Jojo Thread 15.5: Golden Heart, Golden Thread

>>30195159
Glad we're back up so soon
Kinda missed my cue last thread

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>>30195159
For easy Stand-making and free bumps, here's the automatic one-of-a-kind Stand Generator.

http://www.pages.drexel.edu/~dft29/Stand_Generator/Stand-Generation-Overdrive.html

If you like, replace the Description with your own explanation of your Stand's powers and appearance, and show it off to everyone.

You can also share drawings of said stands or make some from some other ones you liked!

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And whether you're new to the thread or you've been here since the start and just want to let out your creativity with a nice one-shot, why not try your hand at an All Star Battle?

Lots of Stands have come out of these threads, both powerful and creative, so what's so wrong with a little competition? Let's see who comes out on top!

>Pick any stands from these threads and come up with a battle!
>Example: [BENZIN] vs. [Rocket Man]
>And if you're feeling really creative, you could write multiple stand users fighting, either in groups or be a huge battle royal.
>Example: The ｢SHADOWBOLTS｣ vs The ｢WONDERCOLTS｣
>And in true JoJo fashion, feel free to get creative with it. Maybe write a conflict that isn't a straight up battle.
>Example: Rainbow Dash decides to prank Pinkie Pie with her newly gained stand, unbeknownst to the fact that Pinkie also possesses one, and shenanigans ensue.

We've had a lot of ASBs so far.
A four Anon free-for-all: http://pastebin.com/nYizqLre
Or the Triple Pink Ponkdown!: http://pastebin.com/0GKTJbDC
We've even seen a team-up to save the world: http://pastebin.com/AUjwjBcF

But we still ask ourselves... do we stand a chance against the Joestars themselves?

>Jonathan vs. [Fire in the Church] http://pastebin.com/si7M9A9f
>Giorno Giovanna VS Erich Rammstein http://pastebin.com/Atks9007
>Jolyne Cujoh Vs. [Saturn's Children] https://pastebin.com/YbMARP67

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And if you're new to the thread and don't know what to read, here's a little directory:

>Rammstein's Bizarre Adventure: (Ace_Sorou)
Erich Rammstein is a NatSoc and stand user living in Canterlot that gets often dragged to battles against other stand users.And his sister is a cute. A CUTE!
Status: ONGOING
All chapters here: http://pastebin.com/u/Ace_Sorou

>Dimensional Link: (A-non moose)
Pinkie Pie stabs Anon with the Stand Arrow, thus granting him a stand. And everything is fine and dandy, until said arrow becomes Twilight's stand. Now Anon and his pony friends need to find a way to create a new arrow and give it back to Pinkie's family because tradition... or is that all?
Status: ONGOING
All chapters here: http://pastebin.com/u/A-nonMoose

>Stan(d)on in Equestria:(AusAnon)
Rainbow Dash misteriously develops the stand of ｢ANONYMOUS｣, which has its own will, and quickly become friends. But when the ｢NIGHTMARE｣ returns to Equestria, it is up to them to fight it and any other stand user that gets in their way.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters here: http://pastebin.com/u/AusAnon

>MY LITTLE JOJO: STANDS ARE MAGIC: (Cameo)
After Twilight and Starlight prod Anon's soul in an attempt to give him magic, his "Soul Stone" shatters everywhere, granting anypony in contact with it a stand. Anon also develops a stand, but a new threat comes to Equestria, trying to get a hold of the soul shards and get rid of Anon and his friends in the process...
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Creamymemedaddy

>Care Root's Bizarre Adventure: (Ditherer)
When Stands become normal in CHS, the antisocial loser Care Root gets one that burns up his own future with every use. After a chance encounter with his soulmate, that future suddenly changes, making him one of the most dangerous Stand users in play. Will he survive the conspiracies raging across Canterlot when even victory can burn up his reason for fighting?
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Ditherer

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>>30195491
>Coco's Bizarre Adventure: Nothing's Kingdom (Ditherer)
On the night King Sombra reconquers Equestria and sends the Elements into comas, Coco Pommel falls off her balcony, sorts out her life, and gets saved by a mysterious power before she hits the ground. With the power of Stand, she ventures beyond Manehattan to foil Sombra's plans, save civilization, and - most importantly - revive Rarity.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Ditherer or http://www.fimfiction.net/story/328442/cocos-bizarre-adventure-nothings-kingdom

>Bon Bon's Bizarre Badventure (Ditherer)
Ponyville's resident grump Bon Bon gets dragged by Lyra Heartstrings to Fillydelphia's chintzy Alternate History Museum, and discovers the fringe science really has something to it when they both wind up in an apocalyptic universe, and find they're not alone.
Status: Complete
All chapters: https://pastebin.com/C7rsbsjk

>Marble Pie's Bizarre Adventure (Ditherer)
The Pie Family has prospered for generations through the magical energy of a strange meteorite. When rogue author-adventurer A.K. Yearling steals it for the good of the world, Maud, Limestone and Marble have one week to recover it before the farm goes bust.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: https://pastebin.com/Xbqcj7qn

>French Anon's Bizarre Adventure: (FrenchAnon)
Anon is an intern in the SpeedWagon Foundation, but after a terrorist attack during an experiment with a stand arrow, he is transported to Canterlot High...
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/JosefJoestar

>Anon's Bizarre Adventure: Canterlot Escapade: (FriskyBits)
Anon and Pinkie Pie get stabbed with an arrow and develop stands of their own. After meeting with other stand users, they decide to investigate who is responsible of going around town giving powers to random people.
Status: This story has not been updated in a long while...
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/QivjKsiH

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>>30195159
>look at mlp
>forgot to come by todaY
>the one day I'm gone, the thread doesn't get bumped and dies
>tfw you saved everything in pastebin before it happened

Call me motherfucking Yoshikage Kira cause fate is on my side.

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>>30195515
>Stand by Me: (FuckFaceMcGee)
Anon Y. Mous, your slacker green weeb, becomes really close with his purple neighbour Twilight Sparkle. After watching Jojo toghether, Twilight develops an "Evoker", which is capable of granting a stand to whomever is shot by it. Flash Sentry, in a fit of jealousy, steals the Evoker and starts creating an army of stand users to get in the way of Twilight and Anon's relationship.
The OG story!
Status: The author is on a hiatus.
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/515d4KLQ

>Anon's Stando Adventure: (Omnee)
Anon gets invited by Celestia to check the "Sovereign Arrow", an ancient relic said to grant powers to whomever survives being stabbed by it. After messing with it, Anon is able of weilding the power of stand, but apparently a shady group is coming for his life. And either by bad luck or destiny, his friends get stabed with the arrow and get stands of their own.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Omnee_Potent

>Kira Visits Horseland: I Want It All (Omnee)
Yoshikage Kira, after the events of Part 4, awakens in Equestria with a downgraded version of his stand. Now, under a false identity, he plans to get back his powers and his quiet life.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Omnee_Potent

>Friendship's Bizarre Adventure Part one! The Dark Side of the Moon (Phase 2)
Jovial Journey, a.k.a. Jojo, is a talented psychiatrist in Equestria assigned to council Princess Luna. But after she becomes Nightmare Moon, it is up to Jojo, Celestia and other ponies to stop her from resurrecting Discord.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/DNZ6FD9q

>Daring Do and the Arrows of Marapore.feat Ziggy (StarAnon)
Mild-mannered Ziggy Stardust is sent to negotiate with A.K. Yearling on behalf of her publisher, only to become embroiled in a Daring Do adventure featuring some especially magical arrows.
Status: Complete
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/9fSMNBDh

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>>30195610
>Interview with a Stand User (StarAnon)
Featherweight is a sick child staying in Canterlot's Hospital.His condition gets worse quickly and so does his hopes of living, until one day his mother brings a quirky character to visit him.
Set after the events in "Daring Do and the Arrows of Marapore"
Status: Complete
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/dqnGFj3m

>Cat Armed Phenomena (StarAnon)
Flitter and Cloudchaser, the Stand-wielding Storm Sisters, find their occupational luck changing when they get a job tracking down a very special missing cat. Unfortunately, they're not the only Stand users trying to get their hands on "Princess Blue"...
Set before the events in "Daring Do and the Arrows of Marapore"
Status: Complete
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/WP4W1KNm

>JoJo Green? It might be a thing: (Superkeaton)
Anon, a self proclaimed PSIE-ntist, wants to uncover the misteries of Canterlot City, but he may be in more than he can handle.
The story is supposed to feature the stand [Beautiful Liar].
Status: This story has not been updated in a long while...
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/jLVdFdQV

>JoJo's bizarre adventure part 9: Cars & Chaos... and JoeJoe: (Writroplex)
JoeJoe is a student in Canterlot High that doesn't get along with anyone else, but after discovering he is part of the Joestar linage, bizarre events may happen.
Status: This story has not been updated in a while.

>Shizuka Joestar in Canterlot High (not the official title): (FightingPen)
Anon, a normal student in Canterlot High, is tasked to show the new student around the school. But not long after meeting Shizuka, he gets involved in a stand battle...
Status: This story has not been updated in a while.
All chapters: None yet provided.

Shift today and another tomorrow, but I'm doing some writing on my break. CRBA 12's at 5800 words now, and I'm trying to give all of the moving parts a route to a strong ending. Looking forward to everyone else's updates.

>>30195515
>filename
Kek. Also, don't forget Moondancer.

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So what's the next reference going to be?

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>>30195744
Now that you mention it, I don't have a short description for the Moondancer story and the one with Jovial Journey.
Anyone here is cool enough to write them?

>>30195906
Jovial Journey's Bizarre Adventure
Author: Phase 2
>Jovial Journey, greatest therapist in Equestria, finds the country's peace threatened by the sinister forces of Nightmare Moon. Now he must rally a team of comrades and assault Castle Skynyrd to prevent Nightmare Moon's eternal night!
Status: This story has not been updated in a long time...

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>>30196105
After a more thorough inspection, I had already posted it but thanks man!
Secret discusion topic: is StarAnon the worst thread maker yet?

>>30195159
Goddammit anon, you had to chose Vento Aureo.
I havne't recovered of what happened to Narancia and Abbaccio

>>30196135
No you're not.

Content almost ready bump

THE SECOND DAY
>You are Anonymous
>And you have just woken from the sweetest deep sleep you’ve ever had
>You didn’t even dream or anything
>Did yesterday really honestly happen? It seems kind of like a fever dream
>Pulling your right hand from under the covers confirms that you did not imagine a single thing
>The cast is still there, rigid and unmoving
>Which means…
>With a thought, [Planisphère] phases into existence above you, its bulbous head looking down on your relaxed form
>Fucking excellent
>A yawn escapes your mouth, and you close your eyes and arch your back in a long and wonderful stretch
>When you open your eyes, you see that you’ve “switched” into [Planisphère]’s body again, and its visor is giving you the same readout as yesterday
>Experimenting, a needle emerges from your Stand’s finger, and launches into the floor nearby
>After waiting a few seconds for some sort of visible effect and nothing happening, you decide to look through your own eyes again and get out of bed
>As you shuffle towards the kitchen to make breakfast, you notice an envelope resting on the floor by your front door
>Must have come through the mail slot this morning
>You stoop over to pick it up and notice that it says “To Anon, From AJ” on the back
>Curious
>Inside there’s just a simple letter from Applejack, signed with a flourish
>”Howdy Anon, figured you’d be tired as heck after all that Stand business yesterday, since I know I am. Anyway, I’m taking the day off today to try and experiment with my Stand, and I’m giving you the next week off of work so your hand can heal properly. Be warned though, that when you come back I’ll work you to the bone for a week straight. Enjoy your down time, and I’ll see you around town later. -AJ”
>Shit, you didn’t even think about work after yesterday

>>30197758
>It’s a huge relief to not have to worry about doing any heavy lifting, but you do feel bad for AJ
>The poor mare’s gonna have to work twice as hard to make up for you not being there to help out
>Nothing you can do about it though, so you may as well make the most of the week you’ve been given
>On to breakfast
>Since it’d be difficult to cook pancakes and imitation bacon with just one hand available, you settle for frozen waffles drizzled with butter and syrup and a glass of fresh-squeezed orange juice
>It’s grown by magical horses, so you don’t even need to worry about pulp
>Admittedly it was difficult to cut the orange until you realized that [Planisphère] could hold it still with its left hand while you cut it with your own left hand, and by the time you realized that it was too late to cook the eggs, but breakfast was delicious anyway
>Afterwards you undergo the familiar routine of shit, shower, and shave before deciding to experiment a little with your Stand
>Shaving, thankfully, is easy with only one good hand
>Twilight’s gonna be experimenting on you today, so you might as well see if you can surprise her with a new power or something
>Taking some fruit into your backyard, you toss a few overripe apples and bananas into the air all at once and try to get [Planisphère] to smash all of them before they hit the ground
>It’s not the most precise Stand, since a few of the fruits pass harmlessly by its fist, but the objects it does hit are pulped with a satisfying squish, and it’s handicapped anyway
>Can its legs do anything?
>A few simple tests reveal that no, its legs do basically nothing aside from looking goofy and allowing it to pose like any other Stand from the manga
>Well since the legs and elbow fins are a bust, might as well try your power out on something else
>You’ve used it on flesh-and-blood targets before, but will it affect non-sentient non-fleshy beings as well?

