple, Pressing the tip of it right against it too
>“I didn’t ask for your whole life story kiddo, I’m asking for a reason for all of this bullshit.”
>「He’s dicking around with us Sean, we should just kill the kid. 」
>Sean’s anger flared up in his face, you could almost see the fire in his eyes
>This was a different man than the one you knew this morning.
>This man had an actual backbone, he had something more than just his hollow words
>“We’re…not killing a kid LP.”
>「Why not, he tried to kill us, we should return the favor」
>” That he did…But something tells me he didn’t mean it...or he at least had a reason.”
“I…I’m sorry about that… It was the dreams. They told me about you.”
>Sean crawls towards you, probably to hear you a bit better.
> “What dreams, anon?”
“…When I was telling you about my birth, it wasn’t to mess with you. This really does start at my birth."
>” ...I’m listening.”
“I was born dreaming. When I was still in my mother’s womb, I could see a vision of something. It was a sword. And not just any sword, It was one that looked as majestic as the great African lions of the savanna, As powerful as the Lighting Bolts of Zeus, and More valuable than any gem on the planet. And holding that sacred
>”You.”
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>>30458565
>You turn to Sean, a bit miffed that he interrupted your sick description
“Well, yes, but I didn’t know it was me until the voice told me.”
>「Okay, Pause. The voice? What the hell is he talking about Sean? 」
>” Can you not fucking interrupt him 「Little Prince」, he’s trying to explain…. But for real what the fuck is up with that?”
“It’s the voice that talks to me in my dreams. It told me that one day, I would gain the ability to use this sword, and smite great evil with it. That sword is the same one you hold behind your back, my 「Brave New World. 」
>Sean looks at the sword, almost with the same mesmerizing glaze in his eyes that you did when you firs laid eyes on it.
>” And this “voice” told you all this shit while in the womb?”
“Yep.”
>” And…you don’t question it?”
“I did. When I was born, I didn’t understand what I had truly seen, only when I was of the age of three did I see the strange dream again, with the voice in tow. It told me; “Anon, you’re going to do great things one day. Listen to me when I visit your dreams, I will guide you, and we will navigate your ultimate destiny together.”
>「That is…one of the cheesiest things I’ve ever heard in my life, you sure this kid ain’t crazy? 」
“I can assure you 「Little Prince」 that I am far from crazy. You see, I listened to the voice’s advice. From that day forward, I did everything it told me to do for a certain day. It helped me breeze through my schooling with flying colors and recommendations by telling me answers to test I never studied for, It told me what to say to sway certain people to my side, it even helped me get a girlfriend. But, I understood that all these things were only done to achieve on goal…Finding the sword.]"
>「Yeah, are you gonna get to that part anytime soon, or are you gonna talk about how great it was that your imaginary friend coasted you through life.」
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>>30362335
>http://www.pages.drexel.edu/~dft29/Stand_Generator/Stand-Generation-Overdrive.html
That stand generator doesn't work. Clicking generate stand after getting the names does nothing. And tried on three different browsers. In firefox and chrome clicking "Link to Ability Page" after generate just opens a copy of the tab and Internet Explorer just opens a blank tab.
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>”LP, can you actually shut the fuck up and let him finish, please, PLEASE?!”
>His stand looked at him with disgust, than back to one of contempt and “zipped it’s lip”.
>” You can continue now Anon.”
“Uhhh…thanks…anyway… I was 15 when I finally found the sword. I convinced my parents, with the help of the voice, to take me to a nearby cavern in the outskirts of Manehattan. Of Course, they agreed to it, and it was there, buried deep inside of the cavern, That I found 「Brave New World」. When I touched It, I could feel the stand energy coursing through me, the blade had become mine and mine alone. That’s why it only works for me.”
>You look directly at Sean, doing your best to look as smug as possible.
“I bet you tried to use it yourself, didn’t you Sean?”
>” wha-whaaaaaaaat. Of course I didn’t, I Would never try to use that deathtrap of a sw-“
>「He did, and lo and behold, it didn’t fucking work, like I TOLD HIM!」
>“Okay, ya know what, get back in me asshat.”
>Sean withdrew his stand back into himself, leaving his only defense being your sword
>“…I may have tried use it.”
“heh…it’s fine Sean.”
>”so um…what happened after that?”
“Well…the next night The Voice told me that this was the last night it would give me advice. It gave me a new goal. It told me that the only way I’d become like the hero in my vision, the original dream, was to abandon everything and come down here, to the city of canterlot.”
>” Well, That’s a fucking jump in orders.”
“Yeah, I though the same thing. I asked it why I had to do so when Almost everything I’ve done was never as…drastic. It told me about a group of stand users, just like me, that we’re going to cause trouble for the world at large, and that only I could stop them all. It told me that if I had not gone down here, the entire world would be in danger.”
>” And you just…mindlessly listened to it?”
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>>30458466
Not long ago there was a similar prompt, but it implied the stands changed to another user.
>>30458506
Wasn't there going to be a story only with Anons with the same title?
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>>30459382
I suggested that as a title for a story like that, but i don't think there was ever a plan for anyone to write it
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>>30460494
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Kinda dead today, huh?
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LoodStandAnon, you seem to know a thing or two about kinks and fetishes and what not.
What do you think are the fetishes or sexual preferences for the ponies and characters ITT?
Do you think anyone would take their kinks as far as Kira?
You know, besides horsefucking I guess.
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>>30462970
10/10
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>>30462995
O boi thats a tough one.
I don't think I can speak for the oc's of authors in this thread because 1. I think it's a mite disrespectful since I'd be forcing my head cannons onto their work and 2. I'm probably fucking wrong since I've only read the greentexts of 2 or 3 anons here. All the kink stands I make are based off the character's cannon personality and portrayl in the show, and that doesn't necessarily match up with how anon's portray them in greentext. Furthermore, I haven't watched the show since the beginning of season 5 (the one with Communist lavender horse?) so most of the stand's i've made that belong to a canon character probably don't perfectly align with said character's personality now. Lastly, unless the sexual content in a greentext is pretty blatant like in FuckFaceMcGee's work, it's pretty hard to assume what a character's kinks are.

I think you could get better answers if you asked the anon's here what their oc's kinks are. Also, just what the hell have I missed because I'm thinking about getting back into the show to get more inspiration for standos.

Speaking of Standos, heres another

[BONKERS]
A blue lanky humanoid in a white dress shirt and loss dress pants. Both the shirt and pants are dotted in a random pattern of large, plasticlike cartoon eyes. Said eyes occasionally blink. (Basically think the suit at the start of this vid https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ISy0Hl0SBfg)

Abilities:
Allows it's user to apply cartoon physics to him/herself or their surroundings. Pretty much makes them a Toon from Who Framed Roger Rabbit. While this has wide applications and decent combat abilities, it's mostly used for making jokes and distracting fighters. I'm thinking this is a non lewd stand for Pinks. Seems to fit her character well.

Another contender for this stand is an Eris like figure, basically the same guy who had [ART FOR ART'S SAKE]. Does anyone know songs about chaos or entropy that aren't too depressing?
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Would giving [Wicker Man] bee related powers be too on the nose for a reference?
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>>30464839
Which was [Wickerman] again? Wasn't [Beautiful Liar] the "bee" stand?
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>>30465049
Oh, is there a [Wicker Man] already?
I was just thinking that, since it's also a song, it would technically work as a stand, but i could work in a reference to the movie
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Which stand ITT has the most 「Destructive Potential」?
>inb4 stand stats MEAN NOTHING.
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How was your steam sale anons?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HpqBh5Y2MyA&t=2s
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>>30464839
>[Wicker Man] attacks [Little Prince].
>Sean feels each and every sting.
>Sean says famous catchphrase.
It would be worth it just for that.
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>>30466103
I approve of and fully endorse this idea
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Are there any stands from separate stories that you think would work really well together?
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>>30465111
Wait is there a bee stand already? I was gonna make one out of https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HYU47cfNayA

>>30465323
That depends, what kind of destructive potential are we talking about? [TIMBUK THREE] can generate enough light to destroy anything if Care Root sacrifices something big enough. [BOULEVARD OF BROKEN DREAMS] will pursue you until you are dead with something that killed another version of you. Basically, lots of stands here are hella deadly in different ways.
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>>30467585
>[RISE] and 「Go Zone」
>[MY IMMORTAL] and [Material Girl]
>「Year Without Rain」 and 「I WANNA GO」
>[Seven Nation Army] and 「WAR」
>「FIRESTARTER」 and 「FEUER FREI」
>[Russian Unicorn] and 「Simply Red」
>「LIKE A RECORD」and 「BLACK SUN」
>「Five O'Clock Somewhere」 and [MONSOON]
>[The Hellion] and 「Technologic」
>「Fineshrine」 and [SOLITARY SHELL]
>[Starman] and 「Timbuk Three」
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>>30467960
Not technically, i was just kinda toying with the idea for one
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>>30467585
>[MEGASONIC], [LITTLE PRINCE], [BRAVE NEW WORLD], and [CRY THUNDER]
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>>30468565
*[MEGATRONIC]
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Y'know, there really should be more suit stands
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>>30468565
>Sonic, Sean and Dreamer act cold towards Shining Armor ot of jealousy since he is the only one with a shield.

Also,
>LoodStandAnon inheriting Sonic's 「ORGASMATRON」 for more lewd ideas.
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Bedtime bump. New job, graveyard shifts. Sorry it's been a month since CRBA 12, I'm adding to 13 mostly on lunch breaks and right after I wake up.

Stand: 「Will Do」 www.youtube.com/watch?v=1c7JzSH3LiQ
User: Eff Stop
Ability: Activates when the user plays 20 Questions with a target; for each question answered "Yes", the target's body temperature increases by half of a degree. If the user wins the game, the target spontaneously combusts, but if the user fails, this Stand relocates to the nearest survivable user without a Stand.

>>30464184
The characters aren't that different now, but you're definitely in for a ride, and I hope it throws some inspiration your way.

「Chaos Chaos」?
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>>30467960
I meant as in sheer force. Like who can hit harder or potentially wreck more shit.

>[TIMBUK THREE] can generate enough light to destroy anything if Care Root sacrifices something big enough.
This is the strongest we have then?
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>>30470607
I forgot [Sweet Thing Reprise] which almost always guarantees a win for it's user in a 1 on 1 fight. Also, [YEAR WITHOUT RAIN] makes the environment increasingly inhospitable the farther it's user is from a target, so it's pretty dangerous too.
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>>30470941
There is alss [Benzin] who by the start of the new chapter is able to lift a train car albeit with difficulty.
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Some more stand ideas I've been musing
[CARDBOARD CASTLES Act 1]
Appearance: A short, childlike figure wearing a comically large cardboard crown and chestplate.

Abilities: Any cardboard tools or weapons made by the user function as the object they represent and can harm enemy stands. These weapons are still cardboard though, so they'll fall apart in water. The stand needs to make the weapons out of physical cardboard and glue, and must be stored in dry locations so they don't mold and deteriorate. The user can be harmed by the weapons created by his stand.

[CC Act 2]
Appearance: A slightly taller but still rather short figure in full cardboard armor. The crown and chestplate fit better now.
Abilities: All cardboard creations have a slight durability increase and will no longer collapse due to natural deterioration. The stand itself can create weapons out of cardboard at a rapid speed now. The stand can also store and summon the weapons it creates but only 5 can be stored at a time.

[CC Act 3]
Appearance: Same as act 2 but the crown is now smaller and more of an accessory. It also wears a dazzling furred red cape.
Abilities: Can now turn the ground within a meter of it into cardboard for instant weapon making but weapons made on this ground will rapidly deteriorate if [CC] leaves that range. Larger and more elaborate weapons can be created such as battering rams and trebuchet. Also, any non stand user looking at CC will be compelled to refer to him as a king and offer him anything to earn his favor.

[UGLY FACES]
Appearance: A remote stand that can implant itself in a person. Once implanted, it forces the user to make increasingly bizarre faces. Prolonged exposure can cause the victim's face to stretch or tear itself apart due to the muscles stressing the skin.
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Devil’s train
Appearance: An 1800 style, english made train

Abilities: [DT] can manifest and it can travel anywhere so long as two parallel lines exist in front of it. These lines can be made out of anything but the size, speed, and maneuverability of [DEVIL’S TRAIN] depend on the components of the lines. The stand stand starts off slow but rapidly increases it's speed as it continues to travel. The stand isn’t suited for combat but since it can be summoned and dismissed rapidly it is dangerous in locations with multiple parallel lines.
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SUTANDO BUMPO

STAND NAME:
[PINBALL WIZARD] https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=4AKbUm8GrbM

APPEARANCE:
•A lithe humanoid with pale skin and slicked-back black hair, wearing a dust mask, glasses, and headphones and holding a cane

