Queen Umbra Thread

>>29977637
Holy shit we actually managed to survive long enough to reach bump limit!

>>29978383
Feels great

I got stuck

>>29980628
I just beat shido palace again, man that was fun as long as you know what to do, if you dont it gets annoying

>>29977637
>When Umbra said a long day, you're sure she messed up and meant to say week
>And shit with how this week is going, it's looking like it's going to be a long month
>The first day just consisted of Umbra bringing ponies into her throne room to discuss the upcoming days
>It was difficult at first to get them to settle down because EVERYONE wanted to be the one to help plan the wedding
>The only reason Umbra got them to shut up was because she said that she wouldn't take anypony offer if the didn't quiet down
>She would meet with the wedding planers first as that was the top priority for her
>After all, there's no point in a wedding dress if there isn't a wedding to have
>Then after you both found a planner that you liked, Umbra alone would sit down with ponies that wanted to make her wedding dress
>Rarity offered to make your suit for you so you didn't need to meet with them
>That didn't stop some mares and stallions from handing you their cards
>It actually surprised you how well Umbra handled all these ponies in front of her
>The mares that organized the festival where there as well telling Umbra that this would be no problem for them if she chooses them
>Umbra told them that they could apply tomorrow when you and her are at one hundred percent
>Because after last night, you just feel like laying in be with your fiancee
>As soon as the meeting with the ponies finished, more congratulations came from them before they finally left
>Umbra sighs as she sits back in her throne
>"It's not even noon yet..." Umbra whines looking over to you with a pout on her face "Can we go back to bed and cuddle with our cute puppy? We usually have a day off after our nights of love!"
>She hits you with the good ol' puppy eyes which causes you to laugh
>Walking over to the throne, you pick her up and carry her back to your room

>>29981022
I died there the other night because I brought Haru Who I'm going to go for in NG+ instead of Makoto and I had no healer when Ryuji, Yusuke, and I are dropping physical attacks like it's happy hour.

I forgot about Jack

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>>29981588
>You are Rarity
>Placing the last gem on our latest masterpiece, you step back to admire your work
"Hmm..." You say as you "This dress could use a tad more Crystal Sapphires."
>Reaching into your gem box, you realize that you're all out of the one you got at Queen Umbra's empire!
>This is a catastrophe!
>Before you can fully panic, the familer sound of a bell ringing grabs your attention
>"Rarity, I'm home!" You hear Sweetie Belle call out
>Looking at your empty gem chest, you close it and leave your workshop
"Hello, Sweetie." You tell "How was school?"
>"It was fun!" Sweetie Belle says "I was going to the clubhouse with Applebloom and Scootaloo. I only stopped by because Twilight said that Anon had a letter for you."
>Your ears perk up as you spot the scroll
"Really?! Anon wrote back!" You tell her "You or Twilight didn't look in the letter did you!?"
>Sweetie Belle takes a few steps back before shaking her head
>You let out a sigh of relief
"Good, good..." You tell her as you take the letter "You may run along, Sweetie. Do make sure to be back before dark."
>Sweetie smiles and nods her head as she begins to head out
>"Rarity?" Sweetie calls out "When are we going to see Anon again?"
"Soon I hope." You say as you begin to open up the letter "You may even get to meet some new fillies if everything works out."
>Reading the letter it's short, but gets to point very quickly
>You let out a squeal of happiness as you read that the proposal was a success
"He did it! He actually did it!" You cry out as you bounce in place
>"Did what?" Sweetie Bell
>You smile at your sister
"You will know when everypony else does." You tell her before turning around to whisper to yourself "I may need to plan a trip to Queen Umbra's Crystal Empire soon. I need to get a look at the body of her's if I hope to make a dress to match her in beauty!"

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>>29981658
Makoto is a decent healer, problem is that it always seems like her SP goes down really fast
Thats not just me right?
Also haru is like borderline useless because there are no full team reflect attacks, cool idea but it feels kinda pointless
But her amrita healing and gun attacks are decent

>>29984735
Honestly One Shot Kill is super strong and it helps bring down enemies frequently. Also no Makoto does feel like she has a small sp pool

hn

>>29983274
>You are Anon
>And so far this week has been progressing smoothly
>Your week has just consisted of you waking up, eating breakfast, and then following Umbra into a meeting room on the first floor of the castle
>Inside the meeting room is a long table made of black crystal
>Umbra told you this was the room she used when she planned for the festival
>The past few days have been filled with wedding planners coming in and out of this room, showing you and Umbra their boards and plans, and them telling you and Umbra about how they'll do the best job
>And finally you're on the last day
>At this point you're just willing to pick anyone if it means getting out of here
>You sigh
>Looking over to Umbra it looks like she's fairing far better than you
>Then again, she is used to doing this type of stuff
>"And that is how we would make your dream wedding come true!" The brown mare tells you "We do hope you choose us to plan this once in a lifetime event."
>"Hmm, that is very promising." Umbra says "Thank you, my little pony. We will keep you in mind."
>The mare bows to Umbra and you before packing her things and leaving
>"And that was the last one!" Umbra says looking at the list "How are you holding up, my love?"

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>>29987204
>You lean back in your chair
"I'm holding up." You tell her "Even though I'm board out of my mind, I've still been listening."
>Umbra smiles
>"I've been starting to lose focus as well." Umbra says "I'm used to meeting ponies like this, but for a straight week? I need some fresh air."
>Hearing those words make you shoot straight out of your chair
"Now that's what I want to hear." You tell her holding out your hand "Come on, let's get out of here and head out to the back."
>Umbra smiles and places her hoof into your hand before getting up
>Walking back outside, you meet up with Ammy and head outside
>Ammy quickly runs off on her own and plays in the snow
>"She's getting much larger." Umbra says "I think I will need to use the size spell on her soon."
"How small is it going to make her?"
>"She'll still be large enough to take up the foot of our bed, but she won't get to the point where she towers over us." Umbra says "If anything she will come up to about your waist."
>That big
>"This is so much better." Umbra says as she takes a deep breath "It's nice to be free from the castle."
>You stretch as hard as you can to get rid of the stiffness in your body
>"So Anonymous do you have a preference on the ponies we should pick?" Umbra asks
"Why not go with the ones that did the festival?" You tell her "They did a good job and brought us together. Even if that wasn't their intention."
>"I was thinking about them too. That was such a magical night wasn't it?" Umbra says "It was the start of all this..."
>Umbra nuzzles up against you
>"I just wish their plans had more oomph to them." Umbra says "I don't want our wedding to be too formal to the point where it's boring, I want it to be exciting and special day for us and our guests."

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>>29977637
DONT POST THIS EVER AGAIN GO BACK TO AIE
WE HAVE TO MANY OF THESE DEAD, SHIT, OVERLY SPECIFIC AIE THREADS
REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>29987930
Yuo a fagget

>>29987831
*bored

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>>29987831
"I actually thought about asking Pinkie Pie if she would help with setting up the wedding." You tell Umbra "Parties are kinda her strong suit so I'm sure she could spice it up."
>"Oh? Does she do a good job?" Umbra asks "If so than perhaps we can have help the party planners we chose."
>You nod your head
"She helped with Cadance's wedding. The only thing is I don't know if she could keep quiet about our engagement until the invitations were sent out." You tell Umbra "Speaking of Cadance, why don't we ask her if she can do the wedding ceremony for us? Those mares did tell us that we would have to find someone to do it."
>Umbra thinks on it
>"Princess Cadance?" Umbra says "That's not a bad idea actually. She was the first pony to actually believe in our love when we met. She is a Princess of Love after all!"
"I'm sure she'll do it too." You tell Umbra "We just need to speak with her."
>"Then why don't we send some letters out tonight?" Umbra says "One to Cadance and one to Pinkie Pie. Isn't Rarity stopping by this week?"
"Yup. She said she'd be here when all the party planner stuff was done."
>"Then we should send her one as well." Umbra says "Because now that we've decided to go with the festival planners all that left it to bring them on and have get to work straight away, make and send out the invitations, and for my dress and your suit to be made!"
>You smile before you fell your stomach start to growl
>Umbra looks at your gut and laughs
>"Why don't we eat first before that?" Umbra says "Muffins and coffee can only do so much."
>Nodding your head you whistle for Ammy to come back before you all head inside

>>29987930
Tell you what Anon, when this thread dies in a month or so unless no one is paying attention it'll be the last one. Yup, yup totally not lying to you at all
>>29988391
Time to off myself like Jack was about to again

Stop lurking /v/

>>29987930
Fuck off nigga go back to the shittier part of the board yhis story is the only thing that keeps me here

>>29987831
Damn I was hoping the wolf could have become the next Sif sized badass darn.

