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I like ponies and I like horror. Let's continue mixing the two.
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She took care of her chores quickly, without singing, humming, talking, or making any noise at all, and when she was done and had made sure all the animals were properly fed, she came back inside, turned her head away from Angel to avoid his gaze, and hurried back upstairs into her room. The spiders were all waiting for her, and there were many more webs covering all the furniture, the ceiling, and between her bedposts. She navigated her way among them and sat down at the edge of her bed. One of the spiders waved at her and she shook her head in response.
“Nothing happened. I made him breakfast, did my chores, and came back up here immediately afterward. He didn’t touch me or say anything. Thank you for your concern, though.” She said.
Another one waggled at her.
“Oh, that would be nice, yes. I should really get to a hospital, but they would ask a lot of awkward questions, and I don’t know how I would respond. I don’t…” Fluttershy said, but stopped.
How much more of this should she take? She looked down at the bloodstained bedding she still had yet to change. She felt the weight of it all come crashing down on her again. She had no more chores to do. Nopony was expecting anything of her, and she had free time. She didn’t want to go downstairs and see Angel glaring at her again. She would have to pass him to go anywhere. She curled up on the bed trying to make herself as small as possible. It was all so much to deal with. She couldn’t leave, but she couldn’t stay. He needed her to take care of him, but he would only hurt her again. She felt the spiders crawl on her, and a couple in her mane started covering her wounds with silk. She fell asleep quickly, not wanting to think about anything at all.
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>>29698373
Hours later, when she finally woke up, it was dark outside. She sat up quickly, spilling spiders everywhere. She gazed around the room with her one good eye, watching the tiny motion of hundreds of eight-legged forms crawling up the walls. She felt at her head, at the tiny patches of silk covering her scratches and scabs, and a hoof went to her left eye, feeling another patch covering it. It still burned, but at least it was covered.
“Oh, thank you so much. I really appreciate your help, all of you.” She said.
She heard a thump and froze. Her head whipped to the stairs, and she saw Angel sitting at the top of the steps, looking around the room. His eyes scanned the walls and ceiling with obvious disgust. Fluttershy pulled the blood-crusted blankets up to her chin, watching him with palpable fear. Angel pointed to himself, to her, then downstairs, and hopped down the steps. Fluttershy let out a sigh of relief.
“I didn’t know if he would try to squash all of you or not, but it seems like he only wants supper.” She said. Hundreds of legs waggled at her, but she shook her head. “He needs me to take care of him. It’s just supper, don’t worry so much. I’ll be back up soon. Thank you all for your concern.”
She slipped out of bed, spiders scuttling about avoiding her hooves on the floor, and she walked down the steps. She went straight into the kitchen without looking at Angel, cooked him a meal of boiled carrots and tomato soup. Her own stomach grumbled as she was making it, and she realized she hadn’t eaten anything all day. Angel hopped up onto the counter near her to eat and she flinched away, looking at the floor. She gave him a wide berth, pulled an apple out of the fridge and hurried back upstairs.
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>>29698380
Once she got all the way back up the stairs, the spiders once again all waved at her at once. She smiled at the welcome and slowly ate her apple. They talked about anything and everything spiders cared about. Bugs, webs, predators, and hundreds upon hundreds of babies. The spiders were polite enough to avoid talking about Angel and Fluttershy’s injuries. They kept her company well into the night, talking, laughing, and being companionable. Her injured eye itched, but it was a pain that was far back in her mind while she talked. Eventually though, she succumbed once more to sleep, and laid down on the still-filthy blankets. Her spares were downstairs, and she didn’t want to disturb Angel while he was sleeping.
The next day was much the same. Angel stayed out of her room, only coming to the top step to bother her about food, at which point she would go downstairs, feed him, grab something small for herself, do her chores, then quickly disappear back up to her room, sleeping most of the day. She never replaced the blankets, nor did she bathe, or eat enough, and several days passed. Fluttershy was starting to look gaunt, filthy, and her eye itched. She was able to remove the bandages on her head, but her eye would definitely need more time. She slept far too much, but she didn’t want to see Angel, or have him look at her any more than necessary. She didn’t know what she was going to do when her weekly tea with Rarity and Twilight came around. The spiders had made their own, with webs covering every possible surface, leaving Fluttershy a path to go to the bathroom and to go downstairs when she needed to. They talked with her and tried to keep her spirits up, but she had stopped caring, and they were too small to do force her to do anything.
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>>29698385
As the sun peeked over the horizon and spilled into the web-filled room, Angel hopped up the steps. He peeked over the top step and looked around, scowling at the webs covering everything. Fluttershy had let herself go over the past few days. You kill one spider and suddenly she overcompensates and lets everything in her room get covered in spiders. It’s not like it was an actual friend. It was a spider. Gross, crawly, and they make a mess. Like this. Webs everywhere. It was nasty. She’d also stopped bathing and her room smelled like blood. She really needed to take better care of herself. Maybe tomorrow he’d tell her she smelled, then she’d actually wash.
Angel looked around at the floor and noticed the hundreds of creepy spiders were missing. He looked up at the ceiling and saw that the webs up there were empty too. Was it true, had she actually told them to leave like she promised but never did? Angel’s ears perked up as he scanned more of the room, finding not a single spider. He hopped up the last step, but stopped short. Maybe they were hiding. He slowly made his way closer to the bed, peeking under the bed from a distance, trying to catch a glimpse of any hairy legs. If he were a creepy nasty spider, that’s where he would hide. Finding nothing, Angel chanced sticking his head under, but still saw absolutely no spiders.
Angel looked up at the blankets on the bed. They were dirty, covered in blood splatter from that injury she’d caused him to make on her, and little bits of spider silk were everywhere. Gross. Grimacing, Angel grabbed hold of it and tugged, trying to get Fluttershy’s attention. She didn’t respond so he tugged harder, still getting no reaction.
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He sighed and leaped up onto the bed. She’d gotten so fucking lazy since that eye injury. It’s not like it was her hooves that were ruined. She could still cook, and clean, and go shopping, so this was completely unreasonable of her. He crawled up the blankets, keeping an eye out for disgusting spiders. He got some silk stuck on his paw and he shook it loose, sticking his tongue out in disgust. Absolutely disgusting that she would let these things live in the house. He supposed she’d lied to him about how she wouldn’t let any spiders inside. It’s no wonder he’d had to get mad at her about it if she was going to be a filthy liar.
He made his way up to near her head, and stamped the bed, trying to wake her up. She didn’t respond, so he stamped harder. Still nothing. There was no glass of water this time, so he couldn’t toss that. He stamped rapidly, but she didn’t even so much as stir. Frustrated, he jumped on top of her chest and up to her face. She wasn’t dead because she was still breathing, so she needed to make him some goddamn breakfast. He stamped on her chest, making her cough slightly, but she still didn’t wake up. He climbed up onto her face, and made a face at that disgusting spider silk eyepatch. How she could let something so nasty on her face he didn’t know. He climbed up to her nose and pinched it shut. Surely she’d wake up if she couldn’t breathe. Her mouth opened and she started breathing through there instead, but he used his hind legs to keep her lips shut. Angel was so focused on suffocating Fluttershy awake, he didn’t notice her eyepatch swing open.
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>>29698394
Before Angel could react, a huge spider, about half the size of Angel himself, swung open her eyepatch and dashed out of her now empty eye socket at him. Angel had barely a second to react, but his paws were busy, and the spider was on him before he could even make a sound. Angel felt fangs sink into him as he kicked and punched back at the beast holding him. He felt a satisfying rip as he pulled one of its legs off, but his strength was swiftly fading. He felt a coldness seeping into him from where the spider had bit him, and slowly his paws stopped swinging with as much force. He swatted at it with the leg he’d ripped off, but Angel ultimately succumbed to the venom. His last thought was how right he’d been about deceitful, nasty, disgusting spiders.
Silently, on skittering legs spiders began pouring back in the windows. They crowded around Fluttershy where she slept heavily on the bed. Some of them checked on her to make sure the venom they’d injected her with hadn’t killed her. Once they were sure she was okay, they all turned to Angel and the trap door spider who had killed him. They bandaged the injured spider up with silk, and carried his leg over to where Louie still lay on the bedside table, dessicated and forgotten. Once the living were cared for, the swarm of spiders descended on Angel. Hundreds of fangs bit, ripped, and tore at the deceased rabbit. Blood was drained, fur was torn, and soon there was nothing left but bones of the much-maligned bunny. These, they wrapped up in silk, and as a group carried out the window, and off into the distance, never to be seen again. Spiders returned to their places in Fluttershy’s room, watching over her until she awoke.
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>>29698397
Fluttershy woke up feeling groggy and weak, and it took some effort for her to get her limbs to respond to her commands. When she finally sat up, she blearily looked about the room, her eyes going to the top of the stairs, expecting to see Angel impatiently waiting for her. When she saw nothing, she sighed and fell back down into bed, closing her eyes again. She slept for several more hours. She awoke again, feeling worse than ever. Her head was pounding, her mouth was dry, and her stomach growled angrily at her. Weakly, she dragged herself into the bathroom where she retched into the toilet, nothing coming up except some bile, burning her mouth and throat. She turned on the sink, rinsing out her mouth, and greedily sucked down some water. It helped, but she was still starving. Literally starving, she thought faintly. She stepped out of the bathroom and looked to the top of the stairs. There was still no Angel. She walked over and slowly descended, peeking down until she could see the couch where he usually sat. There was nopony there.
Feeling a bit more brave, she stepped out into the living room, gazing around. It was a mess. Angel had left scraps of food and dishes everywhere. The cats needed their litterbox changed, and the birds their bedding. Her stomach growled, reminding her what she needed to do first. She made Angel’s breakfast first, placing it down on the floor as she looked for him.
“Angel Bunny? Your food is ready!” She called.
She got no response.
She left his food there, a little confused, but emboldened by his absence. She made herself a proper meal. Hashbrowns, eggs, fruit, and juice. Out of habit, she took it upstairs to eat, sitting on the edge of her bed.
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The spiders were awfully quiet while she ate, only a couple even waved at her asking her how she felt.
“Oh, I’m fine, thank you. It has been a while since I last treated myself to a nice breakfast.” She said.
They went silent after that, but Fluttershy thought nothing of it. Once she was done, she looked at her blankets and noticed they were still the same ones from last week; filthy, and covered with blood and silk. They needed cleaned!
Fluttershy stood up, took her dishes back downstairs, and finished her chores, making sure the animals were all fed. She looked around at how neglected everything was, and decided she would start with taking care of the animals, since they depended on her. She started with the chicken pen, giving them fresh bedding. She cleaned out the litterboxes and cages, checking the animals for any illnesses or sores from her regretful neglect. Once they were taken care of, she came back inside and cleaned the living room. She picked up all the dishes and food scraps, swept the floor and beat the rugs after hanging them outside to air out. When she got to her bedroom she tossed out her old bedding, replacing them with clean and fresh sheets and blankets. There was sadly no saving them after letting the blood set for so long. Finally, after a long day of cleaning, working, and refreshing everything, she felt satisfied and accomplished. Finally, she went in the bathroom and looked at herself.
She was a lot skinnier than before. Her cheekbones were sunken and she had bags under her good eye. Her bad eye was still discolored, but it looked like it was healing well. At least on the outside. She started tugging on the patch, peeling it off in order to have a look underneath. The spiders in her bedroom waved frantically, but she didn’t notice. It finally came off and she gasped in surprise.
“Oh, my!”
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Twilight and Rarity made their way up to Fluttershy’s front door and knocked. Fluttershy had missed their weekly tea. They thought she might just be sick, so they’d brought her some homemade soup and tea in case she was feeling good enough to have it at her cottage.
“Just a moment!” Fluttershy called from inside.
There was a rustling and the tapping of hooves getting closer and Fluttershy opened the door cheerfully. She was looking thinner than usual, but her face was vibrant and smiling, her hair was shimmering and clean, and her fur was bright and lively. The only odd thing was that her left eye was slightly bruised and closed.
“Hello Fluttershy. You missed tea yesterday so we thought you might be sick and came to check on you. We brought soup and tea if you’re feeling okay to have it today.” Twilight said.
“Oh, thank you Twilight. Please, come in, I’m feeling fine.” Fluttershy said.
The two mares stepped inside and Fluttershy pulled some chairs out for them next to the coffee table.
“Make yourselves comfortable you two. We can try that tea I forgot last week!” Fluttershy called from the kitchen as she prepared the kettle.
“Thank you dear. But whatever happened to your eye?” Rarity asked in concern.
“Oh, just a small accident with one of the animals. It’s nothing to worry about.” Fluttershy answered. She hummed to herself as she pulled out the tea leaves and the infuser. She finished boiling the water and brought it out to the table, pouring each of them a cup. They all chatted quietly for a while, Twilight nor Rarity bringing up her eye again.
“By the way Fluttershy, where’s Angel? He’s usually here demanding biscuits or cake?” Twilight asked.
Fluttershy was silent, but smiled wide. Twilight noticed spider webs on the stairwell leading up to Fluttershy’s room and was about to ask about it, when a single long and black hairy leg poked out from under Fluttershy’s eyelid, creeping down her cheek.

THE END.
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>>29698423
The end. Happy ending?

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>>29698440
For once I rooted for the spiders, and I'm arachnophobic.
Speaking of which, your story's making me want to revisit one of my greens that I barely started. I'll see if I can write some more.
Premise: Instead of ponies, Anon only sees pic related.
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>>29698685
>Anon has to deal with horrific spiders that act kawaii uguu~
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>>29698685
Anon. Go make some friends Anon. Eight-legged friends.

>Pinkie as a jumping spider.
How adorable. I bet she'd even wear drops of water on her head.
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>>29698785
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>>29698440
WTF I love spiders now!
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>>29698785
Jumping spiders are the exception to my fear, due to the fact that SOME of them are actually cute, especially with the water droplets.

The rest have faces only a demonic mother can love. I have no idea why most people are not scared shitless when a close-up of a spider's face is presented.
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>>29698440
How about the Nightmare on Luna St.? With Luna going psycho and becoming a Freddy Crooger type?
Or did you think of a way to start up the villagers cult?
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>>29700452
I will work on both, then, and we'll see which one comes easiest.

>>29700053 Jumping spiders are super cute, but come on, I find it adorable when the Sydney Funnel Web rears up before he's gonna fuck shit up.
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>>29700053
Don't forget it's closely related cousin, the peacock spider
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>Time for some nightmares.

Golden Harvest trotted happily through the garden, pleased with how well the crops were growing. She had put a lot of effort into making sure there was more than enough for winter, so that she could share with her friends and family if it became necessary. It was her own personal little plot so that she didn’t have to pay the Apple’s exorbitant prices all the time. There were some vegetables she just didn’t have the time nor resources to grow because they needed more care than usual, but this time, it had all worked out. Giant carrots. Massive lettuce. Colossal cabbage. It was everything she’d ever dreamed of it being. She should be able to save up enough bits this winter that she might be able to buy those fancy gardening tools she’d been eyeing. If only her pumpkins would get bigger before autumn was over. The running of the leaves had already happened and her pumpkins still hadn’t grown beyond the tiny green bulbs. She looked at the weak little squash sadly and poked one with her hoof.
Suddenly it shook, bulged slightly, and grew a few inches. Golden harvest jumped back, startled, but after it looked like it was done moving, she approached it again. She looked it over, but it looked like a regular pumpkin. She gave it a sniff, checked the vines and the roots, and couldn’t find anything out of place that might have caused the sudden burst in growth. Why did it grow, then? She leaned closer and gave it a lick. It tasted normal. Nothing weird on it. She spat just in case it was tasteless, but as soon as she did, it twitched again, bulged, then grew another few inches.
“What in the world?” Golden Harvest said in alarm.
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>>29702020
It was growing so spontaneously! She looked around at the rest of the garden, and suddenly everything started growing! Carrot tops burst out of the soil, tossing dirt everywhere. Cabbage leaves spread wide, blocking the sun above her. The pumpkin turned a rich orange and grew larger and larger, reaching her own size, and continuing to swell. It got twice as big as her. Three times as big. Four times! Finally, once she had been dwarfed by her produce, the vegetables stopped growing. Golden Harvest slowly pulled her hoof away from protecting her head, and looked around. Her garden was filled with vegetables that would feed Ponyville for months! If these were properly chopped up and preserved, they’d last for years! A single happy tear rolled down her cheek and she reached out a shaking hoof to the pumpkin.
“Okay, don’t grow anymore please, but this is so amazing! I won’t have to buy anything from the Apples all winter!” Golden Harvest said. “I’m going to need help canning all of this, but if I share with everypony, I can get enough help. I’ll need to ask the flower sisters, for sure. Caramel might be willing to help out. Oh! I might even be able to get jars from Filthy Rich in exchange for some of the food! I could even take you to the fair, pumpkin. I’d surely win!” She said, hugging it as best she could. She felt it shift under her hooves, and pulled away in alarm. “No no! Please stop growing! You won’t fit in my garden anymore!” She pleaded.
The pumpkin didn’t grow, but it spun around to face her with a massive carved face, through which she could see a single candle burning with a blue flame inside it’s hollowed shell. The face was still for a moment, a wicked and frozen rictus grin gazing out at nothing. Golden Harvest was confused. It had just grown, why was it already carved?
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>>29702030
Its eyes eventually moved, twisting, the chunk of pumpkin making up the pupils spinning in the empty sockets to point at her.
“Ah, Golden Harvest.” A cold, feminine voice said. “You spend so much time in the sun, trusting it. Loving it. Relying on it for your livelihood and well-being. I trust you appreciate what it has done for you today? Your vegetables are bountiful, giving of themselves in order to see that you might live.”
Unsure how to respond, Golden Harvest simply nodded.
“Of course. You are grateful, are you not? The sun provides, and you take from it. Praising it. Food grows in the moonlight as well, you know. There is more than one way to feed ponies. Why don’t we have a look?” The pumpkin said coolly.
As Golden Harvest watched, the pumpkin withered and rotted. As quickly as it had grown, it collapsed in on itself. Mold grew, spreading to the other vegetables as they all collapsed in on themselves.
“No, no, no! Please! I need those to eat! I can’t afford winter otherwise! The Apples will take everything!” Golden Harvest cried.
The remains of the plants disappeared into the soil, and night suddenly fell. The moon’s glow cascading down on her garden. As she watched, various mushrooms sprouted on the corpses of the plants. Morels, chanterelles, maitake, and many other varieties grew, even if they shouldn’t have been able to in such a spot. They grew massive and towered over her, replacing the greens and oranges of her lovely crops. One of them turned to her and smiled what might have been an attempted comforting smile, but only came off as creepy. Golden Harvest whimpered and began crying, falling down on the ground underneath the mushroom forest and covering her eyes with her hooves. She started sobbing and the world around her started wobbling as the poor mare woke up, leaving Luna alone in a twinkling void.
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>>29702037
Poor Golden Harvest has a nightmare.

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This is where the fun begins.
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Death. Comes. Unexpectedly.
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AM I pretty?
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>>29702049
Applebloom’s head jerked away from her pillow. She sat up straight and panted hard. She looked out the window at how high the sun was and groaned. “Aw no! Ah slept in!” She leaped out of bed, quickly tied a bow into her hair and dashed down the stairs.
Granny Smith called out as she passed. “You be careful out there Applebloom!”
“I will Granny! Love you! Me and the Crusaders were gonna try our hooves at road construction!” She yelled back. Granny just shook her head and smiled as Applebloom disappeared off into the orchard. Applebloom waved to Big Mac, who silently waved back. Applejack wasn’t in sight, but she was probably on the other side of the farm. Applebloom dashed up the steps to the clubhouse and kicked open the door, startling the other two ponies who were already there.
“Applebloom, you’re late! We were supposed to meet ten minutes ago!” Sweetie Belle scolded.
“Ah know girls, ah’m sorry. Ah didn’t sleep too well last night so ah guess ah slept in.” Applebloom said sheepishly.
“Aw, it’s cool. We’ve all had days like that. So are you ready to become cutie mark crusaders road workers?!” Scootaloo said, holding up a hoof. The other two swung their own hooves up to meet hers and they yelled together: “Cutie Mark Crusaders road workers! YAY!”
The idea was Sweetie Belle’s. She’d seen some construction going on in Canterlot when she went with Rarity on a business trip. It had been incredibly boring even though she’d been told they’d go see a lot of cool sights. She’d been killing time staring out the window at the ponies rushing about. Taxi’s buzzing by. Unicorns strutting past with their noses in the air. Couriers dashing to and fro with packages. She’d finally latched on to a group fixing some broken cobblestones and had the epiphany! Road workers!
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>>29705165
The majority of roads in Ponyville were dirt. This meant that whenever they had rain scheduled, nopony wanted to go outside because there would be mud in the streets. It would get splashed everywhere, messing up clothes, gunking up carts, and generally just being a nuisance. So the Cutie Mark Crusaders could fill a need, improve Ponyville, and get their cutie marks all at the same time! It was foolproof. The first they needed were cobblestones.
“Ah did some research, and ah figured out how cobblestone streets are generally made. We gotta find a big pile of round stones and then we just stick ‘em real close together in the dirt!” Applebloom said.
“Okay! I know where we can get a lot of good rocks!” Scootaloo said excitedly. “Everypony come on!” The three piled out of the clubhouse and down to where Scootaloo had parked her scooter. She attached Applebloom’s wagon to the back and the other Crusaders piled in, putting on their helmets. With a buzzing roar, Scootaloo revved up her wings and they were off.
They sped through town, Scootaloo deftly avoiding the ponies, carts, and obstacles as they went. While they rode through, Sweetie Belle held onto Applebloom with a pensive look on her face.
“What was your nightmare about Applebloom? If you want to share.” Sweetie asked.
“Ah don’t remember all of it, but ah remember ah was alone for all of it, except this… thing, following me around talking to me.” Applebloom said.
“A thing? What kind of thing?” Scootaloo called back, shouting to be heard over the buzzing of her wings.
“Ah don’t remember. Ah know ah didn’t ever get a good look at it at the very least. It kept telling me to spend more time outside at night.” Applebloom said, her brow furrowing.
Sweetie Belle tapped her chin with a hoof in thought. “That’s kinda similar to the one I had last night. Mine had a dress telling me it would shine best in moonlight.”
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>>29705171
“That’s kind of weird.” Scootaloo called back.
“Well they’re just dreams, ain’t they? Other than the mention of night, there’s really nothin’ connecting ‘em.” Applebloom said.
“Yeah, I guess you’re right.” Scootaloo said. “No time to really wonder too much, either. We’re here, girls!” Scootaloo skidded to a stop and the Cutie Mark Crusaders pulled off their helmet, looking out at the sight before them.
It must have once been a riverbed, as it was a deep, stony channel cutting through a section of land outside Ponyville. It was about as deep as Sugar Cube Corner was tall, with soft, rounded banks that sloped gently down on either side. In the dirt scattered all around were a bunch of rounded stones, worn down by the time they must have spent in the long-gone river. Scootaloo smiles proudly and held out a hoof, pointing at the river.
“I found this while I was looking for good places to jump off of to practice flying!” She said.
“Wow Scoots, this has the perfect kind of rocks we need! Now we just gotta collect a bunch of ‘em!” Applebloom said happily. “Okay! Let’s create a chain and start bringing them up!” Applebloom said. She hopped down off the bank and slid down a short distance. She picked up the first few rocks she found that were rounded and held one up, waving it at the other two fillies. “C’mon you two! We need to start collectin’!”
Scootaloo jumped down after her and grabbed the rock from her hooves. She turned and tossed it up at Sweetie Belle, who panicked and tried to catch it. She kicked it back up into the air, dashed around in small circles trying to figure out where it would land, and accidentally kicked it back down over the edge. Scootaloo and Applebloom watched it roll down the hillside and frowned up at Sweetie Belle. “Oops.” She said with a sheepish grin.
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>>29705181
the Cutie Mark Crusaders start roadwork.
This takes place very shortly after Nightmare Moon comes back and gets defeated, if anyone is confused. CMC have no cutie marks. Unicorn Twilight. Luna hasn't been to Halloween.