ABILITIES:
•When the user closes their eyes and takes a deep breath, all of their senses are heightened exponentially, along with their reaction speed
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"Alrighty, could you please tell me what you saw?" you ask your usual trio of informants.
>"If ah recall correctly," begins to tell the country girl "we were having ice cream at Sugarcube Corner when we saw a buncha people running away from something."
>"Hold up! I thought we were having a Sundae."
>"Ah Sundae IS an icecream!"
>"Is it? I thought icecream was just an ingredient."
"So what did you do then?" you interrupt their bickering, although now you also want to know which comes first, the sundae or the icecream...
>"Well, we finished our ICECREAMS, " punctuates the girl with the squeaky voice "and then we rushed to see what was going on."
"So you three just jumped right into what could have been a dangerous situation?"
>"Duh, of course we did!" says the one with the purple hair, you should learn their names some day, "How else would we know what was going on?"
>You nod your head in approval.
>You were certain kids these days did stupid things like calling adults to solve their problems, but it brings joy to your heart to know there still are some who would jump into danger just to satisfy their curiosity.
>In a way it reminds you of your younger days, your scars and your police record could tell some bizarre stories...
>But this isn't about you. Carry on!
"What did you see at the place of the incident."
>"There was our friend Twist."
>"Yeah it was Twist."
>"Totally."
>You know about her, the ginger with the lisp.
>"And she was acting kind of weird."
"Weird how?"
>"She was just standing there... menacingly."
>"To me she seemed distressed, what with all that wind blowing everywhere."
>"That wind was so strong, I thought the trashcans we were hiding behind would get blown away!"
>So far it checks out with what you already knew, but let's see if you can get something new.
"Was she alone?"
>"No," they say at the same time "there was someone else."
>This is it!
>The missing piece in your investigation!
"Please, tell me everything. Who was it?"
>"It was..."
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>"That guy Whiz Kid from school."
>"A man with a shirt like the one my dad uses and Rarity hates so much."
>"Some wackjob dressed like a super hero with a sword."
>...huh?
>The girls seem as surprised as you are.
>"What are you talking about Scoots, I'm sure ah saw the kid with the bowl cut that was always hanging with Derpy!"
>"Are you blind? It was this guy with a sword. A real sword!"
>"I'm not sure why she doesn't like those shirts, they are so colorful!"
>This is getting nowhere.
"Ok, why don't you tell me, one by one, what you saw?"
>The girl with the pink ribbon speaks first.
>"Whiz Kid was yelling at Twist, then all of a sudden a tornado formed between them!" she makes some sound effects while waving her arms "Whiz seemed to duck and take cover behind something, I didn't see nothing, until he rushed into the tornado. Then there was this huge arc of light, and then they were gone."
>You hastly take notes of all she said, then move over to purple hair who was tapping her feet in dissaproval the whole time.
>"Here's what really happened. Twist was making the air spin in circles but then enter Mr hero who posed dramatically and took out a sword out of nowhere. He wanted to rush in, but the wind got stronger, so he pierced the ground with his sword to keep himself stedy. Now, I'm not sure how he did this, but the tip of his sword emerged right in the middle of the
tornado! Then he seemed to freak out a bit, and then he kinda passed out."
>You finish writing down what she said.
"He passed out? Just like that?"
>"Yeah, I don't know why. But Twist began to cry that moment, and then she left... Wait, if he was a hero, does that mean that Twist is a super villain?"
>"Our friend Twist ain't no villain!" screams Apple...uhhh Ribbon, Apple Ribbon at her friend.
>"She could be!"
>"Could not!"
>"I don't think Twist really wanted to do what she was doing." says the remaining girl.
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"How come?"
>"Well..." she fidgets a bit with the hem of her dress "when she made the tornado she was really angry. That man made a huge and pretty star to shield himself for a bit but, he left his cover and started to walk slowly towards the tornado.He..." she seems to be struggling a bit to say the next part "He got hurt really bad. There were a lot of things flying towards him, and then his leg twisted back."
>She gets a bit paler.
"And then what happened?"
>"I closed my eyes."
>Shoot, just when it was getting interesting.
>Then again, you can't expect a little girl like her to endure so much violence.
>"But, even though he was being hurt all over, he seemed more concerned about Twist the whole time, and he didn't stop moving towards her... Maybe that's why she was crying? What do you think girls?"
>"She could be!"
>"Could not!"
"Really, they are still at it."
>"Geez girls, stop fighting!" she says joining them.
>Still, you got quite a bit out of all of this.
>Their stories are all different, but some key elements remain.
>You remember visiting the place of the incident, and indeed there seemed to be evidence of great gusts of winds, an unknown sort of flashbang, something sharp perforating the floor and lots of blood.
>The girls are definitely telling the truth.
>Did something affect what they could perceive?
>Is it possible that all three of the stories happened at the same time?
>You may need more time to unravel this mistery.
>But business comes first. You take the usual sixty bucks from your lab coat's pocket.
"Okay girls, thanks for your cooper..."
>Oh shit...
>"I keep telling you it was made out of lights"
>"No! It had pretty stars!"
>"I keep saying from the fucking begining that it had a fucking sword!"
>All three of them are surrounded by a thin red veil of PSI energy, and hovering above them is a ghost like apparition, made out of red neon tubes, holding a lightsaber and with a longcoat made out of stars.
"You have one too..."
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>>30474738
>"Lights!"
>"Stars!"
>"Sword!"
>"Light... Oh! That's our money!"
>The three of them finish arguing inmediately, their anger being replaced by greed.
>The apparition vanishes.
>Before you can even begin to question them about it, they had already taken the money from your hands and ran away.
>"Thanks for the money!
>"Smell ya later!"
>"So long Mr. Psientist!"
>These girls are going to be the end of you...
>But that doesn't matter right now.
>You take out a small notepad from the inside of your coat and quickly sketch their "summon".
>Ever since you found out the secret from that honey shop, you've been making this 「Compendium」 of people with this particular bizarre power.
"It only came out when those three were arguing, but neither of them noticed it and it went away as soon as they were distracted. This must mean that they haven't matured to it yet. It seemed to be an amalgamation of what each of them interpreted from that situation, so it could possibly have a new form each time it is used, and thus a huge development potential."
>And now the finishing touch.
"I shall name it..." you check the last album you had playing on your phone "「Mouth Moods」!"
>http://www.neilcic.com/mouthmoods/
>Since you discovered it first it is only fair you get to name it.
>You are one step closer to your new goal. Finding each and everyone of these espers in Canterlot and compile as much as you can about them.
"Ok, what's next..." you check your phone for some of the hundred memos you wrote about bizarre incidents. "There is that blue haired guy running around with that strange gun, or the rumored vampire with a scythe-fishing hook, ... oh this one looks promising. These two are from different schools but found themselves suddenly as companions. I wonder what is your story, Joestar and Zeppelli."
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>>30474703
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>>30474738
>>30474758
Today I had some free time at work and all of a sudden came up with this little Rashomon style story. I hope it can fight your boredom while we await for the return of Writroplex, the epilogue to French's ASB, and hopefully the return of Superkeaton someday. If you hadn't noticed, these characters were from his unfinished story.
And as always Stand Proud!
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In life, we face regrets! Decisions made poorly, roads untraveled, entire lifetimes to which reality is merely a shadow. The choices we make and things we say create the hands of fate, and they torture us forever after. Sometimes we must decide between striving for a future already lost and wallowing in fatal despair!

Stand: 「Dr. Flynn」 youtube.com/watch?v=lDp0VfKKxss
User: Inky Rose
Ability: Appears as hands which manifest from solid surfaces, dragging victims into the Earth as if it's made of quicksand. This Stand can track multiple targets at once, slowly, but is only summoned when the user identifies something a target regrets. It can only be retracted by defeating the user or by accomplishing whatever triggered it: writing that novel, kissing your sixth-grade crush, buying your dream car, et cetera.

>>30472055
Holy shit, that's an Araki-tier Stand.

>>30474870
This was pretty good, man, and I'm interested in this researcher's intentions. Also, glad someone else here's listened to Cicierega, and that the Crusaders aren't just OP in CRBA. Since you mentioned Rashomon I can't stop imagining Apple Bloom crying and saying "Ah don't wahnt this to be Hell!" while Sweetie leers at her.
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>>30474870
NJ in saving the thread Star. Cool read too!

Another stand idea
Stand Name: [3005] or [THREE THOUSAND AND FIVE]
Appearance: The stand itself is beachside carnival.

Stand abilities:
Activates whenever the stand is threatened. Upon activation, any inanimate animal in the park is granted sentience. This mostly applies to the stuffed animals sold as prizes in the park but it can effect other depictions of animals or people. Objects under this stand's effect develop personalities that fit their appearance (A stuffed bear with the name "canadian lumberjack" would act like a canadian lumberjack) and all accessories they carry are capable of harming stands. This stand has a fondness for children and will often find ways of working it's creations into their hands.
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>>30475071
Holy shit, thanks man!
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Revamped [LEGEND HAS IT]
Appearance: A pair of brass knuckles that the user wears.
Abilities: Victims of [LEGEND HAS IT] are sent into a drug induced state similar to a bad acid trip. If multiple people are targeted by [LEGEND HAS IT] they all share the same hallucination. During this time, [LEGEND HAS IT] can manifest as a monster and attack one person who is suffering it's effects. The catch is only that person can see [LEGEND HAS IT] until it's user sends it to attack another person, which makes attacking it difficult. The weakness of this stand is that it's strength is dependent on the reaction of the victim, so if a target is resistant to the brass knuckle punches or if they can focus on making themselves calm/more lucid, the stand loses a lot of power.
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>>30474758
>tfw someone prempts you in naming a stand after a Neil Cicierega album.

Once again, it's scary how close some of our musical tastes run.
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>>30362273
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Aya
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What stories do you think DP will include in the OVA?
https://youtu.be/0rc5O6jwssw
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JoeJoe bizarre adventure chapter 2 is ready to be posted tomorrow at about 5pm.

The car park conundrum concludes the chapter with a epic show down between our duo protagonists against a surprising challenger.

Anyone still reading get semi hype? N-not that you have to o-or anything Baka....
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>>30478920
I'm really looking forward to the showdown!
GO! GO! JoeJoe! GO! GO! ZEPPELLI!
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Looks like this thread is sinking. It was fun guis.
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>>30480451
Stand Name: [Never Give Up] https://youtu.be/s43sptuwkvA
Stand User: My Little Jojo Thread.
Ability: Automatic stand of the thread. It takes the form of a desk toy water bird. This stand bumps the thread whenever it is in danger of reaching page 10. This stand can only function if there is at least one concious writefriend with new or due stories to write or topics to share.
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If a character in this thread and a jojo character teamed up, who would you want it to be?
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>>30481192
I just wanna see Erich and Stroheim team up.
Also maybe Ziggy taking a trip through Italy alongside the journey of Buccellati's crew or anywhere in any of the parts for that matter, tripping his way around the main adventure
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>>30458708
“What was I supposed to do? All my life, this unknown figure, this voice, has guided me to success every time. I couldn’t ignore fate, this was something I had to do, but it’s not what I wanted. So, I took as much money as I had at the time, about 1,000 dollars saved up, and all my stuff. I was told not to say goodbye to my family, or my girlfriend. I was gone by the morning on a train to canterlot.”
>Sean sat there in disbelief, puzzled about your blatant obedience of the voice
>He did not understand, he probably never would, no one ever would, stand or no stand.
“This was 2 years ago. I’ve changed my name Anonyeemoose for full secrecy, living in a motel not very far from your apartment. The Voice still comes to me in my sleep, but he does not give me advice now, only choices and bits of info, mostly other stands in the area, but not really the user…that was until it told me about you. The Voice told me all the basics of your stand, and told me to challenge you in a duel. If you lost, I’d have to kill you, no exceptions. But If you won…. You could go free."
>” Wait…you’re for real letting me go?”
“Yes.”
>”no, no no no no, literally less than 5 hours ago, you tried to fucking kill me, and now you’re just…letting me leave?”
“Whatever the voice heeds as true, it will be so. I’ve learned this a long while ago, I’ve learned to stop questioning what it told me…there’s no point to. Everything it says is for my benefit.”
>”Your benefit? Was it your benefit to almost kill people out there with that sword of yours?”
“BNW works separately from me at times when I’m not focused… If I had known, I would’ve stopped it from even crossing their paths!”
>” And what would you have done if the voice told you those people would have needed to die? You wouldn’t have questioned it right? It would’ve been for your benefit, correct?”
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>>30481072
You clever mother fucker. 10 horse points for you Star
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>>30482093
“It…It would never tell me to do that. It has never asked me to kill an innocent before, and It wouldn’t do that now…I’ll be more careful in the future!”
>Sean gets up from the ground and brings out his 「Little Prince」, giving it your 「Brave New World」 too
>” there might not be a future for you kid…. LP?”
>「Yeah? 」
>” Let him have it”
>As you see his stand slowly lift his broadsword up high, you think…this is probably what you deserved.
>You were to reckless, too heavy handed
>this is what fate wanted… so be it.
>you get ready for your incoming demise, only to feel…. relief?
>you look behind you to find that your legs are free, no longer trapped under some of the playground wreckage, which had been cut to pieces
>You then look over to find Sean falling over on the ground, barely conscious from using his stand just once.
>You immediately crawl over to Sean and speak to him.
>”Hey, what the hell are you still doing here? Go, before the cops get here, they do a patrol of the park in the evening, they’ll be here soon.”
“Why?”
>” oh my god, why what you colossal asshat?”
“Why did you save me? Why didn’t you kill me instead, I almost did the same to you?”
>Sean looks you over one time. Before he passed out from the exhaustion, he had only told you one thing
>” Because I’m not fucking crazy.”
>You are left by yourself, wondering how the hell you're getting out of here.
>"HOLY SHIT! Mckennean, get your ass over here!"
>in the distance, you hear somebody yelling by where the park formerly was
>A good look in that direction could see it was the police
>this is not good at all, not one bit
>you then quickly search all over the ground to find BNW, which was conveniently dropped by Sean right next to his body
>you get up from the ground, intense pain shooting all over, but you can't rest now
>you have to go, there are no other options!
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>>30482490
Mckennean is so a police name.
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I want to watch Stardust Crusaders BUT THE FUCKING EPISODES KEEP FUCKING FREEZING
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THE TIME HAS CUM AND SO HAVE I LETS GO GO JOEJOE!!!

also quick key chart here N = narrator (I really love the narrator through the JoJo series.)

