Dragon Transformation General #8

>>29940464
Authors:
Finished:
Buggernon's "Anon the Dragon": http://pastebin.com/u/Buggernon
Punki's "Hangin'": https://pastebin.com/As6YwYpx
Punki's "Discord vs. Daze": https://pastebin.com/bNLBq5N1
Dragonlord Kolaghan's "The Gold Standard": http://pastebin.com/10Tytn1J

Work In Progress:
Sergeant Nonymous's "Anonymous the Wise Dragon": http://pastebin.com/CY698CQ0
Clarissa's "No Fury at All": http://pastebin.com/U5q2gcBr
Alcrowholic's "Mountainous": http://pastebin.com/7iJzrFDt
Harmonyrla's "Dragula": http://pastebin.com/m0i4tGEK
BizarreCoyote's "Rukodiora's Romp Around Equestria": http://pastebin.com/rYB3Agh6
Tambourine's My Tiny Ponies: http://pastebin.com/sBQrS8ZR
Bubblewolf's Crystal Draganon: https://www.dropbox.com/s/8dlbvjaz3emxv2h/Bubblewolf%20Crystalanon.txt?dl=0
(hosted on dropbox as a notepad file)
Dracononymous' "Deceitful (Not a) Dragon": http://pastebin.com/GQiUeKe7
Woofr's "Reflection": http://pastebin.com/YUgjpmUL
Dragonlord Kolaghan's "The Universal Solvent": https://pastebin.com/8LmMiVjm
Punki's "Dazed": http://pastebin.com/ZStRTpMn
Treasure Mage's "Tonic the Dragon": http://pastebin.com/dbJ3Mnny
Treasure Mage's "Equestria Five-0": https://pastebin.com/DZ48KDMQ
Treasure Mage's "Wanderer"; no pastebin yet
Rat's "Lady of the Mountain": https://pastebin.com/tTCDh4s7
Purple-Blep's "Scylla": https://pastebin.com/bGwKSz0E
Ice-Beam's "Anon the dragon": https://pastebin.com/jRDJMTPQ
Hope's "Hope": http://pastebin.com/bRPwtEFq
Primusings' "Unplugged": https://pastebin.com/8JKLWBg0
Thunder dragon story by anon: >>29925081

Previous thread:
https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29869298/

>>29925081
>Watching them as they go you notice they're one short of the original party
>Turning to face Spike you see him standing there, jaw on the floor and eyes bulging
>You're willing to bet something else is bulging but you refuse to look that far down
>Clearing your throat in an attempt to get your new vertically challenged friend's attention, your only response is a lazy blink
>Clearing your throat a bit deeper you are still met with no response
>Jeez did you turn this little guy into a vegetable or something?
>Getting a little irritated you finally speak up, snapping your finger claw things in front of his face as you do
"Eyes forward Spike!"
>Something seems to snap back into place in his mind as your voice finally reaches him
>"Whosawhatnow?"
>Snapping out of his daze his head starts turning in every direction frantically
>He's gonna snap his own neck at this rate
>Grabbing his shoulders you give him a vigorous shake to try and calm him down
>You know, thinking about it now, this might be why people say you're bad with kids
>Finally getting over his heart attack Spike finally comes back to his senses
>Looking around his eyes finally settle on you before going wide and turning his head down, suddenly becoming very interested in a patch of dirt
>You can't help but chuckle at the amount of spaghetti this guy is spilling
>Patting him on the back you turn him to where the others are and give him a small push
"Come on, Twilight says we're heading to the castle, we better hurry up"
>All you get out of him is an affirmative murmur as he continues his staring contest with the ground
>But at least he's following behind you
>Going into a jog you manage to catch up with Twilight
>"Oh hey Tes, I just want to say again how happy I am to welcome you to Ponyville. Not much is known about dragon culture and here you are, a near fully matured dragon, this'll be a great help to my research"

>>29940945
"Research? I'm not gonna have to take a test, am I?"
>You did your time in school, you're not going back
>It's a shame there's no window for you to dramatically jump out of near here
>Well technically there is but then you'd be breaking and entering
>Do they even have crime in this place?
>You're snapped back to reality as Twilight lets out a small laugh
>"Don't be silly Tes, of course you won't. Oooh maybe you could test me after I've asked you a few questions, I've never done a real dragon test before. Ooooooooh this is gonna be so much fun"
>You can't help but feel a smile tug at the corner of your mouth at this pony
"Yeah well like I said don't expect too much from me"
>Whilst you see disappointment briefly flash across her face it’s soon replaced with an understanding smile
>"That's alright, I'm just glad you're one of the more reasonable dragons"
"Oh yeah you mentioned something about me being a "good dragon" earlier, what's that about anyway?"
>Bringing a hoof to her mouth Twilight gets a look like she just swore at her grandmother
>"I- I'm sorry I didn't mean to offend you or anything I just meant that you-"
>You cut off her apology rant short as you let out a small laugh at her attempt at damage control
>Patting her on the back you give her a reassuring smile
"Don't worry about it Sparkle, I was just curious what you meant is all"
>Hearing this Twilight lets out a large sigh of relief
>"That's good to hear, but all I meant was that… well..."
>Her voice trails off as she tries to find the right words
>Hearing a scoff beside you, you turn to see Rarity having turned her head up
>"There's no need to beat around the bush Twilight, dragons are brutish, violent creatures, and you simply cannot live with them"
>Turning to face you she gives you a sympathetic look as she pats your leg with a hoof

>>29940949
>"Now Tes, I’m sure you are perfectly well mannered, after all my little Spikey Wikey, and even the new Dragon Lord Ember have some modicum of civility to them, but most other dragons we've met are simply terrible"

>"RARITY!"
>Jumping at this Rarity looks around to see all the other ponies glaring at her
>"What? It's true and you all know it; besides I've nearly gotten seriously hurt multiple times because of those brutes, we all have! So, you'll forgive me for holding a grudge"
>"Rarity please, you could hurt Tes' feelings, talking about her people like that, maybe that's why she came to Ponyville in the first place, to get away from them all"
>Holding a hand up you silence the small pegasus
"Easy Fluttershy, my feelings are fine"
>Opening her mouth to argue she closes it before giving you a small nod
>Clearing her throat, you turn your attention back to Twilight
>"Whilst I wouldn't have quite used Rarity's phrasing, I will say she is somewhat correct, dragons are notoriously territorial and confrontational. More often, than not you'll find a dragon who will fight you before they talk to you"
"So dragons are just a bunch of wankers who are dead from the neck up. Got it"
>Your choice of wording and the casual tone of voice earns you what you can only describe as
>[Startled Horse Noises]
>Clearing her throat Rarity speaks up again
>"Ummm yes that was... interestingly put darling. But enough of this talk of other dragons you and Spike certainly seem to have been raised well at least"
>Oh yeah, where is the little guy anyway?
>Looking behind you, you spot him following just behind the group
>Just far back enough that he has full view of each of your backsides
>Though you notice he seems to be particularly focusing on you
>Again
>Oh my poor young padawan learner, you have much to learn in the ways of peeking, not staring
>Facing forward again you notice a jagged rock sticking out from the ground

>>29940953
>Deciding to give one of your new features a test drive you attempt to sway your tail
>With a bit of concentration you're able to get it swinging mildly, side to side
>Catching Spike's attention you lead him back and forth like a cat with a laser pointer
>Guiding your tail to the side you watch as Spike trips over the rock and face plants straight into the ground
>Desperately holding back a laugh you manage to call back
"You alright there Spike?"
>Pulling his head out of the ground he looks up at you before his face becomes flushed
>"Uh um y- yeah I'm fine, just wasn't watching where I was going"
>He tries to murmur that last bit under his breath, but you're able to hear it loud and clear with your new ears
>Now walking beside the group he stands between you and Rarity
"Distracted by something else Spike?"
>His head jolts up to look at you wide eyed at this
>Giving him a wink and a pet on the head you can almost feel the embarrassment coming off him
>Are you a dick for messing with him like this?
>Probably
>"Excuse me, Tes?"
>Turning to face Twilight you see she has a sheepish look on her face
>"Sorry if I'm being intrusive but, what's that you're holding"
"Oh, you mean this?"
>Holding up your I-pod you see a smile start to grow on Twilight's face
"It's an I-pod, it stores and plays music, sadly I don't have any of the stuff to add any more songs to it, and before you ask, no I can't make any more either, don't have the know-how for it"
>"Why that's quite a shame darling, I've never seen anything like it and I know a lot of ponies who would pay a hefty sum of bits for something like that"
>Wait, bits are there currency here, or is that just short for bitcoin?
"Yeah well, what can you do, I've got enough on here to keep me going though"

>>29940956
>"Hmmmm, well I may not be able to do anything about making more or getting more songs on it, but maybe I could help you carry it around. I doubt you're going to want to go one-clawed everywhere you go. Maybe I could make you some clothing to put it in?"
>Clothes, shit you just remembered you'd been walking around naked for who knows how long
>You're able to stop yourself from instinctively covering yourself by reminding yourself that everyone else here is naked too
"Yeah, actually that'd be really useful, cheers"
>"Not a problem at all, just come by my boutique when you have the time and I'll take your measurements. I've never measured a grown dragon, so this could be very useful for my future fashion lines"
>Giving a small nod you feel something poking your shoulder
>"Psssst"
>Turning to the side you don't see anyone there
>Turning to the other side you're startled by two magenta eyes uncomfortably close to your face
>Moving back a little you spot a certain blue pegasus connected to the eyes as she clutches her sides
>"Gotcha Tes, man you're too easy"
>Giving her a blank stare she simply rolls her eyes and gives you a small thump on the shoulder
>"Lighten up, it was just a little joke. But anyway, listen up, you're a dragon, I can tell that spending all day wearing dresses and doing boring egghead stuff isn't your thing"
"Really, I didn't realize pegasi could read minds as well as fly"
>"We can't, I just have a feel for these things you know?"
>Giving a small sigh you roll your eyes at this before a hoof hooks itself around your neck
>"Look I've always wanted to race a dragon, what do you say when you get the time you meet me and we do a few laps of Ponyville?"
>Raising your eyebrows at Rainbow Dash she begins to wiggle her own at you
>Sighing you turn to face her fully
"I'm sorry to break it to you, but I can't fly"
>This earns you several shocked gasps from everyone and a nervous laugh from Rainbow
>"You're kidding right?"
"I wish I was"

>>29940957
>Groaning Rainbow plants her face in her hooves as she hovers along
>"Oh come on, can't I catch a break"
"Well hey if you like you could always teach me"
>She seems to perk up at this but seems hesitant at the idea
>"I dunno..."
>As much as you’re loathe to admit it, from her little greeting earlier she seems to be a strong enough flier, and you need the help
>But she’s hesitant at the idea, you may have to play her ego a bit
"Well of course, if you don't think you're up for it, I completely understand"
>Snapping her head to face you, her nostrils flare up at this and she brings herself inches away from your face before you can blink
>"Alright then fine, I'll teach you how to fly, and when I'm done with you, you'll be eating those words"
>You can't keep the smirk off your face at this point
"I look forward to it"
>Huffing Rainbow goes back to hovering along
>As the group quietens down you begin to hear that ringing in your ears again, to take your mind off it you take in the scenery a little more trying to ignore it
>A few minutes pass and the ringing's only gotten louder, you'd try draining it out with music but your I-pod's dead
>Shaking your head you try to get rid of the ringing but it only seems to get louder
>"Tes?"
>As the ringing gets louder, you start to feel a headache coming on, bringing your claws to your head you try massaging your temples
>"Tes!"
>The ringing sadly only gets louder and louder, and the headache becomes more painful
>"TES!"
>Hearing Twilight's voice seems to finally stop the ringing and the headache
>Finally focusing again your eyes are met with a wall of purple crystal
>Stepping back a bit and craning your head up you see that you're now in front of a massive purple crystal tree
>Looking to the side you see Twilight and Spike looking at you with concern
>Glancing around you notice that the others have broken away from the group
"Where'd everyone go?"

>>29940966
>"Everypony went home Tes, they said goodbye but you were just staring off into space, then when we got here you weren't responding and started clutching your head"
"Oh, so this is your castle?"
>Turning to face the castle Twilight sadly catches on to your pathetic attempt to change the subject
>"Tes, are you feeling ok?"
>Throwing your hands up you start making your way to the door
"Bah. Don't worry about me Sparkle, I just need an aspirin is all"
>Looking back you see that Twilight and Spike exchanging nervous glances
>Sighing you dramatically hunch over
"Guys, I'm fine, trust me"
>Giving them your best reassuring smile you all head into the castle

>>29940968
Was able to get a lot more stuff done yesterday a lot quicker than I thought I would so here's another big green dump for you guys
My schedules gonna be a bit weird but I'll try to update as often as I can

>>29940971
also here's a bin for my trash, hope you guys liked the update
https://pastebin.com/0j6QkqGe

https://pastebin.com/Jt9shzrQ
For anyone who missed it, I'll be posting the last few updates for the Wanderer.

>The noise becomes less of an echo, and you can tell that whatever it is, it's almost to the doorway to the kitchen.
>You are put at ease slightly because you begin to hear the sound of hooves along with it.
>Applebloom suddenly comes through the door and pauses for a second as she realizes your presence.
>AB: "Oh, uh...hey Tonic. Maybe you or Jazz could help us too."
>You raise an eyebrow at her.
"Help you with what?"
>Not a second later, a rather large and imposing dragon steps through the doorway, along with the remaining two crusaders.
>Another one?!
>This one looks nothing like the rest of you. He's old, he has clothing and accessories, and he's covered with scars. He's even missing a leg! That must've been the noise you heard...
>He must have here for a while, he's seen some shit. He must be a born dragon then! But if that's the case, why is he here...and why is he being escorted by the crusaders?!
>You look down at Applebloom, he stares at you expectantly, then you shift your gaze back to the dragon.
"A-alright, why don't we go over in the corner and you can tell me what this is all about."
>You look over to Jazz, who is just staring at the stranger, presumably at his leg.
"Jazz, why don't you show our new friend one of your tricks while I talk to Applebloom?"
>He turns to you with a puzzled look.
>J: "I have tricks for limited vision, but I doubt he can see /anything/, let alone colors..."
>You hear the stranger speak up for the first time and address Jazz. His voice is damn near indescribable. It's stern and booming, but it also sounds like there's a layer of static behind it...like a white noise.
>W: "The colors I see could destroy your mind."
>J: "....Riiiight. Well, I may have a few tricks for you then."
>Jazz reaches for his playing cards while you and the crusaders move to the corner of the room.

