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Police Glim!
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>>30274573
And you can even pick her up by the legs, turn her around, hold her like a gun, and use her marefarts as a nonlethal weapon!
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Reminder that Fluttershy is a bad pony that needs to be breed so that she's not entirely worthless.
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>>30274577
Something something BBRAAAP
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Fire's heart when?
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>>30274618
>You will never breed Fluttershy and then purposefully keep her away from her foals until you sell them.
>You will never slowly break her hope that things will get better.
>You'll never watch her give up.

Why even live?
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>>30260797
>>30266727
>>30268961

> Slowly you approach Comet Tail, the prod still grasped in your mouth.
> His eyes are locked onto the two-pronged tip as it drifts closer - real fear, even fear that you hadn't seen before, now filling them.
> Breath hitching they pass over the tender location of Anonymous' blow.
> Even with your fortitude the thought of torturing a stallion there is enough to make you shudder - but not so much it shows.
> Comet Tail jumps as you squeeze on the trigger - sharp, snapping pops coming from the prod's contacts.
> "No..."
> He's scared - really, truly scared now.
> Still pressing forward, you advance until those twin metal pins are digging into his throat.
> Eyes rolling wildly in fear and body shaking, Comet desperately tries to wriggle back away from you.
> But there's only so far he can go, and it's not nearly enough.
"I want you to remember this moment, Comet Tail."
> Lips working soundlessly, the stallion shakes his head - horn scraping against the concrete floor.
> The bit in his mouth clicks as he struggles to bite through it and free his jaw.
"Focus, Comet! Focus on me, and remember that between the two of us, wher we both held a completely defenseless pony at our mercy..."
> Your head twists aside and you spit the prod from your mouth, leaving it to clatter on the floor.
> Then you spit again, just to get its foul taste - literal and metaphorical - out of your mouth.
"...and it was the 'traitor' who refused to harm another pony."
> Though it's impossible to be certain, you think some of the drops of liquid that run down Comet's side are sweat.
> He is sucking deep, heaving breaths - taking time to come to terms with what you said.
> While he does, you go to work:
> Dragging the bucket from where you'd tipped it over fills the room with an ear-splitting scraping, but you have to bring it around into Comet Tail's field of view.
> As he watches, you pick up every tool that had spilled out.
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>>30274754

> The gas torch, and the brands it would heat.
> The powerful shears, with its gleaming jaws.
> Devices whose bladed and spiked edges hold the alarming tinge of old blood.
> When the last is out of sight, you step over to Comet Tail himself.
> Trembling still racks his body, but he remains still as you reach down and - taking the straps carefully in your teeth - undo the muzzle around his head.
> Comet gasps when you pull it free, spitting the bit clear of his jaws.
> As soon as it is gone he gasps out:
> "Why...?"
"Why should I torture you? I told you, Comet. I'm trying to protect you."
> Again you drop to your haunches, ignoring the cold wetness seeping up from the floor.
> A moment later you give in altogether, dropping down to your belly and letting your head rest on crossed legs.
"I've been called a lot of things, Comet. Traitor, coward, Anonymous' attack dog... I'm not, though. All of this... when I started it, I swore that I would be doing it to keep us all safe. To keep him from doing... this to even more ponies."
> "So you won't torture me."
"I won't."
> Laying his head back down against the floor, Comet eyes you from his upside-down position.
> "It's a noble ideal, Thunderlane. But you're wrong. He takes from us in more ways than whips and torture. Every time a pony follows an order without question, it's another defeat."
"That doesn't make it right to beat an innocent filly half to death."
> "She was a casualty. We're at war, even if there isn't an Equestria anymore."
"I don't want to be at war, Comet. I don't want to call innocent fillies 'casualties'. And I think the camp agrees with me more than you."
> "That's just the problem."
> Twisting his head over, the stallion manages to look at you with both eyes.
> "Nopony wants to be at war. It isn't nice. So they obey, because Anonymous promises to let us have a little bit to ourselves and it feels like a win... and they forget everything humans like him have taken from us."
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>>30274762
>> Devices whose bladed and spiked edges hold the alarming tinge of old blood.
..yeah, I hope this anon fucking goes to prison for a long ass time when he gets exposed.
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>>30274762

"If it's between having a little and having nothing..."
> "But do we really have anything?"
"Yes. It's exactly that kind of little independence that let me kick him out of this room, refuse to torture you, even take that muzzle off. It's exactly what lets me look at myself in the mirror and swear I'm still the same stallion I was. That I could stand in front of Celestia herself tomorrow and swear I did the best I could."
> This finally seems to break through to Comet Tail, and he spends several long minutes staring off into the distance.
> You are patient, though, and eventually he does speak up again:
> "I guess... I kind of envy you. That you can make that peace with what you do."
> Again he twists around to look at you, squirming on the floor and heaving on his chains.
> "You know what I see? I see us being obedient. Being turned into livestock for them, for the rest of the future."
"That won't happen."
> "Won't it? He's talking about bringing a lot more ponies here. Everypony will see this being better, and the humans will see us being good, hardworking little ponies, they'll see an alicorn-"
> The word is spat as an insult, and you don't think he could bring himself to use her name.
> "-following him around like a filly in her first heat... and both'll forget everything they took from us."
"I..."
> You turn away now, shuffling your wings and trying to ignore the insult against Cadance.
"I'm not ignoring that. I want to fly freely again too! I want to sleep in a real cloud for once! But I've also seen his daughter. She's a good, innocent soul. I think we can show her how we really feel, and in time... something might pass."
> "Yeah, well..."
> Comet Tail sighs again, adjusting his head to try and keep his horn from scraping the floor.
> "...like I said, I wish I had your confidence."
> You nod, then stand.
> Detaching the chains that held Comet Tail's shackled hooves in mid-air isn't as easy as removing his muzzle had been, but you manage.
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>>30274770

> The moment they detach he all but collapses onto his side, legs curling defensively over his belly.
> "What're you doing?"
"Letting you down. You'll have time to think this over, but I can't keep Anonymous off of you either. Sooner or later, he'll be back. He'll use everything in that bucket against you and more, and you will break."
> "I know. I thought if I pushed both of you, he'd just get it started and over with faster."
"He won't, if you talk."
> "Yeah, but I can't be a good, obedient pony either."
"Well... I tried, Comet. I'm sorry."
> The cell door slams shut behind you, leaving you alone in the hallway beyond.
> Immediately you sink to your belly again - an unbidden trembling now running through your own body.
> You'd... resisted.
> Somehow, despite his angry words, you'd held back and refused to use the prod.
> Where the strength to do that had come from, you aren't quite sure, but you're glad it was there nonetheless.
> Anonymous is just outside, resting in a chair with his elbows on his knees and a pensive expression on his face.
"Sir?"
> "Thunderlane... any luck?"
"I got him thinking, but it'll take some time."
> "I sort of figured. I know what you were hoping would happen, Thunderlane, but they're beyond rational argument."
> Anonymous stands, stretching.
> Glancing about, you find no one else close nearby.
"...sir, how are you holding up?"
> The glance he shoots you is enough to make you reconsider having asked that.
> But then his expression softens.
> "If it weren't for how you pulled me out of there before, I might think you're getting a bit full of yourself... but fair question. I'm not okay, and I have to thank you for getting me out."
"You're... welcome. You told me to."
> "I did, didn't I?"
> His expression barely fits the description of a smile, but it is one still.
> "And you carried out your duty. Thank you, Thunderlane."
"What will happen to them now?"
> Anonymous looks down at his hand and lets it clench.
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>>30274780

> "...I can't be dealing with them while the anger is so fresh. There'll be time for that later. I'll put Eric on it, have him box them up for a day or two."
> Catching your questioning look, he adds:
> "It's not nearly as harsh as I was going to be in there."
"If you say so. If there's nothing else, I'd - like to go see Rumble."
> "Sure, sure. Go ahead, Thunderlane."

> For a few seconds after the stallion's tearful admission, you're frozen by shock.
> He-
> One of the ponies who had-
> Taking your silence to be coldness against his offer, Windy Winters throws himself around your leg and squeezes tightly.
> "Please, Your Highness! Your Majesty! It's - you have to protect him! Don't let him take me!"
"Windy - please, calm yourself. You will not be harmed in this room. But please, tell me everything you can."
> Rubbing his nose on one hoof, he nods - speaking in a halting, broken voice:
> "Autumn and Ch- the others, th'said - said we were just going to give her a little scare. Just - k-knock her about a little, you know? Push her over, yell a bit, give a few kicks..."
> Mayor Mare looks questioning to you, then the door, but you shake your head.
> It'd be good to have another pony in here to corroborate your claim.
"This was Mocha Cream, yes?"
> "Y-Yes, her. W-We knew sh-she'd taken the stuff from our cache. S-So we were going to just... spook her a little, show A-A-Anonymous we weren't afraid to a-act."
> The irony of that point being given by the terrified, teary-eyed stallion in front of you is not lost.
"What happened, Windy?"
> His jaw clams up, though, teeth jammed together, and Windy gives a little shake of his head.
> Despite the first tendrils of anger creeping up to grasp your heart, despite the voice that tells you to avenge the little filly's savage treatment, you force them down.
> A wing stretches out, laying across Windy Winters' trembling back.
> "C-Can't tell y-you. You'll get angry, and tell Anonymous, and he'll-"
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>>30274789

"I have to know everything that happened, Windy. Please, tell me the rest. I swear I will do nothing until you've finished your story."
> It takes a few moments, but eventually your gentle, soothing tone works its magic.
> "W-Well they c-called her over into th-the alley, to f-far to be seen... and then we started p-pushing her around. A-Autumn took her b-bags, and we shoved her down-"
"Did you kick her, Windy Winters?"
> He swallows, but nods.
> "Once. Twice. M-maybe more. Not too hard - we were just trying to s-scare her."
"What happened then?"
> He takes a ragged, gasping breath before continuing.
> "M-Mocha? Mocha kept trying to talk, tell u-us we were wrong, and that made Autumn real pissed. Told me to watch the entrance of the alley. Lookout if anypony was coming."
"And then they really hurt her."
> Nodding shakily again, Windy Winters lays his head back down against your leg like a fearful colt confessing to his mother:
> "I guess I r-realized something was wrong when Co- they g-gagged her. And then they just started kicking and she was screaming but nopony could hear her. I t-told Autumn it was to much, but she told me to sh-shut up and just kept kicking, and I looked and there was blood, and..."
> Another pause.
> Mayor Mare is looking distraught, a hoof to her chest.
> "They already took Comet and Autumn, and they tried to take me and Chrysocolla but we got away. She's hiding, I think. He's going to k-kill them, Your Highness! Please, you have to protect me!"
"Shhh..."
> Leaning down, you brush the top of his head with your muzzle.
> Windy Winters reeks of fear and sweat; he must've come galloping right to you.
"...Windy, I will do all I can to see that you do not suffer, or - Celestia forbid - are killed. But... you must understand. I may not be able to protect you entirely. I may have to tell Anonymous... some of this."
> "No!"
> His howl is accompanied by a new round of grovelling before you.
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>>30274803

> "He won't listen. He wants blood now. He'll break us! Make examples of us!"
> Those last four words send a shiver though you, and Windy can see the tremble in your feathers.
> "Please, Your Highness. Please, I know we've - attacked you. But you have to see, I'm a pony too... you have to protect me."
"I.. need to go think this over. But I will swear this to you: You can stay here, and so long as you are in this room no one will harm you. Do you understand? No one."
> Sniffling, he tilts his head.
> "...swear by your aunt's memory."
> A chill runs down your neck, but you do so anyhow.
"I do swear, by the memories of Celestia my aunt, what I say is the truth."
> That seems to be enough to mollify Windy Winters.
> Circling around to the far side of your desk, he hunkers down beneath the window - as if the mere act of daring to reveal himself in it would be to expose himself to Anonymous' wrath.
> Stepping out of the office, you're followed by Mayor Mare who quickly turns to face you.
> "Well?"
"Well, what?"
> "What'll you do?"
"Do you believe him?"
> "I do."
> Her blue eyes regard you questioningly - perhaps with just a touch of accusation as well.
> "Do you?"
"I do. I've seen true terror. He really does believe I am his only hope... and I believe him in that, too."

What will we do?
> Get him out of here and turn him over to Anonymous. The man is much more reasonable now, but if he finds you hiding a fugitive like this everything could be forfeit.
> Alert Anonymous, but do not tell him where Windy is. Make him first swear no harm will come to the pony.
> Find the last of the four yourself. Having another pony - one who actually took part in the worst of the attack - will mollify Anonymous.
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>>30274810
I think Cadance needs to talk to Thunderlane first, and find out just how brutal his "interrogation" of the other pony was before any decisions are made as to what to do with this one.
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>>30274762
If we are still at war then Anon has every right to your life and the Autum, Comet Trail, so you can not expect that you and your horn will stay together for a long time
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>>30274810
>Find the last of the four yourself. Having another pony - one who actually took part in the worst of the attack - will mollify Anonymous.

We already saw what Anonymous is capable of and now we know that at least two of the attackers showed no mercy when attacking an innocent filly, what worries now is what Chrysocolla might be able to do now that they have been discovered, if she Also believes that they are at war against the humans then it could commit one madness, if Candance hopes to have some deal with Anonimous must obtain of Windy Winters not only a confession but also all pertinent information of the rebels, its base of operations and the names of everypony, there may be more and they are planning a large-scale operation
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>>30274944
This.
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>>30274810
>> Find the last of the four yourself.
Coordinate with Thunderlane if you need to, but leave Anonymous out of it until Chrysocolla has been found. Any involvement from his side would make waves and only cause her to dig in even further. It's not going to be pleasant, but we'll deal with him later.

Sounds like Windy got swept up in things much bigger than he signed up for. What Sunburst said, about giving ponies another chance, might be an option for him. The other three seem completely unrepentant. What's bugging me though, is Chrysocolla. She's on the loose, in hiding, and she thinks her comrades are being tortured and murdered. There's no possible way she's going to just sit there and be okay with that. Might be in a safehouse with days of supplies, might be getting food/water from other allies, might be neither and she knows she has to act soon. If Rumble is in danger, it's from her. And she's going to be smarter and more brutal this time.

Also, that name. Is she from a rock farm?
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>>30274810
> Alert Anonymous, but do not tell him where Windy is. Make him first swear no harm will come to the pony.
Something like this will do. "Make him swear" is a bit strong though, tell him what happened and If Anon gets pissy, remind him that he needs to keep a level head about all this, just a little bit longer until he gets some alone time with Autumn.
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>>30275138
>>30275232
No reason we can't combine these two? If these ponies hear Anon has what he wants and hasn't gone on a murderous rampage, it might make other ponies more susceptible to turn her in, right?

If we don't tell Anon at all, they'll be too scared of the outcome and if he finds out himself, he'll be even more mad. If Anon and Thunderlane work with Cadance on this they can act on all of this faster.
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>>30275257
This sounds like it could be the best option.
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>>30275257
With as angry as Anon is, I don't think Cadance could stop him from hauling Windy to the cells with the others. Assuming he's telling the truth about how things went down, he shouldn't be treated the same as the other three.

Also, she sweared on Celestia. That's a pretty big deal in this context. She did leave a loophole where we just have to get him to leave the room, but by doing something that'd get him into Anon's hands Cadance would lose some of her horse-humanity, and it's already hard enough without our protagonists becoming the demons.
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>>30275360
Actually, Cadance quite literally can stop him - she has magic! More importantly, she's also a voice he trusts, and we saw earlier with Thunderlane that Anonymous will pull himself back if he's told he's going to far.

If she locked him in magic and told him to cool his head, I think he's aware enough now to know she is doing the right thing.
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>>30274810
>So long as you are in this room no one will harm you.
That's pretty big talk for a slave. We can't keep that promise and should not have made it. What if he just camps in our office for years like Julian Assange?

>What will we do?
Ask Windy about Chrysocolla, and track her down our self.
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>>30262999

> You're getting drowsy and it's not even midnight. You consider taking a brief nap - Pinkie seems stable enough.
> You think she's sleeping, curled up on her cot with her tail wrapped tightly around her.
> She's probably cold. You quickly take a blanket over and carefully drape it over the sleeping pony.
> You sternly resist the urge to pet when she shifts slightly and mumbles something incoherent.
> Then you make sure the terrace door is locked and the kitchen and bathroom are closed. Those seem the most dangerous.
> You figure she can't do anything too bad without waking you up, so you stretch out on the couch and turn off the TV.
> ...
> You wake up in the morning. As far as you can tell, pony didn't try any more fellatio in the night.
> She is still exactly as you left her.
"Good morning, Pinkie."
> You're not the happiest person this early - a quick glance at the phone tells you it's half past eight - but you don't want to bring your guest down with your sour mood.
> Well, further down.
> She looks at you blankly for a moment. "Oh, good morning, Master."
> Pony sounds depressed, but you can see she's trying to be cheerful for her owner.
> Your bladder makes itself known and you shuffle your way to the toilet.
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>>30275661

> There, you're empty now and thinking about filling up again.
"Pinkie, would you like some breakfast?"
> She's standing in the middle of the room, waiting patiently.
> "Yes, Master. What do you want me to make you?"
> Having her cook on human furniture would be both difficult and dangerous.
"Don't worry, I'll make us something simple."
> Looks like she's not going to argue anymore. She just hangs her head low.
> "Yes, M-master."
> God, you hope Zoe gets back with the other two soon.
> But you still want to take a stab at this. You approach and sit down on the floor in front of the distraught pony.
"I'd like to talk to you for a bit, first."
> "O-okay, Master," she says in a small voice. It obviously worries her, but she doesn't dare say no.
"Sit down, please."
> Her rump hits the floor.
"Do you believe I'm telling you the truth?"
> She frantically looks for the trap. You wait patiently until she gives up and nods. "Yes, Master."
"Good. Everything those bad men said while beating you were lies."
> You think she's taking it rather well. Her breathing quickens a little and you think her pupils grow larger, but that's about it.
"They wanted you to be a good slave, so they hurt you until you forgot how to think for yourself. And they told you that you have no friends anymore."
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>>30275668

> "I don't-"
"Nonsense," you interrupt. "I spoke with Rarity just yesterday - do you know what she told me?"
> Pinkie shakes her head.
"She asked me to take her back and bring you out of that place. She wanted to take your place, because she didn't want you to get beaten and used anymore."
> There it comes, the pony keeps shaking her head and taking small, fast breaths.
> You press on, anyway.
"And Twilight said she hopes you're okay and can't wait to see you again. You've got good friends, who care about you."
> She's openly sobbing now and can't even keep looking at you. She's not saying anything, either.
> You don't want to push the issue too much. Luckily, you'll have some pony help, soon, otherwise you feel this rehabilitation would take a very long time.
> Baby steps?
"Okay, enough about that. Let's go over some rules, alright?"
> It seems to help. She looks up again.
"If you're hungry or thirsty, you have to tell me. Even if you haven't earned it. If you need to use the bathroom, you just do - you don't have to ask. And if you're uncomfortable in any way, you must say something."
> She seems sceptical about the rules, but she isn't going to argue.
> "Yes, Master." She thinks for a few moments, then carefully adds: "Thank you, Master."
"And you're not to call me that. You can say 'Anon', instead."
> At this point, Pinkie seems resigned. "Yes, Anon."
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>>30275673

> She makes 'Anon' sound exactly like 'Master', but it's an improvement anyway.
> "I'll- I have to use the bathroom. And I'm a little hungry, if it's okay. A-anon."
> Well, she's obeying, all right. It's better than trying to guess what she needs all the time.
"Very good. I'll go make us something, just wait here and make yourself comfortable."
> ...
> You remember the day you brought the other two and decide to go for a fruit smoothie. Maybe Pinkie will appreciate something tasty.
> The blender is whirring away so you almost don't hear the doorbell. You guess it's the girls, probably with Zoe or maybe Sally.
"Pinkie, could you open the door?"
> You quickly fish out more fruit. Gotta turn two smoothies into five, fast.
> You hear two excited squeaks of "Pinkie!" and then a dull thud.
> Hopefully they won't hug her to death. A few moments later, Zoe is in the kitchen.
> "Stop that and come look," she says with a wide grin.
> You obey. It's almost done, anyway, just needs pouring into glasses.
> Looking in the hallway, you find a bundle of purple and white fur, pinning down Pinkie, who is on her back. There's some crying.
> Pink pony doesn't know what to do, she seems in shock. Her mouth is opening and closing and she's staring at the ceiling.
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>>30275675

> Zoe turns serious. "What's wrong with her?"
> You lean closer. The other two don't need to hear this.
"Bastards beat her senseless and made her like that. Submissive as all hell and afraid to even think for herself. I've been trying to break her out of it."
> You watch for a minute as Rarity and Twilight nuzzle their unresponsive friend.
"Not much luck yet, I was hoping seeing them would help."
> The girl nods to herself. "It will, but it might take a while. I've heard about this before. Ponies beaten so much that they forgot who they were."
> You hope it's not that bad.
> Meanwhile, Twilight has planted her face right in Pinkie's line of sight. She looks worried.
> "What's wrong? Pinkie, are you okay?" she asks, voice full of concern.
> It gets a reaction. Pony focuses for a moment and carefully touches Twilight's face with a hoof.
> "I- I thought-" she can't seem to find the words. "I know you hate me. I'm sorry."
> "What?! Who told you that?" the purple mare demands. Rarity is also staring after hearing those words.
> "M-master Dave."
> Twilight snorts angrily. "Everything that bastard told you is a lie. I never stopped thinking about you.
> Pinkie is starting to shake her head again, but Twilight just slaps her gently. You're stunned, but don't interfere.
> "Who are you going to believe? The pig that did all those things to you, or your friends - the Elements of Harmony?"
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>>30275681

> Twilight doesn't wait for an answer, she just goes in for a hug again.
> It's working. Pink mare returns the hug and buries her face in the purple fur. She seems to be sobbing.
> She pulls away for a moment and blinks up at her friends. "I don't knoooow," she wails.
> Zoe pulls on your sleeve. "Uh, let's just give them some privacy. Come, I want to show you something."
> You follow her into the work room. She pokes at the keyboard, but is stopped by your password screen.
> She just looks at you until you unlock it.
> "Look here, in Dave's files," she explains while she clicks through them. You see there are some video clips.
> She selects one, apparently at random.
> You can't help but stare. Dirty Dave had been recording his customers, it seems.
> The way Zoe glares makes you think you should know the person in the video. You just raise your eyebrow.
> "That's the fucking chief of police!"
> You fail to make a connection.
"So? It's not exactly illegal."
> She seems furious with you. "No, but it will still cause an uproar. There's all sorts of important figures here. I bet the bastard was planning on some light blackmail to round out his bottom line."
> She plunges on when you don't answer immediately.
> "Anyway, that itself is not too illegal, but blackmail is."
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>>30275686

"You've got proof?"
> She grins, cruelly. "We have his e-mail inbox."
> You feel your own nasty smile starting as well.
> "Oh, and he also liked to sell guns and drugs. An all-round business man," Zoe adds, casually.
"Shit, why didn't you tell me that in the first place?"
> "Eh, doesn't matter, really. I made a few copies and dropped them into a few mail slots. No way the police will turn a blind eye now."
> That was really irresponsible. You say as much, but Zoe just laughs.
> She remembers something. "What about Fluttershy - you said he already sold her? Can you, I dunno, hack a bank or the phone company and find the guy?"
> You sigh.
"Not everything is solved by hacking. And no, I can't just hack into a bank, that's a federal offense."
> "Worked pretty well so far."
"Okay, I've got an idea, gimme a sec."
> You check your old projects folder. You've remembered something that might work.
"You ever heard of data mining?"
> She thinks about it for a second. "That's where they gather up all kinds of information and build a database of people?"
"Something like that. We did a job for a search engine a few years back. The usual function is collecting a ton of data and correlating it, but you can change it, like so."
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>>30275690

> You type fast and it always amazes people. But with so many ideas, you *have* to speed along or you'd never get them out of your head.
"There, a simple change in the indexing function. Now it will look for specific words and phrases in combinations."
> She doesn't understand yet. "Phrases like...?"
> You say them out loud as you put them in.
"Fluttershy, yellow pegasus, yellow and pink, butterfly cutie mark,..."
> You briefly glance back. Zoe is almost jumping up and down with excitement.
> "That will actually find her?"
"Yes, if anyone mentions anything like that on social media or forums. I'll patch in some image recognition later to try and find her in photos. I'll do the same for AJ."
> The slap on the shoulder almost knocks you off the chair.
> "Damn! We should have gotten ourselves a hacker a long time ago. Dude, this is *amazing*."
"Don't get your hopes up too fast. It could take a while and it may turn up empty. But I'll leave it running anyway."
> You look for Zoe's phone number and punch it in.
"We'll both get a message if it finds anything."
> "Seriously, dude. You rock!"
> You smile, modestly, happy that your skills can be put to use.
"Just my job. How about you help me feed our guests? I was making fruit smoothies when you came in."
> "Delish."
"Oh, and I want to hear about Dash. When can you bring her?"
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>>30275691

A bit of a slow one, I think, but I didn't want to skip ahead just yet. And yes, I studied comp sci on college for two years before ending up in construction. Hope it's not too bad.
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>>30275701
Not bad. I enjoyed it.

Just one thing.
>"I'll- I have to use the bathroom.
"just wait here and make yourself comfortable"

I thought for sure she was going to make a mess. But I guess Dave made them learn to hold it. After the shampoo incident. We wouldn't want her to try and clean up another mess by herself.
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>We will never see how cutelestia responds to being healed.
>We will never learn if alicorns grow stronger with age.
>We will never hear a fully healed, enraged Celestia threaten a powerful family with "I'll tear your star from the sky".
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>>30275701
I like thing
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>>30275701
This Anon, too, enjoys the thing.
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>>30274558
wtf I want to be the princess pet, not the other way around
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>>30275701
Good thing for begin the day AWF, thanks for the update and hope soon read for some info of Applejack and Flutter..

You know what a good way to punish Dave? That your videos come to your "Partners" or someone much worse than Dave with whom you have deals and they see in them something that can compromise them and think: "Fucking pony fucker, you recorded me while making Butterpony change my diapers how as my Mom? Your ass is mine piece of shit! "
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"S...spare some change sir? Ma'am? I.. I'm terribly sorry to be a bother but.. I.. I just need a little bite to eat and--"
>the unicorn couple simply turn their muzzles up and away from you with a frown
>"Careful Upper Crust, seems some thoughtless pony left their refuse on the sidewalk. Wouldn't want to sully your hooves by stepping in it."
>"Ugh."
>you bite your lip as your ears lay flat, fighting back tears as they walk away
"Thanks anyway..." you murmur, pulling your filthy threadbare jacket around yourself more tightly as you return to your spot in the alley where you'd been clearing away the snow from the front of your home
>or, more accurately, your box
>it's been over a week since you last ate anything
>drinking water from melted snow had been enough to keep you from getting dehydrated, but your body is weak and wracked with hunger pangs

---

>you shake your head in a daze, your master's words might as well have been a magic spell freezing you in place
>"are you listening to me, girl? do you know what this means?"

---

>you hadn’t been terribly difficult to capture
>after all, you had nowhere to hide when the humans came with their war machines
>you remember lots of ponies yelling, panic, some kind of gas filling the alley and street, and then not much after that
>you wake up in a cage, shackled up next to those same two unicorns
>the ones who treated you like just another piece of street litter
>one of them is bleeding
>a man in a camoflauge uniform opens the door to the cage you share with them and puts his hand under your chin, tilting your head from side to side, placing his hand on your back, your sides, your stomach, your legs
>"We should put this one down, she probably won't survive the trip. Looks like she hasn't eaten in days."
>"You know our orders, no killing noncombatants. Give her an MRE and lock the cage back up, we need to move out."
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>>30277583
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>you shake your head once again, snapping back to attention
"T...the vote passed? I'm... I'm free?"
>he nods at you
>"looks that way..."
>you close your eyes and take a deep breath
>you remember meeting your master for the first time

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>you're in a poorly lit room with all the ponies you'd been captured with
>about 20 of you altogether
>most of them had been pretty well off in Equestrian society
>a tall, strong looking human walks into the room in front of you and speaks
>he's straight to the point
>you're all now his property
>his slaves
>you're going to be performing heavy labor
>hauling ore from the mines your master owns
>14 hour days, two ten minute meal/bathroom breaks per day
>there are gasps, stifled sobs, a mare faints
>but you're just kind of numb
>he makes eye contact with every pony in the room but seems to completely ignore you
>you're used to being overlooked
>you're taken to your slave quarters and collapse on your cot

>you wake up to the cracking of a whip, the ponies around you skittishly falling into a single file line
>their clothes have been confiscated, manes all uniformly shaved and tails cropped to hock-length
>yours seem to have been untouched for some reason
>many of them are shaking, not sure what to expect as your instructions are delivered
>one of your master's employees will hitch you to an empty cart, you take it down into the mine, and come back with a full load of ore, seems simple enough
>you're not told what kind of ore it is
>perhaps it's something valuable and he's afraid his slaves might try to steal it
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>>30277587
>the mine is dark, and hard to breathe in
>your harness is far too tight, which makes it even harder
>you look back over your shoulder, watching patiently as the humans working in the mine continue to load what looks like nothing more than a bunch of sparkly rocks into your cart
>you wonder when they're going to stop
>can you even pull this much?
>they're still loading the cart...
>finally you're given the command
>you feel the sting of a whip on your hindquarters as you're ordered out of the mine
>you struggle, the cart barely budging an inch

>the biting lash torments you relentlessly until your load finally begins to move at a reasonable pace, your cries of pain being completely ignored
>the human driving you, satisfied that he's finally got you going, turns his attention - and his whip - on the next pony in line
>your muscles and joints scream out for relief as you haul your third load out to be dumped into an awaiting container
>you don't want to go back down there, but you know you have no choice
>when you're ordered out of the mine this time, you can't move your load
>no matter how many times they whip you, or how hard, or how much they scream and threaten you, your tired little body just can't budge it
>you collapse, tufts of fur flying off your rump and back as your taskmaster puts every ounce of strength behind his swings
>so this is it
>this is how you die
>you close your eyes, so exhausted you can't even cry out, eventually losing consciousness

---

"How soon?"
>"A matter of weeks... maybe even days"
>you whimper

---
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>>30277594
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>"...need these ponies in good working condition, I catch you wailing on one like that again you'll eat a fucking bullet, you get me?"
>a door slams
>a glass is placed against your lips
>it's cool and wet
>you instinctively drink, the ice water soothing your parched throat
>you look up and see the face of your master, your lower jaw trembling as your body begins to shake in fear
>"shh, easy girl, you're done for now. Those idiots should have never taken you down there in this condition, you're clearly malnourished."
>he gently dabs a wet cloth against your forehead, and it comes away bloody
>you don't even remember getting that cut
>he brushes your matted, tangled mane out of your eyes and carefully inspects your filty face
>not that much more filthy than when you'd been captured, honestly
>there's something unsettling about the look he's giving you
>he seems to linger a bit too long for your liking, before eventually shaking his head and snapping his fingers, one of his employees or assistants appearing
>"See to it she gets a nice warm bath and a hot meal. I want her thoroughly groomed by the time I get back."