Narrator - >Upon just releasing the rock from his hand, JoeJoe's hand inverted so the rock was aiming towards his face!
N - >Quickly reacting to this he managed to twist his wrist so the rock narrowly missed his head.
"What the fuck!?!?!?!?"
N - >Looking left & right, up and down JoeJoe could see nothing in particular out of the ordinary...
"Zac did you just see what hap-"
N - >JoeJoe finally turned to Zac to see him completely in a state of paralysis; the only part of him able to semi function was his mouth.
>"Joe-Ghost,other-side,car,park..."
>Looking to the other side of the car park you didn't see a ghost of any description.
>But you did see something equally bizarre.
"You're a long way from canterlot high, you stupid bitch."
>A mere chuckle was the girls only response.
>"Sticks and stones may break my bones but names will never hurt me."
>A devilish grin emerges from her face.
>"But they'll sure hurt the hell out of you!!!"
>Before you could comprehend what she meant you found yourself being thrown across the sports field of Crystal prep academy.
>You manage to stand your ground for half the journey however dealing with this supernatural force became too much for you as you slided on your back through the dirt.
>This bitch ruined your Fleece.
"I'm going to give you a headstart to run before I kick your ass into next week..."
>you point menacingly as the girl emerges from the trees on the other side of the field.
"AMETHYST STAR!!!"
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>>30483710
>The purple girl must have heard you from this great distance as she merely laughed whipping back her well kempt hair.
>"I must admit JoeJoe what happened to your little friend was simply 'shocking', I suppose you could even call it a 'twist' of fate."
>You brush the dirt off of yourself before running for her, a good football field length between the both of you two.
>"However it seems like you haven't got what it takes to beat a superior student like myself..."
>You're getting angry, she is merely trash talking while you're getting ready to punch her into orbit.
>"Look's like a plebeian like yourself can't 'see' what i'm trying to say hmmm?"
>As you try to close the distance between yourself and one time runway model dumb bitch Amethyst star you suddenly lose all sense of vision!
"WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON!?!?!?"
>The girl merely laughs while you struggle to find your bearings.
>You may have been blind but you were seeing red; you were pissed off.
>"You must really be dumb, you're lucky I can't actually fight you."
>She yells a bit closer to you then you thought.
"Say that again you dumb bitch!!!"
>You were no longer angry...
>You were fucking furious!
>"Maybe you just can't 'hear' me"
>And just like that your vision suddenly returned however you became deaf.
>You went from a football pitch sized distance to probably about 50 metres.
>This one time model was about to get a reality check!
"I Can't wait to wipe that shit eating grin off your face, better yet wipe that face off your head!"
>That was what you wanted to say but since being deaf you could hear nothing.
>You were closing the distance extremely quickly, every step being about 5 metres.
>For someone your size you had a lot of speed when you really wanted to use it.
>That's mostly why Retardbow Dash wanted to always best you at anything involving racing.
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>At about 10 metres you finally were within attacking distance and launched yourself forward going for a very fast very hard hitting flying kick.
>".... ... ..... .... .... .. ... '.....-....' ......?"
Don't you agree that life is one 'giant-maze' JoeJoe?
>Instead of your leg connecting to Amethyst Stars very kickable face your leg went straight through a tall wall like bush.
"What the?"
>At least you regained your hearing.
>"Oh JoeJoe did you really think defeating an amazing runway model with much superior looks and intellect to a mere simpleton like yourself would be that easy?"
>you gritted your teeth as you started running through the maze.
"I don't know where you are fucking hiding or what the fuck is going on but i'm still going to kick your ass into next week!!!"
>"That's sweet JoeJoe I'll be waiting at the end for you; don't take too long i've got to get back before lunch ends..."
>You could hear her snicker as she walks away.
>"Ciao~"
>That little...
>Before you could go into an explosive mental rant you realise the reality of what has just happened.
>You think you do anyway, how could anyone explain what you've just been through?
>Your one true friend was put into a severe state of paralysis mumbling something about a 'ghost'
>While all this is happening you are by what seems to be magic 'thrown' across the field like a leaf in the wind...
>all followed by nearly simultaneously going Blind followed by Deaf.
>If you actually told all this to anyone you'd most likely be sent to a Shrink.
"I really don't know whats going on, I let my anger cloud my judgement; i'm still going to kick that purple bitches ass as soon as a I get out of this maze!"
>And with that you set off into the high green tall wall like bushes, who knows what this natural maze could hold?
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>>30484194
>You are JoeJoe and you are lost in a green maze, you're less angry and more determined on getting off this natural nuisance.
>It has been about an hour since you last said you were going to kick Amethyst stars ass.
>Well it's realistically been 5 minutes but it has felt like an hour...
"Stupid purple bitch using some sort of 'ghost' to defeat me!"
>Your anger fueled your determination which is your greatest asset however it fuels your ignorance which is also your greatest weakness.
>You're not ignorant like she or some other people were but you just generally ignored things when pissed off.
>Thankfully you were not stupid like most people either, easily angered yes but you could easily calm yourself down when given a moments notice...
"I just want to get out of this stupid maze."
>Amethyst was out there most likely eavesdropping to you but your main concern was Zac.
>It seemed like no matter what she said in a sentence a certain word or phrase enabled something to change within you...
>Almost as if something was targeting you and doing exactly as she said...
>you've seen some bizarre things before but 'ghost's' really? that's just the stupid shit said in childrens storys.
>Probably those stupid girls from yesterday in history would believe that shit.
>But you? no way.
>There must be some sort of logical explaination for all this, right?
>These 10 ft high natural walls seemed like skyscrapes as you looked up.
>It's funny being 195cm and built like a deity of fitness usually is quite admirable in school and general life...
>But now you just felt small in this seemingly endless maze.
>It seemed like you'd be here forever; doomed to wander aimlessly, until fate intervened.
>As the wind passed through the maze natures breeze seemed to be on your side.
>Listening carefully you could hear whispers, as if the ants below you were talking.
>Upon blinking your eyes to do a double check you seemed to see THROUGH the thick tree-like walls!
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>>30484647
>"What's going on here?"
>The senses that were once taken from you merely minutes ago had returned stronger then ever.
>Even though you were in the middle of a giant maze you could see your house from here!
>You could even see your mum showering nak-
"No time for that me; I gotta exploit this new super-vision!"
>Nearly perving on your own mother aside this was awesome, bizarre but awesome.
>The maze itself seemed to flatten back into its original field state.
>But why was all this happening?
>What possible reason could you gain all this power and overcome the maze in mere seconds?
>The reason soon became obvious to you.
>Amethyst had seemed lost to interest in you and departed back to the car park...
>...
"ZAC!!!"
>The distance she had over you was way too much, even your car wouldn't catch up to her time.
>But you can't give up, impossible or not you can't let your friend be harmed!
>Realising your paralysed friend would have no potential chance to withstand whatever otherworldy powers Amethyst star had used here you start sprinting.
>Also by sprinting you mean flying at speeds similar to that of a aeroplane.
>You, JoeJoe had transcended the need for walking...
"I CAN FUCKING FLY!!!"
>Feeling the need to make a pose for flying you choose the iconic Superman.
>Although the distance seemed about 5 miles away (Yes Crystal prep had a VERY large sports field) you closed the gap within 30 seconds.
>Ceasing your flight towards Amethyst purple bitch you once again pose in a hero like fashion.
"STOP RIGHT THERE LEX- FUCK I'M NO LONGER IN SUPER HERO MODE."
>You stop posing as if you're in a tight blue suit with a red cape.
"Stop whatever the fuck you're doing Amethyst Star i've come here to save Zac and kick your ass!"
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>>30484813
>Mostly save Zac but kicking her ass is very important to you too...
>Also you don't really know why you didn't question how you just gained all of these powers and just FLYED.
>But that can wait you got to take care of this bimbo ONE TIME runway model who thinks she's a fucking hotshot.
>Her teeth grind in fury, and her composure breaks down to that of a freshman on their first day of college.
>"WHAT!?!?! This wasn't supposed to happen, 'HE' told me it wasn't supposed to happen."
>He?
"It seem's like you must have sniffed some glue or something Ameth-bitch, you're deluded!!!"
>She stutters trying to form any sort of word at all.
>"Ca-nt fa-il, he wi-ll ki-ll m-e..."
>Something changed within Amethyst Star!
>Her purple skin had become a shade lighter and her eyes, her eyes had become a smokey purple similar to that of that demonic twilight you once saw.
>You know; the one who nearly destroyed your universe... yeah her.
>Anyway something seemed very off putting as Amethyst withdrew a knife, a very large unnerving knife.
>Her attention drifted away from you and back towards her original target.
>ZAC!
>You were not an expert on knives since your main weapons were your fists but if you had to guess she had a Bowie knife big enough to easily be mistaken for a machete.
>It had a White hinge with mini black star patterns on it.
>It was going straight for Zac as you were too busy analysing it...
"STOP YOU CRAZY FUCKING BITCH!!!"
>As you quickly ran in an attempt to rugby tackle her to begin the mother of all ground and pounds she screamed as she confronted you once again.
>"[BLACK STAR]!!!!!"
>Why the fuck is she referring to a David Bowie song / album?
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>>30484894
>I mean yeah you liked that song and the artist himself but that was so out of context.
>You don't just fight and scream a song reference out of now-
>Overthinking all this bit you back in the ass, severely!
>When the name of that David Bowie Song / album was yelled and her knife was lunged deep within your shoulder you could feel this un-natural force again...
>It was pissed off, like super duper pissed off.
>It felt like a tornado had been thrown against you as you flew back.
>The pain from the knife was unbearable but it also felt like a pin prick as you were more concerned for your best friend.
>As this supernatural force threw you away all your previous problems came back, you became: blind, deaf and was going through very thick painful bushes.
>All at once this happened and it seemed personally to you all hope had been lost.
>Maybe Zac was right afterall; Amethyst had some sort of 'ghost' aiding her.
>Theirs not much more that you could think of at this point to actually explain these bizarre events.
>That didn't matter much anymore though, you let your friend down, you abandoned and most likely let your best friend die.
"I'm so sorry Zac Zeppeli..."
>It felt like a minute passed before everything seemed to suddenly stop.
>Nothing... Nothing was happening, there was no noise no supernatural force was pushing you...
>The last thing you remember seeing was Amethyst scream as she stabbed you and forced you away and turning back to Zac.
>What happened?
>Slowly the sound of the wind came back to your ears, not super powerful like before but back to normal.
"HOLY FUCK WHAT IS THAT!?!!?"
>You're taken aback as a pair of alien-like jaws are mere inches away from your head. a metal cage stopping them from actually making contact with you.
>It had a ripped body with human features of quite burly arms and pecs (no where near as good as you of course)
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>To top it all off it had wings which looked like they were made from scorpion singers.
"Zac was right this thing WAS a ghost, I never saw it at all..."
N - >JoeJoe had not gained his stand yet However through the power of another stand users ability turning Amethyst's stars stand into stone had made it completly visible to none stand users.
N - >JoeJoe was not concerned about this too much though after awhile he remembered what he was most worried about, running back to check on his friend Zac Zeppeli!
>5 miles was a long run you were winded and the knife pain seem to set in.
>You lost your adrenaline from the thrill of this epic battle and by the end was merely stumbling to Zac.
>Having a 2 ft blade go right down your elbow until the hinge is against it is not fun...
"Zac... Zac, where's Zac."
>Limping at this point to the car park you see a blood trail lead around the corner.
>You didn't 'believe' in many things, fate was the nearest thing to something you actually beleived.
"Please if there is any power above, let fate help Zac survive!"
>At this point you are clinching to the wall. your vision fading...
>You were a big guy and could take a good beating but you are only human; humans aren't build for supernatural encounters.
>Finally going around the corner you are met with once again another blood curdling fright.
"Amethyst star also became a stone statue?!!?!!?"
>The sheer suprise from this face to face encounter and the loss of your own blood forced you to fall down.
>Crawling back you can see the frozen look of horror on her face.
>That didn't matter too much to you however, what did matter was Zac.
>"JoeJoe, What happened to you man!?!?!"
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>>30485178 was meant for >>30485041
by the way.

>>30485178
>Zac back to his normal good self rushed to your aid, you were bad but he was okay which was all that mattered to you.
"H-Hey buddy... Sorry for being late to help you there..."
>Zac picked you up and steadyed you on the Crystal prep school wall.
>Applying pressure to your wound he continues.
>"Mamma Mia JoeJoe you're white as paper i'm taking you to our nurse stat, i'll make a story up."
>You were exactly at the spot you were at before all this mess started...
>That car belonging to that Deutch-bag Aryanne.
"Not before doing what I promised to do for you buddy."
>Using the last of your strength you yanked the Knife out of your shoulder further shocking Zac.
>"Merda santa, JOEJOE we've got to go now!"
>You face Zac; huge bowie knife in hand.
"You better tell me what you did to Ame-bitch back there, I was supposed to kick her ass back there... NOT YOU!"
>You nearly black out but you remember one last thing...
"EAT AMERICAN STEEL, NAZI ASSHOLES!!!"
>With that you black out throwing the bowie blade through the wind screen and through the central gear box of Aryanne's car!
>That knife throw has left Aryanne no choice but to take the bus to school for the next week or two.
N - >JoeJoe and Zac had both encountered their first stand user, but their are more questions then answers here.
N - >What was going on with the 'second form', who was 'he', How did Zac turn Amethyst star and her stand into stone?
N - > FIND OUT IN CHAPTER 3 OF JOEJOE'S BIZARRE ADVENTURE CAR'S AND CHAOS!!!
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>>30485235
Stand user - Amethyst Star

Stand Name - Black Star

Stats - Power - D
Speed - C
Range - A
Vitality - C
Precision - A
Develop - D

Stand Ability - This stand has the ability to turn words and their meaning into their literal sense, so if the user was to say 'why is it so 'dark' in here'
the stand will literally turn the room pitch black dark, it isn't combat based as it's more of a time wasting / trap stand, even though it is a horrible looking
human alien hybrid it's actual master is the knife which the user wields. very similar to Anubis in Stardust Crusaders except now the stand itself has been encased
in rock the knife itself is no more than a cool collector's item. The main drawback
to Black star is it has a 5 mile range and if the stand user leaves it's target alone within that range the stands ability wears off and thus the users gains all those senses
taken by Black star back, but they are enhanced until the target is face to face within the stand user. Oh also if the knife is used and embedded into the target then the actual stand is released
bringing out the spirit who will do everything previously mentioned to you by the stand user.

TL;DR The Stand user must keep eye contact on target at all times to take 'one' sense / ability away at a time (or to set up a trap or a maze etc...) if the stand user does
turn away if they go 5 miles away from the target the target gets everything back and gains enhanced abilities until the user gets into very close range and looks at them again.
Also the power is literally the knife as the alien human has no real power just a huge 2ft knife which is usually very threatening but in the JoeJoe universe is nothing really.
Just don't get stabbed with it otherwise you'll have a lot of bad things happen very quickly!

P.S: Sorry guy with David bowie reference / character Ziggy stardust theres too many writefags to remember, but you're awesome. infact all of you other writefags are awesome!
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>>30485235
This chapter was awesome!
We got to see our first Stand Fight, and as I've said previoously I love when a non.user has to figure out what is going on around him.
I liked how you wrote Joe Joe. I remember him being a bit mean spirited on the beginning of the story, although so was everyone around him, but now we got to see how far he is willing to go for a friend. Seeing him go from pissed, to confused, to extatic [spoiler[ that part were we got to see a glimpse of his powers was fun to read[/spoiler], to impressed, then angry again... He has clearly shown way more emotion than just being constantly annoyed and I like that a lot.
>However through the power of another stand users ability turning Amethyst's stars stand into stone had made it completly visible to none stand users.
When I read this part I thought Angel Rammsetin had somehow got herself involved in the fight.
I like how you handled the 「Narrator」. Adding it is kinda tricky to do in a second person greentext, but the way you did it did not hinder how the story was read.
All in all it was awesome and I'd love to see more chapters to come.
Keep it up!
>>30485263 You have nothing to apologise man. In fact, it surprises me that the name [Black Star] hadn't been used sooner.
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Anyway that's my update. I've got a lot of work to do but i've never really written stand combat before so it'll be sub-par compared to everyone else here...