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>>29988501
>You are Rarity
>And today is your day to woo Queen Umbra
>Placing your idea book and your gem box in your bag, you leave your boutique and make your way over to Twilight's home
>This is going to be so exciting!
>You've been drafting ideas for a wedding dress fit for a queen ever since you received the letter from Anonymous
>And last night you received another one from Anonymous telling you that Queen Umbra is now interview ponies to make her dress
>You really do hope she likes your ideas for her
>When you arrive, you find Twilight talking with Pinkie Pie
"Pinkie Pie?" You call out "What are you doing here, darling?"
>"I'm going to go see Anon with you!" Pinkie says
"What?"
>She nod her head before reaching into her mane
>She pulls out a scroll just like yours
>"Anon wrote to me and said that he and Queen Umbra needed my help!" Pinkie says "He said they need my help to make a super duper amazing party!"
>Their wedding party?
>"Well girls it looks like you're ready to go." Twilight says "Have fun and say hi to Anon and Queen Umbra for us."
>You and Pinkie nod your heads as Twilight cast the teleport spell on you two
>Opening your eyes, you find yourself inside Queen Umbra's empire
>"Oh hello, girls." You hear a familiar voice call out
>"Looking to your side, you see Princess Cadance waiting ahead of you

Bamp

>>29991647

Bamp

Anons I need help with names here. I need a name for a beach and a name for a hot springs

>>29995780
Equestria bay?
And griffin springs?
Is that good

>>29991106
>"Princess Cadance?" You and Pinkie both say "What are you doing here?"
>"I'm here for the same reason you are." Cadance says pulling out a scroll from her chest clasp "Umbra and Anon sent me a letter saying that they just wanted to talk over some tea."
>So Anonymous didn't tell her about the engagement too?
>"They told me that you and Pinkie Pie were going to show up, so I decided to wait for you two." Cadance says "Now that you're here, should we get going?"
>"Allow us to escort you to the castle." Two guards behind you say
>Turning around, Cadance nods her head
>"Thank you." Cadance says as you follow the guards to the castle

>>29996135
I like Equestria bay, but I'm trying to get something Japanese sounding for the hot springs. Just like how there's Saddle Arabia

>>29995780
Hapone Onsen
cause http://www.hakone-english.com/

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>>29996509
>You are Anon
>Currently you're killing time here in the main hall by teaching Ammy some tricks
"Alright Ammy, roll over!"
>Ammy tilts her head to the side, wagging her tail back and forth
>It's been a fun way to kill time
>Umbra right now is meeting with ponies one at a time for her dress
>She didn't want you to see of course
>Guess that whole "It's bad luck to see the bride in her dress" transfers over to Equestria
>Except she's not even putting on dresses
>She's just being superstitious and wants it to be a surprise
"Come on, Ammy. You got sitting and laying down covered." You tell her "All you have to do is roll over."
>Ammy looks down at the ground before laying on the floor
>Oh?
>She start to roll over onto her back
>Ahh!
>But then she abruptly stops and stays on her back
>She begins panting with her tail wagging from side to side
>You sigh as you kneel down and rub her belly
"I swear you're just like your adoptive mom." You tell Ammy "Mommy sometimes does this too when we're alone in our room."
>Upon hearing the door open, you and Ammy quickly get back up as a guard enters the castle
>You can her the tailor ponies outside voice their displeasure
>"Uh, Anonymous. Princess Cadance, Miss Rarity, and Miss Pinkie Pie have arrived." He says as your guests come in behind him

>>29997008
That's actually pretty neat! Thanks Anon.

Bed bump

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>Celly got the get

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>>29999220
>"Anon!" Pinkie says as she jumps over and gives you a hug
>You try to avoid the incoming death hug, but fail and become trapped by the pink pone
>"OhmygoshAnonImissedyousomuch!" Pinkie says as she squeezes the life out of you
"Pink!" You struggle to say as you push against her face "You're breaking me!"
>How can she even hold you this hard!?
>She's going to break you like the bat at this rate!
>"Come now, Pinkie Pie. You're going to hurt him." Rarity says "I don't think Queen Umbra would want that."
>Pinkie lets go you and you gasp for air
>"Wow Ammy, you've gotten bigger since the last time I saw you!" Cadance says as she rubs Ammy's head "Who's a good girl?"
>Ammy hops around before letting out a happy bark
>"Aww! Look at the puppy!" Pinkie says as she circles Ammy "She's twice as big as Winona!"
>Hearing some hoofsteps you see Ariadne come flying out of the stairwell
>"Pinkie Pie!" Ariadne says as she rushes up to her
>"Ariadne!" Pinkie says
>While the two hyper energetic ponies hug and talk to one another, Rarity and Cadance come up to you
>"You're looking well, darling." Rarity says "How have you been?"
"Pretty good aside from almost having my back broken." You say as you rub your back
>"Where is Umbra?" Cadance asks "I hope we aren't interrupting anything."
>You chuckle before glancing over at Rarity
"She's just meeting with some ponies right now." You tell her "Come on, I think she's almost done."

>>30005394
>"Pinkie Pie! We're going now!" Rarity says
>Pinkie and Ariadne stop their hopping around and follow right behind you
>Walking down the halls to the meeting room, Cadance walks right beside you
>"So Anon, how have you been?" Cadance asks "Or how's Umbra been?"
>You smile
"We've never been better." You tell her "Just wait till you see Umbra. She's practically beaming."
>Coming up to waiting room, you see the ponies waiting in line outside
>Knocking on the door, you poke your head in
>Umbra sitting at the table looking at some designs in front of her
"Hey Umbra, you done with that group yet?"
>"Anonymous! I told you not to come in here!" Umbra says "You aren't allowed to see these!"
"I can't even see them from here!" You tell her "Besides Cadance, Rarity, and Pinkie are here."
>"Oh are they?" Umbra says before looking at the purple stallion beside her "Thank you, I will continue to look over these and will let you know if I decide to go with one."
>"Thank you, my queen." The stallion says with a bow before making his way out
>Umbra places the papers in the portfolio and motions you to come into the room
>Opening the doors for the girls they enter the room
>As soon as they enter, Cadance and Rarity stop in their tracks while Pinkie and Ariadne hop over to some seats
>You wonder why until you see what their looking at
>They're looking right at the ring on Umbra's horn
>Umbra just smiles back at them

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>>30007312

iuvbo

>>30001297
Goddamn that sun pony

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>>30006655
>"Hello, Ladies!" Umbra tells them "It so nice to see-"
>"Umbra!" Cadance and Rarity say as they rush Umbra
>Cadance gets right in there and makes Umbra back up into her seat
>"It's beautiful!" Rarity says
>"Is that what I think it is!?" Cadance asks before looking to you "Anonymous, did you?!"
>You nod your head
>"Really?!" Cadance asks turning back to Umbra "Congratulations you two! I'm so happy for you!"
>Umbra smiles and playfully waves her off
>"Thank you, Cadance." Umbra says "But if you can, can you girls not mention this to anypony yet?"
>Cadance, Rarity, and Pinkie all nod their heads
>"Thank you," Umbra says "You won't have to keep the secret long as we are about to send out invitations, Pinkie Pie."
>"Oh! You need help with a wedding party!" Pinkie Pie says in her usual excited tone
>"That is correct, Pinkie Pie." Umbra says "As for you Rarity, I wanted to see what ideas you had for my dress."
>"Of course, Queen Umbra! I even brought some starter ideas I can go off of!" Rarity says
>Umbra looks over at Cadance
>"And Cadance, we would like to know if you would officiate our wedding." Umbra says
>Cadance looks shocked
>"Me?" Cadance asks "Why?"
"Because you were the first pony to actually believe in my love for Umbra." You tell her "And if not for you helping us back then instead of hindering us, we might not have made it to this point."
>"It would mean a lot to us if you would accept." Umbra says "No one else would be fit for the role than the Princess of Love herself."
>Cadance smiles before nodding her head
>"Of course I will." Cadance says "It would be my honor. Auntie did it for me, I think I should do it for somepony else now."

