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>What is this thread about?
This thread revolves around stories about ponies being enslaved.

>Can you elaborate more?
Sure! SPG (Slave Pony General) is mostly about characters dealing with the actual implications of the horrifying thing that is chattel slavery. It's more looking at how people with modern sensibilities deal with the ownership of another sentient being, and how most people aren't total cunts.
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Remember to drink your alicorn milk
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>>30117555
Remember that if your alicorn isn't a shaking mess when you leave, you haven't done your job right.
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>>30117550
Hey does anyone know anything about ____the_____filly______brothel?____
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pony mod when?
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>>30117582
i have to admire your dedication
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MARECUM ALICORN EXTRACTION CHAMBERS FOR SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH AND MEDICAL TECHNOLOGY
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>>30117582
its a meme and its gonna stay a meme

sorry not sorry [/spoiler}
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>>30117609
There's gotta be a way we can shuffle those words around to make the abbreviation 'M.A.R.E.C.U.M.'
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>>30117694
MARECUM ALICORN RETRIEVAL CHAMBERS FOR CARNALLY UPLIFTING MEMBERS
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>>30117995
I mcfucked up
MARECUM ALICORN RESEARCH AND EXTRACTION CHAMBERS FOR UPLIFTING MEMBERS
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>>30117995
>M.A.R.C.C.U.M
Try again.
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>>30117999
That's better.

>Uplifting Members
>Not
>Udder Milking
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>>30117999
>FOR UPLIFTING MEMBERS
what did he mean by this
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>>30118014
There was a time when I would be revulsed to the idea of tasting horse milk

Now I NEED to try it
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>>30118022
Step one: Find portal to Equestria
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>>30117583
What dis?
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>>30118067
Teaching Feeling, a video game about adopting a child slave girl and slowly nursing them back to health.

Or fucking them, but what kind of sicko are you?
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>>30117999
I can't help but feel the last 'M' should be for "Medicine/Medication"
Unifying Medicine
Updating Medicine/Medication
Ulterior Medication
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>>30118331
>unconventional medicine
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>>30117694
Mare Alicorn Real-time Extraction of Cum and Unused Minerals (piss)

Remember to donate for studies done by::

MARECUM
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>>30118018
Erect penis
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Tales of Anon working at M.A.R.E.C.U.M when?
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>>30118364
>Anon works at M.A.R.E.C.U.M. as a janitor
>Celestia, Luna, Twilight and Cadence come in monthly for a cum/piss extraction (for science)
>Anon has to clean up squash soup
>And also be harassed by horny princess pones

Anon is the slave
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Do slaves get charlie horses from overwork or Adam Lanzas?
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>>30117582
If you used the same dedication to write the story that in repeating the image and you would have what you want
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>>30107384
Belated response, finally got around to re-reading this:

Man, the more Anon is around Cadance the more shifty I feel this whole setup is. Cadance says the war is over and she's just trying to return her people to Equestria, but is running a espionage, sabotage, and theft ring on human territory and is perfectly okay with Anon killing her and decapitating her plans? That doesn't sound like the war "is over" to me, it sounds like it's just turned into an asymmetrical/terroristic conflict instead. This may have verified that she actually is Cadance (at least to Anonymous) but now that just raises a whole bunch more questions.

Now I'm wondering if she's actually in control anymore. The Changelings - given that they seem to have adapted best to these circumstances - might be the ones actually in command, in which case we need to be doubly nervous: They've shown they're totally willing to kill and manipulate others to get their way. Who's to say they haven't conscripted Cadance into their plans as well? Hell, the way the ponies messed with Anon's mind sounds pretty changeling-esque too.
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>>30119142

This demonstrates the severe mental deterioration of Candace as a result of her stay in this world and the deep emotional wounds she has suffered, many would have long surrendered for them

With the changelings I have a theory, they used to feed on emotions, in Equestria the love of the ponies is more pure, but human emotions can be toxic for them, and that affects their psyche
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>>30118331
>>30118338
Yes.
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>>30118331
>>30118338

The leader of North Korea; Kim Jon-Um threatened America with using his most modern nuclear missiles but gave him a lifetime endowment of the Alicorn extract, according to ... "To help the already of the eternal health and happiness of his people"

It also offers the help of 5,000 vigorous young soldiers of the town to help in the extraction and care of the mare to keep the medicine fresh
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An Arab prince offers his 100 best pure blood in exchange for an extract of miraculous medicine
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>>30119481
>"To help the already of the eternal health and happiness of his people"
i think you accidentally a word
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How would you react as a unicorn slave to finding out what little family you had left was sold into pit fighting?
What would you do if you were entered into a death battle against them, but the winner is free?
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>>30119494
Kim Jon-Um do not make mistakes, him win the Third World War against the Equestrians for Himself!!!
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>>30119510
I would bang the hottest sister and enjoy incest before death.
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SLAP
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>>30117583
Working on it but my pc burned down
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>>30117583
>>30118078
Checked it out.
Pretty comfy.
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>>30119368
True.

Whether emotionally damaged or not, I guess the sense I'm still left with is that this Cadance is not totally there yet this operation is well beyond the ability of someone like that to manage. Yet, Anon still seems to be taking what she says at face value and not questioning it.
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>>30118022
If you make a trip to France before Macron finish destroying it, you can find that in some supermarket.
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>>30121227
Teaching Feeling, just like >>30118078 said.
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>>30121608
God damn, why can't it be more available over here...
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>>30104148
>”Nah, don’t bother. I wanted something without strings.”
“Typical” the dragon’s sardonic voice came out.
>You just grabbed one of the extinguishers nearby, pushed it toward an opening and pulsed the handle.
>The slave’s scrambling claws told you all it all there was on who had the power here.
>The intern cocked an eyebrow at your show but kept quiet.
>”I believe I shall take the bat pony. What paperwork do I need to fill out?”
“Just a bill of sale. You have ID with you?”
>That you did, several forms in fact, you had little interest in ever having someone claiming you as an escapee.
>You’d seen someone try that on Flitter at the mill.
>It wasn’t pleasant for any involved, especially not her, not when it was a chance to be with her sister again.
>You followed the anon back through the cells, pausing to look at the thestral once more.
>It would be yours soon.
>The office was a small cubicle to the rear of the area.
>You were given a pamphlet on what to do with your new slave and what you could not.
>You smiled at the start of it, all the laws only bound you in the territories of the United States of America.
>Once you were in Equestria, you were free to do as you wanted.
>The rest was fairly droll, you would have to make sure it was well nourished, had some shelter, and was not criminally abused.
>Not hard to avoid, though you were pretty sure it would be sleeping in something less than the recommended spare bedroom.
>The anon waved you over and went over some background information, nothing too probing, though there were some issues on the state of your citizenship.
>Apparently, the form had one spot for alien, and it was not for you.
>You weren’t sure what had happened, but you were apparently now a dual citizen of America and Equestria so far as the FBI was concerned.
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>>30121764
>History finished, you pulled out your charge card and waited as it processed.
>You always wondered about that piece of plastic and why Equestria had never created its own such version of a talisman.
>Bits were heavy, and yet this would have made it so much easier.
>Finished, you chose to have a security officer prepare your slave for shipment.
>You weren’t sure what to do with it, you were used to transporting unconscious ponies, not lively ones.
>When your new slave was escorted in, you were a bit annoyed at the way it still looked tired.
>The chains and clasps weren’t too surprising though as restraints went.
>You definitely did not want your investment flying away.
>That was going to be an issue you realized, a collar and lead would do little to stop it from escaping when it pleased.
>Your other option would probably not work too well if you were forced to it.
>A better collar you would need then.
>The marketplace stalls were lively with business.
>Offerings of slave boosters, enhancements to make them work harder, of exotic Equestrian goods that looked like shams, deterrents against ponies, deterrents for ponies, even a saddle stall for pony ridings.
>That last one left you feeling very uncomfortable with yourself and you pushed along faster.
>Finally, you found a collar stall advertising pegasus safe collars.
>You looked at your slave, this was a moment it would need to be consulted on.
>The shrugging nod was good enough for you.
>The assortment of collars was interesting.
>Most seemed to be focused on keeping them from leaving a leash, either as reinforced versions or with some nasty looking spikes.
>There were some that advertised keeping them in a pen with the power of MagnaWave technology.
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>>30121768
>Those were close, but after conversing you found that it would only be good for home use.
>Finally you were shown what you had wanted, remote collars.
>There were several methods to choose from, some human, others enchanted.
>There were shock collars, you had seen pegasi make thunder clouds, you figured it was a fake.
>The enchanted collars fascinated you more, magic was something you could understand easily.
You were offered:
A collar that got heavier the further away a pony went.
A collar that got tighter when triggered.
A rather pricey one that promised to make any pegasus the worst flier there was when triggered thanks to poison joke.
A training collar that compelled a pony to do as they were told, made by Discordax Enterprises.


Which collar do you choose?
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Does anyone have a repository of all the old SiM stuff?
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>>30121773
None of those. Use a choke chain. Human simplicity and brutality at its best, none of this fancy magical bullshit.

Gets the job done. HFY.
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>>30121133
>mfw i wasn't paying close attention and she died at day 15...

Shouldn't be allowed a slave
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>>30121897
Lead and collar are taken care of, this is in case Bat Dash slips them and we need to stop her.
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>>30121779
https://pastebin.com/778zgnJ5 is the last "thread archive" pastebin, but it's missing a few bins.

At the very least:
>http://pastebin.com/dGBtPp6h - Twilight's Submission (Twilight, consensual)
>https://pastebin.com/vjFHrYZm - Welcome Home, Master! (Consensual, Starlight)
>http://pastebin.com/jkbWqc3P - Second bin for Mouth of Anonymous (first bin: http://pastebin.com/wcXHMZkx - Fleur de Lis, Lyra, nonconsensual)
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>>30121909
Choke her until she learns not to run, for fear of what would come next.
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Corona a dead mare?
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>>30121779
>tfw wanted to post links but all were on the pc the burned so I lost all the booksmarks
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For you history Mercury
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>>30121773
>got heavier the further away
This is probably the one. It sacrifices the option of sending it (bat Dash, that is) on errands, but it's safe and effective.

>got tighter when triggered
Also an option, but we have to sleep sometime. That gives it like eight hours to fly out of range. If we use the trigger while it is out of sight we might inadvertently kill it.

>worst flier there was
Cannot be used without risking injury, does not prevent running anyway. This expensive and useless collar is our last choice.

>compelled a pony to do as they were told
I'm guessing there might be reliability issues here? We ask the vendor why all slavers don't use these things, depending on the answer we take this or the variable mass one.
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>>30111082
>>30111188

"I just gave Bon Bon the lecturing of her life for taking justice into her own hooves. We can hardly do the same thing now; focus on confirming Crescent's information first, and then actually detain them."
> 'Detain'.
> It's such a... mild word.
> As if it didn't reflect what was really going to happen - that the ponies who were going to be taken would be condemned to a severe punishment at the very least, and excessive torture at the most.
> You hope Crescent Moon will forgive you if you cannot protect them.
> "I understand, Your Highness."
"Don't go to Anonymous yet - he'll find out eventually, but we need a bit of time to work. To show that we can handle this without him leaping headfirst in. Check if any of them have been in trouble with the guards before, or see if they have solid alibis. Wait for Mellowheart's contact to reach out, and-"
> Cutting yourself off, you shake your head with a hefty sigh.
"I'm sorry. You probably know more about how to carry out a proper investigation than I do."
> "Really, I'm as lost as you are... like trying to fly in a thunderstorm on a moonless night: You catch glimpses of the ground in the lightning, but it's not enough to really know where you're going..."
"An excellent way of putting it."
> Stopping in place, you take one last glance back towards Crescent Moon's place of work.
> Once she'd given you the six names, she'd had to go back to working.
> A fact made somewhat more humiliating by that she'd had to ask you to re-connect the magic limiter on her horn to the wire that would disable it.
> Even the shudder of relief that ran through Crescent as her magic was return - her muscles rippling, like a pony who'd just stood up and stretched after being cramped in a tiny space for too long - only drove more pain into your heart.
> Maybe you could see about getting her sentence reduced as a reward for her cooperation on this.
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>>30122603

> Crescent's prediction that she herself would be in danger herself rings in your head.
> Maybe it would be better if you could see about getting all of the ponies like her - those who'd lashed out in fear rather than hatred - a slight relief as well to conceal her direct participation.
"Do what you can, Thunderlane. I know you won't slack off on this."
> "Yeah. If you don't mind, I'd like to head back to the security post - bring everypony else up to speed on what happened and set new orders out for tomorrow."
"Of course. I'll look forward to hearing from you, Thunderlane... and, be safe."

> Be safe.
> Cadance's final words echo in your ears.
> From the ponies who'd savaged Mocha Cream, you wonder, or from Anonymous?
> You were, after all, playing a most dangerous balancing game.
> Anonymous and Rumble's safety on one side, your pride, Cadance, and the wellbeing of everypony else in the camp on the other.
> What would happen, you wonder, if you fell from that balance - to either side?
> A tremble runs through your wings - and is instantly sensed by the pegasus mare curled at your side.
> "Thunderlane? What's wrong?"
"Nothing, Vapor..."
> For a moment you think you might have gotten away, and then a broad span of creamy feathers settles over your eyes.
> "Now, Thunderlane..."
> Her voice is teasing, breath rushing off one ear.
> "I know what shaky wings like that mean in Pegasi. So, what's wrong?"
> Despite yourself, you still smile.
> This mare...
> She'd immediately seen just how stressed the day had left you, had guided you back to her quarters, and even was staying with you now.
> The one time you'd questioned her on it, Vapor had simply responded that her roomate would understand.
> At the same time, however, a kernel of nervousness had taken hold inside of you.
> Crescent Moon had known Vapor Trail - maybe you should have asked her about that as well today, though now it was far too late.
> Just how far in was she too?
> "Thunderlane-"
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>>30122611

"It's just - you know. I've told you about it before. Frustration with - things not happening. Things I should be doing."
> Like the little voice at the back of your head that says you should have been the one to go to talk to Bon Bon.
> She'd been willing to speak frankly with you, at least.
> Though who knows how much that would've helped now.
"We've got some leads into who attacked Mocha Cream, but not enough to act yet. The pony who was supposed to give me more information hasn't shown up yet-"
> And part of you still fears Mellowheart's contact never will.
"-and in the meantime I'm afraid something worse is going to happen, somepony else is going to get hurt, and everything's going to go just completely fall apart, and - and it'll all have been for nothing!"
> At the end of the little tired you collapse back down, breathing heavily.
"...and I'm afraid you'll be caught up in it."
> "Shh..."
> Vapor Trail's wing rises from your eyes, but they remain closed.
> Shortly thereafter her hooves fall on your back, pressing in on the dense knots of muscle that have built up in your back.
> Being a pegasus herself, she knows exactly where to press.
> With distinct, practiced motions her hooves traces down the ridges of muscle that support your wings; a far more pleasurable ripple runs the length of your coat from muzzle-tip to dock.
"Where did you ever learn to do this?"
> Even Vapor Trail cannot help but giggle softly at how mumbled your words come out.
> "What can I say? I like helping ponies. Sometimes that means listening to them, or being there to support them. Sometimes it means giving them a relaxing touch to help them calm down."
"Mmmmrph."
> That was supposed to be a much more coherent statement, but as she was rapidly reducing your entire body to the consistency of jello it didn't quite make it.
> Another soft giggle from Vapor Trail, who continues working down the length of your back and flanks until your wings lay limp and spread across the bed.
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>>30122618

> "So... now do you feel better?"
"S'good..."
> Rolling over onto your back, you stretch out considerably - fore- and hindlegs extending ahead and behind you respectively - and smile fondly up at her.
> Vapor smiles back down, though it slowly fades.
> "Something's still troubling you."
"...is it that easy to see?"
> "Yes. In some ways. What is it, Thunderlane?"
> You can't bear to face her like this; head rolling to the side, your eyes instead peer out the window to the darkened sky beyond.
> Within moments her head has been lowered to rest on your chest - breath from her nostrils tickling your chin.
"Vapor, your name..."
> A hoof slides up to circle around her neck on one side; on the other, a wing extends to do the same.
"...when we were interrogating some of the ponies caught in the raid, your name came up. They knew you - were surprised I was asking about you. More than surprised; chocked, even."
> At last you manage to drag your gaze back to focus on the mare above you, there's something inscrutable in her cyan eyes.
"It was more than just familiarity, Vapor. What's going on?"
> Now it is Vapor who is forced to look away.
> "You - didn't know? I - I thought..."
> The feeling of uncertainty and concern in your belly metastasizes into full-on fear.
"I didn't know anything, Vapor."
> "I'm - I'm not going to be staying, Thunderlane. When my foal is old enough to travel and there's a safe plan - Derpy said - I'm helping them to earn myself a spot getting out..."
> Of course.
> The one night you'd seen Cadance and Derpy slipping into the clinic while Vapor was in there, and how fast she'd turned around and agreed to stay after that.
> Derpy must have told her there'd be a way to leave soon after.
> She had a filly of her own still in the camp to look after, so it would make sense that she was more focused on leaving then on fighting back.
> Word must have gotten around that to the cell that Crescent Moon was part of.
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>>30122625

> Your first instinct was to be furious that the information had been leaked, but it's soon overwhelmed by horror at what has been just laid on you.
> Vapor clearly sees it, and winces sharply.
> "I - I'm sorry, Thunderlane. I thought - with how close you were to Cadance - I thought you knew."
"No, I - I didn't. I didn't know at you were going to. I - I really did think you were going to stay."
> Your own eyes close and you have to swallow before you can speak again.
"Crescent Moon. Did you know her?"
> "No. Not directly. She was the one who knew me?"
"Yes."
> "I haven't met her, or anypony else from her group. I just carried messages."
> Even as she speaks, it occurs to you just how much trust she is placing in you.
> Vapor Trail knows what your job is; she knows you can have her thrown in a cell right now if you wanted.
> But she hasn't stopped.
> She's trusting you to understand - and that's reason enough for you to believe she genuinely didn't intend to fall in with violent ponies.
> Reason enough to not have her imprisoned.
> Yet, if she's held on to hope of eventual escape this long - even as she's seen what Cadance has been trying to do - she must still feel very strongly about keeping her foal out of slavery.

But what do we do instead?
> Ask her to turn and feed information to us about any dangerous types?
> Plead with her to give up on any plans to escape?
> Try to accept that Vapor is going to leave with her foal, and there's nothing we can do to stop it - no matter how painful this may be?
Feel free to suggest particulars for any, or another option I haven't even got here.
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>>30121773
>>30122347
This
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>>30122631

Thunderlane may feel like the stress of a moment is transformed into a knot that tightens your stomach.

He thought of the possibility more than once, but the Vapor company relieved the pressure of living every day as a traitor to his princess and his people.

He thought of how low he had fallen to protect his brother, how him accept the position of vigilante, how accept the treatment of Anon to have something to hold, how to change the shackles of the slave by the key of the jailer.

He thought of the escape plans, those of BonBon and many others made in the past, in Candance's future promise to flee if the magic plan works, but I also think of all those ponies who returned after they had run away, the sad eyes, the conquered spirits and those who never returned.

Each plan looked like the piece of a puzzle that lacked pieces and the only ones that did not seem to fit.

Sorry, i just wanted to write that, then I'll give you my opinion
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>>30122631
We shouldn't put her in the line of danger by feeding us info or try to force her to stay if she really wants out. I think it's best to accept if she really plans on leaving.
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>>30122631
>what do we do instead?
The first and second options.

Asking for tips on dangerous types is obvious. It actually helps with Sunbursts escape plan, and everypony, as well as being our day job.

Talking about Vapor Trails personal escape plans is more nuanced. We know that Cadance is keeping this in reserve, just in case Anon completely betrays us or some other disaster. If things go as she and he intend, it will never be activated. Does Vapor understand this? Has her cell made promises they can't keep? Does a faction within Sunbursts compartmentalized orginization intend to activate the plan without authority?! We should raise this threat with Sunburst personally when convenient. We keep our ears open when we do, because we will be betraying him ourself when Rumble needs us next. We don't tell Vapor about any of this, it's bad security and no good can come of it.

For now we plead with her to wait and see before committing her self and foal to anything hasty. Where does she want to escape to, anyway? Anon has no plans to free us, but many plans to let the chains ride as light as can be. That might be enough.
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>>30122631
>"I didn't know anything, Vapor."
OMG did she just casually mention the Sooper Sekret Escape Plan, without already knowing that we already know? To her new coltfriend who just happens to be, ya know, Anons head guard pony? Is she too stupid to be worth breeding ourself? Who else has she been talking to? Who else is in her cell?! If this is what passes for opsec around here, Sunburst is already fucked and there is nothing we can do about it. We should just tell Anon everything now, while we still have something to tell!

>or was this Anon just not paying attention?
>might have missed where Vapor Trail learned of Thunderlanes involvement...
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>>30122631
So we can have her continue her duties carrying messages, but also tell us if something bad is about to go down. This mystery group may have attacked Mocha, may be a part of Sunburst's plan, both, or neither. Passing messages makes me think it's part of Sunburst's setup, though. We might be able to stop bad things in the future, but Vapor is at risk of getting caught by the other guards or possibly targeted by Bonbon's group.

We could ask her to give up, but that puts suspicion on her as a snitch and I don't think the thread could handle a second beaten pony. We'd lose out on possible information, and may end up slowing down Sunburst's plan. And that's if we can even convince her. We'd likely have to tell her that we're helping along a larger escape plan, otherwise she'd be angry about telling her to abandon her foal's future and will probably go on anyways, except she's not comfortable with Thunderlane anymore.

Option 3 is accept the heartbreak and things go back to how they were yesterday. The bad parts of 1 without the potential information.

>> Ask her to turn and feed information to us about any dangerous types
She'll understand. Telling us if anything violent is planned, or giving us information on the angrier ponies isn't going to shut down their whole plan, but could save lives. She'll just have to trust that we're not going to dismantle it. Ask her more about the groups she's acting courier for. I don't know if it's worse if the Museum group was part of Sunburst's group, or if there's a second unrelated group using the same type of compartmentalization. It's equally possible that one part of Sunburst's group is so far removed that they thought encouraging rebellion and attacking Mocha were helping the overall goals, or that Vapor is passing messages between two groups of Haute's followers.
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>>30123200
She doesn't know of his involvement.

Either Vapor Trail figured the whole thing was coming unraveled with other cells coming apart and she may as well admit everything to Thunderlane, or she trusts him enough to believe he won't act on it. I don't think we have to fear for general opsec that much.

The real question is, do we keep up the masquerade of not knowing anything about an escape plan or admit to her we knew as well? If we pretend we didn't know, we have to rationalize not arresting her. If we admit we did, we have to explain why it's a big deal to us if she does take part.
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>>30123200
>>30123279
Hey CYOS, are you around to clarify something? I thought she was talking about Cadence and Derpy's promise that she'd be able to escape the camp, but now that they mention it it does kind of sound like she's talking about the escape plan itself.

Or do we have to guess?
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>>30123293
I am hesitant to answer this directly, as it is not information Thunderlane would objectively know.

I will say the answer has been given somewhere else in the story. A smart guess on what to look for will make it very easy to find, though otherwise it might be quite hard.
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>>30123422
Yeah that's what I was afraid of.
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>>30123514
To lazy to pour over the pastebins (both of them) at this hour. If Slaveventure won't spill it directly, any other Anon here want to clue me in?
>feels like Vapor is with another escape group, not Sunbursts, but no evidence.
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>>30123200
Yeah, it's pretty clear the security on this high-risk operation is about as air-tight as a swiss cheese submarine. At this point the only way it wont end up collapsing in on itself is if it turns out Anon's been playing 5D CS:GO all along by setting up the conspirators with a fake outside contact.
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>>30121903
Hah!
Over a month in, she absolutely loves me and helps with work wearing cute nurse outfit.
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Been caught up with my finals lately, but I'm getting around to finishing the next update. When I do, should I post the last update from 2(?) threads ago? Didn't get to do that, what with the connection error screwing things up. Or do I only post the one I'd just got done writing?

Actually, is that connection error problem still a thing? Hopefully it's been resolved by now.
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>>30122631
Accept Vapor's role. She's not a part of what we're really after. There's no reason why we can't let her do what she's doing if we are already in knowledge of Sunburst's plan and in approval of it.
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>>30123200
If he tells Anon that there is another escape plan, here's what will happen.

1: Vapor Trail will be taken away from us and separated from her foal.

2:Anon will crack down harder than ever.

3:Thunderlane with be anathema from every pony ever, forever.

I think that's a terible idea.
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>>30122631
Her trust in us is a precious thing. We can't let give her up or force her to reveal anything, besides maybe if she has heard whispers of who could have been responsible for Mocha's beating. Stress to her that this matter is the only one you are interested in pursuing right now, not her general escape group cell.
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In a Glimmer of Hope, is it set in an au where /mlp/ doesn't exist? Glimmer claims to be an /a/utist, so she'd know about /mlp/, right?
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>>30123632
That would be funny as hell.

>>30123200
It might be time for him to seriously start considering this, the info is only useful as leverage as long as Anon doesn't know, and with how shit they seem to be at keeping this under wraps that may not be much longer.
And if one of the ponies involved in the beating knows about the plan they may cut a deal with Anon so he doesn't fuck them up.
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>>30122631
Ask her if she knows about the violent ponies, but do not report her at all.
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>>30122631
Try to accept that we are going to betray Vapor Trail, there is nothing we can do to stop it - no matter how painful this may be. We have already made this choice before the beginning of this story.
We ask about how her escape is going to work. If she mentions Haycartes, books, or Sunburst then we go to Anon now. We have to before somepony else inevitably does and takes away our ability to protect Rumble, that we have decided to sacrifice everything for.
If she mentions some other escape method, we start an investigation and do our guard-pony job like normal. Her escape organization cannot be allowed to compete with Sunbursts (and Cadances, ours, and Rumbles if he ever needs it). In either case our relationship with her has just ended.
>Anon is our only real friend, the only being who really understands us; too bad we hate him the most!
>We should talk to him anyway. He might understand something about loneliness too.
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>>30123200
This is risky as all fuck, but I'd have to agree with this being trash-tier opspec. Maybe at one time this might have been genuine puppy love but she clearly would throw Thunderlane under the bus over an unborn foal's freedom, rather than accept Thunderlane into her life.

>What can I say? I like helping ponies.
How many fucking ponies?

However, don't press her for information either. She's fucking dumb, but still worth protecting and if they'd beat an innocent teenager for jack shit they'd beat a pregnant mare that actually snitched. They have to know whatever information her little "guard dog" would have would come from her (Regardless if it was actually from her or not, we should probably warn her about this). For her safety and ours, we need to play dumb for now though.
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>>30125023
We should not report her in any way, shape, or form. That would be buttfuck retarded. "Thunderlane, betrayer of his pregnant marefriend" would also be his new moniker, and any respect he had from the other ponies would be lost forever.

And everyone is calling her "dumb", but really, it's love. She trusts him a fuckton. A relationship like that with someone like her is one in a million. She's let us vent plenty to her, and we've told her stuff, and just by virtue of the fact that she's told us this, it's safe to say she isn't snitching.
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>>30124084
This, all this.
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>>30124084
If he doesn't tell Anon there is another escape plan, here's what will happen.

1: Another pony will. If Vapor is telling us, she is telling others. If she isn't, others are. This conspiracy just has no discipline, and thus no security, and thus no future.

2: Anon will find out we were involved, and kept it secret from him. We will be severely punished with the rest. He will no longer trust us.

3: When Rumble screws up and needs us next, we will be unable to help him.

It's that third point that's the kicker. This is the reason we betrayed the last escape attempt, and it's the reason we're betraying this one too. Anon will keep our betrayal secret this time just like last time. Rumble and the rest never have to know.
>this is just what we are, for better or worse
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>>30122631
>But what do we do instead?


>> Ask her to turn and feed information to us about any dangerous types?
In exchange for? Make a new deal with Anon to hand over those responsible in exchange for Vapor being exonerated of all participation and that she and her foal can live in the mansion? No doubt Megan and Flurry love to have a new baby brother but I very much doubt that Vapor sees that as an improvement to their condition

>Plead with her to give up on any plans to escape
I fear that Vapor will not betray what she sees as the only opportunity for her foal to live free, and if she is threatened by the rebels and follows them out of fear?

Maybe she knows they would attack Mocha all the time.


> Try to accept that Vapor is going to leave with her foal, and there's nothing we can do to stop it - no matter how painful this may be?
If Thunderlane had the opportunity to free his brother would not make the same decision?

What can you offer to Vapor and your Foal here? Love and companionship is not enough, the life of a slave, even that of a first class will always be determined by its owner, a life of gray dreams and empty smiles

Man, this is hard

Maybe Thunder should just hand it over to Anon and let him get the information.
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>>30122631
I think the third option is best from the list. But we need to warn her of the dangers, too. And on top of that, we need to possibly meet with Cadance about this matter before we go blabbing to Anon. Vapor mentioned that she thought he knew because of his "closeness" to Cadance... we need to know if this escape plan is Sunburst's or not. For now, we shouldn't go to Anon I don't think.
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I miss corona
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>>30126622
All that love of her's isn't going to stop her from bailing on him at the first chance of escape.
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I miss clear skies
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>>30127922
Just my two cents, there is a LOT of time between then and now. There is time for her attitude to change, or for their circumstances to change considerably in favor of escape. Her foal isn't even born, and she can't travel until he or she is much older.

Rumble is going to be fine, too. You guys are even more anxious than Thunderlane about that, Jesus. Besides, even if we tell Anon about the planned escape (which isn't going to happen for a long time even IF it does happen, for above reasons) all he is going to do is crack down much harder and insist that trying to do good things for his ponies is fruitless. Say goodbye to any more positive developments, here.
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if faganon hasn't left the thread permenatly, maybe he could write estrus season 2 electric boogaloo?
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>>30127132
>your Foal
Woah, put the brakes on there nigger, that is her fucking kid, not Thunder's.

She was already knocked up when he got there, and I'm pretty sure she hasn't even fucked him yet, He's only starting to think he might love her, it's not like he's married to the ditz.
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>>30122631
>>30127132

I would like to make a correction, here Vapor could respond to the proposal of Thunderlane about making a deal with Anon in exchange for information.

>>> Ask her to turn and feed information to us about any dangerous types?

"And then Thunderlane? Sell my comrades in exchange for a fluffy bed and a maid's uniform in the mansion of Anon? And what will be my foal? I'm sure that Master's daughter will have fun with her new toy!"


>Try to accept that Vapor is going to leave with her foal, and there's nothing we can do to stop it - no matter how painful this may be?

"Let's flee Thunderlane! Let's fly away, we can hide in the clouds and look for food at night, we will follow the paths of the birds that emigrate and we will find a place free of humans! You, Me Rumble and my Foal, even for a short time we will be a family! We'll be free!"
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>>30128245
>Rumble is going to be fine, too. You guys are even more anxious than Thunderlane about that, Jesus.