>>30197765
>At your command, [Planisphère] produces a needle which it fires into the nearest tree
>…
>Literally nothing happens. No leaves fall, no branches break, no pinecones smack you on the noggin
>Well that sucked
>Since that was a bust, what about testing your Stand on yourself?
>Might be bad, but as a great scientist once said, “you never know until you’re dying on the floor in a pool of your own blood.”
>You think that might have been Oppenheimer
>Another needle emerges from [Planisphère]’s finger and you squeeze your eyes shut, pointing it at your thigh and waiting for the pain
>ACK
>It’s like being pinched by a particularly vigorous grandmother
>…But you don’t feel like sneezing at all, and the needle’s vanished
>Hmm
“Do you know why I don’t feel like sneezing?”
>Your Stand only offers you a blank look through its visor in response
“Yeah, I kinda figured you wouldn’t.”
>Anything else you ought to follow up on?
>Um…
>Oh, right
>Spike mentioned a pull between the two of you yesterday, and you confirmed it
>You close your eyes and try to feel around with your mind, searching for the same feeling from yesterday
>It’s very faint, but you can feel a slight mental tug from the directions of Twilight’s house and Sweet Apple Acres
>Looks like allied Stand users can directly sense each other’s presence
>You’re unsure if the creation of an enemy Stand user would change that though
>Good thing it seems to be a mostly unconscious deal, otherwise you’d get irritated as hell
“Alright, let’s head over to Twilight’s. It’s time to get experimented on.”
>WAIT
>Blade Dancer was able to get into your house with no problem yesterday, but you’re not sure how she did it
>Sure she’s a unicorn, but maybe she was able to sneak in easily anyway
>So after you pull on your watch and straighten out your suit, you spend the next few minutes locking every door and window and duct taping them shut

>>30197773
>When you’re satisfied that you won’t get assaulted again because you left the upstairs windows unlatched, you lock the front door behind you and head out for the day
>Twilight’s place approaches you as you head up the street, looming invitingly over all the little horses that pass it by
>As you approach you notice a sign on the door that states, “Closed for the day, please come back tomorrow. Thank you, Twilight Sparkle”
>You knock a few times and wait out on the stoop
>Spike opens the door after a few moments
>”Oh hey Anon, good to see you! Twilight’s setting some stuff up in the basement for later, but you can come on in anyway!”
>It’s a good thing he’ll never know how lewd that sounded
>The Ponyville library is just as inviting as ever, and it smells like oak and yellowed pages
>Reminds you a bit of your childhood
>”Come on and sit down for a bit Anon, I’ll let Twi know you’re here. You want anything to drink?”
>Spike pulls you up a chair in the kitchen and gestures for you to sit down
“Nah, I had breakfast right before I came over. Thanks though.”
>”Cool. I’m gonna go let Twilight know you’re here, and then maybe we’ll have some time to talk about our Stands. Be right back!”
>He scampers off down the stairs, yelling for the local librarian
>While he’s out, you fold your left leg over your right, hunch over onto the kitchen table, bring your right hand in towards your stomach, and drape your fingers over your face
>[Planisphère] hunches over behind your back in a menacing fashion, imitating the gesture
>”She says she’ll be ready in a few-“
>Spike stops short of the kitchen entryway, gawking in awe at your posing game
>”Whoa! You look way cool Anon! How’d you learn to look like that? I wonder if I can do it too…”
>He turns his back towards you, squints over his right shoulder, balls his little fists and summons [Dragonforce] out of his shoulder blades
>The effect is actually rather intimidating, even though you know he’d never hurt a fly

>>30197778
“Dang Spike, that’s some impressive posing you’ve got going on. Nice job.”
>Grinning widely, Spike runs over to the table and pulls up a seat
>”Thanks! I’m glad it looked cool. So, have you done anything cool with [Planisphère] since last night?”
“I mean, I shot a tree. And uh… I made it punch fruits. That’s about it. Oh, and I can see through its eyes if I concentrate hard enough.”
>Spike’s eyes dilate until all you can see are the edges of his irises
>That’s kind of freaky, and you’ve seen a lot of freaky stuff since you arrived here
>”REALLY!? THAT’S AWESOME! HOW D’YOU DO IT, ANON?”
“I just uh, kinda focus. Tell you what, I’ll show you an example. Hold up some fingers behind your back and I’ll say the number you’re holding up.”
>You close your eyes and concentrate on [Planisphère]
>As it phases into existence behind you, your vision fades back in until you can see Spike through its visor
>You bring your Stand around behind Spike’s back, and admit to yourself that you cut a pretty cool figure when you pose like that
>Spike’s holding up 3 fingers behind his back
“Three.”
>”Whoa, that’s so cool! Do some more!”
“Six.”
“Five.”
“One.”
“Eight.”
>”Anon, that’s amazing! How’d you even figure that out?”
“Well according to the original comics, Stand users can use their Stands to talk to each other. I figured I could extend that to the five senses in general since I felt it when my Stand touched Rarity’s nose yesterday.”
>He pouts a little at that
“While the girls were fixing me up I passed the time by messing around with my Stand until I tried to see through its eyes, and the rest just kind of happened from there.”
>Spike summons Dragonforce out of his shoulders again, and takes on the face of someone who’s been constipated for a week
“You okay there dude? You look like you gotta take a dump.”
>”I’m good Anon, just trying to feel stuff with [Dragonforce]. Not sure it’s working though.”

>>30197787
“Well heck, you’ve got the rest of your life to learn how to use your Stand, you’ll get the hang of it someday.”
>Twilight takes that moment to poke her head into the treebrary from the basement stairs
>”Hey Anon, good to see you! Ready to start on our experiments?”
>You chuckle
“You sure wanted to get started quickly. I don’t think you’ve even had the Arrow for twelve hours yet.”
>Twilight rolls her eyes
>”Well we need to observe the kind of actions your Stand can take, and come to think of it we should probably get you looked at too Spike, since I want to gather as much data as possible. If Applejack didn’t have to work today I’d have dragged her over here as well.”
>The letter from before drifts into the front of your thoughts
“Well, AJ’s taking the day off today, so maybe you could see about buggin’ her. Not so sure she’d appreciate it though.”
>Twi looks at you inquisitively
“She sent me a letter this morning giving me the next week off so my hand can heal, and said she’d be taking the day off work to recuperate after yesterday afternoon.”
>Twilight seems to actually be considering ponynapping AJ for experiments
>”Nah, we all had a rough day yesterday. I won’t bother her about it just yet. You two, on the other hand, volunteered for this, so we’re doing it now. C’mon, follow me.”
>You and dragon-boy follow Purplesmart into the basement
>Suspended by magic within a jar on the table floats the Arrow, surrounded by various magical implements and a few notepads
>”Don’t worry, everything’s been sanitized since yesterday. Now Anon, Spike, I need you two to just take a seat and relax. I’m going to get the Arrow ready for a few tests later on in the day, so you two can keep having your conversation from earlier.”
“Alrighty Twi.”
>You notice a big seismograph-looking thing over in the corner, hooked up to a crystal pointing at the Arrow and delivering readings on a continuously printing piece of paper
>Whatever, you can ask about that later

>>30197798
>Twinkle Sprinkle runs around the basement, attaching electrodes hooked up to another machine onto the jar holding the arrow
>It’s very flashy and constantly prints a shit ton of data that makes no sense to you
“So what’s she trying to do here Spike? Why attach all this stuff to the Arrow when Celestia wants her to cast spells on it or whatever?”
>Spike leans in, cupping a hand over his mouth so Twi doesn’t hear his next words
>”She’s a big nerd, gotta get technological readings as well as magical readings for her data. Why she doesn’t just test it on herself I don’t know.”
>Now there’s an idea
>Not a good one but good ideas are a rarity for you
“Hey Twilight, why not just use the Arrow on yourself? It’d make getting these readings and observing our Stands way easier.”
>She visibly hesitates in the middle of arranging some test tubes at the back of the basement before continuing with her work
>”Though I am interested in that idea, it would likely knock me unconscious for between two hours and three days, you’d need to get me to the hospital, and Spike would probably need to be taken care of for the night.”
>The dragon bristles a little
>”I may be a kid but I can take care of myself, especially now that I have [Dragonforce]!”
“Do you know what your Stand’s power is yet?”
>The kid deflates a little
>”No…”
>Twilight finishes whatever she’s doing back there and trots over to the table, smiling brightly at the both of you with her notebook grasped in her magic
>”Well that’s why you’re here. We’re going to figure out exactly what your Stands do today!”

>>30197802
>Twilight has set up a couple training dummies in the corner of the basement, one for you and one for Spike
>Well, she calls them training dummies, but they’re just enchanted logs
>According to Book Horse they’re enchanted so they won’t break, but they will soak up impacts without damaging the impactor
>Meaning you can punch a log without breaking your other hand like a dumbass
>”Let’s start with a basic punch test. Anon, you demonstrated inequine, er inhuman speed with your Stand yesterday, able to punch through wood a few times a second for several seconds on end. I want to see if you can still do that with one hand tied behind your back.”
“Easy peasy Twi, sit back and watch the master at work.”
>Focus…
“[PLANISPHÈRE]!”
>Its left fist blasts into the log, causing it to shake a little before settling
>”Good, that was a strong blow. I’m magically tracking the impacts you make on these logs. It’s kind of like a scale for how hard you can hit.”
“Is there anything you can’t do with magic?”
>She snorts derisively
>”Not really. Anyway, please continue.”
>Your lips pull back from your teeth in what you think might be an ecstatic grin and your Stand pulls its fist back
“FUCK YOU!”
>THOCK
>Er, Spike’s here though, and Twi’s looking at you like that wasn’t the best idea, so you decide to change your yells
“ORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORAORA ORAAAAAAAAAA!”
>[Planisphère]’s final blow forces the log back a few inches, wobbling back and forth before coming to rest on its base once more
“Phew, how was that, Twi?”
>She squeezes her eyes shut while she tries to come up with an answer
>”Wow, [Planisphère] is a pretty strong Stand! It’s hitting slightly harder than a full-grown stallion, and that’s just with its left hand!”
>You scoff
“Pfft, that’s nothing. In the manga there was one that could punch through foot-thick diamonds with no problems. My Stand barely registers compared to that.”
>The two of them look at you in wonder and…fear?

>>30197807
>Spike is the first to speak, barely above a whisper
>”Foot-thick diamonds? Without hurting the user?”
>Twilight seems to be considering the implications of granting power like that, since she’s uneasily looking back and forth between you and the Arrow
>Stammering, you quickly interject
“B-but he’s the most overpowered character in the manga, like one of those heroes from kid’s shows that never loses! And Stands that strong are almost nonexistent anyway, so the chance of someone getting a Stand like that is astronomically low! It’s nothing to worry about guys.”
>You hope
>Twilight looks to you again, concern written all over her face, but then she turns to Spike
>”Well if nopony else gets their hooves on this thing then we won’t need to worry about that anyway, right? It’s your turn for the strength test Spike!”
>The little guy steps up to the log proudly, puffing out his chest
>And he deflates just as quickly without even summoning [Dragonforce]
>”Guys, how the heck am I supposed to hit that thing? My Stand’s like a couple of worms that just sort of drift around. There’s not much I can do with that.”
“I dunno, maybe try slapping it. If that doesn’t work then curl it up and jab with it.”
>You make a fist and punch the air to emphasize your point
>The little guy sighs before sprouting [Dragonforce] out of his back and rearing back with it
>”Here I go! RAAAAAAAAH!”
>One of his tentacles swings through the air at high speed, straight at the log-
>And just kind of sticks to it instead
>It hit the log just fine, but the tentacle sort of molded to the shape of it, like a string touching an object underwater
>”Well this sucks.”
“You haven’t tried jabbing yet little man.”
>”Oh, r-right.”
>[Dragonforce]’s other tentacle drags along the ground for an instant before Spike raises it up-
>And it refuses to come off the floor
>”Guys, I think my Stand’s broken.”
>”What’s wrong Spike?”
>He tries to pry it off the stone floor but it won’t budge

>>30197812
>He turns and bends down to grab it with his claws, and the other tentacle refuses to come off of the log
>”Wh-hey! My Stand’s stuck!”
>He grabs both of [Dragonforce]’s tentacles and pulls them, hard
“Spike wait, you’re gonna hurt yourself!”
>As you step forward to help the little dragon, his hands snap to his head and he doubles over in pain, moaning softly on the floor
>Twilight rushes over, crouching next to him
>”Spike! Are you okay!?”
>The little guy staggers back to his feet, defeat written all over his face
>”I think I pulled on my Stand a little too hard. But it’s no use, I’ll never be able to use it to fight if this is all it does! What a stupid power…”
>…You think you see a learning experience here
“Well Spike, sometimes the best way to learn something about your Stand is to just stop what you’re doing and look inside yourself. Let the Stand talk to you in its own way. [Planisphère] moved of its own accord right before I realized its ability, so maybe your Stand will do something similar. Just try to focus on what your Stand naturally wants to do.”

>Be Puff The Magic Dragon
>Man, you wish you were Puff right now
>At least he was cool
>Still, you try to calm down enough to follow Anon’s advice
>It just sucks that he and Applejack have cool powers and you have a pair of sticky worms
>But assuming there’s something you’re not seeing here, you can try to listen to your Stand and hopefully do something really cool with it
>Closing your eyes, you try to feel around for something like the feeling you got the first time you called out [Dragonforce]
>…
>…
>…!
>There’s something out there, something floating just outside of your soul!
>It’s like a small rubber ball, just sitting there, but you can touch it with your Stand
>As you begin drawing it closer to yourself, you detect the presence of something behind you
>Mentally pushing your focus that way, you see another ball-like thing just floating there

>>30197816
>You reach out and grasp them with your mind, and bring the two of them closer to your soul
>For a brief instant feelings not your own flow through you
>The babbling of a brook at the end of spring, leaves dyed every hue of green there is
>A stark and jagged landscape, smelling of granite and slate and upturned soil
>And then the balls switch places
>”What the hell?”
>Your eyes jerk open, searching for the problem
“What’s wrong Ano-“
>Whoa!
>The floor looks like a tree trunk!
>And the log looks like it’s made out of rocks!
>In the exact places where [Dragonforce] was touching the floor and the wood, there are perfect circles where they seem to have switched places!
>”Whoa Spike, did you do that?”
“Y-yeah, I think I did, Twilight!”
>You switched the surfaces of the things [Dragonforce]’s tentacles touched!
>Awesome!
>You fist pump to yourself as Twilight runs over and hugs you
>”Wow, I’ve never seen anything like this. You have a seriously cool power, Spike!”
>Wow, praise from Anon!
>He’s such a cool guy with his Stand, and now you can be just like him, fighting by his side against enemy Stand users!
>It’s gonna be awesome!
>Hey, could you switch them again?
>Focusing, you slap your Stand back onto the centers of the changed areas and concentrate
>Again you feel the orbs floating around you, tethered to the ends of your Stand’s tentacles, but something’s different
>There are more of them now!
>Several different orbs float on either end of your Stand, each looking and feeling way different from each other!
>You take the two that you originally switched and put them back where they belong, to accompanying gasps of awe from Anon and Twilight
>Then you take a look at the other orbs, each of which seem to be paired with an orb from the other side
>Shrugging, you grab one at random from the group in front of you and feel one from the group behind respond
>You grab that orb and switch the two, and open your eyes to something different

>>30197820
>”Whoa Spike! You can do more than just switch surfaces?”
“Seems that way big guy! I wonder if there’s more to it than that though.”
>You were able to switch “surface” and “shape,” but maybe you can switch something else
>What was that thing Twilight was teaching you about last week?
>｢Density｣?
>As if on cue, one ball from each side of you floats towards the center, and you feel them switch places on their own!
>You feel the stone beneath you give just a little, like you’re standing on the wooden floor upstairs
>For a quick second you feel like you can do anything
>Then the feeling passes and your Stand retracts from the surfaces it’s touched
>Twilight hugs you again and Anon gives you the thumbs up and a huge smile
>”Proud of you dude, you’ve got an incredible ability.”
>”Yes Spike, that was incredible! I can’t wait to see what else you can do!”
>With a self-satisfied grin on your face and anticipation in your heart, you flex dramatically for Anon and Twilight
“Well you know, all in a day’s work!”
>The pair of them giggle before Twilight gets up and moves over to another corner of the basement
>”Now for something a little different!”

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STAND NAME: [DRAGONFORCE]
STAND MASTER: SPIKE THE DRAGON

POWER: D
SPEED: C
RANGE: B
DURABILITY: E
PRECISION: C
POTENTIAL: B

ABILITY: [DRAGONFORCE] allows its user to switch two “aspects” of whatever the Stand’s tentacles touch, including shape, surface, and density. Spike can apply its ability to many different concepts of thermodynamics and physics, he just needs to discover them first.
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>>30197825
It's finally here, and I gotta say it feels good getting this bit done. I've had it waiting in the wings for weeks now because I kept going back and redoing something, so I just said fuck it and posted it all.

