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>>29832520

Added to the /bug/ pastebin
Looking forward to more!

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>>29835227

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>>29835227

b u g

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>Allez le bugs!

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>>29836849
What did he mean by this?

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Hey /bug/, I'll be continuing by story momentarily.
Also slapping on a name just to make things easier
plus its in the pastepin so might aswell while writing.

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>>29832373

>>29837529
>”Charla, hows that wing of yours?” Gilda pipes up.
>”Well, I dont think I could carry anypony, but I could fly...”
>Gilda nods, and the Yellow Unicorn and guards nod aswell.
>You however, are too transfixed on the fight to notice, until suddenly Gilda has you in her claws, the Unicorn in the other.
“Wha, huh?!”
>”Dont squirm so much you imbecile, this isnt as easy as it looks.”
>As you, Gilda, Charla, and the Unicorn make your way over the crowds heads, you notice nearly every street is under attack, save for the two eastern most ones, and one to the south.
“Thats...not good.”
>”No, no it is not...” the Unicorn adds.
>As you get to the train, your heart sinks further.
>The thing is already Tooting its horn, so over full even the roof is covered in griffins.
>”Dammit, we might be able to squeeze into the Conductors Booth...” Gilda says.
>As you land, ponies rushing to get out of your way, you shout, the train already starting to lurch forward.
>Ponies were screaming for it to stop.
>Others trying to jump onto it, but with little if nay space left, most missed their mark.
>You Grimaced as some fell under the tracks, as Gilda forced you onto your feet and pushed you towards the front, getting ever faster.
>Luck was on your side though, as someone apparently recognized the Yellow unicorn inside the Front, and the door swung open, the Conductor motion for you to quickly jump in.
>With flight on your side, it worked out.
>After catching your breath, you could not help but look out, staring at all the ponies left behind as the Train rushed along.
>”Well, best settle in I guess....” The conductor says as he looks over his controls, wiping tears from his eyes as he yells back for the ponies working the furnace to give it all they had.
>”Well, that was certainly close.” Charlas says, looking out the window at the snow covered landscape.
>”You're telling me,” Gilda said, yawning and leaning against the wall.

>>29837532
>You keep staring out at the ever shrinking city.
>You didn't even hesitate.
>Left, just like that.
>You barely notice you are holding your breath, until your forced to take a big breath and slump down.
>after a bit of silence,e the Unicorn speaks.
>”I...Im Sunburst, we never had a chance to be formally acquainted...”
>He, slowly, Holds out a hoof.
>You reach out and give it a slow shake.
“Anon Mous....thanks for the help, not sure why you did it though...”
>He blushes a bit, shrugging.
>”Orders mostly, ill admit. Though id have helped you either way if I could've.”
>You give a nod and a thanks, before simply looking up at the ceiling.
>Time seems to go by slowly, as you sit there, mood glum.
>But then, next thing you know, your slamming into the roof of the Train and your world goes black.

>>29837535
>Cold.
>That is all you feel.
>Then ,as a Roar howls over the heavy wind, your eyes shoot open.
>Slowly, Agonizingly slowly, you get up onto your knees, squinting into the Cold stormy air around you.
>As you wipe some blood out of your vision, you catch a glow off ahead of you.
>Step by Step, You make your way to it.
>The entire train it seems, or at least as far as you can see down the line, has been knocked over.
>bodies and blood lay around you, though you think you hear some moans here and there, you couldn't pinpoint them if you wanted.
>The light was the burning coal, spilled out across the knocked over engine room.
>You grimace as you see the Conductors leg sticking out from under what should've been the wall.
>Then ,you hear it, another roar, closer then ever.
>Quickly ducking back into the Train, you notice Sunburst sprawled across the new floor.
>Luckily, his chest is breathing, but hes other knocked the hell out.
>No sign of anyone else you note, a the roar comes closer.
>IT was then, you notice a familiar image out in the snow, limping along.
>Black, tall, with a splash of green.
>As you feel the train rock as something down the line pushes against it, you make a hasty decision.
>Prying the Train handle from its perch, easier when its already almost broken off, you rush back int the stormy winter nightmare.
>Why you were doing this for her, you really were going to have to decide later.

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>>29837545
>Grimacing as the cold chilled you to the bones, you were almost upon her.
>You refused to yell however, as even if she would hear you over the wind, you didn't want anything else to.
>Finally, you catch up, putting you hand down on her back.
>She of course, Kicks you. Hard.
>A smart move, considering everything, but your stomach says otherwise.
>As a green horn is shoved in your face, you cough out a raspy hello.
>”..A...Anon?” She says, completely take by shock.
“H-Hi to you too...” you say as you crawl back to your feet.
>Without a word, you pick her up.
>She grimaces, but given her condition she was smart enough not to argue.
>However as she realizes where your headed, she tries to speak up, but you shove your hand over her muzzle as another roar is let out, luckily further away this time, not closer.
>Whispering, you give her an answer.
“Were not gonna survive a trek through this without some heat, were gonna need those coals, and hopefully for the weather to clear...”
>she give you a look, but nods.
>Your not sure how long you could've lasted out there, but luckily you get back into the Train soon enough, setting Chrysalis Down next to the fire.
>She freezes when she Sunburst squirms a bit, though he doesn't wake.
“Cant you just transform if its such a problem?” you say as you go over to check on him.
>”Im afraid I don't have the energy...” she quietly says.
>sighing, you shrug.
“Ill keep him off your back then if you think hes going to actually do something, despite everything going on.”
>After a moment she slowly turns to you.
>”He will.”
>You let out a grumble and wave your arms about.
“Well then you're both Idiots. Were going to need everyone if were to make it out of here.”

Did celestia and mane 6 died?

>>29837559
>Suddenly, you hear what you swear is a battle cry.
>Quickly looking out, you see several shapes charging a much bigger ones off in the distance.
>You couldn't tell who was winning, but barely contain a shriek as you fall backwards to avoid a Massive....THING rushing past you to the battle.
>The Train shakes all over, as every monster rushes to the fight.
>Quickly, with little time to think, you pick yourself up and rush over to Sunburst, ripping his cloak off of him.
>”Mrwh-OOF!” he says as that wakes him up as you spins onto his stomach.
>Chrysalis watches you intently as you wrap the Train Handle up in the Cloth, then light it in the coals.
>Running up to Chrysalis, you hold it out to her.
”This might be our only chance out of here. Im about to have to carry tow ponies, think you can handle this with you horn?”
>She smirks “Of course.” she say as she take it into her horns grasp.
>Slowly, you pick her up, then, step by step, get over to the still dazed Sunburst.
“you ok?”
>”I...where...my glasses...I...”
>As he starts to fall over,you curse and quickly scoop him up, wincing as you lift all that weight.
>Step by Step, you make your way out.
>Step by Step, you get further away from the sounds of agony as those thick headed fools get torn apart.
>Step by Step, you get further and further into the unknown wastes before you.


>>29837576
Spoilers!

yes. no. maybe. at least some. probably.

>>29837587
>You do not know how long you walked.
>Or how far.
>Eventually though, You feel your legs buckling.
>Each step harder then the last.
>Already having to hold the dwindling torch, Chrysalis having passed out you think, you had way too much to carry in such conditions.
>As you fall to your knees, no idea where you are or how close you may be to someplace safe, you let your charges slid out of your grip into the snow.
>Staring blankly at the torch, you blink slowly, your mind unable to think clearly.
>And then suddenly, a warm breath hit the back of your neck.
>Thinking one of the beasts must've caught up to you, you close your eyes, ready for your end.
>”What is thing doing in Yak lands!?”
>Snapping back to reality, you slowly turn around, shocked to hear a voice.
>Behind you was a massive, well, Yak.
>And it didn't look happy.
“I.....we....running...monsters.....help?”
>The yak takes a moment, but then nods, turning away and striding off into the snow.
>Blinking, you look down at you hands, wondering if you had just had the most realistic hallucination you have ever heard of.
>And then passed the fuck out.

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>>29837603
>Waking up to the feel of fire and a warm blanket was amazing.
>Yet like not so long ago, this jolts you fully awake, the environment wholly unrecognizable.
>Looking to your left, you appeared to be on the ground next to an impressively big fireplace.
>To your right, you saw, and heard, Chrysalis and Sunburst snoring, each in their own bed.
“...Why am I the one on the ground?” You say to the crackling fire.
>Grumbling, you shakily get up onto your feet, wrapping the blanket tight around you as you peek out the door.
>Yaks, Yaks in hats everywhere, and not one of them seemed to know what an indoor voice was.
>With little else to do, you head out of your hut and into the Yaktown.
>You get a few odd looks as you wander around, but thankfully no one tries to bull you over or something worse.
>Eventually, one Yak walks up to you.
>”You, Creature, come with me.” it says, motioning towards, of course, the biggest building around.
>Nodding, you follow the Yak to its shack.
>As you enter the large Wooden Hut, you cant help but feel in awe.
<not anywhere near as big or shiny as the Palace in the Crystal Empire, but something about the way it didn't feel like it was trying to blind you really connected with your tastes.
>Insides sat many yaks, with one sitting up high on a throne, giant fires on either side of it.
>”You. Creature. Why you bring ponies to Yak lands?”
>Straight to the point with these guys.
“Well, the Crystal Empire was under attack, and then the Train was too. I just kinda...Ran in a direction with them, hoping for the best.”
>You shrug meekly, not sure what else there was to really say.

>>29837625
>The yaks talk amongst those in the shack.
>A bit later, they all start nodding, before turning to you.
>”Yaks want help you and ponies, but yaks not know how. Yaks return Creatures weapon until yaks can help more.”
“Weapon?
>You Look on in surprise as a yak walks up and spits a now somewhat gooey train handle into your hands.
>They actually took the time to drag that thing along with you and the others.
>You were utterly dumbfounded, but a bit touched.
“Th....thanks....”
>”NOW, Creature, tell yaks more about you, and how yaks might help ponies!”
>You nod, scratching your chin as you shake the yak spit off your 'weapon'.
“Well, im a human, Aon Mous, nice to meet ya. And as for helping us out, I do have a few ideas.....”

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>>29837655
>You are Chrysalis, Queen...former Queen, of the changelings of the badlands hive.
>And the past few days has been terrible.
>As You Yawn and stretch under the heavy wool blankets, you wince as you flop off the bed after your leg give out, much too injured to put any weight on.
“Confound it all!” You spit out into the warm air of the hut.
>Forcing yourself back to your feet, despite the pain, you take in your surroundings carefully.
>In another bed that blasted Unicorn was softly snoring away, and the blanket and pillow near the fireplace most likely was where Anon Mous had slept, though where he was himself you could only start to guess.
>A strange creature, that...human.
>IT was clear he did not trust you, but yet he seemed to blindly try to keep you alive.
>Well, everypony alive he could, you suppose.
>You couldn't help but snort in anger.
>His oddity had presented a wonderful opportunity to get in a position for revenge, yet the chaos caused by those abominations had ruined everything.
>Now, you simply had no other option for survival but to see where this all lead.
>As your stomach lurches in pain, you hiss.
>Drawn to the smell of the Unicorns love, for his fellow ponies, his kindom, yadda yadda, this and that, you lick you lips.
>He HAD just, probably, lost everything he cared about...
>Hardly suspicious if he acts a bit...drained.
>After sucking the pitiful pony dry, you sigh as you stretch out you leg, biting your lip as you hear the carapace and bones clicking back into place.
>You would have to watch how much energy you spent so quickly, but you had not been at perfect health in far too long to not indulge a bit.

>>29837676
>With breakfast out of the way, you walk over and poke your head out of the hut, sniffing the air.
>You quickly pull back, gagging and heaving.
>As if the smell of yak wasn't bad enough, the sheer amount of self aggrandizing, Self centered 'love' coming off the yaks was like smelling old scraps to a changeling.
>Edible, but to be avoided.
>Sighing, you get your composure back.
>Beggars could not be choosers, you decide, and holding your head high, step out into the town.
>The yaks give you some stares here and there you ignore, but it appears they know little to nothing about changelings, a ignorance you were happy to let them keep.
>It took a bit of Transforming, but you manage to get a few snacks out of some unsuspecting fools.
>With your hunger settled, you decide it would be in your best interest to find Anon.
>There wasn't much else to do actually, considering everything.
>That is, until something catches your eye.
>Two yaks wandering behind a building on the far side, looking horrible suspicious.
>And you of course, were a master of what looked suspicious.
>With curiosity peaked, you zip along into the shadows, not one against a bit of eavesdropping.
>”Scouts say Crystal Empire barely holding last half of City, but King do nothing for ponies!”
>the other yak snorted, kicking at the dirt.
>”King make deal with other pony, King say he cause this, and will send them after yaks if they help.”
>The other one snorted louder, grinding his teeth.
>”But yaks make promise with ponies, yaks yak of their word! King making yaks into liars! Yaks strong, yaks no need deals with evil ponies!”
>”Yak agree, and yak think many more do, but king still have support! And fighting other yaks only make us unable to help even yaks!”
>They both go back and forth, but you had gotten more then enough info out of them.

>>29837698
>As you buzz away, you cant help but feel your heart racing.
>You had no idea who the yaks could've possibly made a deal with, but if they were claiming to be responsible for those things, then this place was not safe.
>You were about to simply leave on your own, let no 'companions' slow you down, when you round a corner straight into Anon.

>You, Anon, had a bad habit of ending up sprawled out on the ground.
“Er....hello Chrysalis. Fancy meeting you here?”
>”Queen, Queen Chrysalis to you, you daft creature.”
>Nodding, you decide to risk your luck and gently push her off from on top of you.
“Yes, well....hard to remember when one changes their name on a whim.”
>You cant help but smile as she rolls her eyes, getting back up on her feet, grumbling as she tries to regain her higher ten thou composure.
“So....Good news! The Kings agreed to escort us into Equestria! Hopefully things are holding out there, and maybe whoever is in charge there right now can help us figure out what to do. Better then sitting up here freezing our asses off at least, right?”
>You are caught off guard, as you swear, just for a moment, it looked like Chrysalis was worried about...something.
>If it did happen, she quickly hides it, though her eyes seem to be looking around more then usual.
>”That...hrm...”
>She sighs, cursing, before your suddenly magically being dragged.
“What the heck?!”
>”Blast it all, never let it be said I don't try and even scores human!”
“What? We have a score between us?....whos winning?”
>You shut your yap as she sneers back at you.
>Whatever she was doing, you hardly had the strength to stop her.
>You had asked the yaks for food, and they gave you hay, and once you had convinced them you needed fruits or vegetables, they gave you a couple of carrots.
>You were not exactly, satisfied, or full, and were beginning to wonder when you would not have trouble finding food.

>>29837738
>To your relief, Chrysalis was taking you back to the hut you had slept in, so it couldn't be anything TOO drastically important she was so desperate to tell you about.
>You were about to be proven drastically wrong.
“You're.... trying to trick me or something...right?”
>Chrysalis shrugs, staring at the fire from the bed before yawning.
>”I heard what I heard. If your feeble mind is too idiotic to think it is possible, then it is hardly my problem.”
>You stare at the fire, having no idea what to think.
>You simply didn't really trust her, but at the same time, if she was right....
>”Mermph....”
>You spin on the spot, bringing your Train Handle up and ready.
>”Hello to you too....” Sunburst says grumpily as he groggily gets up and to his feet, taking in the room with a squint.
“Err....Sorry....” You lower your weapon as Chrysalis chuckles.
>”....Where are my glasses?” Sunburst says sternly.
“Oh....err....Somewhere in the wreckage of the train?” you say with a weak smile.
>”...and my cloak?” he says as he attempts to squint his way around the room.
“It....kinda was used as a torch as I dragged us across the tundra.....”
>He stops, before taking a long breath.
>”Well I dont suppose you could at least fill me in on whats going on at least?”
“Well, actually, me and C-”
>you stop as you hear a mild whooshing sound, turning to see not Chrysalis, but quite the similar look Unicorn standing before you.
>”Candle Shine. Anon here found we wandering about after the train was attacked. I thought I was fortunate to make it on, but alas....” she whimpers a bit, which you cant help but grumble at.
>Sunburst sighed, sitting down in front of the fire.
>”Well pleased to meet you I suppose. Now, Anon, if you wouldn't be so kind?”
>Well, someone had certainly slept poorly, though you couldn't exactly blame him.
>Sitting down next to him, you sigh.
“This...is gonna take a bit of explaining....”