I think the length of the posts for the actual fight was decent, 8-9 it was mostly french anon and his story of anon vs trixie which gave me the idea of doing a stand user vs none stand user (that and I've yet to give JoeJoe his stand...) so trying to make it seem bizarre but make JoeJoe keep his cool, non fuck giving demeanour is a bit of a challenge to say the least.

Anyway thanks for being patient and waiting guys and well reading if you so chose so (but i can't really blame you if you didn't this honestly does feel bad what i've just spent the last week typing.)

There won't be many actual stand fights for these few beginning chapters (and the chapters aren't going to be huge long compared to other writefag stories i.e. CRBA) but once the story sets itself out things will a bit more worthy of reading but until then your patience and anyone still reading this is greatly appreciated.

Also I will fix any small errors in my pastebin, i wrote this all on note and semi-fixed it before posting.
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This is actually an old one i forgot i made

Stand name: [Tik Tok]
User: ???

This stand allows the user to slow time proportional to their blood alcohol content
In theory, the user could stop time completely, but the required amount of alcohol in their system would kill any non-supernatural being
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Bump because I'm almost done with the epilouge after 100,000 years

>>30485462
You don't know how happy you made me when I saw that my first fight was your inspiration for this fight. I'm completely and utterly floored at how I was able to makes someone I looked up to inspired
Keep doing what you're doing man, I'm proud of you, yhonestly

>>30485407
Also everything here that my nigga star said is pretty much how i felt
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>>30487988
Bump
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It appears that the Diamond is Unbreakable movie won the audience award in the Neuchatel International Film Festival.
Also, for those in Montreal, the movie will be shown at the Fantasia International Film Festival from july 13th to August 2nd.
https://www.animenewsnetwork.com/news/2017-07-10/live-action-jojo-bizarre-adventure-wins-audience-award-at-neuchatel-intl-fantasic-film-festival/.118605
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>>30487122
>my nigga Star.
I did it! I'm one of the crew!
We them boyz!
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>>30490990
So instead of the [GANGSTARS], you'd be the [WRITEFAGS].
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[Bumple Haze]
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>>30491696
Who would each writefag be in terms of character based on that characters personality?

So we got 13 writefags (Death 13? But seriously that's a lot...) I guess all I can definetly say is frenchanon without
Sounding racist would be polnareff and for Ace / rammstein welp I think I can only thing of one German who loves Germany as much as Erich...
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>>30485462
I like the choice of Amethyst for the villain, and the inclusion of the narrator is a fresh decision - that overdramatic third-person omniscience is a lot of what I started Coco for.

However people feel about an individual episode, what matters in the long-term is that you spent a week working on it. Hold onto that drive, and focus on improving the things that pop out to you that know you could do better.
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>>30492891
>French is Polnareff.
>Ace is Stroheim.
So the rest should be...
>Omnee is Kira.
>FuckFace is ...Joseph? Or Hol Horse? So far they are the only characters overtly interested in the opposite sex.
>Phase 2 is Jonathan.
>Ditherer is Gappy. Because Care and Derpy = Gappy and Yasuho.
>Cameo... Hail 2 U!
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>>30495337
>And Writroplex as Jotaro obviously.
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>>30469723
You know, I DID have an idea that involved explaining Sonic's Stand change...
>ORGASMATRON was a bound Stand that SY found
>it can read lots of things but SY only looks at lewd stuff because it makes him laugh
>After the ROCKET MAN battle he decides he hates this dumb helmet and kicks it
>ends up in a window of a motel
>the guy staying at the hotel shoots him with an Arrow
>MEGATRONIC get
I had no idea where to take it from there, but one idea I scrapped was having the helmet belong to Batman, and it was actually a project used to spy on Stand Users. It would tie into that "Batman's notes on Stand Users" thing Ace did a while back.
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>>30469723
Whats this about 「ORGASMATRON」? I've never heard of this stand before.

Also, heres another stand
Name: [THUNDERSTRUCK]
Ability: [THUNDERSTRUCK] temporarily boosts the abilities of those struck by it's lightning attacks. This causes the physical abilities of it's opponents to double per each attack and stand users to use what abilities they have with greater control and efficiency. The drawback is that repeated attacks by [THUNDERSTRUCK] cause the stand's abilities to grow exponentially, eventually overwhelming the user and causing them to die of overexertion.

Basically, this stand boost's the enemy's abilities to the point where their body can't handle the power and they die.
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>>30495893
A motorcycle helmet that can read info about whatever the user looks at. Mostly fetish-related stuff for laughs, last it was used. See >>30495785
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>>30495955
Hmm. Seems similar to [THATS WHAT I LIKE], except [TWIL] can only reveal sexual interests and desires of people.

I just realized the initials spell out the 1st part of Twilight, so i think i just found it's user
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Alright, time for a new challenge
Create a stand based on any song played during a musical number in an animated movie
Hard mode: nothing from mlp or eqg
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>>30496891
[ALL STAR INTENSIFIES]
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Care Root’s Bizarre Adventure, Episode 13: Harsh Lights

>”Do you know why Dagi and I have different eyes than Aria?”
>Weeks back, you and Sonata were laying together on the couch in your resident shithole, and she asked you that.
>Her head was kind of buried against you, so you had to stop and put the hairbrush aside.
>Then she repeated herself.
>’Different eyes’...?
>You hadn’t really noticed, you guessed, but afterwards you could tell.
>Aria’s were a dark purple that matched the rest of her.
>Adagio’s and Sonata’s were pinker, violet.
>Cerise.
“Why?”
>She smiled a secretive smile and put her head back against you.
>”I’ll tell you when we go to Equestria.”
>Another interesting thing.
>She always said “Equestria”, but her sisters said “home”.
>But it was hard to notice that with her powder blue cheek against your ribs and her shoulders against your ribs.
>You hadn’t run to do laundry yet, so she was wearing some of your lay-about clothes.
>Those few inches you have on her mean the world.
>She occupies the small, sleepy space between cuddling and napping.
>The faint scent of strong flowers hums in the background.
>Eyes closed, she grins a wide feline smirk, face scrunched against your chest.
>T-top cute.
>God, you never thought a girl would be, like this, this close to you.
>”You’re excited to find out what it is, aren’t you? Your breathing’s picking up again.”
>You stop, involuntarily trying to calm your heartbeat.
>She giggles.
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>>30497351
>You try to ignore your embarrassment, and grasp the brush from the carpet.
>After giving it a once-over to ensure there’s nothing on it, you return to the long, sweeping strokes down her beautiful fountaining hair.
>”Mmm, Nonny...”
>She’s still smiling as she falls asleep.
>You keep running it along her, watching it leave a glossy curtain of lamp-light in its wake.
>She seems so peaceful, despite everything she’s been through.
>That smile...
>You have to protect that smile.

>Be Diamond Tiara, here, now.
>Anonymous stands over you like a man possesed, gun on your temple.
>Time moves in slow motion.
>C’mon, 「Pink」...!
>Erase just a few steps, maybe getting out of the car!
>Then you can jump in the front and run this guy down!
>The ghost touching you creates some kind of… of interference!
>It didn’t do that last time!
>Has he gotten stronger, or have you just--?
>「Nowhere Man」 keeps you planted while he pulls the trigger.
>Behind him, the lights go out, and he becomes less than a silhouette.
>But the gun glints faintly in the evening light of the entrance.
>「Pink」 struggles, trying to outpace his forefinger.
>But it isn’t fast enough.
>He fires.
>Click.
>Click.
>He’s out of bullets.
>As the moment clicks into the tapestry of fate, time starts again.
>Think, Diamond, think.
>If you can just escape the hold of his Stand, you can summon your own and beat-
>He rears back and smacks you across the cheek with the hilt.
>You feel the persistent sting of a developing bruise.
>He’s breathing heavily now.
>Is he going to cry, or something?
>Then, behind you,
>”「TIN CUP CHALICE」!”
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>>30497360
>A burst of energy moves past you and smashes into his ribcage.
>It doesn’t pierce the skin, but he’s sent sprawling sideways.
>The gun flies from his fingers.
>The air goes out of him in a moment, and you see Silver, holding two pieces of her Stand.
>Between them, dust coalesces into a fresh pair of glasses, and the implosion dissipates the ghost on her.
>Right!
>It floats, breaking down again, while you angle your own assailant closer to it.
>The ghost lets go of you, and flies around to Anonymous.
>He regains his balance as her shot goes wild.
>You summon 「Pink」, feeling its metaphysical weight beside you.
>And then you dive for the pistol.

>Be Scootaloo.
>The all-encompassing red throws deep shadows.
>Your allies inch closer, Sweetie wringing the arrow in her hands.
>Derpy’s crying breathily over Care Root’s unconscious body.
>It isn’t pleasant to look at, but it’s better than the alternative.
>In the room beyond, the final moments should be playing out just now.
>The gems have come together, and the portal opened.
>You’ve done everything in your power to bring this about.
>”W-what?”
>That’s...
>Sunset’s voice?
>”No! No, that can’t happen! They’re complete! They’re all COMPLETE!”
>And then, a mighty, arcane thundercrack.
>You stop being able to hear things at the same time as waves of pressure run up your arms.
>Something’s gone wrong…!
>A crimson wind smashes against the three of you, and Sweetie puts the arrow between them.
>Red, glittering light punches through something hard enough to rattle you, and then disappears.
>Your eyes go wide, and you run past the cross-eyed girl and into the conference room.
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>>30497365
>Twilight’s frozen next to the doorway.
>Sunset’s laying on the ground, propping herself up with one hand.
>Flash is looking up at the giant holes in the ceiling.
>Each one is the size of your head, and there are more than a dozen.
>Sixteen, seventeen...
>Before you can bother counting, you notice Sunset climbing to her knees.
>Her body’s smoking in spots, like she’s been struck by lightning.
>”W-we didn’t have all of the gems.”
>Flash comes over and helps her to her feet.
>”I don’t think any of them were fake. We checked them, thoroughly. There was no time for a switch.”
>Sunset breathes a little, patting down her leather jacket.
>”No, all three of them were real. I know that for sure. But they weren’t all there.”
>”You mean, a piece was missing?”
>She nods.
>Who wouldn’t have brought them together tonight?
>Adagio’s had to be complete to use her singing powers.
>Yours was definitely altogether, unless someone made a really stupid mistake.
>And the one Care got from Trixie was complete to begin with, right?
>As you ponder this, a blur of motion blends through the darkness.
>All the light’s coming from outside the door you entered from, so you have to squint against your own shadow.
>Apple Bloom sees it first, and cries out.
>”「Steam Powered Giraffe」!”
>She takes over the Stand, stepping forward and away from both of you, and it smashes a fist against the form.
>Adagio goes sprawling back into the dark.
>That puts Flash and Sunset on the alert.
>Sunset takes the lead.
>”They’ve scattered again. We’re not safe here, and there’s no advantage to fighting. We have to retreat.”
>Shit.
>What you just did to Care might not have been a wise idea.
>But as long as he makes it out...
>”I don’t think so.”
>The low purring voice comes from behind Sunset, and a clawing hand tears at Flash.
>The two separate, each moving backwards, but the attack abruptly stops.
>Adagio steps into the dim starlight.
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>>30495785
So that is how it happened. That explains everything!
>>30496891
Stand Name: [Be Our Guest]
Description: Automatic Stand bound to the Canterlot Castle's Cuttlery.
The stand activates when there is no staff available. The cuttlery will begin to act by itself, copying the movements performed by the staff.
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>>30497373
>”Sunset Shimmer may be as tough as we are, but none of the rest of you will be leaving tonight.”
>By the door, Twilight’s frozen.
>You can’t tell if she’s terrified or calculating.
>Adagio makes another swipe at Flash, this time drawing blood on his arm.
>Then, she steps away from him into the dark of the room.
>”Maybe I should start with your unconscious acrobat over here?”
>Flash grits his teeth.
>”Leave her out of it!”
>The voice comes from another part of the room, now.
>Is she throwing it?
>Is that something she can do, without the gem to help her?
>”How chivalrous. Why don’t you give me some answers in exchange for her life?”
>Sunset moves toward the table at the center of the room, looking around into the darkness.
>She doesn’t see anything more than you do, but she speaks.
>”Don’t ask him. Ask me what you want to know.”
>Silence.
>”Why are there Stands in CHS, and nowhere else? And why is it that the only Crystal Prep students who have them are the ones who are expressly helping you?”
>Sunset is stone, but Flash is nervous.
>”I know that you have the answer. If it’s worth more than a girl’s life...”
>Okay.
>You really, really need to shed some light in here.
>Wait, that’s it!
>You motion to Sweetie, and grip the arrow.
>Flash opens his mouth to speak.
>The arrow’s power runs up your arm, drawing in a current of energy from you.
>And forcing a Stand to activate.
>「Gold Guns Girls」.
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>>30497379
>Along one wall, your enemy is illuminated, holding Lemon Zest’s body.
>Above her is a giant light, created by her own ability.
>Her eyes narrow as they find yours, and you see a look of murderous frustration on her face..
>「Steam Powered Giraffe」 speeds towards her, but she’s too nimble.
>Even holding Lemon in a bridal carry, she still leaps out of the way.
>The light follows her in the air, and then hits a wall.
>She’s retreating through the far door!
>Flash yells and throws a hand out, flinging his energy after her.
>”「Beat Street」!”
>Reality goes wonky where he’s motioned.
>A massive chunk of the wall gets caught up in endless high-velocity blacktop.
>And then the doorway is about four times larger.
>Beyond is only darkness.