>>29941256
>When you get out of earshot, you stop and kneel down to their level.
"What. Did. You. Do."
>Sweetie bell starts in with her squeaking.
>SB: "It wasn't our fault! Well, maybe it was, but nothing bad happened!"
>Sc: "You should've been there! It was so cool!"
>AB: "We didn't know what was gonna happen!"
>You put your hand up to silence them.
"One at a time, please!"
>You point to Applebloom.
"You. Start talking."
>She takes a deep breath and begins her tale.
>AB: "Me and the girls were playin' a game that granny taught us when suddenly that dragon over there teleports onto the playground outa nowhere! He calls himself 'The Wanderer' and he fights evil things! The game we were playin' summoned monsters that he saved us from, so we brought him here to get some answers!"
>Needless to say, you're flabbergasted by the the shit that just came out of her mouth.
"What...what the fuck kinda games is your granny teaching you?"
>Applebloom just shrugs.
"Whatever. What about this Wanderer guy? Do you know anything about him?"
>Sc: "Just that he's super cool and really like saying 'darkness' and 'shadows.'"
"So a random dragon 'teleports' to you and starts calling himself the Wanderer, so you just run off with him? Don't you little shits know anything about stranger danger?"
>SB: "Stranger...what?"
>You groan and slide your hand down your face.
"Look, don't do that shit. We gotta find Twilight so she can send him back to the dragon lands or something..."
>AB: "But he's not from there! He said that he traveled to our world from somewhere else!"
>You look past the fillies in front of you to examine the Wanderer again. There's an aura of haziness around him and...did he just discharge a small lightning bolt?!

>>29941258
>You think about all of the other dragons that got thrown into Equestria alongside you.
>A crazy Brit, a fucking magician, a parkour graffiti artist, an English major, a condescending alcoholic scientist...and now, this.
>You almost begin to well up with tears.
"Why are they all train wrecks...?"
>The girls give you confused looks.
>AB: "What are you talkin' about?"
"Why are all of these dragons crazy! I'm the only sane fucker here!"
>SB: "That's not true, there's still Spike..."
"I'm the only one..."
>You stand up and make your way over to him.
>Jazz is still working on one of his tricks. He looks amazed that the Wanderer can even see his movements.
>Jazz fans out the deck and presents it to the Wanderer.
>J: "Don't see your card in the deck do you? That's because..."
>He reaches up and pulls a card from behind one of his horns.
>J: "...It's right here!"
>The Wanderer's face remains stoic.
>W: "You are quick one, but I see what you did there. You simply-"
>Jazz goes into a full panic as he tries to keep him from revealing his secret.
>J: "Hey hey hey, magicians never reveal their secrets!"
>W: "I'm no magician, I will reveal for you."
>J: "No, people can't know my secrets! It'll ruin my tricks!"
>W: "Tricks? That must mean you practice deceptive fighting style. You could use knavery against shadows?"
>J: "...I don't know what that means, but if I say yes will you keep your mouth shut?"
>W: "I would not compromise brother in arms."
>Before Jazz can say anything else, Twilight walks into the room with Spike.
>The Wanderer turns to look at her...with his dead milky eyes.
>W: "You must be the paladin. I've been waiting."
>He walks toward her, leaving Jazz with a puzzled look on his face.
>J: "Did...did he just recruit me?"

>>29941265
>You leave Jazz to his thoughts and join the conversation happening between Twilight and the Wanderer.
"I just got quite the story from the girls, you're not going to believe this..."
>T: "Hold that thought, Tonic, when Slike came to get me I requested a second opinion from a friend. She should be here shortly, then we can figure this out."
>Oh, Jesus. You know exactly who she's talking about.
"This friend wouldn't happen to be red, black, and possibly buzzed would they?"
>Twilight begins to look guilty.
>T: "Yes...it's Flamel. But she could be a big help in this situation! What's your problem with her anyway?"
>Flamel: The red and black speckled science drake. She was supposedly a scientist back on Earth who studied the multiverse theory. She made a teleported of sorts and risked her life to get here so she could live a life of fantasy and wonder.
>She's not a bad person per se, but she has a drinking problem that she thinks you don't know about. You're also pretty sure she's in the beginning stages of narcissism...
"My problem is that she only views me as 'the dragon who invented coffee.' Other than that, she always makes me her Watson when she's working on something."
>T: "There's nothing wrong with that. She acknowledges your accomplishments and likes spending time with you..."
>She trails off when she sees your dead pan stare.
"...How did you even find out where she lives anyway? I thought she 'needed privacy for her experiments.'"
>More than likely meaning privacy for her booze cellar. That Daze showed her the cellar she has and she was hooked...
>T: "Well...I don't. I just had Spike send a scroll to her."
>You soon hear a sing-song voice from down the hall.
>F: "Hellooooo?"
>Spike calls to her from the doorway.
>S: "We're in the kitchen!"
>Now you have to mentally prepare yourself.

>>29941269
>You hear hurried footsteps coming down the hall, and Flamel eventually pops into the room, an excited smile on her face.
>Her smile grows even bigger when she sees you.
>F: "If it isn't my favorite little barista!"
>Her eyes shift to Jazz and her smile falters.
>F: "....And magician."
>Jazz fixes the collar on his cape and bows.
>J: "Ah, the beautiful Flamel graces me with her presence yet again."
>Flamel's smile returns, but it's more smug than before.
>F: "Pffft, get outa here, Houdini..."
>She's a little drunk, you can tell. She's usually rather uptight and sarcastic, but when she's drunk she gets more loose and straight forward.
>J: "Still mad that you can't figure out my tricks are we?"
>She glares at him, puffing out smoke from her nostrils, and quickly turns her attention back to you.
>F: "You and I, we don't talk that much anymore! I've been in need of my assistant recently!"
>Your face has remained totally emotionless.
"Well, as fun as that sounds, I can't assist you when no one knows where you live..."
>F: "That's no excuse. I know you can do that trick with the scrolls like Spike, you can at least drop me a line!"
>She reaches up and grabs both of your cheeks with her hands.
>F: "But we're together now, and with you as my Watson, we'll figure this out!"
>J: "You're not going to kiss, are you....are you?"
>Flamel releases you and you almost immediately spin around to smack him.
>You hear Flamel gasp as she finally realizes that the new dragon in question has been in the room the entire time.

>>29941272
>Flamel paces around the Wanderer, inspecting him.
>F: "So this is our new dragon resident...interesting."
>She stops and snaps her claws.
>F: "Tonic- er, Watson! Bring me up to speed!"
>You let out an exasperated sigh and fill her in.
"The girls said they were playing a strange game that summoned monsters. This dragon, he calls himself the Wanderer by the way, he teleported in out of nowhere and defeated them. He claims to be from some other world."
>F: "Well I can believe it. His eyes are obviously dead, but he followed all of my movements...even the silent ones. Some of the scars he has are from sources not commonly found in any injury. Not to mention this distortion around him...that's a bit fucking out there as well..."
>Her look of concentration is replaced by a wide smile.
>F: "This is so exciting! Finally, a mystery worthy of my talents!"
>The Wanderer finally speaks, silencing Flamel. You didn't think anything could do that...
>W: "Is no mystery. I am the Wanderer: follower of the way, but also a pathfinder. Protector of peace, but also fighter of evil. Paladin of-"
>F: "Yeah, whatever, save the zealous dribble for the impressionable children. I want to know what you are, not /what/ you are!"
>W: "Is no simple answer for likes of you. I am elemental of five dimensions. What you see and hear before you is only what your mind makes of my presence. Is odd seeing my scars manifested in such a way, however..."
>Flamel's eyes grow brighter with each word coming out of his mouth.
>F: "You and me, we can learn alot from each other. I'm looking forward to talking with you some more, but I need to go home and get some equipment first!"
>Flamel takes off down the hall, giggling like a school girl.

So, still not totally sold on what I'm writing for the thread. I made a few story pitches, and was wondering what you guys would want to see:

Idea 1:
The anon has just woken up from a mortal injury in the middle of dragon territory. Despite remembering none of it, they have apparently been living as a dragon for the past year, and arrived in similar circumstances to how they just woke up. So now the anon has to piece together fragments of their double life.


Idea 2:
A young man In search of a good time goes to purchase some Pon-E, a drug that can temporarily turn one into a pony in small doses. However, a crackdown on the drug has lead him to purchase it from a shady pusher. As it turns out, they've purchased a dangerous knock off brand that makes them into a dragoness. Things get strained when they develop an addiction, but refuse to take a permanent dose. The solution: become a pusher to get access to the stuff for cheap.

>>29941480
Was too long for all five, so here are the others:

Idea 3:
Anon waking up in Equestria as a dragon was strange enough, but their strange blackouts at night slowly causing them more and more alarm, along with how tired they are during the day. As it turns out, they have a split personality with a very gregarious dragon who takes the night shift in the royal guard.

Idea 4:
An occult fanatic botches a ritual and winds up becoming a drake. Nobody around them seems to share their passion for the darker side of things- save for a strange dragon with black-stained claws. At the mention of the properties of mirrors, this dragon almost instantly takes anon on as an apprentice.

Idea 5:
A prison bus carrying new inmates is teleported to Equestria by Discord because chaos. All the inmates have become kobolds, and the supervising officer has become a dragon, or at least that's what they all assume. In truth the guard was left on earth, and a random prisoner was made the dragon. This prisoner was in tight with a crime syndicate, and has the silver tongue needed to bullshit his newfound authority role.

Why haven't you guys fucked off to MLPTFG? A thread had to die for you to continue this sad charade.

>>29941566
did you not get the memo? turns out that, despite the fact that the OP has said any transformation is welcome since it started, if you post any green other than pony they screech at you to get out

>>29940971
Great, I like your stuff.
>>29940978
One man's trash is another man's treasure.

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>>29941275
>Flamel takes off down the hall, giggling like a school girl.
"Ha ha, time for !!SCIENCE!!"

>>29941480
>>29941486
2, 4, and 5 are my faves.

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>tfw get blueballed in every world of the entire multiverse

>>29941566
They don't want us, we tried this last thread. Fuck off.

>>29941647
That was a couple of posters from this thread in an autistic rage at their writers apparently deserting them. Most of the rest of the thread was appreciative of the content.

>>29941566
There's enough content here so I don't think it's time for that yet.

>>29941480
>>29941486
Idea 1 has the most appeal to me. To be honest, the other ideas are pretty shitty, except for idea 3.

>>29942338
Fuck off, m8. Those are THE shittiest ideas I've EVER seen.

>>29944040
>>29944052

How funny these are a minute apart. Not even trying to hide your samefaggotry.

>>29944379
M8, there's a difference between samefagging and having an opinion.

>>29944040
>>29944052
Do tell, what makes them shitty. I'd love to know why I should steer away from the ideas and do something else. Saying something is shit without any reason why doesn't help, and is shitposting. But hey, if it's not shitposting I would love to get some insight on your opinions.

>>29944422
Firstly, check'em. Secondly, I already told you why the Pon-E story was shit. Thirdly, 4 seems too edgy. And finally, I honestly don't know why 5 seems bad, it just does.

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Get ready lads, Tonic is making a triumphant return tomorrow

>>29941486
It would be interesting to see how the dragon in #5 would use his syndicate knowledge to evade the authorities in Equestria

>>29946066
Fuck off, m8. That prompt is shit and you know it.

>>29946103
Just because you don't like it, doesn't mean others can't.

What do /you/ think I should write?

>>29946173
Prompts 1 and/or 3.

>>29946173
2 or 3

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fancy maid khoa

>>29946726
What part of "2 sucks shit" aren't you comprehending?

>>29947319
>maid
That looks more like swiss national dress than anything.
Not that I'm complaining. Khoa a cute.

>>29944439
Why Pone-E is bad though? Just curious.
4 is as edgy as you want it to be. Though it might still have some edge no matter what...
That's probably because 5 doesn't feel "finished". It rough around the edges and might need some brainstorming to "refine" it.

>>29947660
If they're the anon I think they are, they are very anti ptfg and think an idea from there is instant garbage. As for four, I hadn't really intended to make the story very "edgy". And five is a very basic, undeveloped concept, so what you said about it needing to be refined sounds about right.

>There's two transformation generals now?
What possible reason could you have for not merging with the other one? They even allow dragon transformations there.

>>29948345
Look through that other general, they are not very welcome there

>>29948345
>They even allow dragon transformations there
no, they just say they do, they screech at you if you post anything that isn't their precious ponies

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>>29947477
maidish?? i fixed the colours on it, not so intense

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>>29947477
i just googled maid costumes,, there are more to come too

>Stepping outside, you assumed you were going to be hit by a comfortable wave of heat, the view from the castle windows told you that today was a really nice day.
>What you actually got was rather disappointing, as you don't really feel anything as the sun beats down on you.
>That's right, you're a dragon now, the weather isn't going to matter to you that much.
>The dragon lands are mostly harsh deserts, and its locals take lava baths regularly, a sunny day isn't going to feel like anything.
>You can still appreciate the scenery at least...
>Rarity's store comes into view, but you can't tell how busy she is from the lack of vehicles. You hold the door for two mares as they walk out of the boutique making idle chatter about accessories and the like.
>Their conversation ends as they both do a double take when they see you.
>Right. Dragon.
>You smile coyly as they cautiously walk past you, and you step inside the store.
>The store has a lot of curb value, but the inside looks a lot messier.
>Mannequins are strewn about wearing half finished ensembles, ribbons and pieces of cut fabric of varying colors as well as pages with concept art litter the floor.
>Rarity is over in one of the corners of the store working on a mannequin's dress.
>The store is otherwise empty, and you can hear Rarity mumbling measurements to herself in the silence.
>You held the door for those ponies, so the bell on the door didn't signal your entry, only their exit.
>You clear your throat in a subtle attempt to get her attention, but she yelps in surprise. She turns to greet you, but her expression softens when she sees you.
>R: "Oh my, you mustn't sneak up on me like that!"
"Did I catch you at a bad time? You look a bit...flustered."
>She wipes sweat from her forehead and gives you a nervous smile.
>R: "A lady is never flustered, dear."
>You look around the room.
"You can tell a lot about someone from looking at their workplace..."