Pastebin for The Second Day is live here: https://pastebin.com/LSAXFsKT

As always, please critique the hell out of my writing, and thank you all for reading my shit.

Anon who bumps with stands back again

Stand name [Black Sunshine]
User: ???
[Black Sunshine] takes the form of a motorcycle key with a skull shaped grip
When inserted into any object with wheels, regardless of the presence of a keyhole or motor, it will have an effect similar to [Wheel Of Fortune]

Stand Name: Smooth Criminal
Stand User: Anon
Power - B

Speed - D

Range - B

Durability - A

Precision - B

Potential - D

Description: The ability to control the plot. Sub-power of Author Authority. Narrative equivalent of Reality Warping/Nigh Omnipotence, depending on the user's level. The user controls the plot of the story as it goes, be it the setting of the story, whom the plot revolves around, how the plot progresses or the reasoning of the user's world. They can control every decision the characters make and every consequence of those decisions and essentially control the whole timeline of their verse.
I guess I won

>>30197849
I like how this chapter is going. The details on Anon's everyday lige like his job or what he has for breakfast are nice after the rough day he had.
And I'll always enjoy how he tries to figure out his stand.
Spike's ability is awesome.
Looking forward for more!

[DRAGONBUMP]

>>30198330

Stand name: [Bullet For My Valentine]
User: ???

[Bullet For My Valentine] appears as a robotic man made of black metal with a pair of spikes on either side of it's head that vaguely resemble bat ears. It's eyes are a pair of circular lenses that glow yellow, and have markings that resemble crosshairs. In place of it's wrists and stomach, it has revolver cylinders, and it's fingertips resemble pistol barrels. It is dressed in the upper half of a waistcoat with a frilled neckpiece, along with a red coat and breeches
It appears to possess a personality similar to an olde fashioned nobleman, or a comedic parody of one
[Bullet For My Valentine] is capable of producing bullets from either wrist cylinder, which seem to work in any firearm regardless of calibur
These bullets are imprinted with an emotion based on whatever the user is feeling at the time, and this emotion determines the bullet's properties, and each bullet will be inscribed with that emotion
Hate bullets have an incendiary effect o impact
Fear bullets can cause paralysis in any tissue it hits
Love bullets cause no damage to the target and can heal or otherwise rejuvenate them
(Any other bullet types can be created by the author)
Notes:
[Bullet For My Valentine] Is not capable of firing it's own bullets, they must be used in some sort of firearm to activate their effects
Bullets created by this stand disappear 24 hours after creation, and only 13 rounds may exist at any given time, creation of additional rounds will cause rounds to disappear before their time expires, starting with the oldest
[Bullet For My Valentine] is capable of firing small calibur rounds from it's fingertips, but they lack any of the properties of it's created rounds, and deal damage similar to plastic bee bees
this is actually an old idea, but this has given me the chance to flesh it out more

>>30198330
So it can turn even a skateboard into a better vehicle? That is cool.
>>30199878
I like the idea of it having revolver cylinders, crosshairs and barrels in the body.
It depending on having to use an actual firearm to do damage is a good condition.
Over all a good stand.

>>30200533
Yep, it'll be the most tricked out and deadly skateboard in existence
Until the key is removed anyway
But imagine using it on somethind ridiculous like a unicycle or a single rollerblade
And i imagine that [BFMV] isn't particularly strong or durable
It's very dependant on attacking from a distance

>>30199878
Stand name: [Wolf In Sheep's Clothing]
User: ???

[Wolf In Sheep's Clothing] tales the form of a pack of wolves made of fire
These wolves can manifest from any flame within the user's sight
Once activated, they will relentlessly track a single target for up to 10 miles
[Wolf In Sheep's Clothing] can only track a single target per activation, and must be reactivated to change targets
Being made of fire, this stand is extremely susceptible to water, and can either be damaged or extinguished with enough of it
[Wolf In Sheep's Clothing], despite being a stand, is still fire, and will ignite anything flamable that it comes into contact with. Whether this includes the user is unknown, but they're most likely not dumb enough to try and find out

>>30197849
Emptying up the next few days of the story was done well, and so was the reaction to being told the upper limits of Stand power. [DRAGONFORCE] is an excellent Stand idea, and I notice that the protag Stands so far are pretty modern and abstract, which makes me interested to see them in combat - there's a challenge to using their internal rules against more straightforward punchghosts, and an even bigger one in matching them up against equally out-there powers. Twi's reasoning for not stabbing herself was also very rational, and it hadn't occurred to me until she explained herself.

That said, for an update focused on testing Stands and figuring out their limitations, I was expecting a more exciting development for [PLANISPHĖRE]. We've learned some stuff about its capabilities, but without a conflict to add dramatic tension to the discovery or anything unexpected popping up, it's all pretty clinical. Spike salvages this because he uncovers a big gem of new information for the reader and grows as a character in the process, but without him it felt like a way to get Anonymous up to speed with the audience about his Stand description.

>>30195159
>the op pic

Huh I like it.

>>30201304
I'm trying to write either a conflict or an interesting development into the story, so perhaps the next update will be a bit more fight-or-die than this one.

Something I've come to realize about Anon's Stando Adventure is that at it's heart it has become a story that examines what it is like to have a Stand as well as a way for me to pick apart and understand more about how Stands work. I'm trying to make it a little more actiony since I know that it's probably a little boring, so hopefully the coming updates will be able to hold your attention and enthrall you. [Planisphère] is going to develop quite a bit over the course of the story though, that's something I've been thinking about from the very beginning.

Thanks for the critique my man.

>>30201278
Tapped out on ideas for now, so have a regular bump

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FoS_Mlh4RoA

>Discuss the beauty of Jojo girls vs. MLP Girls

>>30201559
HAHA I'VE GOT A GREAT IDEA

Oh man, you guys are gonna like the next update.

Stand: ｢White Wedding｣
User: Lemon Hearts
Ability: Anything of even remote value the user loses possession of without giving to someone else will return to her within an hour of being lost.

>>30203102
Erina is best girl across any medium. Most pure and kind and loyal waifu.

>>30203102
Eqg girls would fit in a jojo story since they are all basket cases too.

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>>30195159

HOW THE DOES KING CRIMSON WORK!?

>>30205213
https://youtu.be/Jm2D7ohWos0

Classic

Dirty bumps done dirt cheap

The origin of stand cries
https://youtu.be/jBfpWUJPNXk

>What is your favorite battle cry?

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>>30207203
WANABEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

I love it Just for how angry and shrill it sounds, especially, stand cries to me is kinda like a stand user releasing stress, Like when you yell into pillow, except amplified X100. ｢Spice Girl｣ takes it to a whole new level, Not only making the cry sound like a shriek from hell, but also referencing the inspiration of the stand's name, which I don't think any other stand has done since spice girl. Also, It's one of my favorite stands ever, so that also comes into effect too. Sticky Finger's ARI ARI ARI comes in at a close second when it comes to stand cries tho.


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nM9qQJl3CfE

I love this fucking cry

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Bumping with some shitty MS Paint minimalism.

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>>30208368

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>>30208379

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>>30208393

>>30208356
>>30208361
>>30208368
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>>30208405
These are really fucking cool Dith, Like honestly all you would need to do to make them better is to color them hoes except for Erich's of course, that one had me thinking for a bit lol, good shit

>>30208473
woops forgot my fuggin name

ALSO

For anybody interested, I will be posting more tomorrow, Just wanted to give a heads up.

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>>30208361
Damn, just realized I could've made this say "MAKE YOUR OWN LUCK".

>>30208473
Thanks.

>>30207203
Giorno's MUDA is my favorite because it implies that shouting "USELESS!" is hereditary, but ARI ARI ARI is also awesome. DORA is a good progression from ORA, especially in that a person can do the RARARARARA out loud. All the ones in ERBA are also very tightly constructed, especially compared to my attempt with ｢Spinal Tap｣.

>>30208356
>>30208361
>>30208368
>>30208379
>>30208393
>>30208405
Instaboner and instasaved. These are all really good stuff Ditherer, and I'm hella honored that you'd make one of my Stand. You're the thread's #1 contributor and damn if that doesn't include being an artfag too.

This is honestly really inspiring, and I'm gonna use White Writing Overdrive to make a good update just for you.

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Here's a little something in return, Dith.

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>>30207203
WRYYYYYYYYY is my all time favourite... after Baoh's Barooooo of course https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gEV-0DCw-Wk

>>30208356
These
>>30208361
Are
>>30208368
The
>>30208379
Best
>>30208393
Thing
>>30208405
Ever! It just being jet black is the best

Honestly, I would pay money to use these as shirts.

>>30209138
So bright you have to wear shades.

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>Name characters from the thread and the show that would not get along at all.

>>30209138
I'm counting this as my first fanart.

>>30208789
>me artfag
Pff. Glad you like the designs, though. You don't know how lovely it is to read something like that. I'm gonna try to top myself again with CRBA 12 soon - there are four scenes left to write.

>>30210013
>shirts
You could probably get away with it on a custom site like Zazzle.

>>30210547
Erich would probably not be good friends with Celestia, although being trapped in Equestria would probably fuck him up in general.

Coco, Silver and both Diamonds would probably feel rubbed the wrong way if they met with their canon selves.

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>>30208479
I'm excited for it mane, give us some good green.

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>>30211504
>first fanart

I am content.

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>>30208368
These are pretty sweet, and its nice to see some art (however minimalistic) pop up in the thread.

>>30211504
>Erich would probably not be good friends with Celestia, although being trapped in Equestria would probably fuck him up in general.

Going >pic related, hell even replying to this is probably a spoiler, but w/e I've implied things already.

>>30207203
Hearing a stand yell it's own cry rather then the user really sends a shiver down my spine

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=JykfthBtCtU

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>>30211766
Oh, fuck.

>>30211627
>"What's your shirt mean, Anon?"
>"Uhhhh..."

And as you wish!

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Care Root’s Bizarre Adventure, Episode 12: The City is at War

>’Sunset, Sham Factory, front entrance. Just the two of you. Bring your gem or you won’t get in’.
>Be Silver Spoon.
>Last night Derpy and Care came back home and told you a long and strange story.
>This morning, to make up for it, they rescued you from going to school on time.
>You’re eating in a breakfast buffet, surrounded by the elderly and a wet mess of badly-scrambled eggs.
>A muted TV on the corner wall’s broadcasting a local report about the sun being sighted over Canterlot City at night, but you can’t read lips to figure out what the talking heads make of it.
>Care’s talking, poking at a piece of french toast.
>”We’ll need Trixie to drive. She’s an expert at getaways by now, and her Stand could help if we need to escape quickly.”
>Trixie, who’s almost slumped over the table, nods with closed eyes into her overcreamed coffee.
>”Silver, it’d be a big help if you could fix my windshield again.”
“Yeah, I can do that.”
>Seriously, why hasn’t this guy been pulled over yet?
>”And what about me?”
>Your other older sister asks across Derpy.
>Golden’s still banged-up, but she’s not wearing a cast any more.
>She joked with you that she’d been stealing nutrients from the other patients.
>”We… I, need you to keep the rest of your family safe and away from this factory.”
>”Except for my little sister, who’s going to walk straight inside.”
>She deadpans.
>He grimaces.
>”I can’t help that. If we don’t play along, things might get even uglier.”
>”And why, for the love of everything in heaven and Earth, should we play along with them? Can’t you just blast them to pieces and take what they have?”

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>>30212945
>He makes eye contact, and speaks clearly to match her rising voice.
>”I don’t know. As far as I can tell, everything we’ve fought up to now has been because of these three girls, and they seem ready for me. I don’t know what they’re capable of, what they do or don’t have, or even who’s on their side. I’m just trusting Twilight and Sunset to have a plan, and trying to work out what to do if everything goes wrong.”
>Golden leans back, arms crossed.
>”Then fine. But you’d better keep her safe.”
>He doesn’t even answer, to avoid cliche, but Derpy does.
>”After last night, you don’t need to say that any more.”
>She huffs, and grumbles inaudibly about missing English.
>You’re next to her and you can barely hear it.
>While they wake up, you take the opportunity to do some surreptitous texting under the table.
>Care’s nice, powerful too, but he’s not very street-smart.
>Diamond should be between classes just now, in a perfect place to answer you.
>You tell her you’re going to need a ride tonight.
>Then you stash it back in your backpack.
>And notice Golden’s eyes on you.
>You turn to her, and she raises an eyebrow between the two of you.
>You nod, minutely.
>She doesn’t react, except to look bored and rejoin the general conversation.

>Be Anonymous, making the rounds.
>The building is slightly winding, built almost like a labyrinth.
>It’s not the factory itself, more a set of conference rooms, service areas, offices, a cafeteria.
>The whole place is a mess, and it’s why you’re scouring your way through all of it.
>You glance askance at Aria.
”You sure those are gonna hold?”
>She pulls tighter with ｢Electra Heart｣, reinforcing the shadow-briars.
>”Nothing’s broken them before.”
“Even after last night?”
>You remember how she looked when she saw the sky light up with words, and a second sunrise.
>Plates of muscle tense in her bare arms.

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>>30212953
>”He won’t be here. I’ll deal with him if I have to.”
>You’ve been blocking out a path, piece by piece, from the entrance to the center.
>You don’t worry about one or two dead-ends, but for the main flow, you force it forward to the middle.
>Adagio’s preparing there.
>And Nata’s getting the hang of the rest of the area.
>She has a habit of running loose in any wide-open space, with her hair flying behind her like a flag.
>It’s been weeks since you last broke into a building with her...
>You send three of ｢Nowhere Man｣’s specters out to patrol the outer edge of the building and alert you to anything living.
>The last you send to keep track of your gemless sapphire.
>If this ends with her and Aria getting their gems back, you’ll have done your job.
>Maybe she’ll still visit you, or find a way to communicate from home.
>Or, more hopefully than you’re willing to jinx by saying out loud, she’ll take you with.
>Aria grips another thick patch of darkness and dapples it with thorns.

>Be Sugarcoat, in your own ghetto hideout.
>Indigo’s parents don’t really care who she has over, so she lets you use her living room.
>Everyone else is here.
>Which is, of course, a terrible idea.
>Even Lemon notices.
>”Shouldn’t we have someone guarding the, uh, storage… crate?”
>She really needs to work on using filler-words.
>Your leader answers.
>”She’s not going to go anywhere. She’s there of her own free will.”
>Yeah, just like the rest of you.
>This zoo of dispossessed student-competitors.
>You’ve been promised to have all of your missed days and failed assignments erased from your record.
>You’ll even have a nice future laid out for you at a school of your choosing.
>You don’t do it for that, of course.
>You’re not shallow.
>But all these actions aren’t done out of driven-snow selflessness, either.
>You’re not sure you’re allowed to stop fighting.