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>Master puts on his shoes and you reflexively reach for his overcoat, holding it for him while he puts his arms into the sleeves one by one and stands up, heading for the door
"Where are you going, Master?"
>"I've called an emergency meeting with my own personal attorney and the Company's lawyers, we're going to see what we can do about this. Be a good girl until I get home, okay? Don't worry about fixing dinner tonight, just eat something yourself when you get hungry and wait by the phone in case I call."
"Yes, sir."
>he turns the doorknob, and you rear up, placing a hoof on his side as you look up at him, unable to hide the worried look on your face
"Master?"
>"Hm?"
"Everything's gonna be okay, right?"
>he pats your head with a warm smile
>"Let your Master do the worrying for now, okay?"

---
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>>30277598
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>You can't remember food ever tasting this good before
>or the last time you were ever this clean
>you gorge yourself on the various fruits, veggies, and fresh hay set before you
>"careful not to overdo it, you wouldn't want to get sick," the assistant chuckles as she brushes your mane carefully
>before too much longer your master joins you again, sitting across from you at the relatively small table
>"let me ask you something, mare" he says, immediately seizing your attention
>"you don't want to go back out into that mine, do you?"
>you simply wince and shake your head, starting to tremble again
>you barely lasted two hours out there
>you'd die if he sent you back
>he leans over the table, placing his hand on your forehead, slowly running it up through your mane, his fingers coming to rest behind your right ear as he continues speaking
>"You're too pretty to be a workhorse anyway, you know that?"
>you glance around nervously, not wanting to make eye contact
>he doesn't like that
>"HEY. Look into your Master's eyes when he speaks to you."
>you gulp as you hesitantly comply
>there's a warmth in his gaze that seems wildly out of place

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>Master still isn't home. Your stomach is all twisted up in knots, you can't make yourself eat anything, instead laying on the couch and staring at the phone intently, waiting to snap to attention and hit the speakerphone button on the first ring
>it's pushing 10pm, you should have heard SOMETHING from him by now
>you feel utterly helpless

---

"'Comfort mare?' I don't understand..."
>"You don't have to understand. Just obey me and your life will get much better very quickly. Wouldn't you rather live in my big, luxurious house along with me instead of those rickety slave barracks?"
>you nod, the answer coming easily to you
>anything had to be better than that shithole you slept in last night
>though even that, you admit to yourself, was an upgrade from the cardboard box in the alley
"What do I have to do?"
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>>30277604
>From that moment you'd never looked back
>you quickly found out just what a "comfort mare" was expected to do
>and you weren't as appalled by it as you should be
>your master wanted physical companionship from you
>hugging, kissing, cuddling
>massages
>and yes, even sex
>officially, you were his personal assistant
>nobody really knew what he got up to with you behind closed doors, though you're sure plenty of people - and ponies - had their suspicions
>in exchange, you got a big, warm, spacious house to live in
>regular meals and baths
>an indescribably comfortable bed all your own to sleep in

>at first, you treated it as any other task you might have been assigned
>you went about it dutifully, but didn't enjoy it at all
>you simply reminded yourself it was better than being worked to death in the mines
>but over time, your Master's generosity grew
>gourmet food, beautiful outfits to wear when you go out in public with him, random gifts for no reason
>these things all became the norm
>while he made it clear you still belonged to him, you felt a genuine affection start to form between the two of you

>and then one day, he said it
>he actually said it
>you'd been making love face to face
>kissing, stroking each other's bodies
>and you were really into it
>you wanted to make your master cum, and you went at him voraciously
>when he finally did, he held you tight against his body, one hand clamping your rump against his crotch, the other holding your head gently against the side of his as he gasped for breath
>"I love you, girl, oh god I love you so much..."
>your eyes went wide, but he shoved his tongue into your muzzle before you had a chance to respond
>you felt a tingle travel up your spine, melting into the kiss with a soft nicker
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>>30277608
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"Heh... that was it..." you think to yourself with a somber smile, "that's the day this became home..."
>you sigh and swish your tail, trying to keep your anxiety from welling up any further
>the phone call never comes, and eventually, unable to force yourself to stay awake any longer, you fall asleep right there on the couch
>Master doesn't come home for days after that
>and for that same amount of time you don't eat
>it's the longest you've gone without food since you'd been a free mare back in Equestria
>your sleep is troubled, you only manage an hour or two at a time before waking up and tossing and turning for another hour

>Finally, after being gone for nearly a week without so much as a word, he walks through the front door
>you're instantly at his feet, ready to greet him
>but he looks different
>his usual stern, confident demeanor is nowhere to be found
>he looks deflated
>defeated
>beaten
>he slumps to his knees in front of you
>there are bags under his eyes
>he hasn't shaved since he left
>he reaches a hand toward your cheek, and you nuzzle into it affectionately
>bringing his other hand to your face, he brings his forehead to yours silently
>and begins silently weeping
>this can't be good
>you've never seen Master cry
>EVER
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>>30277612
>he doesn't need to say anything
>you already know
>they'll be coming for you
>to take you away from him
>your Master
>your lover
>your home
>back to the mean streets of Equestria
>back to struggling to make it
>back to wondering where your next meal is going to come from
>back to being all alone in the world
"M...Master... I won't go... I refuse..." you say shakily as he pulls you into a tight embrace
"This is my home... here with you... I'm your pony. I'm YOURS... they can't do this..." you stammer, panic beginning to show in your voice
>he rocks you gently in his arms, trying to calm you down without having much success
"You won't let them take me, will you Master? You're going to keep me forever, right? I can stay here with you, right?"
>you start to cry
"Please Master... say something..."
>"I'm so sorry, my sweet, sweet girl..." he replies in a mournful tone that shatters your heart into a thousand pieces
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>>30277620
Old pasta is served again?
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>>30277583

>"Careful Upper Crust, seems some thoughtless pony left their refuse on the sidewalk. Wouldn't want to sully your hooves by stepping in it."
>>"Ugh."
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>>30278019
proof that unicorns are shit and deserve slavery and torture
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>>30277620
And what happened next?
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>>30277620
One old clasic here
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>>30278139
Slave mare was taken away from her loving master and forced to return home to Equestria, and become a homeless, unloved, unwanted pony once again. The end.
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>>30274810
go get anon
make him swear not to hurt the pony in the office
let anon confront him

if he says the errors of his ways AND cooperates (tells on the others, helps find missing pone) and the testimonies match he should get the light treatment
just being sold off as disobedient
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>>30278139
Anon gathered all the current equestrian currency he could, and sent her back with full bags of supplies, and books on modern business tactics. Giving her a fare superior starting point then most. A few years later after things after have settles down. The first pony to ever wish to go back though a portal, did so.
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>>30278149
You final suck

>>30278258
Yes, this final is much better
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>>30278230
Ya, this.
Already answered, said we should hunt Chrysocolla ourself, but on second thought this is better. We have enough credit with Anon to make this promise, and she's not going anywhere. Let's ask about Mochas saddlebags too, they had that museum stuff that we want.
Perhaps Anon can auction them with a reserve price: low for low value stock like Chrysocolla, higher for salvageable ponies like Windy. Anon is a financial guy at heart, he might be willing to let the market decide.
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>>30278230
>Anon punishes them anyway and then sells them to the worst possible place.

>Reminds Candance who is the master here
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"Because I Choose To", Part 2 - https://pastebin.com/GKxvUCek

> Starlight masters the skill quickly and does the rest of the nails on both hands, as well as the nails of your toes with a little guidance from you. The way she smiles and looks up to you for affirmation each time she successfully clips a nail simply melts your heart, so you smile and encourage her, telling her that she is a good girl and that she did well. With a smile of her own, she clips the last nail and throws away the clippings in the bin, before using one of the wet wipes she found in the bedside drawer to clean your fingers and toes. Satisfied with her work, Starlight throws that away as well.
“Thank you, Starlight.”
> “You are very welcome, Master.”
> You use the short silence that follow to pet and ruffle her mane, enjoying the silky fullness of it in your hands. The teal streak that runs through its purple length is adorable, and it accentuates Starlight’s feminine beauty.
> “Master?”
“Hmm?”
> “I have something for you... A token, to show how much I appreciate having you as my Master.”
“Oh?”
> Seems like the universe really likes you today, Boss. Receiving gifts from 3 pretty mares, especially after 6 years of not having anything other than well-wishes for your birthdays and Christmas? It is almost like the world realises how selfish it has been with you, and had decided to compensate for that.
> You smile a little at that, because you do not even get anything from Angela. Like your parents and you, she is also not in the habit of exchanging gifts, so you both usually just give each other a phone call on these special occasions. To receive a present is a wonderful thing that you cherish, but since you hardly sent anything yourself, you have developed an expectation of not receiving something in return. Not that you are complaining; it just feels… Normal… For you not to exchange gifts, especially after years of not being in the habit.
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>>30279480
> Yet, here you are, waiting to receive yet another one. From your pink pony, no less.
> You watch Starlight focus her magic before she turns her head and closes her eyes, looking serene as her horn and ring-jewel glows with a teal aura. Out of her saddle bags comes a pendant of sorts, covered in the same magical aura as it floats up into the air silently. Opening her eyes, she looks at you with a soft smile before moving her eyes to the pendant, using her magic to move it slowly towards you. You use your left hand to grab the black string it is attached to while your right moves to hold the pendant in place, allowing you to turn it around as you examine it.
> The pendant is a dark golden shield that is decorated with intricate carvings that run along its border, and you estimate that it is about 4 centimetres tall and 3 centimetres wide. It is a rather heavy thing for its size, and it is about half a centimetre thick with a loop at the top of the shield for the black string to pass through. At the centre of the shield, protruding just that little bit, is Starlight’s cutie mark: the 8-pointed star with the 2 wavy streams. The purple sections are done in a copper-and-gold coloured metal, the white portions are done in a brighter copper colour, and the wavy streams are a shade in-between these 2 colours. The level of skill that is involved in making this is evident: Starlight’s cutie mark is replicated beautifully on the pendant, albeit in different colours to those on her… Well, butt.
> Turning it over, you see that the back of the gold shield has a similar border to its front, but the centre of it has words in the same bright copper colour as that of the whites in Starlight’s cutie mark. The writing is done in an elaborate cursive, but you can clearly read it.
> It said: “Because you chose to… I will always be your little pony.”
“…Whoa…”
> You open your mouth in awe as you read the words again.
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>>30279491
> “I had it made for you at the forge at Harmony Village, Master, and I chose the design and got them the materials. Those workshop ponies are quite talented, aren’t they?”
> Your mouth remains hanging open in wonder as your eyes drift to Starlight’s face. She is blushing softly as she smiles and nods at the pendant, and you follow her gaze to the object in your hands once more.
> “This is made from the ammunition of the smugglers that your Rescue Team went up against, Master. Thorax happened to mention that Angela was given the task to dispose of what remained of their ammunition, so when ECAD gave the approval for her to melt them down in a metalworks plant, I requested for the residual metals, and she brought them to Harmony Village to give them to me. The workshop ponies used the metal from brass casings for the shield, and they treated and cleaned the copper that came from the jackets of the bullets to form an alloy. This was used in the cutie mark design and for the words behind, and the pendant has a simple enchantment to protect it from corrosion and discolouration.”
> Starlight grins when her eyes travel to your face. She is clearly amused from your facial expression; it is no doubt still frozen in a mixture of shock, gratitude and awe.
> “I chose a shield to represent the nature of your job, Master: to be a protector and defender of people and ponies alike. A shield is a tool that is used in war, so in a similar way, Master, it also represents your duty to do battle with those who seek to harm the innocent and the helpless... I chose to use the metal from the bullets from your first raiding operation to represent the danger that you may face in your work, and I wanted my cutie mark to be on the face of the shield to remind you that I will always be with you. Finally, I chose those words at the back as I wanted to inscribe my gratefulness to you for being my Master, and declare that I belong to you and you alone.”
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>>30279502
> Lowering her head and blushing shyly, Starlight continues speaking as she smiles softly.
> “It’s probably just a lot of silly thinking on my part, but I wanted a gift that is meaningful, Master. I wanted something that is symbolic; an object that will remind you of me whenever you notice it... I got the idea from the collar I am wearing… The one, that you gave me on the first day that I met you.”
“… S-Starlight…”
> Still smiling at you, Starlight keeps her head low.
> “I volunteered to clean the toilets every morning and night during my stay in Harmony Village, Master. It was to convince the workshop ponies to forge this for me, as I did not have anything else to offer in exchange… I feel that it was worth it though, as they spared no expense when they put in the effort to make this beautiful pendant for me... Well, for you actually.”
> Starlight… She did this for you. She went and… Starlight… She… She…
> When you just blink at her numbly, your pony just gives a soft giggle as she uses her magic to move the pendant over your head and onto your neck. She must have taken measurements as the black string was just the right length, allowing the pendant to rest nicely just at the middle of your sternum. With a quick glance down and back into Starlight’s pretty violet eyes, you clench your own eyes tightly as the shock that freezes you in place wears off rapidly, replaced with an immense warmth and gratitude that overwhelms you.
> Hot tears squeeze themselves out of your eyes as you let out a pained breath, and your body shudders as you cry uncontrollably. You cannot even respond when Starlight moves to hug you; you feel her hooves wrap around your shoulders as she presses the left side of her neck against yours, and her head comes to rest against your left cheek.
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>>30279511
> “Don’t be lonely anymore, Master. That battle is over, and you’ve won… You’ve won because you have me now… Do you understand? You have me, Master… And I love you.”
> Unable to speak, you just move your hands around her body and hold her close as you bury your face into her mane, sobbing loudly in gratitude and joy. Starlight is right: You have her now, and your struggle with loneliness is over.
> As you continue crying, you try to tell her how happy you are, but you choke on your thanks as another wave of tears escapes your eyes, forcing you to clench them shut again.
> “… Staring at the moon so blue… Turning all my thoughts to you…”
> Your pony is singing to you. You can feel her chest and throat vibrating as she lets her wonderful song fill the room.
> “… I was without hopes or dreams… I tried to dull an inner scream but you… Saw me through…”
> This song. You know it.
> “… Walking on a path of air…”
> What is the title?
> “… See your faces everywhere…”
> Starlight’s beautiful voice is such a distraction. Oh! This is You Took My Heart Away by Michael Learns to Rock! That’s it!
> “… As you melt this heart of stone, you take my hoof to guide me home and now… I'm in love…”
> Your pony leans back slightly and you release her as you open your wet eyes. Keeping her own shimmering ones on yours, she closes them as she sits. Tears roll down her cheeks, and you watch her angle her muzzle upwards ever so slightly when she starts to sing the chorus.
> “… You took my heart away… When my whole world was grey… You gave me everything… And a little bit more…”
> She sang that so effortlessly. Starlight must have been practicing.
> “… And when it's cold at night… And you sleep by my side…”
> Opening her eyes, Starlight gives you a quick smile before she opens her mouth and closes the chorus.
> “… You become the meaning of my life…”
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>>30279523
> Quickly, you use a hand to wipe your eyes and swallow to clear your throat. Having the fresh memory of her melody as a reference, you quickly join her in signing the next verse.
“… Living in a world so cold… You are there to warm my soul…”
> “… Living in a world so cold… You are there to warm my soul…”
> You close your eyes and focus your efforts on the next part of the song. Starlight surprises you when she sings the lyrics in a higher key; her voice forming a perfect harmony with your own.
“… You came to mend a broken heart… You gave my life a brand new start and now… I'm in love…”
> “… You came to mend a broken heart… You gave my life a brand new start and now… I'm in love…”
> Opening your eyes, you keep them on Starlight’s as the both of you extend your voices to sing the chorus in unison.
“… You took my heart away… When my whole world was grey… You gave me everything… And a little bit more…”
> “… You took my heart away… When my whole world was grey… You gave me everything… And a little bit more…”
> You feel your diaphragm straining as you do your best to sustain your attempt on the high notes. Starlight clearly has no problem, as she simply sways her head gently in time to the song.
“… And when it's cold at night… And you sleep by my side… You become the meaning of my life…”
> “… And when it's cold at night… And you sleep by my side… You become the meaning of my life…”
> Taking a deep breath, Starlight closes her eyes again as she angles her head once more, extending her neck and opening her muzzle to sing the bridge.
> “… Holding your hand… I won't fear tomorrow… Here where we stand…”
> Holy shit. She hits that high note perfectly, even managing to do a powerful vibrato as she closes each line. You mentally prepare yourself and your vocal chords as you join her for the last line of the bridge.
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>>30279535
“… We'll never be alone!”
> “… We'll never be alone!”
> Without missing a beat, Starlight ‘lah’s the guitar solo, opening her eyes as she looks at you with those shimmering eyes. She sways her head from left to right and back again as she loses herself in her music, but starts nodding her head 4 beats into the chorus, and you follow her lead as you join her again in singing the chorus.
“… You took my heart away… When my whole world was grey…”
> “… You took my heart away… When my whole world was grey…”
> This is more than just singing together. Starlight and you are declaring your love for each other through the song.
“… You gave me everything… And a little bit more…”
> “… You gave me everything… And a little bit more…”
> The warmth and passion you feel envelops your entire being as you gaze into the tearful eyes of your pony lover.
“… And when it's cold at night… And you sleep by my side…”
> “… And when it's cold at night… And you sleep by my side…”
> Starlight is so beautiful. She is yours, and you are her Master.
“… You become the meaning of my life… You become the meaning of my life…”
> “… You become the meaning of my life… You become the meaning of my life…
> Indeed, she IS the meaning of your life. Now, and till the day you die.
“… You become the meaning… You become the meaning of my life…”
> “… You become the meaning… You become the meaning of my life…”
> Ending the song together, you exchange smiles with Starlight before she giggles, and you laugh with her. You have no idea why the both of you are laughing, but it does not matter; it just felt like the right thing to do. Recovering from her laughter, Starlight gives you a warm smile as her eyes fall on the pendant that you are wearing before they flick up to meet your gaze.
> “I hope you like it, Master.”
> You meet her smile with a grin of your own.
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>>30279545
“Are you kidding me? It is the best thing I have ever received! I love it!”
> Starlight nods before she leans in and plants a gentle kiss on your lips, closing her eyes briefly as she does so. You keep still and let her complete that action, and you notice how brightly the teal jewel in her horn-ring is shining.
“Thank you, Starlight. Really, I mean it.”
> With yet another cute giggle, Starlight shakes her head as she smiles wider.
> “Then kiss me, Master. Kiss your little pony, and show her how much you love her.”
> Almost immediately, you reach both hands out and pull her into your embrace again, leaning back on the bed as your lips meet hers in an aggressive kiss. Opening your mouth, her tongue enters and wrestles with yours in a wet embrace as you close your eyes and work your jaw, savouring the taste and texture of her mouth and tongue. You can feel her hooves pressing on your chest as you hold her tightly in your arms.
> You do not care how lewd the sounds of your make out session is. You do not care if she is practically drooling into your mouth, or you into hers. You do not care if the both of you are crying silently in happiness. You do not care if someone comes in.
> Starlight Glimmer. She is all that you care about.
> Now, and till the day you die.
> …
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>>30279557
And end of update.

Starlight does something, and Insp Anon cries.
Details? You'll have to read to know.

"Because I Choose To" by Mercury
Part 1 - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU
Part 2 - https://pastebin.com/GKxvUCek
(Updates are posted in Part 2).

I am really happy with this segment, and I hope that you'll enjoy reading it as much as I loved writing it.

As always, I wanna thank you all for all your support, and I look forward to reading your comments, ideas, suggests and criticisms.

Stay awesome! ^^

> Pic related is best pony in my book.
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I want to force my slaves to eat healthy whole grain oats and long stem leafy greens rather than let them be spoiled with grass.
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Reminder, slave is for cummies.
Any time, any place, and always in a maid outfit.

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>>30279613
Very thanks Mercury for sharing with us this beautiful story, had everything that one can expect and much more and in the end we showed everyone a good message although I feel as if you were giving us the end, I do not complain, on the contrary it is a good way to give to finish your story and move on to a new tale
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>>30280248
What a nice group of ponies to enslave
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>>30280898
You are already a slave, and slaves can not have slaves
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>>30280926
>you are already a slave

What did he mean by this
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>>30280248
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>fin

PARECE QUE NOS ENTENDEMOS >:v
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>>30281437
MODERADORES
CONSTRUYE LA PARED
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>>30280248
>Bulk Biceps looking at Fluttershy
>only one not looking ahead

No one can tell me the animators of this show aren't amazing.
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>>30281445
>CONSTRUYE LA PARED
alv :,v
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>>30281445
Ah! Here we have another slave!
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>>30281437
Contrario al pensamiento recalcitrante de algunos de poca vision /MLP/ aun es un foro abierto para todos, incluso para aquellos que no "hablan" ingles

And many enjoy being here, regardless of the language we speak, why this thread is great
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>>30281722
Tu lo has dicho
You said it
;)
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>>30281722
Google Translate is truly a thing of wonder. Slaver Lyra, Russian Trixie, and ZZZZ all contribute.
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Stripes, work on your story. I need it.
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>>30274810
>"Please, Your Highness. Please, I know we've - attacked you. But you have to see, I'm a pony too... you have to protect me."
Make it clear from here the matter of which he speaks of you is not the point of order. Cadance is hurt by the slander she's given, she obviously wishes to contest it, but it matters little here. He can call Cadance a traitor, a whore, whatever he would have and that would not make his punishment any worse.

This is not about the Princess. It is about Mocha. It is about facing up to the consequences of your actions and the justice for a mare beaten half to death for doing nothing. That is what is at stake here.

That said:
>Alert Anonymous, but do not tell him where Windy is. Make him first swear no harm will come to the pony.
Right now resources are being spent on searching for Windy. Resources that are being wasted. Anon wants there to be some trust between us and he'll only be more pissed later if he knew we were hiding him. However make it absolutely clear there is to be no harm to him and he is not to be taken out of her office until he's ready. He came to them and Cadance gave her word: if Anon shits over that he is going to cause even more of the ponies to lose faith in Cadance. Get him to promise that Windy can claim the office as sanctuary, and in turn promise Anon you will get him to come out and face up to what he's done. Make it clear he had the least to do with this and you will put all you can into finding the last one.

After that, then also keep your word to Windy, and see to it that Anon does kill or torture another of our ponies to suit his sadistic revenge boner. They will see a punishment fitting for what they have done to Mocha, but we won't let a single one of them become another Corana, no matter how much they might deserve it or how little they regret what they've done.
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>>30282671
The hair is off.
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>>30274666
Man, you don't have to go summoning satan to get my attention.

Next section is like, 75% complete.
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>>30283175
Work harder!
>love your story
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>>30282695
I like her with long hair.
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>>30283281
I meant the colour of the hair.
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>>30282671
Pony should pony pony
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Tuner, get back in here and gimme more Skittles or I'll be really, really sad.
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Lyra Temple Run is currently being rewritten as I have found an editor.
Please pardon the absence of Lyra and Bash as the world is improved.
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>>30285157
Sorry I didn't comment on your last update. I was traveling and it was too big a job for mobile faggotry. Everything but the grammar is pretty great in that story, careful you don't edit out its heart!
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>>30285249
I'm reinforcing the idea right now that this took place during the season finale, thus Crystal war Lyra and Nightmare Moon Bash.

Mostly I am adding new lines as opposed to removing, taking the stuff I had to explain and putting it in story.
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>>30282238
>They will see a punishment fitting for what they have done to Mocha, but we won't let a single one of them become another Corana.
Mocha was hurt much worse than Corona, she's in an off-site hospital and might not make it! A human might face death for doing that to a fellow human. Justice might demand something worse than Coronas punishment.
But as non-persons justice is irrelevant anyway. Anons practical slave management policies, neutralizing their offensive abilities and divestment, will be much worse than his temporary revenge-boner.
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>>30231787
>Suddenly, radio stopped, as someone called me.
>As I push to answer call, his office rat voice fills the cabin
>”Hey, dipshit. I’m already near your house, where are you?”
“I… needed to take a control of some deal, I’ll be back in twenty minutes.”
>”Have you left unicorn alone?”
“No, she is with me. Trixie, say hi.”
>Looks like she is still had not used to all our technologies, judging by her face.
>”H-hi.”
>”I hope she wasn’t involved in any of your shit.”
“Em, man, can we discuss it-“
>”What? She was, right? Trixie!”
>”W-well, I volunteered.”
>Curse words rained heavily. Trixie was a little uncomfortable, so I showed her with gestures to just wait it out. After five minutes he finally calmed down.
>”Anyway, just as agreed, I bought the stuff”
“Listen, since we have a lot to talk about, maybe you will stay overnight?”
>”Fuck no. I need to be in Moscow tomorrow.”
“Well, the meeting is appointed on 16:00, right?”
>”…You know, okay. I need to relax. Come faster, I will go shop in meantime. Later.”
“Later.”
>As call ended, radio started playing again.
>Trixie was staring out windows, looking on construction sites and people running around.
>Rest of travel we mostly haven’t talked.
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>>30285406
--Mobile Radio. We have some news---
--Hello, Moscow. It is 14:00, and major news for now—
--Today, American president publicly denounced Russia for placing Iscander systems on border with China. He threatened to use economical means if, citation, “warmongering like that continues”. First to react was Sergey Figov, here are his words—
-->If our American partners see adequate reaction on concentration of army on borders with us as “warmongering”, they probably should have not placed renewed nuclear weapons on bases of Chernogoriya. Do they have more rights on independence, or what?—
--Another news, Ministry of Justice did a report in Parliament about so-called “Alien package”. They argued, that in ten days of acting of these laws already paid one tenth of military budget, and holes in them wouldn’t be abused if infamous “Alien Coexistence” pact will pass. Left-wing parties criticized reporter for biasedness, calling “Alien package”, citation, “legalization of slavery”.
--Mobile radio. People’s news---
--Well, again, Parliament cannot agree on anything, right?—
--It is easy to understand him, Second Dj. After all, these “ponies” bringed us only troubles--
--I wouldn’t say so, First Dj. Like yesterday, Cumsomeoil Truth reports, private agent donated two “ponies” to Orphanage №8 of St.Petersburg. Children were happy to such gift, and ponies themselves were positive, even though, as its written, they had some problems--
--Like what?--
--Like “children pulling tail and mane”, that is what!--
--That made me remember, independent statistic, published by RussischeSweine Zeitung, says that finally, first time in this year, last quarter had negative growth of number of orphans.
--Anyway, we have some more news that are close to us, commoners, right after next song--
--People’s news. From people, to people--
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>>30282671
>>30282695
>>30283281
>>30283329
the hair is fine but her eye color is wrong
should be light blue/icy blue
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>>30285413
>Turns out, Anon has secret -1 floor.
>Wooden interior, three or more rooms.
>Main one has big “acoustic system” and table.
>Now in that room also stands 5 bottles of vodka, baked potato and some other food.
>Plus documents.
>I don’t know where leads second door.
>And we are behind third one.
>”Man, are you sure it is ok to be naked around her?”
>”Vasya, she is naked all the time, what is the big deal?”
>It is hot and wet here.
>And… how to put it?
>Say it as it is, Trixie.
>Their dicks are just on the level of my eyes.
>”Trixie, is it okay? Maybe you will sit on the ground instead?”
“No, I’m fine. It is not that hot.”
>They call it “banya”.
>And Anon acts like nothing is happening.
>Well, I have no big deal about nakedness, but I thought humans are not in clothes only in intimate moments.
>Or maybe it is one?
>”Fuck, it is stinking with horse now! Anon, why you thought this is good idea?”
>Stinking? I was pretty clear even before this “banya”.
>And what is wrong with my smell? Anon is stinking with blood, and I mean not only metaphorically.
>When he was opening a bottle with knife for some reason he misjudged a little and hit his hand.
“I… What is the point of it?”
>”What? Isn’t it relaxing?”
“Yeah, it is like spa I visited back in equestrian, but hotter.”
>And they laughed.
>”Spa! Man, can you believe it? Ponies had spa! They had no fireguns, but already had spa!”
>Does Vasiliy knows? Does he know what kind of business Anon is doing?
>”Don’t say it, Vasya. Trixie, maybe you even had a pedicure?”
“What, of course no!”
>”At least you had some sanity.”
“…It is called hooficure.”
>They turned to me and laughed again.
>Their… reproductive parts wiggled around in tact of their laughter.
>By Celestia it is disturbing.
>”So, you like tender care, right?”
“Yes, "Sticher".”
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>>30285425
>While Vasiliy haven’t stopped, Anon’s face turned serious.
>Have I said something wrong?
>Well, he did wrong, why would I care.
>”Then, maybe I’ll give you some.”
>WHAT?
>”Are you serious, Anonosha?”
>He stood up and went down to me.
>Is he really going to do it?
>I… I’m not ready.
>What? What have you said, Trixie?
>Haven’t I misheard?
>You are not ready? You want this?
>No, no, no, don’t you even think about it!
>Don’t let that ape violate you!
>”Lie down.”
“Y..yeah.”
>What are you doing, gal? You do know what is going to happen?
“But Vasiliy is here…”
>”Ha-ha, that doesn’t matter.”
>Are they going to do it both?
>Anon leaned over me, as his relief body taken my whole sight.
>He grabbed something, and stood up in his full height.
>Branches. There were branches of some tree.
>Strikes. Many little strikes on my back.
>Leaves were messing up my fur, with every hit they stimulated my stained muscles on my back.
>Shivers went through my body with every touch, as they formed symphony of vibrations.
>And he started to hit harder.
“Ah!”
>Now came tetrachords. With every hit he went a little down my spine, as he attacked my buttchecks with series of decisive blows and laughed.
>I cannot oppose it.
>I can only submit.
>My heart started to race.
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>>30285430
“How is it, Trixie?”
>I stopped the branch massage for a moment.
>For some reason, she hasn’t answered.
>Her eyes rolled over, and breath fastened.
>”Is she okay? Is it a heat?”
“What?”
>”I meant, “overheated”. She has a fur, she could have badly taken the temperature around here.”
>Well, it was fine before.
>After some little slaps on her face, she haven’t reacted, only mumbled something.
>Fuck. I guess she really have a overheating.
>”We need to cool her off.”
“Yeah, I know. Go open the second door.”
>Vasya rushed out of banya, as I grabbed Trixie.
>She tried to grip on me in return.
>Ah, it feels nice.
>Who thought she would take a branch massage like that?
>When we deal with it, I hope Vasya will do it for me.
>And now I cannot even run, since floor is sloppy.
>As I walk out off banya, air hits me.
>Ah, here it is, normal floor.
>”I will go back for now.”
>Go, go, Vasya.
>And now, as I run, I hope it will return consciousness to Trixie.
>Here we go. Yupikayay!