Updated my journal: http://pastebin.com/cYCvXPXB
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>>29702037
"A little harsh, don't you think?"
>You sip some more of your bland tea as Luna stares into your fireplace, which displayed Ms. Harvest's nightmare
>"Tis necessary, Anonymous, unfortunate as it is."
>You set your cup down on your small, now glistening wooden table
"So everyone has a nightmare?"
>The Princess takes a sip of her own tea
>"Every now and then. Some I design, and some come simply from their own machinations.
>Sad, yes, but what are dreams if there is nothing to compare them with?"
>You nod, silently noticing you spilled some of your tea on the carpet somehow
"What is good if there is no bad?"
>You wince at the pathetic attempt at philosophy, before getting hit by a sudden dread
>In that moment, despite the crackling of the fire in your darkened living room, you hear your faucet drip loudly from upstairs

"...Do I get a nightmare, Luna?"
>Moonbutt answers with a twinkle in her green-blue eyes and a cheshire cat grin
>Shit

>The dripping quickens as the fire slowly turns from a comforting red-orange to a deep, unnatural blue
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>>29705288
>The ring of light the two of you are in starts to shrink from the color change
>You weigh your options as the darkness creeps up from behind
>Gripping the arms of your chair tightly, you lock eyes with the now ghastly-looking ruler of the night
>A small voice in your head then pipes up
>"If you're gonna get spooked, don't wait for it."
>The simple logic makes you lunge out of the chair and straight at Luna, now encased in darkness
>Except for her eyes, which flash wickedly from your sudden movement

>You take one step before the floor disappears
>Surprised, you shut your eyes as you fall face first into a cold, soundless void
>You flip onto your back, but then stop
>Slowly, you open your eyes to see ripples of moonlight just above you

>You're underwater
>In the middle of the ocean
>You sense something under you

>Oh God no

>You can't help yourself, but slowly twist around to look down
>It's the fucking abyss, its blackness almost on par with black holes
>Despite that, you think you see an outline--
>Two yellow disks, each the size of a town, flash at you from hundreds of met
>You see a hint if a rising tentacle before trying to swim fruitlessly up to the surface
>There's no real water, but whatever's substituting is making you fatally slow
>You're within' arm's reach before an appendage as big as you grabs your legs and pull--

"FUCK! Fu--..."
>You jolt yourself awake amidst a string of profanity
>It's morning, you're beside your bed on the carpeted floor, and you foot is tangled up by the sheets
>You take this all in before relaxing, your head swimming
>You then take in a deep breath
"Goddammit, Luna."

3am writing is best writing
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>>29705311
Hah! That was nice! Good work, Anon, and thanks.
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Scoothulhu.
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>ponies
>horror
Shame this combo isn't more prevalent, it's quite enjoyable.
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>>29705311
woah there page 10. I'm up.
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>>29706136
That is adorable.
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https://derpibooru.org/971712

>She asks you to eat her out.
>Would you?
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>>29705190
“Next time hold onto it a bit better Sweetie Belle. Just put ‘em in the wagon.” Applebloom said.
Sweetie Belle nods and catches the next rock and dumps it in the wagon. The three fillies dig up a good load of them, seeking out only the smoothest rocks they can find, and before long the wagon is full of stones and the Cutie Mark Crusaders are dirty and tired.
“So now we gotta drag all these back to town?” Sweetie Belle whined. “I’m tired!”
“Oh come on, Sweetie Belle. All you did was toss the rocks into the wagon. You didn’t even do any digging.” Scootaloo retorted.
“Don’t get so upset girls, complaining won’t get us nowhere. Scootaloo get on your scooter and start pulling, me and Sweetie Belle will push. I already know the place I want to fix up, and it’s not too far away.” Applebloom said.
With a groan and a roll of her eyes, Scootaloo put on her helmet, got on her scooter, and started flapping her wings. Applebloom got on the back of the wagon and butted her head against it, pushing with all her might.
“Ohhh, Rarity’s going to be so mad at me for messing up my mane.” Sweetie Belle complained, but she still started pushing as well.
It took the three fillies a while, but they eventually reached their destination; a small section of dirt road just across from Sugar Cube Corner. They flopped down to the ground, breathing hard. A few stray stones fell out of the wagon. Applebloom plodded to one side of the wagon, put her shoulder against it, and tilted the whole mess onto the packed dirt road.
“Alright girls, now, we just, -phew-, need to start digging.” Applebloom panted. She plopped down onto the ground, leaning against the upturned wagon.
“Do we have to? I don’t think I want to be a construction worker anymore.” Sweetie Belle whined.
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>>29707464
“Me neither. My wings are sore, and my hooves still ache from all that digging from earlier. Maybe we should have brought a shovel.” Scootaloo said. She stretched her wings out with a light crackling sound.
Applebloom sat there in the dirt in silence for a moment, before letting her head lean against the wagon. “Yeah, maybe you’re right, Scootaloo. Whaddya say we take a break and maybe come back to this tomorrow? With a shovel.”
“I’m okay with that.” Scootaloo said.
“Can we get milkshakes?” Sweetie Belle asked.
“Yeah! Milkshakes for the road workers!” Scootaloo crowed.
The three jumped up in a sudden burst of energy, leaving their mess of rocks in a pile, and disappeared into Sugarcube Corner, coming out much later licking their lips.
“Well girls, it’s been a productive day, but ah gotta get home and help Applejack with some chores. Same time tomorrow morning? Ah’ll bring a shovel this time.” Applebloom said.
“Yeah! I’ll bring some reflective vests!” Sweetie said happily.
“I think I can score some road cones from somewhere.” Scootaloo said.
“Fantastic! See y’all tomorrow!” Applebloom said, as she dashed off for home.
Applebloom arrived back to find Applejack and Big Mac cleaning up the barn and the farm, and she got quickly put to work running errands here and there, delivering tools among the shed and her siblings, and eventually was sent inside to help Granny cook supper. She set the table, called in her sister and brother when it was ready, and they all ate a pleasant meal together. Afterward, Applejack insisted her little sister bathe to clean herself of all the dirt and dust she’d accumulated during the day’s efforts, then tucked her into bed with a kiss on her forehead.
“Y’all sleep well little sis.” Applejack said, flipping off the light.
“You too, Applejack.” Applebloom said. She snuggled into her blankets and was asleep within moments.
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>>29707468
Applebloom found herself at the edge of a dry riverbed with the hot sun beating down. It was almost like the riverbed the Cutie Mark Crusaders had been digging in earlier that day, but the stones were much bigger, and there were many more of them with far less dirt covering them. Happy that she’d found even better rocks than they’d tried to use earlier in the day, Applebloom jumped down into the river with a gleeful cheer. She grabbed the first one she reached, and despite it being as big as her, she easily lifted it above her head. She laughed and spun in a circle, then tossed it up into the wagon that suddenly appeared on the riverbank. She picked up more and more of them, throwing them up to the wagon with ease. The wagon never seemed to get full, either, no matter how many of them she threw. She was enjoying herself immensely, knowing the other Crusaders would be ecstatic to see the stones she’d found. Maybe she’d get a cutie mark in geology or digging!
“Geology? How very droll.” A cold voice said.
Applebloom stopped and looked around. “Who’s there?” She asked, not seeing the source of the voice.
A tall, dark blue alicorn appeared next to her wagon, which was piled high with rocks. She shimmered into existence, her mane and tail looked like they were made of the night sky, and she smiled at Applebloom. The smile itself looked warm, but it never touched her eyes.
“Tell me little filly, why do you dream of digging in the daylight?” The tall mare asked.
Applebloom was confused. The mare was an alicorn, but only Celestia was an alicorn. Unless... Applebloom’s eyes widened in alarm. “Ahhhh! Nightmare Moon!”
The Alicorn’s eyes flashed in anger. The sunny sky slowly darkened, the moon appearing high above, looming large with the mare in the moon prominent. “I am NOT Nightmare Moon!”
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>>29707479
Applebloom dreams.

Updated my journal: http://pastebin.com/cYCvXPXB
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>>29709546
blump
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>>29705311
Nice.
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>>29698440
Just slipped my mind.
Cont. from http://pastebin.com/rf5LkTV0

>As everypony marches closer towards the fortress, its true form begins to make itself known.
>It seems it was carved right out of an ancient mesa with only certain parts and specific buildings made from other foreign stones.
>If anypony were to pass by, it would look to be abandoned.
>The old watchtowers and ramparts remain empty and many of the bastions and buttresses have large cracks from neglect.
>At the very top, old rusted flagpoles stand alone in the baking heat.
>The old banners that once flew from them have been taken down leaving the pole to defy the elements alone.
>The fortress's towering presence blankets everypony in a cooling shadow.
>A crumbling wall surrounds the fortress and a lone portcullis blocks the path of the group.
>Roadwind steps forward to investigate it.
>Unlike the walls, it seemed to be in good condition.
>There is almost no rust along any of the crossed bars.
>The old chains used to lift the heavy monster almost even shined.
>It's been used.
>And recently.
>Onyx sits down with his mouth agape.
>"This isn't a fort, it's a castle!"
>Spark sits down to rest right next to him.
>"What's the difference? Both are used for defense."
>"I was thinking more along the lines of a Motte & Bailey the Saddle Arabians usually made. I didn't think we would be infiltrating the Sultans damn vacation home."
>While the rest of the group settles down, Roadwind tries to look through the gate.
>Peering through the square openings, he could barely see some carts parked inside the courtyard.
>They are partially sunken into the sand, but the tarps look fairly new.
>The crest of a black falcon with its wings outstretched is printed on the side of one of them.
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>>29710180
>"See anything Captain?"
>Copper is suddenly standing beside Roadwind staring through the gate also.
"You have some light hooves just like Specter."
>Roadwind doesn't turn and keeps scanning the courtyard.
>"A true trait I learned to care for when going on missions like these."
"How many missions 'like these' have you been on?"
>Copper gives out a little chuckle.
>"Strange don't you think?"
>He's ignoring the question.
"Yes it is. All the guards are missing."
>"Not a single soul in sight for miles. No weapons, clothing, not even corpses."
"They must've went inside. Take a look over there."
>Roadwind motions a hoof to the carts.
>"The Crest of Saddle Arabia. So at least we know somepony important is staying here. It doesn't look to big of a caravan, probably only four or five guards at most."
"And whoever that is we'll find out what they did with our scouts."
>"I'll get my things ready, go and get that Monk and fly atop to see if you can raise the gate."
"You're insane, they'll hear the chains! I suggest we just climb the walls, they aren't too high and we can just carry your stuff over."
>"If they knew we were here, they would be charging at us by now. I don't need any of my tools to be damaged by your clumsy hooves! Now call your subordinate and get this gate open now!"
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>>29710187
>He turns back to the two turncoats and calls them to harness back up.
>Roadwind flies up to the wall and carefully peaks over to get a view of the entire courtyard.
>A broken fountain lays on it's side half sunk in the sand that has overtaken the bowl.
>Old clay pots are covered in cobwebs or are broken on the ground.
>It's completely empty other than the two carts.
>Roadwind hovers back to his team who are all checking on their equipment.
"Alright listen up, Me and Light will fly up to open the gate for you all. Nimble I want you to carefully guide it with your horn to prevent as much noise a possible. Once it's open sweep the courtyard and make sure it's clear, you know how much I hate surprises. When that's done we'll move our way to those storage houses, they're connected to the main building and we can use it as a stealthy way inside rather than those heavy front doors. Stay vigilant, we don't have eyes on any hostiles, but that doesn't mean they don't have eyes on us. Watch the windows, watch the doors, watch any opening for movement. Any questions?"
>Nimble looks hesitantly at the towering castle.
>"Sir, what will we do when we're inside?"
>Roadwind makes a glare at Copper who is looking over his things while the two turncoats wait idly by.
>Their keffiyehs cover their facial expressions, but Roadwind could tell they seemed uncomfortable.
"We're going to find our missing scouts."
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>>29707489
She stamped a hoof on the ground and a rumbling began. Smaller stones around Applebloom’s hooves started bouncing and shaking on the ground, and a hissing sound could be heard. The alicorn spread her wings and her horn began to glow with magic. Some of the stones lifted out of the ground, tearing themselves free from the dirt. One erupted from beneath Applebloom, carrying her into the air.
“I am Princess Luna, ruler of the night and of dreams! My dearest sister would have me believe that I will be welcomed back with open hooves. Too many dreams tell me that is a lie. Still, ponies do not enjoy my beautiful nights, and still they fear me as they feared Nightmare Moon!” Luna said sternly, looking at Applebloom.
Applebloom cowered on top of the floating rock, and watched Luna’s pupils turn to slits, then back again. Luna saw the fear apparent in the filly and sighed. She slowly lowered her to the ground. As soon as Applebloom was on the ground again, she screamed and ran away, trying to climb the far side of the riverbank.
“Stop running! Stop screaming! Stop being afraid of me!” Luna yelled. She stamped her hooves on the riverbank, and the hissing in the distance became the rushing roar of water.
Applebloom saw the roaring flood in the distance up the river, and she tried harder to climb the riverbank, but it was proving far too steep and loose after Luna’s assault on it.
“Every time I attempt to speak with my subjects they scream and run or cry in terror! ‘Nightmare Moon’, they call. Well if I can no longer be loved, then there will be no welcome for you in my realm! I will remind you all why you once feared the dark!” Luna shouted. Her voice was an imperious hammer on Applebloom’s ears, and the filly started crying as the water bore down on her. As it impacted her poor body, she awoke, her sheets soaked, screaming out loud in her bed.
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>>29712225
“Applebloom?! What’s wrong?”Applejack burst into the room, her mane loose and flying in her face. She dashed over to Applebloom, who grabbed onto her and started crying into her chest.
“There-there was a *hic* scary pony who-who yelled at me be-because it was daytime, and then she tried to drown me!” Applebloom sobbed.
Applejack stroked her mane slowly, letting her cry herself out. She murmured reassuringly to her little sister until the filly had calmed down, her sobbing slowing to sniffling until it was gone altogether.
“It was just a dream, Applebloom. It’s scary, but it can’t hurt you.” Applejack said.
“Ah know that! But that mare was so mad, and she took away the sun, then tried to drown me! For no reason!” Applebloom said.
“Well, it’s a dream. They ain’t usually known for makin’ sense. Ah once dreamed ah was bein’ chased by a giant apple with teeth! The dang thing was tryin’ to eat me!” Applejack laughed, but Applebloom didn’t join her.
“Well anyway. It’s still just a couple hours too early for us to be getting’ up. Let’s get your bedding changed, and you might want to go rinse off in the shower right quick. You sweated up a storm! You and your blankets are soaked!” Applejack said, lifting the filly out her bed.
Applebloom realized that she was indeed soaking wet. Her mane was damp, her fur was damp, and she’d left an incredibly large wet spot on the bed. She slowly walked into the bathroom and turned on the tap, but as she was waiting for the water to heat up, she sniffed her leg out of curiosity. To her confusion, it didn’t smell like she had been sweaty. It smelled like she was just wet, in fact. Like she had been doused with water.
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>>29712229
When she had rinsed and dried herself, she got back to her room, where Applejack had switched out her bedding already. “Now do you think y’all will be okay sleeping alone, Applebloom? You can come stay with me if you like.” Applejack offered.
“Ah’ll be fine Applejack. Thanks fer comin’ to check on me.” Applebloom said, climbing back into bed.
“Alright then. Y’all sleep well. See you in a couple hours.” Applejack said, and left the room, flipping the light out on her way.
Applebloom lay there in the dark, staring at the bed’s canopy above her. She didn’t know what to make of it. She wasn’t really afraid anymore, but she was definitely confused. It had been a dream, but she distinctly remembered parts of it feeling incredibly real. The feel of the dirt under her hooves, and the water when it struck her. She shuddered a bit at that. It hadn’t really hurt, but the fear of imminent drowning dredged up some unpleasant feelings. She couldn’t remember the pony’s name for the life of her, though. She had been a mare, that she was positive of, but why was she positive it had been a mare? Something about her had triggered that feeling. She had been… unique, somehow.
Applebloom twisted and turned in her bed, trying to fall asleep, or remember the pony’s name, or something. Anything to help her get this weight off her mind. When she’d lain there for maybe fifteen minutes she gave up, kicked the blankets off, and went to look out the window. She stared off into the night sky, admiring the moon. Then it hit her; Nightmare Moon! She dashed into Applejack’s room. “Nightmare Moon! It was Nightmare Moon that tried to drown me in my dream!” She yelled.
“Nightmare Moon? Oh Applebloom. It couldn’t have been her. Me n’ my friends defeated her. Go to sleep Applebloom.” Applejack muttered drowsily.
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>>29712233
It was definitely Nightmare Moon.

Updated my journal: http://pastebin.com/cYCvXPXB

>>29710196
Great to see you're still going to finish it, Anon.
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Oooh, this is a thread now? That's lovely, I haven't perused in quite a while but had always wished for a thread like this.

I wrote these a long time ago for the FR thread as my first attempt at a horror story. Take a look if you don't mind the greentext format.

http://pastebin.com/Lj0AKRef
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>>29714013
Thanks Anon, I'll give it a read tonight.
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>>29714073
>"This is not what I meant when I said, show me how much you love me."
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>>29714073
I want to fuck her ever changing orifices.
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>>29712243
Annoyed by her sister, Applebloom grumped back over to her own room and rolled onto her bed. She rolled back and forth in frustration both at her inability to sleep, and at Applejack. Eventually, she gave up and decided to just head out to the clubhouse early and wait for the other crusaders. It was only an hour until dawn anyway. She tied her bow into her hair, cracked open the door, and slipped outside. She scurried over to the clubhouse, got the promised shovel she was going to bring, and waited. She tried to keep herself busy, but the clubhouse was empty, and she was all alone, and she still had a good hour or so to wait. She tried drawing pictures of what the roads would look like when they were all cobbled, but she’d been woken up early, and that wasn’t particularly exciting. She started nodding off. She slapped herself in the cheeks, trying to keep herself awake, but it was no use. Eventually, despite the hard, wooden floor, Applebloom slipped off to sleep.
She was on the streets of Ponyville at night, with a single lamp post gleaming in the darkness, shining its beam down on her. She held in her hoof a single apple, and on her back were her saddlebags, filled up with schoolbooks of all sorts. Applebloom looked around, and she saw next to her a sign that said ‘CARRIAGE STOP’. She was... going to school? She must be, or else why would she be waiting for a carriage with her schoolbooks? She was confused why she would be waiting in the dark, though. Was it near morning, or was it the evening? She didn’t know what else to do, and there was nopony else around for her to ask, so she waited.
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>>29714819
She heard the clopping of hooves in the distance, and she turned to look. Out in the darkness, a swaying light could be seen, plodding slowly toward Applebloom’s carriage stop. Still holding her apple, Applebloom waited while the yellow and black carriage came toward her. The pony pulling it was a dark blue mare, wearing a bus driver’s uniform. She was an alicorn, strangely, and seeing her tugged at Applebloom’s brain. She was sure she remembered this pony, but she couldn’t think of where, exactly.
“Going my way, young filly?” The driver said, tipping her hat at Applebloom.
“Uh, yeah. Ah think so.” Applebloom said, and hopped in the back.
“Well, you just let Luna take you to your destination.” Luna said, winking at Applebloom.
She started off, Applebloom sitting in the front row of carriage seats, and rocked back and forth as it crossed the cobbles. Cobbles? Ponyville’s streets weren’t cobbled. Applebloom looked around in alarm. She was suddenly in the middle of a busy intersection, with carriages going to and fro incredibly quickly. She couldn’t identify any ponies around as their faces were blurred by the speed at which they were passing. Luna picked up speed, pulling the carriage and a swift canter.
“Can, can you slow down, ah think we’re at the wrong place. This isn’t mah school.” Applebloom asked.
“Why whatever do you mean? I’m taking you to your destination.” Luna said, not looking back.
Applebloom sat back in her seat. They didn’t seem to be in any danger, and Luna had the carriage well under control. She could probably calm down and wait it out without any trouble. She rocked back and forth as Luna expertly drove them in between carriages, weaving back and forth, buzzing past some, and speeding alongside others down city street after city street. Suddenly, they burst out of the city and onto some desert plains, akin to those described by Applejack near Appleloosa.
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>>29714013
Good shit, Anon
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>>29714829
“Wait, wait! This definitely isn’t anywhere near my school! Ah don’t even know where this is! Are we near Appleloosa?” Applebloom said, scrambling to the front of the carriage.
“I never said I was taking you to your school. I said I was taking you to your destination. Your FINAL destination! AHAHAHAHA!” Luna looked back at Applebloom and her eyes, where they had been normal before, now had cat-like slit pupils, her green eyes glowing with a terrible inner light. Her wide grin had dangerous fangs filling it, and a long, thin tongue snaked out, licking her lips.
Applebloom pulled back in fear. “Ahhhh! Nightmare Moon!”
“Hahahahahahaaaaa! If that is what you wish, then that is what I am, but I think you have more pressing things to worry about! Your stop is coming up!” Luna said gleefully.
Applebloom heard a train whistle, and she looked up ahead where they were going. The road they were on crossed the railroad tracks, and there was the Friendship Express, chugging merrily along.
“Stop! You’re going to crash!” Applebloom pleaded. Luna merely laughed harder.
“Don’t worry, young filly, we’re right on track!” Luna cackled.
Applebloom looked around desperately. The carriage was going far too fast to jump off safely, but she might survive that fall as opposed to getting hit by a train, which she definitely wouldn’t survive. She tugged on the harness Luna was attached to, trying to pull it off the carriage so she could coast to a halt, but the harness was expertly attached, and without tools it wasn’t going to be possible to remove.
“Please stop! We’re going to get hit!” Applebloom cried.
Luna was galloping along at an incredible speed, the ground whizzing past. “Sorry, little Applebloom, but you don’t want to miss school! It’s time for you to catch your train!”
Applebloom put her hooves up to shield her face as the train impacted the carriage, and she was sent flying.
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>>29714838
Applebloom goes to school.

Updated my journal: http://pastebin.com/cYCvXPXB
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>>29714013
That was pretty good. Good ending especially.
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>>29716212
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>>29716225
>>29716212
Aw man, me too. I love the origin story Chrysalis has where they popped out of a sick tree growing in a pool of corpses. It was pretty great. I'm actually glad the show hasn't given them any sort of origin, because whether or not the comic version was true or not (for the comic's purpose), it was still pretty badass. "I've always been this way."
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>>29716247
I haven't been following the comics, which issue is that?
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>>29716912
Fiendship is Magic

Stories about the villains of Equestria.
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>>29716912
Yeah, it's the fifth one in the Fiendship is Magic series. At the very end Chrysalis talks about herself. Took me a bit to find it in my files, but here are the pertinent pages.
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>>29717094
Tree growing in pool full of corpses.
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>>29717099
That is literally a unicorn skull. CORPSES.
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>>29717108
>I think this place is nasty and bad. I'm gonna hammer a sign on the tree in the middle of the pool of death so that anypony who finds it will have to walk out there to read it.