>Be Sunny Flare.
>The lights went off a couple minutes ago, and your eyes are only now adjusting.
>You’ve been separated from the group for too long.
>Ultimately you just feel very alone, and weak, wandering these halls.
>They could be getting slaughtered back there!
>You want to call them, but your gauntlets aren’t getting service.
>You’ve already resolved to find an exit and come back in to help them, however long it takes!
>If you could only find a door, or an opening, or anything remotely window-shaped...
>Labyrinth rules, you’ve followed the left-hand wall wherever it goes, and you haven’t doubled back.
>But this building seems mostly made of intersections.
>It’s only twenty seconds ago that you heard the humming.
>Faint, definitely muffled by something, but present.
>And not in the direction you came.
>Someone else is around here.
>Probably a Dazzling.
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>>30497381
>The point was driven home to you that they have superhuman hearing.
>If you can hear her, then...
>You keep your breathing silent, fighting the urge to stop completely.
>Then you kneel down and pop off your flats, one at a time.
>You realize belatedly there might be broken glass around, but it’s too late.
>Your socks are silent against the floor, and you plod forward.
>So, out of the three, it can’t be the ringleader or the one you already fought...
>Blue, Sonata.
>Like the other two, you have no idea what her Stand is.
>But she wouldn’t just be standing in a corner somewhere.
>You meander closer to her voice, your back to the nearest wall.
>The hum’s punctuated with breathy clicking.
>It sounds like her voice is cracking, sans actual talking.
>Did something happen to her?
>Yellow electrical warning signs begin to populate the walls, and at the next intersection her voice leads you rightwards.
>You’re in the guts of the building, doors lining the walls this way and that, unhelpful laminated signs on the walls, and as you round the corner you can hear her even more distinctly.
>You get the completely unwelcome impression of plodding into the underworld.
>If you died here and everyone else got to go home happy...
>Well, maybe you just aren’t meant to deal with danger.
>You’ve been testing fate, first against Care Root and now against this whole labyrinth.
>And you’re lucky you didn’t sustain long-term damage from it.
>All you want is to be with your sweetheart in France.
>She told you that if you helped, a full life would be arranged for you.
>Plane tickets, a comfortable bank account, general happiness.
>Even a cure for sterility, which you didn’t know you had and didn’t know how to feel about taking.
>But it was there, from that other world, along with the rest of their pile of wonders.
>You suppose everyone wants children eventually.
>Not your Aunt Cinch, though.
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>>30497386
>>30497386
>But to breathe the air of Lorraine, to finally try those oursins along the coast…
>You and your dearest Aligot Truffade...
>What was that?
>Movement, or the hint of it.
>It’s hard to tell out in the staticky sea of black, but your ears don’t mistake it.
>The humming-clicking is louder, punctuated by silence, and the sounds of plastic boots tapping away at the floor.
>You freeze, pressing yourself against the wall, but nothing about the sound changes.
>She hasn’t noticed you yet.
>No sooner do you think that thought then she stops.
>This is a four-way intersection.
>She’s coming back from somewhere, going somewhere...
>Those are likely to be the places that matter.
>You could retreat back down your hallway, but it wouldn’t be important.
>You need to make a turn, right or left.
>”Listening chair.”
>The words are a whisper.
>And then, sleepily, like a reminder:
>”Someone’s hiding...”

>Be Derpy.
>「Spinal Tap」 has fallen away, and there’s just the light.
>He’s still okay, still breathing.
>The Crusaders ran past you into the room, and you don’t bother looking back at the noise.
>The concrete burns your knees, and you fumble for something to break.
>You can’t stay here, you have to escape.
>And you have to open your eyes.
>You manage it against the brightness, blinking wetly and trying to focus.
>It’s real brightness, something between your chest and the ground.
>You reach into a pocket and snap something.
>「Spinal Tap」 scoops up Care, whose head is starting to bruise with a rash of red.
>He’s not bleeding, but you still don’t look at him.
>What’s this thing beneath you?
>Light.
>Solid, almost flat.
>You touch it, expecting it to burn, but it’s cool and glassy on your fingertips.
>A ball.
>You lift it, and it buzzes against your palms.
>Something twitches in your mind, like an extra muscle.
>Like a hand pressing into yours.
>This is...
“「Timbuk Three」?”
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>>30497394
>It presses against your mind.
>An image.
>You and him, much older, somewhere top-rate, with little masquerade masks over your eyes.
>Slow dancing, perfectly postured, looking into each other.
>You’ve always wanted to slow dance...
>You shake your head, and it diminishes before it can show you any more.
>The orb is a little less bright now.
>Just enough to notice.
>He gave you one of the orbs to light your way out.
>He’s letting you burn up his future on his behalf.
>...Your.
>Your future, too.
>You look down at the orb, and then up at the way out.
>And then, gingerly, you set Care back down.
>They could’ve finished him, and they didn’t.
>And they completely ignored you.
>You can’t just run away from that!
>You won’t!


>Be Anonymous.
>Luck is not on your side tonight.
>Is your life just a shitty comedy, or something?
>A cosmic joke?
>No, no more thinking like that.
>For Nata!
>「Nowhere Man」 summons up the twenty-third, twenty-fourth and twenty-fifth people to commit murder with their bare hands.
>Shit, and these ones have pecs.
>With a gesture you set them on the girls.
>”Silver!”
>Diamond shouts to her friend.
>She’s holding your pistol now, not that it’ll do her any good.
>But she’s got a point.
>You redirect the ghosts, sending them to mob Silver.
>One gets smashed by one of those waves of energy or whatever they are.
>The second you feel it dissipate, you summon it back to 「Nowhere Man」.
“Go for her Stand!”
>Silver throws something at #24, and it passes straight through.
>Diamond rushes forward, but her friend’s already held back.
>The two square plates clatter to the ground, and #23 plunges a hand into her heart.
>There!
>And then, against all odds, a gunshot.
>It cracks a few feet from you, and you’re stunned.
>So are the ghosts, temporarily.
>Diamond’s facing you, holding it up, a wisp of smoke over her eyes.
>”Call them off.”
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>>30497416
>Fuck.
>It went wild, but not by much.
>Was there an extra bullet in the chamber?
>You thought you ran through the whole cylinder, but maybe there was.
>Or one of your helpers reloaded it to be useful.
>You know there’s definitely not another one in it.
>But just to be safe...
>#23 takes a break from stopping Silver’s heartbeat to glide and take the gun.
>Diamond adjusts her grip and pulls the trigger again.
>Bang!
>And another time!
>Bang!
>The first bullet nearly hits your legs, and you throw yourself out of the way of the second one.
>How did this bitch have ammunition ready?
>#23 goes for the gun, and you hear the smacking sound of her Stand pulverizing it.
>You breathe heavier and summon another, throwing your head back and forth in search of cover.
>She fires again, over your head.
>Aria blocked off all of the exits!
>As time creeps by around you, you try to calculate some solution.
>How many bullets has she fired?
>Four.
>She fires another one at you, and your latest ghost grabs it out of the air.
>It falls to the ground, and you make your move.
>The two holding Silver lift her off of the ground and position her between her friend and you.
>Diamond hesitates.
>One shot left.
>The ghost in front of you flies to grab it.
>Her Stand appears, a tiny inky thing, and your ghost dodges around it.
>Diamond’s eyes go wide, and she dives out of the way, flopping onto the floor.
>She aims for her last shot, and you run out of the way.
>It clangs and sparks against the wall behind you.
>You breathe easier at the clear fact that she’s obviously never used a gun before.
>And you keep an eye on her to make sure she isn’t reloading.
>She’s still, just aiming towards you, lining up a shot with one eye closed.
>Trying to act tough.
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>>30497429
>Bullying bluster was enough to scare you as a kid, when you still didn’t know that people were just not worth the energy.
>But you’ve healed since then, and it doesn’t impress you.
>Your ghost pins her to the ground, reaching through her back to grab her heart.
>She gasps, and the pistol wobbles.
>To her credit, she doesn’t let go.
>But there’s no way in hell that she could reload that thing now.
>She’d only barely be able to fire it, if there were something in the barrel.
>You saunter over to her.
>She threw herself close to her friend’s… shards, or whatever they are.
>「Tin Cup Chalice」.
>You don’t want her pulling some last minute trick with them.
>So you pick them up, gingerly, between your forefingers and thumbs.
>And prepare to turn on your heels and hurl them outside, or else just smash them onto the ground.
>Silver winces, turns her head and shuts her eyes.
>You almost wish this weren’t so satisfy-
>BANG!
>The shot’s close, and you can feel the echo that comes with it.
>Your body ripples with it.
>Like you’re suddenly underwater, not completely solid.
>The feeling has a center.
>The ghost falls away from her as you run two fingers down and find it.
>Red, just above your hip.
>It looks like when you ripped out one of your baby teeth a little early...
>Your ears are full of cotton and now the world’s moving.
>Her friend falls to the ground at about the same time you do.
>Seven.
>How could there be seven?
>And then the hard metal of the bullet vanishes under your fingers.
>And Diamond stands over you, gun in hand.
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>>30497435
>Be Sunset Shimmer.
>You planned this!
>You planned out all of it!
>You were careful, and your Stand let you run it through with all of the survivors!
>Care Root, a less powerful version, granted, explained Trixie’s death, and Derpy’s.
>Other Flashes told you about what casualties you might expect, if you convinced the rest of the Rainbooms to come along..
>You knew it couldn’t be perfectly predictable, because Care was bringing the gem instead of Trixie and her group, but...
>But how could that have affected anything?
>It worked in the other universes, you were successful, everything was worth it!
>Now it’s all back to square one, someone shook up the puzzle and dumped it back into the box.
>And your allies, not to mention the little sisters of your best friends, are in danger because of it.
>Okay, okay.
>The important thing is to regroup.
>To regroup, and not to panic.
>So.
>You’re going to have to come back the way you came, and hope-
>”「SPINAL TAP」!”
>The voice comes from behind you, and the fist immediately follows it.
>You smash into the conference table, sundering it in two with a primordial crack.
>Splinters fly, and by the time you can roll over you can hear another impact.
>Flash hits the wall.
>Standing in the room, angry and crying, is Derpy.
>Under her arm is something unfamiliar, some kind of giant light bulb.
>It leaves none of her feelings to the imagination.
>”You attacked my boyfriend who never did anything to hurt anyone, and you made him give up SO MUCH-”
>Her Stand appears in front of the Crusaders and cracks the floor with its elbows, making them stumble.
>They summon 「Steam Powered Giraffe」, which levels a punch back at her.
>But 「Spinal Tap」 punches back at it, holding back its fist.
>Reversing it!
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>>30497442
>”And then you though you could lie to trick him into doing whatever you wanted! After you hurt MY SISTERS and made us think it was someone else! There’s no reason for that! He would’ve helped you, any of you, if you’d just ASKED!”
>She’s making it very hard for you to stay cool and think ahead.
>Flash is getting up.
>"But you didn’t! You didn’t ask because it was alright to make him suffer! It was okay!”
>「Steam Powered Giraffe」 has to throw up both arms to block the following strikes.
>They’re faster than her Stand should be able to move!
>In the light of what she’s carrying, she’s the center-stage of this scene, her motion the only motion.
>“All of you, all of you, all of you, all of you, ALL OF YOU ARE EVIL!”
>The final hit lands, and something cracks.
>It’s not 「Spinal Tap」.
>Still clutching the arrow, all three of them flinch and back up, shoulder to shoulder.
>And then the Stand dissipates back into nothing.
>Flash takes his opportunity.
>He’s positioned himself behind her, and he slips something out of his pocket.
>A taser.
>You’re proud of the selection, and keep your eyes pointed away from him.
>If you can get through past her, you still have to worry about getting Lemon back.
>And Care...
>He pulls the trigger, and twin prods fire from the end.
>And stop, caught in a field of light.
>The orb under her shoulder pulses, and her free hand reaches into her pocket.
>Flash lets go as the light travels up the lines, but it encases his hand, holding him fast.
>Without turning around, she produces a popsicle stick.
>Slides it into the corner of her mouth, very nearly smiling if not for her eyes.
>And then snaps it in half with her teeth.
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>>30497447
“Uhhhhh.”
>You clutch your head and wake up, eyes watering.
>Cold, floor.
>You can’t have been out for long, they haven’t tried to check that you’re dead.
>Why did you-
>Oh.
>Yeah.
>The corpse.
>Past Sour, who’s at least in one piece, there’s... Zap.
>You… honestly can’t say that you liked her very much.
>But there was something admirable about her anyway.
>Something that stirs in you, now...
>Your eyes adjust, adding wobbling depth to the darkness.
>Are you being attacked by a Stand?
>You scramble for your phone, and its light slices through without an issue.
>It better, considering it’s only a week old.
>And catches someone supporting themselves against a wall with one arm.
>You realize who, and lower the light, too late.
>She looks over her shoulder at you, and her glinting eyes are lost in the darkness.
>You nearly drop the phone, and switch it off as you scramble to the far wall.
>Giving up your light source is death, here.
>Something wet slops around the area you were just in, slithering.
>You resist the urge to look at it, just planning a route to take when it quests near you.
>What can you do?
>You have 「Pavlov’s Daughter」, so if you can make her tell a lie, then you can force her to eat...
>Concrete?
>Or, if you tell a lie and make it work on yourself, which you’ve never tried before, you can make yourself eat the… the darkness.
>Oh, this is hopeless.
>You saw Indigo, Sour.
>Flash and Lemon probably didn’t even make it to the end of this hallway.
>And whatever they did to wind her, it’s not as if your Stand will even attack her!
>She’s an immortal, and you’re essentially in a giant empty room!
>Sure, you carry a baggie of sleeping pills on you in case you need to use your Stand on someone, but it’s not going to work on her!
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>>30497451
>Something slides blindly around the room.
>You choke down a shriek and hold still as it touches your shoe.
>It wraps around your ankle, and you’re forced.
>You give a flash of light from the phone, briefer than a lightning-bug.
>It disintegrates, but then another one’s gripping the arm with the phone in it.
>So much for discretion.
>You switch hands and shine a light on it.
>Switch... hands…?
>Why does that sound so instinctually right to you?
>More are already coming, and you turn the light on them.
>Aria’s standing there, shoulders hunched, striding for you.
>Her fists comes right at you.
>But all you have to do is catch it!
>Your hand moves with the thought.
>Huh?
>Why did you do that?
>Her fist connects with your palm, obliterating your phone.
>You feel the cracking locomotive force of the punch disperse up your arm in little dark-red explosions.
>Bones creak, and then your Stand bubbles up to the surface.
>But that’s…
>No.
>It becomes clear to you.
>Clear as crystal.
>Yes, right when you were passing out!
>A name just came to you!
>Aria Blaze holds you against the wall just by pushing your fist.
>And then over her shoulder, wtih her free hand, she pulls a scimitar out of the darkness.
>With deathly speed, and mad eyes, she slices it down for you.
>If you tried to grab her arm, you would never overpower her, even in desperation.
>If you tried to make your phone dissipate it, you’d die in seconds even if it worked.
>No.
>There’s only one path forward!
>You throw your free hand over your head, and catch it.
>Aria’s face doesn’t even register it.
>Until the blade stops.
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>>30497455
>She jolts, eyes running down the sword to your hand.
>Possibly noticing that it’s the wrong color for the rest of your body.
>In fact, both of your hands look that way.
>And, even in the low light, hers doesn’t look right either.
>She tries to make a retreat, but her body won’t pull away.
>She’s being held in place, her fist locked in your grip.
“「Nails for Breakfast...”
>You tighten your grip.
“Demo」.”
>With her hands you can output incredible force.
>Your crush the hand you’ve switched with her in a single, mean movement of muscle.
>And this time, she feels it.
>She cries out like a child falling off a bike for the first time, and collapses to her knees.
>Letting go of the sword, in time for you to wrest it from her.
>The hands you took from her grip the blade and bear it down on her.
>Straight into her chest.
>She gasps at the power of her own Stand, and throws her head up for a moment.
>And then passes out.
>Even in the low light, you can tell that she’s breathing.
>Nothing here can kill her.
>Which means there’s no reason to go easy on her!
>Go team!
>...
>That thought really didn’t seem to come from you.
>You look at your borrowed hands and wonder why in hell this happened to you.
>You have so many questions...
>But you understand where this came from.
>Indigo.
>Somehow, Indigo’s still with you.
>You nudge Aria with a foot to make sure she’s out.
>Then you stoop and pick up Sour, making sure to put all of the weight you can on your fingers.
>You have a team to reunite.
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>>30497460
>Be Silver.
>It’s a relief to not be hoisted into the air like a pinata.
>You didn’t think that you’d get out of that one.
>But you guess you didn’t count on Diamond.
>When she was near the gun, you recreated the bullet Anonymous shot at you when you first saw him.
>It had been in 「Tin Cup Chalice」, surreally half-forgotten.
>But even you thought it had only given her one chance to hit him!
>No, it was her own strength that saved the two of you.
>「Pink」, undoing the pulling of the trigger so that every shot was the first shot!
>You feel something swell in you, like pride but less fatherly.
>She’s starting to see the power of her own potential!
>But she’s also about to shoot someone.
>You don’t feel as bad about that as you were expecting to.
>You mean, he did try to murder both of you, more than once.
>And your whole body is still sore from hanging in the air.
>Anonymous speaks, looking up at Diamond.
>”Why?”
>She doesn’t move the gun, or change her expression.
>”’Why’ what?”
>”Why are you here?! Why would you bother trying to make my life MORE miserable?! Why do you want to take away the only good thing that’s ever happened to me?!”
>You... have no idea what he’s talking about.
>Diamond doesn’t either, but she answers.
>”We’re here for the people who matter to us. And you’re the one who tried to shoot us.”
>He gnashes, going on like he hadn’t heard her.
>”I worked forever just to track down that one speck of her gem, and you stole it from us! You did it just to give it to… to that geek and the only woman who could stand him!”
>Actually, you remember you didn’t.
>You hadn’t… gotten around to it.
>Oh, dear.
>Anonymous keeps going.
>”Well, what did they need it for so badly?! What was so important that those two had to keep their grubby hands on the ONE THING that would make her happy?!”
>He pushes himself up, kicking out of his pooling blood, right for her.
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>>30497477
>Wait, what’s that he’s holding?
>Oh, no.
>Diamond fires, right for his heart.
>But the gun is caught between two tiles of 「Tin Cup Chalice」.
>You try to stop its effect, pushing against it, but you’re too panicked.
>It senses your panic, and works faster.
>The bullet doesn’t even make it all the way out of the barrel before it turns into dust.
>Diamond tries to use 「Pink」, but by the look on her face it doesn’t work.
>And then the gun disintegrates just after it.
>Anonymous turns, drawn up to full height, and punts her back towards the door.
>You run after her, but she disappears before she can make the impact.
>She’s back where he kicked her from, and she sends out her Stand.
>Its surface is mottled and cracking, and it’s slower than normal.
>She’s abusing it too much.
>When it strikes, one of his ghosts flies out of the sleeve of his suit and absorbs the hit.
>It takes a second one for it to dissipate.
>Your heart’s beating so fast that you can’t stop 「Tin Cup Chalice」 from activating.
>And there’s more of that interference, grabbing at you like pulling hair.
>Your Stand spits the bullet and the gun back out, and he snatches them up.
>Another ghost grabs the two pieces of tile and flies closer to the ceiling, playing keep-away.
>You’re not interested.
>He kicks for her again, but her Stand helps her leap out of the way.
>Then a swipe with the pistol, and she’s back where she started.
>Panting.
>Then, from under the floor, one of the ghosts reaches up for her.
>”Diamond!”
>You shout.
>But it’s no good.
>She tries to use 「Pink」 to dodge it, but there’s nothing for her to erase.
>Another reaches for you out of the ground, and you hop away from it.
>Not again.
>You won’t let yourself be helpless like that!
>If Diamond’s going to save you, you have to save her too!
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>>30497481
>You run for the far wall, staring up at the ghost stonefacedly holding your Stand.
>Anonymous strides over to you.
>That ethereal hand grabs your foot, holding you in place.
>But that’s alright.
>You can’t stop 「Tin Cup Chalice」, but you can definitely do the opposite!
>In your mind, your hallway’s laid out, including the lockers.
>And everything in them!
>A moment of force, and the storm starts.
>A storm of paper and pencils, binders and backpacks, magnets and memorabilia.
>A wave of textbooks pelts Anon, and he covers his skull with both arms.
>The force of the summonings blows apart the ghost, and the shards fall back into your hands.
>Anonymous wades through the refuse, bleeding over the paper.
>He’s still not stopping!
>It takes only a few more items to throw off the one on your foot, and then you bring over a pencil.
>You grab it as he reaches you.
>And jab it straight into the center of his red wound.
>And deflects, glancing off of a momentary blue barrier.
>Wh-
>What was that?!
>He growls, and a hand reaches out of the blood to grab yours.
>It holds you fast, and then the barrel swings at your skull.
>The impact cracks your neck with the sudden turn of your head.
>Think through the pain!
>There has to be something else to summon!
>You feel around your Stand, grasping for anything-
>Another strike, and your consciousness whipcracks out of existence.