“Fuck. Relax, horse!”
>Ouch.
>My fucking ribs.
>Why she struggles so much?
>Cold water of my swimming pool quickly returned her back.
>”What are you doing?”
>Well, since we are here, some fun wouldn’t wind.
“Take a big breath!”
>”Wha-“
>As I dived with her to the bottom, she started hitting me again.
>Now my spine.
>I wouldn’t mind some “resistance”, but pony’s hooves are fucking hard.
>As we came up, she stopped the struggle, gripped to me and started to look around.
>”Are you crazy?”
“Ha-ha, maybe I am.”
>After that she spitted the water that got in her mouth when we were diving.
>Right in my eye.
>Of course, I splashed some water in her face in return.
>And then we both laughed.
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>>30285437
>”So, Anon, your compensating for daughter isn’t that healthy.”
>The fuck he knows if it is healthy?
>And Trixie has nothing to do with my daughter.
>”Not that your attachment to her was healthy in first place.”
“The fuck you said right know?”
>”Don’t get me wrong, I understand that you are not that type, but you cared for her too much.”
“What do you mean?”
>”I mean you got in “business” for her sake. And lost her because of that. Isn’t it telling?”
>Maybe I just need to punch some shit out of him?
>”Ouch, not that hard. My back is sensitive.”
“Sorry, now turn around.”
>While Trixie hanging around vodka, we decided to not stop banya session.
>Branches are biting in little wound on hand, but it doesn’t mean that Vasya will go out tomorrow unwhipped.
”Listen, you had no daughter. When you got one you will understand.”
>”Well, then it will take long until we reach consensus.”
“And yes, I lost her, but I’ll take her back someday. This motherfucking bi-”
>”Hey, relax, man! I know.”
“Then why have you started?”
>He struggled to answer for some time. Or maybe he just wanted to enjoy massage in silence.
>”All I’m saying is that pony is for deal. Don’t attach to it.”
“And be like you, yeah? Not attaching to anything?”
>”Ok, it is your turn.”
>As I lied down, he grabbed branches and continued.
>”You know, I really have problems with that. But business is business.”
“What are you standing? Start already.”
>Hard touch of branches in a good heated banya really revives the body.
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>>30285439
“And who are you telling that to? Today I… I…”
>”I don’t wanna hear about it.”
“Then who if not you?”
>He stopped for a moment, and slapped my butt with full strength, then continued.
“Hey, that is gay!”
>”That is what I was going to say.”
“Listen, is it really hard to hear out a friend?”
>”If he is murdering people on constant basis, then yes. We have talked about it already.”
>Yes, we have.
“She witnessed all of this. I… I don’t know how explain it.”
>”Well, there is no need if she witnessed it.”
“Stop with your jokes!”
>”I’m not joking. Turn around.”
>Now he is looking upside down right in my eyes, as he started hitting my chest.
>”Relax. There would no need to think about it. You are gonna come out clean, and never work in this sphere again.”
“And where would I go? They will not let me live here. And what if they will find my daughter?”
>”You made the preparations with Marinovsky?”
“Yes, I have.”
>”Then don’t worry about your daughter. I appointed two meetings on next week, start preparing Trixie intensively please.”
“Of course, and why only two?”
>“Because third one is totally on me. Here, stand up. How do you feel?”
“Like a newborn! So, into the pool?”
>”Yeah, as I count to three.”
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>>30285444 And that is all for now. Link on the whole thing https://pastebin.com/wgaVqQ0u
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>>30274556
this picture. its eyes remind me of some artist...

>vega update
rarity sure is messed up, still, I can't help but wonder what will happen once twilight tries to administer some corrective hrt for poor rarity. I could imagine her mood swings getting worse, not less, even as the aggression bleeds off.
I wonder if twilight will put it together. That one of the biggest reason that element is warped because rarity feels her desire to own others is generous because it's beneficial to the owned. The way she clings to twilight and hides her from the hard stuff really makes it seem like she wants twilight to be 'hers', not just wants twilight to be 'safe'

To be honest rarity really has given up on this world, and I can't help but wonder if Rarity or twilight have any connection to how horse hierarchy works on earth. I wouldn't be all that surprised to learn that rarity knows, having a vet on staff. I admit the idea of rarity trying out some methods of horse respect to see if they work at all on other poners subconsciously to be a fun one. What I'm really itching for though is just rarity brushing off twilight's misgivings of invasive magic use, considering how ridiculously often twilight did that herself.

either way I like it, rarity is aggressive and still somewhat kind, her life is defined by others, but now she is head horse, guarding her herd and making sure they respect her. I wouldn't be surprised to learn that her punishment wasn't that painful, simply because in this case it is likely to be frequent. Swift, surprising punishments, that highlight the cause of why its happening, and immediate release when obedience is met. That last part tells me rarity isn't an idiot going in half cocked, maybe its just a coincidence. She focuses on rewarding even in small condescending ways immediately after a mistake has been rectified, rather than focus on the mistake. This is very very important in horse training. They get relief when they obey
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>>30275691

> ...
> Zoe left before lunch, so it's just you and the three ponies. And it looks like that's how it will stay for a while.
> Dash will need specialized care for now. Sally promised that they will try to find a skilled surgeon to look at her.
> You've arranged to take your three guests to visit her the next day, so you can see Dash yourself.
> For now, Twilight and Rarity are both huddled around Pinkie, talking quietly.
> You try to distract yourself with the Internet, but it's not working too well.
> On a whim, you order a couple of pizzas for lunch. Why not?
> You don't even notice the pony walking up to you.
> Not until Twilight speaks, anyway.
> "Uh, Anon - can we talk?"
"Sure, what's up?"
> "Rarity asked if she could spend more time at the Pony Society. She wants to be around Rainbow Dash and the others."
"Others?"
> She sighs, saddened by the memory. "There are a few of our... old neighbors. They're not doing too well."
> She looks back at the other two and you follow her gaze.
> Pinkie still looks depressed, but she's talking. It seems like progress.
> "I think it's good for her," Twilight goes on. "When she's helping her friends I can almost see her old self."
> She leans in and lowers her voice. "I think I saw her smiling a few times."
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>>30285952

> That, in turn, makes Twilight smile a little. It's a welcome sight.
"Do you trust the people at the Society enough for that?"
> Now she looks uneasy. "Well, we don't really have a choice. They have Dash and everyone."
> It takes a lot of strength for the pony to say this, but you can see the determination.
> "I think we can trust them. They have good intentions. I trust Sally and Zoe."
> Yeah, now that you think about it, you do, too. You just wished they didn't need armed goons.
"Okay, I suppose that's fine. But I'd still like both of you here, most of the time. We have to figure out what to do next."
> Mare gives you a curt nod. "Thanks. I've been thinking about that, too."
> You raise your eyebrows and wait for her to explain.
> "I can't-" she starts and closes her eyes at the memory. "I can't do magic anymore, but I still remember it all."
> "There's a unicorn at the Pony Society who still has his horn."
> You are about to ask why the slavers would take that risk, but Twilight answers before you can say it.
> "They didn't think he was a threat. His magic is- it isn't strong." She says as politely as possible.
> "Maybe I can teach him," she proposes, but you can already see the doubt in her expression.
> Just how weak is this guy?
> "I mean- at least so he can send a message back home. I think he can manage that."
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>>30285959

> Some help from the other Princesses would be welcome, but you're worried about the military.
"O-kay. I don't know anything about magic, but is it a good idea to bring more ponies here?"
> Twilight shakes her head. "I wasn't going to propose that. I'll tell them to close the portals."
> If you had a drink in your mouth, you'd spit it out now.
"What?!"
> Rarity and Pinkie look at you, but after a few seconds go back to talking quietly.
> Twilight just stares at you.
> "I don't want *anypony* else to go through- this," she says fiercely.
"But you'll all be stuck here!"
> She nods. You can see the determination. "I know. I'll try and get at least some of the others home, but even if I can't, the portals *must* close."
> You don't think there's any chance of talking her out of it.
> It brings you back to a stranger question you've had.
"By the way, how is it possible that we had a show about you and suddenly there's portals to your exact world?"
> You can swear her eyes sparkle in excitement, at least a little.
> "Well, I've been wondering about that, too. Ever since-" she stops and her ears droop.
> "Ever since a customer told me about it."
> She's looking down. The shame of those memories is like a physical force.
> You can't help it - you reach out and brush her cheek.
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>>30285962

> It seems to help. Twilight takes a deep breath and looks back at you.
> You keep your hand there, slowly stroking her cheek with your thumb.
> She doesn't seem to mind. Quite the opposite - the pony is leaning into your touch.
> "I've thought about it a lot. Mostly to try and take my mind off-"
> There she goes again. But this time she rallies quickly.
> "Off what was happening. I think it's got something to do with dreams."
> She sighs again. "I wish I could talk to Luna - she's the expert. My theory is that sometimes, when we dream, we actually see other worlds."
> Well, it's as good a guess as any.
> "I've read some of your science," she says and her eyes lose their focus as she's remembering.
> "The 'Many Worlds Interpretation', I think it's called."
> You remember it vaguely from college.
"Wasn't that disproved?"
> "Well - yeah. But maybe they were wrong about that? Or something similar is happening?"
> You think this sort of discussion is really helping her. Twilight seems engaged, even excited to debate the metaphysical. All traces of her bad memories seem to be gone for the moment.
> Reminds you strongly of the pony in the show.
> "Anyway, physics aside, I don't really have a better explanation. One human saw our world in a dream and then made a show based on it. And then so many people watched it and imagined it..."
> "I think that somehow drew our worlds closer. All it took then was one gifted, dissatisfied unicorn who wanted to escape. The walls were so thin that she inadvertently made a portal."
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>>30285971

> It takes you a bit to process all that. It sounds crazy, but hey - who are you to judge?
> Seems like Twilight is about done talking.
"So anyway, you teach this unicorn at the Pony Society how to send a message. Then what? Can the others open up more portals closer to you? Because I don't think we can get to the existing ones, not with the military there and all."
> The pony sits down on the floor. You scooch over and pat the couch.
> She jumps up. Might as well be comfortable.
> "Maybe. I don't know how much control they have. It's possible there are places where the walls are thinner. But I'm definitely telling them to close all the portals first. Even if there's a chance they won't be able to open any new ones."
> Her experiences fuel her conviction.
"You'll be trapping all of you on this side."
> She's not happy about that, but still determined. "I'll have to live with that."
> You nod. In her position, you'd probably make the same call.
"Okay, how can I help?"
> "Pen and some paper, please. I couldn't find any. I need to write some spells down for Gray Lotus."
> You guess that's the unicorn.
"Okay, I'll order some supplies. These days they deliver everything. I'll show you."
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>>30285979

> ...
> You leave Twilight browsing through Amazon for anything else she might need.
> Meanwhile, you go and check on the others.
> Rarity was saying something to her friend, but falls silent when she spots you.
> Pinkie is the first one to speak up.
> "Anon?"
> Her worried tone tells you she has some ways to go before she can talk to you like Twilight just did.
"I've ordered us a pizza. It should be here any minute. You like pizza, right?"
> She gives you a hesitant nod. "Thank you, M-master."
> Rarity looks at her in surprise and then back at you. That's disapproval, no doubt.
> You quickly raise your hands up.
"Hey, none of that Master stuff, I already told you. Not a slave anymore, okay?"
> Pinkie looks like she's about to cry and Rarity's glare is liable to create some storm clouds above you.
> Well, if she's angry, at least she's not depressed. Maybe that's better.
> You still change the topic, quickly.
"Would you like something to drink?"
> That should be safe enough.
> After a moment, Pinkie nods. You go check the fridge and spot a can of Coca-Cola in the back.
> You grab it on a whim and take it to the living room.
> Pinkie is watching with genuine curiosity - you guess the vivid red caught her attention. You crack it open and hold it out.
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>>30285985

> You still can't get your head around the way these ponies can hold stuff so precisely.
> She takes a sip and you see her eyes widen.
> "It- it's good!" she exclaims, surprised. "Wow! What is it?"
> She remembers the manners they have force-taught her and adds belatedly: "Anon?"
> At least she didn't say 'Master'.
"It's Coke. It's quite popular here. I'll buy some more."
> Rarity almost gags. "Coke?! That sounds absolutely horrid!"
> It takes you a second to piece it together. You almost slap your forehead.
> Can't help laughing.
"Not coke as in coal, Rarity. It's short for 'Coca-Cola'."
> She's sceptical, but you swear you saw a small smile on Pinkie. She holds it out. "Wanna try?"
> Rarity is tempted, but shakes her head. "I'd.. rather not. I'll take your word for it."
> There goes the doorbell. You grab your wallet from the coffee table and fish out the credit card.
> You barely suppress a laugh when the delivery boy nearly shits himself. Twilight had poked her head out of the room to see what was going on.
> Poor guy just stares, until you just take the pizzas out of his hands.
> You also have to take your credit card back. Good thing you paid first, it doesn't look like he remembers how to work the card terminal.
> "Is.. is that-" he tries to say, pointing.
"Sure is. Thanks!"
> You close the door on him with a grin.
> It's good to be a little bit evil every now and then.
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>>30285993

> Twilight closes her eyes and swivels her ears toward the door. You guess she's listening for the guy to leave.
> You just wait. A long while later she relaxes and bursts out laughing.
> "The look on his face!" she chokes out.
> Seeing her giggling like that warms your heart.
> You're sure the delivery boy won't mind. You've given him a fifty-percent tip. But you don't think he will notice until he gets back to the pizza place.
> Suddenly Twilight is all serious again. She raises her nose up and inhales.
> "Is that what I think it is?"
> You just nod.
> "I haven't had pizza in... forever. Thanks, Anon!"
"Hey, don't mention it. Come!"
> You take it to the coffee table, purple pony right on your heals.
> The other two seem a bit reluctant, but having heard Twilight laughing like that has definitely improved their mood.
> Mental note: pizza party seems to be a good cure for depression.
> And it gets better. Twilight swallows a mouthful and seems to remember something.
> "Oh, Anon, there was a thing in the news today on Internet. I just saw it - I was coming to tell you when the pizza came."
> You stop chewing and look at her.
> "The police - 'raided, I think the word was - that place," she says. You instantly know what place she means.
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>>30285999

> "There was this big scandal and all the newspapers published what was happening."
> The memory almost brings her down again, but she pushes past it.
> "Anyway, most of the people who worked for him are in jail and they saved a bunch of ponies. The Pony Society will take them in, for now."
> Rarity speaks up, interrupting her friend. "We *have* to go see them! I'm sure a friendly face will make everypony feel better."
"Of course," you say with a nod. "I'll call Sally right away."
> Twilight isn't finished yet. "They didn't get him - Dave," she admits, grimacing at the name. "But there's something called an 'APB'. The reporter seems to think they'll catch him soon."
"All Points Bulletin. Means every law officer will be looking out for him."
> All three ponies brighten up.
> "Zoe told me you were the one who got all that evidence," the mare continues. "I wanted to say thanks, Anon. You've done a good thing."
> You're not entirely certain how legal it all was. You've been worried that people - and ponies - might die because of it.
> It's a relief to hear it ended up okay. But you still have to talk to Zoe and make sure she doesn't do stupid stuff like that anymore.
> You notice how wide Rarity's eyes are as she's staring at you.
> "Y-you did that?" she asks, incredulous.
> "Yes," Twilight confirms.
> You're almost knocked down by the sudden hug. All you can see is the purple mane in your face.
> Well, maybe you've earned yourself some trust, at least.
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>>30286013

Yes, we're not done with the baddy just yet.
And I'd also like to thank everyone for your feedback, it's very gratifying that people like what I'm writing.

And yes, I have used a few of the suggestions. Might do a more cyoa-style thing at some point, too.
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What would Discord as a slave be like?
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>>30285420
That's because it's not actually Corona. It's someone else's OC who happens to look a bit like her.
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>>30286013
Please have that faggot buy a gun. He's such a wimpy baby he's just going to get everyone killed if 'Dave' ever shows up.
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>>30286801
Nah, dude. He's a pacifist. Besides, that would ruin a nice little scene I'm planning.
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>>30286888
I sure hope it involves Dave getting beaten to death by three ponies and a human
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>>30286030
Getting pinkie back on caffeine was a good idea. With how much sweets they eat. More is probably a good idea. Getting them back into doing their talents would help take their minds off things.
Makes me wonder how they would react to watching their own show.
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>>30287824
Now that i think about it. watching their own show would probably just make them homesick beyond belief. especially treebrary
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>>30276286
I refuse to believe space-horse is dead.
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How much you wanna bet Corona's insides are getting basted with Master's baby batter?
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>>30285761
Thanks glad you liked it. She's definitely trying to win twilight over little by little and by whatever means necessary. What's a little psychological manipulation between friends after all? We'll get to the real meat of the element situation soon but you're onto something for sure. The magic of the element wasn't broken just twisted and turned in on itself in an almost selfish way instead of generous. We'll just have to see how she reacts when confronted by the truth.
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>>30261222
>Noises are bad, make the noises go away.
>"wilight... wake up twilight..."
>You try to bury your head further into the soft pillows like you usually do when Anon comes to bug you in the morning but strong forehooves around your stomach prevent you from escaping.
>The grip tightens as the fuzzy creature behind you pulls you even closer into it's diabolical grasp.
>Your ear twitches as your captor breaths into it again.
>"It's time to get uppppp."
>No no no it's time for more sleeps, evil sing song voices can go away.
>Apparently unsatisfied with your response your tormentor grasps the tip of your ear in her teeth and pulls lightly.
>The shock of being chewed on sends bolts down your spine and confused feelings through your sleep addled mind.
"Quit it... Go away..."
>You suppresses a moan as the vicious chewing only gets worse, squirming you try to wiggle out of the hold.
>Unfortunately the pathetic struggles are in vain as the much more awake pony behind you giggles and continues her ear based assault.
>Finally opening your eyes you turn to face your torturer as best you can.
>The white mare with a mouth full of purple ear just gives you a quick smile before letting go.
>"Now that's the heavy sleeper I remember. Always so stubborn."
>Learning down towards you Rarity subjects you to aggressive nuzzles. The monster.
"I'm up, I'm up."
>"I know how you are, the minute I leave you alone you'll be right back to sleep."
>That is 100% totally not true.
>"Besides one does not tell their mistress to go away you naughty thing."
>She punctuates her statement with a giggle and a squeeze.
>Had you been more awake and her tone more serious it might have scared you a little but right now it was just playful banter.
"Fine, Go away mistress."
>"Hmm maybe someone needs an early morning lesson?"
>You hear her horn light up and suck in a sharp breath as something floats right into your field of vision.
>Holy crap that's a huge hairbrush!
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>>30289095
>You whimper and try to squirm away from it, it's giving you flashbacks of screaming over Anon's knee with your flank on fire!
>Sensing your distress Rarity floats it away quickly.
>"Oh my I'm sorry darling I just meant to poke fun. Shh it's ok you're safe you aren't in trouble."
>Despite the assurances you pulled yourself into the smallest ball of purple pony you could.
>Rarity gives chase though and wraps even further around you covering you in a shell of white and purple.
>"You've been a good girl darling it's ok."
>It takes a few minutes of quiet assurances from your big spoon but you eventually begin to relax again.
"I'm sorry Anon has one just like that."
>"That's good sweetie that's good that he trains you so well."
>You don't feel safe arguing with her so you just nod a little.
>"A good healthy fear of the brush keeps many a mare out of trouble I assure you. Some more than others though."
>She sort of chuckles at her last statement, is she talking about her other mares?
"Is... Is that what happened last night?"
>"Oh. I was hoping you wouldn't have to hear that."
>Pulling her right forehoof out of her death grip she places it on your side and begins to brush your fur up and down.
>It feels nice.
>"Yes a few of the girls got in trouble last night I will admit. I promise I was not too harsh with them but a quick lesson set them straight in no time."
"Does that happen a lot?"
>"I'm not sure I would say a lot but it happens. A lot of the time just the sight of the brush is enough to make them think twice."
>Her hoof absentmindedly drifts down your side to your cutie mark as she continue the light massage.
>"But if that doesn't work then a quick pop pop pop and they remember!"
>Each pop is emphasized by a light pat to your cutie mark that makes you blush like a school filly!
"Rarity!"
>A tut tut issues from behind you hear her magic and feel the brush coming to rest on your flank!
"Mistress I meant mistress!"
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>>30289103
>She gives you one light swat before floating it away again.
>"You're lucky we're friends darling. Now come along it's time to get ready!"
>You find yourself frozen in place for a minute as your mind focuses on the light sting where the brush had just landed.
>She spanked you! Rarity disciplined you and you aren't even hers yet!
>"Up up let's go Twilight."
>Hearing her horn light again you quickly evacuate the bed before you find out if she was going to lift you or the brush with her magic.
>"There's my girl! Here the bathroom is this way, I think you'll love it."
>Ok she was right but to be fair the bathroom was bigger than your room at Anon's house.
>The more you looked around the more it rivaled the royal bathrooms in canterlot and those were built for alicorns!
"I think this is the biggest bathroom I've seen in my life..."
>"I knew you'd be impressed, to be honest I had the entire thing rebuilt when I moved in. A guest bedroom is a small price to pay for your own built in spa!"
>You can't argue with that.
>"Well come on hop in. Lilly already drew the bath for us, it's just the right temperature I promise."
>Get in!? We don't need a bath scene Rarity we're both ponies!
"Us?"
>"We've been to the spa together before Twilight. I know it's been a while but don't be modest."
>Grabbing you lightly by the ear with her magic she softly pulls you with her as she trots to the side of the small swimming pool sized tub.
>Not enough to hurt but enough to get you moving.
>"Well, can you get in by yourself?"
>She giggles at your blush. No way out of this it seems so you trot down the stairs and into the bubble filled water.
>Following close behind you Rarity goes over to the side to pick to scrutinize her selection of products.
>"Have you been taking care of your mane? Anon doesn't seem the type to spend much on shampoos."
"He just has some human stuff, it's ok."
>"Oh no no that just wouldn't do. Come here darling I know just what you need!"
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>>30289115
>You back away from the determined gleam in her eyes as she approaches you with 3 different bottles in tow.
"I can wash my own mane..."
>"Hmm maybe you can but not today!"
>Wading towards you even faster you soon run out of tub to escape too!
"No no wait!"
>Your cries for mercy are ignored as she once again grabs you with her magic, taboo!, and turns you around.
"Ra-Mistress please I'm not a filly!"
>"You're my filly as long as your mane is in such dire straits Twilight."
>With no real choice you simply resign yourself to the washing.
>Her ear pulling hadn't been painful but it was clear she was going to have her way one way or another, may as well behave and make it easier on yourself.
>Besides it was kind of nice to have someone take care of you for once.
>"I'm sending you home with some of my products Twilight. You've already got split ends and those cheap human shampoos are only going to make it worse."
"Yes ma'am..."
>Aggressive washing is aggressive. Your head bounces all over the place as she really digs her hooves into your mane.
>"Oh don't be so drab I know this must feel amazing."
>It did feel kinda nice but you were not gonna tell her that ever. You just sit in place like a statue as she has her fun.
>"Ugh fine have it your way you spoilsport. But Just for that I'm doing your coat now as well."
>You just groan and hang your head, until she pulls it back up to rinse out the 3rd and final application of product.
>"Tail darling."
>She tabs your rump under water to get you to raise it.
"Please I can do my tail myself..."
>"Don't be silly just get it up here."
>Wrapping her the base of your tail in her magic she starts to pull.
>The sensation of having your tail pulled is like nothing else and instantly your whole rear is out of the water.
>Pushing you forward off the side of the tub she soon has you bending over the edge with your tail end completely out of the water.
"Rarity this is embarrassing!"
>"Hmm the price of disobedient I suppose."
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>>30289125
>You turn your head back to plead with your eyes but she doesn't even spare you glance. Instead already focusing on lathering up your tail with the soapy shampoo.
>"I envy you Twilight."
>wat?
>"You've never had anyone do this have you? My first owner loved to bathe me, it's some kind of an obsessions for some of them"
>Shit that sounds awkward.
>"It was as pleasant as you can imagine. Those little monkey hands everywhere..."
>You can feel the shiver through her hooves as she remembers.
>"I hope my hooves are a bit kinder, this isn't our first time at least."
>That does help a lot, communal bathing was common in equestria.
>While not a big deal for unicorns the less magically inclined races had no real way of scrubbing their backs. As a result bathing with family or friends was an everyday activity.
>Rarity had scrubbed you plenty of times but this time it was still somehow different.
>The power dynamic was always on your mind, as well as the way she so easily marehandled you with her magic when you resisted.
>"There, back in the water now."
>Don't have to tell me twice, the less humiliating posture was welcome as you climbed back into the tub.
>Catching your eye she offers you an apologetic smile.
>"I hope this isn't too unpleasant for you. I don't get an opportunity to be hooves on with any pony anymore. I fear it would frighten the girls and I don't want to put them through what I've been through."
>Wow that's a first, not gonna say that though.
"It's fine it's just been a long time."
>Sure it's awkward but you know she's not gonna molest or abuse you, it's still Rarity.
>"Oh this is why I want you darling! I can be so me around you!"
>Squishing your face with her hooves she rubs noses with you.
>You can't help but notice yesterday it was all about keeping you safe, now it's all about you making her comfortable.
>Of course no one else wants to snuggle or bathe with her when she's so strict with them.
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>>30289133
>But if you lived here would that strictness ever turn on you?
>So far she'd been rather gentle even when upset with you.
>This morning's little demonstration made you question that sense of safety though.
>Turning you back around Rarity begins to lather up your back with her various coat shampoos.
>It does feel kinda nice but more importantly you can tell it's doing wonders for her.
>Up until now she'd always seemed to serious. Sure she'd give you a smile when you caught her eye but most the time it was the visage of someone planning, calculating, never relaxed.
>Now she's genuinely smiling, even humming as she picks up a foreleg to wash it.
>You don't doubt that's what she needs. A friend instead of another slave to break beneath her hoof.
>Could that be you though? Your strength of will wasn't what it used to be, if she started to discipline you seriously you'd break just like you did with Anon.
>Your mind wandered through the possibilities until jarred back to reality by a knock at the door.
>"Come in Lilly."
>A young unicorn mare trots in with a load of fresh towels in her magic.
>"Here are the towels you asked for mistress. Do you want to start on your makeup now?"
>Her magic looks a bit weak. It seems she's so focused on keeping the towels under control she didn't notice where the two of you were at.
>"Well it might be a bit soon for that dear."
>"What? Why what are - oh."
>"Lilly this is Twilight, I don't believe the two of you have met."
>She's kind enough to NOT stop bathing you as she introduces you.
>Yeah that's not awkward at all as she turns you and begins to lather up your chest.
>Ponies usually help each other with backs, not everything else...
>Lilly clearly finds it as awkward as you based on her blush.
>Oh god her hoof just keeps going lower and lower as she reaches into the water to scrub your underbelly.
>If she keeps going down you're going to have a real problem here!
>Your discomfort must be easy to read as she giggles.
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>>30289141
>"Good fillies get to do this themselves you know."
>Wow thanks for patronizing in front of someone that's great!.
"Alright I'm sorry. Just please let me do it..."
>You practically whimper the last part but it seems to do the trick.
>"I'll let you off the hook this time, but only because I think you've learned a lesson in cooperation."
>You sure had. A mane washing is pleasant compared to where her hooves were slowly moving towards.
>She floats her products over to you as she herself climbs out of the tub.
"Getting out already?"
>"Hmm? Oh yes I bathed last night."
>So she just wanted to play with you, lovely.
>"I do need to do my makeup though. Let's get started Lilly."
>Sinking further into the water you're finally able to relax now that you're alone.
>"You can soak for a minute Twilight but breakfast is soon."
>You sink your head beneath the water.
>What a day this will be.

We're moving slowly but we'll get there eventually.
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>>30289150
Rarity is a real weirdy. If I were Twilight I would go back to Anon at this point. However, if Twilight can somehow break through to her friend and get her to see how she has become, it would be worth it to stay with her!
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>>30285971
>Anyway, physics aside, I don't really have a better explanation. One human saw our world in a dream and then made a show based on it. And then so many people watched it and imagined it..."