>>29949183
>R: "Im just a bit busy, that's all. There's always an influx of orders during spring-time, lots of mares wanting dresses for the warmer weather. Which reminds me! I wanted to talk to you about your dress, I see you're still wearing it!"
"Uh, yeah, I actually like it a lot."
>She gives you a smug look.
>R: "Maybe /you/ like it, but I know the stallions probably like it even more, am I right?"
>You can feel your face heating up.
"I've...been getting looks."
>R: "And how does it fit, dear? I know I had to help you before."
"It's hard getting it on by myself due to the spikes. It also doesn't help that i'm new to being a..."
>You want to say 'female,' but you stop yourself.
"...A dragon. But twilight helps me out, I was actually hoping you could make something else for me."
>Rarity chuckles to herself and walks over to a rack of hanging clothes.
>R: "I'm already way ahead of you! I made you a sun dress for the approaching summer months, it's what all the mares are ordering. Our first female dragon resident is going to be in fashion as long as I'm around..."
>One of the dresses on the rack is enveloped in a blue glow, and Rarity levitates it toward you.
>The dress you're wearing suddenly disappears in a cloud of smoke and reappears next to the dress in the air. She then gives you the sun dress.
>R: "Here, try putting it on yourself. I made some corrections to this one."
>You gingerly put the dress on as if it were a big T-shirt, trying not to rip it with your spikes.
>It's just a plain white sun dress. You're actually a little surprised, usually Rarity makes some outrageous dresses, but she's actually been showing restraint. Still no sleeves, just straps this time. Instead of individual holes, there's a long slit going down the back that makes it a hell of a lot easier to maneuver around your spikes. The material is much lighter and soft, unlike your other dress which is more silky.

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>>29949192
>You get it all the way on without much trouble, and it isn't as tight and constricting, she must have adjusted her measurements...
>While you were struggling, Rarity went and levitated a full-body mirror over to you.
>R: "Well...what do you think?!"
>When you got your first dress, you really only wore it to appease Rarity and maybe fuck with Spike a little. You've been getting used to being a girl, but you would never get used to wearing dresses and shit...and yet, here you are.
>You do a little spin in the mirror and a smile crosses your face.
"I love it!"
>The dress is fantastic, she must have put so much work into it...
>She made to be in style, adjusted it to fit a dragon, something she is very new to, and she even tailored it to fit you specifically.
>And now you were going to ask her for more. You couldn't do that...
>R: "Is something wrong, dear?"
>You look up at your face in the mirror and see that you're looking very apprehensive. You then look over at her, a worried look on her face.
"Oh, well...the dress is fantastic, but..."
>You point to a nearby table where you set down her book and your list.
"I actually wanted to commission something, but now that you gave me this, I should be set for a while."
>Rarity scoffs and levitates the list over to her while putting on her glasses.
>R: "Nonsense darling, I always make time for a friend! Let's see what you've come up with..."
>She narrows her eyes as she reads the specifications on your list, occasionally lifting her head from the page to think.
>You asked for some pretty basic armor, but in an exotic form. Judging from the book, different regions of the dragon lands had their own kinds of armor. You liked a lot of them, and you don't exactly come from any of the regions, so you made a list that would incorporate different historical styles.

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>>29949204
>You still appreciate having full motion of your arms, so you went with more of a tank-top for the torso to start with. You wanted a bitchin' thick wrestling-type belt as well, with two long strips of cloth in the front and back that dangle down to the ground like a loincloth. The legs were a bit harder, that's where more of the armor aspect came into play. You wanted some gnarly knee high plated boots, and plate leg guards that cover your outer legs and strap onto your inner thighs.
>R: "Armor, I like it! It looks like you're really coming to terms with your new dragon identity. I do hope my book played a part in that."
>She takes a pencil and begins jotting down notes of her own on your list.
>R: "The torso should be simple enough, but I'm not much of a smith..."
>You were afraid that she might have a problem with that part.
"That's ok, I can always have Discord conjure something up for me."
>Rarity gasps.
>R: "You will do no such thing! Discord doesn't appreciate the finer details like I do, there's no way I'd let him handle a project like this!"

Let me know if my description was a little ham-fisted and I'll try and make it better

>>29949211
I liked it, good update, and good to have you back, looking forward to Battle-Tonic

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Which dragon would you most like to cuddle with, and go on romantic dates with dtfg?

>>29949211
Good stuff. Keep at it.

>>29949377
I'd go for a hike with Columba. It'd be good to have someone who can keep up for a change. Sunset cuddles in a blanket on a mountaintop are the best, also.

>>29949377
I'd shoot the shit with Daze all day if I could

>>29949377
I miss the random little sketches that Purple-Blep posted in the earlier threads
am I blind or has he not posted for like the last two threads?

>>29949916
He's been posting in the discord, m80.

>>29949916
I have been,, just one tired blep who forgets to namefag,, and lack of omphf atm

>>29949916
>>29949961
Also I would like to add that me, another anon occasionally posts some draws here as well.

I should namefag more often. This might be getting confusing.

>>29949990
Yea shoud defs put a name on for it,, cool seeing other draws

>>29950021
Purple you don't even need to namefag. Your double commas stick out like a sore thumb.

https://discord.gg/Q42FMGK
https://discord.gg/Q42FMGK

>>29948345
You've miscounted. There are four.

>>29948725
Not so. It was someone from this thread screeching until he got his writers to come back over here.

>>29950490
purple is not for bully.
>>29949377
I'd like to do get wasted with Daze, but Khoa is waifu material.

Look who's back-ish for an update!

>Sleep never was an issue for you.
>You were one of those lucky people who could just pass out on command and wake up feeling refreshed.
>You’re not tired, but it feels unnatural being awake for this long with nothing to do.
>In the past, it was just your computer that kept you up, not being the computer.
>Either way, you’re bored and have nothing to really do.
>Not gonna be fun if you’re staying in this mystical equine land.
>The window lets in a bit of moonlight, somehow not blocked by the light behind your generator.
>A slight breeze was being let in as your attention shifted to the door.
>It’s been 40 or so minutes of just inspecting things around this lab.
>You should have enough charge to last outside for a bit.
>The door doesn’t seem locked. Good thing no one seems to steal around here.
>At least you assume that’s the case. Hard to imagine these cute fuzzy things committing crimes.
>You grab a spare watch, unplug yourself, and step into the cool night air.
>The perfect hour. Everyone’s asleep and you can finally take a breather.
>Night has been your go to time for that reason.
>And then you glanced up and saw the stars.
>You’ve seen clear nights from your times camping as a little kid, but this takes the cake.
>No light pollution out here, meaning things are a lot more clear than you’re used to.
>Not even two feet from the door and you’re gawking at the glittering dark shroud that is the night sky.
>What brings you back is a mischievous chuckle from behind you.

>>29951346

>Looking around there doesn’t seem to be anyone, thought you do see a glimpse of something.
>A red tail with a white tuft slithering into the shadows to the side of the building.
>Any sane person would probably shrug this off and move on.
>So you follow it down the alley to see what other creatures are around here.
>You’re a fucking robot. A dragon robot.
>You’re not programmed to know fear.
>Or programmed at all.
>You turn the corner and prepare for something to jump out at you.
>Instead there’s a something.
>A goat headed mash of various creatures with sunglasses leaning against the wall.
>Out of everything in the place, the fact he’s wearing shades at night is the strangest thing in this situation.
“Who are you?”
>“Keep your voice down! There are ponies sleeping!”
>Figures that even the weird creatures here are silly in some way.
“Who are you and what are you doing here?”
>“Odd question for a mechanical wonder such as yourself.”
“Fair. You gonna answer the question or not?”
>He disappears and reappears in front of you with neon lights spelling his name.
>Confetti and streamers included falling above the scene.
>“I am Discord. Your resident god of chaos, disharmony, etc., etc.”

>>29951371

“Really? Me, a mockery of magic and embodiment of science is talking to a god.”
>“I know. I didn’t expect a human showing up like this either.”
>Wait what was that? What does he know?
“Can you repeat that last bit?
>He squeezes your cheeks.
>“It’s not everyday something like you shows up here.”
>You shoo him away, only for him to teleport next to you.
>”A mundane, fleshy meatsack waking up as a cold and unfeeling machine. But what would I know?”
“A lot. Can we skip the banter and just get on with this?”
>“I can. But I want to see where this goes.”
>He pulls out a tuning fork. A really small tuning fork.
>It’s barely as big as one of your claws.
>Then he strikes it, letting a noise ring out.
>No one seems to be reacting, but you can feel something in your chest.
>Something vibrating.

>>29951465

>Oh right, your fake heart. It’s crystal.
>You fall over, feeling pain as your chest violently vibrates among other parts.
>The big chaotic deity conjured a clipboard and scribbled something down.
“Fucking really?!”
>Note to self, see about getting some sort of artillery on you for this guy in particular.
>And almost as fast as it came, it stops.
>You’re up now run straight towards Discord.
“Stop the tricks! Explain!”
>“Well the soundwaves from this oscillatory dining instrument resonated-”
“Not the science jargon, why you brought me here!”
>He hands you the fork.
>”Well that’s something I’m afraid I can’t talk about right now. Plans and schemes. You know how this works.”
“Don’t care! ANSWER!”
>He starts slinking into the shadows, with his smile still visible.
>”Enjoy your time out tonight. Time is so short for you after all.”
“DON’T PLAY CRYPTIC WITH ME! ANSWER THE QUESTION!”
>He vanished.
>Words cannot begin to describe your frustrations right now.

And that's that. Now to go and spend another eternity for the next update.

>>29949377
Come on guys, Scylla is best for cuddles

>>29951482
Do you know where you're taking the story? We could help. If it's just a matter of free time then I understand

>>29952465
Little bit of both at the moment. Should be more free in a few months hopefully.

>>29952549
Maybe he could eventually find a way to transfer his consciousness so he can have a garage full of different bodies

>>29951482
Saying that this update was ominous would be an understatement.

boop

>>29940968
oh boy, time for dragons

>As you walk down the winding corridors of the crystalline palace your eyes wander along the arching crystal columns jutting out of the walls
>Thinking back to Spike so casually snacking on that emerald earlier like it was a biscuit, you wonder if the same applies to this castle
>You also begin to wonder whether you've gained the same ability from your new body
>Is it considered rude to eat someone's house?
>Probably best not to piss off the local monarch by eating her house
>As you take another turn you begin to lose track of where you are in the castle
>First off, you're pretty sure that this is the fifth right you've taken in a row
>You can't even make a mental map due to the lack of landmarks
>It's just the same doors over, and over, and over again
>You're not even sure there are any windows in this place, the only sound you can hear is the echoes of you, Spike and Twilight's steps
>As you notice the others coming to a stop you let go of a breath you didn't realize you were holding
>The door you’re standing in front of, whilst having the same design as all the others, is significantly larger
>Swinging the ornate double doors wide open Twilight steps inside, making her way towards a pair of chairs sitting in the centre of the room
>As you step into the room your eyes almost pop out of your sockets at the sight
>Rubbing your eyes you spin around, taking in your surroundings
>Lining each and every wall is shelves upon shelves of books
>You can't help but let out a whistle at the sheer quantity of books packed into the room
>Hearing a giggle behind you, you spin on your heels to face Twilight, a hoof covering her mouth
>Raising an eyebrow you make your way over to her and practically collapse into the chair opposite her
>Letting out a sigh of relief you begin to sink into the chair
>You still have to crane your neck down to look Twilight in the eyes, but at least you're comfortable

>>29954157
>Finally regaining her composure she sits up in her chair and looks up at you
>"Sorry about that Tes, it's just I haven't even met another pony that's paid that much attention to the library before"
>Giving her a small smile and a nod you stretch out your back
>Feeling a few satisfying pops and clicks you sit up straight and cast another gaze at the books surrounding you
"I'm just surprised really, that you could fit so many books into one room, that anyone would have a collection this big in the first place really"
>"If you think this is impressive you should see the Canterlot Library, or the Royal Archives, or the Library in the Crystal Empire, to be honest this is child's play compared to most libraries"
>Your mind begins to wander as you begin imagine how huge they must be to dwarf this collection
>"Are you a fan of literature Tes?"
>Processing the fact that you were just asked a question your mind tears you away from your little daydream
>Humming your eyes snap back to meet Twilight's
"Uuuum literature? Not really, well I mean... when I get the time I try to read any books I have lying around that I haven't gotten around to. But usually my schedule keeps me pretty busy. Though I think it just opened indefinitely"
>Murmuring that last part to yourself you seem to have gotten it past Twilight but Spike is giving you a suspicious look
>"Well if you ever want to read a book from my library you can feel free to take it. Just let me know first, it helps to keep everything organized"
"Much appreciated Twilight"
>"Or if you feel like reading some comics I can always hook you up"
>Scrunching her muzzle slightly, Twilight shoots Spike a small glare at this
"No kidding?"
>"Nope, I've got all kinds of comics if you're interested"
"Well then I guess I'll have to pay you a visit later"
>Twilight seems shocked at your response whilst Spike has gained a rather smug smirk
>You can’t help but grin as well at Twilight’s reaction

>>29954167
"So Twilight tell me, what's a princess doing out here?"
>Snapping out of her shock Twilight focuses back on you
>"What do you mean?"
"I mean you've got the castle, you've got the horn and wings, and you've got the title. I'm just wondering why the ruling monarch would choose to set up shop in the boonies"
>Twilight almost seems shocked at your words, her eyes going as wide as saucers whilst Spike desperately tries to hold back his laughter
>Regaining her composure Twilight lets out a sheepish giggle of her own
>"Oh, I'm not a ruling princess Tes, the royal sisters, Princess Celestia and Luna are the rulers of Equestria"
"Oh yeah, and where are they?"
>Starting to feel a little intrigued you lean forward, resting your chin on top of your claws
>"The princesses reside in Canterlot castle, it's the city on the side of the mountain just outside the borders of Ponyville, you should have been able to see it on our way through Ponyville"
>Brief flashes of something hanging off the side of a mountain come to you as she says this
"Yeah, I vaguely remember"
>"Not to worry I'm sure they'll both want to meet with you once I send word, they've been around for who knows how long and even their knowledge of dragons is limited. But that does remind me, why did you decide to come to Ponyville in the first place Tes?"
"Why?"
>That's what a lot of your own questions revolve around
>Thinking back over your short time here you try to look through your memory as far back as you can
>You're able to remember back to waking up in that forest before your head starts to ache and jumps to you during that storm, back when you were still, you
>Obviously, you're still you but it just seems almost like the majority of your memories now are from someone else's head
>Trying to connect the two events your mind just goes blank, like you're hitting a wall of static
>Each time you hit the wall you hear a ringing before your mind snaps between one of the two

>>29954176
>You keep trying to force yourself against it trying to hold your mind there
>You try to remember something, anything that connects the two, a sensation, a sound, anything
>The more you focus on the static the louder the ringing gets
>Just as the ringing hits a crescendo something starts to overcome it
>The roar of rolling thunder and a familiar burning sensation
>The sound of thunder and the burning sensation quickly turn into a blistering headache that feels like it'll split your skull open
>Snapping back to reality you feel a cold sweat running down your body
>Gasping for air your eyes snap over to Twilight and Spike
>Both of them have a worried look in their eyes but remain still as they look up at you
>Taking in a deep breath you finally start to come down from whatever the hell that was
>Feeling your claws digging into something you glance down to see you’ve crushed the edges of the armrests in your hands
>Relaxing your claws, a chunk of splintered wood hits the marble floor, shards of woods scattering as it does
"Shit, sorry Sparkle, you got like a dust pan or something I can use?"
>Cursing under your breath you start picking up the scattered bits of broken wood
>Feeling a claw rest on your shoulder you look up to see Spike looking at you, worry clear on his face
>"Tes are you alright? I mean, I'm not even sure what was going on there but you looked really bad and you were pretty out of it"
>Clearing your throat you gather together a few more bits of wood before standing up and planting them on top of your chair
>Feeling a jolt of pain shoot through your head you let out a pained grunt before rubbing your temples
>Looking down at Spike you see him just giving you that same worried expression
>There's not a hint of pity in it, he's just genuinely worried for your health
>To think you were happy, fucking with him just a few minutes ago
"It's nothing you need to worry about Spike, I've just had a killer headache all day. I'll get over it."