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>>30011571
>Umbra stands up and walks over to Cadance
>"Thank you, Cadance." Umbra tells her "You were really our only choice."
>"It's no problem." Cadance reassures her "When is the wedding so I can keep my schedule clear?"
>Umbra looks over at you for a second
>"In a month." Umbra says
>"A month?" Rarity asks "That's so soon."
>"You would be surprised." Cadance says to her "When Shining Armor and I were planning for our wedding everypony jumped at the chance to set it up for us."
>"Everypony is out to impress their Queen or Princess." Umbra says "My citizens are the same way."
>"It's one of the perks of being royalty, huh?" Cadance says with a smile on her face
>The two of them share a laugh until Umbra looks at Ariadne
>"Ariadne, can you get us some treats and refreshments?" Umbra asks "And Anonymous can you let the ponies outside know that we're done for the day?"
>Both you and Ariadne nod your heads as you step out into the hall
>"Move it! Out of the way!" You hear someone shout outside "Coming through!"
>Opening the door, you see Seth coming down the hall with a binder in his magic

Alright now that I got past my little block there I think we should start trotting along to the wedding itself

Tonight on Celebrity Showdown
The Element of Generosity herself, defending her title as best dress maker...Rarara!

The challanger, Greatest tailor in the Crystal Empire, Probably the most feminine buck in all of Equestria...Seth!

Who will make the dress? Find out after the break!

>>30012294

>>30013967

If only this thread became R63

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>>30012939
>Picking up Ariadne, you move to the side to avoid Seth bursting into the room
>"Helloooooo Queen Umbra!" Seth says as he enters the room
>When he finally opens his eyes he look around at Cadance and Pinkie Pie
>"Am I interrupting something impo-?" Seth says
>That is until he sees Rarity
>"Wait a second, you're that dress pony!" Seth says before averting his gaze to you
>You tries to whistle like you don't know anything
>"Oh no! No way in Tartarus am I letting this pony take the dress from me!" Seth says as he walks over to the left of Umbra "I'm not letting any other dressmakers here make the wedding dress and I'm definitely not letting some outsider take this from me!"
>He opens up his binder and starts showing pictures to Umbra
>"Look Queen Umbra, I can make you anything far better than that mare can do!" Seth says "If her dresses look anything like the maker, they must pretty bland."
>Rarity opens her mouth in shock as she pulls out her papers
>"Excuse me?!" Rarity says as she shows them to Umbra "Queen Umbra, I assure you that I can make a dress so extravagant that that will make his look like it was done by an amateur!"
>"What!? AMATEUR?!" Seth says "Listen sister, I'm the best tailor living in this empire! you aren't going to take this once in a lifetime job from me!"
>"You should of thought about that before you insulted a lady and her craft!" Rarity says "I am already making Anonymous's suit now I'm taking this!"
>Rarity and Seth stare each other down with murderous intent
>You swear the little lightning bolt appears between them as well
>"Anon? Can you put me down now?" Ariadne asks
>While the two argue in Umbra's face, you look at Pinkie Pie and put Ariadne down
"So yeah Pinkie, you want to help with the party?"
>"Um YEAH! Of course I will!" Pinkie says "I'll make it the best wedding party ever!"

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>>30018471
>"OKAY!" Umbra shouts, throwing her hooves into the air "Enough!"
>Both Rarity and Seth take a step back as Umbra rubs her temple
>Their papers fall down onto the table
>"I'm sorry, you two." Umbra says "There's just so much dress talk I can take in one morning."
>Rarity looks down to the ground
>"I am dreadfully sorry, Queen Umbra." Rarity says
>"I apologize, my Queen." Seth says
>Umbra looks down at their designs
>"This don't actually look too bad." Umbra says picking up one of Rarity's "The dress itself looks so elegant."
>Rarity smiles
>"It's actually just a base to work off of." Rarity says "I wanted to get a good look at you to see what I could add."
>Umbra looks over at Seth's design that landed in front of her
>This one isn't too bad either, Seth." Umbra says "I really like all these accessories."
>His ears quickly rise again
>"O-Oh! Well thank you, my Queen." Seth says "I actually just doodle them up."
>Umbra holds up the two before putting them together
>"I think I would have a winner if you both combined your ideas." Umbra says

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>>30019791
>"Combined?!" Seth says "No way. I'm sorry my Queen, but I work alone."
"You liar." You say jokingly "What about the job with Credo?"
>Seth head quickly snaps over to you
>"That's different!" Seth says "He only wrote to me because he needed my fashion sense!"
>Umbra sighs before looking at Rarity
>"How do you feel about cooperation?, Rarity?" Umbra asks
>Rarity looks at Seth
>"He may be rude..." Rarity says as she glances over his designs "But his sketches are well done. I suppose I would be fine with sharing the dress since it would be for you and Anonymous."
>Umbra smiles before looking back to Seth
>"You heard her, Seth." Umbra says "Rarity will put aside her issues with you for the dress."
>"Suck up..." Seth mumbles to himself
>"Seth. I will not tolerate you insulting my guests, especially when she is an Element of Harmony." Umbra says in a more stern voice "Come now Seth, I will give you a chance to work with Rarity here. Should you refuse then I suppose Rarity will be earning the right to make my dress.""
>You smile
>Seth groans and turns around
>He repeatedly taps his hoof on the ground, trying to weigh his options
>Eventually he sighs and nods his head
>"I don't want this opportunity to slip away from me." Seth says "Fine. I'll work with the mare."

This warm weather is killing me

>>30025192
>Umbra smiles before looking over at Rarity
>"Excellent!" Umbra says
>"Wait how is she even going to help me with the dress?" Seth asks "Doesn't she live somewhere else?"
>While Cadance and Pinkie talk with one another, you step up to the table
"Hey Rarity, want to use our guest room for a bit?"
>Rarity looks a little surprised
>"May I?" Rarity asks Umbra
>"I don't see why not." Umbra says
>"Oh but what about Sweetie Bell?" Rarity asks "I can't possibly leave her alone."
>"She may come along too." Umbra says "If you can not find somepony to look after her of course."
>Rarity smiles
>"Thank you, Queen Umbra." Rarity says as she gathers her papers "I promise not to impose on you."
>"You don't need to worry about anything." Umbra says "Feel free to tell me if Sombra tries to bother you."
>Rarity looks across the table to Seth who is gathering his papers
>"I look forward to creating something amazing for Queen Umbra with you." Rarity says
>"Yeah, yeah..." Seth says "Let's just focus on making the best damn wedding dress we can."
>As Seth takes his leave, Ariadne returns with a cart full of treats
>"Well now that, that's over with let us enjoy a nice little lunch." Umbra says "And we can let you know about our plans for the upcoming week!"

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>>30025192
Its nit too bad over here, though yeserday drenched me thouroughly with a big rain comin from pennsylvania

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>>30030522

>Finally finished Persona 5
I was putting it off for so long because I didn't want to get hit like I did in P3 with emotions

>>30026113
>After having lunch with Cadance, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie you had Pinkie meet with the party planners to get acquainted
>They were thrown off... To say the least, but the welcomed her help once they learned she helped with Cadance's wedding
>Pinkie unlike Rarity would not be staying here and would come back on the last few days to add her own charm to the party
>As the sun began to set, you and Umbra treated the girls to dinner before seeing them off
>Along the way, Umbra let the girls know who was going to be the first pony to receive their invitation
>Cadance said that it would be funny because she was going to meet with said pony in about three days
>Umbra then joked for Cadance to take a picture for her
>Rarity said she would return tomorrow with all her supplies so she can get right to work
>With everything being all set, there was nothing left to do but say goodbye
>As they teleported away, you and Umbra walked back to the castle
"So Umbra, do you even have the invitation?"
>Umbra shoots you a toothy grin before pulling out the card from under her cape
>"I spent all morning making this." Umbra says "I put every ounce of love I have into it."
>You chuckle
"You're such a strange mare." You tell her "But I guess that's why I love you."
>Umbra tucks the invitation under her cape and you both return home

Little rushed, but I was writing myself into a hole

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>>30032857
>Three days have passed since Cadance went to go see Umbra
>You are Celestia
>You've decided to bring all the princesses for a little get together here in the castle
>You wrote to Umbra to see if she would like to come, but she wrote back saying she was busy with something important
>"So why did Umbra write to you?" Luna asks "You still have yet to tell us."
>Taking a sip of your tea, you glance over to Cadance
>"She just wanted to talk." Cadance says "We also went out to lunch and she treated me to dinner."
>"Rarity and Pinkie Pie said you all had fun." Twilight says
>Why would Umbra just invite Cadance, Rarity, and Pinkie Pie, but not Twilight or the others?
>"We did!" Cadance says with a smile "Umbra's empire is always fun to visit."
>"I really wish she would warm up to the idea of a train leading from your Crystal Empire to hers." Luna says
>"How come you don't go see them, Luna?" Cadance asks
>"It's... Difficult for us to face them after the long history we have." Luna says "We do not have the courage to face them after everything... I did to Anonymous."
>You place your cup back down
"You should still go and see them." You tell your little sister "If Anonymous could forgive me, and Umbra can actually start to warm up to me, I'm sure the same could happen for-"
>Your sentence is abruptly cut off as what looks like a silver card appears out of thin air in front of you

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>>30033325
>You jump at it's sudden appearance
>It has a black trimming around it and a seal on the front
>"What is it, sister?" Luna asks
"It looks more like an invitation of some kind..." You say taking it out of the air "This was sent by Umbra."
>"Cadance?" Twilight asks "Why do you look so happy?"
>Cadance just continues to smile
"To Princess Celestia..." You say reading the outside
>It looks extremely well done
"So formal." You say "Is she planning a party?"
>Well it nice to see that she actually invite you
>Undoing the seal, you hesitantly open the letter
>"What's it say, Princess Celestia?" Twilight asks
"Dear Celestia, you are cordially invited to the wedding of Queen Umbra and the human Anonymous..."
>The volume of your voice descends lower and lower as you realize what this says

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>>30033764
Oh this is golden.