You're right, Rumble would be fine. Even before, he could have taken the 30 (or even 60) lashes he deserved along with Cadance and the rest, and been perfectly fine. But that's not how Thunderlane thinks, as we see here:

> "I spied for you, Celestia damn it! I betrayed everypony else here and you promised me you'd keep my little brother safe!"
"And I have, Thunderlane. I gave Rumble a nice cushy job handing out bread. I've gave him quarters for him and his marefriend. I've even looked the other way when I know he's been giving out extra food left and right against the rules."
> "So then let him off! Isn't me turning over this whole thing to you worth his safety?"
"You didn't exactly prevent the escape from happening, you know."
> "I've stopped plenty of other escape attempts. Plus, a hundred more would be gone - including all of the ones who planned it - if I hadn't told you where to find them."

In Thunderlanes mind, there is no amount of suffering or betrayal inflicted on other ponies that cannot be justified by protecting Rumble from even the smallest risk. Nothing much has changed between his last betrayals and this next one. He is not quite rational or proportional on the subject; his love for his brother and the stress of slavery have damaged his sanity.
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>>30124184
From the paste:
>The two of you spend the next hour catching each other up on your favorite boards. Apparently, since the two universes actually collided and ‘PONIES R REAL’ /mlp/ grew to be one of the most popular boards, where both media series are discussed.

It's super trippy seeing brony sub-cuture collide with SPG in world, HJ handles it really well.
>Hope you're doing ok in boot camp, maggot!
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>>30122631
Already said my say (at length), just wanted to compliment you on the writing. Crescent Moons stoic suffering and politeness to someone she hates, Thunderlanes poetic turn of phrase, Vapor Trials pegasus massage, you make all the little details of the story shine through.
Your story has become part of my own life, and I thank you for it.
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>>30123930
Ya, repost that last update. A bit of pasta is not a bad idea anyway, just to remind us where the story is.
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>>30122631
A combination of plans 1 and 2. We will accept if we cannot force her out of her decision, and we swear we won't turn her into Anon for planning it. But stress just how dangerous attempting to break out is, especially for a newly walking foal. Point out the dangers of not knowing where to go, or making sure if the plan is solid or not, and stress that if things in the camp are NOT totally unbearable the risk aren't worth what you're losing here

1 is important just in case she knows anyone who might do like what happened to Mocha Cream, which I feel like Vapor would do just for her sake as well
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>>30121773
>You just grabbed one of the extinguishers
Lyra is such a badass. Teach that mouthy dragon!

>It wasn’t pleasant for any involved, especially not her, not when it was a chance to be with her sister again.
Not sure what this refers to. Who are Flitter and her sister? What happened at the mill?

>pausing to look at the thestral once more.
Did you mean 'the slave'?

>It would be yours soon.
Like the consistent use of 'it' instead of 'she', in english this is really powerful. Technically appropriate for a slave, but even animals usually get He or She if they are respected even a little. Looking forward to Lyras conversations with Bat Dash.

>one spot for alien, and it was not for you.
Always fun to mock the bureaucracy.

>You weren’t sure what to do with it, you were used to transporting unconscious ponies
Also looking forward to Lyra learning to be an efficient slaver. I'm sure she and Bat Dash will make many mistakes along the way, but Lyra should get good fast at this basic skill.

>That last one left you feeling very uncomfortable with yourself
Tell us more about Lyras hidden riding fetish! Was she saddled as a slave herself? Was she uncomfortable with how comfortable it was? Does she understand her true place is under a human master, one way or another?

>You looked at your slave, this was a moment it would need to be consulted on.
Why did Dash need to be consulted? What if 'it' did not want to wear a collar?

>Which collar?
The training collar that compels sounds by far the most versatile, but like the previous post said we should learn more about it.
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>>30116749

>Ok so far the plan was working out about as poorly as expected.
>Calling their regional office and asking for Rarity had gotten you nowhere fast.
>"A Miss Rarity? Do you have a last name?"
"Oh um yes Bell, Rarity Bell."
>"No I'm sorry I don't think we have anyone by that name at this office Miss."
>Yeah ok sure you don't...
>So either she changed her name or she doesn't take calls from random strangers.
>But how do you run a company without taking calls?
>Does her secretary just screen every single call or maybe her second in command just pretends to be CEO most the time.
>You start to write an Email but it makes even less sense the more you look at it.
>Yeah just forward this email to the mystery mail way at the top just because it asked nicely.
>You almost delete the draft but why not send it anyway?
>May as well try the phone a few more times but you soon give up on that too.
>If the company publicly denies her existence then any publically accessible means of contact probably isn't going to work.
>So what else is there?
>The picture was taken in New York and that's also where the company head office is.
>Unfortunately You and anon live way down in Georgia, not exactly a quick trip.
>Even if you went there in person though they still probably wouldn't let strangers off the street see her, much less random ponies.
>If push came to shove though you were pretty sure you could just teleport your way past security.
>You know if you could somehow get to New York that is.
>Oh Anonnnnnnnnnnnn
>You have to wait til he gets home and had dinner but once he's nice and relaxed and buttered up you pick up your laptop and find him in his room.
"Soooo this is going to sound crazy but remember my friends I told you about? Welllllll this is one of them."
>Giving the article a quick once over he nods.
>"Runs a company? That's pretty crazy, gonna give her a call?"
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>>30131438

"Well... I've tried. I've tried everything but the company seems to keep her a secret and I can't just call up there and say 'oh hi im Rarity's friend let me talk to her'..."
>"Oh well that sucks, maybe you should just send her an email or something."
"I tried that too trust me. The bottom line is I'm not gonna get through to her like this... We have to go to New York."
>"We what?"
"Please please please we have to go there, I can sneak in and find her and everything will be great please we just have to go!"
>"Ok you are not sneaking into a random business because your friend might work there first of all. You'll get arrested and I'll get fined or something."
"Annnnonnn please you know how much my friends mean to me please!"
>"Twilight I have work I can't just run off to New York with you I don't have the vacation days left."
"We can go on the weekend please anon I just need one day!"
>"Twilight drop it! We are not flying across the country for the slim chance you can chat with one of your friends that's crazy!"
"Ugh you stupid humans you just don't get it do you?! Ponies need friendship it's a part of us! Please I'll do anything I just need to see her!"
>"No you're the one that doesn't get it Twilight! Do you know how much the flight would cost alone? Much less room and board for two in one of the most expensive cities in the country? I don't need this attitude from you little filly!"
"I am not a filly! This is the one thing I've ever asked of you and you can't even do this for me?!?!?"
>"Who do you think pays for your food filly? Your internet? Your new computer? Even that expensive tracking system so you can leave the house??? I'd say you have it pretty sweet here as it is but if you disagree I'll give you something to complain about!
>Oo ow anon grabs the scruff of your neck and pulls you over to his bed!
"No no quit it!"
>"You know what happens when you get lippy with me you little brat!"
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>>30131441

>Your righteous anger is quickly extinguished and replaced by a cold sinking feeling as you realize you've pushed him too far.
>Hooves dragging anon mare handles you his side as he sits down on the edge of his bed!
"Please Anon I take it back I take it back! I'm sorry!"
>"You're only sorry because you're about to get taught a lesson!"
>You desperately squirm and kick as he drags you over his lap but it's no use.
>Grabbing your tail in one hand Anon pins you down over his lap with a firm grip on your back.
"Please please please not again Anon I'm sorry I'm sorry!"
>"Two weeks in a row Twilight, I'm not gonna pretend I'm not a little disappointed in you..."
"I'll be good sweet celestia I'll be good!"
>Yanking your tail to pull your bottom even higher Anon pats you seat a few times in anticipation.
>"You will be after I'm done with you that's for sure."
"OWWWWW!"
>Your master wastes no time raising his hand and bringing it back down across your flank!
"No no no!"
>"Yes Twilight! SPANK You did this SPANK to yourself SPANK!"
>You can't believe this is happening again so soon!
>You just want your friends!!!
"AHHHH ow ow owwwwww!"
>"You will not talk to me like that!"
SMACK SMACK SMACK
"Yes master!!!"
>"You will not talk about humans like that in general!"
SMACK SMACK SMACK
"OHHHHH YES MASTER YES MASTER I'M SORRY I'M SORRRYYYY!"
>"If you don't appreciate all I do for you them maybe I need to do this more often!"
"NO NO NO PLEASE DON'T PLEASE FORGIVE ME PLEASE!"
>The heavy spankings don't let up as you kick your rear hooves helplessly!
>You just finally recovered from your lesson last week and now you're probably already back to a bright red flank!
"AHHH OWWWWW NOOOOOO!"
>Giving you a few more firm smacks the lesson momentarily stops as Anon reaches down and picks something up off the floor.
>Blinking away the tears and look back over your shoulder to see Anon already tapping the flip flop lightly on your roasted rump!
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>>30131447

"Master please no!"
>"Quiet you, you're gonna get it until I'm sure you've learned."
>It's not the hairbrush but it still stings!
>THWACK THWACK THWACK THWACK THWACK!
>You close your mouth to muffle your squeals but you know you can only stay quiet for so long!
>THWACK THWACK THWACK THWACK THWACK!
>You can't do it! He said be quiet but you can't!!!
>Your bottom feels like an active volcano as you burst into loud bawling once again.
"WAAAAAAAA OWWWWWWWWWWWWWW CELESTIA PLEASEEEEE!"
>"I SPANK said SPANK be SPANK quiet SPANK SPANK SPANK!!!"
"I CANNNNTTTTTTTTTTTTTT PLEASEEEEE!!!"
>Suddenly there are hands around your midsection, you are lifted up then placed on all fours on the floor.
>"If you can't follow simple instruction like that then maybe you can follow these. Fetch your hairbrush right now!"
>This is it, worse case scenario!
"No Anon please I can't take that right now! I'll never be sassy again just not the brush!"
>"If you don't get the brush in the next 30 seconds we're going to have a repeat of this tomorrow!"
>Your eyes shrink to pinpricks as you dash out of the room.
>Stumbling into your room on unsteady legs you look around for the instrument of your demise desperately.
>Shit where did you even leave the damn thing!
>"15 Seconds!"
>fuck fuck fuck! there!"
>Grabbing it in your magic you run back to Anon's lap and crawl back over like the fearful little slave you were.
>Lifting your tail to your back again he pats your seat a few times to get you ready.
>"See you can follow directions, you just need motivation!"
>You barely have time to gulp in fear before your 'motivation' lands!
"AHHHHHHH NO NO NO NO NO!!!!"
>The brush is landing twice as fast as the flip flop was and you instantly find yourself kicking desperately as your bottom burns like a thousand suns!
"MERCY MASTER PLEASEEEE!"
>"You'll get mercy when you've learned!"
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>>30131459

>He punctuates each word with a brutal blow from the brush!
>You are sure your cheeks are bruised now as the pain only gets worse and worse!
"PLEASEEEEEE MASTERRRR PLEASEEEE FORGIVEEEE MEEEEE!"
>You must have sounded extra pathetic because he takes a moment to check both your rump and your face.
>Seemingly satisfied with your blisters and tear stained face a mere three more hard swats land and the rapid fire flank flattening finally stops.
>You desperately gasp for breath as you look down at the puddle of tears on the floor beneath you.
>Gosh you're so pathetic now...
>"Now you're going to get up, you're going to give me your laptop, and you're going to go to your room for the rest of the night do you understand me Twilight?"
>You can only nod as you hiccup and whimper pathetically, your body now nothing but dead weight over Anon's knees.
>When you don't make an effort to get up yourself he picks you up by the scruff of your neck once again and carries you like a foal to your room.
>Struggling to stand on your shaky legs you float the laptop over to him before he has to ask for it.
>"You MAY get this back tomorrow. IF your attitude changes."
"Yes SNIFF yes sir..."
>Closing the door behind him you look around you in dismay.
>A quick look in the mirror confirms you're backside was covered in bruises, no doubt a result of another lesson on top of your not yet healed cheeks.
>Having seen enough of just how far you've fallen you crawl into bed and curl up into a pitiful purple ball of pony.
>Human's just don't understand, you'll go crazy without some real friends.
>You may have said a few thing you now regret but you stand by your reason for saying them.
>Rarity where are you?

We'll actually meet up with Rarity next time, i just figured i couldn't name the story 'Sparkles Slaves and Spankings' without spanking her at least a few more times.
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>>30131468
I'm a fan of the spank generally, but this seemed kinda harsh. Last time it was actual disobedience, this time it was just a forceful request. Perhaps Anon will feel guilty, and help her contact Rarity somehow.
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>>30131512
who told you my secrets? Anon isn't perfect but he does have a conscience.
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>>30131441
I do not want to say that she deserves a punishment, but Anon has proved to be a decent Master, others would simply have her sleeping in the dog's house with a chain around her neck and the magic suppressor at full power, she needs a dose of reality and look for a different method to find your friend
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>>30131459
>>30131468
Ouch! Poor Twilight..

She is going to need it

If I have not seen it before I would like to know how Twiligth known to Anon, the story behind.

Good job Vega
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>Final episode of Samurai Jack in 8 minutes, all the threads suspended for 30 minutes
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>>30132241
22 minutes of "YEAH!" "WHOA!" "FUCK YEAH" and "NOOOOOOO" Samurai Jack finally is over, thaks for his patiente and we return to our regular thread
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>>30128006
I miss her too. That writefag was so talented, and ruggedly handsome.

>>30128302
>faganon
Close enough. I'm usually here, you can spot my wall of text after every CYOS update. I'm just a shit that wrote everything I wanted to and then burned out. Also, the subtitle is 'The Re-estrusing'.

Today was a tequila kind of day. First we get knocked into the Fetus Cup by fucking /n/ and /sci/ of all teams, and then a new episode of The Starlight Glimmer Show. 8/10, Daybreaker is best pony And THEN, Samurai Jack finale.

Expect some more Clear Skies in the next day or two, I guess.
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>>30132664
>We got fetused

Fucking REALLY? God, I hope our managers are sacked in the morning.
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>>30132775
kek
really dropped the ball
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>>30132795
We have two stars, who let this happen?
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>>30132775

Mmmm... That salt...
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TFW I've never actually watched the Hasbro show, only been a fan of the fandom. Starting S01E03 now. Anything I should pay attention to?
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>>30133563
Anything and everything, new ponyfag.
Just enjoy the ride, and welcome!
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>>30132963
Not salt, just disappointment.

I expected better to be honest.
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>>30133596
>welcoming
On the other hand. It does make me feel better to know there's someone even more pathetic than myself around.
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>>30123293
>>30123542
Figured it out. From the last time we talked to Derpy (which is probably why CYOS said it could be easy to find):

> "She's... I got her to believe that her foal could be free, but I reeeally think she's gonna try it too, Cadance."
> Standing, you turn and start walking; Derpy is quickly at your side.
"To run away?"
> "To get her foal away, anyhow..."

and

"...would you help her, Derpy? If she asked?"
> "Yes."
"I thought you didn't want any part of resisting anymore."
> "I don't want to be separated from my filly in here. I still want her to be free - but I'm not gonna do something silly."
> Dropping your head and leaning over to nuzzle her gently, you nod.
"I understand."
> She closes her eyes, giving a soft nicker.
"I won't ask what you're doing, then - but for both our sakes, don't tell me and don't get caught."

So, Derpy was probably brought in on Sunburst's plan because she's a trusted pony. She brings Vapor Trail in because she knows that Vapor is driven and can be trusted not to screw her own chances over, for the same reason Derpy isn't going to do anything stupid until she knows she can get out of the camp with her filly. Vapor mistakenly assumes Cadance knows all of this because Cadance connected her with Derpy, and then also mistakenly assumes Thunderlane knows too because he works superclose with Cadance.

BUT, there's nothing to suggest she knows the details of the plan, just that there IS one. I think we're all freaking out a little bit too much about opsec here, Vapor made one bad assumption based on a very particular situation but that tells us nothing about how the rest of it is being run.
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>>30133664
Alternatively,you can fuck off and throw yourself under a bus if you insist on being such a mean cunt and a faggot.

> It does make me feel better to know there's someone even more pathetic than myself around.
Takes one to know one, asshat. At least, we treat each other nicely you basement-dwelling, overweight NEET; but then again, being nice to others is probably an alien feeling for a social recluse such as yourself.

I would advise you to take the friendship lessons from from MLP seriously, and use them to try and make your first friend. If you still are unable to, then just do us a favor and inject bleach into your bloodstream.
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>>30133697
Had a hearty chuckle mate. You should do stand up.
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>>30133697
10/10 reply would completely fist a troll again
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>>30133749
>Telling the truth is trolling.

You must be a glimmer fan.
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>>30133785
>Using the Starlight Glimmer meme.
Hahaha. Fuck off.
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>>30133601
at babscon they made a lot of claims about testing
they need to redo those fucking tests a few times apparently
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>>30075481
Ok, i edited previous parts(except one mistake i found too hilarious to take out). Here is pastebin https://pastebin.com/wgaVqQ0u

>Room actually looks nice. It is a bit messy, not consistent with style but has good interior.
>Well, I couldn’t notice it first time for obvious reasons.
>Large bed out of red wood, futuristic closet, and old desk with.
>”Do you have these in Equestria?”
>Also, a piano and gramophone. He clearly haven’t planned interior of this room.
“What do you mean?”
>”I mean this. It is called a piano. It is-”
“Yes, of course! Do you think we are tribals or what?”
>”Well, no, just… I thought you are different species from another world.”
”So me talking the same way didn’t concern you?”
>”Actually… Well, you have undisguisable accent, so I thought you just learned it.”
“I have. But your language sounds very Yakistanish for my ear.”
>”I’ll pretend I understood what you are talking about.”
>Maybe he thinks that I was afraid of that thing on the wall.
>But who am I to judge? I killed too. After all, I was a war prisoner.
>And now slave of quirky upper-class colt.
>Man. By Celestia, it is hard too correct yourself sometimes.
“Do you play it?”
>”Huh? The piano?”
“No, the feelings of mares.”
>”Hah, good one. Well, I used to, haven’t practiced for long time.”
>As he sits before piano, he tries out different passages
>”Well, could be worse. It was a year, I believe. Primarily because I changed line of work.”
>”Piano helped me. I had a habit of playing it.”
>”You know, sometimes when I had no idea what to look for in case, the officials don’t cooperate, and your client isn’t making it easier, one composition helped me to concentrate. Now, let’s say…”
>He started playing, something a lot like a waltz.
>”I guess it was hardwired in me then.”
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>>30134286
>As he smirked, he continued, with much more passion. Mistakes happened then and there, judging by his reactions, but for me, it still sounds pretty.
>And pretty strange. I’m no musician, but I don’t remember any waltz sounding so… ironical?
>There must be a better way to put it.
>Grand chords taken place of humble melodies, and then they shift around again.
>As composition progressed, his face showed more anger. Chords sounded more compulsed, emotional.
>He ended it with two loud chords.
>”Well, better than expected.”
“What was it?”
>”It was Shostackovich’s. At least shadow of it. I’ll better show you sometime how it really should sound.”
>Shosta… Ah, I will not remember that anyway.
>”And what your line of work nowadays?”
>His face shows more than wonder. As he looks around the room, he stops his glance on gramophone.
>”Of course! Now about what I brought you here for.”
>He quickly jumped to a lower part of desk, from which of he got out some vinyl’s.
>”You know, this shit is hard to get. Half of that I got from my father, and half of that I bought in student years, from some drunkards on Arbat or some other places. ‘Cause another way it would cost fortune.”
>He looks like he will not return to my question.
>”There is different stuff. Soviet pop groups, some Soviet rock. Heh, “Civil defense”. Some foreign stuff. Oh, Pink Floyd, father’s one. Uh, sneaky bastard, you still hadn’t told me how you got- Khem-khem, sorry. What kind of music do you listen?”
>He surely likes his collection.
“Whatever I choose for my show usually.”
>”You were showman? Eh, show woma- Hm, how to-”
”Yes, I am showmare. I used to be illusionist.”
>”Huh, really. But don’t you have magic in your world?”
>That is… kind of out of place.
“Yeah, we do. How it is related?”
>”Isn’t the whole point of illusionism is to fake magic?”
>Oh, you better not mean it.
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>>30134293
>”And what the point of illusionism in the world where magic exist?”
>You better not mean it.
“Eh, you know… Yes, there is some “fake magic”, you know, but the real one used too.”
>“Then what is the point?”
”What do you mean?”
>”I mean, why would people be attracted to “fake magic” if there is real one and it is normal?”
>Relax, Trixie. Relax. He doesn’t know what he is talking about.
>He is wondering, not stating. He is not that bitch.
“Well, it is still spectacular, you see. After all, it is not “magic” ponies are searching for, but show.”
>”Huh. So, it is like circus tricks basically, right?”
>I can kinda understand his logic, but it is still a little insulting.
“Sort of. It is… illusionism, you know.”
>”Right. Right.”
>That awkward silence.
>”So, what about human music? Wanna hear it?”
>”Yes, wouldn’t mind. What about… this one?”
>At first he wonders, but then he grins.
>”Are you sure?”
”Well, do you mind?”
>”Oh, no, “Civil defense” is one of my favorites, it is just very specific, you see.”
>Now we will see.
>He puts vinyl in gramophone and starts the machine.
>some strange noises come out of the speaker.
>What is with a quality of record?
>And now some drunkie starts to “sing”.
--Peace or war? Peace or war? Peace or war? Peace or war? WAR!--
>That is some good start.
>Now I wonder if Anon really have any taste in first place.
--God or death? God or death? God or death? God or death? DEATH!--
>He looks like he really enjoys it.
>What is wrong with humans?
--Love or fear? Love or fear? Love or fear? Love or fear? FEAR!--
“What about-“
>”Understood, not your type of music. Lets find something else.”
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>>30134299
--Freedom or whip? Fre-
>Now, needle off the vinyl. She clearly was not prepared for some deep russian stuff.
“So, what about some old pop music?”
>Before Trixie could answer, my phone started to ring.
>God damn it, what do they need me for so early?
“Sorry, Trixie, wait a minute.”
>It is Roller.
“Yes, I’m listening.”
>It better be important, you fuck.
>“Stitcher, I need some consulting.”
>I understand that position of my right hand was sudden for you, but can you at least try to act on your own?
“Everyone needs it once in a while. What is your question?”
>“Lets discuss it personally; I’m already near your house.”
>That is some quality work, Roller. Not warning your boss and fall on him like snow on the head.
>I’m really proud of you.
“Okay, wait, I’ll open the gates.”
>Why I chose him?
>Well, it is not like I had options. Since I became a little busy with that pony, I needed someone to take charge of the deals.
>And all I need when I don’t have any other concerns is “treasury” and “discipline department”.
>Both represented by one group.
>So, as I went outdoors, my remote for some reason worked only after third try.
>Maybe it is time to change the batteries.
>Roller drove up in his Lexus and stepped out of the car with worried expression on his face.
“Greetings. Be my guest. Would you like a tea?”
>”I’m not for long, we just have problem with one deal.”
“Still come in. It only April, and I’m in only the robe.”
>He sure fucked up.
>Jesus fucking Christ, why they can do no shit without me?
>Well, if they could, they wouldn’t be your subordinate, after all.
>Oh, that is fucking great. He doesn’t even take off the shoes as he goes in.
“Do you all have something against my carpets?”
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>>30134305
>”Sorry, boss. Anyway, it will be fast, so…”
>Start talking, dumbass.
>”The deal is today, but shipment cannot be driven out of Moscow because of BOLO.”
>Why would he concern with something so easy?
”Is techie is missing?”
>”What? No.”
“Then have you changed license plates?”
>”Yes, of course.”
“Then hide the shipment and wait for end of police operations, what the problem?”
>”Shipment must be done today, Stitcher.”
“So, you cannot warn client that shipment will be late for some days?”
>”No, cause they need it today.”
>Good Lord. If he made a deal with “vory”, I’ll kill him right-
>”Do you have problem?”
>Oh, Trixie came to the living room and probably heard all that.
“Oh, don’t worry, Trixie, nothing serious.”
>”Oh, you have a pony, Sticher? She looks nice.”
“Don’t change the subject, Roller. Why you made so suspicious deal?”
>”Well, client was checked, and deal sounded nice…”
“Roller, we don’t trade paper clips. We trade arms. You understand that all precautionary measures I make for at least some reason?”
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>>30134307
>”I haven’t made a mistake! Police actions are out of my control.”
“And that is why you made a deal without back up variant?”
>”That was a back up variant, Sticher!”
“Are you ins-”
>”You trade arms, Anon?”
>Oh. Of course, she didn’t know.
“Ehm, yes, Trixie. And I want you to not tell anyone that.”
>For some reason, her face didn’t change.
>A hour ago she screamed when she saw my room, but now she doesn’t even react.
>What is up with that pony?
“I guess I need to go myself. Trixie, sorry, but can you spend another day without me?”
>”Maybe I can help?”
>Why would she ask this?
“Unless you can make whole track guns and ammunition invisible, hardly.”
>She smirked and laughed a little. I didn’t even joke.
>”Then you are lucky, since I’m The Great and Powerful Trixie. This is minor feat for someone like me.”
>Is she serious?
”Trixie, I appreciate the joke-”
>”No, really, I can do it. The only thing that I need that thing out of my horn.”
>Okey, unicorns can do magic, I heard about that. But something like this?
>No, seriously, what the fuck?
>”Sticher, I see you have some good tricks up your sleeve.”
>This certainly will not end well.
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>>30134312
That's all for now, folks. Sorry, for long period between updates, real life kinda messes my plans up.
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>>30134312
>track guns and ammunition invisible
*truck of guns and ammunition.
I only posted it and there are already huge mistakes. Geez.
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>>30133667
This is exactly what I was thinking, too. We cannot turn this in to Anon. Vapor Trail simply assumed wrong about TLane, and that diesn't make her a ditz.
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>>30134821
Woops, meant "doesn't"
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>>30134332
pastebin?
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>>30131178
Flitter and Cloudchaser.
Flitter is a free pony, Cloudchaser is a slave.
Cloudchaser's owner tried to claim Flitter as a slave due to their similarity, and Flitter almost went through with it just to be together again.
A bit of the issue of what does it mean to be family and free.
I'm probably not saying it correctly, the idea is that being a slave and being free are both costing part of who you are.

>Did you mean 'the slave'?
Thestral is an alternative word to bat pony I saw in the general. I figure it would be nice to have some words other than it constantly as you say below.

>That last one left you feeling very uncomfortable with yourself
In time, though the last part is a bit more of the issue.
Lyra isn't completely free in her mind, just a conscript never is.
Say, where is your service weapon, you did turn it into inventory right?

>You looked at your slave, this was a moment it would need to be consulted on.
Is a bat pony a pegasus? Rainbow Dash says yes here.
That's all it really is about.
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>>30135446
https://pastebin.com/wgaVqQ0u
It was there >>30134286, but i guess was not percieved since that is not how it is usually done here.
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>>30136717
i am so sorry
i totaly did not saw that
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>>30137336
Would whip the back of until she has permanent fishnets/10
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>clear skies master has to leave for a week during the peak of her estrus
>clear is on the verge of going absolutely insane without him
>she seems to not be as sad this time around but shudders into fits of extreme horniness from time to time that leave her a sweaty mess
>the house is shut and filled with her thick musk which only serves to embarrass her
>when anon gets back clears beyond hope
>the mere scent of her beloved master makes her drip
>her tail flags as hard as it can, her thighs spreading to present herself
>she's shaking and trembling with lust
>anon quickly carriers her to the bedroom and absolutely breaks his little mare
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>You see your neighbor having to constantly discipline and physically punish his pony for disobedience and attitude problems. Asking him about it, he offers to leave the pony in your care for a while if you can break them into an obedient slave. Doing so will result in a dramatic improvement in their quality of life, but you will be mentally breaking them with some pretty rough methods.