>>29837776
>Sunburst seemed to take it all in stride.
>From the train to the Rescue and possible Betrayal.
>”Well...at least the Crystal Empire might still stand a chance...” he said, a slight smile coming ot his face.
“Yeah, but it doesn't sound like we have much time, and if what Candle said is true.....well...we might not even survive a walk back...”
>Attempting to straighten his glasses, but remembering they aren't there, he gets to his feet, and turns to Chrysalis with an eyebrow raised.
>”But our friend here already found us a ride, with or without the kings help.”
“She did?”
>”I....well...that is a risky plan you have here Sunburst.” Chrysalis says with a smile.
>Sunburst nods. “It is, but we dont have a choice. We simply dont have time to play politics.”
“Im...missing something.”
>Chrysalis and Sunburst roll their eyes, in disturbing synchronization.
>”Those Yaks Candle Shine heard might be more then willing to help us on their own.”
“Thats a big if...”
>”well, you could always carry us again, I wouldn't mind.” Chrysalis says with a wink.
“alright well lets go find them then!” You say, quickly getting to your feet with a newfound excitement for this activity.
>You were willing to do many things.
>Trekking through the snow while carrying two equines was not one of them.
>”well, uhh, lead the way.” Sunburst says, getting up himself.
>With a shrug, Chrysalis strides off the bed and out the door, not even waiting to see if you guys would follow.
>Luckily, however blind Sunburst was, he could see well enough to follow her himself.
>As your group left into the chilly yak air, Sunburst suddenly nudges you.

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>>29837870
>”Err....Anon?”
“Yea?”
>”Look....im...im sorry for this morning...Just...With everything that happened, I just felt so angry....”
>Wait....was he apologizing for his grumpiness?
>He considered that angry?
“Its fine. We've all been through shit we shouldn't ever have to. Id be more worried if you hadnt been miffed.”
>”Ri...right....” Sunburst looked ahead, silence overtaking him.
>Somehow you felt he was not satisfied you were satisfied.

>You, Chrysalis, Look around the crowd of Yaks carefully.
>You were never one to forget a form, Being a changeling queen it was impossible.
>But yaks were nothing like changelings, all looking so similar.
>So few details to tell them apart compared to your superior race.
>But you still had seen a few things you could look for, probably.
>Finally, you spot one of them, sitting at a stand, mouth full of hay.
“Over there.” you point, before trotting along, Anon and that wretched Sunburst in tow.
>However, before you could make it to the table, another yak blocks the path.
>“King would like to see Anon and friends.” the yak says plainly.
>You look to Anon and Sunburst, both with worry plain across their faces.
>It seemed you would have to take care of this yourself, of course.
“Well, id just love to but ah, you see....I need to freshen up?”
>the yak jolts a bit, and blushes, but nods.
>”Yak bathroom over there.” He points with a horn.
“Splendid. Meanwhile Anon and Sunburst would be more then happy to go with you, of course!”
>”Uh, yes! We Would be honored!” Sunburst pipes in.
>With that, You slink away as the yak leads them off.
>You are hardly surprised none have noticed your not exactly the same as before, they seemed a bit dull, these yaks.
>But you hardly had a choice on where to get help from, a shame that.
>Walking up to the yak you are sure was the one you saw before, you get prepared for a conversation you knew was going to take awhile.

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>>29837925

And with that, ill be back. unlike anon i have access to scrumptious food and im in need of it.

pastepin updated.

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someone shitpost while im gone to keep the thread alive.

>>29837293
The French Front on the Great Meme War to get Marine LePen elected as the French President.

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>>29837951
Yes!

>>29837925
Im back, had some chicken express. anyone else have a good lunch?
Story Cont.

“Hello sir, enjoying your lunch?”
>They yak finishes chewing and swallowing his hay, before turning slightly towards you.
>”Yea, hay good.”
“Thats....great.”
>This was going to be painful.
“Well..” Chrysalis said, looking around real quick, before leaning in to whisper in the yaks ear, “Alright listen, I overheard you and your friend talking earlier, and me and my friends would like your help.”
>”You eazesdrop on yak!? Yak no like eavesdropping!” the yak said, though despite it still being loud as a bell it was quieter then they usually were, which was enough to not draw any attention to them.
“...Yes, well, I do apologize, truly. It was an accident. I just....you see.....” as Chrysalises body created tears on command, she sniffed, watching as the yak looked around quickly, unsure of what to do.
>”Uhh...yak forgive pony! Yak know things happen sometimes even when things not meant to! Yak ask pony to please not cry!”
“Y-you right...I...I should hold my chin up, despite....despite my home being under attack...a- and now your king might be tricking u-s...a...and..”
>The yak was antsy, barely holding it together.
>Honestly, some creatures were simply too east to manipulate, took the fun out of it.
>”Yak will try and help pony, but yak cant talk here. Meet yak where last yak talked soon.”
“O-ok...” she said, giving him a weak smile as he walked off.
>She smiled, on the inside of course.
>No self respecting changeling queen would break character so easily.
>Trotting off, she went to meet her contact.

>>29838540
>Meanwhile, Anon, was nervously trying to hold his shit together.
>If Chrysalis was right, then this meeting could go very south very fast.
>As they entered into the Kings sack full of yaks, Anon felt the mood was a bit...different.
>It was hard to tell with these yaks, but he was still pretty sure it felt much more serious.
>”Yak King thought on human plan, and while yak kings like it, he can not help as of now.”
>Anon was a bit surprised, all he had asked for really was transportation and maybe some supplies.
>Perhaps Chrysalis was right....
“But we dont have time to travel on foot alone. The Crystal Empire doesn't have time to wait!”
>”Yak king sorry, but yak king cannot risk his people. Storm season is here, and those beasts might be prowling. Yak king says you should stay til weather not so bad. Ponies smart, ponies always find way out of problem.”
“Er....even if that was true...”
>”I cant sit by and do nothing while my home is under attack.” Sunburst says as he steps forwards, “If you wont help us, then we wont stay any longer. Id hoped the Yaks were better then to let their neighbors fend for themselves, but I guess I was wrong.”
>The yak kings stands up, snorting as he stomps his hoof hard enough to crack the ground.
>”Yak King do what he must! If pony will not respect Yak choices, then pony free to leave!”
>And with that, Anon and Sunburst were, quite literally, pushed out of the shack, the door slammed behind them.
“Well.....that went....”
>”Terribly?” Sunburst suggested.
“I was gonna say better then expected actually, I thought he was gonna say we weren't allowed to leave at all.”
>”Oh....well I suppose that would have been worse yes...”
>shrugging, you motion forward.
“Lets just find Candle Shine and hopefully take a ride out of here.”

>>29838579
>Chrysalis sat waiting for the yak to show up.
>She didn't exactly have anything better to do then wait, which as she stifled a yawn, she realized said a lot about how things were going.
>Finally though, the hulking thing showed up, his friend from before in tow.
>”Yak and friend here.”
>”Friend say pony want our help. Dangerous to help Ponies now, Kings say no help for Ponies.”
>Chrysalis took a moment to think.
>If the king had said such, then they had in a sense been proven right.
“Well, but you know the king is wrong on this, right?”
>”Yak may think king wrong, but king still king.”
>Sighing, Chrysalis let her lip whimper a bit, which clearly caught the yaks attention.
>”But....king might forgive yaks if yaks help ponies....”
>The other one nodded. “Yaks will help ponies. Meet yaks at night near back gate, yaks will be ready to help ponies then.”
“Oh, thank you, thank you!” She said, giving them both a big hug before running off.
>She fought the urge to roll in the snow til the smell was gone, but she had done worse before to keep up appearances, sadly.
>There were some disguises she had promised herself never to take again...
>As she headed back towards their cabin, she saw Anon and Sunburst striding towards it aswell.
“Well, it looks like things didn't go too well with the king. Luckily for you, I got us some help, were to meet them by the back gate once night arrives.”
>”Ah, thats good to hear, because the king made it pretty clear we weren't getting any from him.” Anon shrugged out.
>Sunburst grumbled, leering backwards at the Kings hut.
>”You were right, he seems way too against helping us even a little, the bastard.”
>Anon whistled, clapping his hands.
>”Damn Sunburst, now THAT is getting angry!”
>Sunburst rolled his eyes and headed in the hut, Anon laughing as he went along with him.
“Well, we have all afternoon for him to settle down now.” Chrysalis said with a smile as she followed the two in.

>>29838665
>As everyone got settled, only the sound of the fire as Anon poked some life into it filling the hut, she sniffed at the air.
>Impressively, Sunburst was recovering from this morning quite quickly.
>Perhaps the stress was reminding him of what was 'important' to him or some other pony nonsense.
>Anon, however, was still only a flicker to her tongue.
>A Creature of such repressed and desolate love as to put herself to shame.
“So, Anon, since we have some free time....I was wondering....”
>”Yes?” He said turning an eyebrow her direction as he threw another log in the fire.
“Well, I myself dont even know what you are, much less your story. Tell us about yourself!”
>”Wha? Yo-Err, ah, yeah....Things are going so fast my minds blurring about who knows what...”
>He turned, staring into the fire.
>”Well, Id like to know more too, if its not a problem for you.” Sunburst added, give a smile.
>Anon nodded, and sighing, turned around, sitting as he pulled the blankets tighter around himself.
>”Well...im not sure where to start with me, or with what...I work as a Simple Factory Mechanic. Nothing glorious but it was decent work...”

>You, Anon, Stare into Candle Shines, Chrysalises, Eyes as you give nonsensical, simple information about your life.
>Your mind however, Wanders, as the Crackling of the fire fills the corners of your consciousness...

>>29838691
>You took another small sip of your whiskey as the bar tunes hummed in the background.
>The Bartenders eyes were glued to the screen ,as some Christmas Float parade marched along from earlier in the day.
>You hardly notice the Bar doors open, but you do notice as your brother sits down next to you.
“...Hey.” You mumble out.
>”Hey...I...heard what happened......its....”
“Its shit. Shes shit.”
>He sighed, before patting you on the back, to which you couldn't help but smile a bit.
>He had always been there for ya, even if h was sometimes a knucklehead.
>”Look man...She shouldn't of done it, And she shouldn't of said shit about it today....but.....Look I know its fucking shit, im not happy either....but I want you to come home. Listen just talk to her, im not saying you have to forgive her but shes still our mother man...”
>You scoff, waving his arm off your back.
“And what about dad?”
>Your brother side, and snapping to get the bartenders attention, ordered his own drink.
>”What about him?”
>You blink. Slowly, your head turns, confusion and anger building up inside of you as you met your brothers face as he accepted his drink.
“What....what? Hes our dad....Hes not the one who fucked some other shithead.”
>”How do we know that? Dudes gone half the year on business. Fuck man where is he today? Japan? England? I dont know, do you?”
>You feel your Fist clenching your glass hard, but you sigh.
>Your brother wasn't entirely wrong, but you still couldn't believe what he was saying.
“His jobs the reason that bitch can afford to sleep around instead of having a job.”
>Your brother slams his drink down on the table, turning from it to you, clearly miffed.
>”Look man, I know your pissed but watch how you talk about her. You can glorify that man all you want but I cant remember one time he was here for more then a few weeks. Mom fucked up, but considering who she met I cant fucking blame her, at least he was around.”

>>29838733
>You blink, your world goes quite.
“What....are...have you met that bastard shes sleeping with!?”
>”Yeah, I have, and hes a great fucking guy.” he says, taking a sip.
>You don't even notice, but suddenly your on your feet.
“How long? How fucking long have you known?”
>”No brawls in my bar.” the Bartender says, not even turning from the TV.
>You reluctantly sit back down, though your sheering anger stays pained across your face.
>Your brother turns back down towards his drink, shrugging.
>”Forgiveness isnt a bad thing to be able to give Anon.”
“Fuck.....God dammit fuck you....anything else you fuckers are hiding from me? Anything else you decided I didn't need to godmaned know?”1
>He shook his head know, and you take a long chug to finish off your drink.
>”Anon, just come home. I wasnt happy about it at first either, but just give it a chance.”
“Fuck that, and fuck both of you.” You say as you get up, tossing a tip to the bartender as you head for the door.
>You freeze at your brothers next words.
>”Its us or him. You cant have both Anon.”
>You wipe the tears from your eyes, and turning around, toss the glass you still had in your hand at your brother.
“Get fucked to hell, both of you.”
>The night was still cold, the wind still howling.
>You couldn't feel any of it.

>>29838747
>As you, Anon, snap back to reality, Chrysalis Staring, eyebrow raised, she Repeated her question.
>”What, exactly, is a car?”
>Outside your mind, you had been filling them in about this and that of the human world, not reliving moments best left forgotten.
“Its like a carriage, but uses a device to move forward itself with the driver in control.”
>”Fascinating!” Sunburst say, fully entrenched in your conversation.
>”Truly,” Candle Bright says with a small smile, “But I cant help but notice you haven't said much about yourself, not really.”
>You hesitate, holding your breath as your mind raced.
“Im....Just some bloke. Nothing interesting about me honestly.”
>”Oh, im sure you're selling yourself short.” She responded, fluttering her eyes.
>”Well, your certainly not dull.” Sunburst said, patting you on the back.
>He Looks at you, worry in his eyes as you wince from his hoof.
“Look, uhh, were gonna be up all night, so....probably best if we all grab some sleep.” You sa with a fake smile plastered across your face.
>Sunburst and Candle Shine exchange shrugs.
>”Good point...”Sunburst says, as he gets up and goes to his own bad.
>”We can talk later I suppose.” Candle says with another of those small smiles, before yawning and laying her head down.
>You simply turn around and put your own head down, staring blankly into the crackling flames.
>Your eyes flutter shut, but your mind hardly rests.

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>>29838792
>A Hospital.
>Years since the divorce.
>Your dad had taken it in stride, taking time off to spend with you and what little family didn't take his ex-wifes side.
>Even before the Cancer hit, He seemed to age so much faster now.
>But you didn't regret your decision.
>He was a good man, thats all you had ever seen him be.
>His wedding wing never left his finger.
>Not even as he lay in that damned bed, life draining out of him second by second.
>You sat, watching him breath in his sleep.
>You didn't know how much time you had left together...but you planned to spend as much of it as you could with him.

>Snapping from your dream, you gasp for air as reality hits like a wall.
>Night had arrived, and you, Anon, and Your companions Had a long night ahead of you.
>Getting up, You tie a blanket or two around you, in hopes it would stay in place so you wouldnt have to hold them constantly.
>Reluctantly, you pick up your Train Handle and stuff it under your Makeshift parka.
>A shitty weapon was better then no weapon.
>As you nudge Candle Shine and Sunburst awake, you take a moment to peak outside.
>All clear it seemed.
“Well....now or never I guess....”
>You turn to them, both nodding along, and so you head out into the night.

>>29838800
>It was easy enough getting to the back gate.
>Now getting past the two massive Yaks guarding it...you had no idea on how to do that.
“Please tell me those are conveniently the two you talked to Candle...”
>”Im afraid not. We will simply have to think of a way to draw them off.” she said with a shrug.
>”Maybe....we could make a noise or something?” Sunburst said.
“...There is no way that would ever work.....I mean....it wouldn't...right?”
>You all exchange looks.