>>30031180

>>30036525

Bump city?

>>30038716
Youre in attitude city here

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>>30033764
>Not even as soon as you finish reading the invitation two more appear in front of Luna and Twilight
>"O-Oh there is one for us too?" Luna asks as she takes hers
>"Anonymous and Queen Umbra are getting married!?" Twilight says "Isn't that amazing, Princess Celestia?"
>You continue to stare at the card
>"Princess Celestia?" Twilight asks
>Doing your best to not let your emotions over take you, you give Twilight a fake smile
>"It is." You tell her "I am so h-happy for them."
>Luna is staring at you
>"That's why Umbra wanted to see me." Cadance says "Umbra and Anon asked me to be the one to officiate their wedding."
>"So that means that Pinkie Pie going to help them with the party and Rarity is helping with her dress?" Twilight asks "No wonder why Rarity is staying over there right now."
>Cadance nods her head
>Twilight jumps as three more show up in front of her
>"These are for Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, and Applejack." Twilight says "I should get back to Ponyville and give these back to them."
>"And I should be heading back home as well." Cadance says "I'm sure Shining has his hooves full."
>Saying your goodbyes Twilight and Cadance make their leave, leaving you and Luna alone

>>30039522
Get your monkey suit and popcorn ready because this wedding is gonna be good.

>>30039522
Sunbutt btfo

>>30037465

>>30040844

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>>30039522
>You let out a depressed sigh before putting down the invitation
>They're actually doing it
>"Are you alright, sister?" Luna asks "We could tell that you were lying back there."
"How am I supposed to be alright with this?" You tell her "The man I love is marrying another mare."
>A mare that brought you to your senses before you hurt that man
>"Sister, we know your heart still yearns for him, but you must not let how you feel about about this engagement stop you from being happy for Anonymous." Luna says "We should support him and be there, even if we did fail to capture his heart."
>You look up towards the window
"Luna, let's switch now." You tell her "It is getting to be that time."
>Luna nods her head as you both look out the window
>As you lower the sun, Luna raises the moon
"You're right." You tell her "I need to be happy for them, even if I do not want them to wed."
>You begin to pace back and forth
"How am I even going to be able to sit through the wedding?!" You ask Luna "I don't think I could do it! And if that happens it would be the rudest thing I have ever done."
>You begin to panic
>"Sister, you need to calm down!" Luna says "We still have time to prepare you for it."
>Luna looks at her invitation
>"Two weeks..." Luna says "Can you do it?"
>You stare right back at her
"I don't know."

>>30041945

>>30043257

>>30043825

>>30044387

>>30043825

Little stuck on how to progress the story here

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>>30046713
Twu wuv

>>30046713
Maybe a dream therapy with all involved parties so Celestia doesn't make a total ass of herself. Something like a fake wedding maybe?

>>30046713
Or just let her make an ass of herself. As long as we get the "Speak now or forever hold your peace" bs, I'll be happy

Sure wish I could post from my laptop but this thread ain't having it

>>30042411
>You are Rarity
>Since you've been staying here in Queen Umbra's castle, you've been working at Seth's workshop so that Anon doesn't see the dress
>You did decide to bring Sweetie Bell with you since she wanted to see Anon again
>So far she has been enjoying her time here
>She even seemed to make friends with a filly by the name of Cynthia
>Thinking back on it, Sweetie Bell was quick to point out Cynthia's blank flank and they quickly hit it off from there
>Now Sweetie Bell is spending her time with Eris at the school while you work on Queen Umbra's wedding dress
"Do you think these gems clash with the rest of the dress?" You ask
>Seth glances up from his ornaments
>"No, you're trying to incorporate her eye color, right? I think the red, green, and purple gems fit nicely on the white." Seth says adjusting his glasses "Just keep them around the bottom lining of the dress. We don't want to overdo it."
>He looks back down at the ornaments
>"I really wonder if we should have done a black wedding dress..." Seth says "It's just that I've hardly ever seen Queen Umbra in an all white dress. Maybe these silver ornaments will bring some more life to it."
>You sigh before taking a step back
>You really want Queen Umbra to love this dress
"I do hope she likes it." You tell him as take your glasses off
>"Well we still have a week and a half to make changes if necessary." Seth says "And seeing how far we've gotten in just three days, I don't think we need to worry."
>Sitting down on the couch he has, you pull over two large gift boxes
>Seth looks over to you
>"What's in the boxes?" Seth asks

We'll come back to Celestia prepping don't worry

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Test?

>>30048518
Hmm, looks good to earth standards, but for Umbra I'm not sure. Seems like she might have more Gothic tones on her dress, but that's just me. I'm an engineer, not a wedding planner!

>>30048518
Shots broke again

>>30048955
Okay so I can't post on my laptop because of 4chan being retarded. So I'm just going to have to wait to post this next part then.

>>30045825

>>30048512
>You look down at the white box and black box
"Oh these?" You ask "They're just some thing I made for Queen Umbra in my spare time."
>"You made something while we've been making the wedding dress?" Seth asks
"I like to take on multiple challenges."
>"I can respect that." Seth says "I like to do the same."
>You hold them up
>"So what is in those boxes?" Seth asks
>You smile
"The white one holds something very important for Queen Umbra's wedding night." You say "While the black holds the same, but for a different occasion."
>Seth thinks about it for a moment
>"Wait a second, did you make her what I think you made her?" Seth asks
>You smile and give him a wink
"Would you mind if I run off for a moment to give her these?"
>"I don't care. You're keeping up with me with the dress." Seth says "I was about to go out on a break myself."
>You smile as you take the boxes
>"What do you want from the sweet shop?" Seth asks "I'll make sure to bring you something."
"Something with apples would be nice."
>Heading outside Seth's shop you turn and make your way towards the castle

Really starting to wonder why I can't post in this thread, but every other thread is no problem

jjjjj

>>30049493

>>30051332

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Yup for some reason I just can't post a part without it telling me Connection Error, yet I can post stuff like this. Maybe when I'm feeling up to going through the hassle I'll copy and and paste it from Pastebin onto here using my phone.

>>30048811
I tried telling you last night but lolcantpost. I wish I could Photoshop because I would have turn the pink to red, make the dress a little more gray, remove the crown and earrings, and make the little ornaments silver like Umbra's armor

>>30050393
>When you arrive at the castle. you find Ariadne tending to the main hall
>"Hello Miss Rarity!" Ariadne says "Are you looking for Queen Umbra?"
>You nod your head
"Do you know where she is? I want to give her these outfits I made for her."
>Ariadne nods her head
>"Follow me! She just finished day court and went upstairs with Anonymous to her study." Ariadne says as she head towards the stairs
>Following right behind the white mare you take a closer look at her outfit
"Ariadne, I must say I love your outfit!" You tell her "Who made it for you?"
>"Seth did!" Ariadne says "But we maids are the ones that designed it!"

Figured it out. It seems I just have to gut my parts into two until this gets fixed or something

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>>30053439
I wonder if any other writefriends are having this problem or is it just me? Anyway I think that it from me today Anons my head hurts and I'm tired of trying to solve 4chan's Da Vinci Code to post updates to the story so I'm just gonna play some SMITE till it figures itself out.

Jesus what the hell happened

I left off at some sort of prison riot, could someone give me the Tl;dr?