You cannot talk the pony into obeying, and you cannot flee with them. Do you do it?
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>Be me
>Came into this thread for the first time when Shiny and Corona, AGlimmer of Hope, and Choose your own slaventure were beginning
>Got sad by slave pony left
>Only just came back because I missed the sadness
>whatthefuckiswrongwithme.jpeg
>All the stories have a few thousand lines to go through
I've missed so fucking much and there's so much to catch up on that I'm wondering if there's any point in
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>>30138388
Corona died so if you're looking for sad go read that
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>>30138349
Offer to buy it.
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>>30138349
Yes.
Mind breaking a pony through invasive physical methods is a real treat.
I would start with the hooves and putting electrodes through the front into the vellum.
Any time a step is taken without approval, direct shock into the hoofsie.
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>>30138388
Just think of it as an opportunity to have fun reading straight through tons of story. Take your time.
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Where are the boat ponies? I need to know how many lashes Primrose gets!
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could a drawfag turn the silhouette of the woman into one that looks like that whorse corona?
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>>29951557
SILVER SPOON
>"Between you and me,” Moondancer mumbles softly, just as aware as you how thin the walls are. “I *really* do think he’s trying to help."
“By selling off… selling off *worthless* ponies?”
>You heard him say it clearly. You both did.
>The walls are thin, just bare plywood for the most part.
>You both heard him clear as day, but the other mare shakes her head.
>”He’s… he’s just under a lot of stress. He won’t actually do it.”
>You glance at the door, though you can’t say why.
>He’s still outside in the hall, not anywhere near the door.
>You can’t hear his voice anymore, but his furious pacing gives him away.
>That’s all you’ve heard for several minutes - his steps echoing back and forth on the bare concreate floor.
>You can follow him just from the sound – or from the way Moondancer’s ears swivel to track each step.
>She’s terrified, or her ears wouldn’t be doing that.
>He’s angry.
>When he comes back in…
>You don’t want to think about it.
“Then…”
>This may be your only chance to ask.
>To know for sure.
“… if that’s true…”
>She hasn’t spoken ill of him. Not once. Not today, nor last night.
>”It is.”
>Her presence – and your own – had been fleeting at the welcoming party, but she was there.
>You recognize her now, from the brief moment between when Baritone had carried you in to when you made the mistake of thinking you could eat cake.
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>>30140552
>It was just a small piece, but apparently solid food is still a bit beyond you.
>She had arrived even after you, her mind clearly on other things, but made a point to stop and speak with you.
>It was too late, you were too out of it.
>You don’t remember what happened.
>But deep down… no, not even deep down.
>You *want* to believe her.
>With all your heart, you want to believe Moondancer.
>Not because of who she is or what she says, but because you simply want to believe that things can be better than this.
>It’s just so hard to ignore the evidence in front of your eyes.
“… why are you acting so scared?”
>”I’m… I’m not.”
“You are. You’ve been acting nervous since you came in here.”
>Having your glasses on only makes it clearer.
>The way she keeps looking around, nervously shifting her weight back and forth like she’s going to bolt at any second.
>She wants to believe he’s kind, and you want to believe it too, but you know all too well how humans can turn in an instant, without any warning.
>One minute they’ll be gently stroking your mane, the next they’re viciously yanking it back to expose your neck.
>They’ll tell you how you’re their favorite, but won’t so much as look at you the next day.
>And this one?
>He’s already angry.
>He acted like he cared. He asked you to help him help the others.
>But when he comes back inside your tiny room?
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>>30140564
>Will he shout and rant? Will he hit you?
>Are you one of the useless ponies he was speaking of?
>Who could he even sell you to?
>A glue factory?
>Or would you make better pet food?
>You bitter, choked laugh makes Moondancer jump, though her ears never stop following the sound of his steps.
>Is he going to get rid of you?
>Or maybe… maybe he will walk through that door and ask you to find a way to keep all of his ponies here.
>Maybe he’ll keep his anger in check.
>Maybe he’ll be kind.
>Maybe he’ll let you talk or ask if you’ve found anything.
>Maybe he’ll even listen.
>Maybe…
>You shouldn’t feel this way, but you can’t stop your heart from hoping any more than you could from beating.
>It will let you down. Betray you. Lead you down a false path that only grows darker, but you can’t help but hope that maybe he’ll be gentle.
>He might be.
>He might listen to you and what you’ve found.
>You have no idea, only fear warring with hope.
“Moondancer, why are you scared…?”
>She shakes her head.
“Is it… is it him?”
>You hope it isn’t.
>It is, but you *hope* it isn’t.
>But it has to be.
>Everypony you’ve seen, everypony that watched over you, everypony at the party last night… all of them…
>None of them had been afraid. Every other emotion under the sun, some angry, some happy, some welcoming and others standoffish, but never scared.
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>>30140581
>Not like this. Not until today.
>Not until *he* was around.
>”No,” Moondancer whispers. “It’s… it’s…”
>She glances towards the ceiling, but her gaze goes beyond it.
>”Can’t you feel that?”
“Feel… what? The cold?”
>Is she worried about the weather?
>”No,” she answers, though she shivers as she says it. “It’s like everything is wrong. The sun… the sun didn’t rise today. I mean it *did*, but not *right*.”
>She shivers again and sighs.
>”You honestly can’t feel… *it*?” she laughs nervously. “Whatever *it* is?”
>All you feel is the pointless war between fear and hope, the chill in the air, the pain of your injuries, but nothing like that.
>Nothing feels ‘wrong’, no more than everything else these past four years.
>”It’s like… like when the princess… *died*. Don’t you remember that?”
>You nod.
>How could you not?
>”And you don’t feel it? Everypony else does, but you…?”
>You shake your head, afraid to open your mouth to answer.
>Afraid that you’ll ask what new atrocity occurred.
>Afraid that she’ll tell you.
>Which one was it this time? Princess Cadence?
>You thought there was a ceasefire in effect, but that doesn’t mean anything.
>The two worlds weren’t even at war when Princess Celestia was assassinated.
>Did someone finally catch Princess Twilight?
>You don’t ask.
>You’re afraid you’ll feel joy at the news and you don’t want to be that pony.
>You want to believe that everything will be okay.
>”Maybe that’s because you didn’t go outside to watch the sunrise,” Moondancer sighs. “Or maybe we all just imagined it. Maybe it was just one of us.”
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>>30140587
>She chuckles hollowly, her eyes darting back towards the ceiling.
>”You know, like how I’m making you scared right now, even though you shouldn’t be? Because I’m… *I’m* scared?
>”Somepony must have felt something was wrong and acted nervous, so the rest of us did too. That’s got to be it. You don’t feel it because you weren’t there. It’s nothing.”
>She forces herself to stillness and tries to smile.
>”It’s nothing,” she repeats. “Everything is fine. He’s… he’s a good man, or he’s trying to be.”
>Moondancer holds that expression as she nudges your bowl towards you with her muzzle.
>”Eat up. Before it gets cold.”
>She’s just trying to distract you, but you’re too scared to eat.
>… and too cold and hungry to not attack the steaming porridge.
>Maybe everything will be okay.

ANON
>Be furious.
>And only working yourself up to greater and greater heights.
>That won’t help anything.
>Pacing back and forth kept you warm, but that’s all the good it did.
>Already you can feel your sweat turning ice cold as it runs down your back.
>Being angry is doing more harm than good right now.
>Or ever.
>It’s never helped.
>Not once.
>Well.
>Once.
>Only once, when it wouldn’t let you walk away from the clinic.
>Just that once, when you were too angry to think about how hard it’s going to be to care for a crippled pony.
>And even then…
>No, you can’t bring yourself to believe you made the wrong call there.
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>>30140594
>But only that once.
>Just once.
>You force your anger down, your feet eventually coming to a stop outside Silver Spoon’s door.
>She might have a solution. Maybe. But she won’t.
>You hesitate to pull the door open and find out, because when you do… when you do there won’t be any more pretending.
>She won’t have a solution.
>It’s not too late.
>You could call Lauren back, tell her she’s crazy, and to go back to the hardware store.
>Maybe cut back on your plans, if not cancel them altogether.
>This is only a temporary setback.
>You could put it off for a year, maybe two. Save up the money or wait for prices to fall.
>Or you could kill two birds with one stone.
>Sell some ponies.
>Have fewer to feed, fewer to house.
>Make some money in the process.
>It was just a threat, just your anger talking in the heat of the moment, but it makes sense.
>Or maybe your brand new miracle accountant worked some magic and found money out of nowhere.
>She didn’t and you can’t even make yourself pretend any longer that there’s a chance.
>You don’t want to make that certainty *real*, but you’ll never get anywhere if you keep avoiding things.
>At least you can start planning for failure once she’s told you there’s no way.
>You raise a loose fist and rap it against the door.
“Hey, can I come in?”
>You don’t know why you even bothered.
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>>30140609
>You own this place. You own the ponies.
>Hell, it’s not as if you have to worry about walking in on them naked, because they’re *always* naked.
>They aren’t even real people.
>Real people can’t be bought and sold on a whim.
>You should just walk in, but still you wait until Moondancer pulls the door open.
>”Uh… yeah,” she grunts, trying to sidle out of your way. “So…”
“I have bad news.”
>”I guessed that,” she tries to laugh. “I mean… there’s no such thing as good news these days, right? So…”
“No, I have that too.”
>You sigh and wait for Silver Spoon to finish fumbling with the plastic spoon in her hooves.
>It doesn’t look like she’s managed to eat any of her breakfast at all.
>Of course not, with her legs like that.
>She can barely lift them, let alone use them with any grace.
>Shit.
>You shoot Moondancer an angry glare that she doesn’t deserve.
>Or maybe she does. You don’t know.
>You’re too angry to know anything right now – except that – which is why you gently push the mare aside so you can step around the table.
>Gently, not how you want to.
>You’re in no state to make decisions.
>Had to put a hole in a wall and almost kill a pony to realize that, but you can learn.
>Just takes a while.
“Here, let me help you with that.”
>You reach for the spoon, but Silver Spoon shakes her head.
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>>30140614
>”No… no, sir. I can…”
>She looks at the bowl, at the spoon, at the mare behind you.
>Whatever reassurances she was looking for, she didn’t find a one.
>”I can eat later, sir,” she mumbles. “I’m not hungry.”
“If that’s true... fine. But…”
>Do you really care?
>Do you *really* want to help?
>Or are you just finding another excuse to put off doing anything?
>Does it really matter, so long as you can pretend to yourself that you’re a good person?
>That doesn’t even matter.
>You shake your head to clear your jumbled thoughts.
>It doesn’t work, but you didn’t expect it to.
>You aren’t in any condition to start making decisions.
>Not that you wouldn’t make the wrong ones anyway, but you’ll probably make worse ones.
>You crouch down by the head of the cot and take the spoon from her – she’s in no condition to stop you.
“Look, Silver Spoon… can I just call you Silver?”
>She nods.
>Of course she would.
>You *own* her. You can call her whatever you want.
>Or, like your neighbor, you could call her nothing.
>There’s nothing to stop you from taking away her name entirely.
>Nothing but the ache in your heart when you think that over too long.
>The mare on the cot stares up at you – even crouching, you’re head and shoulders above her – and there’s no mistaking the expression on her face.
>She’s scared.
>Helpless.
>Just like that one time, with another mare you used to think you knew.
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>>30140627
“Silver…”
>God, it hurts.
>“… if you need help, *ask* for it.”
>You don’t want to remember that day, but you can’t think of anything but.
>You can’t think of any words other than the ones you parroted up to her.
“When… when you can’t run, you crawl…”
>You scoop up a spoonful of the porridge and tilt your head towards it; Silver’s so focused on your face that she wouldn’t have noticed otherwise.
“…and when you can’t do that…”
> It’s just a quote from an old TV show, one you’ve probably quoted it a thousand times.
“… when you can’t do that, you…”
>It doesn’t mean anything.
>They’re just comforting words.
“…you…”
>It don’t *really* mean *anything*.
>This shouldn’t be so hard to say.
“… you find someone to carry you.”
>And pray they don’t break your heart.
“So…”
>You both failed on that point, didn’t you?
“Silver…”
>You try to smile as you hold the spoon closer to her mouth.
“Are you hungry?”

SILVER SPOON
>”Because I can help you,” he adds with a strained smile. “Please, let me help you.”
>You want to believe this is a trick.
>He’s going to dump the hot porridge on you or hold it just out of reach so you have to stretch but never come close enough to take it in your mouth.
>You *know* this, and yet… yet you can’t quite believe it’s true. And you *are* hungry.
>Carefully, *warily*, you open your mouth.
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>>30140671
>He doesn’t make you strain to reach the soon. He doesn’t toy with you.
>From the first spoonful, he’s gentle. He helps.
>That doesn’t stop you from wanting to run every time his hand draws near.
>Moondancer’s ears are pinned back, her every movement and twitch one of fear.
>Something is wrong.
>Maybe she’s just spooked by whatever happened earlier, or maybe… maybe…
>You’re careful not to let the man touch you.
>It’s hard; he’s not very good at this, not like some of the other ponies that have helped you eat.
>”I completely forgot,” he sighs between the fifth and sixth spoonful.
>Now.
>It’s now.
>Now is when all your worries will come true.
>”I need to call that doctor and see about setting up an appointment for you.”
>You... you can’t believe it.
>It can’t be. Whatever you think it is, it can’t be.
>”You know, for rehab,” he sighs again. “Well, that’ll just be one more thing we can’t afford and there’s already so many of those it doesn’t really matter, does it?”
>You nod carefully.
>Agree. Always agree.
>It’s safer.
>But there’s a chance he means it.
>”And a follow-up appointment with the clinic, but insurance should cover that. Or the relocation agency. Don’t know about the rehab, though.”
>He sighs and lets his head drop limply.
>”Shit.”
>A moment of silence passes before Moondancer takes a cautious step closer.
>”Is… is that the bad news…?” she asks, almost but not quite putting a hoof on his shoulder.
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>>30140680
>”No,” he answers quickly, but follows it with a nod. “Yes, but no, just *more* bad news.”
>He sighs and raises his head.
>A second later, he’s offering you the next spoonful.
>”Well…”
>”It’s the construction supplies, Moondancer,” he explains, even as he continues to feed you. “They’re going to cost way more than we thought.”
>”Oh,” she grunts. “Yeah, we… uh… we heard.”
>He hand stops suddenly, the spoon just a few inches shy of your mouth, and looks back at her over his shoulder.
>”You heard?”
>”Y-yeah. Not everything, but enough to get a general idea of –“
>”So you heard me talking about selling ponies.”
>It’s not a question, not even a statement from the way he says it.
>Just a resigned acknowledgement.
>He looks back to you and brings the spoon closer to your mouth.
>“Well. That’s great. Saves us some time.”
>He’s going to sell you.
>That’s why he’s taking care of you, so you can get healthy enough to make him a profit.
>You feel grateful anyway.
>”Look, I now there’s plenty of ponies that don’t like it here,” he says softly. “I’ll try to make sure they go to good places.”
>Moondancer nods, though you’re the only one who sees it.
>He keeps his eyes locked on the spoon, on the bowl, on anything but her face – or yours.
>”I swear I’m not going to send anyone to *Sterling* or my goddamn neighbors.”
>She nods again, and again he doesn’t so much as know – or care.
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>>30140702
>He’s angry at her. So angry he can’t even look at her.
>”I’m not a fucking monster, you know, though I can’t promise it’ll be all -”

ANON
“- beaches and sunshine, but maybe some ponies would be happier.”
>You shrug.
“Like… I don’t know… Bon Bon? Maybe there’s a candy shop in town that would buy her, or… hell, in a few months, up in the city.
>You risk a glance back, terrified of the expression you’ll find on her face.
>The utter disappointment she must feel in you.
>From everything you’ve heard, she worked so hard –
>*Apple Bloom* worked so hard to keep all of the ponies together.
>Moondancer just looks confused and worried.
“They’re getting the bypass finished up.”
>She nods, though you can’t be sure she actually heard a damn thing you said until she limply mouths “Bon Bon?”
“Yeah. Her.”
>”Why…?”
>You can think of half a dozen reasons why.
>Because she attacked you, because she’s a troublemaker, because she’s probably sabotaging the harvests, because you don’t want to have to have another pony killed…
>But it all comes back to one key reason.
“She’s not happy here, Moondancer. I’m not trying to punish anyone for anything, just…”
>”Oh.”
>She nods along.
“It might be the best thing for everyone, but I don’t think one pony would be enough… so…”
>You look over at Silver for confirmation, though you already know it’s true.
>She’s your damned accountant, after all.
>If she agrees, then the blame isn’t all on you.
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>>30140724
>It’s just the practical solution.
>As soon as you lay eyes on her, the mare practically spits the spoon out in her haste to answer.
>”How… um… how much more expensive will it be?”
“You read the estimates, right?”
>They should have been in the paperwork you’d bundled up for her, but who the fuck knows.
>You just grabbed everything off the top of your desk and stuffed it in a briefcase.
>Silver pauses a moment, then nods.
“Yeah, triple that.”
>That makes even her flinch.
>Yeah.
“So, how many would I have to sell, at the current rate for unskilled ponies?”
>She blanches, the light grey of her face growing even paler.
>”Twenty,” she mumbles. “Maybe thirty.”
>Shit.
>Worse than you thought, and you’re already running on –
>”We can’t afford to lose that many,” Moondancer blurts out, stealing the words right out of your mind. “We barely got the harvest in as it was, and that was with the foals helping out!”
“You think I don’t know that!?”
>Silver’s wrong. That’s impossible.
“Look, do you think you *maybe* got that math wrong, because last I checked prices were going *up* ever since the ceasefire.”
>It can’t be that many. There’s no way.
>”Maybe… maybe I did,” she whimpers. “It’s… um… it’s just an estimate…”
>Great.
>Your miracle accountant can’t do basic fucking math.
>”… but before I…” she trails off with a wince. “*Before*… there were rumors of a new wave of refugees coming over…”
>You shake your head, because you hadn’t heard any such thing.
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>>30140740
“I really doubt that.”
>Silver’s eyes dart away from you and she shivers under her blanket.
>Goddammit.
“Hey, hold up, I’m not angry at you –“
>You *are*, but you shouldn’t be. You won’t *let* yourself be.
>It’s not her fault but yours.
>You shouldn’t have had hope.
“But… uh… just how reliable was that rumor…?”
>”Enough that ma- uh… Mister Sterling…”
>She shivers again.
>”… raised our quotas to… um…”
>You don’t want to hear it.
>You shouldn’t have asked.
>You –
>”…‘thin the herd’ to make room for new arrivals.”
>You should have done something.
>But no. You’re not a good man.
>A good man would be trying to figure out how to buy up more ponies to save them from that hellhole.
>He’d find a way.
>You… you have problems of your own.
>”And… well… even if it isn’t true…”
“I *really* hope it isn’t.”
>That probably means it is.
>That’s how this world works.
>Silver nods quickly, but continues speaking barely a second later.
>”A rumor alone is enough to drive down prices.”
“*That* much?”
>”Combined with a ceasefire and… and what that eventually means…?”
>Shit, she’s right.
>It wouldn’t happen overnight, but it’ll happen.
>Eventually this entire program will be abolished.
>”By the time you find a buyer...”
>”Particularly if you’re going to try to find a good match for each pony,” Moondancer adds, “even classified as unskilled labor…”
“I get it.”
>You sigh and scoop up another spoonful of porridge for Silver.
“I get it, girls.”
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>>30140761
>You hold it up to her muzzle.
“I’m sorry, Silver.”
>It takes a moment before she notices, both the spoon and what you said.
>You can see the conflict warring in her eyes for a moment before the later wins.
>”S-sorry?” she murmurs. “For…?”
“For… for everything.”
>She waits a second, but that’s all you can say.
>You don’t even want to imagine what happened to her, let alone put words to it.
>When she realizes you’re done, she mumbles a soft thanks and takes the spoon in her mouth.
>Always careful not to take too much, lest she touch you.
>You can understand.
>More than understand.
>You really wish you didn’t.
>You sigh and wave Moondancer forward with your other hand as you continue to feed Silver.
>It takes her a while, but eventually she’s standing at the side of the bed, the small table between the two of you.
“So…”
>She looks away quickly.
“Got any ideas?”
>”A… a few.”
“Like?”
>”Well… um…”
>The rest of her answer is lost as she mumbles it into the floor.
“I have some, but…”
>They’re probably shit.
>Won’t work.
>Nothing does.
>You go to refill the spoon, but…
“Silver? Are you full?”
>She flinches and shakes her head.
>”N-no, sir, but… um… what are your ideas?”
>It won’t work.
>You’ll tell her and she’ll shoot it down and she’ll be *right*, but it’s the best you have.
“Moondancer had a point. We can’t sell that many ponies and still keep the farm going. But… what if it’s just one?”
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>>30140782
>”One?”
>”One?” Moondancer echoes. “Who?”
“Maybe more, but… I’m guessing prices on certain kinds of ponies aren’t going to drop too much.
“I mean, if these are voluntary refugees coming over, they’re just going to be ponies that don’t have anything to live for in Equestria, right?”
>The two mares nod, a hair apart.
“So…”
>”We just have to find the ponies that are wasting their talents here,” Moondancer says slowly. “The kinds of talents that the big companies will pay big money for.”
>Not what you had in mind, but it makes sense.
>It’s an obvious solution.
>You shrug – and, a second later, realize you’d pulled the spoon away from Silver’s mouth just as she was leaning in for it.
>Great.
>Classic.
>”So, who…?” Moondancer mumbles, turning aside from you. “Anypony in particular… or…”
“Whatever would fetch the most. Any suggestions?”
>Silver shakes her head quickly, but Moondancer falls silent and utterly, completely still.
“I mean, there’s got to be a few, right?”
>She doesn’t answer, but even you know of some.
>Only some.
“Moondancer? Hey, I –“
>”I don’t want to go.”
>She looks up.
>Just her eyes.
>Just those wide, trembling purple eyes, framed between her bangs and the top of her glasses.
>”Please,” she whimpers, “I don’t want to go.”
>That’s all she says.
>It’s all she has to say.
>You can figure out the rest.
>She’s scared, *terrified* that you’ll sell her, probably to a pharmaceutical company or some science lab - somewhere she can put her skills and knowledge to good use.
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>>30140801
That's a big one.

Good to see you.
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>>30140801
>”Please…”
>She’s lived through that before and only made things worse, and not just for herself.
>You can relate.
>Just the thought of it has her frozen stiff, so scared that she doesn’t flinch away when you reach for her, so unnerved that she doesn’t jerk back when you brush the bangs out of her eyes or run your fingers through her mane.
“Hey… It’s okay, Moondancer.”
>She trembles, softly mouthing the same plea again, so quietly you can’t hear it.
>You push the table between you back, out of the way, and pull her close.
>She doesn’t resist. She doesn’t pull away or hesitate to lean her face against your chest, even if it does push her glasses askew.
“I won’t…”
>You could never.
“I won’t sell you.”
>”But… I would…”
>She swallows nervously; even through your coat, you can feel every movement of every muscle.
“I wouldn’t. You’re one of the few I can trust.”
>She’s never lied to you, not once.
>Never led you astray.
>”I mean…” she mumble softly, her voice muffled by fear as much by your coat, “I would… my sale would cover the cost. By myself.”
>She’s always been open, even now as she’s begging you not to sell her.
>You shake your head, even though she can’t see the gesture with her face buried in your chest.
“No. I need ponies who don’t lie to me.”
>"Then… then who..?"
>You glance over, but Silver doesn’t meet your eyes.
>She has the exact same answer you do.
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>>30140831
>Knows exactly what you’re going to say.
>There are two skilled ponies right here.
“Well…”
>You couldn’t.
>”I have another idea,” she murmurs, saving you from saying anything you would regret. “A… um… a…”

SILVER SPOON
“… better idea.”
>You hesitate to say that, but it’s true.
>”What…?” he asks cautiously, but at least he asks.
>He’s listening.
>You had hoped, but weren’t sure that he would.
“What about… what about the crop?”
>”What about it?”
>He’s gruff and dismissive, but responding.
“When will it be picked up and… um… when will you be paid?”
>”Soon,” he responds with a one-armed shrug. “We’ll have some trucks in next week, and the money should hit our accounts the week after that.”
“How… how much will that be?”
>The rest you could have extrapolated from the ledger, at least gotten a rough estimate, but that? That you don’t know.
>”I don’t know.”
>And neither does he.
>Or… he’s stop paying attention to you, just giving a quick answer to shut you up.
>You had hoped that he -
>”It won’t be enough, if that’s what you’re thinking. It’ll only be enough to keep things afloat.”
>He’s still listening.
“Most of it the payment is locked in… in war bonds?”
>”Yeah, for what good that is,” he sighs. ”Otherwise… otherwise this wouldn’t be a problem.”
>He’s still stroking Moondancer’s mane, still running his fingers through the strands, his attention barely on you or your words.
>”Otherwise, this dump would be making a shit ton of cash.”

>>30140812
There were grumblings last dump about no happytimes.
Decided to wait to make this dump until I had written enough to get to the happy stuff.
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>>30140851
“It…”
>And now is the moment of truth.
>He’s listening, if only partially.
>He’s calm. Calmer, at least.
>He’s trying to help.
“It… it *is*.”
>His hand pauses for a moment, as if snagged on a tangle in her mane.
>”What…?”
“The farm… it *is* making money.”
>He looks up from the mare in his arms.
>”What.”
>He’s…
>You want to fall silent. Mutter an apology. Say you were wrong.
>It’s what you should do.
>You should always agree with humans.
>Even now, even when he’s missing something blindingly obvious, something you saw the first moment you started looking through the ledger, you should agree.
>Say he was right. Say that the farm is barely making enough money to keep itself running.
>It would mean him selling ponies, probably quite a few, but you should keep silent.
>You can’t.
>Experience tells you one thing, but your heart… your heart says something else entirely.
>It says this time is different.
“It’s…”
>It says to have hope.
“It’s quite profitable, really.”
>”Bullshit.”
>He doesn’t argue, doesn’t try to prove you wrong.
>All the evidence is right there; he doesn’t even feel a need to explain it to you.
>He doesn’t even see *how*.
>It’s just so basic.
“These bonds…”
>”The funds are locked,” he says, matter-of-factly.
>And that’s why he’s not seeing the solution.
“… are they transferable…?”

ANON
>”… because if they are…”
>Fuck.
>Fuck everything.
>No. It won’t work.
>It *can’t* work.
>”… you could sell them.”
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>>30140864
“No one would buy them.”
>Silver tilts her head slightly, waiting for you to explain.
>It’s a long wait.
>All you know is it wouldn’t work, not *why*.
“Because… because…”
>”Because there’s no set due date on them,” Moondancer says, her voice muffled so as to be barely understandable. “Who would buy them?”
>”Someone willing to wait.”
>You shake your head.
>It makes sense, but it’s just not practical.
“For all we know, it’ll be *years*.”
>”That’s why… why you’d have to… you’d have to sell them cheap.”
“How cheap?”
>She hesitates, looks away.
>Shows uncertainty for the first time since she started speaking.
>”Maybe… fifty cents per dollar?” she answers. “Probably… probably less.”
>That…
>That won’t work.
>It *can’t* work.
“How much less?”
>“I… um… I don’t know the current market…”
>You sigh.
>It was too good to be true.
“I doubt we’ll be able to raise enough money that way, but…”
>The mare pressed against your chest shifts, pulls away. Turns to look at Silver.
>“Do you really think that would work?” Moondancer asks. “Really?”
>”Going by the ledger…” the other mare mumbles, “yes. Maybe.”
>Her eyes drop.
>”I *hope*,” she continues. “It’s better than… than…”
“Than selling ponies?”
>Silver nods.
“But what if they aren’t happy here?”
>”Then…”
>”Please,” Moondancer cuts in, her chin pressed against your chest. “Please, look into it.”
>Two sets of purple eyes stare up at you pleadingly.
>”Please…”
>Oh… fuck it.
“Fine.”
>Moondancer smiles faintly as you ruffle her mane.
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>>30140552
Hey people! Look who return!
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>>30140870
“I’ll look into it.”
>Not that it’ll go anywhere.
>”R-really…?” Silver asks her eyes wide with surprise. “Really?”
“Yeah, why not? What’ll it hurt?”
>All you’re doing is wasting your time.
>Not like there was anything more important you could be doing.
“I’ll… uh…”
>Silver almost looks like she’s going to cry.
“I’ll…”
>She *is* crying.
>That’s just too much.
>You reach out to touch her.
>Gently, softly.
>To just lightly brushing her hair, like you did for Moondancer.
>Like you’ve done for Lauren.
>For Apple Bloom.
>She doesn’t want to be touched, but it’s all you know to do.
>All you can think to do.
>Hesitantly, your fingers come closer.
“Look… it’ll… it’ll be okay.”
>She doesn’t flinch away.
>Of course not, her eyes are shut.
>She can’t see you, see how close your hand is.
“I’ll look into it along with the other idea and… and *maybe*…”
>There’s a sharp shock, like static electricity, and you jerk your hand back as Silver jumps.
>Her eyes are open wide.
>Yeah.
>That was a stupid idea.
>The static shock was just a coincidence, but what isn’t?
>You shouldn’t touch her.
“I’ll… um… I’ll look into it, okay?”
>Maybe it’ll even work out.
>And even if it doesn’t… at least you won’t have to sell as many ponies.
>Just the one, if you’re lucky.
>Silver nods wordlessly, but you’re already standing.
>Already thinking about what to do next.
>You’re due for some good luck right about now.
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>>30140883
“So… I’ll get back with you by the end of the week, I guess. Might take some time to do the research.”
>Even if you get Moondancer to help you.
>The house only has the one computer, after all.
“Anyway…”
>You should go.
>You shouldn’t have tried to touch Silver.
“You’re looking tired… so…”
>She doesn’t; she looks more awake than ever.
>Doesn’t matter, because it’s just an excuse to leave.
>You have work to do.
>Moondancer takes the hint and reaches for the briefcase with her mouth, but stops when Silver quickly shakes her head.
>”I…”
>The injured mare stops, looks up at you, and – after a moment – smiles gently.
>”I’m still looking it over,” she says. “I might find another option.”
>You hesitate, but the mare doesn’t.
>”I can look at them when I wake up.”
>You nod, conceding the point.
>Maybe she will find another way.

>Moondancer stays quiet until you’re out of the room, until you’re walking out the door to the next hall.
>Rain is slamming down, driven by wind that makes the paltry cover of the walkway totally worthless.
>You’re soaked by your third step, Moondancer probably from her first.
>She only says one word, just one simple question that you can barely hear over the roar of the storm.
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>>30140889
>”Really?”
“Yes.”
>You meant it.
>Looking into selling the bonds seems a lot easier than trying to sell your ponies.
>Better for the farm, too. And better for the ponies. Most of them, anyway.
>Some... some should probably be sold. For their own sake, if nothing else.
>Moondancer falls back into silence until you’re into the next hall, both of you dripping water like you were the storm itself brought into the building.
>Neither of you bother to shake yourselves dry; you’re about to get soaked again anyway.
>”Well,” Moondancer whispers, as you push open the next door, “*that* seems out of character.”
>You pause to think about it and find yourself agreeing.
>For the first time in a long time, you find yourself with real hope in your heart.
>You’re not sure how much you trust it, but it’s there.
“Time for a change, I guess.”

end for tonight
Next time on A Deal is a Deal:
Octavia confronts Sterling! What's in store for Diamond Tiara!?
Derpy meets Apple Bloom! Will the mystery of the letters finally be revealed?
Bon Bon and Lyra fight! I said they weren't a couple in this story about a year ago and now I'm going to prove it!
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>>30140924
rip octy. you were such a pretty pony.

I never imagined it was that bad, but 20-30 is pretty damn grim situation to be in. I sure hope he can find a good deal on the bonds.
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>>30141100
>I see the image.

Damn.

I know they are ponies, but they are also mammals
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>update thread
So much green!
>tgn
oh
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>>30140924
>>For the first time in a long time, you find yourself with real hope in your heart.
Well, it's a tg/n story so we all know how this will go.

Also, holy shit that's a lot of green for one update.
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>>30142330
>Well, it's a tg/n story so we all know how this will go.
Yeah, Anony's gonna fuck off to see if he can do whatever the fuck he was planning to do with those war bonds, it's gonna turn out he can't, he's gonna spend twenty years angsting about it, and then he's going to come home to find out everypony was raped to death by a wild pack of teenage hoodlums during those twenty years.
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>>30140924
It's always nice to see more.
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Reminder, a slave pony can't accidentally reject cuddles if you cut their legs off.
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SAVE!
>>
Save 2
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Which slave would you not trust to put a gun to your head.
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>>30144422
One with fingers.
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Moonie a good horse
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>9

Seriously???
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>>30144422
Slaveventures Celestia doesn't need a gun. She could squish Anon like a bug with her unimpaired alicorn magic. She hates him quite a bit sometimes, but he's pretty safe. It's part of what makes the story interesting.
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>>30145668
Wrong pony, but right point: Angry lovehorse is no joke; she practically crushed that guard to death without deliberately trying.