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>>30212970
>”Poor girl.”
>Sunny chimes in, mostly to herself.
>Don’t people understand the purpose of speaking out loud?
>You latch on to what they’re not saying.
“So this is it, then? Our big climax?”
>Flash nods, hesitantly.
>”If we play our cards right. The Dazzlings are making their play tonight, and we’ve all got to be ready.”
>He types at his phone for a moment, and all five of you receive a time and place.
>’Sunset, Sham Factory.’
>”Isn’t that abandoned?”
>Lemon.
>Flash answers.
>”As far as I can tell. But it’s not defunct yet. We’re working on a floor plan, but we haven't figured an entrance.”
>”Pff. We’ll just go in through the front!”
>Indigo calls from the kitchen, where she’s scarfing down something unhealthy.
>Everyone looks at each other with varying degrees of exasperation.


>Be Sweetie Belle.
”This won’t be touched by ｢Timbuk Three｣.”
>｢Steam Powered Giraffe｣ smashes into the focal point between the three of you.
>The others are getting tired by now, but it’s still more powerful than any one of you alone.
>You spent most of the early morning at the school doing this.
>It’s not any more fun now that you’ve changed locales.
>Or that you’ve barred some people from noticing your hiding spots for the day.
>Apple Bloom consults the list.
>”This won’t be touched by ｢Tin Cup Chalice｣.”
>With part of your soul and part of theirs, your Stand shunts away another possibility.
>Scootaloo takes her turn.
>”This won’t be touched by ｢Year Without Rain｣.”
>Smash.
>You’re narrowing it down, on orders, to only the Stands you can absolutely trust.
>Even people who have no reason to show up today are being blacklisted from this arrow for the next twenty-four hours.
>This is the emergency measure.
>If the arrow disappears early, you know you’re in the clear, and you need to get out.
>If it doesn’t, you have your orders.
>You crack your knuckles and call out the next name.

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>>30212985
>At sunset, be Derpy.
>You took the day off with Care, and it didn’t make you feel much better.
>Well, of course, being around him makes you feel something you can’t quite describe.
>You have a cord in your chest that pulls you towards him.
>But… you didn’t have much to say.
>You’re both holding your breath.
>After this, after tonight, it’ll probably be different.
>You worry he’ll be haunted by all of the fighting.
>The way he tells you he burned off a girl’s arm, when the two of you are alone and not as love-drunk.
>The worry about this ｢Boulevard of Broken Dreams｣.
>Whatever happened last time, the Rainbooms won out.
>If you place yourselves on their side, it should all go the same way.
>Right?
>｢Spinal Tap｣ flies alongside his newly-fixed car and hands you the gem through his backseat window.
>You’re sharing the back while Trixie drives, and Care looks at it.
>Voila.
>You hand it over to him, and he shoves it awkwardly into his pocket.
>No use leaving it out in the open.
>Then, with surprising force, he pulls you into an embrace.
>His head resting against your neck tickles a little, but you hold stil.
>He’s starting to sweat, even in the cold.
>You wrap an arm around him and rub up and down his spine.
“We’ll make it through.”
>He doesn’t let go for a couple of minutes.
>When he does, his face doesn’t look much better, but his eyes are clear.
>You smile at him, hoping to draw out a smile of his own.
>But Trixie’s voice comes from the front.
>”We’re just about there.”

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>>30212996
>Be Anonymous.
>Aria fumes.
>”They only have one of the gems. They didn’t reclaim the other one.”
>You’re about to ask whose it is when she answers.
>”Sonata’s, obviously. Mine’s just now arriving. And HE has it.”
>Well, at least there’s room for a happy ending after all.
>Ari looks ready to rip something open with her teeth.
>Normally you might poke at her.
>At this moment, you take a couple steps away on weak mammalian instinct.
“Who?”
>You ask, and then realize it’s a stupid question.
>If you were in any doubt, her nails gripping into your shoulders would remedy it.
>”The lightbringer!”
>Even though she didn’t raise it, her voice echoes down the dim corridors in three directions, screeching with distance.
>Well, fuck.
“M-maybe Adagio knows what she’s doing.”
>”Of course she does! She just didn’t think it was important to tell me!”
>She lets go of you to throw her hands up in the air.
>Then, without a beat, she begins working more furiously with ｢Electra Heart｣.

>Be Care Root.
>Trixie parks a little ways away, and you get out.
>She had to drive through a gate and into an oversized parking lot, toward the very back.
>You and Derpy can see the front by the person standing there.
>She’s familiar, but you’ve never spoken to her.
>Light blue hair, slightly dirty, and extremely light lavender skin.
>The dead eyes are new.
>She’s brainwashed, but you can’t hear it in her slightly nasally voice.
>”Show me your gem.”
>You put a hand in your pocket, and debate whether to take it out or not.
>After all, they might be able to take it, or teleport it, or who knows what.
>But...
>If you can’t put this foot forward, you aren’t going to go anywhere!
>You have to take this risk to get any further in!
>Come on!
>You produce it and let her see, and then swiftly pocket it again.
>She doesn’t move for a moment, and then she reaches out for you and Derpy.

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>>30213010
>You take a half-step back, and then hold still.
>｢Timbuk Three｣ creeps at the edge of your being, ready to pop out.
>”｢Glamorous｣.”
>Suddenly, you can see a glowing light in Derpy’s stomach, yellow.
>And a blue one in your own.
>Through the towering brick, you can see the faint sparks of two others, red and purple.
>Twilight and Sunset, probably.
>They’re here.
>You feel some comfort knowing that you haven’t walked into a trap.
>Knock on wood.
>”Head straight down until you meet them.”
>The door-guard steps out of the way, swinging a thick metal door inward for the two of you.
>You both walk down a long hallway.
>There’s weak light, concrete walls and flooring, doors here and there shrouded in darkness.
>You feel like you’re stepping down the Industrial Revolution’s esophagus.
>Almost everything around here is dead silent, except for the light-flicker.
>And, long before you’ve thought of anything to say or do, you’ve reached the open door at the very end of this snaking tunnel.
>Through it shines full-on electric light, bright enough to burn your eyes from around the bend.
>You can still see the lights with your eyes closed, and you head through the doorway.
>Inside, there’s a conference room.
>Really, it’s more like a lounge or a break room, with a water-cooler shoved in one corner.
>But the center is dominated by a giant rectangular table.
>On the far head, right in front of the only other exit, she looks at you.
>Orange hair, the same outfit as before, down to the newly-reattached pendant.
>Those eyes that pierced you, a head resting on the hand that touched you.
>You thought once that it might be your only human contact before you died.
>And, quite possibly, you were correct.
>Adagio Dazzle smirks at you.
>”Well, look who’s here.”
>She waves to the chairs set around the table.
>”Have a seat. We were just making introductions.”

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>>30213025
>On the left side of the table, you see Sunset and Twilight, and someone behind them.
>Sunset’s frowning, but steady, while Twilight looks uneasy.
>The third person looks like the door-guard with more elaborate hair, and she stands silently behind them like the third point of a triangle.
>You sit parallel to them on the right, with Derpy sitting to your left.
>You’re shielding her, you suppose.
>Adagio waits.
>”Now, I can understand why Sunset Shimmer and her friend might want to take my sisters’ gemstones, but I don’t know why you would do it. What’s your final goal, Care Root?”
>You take a deep breath and scan the room for funny business.
>Nothing.
>Derpy’s hand squeezes your knee from under the table.
”I want to spend as much of my future as possible with Dernier Piege.”
>She looks mock-sympathetic.
>”Well, what’s stopping you?”
>You growl.
”The people you’ve been sending after me.”
>Now she tries on mild shock.
>As if she wants to hold up a big sign that says “Moi?”
>”I haven’t lifted a finger to hurt you, Care Root. I wouldn’t even have been able to if I wanted. The only time I’ve tried to talk to you, you ran away from me.”
>Derpy squeezes harder.
>”Yeah, because probably you were going to use him to do something awful to somebody!”
>Sunset snaps from across the table.
>”I’ll get to you in a moment. But first things first, I want to make it clear that I haven’t made any attempt to hurt you. All I’m interested in is taking back my property and going back to where I came from. That shouldn’t sound too awful, surely?”
>Derpy picks up beside you.
>”Why did you want to talk to him?”
>Adagio splays her hands.
>”I thought he could help. I can sense Equestrian magic, and he’s got it in droves.”
>”You mean his Stand?”
>”That’s right. If I’d known he was going to blind me, I would’ve gone about it more subtly.”
>Derpy frowns, and you pick up.

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>>30213037
”What’s different from when you had all three gems before?”
>She stifles a laugh.
>”All of this delicious conflict, of course! We haven’t had an opportunity to gain power like this since our last war. Not to mention Sunset Shimmer and Princess Twilight and the rest of you are all dripping with Equestrian magic. It’s only fair we should use a little of it, since it was probably helped along by our gems to begin with.”
>”She’s not a Princess.”
>Sunset gets everyone’s attention.
>”Hm?”
>”She’s this world’s Twilight Sparkle, not any other’s. Whoever you’re getting your information from, they don’t know anything about the last couple months at Canterlot High.”
>Adagio looks smug as ever, but leans forward a little.
>”Enlighten me.”
>”The only portal to Equestria is gone. It was destroyed during the Friendship Games.”
>Twilight speaks.
>”I-I turned into a monster, and almost destroyed the barrier between the two universes. Now, nobody can go from one to the other.”
>She... didn’t mention that earlier.
>Adagio shifts, considering.
>”And I suppose that’s your explanation for where all of these nifty little abilities came from?”
>Twilight stops, and then nods.
>A tight grin over tangerine skin.
>”That sounds very logical. Maybe you could explain something else to me, then.”
>The smile disappears instantly.
>”What’s the arrow for?”

>Be Trixie.
>You’ve stopped crouching into your seat, which you’ve had to readjust several times now.
>It’s clear that Flitter’s not going to attack you.
>She was on your shortlist, but she never seemed interested in being a team player.
>Just as well.
>She doesn’t keep your attention for long, because a few minutes after Care and Derpy head in, two more cars have the time to arrive.
>The first parks away from you, in the same aisle.
>You don’t recognize it.
>It occupies your attention, but you can’t see inside from where you’re sitting.

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>>30213062
>And, just now, a car which stops just in front of the door.
>Blue, a little big to be fashionable - you don’t know much about cars.
>Flitter doesn’t move, but out pile six people.
>Even from here you can see them.
>Trouble.
>You sink back into your seat and start mapping out the way you came in your mind.
>You should’ve known, but...
>You peek over the dashboard to get a better look at them.
>There are two you fought with personally.
>No sign of Snips or Snails, but the sixth person there is...
>Flash Sentry?!
>They stand in front of Flitter, talking animatedly with each other.
>Finally the yellow one with pink hair raises her hand, and steps closer.
>A fast black fist arcs from over her shoulder.
>It fells her with a single hook.
>They all, collectively, look down at the slumped body.
>And then they file inside.

>Be Care.
>”Arrow?”
>Sunset asks.
>Adagio looks at her like she’s telling a transparent lie.
>”The source of magical energy I can feel from here? The one which is only second in intensity to Care here? Are you really going to pretend you don’t know about the epicenter of your school’s magic surge?”
>Her eyebrow could hit the ceiling.
>Neither Sunset or Twilight answer in words.
>They just look confused.
>Then Adagio’s breath hitches, and she sits up straighter.
>The lights, which you were just getting used to, flicker.
>She growls at the edge of hearing.
>”It looks like we have an intruder.”
>You turn around, but the door’s still closed.
>”Don’t worry, we have things taken care of. I wouldn’t try to leave if I were you.”
>You look back to her.
“Why not?”
>”Because my sister Aria has used her Stand to barricade us inside here.”
>When she sees the look on your face, she puts her hands up and looks at you with wide violet eyes.
>”What? If anyone has a right to be upset here, it should be me. I’m outnumbered four to one!”

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>>30213083
>Something touches your hand.
>Derpy.
>You calm down a little, and sit again.
>Alright, so things are starting to go wrong...
>What’s important hasn’t changed.
“Is that what you’re doing?”
>She stares at you, as challenging as quizzical.
>Sunset sends you positive vibes in your periphery.
>Her eyes command your vision if you look too long.
“You want to keep us contained in a small area so you can-”
>”-turn the four of you against each other? No.”
>She leans back and kicks her feet up.
>They have the same spiked spurs as before.
>”To be honest with you, I could wait for a few more decades until the rest of you die of something, if I wanted to get my sisters their gems back the easy way. I’m only putting in this effort because I’m curious, and there’s an opportunity to go back to Equestria in the cards.”
>She turns to Sunset and raises her voice, as if she’s further away.
>”That is why you want to collect the three of them, isn’t it? Or is it just for power?”
>Twilight continues to look insecure, and Sunset answer for both of them.
>”It’s to keep you from having them. Just from seeing you trying to turn us against each other in this room, I don’t want to imagine how much damage you could do if you unlocked your full power.”
>When Adagio smiles, she does it with her whole face, but when she frowns it’s concentrated and snarling.
>There’s certainly something unworldly about her that draws in your attention.
>If you hadn’t met someone like Derpy, her gravity might even have felt like love.
>Her composure returns.
>”Really? And why are you so worried about whether Care here is on your side, if you’re so certain you’ve got things in hand?”

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>>30213091
>”Because turning people against each other is what you’re best at, and you nearly destroyed our school trying to take over the world. Everyone you meet is just a means to an end! And yes!”
>She gestures at you.
>”Care could take all of the gems here and use them to create a new sun, if he wanted to! But it would destroy his future!”
>...
>Adagio’s face is a mask.
>”Is that a fact.”
>”Yes! You heard him say it himself, he just wants to have his happy ending! The fewer times he has to use his power, the better!”
>...
>You look at Derpy, and worry dominates her.
>The room is silent.
>”What? Am I wrong?”
”...I never told you how ｢Timbuk Three｣ works.”

>Be Indigo Zap.
>It’s too dark in here, but with Sour at the front you’re not worried.
>So long as you don’t hear any singing, things should be okay.
>Lemon tries to investigate one of the doors along this huge hall, and then yanks her hand back.
>It’s bleeding.
>You lean in to investigate, and you can make out sharp spikes, outined in a spatter of blood.
>It’s like a rosebush or something.
>The light glints off of it all along the hallway.
>You’re about to mention this when you notice the rest of the group’s stopped.
>There are two people coming down the hallway for you.
>The taller of the two’s wearing dark clothes, and you can only make out an outline.
>But the gunshot’s loud and clear.
>Sour’s in the front, and ｢Message Man｣ saves the bullet being fired at the same time you hear the gunshot.
>The further figure stays back, but the purple Dazzling steps forward.
>Sour rushes for her automatically.
>｢Message Man｣ appears for a moment, firing the bullet straight for her.
>A five-second victory!
>It hits her in the stomach, she staggers!
>But that’s all.
>Like some kind of zombie, she comes closer.