WIZARDS. No sense of right and wrong.
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>>29717120
"There is no story, I was born this way."
The implication is that she didn't actually tell Twilight that story, and just said that single line, but you could also infer that she did tell her the story. But I think the origin of the changelings being a mixture of dead flies, nasty acorn tree, and dead ponies, is pretty badass.
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>>29717138
Thanks for posting!
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>>29704693
not really
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>>29716212
>>29716225
>>29717094
>>29717099
>>29717108
>>29717120
>>29717138
>visible rib cages
>dead looking ponies
>alien-like nests everywhere
>pool full of corpses
>skulls and bones

You know, for kids!
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>>29717491
Damn right it's fuckin' brutal. I god damn love it.
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>>29704693
>Ah you we're by my side all along
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>>29714842
“Applebloom, wake up! We appreciate you trying to make up for yesterday, but now you’re holding us up by sleeping in the clubhouse.” Scootaloo said. She shook Applebloom again to try to wake the filly up.
Applebloom awoke with a shout, jerking upward and sending Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle sprawling. She patted herself all over, checking to make sure she was in one piece. When she was certain she was solid and not a mess, she sighed with relief and flopped backward on the clubhouse floor. “Oh mah stars, what a nightmare.” She said.
“Have another one of those dreams again?” Scootaloo asked.
“You have no idea. Two in one night. Every time ah go to sleep there’s this stupid mare acting crazy!” Applebloom said, pulling herself into a sitting position.
“Really? What does she look like?” Sweetie Belle asked.
Applebloom furrowed her brow as she tried her best to remember. “She was blue, and she was an Alicorn! She had a big starry mane that floated constantly! Like the princess!” Applebloom said. Then she gasped. “Girls! Ah think ah’m bein’ haunted by Nightmare Moon!”
The two other fillies gasped as well and leaned in close.
“But, didn’t Rarity and her friends defeat Nightmare Moon? How could she be back?” Sweetie Belle squeaked.
“It was Rainbow Dash and her friends, and yeah, the whole town heard about it.” Scootaloo said. “Are you sure they weren’t just- what’s that on your cheek Applebloom? Are you bleeding?”
Applebloom reached up to her cheek, poking around. She winced as she found a small spot near her nose that was sensitive. She wiped at it and sure enough, her hoof came away with blood on it. Her hoof shook a little as she looked at the blood, and was suddenly acutely aware of the pain on her cheek. That was when she noticed that she felt tiny pinpricks of pain all over her body.
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>>29719134
“That’s what you get for sleeping on a wooden floor. Splinters everywhere.” Scootaloo said.
Applebloom looked herself over, and she found that she had tiny scrapes, abrasions, scratches, and yes, splinters, all over the right side of her body. “Girls…” Applebloom began. “ah was dreaming about being in a runaway carriage, with Nightmare Moon pulling it. She pulled it in front of a train, and right before you woke me up, the carriage got hit. Ah… ah think these are from that. Because – because the nightmare before that, she tried to drown me, and ah woke up soaking wet!”
“Are you sure you didn’t just… you know?” Scootaloo asked, pointing down between her legs.
Applebloom rolled her eyes. “Yes ah’m sure! It didn’t smell like that!”
“But how could a dream possibly hurt you? It’s just a dream.” Sweetie Belle said quizzically.
“Maybe Nightmare Moon can do that.” Applebloom said. “Ah think we need more information, girls. To the library!”
“But what about being road workers?” Sweetie Belle said.
Applebloom sighed. “Fine. Bring the shovel, then. We can go dig after ah find out what ah want to know.”
Applebloom and Scootaloo headed outside, walking down the ramp of the clubhouse. Sweetie Belle grabbed the shovel and stumbled after them, trying to wrangle the hefty tool with her hooves. They all piled into the wagon and Scootaloo took the reins, pulling them off toward town.
“Do you think the library has many books about Nightmare Moon? I heard Twilight had difficulty interpreting the pro- uh, prophet-see? about her coming back because it was all missing.” Sweetie Belle asked.
“Ah’m sure there’s something. Or maybe we can find out some more about dreams in general. There must be something.” Applebloom said.
“I just don’t see how a dream could hurt you. Or why Nightmare Moon would want to attack you, Applebloom.” Scootaloo said.
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>>29719138
“Well, the story from Nightmare Night says she wants to gobble us up. Ah’m not sure how hitting me with a train would help with that.” Applebloom said.
The three eventually arrive in town, to a huge hubbub. Ponies were crowded around in front of one of the houses. The library was just ahead, but their curiosity got the better of them, and the three stopped and crowded into the back of the milling ponies, trying to see what they were all looking at. Unfortunately for them, Rarity caught sight of them and pushed them back.
“Sweetie Belle! What are you doing here? I thought you were going to the clubhouse?” Rarity said, shoving them further away.
“We wanted to go to the library and find out more about dreams!” Sweetie Belle said.
“Well I’m very sorry, but you’re just going to have to go another way. Something has happened, and it’s not safe for you to be here at the moment.” Rarity said.
“But-“ Applebloom began.
“No buts! Please go find another way to the library.” Rarity insisted.
“Fine!” Sweetie Belle said.
The three got back into the wagon, and Scootaloo buzzed off a different direction. Applebloom peeked back at the crowd, and she saw a police pony and Nurse Redheart coming out of a break in the crowd, carrying a black bag of some kind. They moved to a carriage that had been parked out in front of the building and then Scootaloo turned a corner and she lost sight of it.
“Ah think somepony got hurt real bad, girls. Ah saw Nurse Redheart.” Applebloom said.
“That would explain why Rarity didn’t want me to see.” Sweetie Belle said. “I can probably find out what happened later tonight when Rarity starts drinking. She talks to the dress horses about her day when she doesn’t know I’m listening. I’ll let you know if I find anything out.”
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>>29719142
Crusaders go to the library.

Updated my journal: http://pastebin.com/cYCvXPXB
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>>29719147
When I read this, all I pictured was knights walking into my public library
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>>29719922
>"Ave Maria! Bookeeper! Where are the scrolls of Saint Mikael!"
>"Sir you can't bring that weapon inside. This is a public library."
>"You dare deny a warrior of God! Have at thee!"
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Just updated Blossomthing for all you thingfags out there: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/258844/blossomthing
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>>29719147
Scootaloo pulled them around the pony blockade, and they eventually came to a stop in front of Golden Oaks Library, where the new pony, Twilight Sparkle had recently taken up residence. They rapped on the door and waited. Soon enough, Twilight opened the door.
“Well hello my little ponies. Please, come in, the library is currently open, so you really didn’t need to knock.” Twilight said, stepping aside and motioning them in.
“Sorry. It’s a little weird having somepony live here now.” Applebloom said.
“I understand. Well are you looking for anything in particular?” Twilight asked.
“We wanted to look at some books about Nightmare Moon.” Applebloom said.
“Or dreams!” Sweetie Belle piped in.
“Oh certainly.” Twilight said. She used her magic to pull several books off the shelf and piled them up in front of the Crusaders. “These are all the books that detail the rise and fall of Nightmare Moon 1000 years ago. We don’t yet have any books on her recent return and defeat, but I’m sure they’ll come out soon.” She pulled a couple of other books off the shelves and put them in a separate pile. “These are all the books about dreams and the possible interpretation of them. Some of them are empirical, while a lot of them are entirely theoretical, so take those ones with a grain of salt.”
Scootaloo looked at the pile with dismay. “Uhhh, we were specifically wondering about whether or not it would be possible for somepony to hurt you in your dreams, and have the hurt be real. Like, could Nightmare Moon do that?”
Twilight put a hoof to her chin in thought. “That’s an interesting question. Nightmare Moon could easily influence a pony’s thoughts in their dreams, but actually injuring somepony? That I don’t know. That doesn’t really seem possible.”
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While the Crusaders were reading and debating dreams with Twilight, Luna floated in the realm of dreams, seeking and searching. With the coming of the day, her realm was black and empty, save a very few points of light. One of these was particularly bright, and she sped toward it, a toothy grin reaching her face.
Rainbow Dash flew faster than ever. So fast you’d think she was teleporting like a unicorn, but no, she was just, that, fast. Why wouldn’t she be? She was the greatest Wonderbolt ever. Barely spent a week as a rookie before they recognized she was the best flyer Equestria had ever seen and promoted her to Captain of the squad. Spitfire was allowed to stay on, but she was demoted to Rainbow Dash’s old position as rookie. Unheard of, yes, but so was Rainbow’s skill at flying. The current show was a solo performance by Yours Truly; Rainbow fucking Dash. She did loops, cartwheels, barrel rolls, aileron rolls, and even this impossible new trick she’d come up with where… well… it was impossible so you’d have to be there to see it. She had everything and she was the most popular flyer ever. She left her latest performance and went to shower before she went out to meet the cheering crowd. She checked her mane, spread her wings, made sure her uniform was impeccable, and stepped out to a raucous cheering crowd.
She let them cheer for a bit before raising a hoof, her bodyguards held the crowd back as she cleared her throat to speak. “Thank you! Thank you! I know you all came to see me, and thank you for doing so. I’ll take a couple questions from the crowd. Hmmm… you! The tall blue unicorn!” She pointed at Luna.Luna was wearing a baseball cap with Rainbow’s cutie mark on the front. She feigned surprise at being picked and motioned to herself in bewilderment.
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>>29721522
“Yes, you. Say the first thing that comes to your mind. How about: ‘Oh Rainbow, I’m your biggest fan!’ I always love hearing that.” Rainbow said. It was a dream, so it didn’t seem odd.
Luna smiled a wicked smile and spread her own wings. They grew impossibly big, dwarfing her body, until they were almost as wide as the entire crowd. “Oh! Rainbow Dash!” She said sarcastically. “I’m your biggest FAN!” When she spoke the last word, she flapped her giant wings down, creating a massive gust of wind that blew the entire crowd away. Ponies screamed as they all disappeared into the distance, the only pony who managed to stay grounded was Rainbow herself.
“Wha-*huuck*, what?” Rainbow said, the wind making it difficult to breathe or speak.
Luna walked over to where Rainbow was pressed against the ground. Her wings had shrunk down some, but were still oversized. “Oh, did you not hear me? I said I’m your biggest FAN!” Luna said again, flapping down at rainbow, the wind was directed straight at her, and it pressed her into the ground. “Your performance simply takes my breath away!” She said, as she kept flapping, the strong winds pushing Rainbow harder into the ground, crushing her ribs.
Rainbow tried to move away, turning away from Luna, she attempted to drag herself away, but the impossibly strong winds pressed her against the ground. She spread her wings, to catch some of the wind and maybe escape, but the sheer forced dragged her along the ground, rolling her with it until she came to a forceful stop at a wall of the stadium. She felt her left wing break as it was folded unnaturally between her and the wall. “Gaaaaaaah!”
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>>29721527
Rainbow sleeps on the job. Again.

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>>29704102
Not. Yet.
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>>29721527
I can hear her wing make a sickening crack.

This pleases me.
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>>29710196
>Flying up atop the rampart, Roadwind and Light enter the gatehouse.
>A windlass sits in the center with the end of the chains connecting to it.
>Roadwind sets himself on one side of the wheel and Light the opposite.
>Giving a great heave, the chains strain at the pressure.
>For a second, it seems they are too weak.
>There are four sections for ponies to push and only two are filled.
>Roadwind's hooves begin to shake from the exertion, but he still endures.
>Through grinding teeth he gives Light an order.
"Wings!"
>Light looks over at Roadwind, but still puts force on the wheel.
"Put your wings into it!"
>The two begin flapping their wings tirelessly in hoping it would provide some additional pressure.
>The gate shudders.
>Then it slowly begins to rise.
>Spark's magical green aura surrounds it as the two slowly watch it rise into the gatehouse.
>Once it got halfway up, the two lock it in place.
>They both lean on the windlass wheezing.
"Nothing like a *cough* workout to end a long march."
>"Couldn't have said it better myself Sir."
>Regaining their composure, they exit the room and join the others in the courtyard.
>The two Saddle Arabians already parked their carts behind the storage houses out of sight.
>Copper digs through one of the carts while they sit idly in the shade of the building.
>One of them takes off their keffiyeh and fans himself with it.
>He's...young.
>Looks to be barely past the colt age range.
>Roadwind watches as the other one takes out a canteen and let's the younger sip from it.
>Probably his older brother or father maybe.
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>>29723934
>Continuing with the sweep, Velvet motions him over.
>She is standing inside the fountain next to the toppled statue.
>"Captain, take a look at this."
>She points a hoof to the base of the statue.
>Looking carefully, there's a torn piece of cloth.
>A majority of it is a faded white, but the bottom part where the tear is has a bloodstain.
>Turning it over, the tips of black wings and the end of a golden spear peak over the ripped part.
>It's only half of the crest, but Roadwind recognizes it.
"This is from a scout uniform."
>He turns to face the castle doors.
"They were here."
>"They must've went inside, but why? Scouting missions consist of 'Report and Return' right?"
"Something isn't right about this."
>A harsh wind blows the cloth from Roadwind's grasp.
>It flies upward and lands against one of the high windows on the upper level above the doorway.
>A whistling can be heard.
>Looking for the source, Roadwind sees his team getting behind cover.
"Get down."
>The two duck under behind the base of the fountain and keep their heads low.
>Lifting his head from the sand, his sight ends on Light who is taking cover behind a couple barrels beside another building to the right.
>As their eyes make contact, Light stops his whistling.
>He motions his hooves upward in a square motion and mouths out some words.
>Window. Third row. Far right. Drawn curtain.
>Peaking over, Roadwind sees what Light was warning him about.
>The windows are tinted slightly to block out the sun, but the silhouette of a pony leaning against the glass can be easily seen.
>It stands there motionless.
>Front hooves pressed against the glass as if trying to push it open.
>"Did he see us?"
"No."
>If he did alarm bells would be going off.
>Why is he just standing there?
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>>29723955
>The figure stands for what seems like hours before moving.
>But something is wrong.
>As it walks past the other windows, the pony would twitch its head.
>Each movement made seem jankey and forced.
>Similar to how a puppeteer contorts a marionette.
>Getting to the end of the windows it disappears behind the stone walls.
>Roadwind looks to Light who gives an all clear.
>Shaking the sand from his coat, Roadwind gives out a whistle and everypony returns behind the storage house.
"Okay, Onyx and Marble. Get your full plates on. Onyx is on point Marble cover the end. Velvet and Nimble will provide cover fire if things get hot, we're going to work our way room to room and see what this place is hiding. If you spot anypony or anything do NOT engage. This may be a fortress, but that doesn't exclude there won't be any civilians, if compromised subdue with force, maybe we can get some information as to what happened here. Dead or alive we are getting our soldiers back. Copper, you're with me behind Onyx. Get whatever gear you feel comfortable with and lets move out."
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>>29723965
>>29723955
>>29723934
Oooo, shit's gettin' spooky!
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>>29721531
“Oh no! Are you hurt? Here, let me help you. Anything for my favourite hero.” Luna said. She pulled Rainbow from the wall, and tossed her roughly back inside the locker room. Luna’s wings were their normal size again, and she followed after the tumbling blue Pegasus. “Surely there’s a first-aid kit here somewhere.” Luna said.
Rainbow pulled herself standing, finally able to catch her breath. She grimaced at her broken wing, and at the back of her mind she faintly wondered why it hurt so much. This was a dream, right? Nopony can make their wings grow that big in real life. She scrambled away, Luna mocking her as she stumbled away back into the locker room.
“Come back! Can I have your autograph?” Luna called.
Something stabbed into her right flank right before she slammed the door of the locker room. She looked and saw a quill stabbed deep into her thigh. She felt a thumping on the door as she tried to hold it shut against her rabid fan. Again Rainbow felt like she should know who this was, but couldn’t fully pull the memory to the fore. Dreams, blue alicorn. “Nightmare Moon?” She said.
The thumping on the door stopped, but Rainbow didn’t let go. She held on and waited to hear hoofsteps moving away. She heard a few tentative steps, the clopping going down the hall, and she held her breath, waiting to see if she was truly going to leave. She heard a suddenly rapid clopping, and panicked as she realized Luna was going to charge the door! She leaped to the side as Luna’s horn speared through the wood as though it were paper, and the whole door came off its hinges! Luna grinned down at her, a wild look in her slit pupils, her sharpened teeth gleaming in the light.
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>>29725122
“Heeeeere’s Moony!” Luna crowed, and tossed the door off her horn. She advanced on Rainbow, her horn pointed down toward the frightened Pegasus.
Rainbow dashed down an aisle of lockers, and Luna walked calmly after her. In her panic, Rainbow was looking for a window, or a back door, or anything she could use as a weapon, but all that was in the room were harmless objects like soap, clothing, and towels. She picked some of these up and threw them anyway, hoping maybe one would cause her to stumble. Luna simply caught them with magic and tossed them to the side.
“Oh come now. You’re supposed to be the best Wonderbolt ever. Strong, powerful…” Luna gave an evil smile. “…FAST.”
Rainbow was acutely aware of her broken wing. She was fast on hoof, but not as fast as she could be in the air. Not even by a long shot. She led Luna in a large circle around the locker room, throwing anything and everything she could get her hooves on, all of which Luna just tossed to the side. Eventually, Rainbow was back at the entrance to the locker room, and leaped out into the hallway. She galloped down the empty hall, hoping she could outrun her pursuer. She sprinted for some distance, then turned around with a smile to see how far behind Luna was. To her dismay, Luna was walking casually behind her, keeping up with her full-bore run.
“Wh-what? How?!” Rainbow said.
Luna grabbed her hind legs with her magic, and yanked, knocking Rainbow to the floor. Her chin smacked into the hard ground, and she felt a tooth chip from the impact. Luna didn’t pull her anywhere, but Rainbow felt her right hind leg twist painfully.
“AHHHHH! Stop, stop, stop!” Rainbow cried.
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>>29725132
“Rainbow Dash, you’ve let me down. I thought you were the FASTEST. WONDERBOLT. EVER!” With every word, Luna twisted harder, until Rainbow’s leg snapped with the final syllable. Rainbow laid on the ground, sobbing and trying to pull herself along the ground.
“We… we defeated you. Nightmare Moon was supposed to be gone.” Rainbow sniffled, slowly crawling away.
“Oh, my dear little Rainbow Dash. You did. Nightmare Moon is super gone, and very defeated. This isn’t Nightmare Moon doing any of this at all.” Luna stood over Rainbow Dash and leaned down, looking her in the eyes. “This is entirely Luna. Sweet widdle Woona. Forever forgotten, ignored, and feared. Even after one thousand years ponies still ignore me and fear me all because I rule and live in the darkness. Even in their dreams, my very realm! They dream of my sister. I came back for this? You took away all my power as Nightmare Moon, all for this?!” Luna said. She stamped on Rainbow’s back, making the Pegasus cry out in pain again.
“Being loved by ponies isn’t everything.” Rainbow gasped.
Luna’s face twisted into smirk, a grimace, a frown, then she barked out a hideous laugh. “Hah! The pony who was dreaming about being loved by ponies tells me that being loved isn’t everything?! Oh! Oh my! Hahaha! HAHAHAHA! The sheer, disgusting, audacity!”
Rainbow Dash slowly and painfully lifted herself to her hooves and hobbled slowly away, knowing she couldn’t possibly outrun Luna once she began chasing her. Rainbow dove into the nearest room she could find. It was a restroom, and she flipped out the lights, climbed into the first stall, and lifted her hooves off the ground. She curled up, her right leg and left wing throbbing. She didn’t hear anything, but soon felt a breath on her left ear. She whimpered, but didn’t move. It wouldn’t help.
“Welcome to my world, Rainbow Dash.” Luna said, and struck.
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>>29725140
Overzealous fans.

Updated my journal:http://pastebin.com/cYCvXPXB
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>>29725146
Woah
Fucking brutal
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>>29725132
>Heeeeere’s Moony!
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The Crusaders left the library much later in the day, looking far more tired than they had when going in.
“Ugh, I’m exhausted and we didn’t even do any digging.” Scootaloo said.
“And we didn’t even learn anything useful.” Applebloom said.
“I learned that you can tell if a pony is dreaming by checking to see if their eyes are moving behind their eyelids! That means they’re in a state called REM, or ‘rapid eye movement’!” Sweetie Belle interjected.
The other two turn and glare at her.
“I thought it was interesting.” Sweetie grumped, kicking at the ground.
“Well it doesn’t answer any questions about whether or not you could hurt another pony in their dreams, so we’re no further along now than we were before.” Applebloom muttered.
As they trundled back to Scootaloo’s scooter, they saw Applejack galloping over to the treehouse. She barged inside, and there was some heated shouting, then both Applejack and Twilight dashed back out and headed in the direction of Sweet Apple Acres. Applejack yelled at her sister as she galloped off. “Applebloom, stay here inside the library! Ah’ll come getcha later!”
“What’s goin’ on?” Applebloom yelled at her sister as the orange pony cantered away down the road. “Well ah ain’t waitin’ here the rest of the day! Ah already spent the entire mornin’ in there! Scootaloo! Follow those ponies!” Applebloom commanded.
Without needing further prompting, Scootaloo revved up her wings and took off, dragging the wagon behind her. When they turned onto the road leading to the orchard and the trees started to get thicker, they could see off in the distance, Applejack and her friends all gathered around a single tree, with the same police pony and Nurse Redheart from earlier that morning. Scootaloo felt her heart leap into her chest when she saw a blue, rainbow-maned form lying on the ground under the tree.
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>>29727603
Scootaloo jumped off her scooter, tossed her helmet to the side, and amidst calls from her friends to stop, ran toward the small crowd. “Rainbow Dash! No! Did she crash? Is she-“ Scootaloo began to ask, but stopped short as she was blocked by Rarity. She could faintly see Fluttershy sobbing into Big Mac’s shoulder, Twilight was talking to Nurse Redheart, and Applejack was saying… something to Rarity. Scootaloo saw her hero, her wing broken, leg twisted, and a hole in her neck. She was no longer bleeding, but there was a large trail of blood leading up the trunk of the tree to Rainbow’s favourite sleeping branch. She dimly felt somepony lift her off the ground, and she was dragged bodily away from the scene.
Everything was kind of a daze for Scootaloo after that. The three fillies were kept together at Rarity’s boutique. She brought they food they barely ate, talked to them about some things Scootaloo didn’t register, and when night came, she stayed with them in the room with the light on.
“Are you going to be okay if I go to bed, dears? It’s very late, and despite the excitement of the day, my body is only going to continue for so long.” Rarity said. Her eyes were droopy. She had removed her makeup earlier following the incident with Rainbow Dash and had never reapplied it. It allowed the redness from crying to show through.
“We’ll be okay Rarity. Thank you.” Sweetie Belle said quietly.
Rarity gave the three a sad smile and stood up from the bed. “Did you want me to leave the light on?” She asked.
“Yes, please.” Scootaloo mumbled, her own eyes wide and haunted.
Rarity nodded and stepped out the door, closing it behind her. Applebloom and Sweetie Belle then sandwiched Scootaloo in a big hug. “You okay, Scoots? You’ve been real quiet all day.”
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>>29727607
“I can’t believe she’s gone. She was my hero, and I was hoping eventually we could become the best of friends if only I could get her to notice me. But now she’s gone.” Scootaloo said.
“I heard Rarity say to Twilight that that makes two ponies murdered today.” Sweetie Belle said.
“That’s horrible! But how? Rainbow always sleeps really high up. Only a Pegasus could reach her, but there was a hole in her neck like a unicorn stabbed her with its horn!” Scootaloo fumed.
“Nightmare Moon.” Applebloom said.
The other two looked at her in confusion.
“That’s Rainbow’s favourite sleeping tree. She always said that branch had the best shape in the whole orchard, so that means she was sleeping when it happened. Nightmare Moon is an alicorn, so she has wings and a horn.” Applebloom said, her face deadly serious.
“But Rainbow is the fastest Pegasus, and a hardy fighter, how could anypony sneak up on her?” Scootaloo said.
“Because Nightmare Moon got her in her sleep!” Applebloom said, poking her cheek where her scab was.
“I don’t buy it.” Scootaloo said.
“I’m sure Rainbow Dash would have put up a fight.” Sweetie Belle said.
“Well we’d need to see the scene of the crime to determine that.” Scootaloo responded.
Applebloom slapped the blankets with her hooves. “That’s it! We’ll go investigate!”
“What, now?” Scootaloo said.
“Yeah! We sneak out and go to the tree and see if we can find any physical evidence of another pony being there!” Applebloom said.
“That’s a great idea!” Sweetie Belle squeaked. “I’ll get my flashlight! We’ll need to sneak past Rarity, though. She’s probably down in the boutique drinking. Especially after a day like today.”
“No problem. Cutie Mark Crusaders sneaky investigators!” Applebloom said.
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>>29727611
Crusaders investigate a crime scene. Deus Vult

Update my journal: http://pastebin.com/cYCvXPXB
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>Equestria. 1100 years ago, Discord's reign has ended at the hooves of the twin sisters Celestia, and Luna.
>With the power of the Elements of harmony, he is no more, mere stone. A memory
>Peace has set in. The establishment of the Royal guard force is made. To maintain, and protect the sisters and their new kingdom.
>Among the guardsmen, a capable young unicorn, Nether Star, is made head of the Magical Anomalies Over watch.
>Monitoring all forms of magic within Equestria. Finding those who would do harm to the empire with dark, or foreign magics.
>But a new, dark force is beginning to make appearances across small, outlying parts of the empire.
>Leaving only carnage, and death in it's wake.
>The Over watch force is tasked to find, and identify the malevolent force, whatever or whoever it may be...