>>29954182
That's this update done, I actually had this ready to post last night but I was way too tired to, luckily I've got the rest of today off as well so I might be able to get another update out by the end of the day

>>29954185
going good,, excited for more

>>29954185
Godspeed my guy, Tes is a qtp2t

Update coming soon. Trying to name five dragons right now

>>29954987
TFW you forget to namefag

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>>29954987

>>29954987
Permanently stoned/chill dragon named Blaze when?

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>>29955999
>DOUBLE DUBS AND TRIPS
Someone get on this

>>29955999
Blaze gets high and endeavors to plant trees in the dragon lands even though it's a blistering desert

>>29954182
>Wringing his hands he looks down at his feet, drawing small circles in the floor
>"A- are you sure?"
>You can't help but giggle at his concern, it's adorable
"Definitely... Although, if you're gonna be so worried... remember that aspirin I mentioned earlier?"
>Raising one of your eyebrows at Spike slightly he seems to perk up at this
>"You got it, I'll be right back"
>Your eyes follow him as he rushes out the door
>You can't help but feel a smile grow on your lips at the sight
>"That's why he's my number one assistant"
>Turning your head downward you spot Twilight gazing out the doorway, a warm smile on her lips
>You had almost forgotten she was there
"He's a good guy, and again, sorry about the chair"
>Turning back to the chair you internally groan at all the shards of scattered wood
>"Oh, don't worry about that"
>Suddenly the chair and the splinters of wood are enveloped in a lavender glow
>Floating upwards, the shards of wood start to surround the armrests, slowly spinning up, the shards of wood come together and start to repair the chair
>With a flash of light the chair floats down to the ground, good as new
>Hesitantly placing a claw on the armrest, you begin to apply a bit of pressure, before leaning your weight onto it
>Magic, how does it work?
"Damn, that's impressive"
>Turning back to Twilight she stands there with a proud look on her face, obviously enjoying the praise
>"Oh it was nothing, just a little repair spell"
>Chuckling at her you take a seat once more before another jolt of pain runs through your head
>Grumbling, you slide down the chair a little as you rub your temples
>Despite the pain you at least got something out of it
>You managed to remember spotting that lightning bolt just as it struck you in the chest
>Thinking back on it only raises further questions
>Did you die?
>Were you teleported here with magic?
>Does that make this the afterlife or what?
>Are the royal sisters or whatever God?
>Is the universe just fucking with you?

>>29957002
>Burying your head in your hands you let out a low growl
>You'd be surprised if you weren't so pissed with this world and its constant habit of making your situation even more confusing at every opportunity
>"Uuuuh Tes?"
>Looking up at Twilight you feel your shoulders relax slightly as your eyes meet hers
>At least you ended up in a place with peo- ponies who could maybe help you out
>Giving an affirmative hum you rub your eyes as you feel more exhaustion begin to weigh down on you
>"I'm sorry to ask but, did your... memories, cause that?"
>Taking a deep breath you're about to spill the beans as you catch the sound of steps echoing in the hallway
>Only there's a problem, you don't remember Spike having six legs
>Standing up, you face the door; sure enough Spike comes jogging into the room alongside another pony you hadn't seen before
>Seeing as how Twilight and Spike seem unfazed by this you stay as you are
>Jogging up to you, Spike holds out a pill with a glass of water
>"Here you go Tes"
"Cheers Spike"
>Taking the pill and water you do a double take on the pill
>Holding it to eye level you notice it's much bigger than you expected and engraved with weird runes
"Well this is certainly the weirdest aspirin I've seen"
>"Yeah, sorry about that. When I ran into Spike he told me what was going on, I just thought it'd be a good idea to give a dragon something a little bit stronger than your average pain-killer"
>Glancing up at the new pony she gives you a sheepish grin
>Shrugging you wash the pill down with a gulp of water
>Feeling a slight numbness in your head almost immediately you're relieved to feel your head clear up
>Looking up at the pony from before you take her in a bit more
>She’s a unicorn like Rarity, her coat is a light purple, with her tail and mane being a dark purple mane, and a strand of blue hair going down the middle of both
"Thanks for that Spike, I already feel better, and thank you too… who are you again?"

>>29957026
>"Oh right, sorry, I'm Starlight Glimmer, I was in my room so I didn't hear you come in. You know I had heard the girls talking about something but I didn't realize they were talking about another dragon being in town"
>Extending her hoof, you give it a small shake
>"I'd love to stay and chat but it's getting pretty late and I should probably be heading to bed, maybe we can talk some other time?"
"Maybe"
>Letting out a small yawn Starlight makes her way out of the library
>Turning back to Twilight you stretch out your back before letting out a small sigh
“Sorry Sparkle, if it’s getting so late we may have to pick this up tomorrow"
>"Awwww, are you sure? It looks like Luna only just raised the moon, you sure we can't talk a little?"
>Tilting her head to the side, she gives you a small pleading smile
>Damn these ponies and their cuteness
"Alright, I reckon I can stay up a little longer"
>"YES-"
>Holding up a claw you cut off Twilight mid-bounce as a smile threatens to overtake her whole face
"But how I got here can wait, still trying to wrap my head around that myself"
>Deflating a little Twilight gives you another concerned look
"But if I remember correctly I still have a few questions to ask you~"
>Flashing Twilight a wink and a smirk she immediately perks up at this
>Again you and Twilight sit down as you ask her a few of the millions of questions that have been bothering you all day
>Over the course of about an hour you learn some basic stuff to help satisfy your racing mind
>Turns out, you're in a place called Equestria
>Further questions revealed its a substantial land-mass on this planet
>That means you're not on Earth anymore, possibly not even the same universe
>You figured as much but you can’t help but feel your heart sink, hearing it so clearly
>But hey, if you could be brought here somehow, maybe you could get back somehow

>>29957040
>You also learned that those wooden bastards from earlier are known as Timber Wolves, and that you had ended up in what was known as the Everfree, apparently one of the most inhospitable areas here
>You avoided mentioning anything about humans, Earth or anything from your past life
>You're still not sure what to make of all this so you'll let that sleeping dog lie
>Roughly an hour passes and Twilight is overcome by another yawn, you also notice how hard she seems to be trying to keep her eyes open
>Leaning back you let out a sigh before planting your claws on your legs and standing to full height
"I think I'm gonna hit the hay, what do you say Sparkle?"
>"What? no... no, I- I'm fine I'm-"
>Her sentence is cut short as she is overcome by another yawn
>Chuckling slightly Twilight joins in with her own sheepish giggle
>"Maybe you're right"
>Stepping off her chair Twilight arcs her back before relaxing, her head drooping until it's nearly touching the floor
>Turning her head to the side slowly she flashes up her horn
>Following her gaze you notice Spike conked out on the ground next to her chair
>Levitating him onto her back, Twilight gives him a small nuzzle before slowly making her way to the door
>"Come one, I'll show you to your room"
>Dragging your feet as you go, you follow behind Twilight back down the winding halls of the castle
>Luckily this journey isn't as long and soon enough Twilight stops in front of a door
>Murmuring incoherently, she lazily waves a hoof at the door before letting out another yawn
"I got it Twilight, you take care"
>Humming, Twilight stumbles away down the hall, readjusting Spike on her back as she goes

>>29957052
>Letting out a sigh you push open the door to your room
>It's a very simple room, directly ahead of you sits a writing desk tucked away in the corner
>Opposite it is your bed with a mirror at the end, and an empty bookshelf just to the right of the door
>You’re forced to duck down to get through the doorway but the roof is high enough that you can walk around qt full height comfortably
>Making a quick sweep of the room you see a few pieces of parchment with a quill and ink-pot on the desk
>Turning towards your bed, you find yourself standing in front of the mirror and doing a once over for the second-time today
>Yep still a dragon babe
>At least you're still sexy
>Looking over yourself you're able to get a much clearer look at your new body without the water ripples
>More specifically you're able to see your horns clearer
>Running symmetrical to each other they start off thick at the base, becoming thinner as they get to the tip
>Sprouting out near the back of your head and curving downwards, your horns run down the back of your head and the sides of your neck
>As they reach your shoulders they curve upwards like hooks as they reach the tip
>Running your claws down your horn you take yourself in once more before you make your way over to your bed
>Crashing onto your bed, the events of the day flash by
>You got hit by lightning and possibly died, turned into a dragon, fought timber wolves, killed their dad, then ended up in a village run by talking multi-coloured ponies
>Feeling the exhaustion from the day on top of the pill from earlier come crashing down on you, you quickly find yourself falling into sleep's embrace

>>29957063
Another day another update, hope you guys liked it cause the next one might not be until the weekend
As for the anon in the last thread who asked for more details on Tes, this update is gonna be the very last bit of detail I add to her body, I might add some clothes and accessories to her but this is gonna be the last time I mention any of her real defining features

>>29949211
>Rarity spins around and takes your list to her desk, she then sits down and starts writing some more.
>You weren't trying to manipulate her, but you kinda did...
>Rarity speaks up again, but keeps her eyes on her notes.
>R: "Oh, and do keep that book dear, you will get far more use out of it than I will."
>Damn, she sure is generous...
>You mentally sigh...no shit she's generous, that's kinda her thing.
"Well, I /really/ do appreciate all that you're doing for me, and I'll make it up to you. I do have to get going though, I have date-"
>You stop yourself, it's not really a /date/ is it? You called it that to mess with Spike, right?
"...A friendly...lunch meeting with Spike. I need to go meet up with him, to hang out. As friends..."
>Luckily, Rarity seems to be too enthralled in her thoughts to notice you fumbling with your words.
>R: "Don't worry about it darling, go have fun. I'll have your armor done as soon as I can!"
>You grab your book and your purple dress and head out the door.
>Your new dress is a bit longer, but the material flows better in the wind.
>A few mares even ask you if it's one of Rarity's. Maybe that's why she makes you clothes: everyone wants to look at the pretty new dragon in town, might as well advertise your clothing line on her...
>Generosity can be self serving, but it's still generosity. The armor? That might just be a gift, unless she's looking to get into smithing, but that seems a bit messy for her.
>Back at the castle, you make your way to your room and put your new book in your collection. You also find a good place to hang your purple dress, you'll be wearing this one for a bit while it's in style.

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>>29957645
>You head toward Twilight's room. That's basically Spike's room too, so you assume that's where you can find him if not in the library.
>You find the door open and peek inside only to find Twilight, alone and making another random list.
>You knock on the door frame and step inside.
"Hey, do you know where Spike is?"
>Twilight turns to you, her face is quizzical and her words carry a strange tone.
>T: "You just missed him, he should be waiting by the door for you. He told me about your...date."
>You wince. She's probably not very happy about this.
>Her tone suddenly takes on hopefulness.
>T: "I haven't eaten yet! I could come along...if you want."
>You scratch the back of your neck in awkwardness.
"Well, Spike is taking me to try gems. Plus, he kinda wants it to be just us."
>Her hopeful smile wavers.
>T: "I bet he does..."
>You just barely heard her as she mumbled.
>Just change the subject.
"But I got invited to play Spike's little role playing game later this afternoon, you could come play with us!"
>Her smile returns, but it's weak.
>T: "I was never really interested in that silly game, but maybe I'll give it a shot."
"I used to play a very similar game back on my home world, you'll like it!"
>You give a small wave and turn to leave.
>T: "Wait! I like your dress..."
>It looks like she just now noticed it, being too distracted by the situation to notice it before.
"Rarity made it for me, pretty isn't it?"
>You continue out the door and Twilight cranes her neck to continue her examination.
>T: "yeah, /really/ pretty."

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>>29957657
>You round a corner, the front doors now in your sight.
>You also spot Spike, and you roll your eyes.
>He's wearing a vibrant red bow tie and a fake fucking mustache.
>You sigh and march toward him. He spots you and straightens out his tie.
>S: "Oh hey- wow, that's a fantastic dress, you look great!"
>Your march falters and you can feel your face heat up.
>Ok, his flattery has bought him a few more seconds before you chastise him.
"It is, isn't it?! I can even put it on without any help!"
>After a few seconds your face pulls a 180 and you give him a disapproving look.
"Now...lose 'em."
>S: "What do you mean?"
>Your response is a blank stare.
>He sighs in disappointment.
>S: "Fine..."
>He takes off his bow tie and fake mustache and discards them begrudgingly.
>Spike leads you to the outskirts of town where he sets up a picnic blanket in a small grassy plane.
>The afternoon sun shines bright in the cloudless sky. From where you sit, all you can see is an endless horizon of grassy hills punctuated by a distant mountain range, a few lone trees littered here and there.
"This is beautiful Spike, but where's the gems?"
>He grins smugly.
>S: "You have to find them! Freshly dug up gems are the best!"
>You watch in amusement as he digs in random spots in the area until he stumbles upon a few gems. He brings a small arm full of them back to the blanket and sets them down, sorting them by color.
>two emeralds, one sapphire, three garnets, and two amethysts.
>You both get one emerald and one amethyst, but he gives you two of the garnets and the only sapphire.
>S: "It's not much, but it should be a good enough sampler."
"You only got three gems, Spike, that's not much of a lunch..."
>S: "That's fine, you'll thank me once you try them. Sapphires are my favorite, but I really want you to try one."