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>>30213114
>Sugar and Sun make the eminently wise move to keep their asses out of the line of fire.
>She comes close to Sour with almost no expression, raising a hand toward her face.
>Then ｢Message Man｣ swats at her twice, using up those two saved punches.
>They kick up dust with their sheer speed.
>Yeah, direct hits!
>Suck it!
>Your opponent gets knocked back by the recoil, stumbling.
>But then Sour’s lifted off of the ground, floating for a moment.
>The Dazzling spins, and you see the thick black cord in her fist.
>It’s coming out of Sour’s mouth.
>You run for her, but something grabs your leg.
>You trip, and fall correctly, but it still doesn’t move.
>By the sound of struggle behind you, something grips Sugar and Sun behind you.
>Above you, the enemy swings your teammate around her like a ragdoll.
>You spin the rest of your body around until you’re close to crabwalking.
>On your ankle, there’s a ghost.
>No, seriously, a literal ghost.
>And behind you, two more are choking your friends.
>Sun and Sugar are grabbing at their throats, through the clear wispy biceps.
>｢Lemon Demon｣ smashes through Sugar’s, and... it actually dissipates.
>But Sour comes crashing into all three of them.
>Flash ducks it, but not the bullet that catches him in the leg.
>He winces, and you switch legs with him before the pain sets in.
>The ghost loses its grip when you switch, and you kick.
>It works!
>Meanwhile, Lemon’s caught Sour, and slowed down her knockback.
>She has to drop her as soon as she stops moving, though.
>｢Lemon Demon｣ makes short work of the next ghost, but fuck she’s right on top of you.
>The purple bitch reaches into the wall and pulls something out of the darkness.
>It’s a knife.
>She looks at you with stone cold measuring eyes.
>And then she rears it back, giving you your opening.

>>30213124
>You’re not in a position to walk.
>You switch hands with Lemon and make a fist.
>Blood sprays into her eyes, and she staggers back.
>You wish this weren’t such a clusterfuck.
>Sunny rushes over to Flash, keeping low, and you switch back his leg.
>He winces and grabs at it, but ｢Royals｣ is already activated.
>Everyone’s bouncing back!
>You pump a fist at them.
“Yeah, Shadowbolts! Let’s give ‘em what for!”
>”Worry about fighting!”
>Sugarcoat says, as she activates the flashlight on her camera.
>Above you, another sword crumbles into the air.
>This girl gets back on her feet fast, huh?
>Well, you’re not going to be shown up by an out-of-towner!
>You hop to your feet in one swift motion, reaching for her hand.
“｢Nails for Breakfast｣!”
>You shout your Stand name over another gunshot, this one going wild.
>Lemon runs past you at the long-distance fighter.
>Then the woman in front of you moves.
>She doesn’t jump out of the way, or dodge, or turn.
>She bends.
>She does the fucking limbo without even bending her legs.
>Your arm goes wild through the air.
>You keep your momentum and hop straight forward with both feet.
>Just touch this chick’s hand and you’ve got her over a barrel!
>Sugarcoat’s got her light on your back.
>And your enemy looks up at you, bored, from where her hair’s spread out on the concrete.
>And then, like lightning, she puts her hands underneath her head.
>She’s not.
>Her muscles stretch as she presses down.
>Bullshit.
>And she executes a handstand, grabbing your body between her calves.
>You stay in the air.
>And then she spins, like it’s no harder than throwing Sour.
>You ignore the dizzy blur and focus.
>You grab onto her ankles and try to crack them in the wrong direction.
>But it’s like trying to snap a statue with your bare hands.

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>>30213134
>You just hold on, even when she lets go, swinging around one leg to decide your landing.
>Her other foot jabs you in the ribs like a truck backing up.
>But before she can land another hit, a black fist smashes into her leg.
>｢Message Man｣!
>It knocks her back, and she backflips.
>The world tumbles around you, and then she’s standing on you.
>Sour goes for another hit, and then trips.
>There’s a black rope stretched around her ankle.
>Sugarcoat sees it immediately, and shines her light.
>But it doesn’t go away.
>She notices too late that the darkness stretches backwards.
>Back to the shadow on the dark side of her phone.
>The enemy snaps her hand backwards as the curve completes itself in her palm.
>The phone flies out of Sugar’s hand, arcs and lands.
>She grips it, and it crumbles in her hand.
>Then she drops it, and steps off of you towards Sun and Flash.

>Be Trixie.
>Nothing’s happened that you can see.
>You assume that if it’s a Stand conflict, you’ll be able to see it.
>Although, it might be that they’re all there to team up against Care!
>But if they’re there for some reason and you burst in, you might jeopardize it all.
>Care can handle himself, can’t he?
>He could handle anything you can, you’re almost certain.
>But what if this is some sneak ploy?
>What if he even knows about it?
>Two knocks on the passenger window, and you shriek.
>The only reason you don’t fall out of your seat is that it’s physically impossible.
>｢Abracadabra｣ immediately phases the interloper twenty feet from your car.
>Only then do you recognize the face.
>Golden crosses her arms and looks irritated with you.
>You relax your vicegrip on the steering wheel and stare back at her.
>She motions at you, hurry up!
>So you get out of the car.

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>>30213142
>”We’re going in there after them.”
“Why are you here?”
>”I had to keep Silver safe.”
>She hooks a thumb at the car you didn’t recognize.
>Circling around it is a black, armored-looking bird.
>In the backseat, arms folded, are Silver and her friend, Diamond.
>”Now come on. If things aren’t working out how we want them to, they’re working out the way someone else does, and that’s no good for us! Make us a path!”
>Having said that, she turns and heads for the entrance at a brisk run.
“W-wait!”
>You’re not used to having your melodrama matched, but you run after her.


>Be Derpy.
>Sunset shifts in her chair.
>”Yes you did! You must have, or maybe one of your friends mentioned it. How else would I know about it?”
>Care thinks, hard.
>Did you ever mention it?
>No, you couldn’t have, no one would ever ask you something like that straight out.
>He only started to reveal it to you when it was life and death...
>He shakes his head.
>”No. I don’t believe that.”
>Sunset scoffs.
>”Well, I didn’t get it by reading your mind, or-”
>”Magic?”
>Adagio asks.
>Sunset grits her teeth, and the siren looks like she holds all the cards.
>”You see how she’s trying to make us work against each other?”
>”Yes, I’m just incorrigible, aren’t I? Not as if it matters. Do you really think you could stop me from taking your gems if I really wanted to?”
>Adagio relaxes some more.
>Care stirs.
>”I need answers, Sunset.”
>”Now’s really not the best time, Care. I’m sure I can explain it all when we’re out of here.”
>”After she’s taken your gem, I’m sure.”
>Sunset stands up.
>”That’s enough!”
>She turns to Care, her eyes pleading for sanity.
>”Whatever happens, we have to make sure that this power doesn’t fall into your hands. Apart from that, we can destroy them, hide them, anything. So long as they don’t get to use them to take over the world!”

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>>30213153
>Twilight sinks into her chair, quiet.
>This isn’t her or your fight, really.
>But then Sunset does something that wipes the smirk off of Adagio’s face.
>She takes a red stone out of her pocket and tosses it across the table.
>”Here. You can give it back when you’re convinced I’m telling you the truth.”
>Care grabs it, weighing it in his mind.
“I think she means it.”
>You hope that’s helpful.
>And if anything goes wrong...
>None of ｢Spinal Tap｣’s gifts have been broken yet.
>And you still remember how to use them.
>You’re still okay.
>Care nods, and stands up himself.
>”I’m only in this for my friends, and my future. If you weren’t lying about being able to wait, then you can hold on until all of us are gone.”
>Adagio sneers, and finally takes her legs off the table.
>”And do you think you’re going to take my gem that easily?”
>｢Timbuk Three｣ appears behind him.
>”Yes.”
>She leans in, looking close to angry, eyes slitted.
>”You’d have to beat me into the ground to do that. You don’t have the nerve.”
>It charges up, and he points at her.
>”Don’t I?”
>Sunset watches tensely from across the table.
>You know you could stop him if you really wanted to, but…
>Well, you don’t.
>This person, who sent Fido after you with new powers, who’s hunted Trixie and you for the sake of collecting some silly magical rocks, who’s threatened your entire future, deserves to go down.
>She puts her arms behind her head, submerging them in her hair.
>”No, you don’t. I’ve seen violent people. Soldiers, criminals, tacticians. You don’t have that talent.”
>And he fires a laser into her shoulder.
>It hits, and she stumbles back, falling backwards in her chair.
>A small barrage of light-fists pummels into her before it can hit the ground.
>The scuffs and bruises stand out against her clear skin.
>And then she’s unconscious.
>He tries to pull her gem off with his Stand, but…
>It doesn’t budge.

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>>30213165
>Care exhales, and ｢Timbuk Three｣ falls back into him.
>Then he makes his way around the table.
>You follow him a few feet behind, and even Twilight’s stood up to get a better look.
>He reaches down for the gem, and suddenly all of the bruises disappear.
>They fade into...
>Orange hair?
>Adagio’s eyes open, and she gives another Cheshire smirk.
>And her hand grabs Care’s, and twists.
>As he cries out, she gets to her feet, still holding him by it.
>”You did have the nerve. I’m impressed. Too bad I’m indestructible.”
>And with two fast jabbing motions, she twists him and snatches the gem from his hand.
>A look of complete triumph flashes across her face.
>And then the gem flies out of her hand like it’s been greased and shot from a gun.
>And it clatters back onto the table.
>You snap something in your pocket and shout.
“｢Spinal Tap｣!”
>And then you blow her into the wall.

>Be Indigo.
>The purple girl motions with one hand, and the thorns part around the nearest door.
>Then, with a single, smooth motion, she completes the step by kicking Sunny through it.
>They snap back into place while Flash bolts down the hall.
>Down the hall you can see Lemon fending off more ghosts.
>You rush for the shadow girl before she can do anything else, grabbing her around the waist.
>Suplex, baby!
>Suplex!
>You lift, and her heel stabs into your stomach.
>She turns in time to see Sour, and pulls the thorns in again, blocking the whole hallway.
>Satisfied, she turns towards Lemon.
>”｢Electra-”
>A light breaks through the thorns.
>You almost expect it to be another phone, but it comes from ｢Message Man｣!
>Sour saved the light from the phone when it passed over her!
>Instead of going for a straight one-two combo, her Stand grabs the Dazzling by the throat and lifts her clean off the ground.
>You whistle.
“Damn, we good.”
>You pull out your own phone, hit the flashlight and throw it to Sugar.
>And then you run to Lemon.

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>>30213169
>She needs to go in with Flash, that was the plan.
>He’s already mostly there, by the sound of his footsteps.
>When you get a few feet closer, you can make out the gun knocked onto the ground.
>An endless regenerating stream of ghosts pops up behind the man as he tries to grapple her.
>You don’t recognize him, but he’s green and wearing a suit like this is a business meeting.
>Her constant attacks are the only thing keeping him still.
>Fuck, you swapped hands back with her at some point during all of this excitement.
“What’s up, Lemon?”
>”These things are Stands! You can only touch them with one of your own!”
>Finally!
“Then it’s a good thing my Stand’s wherever I want it to be! ｢Nails for Breakfast｣!”
>You switch hands with her again, this time your left.
>Your left hook’s a little rusty, but it’ll have to do!
>As your borrowed knuckles sweep through the ghosts, Lemon breaks and heads away.
>You take over her post, and the green guy shouts.
>”｢NOWHERE MAN｣!”
>Nothing to it!
>While he’s preparing whatever he’s going to do next, you lunge for his hand.
>And you actually get it!
>Fuck yeah!
>He shoves you awkwardly off of him, and you rip the syringe out of your pocket.
>This is going to fuck him up six ways to S-
>Something cold and slimy crawls through the skin of your back and into your ribcage.
>A hand squeezes your heart.
>You try to spin around to get a better fix, but it doesn’t let you.
>As the green man walks down the hallway toward his ally, another lifts up his gun from the ground.
>You fidget with the syringe, turning it towards your arm.
>Sugarcoat stares at you, helplessly, close to bug-eyed.
>You feel like you just can’t get enough air in, no matter how you breathe.
>You thrash as best as you can, more like wiggle.
>Come on!
>You’re too cool to go down like this!

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>>30213171
>Ghost #2 raises the gun to your forehead.
>From this close up, it looks like a pirate.
>You’re cold, now.
>Too cold.
>The syringe falls out of your hand.
>You c-can switch backs with him, hearts, maybe then you can-
>Your Stand is there, but it doesn’t answer.
>Its only pull isn’t towards him at all.
>Wh-
>It pulls the trigger.

>Be Lemon Zest.
>There was just another gunshot, but you don’t have time to think about it.
>You rush with Flash, pulling ahead.
>And then stop at the end of the hallway, where there’s a light under the door.
>And a set of jet-black brambles in between.
>Flash reaches you, and sees them too.
“If you try to clear them, my Stand can-”
>He shakes his head as he catches his breath, and then raises both arms.
>He makes matching finger pistols and aligns them into two corners of a square.
>Then, he uses his voice.
>”｢Beat Street｣.”
>A vision of a pulsing highway running along underneath of them, and they’re suddenly gone in a current of high-velocity asphalt.
>Whoever owns this hallway will have them... integrated... into their history.
>It’s usually not fatal, and anyway it’s probably someone who buys up old properties so no one else can use them.
>Alright, this is your chance!
>You run ahead and throw open the door.
>Flash treads behind you, dusting himself off, getting ready.
>You kick off from it, and focus on grabbing the gems.
>Everyone in the rooms wants all three of them, so it’s not difficult.
>One’s just on the table, and you leap on top of it, glimpsing the surprise in most of the room.
>You even recognize Derpy, the girl whose sister conked you on the head.
>She has that fuck-off powerful Stand floating next to her, and it throws a fist at you..
>You jump over it and towards the gem in the corner, attached to the siren monster.
>She’s standing up from the floor she’s been thrown to, shaky while she’s at it, and you lunge.

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>>30213176
>As all eyes turn to you ｢Lemon Demon｣ propels you even further, and you rip it off of her neck!
>Where’s the third one?
>Derpy’s relented from her attack, but the third one’s not in plain sight anywhere.
>｢Lemon Demon｣ lights up around you, and you see its yellow-green aura in his pocket.
>He’s distracted with grabbing at his own wrist, clenching his teeth.
>Everyone else is watching as Flash enters the room.
>It’s about the best opportunity you could ask for!
>You sprint to close the distance.
>｢Spinal Tap｣ smashes against your Stand, and you hold it off, sacrificing your stamina.
>You’re only a couple of feet away!
>And then his arm lights up beneath the surface, like holding a camping flashlight against your fingers to see the bones.
>And it snaps like teeth chipping.
>He breathes heavily, and the light dies down.
>”That’s better.”
>And then his Stand kicks you in the stomach.
>You roll with it, sliding backwards and heading for Flash.
>A sultry voice speaks, two inches from your ear.
>”｢Gold Guns Girls｣.”
>And then one of the gems explodes in your hands.

>”Ready?”
“Ready.”
>Be Diamond Tiara.
>You didn’t tell your father you were going here with Silver tonight.
>You’re not even worried about regretting that, because your phone’s off.
>And you’ve got a more in-your-face problem to worry over just now.
>”Set…”
>Golden didn’t talk much, just made sure you both knew she’d string you up if you went inside.
>But that hasn’t stopped Silver from vaporizing the child-locks on both doors.
>You brace yourself on your side as the bird swings by overhead.
>You absolutely loathe birds.
>”Go!”
>You fling your door open and run outside, summoning ｢Pink｣.
>Your Stand smashes the bird, cracking some of the disgusting black gooey stuff on it, and it’s already after you.
>You turn around the front as it dives for you.