>Be Sunny Flare.
>Sonata’s drawing nearer down her hallway.
>It’s way too wide for you to dash across to the other side unnoticed.
>And she sounds like she’s closer to the opposite side than you are, which means you’d be running towards her.
>At this point you’re going to have to face facts.
>She’s tracking you somehow, but she doesn’t know where you are yet.
>And running, even without your shoes on, makes noise.
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>>30497487
>Nervously, your hand stays plastered to the wall.
>Sonata talks to herself, breathily.
>”Dagi told me to turn all of the lights off, and Aria closed off the hallway. How could someone wander all the way out here…?”
>You tense.
>”Ah, right around this corner...”
>Your internal fight-or-flight switchboard is at full power.
>You can suddenly feel yourself sweating in the cold.
>There’s no way you’re making it out of here alive.
>Not if you try to take her on.
>You don’t even know what her ability does!
>But you can escape.
>For your allies, your friends!
>Your Aligot...
>You do your best to buck up, taking in a deep breath.
>You can’t hold it for more than three seconds, but you push on anyway.
>She’s almost about to see you.
>And, true to your title, you bolt.
>Hand still feeling out the wall, you turn the corner you’re already on and pass by her.
>She sees you, automatically.
>There’s no jerk of the head, no motion to suggest she wasn’t waiting for you.
>And over her shoulder there’s...
>Is that really a ghost?
>Oh, you hate ghosts!
>But you only give them a glance.
>No turning your head back, as you pass over closed doors and into the deeper darkness.
>You feel as if you’re being pursued underground.
>You hush the chorus of inner voices begging to wake up right now as she comes after you.
>And trust that you’re faster.
>You can hear each of her footfalls, and you know you’re not.
>But you have the slight advantage of starting distance, and you press it for everything it’s worth.
>If she came this way, then there should be a way out.
>Reasonably, if you just kept running in one direction, you should eventually find an exit.
>It’s just one building!
>She doesn’t talk, which is reassuring.
>If she monologued at you while she chased you, you might panick and slip up or something incredibly stupid like that.
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>>30497489
>You can almost relax as you work through your marathon.
>There comes another intersection, this one without a left-hand path.
>You can’t tell anything about them from this distance, but your legs sawing through the air won’t give you time to deliberate.
>Right or straight?
>Right.
>Right is your lucky direction, the way that’s given you a hope to stay alive!
>Go RIGHT!
>You turn the corner, and there are a lot more doors than you were expecting.
>All closed, all the same.
>None of them have exit signs hanging above them.
>And your fears are confirmed when you come to the end.
>It’s a concrete cul-de-sac, a dead end.
>You press yourself up against the wall and turn the way you came.
>She’s walking towards you, steadily.
>No.
>No, you’re not in a dead end!
>In fact, you’re close to escaping her for good!
“「Royals」!”
>You rasp out the words, voice ripped up by fear and exhaustion.
>But you’ve had your hand on this wall for well over a minute.
>And, at your request, it folds itself further into the universe.
>The whole hallway, doors and all, and the intersection at the end.
>You take your hand off, and it holds.
>And then you sprint through to the intersection, heading straight.
>Sonata picks up her speed, but you turn to her and snap your fingers.
>And the walls spring back to their proper shape.
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>>30497500
>As the rightful spaces reassert themselves, your intersection fills up with machinery.
>And, in the corner, windows!
>Big, industrial things, like everything in this choking oily-smelling place.
>You can taste sawdust in the air, and you do your best to ignore your less essential senses.
>Outside you can already see the dinge and grime you were expecting.
>You run over, careful for any sharp objects on the floor, and feel around for a latch.
>Your hand passes over one, a foot higher than you can see, and you wrench at it.
>It eventually comes loose, and then with both hands pressed against it, you force it up.
>Shakily, creaking, it obeys.
>As you put a leg through, something grabs you.
>You yelp as it twists you around by your shoulder..
>But it’s not Sonata.
>It’s the ghost.
>Up close it’s almost comical, a sneering face with the illusion of a stubbly beard.
>Through it you can see poles and switchboxes and big rusty monsters of machinery.
>You hate everything about ghosts.
>The whole stupid Gothic idea of them.
>The idea of someone’s soul persisting in the world and doing nothing but tormenting people.
>Things like that shouldn’t live in the first place.
>You concentrate on your Stand press a finger on it, which holds.
>Suddenly the wispy half of it folds over, and it’s a ball of indistinct greenish energy.
>Not enough.
>You tap a second finger onto it, and it becomes more uniform, spherical.
>A third, a fourth, like tapping at an air-piano.
>Your fingers buzz like they’ve fallen asleep.
>And then, under the strain of supporting itself, it pops out of existence.
>You smile at your achievement, and let 「Royals」 relax.
>Sonata doesn’t appear, and you don’t wait for her.
>You hook a leg over the windowsill and jump out.
>Then you shut it, slamming, behind you.
>And run around the perimeter, in search of where you came in.
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>>30497508
>Be Derpy.
>This time, when you hit Flash, you mean it.
>He goes flying through the hole that wasn’t there the last time you were here.
>You hope he breaks something.
>Then you push down the guilt that comes from thinking that way.
>You crush it like turning a car into a tiny cube.
>Your family might not be here if these people had their way.
>Sunset can’t be hurt, and whatever the arrow is, you can’t seem to touch it.
>You have no illusions, you can’t keep this up for long.
>But just then Twilight Sparkle steps in front of you, hands up and placating.
>”Derpy, I didn’t know any of this was going to happen! Please, believe me, there has to be some sort of an explanation! Sunset wouldn’t just-”
>Sunset weighs something in her mind, and snorts.
>”Give it a rest, Twilight.”
>Twilight startles, looking at her, as she stands up and dusts herself off.
>”I’m not going to make this any nicer than it is, Derpy. I want to collect those three gems. And I’m going to use whoever and whatever I can to do it.”
>Want to…?
“You just did.”
>Your voice is too tight and angry to let it be a question.
>”Apparently not.”
>She sighs.
>“But it doesn’t matter. I wanted to make this easy for everyone, but it wasn’t meant to happen. If you get in my way again, then I’ll do more than knock him out.”
>Before you can repond, one of the Crusaders screams.
>You see a blur of orange heading for her.
>Sweetie Belle.
>Sunset throws out a hand towards the curly-haired girl.
>Then, in a bright flash of light, a figure blocks Adagio.
>In the brightness, she sees her double blocking her way.
>They’re frozen, staring at each other in shock.
>Then the summoned Adagio disappears.
>And then, bridging the distance, Sunset smashes Adagio’s cheek.
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>>30497515
>The Dazzling actually slides off of her feet with the force of the punch.
>And the Crusaders, bouncing back, summon their monster of a Stand.
>It smashes against her, and she backflips, sliding against the floor.
>Sunset turns to you.
>”Go.”
>You sense 「Spinal Tap」 fading.
>You snap something else in your pocket.
>And with it, all of the others crack, simultaneously.
>You see Scootaloo, pointing the arrow at you.
>You make eye contact for a moment, and then your Stand’s summoned for its two minutes.
>Your options just narrowed.
>They turn back to Adagio, and you prepare to throw 「Spinal Tap」 at them.
>Maybe you can get the arrow and figure out where it came from.
>And then, out of the darkness, comes Sonata.
>She moves towards Sunset, who goes on the defensive.
>You don’t know whether to help or not.
>”-cadabra」!”
>You turn around, and see Trixie through the door you came through.
>And behind her...
“Golden?!”
>But then-


>Be Trixie.
>Next to you is the unconscious body of Care Root.
>Unconscious twice in as many days, in fact.
>His face looks red.
>It took too long for you to get through the thorns back into this one hallway.
>But now you’re here, just too late.
>Derpy comes out of a room where utter pandaemonium is reigning, blinding light shining from under her arm.
>She runs up to her sister.
>”Where’s Silver?!”
>”In the car. Something go wrong?”
>”We’ve got to leave right now! I’ve only got a minute and forty seconds!”
>「Spinal Tap」 lifts Care up.
>Golden nods, and with her eyes closed, Derpy puts a hand on the light.
>A solid wall of light appears, blocking the room from the rest of you.
>Someone pounds on it.
>”Wait! Please! Don’t leave me back here!”
>...Twilight.
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>>30497528
>Derpy turns to look at the searing block of energy.
>She regards it, for a moment.
>How much time does she have left, again…?
>Then it disappears, and Twilight comes stumbling out.
>”Oh, thank-”
>”Come on!”
>Derpy grabs her arm and pulls her, and both of them blow past you and Golden.
>You trade glances with her, and then the light-shield goes up behind you again, and both of you head after them.
>「Abracadabra」 pushes you to the head of the group, and Golden catches up on her own merits.
>Derpy casts light ahead of all of you, throwing your shadows against the walls.
>You’ll have to ask her about that as soon as you’re out of here.
>Most of the conflict’s moved into that room, so it might even be a straight shot.
>Once you’re inside the parking lot, you can use your Stand to jump everyone to the two cars.
>Who’s Twilight going to ride with?
>Suddenly, the light shines on someone coming up the hall.
>Two people, one unconscious in a bridal carry.
>It’s her.
>Sugarcoat.
>She stops and squints in the light.
>When she sees you, she straightens, ready for a fight.
>You don’t have time for this!
>But before you can blast her against a wall with your Stand, she squints closer to the light.
>And then, eyes lighting up, she runs straight past you.
>Golden looks over her shoulder at the retreating figure, but there’s no attack.
>Then you see the body of the one who nearly killed you.
>Despite the bloody mess behind her, she looks like she’s just having a nice dream.
>And further on, the body of one of the Dazzlings, the one who never gave her name.
>Skewered, eyes fluttering.
>You resist the urge to vomit.
>This could’ve been you, you realize.
>This is what you were running away from.
>You keep moving, trying to put those sights out of your head.
>In you’re mind’s eye, they seem to reach out for you...
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>>30497537
>You all jog the rest of the way, keeping up without endlessly passing and falling behind each other.
>Glancing backwards occasionally, waiting for some surreptitious backstab.
>But your trial turns out to be much more straightforward than that.
>You see the limited natural light of the door outside at the same time you start seeing sheets of paper.
>Pencils, folders...
>You part the detritus with a couple waves of your hand.
>But as the light illuminates the final stretch...
>”SILVER!”
>Hanging in the air are the two kids.
>And then her light finally goes out, dissipating in the crook of her arm.