Kind of says something that Anonymous feels safe falling asleep around her.
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>>30123276
>>30124137
>>30124366

"Vapor..."
> Your leg and wing are still wrapped around her, but now it feels more like a way to keep a pony pinned in place than a gesture of affection.
"...who - who are you working for? Who's doing this?"
> "I - a few ponies, I think."
> Her voice is cracked and breaking.
> "Not sure how - how many ponies are in it total. I - I just carry messages."
> Just messages.
"Have you looked at them? Tried to see who -"
> "Once. I d-didn't understand it. C-Code, I think."
> So she can't likely tell you about the information, but maybe she'd have something else?
> The other ponies in the cells?
> Is this connected to Sunburst, or something else entirely?
> If his plan was compromised, then you'd have to start looking into - triage.
> Who could be saved, and who... could not.
> If it wasn't, then you had a whole new host of ponies to track down, something that puts an even greater emphasis on needing to know exactly who was involved.
"Okay, who gives-"
> "T-Thunderlane..."
> Her voice is even more unsteady now, trembling and fearful.
> "What h-happens now, Thunderlane? A-Are you going to put me in chains and take me to A-Anonymous? I-I'm a rebellious pony. I confessed - I want to leave; I won't stop trying."
> Pausing, you force yourself to look - really look - at her and think again.
> And you see not a rebel or a fighter or even a resource to be mined for information, but a trembling and scared mare - one hoof clutching her swelling belly, as if it could shield the foal growing there - terrified of what might moves you might make next.
> "I - I won't fight, Thunderlane. I can't, not against you. Not without hurting the foal. But I'm begging you, please don't take me to him. You know what he'll do me."
> In that moment, your heart cracks a little.
> You'd gone too far ahead.
> Jumped too quickly into thinking about the larger picture, forgetting about the mare clutching you like an anchor to prevent her from being swept away.
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>>30146101

"No, Vapor. I'm not going to have you thrown in chains."
> After all, wasn't looking after ponies who needed it why you'd taken this position?
> ...aside from protecting Rumble.
> And even as Vapor collapses against you again wetting your coat with quiet tears of relief, you can't help but wonder about that.
> What would you do, if Rumble was caught up in something again?
> Could you bring yourself to turn over Vapor Trail to save him?
> To betray Sunburst and Cadance again?
> Once had been painful enough, to do it to them a second time and this loving mare too...
> A fresh shudder runs through your body, and this time you're thankful Vapor Trail is too distracted to make notice of it.
> It would be hard to explain this one, after all.
> Those thoughts swirl in your head even as you lift your head to press your cheek to hers - both wings circling her barrel now.
> "I-I'm sorry. I was so afraid - I - I thought for sure you were a part of it, and then weren't, and I thought-"
"Shh..."
> A hoof strokes her mane back, and you murmur softly.
"I'm not going to turn you over, Vapor. But I need to understand exactly how far this goes. If who you're working for might be somehow related to the ponies who attacked Mocha Cream."
> She snorts gently.
> "Betray the ponies who're helping me? And then what? Maybe I'll be reward with a fluffy bed and a maid's uniform up in the house? What'll happen to my foal then - a new toy for his daughter to have fun with?"
> Catching sight of the disappointed expression on your face, Vapor shakes her head.
> "I'm sorry."
"It's not your ponies that I care about, Vapor. It's whoever is pushing to fight now."
> "They're - all that you're after? You have to swear-"
"Vapor. They're it. They're the ponies we want to find; anypony else you worked with isn't in our sights unless they're threatening to be violent too. Trust me, please?"
> A moment of consideration is needed, but in the end she nods.
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>>30146120

> "I was - it was Derpy who brought me in. Princess Cadance brought her when I was in the medical ward; she convinced me I could get my foal out later..."
"...and then she drew you into the process."
> Vapor Trail simply nods.
> "And I thought - I thought because you were... y'know, with Princess Cadance, you knew too..."
> You did, of course, know about the plan.
> Now.
> But you hadn't then, and neither had Cadance at the time either.
"Have you told anypony else about this, Vapor?"
> "N-No. Nopony I haven't, um, been told to."
> Part of you wonders if that was a statement on the depth of her care for you, that she had considered you worth revealing it to.
> Either way, it was a fair bet that the plan was still pretty airtight.
"Do you know if anypony involved has also been responsible for the attacks? Or if not, if they might be thinking about doing something - ugly in the future?"
> "Not really. We, um - we don't talk to each other too much. Just - just the messages that need to go, or things that have to be gotten."
> Then she hesitates, though, eyes going distant.
"Vapor..."
> "There... is one other group. They, um, don't work with us. Or at least, I only ever brought them a message once. But from the way someponies talk, they're more about /doing/ while I think we're... waiting. Until it's all ready."
> It certainly sounds like she is part of Sunburst's operation, even if Derpy had been the one to invite her in.
> But then who was this other group...?
> Asking Vapor to try and question others about them was just an invitation for reprisal against her, but-
"If you hear anything about them - anything! - I need to know, okay? Not just because I'm a guard, but because if this violence continues it's only a matter of time before Anonymous wraps the whole thing up and then you'll be truly trapped."
> "I know, Thunderlane."
> She sniffles softly, nodding with still-bleary eyes.
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>>30146145

> "Just - I don't know how to do all this, okay? I just - do what they tell me to, and if it works out I'll be able to get my foal safely away from all this..."
> Another gentle sniffle.
> "...I'm not a secret agent. I'm just a pony who wants to be free."
"Shh, I know."
> Pulling her back close against you yields a soft sigh from Vapor Trail.
> And, a moment later, information at last:
> "The pony, from that group I met with once - her name was Autumn Frost. She tried to invite me into their group, but I didn't want any part of that I just want to leave."
> You stiffen; that had been one of the names Crescent Moon gave.
"You're doing the right thing, Vapor. I swear, I'm just trying to protect everypony."
> The words almost manage to leave your lips without leaving the bitter taste of lies behind.
> Almost.
> "It's going to make a big mess for you when I leave, isn't it..?"
"Maybe. Not as much as ponies fighting now, though."
> "When it happens, we should all go together, Thunderlane. You, me, my foal, even Rumble! We're all strong fliers - we can hide in the clouds, follow the birds out farther than they can follow us. We'd be - a family! A free family!"
> Laying there, feeling her heart thud against yours, you wish so very, very hard that you could say yes.
> ...
> The early morning air still has the winter's icy chill in it, and your breath steams as you set out on your first patrol of the day.
> Leaving Vapor Trail hadn't been easy - as much on her as on you - but there was a duty to be done.
> Trotting down the street, your eyes and ears both are kept on a swivel.
> Above you, the sky is barely lit - stars only just fading before the oncoming sunrise.
> At this hour, the only ponies who were awake were those who absolutely needed to be, which meant the streets were even more dead than midday when everypony was at their jobs.
> Yet the absence of any other ponies only serves to heighten your fears.
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>>30146162

> Who else might be creeping around at this hour of the morning?
> What other plots might be in play?
> A soft shudder runs down your coat; this was two pieces of evidence to point towards one pony, but even if you arrested her now what would happen next?
> If they were any bit as mad as the ones who'd been running the museum - or even an extension of that same group - then 'Galaxy' wouldn't just turn over the rest.
> The thought of what Anonymous might do to make her do so is enough to make your legs weak.
> Putting those thoughts from your mind, you swing back towards the security post, spread your wings, and-
> Wait.
> There.
> A shadow had just moved in the early-morning light, dipping back into an alleyway between two factory buildings.
> Instead of carrying you up, your wings launch you forward.
> Hooves instantly sound on concrete in the chill air - not your own, as they were quite off the ground.
"Hey, you! Stop!"
> The shadow - no, a cloak - slips right around a corner again just as you come into sight.
> Yet when you actually reach the corner, they're nowhere in sight and the hooves have stopped.
> All that greets you is a dimly-lit space lined with a pair of dumpsters and a shipping crate.
> How had they-
> Too late you feel the cold prick at the back of your neck.
> "Don't move either, police-pony."
> They're voice is growled so low it's difficult to tell if a mare or stallion is making it.
> Either way you do stay still, though, even as the blade slides around your neck to press in on your throat and a hoof replaces it on the back of your neck.
"...easy, now. I'm not moving."
> "Good. Don't wanna hurt you, but can't let you see."
"That's fine. I won't try and look, alright?"
> While your words buy time, your eyes sweep the alley for a way out of this.
> They're close - so close that you can see their steaming breath in the corner of your eye.
> But any movement, and that blade would meet your throat.
> Nightmare's Wings, they'd been quiet!
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>>30146192

> "Sorry about this. Was going to talk to you even before you asked, didn't mean for it to be like this..."
"Asked...?"
> "Well, not asked me, but-"
> It clicks.
"You're Mellowheart's third pony."
> A soft chuckle.
> "Y'got it."
"Listen, I'm not interested in hunting you. I'm here for whoever beat Mocha Cream."
> "Y'might be, but I'm not trusting Anonymous. And you take his orders."
> Reflexively you swallow, and the blade's edge scrapes on your throat.
"...fine. What do you want?"
> A sheet of paper is shoved across the ground into your vision.
> "Names in there are the ponies who did it. Some of 'em, anyway."
"You're just giving them up?"
> "You think I'm anything like them?"
> The first note of real anger enters the pony's voice.
> "We broke windows, stole paint, made some noise, yeah - but that's a fair bit different than kicking a filly in an alley. We're not like that."
"You were angry."
> "Not like that. Angry at Anonymous for what he did, not whatever poor things he's got locked up in that house with him."
> It's the least-insane thing you've heard out of any rebellious pony lately, and manages to lighten your heart a bit.
> "Check whoever else you're asking. There's names and who to question to prove they weren't in their normal places right when it happened."
"How do you know?"
> "What they did isn't right, but I talked a time before then."
> Sighing heavily, you nod.
"Alright. I'll take a look at them. What now?"
> "I back away. You stay still, don't look back until I'm well away."
> You snort softly.
> How had Vapor Trail put it?
> 'I'm not a secret agent'?
> "Sorry. I was going to pass it from where you couldn't see me, but then you saw me and came charging in before I could set things up right..."
"I understand."
> "Alright. Backing away now."
> And they are - the hoof on the back of your neck relieving pressure first, then the blade at your throat.
> Hooves sound again on concrete, and that split-second is all you have to make a choice.
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>>30146221

On the one hand, they helped us and don't seem to be violent. On the other, they did put a weapon to the neck of a guard pony! Of course, they're also a unicorn who still has that weapon - and might use it again. Do we try and pursue them?
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>>30146232
No, we don't pursue them. By this point, Anonymous doesn't give a shit about this guy, and we frankly shouldn't either. He just gave us what we were looking for, and on top of that, he just confirmed that other rebellious ponies are NOT in endorsement of what happened to Mocha. He's an asset, almost like a batman of sorts. I honestly think we would be stupid to go after this guy.

And wow, poor Vapor. I was completely wrong about her. What a monumental sweetheart.
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>>30146232
>batman

Good way to put it. At the present time this pony serves everypony, and Anon, better outside the detainment block than in it. It would be nice to know who it is, but we don't need to know. One conspiracy at a time.
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>>30146331
This, leave him be.
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>>30146331
>>30146232
Agreed. We'll take him down later for the paint incident, on our own terms. He got us this time, and what's more he helped. Or at least we hope he's helping, we'll have to look at the note first. But hopefully he's on the up and up and really does want justice done. And if we're going to have rebels out there, might as well be some with a sense of decency. Let him be and take a look at the note after he's gone.
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>>30146331
>>30146451
>>30146528
>>30146694
Yep. Also, turning around would get us shanked. Doesn't matter it's a knife, magic makes it a ranged weapon.

Before they disappear, tell them to contact Thunderlane or Cadence if something else is going to happen. That we're on the same side as Bathorse, even if they don't realize it yet.

My money is on Lyra, but that's just a wild guess
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>>30146331
This. Let him off with a warning. It's not an uncommon thing to do for people of authority. If we can get a solid friend on the inside who has the right mind to give us deniable plausibility, it's even better
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> "Y'might be, but I'm not trusting Anonymous.
It's easy for the powerful to be virtuous, but has Anon ever lied in this story? The only even slightly sketchy thing he's done (aside from the whole slavery thing) was the Corona incident, as far as I recall. Even then, the only promise he made was that she would suffer. Would think Batpone would trust Anons (and Thunderlanes) word if not intent.
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>>30140924
>Bon Bon and Lyra fight!

Don't you be breaking up their friendship mang.
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>>30146232
>Do we try and pursue them?
Sorta.

Not in a 'Maximum Effort' way, we just get back in the air quick as we can, then have a good look around. Batpone is pretty slick and it's unlikely to work, but who knows? Everyone has a bad day now and then; they might trip over their cloak and knock themselves out or something. The token effort covers our ass with Anon too, he did not give us this position so we could NOT pursue rebels with weapons.
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>>30146120
>>30146162

Thanks for use my lines
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>>30146232

No

They are problem for another day (or potential allies) accept the information that gave you and begins to collate data, gather a group of human and ponies guards and prepare an operation as fast and discreet as possible, do your job to end everything this and perhaps you achieve the longed for peace that the comunity needs
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>>30146795
I don't think he does, and I vaguely remember him saying "I may be a dick sometimes, but I'm not lying to you" at one point.

But here Anonymous has made no clear promises, and "I don't trust him" probably means "trust him not to overrule you while he's pissed off at disobedient ponies".
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>>30143407
Amputee slave pony when?
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>>30147263
If Thunderlane told Anon "I made a promise on your behalf while performing my official duties", Anon would have to really think twice about it. Of course legally Thunderlane is a thing not a person, like all ponies, and his words have no weight. But Anon has his reputation in the camp to consider and I think he cares about that.
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>>30131178
>>30122347
>>30122904


>You take your time looking over the collars, this was not a decision to be rushed.
>You started with the poison joke collar, it was the simplest of the affair.
>The way your new slave, and yes, it was your slave, whined when you touched it was a bit delightful.
>It was a rather refreshing feel, almost too human.
>”How well does this one work?”
“Eh, that one? It’s a show collar really for dem city folks in da skyscraping penthouses. Don’t wanna spoil their mink carpets with the rest. Mostly I think they’se just want to watch da birdhorsies suffer and struggle. Sick bastards they are. Not good enough to just make the little guys, now they got to do it even to the damn aliens! Err, no offense missy.”
>Well that was rather off putting in a number of ways, moving past that is a good thing for you.
>May as well skip to the best one, the compulsion collar.
>”So what’s the catch with this one? I mean if it works well, why stock any of the others?”
“It plumb don’t is why. Watch. Storms Tripper, get out here and suck me off!”
>A pegasus leans out from the back and waves a wing at you, showing the matching collar on his neck, before staring at the human sales person.
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>>30147530
“Fuck off yourself Frank.”
“And dat dere is why. A pony with enough will can just ignore it.”
>You heard some light sobbing from the back of the store and Frank shook his head.
“It also causes emotional breakdowns when they refuse. Never gots ta ask the sales person if it was a feature or not. Could you hold for a moment please.”
>The man picks up a pronged club, and you know all too well what is going to happen.
>You decide to make the most of it and pull the slave up, propping its eyes open with magic for it to see what was coming.
>The beatdown was swift and effective.
>No lasting damage was dealt, but the inventory sorting was going to take much longer.
>You lean in close to the ear, just barely breathing, you utter “I can be just like that if you cause me even less trouble.”
>Your magic drops as Frank returns.
“Now’s I guess ya wants the dealio on the last two. Well, they’re something you probably got a thing with, what with the cranial protrusion you wear. They both come with triggerable and proximity modes. Now they don’t need any charging that I know of, but I just sell them and nobody said they needed batteries.”
>He picks up the choker.
“Now this one is a fine piece. Made by Madame De Rarita as part of her slavery is the belonging line up. It works as it looks, just tightens on the throat until they pass out. Real fun too, can just keep them on the edge for hours. It’s got a safety feature in their to stop once the lights are out.”
>He moves over to the last one.
“This Gravity Gorget is a mighty fine thing. Puts an alien in their place beneath us people every time.”
>You had a brief moment where you considered showing him that being shorter just meant you could put your horn through his kneecap, but decided freedom was worth more than that.
“Gets heavier as long as you want, seen it work wonders at bringing down even the biggest of minotaurs at a rodeo.”
>”I’ll take that one.”
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>>30147539
>You pass over your card and wish that you could have learned a pain spell or something to make people suffer when they referred to you so ill.
>Lacking much other action, you elect to test it in front of the stall.
>You feel an interesting feature locked away in the arcane sigils of the gorget, and with a small tug, activate it.
>The gorget fades away, its silver sheen turning to a nice and pleasing copper as the gems turned to opal.
>Appearance changing spells were always a nice feature in any purchase.
>Satisfied, you pull out the control cylinder and give it a twist.
>Seeing nothing, you crank some more and see the trembling start.
>You keep twisting round and round until finally your slave is brought to the ground.
>Satisfied, you back the dial off until it is only just off the floor and head for the door.
Does Lyra leave for home, or shop here for the supplies you, reading anons, need?
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>>30147446
There was the beginning of one recently, but it never seemed to take off. Same guy who was writing CriminalAnon; seemed to be a rewrite attempt. The trouble is real slaves are economic assets, not kinksters, and an Amputee would take more care and do less work. If you want to explore the role of the disabled in a modern slave society (with magical talking ponies), than more power to ya! If you're looking for specific fetish pr0n, SPG might not be the place.
>we don't, like, object to fetish pr0n per se
>but we can be picky about the context
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>>30147607
>Not just buying a group of slaves from the bargain bin for some cheap labour.
>Not just buying more when they wear out faster and stop working.
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>>30147545
>watch da birdhorsies suffer and struggle
Great dialogue with this character! His attitude and accent really come through, especially when he makes Storms Tripper struggle then suffer himself. You took a risk trying to write that way and I think it paid off.

>close to the ear, just barely breathing
Yup. Badass.

>Made by Madame De Rarita as part of her slavery is the belonging line up
Should not have the 'the' in there. Good to see another pony is doing OK on Earth.

>control cylinder and give it a twist
I thought the Gravity Gorget was a passive system, and it just got heavier the further away it traveled?

>shop here for the supplies
We still need more slave gear from earth:

-Something to keep slave from running off when unsupervised, if the gravity gorget doesn't work that way.
-Something to punish and motivate it. Is a pain spell something we could buy here or Equestria? Otherwise just a whip or something.
-Go-pro style video camera with harness mount. So it can give us aerial views, and to keep track of what it does.
-Hobbles, bridle, and blindfold from Madame De Rarita. Light and cheap, and we might need to leave it behind for a while immobilized. Also: because.
-Saddle bags, other harness, hard hats, and hoof boots for both of us. Synthetic earth gear might be lighter than equestrian technology. Unicorn hard hat might be hard to find, but try.
-A good flashlight for us. The long endurance type with the remote battery and cord, and some way to fasten it to out head. Unicorn style hard hat if available, just a modified halter if not. We bought a slave that's comfortable in the dark, but we don't want to depend on it or use up magic.
-If available, earth-made explosive powered weapons. Guns might not be handy for a unicorn to manipulate, but grenades really would be.

Most other supplies are better bought in Equestria.
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Hey everyone, update coming soon. It's been forever, I know, and the update will be a bit short all things considered, but the story must go on!
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what happened to interstellar celly
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>>30148583
Excite!
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A New Landscape Continued...


(Anon’s POV)

>You sit in silence.
>Applejack isn’t talking anymore, either.

>You feel bad for being morbidly curious
>and part of you now wishes she never told you what happened.
>Your chin wrinkles with anger and disgust, and you sigh heavily through clenched teeth

>She hadn’t even gotten to her scars, yet
>or the way she responded to you simply petting her on the head, thinking you wanted sex from her
>what happened after that to break her so badly
>or what happened to her little sister…
>Your fists clench so hard that your fingernails dig into your palms
>If you were angry at Applejack’s old master before, then you were furious now
>the thought of someone whipping a child, holding them hostage, made you sick

>She pinches her nose in between her hooves, and curls herself up.
>She shakes her head with her eyes closed

“I can’t, Master. Not now, I-I can’t say no more, please don’t make me…”
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>>30148650
(oops forgot trip!)

>There’s a squeak in her voice
>She shudders, and her tail covers up her belly
>God, it breaks your heart just to hear her ASK you not to force her to relive her trauma
>You quickly shake your head, holding up a hand to wave off her concerns

“No, Applejack. You’ve said enough… god…”

>You cover your face with your hand and rest your elbow on your knee
>You strangely find yourself looking over at her backside, which is still visible
>now, you suddenly have imagery behind the cause of those marks, and you bite your lip

>You know what she just said, but you can’t help yourself
>you have to ask
>you shyly point at her rump, and cringe as you ask the question

“Did… HE do that? To you?”

>Applejack’s hooves twitch, and her tail tucks in between her legs.
>You’re not even sure if she saw you point your finger
>however, she seems to know what you’re talking about anyway.

>You almost don’t notice it, but she nods.

“Yes.”

>Her eyes are glistening
>moist with unshed tears
>You feel a sinking in your gut, but also, anger in your heart
>As if you didn’t have enough reasons to hate her former master…
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>>30148657
>It’s probably pathetic
>maybe counterproductive
>but you have to say something

“I’m sorry, Applejack.”

>She doesn’t seem to react to your apology either way
>like the apology just bounced off of her
>and as soon as it leaves you, you can’t help but feel stupid
>What did your sorry do for her?
>Could you heal her pain?
>Could you bring her sister back?

>Applejack gently shakes her head

“No, Master, don’t be. You… you’re the only one. The only human who’s ever shown me k-kindness.”

>You realize she is now looking at you.
>She sighs, and her eyes gently flutter open and closed
>the fatigue in her voice conveys a sort of regret that you can’t quite understand

>You feel an immense sadness weighing on you
>to think that you simply needing some help with your landscaping work led to all this
>you hadn’t brought Applejack in out of the kindness of your heart, but out of utility

>but you hadn’t gotten rid of her, even when she hadn’t been healthy
>injured
>mentally broken and terrified
>you had helped her instead…

>It had been a messy divorce.
>No kids, nothing but a small house and a job making lavish landscapes for rich people so you could pay the bills
>Not many friends to speak of
>Sometimes feeling like your life was in limbo…

>But maybe, after all of that, there was something good you still had left to offer someone.
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>>30148660
>At least getting cold drinking water won’t be a problem now that your power is going to be out for the foreseeable future
>You fill up two glasses and walk back

>To your great surprise, Applejack is no longer laying down, but crouching on the sofa with her legs bunched up under her
>She’s careful not to sit, with her injury and all
>You hand her the glass, and she takes it with her eyes averted from you

>This time, instead of sitting back in your chair, you join her on the couch.
>Applejack still doesn’t look at you, and now that you’re closer, she’s beginning to shiver again
>you frown, and there’s an ache in your chest
>Does she actually think you’re angry at her for something like this?

>Probably, you think grimly.

>You don’t know what makes you do it
>only two nights ago, it had resulted in something very bad
>But your hand has a mind of its own
>After Applejack takes a gulp of her water, you place your hand on top of her head, and pet down her neck.
>She flinches from your touch, and despite that you don’t push down, she instantly lets her head fall to the cushion
>lowers her gaze and closes her eyes, but not in contentment

>Even so, you don’t stop petting her
>You’re very careful not to move past her neck
>you want her not to associate your touch with bad things, but you know traveling down her body would be a step too far right now
>You keep it up despite her silence and rigidity

>After a minute with Applejack’s tension never lessening, you stop stroking her head, and instead rest it softly on her mane
>Even with all of your best efforts to put her at ease, she’s the exact opposite
>you gulp, and ask her a question

“Applejack… are you afraid of me?”
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>>30148666
>She winces when you ask her
>feeling the twitch in her shoulders under your hand
>you almost pull it away, but you decide to keep it there
>you don’t even know why…

“I-I…”

>She swallows hard
>Then, after some mental deliberation, she nods her head.

“Y-Yes. I am, yes, Anon.”

>Well that answers that question.
>You close your eyes and sigh
>you feel helpless hearing that admission
>wondering what you need to do better
>what you did wrong...

>Unexpectedly though, she keeps going
>talking quietly, meekly with her mouth against the couch
>The fear and sadness in her voice is palpable

“I’m always… w-waiting. For when I make too many mistakes, disobey too many times… a-and then you’ll, you’ll… get rid of me. I’ve already messed up so much. I feel like… all I have left to give you, earn what you’ve given me, is… me.”

>She almost swallows the last word before it gets out.
>she lies motionless, closing her eyes and letting some tears trickle down her cheeks.

>Your pupils, already wide from the low light, still manage to get wider.
>Instantly, you pull your hand off of her and let it fall to the couch.
>She feels it leave her, and her head turns to you
>glistening eyes gazing at you with an intensity you do not expect
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>>30148673
>You know what she means.
>It’s the way she said it.
>Suddenly, you have flashbacks to that night, when you showed her the bed she would be sleeping on
>When you pet her then
>What had happened...

>You shake your head at her, and hold up your hands disarmingly
>Speaking like a hostage negotiator, you try to dissuade her away from these thoughts

“Applejack, remember? Remember what I said, hon? I’m not going to rape you, never, ever. Please, hon, don’t think that w-”

“But what if… I… DO w-want to?”

>She cuts you off, and the room falls silent.
>Applejack, as soon as the sentence leaves her mouth, lowers her head, but her eyes actually stay on you.

>You sit there, gobsmacked, for several seconds.
>You begin to stutter, head tilting with confusion, and you slouch back in the couch
>trying to decide if you really did hear it correctly
>And when you register it, you still can’t believe it
>What does she… how could she want...

>Crouched next to you, Applejack’s eyes flicker, and she stares ahead of her for a time
>like she’s coming to some kind of realization
>She blinks slowly, and you hear her move

>And then, Applejack inches toward you
>She practical crawls, with her nose in the couch and her legs audibly shuffling on the couch cushion
>and you feel unnerved when you see her glance toward your thighs
>She begins to breathe heavily, and her voice sounds almost like she’s sleepwalking

“You… you’d be different, right? You wouldn’t be so rough on me…”
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>>30148679
>Oh fuck no.
>This had to stop, now
>You reply quickly, and firmly, trying not to shout.

“Applejack, no. Stop…”

“I won’t mess anything up this time, I’ll be good… I know I could still be good for you…”

>She talks like she’s in a trance
>Almost like she’s in another world, lost
>It’s actually scary.
>You raise your voice

“No. Stop it Applejack, right now...”

“Please, let me give s-something, anything back, f-for what you did… I know I ain’t got nothing else…”

>She inches toward you again
>mouth more loosely held open as she looks between your legs
>Her hoof touches your thigh, and she pulls herself in

“Then I wouldn’t be so afraid anymore, i-if you just…”

“APPLEJACK, STOP IT THIS INSTANT!”
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Alright, NOW we get to the actual new stuff. I made my own pastebin with the proper update spot on it, but that last segment wasn't included on the pastebin in the OP.

Anyway, continuing!
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>>30148685 (NEW STUFF!)

>You grab her hoof on top of your leg, and hold it tightly
>Your voice cracks with panic
>and actually, even a little bit of anger...
>but not at her.

>As soon as you grab her, Applejack yelps and seizes up completely.
>Her hoof tugs away from you on reflex, but you manage to keep your hold
>and with her other hoof, she covers her head, closing her eyes and gritting her teeth.

>you know Applejack is waiting to be struck.
>your thoughts go back to the first night she was with you
>that horrible trance-like state, as she went to unzip your pants
>you hit her then, a good bop on the nose
>and the way she looks now, you relive your regret for striking her all over again

>but luckily, after a moment passes, that cringing tension ebbs away
>her hoof softens in your hand
>and rather than resist you, she falls still
>you gaze down at her with your mouth agape, and feel that familiar ache in your heart

>Her hoof stays over her head protectively, but the tremors in her legs from bracing herself have subsided.
>In turn, you also soften your grip on her hoof
>Unthinkingly, you rub your thumb up and down her fetlock
>In response, Applejack’s eyes flutter
>her breath catches in her chest, and she gives a small hiccup
>and she leans her head into your holding hand, until her snout is touching your wrist

>You can feel her breathing on your hand
>soft, gentle breaths as she miraculously begins to calm down
>she’s just decided to submit to your hold on her, and simply lies still
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>>30148707
>You are still not sure what to say right now
>some of the most awkward silences of your entire life have occurred within the last two days
>Applejack was just so fundamentally damaged, the idea of helping her truly did feel overwhelming
>but you could never tell her that.
>She already feels enough guilt over simply being fed and given a bed
>telling her how difficult she is to deal with would destroy anything that’s left of her.

>But as you let the silence stretch on, mind drawing a blank on what to say or do next, Applejack is actually the first to talk.
>She shivers and raises her head, staring straight ahead at the wall

“Are you… going to hit me, Master?”

>there it is
>hearing that question, you feel like you’ve been punched in the gut
>you wish you could take back that strike you gave her
>she’s afraid of you
>God, the way this pony makes your heart ache…

“No, no, Applejack. I’m not, you don’t have to worry, ok?”

>There’s a little surprise in her eyes when you deliver her the “good news”
>but she believes you
>She sullenly nods her head, and puts her nose back into the sofa
>And all the while, your hand continues to hold her hoof, finger softly stroking her fetlock
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>>30148713
>You refuse to let the room fall silent
>not after something like that just happened
>it would be torture for the both of you, left with your own thoughts
>You are about to say something…
>...but she beats you to it.

“I’m sorry, th-that I’m so… disgusting, Master. I know I ain’t real pretty, b-but I promise if you ever w...want me to, I’ll do anything you ask.”

>Oh, good LORD.
>Maybe you SHOULD bop her on the nose, again.
>You don’t know how you’re going to make her get the hint
>And now, she thinks she’s ugly, too?
>where did that…

>but then you realize why, and your heart just sinks further than you ever thought it could
>you turned her offer down, to use her body for your own sick enjoyment.
>in her tortured mind, that must mean you find her unattractive, or unworthy
>find her disgusting...

>Heart pounding, you let go of her hoof, and it gently falls to your thigh.
>Applejack’s ears twitch, and she gives a tiny flinch, meekly looking up at you
>expectantly, like she’s afraid she did something wrong
>You smile sadly down at her, and brush a strand of her mane out of her face

“Not pretty?”

>You say, staring into her enormous emerald green eyes
>there’s a tremendous amount of emotion and depth you can see there
>and her mane, the way it falls in soft waves over her head and neck…
>You shake your head, continuing to smile.

“Not pretty? Hon, that isn’t true at all. There’s not one ugly thing about you. And you are most CERTAINLY not ‘disgusting’ either.”
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>>30148717
>Your smile begins to widen, and you feel the sensation of butterflies fluttering in your stomach
>Applejack stares unblinkingly, wordlessly back at you, eyes unwavering
>you can see some contemplation in them
>almost like she’s examining your eyes, your face, for signs of dishonesty
>but she won’t find any

>Then, that’s when a sudden urge hits you
>you must say, you’ve never been a super, well, “touchy feely” kind of guy
>but something about this idea feels so right, so necessary

>you take a deep breath, and wrap your arms all the way around her, and with a grunt, hoist her up onto your chest in a big bear hug

>Applejack gasps, and her hooves do a spazzy little flail around for a moment out of surprise
>but you’ve really put all your strength into this one
>She’s gonna get a nice big hug no matter what
>Master’s orders

>You hug her with her head resting on your shoulder, and her belly pressed against yours
>her rear legs and hindquarters stretch away from you, and were you to drop her, she’d be lying on her side across your lap
>You feel the tension in her fearful body, and while a cautious part of you asks what the hell you are doing, you push it to the background
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>>30148727
>You clasp your hand around her mane, and pull her in close, resting your cheek on her shoulder
>your other arm is wrapped all the way around her middle, and it keep her whole body aside from her lower half close to you
>You just breathe, and hold her closely and tightly
>you’d cross your fingers if you weren’t holding onto her
>you hope this doesn’t make things worse

>Applejack, while she shivers at first, and her muscles are harder than rock, they quickly begin to soften
>the feeling of her melting in your arms makes your heart flutter and another small smile spread on your lips
>that there’s just enough trust between you and her
>that she knows you won’t harm her

>Applejack’s heavy breathing slows, and her rigid back legs also relax
>submitting to your hold of her
>and then, you feel her legs wrap around you, too, and they squeeze just as hard
>You carefully rub her between her shoulders, on her withers, up and down
>short strokes, just in a comforting gesture
>Applejack gasps softly, and something tells you it’s not a displeasured one
>you close your eyes, and speak softly beside her ear

“Applejack, inside and out, I… I think you’re beautiful.”