>>29957102
I'm still reading. Lookin forward to more sexy lightning drake

bumba

>>29959115

>>29959965

Continuing the story from the last thread, I'll have a pastebin up soon.

>As you start to regain your faculties, you sit up to look at the source of the voice.
>A small, reptilian creature is waving its arms frantically, trying to get the attention of somebody.
>Your gaze however doesn’t stay trained on them for long, as you look down at your body.
>Royal purple scales coat your body, their dark shine glinting with the glare of the sun.
>Your feet are shoeless, and end with a few sharp, clawed digits.
>A long tail trails behind you, and there’s a slight weight on your back that you don’t even have to look at to know what it is.
>You’re not naked, you’re clad in what seems to be some rough leather armor.
>Hardly even functions as armor really seeing as how little it actually covers on you.
>Covers the chest and the hips, but everything else is just kind of out there.
>As much as you’d like to look your face over, you don’t really see anything to check your reflection in.
>As bizarre as waking up as a dragon is, there’s something even stranger you can’t get your mind off of.
>You feel physically normal.
>Despite your vastly altered anatomy, you don’t feel out of place.
>Your wings and tail move on command without any strain in the slightest.
>The other dragon runs back over, their mouth turned up in a big grin.
>”I can’t believe you’re awake!” he says, holding back giddy laughter.
>Before you can question him anymore, you’re joined by some other creatures.

>>29960782
>By your count, and excluding you, there are four dragons here.
>The first one, the who got excited when you woke up, is a small dragon with sky blue scales.
>Their small eyes dart around eagerly at his companions, the smile not leaving his face.
>”What did I tell you guys? She was gonna wake up and everything would be fine!”
>One dragon to his left, a light green one looks away, an indignant scowl plastered on his face.
>He starts talking, his speech marred with a very noticeable stutter.
>”T-took you long enough, I was g-getting tired of sitting around…”
>The tallest of the bunch, a dragon with peach colored scales smacks the back of his head, frowning.
>”Quit being a jerk Skip!” she says, “Give her a break!”
>The green one, presumably Skip, mutters something under his breath.
>Standing a little ways off from the rest of them is a white dragon, wrapped in roughspun robes.
>Their eyes look grey and lifeless, and they’re staring off more into the distance than at anything in particular.
>Safe to assume that they’re blind.
“Hey uh, what’s going on here?” you ask.
>The pinkish one turns to face you.
>”Hm? We've all just been worried about you Morgan!”
>Morgan?
>Who the hell is Morgan?

>>29960786
“Who are you guys anyways, and where am I?”
>The pink dragon looks at you like you've gone mad.
>”Hey uh, are you feeling okay? You sound a little out of it…” she says, concern rising slightly in her voice.
>You shake your head, standing up.
“I've never seen any of you in my life.”
>Skip holds back a chuckle, and the short one in front gasps in shock.
>”What's wrong Morgan?!”
>Frowning, you try to explain yourself.
“Look, I was floating in this… void for a long time, and when I woke up, I was here! I have no clue who any of you are, or why you're calling me Morgan!”
>Think pink one crosses her arms.
>”You're the one who told us to call you that a year ago!”
>A year ago?
>There's no way!
>The blind one steps forward, her voice soft but calm.
>”You said you were floating in a void when we first met a year ago... Perhaps what happened just now is a similar occurrence?” she asks, looking towards you.
>You try to muster up some sort of objection, but you've got nothing.
“How about you guys fill me in on this year I ‘forgot’?”
>The pink one nods, leading you towards a small little overhang of rock that seems to be their camp.
>You sit down, ready for what you assume is going to be a /long/ story.

>>29960790
>The pink dragon, apparently named Cinder, keeps things short and sweet.
>About a year ago you woke up in the middle of “dragon territory” claiming you were from another world.
>When they asked you your name, you said Morgan.
>The reasoning you gave was “It being the name of a powerful sorceress in my home!”
>Just hearing that makes you cringe.
>If you really did do all this, you should be slapped.
>It's not even like your real name is all that complex!
>Anyways, it seems like you took up a job as a courier.
>That's how you met these dragons, they're your co-workers.
>Out here it seems dangerous enough to send five dragons on a delivery.
>Today you had been doing a run and out of nowhere you keeled over.
>And now here you are with no memories of the past year.
>You have a feeling this is a very abridged version of the story.
>And even then it's a lot to wrap your head around.

>>29957665
muh heart, Tonic a qt

>>29960794
nice, looking forward to more

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Just to satisfy my curiosity: did any of the dragons in any of the greens here succeeded in getting lewd with Spike or at least make him less of a cuck?

>>29962096
I think the first few stories went with that approach but most of those died apart from Mage's Tonic green
Although that story is still working on making him less of a cuck

>>29957665
>He wasn't lying, the gems he brought you were some of the best things you've ever eaten.
>You gracelessly devoured them once you had gotten a taste, and you have to say, amethysts were probably your favorite.
>You spent the rest of the time talking about nothing, and Spike eventually decided to tell you about the diamond dogs. You knew it was only a matter of time.
>He, of course, embellished his story just like he did with the Crystal Empire.
>You had to interrupt him this time.
"Spike, you don't have to lie about your adventures..."
>He looks at you, surprised.
>S: "W-what are you talking about?"
"Twilight told me."
>He hangs his head in shame.
>S: "Sorry Tonic, I just really want you to think highly of me. I think you're really special, and I wanted you to think I was special too."
>He looks like he's on the verge of tears.
"Spike, you don't give yourself enough credit. In both of those stories, if you take away all of the ridiculousness, you still risked your life to save your friends and innocent people. You /are/ special, Spike, you're a hero! Just be yourself, you don't need to embellish stories or wear stupid fake mustaches."
>S: "Thanks Tonic..."
>His voice is shaky and he still won't look at you.
>You sit up onto your knees and pull him into a hug. His new size allows him to fully embrace you.
>With his body pressed up against yours, he buries his face in your shoulder.
>It doesn't take long for you to feel a familiar burning sensation between your legs, however, and you try to get the feeling to go away.

>>29962739
>God damnit, you were in the middle of a nice moment, and now your weird female needs have sprung up again!
>With each second that the embrace continues, you feel your arousal becoming more prominent.
>My mind's tellin' me no...
>It eventually reaches a boiling point, and you grab Spike's shoulders and hold him at arms length.
>He looks shocked, his bloodshot and tearful eyes wide.
>You can feel your own gaze becoming more intense as you look him over.
>S: "What's wrong-"
>You interrupt him by kissing him, your tongue invading his mouth and your arms pushing him into his back.
>He lets out a surprised moan as you straddle him and keep pressing into the kiss.
>Every fiber of your being is trying to stop what you're doing, but some unseen, lecherous force is pushing you down upon him.
>This is weird, Spike is a dude! /You're/ a dude! You've just been fucking with him, this isn't supposed to be happening!
>You feel your mind overload as you try to stop yourself.
>All of the regret hits you at once. Thinking about it and dreaming about it are different things altogether, you're not ready for this!
>More importantly though, it doesn't look like Spike is ready for this either. His eyes are shut tight and his arms are trying to push you off of him.
>He might be mature, but he's still young! What the hell are you doing?!
>Your unnatural strength wavers, and Spike is able to push you upward, a strand of saliva still connecting your mouths.
>There's a moment of clarity as you stare into each other's panicked eyes, and you scramble to get off of him.

>>29962749
>Your throat tightens and your eyes burn.
>Just when you thought that you were getting used to all of this, you come to find out that part of you still clings to your old identity.
>Not to mention you just assaulted a close friend...
>Your vision goes blurry from the tears.
"I-I'm so sorry, Spike!"
>Spike doesn't say anything. He's still in shock, like he's not sure what just happened.
"It's this damn mating cycle! I'd never hurt you on purpose!"
>He remains silent. You start to lean over so you can put a hand on his shoulder, or maybe hug him, but you stop yourself when he flinches.
>S: "It's ok, Tonic...you didn't mean to."
>His voice is distant.
"No, it's not ok! I could've hurt you, I was hardly able to stop myself!"
>You stand up and back away from him.
"/You/ were worried about becoming a monster, but you should've been worried about /me/..."
>Spike's focus returns, and he stares at you incredulously.
>S: "Tonic, no...I'm not mad at you! You're not a monster!"
>He yells after you, but you take off toward town. You need to be away from him right now...
>You spend the next fifteen minutes behind some random house in town trying to stop crying and regain your composure.
>You weren't going to let this mating cycle get between you and Spike. You weren't going to let it affect you at all!
>And you finally had a test to prove that you had put your human life behind you, and you failed that too.
>You're kind of glad you did, ironically, that was one of the things that helped you snap out of it.
"I guess I just need more time..."
>When you're absolutely sure that you're done sobbing, you stand up and start walking toward the castle. You're not sure where Spike is now, but you doubt he'd come looking for you so soon.

>>29962763
>As you continue walking you speak Discord's secret phrase, and he teleports to you a few seconds later.
>He's again dressed in his lab coat, and his weird rat-spider-bat-thing is actually flying around him, hissing and snapping while he flails about screaming.
>A weak smile forms on your face and you chuckle softly as he realizes where he is and teleports the creature away along with his clothes.
"Does Fluttershy know that you're making abominations out of her beloved woodland creatures?"
>He gives you a toothy grin.
>D: "Maybe she doesn't know about /everything/ I do."
>He suddenly gasps and floats around you.
>D: "I see you got a new dress, it's quite lovely. You know, I could always make you some clothes if you're ever in the mood to try out /real/ fashion."
>You cross your arms.
"Rarity told me that your attention to detail might be a bit...skewed."
>Discord scoffs.
>D: "She's still angry about the time I tried to help her make dresses. Asymmetrical is always in fashion!"
>There's an awkward pause, and discord raises an eyebrow at you as your face gets more serious.
>D: "I suppose in this situation Twilight would probably ask you 'what's wrong.'"
"Remember when you taught me all of the dragon stuff? Did you teach me how to control my um...lust? The mating cycle is here and I don't know what's going to happen."
>His face gets a bit more serious.
>D: "A dragon's breath is an ability, a dragon's greed is a supernatural force, my specialty, but lust isn't something I can teach you to control."
>You solemnly nod, and Discord goes back to smiling smugly.
>D: "Why, is someone worried that they'll attack the friends they're seducing?"
>You're a little past worrying...
"I just wanted to know what to be prepared for."

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>>29960794
Sketch dump

>>29960794
This is nice. Although it feels a bit rushed.
You better take a bit more time and properly introduce (read: describe) each dragon later, not necessarily all at once, don't even have to be in a single update.
Like Morgan gets to "know them" at some point, introducing them to the reader at the same time.

>>29963306
Trust me, I fully intend to have her meet these guys slower. There was just no real strong way to introduce the missing year without it taking forever, so I gave the short and sweet version and intend to actually have Morgan learn who and what she's forgotten.

>>29963511
Thats great.
Would make my job much easier.

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>>29963158
>tfw still waiting for a sketch of lightning drake
ok

>>29962774
things are really heating up,
I like you discord in counters,

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>>29955999
>>29956061
>>29956746

what would he look like?

>>29965334
He's gotta have a dragon beanie

>>29965334
because i wouldnt mind taking a crack at it

>>29962774
It'll all end up with spike taking the initiative and giving the D, isn't it?

Roman, I really enjoy the concept of the lightning drake, and I look forward to seeing where you go. Your pacing is good, leaving me wanting more but not frustrated.

Treasure Mage,
I like that you flipped the script on Tonic, and she is in fact in over her head with her body's wants. The whole thing with her telling Spike that he should have been worried about her becoming a monster, not him, was especially nice in a Saturday morning cartoon sort of way. Love that she's getting armor, a rad sundress, and a sexy gown, can't wait to see what she dips into next for fashion.

I wrote up little bios for the main characters of my new green. Would you guys want to see them, or go in absolutely blind about their personalities?

>>29967463
Try to weave them into the story, gradually introducing the dragons to us.

>>29967477
I intended to gradually introduce them to Morgan and thus the reader too, regardless of me sharing this. I mostly wrote it for myself and Laskaris and wanted to know if you guys wanted to see it to. Me sharing it won't affect the pacing of the story itself- but if you'd rather learn about them through the actual story, that's fine by me.

>>29967463
>>29967492
I agree, It is a smart decision to not immediately share this info and gradually do that instead.
It's kind of a spoiler to give it up this instant.

Liking the story so far. Don't rush it.

>>29967492
Okay then, just put them under a spoiler.
Some people enjoy the element of surprise from reading a story.

>>29965334
>>29966394
I would kind of like a running gag where you ever see his eyes at all because of his hair. Otherwise, probably green. Maybe we could step outside the box and make him more of an eastern style dragon

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>>29968089
Bit of a start of tes

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i hope this is ok

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>>29968089
>>29968091
>>29968283
H Y P E

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>>29968283

>>29968344
Nigga that's fucking cute.
I wanna see more of that adorable little bugger.

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>>29968091
body's looking good can't wait to see what you do with the rest of her

bunbunb

>>29970145
dragon rump bump

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>>29970790
I like dragon rumps

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What do you lot reckon spooky dragonfire stories would be??

What are your guys' hopes for my current green?

>>29974270
For it to stop

>>29973656
Damn that's good. I always figured they told scary stories about dragonslayers and, like you illustrated, spooky tales of hoard thieves.

>>29974270
Mystery, comedy, Skip getting the shit end of the stick in the end like he deserves, and dragon shenanigans.

>>29974297
To never see another update of it. Ever.

>>29974270
I have none. You're a traitor and your content is worthless now.

>>29974270
What happened to the good shit? Like, gold standard was good- but this??

>>29974270
Oh, are you being a needy little whore who wants people to tell you how good you are again?

>>29974270
I hope the story stops making my eyes bleed soon.

So anyway,, what are some good apple based lewd puns?

Im up for some suggestions

>>29974270
Is it too late to ask for you to choose any other green to write on? Because I hope you will.