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>>30213184
>｢Pink｣ punches it in the beak, and it’s knocked back but not destroyed.
>You can feel your own lack of experience in its punches.
>If you could pull up your Stand at home or school without worrying about it becoming a federal issue, you might’ve been able to utilize your own strength by now.
>But you’re not doing too bad!
>You slide over the hood and land on your feet.
>Silver throws her door open, bolting away while you keep the attention on yourself.
>And then, with a final motion, you grab her door and jump inside, slamming it behind you.
>The bird hovers, but stays focused on you
>She’s safe.
>But it swoops around to the door you left open.
>You rush over towards it, across the seat.
>You have no doubt that Golden thinks it’s okay to peck out your eyeballs to save your life.
>But it swoops before you can get there, and then it’s in the car with you.
>As it flaps in the tight space and rakes it supernaturally-sharpened claws for you, you smile.
“｢Pink｣!”
>You erase almost the entire journey, up until you first jumped out.
>And then, spinning on the spot, you slam the door shut on the bird, still trapped inside.
>You feel a sense of pride at doing something no one else could.
“Stupid bird. Did you think you could overcome the power of a truly skilled Stand user?”
>You realize it’s not even looking at you, and stop dignifying it with gloating.
>And then you notice Silver’s already waving at you from the door.
>You recall your Stand, shake off the latent sore-winnerhood, and head after her.

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>>30213194
>SHIT.
>FUCK!
>Be Sour Sweet.
>Sugarcoat’s just fainted next to you, dropping the phone.
>Indigo’s brains have been blown out on the fucking wall and you’re hyperventilating.
>Your blood’s like an army of ants crawling through your arms.
>｢Message Man｣ squeezes, but the bitch won’t fucking die!
>It’s like she’s made out of concrete!
>Except your Stand can CRUSH concrete!
>She throws a limp arm back forty-five degrees and pulls a whip out of the darkness.
>You save the impact before it hits you, and your Stand rips it away from her with its free hand.
>The other guy’s coming, getting his gun back from his Stand.
>He’s strolling toward you like he’s hot shit, lining up a shot.
>Fuck that.
>The Dazzling produces a sword from the darkness and swings it for you.
>You save it on reflex, and then spin around.
>｢Message Man｣ throws her right at tall, green and pretentious.
>That’s karma, bitch!
>You wait forever for the glorious moment of impact.
>But it never comes.
>She seems frozen in the air, peeved and catching her breath.
>Looking closer in the shadow, you see his Stand, two of them, supporting her.
>They duck out of the way as he fires at you.
>｢Message Man｣ catches it between its thumb and forefinger.
>Then it throws it back, as hard as you can manage.
>It might actually penetrate the skin at that speed, but it doesn’t matter.
>All that’s important is that the chickenshit thinks it’ll hurt him, so he ducks out of the way.
>And then you run.
>Not away, not to try to wake up Sugarcoat, not to get to the exit and escape.
>Right towards them.
>You leap over the Equestrian, who swings for you with something you can’t care about right now.
>You stop holding back the whip impacting you, and it jumps to the present, smacking into your shoulder in mid-air.
>And forcing you to change trajectory.

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>>30213200
>You fall correctly and keep running, straight to Indigo.
>And you feel like you’re going to puke.
>She was such a sweetheart...
>You try not to look at her face, and instead scan the floor around her.
>Yes, there!
>A simple motion, and then another, and then-
>Shit.
>You feel your center of gravity being moved to another person.
>She grabs you, just with a hand, and spins you around.
>And then she raises you up, choking, a good foot off of the ground.
>The man levels his gun at you, but there’s suddenly noise down the hallway.
>”abracadabra!”
>Your two enemies look at each other.
>You’re running out of oxygen.
>She talks.
>”Look into it. I’ll finish things up here.”
>She’s sending him away!
>He nods, and heads down the way you came.
>Awesome.
>That’s what Indigo would say right now, probably.
>And she turns back to you.
>Her grip is steady, and she makes no special movements.
>If you tried to kick, an impulse you’re suppressing, it would make no difference.
>You’re almost certain that this girl, this whatever she is, is unkillable.
>With the last coughing dredges in your lungs, you summon your Stand.
“Mmmm. ｢Message Man｣.”
>It squeaks coming out, and your Stand doesn’t appear.
>But one of your slots burns out.
>And your hand slams Indigo’s syringe into her outstretched arm at full force.
>With your Stand to drive it in, it punctures the skin.
>And then everything nasty she had ready is in this fucker’s system.
>She keeps holding onto you, and your vision swims.
>You’re laughing silently as she tears it out.
>She’s bleeding.
>Victorious, you go under.

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>>30213208
>Be Care.
>A third party just entered, or a fourth if you want to be technical about it.
>One of them tried to grab your gem, and several seconds later another of them exploded on her.
>She’s missing most of her forearm, and she’s passed out.
>When you see everyone else staring, you cauterize the wound with a brief flash of heat.
>Adagio surveys all of this with mute amusement.
>”Flash Sentry, I remember you from the Battle of the Bands. Loved your work. I have to wonder who you’re working for now. Or maybe I shouldn’t wonder at all, since there’s only one duo here that you haven’t attacked yet.”
>Twilight looks as shocked as Derpy.
>”I’m just here to make sure that this ends tonight. My team and I have been trying to wrap this up for weeks, and now we can finally finish. And I don’t appreciate what you just did to my friend.”
>The way he says “don’t appreciate” is concentrated, threatening.
>It’s slightly undermined by the fact that he’s not looking at her, checking his watch.
>Or something glowing on his wrist, at any rate.
>Team?
>Fuck, the girl with the neon hair you just saved from bleeding out.
>Shadowbolts.
>”It’s a shame that you couldn’t anticipate my Stand, then. If I were a CHS student, you’d probably be able to recite it to me backwards.”
>She strides over to the scrapper and pulls the remaining gem out of her hand.
>”｢Gold Guns Girls｣ scuplts matter into what people desire most, without changing its properties too much. It took me a while to hunt down some C4, but it’s done the trick admirably. Although I did hope to get a more serious casualty.”
>A nod, and Cloudchaser jogs out of the room.
>Then she holds up the gem, and it flies out of her fingers and back onto the table.
>At the same time, Flash comments.
>”It’s beneath her feet, level to the ground.”

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>>30213218
>Adagio startles, then regains herself.
>”You’ve planned this out pretty well, Shimmer. But if Cloudchaser gets too far away, you won’t be going anywhere very quickly.”
>Sunset looks at her, and stands up.
>”I don’t need to go anywhere. I know where your gem is, and I’m going to win this here and now!”
>Adagio’s about to say something when a car appears over her head.
>Your car.
>It pins her, crushing, and shakes the room with the impact.
>Like the Wicked Witch, her shoes are sticking out, and Sunset runs over to yank at them.
>The stiletto part of the left one comes off, and inside is a bright red glow.
>She turns to you, her hand thrumming with red energy.
>”Care, I need yours now. Hand it over and we can have our happy endings.”
>Derpy’s frozen next to you.
>Flash hasn’t moved.
>Twilight’s stood up, but moved away as much as possible from both of them.
>You look Sunset in the eye, and she’s trying to hurry you.
“I’ll give you this gem if you answer two questions first.”
>She’s close to shaking.
>”Fine! Just ask them quickly! I don’t know how long we’ll have this opportunity before one of her sisters shows up!”
“Why do you really want them?”
>”To go home! I want my own happy ending!”
>It’s clipped, but she doesn’t say anything else.
>Whether you believe her or not...
>”What’s your other question?”
>You look at the car and not at her.
“What…”
>You really hope she doesn’t answer this like your gut’s predicting.
“...is the name of your Stand?”
>She follows your eyes to the car, then you, then the ground.
>And then she calms down.
>Stand up straighter.
>Almost inaudibly, she speaks.
>”Fine, we’ll just do it the hard way.”
>Then the car disappears, and something faint takes shape in the air around her.
>She shouts.
>”｢Boulevard of Broken Dreams｣!”

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>>30213245
“｢Timbuk Three｣!”
>You fire a laser at her spine, ready to disable her, at least temporarily.
>But she doesn’t react.
>In fact, it did no damage at all.
>Oh, right.
>She’s from Equestria too, isn’t she.
>Her head’s crowned with a halo of energy, and a pair of animal ears sprout from it.
>And then, with a burst of energy, your own gem rises from your pocket and floats towards the other two.
>You grab for it.
>Agh!
>It burns your palm like a smooth stone left in an oven for a day.
>You let go on reflex, and try to catch it again with ｢Timbuk Three｣.
>But the box of light you create around it just breaks with the feedback.
>Next to her, you appear.
>Another you, that is.
>Your head reels, and you don’t want to believe it.
>You’re not even sure what it means.
>But Sunset has all three now, glittering around her with red electricity.
>Your other self comes closer, and you can already feel the wrongness.
>Adagio, still on the ground, lets out a clicking, high-pitched cry.
>He’s silent, and there’s a look of understanding between the two of you.
>Then Derpy smashes him in the face with ｢Spinal Tap｣, and grabs your hand.
>Flash doesn’t stop you.
>He’s too busy staring at some readout.
>”This isn’t something I’ve ever seen before. Are you alright?”
>”Yes.”
>Sunset answers from at least six distinct areas of the room.
>Twilight holds the door open, urging you out as she cowers, and you blow past her.
>You’re debating pulling her along with ｢Timbuk Three｣ when you’re stopped again.
>There’s no barricade in your way, but three young girls, maybe Freshmen or younger, are standing in your path.
>They look up at you, raising something between them.
>Gold, glinting.
>No!
>You fire a laser for it, for them, but it inexplicably arcs away.
>Like it’s magnetically repelled!
>It goes wild into a wall, and the three point the arrow at you.

>>30213258
>And your power begins to burn itself out.
>They use it with more finesse than the blue-skinned girl, starting at the present.
>Working their way down.
>By the time the next week has been called out of you in rippling blue energy, thrown at them and the ceiling and the walls, you can shove them a little further ahead.
>Even in this situation, you’re still trying to hold onto it!
>The whole hallway’s bathed in red light, a kind you feel even when you don’t see it.
>You can’t hit them.
>Derpy runs ahead to smash the arrow with ｢Spinal Tap｣, and its fists miss completely.
>They don’t even impact the girls holding it.
>And then, between the three of them, a Stand emerges.
>Made of ringed plates of iron, or lead in this lighting, and two heads taller than Derpy’s.
>”｢Steam -”
>”- Powered -”
>”- Giraffe｣!”
>It blows her Stand backwards, and she falls onto the floor.
>She looks up at you as she pushes herself to her feet.
>The energy’s still being torn out of your soul, and you try to work with it, like swimming with the current.
>It burns.
>Just stop them!
>Stop them and it ends!
>You spray lightning into the ceiling, and some of it collapses on them.
>Their mega-Stand reduces it to powder before it can impact them.
>This wasn’t a trap set by the Dazzlings at all.
>Or, at least, not one they could keep control of.
>Your shots can’t even hit their Stand.
>And as the arrow nears the important points, you begin to scream.

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>>30213260
>Be Anonymous.
>There’s no sign of anyone yet, or of anything being disturbed.
>You definitely heard something, though.
>Some kind of Stand user...
>An invisible one, maybe?
>You try to feel out with the ghosts you have on-hand.
>But they don’t find anything here.
>You let them spread out while you head further down.
>But all that’s down there is the-
>Entrance.
>Oh, come on.
>Now?
>At the end of the hallway, halfway between the doors and you, there they are.
>The discount brat pack.
>You seethe, but you’re excited at the same time.
>They’re not escaping this time, even if they can both teleport.
>They scurry in opposite directions, trying to get past you, but ectoplasmic hands grab their ankles.
>Diamond Tiara falls face-first, and you step over to her.
>If she’s here, she’s trouble.
>And, in this case, she’s trouble you can deal with.
>Nata believes in you.
>So you point your pistol at her head, and fire.

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>>30213271
>Be Derpy.
>Care’s skin is pulsing with energy.
>It’s flying out of his fingers and his mouth, and he’s shaking and starting to rise off the ground, and they’re wringing him out like a wet washcloth!
>His light intermingles with the red encroaching from behind you, the buzz in the air.
>He speaks, and his voice is strained and distant.
>”Derpy, help me! I can’t stop it on my own! Please!”
>But you-
>No, there’s a way.
>Yes, you have to.
>You don’t wait or prepare yourself, just break something.
“I’m sorry! ｢Spinal Tap｣!”
>And with a single, well-placed hit, you knock him out.
>The blue light stops, and he crumples to the floor.
>You rush over to him, barely comprehending what you’ve just done.
>It’s for your future.
>For your-
>Tears come to your eyes as you kneel over him.
>The three girls approach you.
>You hug his limp form against yourself.
>And, without warning, and all at once, the lights go out.

｢To Be Continued｣

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1iiHfH7bhnz

Stand: ｢Steam Powered Giraffe｣
User: The Crusaders
Ability: A joint Stand between three users, which gains in power when all three are together. When the Stand strikes something, it can remove or rule out an event or destiny for it for the next twenty-four hours. If all possible destinies are removed from a thing, it is completely unaffected by the pull of fate in any direction.

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>>30213278
Stand: ｢Glamorous｣
User: Flitter
Ability: The user can tag anyone they touch with a colored light in her vision, which is visible as long as they’re within a mile of each other. The user can also share any active lights with the vision of any target.

Stand: ｢Electra Heart｣
User: Aria Blaze
Ability: Pulls, shapes and molds shadows, turning them into solids. The larger or darker the shadow, the more manipulation it can take, and the user can make more precise changes if they use their hands. Shadow-objects disintegrate in light unless they’re connected to a point or area of darkness.

Stand: ｢Gold Guns Girls｣
User: Adagio Dazzle
Ability: Manifests a replica of a target’s desires, either in the moment or in general. This replica can be fashioned out of any material in range, but will look subtly wrong upon close or careful inspection. For more abstract wants, this Stand creates the closest objects it can, sometimes with an apparent sense of humor.

Stand: ｢Beat Street｣
User: Flash Sentry
Ability: By covering an item completely in something the target owns, the user can “integrate” the item with the target’s history, making it a retroactive part of their lives. This only affects the target; everyone else remembers the original timeline, and if the integration results in their past death, they simply seem to disappear. The more unique the item, the more significant a role it plays in the target’s history. Cannot affect the user.

Stand: ｢Boulevard of Broken Dreams｣
User: Sunset Shimmer
Ability: Summons things from other universes which have killed some versoin of the target. Only one thing can be summoned at a time, and can be dismissed at will. The user has no control over what’s summoned, but cannot be harmed by it. Instances of the target killing themselves are not summoned, and when people are summoned, this ability prevents them from experiencing the negative effects of meeting their alternate selves.