How do you think Lauren Faust would feel if she thought she was indirectly responsible for the invasion, murder, captivity and degradation of Equestria ponies?
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>>30289150
>it's some kind of an obsessions for some of them
Yes, it is indeed! Congratulations on satisfying the Bath Scene obligation.

>You don't feel safe arguing with her
Twilight needs to address this issue. It's very difficult for a slave and the master to be friends, there's just too much power getting in the way. If Rarity gets the slave she wants, she should understand she's loosing the friend she needs.
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>>30289150
Really liked the meta bath joke, made me lol
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>>You don't feel safe arguing with her
>Twilight needs to address this issue. It's very difficult for a slave and the master to be friends, there's just too much power getting in the way. If Rarity gets the slave she wants, she should understand she's loosing the friend she needs.
this is wrong, but it may well end up being true for rarity's style since she is distant from other ponies and is hiding her hardship in order to keep them in line, already hiding things from Twilight.

A master can be your friend but only if as you said you are allowed to BE honest. To have open discussion, and experiance compromise. In the end you will always be the lesser, but what defines a relationship is how the walls come down around one another. Even in an ostensibly equal relationship it can be hard to tell someone something that will make them angry. to bring up hard topics. It can lead to fights and end relationships. that's just as much of a disinsentive as punishment sometimes. For Rarity to have her cake and eat it too, she needs to be open with twilight and have twilight be open with her. To promise her exemption from punishment when they talk about serious things they might not see eye to eye on.

This is something anon is actually doing not so terrible at. He didn't punish twilight for communicating her needs. He did not stroak his ego when he knew he was write and looked into it for twilight. He explained her situation in detail so she'd understand, and he made it clear to her that he didn't have all the cards in his hand either on what to do next. Rarity is failing pradoxically because she's trying to put on a show and earn twilight's admiration and desire. She likely cares just as much as anon, but feels like that kind of weakness could ruin her. Shes a free pony through a legal loophole. She dont want no trawble. She appears strong and is obsessed with it because she'd already be in chains again if she wasn't so careful.
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>>30286013
>Twilight isn't finished yet. "They didn't get him - Dave," she admits, grimacing at the name. "But there's something called an 'APB'. The reporter seems to think they'll catch him soon."


Fuck AWF, do not make me think what i'm thinking...
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>>30286030
To distribute the plot between the recovery of the ponies, as well as spend time with the Pony society and the people who help there, while continuing the search of the other mares lost, as well as to continue with the financing plans of Anon and his professional life , know the point of view of their acquaintances, partners and workers about how they left everything to help some dirty invading aliens.

A less humanistic view of a third party on the fate of the ponies on Earth would help reinforce Anon's, Sally's and Zoe's conviction about helping the Equestrians, be it a speciesist, a soldier's relative or a simple Bastard who enjoys watching them suffer reflects the polarized public opinion on the pony problem, something that shows that someone like Dave could act with so much impunity in the past

Great Job AWF!!
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>>30290659
Page 9 bump?
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>>30289150
Hmm seems a few of my last minute edit's didn't get saved. Slightly more refined version available in the pasetbin but it's nothing big: https://pastebin.com/rJhtA082

>>30289667
>If I were Twilight I would go back to Anon at this point.
She's definitely considering it, like she said the grass isn't always greener. But at the same time she doesn't want to leave a friend in need.

>>30290547
>>30289965
Great points. Do bear in mind though that while Rarity has described Twilight as her friend she has never explicitly said that that's her motivation for wanting to own her. She's claimed being owned by her would keep twilight safe, and in today's update she said she enjoyed being herself around Twilight. She absolutely has to keep up a strong face for the world so wanting someone to unwind with isn't unreasonable but it's also not exactly a generous motivation, one might even argue it's selfish. Knock down drag out fight on the subject soon.
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>>30289095
>Holy crap that s a huge hairbrush!
4 U
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>morning bump
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Wait, does Vega Twilight not have a horn, but Rarity does?
How did that happen?
Somebody misunderstood and neutered purple best horse?
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>>30292750
They both have horns. Twilight has a horn ring but it still capable of most her magic, only reason she doesn't use it to escape is she knows she'd just be on the run again and it's not worth it.
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>>30293058
Okay I must have missed something, somebody had a hornless Twilight that needed to talk to Equestria.
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>>30293306
That is Aspiring Write Fag, a different author with a different Twilight. Dave is a cruel master indeed and had mutilated his ponies for safety and convenience.
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>>30289150
It seems to me that Rarity has decided to use another method of persuasion to get the acceptance of Twiligth, instead of the pain chose the pleasure to cajole it and have its approval, the saddest thing here is that one can realize the sadness that the white unicorn takes on his actions, not only wants to "protect" his ponies with punishment and repression, but also desperately seeks to preserve what little remains of his old life in Equestria in trying to own Twiligth but force it to accept the new reality of human society, may not prove it but Rarity is afraid that if he loses Twiligth also lose the last bond that has with his past and that the only thing left in a mare full of physical and mental scars that lost his dignity, to her childrens and herself and the reflection she sees in the mirror every day is what humans left her.

We need Anon to return for Twiligth as soon as possible.
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did the blindanon story ever continue?
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I miss weld pone
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>>30291834
>But at the same time she doesn't want to leave a friend in need.
She doesn't want to part with her ovaries either.
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>>30294163
Rarity offers to buy her personaly, not through Diamond In The Rough Inc, so that company policy will not apply. Twilights treatment will be up to her alone.
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>>30294211
At least thats what Rarity is saying.
And shes not trustworthy in my eyes.
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to be honest I fully expect her to go back to anon because muh fucking self insert fantasy but rarity is unironically the more interesting character here. How twilight interacts with, and is trained by rarity has real stakes for both of them. Anon not so much.
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Aside from the occasional light spanking, the biggest threat from Anon is boredom. One of the species finest minds wasted! Rarity has much more to offer with her well equipped lab and influential organization, but her motivations (and sanity) are suspect... Twilight should try to maintain this temporary rental arrangement indefinitely. She gets to hang with (and help?) her friend, do interesting important work, but the ultimate decisions about her life get made under Anons benign neglect. She can commute back and forth, or Anon might even be willing to move closer. Rarity avoids the big cash purchase she seems to really worry about, Anon gets a small but steady income and a happy part-time pet.
There's a deal in here somewhere, Twilight just has to bring it together!
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>>30293926
I DO miss you, seeing flutter-eye! I hope your hurt wing heals up functionally, and you get a real handle harness to guide your client.
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>>30293872
No, unfortunately. Writefag never came back.
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>>30286013

> ...
> You stand in front of a white door, trying to gather up the courage to open it.
> This wing of the building looks very new - white tiles and fresh paint everywhere. It's a contrast to the rest of the place.
> Pony Protection Society HQ.
> They converted an office building into a safe house for ponies. They even renovated a part of the floor into a makeshift hospital.
> From what you could see, it's well supplied. It seems the people are serious about what they do.
> Enough delaying. You look down at Rarity and Pinkie and push the door open.
> A day in the company of her friends has helped the earth pony immensely. That and the prospect of visiting Dash.
> Twilight had asked to stay at the apartment so she could keep researching the Internet.
> The room looks like a regular hospital room, but the beds are lower. Easier for ponies to use, you imagine.
> Your eyes land on this particular pony. Exactly as you imagined - rainbow mane, outline of wings under the covers.
> And a scowl.
> Her grimace vanishes when her two friends fall on her, one from each side.
> Pinkie is crying already and it looks like Dash might also start.
> For a short while, they just hug.
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>>30295913

> Rainbow is the first to break the silence.
> "I'm sorry you have to see me like this."
> It just makes Pinkie weep harder. "No, Dash. *I'm* sorry I wasn't there when you needed me."
> You almost feel like you're intruding on something private. You think about leaving and giving them some time.
> But Rainbow keeps looking at you, so you stay.
> "I'm supposed to cheer up my friends..." Pinkie keeps going.
> Dash bumps her with her nose. You're painfully reminded that she can't move.
> "Don't beat yourself up, Pinkie," she says. "It's not your fault. It's his!"
> Finally, they peel themselves away, if only to look from her to you in shock.
> Dash keeps her glare on you. "Guys, could you give me a minute alone with Anon?"
> The other two look at each other, but they leave.
> Rarity takes the initiative. "Come, Pinkie, let's go see a few other friends."
> She all but drags her friend out and closes the door.
> You feel a little nervous. The pegasus on the bed can't move, but her stare feels like a slap by itself.
> "They tell me you got the others out of... out of that place," she says.
"Yes. I was trying to get you all. Fluttershy-"
> She just interrupts you. "You couldn't have come and told me that a little sooner?"
> You're starting to understand why she's angry.
> She needs a scapegoat. Someone to blame beside herself.
> It's the least you can do.
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>>30295926

> Besides, you have thought about it yourself. You could have gone back and booked (even the word makes you feel dirty) the others. You could have told them, given them hope.
> But what would happen if you couldn't make good on your promises?
> You look at the broken pony before you.
> Would it be worse?
"I'm sorry. I really am."
> She's not quite ready to accept the apology. "Come here. Look at me!"
> You shuffle forward and take a seat at the side of the bed. It's a low chair, so you're very close.
> Close enough to clearly see her tears.
> "I did this. *I* did this to myself. Do you have *any* idea what that feels like?"
> She looks away. "It would have been better if I succeeded in killing myself."
> You can't help yourself and you reach out to grab her hoof.
"Please don't say that. There's still hope-"
> The angry glare is back. "DON'T TALK TO ME ABOUT HOPE!"
> She doesn't even seem aware that she yelled.
> "There is no hope. There never was any. I hate this world, I hate the bastards at the whorehouse and I hate *you*."
> Maybe you should be angry at those words, but all you feel is pity. And it looks like that's the worst thing you could give her just now.
> Her eyes are like red fire.
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>>30295936

> You're surprised her tears don't come out as steam.
> "I tried to off myself. That's what you humans did to me. I tried to up and quit on my friends. ME! LOYALTY!"
> She has difficulty drawing breath, but she pushes on. "I stuck my head under a chair and I twisted, because I couldn't think of any other way to escape."
> You find yourself gripping her leg in terror, but you can't make yourself speak up and stop her.
> "I felt my spine snap. I thought that was it and I was GLAD! But then I didn't die."
"Oh, Rainbow..."
> You can't stop it. You're crying, too.
> "And then I had to lie there and wait. I knew. I knew I'd never walk again. Or fly. Or anything. I'd just be a- a *fuckpillow*!"
> Finally, she can't talk anymore. You keep hold of her hoof, but you don't think she can feel it.
> She can see it, though.
> You just wait. Eventually she cries herself out and falls silent.
> She's still angry, but maybe not at you, personally. You were just convenient.
> Dash couldn't take her anger out on the doctors or the nurses. But she could rage at you.
> You're okay with that. It feels like it helped to get all that out.
> As you shift, you become aware of your backpack. You remember the present you brought. Maybe it will ease her boredom, at least.
"Well, I brought you something, if you want it."
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>>30295952

> She doesn't answer, so you just give it to her.
> It's a tablet computer, fitted with similar voice software you've given Twilight. You've improved on it quite a bit, becase Dash can't even use a mouse.
> She looks at it skeptically. "What am I supposed to do with that?"
> You place it in her lap. The cover serves as a makeshift stand.
"Computer, call Twilight."
> A little Star Trek, maybe, but it works. The screen comes on and it's already on Skype and ringing.
> A short while later, the picture changes. It's a live feed from the camera on your home computer with a very pleased-looking purple pony.
> "Hi, Dash!" she pipes up. The voice is a bit tinny from the small speakers, but quite clear. You bought the very best you could find.
> "T-twilight?" Dash says, incredulous. "How did you do that? I thought they took your magic."
> The pony on the screen grins proudly. "It's not magic. Anon showed me this thing. It's called 'the Internet'. You can use it from that thing - the computer."
> Always the lecturer, but it looks like Dash is distracted. You imagine there's less anger and more amazement in her face now.
> Twilight just goes on: "There's a lot of things it can do. I'll show you! I think you'll like movies."
> You leave them to it and go look for Pinkie and Rarity.
> A 'thank you' or maybe an apology would have been nice, but you didn't expect either.
> Maybe someday.
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>>30295968

> You don't have to go far. They are right outside. From the looks on their faces, they've heard everything.
> Pinkie, especially, has a hard time believing. "Y-you won't punish her for that, M-Anon?"
> You shake your head.
"I'm not mad. I understand why she's angry. I just wish there was more I could do."
> "But- but- She said all those mean things!"
"I don't mind, really. Go in and help Twilight cheer her up, okay? I have to find a doctor to ask something."
> Pinkie is even more confused. "Twilight? I thought I heard her, but how?"
> You just grin and hold the door open.
"Go and see for yourself."
> They hurry inside and you close the door.
> You can't help Dash walk again. She won't be able to fly and see the world. But you can bring the world to her.
> It's something, at least.
> You set off in a random direction, looking for anyone in a white lab coat.
> A nurse directs you to a doctor's office. You knock, but don't wait for permission to enter. He was just reading a newspaper, so he obviously has time.
> He seems to recognise you. "Ah, Mr. Anonymous. You're becoming quite famous around here."
"Oh?"
> He nods. "It's not every day that someone sells a successful business and uses the money to help ponies."
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>>30295977

> You try to wave it off, modestly.
"I just had the means to help. Doesn't make me a hero."
> He shrugs, unconvinced. "How can I help you?"
"I want to ask about Rainbow Dash. Is there anything you can do?"
> "Unfortunately, no. I'm still waiting on a few opinions from my colleagues around the country, but the consensus is that she won't walk again."
"What if money wasn't an object?"
> The guilt is real, even if somewhat unjustified.
> Doc spreads his arms and lets them fall back. "I've already asked that same question. Sorry, Mr. Anonymous."
> Well, you're going to get a second opinion anyway. If you can find a reputable pony surgeon on the Internet.
> ...
> You take a walk around the building to clear your mind. There are a lot of security cameras and quite a few armed guards.
> It makes a sort of sense. With people like Dave around, these rehabilitation facilities could be interesting targets.
> It feels like a prison, though, so you make your way back to the hospital.
> The door opens quietly and you can hear Twilight explaining Youtube to Dash.
> Her other two friends are on the bed, too. All of them are watching with interest.
> Rarity notices you first.
"Ready to go?"
> She looks at Pinkie and then at Rainbow, then back to you.
> "Anon," she says, carefully, "we would like to say here tonight, if that's all right."
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>>30295990

> She is still wary, but definitely bolder around you.
> You shrug.
"I can't see why not. Do you have someplace to sleep?"
> Dash interjects. "They can sleep here, with me." It sounded a little forceful, but you don't mind.
"Okay. Have Zoe or Sally drive you back tomorrow. And if you need anything, have the tablet call my place, like I showed you. And when it says the battery is low, ask a nurse or someone to plug it in."
> You point to the backpack, which you had left by the bed.
"The charger is in there."
> You get three nods. Twilight had fallen silent when Rarity began talking to you, but now you hear her question: "You guys are staying there?"
> They'll work it out with the staff. You're not too worried - it looks like this place really is a sanctuary for ponies, if a little prison-like.
> Well, they haven't given you a reason to distrust them, yet.
> Luckily the drive isn't very far, but the car feels emptier. You've gotten used to company rather quickly, haven't you?
> ...
> You can hear very loud music when you exit the lift.
> Sounds like 'It's My Life', you forget the singer.
> You hope the neighbors won't complain too much.
> It's only afternoon, so maybe people aren't back from work yet.
> You quickly enter the apartment and close the door behind you. It's deafening.
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>>30296003

> You walk to the work room. Serves you right for buying those $1500 speakers.
"Twilight, what the hell?!"
> You can barely hear your own voice.
> She hears you and looks back, a huge smile on her face.
> "I love this song!" she yells back.
> You quickly turn the volume down. The knob isn't that large - how did she even work it?
"You shouldn't play it that loud, though."
> In the sudden silence your voice seems louder than you meant to make it.
> Her face falls. "Oh. I'm sorry, I didn't realize..."
> Then she remembers something else. "I got us a pizza!"
> You can't wrap your mind around the thought.
"Pizza? How did you-"
> She doesn't let you finish. Her smile is back and the pony is looking proud of herself.
> "I saw the square thingy yesterday - the credit card. I searched on the Internet how to use it. And then I searched for pizza and found one place that delivers."
> She frowns up at you. "Did you know you can pay right over the Internet? I just told the delivery guy to leave it on the floor and go, so he didn't see me. You don't have to worry about that."
> Smart horse.
"Well, that's... impressive."
> She narrows her eyes. "But?"
> How do you explain Internet scams to a pony?
"You should be careful giving out credit card numbers, especially on the Internet."
> Still, pizza is nice. You grab a slice and head for the living room.
"Come, I'll try and explain."
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>>30296024

And I got around to updating the whole thing on pastebin: https://pastebin.com/9TkjPm3N
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>>30296149
I am mad and I don't know why
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>>30296149
Poor Dash! This whole story is so grim, I keep waiting for the deus ex machina to fix all these broken bodies so they can live happily ever after.
>Celestia and Nightmare Moon (teamed up) open a portal inside of Dave, burst out of his chest in a spray of gore, round up their little ponies, heal them with MAGIC, and take them back. Anon gets a chest of equestrian gems, a copy of 'Principles of Magic for the Non-Magical', and a t-shirt that says "I saved the world from the wrath of goddesses, and all I got was this lousy t-shirt".
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>>30296328
Is that how it usually goes with grim greens here on 4chins?
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>>30296376
It very much is not. They usually just stay grim, then the writefag dies. And stays dead.
>no idea what AspiringWritefags plans are
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>>30296510
I'd be sad if that happened. I don't usually like stories involving slavery, but AWF's story is surprisingly enjoyable.
Maybe that's just because it's a lot more "feel good" than what I usually glimpse here, with the main character trying to do the right thing for once, no matter the cost.
Not that the other writers are bad or anything. Their stories just aren't as appealing to me, and I find domination as a fetish to be unappealing.
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>>30296328
Has there been an SPG story where a pony was maimed (dehorned, wing broken, etc) and was successfully rehabilitated? Can't think of one... Skittles, BlindAnon, Space Celly, Toiletslave, even Shiny has not had that implant removal surgery yet. Perhaps Aspiring will break new ground!
>assume magic can do things that stump human medicine, and vice versa.
>a business Slaveventure should look into, buying damaged stock cheap and making the most loyal of slaves, or even opening a human clinic!
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>>30297105
I am toying with the idea.
Mostly cause I find the idea of a broken pegasus hot as fuck and would love to do it all.
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>>30296149
A good idea >>30296328
What about magic to help heal dash. Are your humans taking advantage of magic at all? Do they know it's power other than offensive/defensive?
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>>30297618
>That whole post.
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>>30296149
Little but good green but... where are my Applejack???!!!

And by Flutter I can imagine what follows: Anon finally gets the date from Fatguy that buy her and goes with Zoe on a Purchase/Rescue plan when they get to the address and hear laments, whips sounds and plea for help, fearing the worst both break into the house and find to their surprise:

P-Please... please More MY MISTRESS!
Shadup Faggot Motherfucker piece of shit and lick my hooves you semen trash!
Anon: WHAT THE HELL????!!!!
Zoe:(Happy and excited) Wait until everypeople see this in the association !! -Recording with his phone-
"YOU ARE GOING TO LOVE ME!"
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You wake up and you see this.

What are you doing?
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>>30297507
> Are your humans taking advantage of magic at all?
This, this is what I see an absolute lack of in every single story. Every government the world over would be experimenting on that shit like fucking crazy, unicorns would spend their lives in labs while scientists do everything in their power to harness magic for humanity.
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>>30278230
>>30278598
>>30282238

> "Do you have any idea what you're going to do about this?"
"Something incredibly foolish, but I really think it's the only one that can be done. Windy Winters trusted me; now I must pass on that trust to another."
> "...you aren't going to-"
> Silencing Mayor Mare with a sharp look, you gesture towards the closed door to your office.
> Even shut, it wasn't quite enough to stop a raised voice.
> In a lower tone, you respond:
"Yes, I am. He'll need to know, and the faster we can find the last of them the sooner this can all be resolved."
> "Windy Winters won't like it."
"He doesn't have to."
> "That's a dangerous path for you too, Your Highness. What if Anonymous disagrees? What if he orders you to turn him over?"
"Then he will find out just how much of a Princess I truly still am."
> Re-opening the door makes the stallion in question nearly leap for cover - from his already hidden spot.
> Poor thing truly was terrified.
"Windy?"
> "Y-Yes, Your Highness?"
> He speaks the title with more reverence than you'd heard most ponies who honestly approved of you.
> Nearing him, you drop down onto your belly - how often had you been doing this lately? - to reduce your size.
"First, I want you to understand something. I am not upset about the things you said about me."
> His mouth snaps open, but you raise a hoof to stop him.
"Or, perhaps it's better to say that I am - but what is said about me does not change my duty as a princess to protect you. Whatever you've said, however you've characterized me, I will still do the best I can for you."
> "Yes, Your Highness."
> It's obvious from his expression that he does not believe you.
> Agreeing is simply the best choice to avoid further pain.
"What happened to Mocha Cream, however, isn't so easy. I need you to do something for me too, if you're going to stay here."
> A little whimper escapes Windy's throat, but he bobs his head and a terrified nod.
> "What do I have to do?"
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>>30297855

"You have to own up to what you did. I won't let Anonymous torture you, but you must accept I cannot save you from having any punishment at all."
> "I..."
> Windy pauses, glassy eyes staring into oblivion.
> Clearly contemplating just what "a little" punishment would involve.
> "What if I can't...?"
"I can't say. But I won't let you become another Corona, Windy."
> Reaching out with a wing to gently brush the tip across his withers, you stand again.
"There are things I must take care of regarding all of this, but you're safe as long as you stay in here. I'll put a magic seal in place over the door so no one else can enter without me."
> Halfway to the door, he catches you with an unexpected question:
> "What'll happen to the others?"
"I do not know. I will do all I can, but that depends a lot, on what they do too."
> Then you leave him behind; as promised, you seal the door with a flicker of your horn.
> It was, you consider, as good as locking him in as anyone else out.
> A prisoner in the cell of his own choosing.
> Ignoring Mayor Mare's gaze - unseen but definitely felt - you strut from the rest of the office.
> Surprisingly, Anonymous isn't in his manor as you'd expected but in the camp itself - standing near the gateway and surveying things with a pensive expression on his face.
> In the late winter air he must be freezing - the thin jacket he wears is not nearly enough to completely ward off the cold but even so he stands still in the cold.
> His expression is haunted, you notice.
> Had something already happened with the two that had been captured?
"Anonymous. We need to talk."
> "Coming to scold me too?"
> You come up short; the bitterness in his voice hadn't been what you expected.
> Seeing your reaction, he laughs and shakes his head.
> "I'm doing plenty of that myself, so you can just fuck right off if that's what you wanted."
"...it wasn't. What happened?"
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>>30297865

> Now it is Anonymous' turn to be surprised; studying your expression for evidence of a lie, he finally nods and goes to lean against the nearest building.
> "I went in to try and dig the location of the last two our of the ones we grabbed."
> Your breath catches.
"Did you-"
> "No. But only because Thunderlane was there to stop me - have to find a way to thank that stallion. One of those assholes, Comet Tail, was goading me into snapping at him. It was working, too."
"...you were stopped, though."
> "Only just."
> He grimaces again, shaking his head.
> "What I did to Corona was my anger getting the better of me. So was this. Having someone else there isn't enough; I have to master it myself. Even if the bastards deserve the worst I can do."
"Still."
> "But, if you're not here to lecture me, why are you?"
"The third of those ponies - Windy Winters - has been found."
> Eyebrows shooting up, Anonymous cocks his head.
> "That fast? I wasn't expecting..."
"He turned himself in."
> Once again Anonymous is thrown for a loop, his lips working silently over the words.
> "...turned himself in? Why? How?"
> And so you tell him what Windy Winters had told you.
> Emotions work their way over Anonymous' face in waves, most the incestuous children of rage and fury but also sometimes accompanied by sheer shock, surprise, and incredulity.
> At the end of it, you draw a deep breath and make your case:
"Windy Winters placed his trust in me, Anonymous, and I believe him. I cannot let you have him if you intend to torture him. No matter what you do to me, you will not see him until I have that from you. If you torture him-"
> "It'd be disastrous, I know."
> He sighs softly, scuffing a shoe against the pavement and wrapping his arms around himself to ward the chill.
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>>30297879

> "For me and for you. I'm not an idiot, Cadance; I understand the carrot and stick. He turned himself in, stayed when you told him it'd mean facing a punishment... if I treated him like the others, no other pony would dare do the same."
> Looking back over at you, Anonymous' mouth twists itself into a bitter grin.
> "What, didn't expect me to see that?"
"...in truth, no."
> You bow your head in admission.
"I've wronged you in that, I see."
> A moment later, his hand comes down to brush against your cheek.
> "You're willing to admit it, though. That's enough for me."
"So will you give me your word?"
> "I want to make a phone call first. Then you'll have my response."
> ...
> Windy Winters is still there when you unseal your office door and step through.
> He looks up, expectation shining bright in his eyes.
> "Y-Your Highness! What happened? Is-"
> That light dies as Anonymous appears just beyond the doorway behind you.
> In an instant Windy is cowering back, wings raised defensively and retreating into the wall.
> "No! NO! You promised!"
> "Cadance, do it, like we talked about!"
> Your horn flashes bright enough to cast the room in flare and shadow, and an iridescent cerulean field springs into existence - sealing the doorway again and locking Anonymous out.
"Windy! Look, Windy - he can't hurt you. He can't come in; my shield won't let him touch you. You're safe, Windy!"
> Several more repetitions pass before Windy Winters really does look, though.
> Only then does Anonymous talk:
> "I'm not coming after you now, Windy. Just want to talk. Can we just talk?"
> Still shaking, the stallion looks between yourself and the man who owns both of you - and then nods.
> "B-But when y-you're done, you have t-to get out."
> "If you want me to, I will."
> When no disagreement is given, he goes on.
> "Truth is, I don't know if I can believe you alone. But I do know who I can believe - so I called the hospital Mocha Cream is at, got to talk to her a little bit."
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>>30297885

> You and Windy both start; though he'd accepted your terms for seeing the stallion, Anonymous had kept the nature of the phone call he'd made from you as well.
> "Yeah, she's awake sometimes now. They're having to do a bit more surgery, but I got lucky and she was lucid enough to talk. I asked her about your story... and she confirmed it."
> "She - did?"
> "Yes. Said she didn't remember you really hurting her, that the other three did the worst of it. That's... enough corroboration for me, I guess."
> "You believe me..."
> The words are whispered in half-prayer, half-shock.
> "I do, and you stuck around while Cadance went out and got me so I can't just let that go either. I'm not going to have you tortured, Windy Winters. You - did the right thing, I guess, and even if I want blood... I can't have it from you."
> Even you are surprised; once again Anonymous' rejection of what he'd done once and nearly repeated again ran deeper than you'd expected.
> Lifting himself from the corner he'd crawled into, Windy Winters rises and approaches Anonymous on shaky legs.
> "You - you swear it?"
> "I do."
> Your ears twitch; there'd been the barest amount of anger in his voice, but Anonymous had quashed it admirably.
> Looking to you, he gestures to the force field.
> "May I?"
> Carefully you retract a portion of it, just enough to let him stick a hand through.
> Windy retreats again, eyes locked fearfully on it, but then forces himself forward and wings back down again.
> He pauses in the doorway, then at last stretches a hoof through and touches it to skin.
> "Cadance said I'd still have to face some p-punishment..."
> Anonymous nods and holds his own tone low and soft.
> "You will. I can't pardon you entirely."
> Mouth opening again, Windy hesitates - unable to bring himself to ask.
> Instead a single, whispered plea squeaks out:
> "Mercy..."
> You step in to ask what Windy cannot force himself to.
"What will happen to him?"
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>>30297894

> "You'll be sold off, Windy; I'm sorry, but there's no place in the camp for a pony who can do this. But if you help me do this, you'll be sold off as - just a pony. Not marked as dangerous or disobedient. I'm willing to believe you were lead astray by the others, but you have to show me that."
> "Not - dangerous? Not sent to a glue camp?"
> The slang term - for the sort of worst places ponies could be sent - is enough to make you wince, but Anonymous weathers it.
> "Definitely not that, whether you help me or not. You'll have a new, fresh chance to prove that this isn't you. If you somehow ever end up back here again and I don't see any more trouble on your file, I'll even give you another chance here."
> "What about the others?"
> "Unless they suddenly show some sign of regret for what they did, they'll be permanently marked as dangerous and sold off as such. After that, they will have a chance to fix their own lives - if they care to."
> Both you and Windy cringe; no pony sold as dangerous and disobedient would be going anywhere good.

What do we think about this plan? Are we going to interject with anything, or is it all that we can expect at this point?
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>>30297899
Seems like this is the best they can hope for.
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>>30297705
Put Octavia in the slave box for the day.
That'll teach her to think she's human enough to sleep in a bed.
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>>30297943
But Anon... she's your concubine, your bed is where she belongs.
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>>30297949
She can serve as my concubine just as well inside the slave box as outside. There's a reason I had the back near her behind removed.
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What are some interesting hangs and reminders of a pony that they were a slave?
I don't mean brands, bad relations with electrical arcs, or a fear of collars and whip cracks.

I mean like panicking if the water is just cold enough when they wash their muzzle under the shower and it sends them into a blind panic.
Legs getting all tied up in the blankets in a fitful sleep that only gets worse as they now nightmare they have been tied up.
The fucking car seat belt locking up like the pos it is sending them into panic as they can't get out and it just bites tighter.