>You feel shocked that such a word even leaves your mouth.
>But it’s like you weren’t even aware of the fact you said it
>what were you even going to say, anyway?
>surely it couldn’t have been that!
>Surely someone like you couldn’t have actually meant to say something so dramatic, or… or…

>Your train of thought is derailed, though, when you feel a shudder against you.
>and then another one, followed by another
>an audible puff of air through Applejack’s nose...

>She’s crying.
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>>30148731
>The grip around you tightens, and you feel her pull in closer to you, and a repressed, low pitched whimper leaves her
>The sound of it is enough to almost rip your heart out of your chest
>You give a gentle shush, and resume your hand rubbing up and down her back

>But there’s no holding her back.
>No shushing is going to keep her at bay
>she sobs, much louder this time, and you feel the tip of her wet snout touch the nape of your neck and her warm breathing on your skin
>you feel her lungs heave and spasm, and she cringes against you
>blurriness begins to fill your vision, and you blink away a forming tear in your eye

>Her voice peeps out, and goosebumps rise over your whole body

“No… no one’s ever said that before.”

>You hug her tighter.
>despite everything that’s happened to her, for some reason, that confession hits you just as hard
>you really have been the only one who’s ever shown her kindness since she arrived here…

>but what about before, back in her old homeland?
>what about…

>Something stops you from going down that train of thought.
>your gut tenses, and the muscles in your jaw bulge with a momentary hard grind of your teeth
>and you shove the thought out of your mind, without fully understanding why…

>Your focus quickly moves back to Applejack, the pony shivering slightly in your arms.
>a hand glides through her mane, and you smile down at her.

“Well, it’s true hon. Never doubt that.”

>You pull her in even closer, and rest your head on her shoulder while hers rests on yours
>Applejack sniffs, and her very powerful grip tightens around you
>your smile widens.

>the two of you then fall quiet, and only the sounds of soft breathing and a faint breeze outside can be heard.
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>>30148583
Great! More green of the best pony!
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>>30148736
Alright, unfortunately that is the end of tonight's update. But I will, for sure, be posting the next update much sooner than I did with this measly one. Sorry, it's just that I've had a combo of writer's block and a very busy life lately, and it's made it really hard to get past this scene.

I'll stop rambling on, now. Hope it's good!
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Moar Appul
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my only prompt is
>rape
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>>30148807
>she was only 10
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>>30148807
We do that here, sometimes, but SiM does it more and better.
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>>30131468
Belated response, but wooow, did she ever catch Anonymous on the wrong side of the bed right then. Beat with a hand, flip-flop, and hairbrush just for arguing? That's rough - poor bookhorse. I hope he makes it up to her (though not until she's proved herself a good girl).

>>30140924
This was a good update. I realize misery makes for great drama, but at a certain point you need to have some flash of hope to offset the baseline horror. And with that, you struck a good balance here: They have an option. It won't be easy, it won't be without drawbacks, and it won't solve all problems. But it does exist; furthermore, things are finally looking up for both Anon connecting with his ponies and Silver Spoon proving herself.

Good use of a Firefly quote too. It occurs to me that everyone in this story has just sort of beeing letting themselves be carried along. Maybe now it's time they stood up and walked again.

No hurting the Tavi, though. Tavi is a good poner.

>>30148752
And Applehorse returns! Man, you kept us hanging on that cliffhanger a while, but the payoff was well worth it. This punched all the right white knight buttons, even got me to tear up a bit. He's finally getting through to her, past all the scars and shells she's built around herself.
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>>30148877
Now is not the time to talk about the filly brothel.
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>>30149260
It's always the time to talk about the filly brothel. Who's your favourite prostitute?
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>>30148583
Don't you tease me. I'm too drunk for teasing.
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>Didn't read ahead.

I rescind my previous statements.>>30149304
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>>30117550
It's a shame that Celery in Space died. I've been really wanting a good Celestia and/or Luna green and that's 2 for 2 that died prematurely. The space one and the bipolar Luna one had a lot of promise.
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>>30148752
We need to get the pretty half pear horse healed up, Inside and out. More gentle respectful cuddles are required
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>>30149453
>and the bipolar Luna one had a lot of promise
Fucken writefag probably just up and left.

I am anger
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>>30149453
>>30149462
It took seven years for us to get a proper episode with them. Now that we got one we won't even see the princesses in fanfiction any more.
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>>30149473
>proper
Now if only we can get one that isn't starring Glimmer or some other shoehorned-in pony who doesn't really belong
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>>30149473
I won't let that happen. Time for me to get crackin... on FiMFiction...
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>>30149479
Y-you bastard
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>>30149473
>that pic
>I had to go and see if it was really that bad.

I wasn't great but it wasn't all THAT bad.
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>>30148877
https://pastebin.com/vXL1LP2T
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Cadance is for fancy riding.
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>>30148736
Worth the wait.
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>>30147970
I'm glad it worked out well.

There are quite a few free ponies, but I'm going as post Reconstruction US.
Free, not equal, and one step off from falling right back into slavery.
This is something more fun imo, as it lets me have Lyra be something uncommon over unique in the story.

>if anyone can provide more views and ideas for this, I would be happy.

You keep saying badass, is that good or bad?
>I thought the Gravity Gorget was a passive system, and it just got heavier the further away it traveled?

The collars have proximity and triggered modes. This way there is the potential for Bash to steal it and escape, or to have missed the proximity feature and just wing it.
Bash's personality is rather open, so I don't want to cut off something key early.
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Another update to my fic For the love of Anon. Cant be assed to post green.
Pastebin link:
https://pastebin.com/FbTDi5Gm
Fimfiction link:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/372885/for-the-love-of-anon
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>>30148736
>"No… no one’s ever said that before.”

Notice how Applejackie doesn't even say "Master" or "Anon" in that sentence. In that moment she is finally trusting enough to accept what he said is true about herself, not because she has to agree with her master, but because she truly does believe him. Touching.

And I have to wonder if someday, they will actually fall in love with one another.
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>>30148736
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>>30147545

>>30147970
What this anon said. Some basic gear while we're still here and some weapons Equestria probably wouldn't have like grenades, a baton and some pepperspray.
Lyra needs to start putting her slave in place right from the getgo after all. Then off to Equestria.

>>30150355
Not him, but badass means that anon really likes the way Lyra doesn't take shit from anyone. I'd say thats good.
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>>30146232
Just throw him a warning about that knife. Don't make us regret letting him go.
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>>30148752
Best anon post best pone
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>>30148752
Thanks for the feel train Landscape, always is good read fine green
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what happened?
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>>30150630
why are anon cursing unnecessarily?
somehow it does not fit him/the story
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>>30140924
thank you
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>>30147545
Rope.
Dungeon crawl staple, and earths modern synthetic fibers are WAY better than equestrian hemp. Get some basic rock climbing rigging too. Pitons, cams, pullys, assenders, all lightweight sport gear. Unicorns are poorly suited to underground exploration and we will need all the help we can buy. We doubt a pony climbing harness is available, but we can practice tying on our new slave. Totally not into bondage, it's a practical exercise. We just have to keep telling ourselves that. Are we able to levitate ourself? Even if we are it would be wise to save our magic for when we really need it.

>Writefag should structure the choices better. You gave us a bunch of new information about the collars after the choice was made. You asked us to pick a pony to buy, then said "Oh, by the way, there's a griffon and a dragon too!". Give us everything we need to make the best, most interesting choice up front.

>Love how the story is going, keep it up!
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>>30153657
I am trying to keep as much infornmation up front with the questions as possible.
For the purchase choice, you were given a final go, no go choice on who to pick.
Only Spitfire was removed, as there is yet a possibility of a plan for her, depending on choices.

I apologize if the collars are out of place, when no one wanted the compulsion collar, I figured that an interesting reason would be better than some weird respect for the sanctity of Bash's mind.

The name of it was hopefully a give away to the usage of Thorax and Discord.
Was it too subtle a hint that it would not end up well? I am unsure of my grasp on English and making it work.
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>>30153721
I caught the 'Discord' but not the 'Thorax', that's part of why I questioned it's reliability. No sense buying working equipment we rely on from the Element of Chaos! You just need to plan a bit further ahead. Should have thought out and thoroughly described the slaves and collars, then offered the choice. This will help generate interest and (You)s
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>>30153657
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you know the feel? the feelsy feel that feels?

the feel you get when the loose concept of a story starts to take form? the feel when the dots connect? the feel when you feel like you can write again? the feel when you can see the scenes infront of your eyes, when you can feel the feel?

Im feeling it
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So why is there no love for her?
Well tough love of the whip anyways.
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>>30154162

Lucky....
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prompt
>won that jackpot back in '16
>build mansion with large yard
>quit shit dead end job, party hard
>get lonely, more like get pony
>head down to local auction, see crusaders
>sold as a lot, matching cutie marks
>take home big brother/father feelings develop
>8 or 19 months latter find one of the girls "sisters AJ RD or rairity
the meeting don't go well, she thinks your a dirty slaver and worse youve had time with her sister she will save the girls.
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>>30155028
8 or 9 months**
oops
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I'm currently reading the Shiny and Corona story and right now I'm at the part where they just returned home after Anon gets his concussion. I have to admit, I teared up a little bit at the part where Anon is talking to Corona about what she did. I'm no stranger to that sort of situation, and to be honest there's very little that's emotionally painful to me as losing the trust and respect of someone you love. It fucking hurts.The one time I've ever woken up crying was from a dream involving that. Just want to congratulate the author, if he's still around. You've made me feel.
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>>30155295
Somewritefag is sort of around. Keeps saying "update next weekend" but hasn't come through for a while. Seems to be stuck.
I felt too.
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I miss corona
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>>30156014
Feel
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>>30156014
She is where she belongs, under a 400 pound sweaty stuttering neckbeard for all eternity.
Her lament is he never bathes.
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>>30157209
Corona deserves love and cuddles, just like AJ. They are both good girls.
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>>30157518
What if we make AJ ride Corona.
Into the grave
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>9
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>>30147545
An extra set of restraints, including pegasus wingbinder and unicorn restrictior ring.
What is the situation in Equestria around capturing new slaves? If we don't find any ancient artifacts, and have an opportunity to get the drop on somepony, could we try it? How did we end up enslaved on Earth ourselves anyway?
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>>30158844
Wouldn't wing binders just be rope?
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>>30159002
Well SOMEONE doesn't want to be fancy
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>>30146331

"Hey, I didn't get to say - thank you."
> Distantly, the pony laughs.
> "I'd prefer I didn't have to, but you're welcome."
"Just - if you hear about something going to happen, something to be aware of... you won't be punished if you let us know."
> There's a long silence, then:
> "I'll think about it."
"It'll be good for everypony."
> "Yeah. Now just stay there a bit longer."
> You do, and moments later their hoofsteps fade around the corner.
> Almost immediately you stagger, having to reach out with a wing to steady yourself against the wall.
> Half of you had given up the moment the blade had touched your neck, concluded that this was it and you'd come up next on the list of ponies to be attacked.
> The other half - the fighting half, the old pegasus warrior blood in your veins - had nearly been ready to turn and chase them down despite the weapon.
> Thankfully whoever it was hadn't had killing you on their agenda, and you'd managed to hold your fighting instincts in check.
> No point in getting yourself killed if they didn't want it either.
> At long last you turn back around and stare down the mess of alleyways the pony had vanished into.
> There'd be no tracking them now, and in a way you're almost glad.
> A pony still willing to fight back against slavery, but not so totally lost to hatred...
> You wish there were more like that.
> Maybe even wish you were more like that pony was.
> Wish you hadn't had to betray so many.
> ...wish you could say for certain you wouldn't betray again in the future.
> With another sigh you scoop up the paper they'd tossed to you.
> A bit stained by dirt, but still perfectly legible - and everything you could have wished for.
> Tucking it beneath a wing, you start back towards the security post.
> A few other guards, ponies and humans alike, nod to you as you enter.
> Gene was there, of course, and is the first to speak up:
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>>30159943

> "Thunderlane. Are we going to start questioning some of the ponies you mentioned yesterday? I will have to assign some to help you if we are..."
"Maybe. In fact, almost certainly. But we've got some other things to do first, because you won't believe what just happened to me on the way here..."

> Sunburst looks quite surprised when you first step through his doorway.
> It takes him a moment to do anything at all, and then it's a furious rush to sort through the mess occupying his tabletop in order to locate his glasses.
> Pinning them to his face, he blinks owlishly - as if they had been necessary to confirm it actually you - before nervously glancing around the utterly chaotic space he called an 'office'.
> "An- Master, I, uh - I hadn't expected you-"
"I know."
> You chuckle softly.
"Our original meeting was supposed to be up in the mansion, and I think Cadance was supposed to bring you in - but if I'm going to be rather more involved, I thought I'd prefer to start with the matters immediately at hand. If you're not busy with something important?"
> "Y-Yes, Master. I'll, uh - just, just one moment - I'm supposed to be out to set up the young ones' morning magic lessons in a little bit, but I can spare a little while."
> Magic sweeps a stack of books and papers off a seat and heaves it from the corner it had been occupied, but unfortunately it's still a pony-sized seat.
"Relax, Sunburst. I'll be fine standing."
> You might be, but from the nervous bob of his head Sunburst gives you have to suspect he isn't quite fine with this.
> Perhaps something to do with how you stand nearly half again as tall as he does.
"So, I imagine Cadance has talked with you about what I'm considering."
> "Y-Yes, Master. T-That I would be Flurry Heart's tutor."
> Another pause, during which his eyes flick around the room anywhere but on you.
> "If I may speak honestly, Master, I am surprised you would consider me after..."
> Trailing off, he shifts uncertainly.
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>>30159956

"Well, I won't deny it was a hard sell. Which really, is why I wanted to come down here and talk to you about it."
> "About w-what I d-did-"
> He's terrified.
> Stricken with fear that you would - what?
> Decide to inflict more punishment on him?
> Now you do sit down, lowering yourself to a more reasonable height compared to the stallion and putting both hands on the table.
"Easy, Sunburst. This isn't an interrogation, and I'm not going to hurt you."
> At last he seem to settle, realizing you weren't a threat.
> Or at least not an immediate one.
"Whoever went after Mocha Cream, I'll deal with them when they're caught-"
> The grimness in your tone is matched by the expression on your face.
"-and it not be merciful. But right now, with you, I'm just interested in having a talk."
> "...yes, Master."
"Cadance made some good points in arguing on your behalf - you are probably the most knowledgeable pony I own, and you knew Flurry Heart beforehand to boot. If this works out, I'll be very glad. But if it doesn't - I'd rather know now than run into a problem later."
> You lean even further forward, both elbows coming to sit on the table too.
> It might have seemed menacing, but the gesture also brought your head down even lower - to a point slightly below Sunburst's.
"So, tell me, Sunburst - can I trust you to teach her? Do I have to be worried about what you'll be putting into her head?"
> For several moments, the stallion says nothing - a hoof rising to play with the little tuft of beard that emerges from it.
> "...I can say yes. But why would you trust me?"
"I don't know. Tell me why I should."
> This time, Sunburst answers quickly:
> "Because they're all I have left."
> His voice is stronger now too, much more confident.
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>>30159961

> "My life, Master... I didn't really have an easy path. I left my only friend early on to go to the School for Gifted Unicorns. I didn't make too many friends there, and I wasn't good enough with magic to really stand out. I went to the Crystal Empire, but..."
> A soft sigh.
> "...I was drifting. Pretending I was someone important while I locked myself away to hide how bad at magic I actually was. If Starlight hadn't come back, I hadn't become closer with P- Cadance, Shining Armor, and Flurry Heart... I'd have turned up as nothing."
"What happened to 'Starlight'?"
> "I don't know."
> His glasses slip off to be set gently on the table top, letting him rub at his eyes with one hoof.
> "Starlight was further south when it all began. I never saw her again. Went with one of the groups of ponies trying to flee the Crystal Empire instead, and... well, that didn't work. I was alone again. No friends, no one I knew, no path forward... I was drifting."
"Until Cadance was brought here."
> "Yes, until then. Even when you first brought me to teach the foals and develop new products to sell... those were jobs. Then suddenly I had somepony I knew again. So when she came and asked me to for help organizing the escape... how couldn't I?"
> A fierce shudder ran through his body.
> "When she had to whip me... it hurt worse than anything I'd ever felt. But that wasn't anything to what it hurt me inside."
> 'Had to' whip him?
> For a moment you're considering probing if that was a remark on you, but there's no point now.
"I've no intent to keep you separate from Flurry Heart or Cadance unless I have to. I was even thinking that there might be a chance of having her come down here for her lessons, though I'm not so sure of that now."
> "And that's why you can trust me, Master. I want - nothing more than to see her here. Safe. I failed being her teacher and adviser once; I can't have it happen again."
> He gestures out the window, eyes locked on you even without his glasses.
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>>30159974

> "Something like that only pushes her further away. I want to see Flurry again. I - Celestia above, I don't even know if she'll remember me. I want her to, though."
"And I want the same. If she's to eventually take up the role I want her to, I can't hold her distant forever. She needs to know all of you too."
> "Not one of us wants to be a slave, Master. But if that is the cost of being with the ponies I care about..."
> Your fingers steeple together, gaze regarding Sunburst carefully.
"I wonder, though. What happens if Cadance decides she wants to get ponies out again? What if she decides having her Flurry run away is the 'best thing'?"
> "Would she do that, Master?"
> You're surprised by the frankness of Sunburst's question, but quickly recover.
"I do not think so. She's rapidly opened her eyes to the necessity of us working together. But if she did?"
> What if Cadance did get it into her head that rebellion or escape were right?
> It's a thought that leaves a trail of fear through your mind.
> Once had been bad; twice would be... disastrous.
> "I... I must speak freely, Master."
"Do it. I didn't come here for buttering-up or half-truths."
> "You have become much better as well. We have much less to fear - not looking over our shoulders for whips to be swung at the slightest problem or being subject to the whims of guards who enjoy our suffering."
"...I thought I said no buttering up."
> "I'm not!"
> And for the first time there's real force in his voice too.
> "I'm not - a few months ago I would have done all I could to get Flurry Heart away if I was asked. Now..."
> Voice going soft again, he looks away.
> "None of us want to be slaves, Master. But now that you've improved things... maybe we can live. And it's still my duty as Flurry Heart's adviser to make sure she gets the best she can."
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>>30159981

So, as was chosen a while back we personally spoke to Sunburst before approving him to teach Flurry. If you accept him, the first of their meetings will still be monitored.
> Accept?
> Refuse?
> Ask/tell him something more?
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>>30148752
YES, finally. Can't wait for more apple horse slowly getting better again.
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>>30159986
Accept.

This short little interview tells us where his head is at. He admits that he doesn't enjoy slavery, but that's to be expected. He's not a unreasonable rebel with a head filled with delusions, so for now, he's earned our trust.

Apart from outright releasing them from slavery, I wonder what he thinks could be improved further if he says that things have gotten better.
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Skittles when
Space Celly when
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>>30159986
Accept, of course.

He could have said "Yes, master, I will mold her young mind into your perfect devoted slave! I'm so very happy to be here and would never dream of anything better, for her or me!". That would have been a lie. His interview went about as well as it possibly could have.
Let's take the senic route back. Check out the new rec center, new housing block, let ourselves be seen. But maybe pick up a guard to watch our back on the way.
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>>30159986
>>30160095
This, preferably with Sunburst.
Answer is yes from me too.

Pull him out of his work for a bit to ask him about the curriculum and if he needs anything while they walk. It doesn't have to be a point of interest, but getting him to talk freely about something he enjoys will probably open him up for future talks and get him to relax more. A small point to bond over can even build up to trust and loyalty. And since he's the best magic guy in the camp, who's damn well vulnerable to get coerced into betrayal, Anon really needs that.

Maybe even let him see Flurry for a few minutes.
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umm
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>>30159617
Polymimetic alloy that clings and wraps around the feathers?
Let's them gesture as needed but clamps tight to stop flight.
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>>30160257
>>30160359
Replied to long post. We take the scenic route with Sunburst, I mean.

Adding onto it, Anon should outright mention How important Flurry is to him as well, and the repercussions of anything coming to harm her. Sunburst needs to know their goals align in the end.


On that note, are their no surveillance cameras? Anon should really consider installing a few more. At the end of the day, trust is a scarce resource in this camp.
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>>30160915
>surveillance cameras

These have been mentioned several times. Writefag seems to be deliberately ignoring them for the good of the story. With modern technology Anon could observe and record every breath every pony ever takes, and then where would the drama come from?
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>>30160915
If they do have a rambling conversation, what does Sunburst think of Mochas attackers? Does he think Anon should torture the fuck out of his fellow slave-pones, and offer to help? Does he ask mercy for them? He probably suggests they face Cadances justice, but does Anon listen?
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>>30161439
https://youtu.be/5amFRDngyHs?t=5m45s
-Anon on actually being competent and installing modern surveillance equipment.
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>>30161439
Saving a fair bit of money by not wiring the camp with a pile of technology and hiring the security personnel to monitor it all was a big part of his big "let the ponies run themselves" plan... and obviously it kind of blew up in his face.

I'm not straight up ignoring the suggestion, but something like that is going to take a bit to implement. It is the logical next step to take, though.
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>>30160095
Maybe he should ask his input, the only perspective Anon has had is from thunderland and cadence.
>>30159986
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>>30159986
Even with the candor of things it is necessary to continue with the plans that have beforehand and to continue with the education of Flurry, but it would be better that at least the first lesson is monitored and that there is enough surveillance by the area to avoid incidents, not would be bad thing that the other ponies know Flurry and that she socialize with fillies of her age, would have stories tell Megan and maybe she is curious enough to go abroad and also meet the ponies

Talking with Sunburst could be beneficial, knowing the opinions of other ponies other than Candance and Thunderlane is vital to better understand the condition of the community, if Anon decided to get out of his house of cards and put his feet on the ground, the continuous interaction with the rest of the pony population is vital for the advancement of future projects, him must demonstrate to them that they have better options than to attack defenseless fillies and to plan escapes, that Anon can offer to them surpasses to the hunger, fear and violence that exists outside
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>>30159986
Accept. He's been upfront and genuine, and since we can monitor him, we have to be smart and let someone so familiar with Flurry teach her.
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>>30147545
A lyre.

Our Special Talent has never served us that well, but we have always enjoyed playing. We lost our faithful old lyre when we were captured in Equestria. Working at the mill we never seemed to have the time. Now we have a bit of extra cash and a (literally) captive audience, why not look for a new instrument? One of those little wooden ones humans make for their children... And if our slave boos us, we can beat it till it claps!

>>30158844
Previous post mentioned the "Slavery is Belonging" line up from Madame De Rarita. We turned down the magic collar, but our new slave would look fantastic in the rest of that line with our green, blue, and white! If we get the chance to capture another slave we can use that stuff on it, and get a matching horn ring just in case.
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>>30162486
>get a matching horn ring
Plot twist: that colour matching magic restrictor ends up on her own horn!
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Must be good to the smol slaves.
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>>30162634
>suddenly Lyra and Dash swap bodies thanks to the artifact
>mutual nonconsensual bondage play ensues
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>>30159986
>"Hey, I didn't get to say - thank you."
Already said my say, but that's a great line. We should have thought of it.
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The only good slave is an earth pony mare.
Remember to nullify your stallions and remove any wings and horns to have the perfect slave.
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>>30164157
Even the growling voice is batman-like. This pony is literally the batman of the camp.
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>>30164556
Erf ones are also stronger and more dexterous, having relied on their hooves all their lives
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>>30164559
TFW the menacing batpone turns out to be our friendly Lyra. TFW she and Bon Bon fight about it.
>is that three months done yet?
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>>30164609
I want a trained erf slave to trample the wings off my new Spitfire slave as I fuck her raw.
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Bumpo no bump
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>>30165571
sugoi!
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>>30165571
I could totally believe that Dashie would be a huge cuddleslut when no one else is around. She's secretly a huge girly girl.
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And this just happened.
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Should slaves be made to poop outside and fertilize the yard?
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>>30165571
>ears that fluffy

In your dreams Rainbow.
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Ponies are not sexual objects, I repeat, they are not for pleasure, they are for protecting, loving and perhaps embracing if it is consensual
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>>30167159
Yes. You are very correct.
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>>30167159
Ponies are for whatever Master says they are for.
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>>30167208
Jesus Christ how old is that picture?
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>>30167419
Ancient. S1-era ancient. And it's never stopped being incredibly hot.
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>>30167208
I'd like something like that but with more latex covering than open leather halters.
Latex is hot to cover a pony with in strategic sections, but loses the appeal if its full body.

Its great if you put a stallion in a latex thong and let him get a boner
Dat bulge
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>>30167208
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>9
Slow day, huh?
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"Because I Choose To"
Part 1 - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU
Part 2 - https://pastebin.com/GKxvUCek
^ updates in Part 2