>>30053519
Anon and friends stop riot
Celestia loses her shit, says Discord is looking for Anon
Umbra wakes up Eris to counter that
>Clop
Sombra got his body back thanks to Eris's magic
Umbra executes Alastor
>Almost Clop
Anon get kidnapped by Discord and brought back to Canterlot to be with Celestia
Umbra sends Arthas and boys to get Anon
Mane Six help Anon's friends
Anon comes home, brings the Mane Six so they can meet Umbra
They like Umbra and choose to sit out of any future conflict
Celestia loses her shit and declares war
>Clop?
Marie turns traitor and gives the location of the empire to Luna who gives it to Celestia
Brings Twilight and Cadance along even though they don't want to go
>Clop before the big battle
Umbra vs Celestia finally happens with an opening of Sombra vs Luna
Celestia loses to Umbra and her Bayonetta powers
Celestia finally "gives up" on trying to get Anon back
Umbra and Anon finally get to enjoy their relationship in peace
Umbra and Anon adopt a wild wolf pup and name it Ammy
Anon wants to get huge to protect Umbra and her ponies
Anon purposes to Umbra
4chan breaks and I think I figured out how to fix it thanks to other story threads

I think that's all of it

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>>30053727
>Anon purposes to Umbra
>4chan breaks
Damn Rager...guess the board can't handle the love

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>>30053439
"Really?" You tell her "You maids have quite the fashion sense."
>Reaching the top floor, Ariadne looks back at you and smiles
>"It's my job to make sure all the maids are happy!" Ariadne says "And I think in order to work good you need look good!"
>You chuckle at her statement before she returns downstairs
>Upon hearing reaching the door that leads to Queen Umbra's study, you can hear the Queen giggling from inside
>"Anonymous! Stop~!" You hear Queen Umbra say before another giggle escapes her "What if Somepony walks in?"
>O-Oh my...
>"Oh well. They can watch." Anonymous says "We really haven't had anytime to ourselves since we started planning this wedding."
>"But here in the study?" Queen Umbra asks "Why not our bedroom?"
>"You're the one that pulled me into here." Anonymous says "Besides you said that you just wanted to fool around for a little bit."
>"I know I said that, but..." Queen Umbra says
>You hesitate for a moment before knocking on the door
>You hear a gasp and some shuffling around coming from the other side of the door

>>30053893
hehe

Bamp

>>30054247
>"W-Who's out there?!" Queen Umbra asks
"It's me, R-Rarity."
>Hearing footsteps walking up the door, the door opens and there stands Anonymous
>"Hey Rarity, what's up?" Anonymous asks in his best attempt to act natural
>Glancing down at his chest, you see that his vest is open and his dress shirt has a few buttons undone
>Looking behind him you can see Queen Umbra trying to fix her mane and attire
>"Is Seth acting like a jerk to you?" Anonymous asks
>You look up and him and blush before shaking your head
"N-No it's nothing like that, Darling." You tell him "I just wanted to give Queen Umbra these outfits I made for her."
>You show Anonymous the boxes before he moves out of the way
>Walking into the room while Anonymous buttons up his shirt and vest, you come up to Queen Umbra who welcomes you with a warm smile
>"Hello Rarity, I hope everything is going well." Queen Umbra says "I heard you say that you made me some outfits?"
"I did." You tell her holding up the boxes "I was wondering if you would try them on."
>Umbra looks at the boxes before nodding her head
>"Why not I have some spare time." Umbra says "Let us go to my bedroom."
>Nodding your head, you begin to walk with Queen Umbra until you're about to pass Anon
"You can't see the outfits." You tell him "They need to be a surprise!"
>Anon looks up to Umbra
>"I think Sombra was looking for you, beloved." Queen Umbra says "I'll catch with you later."
>"Alright, just be nice to my fiancée, Rarity." Anonymous says as he leaves and heads towards the stairs

>>30055031

I'm posting this to bump the thread, but also to help give some publicity to another thread on /mlp/ which can be found here >>30041720

The OP of that thread would really appreciate it if you could take a moment check it out and take the poll that they've made. You can find more information about it in the thread itself. Even if you don't want to take the poll, you can help out by using this copypasta whenever you bump a thread on /mlp/ until May 14th, after which point the poll will close. Please only use this copypasta if you were otherwise going to bump a thread without contributing content to prevent spam.

rgcbytv

>>30057305

>>30058459

>>30059446

Bumperino for some horse lingerie

>>30055364
>Walking down the hall with Queen Umbra, she looks to you
>"Um, H-How much did you hear back there?" Queen Umbra asks
>Your face begins to feel warm
"I-It just sounded as if you and Anonymous were about to fool around."
>Queen Umbra blushes before looking away again
>"We just wanted to have some time to ourselves." Queen Umbra says "Him and I have been so busy as of late."
>Now it sounds like you've ruined their alone time
"I'm sorry, Queen Umbra." You tell her "I didn't mean to ruin your moment with Anon."
>"No Rarity, it's fine." Queen Umbra says "It was actually for the best."
"Why is that?"
>"Sombra has been looking to teach Anonymous what it means to be a king. Since I am to be wed to him, he will become the king." Queen Umbra says "Anonymous thinks it's a waste of time... And I agree with him."
>You tilt your head to the side
"But isn't it important for Anonymous to learn about the role he is about to enter?"
>"Rarity, you should know how Anonymous is. He doesn't like the idea of ruling over anypony." Queen Umbra says "The only ponies he is comfortable with ordering are his friends during battle."
>She's right
>Anonymous isn't like that at all
>"So we talked and decided that things will remain the same once we are married." Queen Umbra says "He will have to get used to being called king, but he won't half to worry about running the empire with me. I can do that on my own."
>You smile as you come up to her room
>"He may need to join me occasionally for day court." Queen Umbra says

>>30061628
>Entering the room, Queen Umbra closes the door behind her
>"Anyway Sombra would ruin out alone time and nag us at the same time." She tells you "He can be quiet annoying like that."
>You laugh as Queen Umbra takes a seat on her bed
>"So Rarity, what is it you want me to see?" Queen Umbra asks
>You hand her the both boxes
"I was wondering if you would actually try them on." You tell her "I need to see if they look perfect on you."
>Queen Umbra looks intrigued as she takes the boxes
>She undoes the bow on the black box before opening the lid
>A surprised expression makes it's way onto her face
>She slowly pull out the black and purple corset before looking at you
>"Is this l-l-lingerie?!" Queen Umbra asks, her face red with embarrassment
>You nod your head
"There are also some black stocking in there for you!" You tell her "In the white one is a more wedding night oriented set."
>"O-Oh my..." Queen Umbra says as she pulls out the stocking "Why did you make these?"
"I assume no sleeping is going to happen on your wedding night. I just wanted to make the night more passionate for you two" You tell her "And between you and me? Anonymous has an absolute weakness to lingerie."

You know exactly what picture of Umbra I'm using for the black lingerie

>>30061470
Ayyyy

>>30061674
I don't. Can you show me?

>>30061964
S E C O N D I N G

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>>30061964
>>30062078

>>30062713
There has to be an uncensored version of this somewhere...

Bamp

>>30061674
>"An absolute weakness?" Queen Umbra asks as she looks throught the box
>You nod your head
"When Anon first arrived in Equestria, I was the one that took him in. He did need new clothes after all." You tell her "And he was very helpful around the boutique and even with helping me gather gems."
>Those days were so nice
"But before he went to live with Princess Celestia in Canterlot, I would sometimes model my dresses or other bits of clothing for him to get his opinion." You tell her "One day I had request from one of the bakers in town. She asked if I could make her some lingerie so that she could spice up her nights with her husband."
>Queen Umbra face turns even brighter as she pulls out the thinly veiled nightgown
"I accepted the request and got right to work on crafting her outfit. It's only that when I finished I was starting to doubt if it was appealing enough." You tell her "That's where Anon came in. I told him that I was just going to show him a dress. When I came out in the lingerie, his jaw dropped."
>You giggle
"I went ahead and struck a few poses for him, which cause his face to light up bright red! He even began to shift around in his seat, placing a hand over his private bits." You tell her "I remember the last thing he said was that he needed to sit outside for a moment. When I told him it was cold and snowy he said that was the point!"
>Umbra nervously laughs before looking down at her new clothes
"He eventually came back inside and told me that he didn't think a pony could look so good in lingerie."
>Umbra smiles before taking a deep breath
>"V-Very well." Queen Umbra says as she walks over to her closet "Give me a moment to change into these."

>>30063129
There is. I have it. I just don't want to get b&

>>30063880
I found it human pussy but still...
HNNGGG..