>It took a bit to come up with the best way to distract them, but eventually it came down to Candle and Sunburst floating some rocks up above each of the yaks heads.
>Simply dropping them, the yaks of course hardly got injured, but instantly flew into a rage, rushing forward yelling about how whoever did that was going to be stomped.
>Slipping out of the shadows, you get to the gate.
>Using her magic, Candle Shine slips the gate lock open, and as you pull it open for everyone to slip through, you take one last look at Yaktown.
>You really weren't going to miss it at all.
>As you close the gate, you turn around.
>A little ways off, Four yaks were standing in near darkness.
>As you drew closer, you saw a large sleigh strapped to them, covered in some supplies.
“Uh..hey, hi. Thanks for uhh, Helping us out and stuff.” you say as you draw close to them.
>Nodding, the Lead Yak motions to the Sleigh.
>”Ponies on, we go fast, no stopping. Straight to Equestria.”
>You are kinda disturbed as Candle gives hi ma hug and thanks him ,before joining you and Sunburst on the sleigh.
>It was a pretty big thing, though with a decent chunk taken up by supplies there was not really any room to move.
>As the sleigh suddenly lurches forward, you quickly take a set, wrapping up in more blanket they had provided back there to guard from the howling night winds.
>”its gonna be a long might...” Sunburst says, barely audible over the wind.

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>>29838893
And with that im gonna take a bit of a break.

Hope everyones enjoying the story.
Thoughts are always appreciated.

also captchas a bitch sometimes.

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well /bug/?

>>29838914
Awesome

>>29839405
Yes

>>29838893
>It took nearly a day and half.
>But sure enough, as the sun was high above, you see grass appearing in patches here and there through the snow.
>Eventually, the Yaks come to stop on a hill.
>”Yaks go no further, Sleigh not meant for grasslands.”
>Nodding you hop off the Sleigh, thanking them as you take in the expanse of green laying before you.
>Thankfully the Yaks had given you some supplies.
>Though no map.
>As the yaks turn and head back into the frozen north, you turn to Sunburst.
“So now what?”
>”...Im sorry?” He says, looking mighty confused.
“Well....where to? Were here to get help right?”
>”Oh, well...yes but...I suppose I had not thought of that...specifically....I suppose Canterlot would be best?” he says, mumbling more to himself as he looks around.
>”Well, Ignoring your poor planning, I believe I know which direction to go.” Candle says, pointing down below.
>Looking, you spot it too, some train tracks leading off into the distance.
“Well...Its something.”
>”Actually, the tracks should lead us directly to Canterlot! Perfect find Candle Shine!” he says, a skip in his step as he motions for us to get moving, “I cant wait to get a new pair of glasses, never knew just how horrible it was without them.”
>You Simply follow with a nod.
“I just hope things stay on track for once.”
>”....Was that a pun, dear?” Candle says with a smirk.
“God dammit it was wasn't it?”
>As Your Companions Chuckle at you, you cant help but smile.
>Hopefully things could stay bright and cheerful for once.

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>>29838914
Keep it up you writing fiend!

>>29840216
“Im not sure how Equestria does things ,but on Earth those with power have no obligation, and often dont, help anyone but themselves. Gods similar, leaves us to our own devices, if he exists that is.”
>Sunburst outright gasped, while Candles interest simply seemed quite peaked.
“Bah, but enough about home, we haven't heard YOU talk about yourself Sunburst.”
>”Well yes but...” He lowered his hoof, grumbling a bit. “Im nothing special, just a unicorn verse, but not well gifted, in magic. By pure luck I came to be employed by the Royal family as the Royal Crystaller.” he finished with a shrug, poking at the fire with a stick.
“Well, I guess we all are a bit bland then.” You laugh.
>Sunburst smiled a bit.
>”Just a bunch of bland, plain ponies trying to help stop something far above our skills.”
>You raise a carrot to that, before munching it down.

when a section is accidentally too long but it doesn't work to throw it onto the next one so you have to split it into two small ones. fucking character limits, curse thee!

>>29840274
>As the moon rises high, you hear a sigh from Sunburst.
“Something up?”
>”The moon...”he wipes some tears from his eyes, sniffling a bit. “IF the moons still rising then that means the Princesses are still alive...means homes still alive...”
>Oh Right, the princess supposedly control such things.
>For once, you hoped that was actually true, but your own understanding of nature made it hard to put faith in something like that, no matter how different things were here.
>”Well, im gonna go catch some sleep. Ill see you guys in the morning.” Sunburst said with a yawn, turning tail and heading off to his tent.
>”And how about you?” Candle asked, giving you a smile.
>As you let your eyes wander from her to the fire, you gave your own smile.
“I think im gonna stay up a bit longer. Always was a bit of a night person back home.”
>She nodded, and so silence fell over the camp.

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>>29840321
>You, Chrysalis, were growing hungry yet again.
>The hunger of a changeling was never truly satisfied, but it could be sedated quite well given enough love.
>However, with only one pony around to take it from ,you hardly had a good source of it.
>Anon was not even worth the effort.
>Never before had you seen a creature so closed off, no matter how he tried to act on the outside.
>Maybe, if you could only figure out why he was like this...
>Listening, you waited, til finally you heard Sunbursts snoring.
>With Anon awake you couldn't feed off what love had built back up within him, so you needed a distraction if nothing else.
“So, Anon, what DID happen to you back home?”
>”...What do you mean? “ Anon said, scratching at his head.
>Rolling your eyes, glare at him in annoyance.
“Please, my species has a natural, ah, talent, for sensing emotions. And you, Anon, are but a hollow, loveless shell pretending everything alright.”
>Smugly you stare him down, daring him to say otherwise, as he blankly stares back.
>However, for just one moment, you see an anger in his eyes, one so deep you feel your heart race for a moment.
>And just like that, it faded, as his eyes drooped down to the fire.
>”....My family Betrayed me. Plain and simple.” He says, before shrugging and poking at the fire. “It was a long time ago now, Taught me everything I needed to know about life.”
>His head shot up, meeting your gaze again.
>”Anyone ever tell you love and loyalty are to be trusted, don't listen. Lies as easy to tell as any other.”

>>29840396
>Your eyes stay locked for what feels like an eternity.
>Despite everything, you, Queen of the Changelings, feel an....understanding, with Anon.
>Suddenly and without warning, you understand the truth.
>He was a lost cause, deserving of his hatred for the world.
>Blinking out of your stupor, you stare down at the fire.
“I...Understand, more so then you could fathom human.”
>You take in the fire, as images of HIM flash in your mind.
>Teeth clenched, you hiss in frustration and a hatred so deep you could not name it.
“I too, was betrayed by my family. But it matters not, those responsible will find that I tend to get my revenge, sooner or later...”
>Silence falls over you two, nothing but the crackling of burning logs between the two.
>Suddenly, Anon whistles.
>”Well damn....how unlikely is that? Two bastards, both betrayed by everything they loved, Stuck together as the world falls to shit. It like the fucking universe decided we had to take on all the fucking misery it could dish out.”
>Spitting anon tossed his stick into the fire, and threw out a few colorful words in nothings direction.
>You chuckle, Letting your gaze fall upon the night sky above.
“Maybe so, but I plan to give every bit of that misery back to it. Damn be them all, they left me with nothing else to strive for.”
>Anon nodded, staring up at the sky himself.
>Your attention snaps back to him though, as, for just a moment, you swear you felt something, a spark of love perhaps, but you couldn't be sure.
>Still, all you smell off of him is his hatred, his stone cold exterior pushing the world away.
>And you couldn't help but admire it a bit.
>”Well...i think im gonna catch some sleep myself. It was...actually nice talking to ya, C- Queen Chrysalis.” He said with a smirk.
>Rolling your eyes ,you waved him off, to which he complied.
>Needing to eat, you decide to enjoy the fire til he was asleep.

>>29840429
>You, Anon, toss and turn.
>No sweet dreams, none.

>You stand over your dads coffin, tears welling in your eyes.
>That damned bitch had suddenly come back, and sued to squeeze every cent she could out of him.
>He was doomed, but he couldve lived a bit longer if you had been able to afford it.
>Looking around the empty church, you cant help but frown further.
>Only his brother had showed up, stand droopy eyed next to you, smoke hanging lump in his mouth as he stared down.
“Where...the hell is everyone?”
>Shrugging, his brother simply said “Everyone else took yer mothers side I guess.”
“Damn them then.” You say, letting your eyes fall back on your father.
>”Heh, yeah, damn them all...” He said, pulling out and examining his cigarette.
>”Fucking bastards all of them, but damn, hate the man fer what he did, but he certainly knows how to give a good impression.”
>Suddenly, you hear the church doors open behind you.
>Both of you turn, and your fathers brothers frown deepens as a man enters.
>”Speaking of the devil...”
>Your jaw drops.
>There was no way....right?
>Of all people...the man who stole his wife?
“You....your kidding right.”
>”Nope” He say, sticking his cig back in his mouth, giving it a long draw. “Want me to take care of it?”
“...No, I need to do this.”
>Sure, just dont get arrested, he wouldn't of wanted it fer ya.”
“....Thanks.”
>As you march towards the man, standing respectfully, waiting as you approach, something starts to change in your dream.

>The memory slowly fades, dissipating like a cloud before you.
“No no damnit what?!” You yell, looking around as suddenly, inexplicably, you are in a cozy meadow, somehow fully aware you are dreaming yet still fast asleep.
>”We are sorry to disturb thy dream, but they appeared ot be in such distress we could not idly watch.”
>You turn, and lo and behold, the Alicorn known as 'Luna' if you remember, floats down before you.

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>>29840481
“What the hell? Did...you have something to do with this?!”
>Seemingly taken off guard by your anger, Lune simply nods.
>”We can enter, and affect dreams of all in Equestria. Thy...Thy were not wanting to finish thy nightmare, were you?”
“I....Damnit I don't fucking know!” You say, kicking some flowers to release your anger.
>Looking around, you curse under your breath, turning back to Luna more then miffed.
“I dont want this for sure, for fucking godamned sure.”
>Luna clears her throat, looking around.
>”My powers can only influence thy dreams so much, when I tried to end your nightmare, Thy own mind went here.”
>Grumbling, you look around, and concentrating, change things.
>Suddenly, the terrain changes, becoming a murky bog, the light dims from the trees above.
>Luna grimaces as your both suddenly knee deep in muck, before using her powers, you assume, to give herself a patch of land above the muck.
>”If thy are more comfortable in such an environment...” She mutters.
“Fuck comforts, what are you even doing here?” You spit out.
>After the dreams we were having, you were hardly in a mood for mind games.
>”Ah, yes. We ourselves were simply resting. Things in the Crystal Empire have come to a standstill, the creatures surround us but after failing to break our lines for a third time appear to simply be waiting us out.”
>She sighed, looking you dead in the eyes with all the seriousness the situation deserved.
>”We simply do not have the strength to break through them ourselves. Thou MUST Find the source of this, and end it before supplies run out.”
>You raise an eyebrow, a few questions coming to mind.
“Aren't Alicorns supposed to be pretty powerful? With so many of you, id suspect you could easily get through.”

>>29840572
>Sighing, Luna Looked off into the distance.
>”The Abominations are Not fully alive, Animated from some ancient magic even we do not know about. Who, or Whatever made them, Made them well and numerous. They absorb most magic shot at them to power their own horrid existence, requiring a large quantity to destroy, and they simply keep coming...”
>You nod, unsure of what to say at that.
>”Thy must be careful. We were not expecting to be gone so long from our lands, and we fear from the dreams we have observed that something is going wrong in them.”
“Thats....reassuring. Any more info on that maybe?”
>She shakes her head.
>”Look to a Unicorn named Starlight Glimmer in Canterlot, Twilight assured us she could keep things under control until we came back, though we didn't not intend for none of us to return or be so cut off...”
>You nod weakly.
>As far as you were concerned, you did not need this shit on top of everything else.
>But, of course, here it was.
“Ill..err....do what I can?”
>”You must find it within you to do more then you think you can, the fate of Equestria, and perhaps everything, rests in your hands.”
“OH well yeah no- wait huh?”
>You panic a bit as the dream suddenly starts collapsing around you, Luna dissipating like smoke.

>Gasping as you are suddenly, violently awake, you look around, hearing something but only feeling blood pound as your heart races.
>”Anon! ANON! Bloody hell are you alright?” Sunburst says.
>Calming down, you turn towards him, and Candle Shine, Both looking at you quite worryingly.
“I....Im fine....Err....Well im not actually, but lets talk over...over breakfast.”
>They exchange looks as you crawl to your feet, stumbling over to the unlit fire and rummaging through your supplies for the water canteen, which you quickly and messily slurp down.

>>29840634
>As you all sit around the unlit fire, the early morning sun shinng down, its of course Sunburst who speaks up.
>”Well, this is good news! I know Starlight, shes very capable and will be more then willing to help us.”
>”If, she is even in charge anymore.” Candle pipes of.
>Sneering at her, Sunburst seems to snap a bit.
>”Why wouldn't she be? She has...experience leading, she should be up to the task.”
>Candle shrugged and stood up.
>”Im sure you're right, but theres only one way to find out, of course.”
“Right, we've wasted enough time.”
>Sighing, Sunburst gets up too.
>After packing up, you head back out along the Tracks, a Long day of walking ahead of you all.

>Its late in the day when you finally get near Canterlot Mountain, the massive city sitting up high above.
>It was Candle who noticed Pegasi Flying around here and there.
>Eventually as your group was about to settle down, as the hike up would take quite awhile on foot, a few Pegasi Guards land around you.
>”Halt, this is Restricted land, state your business!”
>”Were from the Crystal Empire! We were snet by the Princesses! Im Sunburst, Royal Crystaller of Princes Cadence and Prince Shinning Armor!”
>The guards talk among themselves, before pulling their spears up, one of them flying off.
>”Is this true? How are we to trust you?”
“...Why would we lie?” You suggest with a shrug.
>The guards look between one another, worry clear on their faces.
>”..Then if what you say is true, you are lucky it was us who found you.”
>”And why is that?” Candle asks.
>The guards all look around, as if they expect to be attacked at any moment.
>”Because 'High King' Blueblood has taken over Canterlot.” The captain spoke plainly.
“The who has taken over?”
>Sunburst Curses, and Candle Shine groans in what appears to be disgust.
>”He is the self proclaimed 'blood related prince' to the sisters.” Sunburst says.

>>29840739
>The Captain nods sadly.
>”after it Became clear something had gone wrong in the Crystal Empire, ponies began to panic. Starlight Glimmer did her best but...when things look bad, sometimes ponies might look in the wrong direction. Bluebloods a bastard, but he didn't get people to believe his nonsense without some charisma to back up his claims.”
>After recovering himself a bit, Sunburst approaches the captain.
>”And what about Starlight Glimmer?”
>The Captain sighs heavily.
>”At first she simply tried to keep herself in a position of power, and ponies weren't willing to ignore that the princesses had appointed her themselves, but...then HE showed up.”
“You're...going to have to actually say who...” you suggest.
>The captain leers at you ,but continues.
>”We do not know who he was, but he was a unicorn. He Claimed that the Monsters attacking the Crystal Empire would come for Equestria next, unless he was to speak with whoever in charge, alone.”
>Naturally,” one of the other guards speaks up, “We were about to arrest the bastard, before Blueblood agreed to meet with him.”
>The captain nodded, shaking his head.
>”We have no idea what happened. Starlight went to the meeting aswell, but not an hour after those doors closed did we hear fighting start, the doors themselves being blown off their hinges. We are not sure how, but Blueblood was able to best Starlight Glimmer.”
>”Many tried to stop him, but his power was thus too much to fight. In the end, we had a choice, obey and bide our time, of face the dungeons with those who defied him.”
>”Worse,” a different guard pipes in, “Whatever that Unicorn gave him, can slowly affect a ponies mind. Every day he hold a public speech, and its like....a spell, slowly making ponies agree with him, more and more. It might be too late to simply use reason to dethrone him...”