> Thanking the nurse, you return her polite smile as she leaves the room with the mop in her hands. You sigh softly as you move over to lie back on your bed. Cadance is still in the small toilet on your left, and in the relative silence that follows, you replay what has happened just now in your mind.
> What you did was reckless and rough, and you probably scared the poor pony when you told her that you wanted to kill her. Despite her tough exterior and her words, you are sure that she is shaken badly inside, but… You had to do it. You had to know her identity and that you can trust her, and that was probably the fastest and most efficient means to achieve that… At least, as far as you know, anyway.
> Sighing again, you shake your head slowly and rest your head on your pillow. You know that you are a reckless, impulsive idiot at times, but so far, things have worked out for you. Now that you think about it, it is a wonder that you are doing relatively well in most aspects of your life.
> You frown as Brain reminds you of your relationship with your family, but you are quick to silence him. It is not a topic that you like to think about, and despite the passage of time, the emotional wounds you have are still fresh, and the pain they bring still hurts.
> The toilet door opens, and out comes Princess Cadance, moving regally and gracefully as she walks slowly towards you. If she had been crying, there are no signs of it when she smiles gently at you while climbing on your bed. You adjust yourself and prop the pillow up behind you, resting your back against it to allow you to see the pony princess clearly. As she lays down on your right, keeping a distance away from you, you gently ask if she would like to hold you again. The pink pony regards you with a slight smirk and a soft snort.
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>>30168481
> “You are a sly one, Mister Anon. If you want to hold me, then just say so and I will let you, or simply grab me and pull me in, rather than asking me what I want… I know you miss Starlight, but she will be back any time now.”
> You smile softly. This Cadance is reading you like a book.
“I would love to have a beautiful mare like you in my arms right now, Princess, but I asked you to get YOUR permission for something that I want, instead of forcing you to do it… I know that you will obey me, Princess, but as with Starlight, I would rather you choose to do it willingly and happily, rather than be coerced into carrying out my will. There is a subtle difference here, even though the direct outcome is the same.”
> Princess Cadance grins at you as she shifts her body over, pressing her back against your side and your right thighs, but you keep your arms still. The way she lays by your side is similar to how a dog would do. Noting the position of your right hand, she looks up and regards you with her eyes. She has the same expression that Starlight had when she was watching you prepare her food that night that you… Did her… In the missionary position. It was a look of adoration.
“Why… Are you looking at me like that?”
> Princess Cadance blushes softly, but keeps her eyes fixed on yours.
> “I… I want to thank you for being considerate and kind to me, Mister Anon… I have a way to go before I fully recover from my experiences, so I appreciate your respect towards me… As for the look… Well, I was thinking… I was thinking that if I didn’t have the responsibilities that I have now… I…”
> Her voice trails off, and she sighs softly. When you raise an eyebrow at her, she blushes deeper and smiles sheepishly before she speaks again.
> “… If it were possible… Maybe… Just maybe… I would love to call you ‘Master’ too, Mister Anon…”
> You blink.
> Oh no… Oh no no no no no….
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>>30168491
> If Princess Cadance has been talking to Starlight, she definitely knows what her role will be if she becomes yours.
> A freaking pony princess as your new bed slave? That slender and graceful feminine body, complete with the luscious mane and tail? Not to mention the beauty of her smile? Holy shit, Boss, you-
> SHUT THE FUCK UP. THAT IS NOT HAPPENING.
> You shake your head vigorously. She giggles softly at your reaction before she rests her head on her hooves and closes her eyes.
> “It’s just a silly fantasy, but I envy Starlight, you know? To be able to live a simple life under a caring and loving master that respects her and treats her kindly… To not have any worries about her food, safety and future… To not have to dabble in politics and face the consequences of not living up to the expectations of other ponies… I do envy her, and other the ponies who were fortunate enough to have met someone like you…”
> With a small sigh, she takes a moment to breathe deeply before she continues speaking, still keeping her eyes closed.
> “I have to be honest with you, Mister Anon. When I started talking to Starlight, I felt that everything she said about you was a load of wishful thinking on her part… I mean, my experiences with your kind were… Well… Not friendly, to say the least… But now, having met and getting to know you and others like you, I am glad that she was right, as are the other ponies whom I have talked to about their Masters and Mistresses… You are a wonderful man, Mister Anon, and I can see why she loves you so… It is a beautiful thing that you have with her, and… I cannot deny that I do miss that feeling of being in love…”
> Coughing awkwardly to cover your embarrassment, you are tempted to shift your body away from her. This is getting into dangerous territory, and you are not comfortable with it.
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>>30168508
> Thankfully, she does not say or do anything else other than opening her eyes and staring at a spot on the bedsheet. You give her a few moments to delve into her thoughts before you take out your phone and ask her if she has one of her own. She confirms it and gives you her phone number, which you give a ‘missed’ call to, again reassuring her that you will be ready to talk if she ever wants to. It is the least you can do for the poor princess, especially when she has taken much of her time to look after you.
> Princess Cadance thanks you softly, giving you an appreciative smile before she lowers her head, again staring at that same spot on the bedsheet.
> Silence. The princess is deep is thought; based on what she mentioned earlier, she is probably reminiscing on the times when she is still with her family. This poor, poor pony girl. You really want to hug her and tell her that everything will be okay, but you know that that is a lie. Nothing can change the fate of those ponies; if you had to guess, her husband is probably dead or missing, as are her children.
> So instead, you choose to keep your silence, simply watching her and waiting. Eventually, the silence becomes uncomfortable and you open your mouth to say something, but Princess Cadance speaks before you can do so.
> “I escaped with the help of Thorax’s Changelings exactly 6 weeks ago. I have been doing some work for Thorax in Harmony Village after your government has granted its approval for its development, mainly revolving around organising and planning the development of our new home. While I recovered from my wounds, one of my tasks is to bring ponies who are selling themselves as slaves to meet their new Masters. Trixie’s case was an exception, as you specifically asked for her, and your asking of information has led me to spend a lot more time here than what is usual… Nonetheless, I do not regret any moment of it.”
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>>30168517
> She lifts her head up to smile at you, but you frown in response.
> Wait, wasn’t the speech made more than 2 months ago?
“6 weeks? So you are saying that that speech you did in Parliament…”
> Shaking her head lightly, she lets out a breath.
> “I never said those words, Mister Anon, as I was not present there that day… I was… “Serving” your kind… At that time…”
> Your eyes widen.
> What? How? Who? Did AC Thor lie to the entire Police Force?
> You frown. No, it cannot be, as you know your government: the speech did happen, as the Bill would never have been considered otherwise. So, it means that-
“Changelings… Those ponies were Changelings.”
> Princess Cadance confirms your epiphany with a small nod.
> “Twilight is a Bearer of the Elements of Harmony, but she was the only Princess left in Equestria after our capture. She had to manage and save what was left of our nation, so she was forced to send her best friends, the last 3 Bearers, as the final party to leave Equestria as diplomats. They were a unicorn named Rarity and 2 ‘Earth’ ponies called Applejack and Pinkie Pie, and their tasks are to carry a letter that I had almost finished writing before my capture and to negotiate for peace between our governments… Or what’s left of ours, anyway... The Bearers made an arrangement with her that if they do not return within a week, Twilight will cast a dangerously powerful spell to teleport all humans out of Equestria and seal the Portal in Fillydelphia for good.”
> Cadance sighs softly.
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>>30168523
> “As you can probably guess, Rarity, Applejack and Pinkie Pie were enslaved quickly when they came to Earth, but somehow, Thorax made contact with the Bearers and rescued them, secretly keeping them in his house while he arranged to rescue me from captivity. By then, Twilight has already sealed the Portal after returning all non-Equestrian beings back to Earth... We do not know how exactly she did it, but the Bearers and I suspect that she managed to get the God of Chaos, Discord, to help her, somehow.”
> You nod slowly and wait for her to continue. She does.
> “While the 3 Bearers and I were recovering in his care, he had his brother and other Changelings to impersonate the 3 Bearers and me to complete their original mission... It may be deceitful, but Thorax and his brave Changelings wanted to protect us, so they volunteered for it… After the speech was made in Parliament, they discussed the terms of our surrender… In short, the Bearers and I were free to leave Parliament as a sign of good faith, the 4 of us were to be considered to be legally freed from ownership, and your government will allow us to create a sanctuary for rescued pony slaves. In return, we are to formally surrender to them and conduct research and development in Harmony Village for a variety of causes as instructed by your government, especially with the creation of new technologies through the incorporation and generation of harmonic magic.”
> You shake your head slowly. Your bullshit meter is getting triggered.
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>>30168531
“Forgive me, Princess, but this is all too good to be true. First, you expect me to believe that MY government will simply let your kind amass in a location to develop what might be possibly new weapons technology? You are talking about a high potential for revolt here, especially with magic-equipped former pony slaves who have suffered as a result of the actions of my kind. Second, I know how my government thinks, Princess; they will not allow the creation of Harmony Village without a catch to it. Third, how will I know what everything you are telling me is true? After all, you are just TELLING me everything without showing me proof… Finally, you are saying that AC Thor made negotiations on behalf of your government, when you or the other Princesses were not even consulted? I’m sorry, but I have a hard time believing everything that you just said.”
> Expectedly, Princess Cadance looks at you with a frown before sighing again. She is evidently exasperated with your doubt. Remaining silent for a moment, she finally speaks softly as she rests her head on her hooves again, staring at a spot on the wall.
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>>30168538
> “… I will answer your third question first. Just before the day of the surrender ceremony, the 3 Bearers and I brought representatives from your government to the site of the Portal, which conveniently enough was situated near an airbase. Your soldiers confirmed that that was indeed the location of the site, and many of them who were in Equestria also confirmed that the Portal were closed after they were mysteriously transported back onto Earth. As for what actually happened in Parliament that day when Thorax’s brother made that speech, you may speak to your elected representative for details as what I know of it is also limited. He or she will probably deny it, given your government’s insistence that your people will be more accepting of slavery if the War is still officially on. Whether you want to believe me or not is your choice, but all I am offering is the truth and my knowledge.”
> Princess Cadance takes a deep breath, letting it out slowly before speaking again. She and raises her head to look at you, giving you a weak smile as she does so.
> “Do you want to carry out another ‘exercise’ of trust again, Mister Anon? And even if you did… How far do you want to go, and what can I possibly do that can convince you to trust me? No matter how convincing my arguments, or how raw my reactions are, you ultimately still perceive and decide if I am telling the truth or not.”
> She pauses and waits for your response. You frown as you consider her questions, shaking your head gently as a thought comes to you before you reply.
“I realise that I am behaving like someone with paranoia; choosing to accept what you are telling me at one moment while rejecting it at another… I guess what you are saying is that trust is a choice, isn’t it Princess?”
> Princess Cadance smiles weakly at you in return and nods.
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>>30168546
> “It is, and you have every reason to doubt me, especially after what you had gone through. I can understand that, I suppose… But… I’m tired, Mister Anon… I’m tired of the hurdles I must jump and the obstacles that I must cross whenever I interact with your kind; you are not the first to be sceptical, and you certainly won’t be the last... As I’ve said, all I am offering is the truth and my knowledge, so why don’t I tell you everything that I know, then you decide what you want to believe?”
> You nod once in reply. You can do that.
> Shaking her head slowly again as she continues smiling back at you, the Princess returns her head back on your bedsheet before she speaks again, staring back at that damned spot on the wall.
> “Thorax did what he had to in order to help us. He, and the other Changelings on Earth had no way of contacting any of the Princesses before they found me by sheer luck, and ponies are dying and suffering every day, Mister Anon. He wanted and needed to do something, and when he chanced upon the 3 Bearers first, it was an opportunity that he felt compelled to capitalise on… I discussed this with him and with Rarity, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie after he rescued me, and we came to a consensus that it was the right thing to do, even if he did made decisions on my behalf and used deception to achieve it, which was against the virtue of Honesty as an Element of Harmony.”
> You shake your head slowly in admiration.
> These ponies. Still believing in their philosophy despite the circumstances… It is… Remarkable, really. How many of us can do that for our own beliefs?
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>>30168558
> “I can answer the rest of your questions at once, Mister Anon. To ensure our cooperation and the security from my subjects in Harmony Village, your government situated the sanctuary in the middle of an isolated plot of land, far away from any human settlements. As I am the only Princess available, they drew both a spoken and written agreement with me on our compliance. In addition, your government maintains a network of security systems to ensure that no ponies attempt to escape into the surrounding countryside. They also keep an entire Army brigade ready to be activated within 2 hours, as well as a squadron of planes on perpetual standby to conduct 5 rounds of airstrikes, should a need to quench a… “Revolt”, as you say, arises... Your government was not shy of letting me know the… Details… Of their arrangements.”
> Your eyes widen. You are not surprised that your government is ready to respond with deadly force, but you did not expect them to go to such lengths to ensure that these former slaves do not become a threat. That explains why Angela’s drive to bring Trixie back is taking so long as well; keeping these ponies isolated allows your military away from public eyes, hence more freedom to conduct their operations if needed. Cadance raises her head and turns to you.
> “Your government is not stupid, Mister Anon. They know what they want from us, and they know how to keep us in line if need be… Not that they had anything to fear, if I may be honest with you, as all my subjects and I want now is just to live in peace and rebuild our Equestrian way of life in the sanctuary that your government has kindly offered us to live in… Thorax and I are hoping to locate and rescue Princesses Celestia and Luna soon, and they too will have the chance to decide if they want to come to Harmony Village or not… Hopefully, their masters are as kind and generous as you are, and I can only hope that everything turned out okay for them…”
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>>30168566
> Princess Cadance sighs softly before she sits up, resting her hindquarters on the bed as she gives a little shake of her head while keeping her gaze lowered. She keeps silent for a moment, and you suspect that she wondering about the fate of her fellow princesses. You decide to give her that period of silence before speaking softly. When you do, her pinkish lavender eyes swivel up to meet yours.
“… Princess Cadance? What happened to Twilight and the other Bearers of the Elements of Harmony? Can ponies still return to Equestria? Also, from what I know so far, AC Thor and his Changelings are seemingly operating without the knowledge of my government. What do you know about this? And I hope I don’t come off as being insensitive, but how can you be sure that Thorax and the Changelings are trustworthy? I am hesitant to take his assurance that Changelings “are not our enemy”, Princess, and I want to hear your views on this.”
> Her reply is quick and in detail.
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>>30168573
> “Rarity, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie are now residing in Harmony Village, Mister Anon. Applejack is one of the foreponies in the orchard that we planted and maintain, which helps to supplement our food supply. Rarity and Pinkie Pie run courses for other ponies in their fields of expertise; the former is a dress designer, while the latter used to run a bakery. They are part of the training team that impart skills to those who have the interests, as well as those ponies who are seeking to sell themselves back to human ownership… I have pried every bit of information I could from them, but we do not know what exactly happened to Twilight, only that she successfully closed the Portal… As far as I know, if her magic remains intact, she is probably the new Ruler of all Equestria, governing our nation as a monarch… We hope that once Harmony Village is fully established and that your government offers us basic rights such as stronger legal protection and the right to go home, Twilight may reopen the Portal someday for my ponies to return to Equestria… And no, until that day, we are stuck here, destined to live our lives with you and your kind as our superiors… It isn’t ideal, but your government has already been kind and generous enough to my subjects and me by the offering of peace and a place to seek refuge… Well, generally speaking, anyway…”
> Shaking your head, you admit to Princess Cadance that you admire the optimism and beliefs that she holds about humanity’s good nature, earning yourself a soft smile from her. She does not say anything about that, however, when she continues speaking.
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>>30168581
> “I do not know if your government is actually aware of the Changeling presence in your country, Mister Anon, but I can assure you that despite the… Clandestine… Nature of their work, all they want is peace for my kind and to save ponies who are suffering on Earth… They needed to do what they did as Thorax’s available means of offering help to my subjects are severely limited if they simply abided by your laws. As far as possible, they will not harm any humans in their operations, and certainly are not planning to overthrow your government or anything of that nature and magnitude… We do not have the numbers, nor do we have such an ambition to do so; we know your kind’s preparedness for war and violence, and experiencing that once is already more than enough… You have my word as the Princess of Love, and the former Ruler of the Crystal Empire, that Thorax, the Changelings, my kind and I simply want peace now… But as I have said… You choose to believe me or not, but I hope that this may convince you.”
> Lighting up her horn and jewel with her magic, Princess Cadance covers your right hand with the teal aura. You can feel the strange energies that pulls your hand up, lifting your arm gently as your palm comes to rest in front of the pink pony. She leans forward, her long mane cascading down as she plants her lips gently on the top of your hand, closing her eyes as she kisses it softly. Eyes moving up to yours again, she gently glides your hand back on the bed as she raises her eyes and looks at you… Pleadingly.
> That lowered head suggests she is sincere, Boss. That much is obvious.
“Do you do this to every human that doubts you?”
> Princess Cadance smiles softly at you before she nods.
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>>30168587
> “Well, not everyone, but it has been more times than I can remember to be honest… In fact, several of your Rescue Team officers experienced this as well… I am not ashamed to do it, if my submissiveness means that will tomorrow will be a brighter day for my subjects.”
> That is an interesting perspective to adopt. Clearly, she loves her ponies dearly.
> Ask her, Boss. Ask her… That.
> You frown slightly, but decide to humour Brain and satisfy your curiosity.
“I don’t mean to be crass, Princess, and forgive my bluntness, but have you… Had to sleep with anyone as part of your… “Persuasion and diplomacy”?”
> She sighs softly even as she gives you what is unmistakably an exasperated smile. Yeah, she knows that you are a pervert, and still is. You smile sheepishly at her in response.
“After what I’ve been through, Mister Anon, and the circumstances that I have to work with… Let’s just say that my body practically belongs to your kind now... Like I said, I must atone for my role in the War and carry out my duties to better the lives of my subjects who now reside in Harmony Village… And frankly, even though I struggle with the memories of my captivity, I do admit that the experience of making love reminds me of the love I once shared with my husband… The defence mechanisms that the mind is capable of is indeed strange and remarkable, Mister Anon, but it does help me get the job done… Especially, when my partner is gentle and considerate…”
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>>30168596
> You let out a sigh of your own as you regard Princess Cadance’s sitting form. Hearing her words and the tone that she used as she was speaking simply makes you feel sad for the pony princess. Slowly, you reach out a hand to cup the side of her face, keeping your movements gentle and well within her field of vision. You feel her flinch slightly when you touch her, but she allows you to run a thumb over her right cheek. Smiling softly at her, you sit up yourself and look into her eyes.
“You are a very brave pony, Princess, as well as a loving and caring leader. Believe me when I say that you have my utmost respect and admiration for the strength of your character, and that… And that you have my full and complete trust… Well, I choose to, anyway.”
> Princess Cadance smiles warmly and leans into your hand, raising a hoof and pressing it on your chest.
> “You silly, silly human… I can see it in your eyes that you feel sad for me… But don’t be, Mister Anon, as I am merely doing what a Princess of Equestria should do. Ours is a position of courage, sacrifice and selflessness, and I know what is expected of me the moment that I chose to do it; it isn’t very different from your own role as an enforcer of the law, I would expect… I will be okay, and I am already receiving help from others who care for me dearly... But, thank you, Mister Anon, for your kind words and your trust in me. I know it is hard for you to make that choice, so I want you to know that I appreciate it.”
> Tired from the conversation you had with Princess Cadance, you simply nod and smile at her before you reach into your pocket, to check the time on your phone. 9.37pm.
> You let out a small sigh as you put it down on the bedside table.
> “If I may, Mister Anon… What will you do with Trixie if she decided to stay with you?”
> Frowning slightly, you turn your eyes to the Princess and decide to be direct with your reply.
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>>30168601
“From what little I gather, Trixie has obviously been free for some time now, since she seemed really reluctant to the idea of being owned by me… I do not want to break her, Princess; I will do my best to accommodate her and be patient as I ease her into her new role, but… To be honest, Princess, I do have an expectation that she should serve me in every capacity as I desire; after all, I am her Master and she is my slave, and I do expect obedience from her.”
> “What if she doesn’t want to pursue a sexual relationship with you? What will you do?”
> Oh boy… Princess Cadance is going for the hard questions.
“I will not rape her, if that is what you may be worried about. Sure, I will be disappointed, as I want something in return for both giving back her magic and everything that I will do for her in the hypothetical future. I am providing Trixie a safe home, good food and a life that is free of physical hardship, cruelty and fear, especially when I am also re-uniting her with Starlight… I will give her some time and space to experience what I have to offer and re-consider her position, and I believe that I will be very fair and kind in how I will treat her. In time, I will try to get her to reciprocate my affections, and it will be great if she does so happily and willingly… But if she really is not comfortable with my advances, I guess I will have to accept that as well… It would mess up my relationship with Starlight though, as she will be caught in the middle. I suppose that I may have to make arrangements to send her back if it doesn’t work out, but Starlight will definitely be upset if I do.”
> Sighing softly, you just give the pony princess a smile.
“Maybe it is better that Trixie remains free, isn’t it?”
> “I suppose it is, Mister Anon. You can give Starlight all your focus and attention then.”
> Starlight. God, you want to see her so badly now.
“Any idea why they are taking so long?”
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>>30168609
> Princess Cadance simply closes her eyes and shakes her head gracefully, causing her long mane to sway from left-to-right. That made you sigh again; a little louder this time.
“I do admit that the thought of having 2 mares to share my bed is an appealing one, Princess.”
> Cadance does not even blush as she smiles at you.
> “Oh? And what will you want to do with them, if you had the opportunity?”
> That made you smile. You have not thought about this before, and Brain is buzzing with ideas.
“I want to lay Trixie down on her stomach on my bed as I take her from behind, wrapping both arms around her chest as I hold her body close to mine. I want her to kiss and lick Starlight to an orgasm as I finish in Trixie, before I lean in to kiss Trixie passionately on her wet muzzle. After that, I want Starlight to reciprocate the oral treatment she received from her as I join in, and together, we will make Trixie cry out in pleasure as we bring her off to a climax. I want it to end with us resting our heads on the same large pillow, me hugging them together with one mare on each arm or with one mare spooning the other. I will give them both a gentle kiss above their closed eyes and bid them a soft “Good night” before we drift off to sleep together.”
> Cadance giggles as you finish your description of your fantasy, causing your face to burn as you cough softly to clear your throat.
> “That was surprisingly sweeter than I expected… But, Mister Anon, you know that they are both heterosexual, right?”
> This time, you cannot help yourself as a grin breaks out on your face. It is probably one that would probably alarm some women if you did that in public.
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>>30168623
“That just makes it hotter, doesn’t it, Princess? Getting 2 straight girls to make love to each other? Especially when you can see the subtle reluctance and awkwardness in their body language before they obey me, licking and kissing the clitorises, vulvas and asses of another female similar to themselves. They would probably be questioning their sexual orientations as they are giving and receiving pleasures that they never thought of before, even as they wonder how their BEST FRIEND can be so good at giving oral sex to another mare when they feel the tongues of their counterpart enter their vaginas. They will be moaning loudly into the pussy that their face is buried in as they strive to match the paces of their friend’s kissing, licking and suckling, and as they feel their climaxes approaching, I will tell them to continue through it. Soon, they’ll be squirting the products of their pleasure into and unto each other’s mouths, swallowing what enters them as they feel the sides of their heads being pressed tightly by the thighs of-”
> … And now, even Cadance herself is blushing as she turns her eyes away from you, moving her head slightly to her left. She covers her mouth with a hoof even as she is smiling widely in embarrassment at the vividness of your descriptions.
“- I’m going to stop talking now.”
> You give another awkward cough and an apology in the short silence that follow, and Brain is quick to give you a mental kick for losing yourself into the perverse pleasure that you enjoyed, even as you reveal what is probably the surface of the depths of your depravity.
> What? The pony princess ASKED for it, dammit!
> For some reason, seeing the Princess herself blushing and grinning at your words as she rolls her eyes at you in exasperation makes you laugh like an idiot.
> Hopefully, these giggles that she is making is a sign that she already knows the kind of answer to expect when she asked you that question.
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>>30168639
> You join her when she practically guffaws in mirth.
> Yep, she is not surprised nor offended. You knew you liked the pony princess for a reason.
> …
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>>30168649
And end of update! 5.6k words this time.

This has been a tough one to write, as I wanted to cover all the details of the plot whilst trying to balance it with SOL segments and a bit of lightheartedness here and there. I know that exposition is tough to read through, and I hope that I managed to strike a balance between presenting what is necessary and keeping it interesting for you, the reader.
> Bear with me as I finish it off with Starlight's saying of "no" to the Changeling who approach her. I promise that it will be short, and I will make up for it with the return of Glimmy!
> I am excited for this bit, as I have loads of ideas that I want to pen that WILL be full of feels and love between Insp Anon and Glimmy. This is my guarantee.
> I have already written parts of the next update, so I can post another update soon.

"Because I Choose To"
Part 1 - http://pastebin.com/qaSx0kEU
Part 2 - https://pastebin.com/GKxvUCek
^ updates are posted in Part 2

Thank you all so much for your patience, your support, and for reading. I hope that I meet your expectations so far, but please, do post your thought, ideas, suggestions and criticisms below if you feel like it.

Stay awesome! ^^
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>>30168706
Dayum nigga that's a long update. In the morning! Thanks m80
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Anyone know what happened to the space Anon and Celestia or...or is it kill...
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>>30169446
Sometimes stories just take a while to update. Look at mine. I'm sure he'll be back any month now.
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>>30170347
I'm writing, I'm writing.
Go hold your ponies.
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>>30170865
> Go hold your ponies.
I wish I had one... I want to hug a pony so badly.... Plushies aren't enough for me.
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>>30168491
Ok, Abort Abort!
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>>30170903
>soft, plush fur
>long, luxurious mane
>squishy hooves with a firm edge
>pudgy belly literally perfect for bellyrubs
>long tail ideal for braiding
>squishy flank that you can sink your fingers into
>soft downy wings
>smooth horns with a spiral ridge
>all-natural earthmare breeding hips
>ears to tousel whenever they twitchatwitch
>extra-fluffy chest tuft to run your fingers through
>warm and loves to cuddle
>heartbeat a little faster than yours
>idly rubbing their squishy cheek against you as they doze off
>gently kicky-kick their hooves in their sleep

I'm making myself sad.
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>>30171568
Mmmmm
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>>30171568
Man, now I want a little bookslave to sit in my lap and cuddle as I browse.
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>>30168517
>her husband is probably dead or missing

Her husband is in good hands, his new master treats him well and even has a new human friend who sees him as a daughter, so he no longer needs you, him belongs to Corona now
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>>30171568
Just get a dog already. Humans (and ponies?) pretend to love you if you feed them, but dogs really do! Get the hairy kind, then get gud at grooming.
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>>30168581

In other words the ponies now live on a reservation, they still can not acquire the sufficient autonomy to receive the legal treatment of a nation like the True American communities but at least they live "free" under the magnifying glass and the cannon of its oppressors.

I hope that they can maintain peace, the government has an old tradition of violating treaties and committing outrages when it is in the interests of the person or group in power that it would be well and truly human that there would be at least one group of human rights defenders With enough vision to extend the law to other sensitive creatures and support their cause, because I really need to see more than just the same human shit ruining other life forms
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>>30171568
My soul is empty and my heart is cold and dead
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>When you have made 5 posts and your sixth is just as long as all of them
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>>30168609
What is the story of Trixie in this tale? Where was she and what did she do before being acquired by Anon?
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>>30173192
You'd have to read from the link to Part 2 of Because I Choose To.
With a small spoiler, she too was enslaved (as expected), but you'd have to read it for the details.
What I have explored so far gives a general idea of what happened to her, but actual specifics may or may not be actually revealed in future updates.
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>>30174001
Have not you thought about writing about how the world sees the United States after making war, killing and enslaving colorful talking horses?
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>>30174425
Because I Choose To is not set in the US. It is deliberately left unspecified to allow the reader to self-insert, but I know that the relative strictness of the laws/Police actions explored here may be a distancing factor for that.
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>>30174505
Ok, just wants to see what is the world opinion about all this
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>>30160095
>>30160257
>>30160359
>>30161701

"Well..."
> Reaching out, you take Sunburst's hoof for a moment.
> He seems surprised, almost fearful at first but it quickly passes.
"...I think that's a goal we both share. When do you think we can begin her lessons?"
> "Tomorrow; I can begin at least figuring out how much she knows and where to take her next."
"Excellent. Report to my house at any time after 10:00; you'll have until 3:30 to do what you need. And if it becomes too much, I'll temporarily pull you off other duties to make sure this gets done."
> Ears flopping down beneath his riotous burst of crimson mane, Sunburst nods - his smile widening.
> "I understand."
> You stand again, stretching.
"Do you have somewhere to be in particular now?"
> "I, uh, have to be at the schoolhouse to do a little bit of teaching with the other foals soon. And, um, then have to go back and see about some new products I was researching - but not now."
"I'll walk with you there. There's a lot I'd like to talk with you about."
> "Yes, Master. Can I get my things before we go?"
"Of course, of course. Take your time."
> It does take Sunburst a few moments to find what he's looking for in the bags, but soon enough the two of you are walking side-by-side through the camp.
> In addition to his bag, the stallion had thrown on a dark cloak and scarf to ward the morning chill.
> Other ponies were also still moving about at this early hour - deliveries being made throughout the camp, a few clusters marching on their way to their work with eyes squinted against the late-winter rising sun.
> They look at you with a variety of expressions:
> Glimpses of anger and disgust out of the corners of their eyes, sometimes confusion and surprise at you walking alone, but just as often apparent relief.
> Presumably that you were not showing signs of cruelty to the pony with whom you walked.
> If anything Sunburst actually seems to fare the worst from their watchful eyes.
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>>30174611

> Wincing and cringing, he slinks along at your side.
> After a minute of this, you raise an eyebrow questioningly.
"Embarrassed to be seen out with me?"
> "Y-Yes... and no. I've never liked being, uh, at the center of attention... and you are attracting a lot of looks."
> You chuckle softly.
"Don't worry. I'll be out and around a bit more often now, so you're hardly going to be the only one."
> No response comes, but he does straighten up and walk a bit more normally.
> Your route takes you towards the core of the camp, near the still-rising rec center.
> At this hour no real work was ongoing, but even so the odd pony was hauling in a cart loaded with bags of mortar.
"You said things have been getting better."
> "Yes, Master."
"How?"
> Much of what he answers is things you've heard before:
> The guards aren't so tough, ponies have less to be fearful of, even that the food is better.
> But then his thoughts start to get personal.
> "...and honestly, I see it reflecting off the colts and fillies I teach too. They see older ponies are less fearful, and they are too."
"You teach them directly?"
> "A few. Most of them - the teachers handle basic magic; I check their work, add a few finer touches, and teach a couple of things myself. The most talented ones I take on directly."
"Well noted. What do you focus on?"
> "Well, we start with the basics of course. How not to hurt, not to overstress themselves. Then I start showing them how to do more complex workings - moving two or three objects together, basic enchantments, simply more advanced spells..."
> As he speaks, you can't help but notice the transformation that comes over Sunburst.
> Now in his element, the stallion's ears perk up, his tail carries more straight, and a spring enters his step.
> "A lot of documentation I've had to basically rebuild from scratch, since I can only get my hooves on a handful of books on magic. And, um, most of those are actually yours, I think."
"A fair few are, yes."
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>>30174617

> 'Lending' them from your own library had been the only way to get proper Equestrian literature on the subject into the camp, since ponies weren't allowed to bring much of their own belongings with them.
> Anything else had been carefully sanitized prior to republishing to remove anything that might be the slightest-bit rebellious or glorifying of old Equestria.
> And, of course, there was the little detail that what unmodified copies survived were no longer being widely reproduced.
> "What we can't find... well, I've had to rebuild a lot of it from memory. And experimentation."
"Yes, I know you're working with a fairly decent laboratory as these things go; is lack of paper resources really hampering you that badly?"
> After pondering a moment, Sunburst shakes his head.
> "There's - so much lost. There are things I would love to do - workings I'd absolutely want to recreate. But they're not - they're not something we can do now. Not even if I knew how."
"Not enough materials?"
> "Not enough ponies. Or time to train the best of the ones I do have."
"I'll keep that in mind. Sooner or later the market is going to catch up to us; we'll have to keep taking steps forward if we want to keep ahead of everyone else."
> "Honestly, with being able to work with Flurry Heart again... well, it'll almost be like being back home again."
> Sunburst's expression softens, a warm smile overcoming his features; he really does love that filly doesn't he?
"Do you think she'll be able to help you? With your research, or teaching?"
> "I really don't know. Even back in Equestria, there was no real documentation on alicorns, especially young ones. It might be several years before she's mentally prepared to take part in anything, though."
> He's trying to talk you down - make sure you don't put too much pressure on Flurry.
> That's fine; the opportunity to use her magic wasn't something you'd been betting on anyhow.
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>>30174629

"That's fine. With the expansion coming in a few months there'll be chances for you to pick up some new resources. You won't be the only area expanding - Randall says there's someone up in Pennsylvania with a pure Zap-Apple strain, but not enough ponies to work it - but we can balance something out."
> Sunburst's mouth opens as if to say something, closes again, and then re-opens as his confidence urges him ahead:
> "Is it - really still going to happen?"
"The expansion? If I have anything to say about it, yes."
> "We weren't sure. With your announcement after Mocha Cream was attacked..."
"Ponies were afraid?"
> His head bobs in answer.
"Mostly we didn't know what to expect. Some were afraid you would come down on the whole camp again if they aren't found. Find another example to be made."
"The only ponies who need to be afraid of me are the ones responsible. They'll pay the price - no one else."
> Sunburst stays quiet after this - at least until you prompt him.
"...you don't think I should be punishing them as harshly as I plan to."
> "I'm in no position to advise about that sort of thing, Master."
"So just give me the off the top of your head thoughts."
> It again takes him several moments to consider the proper words to use.
> He's actually really thinking about it, which gives you pause too.
> "Just - remember what's happening here. Remember that ponies are just starting to let go of what happened in the past. If you bring that back-"
"They'll never let go again, I get it. But this is big, Sunburst. I'm not punishing someone for speaking out of turn, but for savagely beating an innocent mare - and jeopardizing all of you here. I'm surprised you can't see that."
> "I can."
> Sighing softly, he stops - looking over with squinted eyes to the rising sun.
> "Just..."
"Say it, Sunburst. We're speaking freely."
> "Princess Celestia would never have had a pony tortured for committing a crime."
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>>30174636

> Despite your reassurances, his muzzle was pointed to the ground and the words were barely mumbled out.
> "She'd - she'd have found something better. Cadance, too - y'know, when she was..."
"And what would they have done."
> Another hefty sigh.
> "I don't know. I'm not - not a princess. Not even a pony who knows about law. They'd have banished them, maybe? T-There've been a few executions, but they were for much, much worse..."
"...yes, well, I am not a princess either, this is not Equestria, and banishment... the only places I can 'banish' them to would be a death sentence."
> Folding your arms against the cold, you let your vision scan out over the street.
"If there was a better alternative, I'd damn well take it. But I'm not going to let them just walk away from this, Sunburst. They pay for what they've done."
> "I just keep worrying..."
> Hesitation for a second - and then he dives in, the words seeming to pour out a mile a minute like the raging torrent from a broken dam.
> "Like - I'm not saying what they did was right, you know? But the friend I was telling you about, Starlight - she did some very bad things too. Hurt a lot of ponies. But somepony still gave her another chance, you know? And she - she realized what she'd done was wrong, and-"
> Breaking off, Sunburst shakes his head.
> "They deserve punishment. It's not my place to think about it, but I can't help but wonder if they'd see what they're doing is wrong too. If somepony gave them a chance..."

While there's no specific choice, I'm breaking it off here. Open for responses if anyone cares to give any.
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>>30174640
Anon should actually take that suggestion up with Cadance. If it's worked in the past culturally with their kind, than maybe it'll work again if they're willing to change.

Or even better yet, have them work double shifts until Mocha comes to and let her decide. They didn't give her a chance so it's only fair she gets a say in this.
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>>30174640
Anon really needs to think about what HE is going to do when these guys are caught, because he's running into the escalation problem.
A scared filly who used her magic in panic got a good lashing, chained up and her magic locked. so were is he going to go from there without it turning into torture porn, and yes he needs to think about what the rest of the ponies see. Iike sunburst is saying he doesn't want to undo all the improvements.