>>30060827

>>30065674

>>30063880
>Sitting down on the chair in Queen Umbra's room, you patiently wait for the Queen
>"This is so strange!" Queen Umbra says from her closet "I-I've never worn anything like this."
"I'm sure you will look amazing in it, Queen Umbra." You reassure her
>"Oh! My tail goes in here." Queen Umbra says "I like how this covers my flank."
>Finally it seems Queen Umbra finishes getting dressed as she steps out of her closet
>She walks like a nervous mare out of her closet
"Sweet Celestia..."
>She looks so natural without her queenly attire on
>The lingerie hugs her voluptuous figure perfectly
>And those stocking cover her legs perfectly!
>Rarity, you managed to make an already attractive mare even MORE attractive
>"H-How do I look?" Queen Umbra asks
"I can see why Anon loves you..." You mumble out
>"What was that?" Umbra asks "I couldn't quite hear you."
>You shake your head
"You look stunning!" You say getting up from your chair
>You turn around and quickly wipe your nose of the small bit blood
>Umbra turns and faces her mirror before looking over herself
>"I feel sexy." Queen Umbra says as she poses in front of the mirror "And you're sure Anonymous will love this?"
>You nod your head
"I honestly don't think he'll be able to keep his hands off you." You tell her "You may be able to use that outfit to get Anon to do what you want."
>"What I want..." Queen Umbra says before pulling you into a hug "Thank you, Rarity. I'll be sure to let you know if your hard work pays off."
"Q-Q-Queen Umbra!" You try to say with a red face as Queen Umbra lets go of you "I need to get back to Seth. But first I need to sit in some snow."
>A confused look appears on her face as you rush out of the room

Street Fighter Beta has my attention for the moment sorry

>>30066875

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>>30066913
>"Speak now or forever hold your peace." Cadance says to the entire room
>...
>Rising from your seat, you hold your hoof out
"I-!"
>"Sister!" Luna snaps at you "You told us that you would not do it this time!"
>You are Celestia
>And you have one week to prepare yourself for the wedding between Umbra and your sunshine
"Luna, this is more of a nightmare than a dream!" You tell her "Why are you putting me through this?"
>"Because you asked us too!" Luna says as her horn lights up "And we've been at this for four nights!"
>You've been practicing trying to hold your tongue during the wedding
>It's difficult
>Your surroundings disappear before reappearing
>Sitting next to Luna again, the dream version of Cadance begins to speak again while the dream version of Anonymous and Umbra stare at one another
>"You need to keep quiet throughout the entire ceremony." Luna says "Could you imagine what Umbra would do to you if you did that at the actual wedding."
>She would most likely beat you and throw you out a window
>"Not to mention it would be rude to Anonymous." Luna says "It's a special day for him too."
>You close your eyes
>"We still need to find the right gift for them as well." Luna says "But for now, we need to get this out of the way."
>You sigh
"All right. Once more."

>>30067548
L

>>30068057

Be back in a bit. I need to get some stuff done real quick

>>30068703

>>30069109

>>30069494
rx5f5

>>30070062

>>30070849

>>30067639
>You are Umbra
>And it's almost time for your wedding!
>With only five days remaining, you have decided to visit Rarity and Seth to see your dress while Anonymous helps Pinkie Pie with what she needs for your party
>Coming up to Seth's workshop, you open the door
>Stepping into the shop, the bell rings above your head
"Hello?"
>Hoofsteps can be heard above as Seth come down the stairs form the back
>"Queen Umbra! We were wondering when you were going to show up!" Seth says "Please come upstairs."
>With a smile you follow Seth upstairs to find Rarity waiting for you
>Next to her is what you assume to be your dress
>It's covered by a sheet
>"Please take a seat." Rarity says pushing you to a chair

Bumperino

Anons, I'm fucking drained from today. I promise I'll get some more parts out tomorrow

>>30072041

>>30074473
I believe in you rager

>>30073054
༼ つ _ ༽つ Rager TAKE MY ENERGY ༼ つ _ ༽つ

>>30073054
>>30075795

༼ つ O_O ༽つ Rager TAKE MY ENERGY ༼ つ O_O ༽つ

That's better

>>30075402

10

>>30073054
>Taking your seat on the chair, you anxiously await the reveal
>Seth and Rarity stand side by side next to your dress
>"I tell you, Queen Umbra. This was the hardest project I have ever done." Seth says
>"The same could be said for me." Rarity says "But I enjoyed the challenge."
"I knew you two could do it if you worked together!" You tell them "Now come on! The wait has been killing me!"
>Seth and Rarity look at each other before they use their magic to remove to sheet
>When they reveal your new dress, you stand up in awe
>Your dress teeters on being white or a very light silver
>Almost like the armor around your legs
>Speaking of which there is a large pendent in the center of your dress that shines like your armor
>A large red gem resting withing the pendent shines in the center of it
>Walking around it, you like the red piece of fabric on the back
>It's almost like your cape
>Gems line the trimming of the dress, each one matching the colors in your eyes
>"Do you think she likes it?" You hear Seth whisper to Rarity
>"Yes. I'm sure she does!" Rarity whispers back
>Turning around, you see Seth and Rarity holding each other nervously
>A smile forms on your face
"I absolutely love it." You tell them "Excellent work, you two."

>>30077929

Is it wrong that I want to ship SethxRarity?

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>>30080692
If you don't mind pairing her up with who he was based on appearance wise then go ahead

>>30081735
hehe. Thats even better

>>30080326

>>30081735
This is the most convuluted way of saying she should go fuck herself

>>30079209
>Rarity and Seth both let out a relieved sigh
>A smile crosses your face as you turn back to your dress
"I can't wait to finally put it on." You say "I assume it will fir, Seth?"
>He nods his head
>"Of course, I still have all your measurements and we made sure follow them." Seth says "This dress should fit like a dream on you."
"So how do you plan to get this into the castle?"
>"When you leave, we will carefully and pack it up and bring it to the castle." Seth says "The thing is, when do you want us to bring it?"
>You ponder the question
"Why don't we take it right now!?" You tell them "Anonymous won't look at it so long as we cover it."
>Seth nods his head
>"Alright, let us just prepare it and we'll get it over to the castle." Seth says "Come on, Rarity."
>After waiting for the two dress ponies to get your dress ready for transport, you all traveled back to the castle
>When you got up to your room, they hid your dress into your closet so that Anonymous doesn't try to peak at it
"Here you go you two. One hundred bits each." You say as you hand them their payments "Thank you so much for creating the dress that I will wear happily on my wedding day."
>"No Queen Umbra, thank you." Rarity says "I so happy that you allowed me to be apart of history."
>"Same for me my Queen." Seth says "It was an honor to make your dress."
>As the two say their goodbyes, they leave to go out to lunch leaving you alone in your room
>A smile rests upon your face as you turn to head out to look for Anonymous
"It's almost time!"

>>30082957
What if it's Face Rollins?

>>30083500

>"I assume it will fir, Seth?"
*fit

>"and we made sure follow them."
*"and we made sure TO follow them."

>Anonymous doesn't try to peak at it
*peek

Proofread your shit, Rager.

>>30083924
How new are you nigga

>>30080326

>>30084351
Been here since post 1 of this story. I've helped Rager improve his writing before, and I aim to do it again since he actually listens to criticism.

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>>30083924
>>30085786
It was really late and the sun was coming up so I was freaking out and trying to get to bed. It a shit excuse, but thanks for pointing out those errors for me Anon. I appreciate it.

>>30085205

>>30088299

>>30089550

>>30083500
>"Are you paying attention, Anonymous?!" Sombra asks
>You are Anon
>Letting out a giant yawn, you sit back against your chair
>"Of course you aren't." Sombra says with a sigh before shaking his head "You do realize you become the king of this empire in five days, correct?"
Sombra has been trying to lecture you on how to act and how to be a king
>Feels like your back in school, if the class was a war room
"Sombra, is any of this really necessary?" You ask "I mean I told you that I have no intention on ordering ponies or making big decisions. Umbra even said that things would remain the same! She would handle all her usual tasks and I would worry about keeping everyone safe. And I would help her out with Day Court."
>"And what happens if Umbra falls ill, or she is off on some diplomatic meeting with Celestia?" Sombra asks
>You give him that look that says "Really?"
>"Okay scratch that last part." Sombra says "But my point still remains. You need to learn how to act like a king. Who is going to handle all the usual tasks then when Umbra can't?"
>"Why you will, dear brother!" You hear Umbra call out
>Looking towards the door, you see Umbra standing right there

>>30090658

Bamp

>>30091042
>"You know this isn't my empire." Sombra says
>"Yes, but you are somepony that I can rely on." Umbra says as she walks over to you "Hello, my beloved."
"Hey Umbra, how the dress go?"
>"I can't wait for you to see it." Umbra says "I'll just leave it at that."
>You exchange a little kiss with your soon to be wife before she takes her seat next to you
>"So you don't plan on having him do anything then?" Sombra asks
>"Oh don't be like that." Umbra tells him "You and I were raised as royalty, Anonymous wasn't. You can't expect me to just throw him into the fire like that."
>Sombra sighs
>"As I told you before, Anonymous will sit down with me and help me with day court. He'll be there for our meetings with the captains." Umbra says "But Anonymous isn't the type to order ponies around. That's for me to do since I've been doing it from the start."
>Umbra places a hoof on your hand
>"Besides Sombra I need you." Umbra says "After the wedding Anonymous and I will be going on a honeymoon. Therefore neither of us will be here."
>"You haven't even decided where you two are going!" Sombra says
>Umbra shrugs
>"No, but we will figure it out." Umbra says

>>30093424
Not bad

>>30092755

>>30094952

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I like Kevinsano's version of Queen Umbra, she has the biggest cock.