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"Hmmm, this isn't right, I've never seen magic use quite like this before, it seethes into the land and corrupts whatever it touches. Could it be a form of Chaos magic?" You contemplate to yourself, the other guards and your lieutenant surveying the damages.
>Be Nether Star, Captain of the Magical Anomalies Overwatch. Standing clad in silver, gold lined Armor. Your purple fur, black mane, and the yellow 4 pointed star surrounded in silver light, your cutie mark; made you easy to identify.
"This is certainly troubling....the kingdom /must/ be protected from this...whatever it is..."
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>>29728368
>The small farming village, destroyed beyond recondition. Everything burned to ground and laid to waste. Cottages and homes, left in ruin. Bodies burnt and impaled on jagged pikes; from where they came you do not know.
>The design in their hilts and blades were like nothing you had seen before these attacks. Jagged blades and purple dyed wood is what made them.
>"Sir! Our surveying is complete, this /has/ to be a new form of Chaos magic we've never encountered, do you think it could be draconic?"
>Light break, your trusted second in command. He walks to your side, as you observe a stone, seething with a dark aura. As if it infused with the magic's corruption.
>Taking the stone off the ground, you observe the horror lay in front of you.
"Perhaps..." Pausing to observe the damage, the still burning village and maimed corpses scattered around. Blood stained the soil, giving it a red mixed with a grey color.
"But we cant be certain, Dragons don't normally leave bodies. They tend to /eat/ their prey."
>These attacks had been happening in places like this for the last 2 weeks, and it has been...difficult to discover just what it was causing the senseless destruction.
>It always seemed as if you were just one damn day too late.
>Adjusting your armor on your shoulders you make your way to a cottage, still on fire though it was nothing but a crisp. How is it still burning?
"This fire is unnatural." Still holding the stone you order one of the guards to bring you a containment casing, used for taking samples in unknown magics. "We must report back to the castle and have the alchemists test this rock..."
>"A rock?" Light gives you a curious look, "Why a rock sir?"
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>>29728379
"Look at it, Light. It seethes with corruption, perhaps the alchemists at the castle can help identify just what were dealing with. Now, gather everyone, we'll be moving soon."
>"Yes sir!, I'll get the team ready for movement right away!"
"Very good..."
>Light trots away shouting commands to the other guards as you place the stone into the small silver box, enchanted with a magic nullifying spell.
"Don't let anything happen to this, keep it on your person at all times!" You say to the guard holding the case.
>"Yes captain, I will guard it with my life!"
>Light brings in the other guards, gathering behind you.
>"Ready for movement sir, only awaiting confirmation order!"
>Light stands in front of the platoon, 8 in number. All selected by you personally. They are friends, practically family. All skilled Unicorns in combat and surveying magic. You had trained, eaten, and lived together in the Guard-force's barracks.
>They stood at attention, hooves together and faces straight ahead, each clad in dark grey armor, standard issue'd by the Guard-force.
"Gentle-colts! We've been following this pattern for sometime now, were closer now to discovering whats plaguing our lands. We will /find/ it and PURGE it from our kingdom!" raising your hoof, you shout "For Equestria!!"
>"FOR EQUESTRIA!" The guards and Light shout back in unison.
"Move out! We will return to the castle of the two sisters immediately!"
>The formation begins marching, leaving the still burning village, breaking apart into groups of 2s and 3s. Each group conversing among themselves.
>Light walked with you as he usually did, discussing what you had found.
>"It just doesn't make sense!" He says squinting his eyes, "How in Equestria could we have missed this until now, how could we have not seen this one coming?"
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>>29728386
>He was referring to the village. It had been the 5th in the series of attacks since being tasked to find the source of the malevolent force.
"Yes I understand your frustration Light. Too be honest I'm unsure myself of what were dealing with, I spent my entire youth in magic. perfecting the arcane ways of Starswirl's teachings under Celestia's guidance..."
>"Hmph, you always had a natural talent, more so then most unicorns..." Light smirks at you, elbowing your shoulder.
"Hah! well I'm still far from learning as much as Starswirl, and I'm only a /little/ ahead of you Light."
>"Yeah, always just one damn step..."
>You both laugh as you walk.
"Tell me, Light, do you ever look at this world and think; you would do anything to protect it? To, preserve it?"
>You look into the distance, taking in the view if rolling hills of green, mountains piercing into the clouds off in the distance. The sky, partly clear, allowing the perfect amount of shade.
>"Well sure heh, thats why I joined the guard after all..." Light says waving his hoof.
"Right, but would you ever take...drastic measures I mean, to ensure it's safety?"
>"Well, I believe we do what we must for the greater good sir."
"Hm hm hm, good pony." you place your hoof on Light's shoulder.
>A few hours go by, continuing the conversation and making small talk with the other guards, it was a tight nit group you formed with them.
*Rumble* *Rumble*
>"What in the Tarturas is that?" One of the guards says as rumbling continues.
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>A loud burst echoes through the hills and in the distance as a massive creature bursts from the ground, grabbing the gaurd in its tentacle arm.
>"The dark days will come again, with our rebirth, the old ones will rise and RE-MAKE this world for the Black Empire!"
>The massive abomination raises the guard over it's head and attempts to slam him into the earth before Light teleports the guard back to the ground.
>"Just what in Celestia's name is that thing!?" Light shouts as he and the guards ready to attack.
>The creature stood at least 20 feet tall, bipedal. Where its face should be was only a mass of flesh, tentacles portruding from it's chin, and arms. Eyes, glowing amber and speaking in a low-pitched deep bellowing voice. Deep purple skin, almost like scales, and a sash across it's waste; with a runic language written on it you've never seen.
>"You will all face the end soon!!" It boasts, readying for another attack.
"Avoid and counter-attack, surround and destroy it!
>The guards move into position, avoiding the creature's massive arms as it smashes into the ground, flailing it's tendrils.
>"I'll bring it down!!" Light says charging a magic missile spell.
>It fires in a radiant golden light, striking the monster dead in it's chest, knocking it off it's feet.
"Good shot Light, but we cant-" Your cut off by the monster's bellowing voice.
>"Such weak magic....you will all break easy..."
>The creature raises itself back to its feet, grabbing one of the guards.
>"Uhhhhahh! AHHH!" The guard screams in agony, the strength of the monster's grip crushing his armor and body.
"Cant get him in time!!" You say seeing the guard's armor break in it's grasp.
>The creature smashes your fellow guardspony into the earth.
>The sound of clattering armor and breaking bones fills your ears as you see one of your own die, lying there in the dirt. Blood, spurting from his muzzle.
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>>29728396
>"So easy...death will devour you all..."
>Charging for an attack, you envelope yourself in a bubble of arcane magic; leaping into the beast's chest, tackling it and bringing it to the ground yet again.
>Leaping off the massive creature's chest and to it's side you order the remaining guards.
"NOW! Everyone attack!"
>A mass of light envelops the area as you each charge your horns; casting a barrage of arcane at the creature, each shot exploding in a violent display of magic missiles and arcane light.
>Creating a mass of dust a debris, it fades from sight, the attack ceasing as everypony catches their breath.
>"Did we get'em!?" One of the guards say, remaining in a fighting stance.
>"I don't know! What about Dawn!?"
>Dawn's Light, the name of the guard who'd you just lost. An older unicorn, experienced in combat, this however was something you were un-prepared for.
>The dust settles and the monster's corpse lay there, motionless, eyes still glowing a dark amber.
>I journey...to Ny'alotha....for each of us killed...100 more take our place....the darkest days are still ahead...you cannot stop it...hehehehehe..."
>The glow in it's eye fade into a lifeless stare.
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>>29728407
"Ny'alotha? What in Equestria-"
>"Dawn!!"
>your train of thought was interrupted by the snap back to reality, one of your most experienced magi just died.
>"Dawn...how? Not you..." Light takes off his helmet, placing it at his chest, revealing his yellow mane, and orange fur.
"This...how could this have happened..."
>Theres a silence that settles over the battlefield. Each quietly mourning the lost friend.
"We must bring him back to the castle, this new development is something I must bring to the sisters personally."
>Ordering the others to carry Dawn's body back, you continue your journey, no one saying a word the rest of the way back.
"The Black Empire..." You think to yourself, "What could that possibly be?"


Thought I'd take a whack at this dark stuff. If anyone is interested in more just give a heads up.

Questions, comments, concerns all welcome.
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>>29728416
By all means, please continue!
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>>29728416
Is someone new?

Excellent more green!
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>>29728416
A new writefag joining the party? Nice.
Take a seat, make yourself comfortable.
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>>29698440
My apparent has been completely infested with spiders for close to a year now since I had a previous fly infestation before
I'm ok with them, they know who is the boss around here, last night a wasp made its way here but quickly got caught in some spider web and was consumed at some point store this morning
It's a simbols really, I'm too dirty too keep the bugs away and they have no beef with me
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>>29728416
The feedback is much appreciated! Here is another dump.

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>The following morning. Exhausted from the journey and the fight, your team makes it's way to the front castle gates, being greeted by a couple of larger earth ponies.
>The usual types for gate guards. Their size and strength, making them ideal for ground security detail
>"Ah, Nether Star, you've returned!" One of the guards says, happy to see you, "were you able to find the source of the attacks?"
>Looking to the ground, you think to yourself the faceless beast your company had slain.
"We did....and its far worse then we could have imagined." You look back to your fallen friend, "I must bring news of some new development to Celestia and Luna right away! And bring a medical team to care for our wounded!"
>"Yes! Right away Captain!" The guards looks toward the rampart of the front gate, giving orders to the guards tending to the levers operating the gate, "Open the gate, let our fellow guards in! And bring a medical team to care for their wounds, Now!"
>The massive silver barred gates open, a small team of medics trotting towards your group, surveying your friends. And taking Dawn's body onto a gurney, into the medical ward.
>"Just what the Tarturas happened out their, Captain?" The gate guards asks, observing the looks of worry in your eyes.
"We were ambushed, by some kind of monster. It had no face and stood larger then most creatures. It attacked with the ferocity of a dragon. Theres /no/ way we could have been ready for a fight with a monster like that..."
>"Celestia...glad you made it back and...sorry for-"
>You raise your hoof, stopping the guard from finishing.
"Don't, just don't."
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>You close your eyes and hang your head in shame, nothing like this had ever happened before. You were responsible for their safety, and you failed them.
>"Well, Celestia is in the main hall. Open court just started a few hours ago."
>"I'm sure she'll put it on hold for what we have to bring her." Light says as he joins the conversation, holding the containment casing.
"Indeed, lets not tarry any longer. Light, you come with me. The rest of you, be on standby until we receive further word. I'll meet you all back at the barracks."
>"Yessir!" Your remaining guards not receiving medical care leave you, as you and Light make your way to the main hall from the courtyard.
>"We can't let this darkness overtake our home, Nether." Light says as you walk by the market, observing the citizens all going about their day, not a care in the world.
"Whatever it takes...I will protect it." Looking to the castle, you look in awe at the marvel that had been constructed sinse Discord's defeat. "Whatever it takes..."
>Walking up the stairs that lead to the main doors of the castle, you and Light enter the main hall, a line of ponies of all types stand in line. Bringing whatever concerns and petty problems they may have to Celestia or Luna's attention.
>"Yes, that will be taken into consideration, Mudhoof. The trade routes through the Everfree marshlands will have re-enforced security."
>"Thank you your highness! We will be able to safely deliver salt and sugar to the palace much easier now!" The small orange earth pony takes a bow and leaves the podium. Allowing for the next subject to take his spot.
>Light leans in to whisper "We should intervene while we have the chance Nether..."
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>>29730905
"Right right, this line seems to get longer and longer every month."
>Stepping out of line and to the front two sides of the podium, you ask the princess for a private audience.
"Your highness," You speak as respectfully as you can. "Light and myself humbly request a private audience to bring you a new development from the front."
>"Nether Star, Light Break!" Celestia's voice raises, excited to see yours and Light's return. "I'm glad you've made it back, I'd be more then happy to hear your information."
>Celestia leaves the throne quickly exiting the main hall motioning for the two of you to follow.
>"H-hey! what about-" The Pegasus was interrupted by the guards in the hall.
>"The Princess is on official military business, court will resume when she is done!"
"Pays to have perks, Light."
>"Yeah, no kidding." You both say as you follow Celestia out of the main hall to the water fountain outside.
>Meeting the princess in front of the fountain, she greets the two of you again.
>"My prized pupils return!" She paces her hoof on your shoulder, putting you at ease. Her presence was calming and warm. "You look terrible my little ponies, whats happened?"
>Gazing into the fountain at your reflection, you can see the deep bags under your eyes. As well as the pink hue in the where they should be white, the recent conflict and journey taking more out of you then either you or Light had realized.
"My princess," you say taking a bow, "first of all; thank you for this private audience, we will be quick with our report."
>Looking to Light, you nod at him to show her the black stone within the magic casing.
>"We found this at the most recent village we investigated, it seethes with a dark aura." Light reaches into the case and takes out the rock.
>"I see...." Celestia looks into the stone inquisitively. "Is this what has you both so worried?"
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>>29730919
>Light continues the report.
>"On our way back to the castle after completing our survey, we were attacked by a creature of unknown origin, and terrible power."
>Sparing no detail, you both explain the encounter with the monster, which you decided to name, "Faceless one".
>"I see...it took that much power to bring down?" Celestia looks at the stone yet again, still shrouded in a dark aura, "Whatever form of magic this is, it deeply corrupts whatever it comes into contact with. It must be studied indeed. You've done very well bringing it here. And I am deeply saddened by the loss of Dawn..."
"Theres one other thing, your highness, it mentioned a place called 'Ny'alotha' and it said the 'Black Empire' will rise again." Celestia's eyes widen after hearing this. "Do you...know what it could mean?"
>"The sleeping forest..." She whispers to herself, lost in thought.
>"'The sleeping forest', your highness?" Light looks to you and back to Celestia, "What could that be?"
>Celestia closes her eyes and sighs, "I don't know much about it other then that its where an ancient evil sleeps, honestly I thought it was a mere myth. As its never been found before."
"And the Black Empire? What of that your highness?"
>"Enough, you have both done very well bring me this new information. I will handle it from here."
>Her statement catches the two of you off-guard.
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>>29730930
"Wh-what? Princes Celestia please, allow us to continue our search! We can-"
>"No. This situation will be handled. The both of you are dismissed, await further word from the royal guard Colonel."
>Celestia takes the stone and begins to leave the fountain yard into the hallway leading to the alchemy lab.
>"Well this sucks, why did she suddenly get so defensive after you mentioned the Black Empire?"
"I don't know, but I want to find out. I'm gonna need to get stronger too. To fight these abominations." Looking back into the fountain, your mind races thinking of the coming conflict, "If what the faceless one said is true, then we are already on the brink of war."


More to come probably sometime tomorrow night or maybe Saturday.

Also, here is pastebin: http://pastebin.com/x87MRzsH

Same as last time, question, comments, concerns all welcome.
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>>29730693
Spiders are bros. So long as there aren't too many of them. It'd get real ugly if they started hatching babies and got all up in your clothes.
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>>29731084
I keep my clothes in bags because I'm a cool guy plus there isn't enough food for too many spiders
Also the other week I saw a spider make it's slow descent from the ceiling towards my computer and yelled at it, the spider quickly made its way back to the roof and disappeared into the inside of the window
Fucking spiders know who is boss, they aren't my Bros they are allowed to live here as long as they do my dirty work
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>>29727617
The three waited a short while before Sweetie Belle cracked open the door and peered both ways down the hall. Seeing nothing, she motioned to the other two and they all snuck out toward the stairwell. Sweetie Belle went down a few steps, and sure enough, she spotted Rarity lying on top of one of her dress horses, an empty bottle of wine next to her on the floor. She beckoned Scootaloo and Applebloom to follow her, and the three snuck out the door, with Sweetie Belle grabbing a nearby lantern as they left the building. They opted not to take the scooter, as it was too dark to travel that fast, and instead trotted to the scene of the crime. Upon arrival, Applebloom lit the lantern and they saw that the spot had been cordoned off, with yellow tape surrounding the spot they had seen Rainbow laying on. A dark brownish stain covered the grass and a good portion of the tree trunk.
Scootaloo gulped and sniffled a little, but kept her face as stoic as possible. “Okay girls. Let’s… examine the scene.”
“What are we looking for again?” Sweetie Belle asked.
“We need to find out whether or not Rainbow was attacked in real life or in her dream. She’da fought back if she could have, so ah think she was attacked by Nightmare Moon in her dream!” Applebloom said matter-of-factly.
“That seems like a bit of a stretch, but okay. So let’s look at this.. She’s always in that branch, and we saw her here on the ground, so if there was any fighting, it would have happened up in the tree. Gimme a boost, girls.” Scootaloo said, propping herself up on the tree.
Applebloom slipped underneath Scootaloo, boosting her up on her shoulders, then Sweetie Belle crawled underneath Applebloom and with some difficulty lifted the two fillies up.
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“Please… hurry!” Sweetie Belle said through clenched teeth.
Scootaloo pulled herself up onto the branch, then reached down. “Pass me up the lantern.” She said.
Applebloom lifted it up, and Scootaloo grabbed it. She then searched around, looking at the branches and the bark of the tree for any sign there had been fighting. The leaves of the tree, even on the branch itself, were relatively undisturbed. None of the smaller branches had been snapped or bent at all, and there were no markings on the bark of the tree beyond the bloodstains. Disappointed, Scootaloo looked down at her friends.
“I don’t think anything happened up here. I mean, I’m looking, but I’m starting to think you’re right Applebloom. Nothing is broken, there’s no gouges in the bark, or even broken branches. Her… well, the blood just starts and that’s that.” Scootaloo said.
“Not even a scratch anywhere?” Applebloom asked. “Look harder, there’s gotta be somethin’. A ripped leaf or somethin’? Cause ah really don’t wanna be right.”
“Nothing.” Scootaloo responded.
“Applebloom, I can’t-“ Sweetie Belle collapsed before she could finish, falling to the ground and dropping Applebloom. “Uff! Sorry.”
“It’s alright, I’ll get down by myself.” Scootaloo said. She gripped the lantern in her teeth, hugged the tree, and shimmied down. Once there, she set the lantern down and looked at her friends. “Well, I’m forced to admit, I have no idea what happened here. There nothing up the tree, and there’s too many hoofprints around to say that somepony snuck up on her. Even if there were, the pony must have had wings. I think Applebloom is right.”
“So… Nightmare Moon is back?” Sweetie Belle said fearfully. “She’s gonna gobble us up!”
Applebloom rolled her eyes. “She’s not gonna gobble us up. If she was gonna do that, she’d have done it to Rainbow. We do gotta stop her though. Ah am plum out of ideas, though.”
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Twist was working in the shop downstairs, organizing the jars upon jars of sweets. She didn’t have too many responsibilities yet, having just recently got her cutie mark, but she wasn’t going to let her parents down. She’d made a few candies, and she was working on learning more of them, but until then, her responsibility was organizing the jars. However… if she could make something amazing, then maybe she’d be allowed in the kitchen more often. Maybe a really big candy cane!
Twist pulled out the ingredients, and started cooking the two separate colours. She deftly separated the ingredients, mixed them together, and without much effort, she was rolling the candy cane in no time. It was coming out perfectly! She had the shape down, the colours were separate but melted into each other. It was the best candy cane possible! Her parents would be thrilled!
She had just finished when she heard a rattling sound. She turned away from her candy cane to look at the shelf of different hard candies behind her. She heard the rattling again and saw movement on the upper shelf. She got out the step ladder and climbed up to the top, trying to see the source of the noise. The door chime jingled as she was reaching among the jars, and she turned to look briefly. A tall blue unicorn mare was there.
“Oh, be right with you, jutht a thecond.” Twist said.
The mare said nothing, but watched as Twist fumbled among the jars. The ladder jiggled ominously, but she almost had it. Somewhere among the humbugs? She grasped the jar and pulled, and the ladder shook dangerously. Twist lost her hoofing and fell toward the counter. The mare had picked up the candy cane she had just made, and Twist fell right on top of it.
Luna looked at poor Twist, her jaw impaled on the candy cane. She idly lifted something white off the counter, and looked at it. “Oh look Twist, I found your thweet tooth!” She said, and giggled.
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>>29732464
Candy pony caned.

Updated my journal: http://pastebin.com/cYCvXPXB
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>>29732464
Nooo, not Twist!
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>>29730946
I'm always a fan of elite military units getting in over their heads. Keep it up.
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The three Crusaders slowly make their way back to the Carousel Boutique. Their little lantern casting a flickering glow around them as they walk. All three of them are quiet as they walk, seemingly lost in deep thought. Sweetie Belle looks up and opens her mouth, then shuts it again and looks back down. Then she looks up again and stops walking. The other two turn to her in confusion.
“What’s up, Sweetie Belle?” Applebloom asked.
“Yeah, what’s up?” Scootaloo added.
Sweetie Belle puts a hoof to her chin in thought. “Well I was wondering, if Nightmare Moon is attacking ponies in their sleep, does that mean we can’t ever sleep again?”
“Until we figure out a way to stop her, yeah.” Scootaloo said.
Applebloom’s eyes widened as she realized exactly what Sweetie Belle was implying. “Applejack! Granny! Big Mac!”
“Rarity!” Sweetie Belle squealed.
Applebloom dashed off back toward the farm, while Sweetie Belle scurried to the boutique, leaving Scootaloo alone. The Pegasus first made to follow Applebloom, then turned back to Sweetie Belle and galloped after her. Her scooter was at the boutique. That would be more help than simply running.