>>29974270
That Morgan jumps off a cliff, thus ending the story forever.

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>samefagging this hard
At least put some effort in it you dingleberry.

>>29974297
>>29974310
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>>29974330
>>29974340
>>29974360
>>29974347

Not even bothering to hide your samefagging, I see. Ballsy move, but it didn't work in your favor.
P.S. trying to make them see sense won't work. I've tried.

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>>29974297
>>29974310
>>29974315
>>29974330
>>29974340
>>29974360
>>29974347
this, fuck off and lurk moar kola, come back when you've learned what an idiot you've been this whole time.

>>29974604
How has he been an idiot exactly?

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>>29974668
Attention whoring in ptfg was his biggest mistake. Don't enter a thread with your name already on talking about how you're coming from a different thread. Just fucking write. Most of his green is passable at best and yet he used to bring up how long gold standard was like that even matters. Length is not always a factor of quality. In fact, excessive length and bragging about it is a dead giveaway that the story is shit. He is objectively the worst writefag here, and that says a whole fucking lot considering: Woofr has been nothing but a lazy cunt this whole time, at least his bi yearly updates are actually good. Treasure Mage puts out work with Tonic but then he decided to write some crossover that borders on Sonic fanfic tier in terms of the sheer number of OC's. punki is good but can't take the fucking hint that he's good so he stopped.

All that and Kola still manages to be worse. Truly impressive. Do whatever Kolagahn. At this point I couldn't care less. Woofr is the only reason why I'm here anymore since punki stopped writing anyway.

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>>29963158
More draw

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>>29976735
They're all looking great.
Except Skip. He's a cunt.

>>29976826
Everything seems in order then.

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>>29974345
Ahm sweeter than a Honeycrisp, sugarcube. Wanna taste?

So, with the addition of four new dragons, which seems like they'll be the best?

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Guess who's not dead.

I apologise for not being around lately for anyone that gives two flying fucks and a squirrels ass about my content. Just got other things going on right now, and I'm not really finding any time to feel inspired enough to write anything.

I'll try and get back into the swing of things as soon as I can if anyone wants me to come back and start working on anything in particular again.
>>29974270
Haven't read it yet, but I will when I have the time. Care to give me a quick rundown?
>>29972501
We all do. That's a qtp2t Spike you got there.

post more
>>29968089
A new drawfriend? This is fucking awesome, keep it up.
>>29976735
I don't think that you are capable of drawing a none-cuddleable dragon.
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>>29974323
Holy fucking samefag, Batman. Mate, would you just fucking stop, this shit is getting cringeworthy as fuck.

>>29979835
>I'll try and get back into the swing of things as soon as I can if anyone wants me to come back and start working on anything in particular again.
>if anyone wants me to come back
more qt chav shenanigans please

>>29974345
You can always say that you love eating apples...

>>29979835
Basically Anon wakes up from a strange coma in the middle of territory surrounded by a small group of dragons. Based on what they say, she woke up a whole year ago and works with them as a courier, and that earlier today she keeled over. With no memory of this apparent missing year, Morgan as she is now called travels with this group of courier dragons wondering what the hell is going on.

>>29974345
You can use "Apple seed" in a number of situations

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>>29982081
Nice,,

pun bunp

>>29958398
>>29967196
thanks, it's good to know my story isn't complete trash

>>29957063
>Your eyes slowly crack open as your mind is pulled from its pleasant sleep, back to the world of the living
>As you attempt to shift in bed to readjust yourself and get more comfortable, you fell a heavy exhaustion sapping your strength
>Your palms are sweaty, your knees feel weak and your arms are heavy, and you need some god damn coffee
>Finally managing to shift onto your back a series of knocks rings through your room
>As your bleary eyes attempt to focus on your surroundings, your still groggy mind attempts to process what you think is someone talking from behind the door
>"...es, ar... up yet?"
>Weird, when did you get a roommate, or is it just a really polite burglar waiting to shank you?
>As you ponder this another series of knocks snaps you out of your stupor
>"Tes? Twilight told me to call you down for breakfast"
>Bolting upright at the sound of Spike's voice you do a double take on your surroundings
>Fancy bed, room made of crystals, and with a quick glance down met with an eye-full of scales...
>Shit, and here you were thinking that pony nonsense was some sort of coma induced fever dream
>Hearing a third series of knocks your head snaps to look towards the door
>"Tes? Are you-"
"YES!"
>Clearing your throat you grumble to yourself for snapping like that before speaking up again, this time with a little less PMS
"Yeah yeah, I'm up Spike, what were you saying again?"
>"Uuuuuh breakfast. Twilight wanted me to wake you, to see if you wanted anything"
>Throwing the bed sheets off yourself you sit on the edge of the bed, rubbing the sleep out of your eyes
"Is coffee and pancakes alright?"
>"I'll get right on it, just get to the kitchen before it goes cold"
>Giving an affirmative hum your ears are met with the sound of footsteps heading down the hall
>Standing to your full height you stretch out your back and neck
>Feeling a few satisfying pops and clicks you relax your body into a slouch

>>29983826
>Taking in your surrounding once more you let out a sigh of relief
>Briefly wondering why you're relieved to have been dragged out of your home, you soon shake your head free of the thought, for now
>Making your way out of your room you duck under the doorway before stopping in the middle of the hallway
>For a brief moment, you had forgotten that this castle was a labyrinth that could put Daedalus to shame
>With a quick round of eeny meeny you make your way down one of the halls
>After a few minutes of aimless wandering you start to curse Sparkle for having such a messed-up home
>As you're about to turn 180 for the fourth time you nose twitches as it's met with a mouth-watering scent
>Following your nose back through the caste you find yourself near the entrance of the castle
>Heading in through the room the scent is coming from, you're met with Twilight and Spike serving up breakfast, with Starlight eating some fruit with a newspaper in front of her
>Noticing you coming through the doorway, Twilight and Spike perk up as you make your way over to the table
>Pulling out a seat you practically crash into it before laying your head in your hands
>"Good morning Tes, how did you sleep?"
>You're only able to let out a low groan in response to this, eliciting a small giggle from the purple mare
>Hearing a clink in front of you, you pull your head out of your hands to see a large stack of pancakes in front of you alongside a steaming hot cup of joe
>Turning your head slightly you see Spike in an apron beaming at you
>Giving him a small smile in return you give him a pat on the shoulder before sitting up straight
>You choose not to comment on his apron out of thanks
>Digging into your pancakes you find yourself alternating between shoveling the sugary, syrup covered goodness into you as quick as you can, and pausing to savour the sweet taste
>Smacking your lips as you finish off the last pancake, you take a sip of your coffee

>>29983828
>Straight black, doesn't taste the best by a long-shot but it wakes you up, and right now that's what you need
>As you slowly sip on your coffee you find that it isn't burning your mouth but is more of a gentle warmth
>Shrugging your shoulders you begin chugging the black beverage
>Feeling the last drop leave the cup you let out a satisfied sigh before slamming the cup back on the table
>"Somebody's thirsty"
>Glancing up you spot Starlight wearing a small smirk as she glances at you from above her paper
"Tired would be more accurate, my body's been feeling like lead since yesterday. That wakeup call hasn't helped much either, what time did you get Spike to wake me up anyways Twilight?"
>Turning to you with her own cup of coffee surrounded by a purple aura, she takes a quick sip before looking back up at you
>"About 7, why?"
>Grumbling you rub your eyes a bit before picking up your own cup, hoping to find a dreg of coffee left
"Because it should be illegal to make someone get up that early"
>Both mares chuckle at this before you feel something poking your arm
>Looking down, you spot Spike holding a pot of coffee in his claw
>"If you're still tired, do you want another cup?"
"If it's all the same to you I think I could use the whole pot at this point"
>Shrugging, Spike hands you the pot before heading back to the cooking station
>Pouring yourself another cup you glance up at whatever he's working on
>You almost end up overflowing your cup as you stare, stunned at how high the food is piled up
>Salad, cakes, pancakes, waffles, you can't even count all the variations on them he's making
>All different shapes and sizes, and almost stacked up to the roof
"What, are you having a house party or something Spike?"
>Turning to you with a quizzical look, he then glances between you and food mountain before a look of realization hits him
>"Oh yeah, I guess I sort of just got used to it over the years"

>>29983830
>Raising an eyebrow at him your attention is drawn to Twilight as she clears her throat
>"Let me try to explain Tes, from what I can tell, dragon magic needs a lot more energy to keep them from getting sluggish, since Spike is still just a young drake he wouldn't need it as often as... well you I suppose... buuuuut you probably already knew that right?"
>Giving a sheepish laugh Twilight attempts to look at anything other than you
>Chuckling at the adorable mare you dismissively wave a claw at her
"In all honesty Twilight I've never found myself needing that much food before, although now that you mention it"
>Smacking your lips you glance down at what was once your coffee to find both your mug and the pot empty
>Sighing you give it a shake to emphasize your point
"I could probably use a lot more of this to wake up properly"
>Scratching behind her neck, Twilight lets out a nervous laugh
>"The thing about that Tes is, well... it's sort of expensive to keep up with dragon hunger, you should have seen the bills when I first got Spike, and I don't think my pantries would survive another dragon"
>Seeing the near shame growing on Twilight's face you quickly speak up
"Well I'm sure you're not the only pony with food around here Twilight, are there any places around town that I can grab some chow?"
>Glancing up at you, you give her your best reassuring smile
>"Well if you're looking for energy you can always head to Sugar Cube Corner, as far as I know they've got every cake under the sun there. Not to mention Pinkie Pie works there as well, so you wouldn't be among total strangers either"
>Giving a nod you push out your chair before bringing your stuff over to the sink
>You have to place your stuff over to the side as it's already been filled with nearly all of Spike's plate
>Sitting yourself on the counter you turn back to Twilight
"One problem with that Sparkle, I'm new here and I don't even have a map"
>Rolling her eyes she shoots you a knowing smile

>>29983831
>"Don't worry I'm sure Spike or Starlight can show you around town"
>Glancing towards Starlight she gives you an apologetic look
>"Sorry, no can do, I'm looking into some new spells today"
>Giving a shrug you turn back to Spike before giving him a nudge on the shoulder
"Looks like it's just you and me Spike, what do you say, wanna paint the town red?"
>Finishing off his last plate of food and slipping it into the sink he gives you an affirmative nod
>"Sure, I can show you all the best places"
>Hopping off the counter you clap your hands together before making your way over to the door
"Sounds like a plan... unless..."
>Trailing off you stop just short of the door before turning to Twilight, shooting her a quizzical look
>Futilely trying to avoid your gaze, Twilight rubs one of her forelegs as she looks up at you
"Why can't you come with Sparkle?"
>"Oh... well... you know, I'm uh, doing research"
"What kind of research?"
>Usually you'd drop something like this but her nervousness has you intrigued
>"Oh just any old boring research-"
>"She's trying to find a book on dragon culture, something about “wanting to learn more about Tes and dragons without offending her” right Twilight?"
>Twilight body goes stiff as the gears in her head seem to halt with Starlight's interruption
>Snapping her head towards the traitor you find yourself barely holding in your laughter
>Just as quickly she turns back to you and tries to splutter out an explanation
>Holding up a claw to silence her you shoot her smirk
"We're gonna head out now alright?"
>Trying to speak up again she only manages to stumble over her words before she's able to get out a small "Alright"
>Opening the door you let Spike out first before stopping at the doorway
"You know I wouldn't even need to head out if you let me sleep in, right Twilight?"
>Smirking at your little joke she lets out a small giggle before waving you away

>>29983834
>"I'll be sure to make a note of your sleeping schedule"
"Hey, maybe I could get a copy of your sleep schedule when I get back too~"
>You're unable to catch Twilight's reaction as you slip out the door to follow behind Spike
>Finding him waiting at the entrance you both make your way out of the castle and into Ponyville

>>29983835
Another update done, if you have any criticisms let me know cause I can always use them, pacing, characters, the usual stuff, hope you enjoyed it

>>29983837
It's alright, but remove starshit nigger.

>>29984173
>hating socialist poner
Thousand years in gulag.

>>29984173
Starlit is pure

>>29985317
Nah, m8. Also, you spelled the name wrong. It's "Starshit Nigger".

>>29983837
It's pretty much unreadable due to the extreme participial phrase overuse.

>>29986204
I don't know what you're on about, m8. I can read it just fine.

>>29986214
Just like you can read IKEA assembly instructions. There's one difference, though. The prose of assembly instructions is more enjoyable to read.

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>>29962774
>Discord eyes you strangely.
>D: "You're being unusually passive. Did you call me here for some other reason?"
>You don't really know why you called him here, maybe you just wanted someone to talk to.
>You almost chuckle out loud. You must be desperate to call /Discord/ for comfort. Maybe you don't give him enough credit...
>You bring your hand to your chin as you think of a good enough reason.
"Um...yeah, let's go investigate that secret door in the castle. I'd rather do it now than later."
>Discord folds his arms.
>D: "Forgive me if I choose not to ignore how strange you're acting. Why are you so suddenly impatient?"
"Look, I just want something to do. I need to focus on something else right now."
>D: "'Something else?' What do you want to forget? Do tell, I love a good story!"
>You mentally kick yourself for not choosing your words more carefully.
>D: "You don't want to tell me? That's ok, I can always extract it from your memory. I could just use the same trick I used to teach you the dragon stuff..."
>You point a claw at him defensively.
"Hey, keep your weird magic claws away from me!"
>Discord laughs and teleports right in front of you. His arms are outstretched and he wiggles his fingers as he inches them closer to your forehead.
>You narrow your eyes and breathe a blast of blue flames at him, wiping the sly smile off of his now charred black face.
"Hmph, I bet you'd /love/ to touch me again, wouldn't you?"
>A bucket of water appears over him and tips over, spilling water over his burnt form.
>The water makes contact and steam obscures him, only for it to clear seconds later, revealing Discord's "immaculate" self again. Much to your frustration, the smile is plastered on his face yet again.

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>>29986594
>D: "Now that's the Tonic I'm more familiar with."
>Fine. Ask and ye shall receive.
"You didn't answer the question."
>Discord rolls his eyes.
>D: "Shall we go to the castle and begin our adventure?"
"Why are you changing the subject? Are you nervous? The fact that I was from a different world wasn't the only reason you took interest in me was it?"
>He throws his arms up defensively.
>D: "Alright alright, you've made your point! Do you want to explore the castle or not?"
>You successfully got Discord off of your trail. You can deflect better than fucking Genji.
>With a satisfied smile, you nod and start walking toward the castle again with Discord in tow.
>After a few steps you look back at him.
"There's just one thing I need your help with. Twilight is probably still there, do you think you can get her to leave for a few hours?"
>Discord smiles devilishly and rubs his hands together, his voice lowers to hear sinister levels.
>D: "I think I can persuade her to leave for a bit..."