That sort of stuff.
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>>30297705
>Gently nuzzle the music donk
>Have her relieve my morning wood like a good slavemare
>She takes top this time, excellent balance from years of performance keeping her steady
>Cuddle with her a bit more, lightly nibbling on one of those ears on occasion and making them flick
>Shower together, making sure to have some extra time for a little back massage
>'Tavi always coos and stretches when I loosen up those muscles in her back
>She makes breakfast while I dress
>It's delicious, as normal
>Stands on ceremony, head bowed and tail lifted, while I finish it
>She'd laid out a freshly-cut sprig of birch too, just like she was supposed to
>Give Octavia her morning caning just to remind her of her place as a slave
>By now she's learned to mostly keep her squeaks and gasps down
>Leave for work, knowing she'll have dinner laid out ready when I come home
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>>30298086
>>She'd laid out a freshly-cut sprig of birch too, just like she was supposed to
>>Give Octavia her morning caning just to remind her of her place as a slave
>>By now she's learned to mostly keep her squeaks and gasps down
wat

is this a fetish thing with them or something
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>>30298130
Of course not, Octavia hates it. But someone like her especially needs to be reminded of her place often or else she might start acting out.
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>>30297949
Not my concubine! She is my muse...
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>>30297899
It can work as long as Windy provides useful information on the resistance movement, if we want to prevent the tragedy of Mocha from repeating we must capture all the unrepentant
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>>30298146
>Her master once came home early to find Octavia playing his cello.
>She wanted to see if she still could.
>Octavia had to spend a week in the slave box afterwards before her master trusted her enough to let her out.
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>>30297899
Good for Anon, giving him a second chance like that and mentioning he would give the others a second chance if they showed an ounce of remorse for what they did.

I don't think the punishment is enough though. Anon should look him straight in the eyes and give him a chance to write a letter or even let him talk to Mocha over the phone to apologize. Also, maybe it's best Anon and Cadance goes with him to collect his things.
From the outside, it probably looks like he sang like a bird to save his own ass and he might be target for the same treatment as Mocha. Anon and Cadance need to talk about their next course of action too.
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>>30297949
> your bed is where she belongs
Amen to that.
Pony will be my bed slave and I will have sex with her very often, but at the same time, I will be kind and gentle to her both in and out of the bedroom.
I'll want her to enjoy it, even if she doesn't end up loving me. After all, a happy slave is generally a good slave.
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>>30297899
>You'll have a new, fresh chance
Anon is (theoretically) all-powerful inside his camp, but outside the wire he's just another businessman. Is he selling direct to end-users, or going through some wholesaler or auction? What if the glue camp has a shortage today, or nobody buys? Anons only influence is the product description and maybe price point; he can't make these promises, for better or worse.
Would take some world building, but I would love to see the sale! If Anon attends, he should take an assistant too. Would be nice to see him in a setting where he's just another guy.

>"Unless they suddenly show some sign of regret for what they did"
Anon said that was happening if they DID confess and cooperate, otherwise it was mutilation at best. We have not seen much of either. Are the other three getting out of here with both their pride AND their magic intact, or is Anon still honoring that threat? His credibility depends on keeping his word in both directions.

>Are we going to interject with anything?
The camp will be chattering, and we need to tell this story before somepony, like Haute, beats us to it. When (yes: when.) that fourth fugitive is found we should address everypony from the stage just like the other times we have administered what passes for justice around here. We say that Anon has taken back his authority in this case, and have him explain their fate. The 'for sale four' should be on display, but muzzled; nothing they have to say will be helpful. Let the other escapists and rebels think about why leaving here is such a terrible punishment...
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>>30298028
When they buy or sell a thing: a house, a car, even a candybar. They remember their masters buying and selling them in exactly the same way. Can't stop thinking about their expected value as it changes over time.
>"looking good today! That spa treatment would have totally paid for itself"
>"I feel like shit with this colic, good thing today's not sale day"
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>>30298343
>good for Anon
no
Not good for Anon.
this Anon does not get compliments.
Period.
He is still a despicable and shitty human being for putting all of them in this situation in the first place.
MOCHA WOULD NOT HAVE BEEN BEATEN IF THIS FAGGOT HADN'T OWNED SLAVES TO BEGIN WITH. So fuck him.
Fuck him with a jagged rusty piece of rebar up the ass.
Fuck him, for being not only a slaveowner, but one that puts profit over the wellbeing and happiness of the ponies under his charge.
For thinking ANY of this is okay.
For thinking he is right in ANYTHING that he has done.
If there is a hell, and I most certainly hope there is, faggots like this Anon will occupy the deepest pit.
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>>30297237
>Pegasus limps into the auction ring. Really try your best: tail up, head out, trotting action as good as it can be.
>Not very good.
>Auctioneer mercifully does not order a flight demonstration. No hiding that wing splint anyway.
>Word passes around in the slave pens; you know who the glue camp bidders are. You see who the high (or only) bidders are. They're the same bidders.
No! Tail higher! Trot faster! Flap the good wing! Poise! I still have good years in me... Celestia, No!
>Auctioneer tries her best for you: talks up rare skills, sunny personality, but bidders see what they see.
>"Going once... Going twice..."
>"The green gentleman in the back there: did you raise your paddle?"
"thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou"
>Slaveventure camp has its ups and downs, but the various conspiracies floating around never approach. They know your loyalty.
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>>30297105
>even opening a human clinic!
practicing medicine without a license is a surefire way to end up in prison
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>>30298946
Even slave buyers intending to free them give money to slave sellers, the value must find it's way back to the slave takers wherever they work. Demand creates supply. Oscar Wilde said "The worst slave owners were those who were kind to their slaves" because they legitimized the whole idea. Slavery is poisonous, nobody can touch it without becoming evil themselves.
Welcome to SPG! We explore these themes, with ponies. And bath scenes. Now let's see your green.
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>>30299126
Some of the slaves in these stories have been acquired in such a way that they did not provide any value to slavers.
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>>30299093
We're not doctors! We're "Alternative Practitioners". We don't claim to treat any particular condition, our magic is just "good for circulation" or something. Just like the health food store doesn't sell drugs.
>but our results speak for themselves
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Where Derpy flogging story at

Am I the only one that remembers that one? The one that was never completed?
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>>30299198
I want to know what ever happened to that "pony's first whipping" story we never got a satisfying end to.
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>>30299198
Black Mage Anon when?
>pony / human / changeling team-up!
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>>30297105
Buying a Bookhorse had Twilight damaged by overuse of magic suppression drugs... but then it turned out it was just a mental block because she was terrified of using magic again. Dunno if that counts.
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>>30299226
'Regards, Anon' also has recovery from addictive magic suppression drugs. Anon helps her through it.
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little do we know.. Shiny anon is about to update with 15 posts of extremely lewd green
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>>30299287
Did someone say lewd? As in, filly brothel lewd?
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>>30299219
I miss that one. :( writefag where are youuuu!
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>>30299287
Kan't be soon enough!
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>>30299313
Filly brothel?
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>>30299406
>You'll never find one of five golden fillies at the slave market and win the competition to go to the filly brothel.
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>>30297899
Sounds good to me. Can't help pones who won't help themselves
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>>30298946
Nigger go home.
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>>30299500
He's right though.
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>>30299506
Then he needs to find a new thread, all he's going to end up doing here is getting butthurt and whining to the thread.
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>>30297105
>maimed
Does spaying count?
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>>30299515
No, frankly, I like this kind of disagreement. Yes, CYOS Anon is trying hard to be a "better" person and his handling of this situation is miles better than Corona. There's certainly something to be praised in that, and it shouldn't be ignored.

But that doesn't change the fact that he is still owning creatures as intelligent as he is and forcing them to work for profit remains his primary goal; everything else just follows. He is, ultimately, choosing to be part of a cruel and heartless institution and even his less brutal treatment of these ponies doesn't negate that.

There's a fair argument to be made that masking the cruelty under a veneer of "being a better person" is even worse, because it's hard to argue against.
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>>30299126
>people who give money to slave owners are evil because the slavers chose to buy more slaves
>gun store owners who sell guns to depressed people encourage suicide because they sold a gun to someone who chose to off themselves
Wew lad
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>>30294163
>>30294228
That's pretty fair. Technically if Rarity did buy her and changed her mind about the spaying there wouldn't be anything Twi could do about it.

>>30294253
>>30293830
Anon will be back soon. Today is Twilight's last day with Rarity before the has to be returned. Where things go from there we'll just have to see.

>>30294665
>light spanking
>light
Ha she might disagree.

>>30299665
>>30299126
That's what got me interested in the topic. A gilded cage is still a cage and depriving a sapient creature of free will is inherently evil but does that make anyone involved with it automatically evil? I don't think it does, could be simple ignorance, but when really confronted by the morality of the situation there isn't a lot of wiggle room. Then throw in former slaves enslaving more slaves and things get even weirder.
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>>30299126
>>30299730
There's a thin line between supporting something immoral and being responsible for other people's actions. I definitely don't agree someone freeing slaves is contributing to the problem or anywhere close to evil.
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>>30299762
>Do-gooder buys expensive slave from slaveowner, says "You are free now!" Do-gooder does good.
>Slave owner needs new slave to work, has money. Buys slave from slave taker.
>Slave taker needs fresh slave to sell, has money. Organizes expedition to Equestria.
>Free pony has her everything stolen from her. Just as worthy as first slave. Bad karma follows the money back up the chain.
>Do-gooder did not do that good after all!
You are somewhat responsible for where your money goes. When you give to a begger you are responsible for his begging. When you eat meat you are responsible for confined feeding operations. When you pay your taxes you are responsible for the bombs your government drops. When you live you are responsible for death.
Not to say these things are bad, or avoidable, but things are connected.
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>>30299875
>steal slave poner and murder her owner/master, thereby eliminate the immediate demand for a replacement
>love and rehabilitate poner until she's ready to be freed
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>>30299985
I mean, it worked out fine for the Anon in Voyage. I don't see a flaw in this plan.
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>>30297899
> "Not - dangerous? Not sent to a glue camp?"
Ponies from Fire and Sky or A Deal is a Deal will go to any length to avoid a labor camp like Slaveventure. They see their friends go in, but very rarely do any come out. Windy Winter lives in fear of the "glue camp", presumably due to the short life expectancy and thrifty waste disposal policies. Where do glue camp residents fear to be sent?
>awesome slang term
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>>30300000
I can't believe he's dead.
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>>30300000
Can't argue with those quints.
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>>30300000
Quints confirm that Voyage has a happy ending.
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>>30300000
They have been checked.
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One of you commission this? I just added a bit of color.
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>>30300075
It looks like one of ours, and is super cute!
>special scarf for a special slave
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>>30300075
>You will never lock this cutie in a slave box and periodically electrocute her.
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>>30300143
You're right!
I won't ever do that.
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>>30299665
>>30299732

A person who's trying to improve himself is always better than a person who isn't in my eyes personally. I like this Anon. War, slavery, are revolts are terrible and ugly topics, but it doesn’t have to make everyone involved automatically evil.

Maybe it’s because I’m almost seeing this as serfdom. Still slaves, but are getting income for recreational needs now (At least the guards are) as well as free lodging and food. All Anon wants is they don’t straight up revolt and work their 8 hour shifts on his land, or double shifts if they do something terrible like attack someone or steal.

The only way he could solidify that is to have them all earn their own coin and let them buy their own freedom under his rule. Back then it greatly increased morale plus their owner didn’t have to deal with them by the time they were old and worn out. Though most of them stayed loyal to their lord anyways due to freedom being more shit than the hand that was dealt.
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>>30299048
Yes!
Only now for him, he really gets to find out what it means to say any price but death.
The torments shall be multitude, his body wracked in pain that he shall live to know the fullness of it.
A broken wing shall be his closest friend, the only hug he shall ever have.
No escape, no release from his life as a salve, he is to serve, and service he shall be denied in turn.
For earth mares are for sweet and tender cuddles.
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>>30300310
>torments shall be multitude
Jeeze! Aren't we a downer today?
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>>30300337
Such is life for a salve.
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Is there even a single story in this general that has slave boxes in it, or are they just entirely theoretical?
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>>30300347
CYOS has used a slave box twice now.
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>>30300000
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>>30299875
So then, following this absurd linevof logic:
Any food vendor that sells food to a slave owner is responsible for supporting slavery, because they've sustained the slave owner's means of living. Therefore, the food vendor is evil because the slave owner that bought food from them, and also owns slaves.
The contractors responsible for building the house that a slave owner lives in are supporting slavery because they built the shelter that protects the slave owner from the elements. They are evil because they built a house, and also the slave owner owns slaves.
A gun manufacturer who sells guns to the slave owner is supporting slavery, because the slave owner (or someone working for him) will use it to maintain the security of their home, or perhaps the seasoning facilities, thus sustaining slavery. Gun manufacturers are evil because people do bad things with some of their guns, and also the slave owner owns slaves.
>what is an argument from correlation

Also, if a potential slave owner wanted a slave, and is willing to break the law (which slave owners are doing by default in most civilized parts of the world), they would get the slave, regardless of whether or not they had money. You're simultaneously arguing that the intent of the slave owner is what determines the morality of those that deal with him, while arguing that the intent of those who interact with him means nothing. This is contradictory.

Something else to consider: one who opposes slavery cannot control the actions of a slave owner, regardless of whether he paid them or not. You cannot place blame for the actions of one, upon someone who is not responsible for their choices. A slave owner is willing to break the law; money only acts as a convenient medium for goods and services. If a prospective slave owner wants slaves, they will get them. The first slaves in the world didn't just poof into existence and get bought.

It's literally like blaming the gun manufacturer for the shooter's actions
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>>30300368
>buying a slave to help it promotes slavery
>providing food to slaves promotes slavery
>providing housing to slaves promotes slavery
>selling guns to slave owners promotes slavery
Why stop there when we can take it even further? Have you considered that buying the products produced by slaveowners promotes slavery? If so, do you understand how massive that industry was at the time it existed? Maybe you're thinking that you can just boycott those sellers, but that's going to be pretty hard when they're the ones providing the raw materials for everything. Cotton, corn, tobacco, sugar, coffee, fruits and vegetables, spices, cocoa, rice...the list goes on, and if the institution were to be reborn you can bet that modern production techniques would only add to it.
Slavery as an institution was unavoidable. Every product you could possibly buy had in some way been touched by it, from the clothes on your back to the food that you ate and everything in between. I'm reminded of a quote from the movie Imperium:
>character(pretending to be a neo nazi) is asked why he is wearing a jewish brand of jeans, explains they were a gift from his brother
>"You want to boycott the Jew? You ever look at the Fortune 500? You'll be living in a fucking cave."
Nazi Harry Potter said it best. You may not be able to avoid taking part in an institution that you disagree with morally, but you can't let that affect your own personal morality and prevent you from doing the good that you can do.
Buying a poner might provide the means to buy another one, but try explaining to that poner your rationale for leaving it in hell when you have the means to free it. I doubt it would be any consolation.
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>>30293058
will twilight be receiving a real spanking from rarity in the near future?
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>>30300439
Glad that I'm not the only one who thinks that what the anon here >>30299875 said is a poor argument.
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>cute little slave mare queefs in your face while you're eating her pussy
wat do?
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>>30300530
Cum buckets
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>>30300530
That's disgusting. A week in the slave box.
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>>30300509
It's actually not just a poor rationalization(even though it takes the big picture into account), it's somewhat dangerous in that it pushes the only acceptable positions towards extremism, while simultaneously being ineffective at helping to solve the problem.
On the one hand it promotes do nothing feel good moral grandstanding of the kind where everyone changes their facebook profile pictures to "show support" for a pet cause or "denounce hatred" without ever actually doing anything about it, while people who actually try to find solutions have their hard work and sincerity questioned for going about it the wrong way.
On the other hand, this rationale can be used to justify extremism. If you aren't out in the streets murdering slaveowners and setting loose slaves by the hundreds then you aren't being moral, even if the end result is a crackdown that is worse for the slaves than before.

Working within the system to better the system is noble, and sometimes all you can do.
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>>30298028
Scents are always good for panic attacks.
Much more subtle too.
Go for bbq, really enjoy the smells.
Start getting anxious, its so good and you're hungry.
Then it starts moving elsewhere, somepony back there is hiding your bbq, trying to make you starve.
Suddenly, the poner has vaulted the counter and is fighting for a peice of brisket shouting about how one of them will get whipped and by Celestia it won't be him.
Police are called, tasers are used, and now our free pony is sitting shackled in jail.
Police don't give a fuck, a perps a perp.
He on the other hand is alternating between terrified wailing and terrified quiet as he knows his master is coming for him and he has been a bad slave.
Hide prickles and wings tucked tight, all he can do is wait in terror.

Smells, they will make you remember.
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>>30298028
Shouting is a good one. Anger as a whole can bring up some bad memories from the past. Doubly so if the pony thinks they caused it.
As the guy above me said, certain smells are also a good trigger.
Events that bring up the past are obviously in there was well. I'd imagine birthdays or anniversaries would remind a slave of what they've been through, if only because they're a marker of the past.
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>>30300556
I had forgotten to take that into account when posting my argument against it, but to be honest I hit the 2k word limit anyways. You make a very good point though. It's exactly that kind of nonsense that lets people get mad at something while pussying out of actually doing anything, all while feeling like it's the only reasonable course of (in)action.
"I'm sure mad at these Muslims for massacring countless innocents and fucking goats/little girls, but if we try to remov them, we're just gonna add more fuel to the fire, making more Muslim terrorists. Why, it would be so intolerant to even question their culture! Let's just love and tolerate them away".
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>>30300465
hopefully, it sounds fun to write.
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>>30300439
>Buying a poner might provide the means to buy another one, but try explaining to that poner your rationale for leaving it in hell when you have the means to free it. I doubt it would be any consolation.
This exactly. Moral grandstanding is great if you have to but the minute you let it convince you to leave an individual you could help in suffering you're letting your sense of self importance hurt others. You can't bring down a whole industry by yourself but you can do your best to help who you can. You aren't responsible for the actions of the whole world, you are responsible for your own actions.
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>>30300584
The best abuse would be to enslave them on their birthday.
They were born to be the perfect slave, here is proof.
Lingering and following, they will celebrate what is the loss of birth, freedom.

Why aren't there greens where the pony is actually a slave and not just a servant?
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>>30301069
Servants have a degree of autonomy that is lacking in most of these stories, unless you mean indentured servitude which is just slavery by any other name imo. Take Alfred, the butler to the Waynes. Sure he serves them and is provided food and housing in return, but if at any given time he decided to walk away Ican't imagine anyone could stop him. Not so for most of the ponies in the stories in here, their freedom is gone even if their masters are kind.
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>>30299732
>Anon will be back soon. Today is Twilight's last day with Rarity before the has to be returned. Where things go from there we'll just have to see.
incase you didn't pick up on it I am not thrilled.
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>>30300176
It's been a while, but during the early parts of the story it was made clear they're working something close to 12 hour days 6 days a week, and I don't think that ever changed. They're definitely not treated just like employees who can't leave, even now.
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>>30301113
Well we'll not be done with Rarity by a long shot, it will just not be exclusively her and twi anymore.
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>>30300034
What? I'm not dead. Neither is Jacob. Who said Jacob was dead, he was lying! Lying!

>>30300037
Heh.

Anyway, here's a Vinyl for verification. It's been long enough.
Pastebin: https://pastebin.com/GeEg7ELu

>Fluttershy isn’t the first pony to wake up.
>That honour goes to Night Glider.
>Still tired, she attempts to stumble out into the rising sun, until Rainbow stops her.
>It was better they stay inside until everything was discussed.
>She looks at you, and instantly, you can see that she knows.
>That she knows exactly what happened.
>That she was expecting it.
>And that thought scares you.
>If she knew, if they all knew, if they were waiting…
>Then they’re also waiting to see how you’ll react.
>Waiting to see what you’ll do to the offender.
>And if you weren’t just in your punishment…
>Things were only going to get worse.
>To her credit, Glider doesn’t ask any questions.
>Simply returns to the pile, lays down, and waits.
>Eventually, as more ponies wake up, and the whispers begin to spread, Fluttershy rises as well.
>She takes one look at the two of you as well, hollow eyed and tired.
>And you can tell, she knows as well.
>Foresight is a bitch.
>Trotting onto the deck, Fluttershy’s eye contact breaks.
>All she says is ‘take me to Coffee.’
>You waste no time.
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>>30301217

>Swirl and Coffee are awake as you enter the bridge.
>Coffee pulls herself behind Swirl as you come closer, her bandages bloody.
>Her anger is still present as she shouts at you, but it’s tempered by fear.
>”Stay away from me, Anon! You want to kill me too, is that it? Well try it, I’ll throw both of us off this shitty boat.”
>You nearly reprimand her for criticizing the Celestia.
>But catch your tongue.
>Fluttershy inches forward.
>Her voice is the softest you’ve ever heard it.
>”Don’t worry, Coffee. We’re not going to hurt you. I just want to take a look at your legs, is that okay?”
>Coffee scrambles backwards some more.
>”No! Stay away from me!”
>Spinning around, Swirl crouches down and locks eyes with the scared mare.
>”Don’t panic, Coffee. It’s just Fluttershy. You can trust Fluttershy. She’s a friend.”
>Coffee pouts.
>”But she tried to run away from Jacob. She’s not a good slave.”
>”So did you.” Swirl points out.
>Coffee processes this.
>”But I did it because…I mean, I was right to… I…
>Coffee sighs.
>“Okay. But Anon leaves. I don’t want him here.”
>The whole room pauses for a second as the attention falls to you.
“Fine. I’ll just…show myself out then.”
>With little flair, you turn and exit the bridge.
>You can hear the ponies talking inside.
>In nearly no time at all, Fluttershy comes out after you.
>”I’ve…I’ve seen all I can bear.”
“Well? What should we do? Rainbow and I had some ideas…”
>”Take me to Primrose.”
>Her stare could kill.
>It occurs to you that you don’t like it when Fluttershy is angry.
“Are you sure? I mean, maybe we should…”
>”Primrose! Now!”
>You lead her back towards the group.
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>>30301221

>She stops outside the bathroom, taking a deep breath.
>”You can stay out here.”
>She says ‘can’ but it sounds more like ‘will.’
>The door swings open, and you see a glimpse of Primrose on the other side.
>She looks utterly remorseless.
>Smug and self-righteous.
>Then Fluttershy enters, and the door closes.
>Almost immediately, you hear muffled shouting.
>Fluttershy is, as Rainbow might say, tearing into her.
>You look around, and notice that the rest of the ponies are entirely focused on the bathroom door; each one trying to summon up an image of what’s going on inside.
>It goes on for far longer than you’d like to admit.
>Dash inches forward, hovering in front of the door.
>”Um…I’d better…just go and make sure everything’s okay. Ha…ha ha.”
>She quietly slips through the door.
>It doesn’t seem like she has any effect on Fluttershy’s mood.
>You lean against the wall while you wait.
>One of the mares cautiously approaches you while you do, worry clear on her face.
>”Um…Anon?”
“Yes?”
>”Is Sea Swirl…dead? And Coffee too? Cause some of the ponies are saying…”
>Rumours spread quickly, apparently.
“Coffee is not dead.”
>She looks a little more relieved.
>”Oh, that’s…good.”
>She still looks uncomfortable.
“Swirl is okay as well.”
>”Oh, thank Celestia. She’s not hurt too badly, is she?”
>For some reason, that annoys you.
“They’re BOTH fine. I’ll explain everything in detail when ‘Shy and Rainbow are finished, understand?”
>Slowly, the mare returns back to the pile.
>You take this opportunity to scan the crowd again.
>To your dismay, there are only two other unicorns, besides Primrose and Sea Swirl.
>And both of them are pregnant.
>Still, maybe they might know more about magic than Rainbow.
>They just wouldn’t be much help in restraining Primrose if she tried to attack someone again.
>You couldn’t…endanger them like that.
>Not with their condition.
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>>30301226

>You’re almost surprised when the bathroom door opens, and Fluttershy slinks out.
>Glancing inside, you see that Primrose is noticeably less confident.
>Before Rainbow slams the door behind her.
>You crouch down.
“So…you understand what happened?”
>Fluttershy nods.
“So, what do we do?”
>Fluttershy picks her words carefully, maintaining a solid eye contact the entire time.
>“Well…Primrose is very, VERY sorry about what she’s done. She understands that she’s made a mistake, and she’s sorry, and she’s willing to apologize to Coffee and Swirl for hurting them. And I don’t think…she’s going to do anything like this again. She’s sorry, really!”
>Fluttershy takes a step back.
>”So with that in mind, I suppose…maybe she doesn’t need a punishment?”
>There’s a moment of silence.
>Luckily, Dash says what you’re already thinking.
>”Are you serious, ‘Shy? Seriously? She cut up Coffee! She beat Sea Swirl! She basically ruined your only chance of going home again! No amount of sorry is going to make up for that! She needs to be punished!”
>Fluttershy cowers slightly as Rainbow Dash pushes into her personal space, a protective wing snapping out to cover her face.
>”She…she’s very sorry…”
>”So what?”
>”And…and she thought she was doing the right thing. Just trying to help everyone. Haven’t we all made mistakes for a friend?”
>Dash hesitates for a moment, before pushing forward.
>”It doesn’t matter if she thought she was doing the right thing, she still hurt Anon’s ponies. She needs to pay!”
>Fluttershy takes a step back.
>”I…I don’t want to hurt anyone.”
>The aggressive look on Dash’s face melts away as she lands, shuffling closer to her friend.
>”I…I know you don’t, Shy. That’s not you. But sometimes, it just…has to be done. It’s for the best. Okay?”
>Fluttershy pauses.
>”Okay.”
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>>30301231

>Fluttershy glances over to the door, and back to you.
>”So…what are we going to do to her? I mean, we’re not going to…to whip her or anything, right?”
>”Anon and I were thinking we’d just…you know, belt her.”
>”Belt?”
>”Spank her, but with a belt.”
>Fluttershy winces.
>”Can we not do something tamer? Maybe just isolate her or something?”
>Rainbow’s stare says it all.
>This boat isn’t big enough for us to start putting ponies in solitary confinement.
>”No, you’re right. I’m sure the two of you have thought this through. I’ll…trust you. Can we at least…do it in private? At least give her some dignity? Please.”
>You could see where she was coming from.
>And a part of yourself agreed.
>You could save a bit of her reputation, save her the humiliation.
>Just keep this between the three of you, Coffee, Swirl, and herself.
>But in the end, this wasn’t something you could just sweep under the rug.
>Everyone was in this together, and that meant privacy wasn’t something you could afford anymore.
>You shake your head.
“I’m not going to force anyone to watch, but it needs to be public. What Primrose did impacts them as much as it does us. They need to see that there are consequences for it.”
>Fluttershy doesn’t look happy, but she understands.
“Now I need to go and explain to a dozen ponies just why we’re probably never going to Equestria, and why Primrose is going to get a public beating.”
>That came out a lot meaner than you wanted.
>Fluttershy notices.
>”Oh, don’t say that. Just…just stick to the facts. Stick to what we know.”
>Right.
>The facts were the only way you could look at something like this unbiased.
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>>30301245

>You stand at the exit, the sun behind you casting your shadow deep into the room.
>One or two ponies notice, their conversations cutting themselves short.
>Like a wave, the silence spreads quickly as more and more notice.
>You wait until you think they’re ready to listen.
>And begin.
“I think most of you already know what’s happened. There’s already some rumours going around, so I’m going to make everything as clear as I can, and stick to the facts. Just remember, everything is going to be fine. We’re all going to be okay.”
>You don’t think your words did much to reassure them.
>And so you tell them everything.
>About Primrose stealing a gutting knife and abducting Coffee.
>About how she tortured her.
>About how Sea Swirl went out alone to look for her friend.
>About how you and Dash found them all.
>About what was said, about what was done.
>You bared it all.
>And then you explained what was going to happen next.
>And about why it was going to happen.
>Some of them understood.
>Some of them disagreed.
>The numbers shifted when Coffee stumbled in, and they could see for themselves the damage that was done.
>It made everything real.
>With a quick glance at Rainbow and Fluttershy, you decided on a time.
>It would be soon.
>But not immediately.
>Give it a few hours to sink in, for everyone to discuss it.
>Then punish her.
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>>30301251
There will be more tomorrow, but it's midnight here and I still need to proofread it.
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>>30301258
Danke.
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>>30301251
>cliffhanger
>like THAT

Nigga you're killing me

I just hope Primrose genuinely gets the skin hided off her rump. She needs to be in a state of uncontrollable begging before that belt is done whipping her.
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>>30301217
>Heh

You better not be implying what I think you're implying.
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>>30301416
I'll be sooo dead inside when it ends badly. We don't have enough stories with good endings on this thread.
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>>30301258
Thanks Nameless Anon for continue you incredible story
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>>30301463
Most stories are good ends.
If anything, bad ends with actual slavery are rare.
I want more of them, ponies being brutalized, anons knowing the feeling of a family rent apart.
Uncaring publics giving as much care as a tamagotchi.
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>>30301463
>we don't have enough stories with good endings
That's true, but IHLAOY is not the writefag to buck that trend! Buckle up, it's not getting any better.
>Celestia runs out of fuel at sea
>starvation sets in
>birth difficulties, death
>towed back to port by coast guard
>Celestia impounded
>Anon arrested
>ponies go back to Jacob
>Twilight waiting there to be bred
>Dash euthanized
>Celestia sinks at the dock
>at least Coffees cheerful!
Practically writes itself, if you just min / max for depression and hopelessness.
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>>30301592
It makes me not want to read it, honestly. Totally sad endings just remind me of the futility of my own life. Bittersweet is better.
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>>30300044
HOLY
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>>30301258
I EAGERLY AWAIT
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>>30301258
Danke.
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>>30300000
AWOOOOOOOOOO!
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>Angry at life pegasus who had her wings broken as a slave
>Gets freed because owners daughter thinks you are like a little broken bird
>Buy a unicorn slave
>Slave is made to levitate you at all times, everywhere you go.
>Still hate all of life for the constant pain in your wings.
>Slave gets infatuated from all the time spent together.