Rarity found herself in the decrepit castle they had run to when they stopped Nightmare Moon. She looked around in a daze, clucking her tongue at the broken décor. Fallen tapestries, crumbled walls, soiled carpets. What a dump. Why was she here? She started wandering about drunkenly, unable to go in a straight line. She really needed to stop drinking so much. Sweetie Belle always chided her for it every morning. But what was a mare to do when no stallions worth their while lived in Ponyville? Such a Podunk little town. Why did she even live there to begin with? Oh yeah, rent was yet too expensive for her in Canterlot. She was working her way up, like a strong, independent mare.
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>>29733939
She stumbled and caught herself on one of the suits of armor lining the walls. She looked up at it and gave it a drunken smile. “Hello there, my good fellow. How would you like to keep a classy horse company tonight, hmm?” She slurred. “I promise, your lance will be well-polished tomorrow.” She laughed and patted the chestpiece of the suit with a hoof, shaking her head in mirth.
She didn’t see it turn its head to look at her, or see it raise the hoof holding the spear. All she noticed was the ringing in her ears when it clubbed her on the back of the head with the butt of the weapon.
“Ouch! Oh, what in Equestria?” She said. She touched the back of her head with a hoof. It came away clean, but it hurt quite a bit. She stumbled away and finally noticed the suit pull itself off the stand it had been mounted on. Parts of it tore as it yanked away from its fasteners with a screech of metal.
“So desperate for a good lay that you’ll proposition statues, Rarity? Well if it’s something long and hard you’re after, I definitely have that.” The statue said, lowering its spear to point at her.
With a gasp of alarm, Rarity scrambled to her hooves and started running. She didn’t really know where she was going, but there was a pony with a spear where she was, so she wanted to be anywhere else. Her vision swam as she cantered away, the alcohol in her system making things much more difficult than they otherwise would have been. She turned down corridor after corridor, seeing nothing but dark room after dark room. Finally, she decided she’d have to enter one of them eventually, and with much concentration, lit her horn up and stepped inside the next one she passed.
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>>29733943
She found herself in her own boutique, but the walls were made of stone instead of her familiar wood. Her dress horses were here, covered varying amounts of cloth, some finished, some barely begun. Rolls of fabric lay everywhere, with pins, scissors, and ribbons strewn about the floor.
“What is going on here? This isn’t my boutique!” Rarity said.
“No, most definitely not. But I wanted you to feel at home.” One of the dress horses said. It turned to her, and Rarity watched as the head started warping and shifting. A blue bulge appeared on the back of its head which erupted into the starry blue mane of Princess Luna. The rest of the face eventually shaped itself into the muzzle of Celestia’s younger sister, which regarded Rarity with amusement.
“Princess… Luna?” Rarity mumbled. “What are you doing here?”
“Oh, I came to pay one of the other elements of harmony a visit in these trying times, following the death of poor Rainbow Dash.
“Rainbow…” Rarity’s face fell as her drunken brain remembered the death of her friend.
“So very sad, wouldn’t you say? But if you’re in mourning, shouldn’t you ‘dress’ for the occasion?” Luna said, her horn lighting up.
Rarity felt a prick on her leg and winced in pain. She looked down and saw a pin sticking out of her forelimb. She tugged it out with her own magic, staring in confusion. She felt another prick and saw another one sticking out of her leg, next to the bead of blood drawn by the other one. She pulled that one out as well, then felt several more. She finally left them in there and looked up to see where they were coming from, and saw every pincushion, pair of scissors, and seam ripper in the room floating in the air, pointed at her. She looked to Luna and saw the alicorn’s horn alight with magic.
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>>29733945
Rarity feels the effects of drink.

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>>29733945
TFW I'm reading this while drinking.
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>Later that evening, you find yourself back at the Over watch wing of the barracks, sitting in bed wondering to yourself. Getting lost in deep thought.
"Why would she get so secretive, so defensive?" Rolling to your side, looking out the window to the moonlit sky, "maybe Luna would be more open about it? Doubt it, they are practically inseparable. Celestia probably already told her."
>Raising up and sliding off the bed, you exit the room and make your way to the Alchemy ward.
"I'm going to learn all I can, war /is/ coming. And damnit I'm going to be ready to fight!"
>You bypass the many other guards enjoying their liberty and partaking in various drinking games or mindless bantering, as was common among young stallions in the guard.
>The black stone, thats your main focus.
>Approaching the alchemy ward's doors, you are greeted by two royal guards.
"Evening gentle colts, is something wrong?"
>"Uhh, naw, why would you ask that sir?" Says the larger of the two earth ponies.
"Well....theres normally never any guards posted at these doors."
>"Uhh oh. OH! Right, we were ordered by Luna to safe-guard the Alchemy ward while, in her words: 'important works is done'."
>Guess that confirms Celestia telling Luna...
>He closes his eyes and smirks, no doubt patting himself on the back as he remembered how to talk and breath at the same time.
>Mindless fodder...
"Right well, see, I'm actually here for that. I am an..expert in dark magics and Luna herself asked me to...assist in the 'important work'."
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>>29736085
>"Hes an expert bro, let him through!"
>"Sh-shutup! I'm the senior guard here!"
>The two guards whisper back and forth, beginning to raise their voices as they argue.
>Casually walking past them and opening the doors, you enter the alchemy room. The guards still going on with their stupidity.
>"Yeah well, last week I ran out of soap and used yours to wash my ass for a week straight!"
>"Y-you son of a bitch!!"
"Fools..."
>The doors close as you navigate through the dark halls. Your only source of light being the dim glow radiating off your horn. The two guards fighting can still be heard in the hall.
>Continuing through, you find a lone Pegasus sitting on a stool, working tirelessly to examine the black stone.
>"Hey! You cant be in here!" He cries out, turning to face you.
>The skinny young looking Pegasus sat on a wooden stool with his hooves barely touching the ground. His small frame and large glasses made him look as intimidating as his size.
"Relax, I'm Nether Star, the one who brought that thing in!" You claim, pointing at the rock hovering over a set of measuring tools.
>"I see. Well, make yourself at home I suppose. I mean, I heard about you losing a guy to bring it in, guess that means you can look at it at least."
>Alchemists, always quick to avoid conflict.
>The Pegasus continues working, turning back around and scribbling down notes as the stone begins changing colors.
"Any idea of what were dealing with so far?" You ask, trying to subtly probe for information.
>He turns his head to the stone and jabs at it with his quill.
>"Well, good news is we know its chaos magic. Which means we can eventually come up with a counter to it...I think. Bad news is, its very ancient. Possibly older then even Discord..."
>Incredible. Older then Discord? Theres no way.
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>>29736091
>"Which means that theres no way of knowing exactly how it works. Chaos magic is well....chaotic, by nature."
>Examining his notes, you see he must have known what hes talking about. The symbols and writings were neatly done and he obviously had knowledge in alchemy.
"Strange, I normally never see any pony but unicorns working with alchemy."
>"Well we Pegasus /are/ the ones who chemically create rainbows y'know"
>He turns and gives you a smug grin. He did have a point after all.
"Right. Well, if theres nothing more to tell me about this thing. I'll take my leave."
>You begin walking away before he stops you.
>"One thing I will say about it, it may be the darkest form of chaos magic I've come across!"
Navigating back through the clutter of books and small tables littered with vials, you shout back "Good to know! I'll keep that in mind!"
>Exiting the ward you see the two guards still standing there, now rambling on about nothing.
>"Hey."
>"Yeah?"
>"You ever wonder why were here?"
>"Its one of life's great mysteries isn't it? I mean, why /are/ we here..."
>Avoiding eye contact you manage to sneak away, into the library. There was research to be done.
"Hmmm, elder magics? No. Olden ways of arcane? No. Magical ways of cooking- Damnit!!"
>Throwing the book to the side, causing a bit of noise, the other ponies in the library all begin staring in your direction.
>Going through several books and finding nothing. You were growing frustrated. Its been 4 hours in the library and there was nothing going into detail about chaos magic other then explaining how the Elements of Harmony were used to imprison Discord.
"Ungh, my damn eyes are burning. Screw this I'm gonna get some shut-eye!" You say rubbing your temples.
>Making it back to your room, you collapse back into your rack.
*Sigh* "Maybe something will come to me in my sleep...hehehe."
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>"Where, what...how did I get here?" You say, awakening with a gasp, not knowing where you are.
>It was dark, pitch dark. You could only see small shimmers of shadows sputtering about in all directions. Fear and paranoia start overwhelming you, panic began to set in.
>This place was somewhere you could only imagine in a nightmare...
>"You...are weak..."
>"Your friends will...abandon you..."
>Your ears perk up as a dark voice bellowed, echoing in your mind.
"Who's there, Show yourself!" You say turning your head and body in any and all directions, trying to find the owner of the sinister voice.
>You were shouting in the dark, looking down you see laying before a corpse of another pony, who it was you could not tell. In front of you lye a great black forest.
>The trees, twisted with gnarled branches. Dark lights emanating from their branches. You could see a dim red light off in the distance, illuminating what looked to be a cathedral of some kind.
"Who...is?" Gazing down to the body examining it, you still couldn't tell who it was. The body was mangled and ripped apart.
>"Your heart...will explode."
"Enough games! Show yourself!" You shout back again, your voice echoing in the great dark.
>Shadows dance and twirl, invading your mind with horrific visions of death and gore. Flames and darkness begin to envelop you as the voice grows louder.
>"You...are...already...dead..."
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>>29736103
>A feint laughter can be heard from the figures, all mocking you in your fear.
>The flames rise to envelop your entire body, melting your flesh and burning your fur, giving off a horrid stench.
>The pain felt so real.
"UHH HA AHHHHHHHH!"
"NUHH GUHH!!" Waking and violently flailing about, covered in sweat, panting, you slowly catch your breath.
"Was only...a dream...heh" placing your forehoof on your head, you wipe the sweat from your muzzle. "Celestia...what an insane dream, Should talk to Luna when I can."
>Your attention is quickly brought to your door, out in the hallway you could hear numerous hooves hitting the ground and voices echoing down the barracks.
>Opening your door you see several guards making their way out, all wearing their armor.
>"Feels good being left out doesn't it..." Light says standing in his doorway directly across from yours, leaning against the wall.
"The Tartarus is going on?"
>"Word is that another attack happened, this time it was a larger town. And guess what the recon team's description of the attackers were..."
"Lemme guess; large tentacle arms, no face, and really big?"
>"You got it."
>Damnitall! You couldn't believe they would be so foolish as to go hunting these things. They dont know what they're capable of...neither do you for that matter. You've only fought the one.
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>>29736117
>Looking back toward your armor rack, you frantically rush over to put it on.
>"Sir, what are you doing?" Light says entering your room.
"Whats it look like? I'm gonna follow their march and assist how I can. I need to gather information on just what these...'things' are."
>"We have orders to standby for word though, directly from the Guard Colonel."
"Screw orders! Besides, I'm not going off to fight. I'm merely taking a stroll...through town. You want to join?"
>Smirking at Light, he knew what you were going to do. And you knew he would want to join.
>"A /stroll/, yeah! Of course sir I'll join you, hahah!."
>Both dawning your sets of armor and leaving the barracks, you see the platoons of guards forming up; preparing to march out of the castle grounds.


All I got for now, maybe have more tomarow night or Sunday night.

As always, questions, comments, concerns all welcome

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So, one of my vidyas got an update today.

Pic related. Isn't she cute?
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>>29736518
She is very cute. What game is that?
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Warframe. Free-to-play action game, magic robot space ninja simulator thing.

That's one of the pets you can bring to missions.
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>>29736571
I thought so. It's just a pet though? Why can't you play AS the thing? Lame.
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>>29736603
Yeah. A little bit of a disappointment. It is the most damaging pet though, so it's not that bad.
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>>29736644
I avoided the game because I didn't like the look of any of the "frames" or whatever they're called. Featureless shaped blobs don't do anything for me at all.
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>>29736672
The aesthetic is pretty hit-or-miss. That hasn't changed. Lore is that they're robot suits built around blobs of twisted flesh. You do eventually unlock the person you're playing as, which is mostly human. You can pop out for a short bit for some powerful crowd control that activates an OP-as-shit passive buff, but outside of that they're not very useful.

Though, I'm mostly in it for the gameplay. Lore and stuff is just a bonus.
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Since we're on the subject of vidya. I just picked up Layers of Fear on xbox. This is my first horror game. Wish me luck!
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>>29736709
Yeah, I got other games I'm playing, so I've avoided it. Glad you like it, though.
>>29736982
Good luck! Play Amnesia
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>9
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Rarity squealed and turned tail, she leaped out the door and dove around the corner as quickly as she could. She felt a stinging on her flank but didn’t stop to investigate the damage. She knew she needed to get as far away from Luna as possible. She limped as quickly as she could down the halls, hunting for somewhere she could hide, somepony to help, or something she could use as a weapon. She eventually found more statues, their spears still held at the ready, and she quickly nabbed a weapon as she cantered past. Her breath was heavy in her ears as she entered what must have been the throne room once upon a time. It was wide open. Too wide for safety, but the hall she’d just left likely had Luna following behind her. Rarity quickly looked around, didn’t see anypony, and dove into the room, and hid behind the throne. She curled up behind the massive seat, held the spear in front of her, and tried to calm herself. She listened for any sound that might be out of place, and waited.
Rarity’s breathing eventually slowed. Her ears swiveled back and forth as she tried to hear any hint of Luna: The clopping of hooves, the beating of wings, or even just breathing. When nothing made itself evident for several minutes, Rarity risked a peek. As soon as looked around the throne, she came face to face with Luna, bumping noses with her.
“You can’t hide, Rarity.” Luna grinned, her sharp teeth filling her smile. Her cat-like eyes were filled with a humorless mirth. “We’re in your dream, and here, I’m the ruler.” Luna laughed, and she and the throne grew impossibly large, spinning in place so that Luna faced Rarity, blocking off her escape. Rarity would have to fly to get out, and that was impossible.
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Luna slammed a massive hoof down on either side of Rarity, shattering stone and throwing the white mare to the ground. Rarity was pelted with shards of rock. She covered her head until the stone shower ended, then looked up at the huge blue mare towering over her. Luna opened her mouth wide, a long and pointed tongue falling out of her maw. Rarity watched as her teeth changed shape into massive pins and scissors, her tongue changing into a coiled length of thread. Luna leaned down, her now button-eyes looming large in Rarity’s vision. Rarity covered her head again and curled up, not wanting to see her death coming. She felt Luna’s hot breath on her body and waited.
She cried out as she felt an impact on her head “Noooooooo!” She felt it again, and knew she was going to get chewed up. It hit her again, then again, but she didn’t actually feel any more pain beyond that in her flank. Something hit her in the head again, something blunt. She shook her hoof at it, trying to drive Luna away. It hit her again, and she realized somepony was calling her name.
“Rarity! Wake up right now! Please!” Sweetie Belle shrieked in her ear. Her hooves kept smacking Rarity about the face and head.
Hesitantly, Rarity peeked out between her hooves. She was in her boutique. Sweetie Belle was here. Luna was not. She swiftly sat up and enveloped Sweetie Belle in a huge hug. “Oh thank Celestia! Sweetie Belle! I’m so glad it was just a nightmare. Oh! That was simply awful!” Rarity exclaimed. She rocked Sweetie Belle about, then winced as she rolled onto the right half of her flank. Something was hurting her. She put Sweetie Belle down and stood up, trying to get a good look at her rear end. She walked gingerly over to her standing mirror and turned to get a better look. There, embedded in the flesh around her cutie mark, were several pins, a seam ripper, and a pair of scissors.
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“Oh Rarity I’m so glad you’re okay! She came after you!” Sweetie Belle cried. Tears were rolling down her cheeks, and she clung to her sister as tightly as she could while Rarity worked to pull the items out of her sensitive rear. Blood streamed down her pure white fur, staining her entire leg red. Scootaloo was sitting silently in a corner, watching the two, while Sweetie explained the situation. “Nightmare Moon is attacking ponies in their dreams, and it’s REAL! That’s what killed Rainbow Dash!”
“Sweetie Belle, I admit your argument is sound, seeing as how there are several items in my posterior that I remember being hurled at me in my dream, but it’s much more likely I just rolled onto them in the sleep.” Rarity chided.
“No! Nightmare Moon attacked you, and she’s going to attack other ponies if we don’t stop her! We need Twilight’s help! She can get a message to Celestia, and Celestia can stop her!” Sweetie squealed in frustration.
“Sweetie Belle, I’m very sad that Rainbow is gone, too, but we can’t just jump at ghosts. Nightmares aren’t real.” Rarity said.
“Rarity, how could you possibly have rolled onto the scissors like that? They were several inches deep!” Sweetie Belle insisted.
“And that will teach me a valuable lesson about drinking. But it’s not something to get so worked up over. I really think you need to go to bed. Where’s Applebloom?” Rarity asked.
“She went to go save her family from Nightmare Moon, and we need to help her!” Sweetie Belle shouted.
“Sweetie Belle, stop raising your voice, that’s not how you ask nicely.” Rarity scolded.
“URRRRRGH!” Sweetie Belle grunted, and marched to the front door. “Come on, Scootaloo, we’re going to go see Twilight, before she gets killed by NIGHTMARE MOON!” Sweetie Belle shouted. “AND DON’T GO BACK TO SLEEP WHILE WE’RE GONE!”
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>>29738155
Rarity doesn't believe the children.

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>>29738163
I'm happy Rarity escaped. For now.
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>>29738163
If that bitch does not listen to the fillies and dies I got no complaints.
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>>29737029
>Amnesia
Muh nigguh.
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>>29704102
Does anyone have any stories involving Kelpies?
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>>29739556
I found this while looking for horror. It's a little short story about a kelpie.
http://xxmarkingxx.deviantart.com/art/Watcher-Special-pg1-640113381
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It's got pictures, so even Gaston can read it.
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>>29740262
And then he dies. Bad end.
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>>29740268
Thanks there friendo. Kelpies never get enough attention.
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>>29738163
Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle climbed on the scooter and were off into the night as Rarity limped out the door, shouting after them. “Sweetie Belle come back here this instant! It’s the middle of the night!” She huffed as they disappeared, the tiny speck of light getting further and further away. Rarity growled to herself in frustration, but shuffled back inside, fussing with her bandages.

Twilight was reading quietly in her library. Books lined the many, many walls, extending far into the distance. Farther than her library could actually go. Golden Oaks was big, but this was impossibly huge in all directions except down. Row upon row of books, and she was planning on reading every single one. Even in her dreams, Twilight’s appetite for reading was insatiable. It was only unfortunate that she never remembered what she was reading when she woke up in the morning. This time, however, she was distinctly aware of the book in front of her. It was an old copy of Predictions and Prophecies, and it was open to the page about the myth of the mare in the moon. She remembered reading this the day Nightmare Moon came back. Why she was reading it again, she didn’t know. The mare in the moon was gone, and Nightmare Moon was defeated. She and her new friends had seen to that.
The mare in the moon grew green slitted eyes and opened a mouth full of sharp teeth. “But is she really gone, Twilight Sparkle?” It said.
Twilight jumped back and dropped the book with a gasp. “Nightmare Moon? We defeated you! We turned you back into Luna!”
The page ripped open and Luna slowly pulled herself out of the page. “Yes, and I’m very upset about that. All that power gone, and for what? So ponies can keep sleeping at night? It’s disgraceful. But if I can’t rule the real world, I’ll simply rule this one. Even Celestia can’t stop me here.”
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Twilight’s eyes widened as she made the connection. “You killed Rainbow Dash! That’s why it didn’t look like she’d put up a fight!”
“Oh, you are the smart one! Very good. Smarter than you white friend.” Luna gloated, grinning that toothy smile.
“Oh no, not Rarity too!” Twilight gasped.
Luna simply smiled, and the books around the two started to decay, pages slipping out of rotting spines and fluttering down to the wooden floor. The bookshelves shrank in size, until the library was the size of the real life Golden Oaks library. The tree was rotted, the wood started to stink of mold and fungus. Leaves fell from its dying branches and Twilight could hear the creak of the wood slowly giving way under its own weight. There was a loud snap, followed by a crashing sound outside. Twilight figured her balcony had just fallen apart. She didn’t take her eyes off Luna, though, she was probably the next target, so she didn’t want to give Luna any openings. Her horn lit up, and she stared the alicorn down, waiting for her to make a move.
“You assume this works the same way the real world does, my dear Twilight.” Luna said from behind her.
Twilight spun around in shock, and looked at the two Luna’s that were flanking her. She scrambled up the nearby stairs, trying to put both of them on the same side of her. Another Luna appeared up the stairs, blocking her path. Twilight concentrated, lit up her horn, and teleported outside the library. She appeared in a flash outside the front door and looked around quickly, trying to spot Luna. Luna opened the front door and walked casually out, reading a book. Twilight didn’t waste any more time and fired a beam of purple light at the princess. It burned right through her, but Luna didn’t even flinch. She looked casually down at it, bemused.
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“Well Twilight, at least we can say you have a lot of SPINE!” Luna said, and the book she was holding grew massive, and she swung it downward at Twilight.
Twilight flinched and teleported again, appearing behind Luna. She fired another beam, this one piercing Luna’s head. Luna went cross-eyed and looked at the hole in her forehead. She frowned, and her slit-eyes focused back on Twilight.
“Surely my sister taught you better than that. Shooting a princess. Honestly!” Luna chided. “That’s high treason. You know what the penalty is for that, right, ‘My faithful student’?” Luna said, her features twisting into Celestia, with a bleeding hole right through her skull.
Twilight hesitated at the face of her mentor, and she looked away, her mouth a tight line. She didn’t register the snapping sound fast enough, and when she looked up, a heavy piece of Golden Oaks crashed down on her, the rotten wood splintering on her back. She felt something snap, and her vision went white with pain.
Luna kept Celestia’s appearance as she stood imperiously in front of Twilight, looking down at the broken mare. “Oh, my faithful student. For the crimes of high treason, conspiring to take down one of the rightful rulers of Equestria; Nightmare Moon, and the crime of attacking a princess…” Luna said, looking down at Twilight. “…you are found guilty. Do you have anything to say for yourself?”
Twilight could barely breathe. Her ribs were broken, and she was fairly certain one had punctured a lung, as her breathing was difficult, and felt wet. She looked up dazedly, and blood bubbled out of her mouth.
Luna looked down at Twilight, and her eyes and teeth shifted back to being sharp, and deadly. “You’re well-read, I’m sure you know what happens next.” She said. “We throw the book at you!” Luna cackled and brought her book down on Twilight’s head. Twilight’s vision went dark.
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>>29740461
Twilight engages in some... 'heavy reading'.