Banishment might be the best option, despite it being the harshest the camp might see it as the more fitting, less cruel punishment. (Assuming they don't recognize it as a death sentence)
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>>30174640
"Oh", "And what your friend did"
>Uhm ... used his magic to steal his cutiemarks from everypony and take away what made them special.
-We the horses and their cute logos on the flanks-
"I did not know you could do that"
>Starligth was ... is a unicorn endowed with a great magical potential (someponies said that even more than the same Princess Twiligth) but used their gifts for the wrong reasons
"And then what happened?"
>She founded a community where everypony behaved as if they had no will and aspirations to excel, where no one (except her) could do whatever she wanted, wherever she could command.
-That sounds like a sect, something macabre but I must admit that it is an effective way to maintain control and avoid disagreements that can lead to violence-
-If one wanted to rule a herd of zombies-
"But in the end his plan did not work, true?"
>No, the bearers of the elements of Harmonia stopped her
-The so famous elements of harmony, six ponies that coined the most powerful magic force of Equestria and with which they defeated dozens of threats in their world-
-It was not much help to the military machinery and logistics of humans, I wonder what happened to them-
-Because you have heard rumors about the fate of the royal sisters, some that streak in the absurd or the grotesque, but frankly the other six is a mystery-
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>>30171568
>poni gets bought and is terrified at what kind of brutal, backbreaking labour their new master is going to make them do for the rest of their life
>"Yeah, I kinda just wanted something nice and warm and soft to sleep with at night, so your job is basically just to sleep in the bed with me."
>This isn't so bad
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>>30174640
These aren't some misunderstood souls who are confused and have lost their way, these ponies who beat Mocha HAD their chance. They're so set in their ways that they're not looking for some kind of path to redemption. They've made it extremely clear on how they stand between us and them. They've shown us that they're not interested in the olive branch, but would rather keep up this streak of defiance and guerrilla warfare.

They don't want us to "give them a chance." They spit on whatever offering we give them, so we're going to offer them a swift and brutal punishment for what they've done. They made their bed, and they're going to fucking lie in it.
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>>30174640
>>30175222

"And what punishment did Starligth receive for his crime?"
>In fact she managed to escape but became so obsessed with them that she endangered Equestria with a spell to travel in time, change an event in the past and almost destroy the future.
-Woah Nelly what ?? !! -
"Are you serious about Sunburt? Can you really do something like this?"
-Just imagining that ponies may be able to do something you've only seen in movies is so absurd that it defies all logic and common sense-
- And then you remember talking to a pony-
>So master, b-but it's not as if she or any pony could do it, she needs the magic that existed in the castle of Princess Twiligth's for that and this kind of spell can not be repeated again
-Of ..... course, otherwise they would have used it to avoid war in the first place-
"Okay ... and what punishment did she receive for almost destroying her reign? They sent her to the moon? They turned her into stone? She was expelled at the end of the world?"
Sunburst is silent for a moment, lowers his head and after a moment of reflection responds:
>Princess Twiligth forgiven her, became her teacher and the other bearers gave her his friendship
Stupid ponies
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>>30175179
I think anywhere bad enough to "banish" them to is a pretty clear death sentence now.
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>>30174640
>While there's no specific choice, I'm breaking it off here. Open for responses if anyone cares to give any.

An hour in private with Anon in the dungeon for each of the attackers, either to interrogate them because their actions and if they are repentant or to ... I leave it to your imagination

In the morning they will be exposed before the community, their crimes will be read, sentence will be given and punishment will be imposed
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>>30174640
>What does Anon do when (if?) they are found?
Where there is life, there is always a chance, but not usually a fair one.

We will give Cadance a chance. Keeping order in our camp is the task we have assigned this slave, there is no reason not to let her do it. Previously she felt she had to yield to our pressure, this time we really do give her her head. We won't interfere, won't even attend unless invited. Perhaps without us on her back she really will "find something better". Equestrian culture has a judicial tradition just as deep, but quite different, than humanities; it would not be the first time she surprised us. Or maybe just more lashes. Habits can be hard to break.

We will give the individuals a chance. If Cadance chooses to give them some sort of trial we will read the transcript. We will review the reports of our security forces. Perhaps we will even interview them personally. They are unique individuals, and they've all had a rough time here on earth. We are not without mercy.

Then we will give the market a chance. When we buy new stock, 'fairness' is not one of the many factors we consider. We do not review their histories in detail to determine if they 'deserve' a place in one of the most permissive large equestrian communities in the country. We just bid what they are worth, to us at the moment, as they pass through the ring. Sometimes we win, usually we are outbid by other buyers with other values. It's a good deal either way but only 'fair' in the economic sense. The reverse process is no less arbitrary, and quite independent of Cadances justice. We can reduce our herd whenever we need to raise money, or whenever the needs of our business evolve. We don't need them.

Even then, they will still have a chance. Not much of one with violence noted in their catalogue description, but you never know. Some 'White Knights' make a hobby of redeeming ponies in otherwise hopeless situations...

>Anons keeps his hands clean
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>>30174640
Open up to him a little. We're speaking freely, after all, and having an honest relationship with someone who's going to be in the manor frequently is a good thing. Plus, he's been reasonable and intelligent. Maybe he'll understand where we're coming from and why we have to do something about it.

>Something sort of like:
"I still don't know what I'm going to do, Sunburst. I know a lot of ponies are expecting me to torture them, but... I don't think I could. Torturing them would be inhumane, and any punishment fitting the crime would be so severe it could only be torture. I don't want to go down that path, Sunburst. I know the ponies here don't know what really happened, but... I truly regret what happened with Corona. I... I lost control, and let my anger turn me into a monster. I never want to be that person again.

I don't know what Starlight did, but this isn't Equestria. They attacked and brutalized a young girl. A filly, not yet a mare. Because she didn't openly resist a direct order to deliver a letter. This is more than just angry words, more than panicking and kicking a guard, more than an escape attempt. This is open rebellion against everything we've built. Violence will not be tolerated, and can not be allowed. They attacked an innocent pony to get revenge against me. Tell me, Sunburst... If they had attacked Flurry Heart instead, would you have given them another chance?"

Except, you know, written better.

Also, it looks like Hiroshimoot broke the captcha integration for a few hours. *coughcoughbuya4chanpasscough*

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>>30175911
Hey, it finally got through. Last post 6h15m ago.
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bamp
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bump!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Did the fucking mistyped captcha bullshit finally stop?
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slavepone best thread
rarifag when?
writefags when?
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>>30134312
“So, I heard from Balm some minor details…”
>We are already in Moscow.
>I hope Techie is not drunk and is still on place.
“What else worrying is there about deal you made?”
>”Fuck you, Sticher. Everything okay.”
“Yeah, except our shipment is truffle now pigs are looking for, and we need to transport it today somehow.”
>”Relax, your pony got it covered.”
“Why do you think so?”
>”Khem-khem.”
>Oh, maybe it was rude to talk about her when she is on back seat.
>”Sticher!”
>It is good that she understood that better not to use my name, but there is so much salt in way she spoke it.
>”Why this man trust me more than you?”
“Because it is his only option he is not gonna get some additional stuffing.”
>Now Roller looks at me wondering.
“What? Or do you think that I gonna let my subordinates fuck up everything?”
>”What always gets me is your honesty. Any other boss would just stab me when I don’t expect it.”
”Roller, I respect my staff. That’s the only way you, fuckers, gonna do your job properly, or redeem yourself when you fucked up.”
>Okey, we got to the address.
“Now pray to gods Techie is on place”.
>This is one of my many “protectorates”.
>Car repair service that agreed to serve as a safehouse in exchange for protection.
>Plus some services with huge discount.
>After all, we are multi-goal business.
>4th type of criminal transnational organizations.
>Systematical committing of traditional property crime, crime against person, its life, health or integrity on professional level.
>God damn, I’m still thinking that way.
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>>30177784
>At least it distances me from what we are actually doing.
>Maybe that is why I had decided to learn the law.
>We are not so big, but in two years, I expanded what I got in first place, and now we trade mostly with Benelux, while keeping trade with Caucasus and Harkov in Ukraine.
>And that is only arms trade. So much more stuff my boys are doing nowadays.
>And with that “attitude”, I wanted to raise my daughter.
>You are fucking nuts, Anon.
>At least I stay away from drugs.
>”Ok, I’ll call Techie.”
>As Roller said it, he turned the keys and quickly jumped out the car.
>As I went out myself, the usual scent of dust and smoke filled my nostrils. Why is it here, if service manages to run business properly?
>Anyway, now it is not time for mysteries.
“Okay, Trixie, a little bit to me. There.”
>Even though she can walk, she needs some help with different heights. And she is still a little heavy.
>”What is this place, Anon?”
”Well, it is one of my “safehouses”. More proper name would be “base”, but it is not big enough to call it like that.”
>”So, you really going to put that thing off my horn?”
>”Maybe. I need to hear what Techie will say. Oh, here he is.”
>This old man served me well. Does his job, cares nothing but money. No wonder Somov hired him in first place.
>”Okay, youngsters, what is your problem today?”
>”We need to take that thing off horn of that pony.”
>After Roller’s words, Techie stumbled a little, scratched his head and rushed his hand in back pocket.
>”Go into garage, I’ll figure something out after a quick smoke.”
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>>30177792

>His face is too close.
>His smokey breath is hitting my nose.
>”Alright, pony, what do we have here?”
>Those two just leaned and looked at all this without blinking.
>This “Techie”’s veiny hands runned down my horn.
>”Just as I thought.”
>After this words, this old man stood up and started to search for something in some pile of…
>Is it details or rubbish?
>”So, is it possible?”
>Anon’ voice were shaking a little, while his hand waving was somewhat punctuated.
>”Dick knows, youngsters. I’ll do my best, but be prepared to drove off this truck, ‘cause it can send signal to the police.”
>Now Roller grabbed his head and started moving around.
>”Please tell me you are joking.”
>”I’m not, Roller. Oh, here they are.”
>Techie took out 5 big latticed panels and rushed towards some corner.
>”Pony, come here and stand there.”
>What are they for?
>And in this corner, there is such panel already in floor.
>Teche handed panels to Anon, who stood nearby, grabbed some instruments from his desk, and placed himself on floor panel next to me.
>”Roller, you know what to do. Help me out with Sticher.”
>This “youngster” took one of the panels and placed it on side of one on the floor.
>Anon followed the example.
“Will you make a box with them?”
>”Yeah, but it is only 2 meters in diameter, so don’t push me too much, pony.”
“My name is Trixie.”
>”Whatever, pony.”
>After side panels were placed, last one was placed on the top.
>Techie sat down and grumbled.
>”Make sure they fit perfectly.”
>After final check-ups on cage, he moved closer to my face.
>He pulled and twisted device on my horn a little, with no result.
>“Strange. How it is fixated then?”
>In the meantime, those two started arguing again.
>Techie started doing something with his instruments and pulled ag-
>WHATINTARTARUS?
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>>30177803
>”Wow, pony, are you crazy?”
“It… electrocuted me.”
>He frowned, and turned to those both outside.
>”Stop scratching with your tongues, better hold the cage.”
>As they basically laid down the cage from opposite sides, Techie turned to me.
>”Now it will be painful, try to hold yourself. It will be quick.”
>You promised it will be only once, guys.
> I nod my head to signa-
>AHCANHEATLEASTWAITALITTLE
>”Here, done. And now lets hope it is broadcasting in usual frequency.”
>Shit, where are his manners?
>”Why me, Trixie? Why not Roller?”
>Anon’s voice was a little higher than usual.
“What are you talking about?”
>”You swinged your horn… just in right place.”
>Oh shit. I hope it was side of horn, not its point if that is the case.
>In meantime, Techie rotated some tumbler on one of his devices. When he stopped, some strange noise came out of this.
>”We are good. Now, how to stop it.”
>After some rotating and looking he stumbled a little and then bursted with laughter.
“What is so funny?”
>”It’s just… It is just... Wait a little.”
>After like 2 minutes of him laughing his ass off, Techie closed device form my horn.
>”It is done, you can dismantle the cage.”
>With strange look, Anon and Roller put off the panels, and I with Techie were not in cage anymore.
>”Heh, they really haven’t worked on these for long. I expected it to take for two or three hours, got all the instruments, but government really wanted just to get rid of you, so they made them as cheap as possible.”
>”Are you sure, Techie? ‘Cause it is my pony, and if something happens, I’ll be responsible.”
>”Don’t worry, Sticher. Can I play with that thing for few days?”
>”Sure, but don’t mess it up.”
>”Who the hell do you think I am, youngster?”
>Roller breathed out and started with slow voice.
>”Now, Trixie, get in the back of truck.”
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>>30177814
"So, as soon as doors open, you start the performance. Are you sure you can cover all of this?"
>"Don't worry, "Stich". I've done things much more spectacular."
"You need to perform opposite of spectacular, Trixie."
>"I know, I know. I got it covered. Trust me."
>Why would I? There was no sensible reason for you to agree on this in first place.
>Maybe all she wants is her horn being freed?
>Who knows. At least I got back up plan.
>Roller closed the doors, and walked to the driver's seat.
"I'm going with you."
>"What for? You want to be catched if it fails?"
"This pony is my property, which means i'm resposible for her."
>Am I wrong, or I heard a little "Ahh" with Trixie's voice?
"Her actions percieved as mine, so I'll be locked up anyway if it fails."
>Now it was a little "Pfff".
"And this deal clearly needs my through out look into it."
>"Fair enough, Sticher. Your manners also will be a help if pigs stop us."
"That what i'm saying. Just let me grab my fo fo from your car."
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>>30177822
That is it for now. Here is pastebin https://pastebin.com/wgaVqQ0u
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>>30177822
your story can be a little confusing at times but I like it
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>>30117550
Seeing AJ with her back to me like that, makes me really really want to whip her all up and down her back until it's covered in red stripes.
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>>30131468
Wow this thread is dead today, have a little green.

>Fucking anon...
>You wince as you trot to the kitchen the next morning.
>Everything back there hurts, including walking...
>Maybe you got a little upset and said some dumb stuff but what was his problem?
>He was never afraid to discipline you before but last night still felt like a major overreaction.
>You notice a note on the kitchen table.
>Something about him being out of town for the next couple days for work.
>Thank Celestia you certainly didn't want to talk to him after he blew up on you.
>Eating your cereal standing it suddenly occurs to you that if he's out of town your laptop is free game.
>So much for grounding you from that you guess, just gotta find where he put it.
>You aren't really sure if he'd disapprove of you taking it back though.
>His note fails to mention it and he had said you might get it back today.
>Well with him not here to say one way or another you figure you might as well.
>With nothing on your plate today but some laundry you go and fetch the laptop to do some surfing.
>And you bring it to the couch because screw his rules while he's gone.
>A part of you feel nervous breaking his rules so soon after being disciplined.
>You take those little submissive slave mare feelings and shove them deep deep down into a dark corner of your psyche.
>You may be his but you aren't that broken... yet...
>Sighing you shake your head and blow the mane out of your face.
>Well sure you do this chores and cook his food like a little horse maid but at least you aren't like some of those poor mares who get their legs spread every night by their dirty monkeys.
>You'd been real afraid of that at first, lots of horror stories got spread around at the auction houses.
>Not like you were a virgin or anything but if you'd ended up with an asshole who shoved a cock in your mouth you'd have been unable to stop him with your magic as restricted as it used to be.
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>>30180990

>You shiver at the idea, there had been lots of nightmare filled nights dreading that before you'd been purchased.
>While being driven home from the auction you'd tried to make your peace with it.
>That drive had taken forever, trying not to shake in fear of what he was going to do to you when he got you home and bent you over a table.
>Word was that's what most owners did first, 'broke' their mares in the hard way...
>It had almost been anticlimactic when he'd just shown you your room and given you time to get settled in.
>You discounted the idea of a trick pretty quickly and took what pleasure you could in having a real bed and not a cramped cage.
>Maybe you just got really lucky? Or the stories were all exaggerations.
>It had been a few weeks before you found out Anon's one downside, the one you were currently recovering from.
>You couldn't believe he was serious the first time.
>What are you some little filly?
>But he'd quickly shown you who was boss and who made the rules.
>Between more of THAT and falling in line with his rather lax rules the choice was easy.
>Still made you feel like his little bitch sometimes though when you realized how far you'd fallen.
>From Twilight Sparkle savior of the land to Twilight Sparkle good obedient errand mare.
>Fuck now you've depressed yourself over it.
>It's easy to not think about when you spend all your time shit posting or yelling at a game but when you get retrospective things fall apart.
>Must not spiral... maybe you'd call dusty?
>You've got the whole place to yourself and if his owners would let him he was always great at comforting you.
>Yeah you needed a good nuzzle... ideally from behind...
>Your face flushes at the idea and you look down at your hoof phone to call his house number.
>Mrs. Johnson was actually pretty cool.
>She usually came to pick you up for your 'play dates' with dusty and sometimes if he wasn't finished with a task you'd chat with her or offer a little help around the house.
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>>30180994

>You hesitate to say she treated you with respect, she did come over to whore you out kinda, but she was still kind and understanding.
>In the way one's understanding to a pet but you take what you can get.
>"Hello?"
"Oh hi Mrs. Johnson it's Twilight."
>"Oh hey sweetie it's so good to hear from you! You aren't calling about Dusty are you?"
"Well... Uh yeah I kinda just wanted to see if he was busy today..."
>You felt like a foal asking if neighbor's mom if they were free to play.
>"Ohhhhhhh is someone missing her boyfriend hmm?"
"I... wha?... Boy... What? He's... He's not my boyfriend!"
>"Oh you don't have to tell me that cutie and it has been a while. I tell you what I'll drop him off in about an hour how about that?"
"Well... Yeah thanks that would be great..."
>"Ok then you get all pretty for him! I'm sure he'll be happy to see you!"
>You just sputter, whys she gotta make it awkward?
>She hangs up before you can offer a retort leaving you staring at the phone with a bright blush across your muzzle.
>She reminds you of a nosy aunt or something.
>Well she was right that, you might as well get cleaned up.
>You probably smelled like sweat and tears from last night and you wanted to be at least somewhat presentable.
>You were of course ready by the time the doorbell rang an hour later.
>Mrs. Johnson had Dusty on a leash at the door.
>You live like 3 houses down why does he need the leash? Like really?
>"Awww don't you look cute?"
>This is how I always look...
>"Now you two play nice! I'll be back to pick him up at 7 ok?"
"Yes ma'am thank you."
>She gives your mane a tousle and leaves with a slightly too cheery smile on her face.
>"Sorry you know how she is."
>He must have noticed your blush, you nuzzle up to him so he can't anymore.
"Could be worse. You would not believe my last few days."
>Guiding you to the living room you begin to regale him with your last few days of meeting creeps, finding your friend and getting your butt busted.
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>>30181002

>Dusty always was a good listener, that's what you like about him.
>He asks questions and expresses sympathy where appropriate and never made you feel silly or ashamed about your issues.
>Speaking of ashamed though when you'd told him about last night he'd walked around back and lifted the skirt of your sundress.
>It wasn't his first time seeing the results of Anon's anger but it was still embarrassing.
>"Shit Twi I'm so sorry it looks like he was really over the line this time."
>Hanging your head in shame you quietly agree.
"Yeah he was crazy and then today I got to thinking about it all and it got me depressed and then I just wanted a hug and I'm sorry I shouldn't dump all this on you..."
>He probably came over here thinking he'd relieve some stress not get buried under your emotional baggage.
>Dropping your skirt and walking back around to the same direction as you he gives you a firm nuzzle that makes you whimper and lean into it.
>"It's fine we all need someone to lean on right?"
"Yeah... Thanks... Thanks for being there..."
>Giving you a quick peck on the cheek he laughs.
>"Any time"
>He guides you to sit down on the floor with him but you motion for the couch instead.
"Anon is gone for a few days so what he doesn't know won't hurt him."
>"Oh alright little Miss rebel if that's what you want."
>The two of you end up nuzzling on the couch and watching TV for another hour or so before things progressed.
>Being with a stallion while you have a sore rump Isn't ideal but as long as he didn't pound like a horny colt it could still be pleasant.
>30 minutes later you let out a happy groan.
>Your voice is muffled by the couch as dusty maintains his perch on top of you pushing you half way into the plushy cushion.
"Now that I think about it I just got in trouble for making a mess on the couch the other day..."
>Dusty let's out a hearty laugh that resonates through you as well
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>>30181014

>"I'm sure it's nothing we can't get cleaned up. Or you know just flip the cushion."
>Feeling his voice along your spine makes you a happy pony pancake and you just hum in agreement.
>Pillow talk passes the time quickly until there's little left before Dusty is picked up.
>Shaking him off you're sure to brush your mane and clean up before Mrs. Johnson shows up, no need to give her more ammo for teasing you.
>She's of course soooo glad to hear you both enjoyed yourself, but on the bright side she gave you some leftovers from their dinner so that was nice.
>Well it was nice til she said it was for your 'services' and gave you a wink and a giggle.
>Why's she gotta make it weird?
>Food's food though and oh wow this has a lot of meat in it... well whatever.
>You throw it in the fridge for now and then wrap up the laundry.
>Chores almost done already and Anon wasn't home til tomorrow afternoon.
>All you'd have to do tomorrow is pick up some dinner and hope he's in a better mode when he gets home.
>Gotta stay optimistic, today was a good day so tomorrow will be too.
>Maybe you'll figure out someway to contact Rarity tomorrow without setting Anon off.
>Maybe...

I swear Rarity is around here somewhere, next time for sure.
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>>30181019
Thanks, Vega. Your green was just what the thread needed. Love the way you show their lack of agency grinding them down, even though they are not being abused. Gets to the heart of slavery better than torture porn.
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I miss clear skies
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>>30181534
>Clear Skys
>Landscape
>Skittles
>Corona

Where have our White Knights all gone? Now we need Vega more than ever! (thanks, Vega)
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>>30181019
I might have enjoyed this update if twilight wasnt my waifu and didnt make me feel like a cuck
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>>30181019
Very nice, Vega. This kind of ambiguity is something I really like seeing in /spg/ stories: Sure, Twilight is safe, comfortable, has freedom of movement and even a stallion to give her a good railing or a shoulder to lean on; the worst 'abuse' she has to worry about is stinging and humiliating, but not truly damaging. But it's also undeniable that she's not in a good place; one of the greatest minds of Equestria has been reduced to a house-slave who spends her days trawling the internet and playing online games. She's got nothing to strive for, and frankly no hope...

...well, except for dresshorse. Which is probably why Twilight's latched onto that so hard. Can't wait to see where it's going.

>>30168706
Well, despite my skepticism it seems that Cadance is actually on the level (if, in fact, broken as fuck). My paranoia now turns to the Changelings; while the pony government on Earth seems to have accepted surrender, the Changelings are operating way out of line for this and have still done a small mountain of shifty things (even to Inspector Anon) that can't simply be thrown aside. Now I'm wondering if Cadance, too, is aware of the full extend of what the Changelings are doing. She seems to be a good poner, though, and we can't heap too much on her back. I'm hoping she eventually opens up to at least some gentle cuddles, because that'd be a wonderfully tender moment.

...now I'm wondering if she'd tolerate being held if Anon did accept being her master. Not that he should - better to give real affection to a few ponies than spread yourself too thin on many.

Speaking of which, that description of making a couple of straight mares seriously question their sexuality... unf. As much as I think they should stay straight, that scene was diamonds-inducing.
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>>30181178
>>30181932
Glad you guys enjoy it too. Sure beating your slave is bad and treating them like a princess is good but the majority of slave owners would be somewhere in between and that's the most interesting part to me. Are you a good person just for not beating your slave?

>>30181748
These feelings are natural, she's mine too. At least she's happy with him... right? Well then at least shes embodying the element of magic/friendship... kinda?
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>>30181019
Inb4 Anon has cameras watching what Twilight is doing
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>>30181019
Good stuff.
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Beep boop, thread rolling to a close.
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>>30181019
Hmm, Twilight's even naughtier than Last Chance Rarity. We all know Rarity is for spanking, but it seems like Twilight is joining that club too.
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>>30167419
>2012
It's literally on the pic
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bumperino
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I miss corona
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Speaking of spanking, here's a little something something!

>you know something is wrong when you see Pinkie’s face
>walking through the door you see the lines of red on her pink cheeks
>You drop your briefcase on the floor and take off your shoes, putting them by the door.

“Hey, Pinkie, what’s wr-”

>Ohhh.
>Oh, you can see it, now.
>it’s on the kitchen floor, and it’s a MESS.

>The leftover homemade cobbler was in the fridge when you left
>but now it’s all over the floor, broken glass container and all.
>Pinkie sits next to it with a sniffle, and looks tentatively up at you

>”Hi, masterrr.”

>Boy, she knows she’s in for it.
>Well, damn
>You told her before you left, NO eating all the food in your refrigerator without your permission
>she had raided your fridge too many times, and it was something you had told her more than once not to do
>but here it was
>the evidence of her disobedience
>aaaall over the floor

>Your heart beats fast
>Pinkie cries in front of you, sitting beside her mess
>knowing she was naughty while you were gone, again

>but you aren’t mad.
>I mean, disappointed, sure
>at her, not respecting you enough to just do what you ask
>and that your delicious cobbler was gone
>but at the same time, you’re…
>excited

>The excitement you always had when Pinkie Pie just had to disobey you.

>but you don’t let it show to her
>You put on a stern face and look at her with seriousness
>you shake your head, and point at the disaster on the floor tile

“Pinkie Pie. What did I tell you before I left? What is this?”
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>>30186778
>Pinkie wilts
>she cringes when she answers, stammering and squeaking her voice with regret

>”The c-cobbler, master. I t-t-tried to k-keep it a secret, but I dropped it, and…”

>Well, you can see that
>but you didn’t ask the question because you didn’t know
>it honestly just...
>damn, it was so cute when she was guilty.
>but you kept those feeling deep down and shook your head at her again.

“Pinkie, this is a gigantic mess. You knew better, eh?”

>She nods her little head, and wipes her weepy eyes.
>you can feel your pulse in your fingertips, and you feel like you’re short of breath
>it’s hard to maintain your tough gaze at her when you don’t feel mad
>Pinkie doesn’t know better, though

>“Yes, Master, I did, and I’m really, super duper sorry…”

>That may be the case
>But this was not going to be swept under the rug
>you both knew what was happening next
>you shake your head for the third time, and point at her mess again

“I’m sure you are Pinkie, but you were very disobedient once again. You can’t seem to control yourself when it comes to food, and like I’ve said, when we have meals, you can eat then. But you just haven’t listened to me, have you?”
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>>30186811
>She shakes her head, and points her snout down at the floor.
>You sigh.

“That’s what I thought. So, I’m going to help you learn, so that the next time you want to do this, you’ll remember why it’s not such a good idea.”

>now, here comes the calm, steady breathing.
>The pressing your legs together
>and tightening your leg muscles
>keeping yourself under control…

>Pinkie gives a puppy-like whine, and she gets up from the floor
>She folds her hooves together, and dips her head in a low bow

>“Master, I’m super sorry, y-you don’t have to…”

>Oh shit, oh shit
>here it comes
>the word of the hour
>the reason for your excitement

>“...s-spank me!”

>But you do.
>She obviously needed it, you tell yourself
>justify to yourself
>after all, she did flagrantly disobey you again
>and…
>You didn’t get a chance to do this very often.

>Pointing at the mess, you answer her with a direct order.

“Oh no, Pinkie. You do, and you know it. Clean up this mess, make sure that floor is spotless. And when you’re done, you march right on over to my room, got it?”

>And with that, you turn around, pointing to the mess one last time
>Pinkie whimpers behind you, but you hear a “Yes, Master” in there somewhere
>You walk to your room, and now that your front side is out of view, you can breathe just a little easier

>Because right now, you’ve got a boner that you can NEVER let her know about.
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>>30186843
*minutes pass*

>the paddle you bought was in the drawer
>you remember when you first bought it
>the day when you were at your wits end with Pinkie Pie, her adorable but exasperating behavior
>You decided to do something about it

>But you did care a lot about her
>She was a sweet, kind, caring girl
>so affectionate, nuzzling you all the time
>snuggling with you on the sofa, giving you a shoulder rub after a hard day’s work
>asking you about your day, smiling wide
>and not to mention, she was a DYNAMITE baker and cook
>And you loved hearing her talk, spending quality time with her

>which is why you feel guilty about exactly what it was that you were going to do now.

>You’re not a good person, are you?
>you can’t be
>I mean, sure she needed some discipline, the crazy pink puffball
>and when you did this, it was effective for a long time afterwards
>hell, she seemed to still like you just fine!
>but that wasn’t why you chose it to begin with, was it?