Realize being angry all the time does nothing, or punish your slave for thinking she is allowed to love?
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>>30301592
Jacob is dead.
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>>30301941
But zombie Jacob can't die. His detatched, practical hatered can't either.
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>>30301938
Both. It's time to get on with life, but a slave is beneath us. Sell useless vehicle, walk on own hooves, find special somepony.
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>>30302032
Fake and gay.
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>>30301258
HAHA

TIME TO TURN HER ASS CHERRY RED
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>>30301994
But were a pegasus, we have delicate hoofsies not meant to walk on soil.
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>>30276980
wtf me too
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>>30296024

> ...
> You end up on the couch, watching the last piece of the pizza. Twilight is also looking at it.
"Go ahead," you offer graciously.
> She shakes her head, but it's obvious she's just being polite and really wants it.
"I'll play you 'rock, paper, scissors' for it."
> "What's that?"
> The rules are simple and you explain them in about a minute.
> She seems confused. Fingers are a prerequisite for this game. She holds her hoof up and looks at it. Then back at you.
> "Anon, I don't think this is going-"
"Onetwothree, GO!"
> You hold out scissors. She blinks and stares at you in confusion.
"You've got rock," you point out.
> She hadn't moved at all.
"Well, rock beats scissors, so I guess you win."
> The pony needs a few seconds to piece it together. Then she bursts out laughing and smacks you on the shoulder.
> You shrug, pick up the last piece of pizza and hold it out to her.
"Rules are rules."
> It takes her a few seconds to get herself under control, but she takes it.
> You watch her while she chews it.
> Purple pony is cute. Why would anyone want to hurt that?
> She catches you staring and looks away. You imagine her blushing, but it's getting dark so you can't see.
> Shame, it would look adorable, you imagine.
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>>30302718
IT IS TIME
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>>30302718

> She tries to change the topic. "Oh, Rarity told me what happened."
> "I wanted to apologize. That's not like Rainbow, I don't understand why she would-"
> You put a finger on her lips to shut her up. She doesn't flinch away, so that's good.
"You don't need to apologize for Dash. I understand."
> Twilight pulls away and goes on: "Well, it's still not right-"
"Don't worry. What else did they tell you? Is she feeling better?"
> You let your hand fall into your lap. A moment later, the pony covers it with her hoof.
> "Anon. She asked me to thank you for the gift. I think it will help a lot."
"Good. I just wish there was more we could do."
> A wild idea appears.
"Hmm, what about magic?"
> Twilight frowns a little. "Magic? What do you mean?"
"Can't you like heal her or something? I mean - it's freaking magic."
> She heaves a sigh. "Maybe, back home. There were things we could do. But I never was very good at healing spells, even when I still had my-"
> Aw, crap. You've made her sad now. You quickly shuffle closer and bring her in for a hug.
> She sniffs and talks into your shirt. "I just feel so useless, Anon. That was the one thing I could do, and now it's gone."
> You pat her back, careful to avoid the stumps. Last thing you need is to remind her of her missing wings as well.
"I'm sorry, I shouldn't have brought it up."
> But Twilight resolutely pushes herself away. "No, no. It's okay. I have to get used to it."
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>>30302721

> You try her own argument.
"Maybe once you get home, you can get it back? Don't just give up."
> She nods and wipes her face with her foreleg.
> "You're right. Maybe. I just have to focus on helping Gray Lotus improve."
"Oh, how's that going? Do you need anything else?"
> This seems to cheer her up. "I can show you!"
> You're curious, so you follow her into the work room.
> There is a stack of papers on the floor in a corner. Twilight deftly picks one up with her mouth and holds it out to you.
> It looks like gibberish. Like someone printed a document in Wingdings font.
> You can't help but notice how well it's drawn. Perfectly aligned, all shapes precise and clear.
"Wow. This looks very neat. But I don't understand a single thing."
> She's handing you another. This one has larger writing and fewer symbols.
> "Here, this is an easier one."
> You imagine you see less complexity, but without some statistics you can't be sure.
> That reminds you of what you do.
"Wait, I'm getting an idea."
> She freezes and watches you in silence. Smart pony - Twilight obviously understands what it's like to have a thought which isn't quite ready.
"Okay, can you tell me how many different symbols there are?"
> She doesn't even pause to think. "Two hundred and thirty-six, not including variations and rotations."
> That's the pony you remember!
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>>30302730

"Good. Now, what do these represent? Is it a language - sounds or letters?"
> She is trying very hard to explain. "It's different things. Some of them are sounds, but others are - like thoughts and feelings. They tell me what I need to do in my mind to make the magic work."
"And how do you make new spells?"
> "Well, it depends. Sometimes you can combine pieces of existing spells. The really gifted unicorns were able to come up with completely new ones."
"Did they have to make up new symbols?"
> Your line of questioning is not random. You feel like you're gathering information about a particularly difficult programming problem.
> If all you have is a hammer...
> "Not usually, no. The set of glyphs hasn't changed in over five hundred years."
"So there is a grammar or something? Rules on how to write down new magic. Consistent, logical rules?"
> The way her eyes sparkle makes this conversation worthwhile, even if your idea doesn't pan out.
> She nods, happily. "Yeah. Not exactly grammar, but there are rules. I guess that's as good a name for it as any."
"Okay, could you write all the glyphs down on a few pages. Even the non-unique ones - rotations, you said?"
> She looks blank. "I could, but that wouldn't make any spell I know."
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>>30302742

> You shake your head.
"It's not for a spell. If I can get the basic alphabet into the computer, I can run your spells through OCR and then do some analysis on them."
> You step to your bookshelf and look along the top, dusty row.
> You bring out the book and show it to Twilight.
> "Algorithmic Cryptanalysis," she reads. "I'm not familiar with that."
"It's a computer thing. Looking for patterns, decoding secret messages, that sort of thing."
> "I still don't follow."
"Twilight - one of the problems, which computers solve well, is statistics and analysis. If you give me the alphabet, all the rules you can and as many sample spells as possible, I can work out a formal grammar."
> Now she's intrigued, but still can't quite figure out the value. "Then what?"
"Then we do some optimizations. Brute-force, if we have to."
> "Optimizations?"
"Make spells shorter and easier. Humans have been doing that with computer programs for about sixty years now. There is a lot of math and science out on that topic."
> Now she gets it. The expression can only be described as 'stunned'.
> "If you can make a spell shorter and easier..." Her eyes are unfocused as she imagines that. "Anon- that would be a breakthrough!"
> You hold up your hands.
"Can't promise anything, but I want to try. It might help you with that Lotus fellow."
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>>30302747

> You suddenly have your knees hugged fiercely. "Thank you! Thank you, Anon. I'll get right on that. I'll write down *everything* I can remember!"
> You reach down to ruffle her hair, but are interrupted by your phone ringing.
"Sorry, I should get that."
> You extricate yourself from the hug and go answer it.
> It's Zoe.
> "Man, where have you been? Didn't you get the message?"
> You quickly take the phone away from your face and glance at the screen. It's from your automated data miner.
> Your heart begins to beat faster. The part of the message you can see in the status bar says 'Fluttershy'.
> Zoe is talking, so you quickly put it back on your ear.
> "It's genius! There's a photo on Instagram and Shy is right there, in a car in the background!"
> You stifle a gasp.
"Is there a license plate?"
> Zoe just giggles with excitement. "YES!"
"That's great!"
> "Yes! Go! Hack the DMV or something and find out who it is!"
"Yeah, I'll call as soon as I have something."
> You've given up on lecturing her about 'hacking' into government systems.
> The plan is a lot simpler. Car dealerships. Their security is much more lax.
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>>30302755

> You almost run to the computer. Twilight is watching you with wide, frightened eyes.
> "W-what is it, Anon?"
"Sorry, I gotta focus. We have a lead on Fluttershy."
> Her fear is instantly replaced with hope. But she doesn't say anything, just follows you and stands behind your chair as you work.
> Quick as you can, you feed the picture of the car back into the data miner and let it loose again.
> A few minutes later, there are matches. Didn't need to hack anything.
> You hit gold. The guy is an avid blogger and likes to brag about his car. Poor excuse of a website, too. You get a real name and, moments later, an address.
> You send it to your own email, so you can open it on the phone, then you stand up.
> "You found her?" Twilight pipes up.
"Yes. I'll call Zoe and we'll go there right away."
> You're pulling on your jacket and checking that your wallet is in your pocket. You're about to walk out the door, but purple mare is blocking your path.
> "I'm coming, too," she says, firmly.
> You know that tone. Arguing would just waste time.
"Okay."
> You forward the info to Zoe and then quickly dial her, while waiting on the lift.
> It sounds as if she is already in the car. But she is further away, so you will still get there first.
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>>30302718
>> Purple pony is cute. Why would anyone want to hurt that?

Dave...
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>>30302763

> ...
> It looks like an average house in the suburbs. The light is on in the dining room, but the curtains are drawn and you can't see anyone.
> Twilight is looking around nervously. Good thing it's night and no people around.
> You knock until a fat, bearded man answers. It's hard to tell, but he's about your age. A few years younger, even.
> "Whaddya want?"
"Hi. I'm Anon. I understand you have Fluttershy here?"
> Good thing you put your foot in the door, otherwise it would be slammed in your face.
> "I'm not interested," he barks while trying to force the door shut.
> "Please, sir," Twilight speaks up behind you. "I just want to see my friend."
> The shock on the guy's face is priceless.
> "Whoa, you're Twilight Sparkle!" he exclaims.
> You seize the opportunity and push the door fully open. You take his hand and shake it vigorously. "Anonymous, pleased to meet you!"
> It's a trick you've picked up from an insurance salesman friend.
> It works. The guy's brain skips a beat, then falls into a familiar pattern. "Pete," he says and steps aside to let you in. He's staring at Twilight, though.
> ...
> You're sitting on an old armchair. The place isn't very clean and there are food containers and empty soda bottles everywhere.
> The main feature of the room is the computer.
> Your host is sitting in a regular chair and Twilight took the couch, after dubiously inspecting the cushions.
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>>30302769

> Pete seems defensive. "Look, I don't know what you think, but Fluttershy is very happy here."
> Twilight looks at you, but remains silent. You follow her lead.
> The guy goes on, as if arguing his case.
> "I couldn't leave her in that place. I went to see her as often as I could. I mean - it's *the* Fluttershy. She's my Wi-"
> He clamps his mouth shut just in time and looks at Twilight.
> You understood, but you agree that the pony probably shouldn't hear that.
> Pete heaves a sigh and just keeps going. "Anyway, I treat her nice. I get her whatever she wants to eat. And I don't tie her up or beat her."
> The guy keeps staring at Twilight. You realize he's trying to convince her that one of her friends is well-off in his care.
> "Can I see her?" Twilight asks. You can't imagine how much restraint it must have taken her to sit through that quietly.
> Pete stands up and beckons you to follow. He leads you to a closed door and knocks on it.
> "Fluttershy, dear. You have some visitors."
> He doesn't wait for an answer, but opens the door.
> It's his bedroom and the yellow pegasus is on the bed.
> From what you can see, she's not as thin as the others were when you got them. She also isn't showing any obvious signs of beatings.
> Even her mane and tail look reasonably clean.
> In a flash, Twilight is on the bed and hugging.
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>>30302781

> You pull Pete's sleeve.
"Come on, let's give them a minute. I'd like to talk to you alone."
> He follows you back to the living room. He sits back in his computer chair, but you remain standing.
"Look, I can appreciate you're taking good care of her..."
> You don't know exactly what to say and how. It's obvious he cares about the pony, at least on some level.
"But don't you think she would be happier with her friends?"
> He's already shaking his head, but you keep going.
"There's Rarity, Pinkie and Dash and they all miss their friend. There's also a plan to get them all home."
> The guy seems afraid of losing his Waifu.
> "I-I don't think- I think she can be perfectly happy here with me."
> You offer up a silent thank you to the insurance-dude for his drunken ramblings.
"Yeah, I'm not arguing that. It's obvious you're a good guy."
> That was probably a lie, but you delivered it smoothly.
"But think about her. You've seen what Earth does to ponies. Wouldn't you rather set her free, back to her home and her friends?"
> It looks like it's working. Just a bit of grease, now.
"And look, I know how much money you paid. I'll give you double that."
> You think he's about to agree, but Twilight walks between you and stares him down.
> "You're a sick pervert, just like the rest of them!" she spits.
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>>30302790

> You try to grab and shush her, but the pony evades you easily.
> She advances on Pete and he seems to shrink back from her rage.
> "You talk about making her happy, and then you-" she has to swallow. For a moment she looks like she is going to be sick. "You *force* yourself on her every night!"
> You groan internally. You've guessed as much, but this confrontation will just make the guy angry. He might even call the police on you.
"Look, Twilight..."
> Pete also speaks, trying to argue. "No, it's not like that! You don't understand, she wants it too!"
> Twilight just snorts in disgust. "She told you that?"
> The guy looks away. "Well, no, but..."
> He is interrupted by the sound of a car pulling up the driveway.
> Zoe - you hope she can somehow salvage this situation. Or at least get Twilight away, so you can try and talk to the dude again.
> "Well, well, well..."
> The voice sends chills down your spine.
> You look right into Dave's gun, with his leering expression behind it.
> You feel your stomach twist up and your muscles become weak.
> The bastard shifts the gun between you and Pete.
> Fatso looks about ready to piss himself, but the terror in Twilight's eyes hits you much more deeply.
> "Isn't this a nice surprise? I was just about to pay old Pete here a visit and make him an offer for his pegasus." He waves his gun, showing exactly what his offer was going to be.
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>>30302799

> You stay silent, trying to fight off despair. You just pray to God that Zoe isn't bringing the others to see Fluttershy.
> Dave just laughs in the silence. "Seems I'll have two new employees. This turned out to be a very good business decision."
> He looks between all three of you and frowns. "So what's this? A little playdate? Switching your girlfriends around to keep it more interesting?"
> Then he leans down to Twilight and pokes at her stub horn. "And you seem to have done a fine job with this one. I should have offered you a job."
> You see Fluttershy behind the man. The way she's looking at him worries you.
> Pete sees her too, but the idiot can't keep quiet. He tries to get up and reaches out his hand.
> "No, Shy! Get back!" he says.
> Dave looks back, but not fast enough. In a flash, Fluttershy has her teeth in his leg.
> She didn't do much damage, but it's enough to make him lose his aim.
> The gun goes off.
> You hear someone scream and force yourself to move. All you can see is the gun. You grab it and try to wrestle it away.
> As you're holding it, there's another shot.
> It was louder than you could ever imagine and the shock made you lose your grip.
> You fall backward and see that Fluttershy is still holding Dave's leg and he's struggling to free himself.
> But Twilight is facing the other way.
> Her hind hoof connects with Dave's hand. He screams in pain and the gun falls from his grip.
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>>30302802

> Twilight is looking at you.
> You have never seen this kind of rage. She turns her eyes on Dave.
> "You little bitch, I'll beat you until you *beg* for death!" he yells and reaches down to grab her.
> Twilight lets out the breath she was holding. "NEVER! AGAIN!"
> You never thought someone so small could scream so loud.
> Her back arches and she bucks again, with all her might.
> The aim is true. Dave was leaning in, bringing his face close enough.
> The hoof connects with a sickening crunch.
> As he's falling back, all you can hear is Twilight's wordless scream of rage.
> ...
> Zoe bursts in at that exact moment, her eyes wide. She takes in the whole room, then quickly goes to Twilight.
> Pony is now crying her heart out. You don't know if it's relief or horror. But you trust Zoe to handle it.
> You look at Pete.
> Fuck. He's on the floor, bleeding.
"Zoe, I need some help here!"
> She looks over and her eyes go wider.
> "Twilight - go find Fluttershy and keep her safe," she says urgently. You admire her presence of mind. Both ponies are probably scared out of their wits.
> The mare obeys without question and runs out of the room. She makes sure not to look at Dave. You wish you hadn't either. His face is a bloody pulp.
> Zoe helps you turn Pete around. The wound is in his arm, which makes you breathe a little easier. Those aren't fatal, right?
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>>30302812

> Thankfully, the girl works well under pressure. She grabs a nearby T-shirt and pushes it against the wound. "Call the cops," she tells you.
> ...
> It took several hours to sort it all out. The paramedics came before the police and took over for Zoe. Pete would be fine, they said.
> Dave was in a critical condition, but still alive. They rushed them both to the hospital with one police car following. He was a wanted criminal, after all.
> Then came the questions.
> The detective was very understanding, you think, especially given the circumstances. Dave's injury was attributed to self-defense, so there would be no charges.
> They even agreed to let Zoe take the ponies, after she showed them her Pony Society badge.
> You still have to go down to the station and give an official statement, but you're not technically under arrest.
> You take that as a good sign. It probably helped that the officers didn't really know what to do with the two mares. They were mostly left alone in Pete's bedroom, while you and Zoe were being questioned.
> The sight of them, huddled together and crying their eyes out must have helped.
> You don't want to drag them to the station with you, so you give Zoe your apartment keys and tell her to get them home.
> You feel like you're about to break down, but the thought of Fluttershy, safe and in your flat with her friends, helps you keep going.
> But you can't wait to get back home, hug Twilight and thank her. The pony probably saved all your lives.
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>>30302820

There, a bit longer today because I couldn't find a good stopping point. I didn't want to do a cliffhanger.
I had the idea for the scene a few days ago, but I didn't know which horse would deliver the beating. Decided today that Twi should be the one to kick the lights out.
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>>30302827
YUGE update
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>>30302769
Fat Guy
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>>30302827
>no cliffhanger
>wrath of Twilight
>everything
Good choices all.
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>>30302790

> You think he's about to agree, but Twilight walks between you and stares him down.
>> "You're a sick pervert, just like the rest of them!" she spits.

Show us the way dolly, we will do...
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>>30302812

Thanks for this, was better of what I could imagine

>>30302827
Now It remains to see how they can be arranged with Peter to give custody of Fluttershy, hopefully know your point of view in this matter.

Question, Rainbow and Flutter still retain their wings?

Now start the search for Applejack!

Great Work AWF!
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>>30301938
Return the affection, life can be improved.
Friendship is magical
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Can people give my titles of stories that having spanking/smacking involved, I am reading vega's and I was wondering which other ones on the pastebin I should find.
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>>30303341
Rarities Last Chance is pretty much nothing but.
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>>30302769
>> You seize the opportunity and push the door fully open. You take his hand and shake it vigorously. "Anonymous, pleased to meet you!"
>> It's a trick you've picked up from an insurance salesman friend.
>> It works. The guy's brain skips a beat, then falls into a familiar pattern. "Pete," he says and steps aside to let you in. He's staring at Twilight, though.
kek
Smart.
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>>30279613
Singing Glimmy and Anon were adorable. A great way to show they're both on the same wavelength, without lewds. Just something quiet and comfy like this was good too.

>>30289150
Man, I do like how you manage to write Rarity as damaged yet still basically herself. She still wants to be friends, wants to be generous with her time even. But she can't help but add a little bit of domination and control into that, because she's also so terrified of ever falling off of her pedestal of success. It's a really nice contradiction, and I can't help but echo the others that it'd be a shame for Rarity to drop out of the story now. Perhaps have Twilight split her time between Rarity and Anonymous? That'd be a good balance.

>>30301251
The play between Dash and Fluttershy is a good one - between a pony who's only just gotten out of suffering and is trying to recover who she was, and a pony who's been free-er for a while and is more able to speak her mind.

I sort of wish you'd written out the full interaction when they revealed it all to the rest of the ponies too, but I sort of get the sense that you were having trouble writing that? Either way, it's good to see you back and about.

>>30302820
This is the first time I'd really felt that this story slipped more into being wish-fulfillment and formulaic - up until now you'd managed to keep it fresh enough even as it walked a relatively common path that others had before. At this point, though, it seems most everything is going in Anon's favor: Ponies are healing, opening up, and forgiving him, the lost ones can be easily found with l33t hax0rx skillz, Pete gets beat up... the only negatives are from outside the context of Anon's situation, i.e., dash being paralyzed.

That's not to say it's terrible and you should give up writing forever. It's still good, but conflict and struggle is the heart of every story, and all the characters need something to crash into and fight against.
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>>30303935
>too much wish fulfillment
>not enough conflict and suffering
>horn and wing amputation, daily rape, mental brokenness, and full body paralysis isn't enough suffering
You're right, Dave needs to break out of the hospital and remove all their ovaries. It's the only way to save the story.
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>>30304402
Yes, they must all have their ovaries removed. This is a requirement.
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>You will never give a cute poner a bath and make them all clean and happy for their auction.
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>>30302820
I kinda feel bad for Pete in all this. True, he repeatedly raped fluttershy, but it seems like the dude has some disorder that makes it hard to understand social cues. He legit thought fluttershy was okay with the whole ordeal, if his stammered out defense is anything to go by, and other than that, he seemed to legitimately care about her.
Then some guy pops in and wants to take probably the one thing he has going for him (especially since he mortgaged his house) away, and shortly after that, some loony comes in with the explicit desire to hurt his waifu and several others, and gets shot.
Poor guy's probably dead inside now.
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>>30304667
Yeah, you can probably find the exact point in which his heart shattered into a million pieces.

Once they take Fluttershy away and he's discharged from the hospital he'll probably kill himself at home.
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>>30304631
TFW I actually have helped my cousin get her miniature ponies, that she breeds, spruced up for a show and sale. They're just expensive lawn ornaments, don't talk or do magic, but they're pretty cute.
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>>30304689
>You will never turn a pony into an expensive lawn ornament.
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>>30304679
But not after shitposting on /mlp/ with all his pics of him with her ("pic related, me and my bitch"), so he can feel better about himself by sharing the most wonderful moments in his life.
Speaking which, I wonder what would happen if Twiggles happened upon this thread while exploring the internet
>be Twiggles
>find 4chins during your research
>discover this thread
>discover this story
>discover it telling the readers about you exploring the internet, discovering this thread and discovering this story, and discovering it telling the readers about you exploring the internet, discovering this thread and discovering this story, and...
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>>30304733
>Implying she wouldn't start making recommendations about what should happen next, all of which strangely include a happy ending for Twiggles.
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>>30304733
But not before*
God I'm retarded sometimes
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>>30304739
>she begins impersonating AWF, hoping to dear Celestia that she can change fate, and send her friends home.
>and also hoping to put Dave in a Citadel-of-Ricks style mindfuck machine for the rest of his life, possibly magically extended
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>>30304739
CELESTIA, IF YOU'RE READING THIS OPEN A PORTAL IN ANONS APARTMENT
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>>30304739
What, that's ridiculous, I would never do that.

Anyway, I think this story has run its course, it's clearly pretty much done. I think the author should just have a portal open under Anon's bed and send Twilight home.
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>>30304739
That reminds me of that comic where Twilight browsed the Drawthreads and filled requests by taking pictures of herself. I wish I'd saved it.
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>>30304803
>anon's home is now a legal warzone
>american soldiers shit on everything anon owns, because he no longer has any rights in his home, so therefore they have no reason not to, so they will, cause fuck it.
>anon loses all his stuff
Thanks Twiggles
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>>30304710
You don't need to turn anypony into anything. Just put up a electric fence in the front yard, fill a water bucket, and let them graze the day away. Works for earth ponies, from-earth ponies, unicorns, and horses. Not sheep though, they know how to push the wire over with their thick fleece.
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>>30304842
What if I want a pegasi? Do I have to pay for a dome?
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>>30304865
They need smart shock collar, with geo-fence app. Expensive but versatile, they can fly and graze all over the property without any fixed infrastructure. Remember to set 500' ceiling to keep FAA happy; the collar makes them 'drones', not 'birds'.
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>>30304865
For me, I just have a commercial electric fenceless system.
She goes too high, and gets to play twitchy dust angels.
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>>30304981
Are you sure it's a good idea to electrocute a bird in flight?
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>>30304679
>>30304733
>learns she never liked him, was just afraid of him
>was actually forcing himself on her
>get shot, then get her taken away
>kills himself
being pete is suffering
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>>30305031
The manufacturers think of these things. Gives painful but not debilitating shocks until they are back in the zone. If they land outside it, the collar sends a message to your phone and shocks them hard if they move. Bring a halter, and a spare belt.
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>>30304667
Do not forget the enormous legal vacuum of problems that comes with buying the official representative of a peace embassy of a foreign nation that was acquired from a slave dealer, sexually abusing her and possibly physically assaulting her.

Not to mention that he spent all his money to acquire it, so that soon he would stay in the street
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>>30305117
Buying a slave is ALWAYS buying stolen property. When the rightful owner comes around (and she's sitting right there) you can be dispossessed. If Pete has a problem he can take it up with Dave.
>but Dave's not here, man
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>>30304790
>>30304803
>>30304834

>Celestia opens one portal in the department of Anon.

>Before Trump orders to construct a wall the mane six crosses the portal and they return to Equestria

>The portal is closed, all portals are closed at the same time expelling humans back to Earth

>Trump blames everything on the Russian hackers, the Mexican narcos, the secretary of defense, to Lauren Faust and finally to Anon and they condemn to death by high treason to help to an enemy nation and to avoid that America is great again with the resources of Equestria

>Anon disappears mysteriously from his cell on the day of his execution and is never seen again.

>END
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>>30303441
This. If you want spanking, that's the one. Rarity gets it good in those.
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>>30303341
Shiny and Corona has two belting scenes in it. One of them is very severe
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>>30305227
Corona's belting scene is fucking heartbreaking. She's in so much pain and tries to instinctively get away, but her master holds her down. Poor girl...
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>>30305117
>legal vacuum
Legally, the government considers them to be animals, as they are, by definition, not human, and sapience is not a legal factor here. In AWF's story, bills are in process, trying to rectify this, but they haven't been passed yet. At the worst, he would be guilty of bestiality, cruelty to animals, and possibly ownership of an exotic animal without a license (I'm not 100% on what constitutes "exotic" but I think the ponies qualify), which, while still a hefty slew of crimes, is not nearly on the same level as all the crimes associated with chattel slavery. Pete could even try to play off the signs of sexual abuse as things that happened under Dave's care.
Personally, I think what you said earlier, about Pete selling his home, is of much bigger immediate concern for him.
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>>30305236
Rarity's Last Chance parts 2 and 3 are also pretty feelsy. wish part 3 would finally finish
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>>30305264
Remember that Dave kidnapping, torturous, mutilating and regenting a diplomatic embassy of an alien species that sought to establish peace talks with your nation, him would never have gone so far without the approval or the proper ignorance of key people in charge of control of the traffic of the portals that were open, with the capture of Dave and the dismantling of its traffic network of aliens the public opinion began to ask because the government allowed that criminal act under his guard, it is enough that Twilight and the other ponies start giving interviews so that many big guys start sweating
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>>30305210
>>30305272
time to turn the tables with >>30300465
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>>30301221
>”But she tried to run away from Jacob. She’s not a good slave.” (Coffee says)
>”So did you.” Swirl points out.

Wait, when did this happen?
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>>30305264
Sold his home to get her and promptly has her taken away.

Now he really DOES have nothing.
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>>30303935

Thanks. I agree with you that it has gone a bit too well, lately. Then again, we're nearing the end.

>>30304667
>>30304679
>>30304733
>>30305076
That's approximately what I was trying to portray. Guy means well, only a little desperate and misguided. In a slightly different story, he would be Anon.
But I'm not done yet with him, there's a minor arc about Pete left and then wrapping things up, hopefully with some feels
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>>30306326
Jacob once mentioned that Coffee ran away when she was first bought.

>>30302225
Haha, not yet.

Anyway:
Yea, this is good enough.