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>>29840800
>” And what about this unicorn?” Candle Shine asks.
>The captain sneers.
>”Left after the fight, or more like disappeared. We do not believe he is still in Canterlot, if nothing else.”
>You nod, scratching your chin, as suddenly a few guards land, a chariot attached to them.
>You wonder how they had got the here through the air...
>Shaking yourself back to the problem at hand, you turn to the guards again.
“how far reaching has his influence gotten?”
>The guards exchange looks, before turning back.
>”That...is actually a concern we were hoping to get your help with.”
“....Why?”
>Clearing his throat, the captain points upwards.
>At first, you have no idea why he would, until you notice things have suddenly started to go very dark.
>You gasp.
>An airship. A fucking airship was passing by overhead.
>”Blueblood has invited important and influential ponies from across Equestira to a gathering, to discuss Equestrias future over the course a few days...”
>”And with that magic of his...” Sunburst gulps.
>The guard nods.
>”This may be our last chance to stop him, before his control becomes unquestionable.”
>You pull at your raggedy shirts collar, feeling the pressure of the circumstances growing heavier and heavier.
“Well.....uhh.....Anyone thought of just assassinating the bastard?”
>Everyone suddenly turns to you, confused looks in their eyes.
>Everyone but Candle, who you swore had a smile bigger then the damned moon across her face, for just a second.
>”What...is an Assassination?” Sunburst asks.
>You look upon them like they had just asked what grass was.

>>29840869
>You blink, then start rubbing your brow as you try and avoid a headache.
“I mean, wait til the bastards asleep, or his backs turned, and put a dagger through his throat.”
>some gasp, Sunburst gags, and the Captain outright spits upon the ground.
>”We ain't godamned changeling here. We do things with tact, honor, morals. No solution that throws everything we stand for down the gutter is a solution im willing to listen to.”
>You sigh, before something he said catches your attention.
>Changeling? What about them? You suppose it made sense that anything with that name wouldn't fit with some of those things, but the way he said it....
>”Now now captain, the changelings are reformed. Not even they would stoop so low anymore.”
>”Ah, right, my apologizes.” He nods to Sunburst, “Still, its disgusting, below a civilized species to commit, or allow such acts.”
>You groan, pulling your mind back on track.
“Are you kidding me? Really? This 'Blueblood' outright betrayed his people, sold them out to someone who might've started this mess, and now plans to magically control every important pony in the Kingdom? You dont have lot of options here.”
>As the captain was about to answer, another Pegasus lands, panic across his face.
>”You must leave now, a Traitor Patrol is entering the area!”
>Cursing, the Guards all but force you onto the carriage.
>”We can discuss this later, but just know Blueblood will get what he deserves.”
>From what you hear, he most likely wont.
>As the carriage suddenly lurches, you expect them to simply run you up the mountain.
>You nearly scream as it lifts off the ground, clutching onto the side like a madman as you fight an oncoming panic attack.
>”A-Anon...are you alright?” Sunburst asks, putting a hoof on your shoulder.
“H-how?! Why?! This thing is FLYING!?”
>”...Yes? What were you expecting?” he asks, though with concern.
“NOT. THIS.”

>>29840934
>By the time the Carriage finally lands, you flop over the side quickly, not even waitng for it to come to a full stop.
>Despite rolling a food 5 feet across pavement, you quickly get on your knees, kiss the goddamned dirty ground like a lover.
>”By Celestia Anon are you mad!?” Sunburst says, running up to you.
“By All the gods of this world and mine, any creature insane enough to think those things are safe is whos insane.”
>Candle light tries to stifle full on laughter as she steps off, but the Guards seem less then amused.
>”We dont have time for your foolish phobias, follow, quickly.” The captains says, opening the door to the house you had stopped infront of with his unicorn magic.
>As everyone piles inside the house, you cant help but wonder where you actually are.
>”Im sorry for the accommodations, but the castle and guard houses are too well guarded. Too many have become loyal to Blueblood.
>Sunburst nods, “So whats the plan then?”
>”We have agents trying to warn who we can about Bluebloods intentions. Hopefully we can get some on board, and at the right time, they and those we can get into the room, can get through security to allow us our shot at taking out Blueblood.”
“Thats...it? Seems like a half hazard plan to me.” You say, picking an apple of the table and enjoying a long, tasty mouthful.
>You are so happy it was not a wax decoration.
>The captain sighs, and surprisingly agrees with you.
>”No, it is far from a perfect plan, however we have little options available due to his strength. We have managed to fish up an old artifact that might be able to best him, however it requires an amount of power few can muster, let alone use twice. We will only have one shot, and we hope the chaos of his event turning upside down will give us it.”

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>>29841061
>Sunburst shrugs.
>”Its not perfect, but I hardly can think of something better. Where is this artifact? I might be able to see if I cant figure out a better way to use it.”
>The captain nods, and starts leading him away, but stops to address you and Candle.
>”Feel free to use whatever you need from the house, these two guards will stay to protect you. Get some rest, we have a long morning ahead of us.”
>And just like that, you are alone with Chrysalis, even the two guards heading off to a different room.
>You grumble, walking off into the kitchen.
>Apparently having little better to do, Chrysalis follows.
>You mumble and grumble as you search the pantries, picking out this and that and setting it on the counter.
>”Something is clearly wrong, so you might aswell say it.” Candle says with a smirk.
>Slamming down a box of what you hope is cereal, you turn around.
“Yeah, something is wrong. These ponies are idiots, baffoons. Morals mean shit if there's no one left to uphold them.”
>You turn back around, discovering you can indeed aggressively make a bowl of cereal.
>”...I agree.”
>You stop, and slowly turn around, to be met by a Grin that chilled you to your core, eyes shining with glee.
“Err...you do?”
>”Of course, Bluebloods too big a threat to risk on an open engagement. He must be Eliminated before he can gain nay more control over the population of Equestria.”
>You blink, but nod.
“Yeah...but the others aren't gonna let us do anything about it.”
>She giggles, walking up and patting your shoulder like one would a pet or child.
>”Eat your Cereal, Ill be back when its time to leave.”
>She winks and suddenly wisps around and walks off.
“...wait...Gah fuck it fine.”
>Whatever the fuck was about to go down, you were not going to be a part of it on an empty stomach.
>Not again.

>>29839405
Yes, I guess

>>29841132
>Being Chrysalis, Queen of the Changelings, you could not help but be a bit giddy.
>You had not had such a chance for espionage in a long time.
>You usually left it to your children, curse them for betraying you, but you couldn't deny being out and about yourself was exhilarating after all this time.
>As you slipped quietly into the room, you listened as the guards talked among themselves.
>”You think everything's gonna work out?” The first one said as he put down a card for whatever game they were playing.
>The other ones shrugged, plying some card himself and getting a groan from his companion as he swiped up all the chips on the tables middle.
>”Everything always doe for Equestria, just gotta keep hope close by.”
>”If you say so...”
>With little warning, you pounce, slamming the firs guards head into the table, hard.
>Out like a light, you slide across the table after the other.
>Despite his shock, he reacts quickly, tossing his chair at you as he rushes for his spear against the wall.
>You expertly dodge his feeble attempt at a throw, and have him pinned to the wall a moment later, spear thrown across to the other side of the room.
>”What in blazes are you doing!?” He spits out at you.
“Oh, just having a bit of a snack, before we go and do what you pitiful ponies refuse to.”
>Letting your disguise drop, you revel in his shock and horror as you begin your feast.

>You leave not one drop of love between the two, licking you lips gleefully as you tie them up and toss them in the closet.
>You chuckle as you close the door, and pin it in place with the spears.
“Well, that was quite fun.”
>With that, you head back to get Anon.

>>29841232
>You, Anon, Ignore the sudden sounds of fighting as best you can, scarfing down another spoonful of cereal.
“...How do the ponies use this silverware anyways?” You ask the empty kitchen.
>You look up as Chrysalis, fully exposed, walks into the kitchen grinning ear to ear.
“I....take it you did what you had to?”
>”In a sense.” she says with a shrug, before motioning towards the door. “We should leave while we can however. The others wont be happy once they come back.”
>You nod, and taking one last bite of your honestly lackluster cereal, you follow her out into the crisp night air.
>As she leads you back alley to back alley towards the Castle, you cant help but ask what the plan is.
>”Well, using my superior natural abilities, and your...ability to actually understand what needs to get done or something, were going to sneak in and slip silently into Bluebloods room and teach him how a fool meets their end.”
>You nod respectfully, though you feel like this is only slightly better then the guards own plan.
>Better still it was though.
>As you finally reach the back of the castle, Chrysalis holds motions for you to stay in the shadows as she transforms into a guard, stepping out and marching towards the protected door before you.
>You cant hear whats going on, but after a few nods are exchanged, the two guard ponies rush off somewhere, and a moment later she nods in your direction.
>Quickly rushing to the door, you slip inside with her, looking around the hallway for any sings of more activity.
“Good work.”
>”Bah, child's play, you can praise me once the jobs done.”
“Alright.” you say with a shrug.
>”This way.” she says as she leads you along.
>As you travel down hallways after hallways, avoiding a patrol here, and tricking one there, you start to think you might just pull this off like a pro.
>The, as you round a corner, you come face to face with a set of three guards on patrol.

>>29841339
>”Hey, what ar-? Halt!” they yell, And you both curse.
>Quickly, Chrysalis launched forward, ending up behind them due to her wings, cutting them off.
>Smart move you realize, as one had been turning around to most likely get more help.
>You dont have time to think, quickly slamming against the wall as a spear point nearly skewers you.
>Thankfully, you came...prepared.
>Slipping the Train handle from your belt, you pin the Spear to the wall with a full body slam against its shaft.
>The guard lets go, quickly turn and kicking at you, getting one hoof into the side of your gut and sending you tripping to the ground.
>Luckily, Chrysalis was apparently a much better fighter, one of the two after her flying past you.
>For one, simple second, the guard is distracted as his comrade almost slams into his head from behind.
>But it is just enough for you to bring up your Weapon as you get up, whipping him hard in the bottom of his jaw.
>You ignore the crunch as you stumbles but doesn't fall, collecting himself in but a moment.
>But you were quick, slamming your Metal Handle Down hard on his helmet.
>He takes it like a champ, proving helmets work as he kicks at your knee, nearly sending you to the ground, before prying your weapon from you with his mouth and tossing to away.
>You quickly swing, hitting him in the eye.
>Not a moment to hesitate, to think, you grab the first thing you can and go in for another hit.
>Like a Knife into butter, his own spear slips through his neck.
>Your eyes meet, utter surprise in his, your own full of hate, until you yourself realize what happened.
>You blink as he slumps to the ground.
>Slowly letting go of the spear, you kick yourself away, trying to get your breathing under control as you fight panic.
>Your eyes wont leave the blood, hands shaking as you simply try and breath.

>>29841373
>”Anon....?”
>”Anon!”
>You snap back to the world as Chrysalis shoves her hoof in you face, waving it around.
“Im...im...Alright...yeah....”
>She cocks an eyebrow at you but shrugs, pulling you to your feet.
>You wince a bit as you put weight on your knee, but it holds.
>”Well, that was...messy.”she says, looking on in disappointment at the sprawled out bodies.
“I....Yeah...”
>Your mind was slowly coming back to focus.
>You had...known, you thought, what this would entail.
>But somehow, standing here now...
>”Well, we better get moving, only a matter of time now.” she says, and starts running.
>Not wanting to be left behind, you ignore you knee and run after her, quickly picking your Train Handle up along the way.
>It was better then nothing ,and wasn't stuck in a pony.
>The rest of the trip was mostly quite, and before long, a well guarded door stands around the corner.
“What now?” you whisper.
>”Easy.” she points to a room across from you, though along the same wall as your target.
>You don't know what she was getting at, as she transforms into a guard again, and walks over and opens the door.
>The five guards take no notice of her, though your pretty sure they still looked in her direction.
>You simply sit, unsure of what to do as the door closes before you.
>You obviously could not exactly just transform like Chrysalis.
>That is, until the door opens again, and out walk Chrysalis, a large rug floating in her magical grasps.
>Perfectly blocking the hall so you can pass along it.
>To which you do so quickly.

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>>29841484
>”Hey, you, what are you doing with that?” You hear from down the hallway as you slip into the storage room.
>”Sir! I was asked to fetch a new rug sir!”
>”What in the blazes...grah, those bloody rich snobs are never satisfied. Which one of them asked you to do something so ridiculous?!”
>”Jello Donut Sir!”
>You hear the captain groan loudly.
>”Well give that here, ill go take care of HIM. No Mayor is sending MY guards on stupid errands on my watch.”
>”Yes Sir...Thank you sir!”
>A few moments later, she walks back in, door closing behind her.
“Well...that was...convenient?”
>She smiles.
>”Was it? I didn't notice.”
>Walking past you, she pokes her head out the window and looks to the side.
>”Ah, perfect.”
“What is?”
>”He has a balcony we can get to from here.”
>Your mind ticks like clockwork, til it clicks.
“Wait...were not going to...climb the outside of the castle...right?”
>Pulling her head back in, she transforms back to normal, twitching her wings.
>”Well, Im not.”
>You narrow your eyes, not at all amused.
>But the next thing you know, your slipping out a window, hundreds of feet above the ground, with nothing but a small ledge to settle your feet on as you clutch any and every hole in the stones for dear life.
“Y-you know, you probably...probably! Dont even need me for this...”
>”Oh, nonsense, “she says as she buzzes in the air alongside you, “Having backup is never a bad idea.”
>It feels like hours, as you slowly, slowly make your way to the balcony.
>Step by step, it gets closer, as you nervously make your way across.
>Then, of course, at the last moment, your foot slips.
>Undramatically, Chrysalis quickly swoops froward, helping you regain your footing, trying her best not to break out laughing.
“Ass.” you say simply.

>>29841552
>Finally making it onto the balcony, you sigh a heavy sigh of relief as Chrysalis lands next to you.
>As you slowly open the door to the room, you hear snoring, marking your prey for asleep.
>You take a step into the room.
>And the another.
>Slowly, you approach the bed.
>Step by step, careful as can be.
>The only sound his snoring and the blood rushing in your ears as your heart races.
>and then, you are above him.
>Mane like gold, pelt like snow.
>You look to Chrysalis, who nods to confirm it is indeed him.
>suddenly, her horn lights up.
>And there is a knife magically held out before you.
>Heart beating like mad, your mind racing.
>Could you really do this?
>He was just...sleeping, it wasn't like before, you didn't have time to think before.
>To contemplate what you were doing....

>>29841606
>You, Anon, Stood in the entrance to the church, the man who was partially responsible for the destruction of your family, your life, standing before you.
>Here, at the fucking funeral of your father, the man he had fucked over in so many ways.
“What...the Fuck... Do you think you're doing here?”
>You barely control your urges to deck the man.
>He sighs, looking through the door to the front of the stage where the casket was.
>”I Tried you know, to get others to come. Told them he was a good man, he hadn't done anything wrong, didn't deserve so much that had happened to him. Everyone said I was too good a person, that I should forget about 'that old man.'”
>You couldn't believe what you were hearing.
>”Of course, I dont regret anything. I know you cant accept it, but me and your mother were in love, and he wasn't around for her....We were wrong, what we did, love is sometimes wrong.”
>You scoff, and point at him, venom building up in you voice.
“OH fuck the hell off with your sentiment, you have no right to be here, to feel sorry for him after everything you and she fucking did you-”
>”Your right.”
>You pause, and simply stare at him.
>He hesitates, but suddenly reaches into his coat pocket, and pulls out an envelope, holding it out to you.