>>30095641

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>>30093424
>Sombra just stares at you and Umbra
>"You two are something else." Sombra says "I blame Anonymous."
"Huh?!"
>"The same could be said about you, Sombra." Umbra says "Your constant whining makes you more trouble than your worth sometimes."
>You chuckle
>Sombra growls at Umbra
>"I only kid. Lighten up, Sombra!" Umbra says "Your sister is soon about to marry the man she loves most! Can't you at least be a little bit excited for her?"
>"This is me being excited." Sombra says with an eyebrow raised
>You and Umbra exchange glances
>"That's a little disappointing." Umbra says looking back to him
>Sombra rolls his eyes
>"Anyway I came in here to tell you something, my beloved." Umbra says
"What is it?"
>"Twilight wrote to me. She says that her and Celestia are going to be bringing your friends over two days before the wedding." Umbra says

>>30096474

>>30097362
>"Have you even figured out where you're going to put all these ponies?" Sombra asks
>Umbra nods her head
>"There are lots of vacant rooms in the hotel here in the empire. They can stay there." Umbra says "Twilight and her friends are going to be staying downstairs with Ariadne. And lastly Celestia, Luna, Cadance, and her husband will have the guest room next to ours."
>"Really? You are okay with Celestia being that close to you on your wedding night?" Sombra asks
>"More then okay..." Umbra says with a sinister tone
>That tone scares you a little
>"Anonymous have you picked your best stallion yet?" Umbra asks
>You shake your head before standing up
"I was actually about to go out to lunch with the guys right now." You tell her "Do you have a preference?"
>Umbra shakes her head
>"You decide which one of your friends should be your best stallion." Umbra says "It something I have no say in."
>You smile before planting a little smooch on her nose
"Alright then, I'm off." You tell her "I'll see you later, Umbra."
>Waving goodbye to Sombra, you head out of the room before leaving the castle to meet up with your friends

Injustice 2.
Will post another part at the usual time.

Bumperino

>>30098692
>Opening the doors to The Stray Mare, the bell rings above your head
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g9SB7U7kXoE&t
>You see your friends look over at you from their booths
>They wave you over and you walk over there to take your seat
>"What took you so long?" Lance asks "The pizza is already cooking."
"Sorry about that guys." You tell them "Sombra was doing the usual lecture."
>"Still?" Biggs says "Man Sombra's taking away from our limited bro time."
"Limited?"
>"I've been trying to tell these two that nothing is going to change." Wedge says "But they keep thinking you're going to disappear on us."
>"We didn't think you were going to show up." Lance says
>You smile
"Well I had to show up. Umbra reminded me that I needed to choose a best stallion."
>All three of your friends look up at you
>"Do you know who you're going to choose?" Wedge asks

So Anons it's time to chose. Which bro will be Anon's best stallion?
I'd like to know early so I can jump right into it tomorrow

Also I honestly laughed about this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lSFubVTYSNw&feature=youtu.be&t=311

>>30099965
I would say Wedge

I vote Lance
Cynthia as flower girl
Amma as ring bearer

Shit would be cute af

>>30099965
I would say Lance too, but he asks the captain first who rejects the notion.

>>30099685

>>30100661
Lance is indeed quite bro tier

>>30099965
>Also I honestly laughed about this
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lSFubVTYSNw&feature=youtu.be&t=311
Kek

>>30101548

>>30103516

>>30104298

>>30105277
So lance then?

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>>30099965
>You ponder the question
"I haven't honestly." You tell them "You guys have been like brothers to me ever since I arrived here at the empire. I know you are all going to stand up there with me, but picking a best stallion is tough."
>They all smile back at you
>"We know that we wouldn't have made it this far without you too, Anon." Biggs says "Ever since you showed up here in the empire, I've been able to get so much stronger because I'm trying to keep up with you with protecting the empire. You're my rival, Anon."
>"Our lives we're pretty boring before you showed up. We would just wake up and go to recruit training" Lance says "Then here you come along and we get promoted to the guard after such a long time of waiting!"
>Lance chuckles as he scratches the back of his head
>"Also thanks to you getting all up close and personal with our Queen, I was able to finally get a mare friend." Lance says with a big smile "I'm honestly wondering what's going to happen when we go to your wedding."
>"Anon, because of you I was able to grow more as a pony." Wedge says "Before you showed up I was pretty content on our current situation, but now I'm out here doing things I never would have done before like swiping one of a kind gems from lava spiders."
>"Still can't believe you did that without us..." Biggs mumbles
>You laugh to yourself before looking up at your friends
"We've been through a lot." You tell them "And I'm sure we still have more adventures in stow for us. But I just want you guys to know that whatever happens, we're all brothers."
>Your friends all smile back at you
>Letting out a sigh you look up at Lance
"Lance. I'm picking you."

>>30105819
Yes! Sorry I was just busy doing webm related

>>30106521
>Lance actually looks a little surprised
>"Really?" Lance asks "You're not going to ask Wedge?"
"If I could I'd have you all be my best stallion." You tell him "All of you holding the ring at once."
>"But that would look extremely silly." Wedge says
>"Isn't that our reputation though?" Biggs asks "We're just the jokers that Arthas took on ."
"But now we're Arthas's elite squad!" Lance says "That still sounds kind of silly..."
>Lance looks back at you
>"You sure?" He asks
>You nod your head
"You were the first pony I talked to when we all met." You say "It also seems right after everything we've been through. Remember the dungeon and our stay at the hospital."
>Lance smiles
>"Well that wouldn't had happened if I hadn't call Alastor out during the festival party." Lance says before chuckling "Thanks Anon."
>You nod your head as Erika comes around with the pizza
>"So Anon, can Cynthia be a flower girl?" Lance asks

>>30105277

>>30107754

>>30109022

It's storming over here. So if I don't post for a bit, it means I angered Zeus with my choice with the story.

Bumperino

>>30106797
>Two days before the wedding
>Waking up early in the morning, you, Umbra, and Sombra went out to the front gate to meet with Celestia and Twilight who were going to bring all your friends from Ponyville today
>"Are you excited to see your old friends, my beloved?" Umbra asks
>You nod your head
"I'm honestly a little nervous." You tell her "I don't know what my old friends are going to think of you."
>"When you put it like that it makes me feel a little nervous." Umbra says
>You turn around and smile before giving her a kiss
"I'm sure they'll love you." You tell Umbra "Especially since Twilight and the girls gave them the real story."
>"This is true." Sombra says "They should accept you."
>Umbra smiles as you hear a portal open up behind you
>You see Celestia, Luna, Cadance, Twilight, the girls, Shining Armor, Applejack's family, and many other ponies from back home behind them
>"Hello Umbra." Celestia says "We have arrived."

I think it's safe to say I won't die in my sleep due to a tornado tonight.
Sorry about that, Anons. It was just crazy tonight.

>>30111827

>>30112686

>>30111986
be safe

>>30111986
Youre in tornado alley?

>>30111986
>All your friends behind Celestia start looking all around the empire in awe
>Umbra smiles and steps forward
>"Welcome close friends of Anonymous to my Crystal Empire!" Umbra says to the crowd "We have been expecting you and are so happy to see that you all made it here safe and sound for our wedding."
>Umbra look out towards the empire
>"I do hope you hope enjoy your time here." Umbra says "There is plenty to do here as well spots to unwind."
>Umbra walks back to you and Sombra
>"If you need anything please do not hesitate to ask the guards for help and or directions." Umbra says "They already know that you are all guests."
>"I like this one, Big Mac!" Granny Smith says
>Umbra smiles once more
>"I'll take it from here, Queen Umbra." You head Cyprus say as he comes up to you all "I'll lead them to where they'll be staying."
>"And we'll show them around." Twilight says "Once we're done we'll return to the castle."
>Umbra nods her head as your friends all come up to say hi and to congratulate you on finding a nice mare to settle down with
>You promised to talked to them more after they all got settled in
>Cynthia came flying out of nowhere to see Sweetie Bell again who this time had Scootaloo and Applebloom with her
>As they skip away you look at Umbra
>"I think that went great." Umbra says
"Yeah, I was worried that something was going to-"
>"What is it?" Umbra asks with an eyebrow raised
>You just point over behind her
>When she turns around you see Sombra and Shining Armor are staring each other down

>>30114016
Thank you, Anon

>>30115023
Lower Wisconsin. It's weird though because we've never had the sirens actually go off. Eh nothing really happened.

