/foe/ thread

>>29940043
Is Project Horizons actually good? I read a few chapters but I wasn't sure. I heard some people complaining about it.

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>>29939931
Past Sins was more moving and memorable than that overlong grimdark trash.

>>29940518
I heard Pen Stroke writes professionally now. Are there any other MLP fanfic writers that became professional writers?

>>29940518
Well, that's like, just your opinion man.

>>29940518
Don't forget it's just "lol lesbian edgy horses" with no real story of its own

>>29940795
Did you even read the story? The fact that Littlepip is a lesbian was never even a plot point. There are like... two lesbian horses, consisting of Littlepip and Homage.

Retards like you make me not want to read Past Sins.

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>>29940795
>>29940518

did you two specifically come into an foe thread just to bitch about it

no wonder everyone hates nyxfags

>>29940819
Man you make it sound like you're the only people that ever suffer from that.

>>29940819
>No anon in fallout
I don't know.

>>29940065
people like to complain

>>29939931
Why wouldn't they just cut the tails off. Or just put it in a bun.

>>29940065
I've read it once and listened to it a second time as an audio book while working. Great characters and story up until around chapter 65ish then story starts to jump all over the place. Seems somber just tried to wrap everything up too quickly but still wanted to add more detail. Not a great combination. It also adds a whole new layer to the political system and puts a few twists on the ones established in the main fic. Blackjacks bullshitery will always remain unrivaled. Worth the read.

>>29940065
It's as bad as Past Sins and was made purely as a joke, they fact they share the same initials shoudl be enough

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>>29940065
this summarizes PH nicely

>>29941910
>same initials

are you falseflagging?

>>29940065
Starts out alright, then it abandons Fallout and tries to be Evangelion

>>29942017
Are you retarded?

Can you falloutfags explain why the prologue of the story consists of the main character blabbering about the wrist computer thing? I couldn't read past it because I got bored.

>>29942386
It's setting up a Chekhov's Gun

>>29942406
Good to know, but the prologue was a rather odd place to put it in. The intro text got me mildly interested, then a bunch of exposition was dumped on me and I dropped it.

>>29942315
I'm going to assume that's a yes.

>>29939931

>>29939931 x2

So I had an idea for a story. We've seen all sorts of towns and cities throughout the wasteland, but we rarely get any exposition on them.
Suppose we have a story about the founding of a new town by a team of Stable Dwellers in the vein of Dwarf Fortress

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Reminder that /foeg/gots are the mudslimes of /mlp/.

>>29945846
Idea checks out. Write it here, I'm interested.

>>29942386
You can skip 2/3 of the story and not miss anything.

>>29940065

I read it once after I finished the original FoE and read it up until fifty-whatever. I thought it was pretty good. Then I took a break from fanfic to read professionally written work and came back to PH on audiobook.

I got angry at how often Black Jack bitches about her mind.

>>29939931
OP is retard without pastebin.