>>29841636

“What are...”
>”I Figured, your dad loved that little plot of land he owned. Took me every Favor your mother owed me, but its yours now, Paperwork's all done, its official.”
>You blink and slowly take it from him.
“Why..?”
>He smiles, turning towards you.
>”Figured it was time to mend fences. To get the family back together. Its not too late you know, a few words and you'll have your second chance.”
>You look up from the envelope, anger rushing back into your mind like a fire.
“A second chance? FUCKING A SECOND CHANCE?!” you spit in his face, and as he recoils point out the door.
“GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY DAMNED FACE OR ILL SHOW YOU HOW MUCH A SECOND CHANCE IS FUCKING WORTH.”
>He frowns after getting his face clean, rolling his eyes as he turns.
>”I lied, all that was left was for me to sign the papers in that. You blew your chance, all I was asking for was a bit of civility.”
>You laugh, tossing the envelope on the ground.
“Like I give a FUCK you goddamned Bastard!”

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>>29841661
>You, Chrysalis, Cock and eyebrow.
>A Potent Hatred was rising quickly within Anon Mous, so powerful you felt like your tongue was catching fire.
>Suddenly, he whipped the knife out of the air.
>In one, beautifully efficient moment, he brought the knife down, embedding it deep in Bluebloods throat.
>And then, suddenly, as Blueblood awoke, Gasping.
>As the light went out from his eyes.
>The world became screams.
>Horrible, terrible screams from all around, Echoing from every corner of Canterlot.
>You quickly cover your ears, the Sound so intense you nearly collapse on the ground.
>You meet anons eyes as the sound, suddenly, stops.
>slowly regaining you composure, you both look around.
>Anons face suddenly becomes on of horror, before he rushes to the doors to the room, throwing them open.
>He simply stand there, hands still outstretched.
>Slowly trotting over, you cant help but recoil a bit as you catch sight, and piece together what had just happened.
>The Guards, most likely under the effect of whatever Blueblood had been doing, lay sprawled on the ground, blood dripping from even the pores of their face.
>”...we....we just fucked up......We fucked up so bad......” Anons whispers.
>You can only nod, slowly, as you wonder just how many ponies were in Canterlot.
>So few could've ignored or escaped Bluebloods daily speeches.
>As Anon slumps to his knees, you sit down next to him, shrugging.
“The price they pay for their hesitation.” He say with a shrug.
>Anons quite, before suddenly chuckling as he wiped at his eyes.
>”Of course...the Price they pay for their hesitation....”
“Of course.” You say, offering him a smile and a hoof.
>As you get him back on his feet, you stride out, Anon in tow, and a Heart filled with un expected satisfaction.

>>29841730
Aaand with that, i have to go to work.

also Trip and updated pastepin, just for reasons and because i totally thought i had it on this entire time.

https://pastebin.com/0gG0HdXU

Hope you guys are enjoying it.
any thoughts on what i could do to improve is always appreciated.

Until i return, cheers, and remember, /bug/ is best.

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>>29841730
Holy shit...

bug

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>>29841730

>>29836849
Allez, les bugs*
Pereferably allonz-y, when you mean a specific goal.

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Warning Not Pone
*Yawn*
Read it.
Ask for more.
Tell me to fuck off.
Call me a faggot.
Tell me to do this or that.

Do whatever, might feel like writing again or something after Lewd Sleepover has pretty much been dead for the past few months.

>>29835227
Don't die on me, bug. I wanna write things for you someday.

>>29844148
Better post soon, this thread can die any minute

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>>29845046
if so you did a good job then.

>>29843653
>Warning Not Pone
Stopped there. Write pone or GTFO.

>>29841730
>One step by one step, you and Anon go down Canterlots hallways.
>One after the other, empty, save for a sprawled out corpse here, or a, surprisingly, one still switching with life.
>You supposed the side effects of freeing them from Blueblood differed in intensity depending on who much exposure they had.
>”Shouldn't we...help them?” Anon says as he stops staring at one mare as she attempt to blindly crawl across the carpeting.
>You sigh, waving your hoof in exaggeration.
“Hardly Im certainly no doctor, we have places to be, and not enough time for even a fraction of them.”
>”Thats...true....” He said, slowly prying his eyes off of the mare.
>You nod, and lead him along.
>However, as you round a corner, you are suddenly slammed into a wall.
>”What did you do!? WHAT DID YOU DO!?”
>Sunburst stands before you, bloodied hooves, tears streaming from behind a new pair of glasses.
>You Smile.
“Simply what you were too weak to do.”

>Anon Freezes as Sunburst appears from out of nowhere, pinning Chrysalis to the wall.
>Your feet feel like concrete, unable to move as your mouth opens and closes, words unable to form.
>”I should've known something was up with you 'Candle Shine'. You bloody MONSTER, You...You KNEW this would happen didn't you?” Sunburst says, as he approaches the pinned Chrysalis, “Oh, who am I kidding!? You probably PLANNED all this out!”
>Finally, you find the words to speak.
“Sun...Sunburst....we...it was a mist-”
>He turns, and suddenly you're thrown to the ground, pushed several feet back.
>”I Should've known Anon had been under your spell, he always did seem far too close to you for everything he'd been through.”
>You gasp as you try and catch your breath, looking up as Chrysalis tries to break free, shock showing across her face as her magic wasn't strong enough to do so.
>And then you see it.
>A knife slips out from Sunbursts bag, hovering, pointing at her.

>>29845533
“Don.....DONT DO IT!” You yell, “GODAMNED WHAT THE HELL WOULD IT SOLVE AT THIS POINT!?” you shakily get back to your feet, Sunburst simply staring at her.
>Your mind was a fucking mess.
>You slowly approach, step by careful step.
>You didn't want anyone else to die, but you didnt think you could stop him.
>Or....blame him for it.
>”....No....this time she went too far, she wont hurt anypony ever again.”
>You had no idea what he was talking about, but you knew you had to stop him.
>Then, the knife suddenly lurches forward.
>You dont think, you simply rush forward, Panic taking over you.
>And the next thing you know, your blinking, as you double over, knife in your side.

>”A....Anon....?”Sunburst gasps, backing up slowly.
>Your vision blurry, you see his horn stop glowing, fear sprawled across his face, as you lurch over in pain.
>And then, Without a moments hesitation, He slams into the wall, a green glow enveloping him fully, as Chrysalis stands next to you.
>She hisses.
>”You will regret that.”
>But, suddenly, somehow, you find the strength to straighten out, slapping a hand onto her shoulder.
>She Swiftly turns, and, you think you see genuine worry across her face.
>”Anon-”
“Im....Fine....”
>You stand,grimacing as you pull your hand from the wound, looking at the blood.
>Something about it seems...off, but you dont have time to think about it.
“We....have places to be. Leave him be....”
>She hesitates, before pulling her compsure back.
>”He'll come for us.”
“Then kill him then.”
>She Blinks, Before shrugging, and pulls him back a bit, before slamming him into the wall, presumably to knock him out.
>You watch as he slumps against the wall, unsure of what the fuck you're supposed to think, supposed to do.
>Chrysalis, turns to you, staring at your wound.

>>29845584
>”Hold still.”
“Wh-FUCK.”
>You nearly bite your tongue as she rips the knife out of you, then points her horn at it.
>A moment later its been covered in some sorta green, sticky goop that hardens into a sorta rubber.
>She smiles as you throw out a few more choice curses as the pain slowly dies down, stomping around in a circle as if it would help.
>”That should hold well enough. We changelings have a wonderful Mixture of tools at our disposal, wouldn't you agree?”
“Sure...” You say as the pain finally becomes a simple dullness.
>After a moment, she clears her throat, looking off down the hall way.
>”Well, I suppose a thank you is in order. That baffoon was more adept then I had thought.”
“I....No problem.” you shrug.
>You simply lean against the wall, trying to piece together what the hell happened.
“What...the fuck are we even supposed to do now?”
>”Do?” Chrysalis says as she chuckles, “What we already were going to do. They asked for our help and they got it, its not OUR fault if their mistakes created some....unfortunate side effects.”
>You look at her, utterly dumbfounded.
“Wha....You still want to try and stop those...things?”
>She shrugged.
>”I simply want to stop a threat, and that unicorn and his monsters most assuredly is one to me.”
“...Right.”
>Chuckling she motions for you to follow, and with little else to do, you get walking.

>>29845641
>It was a silent trip to the bottom of the castle, but it was as you were approaching the end you speak up.
“So...whats the plan now?”
>She stops, tapping at her chin.
>”Well, YOU should go, ill meet you by southern gate. I myself still have...one last thing to take of here.”
>You raise an eyebrow.
“Anything I could help with?”
>She shakes her head.
>”It wouldn't be right if I didn't do it alone. Now run along and find us some supplies, the trip to the coast wont be the a short one.”
>You hesitate, but you slowly, comply.
>as you exit the castle though, doors closing behind you, you feel your vision going blurry.
>You try to walk, but finally fall to the ground, fighting back tears as you breath deeply.
“Dear god what the fuck Have I done?!”
>You had been fighting to keep it together.
>But now, alone, your mind a flurry of emotions, you just couldnt.
>Why were you expected to uphold this responsibility?
>To try and be a hero to these ponies?
>You were just some guy, some bloke who....
>...Who never asked for this.
>You suck in a large breath, slowly regaining control.
>You never asked for this.
>Just like back on earth, life had decided what the fuck kinda of life you should lead.
>One of misery and loss.
>You sigh, slowly stopping the shaking in your hands.
>Wiping at your eyes, you stare up at the sky, and flipping off the heavens you yell and scream.
“You want me miserable? You want me to keep giving a fuck as shit rolls down the hill? WELL FUCK YOU, FUCK ALL OF YOU! IM SICK OF IT, IM SICK OF THIS SHIT.”
>You get onto your feet, looking around the empty courtyard and wave your arms around.
“THIS IS LIFE, BULLSHIT ON TOP OF BULLSHIT? WELL FUCK THEN, IM GIVING IT BACK. YOU HEAR ME? ILL GIVE EVERY BIT OF IT BACK. IF IM DAMNED, THEN SO WILL BE EVERYONE ELSE.”
>You sigh, letting your gaze fall to the ground.
“then so will be everyone else.....”

>>29845764
>Chrysalis slowly descended the stairs, making her way deep into the dungeons.
>Her heart determined, her mind focused.
>She, strangely, was hoping Anon would be alright, but this was a chance, an opportunity she could not ignore.
>As she passed the guards quarters, all hunched over dead, she didn't even stop, barely looking over to spot and float the keys over to her.
>Like a soldier to war, she marched steadfast into the darkness.
>Finally, you arrived at the cell, a Large wooden door standing between you...and revenge.
>With a loud click, the door was unlocked, and swinging it open, you stared inside.
>The pinkish unicorn sitting chained to the wall at first didn't even look up, simply snorting as she stared at one of the runes on her foreleg shackle, keeping her magic in check.
“Hello...Starlight....” you say with a friendly smile.
>Her head shoots up, eyes going wide.
>Shock clear across her face.
>”....Ch....Chrysalis?”
“Oh, im soooo pleased you recognize me!” you say, pretending to be enthusiastically surprised.
>”I...You...Whats going on!?” She says, trying to put on a brave face, standing up.
>You smile, as you walk into the room, looking around at the murky stone walls.
“Oh you know, this and that. Bluebloods dead, im sure you are ESTATIC to hear that, no?”
>She blinks, a look of confusion and fear on her face.
>”You...no...you didnt....”
“Oh, not me, I would NEVER. My new friend however....” You say with a chuckle. “Well, hes a lot like me you see.”
>You spin around, swiftly coming to a stop in front of Starlight, eyes filled with fury if as you force her up against the wall.
“Everyone he cared for betrayed him too.”
>After taking a moment to enjoy the utter terror in Starlights eyes, you pull back, walking a few steps back, before turning around to give her another smile.

>>29845894
>Digging out a bit of leftover courage, Starlight shakily regains her composure.
>”Changelings like you don't have friends.” she says, holding her chin up high.
>You laugh, stomping your hoof.
“That's the best you can do? Really? That is how you intend to sting at my heart? HA!”
>You quickly unleash a burst of magic, and eyes closed, nearly drool as you enjoy her screams as her horn is liquefied off her head.
“Your wrong of course. Why wouldn't I think him a friend? The worlds turned him even darker and more vile inside then me, its quite admirable, wouldn't you say?”
>You trot over, putting a hoof around her neck, spanning your other skywards as she huffs in pain.
“Just think about it for a moment, ME, the Queen of the Changelings, and a Human, thats what he is by the way, A creature broken and empty, saviors of Equestria.”
>”SAVIORS?!” she says, snapping her head in your direction, anger burning in her eyes.
>Smiling, you take her head in your hoofs, squeezing her cheeks.
“Awww? Does that anger you? Why, despite the side effects, we DID free Equestria from Bluebloods reign, his plan to control the minds of everypony. And I cant Take over if some Unicorn Holds an army of Rotting Abominations over my head.”
>Starlight grinds her teeth, before her eyes go wide again as you slam her against the wall, hoof pressed firmly on her throat.

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>>29845937
>You revel as she chokes, legs kicking above the ground.
>You sniff the air, moaning before breaking out in laughter, letting her slide to the ground.
“Oooooooooh, the love you feel, building up as you still think there a way out of this!” You giggle.
>Smiling wickedly, you stare at the defiant eyes below you.
“No. Your finished. Canterlot is Finished. The Crystal Empire is Finished. And when me and Anon Finish off the pesky imp and his Army, there will be NO ONE even left to stop me.”
>You lean down, patting her head.
“And those traitors? Those BASTARDS who left their mother, their queen to die? Ill make sure they all end up in the same shallow hole you are going to end up in.”
>She goes to talk, but you dont give her the chance.
>She tries to scream, but is unable as you suck the love out of her.
>Not one drop is left.
>You cannot help but Hiss and Moan as you drain her.
>And then, as she slumps onto the ground, dazed, you slam your hoofs down.
>Again.
>And again.
>Licking your lips as you look at your hoofwork, you give a bow.
“Farewell, Starlight the Foolish, you will NOT be missed.”
>You laugh, turning with a swish of your tail, and head out.
>You had no time to waste, Destiny awaited.

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>>29845946
and with that im gonna take a lil break.

dear lord no one let the glimmerfags see this.

>>29845958
Now I feel like cross-posting this in all the starlight threads just to see what will happen...

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>>29846542
Wait, no, discord, lets just talk about this.

>>29846559
Okay, I won't,... If you tell me what happened to Celestia, Luna, and the Element-Bearers.

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>>29846565
but I already technically did.

well , as a whole not individually.

>>29846600
Individually, then.

>>29846600
>>29846607
By the way, if they're dead, I'm posting it anyway.

>>29843653
Added to the /bug/ pastebin

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>>29835227
Daily reminder that Bugbutt has no butt

>Inb4 muh battelfoarm

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>>29846607
you people are never satisfied.

Luna and Celestia are taking turns leading the front lines.
Cadence is helping keep supplies and the like organized.
Shining Armor is leading the ground troops.
Discord is being Discord and is not being helpful.
Telling you about the element bearers would be spoilers, you faggot.

now im gonna go get dinner, so you an just sit here and WAIT.

>>29846691
>Telling you about the element bearers would be spoilers
How?

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>>29846695
It would possibly give away stuff i have planned for later.

>>29846715
Can you at least tell me if they're dead or not?

>>29846720
>they're dead
Worse

>>29846724
How so?