>Be Anonymous.
>They were right.
>You hated to admit it, but they were right.
>They’re just fighting for Care, and the girl.
>You can’t let them get away with it, but you can still sympathize with them.
>And being down to one bullet, and on the edge of consciousness, narrows your options.
>Get to the root of the problem, right now.
>The fact that you can see them and not one of your employers makes your heart sink.
>...You won’t be getting out of this, will you?
>For the first time, you see Care Root, passed out and floating beside Derpy.
>You can hardly even remember seeing him around CHS.
>Different circles.
>But you recognize her just fine.
>She sees you, and her entourage gets ready to attack.
>Doesn’t matter.
>You lift the gun and aim.
>Your final ghost holds it up with you.
>It does most of the lifting, to be honest.
>Heh.
>A pair of birds fly for the two girls out of the hands of the orange-haired one.
>Didn’t you used to be in a class with her?
>Nevermind.
>A third comes at you, and you don’t pay attention to it.
>Even if it gores you, you’ll still take your pound of flesh.
>Line up the shot...
>Breathe in...
>Squeeze the trigger.
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>>30497548
>It heads out, moving flatly away from you, spinning angrily.
>Oh, time’s slowing down.
>It picks up speed as it goes, and its path sends it straight for Care.
>The hulking monster of a Stand carrying him lashes out with its tail, and the bullet goes flying away, harmlessly.
>No!
>You’re about to make an ill-advised shamble to pick it up, but you can’t walk.
>And it’s unnecessary.
>The bullet bounces off of something.
>It ricochets in the air five or six times, off little shining panels of glass, or something like glass.
>Bright, blue.
>You wonder, for a moment, if you’ve developed a new Stand ability.
>But even in this small doses, you know it’s not you.
>It’s fate.
>Everyone freezes in their tracks to watch it.
>Then it goes flying for the orange-haired one, who shouts.
>”「Fineshrine」!”
>A tree springs up between it and her.
>It bounces again, twice, three times, coming around the trunk for her.
>”「Abracadabra」!”
>It moves out of its path, back closer to you.
>There’s more shouting as it gets sent back towards the group.
>You can’t make out the words any more.
>You’re falling, faceplanting.
>Oof.
>A voice cutting through the gorge of the panic.
>A shout.
>An impact.
>The sound of a body toppling into concrete.
>Your ghosts dissipate, but you know you’ve added one more to their ranks.
>And the sea of trash overtakes you.
>Take that, Care Root.
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>>30497560
>Mid-morning...
>Be Lemon Zest.
>The last thing you remember was a big explosion, trying to get the gems.
>You sit up, on what you realize is someone’s couch.
>It’s grey and sticks to your cheek on the way up.
>You’re sweaty, and your hair’s mostly on one side of your body, but you have both arms.
>The room’s a calm blue, like a sky through fog.
>On the far wall there’s a television playing infomercials on mute.
>Where are your headphones?
>You search around the books on the coffee table and the stand covered in coasters.
>But you don’t have any of your stuff.
>When you stand, your back cricks in four places.
>It sounds like Velcro.
>You wander into the kitchen and see Sugarcoat hunched over three mugs of coffee.
>Must be her family’s house.
>She notices you without looking up and slides one slightly closer.
>You take it.
>There’s a boatload of creamer in this thing, so it tastes like caramel.
“Did we win?”
>She huffs, and doesn’t look up at you.
>Fuck.
“Did everyone make it out okay?”
>She turns and looks at you behind those glinting glasses.
>”Indigo didn’t make it, and Flash is gone.”
>Gone?
“Gone?”
>”They have him. We don’t know where.”
>She looks back to the table.
>There’s a tablet there, in a chunky blue case twice its thickness.
>On it is a roadmap of Canterlot.
“Well, we’d… better go find him.”
>”There’s something just as important. The gems weren’t complete, so they’ve been thrown around everywhere, but one of the kids figured out where the final piece was.”
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>>30497577
>The gravity of the rest of the task ahead of your group settles in.
>A couple months of work since you got these Stands.
>A chance at really, seriously owning an indie label.
>And world-saving, of course.
“...Where?”
>”Somewhere around here.”
>She slides over the tablet and taps at its center with one finger.
>The house is huge and looks like people do croquet on the lawn.
>Sunny wanders in, wearing last night’s clothes like the rest of you.
>”Briefing her already?”
>Sugarcoats nods, curt.
>”When Sour wakes up, we’ll decide how we’re splitting up.”
>You grab a seat, but Sunny lingers by the strangely barren-faced fridge.
>At your house, they still had your blue ribbons and certificates stuck on there with vacation magnets.
>”Filhy Rich has one of the most dangerous Stands around, and he’s not going to go down without a fight.”
>She cranes her head at Sunny, who stares pensively into the freezer.
>And then to you, resting when you make eye contact.
>”I’d suggest ransoming his daughter, since she’s basically powerless, but he’d kill every one of us. So I think, if we’re going to heist the gem, we need to work together to get past his security and smash his fuckin’ teeth in before we do anything else.”
>She adjusts the glasses, as you digest how... un-Sugarcoat she sounds.
>“Any suggestions?”

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6K7GPjfPTpo

「To Be Continued」

Stand: 「Listening Chair」
User: Sonata Dusk
Ability: ???

Stand: 「Nails for Breakfast Demo」
User: Sugarcoat
Ability: The full nature of this Stand is unknown.

https://pastebin.com/JEhpAp3k
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>>30497583
CHOICE:

I thought it would be fun to run another poll, since the last one brought Diamond into both of my stories and I think that’s been a net positive. Since a lot of CRBA’s improvised, your choice really will affect the rest of this story. I encourage you to avoid looking at the Results tab until you’ve voted, and to take all the time you like. Polls close at midnight Friday.

http://www.strawpoll.me/13407550

In general, thanks for reading. We’ve finally hit the halfway mark!
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>>30497593
Welp as a Trixie fag I gotta give away my vote to golden harvest no good husband wants his waifu dead, i love golden harvest but well the waifu comes the first...
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>>30497593
Lovong the story Dith. Sorry for making that post midway your story. Didn't realize someone was posting.
Already made the vote!
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>>30496891
On it. I have a few ideas that I wanted to share with the /co/ Jojo story thing before it died so I might as well share then with you once I get home.

>>30497351
THE TIME HAS COME AND SO HAVE I! I'll read this on the train and post my over the top reaction later.
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>>30497004
All star would be disqualified, actually
Despite appearing in the movie, none of the characters sang it, therefore it doesn't count as a musical number
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Seeing these recent events, what other characters from different stories would you like to see dead?
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>>30500995
Care Root.
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>>30497593
I hate you for making me choose but at the same time I can't lie about how lit this chapter was


>literally mission impossible shit happening next

I'm fucking ready, let's fucking go!
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>>30497593
Holy fucking shit, we're only halfway done? That's impossible. Each and every update to this story just makes things crazier and cooler and I was so sure this was gonna be the penultimate chapter or something but goddamn, you're making this story its own Part.

JJBA Part 10: Future Glow

Keep this shit up, Dith. I look forward to each and every update you post.

>>30496891
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XkU23m6yX04
STAND NAME: 「Be Prepared」
STAND MASTER: Adagio Dazzle
APPEARANCE: A leather choker with gold leaf inlay in the shape of siren tails , crowned by a ruby carving of a clenched fist
ABILITY: 「Be Prepared」 allows Adagio to easily rally those who fear her to her cause, regardless of the target's level of animosity towards her. The more the target fears Adagio, the easier it is to enthrall them into her plans. Conversely, the less she is feared by a target, the more difficult it is to ensnare them. Of note is the fact that unless the target is entirely without fear of Adagio, her words will still have a slightly enthralling or enticing effect on her target, which could offer her an advantage in even a losing battle.
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>>30496891
Prepare for all the stands i was too chicken to dump in the /co/co bizarre adventure thread. Pls no bully.

STAND NAME: [FROZEN HEART: ACT 1 ]
STAND USER: Elsa (Child)
Appearance: None. Resides within it's user's body. Can be seen whenever used due to her hands turning blue and frosting over.
Stand abilities: Allows Elsa to create ice balls and small ice constructs using her hands. Her age and inexperience make controlling [FROZEN] incredibly difficult and she often activates it unintentionally in moments of extreme stress. Though generally weak this stand's abilities can severely injure if they hit vital organs.

[FROZEN HEART: ACT 2]
STAND USER: Elsa (teen)
Appearance: A 3 foot tall, half formed snowman (its just a shitty Olaf). This stand has a limited will of its own, but doesn't follow orders well. Its often distracted when summoned to fight, so Elsa prefers to use her new abilities instead of calling the stand out.
Abilities: Boosts the strength of her current ice abilities. When active the air and ground within one meter of Elsa rapidly cools, boosting her active range by allowing her to summon constructs from the air. Constructs are slightly more durable than ACT 1's but still relatively weak. Ice abilities are now lethal, but nothing to write home about considering other stand abilities.

[FROZEN HEART: ACT 3 LET IT GO]
Abilities: Elsa at her fullest potential, or basically how she appears at the end of her movie. Her abilities with ice are now limited only by her imagination. She can create incredibly durable ice structures that will never melt and as well as fabric or other materials. Her ice abilities can now effect the environment around her, rapidly turning a battlefield into a blizzard. Her abilities are still tied to her emotions, so she must keep a level head in order to properly control her stand. [LET IT GO] can also manifest as a towering snow monster, reducing Elsa's firepower but providing a strong defense for her.
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>>30502295
Stand name: [How Far I'll Go]
User: Moana
Appearance: Varies but will always be made of water
Abilities: [How Far I'll Go] is bound to salt water and can only exist as long Moana is near a concentration of salt water. it can only activate in situations where 1. Moana is in great danger and 2. Moana can't get out of said danger by herself or with the help of a friend. if these conditions are met [HOW FAR I'LL GO] will possess the nearest supply of Salt water and attempt to help in any way possible.

Stand Name: [I AM MOANA]
User: take a guess
Abilities; an upgraded version of [How Far I'll Go] that removes the two conditions needed to manifest. The stand is noticeably weaker if used when these conditions aren't in effect and becomes incredibly strong if summoned when said conditions are in effect.

Stand Name: [I SEE THE LIGHT]
User: Rapunzel
Abilities: Allows it's user to heal any injury by wrapping it in a part of her hair and singing. Said wound must make physical contact with Rapunzel's hair in order to be healed and hte song must be completed for the wound to heal properly. After this stand is activated, the hair that was used to heal will rapidly deteriorate and fall off, meaning that Rapunzel must use the end of her hair to heal or risk losing her stand.

Alternatively: Rapunzel is a ripple/spin user who can channel the ripple/spin through her Hair.

Stand Name: [POOR UNFORTUNATE SOULS]
User: Ursula
Appearance: Flotsam and Jetsam
Abilities: Allows Ursula to preform magic if a person makes a contract with her, allowing her to shape reality to deliver her end of the bargain. However, if her opponent breaches the rules of the contract their soul is taken and they are turned into the stubby creatures populating Ursula's den.
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>>30502461
Stand Name: [HELLFIRE]
User: Frollo
Abilities: [HELLFIRE] activates if Frollo detects something or someone who is breaking a rule of his religion. Upon activation, fire will appear from the nearest cross-like object and engulf the target. The fire cannot be extinguished and will burn until even the target's ashes are erased from the world. Frollo is not immune to [HELLFIRE]'s effect and that is it's main weakness. If Frollo can be made to question his faith and he finds himself impious, the fires will turn on him and will burn until he regains his faith.

Stand Name: [BE OUR GUESTS]
Appearance: An old, abandoned castle that is lavishly furnished on the inside.
Abilities: [BoG] turns all those who stay in it for a prolonged time into sentient inanimate objects. This effect is slow and can be ended if a person leaves the castle before the transformation is complete. However, all residents will be compelled to keep any new [GUEST] inside the house until they are fully transformed. Additionally, any person who has become and object and exits the ground will die, becoming a lifeless inanimate object.

Stand Name: [TRY EVERYTHING]
Appearance: [TE] has two forms based on whatever mode it's currently in. It's detective mode is an anthropomorphic bunny in a trench coat and trebly and it's combat mode is an armored fox with a pair of handcuffs.
User: Judy Hopps
Abilities: [TE]'s detective mode increases Judy's speed, detective abilities, and motivation when activated. This effect only occurs once per activation, can't be used in rapid succession, and only works when her stand is in detective mode. [TE]'s combat mode allows Judy to put stand's [UNDER ARREST], rendering them imobile and ending most effects. This works only if [TE] can handcuff the target.