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>>29739556
Kelpies are basically water horses right?
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>>29741110
Meat eating, child abducting, rapist water horses, yes.
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>>29741173
Wew that's hot and scary
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>>29741173
>rapist
Let's see some green of that
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>>29741110
Pretty much. They disguise themselves as normal horses and try to get people to pet or ride them, they then turn their bodies into a sticky goo that is almost impossible to break free from short of cutting off the attached limb.
Then they drag you into the nearest body to drown you and once you're dead they consume every part but the liver.
They also had constantly wet manes that would be tangled with kelp as well as the ability to turn into women and summon small floods to catch people who wouldn't touch them but still got too close to them
Here, have a comic. http://m.imgur.com/gallery/j32bm
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>"So, been meaning to ask, you look as if you didn't get a wink last night, whats bothering you sir?" Light asks, seeing the tiredness in your face.
"I had a...dream last night, though it felt more like a vision more then anything else."
>"Vision of what? Was it a nightmare?"
>Looking at the ground recalling the horrific voice. Images of what you saw re-appeared in your mind as you look at Light.
"I...I don't know. But its nothing now. I must have eaten something spoiled is all, hah."
>Light looks back ahead, he was smart and he knew something was up.
>You had been following the guard battalion for 4 hours. Taking cover and remaining hidden as best you can behind whatever the land provided. Marching into an open field, a larger town came into view. A trading village used as a hub between the castle of the two sisters and Griffonstone.
>Whether or not it had been attacked from this distance it was hard to tell if it had been attacked or not.
>Nearing the town, storm clouds gathered overhead. Bringing thunder and lightning with them, a dark omen of what was coming.
>"Shouldn't the weather Pegasus be taking care of that?" Light asks looking to the sky.
"They /should/. But not if they're all....oh no."
>The buildings, now coming into view, were but cracked and broken ruins of what was the former trade town.
>The situation seemed to grow more grim. For now you both knew. The village had already been attacked. And everypony was no doubt, already dead.
>"Not far now..." Light says, the road to the village's main road coming clearly into view.
>Pointing to a brush not far from the side of the town, you motion for Light to take cover.
"We'll gather what we can, see how they fight. They may be strong, but thats an entire battalion down there. No way one of those things could stand up to that."
>Rain began pouring down. Thunder roaring as both you and Light take cover under the tree, resting on a hill overlooking the village. The perfect view.
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>Gazing down, the battalion was coming to a halt. Breaking into formations as the commander stands in front of them, surveying the area.
>"No...they're walking into an ambush!"
>A loud crack of lightning booms in the sky, and with it; a series of muffled, tortured roars burst from underground.
>Dark shadows seep from the very earth, and erupt in an magnificent display of chaotic forces as lightning cracks the sky.
>So many Faceless ones, now stand surrounding the battalion. More then can be counted.
>One of which, much larger then the rest, shrouded in shadow and a dark aura spoke. It's voice booming in the distance in a deep tone.
>"At last...the feeding hour." Its voice booms in your minds. "Come little ones, savor your fear as we feast upon it!"
>"ATTAAAACK!!!" The battalion commander screams, rallying his forces to defend themselves.
>So many charge head first into the fray, magical sparks and explosions echoing against the horizon as the fight ensues.
>The battle rages, so many of your fellow guardsponies die in the first few minutes. The faceless ones ripping them apart, bathing the soil in thier blood; melding in the rain. Making the earth itself turn a red hue.
>"Yeess.....eyyessssss." The larger creature's voice boomed once again.
>"Missile formation!" The unicorns yelled, gathering to fire a barrage of magic at the faceless army.
>A flurry of magic and arcane rains down onto the faceless army, to no avail. Bringing down very few of their targets.
>The larger Faceless one stands in the back, not even moving, only mocking and taunting the guards as they fight on.
>"Do not fight death...welcome it...embrace it..." It says in a condescendingly sympathetic voice.
>"This...this is horrible..." You both look on, watching them all die. Very few of the abominations being brought down.
>"Air guard! Sweeping formation! Impale them!"
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>>29742162
>Many of the Pegasus are grabbed from the sky, being wrapped and crushed within the tendrils of the beasts.
>The sound of bone cracking can be heard. Coupled with the horrific sound of blood curdling from their screams, as they have the life squeezed from them.
>More screaming can be heard then fighting now. The soldiers realizing their struggle was in vain.
>More death, more blood...
>Eventually, only the battalion commander was left standing, surrounded by the dark army.
>2 of the beasts grab him in their tendrils, holding him down. Forcing him to kneel in the muddy blood soaked ground.
>The foreboding shadowy figure, now standing before him.
>"Get off of me!" He yells, remaining strong to the end. "I bow to no such creatures!!"
>"Struggle no more..."
>Lightning cracks the sky once again, illuminating the battlefield.
>"Burn in TAR- GAH...huhhhhh..."
>A large pike impales his back, tearing straight through his armor. The faceless creature brings up the pike and stabs it into the ground, leaving his body hanging upside down.
Blood running down the hilt of the pike as his life flows out of him.
>"A testament, to /My/ glory..." The creature turns and begins to walk away, "Death's cold embrace, awaits you all..."
>The faceless army begins moving away from the village, fading into dust and shadow, returning to the earth, as the rain begins to let up.
"They've gone, Quickly! We must help!" You say, practically flying to your hooves.
>Sprinting down the hill doing your best not to trip over yourself, You and Light head striaght for the commander, still barely breathing.
>"We've got to get him down, get that...thing from his back!"
"Commander! Are you still alive?!" *pant* "Speak!"
>The commander slowly opens his eyes. He wheezes, trying to take in air. "Huhhhh uhhhh...th-they are..."
"Get him down, slowly. Easy now..."
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>>29742174
>Commander Firespark, a tenacious old Pegasus, large in stature and stronger then most earth ponies.
>You both take the pike from the ground, gently lowering it down so not to cause him anymore pain.
>"Sir stay with us, we can get you back to the castle!" Light says as he looks over Firespark's body.
"I had no idea it was /you/ leading these ponies. Celestia no doubt wanted her best on this assault."
>Firespark was a veteran guard, been in the guardforce for over twenty years and could still fight like a young stallion in his prime.
>Light continues examining the wound, "We-we cant take it out without causing more damage, the stake is jagged." Light looks up to you, "And its in deep."
>"F-forget it heh, I'm done." Firespark attempts to speak, struggling with every word, "Y-you must go back to the castle...inform Celestia and Luna of our defeat here, they must know the evil we face..."
>He pauses, hacking up blood and gasping for air.
"Please, save your strength. We can-w-we..."
>"Enough captain, heheh, if theirs one thing I know is when a subordinate doesn't know what they're talking about..."
>He takes another breath, letting out his last words.
>"You must find a way...to beat them. They are like nothing we've fought before. The magic they use...its too much for our own. Dont let the kingdom we've fought so hard for...burn."
>Thunder echoes in the distance, as he takes his last breath now lying there motionless, dead.
>Looking at his lifeless body in horror, grimace covers your face as you realize.
"This, this is the vision I saw."
>Light interjects "You /knew/ this would happen sir!? Why didn't you-" You cut him off.
"Not this exactly, no! But in my nightmare, a body was laying before me. I couldn't tell who it was. But now..."
>Silence sets in, screaming so loud as you both take in the view. A field of bodies, crushed and frayed beyond recondition.
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>>29742181
"We must turn their powers against them...I will learn chaos magic if I have to!" You smash your hoof into the ground, gritting your teeth as the feeling of rage built up in your body.
>Light looks at you not knowing what to say. "B-but...thats against royal decree! Such forms of magic are forbidden!" He goes on, "We will find a way Nether!"
"Look around you." Tears begin forming, doing your best to hold them back; you explain your reasoning, "Our kingdom, our /home/ is dying! We cant limit ourselves!"
>Silence once again sets in, the two of you no longer having anything to say.
>"W-we should...head back. I'll g-grab Fire..." Light takes the stake from Firespark's lifeless body, picking him up onto his back.
"I must seek council with Luna, about this vision as well..."
>Silence. Thats all that was heard, other then the sound of hoof steps and ambiance of the surrounding fields.
>As you, and Light made your way back to the castle, carrying Fire on your back, wrapped in a cloth taken from the village that now lay in ruin.
>His blood, stained the cloth. His body grew heavy on your shoulders, you had to take turns carrying him due to his size and weight.
"Light...do you remember a few days ago, when I asked you if you would do anything to protect our home?"
>Light speaks softly, both of you were still shaken by the horrible sight you bore witness to.
>"Yeah-y-yes sir, I Remember." He says staring at the ground. Seemingly knowing what your about to say.
"I meant what I said when I told you I would do anything to preserve our kingdom." You look back at the body on your back, "Our friends, and family..."
>Looking back ahead, and remembering the black stone you brought to the castle just days ago...
"I will find a way to protect it all!"
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>>29742189
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>Arriving back at the castle gates, the guards look in horror as you bring in the body of their once proud leader.
>"Wh-what happened! Wheres everypony else!?" A guard asks.
"Dead. Now stand aside." You say to the guard. He moves immediately, hearing the seriousness in your tone. Looking up, you see your next destination.
>Leaving the body with the medics and going straight for Luna's chamber, your resolve only grows.
"Light, I wish to speak to Luna alone, I must ask her of this nightmare. And if there is reason to it's madness."
>Light hesitantly agrees, not wanting to leave your side. "Y-yes sir, I hope you find the answers to what your looking for."
>Placing your hoof on his shoulder, you give a comforting look.
"We will endure, as we always have my friend. We will win this war, one way..." You begin walking away and whisper under your breathe, "or another."
>"The princess is asleep /captain/, she will grant no audience!"
"You don't understand sir! I must have her counsel, this information-"
>"We /know/ of what happened out there, word has already been spread among the guard from the front gatehouse, just as we know of your direct violation of orders!" He leans in, speaking directly to your face. "Don't think that because Celestia showed you favor that the Uniform Code of Imperial Justice doesn't apply to you..."
>This bastard...he would impede your seeking of knowledge. Plebeian fool...
"Very well then, sir. I will await when she is able."
>The earth pony stood there, standing tall over you, his rank; only one above your own. One of Luna's personal guards.
>Rendering a salute and walking away, he boasts as he shrinks in the distance, his voice echoing down the hall.
>"Don't think you wont be punished, you /will/ face consequences for you actions Nether!"
>Gritting your teeth and looking back, you quickly compose yourself and walk away.
"Damned fool. I MUST have answers!"
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>>29742200


All I got for tonight, More will go up probably Tomorrow night.

Questions, comment, concerns, all welcome as always!

Also, Pastebin:http://pastebin.com/x87MRzsH
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>>29742212
I do actually have a bit of criticism.
You're moving a bit too fast.
There's a bunch of monsters coming from some dark realm, and there's the army going to fight them, and they lose, and a bunch of ponies died, but there's very little actual buildup to any of it. You started out with action, and that's fine, but the brief lull between it and this next fight didn't actually feel like it gave any answers or backstory beyond the brief bit where Celestia seemed to know /something/. Everything feels incredibly rushed, and there isn't enough time in between fights for me to feel like I should be getting attached to any of these ponies. You could slow it down, give us some descriptions, maybe have them doing something normal while they're in the barracks or what-have-you, and actually sit them down to hash out their plans before they go rushing off to their next fight.
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>>29742257
Noted, appreciate the critiques, character development is very important and I'll find a way to explore more on it.
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>>29740472
Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo raced through the dark city, headed for Golden Oaks Library. Applebloom had a much longer way to run than they did, so they weren’t exactly sure how much time they had, but they knew they needed to hurry. Applebloom would take care of her family when she got there, they needed to be in charge of bringing backup. Scootaloo skidded to a stop in front of the library, jumped off her scooter, and started pounding on the door.
“Twilight! Spike! Wake up! We need help!” Scootaloo shouted.
There was a commotion inside, and they heard the pit-pat of little dragon feet hurrying to the door. It creaked open, and Spike stood there, tears wet on his cheeks and blood on his claws. He sniffled and stared at the two fillies.
“I don’t know what *sniff* happened.” He blubbered. “She was sleeping, then I heard her gasping, so I got up to check, but the next thing I knew, she just… she just…” Spike broke down and started sobbing.
The two fillies looked at each other, and Scootaloo leaned down and put a hoof on Spike’s shoulder.
“Spike, this is gonna sound pretty awful of me, but we know what’s happening. Nightmare Moon wasn’t defeated, she’s attacking and killing ponies in their dreams, and she’s after Twilight’s friends now. We need you to send a letter to Celestia, okay? Tell her that Nightmare Moon killed Twilight, and that we need her help at Sweet Apple Acres, okay?”
Spike nodded mutely, snot leaking out of his nose.
“Do it now, Spike, I know you’re upset, but we need to handle this immediately. We’ll be back after we check on Applebloom’s family.” Scootaloo gets back on the scooter, Sweetie Belle holding onto her tightly. “And if Rarity comes by, tell her where we’re going!” She yelled, as the two disappeared down the road.
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>>29742971
I remember that.
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>>29743674
Applejack stood staring at the tree in front of her. It looked like an apple tree, but the bark was covered in strange whorls and swirls. The fruit on it, though shaped like apples, were the colour of a clear night sky. The tree itself towered above the rest of the trees in the orchard, dwarfing any of the trees nearby.
“Ah don’t quite know what ah should make of you. Y’all clearly don’t belong here. Y’just smack of magic, and though ah do love my granny, ah never trusted magic.” Applejack muttered.
She looked around at the rest of the orchard. Her regular apple trees looked so small and threadbare compared to this one, and those apples were massive. Easily the size of a pony. They’d certainly sell for a lot, if anypony was interested in buying a dark blue apple. She sighed and turned away from it. She’d talk to Twilight about it tomorrow, ask her why this tree was in her orchard. Until then, she had work to do.
“Oh come on! You’re not even going to kick it? Isn’t that what you Apples do? Kick trees?” A voice said in frustration.
Applejack turned around to see that the tree was gone, and in its place stood Princess Luna. Though she looked a lot more sinister than Applejack remembered. Her eyes were green and cat-like, and her teeth looked kind of sharp.
“Oh hey Luna. Nah, ah ain’t foolish. Ah figured ah’d just leave it for ponies who know that kind of stuff better than ah do.” Applejack said matter-of-factly.
Luna rolled her eyes and grunted. “Ugh. Such delicious irony wasted because of common sense. I even had a delightful pun ready for when you were lying broken and bleeding on the ground under the falling apples.”
Applejack narrowed her eyes and bent low to the ground. “Y’all sayin’ what ah think yer sayin’?”
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>>29743682
“Yes, Applejack. I killed Rainbow Dash.” Luna said with a wicked smile.
Applejack leaped as soon as the words left Luna’s mouth. Luna was impacted by the orange cannonball and knocked to the ground. She laughed as Applejack started beating her in the face, her teeth flying out of her now broken jaw. One of her eyes swelled with blood as her brow was cracked. Applejack’s hooves were scraped and covered in blood as she continued pounding Luna’s smug, laughing mug into applesauce. When she finally stopped, breathing hard, she looked down at the mess she’d made and crawled slowly off Luna, spitting on the prone princess.
“Ah figured you’d put up more of a fight or somethin’. Princess and all. Guess ah figured wrong. Ah’m probably goin’ to prison fer this.” Applejack said, turning away.
“Oh no, Prison won’t be where you’re going.” Luna said, wheezing. She stood up slowly, her pulped head lolling weirdly. It slowly began to pull itself back together, bones knitting and bloodstains disappearing before Applejack’s eyes.
“Wut in tarnation…?” Applejack said, aghast.
“I think you’ll find, Applejack, that I’m very upset with you and your friends. You see, like I was telling Twilight not too long ago, yes, I’m Luna again, but I’m still rotten to the core!” Luna crowed, as an apple flew off one of the trees and struck Applejack square in the face.
“Consarn it! That buckin’ hurts!” Applejack cursed.
“It’s supposed to!” Luna gleefully shouted, hurling more at the farmer.
Luna kept the bombardment coming from all sides. Apples that were ripe, rotten, large, small, and average, pelted into Applejack. At first the farmer covered her head with her hooves, protecting herself from the onslaught, but when she realized it wasn’t going to let up, she knew she had to get somewhere else. She peeked out for a moment, feeling a particularly solid apple strike the back of her skull, and spotted the barn.
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>>29743689
Applejacked up.

Updated my journal: http://pastebin.com/cYCvXPXB
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>>29743721
Savage Luna be. Can't wait to see where this leads.
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>bump
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>>29742019
>You will never be fucked a gooey shape shifting water mare in heat
I miss the strange waifu threads.
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>>29743721
“An Apple…” *Smack* “…a day…” *Crack* “…keeps the doctor…” *Splat* “…away!” Luna crowed, punctuating her words with apple projectiles.
Applejack could feel the bruises growing. She needed to do something or go somewhere, so she decided to take her chances. She glanced at Luna once more, then kept her head ducked down and ran for the barn. Apples splattered on the ground behind her, more than a few still managing to pelt against her flank and legs. She could hear Luna laughing behind her.
“What makes you think that’s any safer? That’s where you keep all your tools, isn’t it?” Luna shouted after her.
Applejack ignored her and dove inside, slamming the door behind herself. She knew exactly that this was where the tools were kept. That was why she came here after all. She grabbed the axe, a length of rope, and hid in one of the many empty stalls that lined the spacious interior. She wasn’t sure how all this shit Luna was pulling worked. She’d pulped the mare’s skull, and she was perfectly fine, so she didn’t actually think hitting her with an axe would work, but she wasn’t going to sit idly by and die. Rainbow’s death was unfortunate and sad, but at least it gave Applejack some forewarning.
Luna walked slowly down the middle of barn, packed earth hard beneath her hooves, giving off a soft clopping sound as she moved. “Applejack, please. We both know how this is going to end, and I still have three more of you to deal with. I had to practice on some others while I was waiting for all of you to fall asleep, but only two were successful. Your little sister is unfortunately a very light sleeper, by the way.”
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>>29745915
Applejack’s eyes widened as she realized that Applebloom had been telling the truth! This was Luna, not Nightmare Moon, but to a filly having a bad dream, they were the same thing. She reared up in anger and leapt out of the stall, heavy axe between her teeth. It impacted the back of Luna’s neck, and the alicorn’s body slumped to the ground as control of her body was severed. Luna merely had a mild look of surprise on her face as her head rolled away on the dirty floor.
“Oh! There you are! How very surprising. I did not see that coming at all.” Luna said sarcastically. “If you were that interested in the barn, though, why didn’t you go for something bigger? A lonely mare like yourself surely wants to get ‘plowed’!” Luna giggled maniacally.
Applejack was busy trussing Luna’s body up in rope, but she heard the implication in Luna’s voice and swiveled to look at where she kept the farm’s plow. Sure enough, it was flying through the air toward her, deadly point shining menacingly. Applejack dove to the side, but felt the it slash viciously across her side. She tumbled to the ground, a hoof pressed against her injured torso. She glanced down at it quickly. It seemed to just be a flesh wound, but there was no time to stop and check. She hopped to the side as the plow dove at her position. It missed this time, but the tip dug into the soil, tossing dirt every which way. It got stuck in the ground, and Applejack felt a mild sense of satisfaction. Then she found herself face first on the ground, a ringing in her ear.
“Can you DIG IT!” Luna’s head laughed. She swung the shovel again and swatted Applejack on the ass, tossing the orange mare along the ground.
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>>29745924
Applejack’s vision swam. She stumbled to her hooves, falling down the first few times until her hooves finally listened to her. She looked hazily in the direction of the door and wobbled toward it, unsteady, but as fast as she could manage. Luna, meanwhile, had managed to loosen the rope Applejack had hogtied her body with, and her body was pulling itself upright. Applejack exited the barn with as much haste as she could muster, and ran into the orchard. She passed under the canopy of leaves and tried to think properly. Her side was bleeding, her head was probably bleeding, and she had literally chopped Luna’s head off, and hadn’t stopped her. She didn’t know what to do. Pain wasn’t waking her up, and there was no way she was going to win this fight the way it was currently going. Luna could have simply blasted her and been done with it, there was no way she could actually stop a princess even outside of a dream, so what was her game? Applejack wished Twilight was here, but that didn’t seem like it was going to be an option anymore. She felt tears welling up behind her eyes, but quickly forced them back. This was not the time for crying. Once she was safe, and her friend were taken care of, then she could allow herself the luxury of crying.
A mocking voice floated over to Applejack on the wind. “Even if you wake up, you must sleep again sometime, Applejack. There’s never an escape from your dreams. Just as night follows day, so must sleep follow wakefulness. This is my realm, and one where my law is absolute. You will never have rest again.”
Applejack grabbed a branch from a tree nearby, biting off the excess and hid behind a tree, waiting. She closed her eyes for just a moment, breathing heavily.
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>>29745938
Applejack fights back valiantly.

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>>29745954
Applebloom better hurry her flank
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Safety bump.
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bampu!
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>>29742200
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>Exiting the hall to Luna's chamber, you run into Light, looking a little worried.
>"Mind explaining what that was all about earlier? You seemed distant..."
"Yes, I uh, am just a little shaken up by all this happening so fast, I admit." Looking to the ground, you think more of your dream. "The dream I had...it showed me a place I didn't think possible to exist, I'm not sure if it was a part of the pits of Tartarus, but it sure seemed like it."
>"Mind describing it? I mean, you mentioned that Fire's was the death you saw." Light looks at you with a curious look, "What did you mean by that exactly?"
>Recalling the dream, you can only think of that voice. Who could it have been?
"When I said that I was referring to the body that was in front of where I stood in my dream. The body was...not in the best shape, i'll leave it at that."
>"Did it look like Fire?" Light says as you exit the castle.
>It was still early in the evening, still a few more hours of sunlight before Luna would awaken.
"From what I could tell, it was. I just couldn't determine who it was in my dream I saw until I saw Fire laying on the ground..."
>"I see."
"And as far as how I acted at the gate when we got back...well, I'm sorry." With a deep sigh you begin to open up. Light was your best friend, regardless of rank. "Your right, I was cold. I should've given more reasoning as to why I was in such a hurry."
>"Hah! don't worry about it, I do appreciate the sentiment though." Light says with a chuckle.
"Right. Well, anyway, have you heard anything about whats going to happen to us as far as disregarding orders?"
>"Nothing, yet anyway. Maybe this new conflict has all the higher ups too distracted?"
"Hopefully..."
>Making your way back to the barracks, you both continue the conversation. Keeping the talk to a whisper as you pass other guards in the area.
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>>29749187
"Fraid not, she was asleep." You place your hoof behind your head, "Guess I could've picked a better time to talk to the princess of the moon other then the afternoon!"
>"Heh...hehehahhaha!"
>You both laugh, entering Light's room.
>Light pulls up a couple of chairs, and walks over to his wall locker, breaking out his personal supply of Red Griffon Vodka.
>"I think we /both/ can use a drink after these past couple of days." Light says pouring a couple of drinks, his orange aura lifting two glasses.
"Thanks, Light. I think your definitely right about that." You say pulling up one of the chairs.
>"Back when we first showed Celestia the black stone, why do you think she got so defensive so fast?" Light looks into his glass before taking a drink, "And what do you think she knows that we don't considering she ordered an entire battalion to investigate one town?"
"She did say she had stories of the black empire before, theirs gotta be more going on though. What could have her so worried?" You say taking a drink.
>"Beats me, maybe she went out and saw the destruction for herself?"
"Who knows, I'll just have to ask Luna, she no doubt had a say in sending so many out on such short notice."
>You pour yourself another drink, looking out the window as the sun started to set, illuminating the room in an orange hue.
>"Maybe your right but, I just have one more thing to bring up before we trail off here." Light says stirring his cup in his hoof, "Would you really stoop to using chaos magic?"
>Damn, why did he bring that up? The ponies who care about you most are always the biggest pain in the flank...
"When I said I would do /anything/ to safegaurd our home, I meant it." The room goes quiet for a second before you continue, "I made a promise to my father before he died, that I would become one of the royal guard, like he was during Discord's reign, and that I would sacrifice myself a hundred times to protect our fragile little kingdom."
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"I barely knew him, only as a young colt. But I was always admiring his resolve to do what is right. And I believe if he were still here, he'd agree with me on this."
>"Nether look, I know how you feel about wanting to protect this kingdom considering what it was like before." Light finishes off his drink, setting the glass down on the night stand next to his bed, "But dabbling in such magics can't lead to anything good."
"There must be a way to control it. If these faceless abominations use it in battle and are so resistant to arcane magic, then we should fight fire with fire!"
>You take one last gulp from the glass and set it next to Light's on the stand.
"Besides, imagine what we could do with that kind of power, what we could create." You say looking out the window, now dark with the moon slowly rising. "We could create so much good with it, we wouldn't have to fear anything that uses chaos magic or any magic for that matter."
>Light looks to you and speaks sternly.
>"Celestia had it banned for a reason Nether, she knows what damage it could do in the wrong hooves."
"/We/ aren't the 'wrong hooves' Light!" You say snapping back at him.
>The room grows quiet again. The silence being broken by Light, changing the subject.
>"Sooo, you ever gonna introduce me to your mom? You always wrote letters to her back in basic, and even in the academy."
"When this is all over, absolutely." A smirk grows on your face, "I used to write so much more to her then I do now...I need to take leave and go home for a bit when we win this war."
>"Yeah buddy! I'll take leave with ya and we'll tour each other's homes, introduce family, and make allll the mares cry for our return!"
"You know it!" You say with a smug face.
>The both of you laugh, lightening things up even further as the night grew darker.
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"Well, heh, I think with that I'll head over to my own room, I gotta make myself at least a little presentable for Luna, hopefully that asshole guard isn't at her door when I arrive..."
>"You mean Major Quartz?" Light places a hoof on his chin, "Yeah hes a prick."
>You nod, exiting the room.
"Thanks for the talk, Light. Forgot how much a simple conversation can lighten the load off us."
>"Definitely!" He says as you exit, crossing the hall to your room.