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>>29846728
>>29846724
Really guys?

>>29846728
Don't you have anything on your mind you would've considered worse than death?

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>>29846724
>>29846728
*cough cough*
damn anonymous imageboards and easy to fabricate tripcodes.

ANYWAYS, now im leaving for dinner, so any post past this one til i get back wont be me.

Ill post an updated Pastepin to prove it, considering someones actually decided to troll with my name.

im flattered.

>>29846762
Not really...

>>29846767
DAMNIT, Now I'm confused.

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>>29846767
Don't be such a puss-puss. I just felt irresistible urge to fuck around with someone and it also looked like you didn't want to be assaulted with spoiler-esque questions.
Better've thanked me, faggot.

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>>29846767
>*cough cough*
>damn anonymous imageboards and easy to fabricate tripcodes.
>easy to fabricate tripcodes.
But you don't have one.

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>>29846728

>>29846815
Dafuq does that have to do with anything?

>>29846720
>>29846776
they're alive

>>29846787
I did say i was flattered. while i dont like spoiler questions, i like questions, and understand that sometimes people are simply curious about characters the story doesn't focus on.

>>29846801
meant name. trying to go get food so wasn't paying attention to wording.

>>29846815
>>29846822
someone stole muh name, which to be fair this is actually the one thread you should probably expect that.

Updated Pastepin, and ill start posting more story chunks momentarily.

https://pastebin.com/0gG0HdXU

>>29846969
Okay. Good. To be honest, I was kinda fearing the worst.

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>>29846987
>I was kinda fearing the worst
...never said you shouldn't, though.

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>>29846987
>Kill starlight shimmer
>no one bats an eye

>just the possibility of harm to the mane 6
>Someone freaks out.

i mean literally no offense, but i cant stop laughing. its like poetry.

>>29845946
>Anon sat waiting by the Canterlot gate, two Travel packs full and ready to go.
>He stared up at the moon, His thoughts, for once, clear.
“Well....guess its juat us again...” You say to the sky.
>”Well, it was never intended to be an 'us' in the first place, but I suppose you've proven to be acceptable company.”
>You look down, Chrysalis Smiling as she strides over, a skip in her step.
“Well....your certainly happy.” You say, curiosity piqued.
>”And you seem content with the situation for once. We both are in better moods, see?”
>You blink, but then smile, shrugging as you pick up your pack and and her the other one.
“You sure you still want to do this? We really have no idea what were walking into.”
>She laughs, nudging you a bit before looking up at the moon.
>”...Yes. It wont do to have something so dangerous hanging over my head.”
“If you say so.” You pull out the map you found, looking it over, “Looks like...whatever this place is, will get us the closest to where we started off.”
>She takes a moment to look it over. “Ah, Manehattan. Terrible place, but nothing we cant handle.”
>Nodding, you roll the map back up as you head down the mountain.
>No looking back, no room for regrets.

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>>29847003
>>29847013

>>29847013
>>29847003
Stop being confusing.

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>>29847032
Do you?

>>29847029
>You completely forgot you had done all this at night as the sun slowly raises above the horizon, hours of walking behind you.
>Yawning, you peer ahead, the path long and intimidating before you.
“Hey Queen Chrysalis, mind if we take a break?”
>She turns, and nods.
>Happily you slump off your pack, nearly dragging it over to the shade of some nearby trees as you flop down.
>Chrysalis joins you simply watching as you glug down on your canteen.
>Moments pass, as you munch on a loaf of bread, staring up at the sky.
“So...changelings....why does everyone hate them?”
>Chrysalises head suddenly snaps in your direction, caught completely off guard by your sudden question.
>Curiosity peaked, he decide to throw her a bone.
“I just accidentally murdered nearly an entire city of ponies Chrysalis....I....I dont exactly have anyone to betray you too.”
>Hesitation clear across her face, her eyes narrow at yours, clearly suspicious of your sudden interest.
“Tell you what. You tell me about changelings, and ill answer any of your own questions about me.”
>She laughs, rolling her eyes.
>”Why would I ever actually care about you or your world?”
“Harsh, but fair.” You say munching down another bite.
>You expect the conversation to die, but that is when you stare at your bread, and realize something.
“...Huh....ive never seen you eat anything.” you say, inspecting your bread.
>”That's because we don't eat the same food as you lesser creatures.” shes says matter of factly.
>You chuckle, giving her a smug look.
“Well, keep saying shit like that and im just not going to be able to let this go.”
>She grins.
>”Well, I suppose I see no need to disappoint.”
>Your head swerves her direction, this time you showing surprise.

>>29847013
Pls let them be having their limbs cut off and their bodies inserted in harmony-harvesting machine or something of the kind, you know.

>>29847074
No, Glimfag. Leave.

>>29847050
>”We changelings are a hive species, ruled by a Queen, like yours truly. We use our tranformative abilities to infiltrate pony and other civilizations in order to feed. That is of course, the issue I suppose, as we feed on love, to which most are far from willing to give. Thus, we replace, usually temporarily, friends, spouses, family, whatever we need to to get what we need.”
>”Oh, so you're a parasite?”
>She gasps, flabbergasted.
>”A- A PARASITE!? YOU DARE INSULT ME?!”
>You laugh, before the pain from your healing side sends you toppling over.
“Im sorry im sorry, but come on, what else is one supposed to think?”
>She sneers, waving you off.
>”Is a pony a parasite to the land for needing plants? Is a griffin one for taking fish from the water?”
“Well, I mean, in a way...”
>You shut up as you notice her nose flaring, quickly stuffing the rest of your bread in your mouth and shrugging exaggeratedly.
“Right, sorry. Everyones gotta do what they have to to survive either way though.” you say. “I can see why they wouldn't like that, but I dunno, they still seemed to personally hate you.”
>Taking a moment to calm down, she grumbles, hissing up at the sun.
>”I may have tried to take over Equestria once or twice.” she admits.
>You whistle, nodding slowly.
“Well that would do it.”
>After a few moments of more silence, she cocks an eyebrow your way.
>”You seem....ok with all that.”
>you cock one back.
“Why wouldn't I be? Im not Equestrian.”
>She blinks, confusion on her face.
“Look, us humans aren't a united species, we fight all the time, good and bad reasons. I wouldn't feel the need to care if France, after a bad harvest, Invaded Germany for food, so why would I care If Changelings invade Equestria for food?”

>>29847086
>She narrows her eyes a bit.
>”Im not sure if you really mean that.”
“and im not sure ill get anything out of this adventure, but im still here and I still trust you...mostly.”
>You smile smugly, taking a sip from your canteen.
>Chrysalis looks away, making an amusing little 'hmph' sound.
>”Well, I suppose you've given me no reason not to trust you.” she says simply.
>you nod, before getting up and stretching, pulling your travel bag back up and onto your shoulders.
“Then that's that. We save this stupid ass world, then we decide if we need to kill eachother.”
>She chuckles as she gets up herself, giving you a sly smile.
>”Id win any such fight.”
>You nod in agreement.
“All the more reason to avoid it then.”
>With that, you set off down the road again, not one worry weighing upon your shoulders.

>You make good progress, but as the moon goes to replace the sun, you decide to make camp.
>As you get the fire started, Chrysalis mumbles somehing.
“Sorry, what?”
>”The moon and sun are still moving, I guess that means THEY are still alive.”
>You look up, remembering how things supposedly work here.
“So....how does that even work then? How do you fight someone who controls a part of the natural cycle things need to survive.”
>”Oh please, “she says, scoffing, “Their own legends say the unicorns controlled such things before they even knew alicorns existed, those bitches are hardly necessary.”
“Well, sounds like someone still would be...”
>You shake you head as you look back down, and finally get the fire going.
>You just had a hard time accepted something so important was in the hands of a physical creature.
>You had no doubt these alicorns must be powerful, but the fact you were even having to help them out meant they had limits.
>And with limits, meant a possibility of defeat.
>One mistake, and this world was apparently doomed.

>>29847128
>After a nice dinner, you lay your head down to rest.
>As you drift off to sleep, you cant help but for once, feel a bit of hope.

>It had been three years since you dad had died.
>Sitting in your small house alone, you stare blankly down at your bottle, nearly empty.
“..gonna have to go buy more I guess.” You mumble, before getting up and yawning.
>That is before suddenly your entire house starts to shake, massive cracks appearing as it breaks away and dissipates, leaving you standing in a foggy forest.
>Quickly coming to the realization you are dreaming, you also come to the obvius conclusion of how you might know that.
“Err....hello Luna?”
>You start turning, trying to find her, before suddenly you are knocked off your ass, a very angry Blue horse, eyes glowing, standing over you.
>”WHAT HAST THOUS DONE TO UR PONIES YOU WRETCHED CREATURE!?!?”
>Taking a moment to let your eats stop ringing, you sigh,and being a dream, YOUR dream, simply will yourself into standing behind her.
“I....I did what should've been done the minute that stallion betrayed 'your' people.”
>You turn to her, ignoring the seething anger she was trying to intimidate you with.
“Im...im sorry about what ended up happening....I....I had know way of knowing...”
>Her expression slowly softens, though still serious as a stone wall.
>”Thou mistakes cannot be ignored, but we cannot afford to serve thy punishment under these circumstances.”

>>29847207
>You laugh half hardheartedly, waving her off.
“Punishment? You can fuck off with that princess. IF your guards had simply done their job, this all could been avoided.”
>With a single flap of her massive wings, shes in your face, hot air blowing across your face.
>”Do not try out patience, human.”
>You push her snout out of your face, giving her your own stone face.
“I think I should go ahead and let you know, us humans aren't so naturally inclined to do whats good, even if not doing so could lead to our own demise.”
>”Ist thou threatening us?”
“I don't threaten unless threatened first.”
>You stare eachother down for a moment, before she sighs, and pulls away.
>”Thou makes some points, and if it was thine only crime, we would not be so steadfast in our judgment of thee.”
>You raise an eyebrow, not really understanding.
“I dont remember doing anything else.”
>”Thy sided with the Changeling Queen. And thy are free of her spell, so thy has no excuse for such actions.”
>She turns, standing as tall as she can over, looking down as if she was unquestionably correct.
>You simply will yourself to be taller then her.
“Why wouldn't I? Shes given me no reason not to trust her. She simply does what changelings must do.”
>Luna smiles, shaking her head.
>”No, Her people are now proof of that. They were given a better option, and they rightly chose it over her stubborn pride.”
>You blink.
“What...do you mean?”
>”Her people were given a choice between her or a reformed son of hers, who had proven that they need not feed on love if they simply are willing to give as much as they receive. They themselves defeated her, and transformed into something better, acceptable.”

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>>29847243
>Your mind races as you hear what Lunas says, and everything else you had gathered about Chrysalis and her situation.
>Images of your own brother, your mother and family, race through your mind.
>Luna worriedly looks around, the dream suddenly a flurry of changing scenery, as you relive all the moments you were betrayed by your own family.
>as Memories fight for space and existence in your mind, trees, snap, house crash into one another, hell breaks loose.
>And the, its all stops, leaving the scenery a mess worse then Detroit.
>Luna looks at you, worry shining through.
>You sigh, then let the anger take hold.
>”Better? Yeah, of course you would say that. Maybe it is, or not. But you expect me to take their side? Yours?”
>You spit at her feet, as she takes a step back as you approach.
“No, Goddamned that shit no. I dont give a damn what she or her people did, lifes shit and sometimes you gotta do what you gotta do. But im not gonna stand here and let some stuck up princes who probably hardly raises a hoof for her people tell me whats right or wrong. They betrayed her, she hasn't betrayed me. I know what thats like, and if she thinks she deserves to burn their world down, ill fucking light the match myself. “
>Luna looks at you, a mix of horror and disgust crossing her face.
>”Thou art a broken creature, Anon.”
>Regaining her composure, she turns and starts walking away, mists slowly enveloping her.
>”Thy will see Anon, Given a Decision, she will betray you.”
“Then ill die as alone as I lived.” You spit back.

>You wake up in a cold sweat, quickly looking around.
>The moon still high above, the fire dimmed but going, and Chrysalis softly sleeping on nearby.
“Fuck....fucking christ....”
You moan, grabbing your sleeping bag and pulling it back over.
>Hopefully this time you would be allowed to just fucking sleep.

>>29847327
>By the time you are on your way come morning, you Cant help but yawn.
>Thankfully, you had gotten some sleep, but even without Lunas interruptions it seemed your mind couldn't settle down.
>”I see someone didnt sleep well.” Chrysalis says mockingly.
>You grumble, shrugging.
“Im used to it, regrettably.”

>The next few hours go by without much issue.
>Eventually though, you start to see a group of pony here and there.
>Chrysalis was quick enough to put on her Candle Shine disguise, but you hardly avoid looks.
>And as the groups get bigger and bigger, and more frequent, you finally stop as a Guardspony walks up to you.
>”Where the hell do you two think you're going?”
“Err....Manehattan?”
>He blinks, looking at you like your some kinda idiot.
>”Im...no, I cant let you do that.”
>”And why not?” Candle pipes up.
>”...You...you haven't heard?” he points to all the ponies running by, many with wagons of stuff, or individual saddlebags, “Those monsters came south from the Crystal Mountains. Manehattans been overun, most think Fillydelphias next. Orders are to get everyone to Canterlot, hold out there.”
>You and Candle share a look, before you give a weak smile.
“Err....Right, we've been on the road for awhile...We'll just...turn around....”
>The guard nods, and rushes off to some other problem.
>As the guard leaves, you quickly get out the map, Sitting down under some shade with Candle.
“Well, damnit, now where do we go?”
>After a moment of looking, Candle smiles, and points at what appears to be a small town in the middle of a forest.
>”We cut through Hollow Shades, and hope we reach Fillydelphia before those abominations do.”

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>>29847430
aaand, Work beckons once again.

https://pastebin.com/0gG0HdXU


im quite enjoying this, and im glad at least a few people seem to be aswell.

>27,500 words of green

christ what the fuck have i done?

[spoilers] if you need something to read in the meantime, try some other stories. never had them critiqued. Anons revenge was my first attempt at green, so im certainly interested in seeing what people think of it VS this if nothing else.[/spoiler]

>>29845800
>good_end.png

>>29845958
>dear lord no one let the glimmerfags see this.
What are they gonna do, like a shitty character at you?

>Posters know how to take a joke
>Dislike Glimfags
Already better than RGRE. Then again, that doesn't take much effort. I like you, bug thread.

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>>29845240
B-but there's nowhere else to go that feels right...

>>29848007
everybody hate glimmerfags

>>29848959
for some reason, the worst part for me is how their tail just randomly becomes another fucking wing.

its one thing to become retardedly colorful, or gain antlers where antlers are at least supposed to be.

But a third fucking wing as a tail? truly a marvel of character design.

>>29849405
I don't even care that the changelings turned into something different. It's that they turned into something so retarded is what bothers me. Thorax looks like a gay clown threw up on him.
This is the sort of thing I expect to see from an online OC generator.

>>29848959
>>29849445
>king throax (c) 2006 original cahractor do not steal

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>>29848959
>>29849445
>>29849458
>when some random, one off comic does a character better then the actual show.

>>29850056
I'd enjoy it if they gave Chrysalis a backstory like that. Just please DON'T mutate her like the rest of the changelings.

>>29850263
they didnt need to even make them change. or so much.

the 'changeling problem' had literally already been solved the second thorax said "Well, ever since making a friend i haven't been constantly hungry."

Boom done. he prove this to the other changelings, they, like him, look just somewhat less scary, and things get settled.

instead we get logic that even kids wouldn't understand as they somehow turn the act of 'giving love' into a laser beam.