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>>30213284
https://pastebin.com/UPh9Nk0b

>>30201278
i actually posted this in one of these threads a while ago
Stand name: [Begin Again]

This stand resembles a pair of headphones made from some copper or brass-like substance, intricate clockwork can be seen inside through a class pannel on the outside of both earpieces
[Begin Again] allows the user to set a "save point" at their current time and location. At any point, the user can choose to return to that save point, retaining any knowledge they gain but otherwise returning to that saved state
Setting a new save point will overwrite the old one
Note: it is unknown if the user automatically returns to a save point upon death

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>>30213284
>>30213937

first off
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA


NIGGA THAT WAS TOO LIT, HOLY SHIT, THAT WHOLE FIGHT SCENE WITH THE SHADOWBOLTS VS. ARIA AND ANON WAS JUST

FUCKING AMAZING

AND ALL THE TWIST AND TURNS IN THIS SHIT, ADAGIO'S SMUG, THAT FUCKING MIXED ENDING SONG YA DID, OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDD


I'm sorry for being an autist but oh my god man, this shit was honestly the hypest thing I've ever read on this board, 10000/10, I can't with any kind of coherent and rational words describe how badass you made this Dith

Araki would be proud.

also filename

didn't help to cool down my fucking hype when I've had ecstasy of gold on repeat for the past hour and a half https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nOr0na6mKJQ [Embed]

>>30214610
I remember this one, you were in the same thread where I first posted Little Prince I think
you're the same guy that dreamt up ｢Brave New World｣ right?

>>30213937
I came, straight up. This is going to be an amazing next few chapters, isnt it?

>>30214641
Yep, that's me
Glad to know i make a lasting impression
honestly, i'm really hoping someone will like these enough to use them in something

>>30214641
>French Anon
>Image filename
>The worst

I can't believe you say such things about yourself well just about every single writefag in this thread is great mainly in their own unique way. Every story is unique and breathtaking, from the ones that have been going on for a long time now, to the ones who are still leaving their initial prologue (you know who you are) every single writefag is great and amazing in their own way and hope to see you all continue your brilliant work.

>>30214610
Only have the power for this one, no form
Syand name: [Razor Sharp]
User: ???

This stand can attach a sensation to a specific section of a piece of music
For example, it could attach "burning" to "guitar"
When the music is played, those who hear the music will experience the sensation of being on fire while the guitar plays
This effect can be negated with earplugs

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>>30214741
DESU I was actually going to use a bit of the stands you made and make em minor villains in muh story, but I can't remember half of them, do you have a pastebin for your ideas or something?

>>30214872
also, thanks for your kinda words anon, I honestly really needed that.

>>30215623
......i probably should've done that, huh?
Well, if you remember names or can give me a vague description, i can repeat them for you

>>30215873
>>30215623
You guys could always use the archives to find the places you've written down your Stand ideas in previous threads.

>>30213284
So wait, has the Sunset we've known this whole time been the alternate Sunset who uses [BoBD]? Has she been rusing everyone from the very beginning?

>>30216219
That is an excellent idea
Should all be in the last 2-3 threads
>>30215623
Also, catching up on your story, loving it so far, and glad to see a fellow fan of treehugger

>>30216296
Also, should i use a name when i post stands?

>>30216421
If you'd like. You could just stick to Anonymous and announce that it's you.

Speaking of Stand ideas, here's one I posted a while back.

STAND NAME: [ROUNDABOUT]

ABILITY: Prevents the user from taking damage until something in their vicinity is “finished.” This can be anything from winning a race to having the microwave ding when it’s done cooking something. Until that time arrives, the user is invincible. Its hands have arrows pointing down along the backs towards the fingers, with one arrow bearing つづく and the other saying To Be Continued…

>>30216469
Fair point, i just figured it'd be easier to find my stuff in the archive

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>>30217007
It would, honestly I suggest using a name, whatever it is is up to you familia

also I'm trying to think, but I can't remember them goddamit, I don't even think I remember how brave new world works, I know he's a sword but that's about it.

>>30216296
>Someone who doesn't hate treehugger besides me

Hallelujah, Praise Celestia
also, thanks my man, I really appreciate

>>30217063
[Brave New World]'s blade changes shape, and it's stats adjust accordingly
It will sometimes change shape on it's own
It may also draw power from it's user's fighting spirit

>>30217131
Oh fuck, I actually thought it changed into different swords from around the world and shit, I didn't know it could do all that

that's super cool my guy

>>30217208
That was mainly because, in the dream, the blade seemed to keep trying to change it's length when i wasn't focusing on it

>>30217131
Could brave new world defeat Kars light blade mode? That would be the ultimate test

>>30213937
What a chapter this was. Everything that could have gone wrong went even worse. Care has less allies and things keep stacking against him.
How is he going to get out of this?
The sirens were great. Adagio was as sultry and manipulative as ever and Aria is a powerhouse. All that's left is Sonata playing music with her stand, or was that ability changed? I don't quite remember.
The shadowbolts were amazing as always, and their team plays were great. Makes me wonder if they could have a DHA between all of them. Although I that's no longer an option.
I'm looking forward to the DT and Silver Spoon vs. Anon rematch and the possible CMC vs Silver Spoon, DT and Golden.
>>30214641
>>30215623
Frenchie stop being so hard on yourself. We like your stories and also got your back. Just keep on at your own pace.

>>30218085
I have no idea

>>30215527
Ths is actually an old stand that i either posted here or on /tg/'s super stand sunday

Stand name: [Feel Good Inc]
User: ???

[Feel Good Inc] is a massive stand in the form of a ship with a floating mass of rock as it's rear half
It's capable of firing chunks of this rock as it's primary method of attack
However, while it may succeed in killing an enemy, there's a good chance it will also level the surrounding block due to lack of accuracy
In addition, it's capable of a limited geokinesis within one meter of it's user, mainly used to lift the user up to the ship

Also, given the origin of [Brave New World], you'll be able to find me in archives under DreamerAnon, but call me Dreamer for short if you want
any other name i came up with sounded too pretentious or overdramatic

>>30220282
Cool.
I think this may be the third time someone uses the same name as another stand. One would think it would happen more often.

>>30220340
True, i guess people's tastes are more varied than we think

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>>30216421
It's your work, feel free to take credit.

>>30214641
Fuckin' capped.

>filename
Lemme hit you up with some more inspiration. Pic related's what my writing looked like when I started out. I can remember I thought I was hot shit. Seven years later, writing on and off without any real discipline, I've reached this point.

The fastest route to progress I've found is to fix the problems you can see in your writing and are able to help, and then act like everything else is decent. Assuming from the start that your writing's inferior in ways you can't see is unhelpful, and it discourages you from getting the experience and feedback that'll make more problems announce themselves to you.

>>30218260
>Shadowbolt DHA
Fuck that's an awesome idea. Also, thanks.

>>30214704
>>30216219
I hope so. I've got some cool and bizarre ideas ready for the midpoint. And yes, there's only one Sunset Shimmer in this story, and it's the one who came to CHS from Equestria. I'm not gonna spoil how deep the ruse goes, though.

>>30217063
>not hating Treezy
I'm down with that, man. She was my roommate's favorite, and I've been keeping a green idea for her in storage for a few months.

>>30220282
Stand name: [Seven Nation Army]
User: ???

This stand, despite being sentient, takes the form of a general's cap, rimmed wih a small ammo belt
It's personality is that of a stereotypical drill sergeant
[Seven Nation Army] causes any firearms that meet the requirements below to animate, moving and operating as if carried by a trained soldier
To animate, the firearm must have been touched by the user prior to the dawn of that day, and must be fully loaded with the appropriate ammunition
When the firearm has expended it's ammunition, it will no longer be animated
At this time, there is no known range that [Seven Nation Army]'s animation can't take effect, but the firearms will take time to travel to the user

>>30221251
Stand name: [Mirror Haus]
User: ???

[Mirror Haus] can take effect in any room with at least 4 walls and a floor that's area does not exceed 60×60×60 feet
[Mirror Haus] is a maze of mirrors that is completely randomly generated with each use, even the user doesn't know the layout
While inside [Mirror Haus], the user can freely travel between any two mirrors they know of
Despite appearing as reflective glass, it can take impacts that would dent steel without a scratch

>>30221251
>Anon is one of those gun freaks that owns like 30 guns
>At midnight on the day of a designated showdown with the story's big bad the protagonists contact him
>He proceeds to show up to the battle in full Civil War attire flanked by 30 professionally trained shootghosts
>Helps whittle down the villain's vitality until all his guns run out of ammo
>Whips out his own custom hand cannon and goes to town

I could see this being a very entertaining story. Maybe there could be one about a guy with the same Stand, but he works as part of a paranormal military unit comprised entirely of Stand users.

>>30221251
Somehow I picture it as the brooms from Fantasia... but they are guns.
>>30221948
>The armies of [Seven Nation Army] vs. Erich's shadow soldiers vs. [WAR] vs. The army of Sweetie Drops with ｢Technologic｣

>>30221948
>>30222026
Wow, i'm glad you guys like it so much

>>30221880
I think Ace had planed on making a story that took place in a circus or something alike. Maybe this stand could be used in that setting.

>>30223420
Sounds good to me

Killer queen has already touched this thread.

MUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDAMUDA!!!!

Who would win chaos god Discord or part 3 The world Dio

>>30224944
Assuming both are using the full extent of their power, Discord. He'd just turn [The World] into a chocolate sculpture and replace DIO's hair with spaghetti or something. Then he'd just nonchalantly dodge all of DIO's attacks until Fluttershy is threatened, at which point he just ends the guy's life by temporarily taking control of the sun. I highly doubt he'd let a little frozen time inconvenience him.

>How to make the final battle in Part 3 more Epic?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NO3HQ9PX3vs

Kinda low on ideas at the moment, so kust a bump for now

>>30225888
Alright let's go a step further Dio the world over heaven (eyes of heaven) against Discord the god of chaos the world over heavens power is equal if not greater then discord

>>30227174
>Dio Over Heaven beats Discord, but both get rekt to this guy >>30219800

>There are shadow based stands like [Benzin] and [Electra Heart], sword stands like [Brave New World] and [Little Prince].
>What other groups of stands do we have ITT?

>>30227174
>Discord throws some of his own bizarre creations at Dio (Screwball, etc.)
>Dio retaliates by removing them from existence
>Discord realizes that he's got to keep a safe distance from Dio or risk true death
>Dio keeps time completely stopped for the duration of the fight to try to finally catch his opponent in the frozen time

In terms of sheer power I don't think we've ever really seen Discord cut loose in combat, but based on the magic that Tirek sucked out of him, I'd say he's ridiculously powerful when he's got good motivation. It'd be a battle for the ages, but no one would ever known it had been fought. Discord would have the advantage though, because his magic works at a distance and [The World Over Heaven] seems to have the same range as its base form and we don't know if Dio can punch lasers or magic to rewrite it.

>>30227736
Location based stands like [Tin Cup Chalice] and [Mirror Haus]?

>>30221880
Stand name: [Monkey's Head]
User: ???

This stand is, as the name implies, a large stone in the shape of a totem-like monkey head
When planted in the ground, anyone within range will become blinded to potential danger, with the exception of the user
While it's planted, it will gradually build up heat and energy, until, eventually, it detonates with enough force to level a city
Note: due to the stand's limited range, the user would also need to be in the blast radius, otherwise the stand would deactivate

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On vacation this week, don't know if I'll be writing or not. If anyone wants a quick prompt to work with, try writing the best Stand battle you can in under three posts.

>>30228585
So.... fabolous...

>>30228585
For being the best shadowbolt in my own personal opinion and basing it on how Ditherer wrote her, she sure has it rough.
Have a nice vacation!

>>30228501
Stand name: [Get Lucky]
User: ???

This stand appears in the form of a black metallic humanoid with gold plating on various parts of it's body. A large slot machine-like mechanism is in the center of it's chest, with it's handle sticking out of it's back
The user or stand can activate it's slot machine to cause a variety of random effects
For each consecutive day the user stays awake, the odds of a good outcome increase exponentially
Aside from it's ability, [Get Lucky] is a somewhat below average punchghost

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>>30229555
Glad you like my version. And thanks.

>>30230171
>It teams up with a stand that causes insomnia.
>Trades sanity for amazing luck.

>>30230930
>they're only defeated because a 1 in a million failure finally comes up
>they go down in one punch and sleep for almost as long as they've been awake

>>30232051
I think they may be talking about us at some point.

Does anyone else think "Dancing with Myself" would be a good title for an anon team up story?

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>>30228501
I actually had kind of an idea like this with a stand called ｢We Didn't Start The Fire｣ In which the stand's main ability was to cause an explosion big enough to level a city, but anybody after the user or the stand would be stopped by a random stand that the user had seen and killed before in the past, however, he would have to had known how that stand worked. I think your monkey's head works way better for alot of cool situations though.

>>30228585
I really loved how you wrote Indigo, Fucking made me scream when she died, fuck but sugarcoat is best shadowbolt,
prove me wrong

>>30233133
I was thinking of a possible acception to the rule where people who witness it being deployed would either know of it (but be sent away by an accomplice's stand resulting in an sdc-style race to the user before it detonates) or have no memory of it but have a distinct feeling of imminent danger and impending doom
if you've heard the song, anyone effected by the stand essentially becomes one of the happy folk

>>30233052
What do you mean by "Anon team up story"?

>>30233556
Y'know, a bunch of anons from different stories teaming up to fight some bbeg, like a crossover episode

>>30233874
>"Dancing with myself".
>Anons from different stories teaming up.
In that case it is a great title. Go for it!

>>30233926
Oh, i just thought it would be a good idea for a title, i'm not much of a writer
i'm just the guy that posts stands

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Here's the latest version of a beginning I'm not really feeling but can't get out of my head.

>Unicorn Adagio barges into Celestia's throne room during visitor hours
>She brags the Princess's students taught her a valuable lesson:
>The magic of friendship!
>Behind her is Lonely Heart, whose Wound activates.
>Conflict generated by ponies at LH gives Dagi instant magical power
>Celestia's as helpless as the Chrysalis battle
>Even better, Dagi's newfound magic lets her use her Stand at a distance
>Dagi uses her magic to channel her power through Celestia
>｢Orange Blossom Special｣, which erases distance for objects the user puts in motion
>A body in motion will stay in motion etc etc
>The sun instantly smashes into the moon, damaging both
>Celestia loses consciousness, Luna's out for the count
>It becomes night, as burning chunks of the heavens threaten to rain down below
>Then arrive Domino Fats and his assistant Apple Bloom, rescued from a bad timeline
>They transferred Lonely, on special order, and they've grabbed some other amoral Stand users for added protection.
>In return, Dagi's going to soak up the impending suffering and produce them a wheelbarrowful's worth of Siren gems
>As the apocalypse looms, Twi flies through library shelves
>Star Swirl wrote something, somewhere, a summoning in the event of total armageddon!
>She finds it, casts it, desperate.
>And it teleports a splotchy, stained, laminated cornflower menu to her.
>Meanwhile in ｢Tom's Diner｣, ｢Black Racers｣ complains to Bon Bon about another world with the lights off outside the window.
>Twilight teleports inside, and stares at the gallery of oddballs.
>Then, quickly, she tells them what's going on, and begs them with all her royal authority to help protect her home.
>Some shrug, some groan, some grin.
>All Stand.