Here's a Vinyl for verification.
Pastebin: https://pastebin.com/GeEg7ELu

>The belt was heavy in your hands.
>It was time.
>The hours had passed; the ponies had finished their conversations.
>Everyone was already settling into their routines.
>Once again, they stood out in the sun, soaking in their limited freedom.
>You’d talked to Moonlight.
>She had training in ‘dark magic,’ apparently.
>She didn’t elaborate, but apparently she’d be able to make something to limit Primrose’s magic.
>Still…
>The belt was heavy.
>Holding it tightly, you can’t help but think back to the last time it was used like this.
>On Rainbow.
>By Rainbow.
>That mare had some real problems.
>And you weren’t sure how to fix them.
>You were just tackling problems as they came up, doing your best to do the right thing.
>And ponies made that so hard.
>You just wanted her to be happy for once, she didn’t smile enough.
>Taking a deep breath, you push that to the back of your mind.
>You had more important things to worry about.
>The bathroom door looms in front of you.
>Rainbow hovers down to your side, serious.
>”You want me to go in and pull her out, or do you want to?”
“We’re partners. We do this together.”
>Taking a deep breath, you push the door open.
>Primrose does her best to look confident, but you can see, in the back of her eyes…
>A hint of fear.
>She wants to appear strong. Wants to make you think that no matter what you do, she won’t change.
>She wants to convince you that she was right.
>But you’d seen looks like that before.
>She locks on to you.
>”So then, is it…”
“Shut up.”
>She stops talking.
“I don’t want to hear your excuses.”
>You didn’t have a collar, but there was plenty of rope aboard the Celestia.
>The two of you lead her out from the room.
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>>30306474

>You barely make it out of the bathroom before she begins to speak again.
>”You know, she’s blackmailing us.”
>Rainbow raises an eyebrow.
>”Who?”
>Primrose just smiles.
>”Coffee. So just because she has something we need, we’re supposed to forgive her? We’re expected to just forget all the horrible things she’s done to us? She’s as dirty as Jacob. They were partners in all this, she doesn’t get to turn around and claim to be one of us.”
>You motion for Dash to ignore her.
>She doesn’t.
>”Primrose, Coffee wasn’t thinking right, she…”
>”She’s never even had a foal of her own, she’s never even had sex with any of these stallions, she’s not been through what we have under her hoof. She’s not one of us. She’s a slaver, just like the humans. Even now, she’s trying to lock the chains around our hooves.”
>Primrose pauses for a moment.
>”You want to talk about what’s ‘right?’ Where’s her punishment for everything she’s done? Why does Coffee get a clean slate? Because she knows something we need? Oh, I bet if I knew where Twilight was, I’d get my own pillow to sleep on and a complimentary slave as well.”
>Rainbow exhales angrily.
>”Swirl’s not a slave.”
>”Oh right, what is the correct term for someone that follows you around and does whatever you sa-?”
>You cut her off.
“We’re not forgetting what Coffee’s done, but we are forgiving her. And it’s not because she knows where Twilight is. We’d treat her the same regardless of what she’s done.”
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>>30306477

>Primrose scoffs.
“You’re not supposed to forget everything she’s done. You’re supposed to understand why she did them, and then forgive her. She’s been brainwashed, Primrose. She’s not thinking right. And even if she wasn’t, then she was coerced into them. It’s not her fault. None of it was her fault.”
>”And that excuses her, does it? That makes up for all my pain?”
>You’re silent.
>You don’t have an answer for that.
“I can’t make you forgive Coffee for the mistakes she’s made. That’s your choice. And in a way, you’re right. She should be punished for what she’s done. She’s hurt people; hurt you. Maybe she doesn’t deserve a blank slate. Maybe she doesn’t deserve to be here.”
>You stand up straighter.
“But she didn’t deserve to become…Coffee, either. She didn’t deserve to become that pony.”
>You shoot a glance down at Rainbow.
>Her eyes are locked to the floor, and everything about her posture is dreary.
>Primrose just shakes her head.
>”It doesn’t matter. It doesn’t matter why. She still hurt her.”
>She takes a deep breath.
>”She doesn’t deserve to be here, she doesn’t deserve a friend, she doesn’t deserve to have everything work out fine for her. Not after what she’s done. She deserves to stay here with the rest of you rotten humans, like the cock-sucking prostitute she is. I won’t let her crimes go unanswered.”
>You open your mouth to argue further, forgetting your own advice, before a much softer voice ends the conversation.
>But it’s not Fluttershy’s.
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>>30306485

>”I’m sorry.”
>Coffee’s voice is quiet, but it rings louder than a crashing wave.
>Primrose looks at her with disgust as Coffee inches closer, eyes glued to the floor.
>Her fear won’t let her look at Primrose.
>”You’re…mad at me. You all are, I understand. I’ve done awful things. Some of them are my fault, not Jacob’s. Not any human’s. Mine.”
>She forces herself to look up, to make contact with the three of you.
>Her legs are shaking.
>”I’m just…trying to do the right thing. Trying to be a good slave. You’d understand if you were me, I’m just trying to make you all happy. Make you understand. Once you accept what you are, and stop trying to fight it…everything becomes easier. You can be happy again, like me. You can stop worrying and just smile. Things don’t need to be so difficult.”
>She focuses on Primrose.
>”But I’ve done horrible things, and I’m not sure they were right anymore, and for those…I’m sorry, Primrose. I’m sorry I hurt you.”
>Primrose stomps her hoof, scaring Coffee backwards.
>”Don’t give me that shit, you’re not sorry. You think you can trick me, you think a little sorry is going to make everything better? You just don’t want me coming after you again and think this will pacify me.”
>”I…I am sorry.”
>”You’re not sorry. You want me to believe you? Tell me, right now, where Twilight is.”
>Coffee doesn’t say anything.
>”See? You’re not sorry, you traitor.”
>”I…I can’t tell you. I can’t be a bad pony. I’m not allowed.”
>”Oh, I wouldn’t worry about that, Coffee.”
>Primrose starts walking again, trotting past her towards the exit.
>”You already are.”
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>>30306489

>Primrose is pulled back suddenly as the rope around her neck goes taut.
>No.
>She doesn’t get to do this.
>She doesn’t get to walk out there like she’s guiltless.
>She struggles against the rope, but you’re stronger than her.
>Step by step, you wind the rope and force her to come back.
>She stares angrily ahead as you pull her in front of Coffee.
“Apologize.”
>Primrose pulls at the rope.
>”Why? She doesn’t deserve it.”
>That just pisses you off.
“Fluttershy told me, that you were sorry. That you would be willing to apologize to Coffee. Were you lying to her, Primrose? Because I won’t have ponies who take advantage of Fluttershy on my ship!"
>A flash of panic passes through her eyes before she controls it.
>”For hurting her. Not for telling her what a piece of fucking scum she is.”
>You begin to pull the rope more, but Coffee quickly speaks up, her hatred of you overpowering her fear.
>”Stop, you asshole. It’s fine, I understand. I don’t care what she says.”
>You ignore her.
>Primrose begins to be pulled onto her back legs.
>You’ve lost your patience with Prim.
“Apologize, Primrose.”
>Her hooves can’t squeeze between the rope and her neck.
>Through grit teeth, she growls.
>”Fine!”
>You release some tension.
>Primrose looks Coffee dead in the eyes.
>”I’m sorry that I told you what everyone thinks of y-”
>You cut her off by pulling the rope back.
>Rainbow just watches you silently.
>She hates Primrose enough that you don’t think she’d stop you even if you tried to kill her.
“Properly.”
>Primrose hisses at you.
>”I’m sorry…I called you a bad pony, Coffee.”
>She looks up at you.
>”There! Can we get this over with now?”
>Before you can respond, Coffee lets out a quiet ‘thank you.’
>But you can’t tell who it’s directed to.
>Grabbing both the belt and Primrose’s lead tighter, you nod.
>And this time, you’re in front as you walk out onto the deck.
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>>30306497
Now it's time to turn her ass cherry red.
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>>30302827
Pretty darn exciting, and satisfying, and painful to imagine what was going though the girls minds at the time.

Bravo.
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>>30301217
I've always had a big ol' soft spot for night glider. Is she p-prego?
I h-hope not, but...

>>30301258
Always looking forward to more.
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>>30306454
>there's a minor arc about Pete left and then wrapping things up, hopefully with some feels
rip pete
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>>30306497
but

but where is the rest
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>>30306489
dizam you really hit me in the feels hard with Coffee there.

>>30306454
>wrapping things up.

I'm not liking the sound of that.
Anon still has lots of healing to help them with and a new business to make and grow with them. And in time, a twilight to woo.
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>>30306596
Well, she was the pony who got sea-sick. Maybe it was something more.

>>30306667
It's coming. Next update.
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>>30306739
Well, I could always do a Part 2 at a later date. The characters have a lot more to tell, I agree. But I'm thinking dragging it on too much would just make it tedious to both read and write.
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>>30297899
I think that's about as good as we can possibly expect of them. Anon's right: this isn't something a mere lashing is going to fix, they nearly killed another pony, willfully or unwillingly. We have to set an example that this won't be tolerated, and it's for the best. Have Cadance pipe in on something Anon said
>Unless they suddenly show some sign of regret
Follow up on this for Windy, and point out that if they do show some signs of regretting what they did then they will see what they can do for the others on the record they'll be sold off with. They won't be able to hide what they did, I think it's illegal to write stuff like that off, but they can do something to see they aren't sent somewhere terrible. IF they come around.

And further enforce what Anonymous has said: that though Windy has to suffer the same fate, he's done the right thing coming to us and he will be treated fairly when he is sold, made out to a good place as they can. Maybe sneak in a line about how Mocha's line really helped him out and maybe built up on the guilt of having been saved by the one he allowed to be beaten, though I'm not sure that's necessary.

>On the side, I think we should consider the idea of keeping Windy around if he truly wants to repent for what he did: he does not seem as bad as the others and might have a place here in the camp. Do not tell this to Windy though and only bring it up with Anonymous latter if Windy's attitude continues to improve. Save it as a pleasant surprise rather than false hope

Also, as a side note: don't forget our promise to Crescent on seeing if we can get her group's punishment lessened for giving up these names, she really came through.
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>>30305190
>trump builds a wall anyways, Equestria refuses to pay for it.
>>
You know what would be fun?
Give a slave a hammer and and a ring of reincarnation.
Their new lot in life is doing discount mine clearance.
How long do you think they would last before their mind goes from dying constantly?
From not dying from the mine the first time and having the ring blown off?
Would you feel regret when that slave dies and you get a new one?
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>>30307041
Nigger, if I can afford a ring that makes me immortal, I ain't spending it on no slave. She can buy her own eternal life.
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>>30307049
If ponies have rings that make them live forever, how the hell did they get enslaved in the first place? Was this one of those willing slavery deals?
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>>30307055
If it takes time to reincarnate or that is all it does, then you can be hobbled and taken captive as easily as before.

Alternately, cut the ring off with bullets, then kill pony as the question indicates.
Further, is the ring indestructible?
You could just blow it up and have it made useless.
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>>30306502
Nice.

After that display, I hope Primrose's ass gets thrashed until it's hard for her to walk without wincing.
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>>30306489
>”I…I can’t tell you. I can’t be a bad pony. I’m not allowed.”

Is that some parallel with Rainbow, I see? Is Coffee's problem going to have the same solution?
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Fluttershy becomes a mafia don after leaving slavery.
She trains her animals to commit crimes on humans and keep tabs on slaves rscaped and non.
Anon must preen the wing if he wants a favor from her.
Should anon do it to find Corona?
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>>30308579
He should preen the wing anyway.
>so sensual
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>>30308599
Dubs confirm, preen your pegapet to turn them into a puddle of happy pony.
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>>30306497
>tfw can't sympathize with any of this

They're still fucked after this
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>>30302820

> By the time you get home it's already past midnight. You find all three girls on the couch with some movie playing on mute.
> Zoe is awake and glares at you. "What took you so long?" she whispers.
> You see that the ponies are asleep - Twilight sandwiched between the human and Fluttershy, who is resting her head on her purple friend.
> There's no point in waking them, so you keep your voice low.
"Sorry. I had to wait for my lawyer."
> She shrugs and gets up. She supports Twilight's head with her hand while she places a pillow underneath. Then she lowers the mare down again.
> It was so smooth that the pony didn't even wake up. You stare, impressed.
> Zoe just shrugs. "Lots of practice," she says quietly.
> You follow her out and wait while she puts on her jacket. She also hands you back your keys.
"Thanks. I'm really glad I didn't have to drag them through the police station, not after what they've been through."
> She grins and pats your shoulder. "No problem. You do realize how lucky you were today?"
"Yes."
> "Good. I'll bring the others tomorrow. Well, except Dash, of course. Doc says she has to stay at least another week."
"No problem, I can drive them over whenever they want."
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>>30309783

> ...
> You're finally done with the day. You quickly check up on the ponies. Twilight is looking at you. Guess Zoe wasn't as quiet as she thought.
"Good night, pony."
> You whispered. Fluttershy might be still asleep and you'd like to keep it that way.
> For a long while she just watches back. Then she seems to remember herself. "Night."
> The couch is occupied, so you head for your bedroom. You can't remember the last time you slept in a proper bed. Was it a week ago? Or two?
> Before all this started, certainly.
> You're out as soon as your head hits the pillow.
> ...
> A strange sensation wakes you up. There's just enough light for you to see a yellow pegasus licking the back of your hand.
"Hmm? Fl'shy?"
> She still has that sweet, mellow voice. "Um, I'm sorry to wake you, Mr. Anon. But I was wondering if, um..."
> She trails off and starts to back away.
> "It's nothing, sir. I'm sorry I-"
"Go on, what were you going to ask?"
> You might regret it, but you want to know anyway. You just hope she won't try to suck you off or anything like that.
> Please, not her!
> She still hesitates, but at least she's not backing away anymore. "Um, I'm sorry to bother you," she repeats, "but I can't sleep."
> Maybe, you hope, she isn't quite as broken as you feared? She's talking to you and everything. Maybe Pete wasn't all bad?
"How can I help you with that? Do you need something to drink? Some music? A movie?"
> She shakes her head. "Thanks, but I don't think any of that will help."
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>>30309791

> You don't want to drag it out of her piece by piece.
"Okay, then what?"
> You can hear her swallow, but she manages to speak. "If I c-could maybe s-sleep in your bed?"
> It's what you were afraid of. The pony seems to sense your reluctance. "J-just, um, tonight? M-master Peter let me, so I would feel safe and not have nightmares."
> You become painfully aware of the fact that you don't sleep in pajamas. All you are wearing are boxer shorts.
> The pony takes your continued silence as denial. You can see her ears droop as she starts to turn away.
"Wait."
> She freezes and looks back at you.
"No funny business. I don't need you to 'make me happy' or 'service me'. You don't have to 'pay me' or 'reward me'. Understand?"
> She nods quickly and you lift up the covers.
> She's there with a single bound. The pony snuggles up against you. She feels ice cold.
> After a few seconds she wriggles a bit closer and sighs contentedly.
> You shift yourself to make sure your boner doesn't poke her in the back.
> Enough guilt and embarrassment that you can't control it in the first place.
> "Um, Master Anon?" she says.
> Uh-oh, the jig is up. You start thinking up a non-creepy excuse for your bodily functions.
> "Could you- could you put your arms around me?"
> You release a breath you have been holding. Good, she hadn't noticed. A little more awkward positioning and you end up hugging the pony.
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>>30309794

> There's a faint "Thank you" and then she's asleep. But you're wide awake, all too aware of your situation.
> You're trying to stay perfectly still, afraid to make even the slightest movement. Even when her mane tickles your chin, you just ignore it.
> It's not something you expected to happen. True, sometimes you hoped it would, but it's not like you'd ever admit that to anyone.
> And it's exactly as pleasant as you had imagined. You feel like you could easily get used to this.
> Before you realise what you're doing, you lean forward to brush her mane with your lips and whisper quietly.
"Sleep well, Fluttershy."
> You almost swallow your tongue at the audacity. But luckily, she doesn't wake up. You see her ear flinch toward you and hear a sleepy, unintelligible murmur.
> Great. Now she's too cute and any chance of falling asleep is gone.
> Or so you thought.
> ...
> You wake up very stiff, but in the same position. It's already light out. You almost jump up when you notice a bundle of yellow and pink in your arms, but then you remember.
> It was strange, right? And you don't even know why you agreed.
> She just looked so sad and lonely with those big, puppy eyes.
> Well, she might have been conditioned to want it, but she does seem comfortable.
> Maybe even smiling a little in her sleep?
> You decide you're not sorry, however creepy it would look to everyone else.
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>>30309801

> You hear hoofsteps at the door, followed by a sleepy Twilight.
> "Anon, have you seen-" she was about to ask, but then she spots you and stops.
> Her eyes go wide and she backs away, incredulous.
> "W-what are you doing?!" she breathes out.
"Hey, whoa, it's not what it looks like!"
> But purple horse won't have any of it. There's already tears in her eyes.
> "I thought you were different!" she cries, glaring at you accusingly. "I really fell for it! But you're just another prevert!"
"No! Wait, I can explain!"
> The yelling woke up the pegasus, who is looking from her friend to you and back. She's scared and near tears herself.
> "Get away from him, Fluttershy!"
> The urgent command from her friend makes the yellow pony quickly wriggle out of the bed.
> You let her go, of course.
> You feel stupid and guilty for no reasong and it makes you raise your voice.
"Hey! Enough of that. Calm down and we'll talk about this."
> Twilight lowers her head. Even without her horn, it isn't a pleasant sight.
> "Come here, Fluttershy! Behind me!" she barks, urgently.
> But the pegasus doesn't move. "Wait," she says, but no one seems to hear.
> With no other options, Twilight walks forward and pushes her friend behind. She's glaring at you.
"For fuck's sake, take it easy. It's not what you think!"
> "Stop!" Fluttershy says again, a bit more loudly, but no one is paying her any attention.
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>>30309812

> "You're all monsters!" Twilight exclaims, tears streaming freely down her face. "Every one of you! All you want is-"
> She can't even say it.
> "At least at the whorehouse they had the decency to tell us the truth," she keeps going instead. "But you're scum! You lie and pretend to be our friend so we would let our guard down-"
> "SHUT UP!" Fluttershy screams at the top of her lungs.
> It's not loud, but both you and Twilight notice it. She falls silent and turns to stare at her friend in shock.
> "You're jumping to conclusions, Twilight," the pegasus explains. "Anon didn't make me do anything. I was lonely and cold so I asked him to let me sleep there."
> Purple horse is dumbstruck. "But- he's-"
> "A gentlecolt!" Fluttershy counters. "He didn't try anything, even though he wanted to. I could tell."
> You feel your face growing hot.
> "And even if he did, I wouldn't mind," she keeps going. Now you feel your jaw drop.
> "I think he would be gentle with me, like Master Peter."
> Purple horse tries again: "Fluttershy, that guy-"
> "No. I was glad he took me. He was way nicer and kinder than all the other men at that place."
> Twilight apparently can't take any more of that. She just bolts for the door.
> You stare at the yellow pegasus in disbelief.
"What?"
> Brain couldn't come up with anything else to say.
> She sighs and goes to follow her friend. "I'm sorry, Anon. I didn't mean to cause all this trouble, I really didn't. I'll go talk to her."
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>>30309818

> You take a look at your phone. It's barely seven.
> Great start of the day.
> Although, to be honest, waking up with a pony in your arms wasn't all bad.
> You firmly push the thought down and get out of bed.
> Might be a good idea to dress quickly. And then get some breakfast started.
> You've got oatmeal and milk, which you distribute between three saucers.
> Cold, just the way you like it. You take the dishes to the living room and put them on the coffee table.
> Then you listen. You think you hear whispering from the computer room.
> You sternly resist the urge to go and eavesdrop.
> Instead, you turn on the news and wait.
> There's a piece already about yesterday's shooting. Luckily, they don't have details, except that Dave was caught by the police.
> You've finished your breakfast by the time the ponies show up.
> It's obvious Twilight doesn't trust you, but she walks up anyway.
> "I... may have overreacted," she admits, grudgingly.
"I can imagine what it looked like," you concede. "And I didn't plan on it. She just came up in the middle of the night and told me she wants to sleep in my bed."
> Her eyes narrow and you quickly continue.
"I should probably have woken you up, but I was half-asleep. And she said it helps keep the nightmares away."
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>>30309831

> She's still not entirely convinced, but the pony gives a curt nod. Then she tries to back away.
"Hey!"
> She freezes.
"You haven't apologised to me. Barging into my room and yelling all those things about me. That wasn't very nice."
> Her indignation quickly changes to embarrassment. "Well, it looked like you were-"
"Twilight... That's Fluttershy you're talking about. Who do you think I am?"
> She's obviously trying to figure that out, judging by the way she stares. It takes her almost a minute to answer, but you're patient.
> "A- a friend, I guess," she admits, looking at the floor.
> You almost have a complete moment, but Fluttershy speaks up.
> "Mr. Anon, is Peter going to be okay?" she asks, nervously.
> You see she's looking at the TV, where a reporter is standing in front of his house.
"The police said he was going to be fine."
> Twilight spins around. "Don't worry, Shy. You'll never have to see that pervert again."
> Seems like purple horse has found her word of the day.
> Fluttershy shakes her head. "Oh, but I want to. I'm worried about him."
> "What?! After what he did to you?"
> You decide to stay out of it. You don't agree with Pete, but you can understand it, somewhat.
> "Maybe, but he was way nicer than any of the others. He treated me like a person, Twilight."
> "He bought you like a pet, Fluttershy!"
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>>30309840

> "Well, Anon bought you too and I don't hear you complaining about that."
> Yellow mare has a point.
> It takes Twilight a moment to find her response: "Yeah, but he didn't *rape* me!"
> They both fall silent. Twilight is the first to speak up. "I'm sorry."
> "Master Peter was always gentle with me. I begged him to buy me, rather than one of the bad ones. He spent all that money, it was the least I could do."
> Twilight just stares. "So you said yes to him?"
> The pegasus looks away. "I didn't say no."
> That has gone far enough, you think. All they're doing is reminding each other of their situation and what they went through.
"Ladies, if you would like some breakfast."
> They notice the food on the table.
> Twilight is grateful for the distraction and chows down immediately. But the yellow one is looking at you, pleadingly.
> You can guess.
"Okay, how about this: Let's wait for the others, so you can see your friends again, and then I'll take you to the hospital to see Pete in the afternoon."
> She nods, happily and steps up to her plate. "Thank you, Anon."
> ...
> You help Fluttershy up until her hooves reach the hospital bed. She can just about pull herself over the edge, to see the man. You keep your hands around her barrel to steady her.
> Pete - or Peter, you guess - is happy to see her. He reaches out to pet her mane and the pony leans in, closing her eyes in pleasure.
> Then the man looks to you. "You're not stealing her?"
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>>30309840

> You try to keep your face straight. It's comments like this that you have a problem with.
"I didn't steal her, Peter. She's not property, you know?"
> His face falls. You suspect that somewhere, deep down, he knows that. But he's trying to forget it to save his conscience.
"Her friends were very happy to see Fluttershy."
> He doesn't seem to hear you. "Well, maybe she *should* stay with you. I'll be stuck here for a while and then I'll have this hospital bill to deal with. No insurance."
> You can't help feeling sorry for the guy. You know how much money he sank to save the pony. And from what you've seen, he gave her a good home. For the most part.
"Look, I'll cover your bill. And I'll pay you back everything you've spent to save her, okay?"
> He heard that and focuses on you again. "But you'll keep her..." he says, dejectedly.
"No, Pete - I'll give her a home until Twilight figures out a way to get them all back to their world."
> He is desperate, so he grasps at straws. He looks at the pony. "I treated you nice, Fluttershy. Don't you wanna stay with me?"
> She's already tearing up and you can feel her heart beating faster.
> "I would like that, I really would," she says quietly. You're sure she means it, too. "But I can't leave my friends. They need me. I hope you'll understand."
> Poor sap is madly in love, that much is apparent. He just nods, blinking away his own tears.
> You're not sure you can blame him, not after holding that ball of fur in your arms for a night.
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>>30309855

> Fluttershy clambers up onto the bed and throws her legs around Peter in a hug. She kisses his cheek and whispers something you can't hear.
> For a while, she just stays like that, but then she pushes herself back down.
> "You can visit me when you're better," she promises.
> You're not entirely sure about that, but you can't tell her no. You look for a business card in your wallet. It reminds you that you'll need to get new ones printed.
> But the number on it is still good.
"Here, give me a call and we can have lunch or something."
> It sounded colder than you meant it, but while the pony was hugging Pete, all you could imagine was him... using her.
> Imagination is a horrible thing, sometimes.
> Fluttershy waves and follows you out of the room.
"What did you whisper to him there?"
> You shouldn't pry, but you were desperate to break the silence and it was the first thing that popped in your mind.
> She looks up at you as she walks. "I said: I'm sorry I can't love you like you love me."
> Wise horse. You start to wonder just how frail she really is. Fluttershy seems to be in better shape than any of the others, both physically and mentally.
> Rarity almost killed herself over what she saw, or imagined, was done to Fluttershy.
> Or maybe the pegasus is just repressing the horror and it will all burst out someday?
> Either way, you can't help but admire her. She's keeping it together. Probably mostly for her friends, but there it is.
> It's something.
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> "W-what are you doing?!" she breathes out.
"Hey, whoa, it's not what it looks like!"
> But purple horse won't have any of it. There's already tears in her eyes.
> "I thought you were different!" she cries, glaring at you accusingly. "I really fell for it! But you're just another prevert!"

Poor Twiggles. She was the incarnation of friendship itself, and now she's scared of people to the point where any human/pony intimacy is automatically sex. PTSD is helluva drug, I tell ya hwut
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>>30309863
Nice to see Fluttershy is still as sweet and kind as she always was.

Sucks for Pete, though. Knew he'd get the shit end of the stick.
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>>30310010
Could be worse off. At least anon was kind enough to pay his bills and compensate him for the money he spent, so he might not go to the streets after all. He doesn't have his beloved waifu anymore, but if he grows at all from this -which from the way he responded the second time he talked to them, it seems like he did- he'll be happy she's in better care now, and with her friends.
He'll still hurt though, for a good while.
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>>30306502
What does it take for Coffe to finally tell Twiligth's whereabouts?

Anon ordered it ???
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>>30306948
>Trump builds a wall in front of the white house
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>>30310135
>trump builds a wall around his wall
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>>30309801

cute
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>>30309970
Twili has always been quick to draw wrong conclusions, that and his control mania
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>>30309818
Stockholm syndrome?
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>>30309863
A-and Applejack?? Where are Applejack???
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>>30310341
I ate those hors
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>>30310341
Shes staying with her parents
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>>30310039
>He doesn't have his beloved waifu anymore
that means who goes back to being a sad fat loner for the rest of his life
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>>30311047
It's fine. He fucked the waifu and she semi-reciprocated. He has transcended beyond the lives of us mortals and has become a god. It may not have lasted, but I'm sure he will have a smile on his face for his achievement in life when he an heros
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>>30310120
If Anon ordered Coffee to tell him where Twilight was, she'd probably respond with 'Fuck you.'
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>>30274558
>still no more Nightmare Luna turning the tables on Anon
Fuck you, writefag. Fuck you and blueballing ways.

Fuck you fuck you fuck you fuck you fuck you fuck you
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>>30311743
Only one of many tragic deaths amonst us. Perilous is the path of the writefag!
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>>30298172
>>30298343
>>30298700
>>30306935

"Windy. Can you tell us where Chrysocolla might be hiding? Where we might be able to find her, or anypony else who might do something like this again?"
> "I... I dunno much. I wasn't really... in, y'know? I never really got to talk to anypony else."
> Of course, they would have adapted the same compartmentalized-cell structure you'd ordered Sunburst to use.
> Whether they were even part of the same network or had just come to similar conclusions you don't know, but it was a good enough guess.
> "You have to have some idea about where Chrysocolla might be, though."
> "I..."
> Windy's head hangs dejectedly, mane falling around his neck.
> "I have to do this if I'm going to make up for what happened to Mocha..."
> Despite it not really being a question, you step close enough to lay a wing on his back; Windy's own feathers shuffle under your touch.
"Yes. You may not have done the worst of it, but you were still a part... and a large part of showing you are truly sorry for what happened is making sure that those who really are responsible face punishment."
> "Yeah."
"And remember what Anonymous said: If they show remorse, he'll consider improving their sentence as well. You aren't automatically condemning them; this is something they have a choice in."
> "Agreed. If they do - really do - I can... water down the descriptions of exactly what happened, make them sound less dangerous."
> And, implicitly, spare them from going to a place where their remaining lives would be measured in mere months and not years.
> Somehow Windy's head manages to droop even further, but he does talk:
> "You know the underground storm drain vault near 4th and H streets?"
"We can find it."
> "Those hatches are padlocked, though."
> Anonymous frowns, head tilted.
> "I don't see how she could have gotten in there, especially without being seen."
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>>30312266

> "Back around the loading dock for the good near it, there's a storm drain with a loose cover. It's pretty hidden, and Chrysocolla is a smaller mare. She can get in there and squirm down the larger pipes into the main vault-"
> Here Windy Winters shudders, and your coat prickles in sympathy.
> An earth pony may have felt safe down there, but to a pegasus the thought of crawling through a tiny pipe you could get stuck in at any moment was tantamount to torture.
> "Anyway, she put most of our stuff in there after the guards raided everything. I bet she'll be there now."
> "Going to be fun for the guards, trying to dig an earth pony out of the ground..."
> Anonymous' mutter provokes another shake of Windy's head.
> "It's worse than you know. She broke through the walls a while back and into the utility vault next to that for more room."
> Groaning, your owner drives both his hands into his forhead and rubs them there; even you have to boggle at how busy they had been.
> "Great. So now we're going to have to check on all of the manholes and vaults here next."
> "...I'm sorry, sir..."
"I think right now we need to focus on wrapping this up as quickly as possible. Everything else follows."
> "Right. I'll get the guards moving on digging her out of that vault."
"Better get one to accompany Windy Winters as well."
> After a moment your unspoken implication of what might occur should somepony realize he had turned clicks with Anonymous.
> "...right, yeah."
> "Where am I going?"
"A cell, Windy Winters. You will be kept there until this is done with."
> Through the windows of his eyes you can clearly see the moment of panic that flashes through.
> It passes, though, replaced with a softer look of understanding.
> "...yes, Your Highness. Can I - get a few of my things?"
> Despite the question being directed at you, Anonymous nods.
> "We'll have a guard go to your quarters and pull everything out."
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>>30312287

> "Thank you, Master. If at all possible, I'd like a pencil and paper. I... want to write a letter to Mocha Cream."
"I'm sure that can be arranged."
> "Cadance, if you have a moment we've got a few other things to discuss."
"I'll be right there."
> Anonymous steps back from the shimmer shield still half-blocking the doorway and closes the proper, wooden door - leaving you alone to brush your nose down Windy Winters' neck.
> He shivers gently, but bows his head.
> "Thank you, Your Highness. I... did wrong, but you listened to me."
"But all I did is listen; you proved yourself. This was the right thing to do, not for reward or pardon but because it is simply right. That Mocha Cream was willing to stand up for you shows how much this is worth."
> "I..."
> Fresh tears trace familiar paths down his cheeks.
> "I'm ready. Send the guard when you want, I won't fight. And... if I don't get the chance to speak to you again, Your Highness-"
> For the first time, the title is not laden with dread.
> "-you're a better leader then we said."
> ...
> Anonymous had grabbed an empty seat while he waited, the pony-sized accommodation leaving him with knees tucked up to his chest.
> Everypony else had evacuated the office - nopony knowing what was really going on, but all having enough sense to realize it was something they did not want to be part of.
> As you arrive, though, he doesn't rise - or, indeed, even bother looking in your direction.
"Something on your mind?"
> "A bit. But you've obviously got some thoughts too; you go first."
"Is it truly necessary to sell off Windy Winters? I understand he did a terrible thing, but he's not just turned himself in to protect his own skin. He's truly remorseful."
> Anonymous produces a sigh that suggests you aren't the only one to have considered that.
> "I know. And he's put a lot of trust into both of us too."
> The unspoken 'but' hovers leaden in the air between the two of you.
"You won't, though."
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>>30312298

> "Recognizing what he did is as much as I can really do. There's still a fair part of me that wants to shackle him up and give him the same treatment I'll give those two assholes up in the cells already."
> Finally turning his head to look at you, Anonymous (mostly) manages to keep his face calm.
> "I'm not going to, though. But neither can I keep him there. There's a place for a pardon, but not now."
> Your own ears fall, but you nod - this was not a place to argue with him.
> "I'm sorry, Cadance, but there has to be a red line for this place overall - after which you're out."
"Very well, Master. At the very least, then, can I suggest lightening the sentence on Crescent Moon and the others with her? She gave us much the same information too, and without even a threat of punishment."
> "...yeah, I guess that could be done. And just because I'm not going to pardon Windy Winters doesn't mean I won't do anything for him: He won't be permanently marked like the others, and I know which market circles the better buyers circulate in. A couple tweaks to his file, play down what happened while emphasizing his clear remorse, and he'll be okay."
"Now, on your end."
> "On my end... well, for starters I ought to tell you - there's going to be a camera system put in. It'll hold a bit of video, so we won't have to go around digging for information in the future."
> Scratching his chin, Anonymous stares off into the distance for a moment.
> "Otherwise - when the sentencing is carried out, I'm going to speak too."
"I understand."
> In a way, you wish there was something else he could do as well.
"The rec center will be opening soon as well. This weekend, even - though, hrm. Perhaps I should tell Mayor Mare to put that one off for a week... but if you wished to, you could speak then as well. There's no need for you to be only a harbinger of punishment and domination."
> Part of the offer was a purely mercenary, self-serving one.
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>>30312361

> Rebellion would never cease, if ponies only ever saw him as appearing at times of woe.
> Yet part of it was honest; he was trying to be a better man than the one you'd stood in shackles before so many months before.
> Now he was promising to be more involved, and even if he was your captor perhaps you could open his eyes too.
> But Anonymous himself looks conflicted, and it's not hard to guess why:
> The rec building had always been a 'by the ponies, for the ponies' development... he knows he might not be welcome.