...how did that even work? for one, Thorax was already having the love sucked out of him, so somehow being able to give it faster at least makes sense. i dont think it does that he might be able to "overload" Chrysalis via "giving it too fast" or whatever, but at least the connection was already made.

Then every other changeling, despite the love not being sucked out of them, can suddenly fire off love beams? love beams implied to be their love concentrated into a single beam.

and somehow firing all your love at something that eats love doesn't just feed it.

out of all the villians they honestly dropped the ball HARD with the changelings. if i had to guess they wrote themselves into a corner by trying to make love and friendship these super powered invincible magic forces, but then made a creature that feeds on love and had no idea how to solve the issues that brings up.

>>29850313
You seem to be under the impression that the writers aren't total fucking shit. Real talk: do they know how much everybody hates them? You can't throw a stone on the internet without hitting someone who hates the writers.

>>29850885
well i suppose there are enough episodes i actually like that i assume SOMEONE on the team must know what the fuck they are doing.

but yes, they tend to write up as many flops as they do successes.

also is there ANY place on the internet you can throw a stone without pissing SOMEONE off?

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>>29850885
The sad part though is that I really liked those two episode up until the last 5 minutes of the episode. I think it's makes it all that much more frustrating that they had fairly clever writing up until that point. It's like they had another ending planned and someone higher up stepped in and said "Nope, gotta be rainbowz™." I actually wouldn't be surprised if that were the case honestly.

>>29850991
What if the writers are actually sufficiently skilled, but it's meddling from the higher-ups that kills things?

>>29850991
it happened with both Changeling arcs honestly.

"Wait, your ending DIDN'T have a magical freidnship/love explosion? Re-Write that shit or turn in your ID and get the fuck out of my sight."

>>29851014
That might be believeable if they're going to make toys of the nuchangelings.

But last I heard there are no toys incoming.

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>>29851030
>MFW the change is so bad even hasbro knows its not marketable.

they just wanted the changelings gone i tell ye!

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>Season 7 will have the nu-changelings

>>29851423
>You can see the exact moment his soul leaves his body

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>>29851423
There's still a chance that they'll get changed back...right?

>>29847483
ive finally got some free time for today, though still a bit busy today so story chunks will be slower.

>>29847430
>It was much easier to break from the growing crowd then you expected, though by the time the Hollow Shades Forest looms infront of you, you cant help but feel a bit apprehensive.
>The way the sun simply stopped as it touched the trees, like the light itself was being absorbed.
“...Interesting place.” You mumble.
>”Well, it certainly has a nice charm to it yes.” Candle Shine says as you approach the edge of the forest.
>Just as you enter onto the path leading into its depths however, You flip around, swearing you saw something off in the trees to your left.
>Chrysalis chuckles, motioning for you to keep going.
>”My Anon Mous, you aren't afraid of little woodland creatures now, are you?”
“Its not the little ones you need to worry about.” You say sternly.
>More importantly, you worried trouble might be approaching.
>Paranoia maybe, but you were running out of patience with this worlds shit.

>You make your way deeper and deeper into the dark forest, Candle Shine lighting the way with a soft glow from her horn.
“So....know anything about this 'Shady Hollows' place?” you pipe up, cutting the near silence of the forest.
>She shakes her head, looking around a bit herself as the subtle sounds of animals fill the air.
>”Not much, it was commissioned by Luna after her return, a place for her to stuff away and forget one of her many mistakes.”
>You stop for a moment, unsure of what the hell any of that meant.
“What does that even mean?”
>Candle Shine smiles, giving you a toothy grin as she stares back at you.
>”It means Batponies my dear.”
“Bat...Ponies....you're fucking with me.”
>She laughs, breaking the murky air as her voice echos around.
>”If ONLY. Honestly, that is what is in store. Lunas “blessed Children” the legends say, though I dont put much trust in ponytales, they tend to romanticize things, and the princesses never think to correct them.”
>you gawk a bit at that, as you hop a bit to catch back up to her.

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>>29851914
moar!

>>29851914
>You dont know how long you walked, and could barely tell that night had approached.
>At least, you are pretty sure it had.
>It felt a bit darker, but you really couldn't tell as much as you would like.
>Eventually though, you see a bit of light up front.
>”Well, I think were just about there.” Candle Shine says.
>You nod, but as you slowly approach the town you cant help but feel like you are being watched.
>Alot.
>From basically all directions.
>You look down, making sure your trusty train handle was still in your belt, gripping it tightly, ready for the worst.
>You look forward, Candle taking a moment to look back at you.
>Your eyes meet, and silently, you know you both agree that you need to be prepared for the worst.
>You gulp down your fears and doubts as you both, slowly, enter the silent town.
>You see a pair of glowing eyes dart in and out of sight.
>Two from the left, three from the right.
“...You ready?” you whisper as you and Candle stop, both getting back to back, as more and more eyes dart around the buildings and trees.
>”Always.” She says as you exchange smiles.
>Suddenly, you see a shape, a blur.
>You turn, Weapon tugging from your belt, as the shape comes straight for you.
>But right before impact, it stops.
>You jerk back a bit from the smiling, gleeful cat like eyes shoved in your face.
>”OhmygoodnessLunabeblessed VISITORS!”
>To your horror, you and Candle are suddenly surrounded by Pegasi with bat like wings and ears, and eyes like a night predator, all full with so much excitement and joy, asking question after question and some even going as far as to mess with your hair, one even giving you a hug.
>You and Candle exchange looks of utter horror, neither sure what the fuck to do.

You guys realize they are basically going to have to reform Chrysalis?

Now that they've built up her character, they can't just kill her off Sombra-style. It would be too horrifying for the target audience.

You will live to see the day Chrissy becomes rainbow-moosified

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>>29851939
dont depress me like that bro....

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>>29851939
my gun is loaded

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>>29851939
This is depressing because I know how likely it is.

>>29851939
>they can't just kill her off Sombra-style
You're right, they can't.

But with a little luck they'll just imprison her à la Tirek.

'Cause, you know, she already rejected friendship once.

>>29851927
>”Alright, alright everyone off the guests!” A voice booms out, as as the crowd sadly give you space to exist physically in this point in space, a much older Bat Pony mare appears through an opening in the crowd.
>After inspecting you for a moment, she chuckles.
“You can put that...thing away. We don't mean you no harm. You must forgive them, we dont get visitors here. Ever.”
>You and Candle light share a look, but you both calm down, shoving your weapon back in your belt.
>”Now, lets get you two a room for the night, come come.”
>You're not sure about this, but you certinally dont feel a need to stay and be harrassed so take your chances with the older mare.
“So...whats your name?”
>She smiles back at you as she holds a door open for you to a quite large looking Inn.
>”Mayor Night Meadow, and who might such a interesting creature such as you be named?”
>You smile, unused to compliments, but weary of them too after everything.
“Anon Mous, and this is my friend, Candle Shine.”
>”A pleasure to meet you Mayor.” Candle says with a nod as she follows you inside.
>It was a cozy enough place, though with clear signs of disuse.
>You cant help but look out the window at the suddenly busy town, Bat ponies zipping this way and that.
“Apparently we caused quite a fuss.” You say.
>”Well, like I said, your the first visitors here we have had.”
>You cant help but stare at her.
“Surely someones come before?”
>The mayor sighs, shaking her head sadly.
>”Im afraid not. Most ponies dont even know we exist, an those that do dont seem interested in getting to know us” she shrugs, “But such is our lot in life, we are what we are and wont let nopony diminish our pride!” She says confidently, hoof against her chest.
>You raise an eyebrow, but Candle seems more then pleased by their demeanor.
>”I agree, You shouldn't let nopony decide what is best for you.” she says with a confident nod.

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>>29851927
>A changeling green with zombies, hyper cute bat ponies, and where glimmer is brutally murdered.
This is the best green ever!

>>29852135
You're forgetting Blueblood's murder.

>>29852125
>Not wanting to get in the middle of whatever seemed to be happening, you quickly move things along as you approach your rooms.
“Yes, well, its been a long day, and we have a long road ahead of us tomorrow-”
>”Oh...of course, I shouldn't of expect you were planning to stay long...” The mayor says with a sad smile.
>You blink, mind going static a bit.
>They...did know what was going on in Equestria, Right?
>Or....maybe they didn't, this place did seem...isolated.
“Er....its not that this place isnt lovely, but, with everything going on, we have to get to Fillydelphia as quickly as possible. Before those things get there?”
>”Things?” She says, cocking her head sideways.
>You feel your mouth twitch.
>Lord help you they actually might not know.
“You...guys dont leave the village much, do you?”
>She blushes, shrugging with a meek smile.
>”Were a bit more...nocturnal then most ponies, and prefer darker places, so there aren't many place we would want to go...”
>You're about to try and explain,well, a lot, when she pipes up again.
>”Ah, whatever it is, im sure you can tell us over dinner. Please, go and rest up a bit, we'll send someone for once everything ready!”
>You dont even bother trying to stop her as she hops away, used to not getting a chance to speak your mind by now.
>These ponies sure as hell didn't sit still for long.
>Sharing a shrug with Candle, you enter the room.
>It was cozy enough, two beds in either far corner, a dresser between them, and a bathroom off to the side.
>Looking inside, you nod respectfully.
“Wasn't expecting running water, impressive.”
>”Well, why wouldn't there be?” Candle says as she sets down her saddlebag, yawning a bit.
“With how isolated they are I guess I just expected less.” You say with a shrug, turning a flopping down on the bed nearest to you.
>”Well, if there is one thing ponies always go for, its comfort.” she says.

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>>29852242
>After taking a bit to freshen up, You stare down at your raggedy, torn up shirt, and then down at your surprisingly healed up wound.
“Man, whatever magic you put in that goop did wonders.”
>”Hm?” Candle Pipes up from her bed, not even opening her eyes.
“Well, my wounds already closed pretty well, doesn't hurt too badly either.
>Her eyes flutter open a bit, eyebrow raised.
>”It was just goop sweety, better then raggedy bandages of course, but there was no healing magic involved.”
>You blink, and jumping out of bed rush into the bathroom, inspecting the wound as best you can in the mirror.
>Its hard to see through the rubbery green stuff, but it looks...alright.
>Considering everything, it looks amazing actually.
>And it horrifies the fuck out of you.
>Maybe some sorta innate magic in this place was helping?
>Yeah, that must be it you decide, taking a few deep breaths.
>Just innate, silly magic in an innately silly magical land.
>you slump back out and pick up your rag of a shirt off the flood, sighing.
>You really needed new clothes, your shirt had been cut twice and had not been mostly red when you came here.
>Well, more of a black now you suppose....
“Do ponies even have tailors?” you wonder to yourself.
>You Had seen a few in clothes, but they seemed rare.
>And you didn't know how you were going to pay even if you did find one.
>As you contemplate the severity of your need for clothes, you hear a light knock on the door.
“Er...Come in?”
>The door gingerly opens, a bat pony standing in the doorway, pacing in place a bit, excitement clearly trying to be hidden as she tries to avoid looking at you.
>”Uhm, I-I was sent to...Well, Im here to lead to to the dinner party?” she says with a wide smile.

>>29849405
I'm hating the gradients more than anything else. Gradients are shit for the show's aesthetics, and lead to bad character design.

>>29852333
>You nod, slipping whats left of your shirt back on.
>It was...not exactly something you wanted to wear, but wearing nothing would feel much worse.
>As you gently wake up Candle Shine, you raise an eyebrow as you hear mumbling behind you.
“Im...sorry? I didnt catch that.”
>”O-oh! Well...well I was just wondering how your shirt g-got so, you know...” she says squeamishly.
>You smile softly, looking down at the damned thing.
“We....have been through a lot recently.” You chuckle. “Way too much actually, some would say its like we have bad luck or something.”
>Her eyes light up, and it appears she was about to ask ALOT of questions if the amount of air she was sucking in was to suggest, but thankfully Candle Shines Yawning as she flops onto her feet next to you cuts into the conversation.
>”Yes, well, it seems our luck might have taken a better turn. Lets go take part in it while we can, no?”
>You nod, and motion for the bat pony to lead the way.
>”Oh...of course! This way! Oh, im sure you'll love the dinner we have in store! Most ponies dont know it, but this forest has wonderful treats in it, if you know how to find them, of course!” She says proudly as she skips down the steps to the bottom floor and leads you outside.
“Sounds lovely” You say, giving her a smile.
>You had to admit, this was nice.
>You felt guilty for enjoying it, but its not like you planned to leave tonight anyways, so you hoped there was no harm.
>Looking around as you go outside, you nod, surprised by how alive the town suddenly was.
>Decorations were flung up here and there, torches and other lights making it feel quite homely.
>”This way!” the Batpony says, pointing with a hoof towards where a large table, nearly overflowing with food, had been setup.
>As you eye all the food longingly, suddenly you notice Candle Shine frowning.

>>29852469
“Something up?”
>She nods, very slowly, then motions for you to lean down a bit.
>She quickly whispers in your ear, before walking forward to avoid suspicion.
>”If they are so happy to have guests, then why do I smell so little love coming off of some of them?”
>You do your best to keep your composure, but inside you feel your heart sink.
>That was a valid point to make, given how gleefully they all were acting towards you.
>As you take your seat, a plate is quickly sat infront of each of you, and bat ponies quickly fill the seats.
>Hearing a ringing of silverware on glass, you turn to see the Mayor getting everyone's attention.
>”A toast, to our new friends! May this be a night we all remember gleefully for years to come!”
>You raise your own glass halfheartedly along with all the others, before everyone starts pulling food onto their plate and digging in, to which you join along with at your own pace.
>You hoped Candle Shine was just being as paranoid as you, but you supposed if Canterlot could be influenced by this threat, maybe this place could somehow be too.
>You sigh.
>Best to simply wait, see what happens.
>Jumping to conclusions would get you nowhere.

>The night passes quickly, You and Candle Filling the air with Tales of your adventures.
>You....skip a few parts, to avoid having to explain away the fact Canterlot was a corpse City now...
>Still, it was a pretty good night, all things considered, and you couldn't notice any ulterior motives from any of them, nor, despite your best efforts, could you catch any glaring eyes with malicious intent anywhere.
>Even Candle Shine seemed to be enjoying the attention, though considering what she was you wondered if that was simply her way of eating.
>As things start to settle down however, sadly, finally, something catches your attention.

>>29852597
>You spot the bat pony from before whispering to another, quickly splitting up the minute they see look their direction.
>You lean over to Candle, quickly whispering to her.
“Be Watchful, something might be up.”
>She simply nods, otherwise ignoring you.
>You try your best to enjoy the rest of the night, but finally as the party seems to come to an end you notice more movement off to the side.
>Before you can get up or see whats going on, your attention is drawn in the other direction as the mayor suddenly speaks to you.
>”Well! Anon, Candle Shine, It really has been a lovely night! We are so glad you decided to join us, and my do you live interesting lives!”
>You smile and nod to her, standing with Candle as you rub at the back of your head.
“Well, it was lovely for us too, but we really need to get some rest. Like I said, got a long journey ahead of us.”
>she nods sadly, but smiles.
>”Of course, but if you could just wait one more moment?”
>Before you can answer, you hear something land behind you.
>Both of you turn, unsure of what to expect but prepared for the worst.
>If they wanted to fight, you would give it to em good.

>you blink, two glee filled faces staring back at you, and two...presents, one shoved forward towards each of you.
>”We-we understand you cant stay long, but we wanted to get you something, to remember our little village by!” One says shyly.
>You, slowly, reach out and take the present, unsure of how to feel.
>”Well...open it!” she says, hopping up and down with excitement.
>You nod slowly, and carefully open the package.
>You look down in shock as the wrapping paper falls away and you unfold your gift.
>A Shirt, a bit big for you, but nevertheless of seemingly good quality.
>”I- I saw you looking at the one you're wearing sadly, so I figured, your race must wear clothes a lot, so I asked a friend to make you a new one...I-Its not too big, is it?”