>>30234557
Can we all contribute to this story? I'd love to be a part of this thing.

>>30234779
Sure! If anyone wants to, they should feel free. Although I think we should work out who's on Adagio's side before anything else.

>>30235099
Well, feel free to use any of my stands if you want
Hell, i'd love it if me and [Brave New World] could join in the fight, preferably on the side of the heroes, but i suppose either side is fine

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>>30234557
>>30234779
>>30235099
First thing first, great prompt. The events escalate quickly, Adagio becomes a real threat by affecting both the sun and the moon, finds a way to generate Siren Gems and gets a lot of stand users on her side.
On the other hand, Twilight just gets the oddballs at [Tom's Diner].
It is great!

Those on Adagio's side should most likely be antagonists from other stories I guess. This could also be a good oportunity to use some of Dreamer's creations. Are Aria and Sonata present, and is so are they also in pony form?

I wonder what those on Twilight's side should do first. Perhaps secure Lonely Heart with the help of a bunch of Pinkie Pies?
With the return of Domino it would be nice to see him prepared to face against Bon Bon again. But of course, both sides wouldn't be alone.

This could end up becoming the SRW of our greens!

>>30235348
Gotta say, i'm pretty hyped

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>>30235348
Adding in Aria and Sonata and other villains based on who Domino/Bloom can pull in and who's around natively sounds awesome! I think the Dazzlings should have new Stands as ponies, though. How about...

Stand: ｢Crushcrushcrush｣
User: Aria Blaze
Ability: Creates dials on objects or surfaces, including skin. Dials appear when the user wants to know some measurable quality of the target, however abstract. Once a dial appears, it cannot be removed. If it reaches zero while in range of the user, it smashes whatever's directly underneath of it with several atmospheres worth of pressure. Multiple dials can exist simultaneously, but only one per target.

Stand: ｢The Fixx｣ www.youtube.com/watch?v=KC3WOoeHgF0
User: Sonata Dusk
Ability: Limited destiny manipulation; forces future events to happen faster, but only at exactly the speed necessary to interrupt any action or event happening in the present.

Also, Domino's and Bloom's are

Stand: ｢Strawberry Swing｣
User: Domino Fats
Ability: Controls the proprioception of anyone the user makes eye contact with.

Stand: ｢Nova Experience｣
User: Apple Bloom
Ability: Creates optionally physical tethers between objects the user touches and their owners.

In general, if people want any directorial guidelines from me, I'd like to focus on characters who haven't been in other ASBs/crossovers yet. Berryshine, Bon Bon, 2 or more Indigo Zaps, ｢FIRESTARTER｣, ｢Black Racers｣, Maud with ｢Stairway to Heaven｣, Ziggy, French and Cameo's Stands, Dreamer's work, the fetish Stands, etc. And I'd suggest 1 on 1 fights if they're feasible, because the JoJo formula's best when characters show their full potential squaring off mano a mano.

In general, feel free to run with it to whatever seems awesome or interesting. If you want hard mode, keep in mind that sorting out the sun and moon is also a looming problem, and just defeating all the villains won't result in a good ending.

>>30235099
An alternate Bon Bon with [Hardcore Soft Porn] would be a good addition to the villain team if she was paired with someone else.

>>30235956
Oh, and I'd like to be able to show off more of [Black Racers] as well, since I never really added more to that particular story.

>>30236099
>[Black Racers] and Bon Bon vs. Domino and Apole Bloom.
That one should be interesting.

>>30235956
I wonder what consecuences brings having no sun nor moon.
Aside from a constant night, weren't the nightmare forces in the moon? Are those things free right now?

>>30234557
>>30235956
>>30236099
>>30236878
>>30236032
>when people are using that one stand you made for cool shit like this

I am fucking excited, count me in on this shit as soon as i can get a few of these fucking chapters moving forward

>>30236878
>｢Strawberry Swing｣ distorts AJ's perception of herself
>Anon's mind takes over temporarily and fights while sprouting eyes that last for only a couple of seconds before being reabsorbed into their body
>Bon Bon decides he's got this for now until Apple Bloom tethers a manhole cover to her forehead and activates the line, forcing her to dance around the manhole while keeping Apple Bloom in her sight and staying aware of Domino
>Taking a gamble, she uses ｢Hardcore Soft Porn｣ to reverse everyone's "sight," causing ｢Strawberry Swing｣ to affect everyone but AJ
>She throws up an arm with sticky epidermal coagulations to keep Apple Bloom held in place before turning it against Fats
>Anon and AJ focus together to repeat Anon's trick with the eyes while they beat the hell out of Fats, who over- and under-dodges around their blows while failing to snare them with his Stand
>By this point ｢HSC｣ has "recharged" and Bon Bon tries to figure out what to use it for as Apple Bloom begins to break free

I can't figure out the rest right now but I figure that's a good start. It's kind of weird for me to pair up two of my Stand users, since I just kinda figure they'll be fighting their own battles.

>>30237430
This already sounds awesome

Should i keep posting stands or wait until we've got this thing sorted out?

>>30238374
Keep going man.

>>30230171
Stand name: [Disturbia]
User: ???

[Disturbia] appears as a gremlin or imp-like creature of roughly one foot in height. It possess elongated arms, prominent fangs, pointed ears, and sunken, pitch black eyes
[Disturbia] will attach itself to a target and, over the course of 12 to 48 hours, depending on the strength of the target's will. During that time period, the target will develop the following symptoms: anxiety, insomnia, paranoia, and hallucinations. Once the target begins hallucinating, [Disturbia]'s full power comes into effect. After nightfall, or in sufficient darkness, these hallucinations can and will attack the target
As the symptoms progress, [Disturbia] will begin to change form, resulting in any of the following: additional eyes, mouths, or limbs, increased size or musculature, elongation of claws, teeth, or limbs, tail growth, horn growth, tentacle growth, etc.
The change in form varies from target to target, but regardless of what changes take place, it seems to grow in strength, speed, or durability seemingly at random
Note: [Disturbia] is linked to a target until they die or the user is defeated, dealing any damage to [Disturbia] will result in an equal amount of mental damage to the target

>>30239586
Oh wow, kinda made some mistakes on that one
Maybe i should've let myself wake up a bit more before starting

>>30239586
Stand name: [Slow Ride]
User: ???
[Slow Ride] is a faceless humanoid stand with it's entire body patterned in constantly shifting tie-dye
While [Slow Ride] seems like a standard punchghost, there's more to this stand than meets the eye
Each time it strikes an object or person, it increases the object's inertia
With enough punches, it can effectively paralyze an opponent by increasing their inertia beyond what their muscles can push through
In extreme cases, [Slow Ride] can increase a target's inertia to the point that not even gravity will move it
Of course, that requires the target to take hundreds of punches
Note: [Slow Ride] can ignore any inertia it's caused for the purpose of moving objects, but the user can't

>>30240110
Stand name: [Icon For Hire]
User: ???

[Icon For Hire], or [Icon]-chan, as she prefers to be called, is a female, humanoid stand. She's dressed in a corset, tutu-like skirt, fishnet stockings, knee-high platform boots with an excessive number of buckles, and striped, fingerless arm warmers. Where her face should be, there's a slightly convex screen like those seen on old tvs, which constantly displays those colored bars, and a pair of large pigtails that are so bright pink they practically glow frame her "face". A row of aerosol spray nozzles line her spine

[Icon For Hire] is a sentient stand who's personality is, in her own words, "Punk-rock genki gyaru" and "Totally fuckin' kawaii"
yes, she's just as annoying as you think
[Icon For Hire] is capable of creating grafitti on any surface and causing them to detonate in colorful explosions
These can either be detonated at will, as long as they're within her or her user's line if sight, or set up like tripwire mines, exploding whenever someone passes by
At this time, it's unknown how many active tags she can have at any given time

>>30240628
Stand name: [Tribute]
User: ???

[Tribute], on it's own, is an amorphous transparent blob with no combat capabilities whatsoever
When it activates it's ability, it takes the approximate form of the last stand the user saw, and it gains something like the powers of the stand it mimics
Both the appearance and powers it gains are like what you'd picture if someone gave you a vague description of the stand without any visual reference
In addition, these forms are inconsistent, using the same stand twice can have considerably different results

>>30241206
Stand name: [They Might Be Giants]
User: ???

[They Might Be Giants] is a pair of spectacles with several movable magnification lenses
This stand allows the user to interact with any object seen through it as if it was the size they percieved

>>30241714
The effect could potentially apply to distance too, but i'll leave that up to whoever uses it
Also, is anyone else here?

>>30241728
I'm rewriting a final and working on ASA. Everybody else is at work or jerking off or this thread is approaching the vanishing point.

>>30241891
I feel like a at least 1 must be doing both

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>>30241891
Confirming jerking off. Finishing Ynanhluutr, watching night waves, chasing drunken stupors. Coco 12 needs a breakthrough on the structure for two of the four fights, Care and Coco 13 are swimming around as a handful of shiny ideas, and I've got the central Stand user ready for Marble 3 as a break mid-season.

>>30242073
Introducing an overarching mystery and immediate conflict into ASA is a fun exercise. Things are gonna get kicked into high gear real soon. Kira Chapter 2 is a formless idea right now, but I have the overall plot in my head solidified, which is good.

Bumping because i'm out of ideas at the moment

Hey guys, Lewd stand anon here. I did some thinking and I've decided, at least for now, to base the lewd stand project in a version of EQG. I figured it only makes sense since the idea was birthed from authors like FuckFaceMcGee, Ditherer, and Staranon, and it allows for more varied stands that aren't just based on fetishes. I'm working on a long-ish greentext for the tf board but once that's finished I'll start on the lewd stand story.

In the meantime, here's a stand my friend came up with:

[THEY MIGHT BE GIANTS]
A Stand which warps reality so what the user believes what will happen will happen. For example, if TMBG's user picks up a toy gun thinking it's real, it will function exactly like a real gun. Additionally, in situations involving chance, it will skew the odds in favor of its user.

>>30243261
>>30241714
fuggin
y'all are destined to beat the everloving shit out of each other, guranteed

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>>30239586
>>30240110
>>30240628
>>30241206
>>30241714
All of these are awesome, by the way. They have the Araki flavor that invites scene ideas and new usages in automatically, and each one could take up a whole arc if written well. I won't press you, but I think if you wrote a green the thread might enjoy it more than you think. What's your method?

Also, /r/ing Stands for the Shadowbolts, if you take prompts \ need inspiration \ get bored.

>>30242281
Awesome. I'm afraid the mysteries in CRBA are too subtle, but I remain hopeful they'll be worth it in the end. I've got two Stands prepped for Coco 13, but they're only names right now. After I hit the midpoints, I'm pretty sure Coco's going to turn high-velocity itself to fit its remaining half. Considering timeskips, but the characters might just outsmart me again and make up for lost time on their own.

>>30243261
>same Stand name twice in one day
Synchronicity confirms new blood for the thread.

>In a version of EQG.
Awesome! I'm looking forward to seeing your users clash. Got a link to the /tg/ green?

>the idea was birthed from authors like FuckFace, Ditherer and Staranon
Shit, really?

>>30243261
>the idea was birthed from authors like FuckFaceMcGee, Ditherer, and Staranon.
I knew our characters were too sexy, but I didn't expect this.
Joking aside, I'm glad you chose to do it EQG based. In a way it also shows your support to the thread. Share the other story if you have the chance!

Also >>30241714
It happened again! And both are great!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NhjSzjoU7OQ

It would be interesting to come up with alternate takes on already made stands.

>>30243427
For making new stands? Either a song title pops into my head a some random point in my day and i go from there, or i get lucky and have a sudden bout of inspiration when the thread's in bumping territory
For writing? Not my stong suit, it either comes out too description heavy to the point that it draws away from the story, or i'm writing dialog that feels awkward and stilted

And as far as the request, [One Armed Scissor] from one of the previous threads could work for sour sweet, but i feel like i should give these a more personal touch

As far as the whole collab thing, does anyone have any ideas for who should be included?
Also, mini-prompt, what would [Tribute] >>30241206 become if it tried to be one of your stands?

>>30243420
O shit I didn't even notice it. Funny how that worked out! I'll tell my friend about >>30241714

>>30243427
Yep. I got started here reading Fuckface's work but I got hooked on the stuff you and star did and I figured I could try my hand at the Stand stuff. Also, the story will be posted in the transformation general here on /mlp/ but I'll drop you guys a link when I'm done.

I'm still interested in making this story it's own unique thing so I figure I'll keep personalities and abilities in line with the characters from EQG for now and change them once I'm more experienced and have a better idea on how to make the story stand on it's own. Anyway, I really appreciate the encouragement and I'll be lurking and working away!

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Bedtime bump.

>>30243610
>too description heavy to the point that it draws away from the story
>dialog that feels awkward and stilted
I feel the same way about my own writing, actually, although my descriptions get caught up more in the internal wheels of the characters than the environment.

>>30244267
When [Tribute] imitates ｢Timbuk Three｣, it becomes a red glowing cowboy. It fires lasers, but for each shot, a (progressively heavy) object will fall on the user's head.

As for the collab, I've posted my wishlist, but I'd bolster it by stapling some of your Stands to uncommon background pones and combing through Cameo's and Aus' Stands.

>>30244463
>hooked on stuff I did
Oh, wow. Thanks for giving my stuff a chance, then; I never thought any lurkers had been reading. Pic related. If you're still keeping up with my stories, feel free to lemme know what you think.

>>30244267
I've thrown in my two cents here >>30236032 and here >>30236099
I'd like to do a little more than that though. I've got plenty of unused Stands and one in particular that I'm saving for a "sleeping giant" type character.

STAND NAME:｢KNIGHTS OF CYDONIA｣
STAND MASTER: ???
ABILITY: This Stand allows the user to take “light” from their life and give it to others in the form of kind words, power boosts, and positive memories. The Stand consists of three technologically advanced-looking knights, two of which convey the user's light to other people. When all light has vanished from the user’s past, present, and future, the final knight activates, laying waste to the user’s enemies before consuming the user and destroying itself.

When paired with ｢Timbuk Three｣,
the user can give light to Care Root for as long as they've got some left, allowing him infinite constructs for as long as the user can fuel him.

>>30244267
Fuck, forgot the prompt. If ｢Tribute｣ imitated ｢Planisphère｣ it would assume the form of a green Stand-shaped starry void in space. The needles would be replaced with BB pellets, and getting hit by the pellets would depress random pressure points on the target's body, causing all sorts of physical reactions in their musculature.

>>30244944
Why is Coco such a qt?

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Oh my god it's like 1:30 in the morning how are you niggas awake, planning shit.

anyway, sorry I've been a bit quiet for a while, finals is in a week for me so i gotta get o some twilight shit and fucking study hard. I'll be back more regularly after next week, wish me luck.

>>30245320
Good luck dude, hope it goes well