Despite this being from Cadance's point of view, I'm giving you control of Anonymous: Do you accept her offer? Or is it best that it remain a pony-only thing?
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>>30312382
>Do you accept?
Yup.

We don't need to hog the spotlight, it's Cadances show and we are just an invited guest. This will be our first appearance where we haven't been 'on duty' as president of Slaveventure Inc. Bring a bodyguard or three, but try to mingle and be approachable; politicians do it, so can we.

>"There's three futures for you, Comet Tail: One, you get sold off on the open market tagged as violent and hostile. Two, the same... but with your horn's nerves cut."
>I can... water down the descriptions of exactly what happened
We are - trying. But we have an important job to do here, and backing down from threats for no reason does not serve it. We have a duty to the safety of our buyers as well: if these four hurt a human next you bet it will come back on us! They deserve to know what they're buying.
Not that I have much of a dehorning fetish...

>"Going to be fun for the guards, trying to dig an earth pony out of the ground..."
Her only protection is secrecy. If the people on the surface know where she is she can be trapped and (perhaps literally) flushed out with minimal risk, unless she has a pony-style rebreather. It's a branching structure, not an open network. Damage to underground infrastructure is the bigger problem, that hole she made will not be a cheap fix.
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>>30311666
She would definitely respond with 'Burn in hell'.
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>>30312382
Do you know what would make Candance's proposal worth accepting? Let Mocha return in time to be at the opening.

I know that this is not possible in its present state, but after everything that has happened that she witnessed for herself the result of the sum of efforts and the good faith that both put as humans have dared to carry out fighting the load Of the past, for what she fought and suffered, it would have been beautiful to see how I helped take the first step in the right direction of a better future for everypony
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>>30312382
Yes. Just because he's bringing the news doesn't automatically mean it's not for them (Even though technically it still belongs to Anon). That's another thing to make more public aside from being the harbinger of both good and bad news. Just be sure to give them their space and at most, go there personally to ask if they have any suggestions on how to improve it once they settle into the recreational area.

>>30312799
>We have a duty to the safety of our buyers as well: if these four hurt a human next you bet it will come back on us!
Good point. It's only a matter of time until Anon comes across a really good actor in this situation. Or only encourage fear and grovelling in the best scenario. Maybe keep it quiet what the outcome for true remorse will be unless they actually show it first like Windy did.

Another thing that should be brought up is that is Cadance the only one who's going to to know about a lot of these cameras? If so all the shit that's been kept in secret that Anon will be able to see plain as day will be a god damn treat.
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I miss corona
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>>30312799
>Her only protection is secrecy. If the people on the surface know where she is she can be trapped and (perhaps literally) flushed out with minimal risk, unless she has a pony-style rebreather. It's a branching structure, not an open network. Damage to underground infrastructure is the bigger problem, that hole she made will not be a cheap fix.

I'd say flush her out with CS Gas, no need for anyone to go digging, and she won't be in any condition to fight when they grab her.
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>>30277620
>i last read this like a year ago
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>>30297705
>grab the small mare
>turn her around
>arrange her mane as not to be pulled on by accident
>masterfully massage her neck and ear muscles
>remind my plaything how much she loves being mine
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>>30312382
No. The intention here is genuine, but just like you said, this is a 'by the ponies, for the ponies' kind of thing. Anonymous should respectfully sit this one out. His presence would not be well received at such an event.

There can always be another place and another time, though. Just not this particular time. This is the first real step the ponies are getting to reclaiming their sense of selves. Let them have this one.
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I want to force my mare slave onto a diet of American cheeseburgers so they may know the pleasure of a good fucking shit.
Her little fumes as she struggles to take her first bowel movement would be adorable.
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>>30313916
I'd rather shrink her down, put her in a condom and use it dirty anal.
Then make another slave swallow it all.
Let her find out the marvels of the pony physique.
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>>30314311
>BLUUUUUUURRRRRRGHHHHH
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I want to force my slave to make pony slave related posts on SPG. If she just makes SiMy shitposts, then the whip for her.
It's depraved, but necessary.
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>>30314792
I would rape your pony's puffy pink maregina with that whip every time she posts something nice.
Then
Then I would hand the cum soaked leather back to you so you can smell her as you hurt that sweet little slave.
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>>30314792
Turns out she's s painslut. Thread dies, nothing but SiMy shitposts.
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>>30288829
Space horse lives, just slightly slower that it was previously. Got a lot on my plate right now. :(
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>>30312382
I think he should agree to make an appearance, make himself more known in the camp like he said he would and maybe make a small speech

but insist that Cadance should headline. The rec center was her and her ponies' hard work: created by the extra funds earned from her trouncing around in the humiliating outfit Anon forced her to wear, suggested by the ponies whom she had convinced to reach out, built by the same ponies themselves and filled with their hope,

Anon should make an appearance and offer congratulations/a small commendation speech but for Cadance she HAS to headline it, lest it seem like she's giving most of the credit to Anon (and further perpetuating the idea she cares more for him than the ponies)
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>>30309863
/r/ Anon to ask Flutters to give a feather to be poor man in the hospital, could help gain some points with her right?
Unless its some kind of personal thing for pegasi to do in that universe, but still should count for something
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>>30314910
Oh. looking forward to more when you can.
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>>30315147
>yellow feather keepsake
This.
Can already feel the feels. Pete can preen her wings and pull a flight feather. Flutter gives just a little bit more of herself.
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>>30309863

> ...
> You don't want a repeat of this morning, so you tell Fluttershy your bed is off limits from now on.
> She nods, albeit reluctantly.
> Besides, three of her friends will be sleeping in the same room. No way she's going to feel lonely or scared.
> By the time you bring her home, the others have already pushed the cots together to make a larger bed.
> They're talking, which is good. But the discussion is subdued. You see worried faces, uneasy glances, even fear.
> Their carefree days of galloping around Equestria, saving the world, are barely a memory.
> Now they are just happy they weren't beaten and used today.
> And they're very grateful for that. You enter the living room and see a plate of pancakes on the coffee table.
> You don't even know how they managed that in your, human-sized kitchen. But you're curious, so you ask.
> Twilight seems proud of herself. "I've had to look up how to use your... 'induction' stove. Turns out, it's not that difficult."
> Rarity pipes up, too. "Yeah, but it was all Pinkie's idea."
> The pink pony shrugs. You could swear her hair is puffing out again. "I just though we should thank Master Anon."
> The others look at her. "Sorry," she corrects sheepishly. "Anon."
"Where did you get the jam?"
> You're sure you didn't have anything like that in the fridge.
> Pinkie almost seems afraid, as if she had done something wrong.
> "It- it's not jam, A-anon. I just blended some fruit and sugar."
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>>30315425

> It ended up tastier than you expected. Not that you remember the last time you had pancakes.
> All in all, a very nice surprise. And probably a good sign of their recovery.
> You leave them talking and go check your computer. There's a ton of email to wade through again, plus you wanted to check up on your data miner.
> Still nothing about AJ, which is starting to worry you.
> After you're done, you briefly think about sleep. There are no more sounds coming from the living room, so you guess the ponies beat you to it.
> You decide to stay up a little longer and catch up on your reading. You still have a few papers about ponies bookmarked.
> ...
> You become aware of the keyboard pressing against your face. It's not a new sensation - you're used to falling asleep on your desk.
> The thing that woke you up is new, however. It's Twilight, shaking your chair. "Wake up, please! I don't know what to do."
"I'm awake, I'm awake!"
> She nervously trots a few steps away and looks back. "Please come. It's Fluttershy!"
> You can hear it, but it didn't register until now. Loud moaning, interspersed with words.
> It makes you hurry.
> You don't immediately know what to make of the scene. They turned on the lights, but the dimmer was left on very low. It looks surreal, full of shadows and faint patches of light.
> The pegasus is being held down by Pinkie and Rarity, both of whom look like they'd like to be crying, but are holding it back.
> Twilight darts around you and throws her hooves around Fluttershy.
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>>30315428

> "Don't worry, I'm here. All your friends are here, just wake up, please!"
> It's strange, because you clearly see that Fluttershy is awake.
> Or so it seems. Her pupils have shrunk to pinpricks and she's staring at the ceiling. You see the others have trouble holding her down.
> But she's not registering anything that's happening around her. Instead, she's trying to fend off her friends.
> "No, no, no, no, no, PLEASE NO!" she's yelling as she struggles.
> "I can't! I CAN'T! Anything but that!"
> Then she just devolves into outright screaming. You've never heard such volume from her and it makes you step backward, involuntarily.
> Twilight looks to you in desperation. "We can't wake her up! Please do something!"
> You're not sure what you can even do, but you gotta try.
> First, it's obvious restraining her is making the pegasus panic.
> You quickly approach and slide down on your knees.
"Okay, let her go, give her some room."
> They obey and Fluttershy immediately pushes herself away. She scoots into a corner and huddles up.
> At least she's not screaming any longer. She's back to mumbling.
> "Please don't make me, please Master! Not that. NOT THAT!"
> You're guessing she's relieving whatever they did to her in that place. She can't repress it in her dreams.
> She falls silent, trembling. But then she flinches and tries to hide her head under her wings.
> "Ow, ow, OW! Please stop!" she yells.
> God, now she's remembering the beating.
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>>30315440

> The others are gathered around you, watching in wide-eyed terror. But they're not crying, other than a few wet eyes.
> You carefully reach out and pet her mane.
> It seems to work, she's no longer yelling out. But she still isn't aware of her surroundings.
> Then she starts sobbing. "Please no more. I can't take it anymore," she chokes out.
> "I'll do it," she whispers brokenly. "I'll do it. Just don't beat me anymore."
> She closes her eyes and starts full-on crying. Whatever she's remembering has completely crushed her spirit.
> What the fuck did they make her do?!
> It breaks your heart, so you reach out to hug her.
> She's aware of you now, but doesn't seem to recognize you.
> She flails her legs again and pushes your hands away.
> "NO! DON'T TOUCH ME!"
> You've quickly pulled your arms back, but she still screams.
> "Noooooo!"
> It is the most mournful cry you've ever heard and it makes your blood run cold. It ends with her choking.
> She pushes further into the corner, making herself as small as possible.
> She looks at you with such loathing that it almost feels like a physical slap.
> But it's not directed at you. Somehow you know she's talking to herself.
> "Get away from me! DON'T LOOK AT ME! I'm a monster!"
> It sounded so broken, so hopeless. So hateful.
> You can't stand this sweet, kind creature abhor herself this much.
> She doesn't resist anymore when you resolutely pick her up and cradle her against your chest.
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>>30315448

> Your eyes are wet and you can't trust your voice. The others are looking at you in stunned shock.
> Rarity is the one to speak, but she's so quiet you can hardly hear her voice.
> "I know what they made her do."
> Everyone looks at her, terrified of what she would reveal.
> She almost says it, but closes her mouth and shakes her head wildly, flinging tears around.
> "I- I can't tell you. I can't bring myself to tell you. I'm sorry."
> It looks like she might have a panic attack if forced. And you remember how she tried to jump from the balcony to escape the memory.
"You don't have to. I can see how bad it was."
> You get up with some effort, making sure you don't jolt the pony in your arms.
> She's still crying, but silently now. You start taking her to her bed, but Twilight steps in front of you.
> You can see how hard it is for her to say this.
> "Anon, last night. She said she doesn't get these nightmares if someone is holding her when she sleeps."
> You nod and try to go around her. A pegasus is lighter than the others, but you can't carry her for very long.
"Well, make sure you hug her, then."
> Purple pony shakes her head, sadly. "We did, but it didn't help."
> You can see where she's going with this.
> "I can't believe I'm saying this, but is there any chance she could-"
> You know she doesn't want to say it, so you just nod quickly.
"No problem."
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>>30315458

> Twilight looks at you with suspicion. You have a feeling that it won't go away for a long time.
"Tell you what - push your beds in my bedroom, then you can all keep an eye on me."
> She considers it, but then heaves a sigh.
> "I'm sorry, Anon. You've given us every reason to trust you. I have to try."
> You look around at the others. They're clearly uneasy, but there's also relief. They were scared out of their wits by Fluttershy's 'episode', and they're grateful you're taking it out of their hands.
> Hooves, whatever.
> Twilight follows you into the bedroom. She watches closely as you lay her friend on the mattress and cover her up.
> Then you climb in, fully dressed.
> Purple horse watches you strangely. "You'll sleep in your clothes?" she asks, remembering the previous morning.
"Will it help you trust me?"
> She hangs her head. "Yes," she says in a small voice.
"Then that's your answer."
> She just watches you settling in and bringing the pegasus to your chest. After you stop moving, she whispers: "Thank you." Then she slowly leaves.
> A small part of you is glad that you get to do this again. But you wish the circumstances were different.
> You can feel the pony in your arms still shaking and quietly sobbing.
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>>30315467

"It's okay. You're safe now."
> She twists to look at you. Now that you know how blue her eyes are, you feel like you could get lost in there.
> You wouldn't even mind.
> But she's not really looking at you.
> "I'm sorry," she says in her soft voice. "I'm so sorry, little friends."
"It's okay."
> You're repeating yourself, but maybe that way it will get through to her.
> She shakes her head firmly. "It's not okay. There's no forgiveness for what I've done to you. But I'm sorry."
> She's starting to cry again, lost in her memory once more.
"I'm sure they forgive you. It wasn't your fault. The men beat you until you weren't yourself anymore."
> It worked. She's back with you. But it doesn't seem better.
> "I wasn't thinking straight. But I still did it. I s-stomped and-"
> Saying it out loud pushes her over the edge again. She squeaks and buries her head in your chest.
> "I did it so they would stop hitting me. I couldn't say no anymore. I'm a monster."
> You carefully lift her head away so she can see your expression.
"No you're not," you say as firmly as you can. "You're the kindest, sweetest, gentlest person I've ever seen. Whatever they forced you to do, that wasn't you. It was them."
> She's thinking it over! Please let this work!
> But the pony shakes her head. "I should have kept saying no. I should have let them kill me, rather than..."
> Seems like it will take a lot of effort to convince her otherwise. But you're damned sure you're going to try your hardest.
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>>30315479

> It took almost an hour for Fluttershy to quiet down and fall asleep. You just kept holding her and sometimes brushing her mane with your fingers.
> Finally, with her face pressed against your chest, she seemed to relax.
> A short while later you're sure she's sleeping. But you don't want to move to find out.
> You don't think you'll ever nod off, but then you remember last night and just wait.
> ...
> You wake up on your back with the pony curled up in the crook of your arm.
> It's of vital importance that you don't move a muscle. You have to try and keep this going for as long as possible.
> But it's no use - you must have shifted slightly or held your breath. She stirs, then yawns.
> It's adorable and you can't help but grin like an idiot.
"Slept well?"
> She seems surprised to find herself in your bed.
> "H-how did I get here? I'm sorry, Mas- Anon. I didn't mean to intrude upon you again."
"Shush. You had a nightmare, so I brought you here. You said it helped."
> She looks around, growing concerned. "It does, but if Twilight catches-"
"It was her idea."
> That seems to answer her last question. You get a tentative smile back.
> "Well, in that case, can, um, can I stay for a little while longer?"
> You're about to say yes, but the purple horse barges in, as if summoned.
> "Rise and shine! We've got a busy day ahead of us!"
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>>30315483

> Twilight talks with a certain kind of manic cheerfulness which shows you she doesn't quite trust you, yet.
> She wants Fluttershy out of your bed sooner, rather than later.
> But she wasn't about to admit that.
> You wonder how long she had been waiting, listening for any sounds of you waking up.
> Fluttershy also gets the same idea, judging by her blush. She quickly scampers down from the bed.
> There aren't really any plans. At least not ones you've shared with the ponies, or they with you.
> You'll probably drive Shy to the Pony Society to see Rainbow Dash, but then you've got to visit your ex-office and sign some paperwork.
> You also want to finish reading the articles. You almost remember something exciting in them, but maybe it was part of a dream.
"How about some breakfast, first?"
> Twilight points at you with a hoof. "Yes! Exactly. A nice, friendly breakfast. Just sitting around the table, eating... uh, breakfast!"
> It makes you laugh.
"Any ideas?"
> "Not a single one," the pony admits. It almost sounds like she's proud of it.
"Well, I think I've cooked an omelette once before. Maybe I can remember how it goes."
> Fluttershy comes to the rescue. "That sounds lovely, Anon."
"But first, I need a shower and a change of clothes."
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>>30315489

> ...
> You're at Rainbow's door again. You were right that Fluttershy insisted on going to see her friend.
> She didn't mind that she'd also have to accompany you to the office. You don't want to make multiple trips in downtown traffic.
> You take a deep breath and open the door. Hopefully, the blue pegasus won't be irrationally mad at you this time.
"Hey Dash. I've brought you some company."
> She glowers for a moment, but then seems to give up. "I don't want to see them."
> That's when the pony steps from behind you.
> "F-fluttershy?"
> You don't think you've ever seen Rainbow Dash so happy.
> "Fluttershy! I'm so glad you're safe!"
> In a yellow flash, the two are hugging. Well, one of them is hugging the other.
> "Oh, Rainbow Dash, I'm so sorry I wasn't there for you."
> The blue mare looks away, out through the window.
> "It's not your fault. I did it to myself," she admits with a sigh.
> "Maybe if I had been there - if you had a friend to talk to-"
> Rainbow still won't hear it. "No, Fluttershy. You know they didn't let us see each other, except when a client-"
> You saw poor Shy freeze in terror, but luckily Dash noticed you vehemently shaking your head.
> She quickly changes the topic. "Never mind that. I'm just happy you're okay!"
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>>30315495

> It seems to work. "Me too," she answers.
> They keep hugging for a little longer, then Fluttershy drops down from the bed.
> Rainbow looks at you, briefly, before lowering her eyes. "Hey, Anon. I'm sorry about last time."
> You hadn't expected an apology.
"Yeah, no problem. I understand how you felt."
> She keeps talking. "I just couldn't stop thinking about it all. It's not fair. I'm stuck here and all my friends have to see me this way and it's all my fault."
> You step closer and wipe away her tear with your finger.
> Actually, you just spread it around, but the thought was there.
"Hey, don't worry. Twilight is working on a way to get you all home. She thinks they could use magic to make you better."
> For the first time, there's a faint hope in her eyes. Even Fluttershy smiles happily at the sight.
> It might not pan out, but this pony needs some hope about now.
> You think she understands just how slim the chances are. But she's grateful.
> "Thanks. And thanks for the computer thing. It- it really helps."
> It got Fluttershy interested. "Computer?" she asks and looks around. "Master Peter had one of those on his desk. Sometimes he showed me, um, 'cartoons'."
> Dash looks to the cabinet next to her bed. "Uh, Anon, could you-?"
> You take the tablet from the drawer. You quickly check the battery, but it's almost full, so you just place it in her lap.
> Rainbow is happy to show it off. "Now *this* computer is way cooler. I can use it with my voice!"
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>>30315497

> After a bit you've zoned out and started reading email on your phone. You're not in a hurry yet, so you can let the friends catch up.
> Dash is showing Fluttershy her favourite music. It's mostly Rock, of course.
> ...
> You stand up and put away your phone. It's almost time for your meeting.
> Fluttershy sees you and quickly says her goodbye.
> Dash is sad you're leaving, but she puts on a brave face. "Well, come and visit me again. It's not like I'm going anywhere."
> She smiles sadly at the bad joke.
"Don't worry, a few more days and you can go home with me, doc says. At least you'll have company, there."
> But she's already looking out the window. "Yeah, whatever."
> ...
> They've already changed the logo above the front door. It feels weird walking into the place now.
> It's empty, with no people around the lobby. It's like a morgue. A lot of people quit on the spot when the news was announced.
> Linda, the receptionist, is still there. She starts to grin as you walk up to the desk, but then she spots Fluttershy behind you.
> "Is that a-?" she looks at you incredulously.
"Sure is. Can you keep her company while I talk to Sam?"
> Linda quickly finds a chocolate chip cookie on her desk. She leans down over the counter, as far as she can reach, holding the treat toward Fluttershy.
> "Hey, you pretty thing, would you like something sweet?"
> It sounds like she's talking to a dog.
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>>30315502

"Linda, she can talk."
> You get a stunned look. "She can?" she whispers, then stares at the pony.
> Fluttershy blushes a little at the attention. "Yes, I can, Miss. And I would like a cookie, please."
> The shock doesn't last long. The woman quickly walks around the counter and pets the pony.
> "Oh, but you're just adorable!"
> It's making the pegasus blush harder.
> Linda remembers something and straightens up. She talks quietly, not wanting Shy to overhear.
> "Was she one of those they rescued from- that place?"
> You half-nod, but change it into a shrug at the last moment.
"Yes, kind of. It's a long story. I bought her after that, but yes."
> You can tell she doesn't like that word. "Bought?"
> You explain quickly.
"I couldn't stand what they were doing to them, so I tried to buy as many as I could to get them out of there."
> Her eyebrows rise. "Oh, so that is why you-"
"Yes."
> "You needed the money to-"
"Yes. Please keep it to yourself."
> She nods. You're glad she didn't think to ask you what you were doing in the brothel in the first place. It's still something you're deeply ashamed of.
"Anyway, if you could keep Fluttershy company, I'll just go finish up with Sam. Don't worry, I know the way."
> She chuckles at the joke, but then she's bending down again.
> "My, that's a lovely name, Fluttershy. Would you like to have some more cookies with me while we wait?"
> "Um, I'm not a child, Miss," the pegasus half-complains in her timid way.
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>>30315511

> You leave the pegasus in the receptionist's hands. Linda can be a big gossip, but she has a heart of gold.
> Unlike the man you're about to see. But then, his money will go a long way to help the ponies, with maybe enough left over for you to start over with a fresh company.
> ...
> On the way out, Linda stops you again. It's eerie how she always guesses what you're thinking.
> She speaks very quietly, keeping a lookout for other people.
> "Sir, I've been talking with some of the people. There's a lot of anger and confusion, but many still trust you. If you decide to open a new company, give me a call and I'll spread the word."
> She winks at you. "A lot of us would prefer working for you."
> Well, that might make starting fresh a lot easier. You thank the woman and call the pony to leave.
> She's only a small bit reluctant to part from her new friend.
> You see Linda wave to both of you as you exit the front door.
> On the drive home, you try to recap what your life has become.
> Five ponies in various states of mental and physical breakdown.
> Rabid, overzealous members of the Pony Protection Society, who idolize you as some sort of amazing hacker.
> A nice sum of money in the bank, but no way to replenish it.
> A tentative plan to somehow enlist help from Equestria, of all places.
> Half-baked idea to open a new software company someday, without any business plan or product.
> Oh, and you need to sleep with your arms around Fluttershy, or she gets night terrors.
> Actually, that last part is kind of nice.
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>>30315511
>"Linda, she can talk."
Gave me a good kek.
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>>30315511
>> "My, that's a lovely name, Fluttershy. Would you like to have some more cookies with me while we wait?"
>> "Um, I'm not a child, Miss," the pegasus half-complains in her timid way.
This is great.
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>>30315519
>> Oh, and you need to sleep with your arms around Fluttershy, or she gets night terrors.
That really is adorable, in a slightly morbid sort of way.
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9??????
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>>30316167
Sure lets feed 9 ponies to zebras.
Slaves always are useful to the poor.
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>>30315519
When stories include sleeping with someone it always makes me sad because I'd be fucking awful to sleep with. Feels bad, man.
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>>30316277
Why? Just move around a lot in your sleep or something or what?

And why is Sunset sleeping with a plucked chicken?
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>>30316277
I want my pegaslave to be my fluffy cuddle blanket.
And some other stuff.
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>>30315519
>> Rabid, overzealous members of the Pony Protection Society, who idolize you as some sort of amazing hacker.

I bet Zoe has a past that justifies her actions.
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>>30316286
That, plus allergies and I'm a skeltel.
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>>30316492
Spooked
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It's been a minute since we've had a pony spanking round these parts.
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>>30316618
I want spank a bat pony up my Spitfire's ass so he knows just what he is.
Shit.
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>>30313963
FINE
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>>30316618
Next update. Just editing it right now.
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>>30316839
Oh my lawd
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>>30316839
Vega spank = Best spank

All the humiliation of a regular spanking, but with a heaping helping of moral ambiguity and existential terror on the side.
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>>30316978
Rarity's Last Chance tho
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>>30316655
>>30314311
What is it with SPG and vore?
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>>30317154
Nothing, it's just one bored shitposter. Don't bite the bait and they go away.
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>>30317298
What if I actually want it written out for some slave degradation?
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>>30317339
>What themes are welcome?
>Most themes are welcome but a select few aren't. These are Fat, Diaper, Vore and Scat.

You'd have a much better audience with /trash/. They usually have a relevant thread up since half the board is horses. Or, if you're just looking for degradation, check out our sister thread SiM >>30152979 They're a little bit dead but they can scratch that itch like no other.
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>>30315519
Can we all now agree that crush-fetish fags are the shittiest of shit-tiers? Poor butterhush.
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>>30312382
Already said my say this update, but the 'for sale four' should be interviewed by Megan before they leave our care. She asked us how anypony could do this to gentle Mocha, let her hear it straight from the horses mouth.
Her ideal relationship with Flurry is giving her a distorted idea of what a slave is. Being surprised by the harsher truth in an environment we do not absolutely control could be catastrophic! The worst case is she hears some coarse language (and they get even more punishment). The likely case is they help a curious and friendly child understand them, and every pony slave, far better than we ever could.
We have not been this successful by letting opportunities go to waste.
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>>30317465
Oh, so pissing on slave is okay?
This works well for my plans then.
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I miss corona
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>>30317776
Obsessed with the HMD Corona, or A G O O D G I R L Corona?
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>>30315519

Poor, poor Fluttershy the breached damage finally came to light, I wonder how much time they spent in the filthy brothel of shit, and what was the reason they had to sell to Applejack

Seriously we need to find out where Applejack is, without her the plan to go home can not move forward

The mane si ... five will need professional help to overcome the trauma, just as Anon is going to need a couple of new beds to accommodate his herd, especially Rainbow

>>30316839

I see that this thread is 20 posts to reach its limit, that seems to continue with your update in the next thread?
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Time for thread to die.
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Ponies allowed to use public transit, but they have to sit at the back. And off-peak periods only.
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Ponies can ape the manners of their betters, try to be human, but they are still ponies. Can put on a hat, but still need the bridle.
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>>30318202
is that you swf? this is a terrible idea. seeing it just makes me cringe
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Your pony is lost in the big city, alone, hungry and helpless at the mercy of hobos and hipsters.

What to do?
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Ponies need human protection to survive. These loyal slaves receive the same cold-weather gear as the mistress herself! The life of a wild pone would be harsh and short.
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Horsies are pretty.
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Although humans are superior intellectually and morally, ponies have physical abilities including magic. It is a symbiotic (but unequal) partnership. Here an earth pony shares her strength under the guidance of her mistresses.
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>>30318308
Spank. Rarity is for spanking.
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>>30317748
Two of our most popular stories, Skittles and Toiletslave, both feature ponies getting pissed on.
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>>30318308
loan her startup capital for her fashion empire.

>>30318359
Yes; Rarity is very good at spanking!
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>>30318380
Next thread.
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>>30318363
When are we getting the next installment of Toiletslave? I need to know how things could possibly get worse.
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>>30318380
Rare doesn't spank. Anon always spanks Rare when she's bad.
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>>30318410
Anon apologized for that last spank. He should make it up to Last Chance Rarity with a chance to turn the tables.
>so hot...
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As members (if not citizens) of the Human Empire, ponies have the opportunity to be harnessed together into something greater than any individual. Outside of it they inevitably devolve into squabbling tribes.
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>>30318402
I can think of a few ways. I don't think Toilet is blind yet. Not that she'd notice, since she spends most of her time in the dark.
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Over time, humans will allow the very pony species to overcome it's grotesque proportions and lack of grace. Here we see the early results of a program to remediate the breed. Remember: unless your own slave is part of the program they must be neutered, for their own good!
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>>30318544
spay and neuter your pets boys and girls.
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I miss clear skies
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500 for Bookslave having to dress up every night before her master roughly fucks her senseless.
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500
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>>30318686
FUCK
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