>You are Twilight, and you're in the library studying as usual.
>You.../might/ be looking for polymorph spells inspired by your recent dream.
>You had some free time in today's schedule and the temptation was too much to ignore.
>You need every edge you can get, Spike is taking Tonic on a date!
>You feel sweat start to form on your forehead.
>Relax Twilight, you can still get her.
>Tonic needs a mate that can connect with her on a similar intellectual level. There's no way that Spike can provide that, he doesn't even like helping /you/ research!

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>>29986604
>You don't want to sabotage Spike, that's not something a good friend would do. However, if you can win her over fair and square, there's no harm in that.
>You can feel the cogs in your head turning as you think of ways to win Tonic over, as well as ways to make these darn polymorph spells work the way you want them to.
>Suddenly, you hear a *poof* sound as a cloud of smoke envelopes you and teleports you away.
>When you're able to see again, you find yourself in the middle of a village you've never been in before, and what's worse is that nearly all of its citizens are running and screaming in terror!
>You look around and see a swarm of strange creatures attacking the towns people! The creatures look like rats with spider legs and wings!
"What in the wide wide world of Equestria is going on here?!"
>You try and think of a spell that might get rid of these things, but one of them fixes its attention on you and swoops down to attack.
>You scream and take to the skies, brainstorming for a solution.

>You are Tonic, and you are starting to question your request to Discord. He seemed all too happy to get Twilight out of the way.
>He just snapped his fingers and kept walking.
>D: "...That should do the trick, Twilight won't be disturbing our sleuthing."
>You pick up your pace until you're walking beside him, and star up at him curiously.
"What did you do?"
>You can see almost every tooth in his mouth with the smile he's sporting.
>D: "You'd have me ruin the surprise?! I'd rather you hear it from Twilight when she gets back."

>>29983835
Liking Tes's personality and Twilight's spaghetti. Also Starlight don't give a fuck. kek.

>>29986612
kek. Discord is a dick. Good job, Mage.

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>>29986612
>Thirsty Twilight
>Discord being a dick
>Tonic having hormones on the brain
it's really, REALLY good, to see this again, good job Mage

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>>29983837
I'm really liking it so far. I can read it just fine.

>>29986204
What? I mean, i kinda understand that you have a problem with the grammar, but "unreadable?!"

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>>29940464
>i could tell what the russian said without translator
oh shit am i a slav now

>>29940464
green of slav drake squatting across Equestria when?

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>>29986612
>What sort of mess did you indirectly get Twilight into? Oh well, it's done, time to go explore.
>Your reaction to Discord's antics are surprisingly casual now, it's kind of worrying...
>Although it must be nice for Discord to finally have a friend that doesn't really give a shit about what he does. Hell, you even find it entertaining!
>Fluttershy is his best friend, but even she gives him shit about the things he does.
>Discord and you take a few more steps before you realize that your surroundings are changing. Before you know it, you walk straight into a wall face first and get dropped on your ass.
>After you quit seeing stars, you look around and see that Discord teleported both of you into the castle, but apparently didn't bother telling you...
>You here Discord snicker behind you.
>D: "Oh dear, you should watch where you're going!"
>You growl at him and stand up.
"Pull that shit again, and it'll be /your/ face bouncing off of a wall."
>But then there are Discord antics like these that really drive you up a fucking wall...or into one.
"How many times do I have to tell you, don't damage the goods! You better hope dragon asses don't bruise. And look at my dress!"
>You rub your head and dust off your dress from where you fell.
>Discord just chuckles as he watches you get more and more annoyed with each sentence.
>Maybe he realizes how strange it is that you're not phased by his tricks anymore, so he likes to push it sometimes.
>Seeing that your ranting is falling on def ears, you groan loudly and march toward the library.

>>29993182
>Discord catches up to you and begins speaking as if you didn't just rip him a new asshole.
>D: "What do you think we'll find in there?"
"Don't ask me. Aren't you supposed to be the expert on ancient magic shit? That weird lock box from the Tree of Harmony shit out this castle, remember?"
>Discord scoffs.
>D: "I never paid much attention to the intricacies of the elements. Harmony is so...structured, so boring, but yet it works in mysterious ways just like chaos."
>You feel your lips purse as you try to make sense of this.
"But the map has always been straight forward for the most part. It tells the girls where to go to find a friendship problem. Why would the castle hide secret doorways, and just how many are there?"
>By this point, you've reached the back of the library and Discord reaches up to the hidden lever.
>D: "Only one way to find out..."
>He pulls the lever and the bookshelf sinks into the wall and slides to the right to reveal the dark staircase again.
>You shudder as you recall your nightmare that ended in you running here.
>Discord conjures a torch and hands it to you. You light it with your breath and start walking slowly down the steps.
>Apparently whatever magic Twilight uses to keep bugs out of her castle isn't present here, there's spider webs everywhere.
>It's not very dusty though, the perks of having a new castle: your secret dungeons aren't going to be dusty for another twenty years.
>You eventually reach the bottom of the stairs and find yourself in a small room, it's walls match the rest of the castle.
>There's nothing impressive about it at all, just a ten foot by ten foot room. What is impressive however is the pedestal in the middle of the room...

>>29993192
>You walk over to the pedestal while Discord inspects the rest of the room, much to his disappointment.
>Your torchlight is able to light up the room well enough, and he squints his eyes looking for anymore secret buttons.
>D: "That's it?! Just an empty room with a pedestal?! No spooky residents, no crazy unearthed magics, no-"
"Can't you see that there's a book on this pedestal?! Don't discredit this just yet!"
>The book on the pedestal looks really old, just like some of the dragon books in fact. There also appears to be a sheathed dagger on the floor next to the pedestal.
>You lean over and inspect the book, careful not to touch it.
"Hey, get ready to teleport us out of here, I'm gonna try to take this book. Who knows what kind of Indiana Jones shit is rigged up to this."
>Discord gives you a confused look.
"Right...uh, Daring Do kind of shit."
>You face away from the book as you reach for it, peeking with one eye. You don't know what to expect.
>You quickly pick it up and shut your eyes tightly, bracing yourself for something crazy, but nothing happens.
>After a few seconds of nothing, you open your eyes in amazement. Then you reach down and grab the dagger as well, with the same result.
"Well shit, don't store your stuff in the castle, it'll just let people take your shit."
>D: "I could install some traps around here if you'd like..."
"I'm sure Twilight would absolutely love that..."
>His face brightens up with excitement.
"But DON'T."
>You take your arm full of loot and head toward the stairs, taking one last look around at the empty room.
"You sure there's nothing else in here? Just these?"
>Discord nods, obviously let down.
>You gesture to your new items.
"Don't worry, I'm sure these have an interesting story to tell."
>You re-seal the hidden door and make your way toward the door to the library when you hear Spike calling your name down the hall.

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>>29993199
WHAT'S IN THE FUCKING BOOK?

>>29993199
is it the dragon karmasutra?

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only a small update,, hopefully will get a few more out over the next couple days or so

Standing in a dim room, the faint sound of dripping can be heard in the distance with no visible source.
The air is thick with a lingering stale taste. you try to take in your surroundings, the emptiness of the room seems to shift and bur, a dizzy flurry of unease flows over you, making your blood run cold.

Each movement you make feels delayed and distorted, sending your head into a spin.

walking gingerly towards the wall, your chest getting heavier and heavier each breath gasped in the thickening fog, vision blurring with every step, as new sound slowly starts to echo and fill the room,

The laughter, pierces through you, as your grip and muscle tighten, trying to distort yourself into as small of a ball as possible, Shifting yours hands along the back of your neck, sudden sharp burning pangs runs down your spine.

“n-no, not again” gripping your head with your hands, curling up even more as you slump against the wall, you can't take another attack like that.

you already know something is wrong.
you manage to see the silhouette of your arms split in two before, you are blinded by a sudden flash of white light that envelops the whole room.

thats it for now

>>29999585
I'm hyped for more Scylla

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im excited for when i get to the apple puns,, and maybe some more lewds??

>>30000605
Wherever you decide to take the story is fine with me

>>29993199
>You are Spike, and you've been looking all over for Tonic.
>You wanted to stop her when she first ran off, but you were still a little stunned by what had just happened.
>It's probably for the best, it looked like she was crying when she left. She probably needed some space...she probably still does, but you need to talk to her all the same.
>You have a hard time remembering all the details of what happened. You were feeling things that you had never felt before, and you just blacked out.
>The only thing you remember is that amazing kiss, and you thinking that everything was happening too fast.
>You're not naive about sex and stuff, no matter how much Twilight likes to think you are, you're just not ready for it. At least, you don't feel like you are, though your body might say otherwise.
>But this isn't Tonic's fault, it's this mating season! Both of you are experiencing it for the first time, and she's probably having a harder time with it considering how much more mature her body is.
>You'd be more than happy to pick up where you left off in about a month when both of you can think clearly, but right now Tonic needs to know that you don't blame her.
>You checked throughout the town, but you didn't see her anywhere. The only other place she could be is the castle.
>She doesn't really have any close friends yet other than Twilight and you, maybe she went to talk to her.
>You really hope she didn't. The last thing you need is Twilight going big sister mode and trying to fix everything with magic or something.
>She could've gone to Discord, they've apparently been hanging out a lot recently.
>You shudder. Discord isn't always the best of friends, sometimes he can be a jerk. Maybe Tonic doesn't know that yet, maybe he has her fooled into thinking he's the perfect friend!
>You imagine Tonic telling him about her situation and how sad she is only for him to laugh and ridicule her!
>You grit your teeth. Just the thought of that makes you angry.

>>30002127
>You enter the castle and head straight for the library.
>That's where she's been spending most of her time, if she's not in there, she's most likely in her room.
>If all else fails you can go looking in Twilight's room, but like you said: you really hope Tonic's not with her.
>You walk down the hallway leading to the library.
"Tonic?! Are you here?!"
>You call out once more when you're near the door, and you could swear you hear frantic half-whispering followed by a magic-sounding poof.
>You peek your head around the doorway curiously and see only Tonic, carrying a large book and...a weapon?!
>A sigh of relief escapes you when you realize that Twilight isn't with her, and you enter the library fully.
"Tonic...what's with the sword?"
>She doesn't look upset anymore, thank Celestia, but her face is visibly troubled when she sees you.
>To: "Oh, hey Spike...it's actually a dagger."
>She shifts uncomfortably.
>To: "I got them at the pawnshop in town...when I ran away from you."
>Her voice is shaky near the end of her sentence, and her eyes become glossy.
"Tonic, I'm not mad! Neither of us were in our right minds, but nothing bad happened!"
>She lowers her head.
>To: "What if I didn't stop?"
"You did stop, that's all that matters."
>You say it in a much more stern voice and she looks up at you again, surprised.
"What if you and I switched places? You'd say I was 'full of shit,' wouldn't you? It wasn't all bad, I just wasn't ready. I actually kind of liked it...a lot, but we can pretend like it never happened!"
>Tonic sighs and sets her items down on a nearby table and then sits in one of the chairs, rubbing her temples.
>To: "I wish I could forget it Spike, but I /attacked/ you!"
"I've been to the dragon lands multiple times, and I've never seen or heard of dragons attacking each other like that. You're just new to these feelings, just like I am, we'll learn to control them and everything will be fine."

>>30002138
>Her face brightens up a little.
>To: "Really? I hadn't thought about that..."
>You walk over and place a hand on her shoulder. She tenses up and looks at your hand nervously, then turns back and tries to look you in the eye, but she can't bring herself to maintain eye contact.
>You give her a warm smile.
"I'm already over it, you just need something that'll take your mind off of it. Ogres and Oubliettes is great for that!"
>She looks apprehensive.
>To: "Spike, I don't know if that's a good idea, I might bail-"
"Come on, if not for me, then how about for Twilight? I asked her to play yesterday and she still didn't want to, but she did take more of an interest when I told her that you would be there."
>She still looks uncomfortable, but she relents.
>To: "I suppose I shouldn't ruin the fun, and I /do/ want to see how similar this game is to a game we had on my home world..."
"Thanks Tonic, it'll be a ton of fun, you won't regret it!"
>It takes you a second to left your hand from her shoulder. Your hand feels like it's a thousand pounds, it doesn't want to leave her smooth and glistening scales, but you force it back to your side anyway.
>Truth be told, she probably drives you more wild than you do her. Sure, these new changes to your body are strange, but it's hardly your first time dealing with lust. You've had plenty of experience resisting Rarity in the past, maybe you've just been applying the same experience with Tonic.
>She doesn't notice your reluctance, and picks up her things and stands up.
>To: "Just have Discord come get me when we're ready to play, I'll be in my room..."
>She brushes past you toward her room, and you stare after her, entranced.
>The very air around her is electrified, and it makes you feel lightheaded whenever your near her.