>You grab the pillow
>sit down on the bed, and put it on top of your lap
>over the slight protrusion in your jeans, so she wouldn’t see it
>or feel it
>just like the other times…

>You put the little square paddle down next to you
>these things were kind of abundant around here
>it was the south, after all
>hell, you got this one at a mom and pop store gift shop
>boy, any kid whose parent got that from the shop wouldn’t exactly view it as much of a gift…

>But it worked perfectly well
>Even though it’s a kind of souvenir paddle
>one of those silly ones with the engravings, a couple of flames with the words “HOT SEAT” written on it
>Pinkie’s seat was certainly going to be flaming before you were done with her tonight...
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>>30186858
So, continue? Y/N
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>>30186869
no
kill yourself
faggot
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>>30186869
Seems more fetish than slave to me but some might enjoy it anyway.
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>>30186869
Yes of course
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>>30186999
aww, darn. :( Time to get the noose
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>>30186869

go on, I have my hopes on how it will end.
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>>30180293
This is why you shouldn't own a poner, Anon. AJ needs baths and warm hugs.
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>>30186869
Sigh...
It's MY fetish, so I want to read the rest, but those negative posters aren't wrong. Keep going, but try to keep it slavery related.
>Rarities last chance is really pretty good too.
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>>30186869
By all means, continue. Just 'cause it's kink doesn't mean it's bad.
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>>30185680
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>TFW no Nightmareslave to keep your bed cool and comfortable at night.
We've had Luna-slave-turning-into-Nightmare a couple times, but I don't think we've ever had a straight up Nightmare Moon slave.
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>>30181019
Good job Vega, thanks for the adventures of Twiligth and his eternal search for his friends, hopefully the other shit stallion will not appear unexpectedly claiming "service" only because they saw Dusty and his master leave the house
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>>30186869
I do not like spanking or other physical punishment but Eons have been around since I read a Pinkie Pie story, maybe you can advance the story to something interesting.

keep going
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>>30147545
>>30147970
>>30151931
>>30153657
>>30158844
>>30162486


>Supplies
>You really needed them.
>Sure you had learned more than a few things from your bloc mates, kept a few things, but you knew that wouldn’t help you in Equestria.
>Besides, you wanted, no needed, to find out if Lady De Raritey had something better than just rope for your slaves wings.
>Perhaps something in neoprene.
>You dragged it over to the arms market, not bothering to let it keep up with its hobbling.
>The human guards were much thicker in this section of the market.
>One of them halted you and tapped the sign behind him, no ponies.
>Fortunately for you, they were only meaning as slaves and made you tie up yours at a bar with other slaves.
>You figured this might end poorly, but didn’t have much of a choice.
>Besides, you knew what armed humans could do, and that you had insurance.
>You went back in without any hastle, surprisingly enough not even a bribe was needed.
>You felt almost insulted that they accepted you so easily.
>Lo and how, but the anonymous intern was there in front of you again at a podium.
>”Wait, you work here now as well?”
“Not really. They pushed me off when I went back after our transaction and had me man here. They paid me though so I guess its all good.”
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>>30188811
>Somewhere you knew Discord was pleased at this, if not behind it.
>Spirits of Chaos always were messing around you or your friends.
>”Can you tell me what I am allowed to get here? I don’t want to make a scene by accident.”
“Oh that’s easy, may I see your ID again.”
>He swiped it once more through his enchanted mirror and started thumbing again.
>An inquisitive attempt to climb up on his podium to look at it was met by a hand to the face and a sudden scooching back in front.
>You weren’t sure how he knew to do that, if his arm even moved, but it happened.
“Well Miss Lyra, it seems that you are permitted to have long arms, explosives, and firearms. I’m not sure why on the explosives, but there is a note attached saying that you will need to reup before the year is over.”
>Explosives?
>You don’t know how that happened, you weren’t even aware those were legal for humans to purchase.
>You were happy with that though, you had always loved how they looked on tv.
>”So how do I?”
“Just walk around and find something you like the look of, the clerk will be able to help you. You can work a trigger right?”
>You picked a corner of his lapel and popped its button in place before brushing off some dust with a magical hand.
“That works. Go have fun, get a shotgun, and as always, shop smart, shop Slave Mart!”
>You stroll down the midway, a constant familiar buzzing noise setting you on edge.
>You tried to suppress the need to stop and freeze whenever it started, but you limbs balked, knowing the imminent threat.
>You see some open seating in a tent and go there to sit, your breath short and heavy, limbs quaking.
>You were in control now, you were human, you were in control, you are human.
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>>30188819
>You keep repeating the mantra to yourself as a video starts on the stage.
>It was flashy, crappy CGI logos and fake flames brushed your vision, but you didn’t care for it.
>Slowly your body calmed and you could pull yourself up in the chair some.
>There were ships on the screen being attacked by some sort of giant quad copter with a gatling cannon larger than itself.
>You weren’t sure if it was just the bad design or if you had just witnessed your first fusion of human weapons and magic.
>What you did know was that you didn’t have the money to get something so extravagant, or a reason.
>Then again, the ability to shoot down any pegasus airship had a certain appeal.
>But that would mean that the humans hadn’t already done so to them all.
>It was an interesting thought, a hope to see some that you hated prosper, only to be the one to bring them ruin.
>Such an exhilarating feeling, perhaps being a slave owner had finally given you some control in life or maybe it had opened you up to a more dark part of yourself.
>Pulling your up to the ceiling you flopped out of the chair and walked back out.
>You were here on a mission, you needed to get explosives.
>You knew that you would be going underground and might have to excavate wreckage, something like mining charges would be needed.
>You looked for the OSHA tags for 1.5Ds, but found none.
>Giving up, you went for somebody who had the 1.1 placard to see what he sold.
>His stall had a number of long barreled rifles with large bulky centers.
>Signs with repeated onomatopoeias were enough of a clue that you wouldn’t be able to buy any of them.
>”What sort of explosives do you sell?”
“’Splosives? I don’t know nothing bout no swearing goin on. Been off the bottle the last hour. Sober as a marine.”
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>>30188828
>”I was looking to buy something that went boom, your sign.”
>You point a hoof figuring he was an avid inspector of what he sold.
“Oh, little missy want to do some yard work? I got just the thing to make you GI Jane.”
>He pulls up some sort of a mass of tubes wires and something that put off heat.
“This here is Church Bell. Moment you pull it out, everyone will start praying.”
>You did like the sound of that.
>”I’ll take it.”
“Good choice red horse.”
>”But I’m green?”
“You won’t be for long with this.”
>There was a conversation you were participating in, but you brain wasn’t.
>”Can I get some grenades too? Flashbangs?”
“What flavor you want? Gots pineapple, apple, plum, cherries, kumquats, potato, even some avacados.”
>His fingers danced over a small showcase of the grenades, names not really matching what he pointed but you guessed there was a reason the old coot knew them so.
>”A dozen cherries?”
“Sure thing.”
>A wooden box was placed in front of you, ruins for preservation firmly embossed on the top.
“You get the whole kit with them as well, free since you aren’t making me open the damn thing.”
>You float over your card and ID, and work through yet another background check.
>Turns out you really were qualified to use explosives, you’d need to speak with Jeff when you got back to the forge if you could take over cleaning the clinkers out.
“Was it worth it?”
>”Pardon?”
“Your ear missy, I may be old but I know what it looks like to betray friends. Was it worth it?”
>”I’m free, that’s what matters.”
>You grab your purchases and walk off, leaving your words to hang on both of you.
>Continuing your loops, you were surprised to find nobody sold rope or tactical gear that you needed.
>Unsurprisingly, they sold human made and shaped stuff in all sizes.
>All sizes you could see.
>It just meant you would have to go back into the main market and look there.
>Passing back by Anon, you got curious.
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>>30188835
>”Can you have these stored with my belongings?”
“Actually, I have to. No weapons are allowed on the show floor. You can take it all when you leave.”
>Cheerfully you turn everything over and go back to collect it.
>It hadn’t moved around the post, but had gotten closer to another slave.
>You didn’t care, you had nothing to punish it with anyways if you did.
>More things crossed your mind on what you needed to get.
>Bags, food, more of the Sandisk magic chips, some clothes.
>Well the clothes would be the hardest, but Daring Doo always was the risk taker.
>You walked past the corral from earlier, and you knew how to feel better from earlier with the noise of the shock prod.
>A few dollars later and you were riding a pony just like the humans.
>Like the very drunk humans as you found it very difficult to stay in the saddle at even a sedate pace.
>Sure you had a slave you could have done this to, sure people were laughing, but you felt much better about it all.
>That it was a fine flank of sweaty stallion you were on was a significant plus compared to however it could have preformed otherwise.
>Your brief revery over, you decided you would need a Go Pro or some other sort of camera that you could record your travels with.
>You were able to get someone to email you a copy of their video, for memories you said.
>Very, specific, fun memories.
>You headed to the booth with the large skull and crossed knives underneath.
>You weren’t sure what sort of safety code it meant, but you did know you were always able to find invasion equipment there.
>You just knew you always had to add some paint to them, the colors kept leading to them being lost whenever you took them outside.
>You guessed humans had simply enchanted them all to keep Equestrians from being able to see them.
>Fortunately, they also sold black colored items, which made them inordinately easy to see.
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>>30188842
>You supposed they might be meant for working in darkness, but if there was no light to see, then you could wear whatever you wanted.
>Humans were weird.
>Fortunately, this one was weird enough to have equipment for ponies.
>You found a number of oddly named pouches and bags by an Alice, but they went together far better than any dress you had seen in Canterlot.
>There was even a sewn platform for the Go Pro he didn’t sell.
>He sold plenty of rope, so you bought plenty of it.
>Anything you could find a use for.
>The equine restraints may have been pushing it, but he sold handcuffs right next to hoofcuffs so what was the issue you got looks for?
>He did take the time to walk you through the knives and daggers he sold.
>Most of them looked like elaborate methods for helping your opponent by hurting yourself, but he did sell some nice utility knoves.
>This purchase finished, you loaded it all onto a courier slave and continued shopping.
>You really wanted to find some sort of slave catching store at the end of all this.
>You weren’t sure what would happen if you did, but the thought was amazing.
>A chance to show just how human you were, and no longer the slave.
>Further wandering and yanks on the tether eventually led you to an outlet store situated toward the rear.
>There you were finally able to purchase something more charming than the plastic wing covers for your slave, but you were unsure what to get amongst the myriad of fine fabrics, chiseled metals, and just plain better looking plastics.
>You just knew you didn’t want to use plain rope.
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I miss clear skies
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>>30186858
>There’s a moving shadow in the hall
>It gets smaller and darker as it nears the entrance
>getting closer very slowly, and you make out the shape of a pony on the wall
>then, Pinkie Pie emerges through the door, and points her teary eyed face away from you
>The bulge in your jeans twitches, but you keep it down
>Pinkie’s eyes water and she wordlessly comes over to you
>Boy, oh boy…
>You nod your head approvingly

“Good girl, Pinkie.”
>Oh, shiiiiit
>Yeah, you think you just leaked a little, uh, downstairs
>You have so much luck that Pinkie listens to you when she’s in big trouble
>You couldn’t get up and grab her with this rising erection in your pants
>not without her seeing it, at least

>You push those thoughts away when your quivering pink pony inches toward you
>Pinkie Pie stammers

>“I’m really s-s-super sorry, Master, honest. P-Pleaaase, it hu-hurts so much and it n-never ends...”

“No, stop that right now.”

>Pinkie squeaks, silenced by you
>You never tolerated that kind of begging from her before.
>She knows it won’t do any good
>You’ve decided she should be punished, and she will be…

>no matter what your angry conscience screams at you… telling you to stop… telling you to just look at Pinkie’s terrified face…
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>>30189429
>You pat your pillow covered lap
“You disobeyed me again, Pinkie, and you are going to get a spanking for it. Up, now, so we can get this done.”

>Your tone is much firmer and angrier sounding than it ever is
>Because of this, Pinkie gulps and just nods her head, and begins to do what you commanded her
>Pinkie shakes uncontrollably as she reaches up with her hooves
>she puts them next to your lap and pulls herself on top of your bed

>from there, you take over
>you reach underneath her, and lift her up and over your pillow covered lap
>a hand firmly pins her down, and she lies flat across
>even through the pillow you can feel her fast breathing expanding her ribcage
>and her crying already starting, too…

>You push that out of your mind
>you try to forget for a moment what her bright smile looks like, or the sound of her laughter
>thoughts of her happiness, genuine happiness being with you
>the guilt knowing what you really feel having her laying over your legs
>all the things that would make that twitching bump in your jeans get smaller...

>No better way to push those thoughts away than just getting this started
>You grab the paddle, and lay it flat over her pudgy pink rear end
>the “HOT SEAT” flaming logo faces up
>that wood is cold, and Pinkie Pie flinches and squeezes her butt muscles when she feels it, and covers her head with her wiggly front legs

>bracing herself...
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>>30189440
This was a little addition for today. I have plans for more story, and the next part, spoiler warning, will be from Pinkie Pie's POV. There's a bigger story I got planned everyone, not just the fetish stuff even though muh spanking, m-muh dick
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>>30188852
>Besides, you wanted, no needed
>shop smart, shop Slave Mart
>oddly named pouches and bags
You have some great references here.

>constant familiar buzzing noise
Should have explained the noise was from a shock prod; did not understand that till later. I like how you show Lyra's insecurities here. If she does not want one for herself, she should get some other compliance tool. As a unicorn a simple pain spell might work.

>It was an interesting thought, a hope to see some that you hated prosper, only to be the one to bring them ruin.
Does Lyra hate the humans or the ponies? Are the pegasus airships prospering, or does she intend to bring humans to ruin? Not getting it.

>Pulling your up to the ceiling you flopped out of the chair
Huh?

>you were riding a pony just like the humans.
Earlier Lyra felt uncomfortable looking at saddles, now here she is using one. Was she saddled herself as a slave, and how does she feel about it? This was a fun scene either way.

So we bought the 'church bell' (a complex possibly nuclear bomb), and a dozen 'cherries' (small demolition charges), the Go Pro, and nothing else, right?

Are you done the update?
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>>30181019

>The good news is picking up dinner went off without being marginalized or picked on.
>That's like a golden day in your book at this point.
>The bad news is Anon's car is already home.
>What the heck it's like 4 why is he home already?
>He can't be mad at you for not having dinner on the table this early.
>You're just gonna walk in there and act like everything's normal and you two didn't end on a horrible note last time you talked.
>Just going to act normal yeah.
>Not nervous at all no sir.
>Wait shit you forgot to put the laptop back in his room where he'd put it after confiscating it.
>Oh crap oh crap oh crap he's gonna know you took it without permission!
>You just got in trouble and you acted up again and oh shit why do you do this to yourself???
>No no you can't lost it! just gotta relax!
>It's ok. It's ok. Breath in, breath out, breath in, breath out.
>You approach the front door and hesitate.
>You don't want to get in trouble again you are so tired of being in trouble...
>"Oh you don't say darling? Well that's quite understandable..."
>Hold on is someone else in there?
>Instead of opening the door you put an ear up to the door and listen.
>"Well I'm sure you know how it is."
>"Oh I most certainly do, I have a hard enough time keeping my own in line from time to time I assure you."
>Sweet Luna that voice!
>Throwing the door open your eyes quickly confirm your suspicions.
>The white mare gasps and jumps in her seat.
>"My goodness Twilight you scared me half to deaHHHH"
>Her sentence is cut off by your slightly over enthusiastic flying tackle.
"Oh my god Rarity! I thought I'd never see you again! I tried so hard to find you but no one I called said they knew you and I tried to send an email but I didn't think that would work and Anon said we couldn't go to New York and I missed you so much and I just didn't know what to do and..."
>Your rambling is cut off by a delicate white hoof covering your mouth.
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>>30189456
>Oh, shiiiiit
Anon is a sick fuck.
Just like me.
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>>30189534

>Pushing herself back up into a sitting position she gives you a warm smile before removing the hoof from your lips.
>"Darling please I know you're glad to see me but one thing at a time."
>Shes here, shes actually here and right in front of you.
>There's so much to tell her, so much to talk about.
>Has she seen the other? was it true she was free? has she been safe? how did she get here?
>The more you look at her though the more the memories come flooding back, the more you realize how much you missed her and the happier and happier you are to see her.
>Naturally you decide the best course of action is to throw yourself into her chest, wrap your forelegs around her and start crying.
>"Aww there there darling. It's alright, everything is alright. I'm here."
>The one hoof hug and mane petting you received only drove home the point that your friend was really really here.
>"It's ok, It's ok. Shhh just relax dear..."
>After a few more quiet minutes of comforting you pull yourself together and extract yourself from her grasp.
>As much as you'd like to hold on to her forever you still had so many questions to ask!
"I'm... I'm sorry I just never thought I'd see any of you ever again and then here you are."
>"Oh no that's quite alright I know this must come as quite a shock to you. It was a surprise for myself as well if I have to be honest."
>Rubbing the tears out of your eyes you notice Anon had disappeared from his chair.
>Maybe he wanted to give you two a few minutes alone... That's kinda nice of him.
>"Did I hear you mention New York though? It's for the best you didn't go there. Our head office may be there but I actually live in Atlanta."
>Atlanta! That's only some 45 minutes away!
"Oh my gosh you're so close! What happened though how did Anon find you?"
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>>30189545

>"Well I was just having lunch with my assistant and saw this human giving me the strangest look. I of course told him it was bad manners to stare but when he said I looked like someone his slave was looking for I was a bit intrigued. Then of course he was kind enough to give me your name and well here I am darling."
>She gave you a confident wink and a smile that you returned.
>So Anon was at least paying attention to you the other night even if things had gone south.
>You suppose you'd have to thank him later despite being mad at you he'd still done you a favor even approaching Rarity.
>"But enough about me for now tell me about Anon dear how does he treat you?"
>Someone actually caring enough to ask about how you're being treated brings a warmth to your heart you hadn't realized you were missing.
"He's well he's ok. He gives me a good bit of freedom but he can be pretty umm firm at times..."
>"Hmm yes I understand that's for the best usually but I'm glad to hear he lets you out and about. I swear some owners barley let their little ponies do anything, I mean whats even the point then? how can they be productive?"
>The warmth in your heart flickers.
>That... was a little weird but you choose to not worry about it.
"Uh well yeah he got me a tracking collar so I mostly just end up running errands and doing the housework."
>"Oh delightful let me see hmm? Oh I see the 3500 model. Real time tracking but it's only so accurate, I suppose in a small town like this it gets the job done though right? I keep the 5k model on my fillies so I can make sure they aren't wandering too far off course."
>wat.
"Your... fillies?"
>"Oh of course darling I'm sure you remember Coco Pommel from Manehattan? She was my first acquisition but far from the last. A quick laying down of the law so to say and she's been a perfect dear!"
>Wtf is this?
"I'm sorry by acquisition you mean like purchase right? As in ownership?"
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>>30189549

>"Well yes yes of course that is the way of things. I would think you'd know that by now Twilight. I suppose Anon is your first master then?"
>She giggles and pokes you in the collar.
>Rarity was never the element of kindness but she was always very socially graceful and considerate.
>For that reason the casual reference to your slavery like it's no big deal sets of multiple alarm bells in your head.
"I umm yes, after they got you girls I was on the run for a few years..."
>"Ha glad you gave them a good chase darling but no one can run forever. Did you put up a good fight? I haven't seen your paperwork yet but I imagine with a run like that you've got a poor obedience score at the very least. Though I suppose your magical prowess would bump your value back up a bit..."
>The hair on the back of your neck stands on end as Rarity continues her evaluation.
>This isn't right... Something isn't right...
>"You've been keeping fit though yes? And your ring is set low so he must trust you that's great! Would you mind?"
>Gesturing to the floor in the middle of the room Rarity herds you up off the couch and on to your hooves.
>"Perfect now say ah."
>The pit in your stomach gets worse and worse as your instincts scream at you that something is very wrong right now!
>She checks your teeth and mane for a few minutes then to your shock lights her horn and teleports the sundress right off you!
>Circling around you like a shark she soon sees the reason you wore the dress and titters.
>"Oh my I see someone has been naughty very recently!"
"Rarity! Please what are you doing?"
>"Oh it's quite alright dear no need to be modest. How can I make anon a fair offer without first inspecting the goods hmm?"
>Offer... Goods?????
"Rarity I..."
>"Shh darling please I really must focus."
>Wanting to say about a hundred things you suddenly find yourself too busy gasping as Rarity takes a magical hold of your tail!
"Rarity!"
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>>30189555

>"Oh just a quick peak i promise. Oh my darling is this Anon's work too?"
>Shoot me now wtf?!?
>To your relief she releases your tail which you instantly clamp down between your legs as hard as you can!
"I... what...? No no Anon has never..."
>"Twilight you can tell me really, a little trauma might help me get a better deal you understand."
>Holy fuck this isn't Rarity... Shes worried about her deal really...?
"No no it really wasn't him. I umm I have a neighbor..."
>"Oh my does Anon know? It doesn't really matter who's doing it darling abuse if abuse."
>You find yourself backing away and trying to make yourself smaller as the mare you're talking to feels more and more alien by the second.
"No it's a stallion. He's my... my friend..."
>Yeah friend... right?
>"Ah a coltfriend never mind then i shan't pry then."
"Not my coltfriend..."
>You mumbled it so it's no surprise Rarity doesn't react.
>He really isn't though Dusty is just your friend...
>Maybe your only friend at this point...
>Some element of friendship you were now...
>Friendships dwindled to a single colt you sell your flanks too...
>"Well I can't use that bargaining chip then so let's see. Good health, magical prowess, average physical fitness and condition..."
>Rarity continues mumbling to herself as she... appraises you...
>Appraises you like another unfeeling piece of stock for her to acquire...
>You'd never felt more inpony than this very moment...
>"I'm thinking we start negotiations at $750. I've got to start these things low you understand darling it's not an insult to your value I assure you."
>She gives you a quick nuzzle that you don't really return and trots off towards the kitchen to find Anon.
>You can only stand there in shock and try to shake yourself out of your stupor.
>Shes just looking to free you right?
>She hadn't really said so but she couldn't really be thinking of owning one of her friends could she?
>But if she owned several other ponies...
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>>30189561

>Violently shaking your head you tell yourself you just have to believe in the Rarity you know.
>What better way for the element of generosity to shine than buying and freeing every other pony she could.
>But she even told you what tracking collar she used...
>You must have been standing there trying to make sense of the situation for a quite a while as Rarity and Anon return sooner than you expected.
>Rarity shakes her head at you as she walks back out of the kitchen followed by Anon.
>"Negotiations have broken down darling, it seems he quite likes you! Worry not I'll be back with an offer your gracious owner can't refuse but for the time being I really must be going. Thanks you for your time Anon I hope you don't mind if I stop by again soon?"
>"Nah anytime you want, a friend of Twilight's is a friend of mine."
>"Splendid! I'll be in touch au revoir!"
>The creature cleverly disguised as Rarity (what else could it be?) gave you a warm smile and closed the door behind her.
>Anon has to poke you to break bring you back to reality.
>"You ok Twi?"
"I... Sorry yeah I'm ok..."
>Anon doesn't look convinced when you finally meet his eyes, you must be terrible at keeping the emotion out of yours.
>"I thought you'd be happy."
"So did I... I... I'm sorry just... please excuse me."
>Teleportation to your room your take a few deep breaths to try and calm yourself down.
>You'll need all your focus for what your about to do with as limited as your magic is.
>Finally feeling ready you light up your horn and reach into the dimensional pocket you'd made all those years ago.
>It's hard with so little magic but your desperation fuels the spell until a small object falls out of the aether and onto the floor in front of you.
>For a minute you dare not open your eyes and as soon as you do you're filled with regret for doing so.
>On the floor lies the element of generosity.
>Cracked right down the middle...

See i got to her eventually.
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>>30189570
>cracked right down the middle

I WAS NOT EXPECTING THIS FEEL, FUUUUCK
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>>30189570
Oh wow!
This cute little spank-story just got... deeper. And darker. And way better! Slavery is a really poisonous and corrupting idea, apparently even the Magic of Friendship is not immune. Really looking forward to feeling your feelsy feel.
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>>30189570
...darn
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>>30189570
I ll say, that was so well done I kinda want to see some of the others if possible. If not, wont change the comfy factor, but still:
Dash being a hit'n'run fugitive/Fluttershy about to be put down for being a bad pony or for depression/AJ being a cargo carrier-literally a work hoers and lastly Pinkie, being the Pink pony of an insufferable overweight child or sharing some happiness in a good home(but completely broken inside).

Still, based green.
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>>30189570
Crossover tiem! This Rarity is the same Lady De Raritey that makes the 'Slavery is Belonging' line of classy (yet effective!) slave restraints from Lyra: Temple Run. Not all of her herd have the expensive 5000 tracker, most wear the same magic leather choke collar Lyra turned down. Her new acquisitions get to model the whole ensemble. Twilight might have just dodged a bullet here.
Did Rarity have a silver stud in her ear?
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>>30189570
Damn, wasn’t expecting her to be like this at all. Your story just got a hell of a lot more interesting.
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>>30190022
Double Dubs confirm: interesting story just got interesting.
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>>30189561
>Shoot me now wtf?!?
>wtf?!?
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>>30190268
I thought the same thing.
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>>30188819
>"shop smart, shop Slave Mart!”
kek, that reference.

>You stroll down the midway, a constant familiar buzzing noise setting you on edge.
Huh, wondering what exactly got to Lyra here.
>You walked past the corral from earlier, and you knew how to feel better from earlier with the noise of the shock prod.
Oooooh. Okay.

>>30188852
Yeah, can we get a full summary of what we purchased?

>>30189440
Dawww. Anon does feel bad about it, even if he feels stiff about it too. Good one - I like this a lot. Please do continue; I'm very much looking forward to Pinkie's PoV.

>>30189570
And yes, this story just got hella interesting. Poor Twilight - especially coming right on top of her own musings about how she herself has fallen so far, this has got to be a truly awful blow. It's not just herself who's fallen, nor did she fall the farthest.

I'm surprised she didn't try to confirm exactly what is going on with Rarity, although I suppose the cracked Element confirms everything we could have ever asked. I wonder where she'll go from here, though? Shut out Anonymous, Dusty, everyone she knows and actually start fighting? Or finally open up to her 'owner' about how she really feels?
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>>30149453

Hey, I'm not dead just yet, and I have some update material ready to go. I've just been rather busy of late, but I'll be getting back aborted the green train asap.
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>>30190656

>Aborted

Well then...
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If it's okay with you guys, I think I'll wait until the beginning of next thread, just so it's a fresh start. Just a small while longer...
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>>30190676
It's cool. looking forward to it, and more.
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>>30189604
>>30189683
>>30189696
>>30190068
>>30190022

Shit now people are going to actually expect me to know what I'm doing. Thanks for the feedback glad you guys liked it.

>>30189804
It's possible but we're starting small scale first, also i suck at writing the other members of the mane 6.

>>30190021
Not a horrible idea really I was actually thinking she'd have some kind of bracelet or necklace denoting her free status but didn't get into it yet.
As for Twi getting off easy Rarity did say she'd be back to make an offer Anon couldn't refuse.

>>30190268
>>30190294
I mean can you blame her for being a little dramatic at her friend checking her out down there?

>>30190321
Well Rarity and Anon were talking who knows how long before Twilight got back home so maybe he knows some of the details of what she's been up to. Honestly up until this point Anon has been kinda 2D, maybe we'll get a better feel for him soon.
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>>30190720
>I mean can you blame her for being a little dramatic at her friend checking her out down there?

It's more about your use of textspeak, pulled me out of the story. Never liked Twilight's use of human swears anyway though.
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>>30190826
Ah that's fair, i just tired of using something something celestia/luna sometimes. And with all that time Twilight spends on the internet I imagine she picked up at least some of the speech, mostly just curse words though.
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>>30190893
No more so then regular pone.
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>>30190893

I desire to hug that spider horse. Is she venomous?
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>>30191031
Where is space?
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>>30190865
Its less that she curses and more that your actual writing has wtf instead of what the fuck
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>>30189499
>Should have explained the noise was from a shock prod; did not understand that till later.

Apologies, I think this may be too used to mention issue.
Basically at all the gun expos I have been to, a number of people try to pawn off crappy stun guns by clicking them off in the air.
For Lyra this is the same as seeing your dad come at you with a belt, it just sort of removes everything about you and pushes you back to the past.

>Does Lyra hate the humans or the ponies?
Not humans as a whole, there are some she doesn't like at all.
As for ponies, she divides them between free and not.
Free ponies are with the humans.
Slaves are.
There may or may not be some hatred that bears out here for wings, it came in an idea discussion in the Discord, but for now its more:
Flying is freedom. A pegasus can't have that taken from them, otherwise its an earth pony, and all sorts of crimes, Lyra had to work to get her freedom, a pegasus always knows some day it will be free.

So its basically a philosophical issue with her.
The born rich versus the working, the king by birth versus the barbarian warlord.

>Are the pegasus airships prospering, or does she intend to bring humans to ruin?
Humans are hunting them, but its much more difficult than just going after blimps.
Essentially, how there can be natives, resistance, and so forth if anyone chooses at the proper times to make it a thing.

I am supposed to allow responses to go "Look at the TV and see a report on a recent attack on a military base in Equestria", then I fluff that out and why it would matter to the story?

>Huh?
Sorry, dropped some words.
Lyra was supposed to flip her muzzle up, then just flop out of the seat onto her hooves in one motion.

>Was she saddled herself as a slave
Bridled for sure, saddling and being treated poorly might have been a thing as some punishment from drunks, I just don't see how to work it in yet, so its just an unease.
Like grabbing a bunch of straws in your fist and looking at them
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>>30191791
> how does she feel about it?
Ponies are ridden, humans are riders.
Lyra rode a pony, so she is human.
A very hot and good looking stallion. I have no clue who, I just figured it would be funny,
and an easy way to show Lyra understands cellphones for the GoPro


>So we bought the 'church bell' (a complex possibly nuclear bomb)
Think as in a bazooka firing nuclear explosions.
Like a beam bazooka from Gundam.

>dozen 'cherries'
Actually just V40 grenades, Lyra couldn't find proper demolitions and excavation charges.

GoPro, rope, tactical vests, assorted supplies Anything you could find a use for under the cover of sure go with that.

What was not gotten was demolitions, slaving gear (this prompt), any sort of actual firearm, the GoPro, and no Lyre replacement from >>30162486

We do have from home:
a full set of tools from work, maul, wrenches, sockets, drivers, battery powered cut offs
A hard hat with head light (fitted to protect our horn per OSHA regs)
A surprise once we leave the slave market and go home, well in the way it will impact the questions then
The Magna Wave wireless slave pen for Bash
/K/s recommended bug out bag for 7 days

and Other stuff covered under the assorted items explanation.
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I miss corona
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>>30192233
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>>30191855
I think Lyra might be pushing her weight budget. Bash is not a mudpone, it can only carry so much. Assuming Lyra also wears saddlebags and shares the load, but she's not that strong either. Horses can sleep standing up if they need to so a full tent setup might not be needed, but they should carry some food. Those tools from work sound especially heavy.
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>>30192233

Corona a shit.
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>>30192390
I don't expect her to carry an entire tool chest frankly, its just painting what she is like for this cyoa.

I don't think weight will be much of an issue, Rarity could carry Tom after all.
And here Lyra works in a forge carrying around lots of metal, so its understandable for her to be more capable.

Bash however is very up in the air, Dash seems more about speed at all times than basic weight lifting, such as when Tank can lift the rock off her wing and she can't.
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>>30190865
I like the swears, and the 1337speak.

Her time on Earth has changed Twilight, just as it seems to have Rarity, and not for the better. She has immersed herself in gaming culture; of course that would come out in her everyday speech. It was totally about 'ethics in gaming journalism', too!
>and she lurks /mlp/ on 4chan, like Glimmer of Hope
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>>30192402
Shut your mouth, corona is best beer.
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>>30192464
What about "other" corona?
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>>30189545
After what his human done for her Twilight should feel so bad of what she and Dusty did on their sofa that surely begged Anon to punishes her
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>>30192547
Other Corona too pure for this world
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>>30190676
Cant wait for some space celly
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Corona a good girl.

But this a dead thread.
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>>30192464

Corona is awful beer, and the pony is shit too.
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New thread: >>30192782
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>>30189570
Poor Twiligth, the image of Rarity has been changed by human society to survive was by other fatalities, all those macabre stories I hear and the mistreatment of other humans do not compare with the discovery that perhaps her friends are no longer the same ones that she knew in Equestria, she herself recognizes that she has changed from an energetic and unshakable pony to a maid who spends her free time looking at the internet and the company of a fellow slave to seek a moment of warmth, perhaps that scares her more maybe she likes her life now, maybe Anon is a good master, strict, but only when he should be, but a master who gives her enough respect so that she has not lost her identity

Meanwhile what happened to the rest of the six? Perhaps Applejack is there, traumatized by the loss of his family who seeks death, Fluttershy being the toy of a pervert or his friend Rainbow Dash sailing in a fishing boat along with other refugees looking for the way back to Equestria, Pinkie rape again and again until there is only an empty shell that kills masters who abuse their ponies in search of the lost joy of the princess celestia being used as an experiment in some complex of the states and her sister obliged to mate with pureblood stallions of a Jeqe Arabe para create a new breed.

Are you even going to write about Anon's parents who were going to visit?

Great Job Vega
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>>30192674
The thread is trying to be like Corona.
A DEAD MARE
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