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>>29852719
>You stare between it and her a few times, trying to get your brain to fucking work.
>You give her a smile.
“Its perfect, thanks....you didn't need to do this though.”
>Especially because you were just about to beat some of their heads in, you think.
>You share a look with Candle Shine, whos holding up a-
>Holy fucking christ was that an emerald necklace?!
>”We-well, I know we didn't need to, but we wanted your first time here to be something great!”
>You turn back to them, nodding.
“Well...it was. Thanks.”

>You sit in your room, staring down at your new shirt.
>You were about ninety percent sure there was actual silk in this thing.
>Candle Shine was inspecting her necklace casually herself.
“...I almost brained them.” You say plainly.
>She nods.
>”Yes well, we thought they might try and kill us.” She shrugs, putting on the necklace. “But I suppose its a good thing we did not. Lovely gifts, They certainly have some fine hoofs to make such gifts.”
>She yawns, and after blowing out the light, lays her head down.
>”Dont let it cost you your beauty sleep Anon, one can hardly blame us for being careful.”
>You simply nod, and with a sigh, lay down yourself.
>You did, afterall, have a long journey ahead of you.

>You Look down, another bottle of empty whiskey sitting in your hands.
>Sighing, you wonder why you sit here every day, doing jack shit.
>Suddenly, the TV catches your attention, Something about Mountain eagles or some shit.
>But it reminds you of years ago, when you and your dad would go hiking together, those few times he had time to when you were young.
“...Fuck it.” you think, and quickly get up and packing.
>You knew a few good mountain trails outside of town, and you were damned if you would keep wasting away in misery in your apartment.

>You mumble, and sit up slowly in bed, your dream cut short as a light knock comes at your door.
“Uhh....come in....”

>>29852896
>Slowly, the same bat pony from the day before enters.
>”Uh, B-Breakfast is downstairs when your ready.”
“Oh, thanks.” you say, yawning.
>She nods happily, and starts to leave, but you quickly catch her attention.
“Hey, I didn't catch your name yesterday...”
>”O-oh! Its.... Wolfsbane....Its not the prettiest, I know...”
>You shrug.
“sounds perfectly fine to me.”
>O....oh, umm, thank you...” she says, blushing before retreating out the door.
>You were glad you hadn't bashed her head in for sure.
“You coming?” You say over to the other bed.
>”Wake me again and you will learn what regret truly is.”
>With that answer, you quickly decide to give her some space.

>downstairs was, thankfully, pretty sparsely inhabited, only a few bat ponies sitting and eating at this table or that.
>Quickly spotting what appears to be a buffet bar, you grab a plate and find a place to sit, giving a nod here or there as you meet some ponies eyes.
>You sit eating in silence, simply enjoying the day, but feeling....off.
>You grumble, wondering why you suddenly feel so....weird.
>And the, with a smile, you feel it click.
>This was the first time, the First Ponies you had met, that actually made you feel like you had a reason to try and save this place.
>And then your heart sinks, remembering that no pony cared about this place.
>But maybe, just maybe, you could be the first.

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>>29853040
And with that, im off to find myself some dinner.

Not sure ill be able to find time to post more tonight, but i hope you enjoyed this somewhat lighter hearted section.

i cant say itll last.

https://pastebin.com/0gG0HdXU

Cheers /bug/! and enjoy the night.

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/bug/ is immortal.

thus /bug/ is not slow, simply patient.

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Will you fug the bug?

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>>29853714
will be there eggs?

>>29853714
yes but it will probably result in my death.

that and its canon that a changelings desire for love in insatiable so that would lead to some major problems.

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>>29854789
>a changelings desire for love in insatiable so that would lead to some major problems.
You mean some bomb-ass sex!

>P 10
fuck

>>29855177
up until you die of exhaustion maybe.

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so what is /bug/s thoughts on there being other hives?

>>29853073
hey some things came up. ill try to get some stuff posted but no promises.

if not i should be free tomorrow.

>>29856476
I couldn't think of a better way to go

>>29857096
Super ded in terms of canon, but still a fun fanon idea.

>>29857096
I refuse to believe there's only one community of a species. With their hypothetically high breeding rate one hive is bound to split. I personally enjoy the idea that there are "princesses" who found their own hives and thus become queens.
>>29858049
Which canon? The comics? The show? Changelings are changelings, they're bound to be good liars or stealthy.

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>>29858120
i do too, though my thoughts are they probably are far apart.

think about how big Chrysalises hive was shown to be, as well as how she acted.

no way theres room in Equestria for another one, even if it was small.

>>29857096
I never much liked the idea before, but now that Chrysalis' hive has been destroyed I'm warming to it.

Something like Oreo and the crystal changelings should be canon.

>>29858944
bad show writing will do that to you.

i dont know the tale you refer to, summary of it?

Gonna bump this, with.

To anyone that wondered how it's shaping up, Chrysalis is going to face Vinyl Saturday in the Waifu Wars Quarterfinal. Winner faces Fluttershy or Luna.

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>>29859679
https://pastebin.com/iA6fbJ4n
Anon finds an injured changeling princess, nurses her back to health, and gets involved in a massive changeling/pony intrigue/war.
One of the best /bug/ stories IMO

>>29861573
sounds neat, ill have to give it a go.

[distant buzzing]

"So, Cuddle Glory?"
>Your blue pegasus marefriend jumps at the sound of your voice and hastily shoves the "Cooking for Mammals" book behind herself
>"Y-Yeah, Anon? What's-"
>She whips her head back and gives the closed basement door a quick check.
>"-What's up?"
"Oh, you know; not much. I just wanted to know why you've installed a bunch of locks on my basement door."
>Cuddle Glory's wings twitch and she starts to sweat.
>Some kind of black substance briefly appears behind each of the trails of sweat, but they're quick to turn back to blue fur.
>It almost reminds you of those toy cars you had when you were a kid; the ones that changed colour when they got wet but went back to normal when they dried off.
"Because, you know... I kinda want to get in there."
>You kneel down in front of her, looking thoroughly unimpressed.
"Because this is my house."
>You get onto your hands and knees and lean in extra-close to Cuddle Glory.
"And you aren't paying rent, despite what you promised."
>Cuddle Glory's eyes nervously dart back and forth as she sputters out response after aborted response.
>"W-Well, I... You see, I'm just... It's not what it looks... I-I just need a few more..."
>The whites of her eyes start to turn a milky blue, and the pupils & irises start to become less emphasized.
>"It... It, uh... It's a big p-present."
>You quirk an eyebrow.
"Mm-hmm."
>"F-For you."
"Is it, now?"
>You stand up and (after popping the soreness out of your back) take a few big, deliberate steps towards the basement door, not at all missing how a few stands of bright-green goop are leaking out from under the door.
>Cuddle Glory stands up and anxiously follows after you, completely ignoring (or forgetting about) her tell-tale book, which is still on the floor sitting cover-up.
>"A-Anon! J-Just wait!"

>>29863196
>You slowly reach out a hand towards the doorknob.
"So if I were to open the door..."
>Cuddle Glory does an unhappy little horse-dance in place, stomping her hooves and just generally looking distressed.
"...then I would find nothing strange at all?"
>You grab the doorknob and slowly twist.
>Cuddle Glory (who had been scrunching her snootle up right up until this point) lets out a high-pitched whine and then darts towards you.
>"N-No! It's not ready yet!"
>The not-horn on her forehead glows a sickly green and your hand is wrenched away from the door.
>Unfortunately for her, you had already twisted the doorknob all the way, so when your hand was pulled away, the door was opened as well.
>You're actually surprised that you were able to open the door; you weren't kidding about there being tonnes of new locks on it.
>A faint green light pulses from deep in your basement, bouncing off the slime-covered walls.
>A bunch of changelings turn their heads to face the door at the sound of it opening, and one-by-one they squeak and/or flatten their ears at the sight of you.
"...It appears as though I have a changeling hive in my basement.
>You look back at Cuddle Glory, who only smiles at you sheepishly.
>"I-I can explain, love."

>>29835227
>Chrysalis raped by Parasprites
Damn it, I saved the link like a week ago and didn't get a chance to read it, now the paste is kill.

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>>29854789
>so that would lead to some major problems
Eh, it could be bad or fine.

In the comics, yeah, getting sucked dry of love is seriously bad for you. Like, that shit will either make you look like a cancer patient or kill you.

But in the show, we've seen no serious effects of having your love drained. Shining Armor was fine, albeit weakened, after Chrysalis had been leeching off him for a while.

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>>29858037
>>29863911

Dudes, i dont think you understand the severity of the situation.

You would be lying there, as Chrysalis towers over you, 3 foot tongue touching you in ways you never wanted to figure out were possible.

Then, like a tornado through a trailer park, shes on you, treating you like a ragdoll.

you will literally be drained, both of physical and emotional love, as you are treated like a cowboy on a rodeo bull, only the bulls on top.

you will dehydrate, beg for a break, and she will just laugh, as magic is forced into your body, pushing you past all the limits humans have.

and then, as you slowly fade, having endured more then a human ever thought possible, your mind will wander to its last thoughts before fading away....

"could i really have saved 15% or more on my car insurance by switching to Geico?"

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>>29864399
>you are treated like a cowboy on a rodeo bull, only the bulls on top
>she will just laugh, as magic is forced into your body, pushing you past all the limits humans have
Not gonna lie, that sounds really hot.

>>29853073
ill be home all day, no work tonight either, so ill be posting story chunks at intervals, though cant say how fast they will be posted.

>MFW when the captcha is literally every single tile you can choose.

>>29853040
>As you say goodbye to the Bat ponies and head on your way, you feel a newfound sense of determination for your....quest? Mission?
>You weren't sure what to call it.
>And as the sun finally shines its light down from above as you exit the Forest and back onto your path, you whistle, as rolling hills of farmland lay before you.
“Well, I almost feel bad taking so much food with me.” you say as you step among the tomatoes and carrots lines.
>Why anon, surely you wouldn't steal from some ponies harvest? That would be sooo wrong!” Candle says over dramatically.
“Hell yes I would, if I had no other choice.” you say with a confident nod.
>You both share a hearty laugh.
>Hours more pass, before you find a good spot to take a lunch break.
>As you sit down to enjoy some food however, Both you and candle notice some shapes up in the sky, heading in your direction.
> You at first try and ignore it, despite expecting that it was going to be unpleasant, biting into one of the fruits you were given, and Candle takes a seat next to you.
>”So, what do you think it is? Passerby's or guards sent to find us perhaps?”
>You shrug, taking another bite.
“So long as its not trouble, it can be whatever it wants to be. Though...they look a bit...big, to be Pegasi....”
>As the shapes get above you however they slowly start circling above.
>Then, like rocks, they drop, kicking up dust all round you as the six shapes land.
>It takes only a moment, but you and the now exposed Chrysalis are up on your feet, back to back, ready to fight.
>You fight past the sudden fear and shock, as you had saw what had landed around you.
>Four Zombiefied griffins, and Two Similarly sized Twin headed Birds, also gearing to be undead.
>you are caught even more off guard by what happens next.
>”We are not here to fight, we came at our Master's orders, with an offer for HER.” Says the biggest Zombgriff, pointing to Chrysalis.

>>29863196
>>"It... It, uh... It's a big p-present."
>>You quirk an eyebrow.
>"Mm-hmm."
>>"F-For you."

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>>29864738
>Being Chrysalis, you dont like it when somepony, or zombified griffin, points at you without permission.
“And what, dare I even ask, could you possible offer ME?” You say, raising your frame up to look as down on them as you could.
>”We offer you Equestria and the Crystal Empire. All of it, yours alone.”
>You blink, completely taken aback.
>Anon stares back at you ,worry across his face.
>”Dont tr-” Anon starts, before suddenly being cut off by an ear curdling screech.
>”Quite human, you were not spoken to, one should learn that means one is to keep the-”
>”-Mouths shut, Yeah im not going to do that.” Anon smiles at the Griffins, its feathers quite literally ruffled.
>You simply look around you, surrounded on all sides by these horrid things.
“...And how do you propose your pitiful master could even accomplish such a thing.”
>The griffin smiles, spreading his arms out wide.
>”All the alicorns are all preoccupied, and will not be able to stop, or survive, the fall of the Crystal Empire. They can be destroyed, or if you prefer, delivered to you personally. Canterlot has already fallen, and with a bit of help from us, you can rule it. Choose a shape. Celestia? Luna? Or would your prefer your own? We can help make any of the QUEEN of this land. All we ask for, is one simple thing.”
>You raise an eyebrow.
“And what would you DARE demand of ME?”
>”Your Obedience to our masters commands. He will not call often, but he expects that when he does, you will give what is asked.”

You guys accept new stories from washed up Writefags?

>>29865229
why wouldn't we?

thats basically what i am.

>>29865254
Okay. is Reversealis okay here?

>>29865291
What's that?

>>29865309
>>29865291
you mean like.....a good Chrysalis? is that the idea of "she once wasn't a changeling" type of story or something similar?

im personally ok with it, i mean id need to know more about the story of course to know if id personally like it but im not against the story element itself.

>>29865291
yes

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>>29865309
>>29865342
He means mirror Chrysalis from the comics.

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>>29865195
>You, slowly, chuckle, then laugh, laughter that slowly grows.
>Until suddenly, you cut it off, hiss as you magically slam the leader into a tree.
“ME?! QUEEN CHRYSALIS?! MOTHER OF THE GREATEST RACE TO EVER INHABIT THIS SORRY WORLD, MASTER OF FEAR, THE GREATEST QUEEN OF THE GRANDEST HIVE?!”
>The griffin tries to struggle, but as your vision goes green with arcane power, you tear him limb from limb as you press hi against the tree til it snaps.
“I BOW TO NO ONE, OBEY NO ONES COMMANDS. I AM QUEEN, DESTINED TO RULE OVER ALL!” You turn to the others, readying to pounce, hissing with all the hatred you had ever felt “and I know no master.”
>everything seems to pause for a moment, until anon whistles.
>“Hot fucking damn, that was fucking terrifying, bravo Queen Chrysalis.”
“Dont ruin the moment for me.”
>”He shrugs, before another griffin speaks.
>”You have made your LAST mistake.”
>They charge forwards, and you and Anon quickly get ready, horn glowing and his...Train Handle raised.
>With a wave of your Horn ,you send three flying back, before turning and kicking one of the Birds away.
>Anon manages to Parry away two attacks from the griffins, before landing a solid blow on one.
>It shrugs it off quite quickly, to be expected from something you dont even know if it can still feel pain.
>Anon, to his credit, quickly give its another hit, and another, but the griffin just takes them, even starts chuckling a bit.
>You quickly are drawn back to your own fight as one of the bird flies high, and two griffins pounce.
>You blast one away, before blocking the other with your horn, getting locked down.
>Surprisingly, the griffins knocked back as Anon turns around, giving him a quick smack before turning back and blocking a double clawed strike from his own side.
>You return the favor, blasting away the second griffin after him as it tries to pounce while hes off balance.

>>29865355
oh, yeah im ok with that sure.

>>29865355
>Good!Chrysalis will never embrace you every night in bed
>She will never tell you how much she loves you
>She will never wake you up early in the morning to help feed the changelings love (via cuddling)

>>29865416
Wouldn't mirror changelings feed everyone else love?

>>29865425
I think that the reversal aspect is that Chrysalis (and I guess the changelings by extension) are good-natured, not that their abilities are reversed. I could be wrong, though; I don't read the comics.

>>29865355
>>29865416
This makes me wonder, would Reversalis still feed on love? Or give it away?

>>29865425
or would they feed on hate, making wherever they go better by sucking it out of ponies as they go along, leaving everyone happier behind them?