>>29983835
>As you and Spike make your way through the small town, you take in a deep breath of the air around you
>This new dragon body sure comes with a lot of new features
>The one you've taken most note of is your enhanced senses
>Your ears catch the chimes of bells in the distance, followed by the laughter of shrill voices filling the air
>A school?
>It makes sense you suppose; these ponies seem to be on the same level of intelligence as humans despite their lack of technology
>Your eyes meanwhile have a larger field of view than before, and you can see a significant distance in front of you
>Lazily trailing from one side to the other, your eyes take in the view of ponies as they go about their day
>But your nose seems to be the most potent of all
>From the fresh grass on the outskirts of town, to each kind of flower being sold by three ponies off somewhere in town, you're able to define smells far better than you could before
>Then there's that delectable scent that hit you from the door
>Presumably Sugarcube Corner from the intense sweetness of the smell
>Twilight sure wasn't exaggerating when she said they had every cake under the sun there, you're almost overpowered by the number of differing smells
>You shake your head to come back to your senses before your brain overloads with all this new information
>Still gonna have to get used to this new body
>You're surprised to see you've only just made it to the edge of town
>Spike is just a little bit ahead of you this time as he leads you through town
>He's becoming subtler luckily, only looking at you through the corner of his eyes whilst keeping his head facing forward as you two make your way through town
>Of course it's still dead obvious with how long he's looking at you
>With a small cough his eyes snap back to watching the road
>Just before he crashes into a pair of ponies
>You would give him a slow clap if he hadn't made you a bitching breakfast this morning

>>30002691
>Probably because they're both awkwardly standing there trying to make up their mind on where to look, you, the ground or the sky
>What, have they never seen a dragon before?
>Actually that probably isn't far from the truth, but still
>Then your memory finally kicks in
>It's those two ponies from the day before who ran off screaming as soon as they saw you... pair of racist carpet munchers
>Finally meeting their gaze they both open their mouths to say something only to close it soon after
>You let out a small huff in annoyance and finally decide to speak up
"Can I help you two?"
>Despite keeping your tone flat, when they snap out of their daze they still seem on edge
>Luckily the mint one chooses to reply rather than run this time
>"We... just wanted to apologize for how we acted yesterday"
>"Yeeeeaaah, we might have over reacted a little when we told Twilight and the others about you"
>You can't help but feel a bit awkward in these situations, you were never good with apologies, giving them or getting them
>Waving them off you give them a small smile, trying not to show off any of your teeth as you do
>You don't want them any more on edge
"Don't worry about it, water under the bridge as the saying goes"
>They let out a sigh of relief and seem to relax at this
>"That's good to hear"
>"Yeah, well anyway we should probably be off to work, we'll see you around though I guess"
>They both briefly speak with Spike before trotting away, giving you a wave as they do
>Half-heartedly returning the wave, you and Spike continue your way to Sugarcube Corner
>"So Tes, what do you wanna see first after Sugarcube Corner"
>Your first thought is the pub, but you doubt he would know
>As you scratch your chin absent-mindedly, you try to think of any other places you'd like to go
>When nothing comes to you, you turn back to Spike

>>30002701
"I dunno, what have they got here Spike?"
>"Well... we could visit the girls, see what they're up to, then there's the book store, that's where I get my comics, but other than that there's just other shops and market stalls"
>Wow, even on an alien planet they have basically nothing to do
>Checking in on one of the girls sounds like it may be interesting enough, then you remember Rarity's offer from yesterday
"We could go to Rarity's, she said she'd try and get me some new clothes"
>"Alright, sounds like a plan"
>You can't help but chuckle as you catch him give a fist bump at this
>As you hear someone clear their throat beside you and tap you on your shoulder, you turn only to internally groan
>Fool me once...
>Turning your head to the other side you find yourself only a few inches away from Rainbow
>"Gotcha"
>You roll your eyes at the mare before getting a bit of distance from her
"Hello to you to Rainbow Dash"
>You try to keep your face straight but the growing smirk on her face is infectious as you feel the corners of your own mouth curl up into a smile
>You both let out a small chuckle before she gives you a slug on the arm
"So what's up Rainbow"
>"Well you could be, if you came training with me rather than getting a frou frou dress from Rarity"
"I thought you weren't too keen on teaching me?"
>"Well sure maybe at first, but then I thought how awesome it'd be to have a dragon as my pupil"
>Of course this would be an ego boost for her
"Don't worry Dash, I'm not gonna blow my chance to learn how to fly, but I got other plans right now, maybe catch you later?"
>Despite saying it was fine, the disgruntled look on her face as she flew off told a different story
>You watch as she flies off, crashing into a few clouds as she goes
>You’re quickly brought to a halt as you bump into Spike
>"We're here"
>Glancing up, you're met with a massive building that would trigger Hansel and Gretel's PTSD

>>30002716
>A huge building made to look like a ginger bread house with a cupcake as the roof, you're astounded that you missed it until now
>You look down at Spike before he beckons you and makes his way up the steps
>As you both make your way through the doors you're showered in confetti as the familiar sound of whoopee cushions, and the smell of gunpowder fills the air
>After untangling a few streamers from your horn your vision is filled with the colour pink
>You come down from your small heart attack as you realize it's just Pinkie Pie
>"Hiya Tes, what're you and Spike doing here?"
>You raise an eyebrow at this hoping to see a hint of this being a joke
>After a few moments you shake your head as her face doesn't change
>This pony could probably destroy anyone in poker
"We're here to browse your porcelain collection"
>Your sarcasm is cut short as she lets out a gasp that should not be physically possible with her body size
>She quickly grabs the sides of your head and presses her face against your, filling your vision with pink once more
>"How do you know about Gummy's secret collection?"
>You wouldn't have been able to hear her if she wasn't so close
"Who or what is a Gummy?"
>Pulling away a little, her suspicious glare is replaced with her old beaming smile
>"Gummy's my gator silly"
>As you're about to question the pink pony further a green blur bursts from her mane
>You're hardly able to react before you feel it clamp onto your shoulder
>Hardly feeling anything but some warmth and dampness you look at the offending creature
>Clamped upright onto your shoulder is a green, purple eyed... alligator apparently
>As it wags its legs to try and stay upright it eventually slides down so it's biting between your shoulder and armpit
>After several attempts to bite into your arm as it makes its way down you grab hold of its tail and toss it back to Pinkie Pie
>As it nears the pink mare it shoots towards her mane, burrowing into it

>>30002725
>Pinkie only lets out a giggle at its attempted laceration of your arm
>"I think he likes you"
>Poking her leg, Spike manages to get her attention
>"Uuuuhhh Pinkie, do you think we could get a table now, that's sort of why we're here"
>"Well why didn't you say so silly"
>Grabbing the both of you Pinkie hauls you both over to a table, placing menus in front of you
>"I'll be back to take your order in a minute"
>With that, she bounces off to the kitchen, defying gravity as she does
>You're starting to think you shouldn't question how that pony works

>>30002733
Another update done, as always hope it was good

>>30002127
>You shudder. Discord isn't always the best of friends, sometimes he can be a jerk. Maybe Tonic doesn't know that yet, maybe he has her fooled into thinking he's the perfect friend!
>You imagine Tonic telling him about her situation and how sad she is only for him to laugh and ridicule her!
>You grit your teeth. Just the thought of that makes you angry.
Spike's got it all wrong, Discord's gonna cuck him

>>30002883
>Discord marries Tonic.
>He needs a best man, but doesn't have many friends.
>He asks Spike.

Fucking kek

>>30002144
Good stuff Mage, liking where you're taking this, keep it up

>>30002744
Like the pinkie interactions m8 keep it up

boop

>>30006822
top cute

>>30006002

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>>30002744
I like it, is it gonna get lewd?

>>30006822
Waifu'd

You guys have any cool ideas for potions? Tonic needs to get some practice in if her dream of being the Draco-alchemist is going to come true.

>>30008206
>inb4 futa/genderswap potion

>>30002144
>You are Tonic, and you let out a defeated sigh as you walk into your room and set your book and dagger on your desk.
>You look at the collection of dragon memorabilia cluttering your once clean desk quizzically.
>You'll have to get your own bookshelf soon...
>You sit down at your desk and make room for your arms to rest and bury your face in them.
>You adjust slightly once you feel your curled horns poke you. Sometimes you forget they're there, the pointed tips constantly in the periphery of your vision.
>Spike's right, everything is going to be ok. You don't know how to deal with all of this, but you'll figure it out.
>Still, you can't fight the frown on your face and the dark clouds in your mind.
>You feel shame, you feel weak, you feel confused, you feel like a monster above all else.
>The facade of the strong, confident and charming female figure crumbled around you, and Spike saw the mess of a person you really are: a displaced and confused creature in the middle of an existential crisis, just trying to make it in their own way.
>You're not even sure if 'your own way' is even working anymore, your obviously still trying to get used to your new self.
>The voice of Spike enters your head again, telling you that you're full of shit.
>He's been paying attention to Twilight's lessons more than he'd admit...
>You can't change the past, just the future. You know what you're dealing with, and you know that you can overcome it.
>Crying in your room isn't going to get you anywhere, just put a smile on your face and work through the pain, eventually the smile will be genuine once you solve the problem.
>You lift your head up, the dark clouds in your head parting as you're inspired by your new resolve.
>You force a short burst of air out of your nostrils.
>'Quit being so melodramatic, just get the fuck over it! Spike has, so can you.'

>>30009696
>You glance down at the newest additions to your collection. The first step of 'getting the fuck over it' is focusing on something else, these will do nicely.
>The dagger is the first thing you grab. You're pretty excited about the book, but come one, it's a dagger and you're not made of stone. Well, scales are tougher than stone, but whatever...
>The dagger is about two feet in total, no wonder Spike thought it was a sword.
>What he didn't take into consideration is the fact that the pommel of the dagger is a decorative dragon's skull.
>In your book of dragon fashion, the Dominion put the likeness of dragon's on almost everything, so it must've been from that time when you compare it to how old the book looks as well.
>Bigger dragons need bigger daggers...
>The blade is sheathed, but you can see that it curves upward halfway down, pretty gnarly.
>The handle is a shiny metal, you'd say it was chrome if you didn't know better. The dragon head on the pommel has red jewels for eyes, and it has a vertical cross-guard shaped like a pair of wings.
>The grip is wrapped in a sort of black cloth that looks amazingly preserved for its supposed age. You assume some redundant magic spell is to thank for that...
>You grip the handle and unsheathe the blade, resulting in an ear-piercing metallic ring.
>The sheath gave away the general shape of the blade, but kept hidden its more detailed features. Miscellaneous runes are written on the sides of it, and the blade itself fishhooks in different places, making it look like a metallic flame. It's every bit as grizzly as you thought it would be, and more...
>Once you take in the full sight of it, you can't shake the feeling that you've seen this very dagger before.
>It was a passing glance, you paid so little mind to it that you can't even remember if you saw it in this world or back on earth!
>All you can say for sure is that you've seen this damn thing before, and now you want to know where.

>>30009705
>Maybe you can check some of your dragon books. You probably saw it in the fashion book, you even referenced it in your analysis of the damn thing.
>You try and think of which books in your collection might have a picture of the dagger.
>It wouldn't be in the anatomy book, it wouldn't be in the alchemy books either, so that just leaves the fashion book and some of the other miscellaneous dragon culture books.
>You rummage through the pile of books, making two stacks: one with applicable selections and the other with books that are unrelated, your new book being set off to the side of course.
>Before you can begin your investigation, you hear Discord warp in behind you.
>You half turn in your seat to face him, and give him a confused look.
"I told Spike to have you come get me when we were going to play, but it's only been like a half hour..."
>He walks over with a grin on his face and sits on your desk, knocking over your stacks of books.
>D: "I thought you'd like to see the show. Twilight just got back."
>You pinch the bridge of your nose.
"Good lord. Fine, let's see what fresh hell you put her through."
>He floats toward the door, and you're about to follow when the dagger catches your eye again.
"Hey, you recognize this?"
>You lift up the dagger for him to see, and he ponders it with a bored expression.
>D: "I've seen a lot of weapons in my time, none of them particularly garner my attention...except for the exotic ones."
>He conjures a pair of nunchucks and swings them around shortly until he smacks himself in the face.
>You respond to his stupidity with a dead stare, then continue your thought.
"From what I can tell, this dagger is draconic in origin, probably all the way back to the Dominion! I can only assume the book is the same age...but why would these artifacts be found in a recently formed castle from the Tree of Harmony?"
>He stops rubbing the side of his face and looks almost thoughtful.

>>30009713
>D: "That's...a good question. You might get me interested in these history lessons yet! There's a first time for everything, right?"
>You feel a smile begin to form on your face, and you turn back to your desk and look at your new book.
"I'll bet we can find out more once I read this book!"
>Discord starts to say something, but he's interrupted by the sound of Twilight's distant voice down the hall.
>T: "DISCORD!"
>He almost immediately begins snickering and you look toward the door, concern no doubt plastered on your face.
"I guess I should go calm her down..."

Any questions, comments, concerns, and critiques welcome as always

>>30009721
All I can say is that I want to see more.

>>30009721
Ready for more shenanigans :D
its got a good balance,gg mage

b

>>30008450
>Tonic takes the potion and shows Spike.
>Says she's had a dick the entire time.
>Spike gets raped

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>>30003183
>Spike ends up entering Cuckzilla mode

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>>30012435
At least Twilight would be happy

>>30013390

Got bored and wrote a little interraction between Tonic and Scylla, where Tonic tries to help her get a date. It's not part of any story, I just felt like writing it

>s: "So I really like this one stallion..."
"Oh yeah, how would you go about asking him on a date?"
>S: "Well, I had this really funny pun..."
>Scylla snorts as she runs the encounter through her head.
>You grit your teeth and try to not show your heavy apprehension.
"Why...why would you do that?"
>Her ears flatten and she seems to deflate.
>S: "B-but it's really funny! Here I'll tell you it-"
"That...won't be necessary. Look, just walk over to him with your sexiest strut and get him talking. It doesn't matter what about, eventually you can casually ask him out, ok?"
>She nods, her face blank as she goes deep into thought.
>She then turns and begins walking away in a ridiculous fashion, eventually tripping and falling into a deep puddle.

>>30009721
>As soon as you walk out the door, you sense your surroundings change again, and you immediately stop in your tracks.
>In the next moment, you're face to face with another wall, but this time you didn't fall for the trap.
>You glare at Discord as he teleports in right after you, and he shrugs.
>D: "It was worth a shot..."
>You turn around fully and see that you're now in the map room, and Spike is sitting at one of the tables setting up some books, presumably for Ogres and Oubliettes.
>He stares at both of you, evidently surprised at your sudden entrance.
>He begins to greet you but is interrupted by Twilight as she enters the room.
>Her hair is frizzy and she looks really annoyed.
>T: "Discord!"
>Discord turns to face her and bows down low.
>D: "What is thy bidding, you highness?"
>She lets out a growl akin to a wolf
>T: "Don't play innocent, why did you attack that village?!"
>Your eyes go wide, and you look to Discord for confirmation.
"You what?!"
>D: "A bit over dramatic don't you think, Twilight? I wouldn't say 'attacked,' more like: introduced a lonely village to a new species..."
>You look to the ceiling and sigh.
"I swear, if this is another one of your Rat-spider shenanigans..."
>T: "So this isn't the first time you've done this?!"
>D: "You shouldn't be yelling at me, you should be thanking me! There hasn't been a threat to the world in some time, I was just making sure you stayed in shape for future events!"
>Twilight groans in frustration, but eventually relents.
>T: "...I suppose I could stand to be more vigilant."
>Discord snaps his fingers.
>D: "That's just what I was thinking!"