And thats pretty much all I had. Feel free to make fun of my disgusting love for disney.
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>>30502461
>>30502552
These seem like a lot of fun. [HELLFIRE] is my favorite of them.
Sadly, I had to look up where some of those came from. I should get up to date with the most recent movies.
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IM GONNA DO IT I-M GONNA PUSH THE BUTTON [BUMP THE DUST] WILL GO INTO EFFECT AGAIN!!!!
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Hey guys, I've got an update for Anon's Stando Adventure coming up real soon and I think you're gonna like it.

Also bump
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>>30500995
>Sister Andrews
>Treehugger
>Ziggy Stardust
>[ANONYMOUS]
>At least 1 Spike
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>>30497375
>>30501526
Well done guys, gold star
>>30502295
I'm impressed by the sheer amount
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>>30504442
Thanks! I'd been sitting on those for about 4 months now and I don't know if /co/co is coming back, so I might as well post them here. I have a few more for Gravity Falls, Princess and the Frog, and over the garden wall.
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>>30504823
Well, princess and the frog woupd definitely fit the theme
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>>30504849
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I want to cum inside Lisa-Lisa
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>>30506467
Yes, joseph, we know
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Another pure lood stand that i wrote on the bus home. Excuse the formattong this was written on a phone.

Exhibition stand: [FLASH] I hate the name.
Appearance: bound to its user's body but can manifest as a old timey, flashbulb camera under certain conditions.

Allows its user to become invisible and imperceptible as she wears less clothing. The more skin she shows, the stronger the effects are, so long as she's not naked. The downside is that the user's heart rate and arousal rise every time someone fails to notice her. She can burn off this arousal by quickly removing and replacing what little clothing shes wearing but this instantly draws the attention of anyone around her.

If she doesnt do this periodically and her arousal continually rises she'll reach a point where she is too aroused to move. Once that happens she can manifest her stand and cause a bright flash of light at her location, temporarily blinding all who were looking at her. This also destroys whatever clothing she was wearing, making her unable to activate her stand until she can cover herself up.
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There have been ASB's in the pasts threads, but let's face it, not all the characters of Jojo and MLP or even in the stories in the thread are that much combat oriented.
So here is a new idea, just comfy meetings and interactions between characters, where the "conflict" isn't solved by means of battle.
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>>30508802
I fully support this idea
Comfy green is best green, even in a jojo thread
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>>30508802
>>30509213
Requesting green of Jotaro and Fluttershy becoming tea buddies.
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>>30510146
Soon, my child...
After I sleep, since it's 11:30 here
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>>30509213
>Joseph and Pinkie go on a pranking marathon around Ponyville.
>Pucchi and Sister Andrews sharing among themselves their own idea of [HEAVEN].
>Johnny and RD as spectators on a Wonderbolt's race.
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>>30510946
>Young Dazzlings meet and get inspired by Cars and his Pillar men.
>Snips and Snails learn how to pickup girls from Hol Horse.
>An older Sumire meets Ziggy's cat.
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>>30511481
>A young Trixie learns magic tricks from her grandpa BT.
>SciTwi watches a documentary of the SWF with Joel.
>Spike and other pets listen a story about the legendary honcho of New York: Iggy the Fool.
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>>30512467
>Valentine meets with Celestia over tea to discuss the various methods she's employed to keep her nation safe, and to share with her his fears and beliefs
>Diavolo runs and hides from everyone until he meets one of the CMC, who somehow manages to become his only friend
>Applejack comes to admire Mountain Tim for his charming demeanor, hardworking ways, and skill with a rope
>Fluttershy takes pity on Dolomiti's broken body and takes him in, intent on making friends with him and nursing him back to health
>Gappy and Yasuho have a couple's day out with Care and Derpy

I just want Care to be happy ;_;
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>>30513167
>I just want Care to be happy ;_;
:^)
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>>30508802
Twilight asks Josuke 8 (gappy) to show her the male human anatomy / body, she gets more then she bargains for in a cute and lewd way
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>>30508802
Semi-related, what do you think would happen if versions of the same character from different stories met up?
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>>30513230
Fuck you, Ditherer
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>>30514169
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Looks like I finally got a cool Stand.
>「SACRED LIE」
>Ability: Dark Element Manipulation http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_Element_Manipulation
>Power - B

>Speed - C

>Range - D

>Durability - C

>Precision - B

>Potential - B
I take great pride in this stand
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>>30514349
Hey man, nice to see a visitor from my waifu's general. I'm not up on your green, but I appreciate anyone with the drive to update so consistently.

Also, wasn't the Generator broken earlier?
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>>30514369
> Wasn't the generator broken earlier?
I dunno, it worked for me.
> CONSISTENT DRIVE
It's mostly because I know the feel of waiting on a writefag to deliver and waiting sometimes three threads down just for a "Yeah I can't continue" so I wanted to keep my audience entertained as much as possible without leaving them on a cliffhanger (for long)
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>>30513167
>Old man Joseph telling stories from his youth at the Ponyville School House.
>Flitter and Cloudchaser having a girls night out with Jolyne and Hermes.
>Emporio playing with Angel and her friends in a ghost room.

>>30514145
They would either merge toghether and die, or it would be a funny ocurrence.

>>30514349
SystemOfAClop everybody! Straight from /dzg/!

>>30514369
The Generator has some good and bad days.
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>>30514349
And here we have the 4th(?) darkness based stand. Two more and we can have a full pokemon team.
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>>30514719
So they are weak to 「fight」 based stands?
>inb4 [BENZIN] vs. [Fortunate Son]
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>>30482490
>You get ready to book it when you are suddenly reminded of somebody…
>You then look over to Sean’s unconscious, muttering some junk about pizza and homeless people
>This man used the last of his strength to let YOU live.
>He could’ve easily left you behind
>But he stayed
>He listened to you
>He decided to let you go, after all of the trouble you’ve caused for not only him, but the innocent civilians of Canterlot…
>You can’t just let him rot in prison
>You won’t allow it to happen.
>Using all the strength you can muster from your being, you grab Sean’s body and run as fast as you can towards your motel room
>Even though you’re still hurt, you’ve got no trouble out speeding the local police force before they could get to both you and Sean.
>You jump over the park gate and int6o the streets of Canterlot, barefoot and In great pain
>But you couldn’t have been happier
>For once, you took a chance, you made a major decision YOURSELF!
>Without the voice, without any outside force.
>And it felt good, for the first time, you felt an emotion you never thought would creep its way out of your mind.
>True, Understandable Pride
>Breaking out of your emotional bliss, you spot your motel.
>You’ve never been happier to see this dump than you are at this moment
>you, still carrying Sean on your back, climb up the stairs to the second floor, pull out your room key from your thankfully not torn up pocket, and rush into your abode, throwing Sean on the couch.
>You then turn on the radio and land on the ground next to him, too tired to even crawl to your bed in the other room.
>You look at him for a second, wondering what he would think of this when he awakes.
>Would he stay here and maybe help with your quest at hand?
>Or maybe head on back to jail?
>Whatever the outcome, it was his choice, and for that, you envy him.
>You don’t get a choice.
>you never had a choice….
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>>30514793
>and with that last thought, you drift off to sleep with the only sound in your mind being your own radio…

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3-2u2lhGO4w

To Be Continued Maybe

- - - - - - -

And With that ladies and gents, the ASB is finally done. Tell me what you thought about it honestly, I'd love any criticisms if you have any. Honestly, I feel like i got a bit too carried away for what was only just suppose to be a shot ASB, but I feel like I did an OK job. I wanna thank DreamAnon for even allowing this thing to be written, thanks alot man. Dream Anon is in the hands of the man himself, so he can do whatever he wants with this character if he wants, I'm just glad I got to write this.
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>>30514828
Dude, i fucking loved it
Hell, it almost made me want to write
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>>30514349
>>30514369
Welcome to the thread man, I don't really wander in the /dzg/ threads often, but it's nice to meet you

>>30510946
>>30511481
>>30512467
>>30513167
>>30514443
All of these sound fucking amazing, I'm honestly flattered That you even used Joel as an idea for a story. but like


>Flitter and Cloudchaser having a girls night out with Jolyne and Hermes

Star, if you're reading this, please, fucking PLEASE do this, I don't care how many horsecocks I gotta suck to get this to be a thing, I need it in my life.


>>30501526
>>30502295
>>30502461
>>30502552
These are all really nice stands, I'm sure if i thought hard enough, I could find some ponies that matched these stands up pretty well. However, my brain is fucking dead and I feel dead lol.


>>30497593
you're a cunt for making me choose like this and I wish I could just d i e but ya know what, this chapter was still fucking fantastic, well done dith.

>>30495785
>>30495955
>Mfw no one noticed sonic youth comging back after 10,000 years
yo youth, if you still there, I'm glad that you came back, I missed you man.

>>30474758
Star this was fucking nice and I wish to see more of you in the future, you're a treasure man.
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>>30514880
>Dream loves it
good
I have fuffilled my objective, mission completiones
not to work on chapter 3 of FABA
help lol, I'm so tired
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>>30514924
Dude, get some rest, we can wait
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>>30514443
Literally, I just came from there. An unannounced Q&A with some guys who had questions. How did you know I'm from /dzg/, I mean I'm a little popular there but I'm a little shocked to be recognized?
>>30514889
I'm happy to be here with my jopobros.
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>>30515042
My boi System in the JoJo thread, I'm lovin it.
> How does it feel to have half of your readers hate you because your story won't keep going after the ending?
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>>30514828
I loved it!
For it being an ASB about two new characters, you ended up acomplishing a lot for both of them.
SEAN! was likeable enugh despite his defeating attitude at the beginning, and his newly found moxie was the highlight of the story. We surely need more "down to earth" characters like him, although to be fair, most of the characteres we got are either magic children, ponies or down right evil.
The epilogue with Dreamer sure was interesting. We got to see his side of the story and how this event made him a free man. Makes one one wonder what the future has in store for him... and who's gonna write it.

>>30514889
>Flitter and Cloudchaser having a girls night out with Jolyne and Hermes
I dunno... They are supposed to be comfy stories, and I get the feeling everyone will go to jail in this scenario. Don't suck anything yet, I might just write something with it...
>Mfw no one noticed sonic youth comging back after 10,000 years
I always assumed he was still in the thread, just... waiting for the right moment to strike.
Ever wondered what happened with Sonic and Ziggy when they went to see the president? So do I.

>Star this was fucking nice and I wish to see more of you in the future, you're a treasure man.
I love you too.

>>30515042
Don sell yourself short man. I'm sure some of us here even read that story about trying to prevent SciTwi to become a school shooter.
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>>30515134
Wow that story was a waste, I never got to conclude it or even give it more stuff to work with. It didn't start too well and the reaction was not good for the most part, oh well.
>>30515090
To be totally honest, I'm ok with some hate. I'm not that hard to avoid.
> Keep going after the ending
I felt like it was time to finish the story and I wanted to finish things off before it got drawn out and boring. I'm actually quite happy about the ending itself but I plan on delivering more to the /dzg/ and other threads as well.
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>>30503093
Hellfire was my favorite too. I got the idea from the song and it just felt too perfect to be changed. Also, check out Zootopia cause under the furry stuff it's actually a pretty solid plot with a good message.

>>30514889
Get some rest French, you need it to write those stories.

Side note, I noticed most of the stands I made have acts. I think I need help making stands simple. Also, whats /dzg/
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>>30515178
The general of the Dazzlings, it's pretty fun if you're under the spell.
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>>30515178
>>30450826
Dazzlings General Thread
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>>30515200
That's some good shit my guy
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By the way, we should be preparing for the next thread.
Any ideas for the next edition?
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>>30514889
French, you are a goddamn cinnamon roll.
>>30515134
>I always assumed he was still in the thread, just... waiting for the right moment to strike.
Uh. Yeah. Haha. Ha. Haaaaaa.
Despite what the filename says, I promise I'm not a traitor that was changed to simply just fuck off for the rest of the story.
>I'm sure some of us here even read that story about trying to prevent SciTwi to become a school shooter.
What?
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>>30515239
What do the young folks love?
>Kars
Here's the most autistic idea I have:
>"Fate of Za Wurldo Edition"
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>>30515241
>Shameless Sonic Youth. Coming Soon...
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>>30515241
The SciTwi thing was a green I was writing, it (along with the thread) went before I could get into rhythm
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「Blue Hawaii」 Edition
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>>30515239
I'm down for more stands based off songs from movies or cartoons, fusion stands, and requiem stands.
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>>30515241
Please don't go, give us the gift of your green
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Bizarrely Comfy Edition
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Unlikely characterization edition.
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https://pastebin.com/xYJpFFD1


also, completed pastebin rh to put in next thread
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Lunch bump. I'm surprised we've jumped ahead so many posts! Next thread you can expect Coco to reach the end of her business in Canterlot and learn some important info about the shape of her journey along the way. After that, Marble's going to be forced to stand on her own four hooves in Las Pegasus, and with luck we'll even get to the unwinding, the raid, and the loss of Care 14.

>>30514394
Yeah, I feel you. I try my hardest to finish whatever I start, although delivering takes longer than I'd like. It's always great to have anotherwritefag show up, so feel free to cool your heels and check out some of our stories.

>>30514880
Do it!

>>30515241
Welcome back, man!
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>>30516393
Thanks a lot actually, I'm currently between like 3 greens right now. A thread to take a break in would be a Godsend
> Only with JoJo amirite?
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>>30516404
This is the right place to take a break buddy. We got a wide arrange of stories and everyone posting here is supportive i their own way.
It doesn't matter if you make stands, or write greentext, provide feedback to the authors or even just bump the thread. You are gonna have a great time!
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>>30516404
Tell me mr Clop what do you look for in a jojo x mlp green / crossover? I just wander what story would take your interest the most...
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>>30514828
This is some good shit, French. Aside from the periodic updates you put together a damn good story with all the hallmarks of Jojo: clever use of the environment, interesting villains, an underdog turnaround, and of course pure style. I'm glad you stuck through it and finished the ASB.
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An idea kinda just popped into my head after seeing an album title on pandora
My Little JoJo: Unorthodox Jukebox
aka karaoke night at Tom's Diner
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Bump bump baze
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>>30517818
B O I

we in autosage mode there ain't no bummpin now
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>>30517261
In a JoJo green I'm expecting some good characters but also good use of the characters, some good action along with good dialog. Nine times out of ten these things are in a good JoJo green but since you guys have spoiled me with good green, I usually want to see some good shit.
> Some comedy is good too, I love to make my readers laugh and when another writer does the same I feel like there is some real love from the writer to the story.
>>30517168
I'm planning something for the JoJo threads, once I get enough time I'll give you guys something in return.
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