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"Ahh, much better. That was much needed." You say exiting the shower, collapsing on your bed.
>Laying there, you begin wondering if it would even be necessary to bother with chaos magic, thinking of how Celestia and Luna imprisoned Discord.
"I wonder..could they both just use the elements of harmony again?"
>You grow frustrated at your own thoughts, why must everything be reliant on only the elements?
"No...why must we only rely on such things? We have to have more then just one weapon!"
>Your thoughts grew more grim, thinking back to the vision over and over again.
"There must be another way...there /has/ to be another way!!" You say sitting up in the bed.
>Smashing your hoof against the wall, making a hole. You sigh and shake your hoof as you look at the damage. Taking a deep brathe, you try to calm yourself.
"Maybe, I'm just working myself up too much. Ponies have had omens in their dreams before I imagine..."
>Taking a deep breath you close your window curtain, only a small ray of moonlight illuminating your room.
"Ahhhh my head, maybe I should get a /little/ sleep before talking with Luna...
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>Awakening in a daze, you feel as if your laying in a pile of dead leaves and sticks poking at your body.
>The smell of rotting flesh and bodies invaded your nose, causing your eyes to go wide. Giving you a jolt awake as you begin fearing having yet another nightmare.
"No...not again!" Panic sets in once again, the dim red light off in the distance, now brighter. The same dark citadel was almost clear to see in the distance, closer this time.
>A dark, foreboding voice rang in your head, the voice you were now growing all too familiar with. Vibrating your very skull from it's deep tone.
>"You could not stop it..."
>"Your allies think you are weak..."
>"They will leave you behind..."
"Stop! Enough of this! Who are you, what do you want from me!" You yell, rising to your hooves ready to fight.
>Lighting up your horn, you quickly get a glance of what surrounds you. Dark, twisted figures of shadow and seething hatred stare down at you. Feeling as if your heart was sinking into your stomach, you see they dark amber and ruby glowing eyes, almost as if they could see into you.
>Their gnarled claws and teeth, disfigured bodies, and bubbling skin and blood, made them out to be something from the darkest pits of Tartarus.
*GASP* "GUH!! Oh Celestia! N-n-no!! What h-h-horrors are these?!"
>Your light dims as you collapse to the ground, vomiting. The shock, fear, and rancid stench overwhelmed your senses.
>"Yeeeess I can taste the essence of your soul, it is sweeeet...." The voice echoes once again.
"L-l-leave me be! I don't want to see this anymore!"
>The same menacing laughter can be heard, louder this time.
"No, NO! I won't be made a fool of!" You say, firing off a magic missile into the dark, leaving a feint trail of light behind it.
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>>29749219
Reveling a massive horde of horrors surrounding you.
>You fall to your haunches, leaning forward on your foehooves.
"Damnit...why is this happening!?" You yell into the dark, shaking from fear.
>Suddenly, it all vanishes, only darkness again. No noise, laughter, or eyes remain.
>A light from above appears before you, not more then a few feet away.
>A body lay in it's glow, lifeless.
>Still shaking, you slowly crawl towards it. Whimpering in fear. You were compelled however, to know who it can be.
>Sitting to it's backside, you see the deep purple fur and pink mane. The cutie mark, resembling a green swirl, looking all to familiar.
"N-no, NOOOOOO!!" Your scream echoes through the darkness, realizing who lay before you.
>It was the body of your mother. And based on the last nightmare, you could only revel in horror of what events may soon follow.
>"Caress your fear...it will be the engine that drives you to greatness...."
"N-NO! Make, It, STOP!"
>You scream in fear and despair. Turning your mother's body to see her pale face, making absolutely sure it was really her.
>Seeing her face, there was no doubt. She lye dead before you and you had no idea what could happen to cause it.
>"Relinquish yourself...give in to your desires for power..."
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>>29749226
>You sit there, holding your mother's body, sobbing and wishing for it all to end as the voice continues.
>"Feed your rage, make it your strength in the times to come..."
>Your mother's body begins fading into dust, falling through your hooves into the ground.
"No...no...NOOOOOO-
-OOOOO!!" You awaken screaming. Breathing heavy and shaking profusely.
>Looking down to your sheets, they were soaked in sweat.
"Huhhh...I-I don't understand...why am I plagued with these nightmares?"
>Leaving bed and into the restroom, you wash your face. The cold water feeling good on your hot fur.
"I must speak with Luna...she will know. Damn the guards!"
>Opening the curtain, the moon was still high in the sky. This was the perfect opportunity!
>Exiting your room, the images you had just witnessed began to fill you mind. What in Tartarus could be causing such images to appear to you?
"Luna will know...I hope....please know..."


All I got till tomorrow sometime, The constructive criticism is much appreciated as it helps me to write better, and as always
Questions, comments, concerns all welcome

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>>29749236
Pretty good. Better conversations, they flow a lot better, and it lets us keep up without things moving too quickly. Keep adding small details here and there, and try to think of how a normal conversation would go.
"You ever gonna introduce me to your mom" sounds a little... odd. The first thing that implied to me was that Light was looking to hook up with his mom. More naturally would be to ask "Am I ever gonna meet your family?" or something along those lines.

Also, the dreams he's having, I may have missed it earlier, but it seems like he's only been having them for a short time. Far too short for him to think they're portents of anything. Sure, having a nightmare about the creatures you've been fighting would be unsettling, but unless there's been an established precedent for prophetic dreams, it seems strange he would think it important enough to bother Luna about it. She's a princess, and to ask her about your own personal dreams seems rather presumptuous.

Also, run through it before posting to check for spelling and grammar errors, and ALWAYS run spell check. That's a minor complaint, though. Keep up the good work!
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“Applejack?”
Applejack heard Applebloom calling her name, she snapped her eyes open, and swung her stick in the direction the voice had come from, cracking her younger sister across the head.
“Applejack, stop! You’re okay! You’re safe now!” Big Mac said, seizing her hooves.
Applejack struggled a bit more, but eventually stopped, realizing that he was right, and if she were still dreaming, he’d have hurt her or killed her by now. Applejack let go of the stick, and embraced Applebloom, pulling the stunned filly onto the bed. “Oh ah’m so sorry Applebloom, ah thought you were Luna comin’ to git me.”
“Ah’m fine Applejack. Only slightly worse than a switchin’. Ah’m just glad you’re okay.” Applebloom said, hugging her back.
“It were a close thing, let me tell you.” Applejack said.
“Land sake’s filly! Yer bleedin’! Wut in tarnation have you been up to, and why exactly didja wake us all up, Applebloom?” Granny said, holding the lantern high to get a closer look at Applejack’s bed.
There was a significant bloodstain from Applejack’s wound bleeding onto the bed. Big Mac said nothing, but ran off to fetch some bandages presumably. Applebloom finally let go of her sister to look at the injury. It ran from Applejack’s rib down to her cutie mark, and was a ragged, but fairly shallow, gash. Applejack herself was covered in bruises from head to toe, though most of them were concentrated on her sides and forelegs.
“Wut the devil happened to you?” Granny said, noticing her injuries.
“It’s a long story Granny, but ah don’t really have to get into specifics, but Nightmare Moon is after me and my friends. She already got Rainbow Dash and Twilight, but ah’m pretty sure the rest are still alive. She was gloating about it while hitting me with apples.” Applejack said.
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“Apples don’t sound like what I’d use if I wanted to off somepony.” Granny said.
“She was just enjoying the feeling of bein’ in charge, ah think. She attacked with farm implements afterward, which is how ah got this, then I ran and grabbed this here… stick…” Applejack trailed off. “Did you bring this stick inside with you Applebloom?”
“Ah didn’t. Ah came straight to wake all of you up after me n’ the crusaders figured out what was happenin’. You didn’t have it till ah woke you up.” Applebloom said.
“Ah grabbed this here stick to fend off Nightmare Moon, but that was in the dream. This don’t make a lick o’ sense. Ah shouldn’t have been able to bring it with me.” Applejack said.
“Applebloom!” A shout comes from outside in the hall, and Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo come charging in, followed by Big Mac with some bandages.
The two fillies climb onto the bed and hug Applebloom, Applejack Winces in pain as they bump into her wound, and Big Mac scoops all three up and deposits them on the floor. He then begins cleaning and stitching up Applejack’s injury with his teeth.
“Good to *ngh* see you here girls. Ah assume you’ve *ugh* figured out what’s happenin’?” Applejack asked.
“We did, but we were too late to help Twilight. I only hope Fluttershy and Pinkie Pie are okay. Rarity got attacked, but I woke her up in time. As long as she doesn’t go back to sleep, she should be okay for now.” Sweetie Belle explained.
“Well, then we gotta go find the others before it’s too late. Once Big Mac gets me stitched up, we can be on our way.” Applejack said.
“Not in yer condition ye won’t be! You’re gonna stay here and stay immobile, but not too comfy. I don’t quite get what’s goin’ on, but if it happens in yer sleep, then ye ain’t goin’ back to sleep on my watch!” Granny said.
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“No buts! I’ll keep ye company. Big Mac, tie that off and get movin’ with these fillies, Wake up as many ponies as ye can!” Granny ordered.
With a nod, Mac tied off the stitches and followed the crusaders downstairs, they stepped out the door and straight into Fluttershy, who was just landing in front of the farm.
“Rarity told me I had to check on you immediately, and she said you’d be here, um, is everything okay? She was limping and bleeding, and she said something really bad was happening. I could tell she was serious because her makeup was smeared. Is everything okay here?” Fluttershy said.
“Well, to make a long story short, Nightmare Moon is attacking ponies in their dreams.” Scootaloo said. “We’re trying to figure out how to stop her, but I guess if you’re here, that’s one less pony we have to wake up.”
“Rarity told me she would go wake up Pinkie, but the walk out to the farm was a bit much for her to make. Is Applejack okay?” Fluttershy asked.
“She’s hurt, but she’ll live for now.” Applebloom said. “We still need to actually stop Nightmare Moon, though, or we’re never gonna be able to sleep again! We can’t touch her in the dream, though. Applejack said she fought back, but nothin’ worked!”
“If there were a way to get her out of the dream?” Sweetie Belle said hopefully.
“Dreams aren’t real for most of us, though. They’re only real places for Nightmare Moon.” Scootaloo said.
“Wait! Come with me!” Applebloom shouted.
She trotted quickly back upstairs and burst into Applejack’s room, scanning around for the stick. She lifted it triumphantly as the rest of the ponies filed inside.
“It’s… a stick.” Scootaloo said flatly.
“It’s a dream stick! Applejack brought it out of the dream when she woke up holding it!” Applebloom shouted excitedly.
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>>29749920
Applebloom has an epiphany.

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>>29749182
>"Is it someone new?"
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Ah I see where you are going with this.
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>>29751217
>Luna's face when she discovers that's how they are going to try and defeat her.
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>>29751217
I remember a scene from the 2010 remake if Nightmare On Elm Street where the girl rips Freddie's sweater. Then they managed to drag Freddie out of the dream entirely.
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>>29749236
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>Exiting the barracks, you look to the sky, thinking to yourself.
>What if she turns you down? Would you even continuing to have these nightmares or are they only a nuisance?
>No, they are more then just that...they are so clear and vivid. How is it that could feel so real?
>The pain, the laughter...
>Entering the courtyard, the other guards hardly even acknowledge your presence, no doubt hearing about how you had gone against a direct order.
"Okay, how exactly am I going to bring this up without sounding like an incompetent fool?" You mutter to yourself entering the castle, "I'll just have to be straight forward, if she turns me away then at least I know I tried. Come what may!"
>Determination grows, causing you to pick up the pace towards Luna's part of the castle.
>Marching down the hall leading to Luna's chamber, the guard still standing his post; you demand to see her.
>Stopping in front of the guard, he gives you a mean look. As if he already knew what you were going to ask.
"I wish to seek an audience with Princess Luna!" The echoing of your voice can be heard all down the hall.
>"Hah, an insubordinate fool like yourself cannot make such demands!" The guard pounds his spear against the ground and positions it in front of the door, "begone before I-"
>The chamber door opens, revealing Luna. Her dark blue starlit mane flowing so beautifully as it always does in the moonlit castle halls.
>"Whats the meaning of this noise, guards?"
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>"P-Princess! M-my apologies," Quartz kneels, his tone going from one of confidence to cowardice, "this insubordinate wishes a private audience, I was informing him that were to not be disturbed!"
>Luna fixes her gaze on you, looking curiously.
>"What is it you want, Nether?"
>The guards looks up in surprise.
>"Y-your highness, you...know him?"
>"He was a promising unicorn under my sister's tutelage. Though now I understand he is more interested in disobeying orders..." She says raising a brow.
"I apologize your highness," You kneel, speaking with utmost respect, "but recent events that have transpired have raised questions I think only you can answer for me."
>Luna closes her eyes and with a long, drawn-out sigh, she opens her door and raises her hoof, allowing you entrance to her chamber.
"Very well, for my sister's sake I'll allow it." She says opening her chamber door and entering with you following.
>The guard gives you a deathly glare as you make entry behind Luna.
>Closing the door with her magic, she gets straight to the point.
>"What is it that troubles you, young unicorn? And why do you seek my council over Celestia's? You were /her/ student after all..."
"I've had these...nightmares, They-" She interrupts, almost seeming annoyed by your statement.
>"/Another/ one? Do you honestly think I don't hear this kinda of thing every single night?" Luna walks over to her window, gazing at her moon, "Hmph, do you and every other pony imagine I can be in /every/ dream at once? making sure /everypony/ is sound asleep?"
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>She continues, growing more frustrated. You obviously weren't the first one to bring this kind of thing up.
>"Honestly, I have an entire kingdom of dreams to look after and I cant be everywhere at the same time!"
>She stomps her hoof into the stone floor, cracking it.
>No wonder the guard feared her, she was quicker to anger the Celestia.
"Y-yes your highness I understand! But, these aren't normal dreams. One of them came true!"
>She doesn't look surprised. No doubt she had heard this before as well.
>"Dreams may seem like they can come true in life but they are mere coincidence."
>Shes not budging, maybe she'll open up more if you bring up the black empire?
"Then tell me this at least, your highness. Have you ever heard of...Ny'alotha? Or the Black Empire?"
>She turns to face you directly, walking within a few feet from in front of you, keeping a straight face and maintaining composure.
>"Celestia...she told me of what you and your team encountered." Her voice tones down, "I had hoped it was all nonsense when she first told me."
"I heard it from the faceless one we encountered after we found that black stone, it said 'I journey to Ny'alotha' whatever that means."
>"I've only heard tales of it." She pauses, looking out her window, "A time long forgotten with the ages passing, though now it seems dark times wish to return to Equestria."
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>>29751726
"Your highness, if you and Princess Celestia had only heard of these things in stories, then why did she send so many off to the trading town? Does she think the stories you used to hear are all true?"
>Your tone grows a bit louder, becoming angry with how Celestia forbade you from gathering more information against the faceless beasts.
"And why would Celestia want my team to stop our search? We could have gathered so much more information!"
>Luna walks over to the center of the room, facing you yet again.
>"You had already confirmed the suspicions she had." Luna looks to the moon yet again, "When she first tasked your team to find the source of the recent attacks, she kept going on about a feeling of a dark presence making itself known. Like a long forgotten evil, I told her she was being paranoid. Whatever would come we could deal with it. After all, we defeated Discord..."
>Luna looks back to you, continuing to explain Celestia's reasoning.
>"She had always believed they were more then just stories. More then mere scary tales to be told before bed, thats why she ordered so many to the trading post. To make sure there would be enough to face whatever dark presence that could appear. But it seems we under estimated our enemy's strength..."
"That would explain a lot then." You look up to the moon from the window, "Will the both of you be using the Elements of Harmony again on this new threat?"
>With a sigh Luna responds.
>"It may very well have to come to that, if we can't find another way, but I don't want it too. It may sound harsh I know, but the two of us can't be relied on to deal with every new threat that comes up."
>Luna pauses and thinks for a moment. "If something horrible were to happen to either of us, the elements would become useless. Without all of them working together in unison, They are mere stones..."
>Her tone grew more serious and worrying.
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>"Nether, describe to me your dreams, what happened in them?"
>She takes a seat on one of the large golden laced pillows on her floor, gesturing for you to do the same as she hovers another next to you from the corner of her room.
"Yes! Of course, thank you your highness."
>Finally, she'll hear you.
>She listens intently as you describe the two dreams, as well as the whispers of the voices. And that of the creatures that you witnessed slaughter Firespark's brigade.
>"As I Feared. All the stories seem to actually hold truth...the Black Empire..." Luna closes her eyes and talks to herself, "Oh Celestia, you were right about all this it seems..."
>She gets up off the pillow and walks over to a large cabinet next to her bed, pulling out two glasses and a bottle of fancy looking wine.
>Using her dark blue aura emanating from her horn, she pours two glasses, giving one to you.
>"I had my suspicions when Celestia told me of your initial report, but I was more doubtful then anything. This place, 'Ny'alotha', is known as the 'sleeping' or, 'black' forest." She takes a drink, finishing off the glass in one gulp, "The myth goes that it conceals a great gate that leads into a place, that could rival the darkest pits of Tarturas in horror."
"I...I feel like I've seen it." You say taking a drink.
>"From what you've described it seems that way. I'm very sorry you had to witness such horrors. But, I promise you, they are only dreams." she says with a sympathetic smile.
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>>29751731
>Her words were comforting. Normally you had always gone to Celestia seeking guidance but Luna, she was just as wise it seems.
"Just one more thing remains, what of the black stone we brought back? What sort of chaos magic surrounds it?"
>"At a first glance I could not tell, it looked like something they may have come from early on in Discord's reign, but the studies of it would prove it to be even older. I don't know exactly what kind of magic it holds. But I'm not going to dwell on it, there are bigger things to worry about. At this point we can only wait and see."
>Finishing the wine she poured you, you thank Luna for the help and counseling.
"Thank you, your highness, your words have put me much at ease." You make for the door, "I will take my leave now, thank you again."
>"I will monitor your dreams more closely. If it happens again, I will be there to help!"
"Th-thank you your highness! I don't deserve such generosity, thank you!" You say happily, bowing your head.
>She gives another comforting grin as you bow your head, and exit the room.
>Exiting, the guard once again gives you a deathly stare. Shrugging it off, you make your way back to the alchemy lab. Wanting to take one last look at the stone, maybe with a clearer head you can figure something about it out.
>Or just see what the Pegasus studying it has found out about it.


All for now, will probably have more up tonight, And of course, questions, comments, concerns always welcome!

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“Hey yeah! Rarity had a bunch of sewing tools sticking out of her flank when I woke her up!” Sweetie Belle blurted.
“I still don’t get it.” Scootaloo said.
“So all we gotta do is get somepony to go to sleep, then wake them up once they grab hold of Nightmare Moon!” Applebloom said.
“That… that’s the plan?” Scootaloo said in disbelief. “GRAB Nightmare Moon!?”
Applebloom nodded.
“That’s the dumbest plan I ever heard! She’s been killing us when we get close, and you want somepony to get the closest they possibly can?” Scootaloo said, waving her hooves in the air. “And then how will we know when to wake them up? We could wake them up to soon, or too late, and what if Nightmare Moon doesn’t even attack them?”
“Well, we could watch for REM to see if they’re dreaming, and if they are, we can watch for injuries, then give them a minute or so to grab her, and wake them up then.” Sweetie Belle offered.
“REM?” Applejack asked.
“Rapid eye movement! It’s when a pony’s eyes move under their eyelids indicating they are dreaming! I read about it in the library yesterday while we were learning about dreams.” Sweetie Belle said proudly.
“Well, ah don’t have any other plans, and ah think this sounds incredibly dangerous and foolish, but ah’m willin’ to try it. Ah didn’t have that stick in my room before ah went to sleep, so it just may work.” Applejack said.
“Applejack no! You’re already injured!” Applebloom protested.
“Well somepony’s got to do it, and we don’t know that she’ll actually attack anypony but me and my friends.” Applejack said.
“She attacked me!” Applebloom insisted.
“And ah ain’t lettin’ her do it again.” Applejack said, staring her sister in the eyes. Applebloom wilted under her stare and relented, looking away.
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“I’ll go.” A quiet voice said.
Everypony turned to the small yellow Pegasus who had been silent up until now.
“Fluttershy?” Applejack said in disbelief.
“If… if Nightmare Moon is hurting ponies, it would be wrong of me to try to hide and wait it out. Applejack is hurt, and so is Rarity, and Pinkie will be too hard to find since she’s waking ponies up right now.” Fluttershy said. She took a deep breath. “I’m willing to try to stop Nightmare Moon.”
“Well… if’n you think you can do it, we’ll let you. All you gotta do is grab hold of her and not let go until we wake you up. We’ll give you five minutes or until heavy injury to wake you up. We don’t want you dyin’ on us, but we gotta make sure you got a hold of Nightmare Moon. Think you can handle that?” Applejack asked.
Fluttershy’s breathing was fast and panicked, but she nodded.
Applejack patted the bed in front of her. “Then c’mon up here, we gotta keep close watch on you, and I’ll be here for you while you’re in there.”
On shaky legs, Fluttershy crawled into the bed and curled up in Applejack’s lap. The orange mare wrapped her hooves around Fluttershy and turned to the rest of the ponies in the room. “Now, we gotta help Fluttershy get to sleep, so everypony needs to stay real quiet, and Big Mac, could you go get a glass of warm milk?” Applejack asked. Her brother walked slowly away downstairs while Fluttershy shivered in her grip. “You gotta calm down some there, Fluttershy.”
“I’m sorry, I’m really trying.” Fluttershy apologized.
“S’alright, we’ll help you get to sleep.” Applejack said.
Big Mac eventually returned with the glass of milk, which Fluttershy sipped at slowly. She passed it off to Big Mac when it was half gone, and closed her eyes, resting calmly. She eventually stopped shivering and her breathing evened out. They all waited as patiently as they could for a few more minutes, until Applebloom broke the silence.
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“Is she asleep?” She said quietly.
“Ah think so.” Applejack said. “If she weren’t, she’da woken up by now. Sweetie Belle, come closer and tell me when she enters RAN or whatever.”
“REM. It’s when her eyes move under the eyelids.” Sweetie Belle said. She walked over and propped her hooves up on the edge of the bed. Granny moved closer with her lantern so they could better see Fluttershy’s eyes.
“N’whaddya plan on doin’ if she never does dream, hmmm?” Granny asked.
“Then we let poor Fluttershy sleep, and we try again with somepony else.” Applejack said.
“She’s in it!” Sweetie Belle squealed.
“That was fast.” Applejack said, looking down at the yellow Pegasus in her hooves.
“Prob’ly magic.” Granny muttered.
“Alright. We give her five minutes, or until she gets injured, then we wake her up. No buts.” Applejack said. The rest of the room nodded, and they watched and waited.

Fluttershy found herself in her cottage. The lights were on, giving it a warm, homey feeling. Outside it was the dead of night, the darkness being held at bay by the lights in her cottage, and the wind rattled at her windows. She looked around, trying to collect herself. She was… here to stop Nightmare Moon, and they had said she had five minutes once she started dreaming to grab hold of her. She had no idea if time would run the same speed in her dream, but she looked at her cuckoo clock: 3:00 in the morning. She took a deep breath, then slowly let it out, trying to calm down. She swallowed, went to the kitchen to grab a knife, then returned to the living room.
“Come out. I know you’re here.” Fluttershy said sternly.
“Come into my parlor, said the fly to the spider.” Luna said, coalescing in a cloud of deep blue smoke. “Brave words from the coward.”
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>>29752012
Fluttershy steps up.