>>30113839

>>30116720

>>30116249
>Cadance is standing between the two stallions
>"Shining Armor." Sombra says
>Cadance looks to her right at Shining
>"Sombra." Shining says back
>Cadance looks to her left at Sombra
>Sombra looks over him for a moment
>"You are looking well." Sombra says "I hope I did not cause any permanent damage to your horn."
>"It's fine." Sombra says "Thank you."
>Alright enough of this pussy footing around
"Will you just make up already?" You ask butting into their "Conversation"
>"It's only going to get more awkward if you two keep acting like this." Cadance says "Besides I told you that Sombra is a changed pony, Shining."
>"Maybe we should put Shining Armor into Sombra's room." Umbra says
>"How about no!" They both say at her
>Umbra giggles to herself
>"Well you two will have two days to get along. Now then." Umbra says "Allow me to show you where you ladies and stallion will be staying."
>"Thank you, Umbra." Celestia says
>Turning around you follow Umbra back to the castle

>>30117916

>>30118617

>>30119358

>>30120032

>>30120698

Anons, I'm gonna see the new Aliens movie so I'll be back in a bit. While I'm gonna how would you guys feel about a little hotsprings scene?

>>30121627
I would love it if Sombra somehow embarrassed himself in that situation.

He is always so uptight so I say he would deserve it.

>>30121627
>new Aliens movie
I'm watching Aliens right now, working my way through the trilogy in preperation.

Yes to hotsprings
>>30121691
Sombra needs a love intrest

>>30121966
Specifically NOT ariadne

>>30122286
I'm trying to think of a good Sombra ship, besides Celestia (witch is to obvious)

>>30120698

>>30122495

Bamp

>>30118218
>Getting back to that castle, you lead the ponies upstairs to the guest room next to yours
>"And here is where you all will be staying." Umbra says as she opens the doors to the room
>Stepping inside with Celestia and the others, you show them the three beds
"There's a bed for each of you." You tell them "One for Celly, one for Luna, and one for Cadance and Shining."
>"Across the hall is Eris's room. She likes to nap when she returns home from the school so she shouldn't cause you any problems." Umbra says "Next to her is Sombra's room."
>"If you require something do not hesitate to ask me." Sombra says "I will do my best to assist you in anyway I can."
>"Thank you so much!" Cadance says to him as she and Sombra walk over to their bed "This'll do just fine!"
>Celestia and Luna do the same, but Celestia takes a seat on her bed
>"These are really comfortable." Celestia says "Thank you, Umbra."
>"It's no trouble, Princess." Umbra says "We would want our guest to have a terrible nights sleep."
>Celestia is a little throw off by how Umbra is treating her
>Honestly you are too
>Umbra always calls Celestia by her name
>Celestia lets out a little bit of an exhausted sigh
>"I'm sorry. It is just that transporting all of Anonymous's friends to your empire took some energy is all." Celestia says
>"Well why don't I take you all down to our hot springs located under the empire for a little R&R?" Umbra asks "You princesses must go through so much, why not treat yourself to a nice dip in the springs?"

>>30121691
Trying to think of what I could do...

>>30121966
It's a good movie not as good as the first two, but nothing can top those.

>>30123990

>>30122329
I would say Luna, which is also Obvious, but they do share a lot in common. Plus that would hurt Celestia even more.

>>30124048
Is it a community hot springs or separated by gender?

Is the hot springs heated by geothermal activity or by magic?

Would Sombra try to use the situation to flirt with Adrianne? If so he is obviously going to fail, but how?

>>30124048
>"Thank you so much!" Cadance says to him as she and Sombra walk over to their bed "This'll do just fine!"
>she and Sombra walk over to their bed
>she and Sombra
I guess Shining is a cuck then?

>>30124497

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>>30124931
Yes
Geothermal
And I don't know if I'll go with that

>>30126483
>mfw

>>30124931
>>30128205
God dammit I mean yes to separate baths

>>30127484

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>>30124048
>"That sounds like it would be nice!" Cadance says "Wouldn't you say, auntie?"
>Celestia nods her head
>"We do hardly get anytime for ourselves and when we do we have to sneak around our own kingdom." Celestia says "It would be nice to sit down and relax easily for once."
>"Are there separate baths?" Luna asks "Not that we mind, but three princesses and a queen would draw many eyes upon us."
"You naked already though..." You say "What does it matter?"
>Umbra nods her head
>"There are separate baths for mares and stallions. Along with a private bath for me." Umbra says as feel her tail rub against your leg "You would not have to worry about any stallion sneaking a peek at you."
>Umbra glances over to Sombra
>"Don't be ridiculous!" Sombra says with a huff "As if I would peep on them!"
>Umbra raises her eyebrow in doubt before looking back to the princesses
>"Anyhoo I suggest you unpack and we will set off when Twilight and her friends return." Umbra says before looking at you "Anonymous, my love, Why don't you go find Lance, Biggs, and Wedge and ask them to come along? That way they can get to know Shining Armor as well seeing how Shining Armor is also going to be standing up there with you."
>You nod your head
"Alright I'll head out of here then and go find them." You say before giving her a kiss "Be back soon, Umbra."
>Opening the door you head out of the guest room and out towards the stairs

Bamp

I want to be Umbra's pet

>>30132224

>>30131607
>You are Umbra
"I love that human." You say as Anonymous leaves the room before turning back around
>"Queen Umbra." Shining Armor asks "Can I ask you about the security of your empire?"
>You tilt your head to the side
"My security?"
>"Umbra, did Anonymous ever tell you about Cadance's wedding?" Celestia asks
>Ah this is what they want to talk about
"Yes. He told me that the Queen of the Changelings tried to take over Equestria by posing as Cadance and using Shining Armor love for her like a battery to power her up."
>Cadance nods her head
>"She took me out of the picture and tried to take my place." Cadance says "She would have succeeded if not for Twilight and her friends."
>"The thing is that before she was defeated, she took an interest in Anonymous." Celestia says "Saying something about how her was different and exotic."
>"As Anonymous's friend I just worry that she might try to attempt to take him again." Shining Armor says "I can create a barrier that can keep them out if you would like."
>You smile
"There is no need. In fact if I knew where she was, I would send her an invitation myself!" You tell them with a smile on your face "It will give me a chance to rip her apart like the bug she is for taking the lives of two ponies from my empire."

>>30133365

>>30133987
Uhm

>>30134969

yi

>>30137067

>>30138651

>>30133987
>The ponies in front of you all look surprised by your statement
>"You and Chrysalis have met?" Shining Armor asks
>You nod your head
"You all know of Anonymous's friend Lance the pegasi, correct?" You asks "The two ponies were his and his sister's parents. They died protecting me from a surprise attack. In my rage I was able to paint the walls of my throne room with her children's blood."
>You close your eyes
"She and a few were able to barely escape." You tell them "If given the opportunity to correct my mistakes, I would take it."
>"Wow..." Cadance says
"You tell me that she's taken interest in Anonymous. I would love to see her try to take him from me." You tell them "Although I think if word has spread that not even Princess Celestia herself could take him from me I would hope she wouldn't try anything."
>Shining Armor smiles before nodding his head
>"Alright then, Queen Umbra. I trust your decision." He says "I just don't want my buddy to get hurt."
"Worry not. If anything were to happen I would assure you that Anonymous and I would be driving the sword into Chrysalis's heart." You say "Now why don't I let you all unpack and when you are done with that we can all get some lunch downstairs."

>>30139869

>>30141267
>After Celestia and the other unpacked their things you had showed them around the castle
>Mostly where the bathroom was
>Once they knew where that was, you entered the dinning room
>Sitting down at the table with Sombra and the others, Edith comes out to take every ponies order
>She also told you that your wedding cake was coming along nicely and that it would be her greatest work ever
>Once she returned to the kitchen you looked back at all your guests
"I am grateful that you all came out to our wedding." You tell them
>"We wouldn't miss this for the world!" Cadance says
>"Hey Umbra, I'm back." You hear your beloved call out
>Looking towards the door, you see Anonymous come into the dinning room

Short part, but I'm trying to move us along so that we can get to another tease at something

>>30142296

>>30142781

Too bad, no herd or harem.