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>>29752018
What if Fluttershy is actually badass in dreamland?
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>>29752867
She shall harness the power of FlutterBat
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"Strange...where are the guards?"
>Observing the alchemy ward doors, the two guards from earlier weren't present, no guards were for that matter. And the door was slightly ajar.
>Entering the room, everything seemed as normal. Nothing broken, only a clutter and disorganized mess of stacked books and papers scattered across the tables, as they usually are.
"Hmmmm, I wonder if that Pegasus is still here? Probably not, its late. More then likely sleeping." You think to yourself entering the doors.
>Illuminating your horn to navigate the dark narrow walk way between the massive bookshelves and large tables, you find the desk where the Pegasus left his notes...and the stone.
"Hmm. Maybe it really /is/ just an old rock, chaos magic is really a mystery." You think to yourself, staring down at the stone.
>The stone was still glowing, giving off a dim red light. Growing curious, you closely examine it.
"What in Equestria could have kept this thing around for so long? How did it not just break down with time?"
>Now inches from it, you begin hearing a feint voice calling your name.
>"Netherrr..."
>Impossible...
"What the-HEY!" You snap back as a pair of hooves grab your leg from under the desk. "Un-hoove me!"
>You charge your horn ready to blast the attacker.
>"I-I'm sorry Captain Nether, sir!"
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>>29754558
>It was the Pegasus from before. He was shaking, looked as if he hadn't slept in days. His eyes were bloodshot and his cheeks were pale.
"What are you doing under there? Whats the meaning of this? And where are the guards?" You say calming down and power down your magic.
>Crawling out from under, he lets go of your hoof as he begins his explanation, shakily getting on his hooves.
>"Well, a little while ago, the stone began acting up. 'Till now its just kinda been...a hunk of rock, and they had to remove the guards posted here to take ponies from 'non-essential' areas as they told me."
>Guess Luna and Celestia really are prepping for a full blown war...
"Acting up how? What has it been doing?"
>He glances back at the rock, then back to you.
>"I could hear...voices from it. Whispering to me my greatest fears. I never told anypony any of that stuff, but they knew. They described them all so vividly...like they could see into my mind or something!"
>He takes a step back farther from the stone, looking worried "Whatever that thing is, I know its evil."
"Calm yourself, how do you know you weren't just hearing things from being so tired? Its late, why are you even in here still?"
>"Late? How late?" He places his hoof on his head, "I've been so intrigued with trying to figure this thing out that I've been losing track of time these past couple of days."
"Its late enough, have you uncovered anything about this thing since I last came here? It's origin? The type of Chaos magic it holds?"
>"I've only found out very little, its definitely dark magic though." He says placing a hoof on his chin, "To be honest I was beginning to lose hope of really learning anything about it till a while ago."
"Whats your name, almost feel kind of rude asking now honestly." You say scratching the back of your head.
>"Its Chemtrail, but thanks for asking."
"Heh right, mind if I take a look at the stone then Chemtrail?"
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>"Not at all sir, just...be careful."
"Trust me, after seeing what I've seen theirs nothing this rock can say that will bother me." You say confidently.
>Looking closely, the stone's dark misty aura seem to intensify. As if it knew you were looking into it, now very dimly pulsating a dark red light.
>A feint whisper can be heard, the voice almost seemed familiar.
>"Travel to the black forest..../we/ will guide you too power..."
>No way...you weren't just hearing things...Chemtrail wasn't just hearing things. Something was using this damn thing to communicate.
>Gazing deeply into the stone, you attempt to respond to whatever is on the other side.
"Power...what power?" You say curiously.
>"Power to save your kin, your kingdom...you will be stronger then any other..."
>A crimson swirl of energy envelops the stone and enters your eyes, leaving it but a mere husk. A rock, sitting on a table.
>"What happened? Who were you talking to?" Chemtrail asks curiously.
"I-I don't know, but its gone now." You avoid showing him your worried gaze. "Y-you should keep researching that thing..."
>You scramble to avoid any other questions, hastily leaving the room.
>"But sir! Wait I-"
>You close the door before he can finish, breathing a little heavy.
"Just what the Tarturas was that..."
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>>29754571
>Moving to the nearest window, you look at your transparent reflection. Checking your eyes and face, making sure nothing had gotten into you.
"Maybe I'm just getting myself riled up over nothing..."
>Shaking your head and closing your eyes you begin to make your way back to the barracks.
>Walking down the halls leading out of the castle, feint whispers can be heard. As if they were coming from all directions.
>"The sleeping forest awaits...to Everfree you must go."
>"Power awaits...find your destiny..."
>That voice, its quiet yet oh so familiar...
"Are these the voices from the black stone?! Or are you just another nightmare waiting to come true?!" You Shout in the dark lit halls, only the echo of your voice answers back.
"Hmph. Whatever you are, you could try to be more consistent!"
>You continue walking. Your skips a beat and sinks as the voice returns, much louder now. As if it were right in front of you talking. The torches in the hall flicker, as a cold breeze blows in from the open windows.
>"We are forever...our patience, is forever."
"What do you want from me then?" You say looking in all directions, walking cautiously, "Better question, what the Tarturas did you do to me with that stone!?"
>"It held a fragment of our essence...now it is held in you..."
>You could recognizing the voice, it /is/ the same one from your nightmares.
>"We want in our rightful world. The sleeping forest awaits you..."
>Stopping in your tracks. Your thoughts go back to what they said earlier. What power could they be speaking of? To save home?
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>"Yeees, let it consume your mind until there is nothing left but thoughts of chaos..."
"Enough! You spoke of a power to save this world from the faceless ones, what did you mean?"
>The voice echoes again as a swirl of green dust rises from the ground, showing you a vision of a tome, a book covered in runes among other things you could not make out.
>"The tome of our magic within Ny'alotha, is your prize. With it, you would wreak havoc on the faceless..."
>The vision fades and disappear into dust, dissipating in the wind.
"How can I trust you?" You say snapping back to reality, "If this 'prize' of your is in Ny'alotha, then why would you want me to use it against the faceless?"
>You raise our voice even further.
"And just how should I even know that you aren't one of them trying to manipulate me into going to a trap!?"
>"Do not trust us, die with your home..."
"Why do you want me to use this power to fight the faceless?"
>"They have strayed from our gaze for too long...they seek to re-make the world in the image of the empire.../our/ empire..."
>He can't mean...
"The Black Empire you mean? If thats true then aren't they doing what you want them to?" You say still looking around, making sure nothing would leap from the shadows.
>"From the earth they draw strength...our earth...our strength. It will not be used unless to /our/ benefit."
"Just who are you..."
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>>29754581
>"We are the endless cycle of life and death...the engine of life to which all souls are bound..."
>They make themselves out to be gods. But they seem more like devils.
>"Use the power we offer, or die with your home. They will not stop, and your pathetic arcane magics won't save you..."
"The Elements of Harmony, Princess Celestia and Luna won't let them win! Not so long as they can use them!"
>Silence falls, but only for a moment.
>"And how many will have to die...before they do. We can see more then you know...they won't use that again until they are desperate..."
>They're right...Luna said it herself. How much time would go by, how many lives would be lost?
>No. If they offer a means to end this conflict quickly, you must take it. Saving lives.../thats/ whats best for the kingdom.
>"Do not accept our gift then, die with your home and people. Die in fear knowing you could have been saved..."
>The voice begins to fade out.
"Wait!" You yell stomping a hoof into the ground, "...Wait." *sigh* "What would you have me do?"


And that'll about do it for tonight, will probably have more tomorrow, don't know what time though. As per usual, Questions, comments, concerns.

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I remember a long time ago when we had a long string of threads about Cyborg Abomination Lyra. Are those all stored somewhere?
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>>29755154
Somebody posted links to the stories in the previous thread. I did not save them before it disappeared, foolishly. My apologies. Hopefully the Anon who did can post them again if he sees this.

As for the archived thread, this is all I've found: http://4chanarchive.net/threads/mlp/lyras-cyborg-horror-show-thread-9/19626796
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This takes place before Flutterbat happened to her. But there's a reason I didn't include Pinkie in the attacks. I feel like Pinkie would be too much like the 'Dream Warriors' movie, and that wouldn't be much fun. She'd win at making stuff up once she figured out she was in a dream.

>>29752018
Also, I have the rest done. You want it all now, or in two chunks? If I get no responses in the next couple hours, you're getting it all at once.

But either way, I need to start writing something else. You all want something specific, or shall I do my own thing? Name ponies, types of horror, settings, or what-have-you, and I'll pick one I like.
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>>29755504
Meant to quote >>29753359
for Flutterbat comment.
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>>29755504
“I-I won’t l-let you hurt my friends anymore.” Fluttershy said, visibly trembling.
“Oh? I’m not sure there’s very much you could do about it. Your friend Applejack already tried, and look what that accomplished.” Luna said. She pulled on her head with a hoof and it detached from her neck. Blood spurted out of the opening, and Fluttershy could see her open esophagus.
Fluttershy retched onto the carpet, though nothing but saliva and bile came up.
“Awwww, can’t handle a little blood? You know what your animals have to eat, right?” Luna mocked.
“I’m well aware that *hurk* my animals have to eat meat. But that doesn’t mean I enjoy seeing a severed pony’s head.” Fluttershy choked out.
“I simply can’t believe you could sleep so soundly after the death of your friends. You’re quite the uncaring little thing aren’t you? Element of ‘kindness’, my hoof.” Luna chided, putting her head back in place.
“I care a lot! That’s why I’m here. To stop you!” Fluttershy quietly shouted. She brandished her kitchen knife, pointing it at Luna.
“Oh please Fluttershy, I’m not going to fight you with weapons. What do you take me for? An ‘animal’?” Luna said.
At the word ‘animal’, a rustling sound began. It came from all directions, and Fluttershy looked about, trying to find the source. First, a few mice came out of the holes in her cottage walls. They made their way toward Fluttershy, moving with a steady, but determined, pace. Next, cats and ferrets came out of the various perches, shelters, and habitrail tunnels around her home. They, too, made their way toward Fluttershy. Fluttershy was starting to get nervous. These animals had no eyes. They weren’t normal, but she was fairly certain if what Applejack and the rest had said was true, that they could certainly hurt her.
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>>29755824
“Please get back. I don’t want to hurt you.” Fluttershy pleaded.
Fluttershy looked up at the clock on the wall, hoping that she was nearly past the allotted time. The clock said 3:01, much to her dismay. Only a minute had passed? It felt like so much more. Maybe time passed slower here or something? But she still moved at the same speed. It didn’t make much sense. But then, sometimes she would have dreams that seemed to take days, and in reality, only a few minutes had passed. So maybe she’d only been sleeping for a few seconds! She felt panic settling in, and started to hyperventilate. She was pulled out of her reverie by a pain on her foreleg. “Ow!” She looked down to see one of the mice on her leg, with his teeth sunk into her leg just above the hoof. She pulled him off of her and put him down gently on the ground, then started flapping to stay above the floor.
“Please don’t do this! I don’t want to hurt any of you!” She pleaded again.
Luna stood silently at the other end of the living room, watching her silently with those cat-like green eyes, a smug grin on her face.
“Why are you even doing any of this?!” Fluttershy cried.
Luna rolled her eyes and sighed in exasperation. “You know, I’ve already explained it three times. I couldn’t possibly ‘bear’ to explain myself again.”
At her words, a thundering series of steps made its way up to the door of the cottage. There was a thump at the door, then a second one, accompanied by the sound of splintering wood, then a crash as the third thump breaks the door down. Behind it stood Fluttershy’s dear tea-time friend, Harry the bear. He didn’t look like he’d stopped by for tea, though. He rampaged past Luna, stepped on several smaller creatures, and took a swipe at Fluttershy with his massive paw.
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>>29755830
She floated backward toward the stairs leading up to her room, staying out of his reach, while her eyes were still filling with tears over her angry friends killing each other in front of her. ‘They’re not real. They’re not real. They’re not real.’ Fluttershy kept repeating to herself in her mind. She sniffled and blinked the wetness back. She had to stay strong and help her friends, but what could she possibly do? Now Harry was between her and Luna, and there was no way she was going to beat him in a fight.
Fluttershy was pushed back upstairs, Harry swiping at her in a rage. His swings were directionless, and they were easy to dodge, but getting hit by just one would probably be enough to put her out. She flitted up the stairs, and looked around for something that might help. She saw nothing useful to her except maybe the blanket, so she grabbed that and tossed it at Harry as he lumbered up the steps. He tore it to pieces and she growled in frustration. She looked down at the knife in her hoof, then over at Harry. She could try to fight him, but the moment she took a single big injury her friends would wake her up, and then she wouldn’t be able to get Luna…
Fluttershy’s eyes went wide. Could she do it? Could she really do that?
Harry roared and she was awakened from her brief reverie. She ducked away from his paw, and raced over to the window. She quickly unlatched it, swung it open, and flew outside, going around the house. She zipped around and peeked in the front door Harry had knocked down. There was a continuous stream of animals pouring out of the various holes in her home. They covered the floor, milling about Luna’s hooves and crawling up the stairs.
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>>29755837
Fluttershy swallowed hard. She turned away from the door and felt herself starting to hyperventilate. She held the knife in both hooves and looked at the blade. She’d had it custom made specifically for chopping through bone in the meat she sometimes had to feed her animals. They would eat the bones too, but one time, one of the hyena’s she’d been taking care of at the time almost choked to death on a large piece of bone. Since then, she’d had this knife made and she always kept it clean and polished. It was sturdy, and would definitely do the job. She gulped, took a deep breath, then struck. Fluttershy flew in the door, her wings almost silent, and latched onto Luna’s back.
“What in the world? You didn’t run?” Luna exclaimed in surprise.
“Not when my friends need me!” Fluttershy shouted back.
Fluttershy closed her eyes and lifted the knife in one hoof. Her other three hooves held tightly onto Luna’s barrel, making sure the alicorn wasn’t going to run away. Fluttershy squeezed her eyes shut tight… and stabbed herself in the side. She felt the blade sink easily into her flesh, and she nearly fainted at the pain. She focused her thoughts entirely on her hooves, all four now clinging as tightly as she could onto Luna.
“What in Tartarus was that!?” Luna barked in laughter. “What was that supposed to accomplish? What was-“
Luna stopped as she found herself standing on Applejack’s bed, Fluttershy bleeding beneath her, held tightly in Applejack’s hooves, the knife stuck deeply into her side.
“What in Tar-“
Once again Luna didn’t get to finish as Big Mac’s hind hooves impacted her face, blowing teeth out and shattering her jaw. She crashed through the window, shattering the glass and frame, and tumbled two stories to the ground below.
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>>29755845
Big Mac thundered down the steps of the Apple family home, and charged out the door to where Luna was pulling herself up. He almost made it before Luna’s telekinesis froze him in mid-stride. She mumbled something, but the blood and broken jaw prevented her from being understood. Her actions were easy to figure out, as she started pulling Big Mac’s limbs away from his body. Her cat-like eyes taking a sick pleasure in his pain.
“Stop it! You’re killing him!” Applebloom yelled, and threw Applejack’s stick at Luna. It didn’t do anything, but it distracted her for a moment. Luna tried to speak again, but all that came out was more incoherent yelling, and her horn blazed with light. Big Mac cried out in pain… then fell to the ground, released.
Luna was grasping with her hooves at something stuck in her throat. Blood was pouring out of the wound and coating some shape in front of her. Slowly, with a shaky white light, Celestia coalesced into being. Her horn was embedded in Luna’s throat, sticking stark red out the far side. Luna’s eyes focused on the princess of the sun, and she uttered a single coherent word: “S-sister…” Then her body went limp.
Celestia carefully lifted her sister’s corpse off her horn, and laid it gently on the ground. She then went to help Big Mac up off the ground and made her way up to Applejack’s bedroom. Granny had already pulled the knife out of Fluttershy’s side and started trying to stem the bleeding.
“Fergive me fer not bowin’ yer majesty. Not only will these bones not do it right, but somepony’s dyin’, and I consider that more important.” Granny said matter-of-factly.
“Do not worry, Granny Smith. I won’t be offended. Here, allow me to help.” Celestia said.
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>>29755851
As the ponies all watched, Fluttershy’s pierced side stitched itself up, and Big Mac’s rough job on Applejack was also done much more finely. “My talents don’t lie in healing, but I have studied pony biology extensively. There will be minor internal bleeding, and she should still get to a doctor, but she will live.” Celestia said. She had cleaned the blood off herself while she did it, and everypony looked up at her in awe and amazement. “I know it will not bring your friends, nor my faithful student back, but I am sorry for the actions of my sister. I wanted to believe the power of friendship could bring her back to me, but time, it seemed, had merely allowed her rancor to fester. I only hope that this time, she can find peace in death.”
“It’s alright Princess. We know it’s not your fault.” Applebloom said.
“Maybe not directly, but as I had a hoof in creating her, so too does partial blame for her actions lay on my shoulders. May you all have a peaceful rest.”
Celestia flew gently down to where Luna’s body lay, lifted it up with her magic, and was gone in a flash of yellow light, leaving the rest of the ponies by themselves in the broken Apple Family home.
“Well…” Applejack started.
“Well…” Applebloom began.
The two sisters looked at each other and laughed.
“Ah reckon ah can sleep well enough with just a blanket draped over that hole in the wall, if’n y’could Big Mac?” Applejack asked.
The burly pony nodded and went to fetch a blanket to drape in front of the hole he’d kicked Luna through.
“You three wanna stay with Applebloom, that’d be perfectly fine. Ah’ll send Big Mac out to let Rarity and Pinkie know what’s happened.” Applejack said. Big Mac grunted as he came back in with the blanket.
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The crusaders nodded happily.
“After a night like that, I am absolutely beat. My wings are sore from all that racing about.” Scootaloo said as she stretched her wings.
“I think Rarity will probably chew me out for yelling at her, but Applejack and Fluttershy’s word should be good enough to convince her I was right! I could sleep though.” Sweetie Belle agreed.
“C’mon crusaders. We’ve earned ourselves some much needed rest. Fluttershy, are you gonna be okay here with AJ?” Applebloom asked.
The yellow Pegasus nodded from her spot in Applejack’s hooves. Her eyes were red and looked exhausted, like she’d been dragged through the wringer. She didn’t say anything or move much, but she gave the three a tiny smile.
With that, the crusaders, followed by Granny Smith, moved to Applebloom’s room and crawled into her bed.
“Thanks t’you three, Ponyville is safe. You should feel mighty proud!” Granny said, ruffling each of their manes.
“Thanks Granny. You have a good rest of your night.” Applebloom said.
Granny Smith tottered out of the room, turned off the light, and shut the door behind herself.
The crusaders closed their eyes and tried to sleep. After a few minutes of tossing and turning, Applebloom looked over at her friends, who were similarly having difficulty sleeping.
“Ah can’t sleep. Too much excitement ah guess.”
“Yeah, me neither. My wings ache.”
“I’m worried about Rarity.”
“Can you shut the curtains, Applebloom? The moon is shining right into my eyes.” Scootaloo asked.
“Yeh, sure.”
But as she moved to get out of bed, bars slammed down, surrounding the bed on all sides. The moon, meanwhile, opened like an eyelid, revealing a single, cat-like eye, staring right into the bedroom window.
“Sleep tight, little ones.” Luna’s voice said, as the bed began sinking into the floor.
The three crusaders clung to each other and screamed in terror, Luna’s cackling laugh accompanying them into darkness.

THE END.
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>>29755860
I hope it was to your liking. Let me know what you thought of it all, and let me know what you might like to see next.

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>>29755867
Holy fuck that's horrifying
me gusta
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>>29755504
Well then, I know what I'm doing on my break now.
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>>29755867
That was awesome Wax.
Watching Luna progress into being more and more savage with her killings was a nice touch and seeing Flutters overcome her fear in...anything, always makes me feel giddy inside.
Keep up the good work.
I just wish I had more free time to be as consistent with my story like you and Ms.
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>>29755867
>I hope it was to your liking.

Yeah, you bet it was. was some good reading right there
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>>29754592
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>The following morning. You hadn't slept at all for the rest of the night, not since waking up.
"Let's see, going to need a least a few days worth of food as well as a some first aid supplies, never know what I'll find in Everfree..."
>Packing up two saddlebags with food, water, and other things needed for a journey through the forest, you open the door to your room and begin the journey. Not knowing exactly what you may encounter, but it will be worth saving this world.
>As you lock up your door, you are greeted by Light. Walking down the hall from the common area.
>"Sir! your back, were you able to receive guidance from princess Luna?" He says with a worried expression.
>He looks down to your bags, growing more curious now.
>"Looks like your prepping for one hell of a journey, why all the packing sir?"
"I'm leaving, for how long I'm not really sure, but I think I may have found the key to ending this whole thing before it escalates too far."
>Light joins you as you approach the doors exiting the hall, directly to the doors leaving the barracks.
>"What did you find? Did Princess Luna tell you how to fight them?" He asks curiously.
"No, though she did help me make this decision..."
>"What do you mean? Did she know anything about those nightmares of yours, or anything about that black empire place?"
"She did, actually."
>Walking from the barracks approaching the rear gates leading directly into the Everfree, you try to explain why your leaving so suddenly without actually saying why.
"See, Princess Luna had told me that her and Princess Celestia both have heard of these things and places before, and that Celestia suspected they were real."
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>>29757381
>"Is that why she became so hesitant to tell us anything when we brought it up a few days ago?"
"I would think so, as well as why so many were sent off to that town to fight the battle we witnessed. Celestia apparently wanted for whoever was going out there to have the numbers and strength to fight them if they appeared."
>Neither of you say a word for a minute, thinking back to that day.
>"I guess we know how that turned out..." Light says hanging his head, "But that still doesn't answer my question, why exactly are you leaving?" He asks glancing at your bags.
"Like I said, I may have found the key to ending this damn thing before it gets out of hoof."
>"And what key is that...your not still hung up on using chaos magic are you?"
>There was no clear answer. If you say no, he'll dig deeper. If you say yes...
"Listen, Light...how long have we been friends?"
>He seems surprised by the question, stuttering in his answer.
>"Uh, well I think...jeez I don't know its been awhile." He says with his hoof behind his head.
"Exactly, and in that time have you ever known me to get into something I couldn't handle?"
>Approaching the back gates, you both continue with conversing.
>"Since recently? No."
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>>29757386
"Exactly my point, I'm not going to rush off and free discord or make a deal with the devil if thats what your thinking." You say with a chuckle.
>You were being honest, mostly anyway. Though withholding your exact reasoning to leaving.
>"Well then I think you should know, before running into you I was overhearing a conversation with two of our higher ups. Magic Overwatch is being disbanded, were all supposed to get separated and put into normal battalions soon..."
*Sigh* "I guess I should have seen something like this coming." You say, looking towards the sky "We /did/ disobey a direct order when we followed Firespark."
>Stopping at the rear gates, you could see only a minimal number of guards posted. Normally there would be at least a dozen, but theirs only 4. One for each tower and gate lever.
"They're pulling a lot of bodies from places where they don't see fit for there to be it seems." You say scanning the gates.
"How soon did they say we'd be getting dropped into somewhere else?"
>Light shrugs, "Don't know, I never got that piece of information, I was at the chow hall when I heard the two talking a few chairs away from me." Light places his hoof behind his head, "I'm just glad they didn't see my dumb flank, haha!"
"Well...hopefully things turn out for the best. In the mean time, I'm-"
>Light stops you mid-sentence.
>"You still haven't answered my question y'know. What /exactly/ are you going off to find?" He asks in a more stern voice.
>Pausing for a second, you try and think of how to dodge the question.
"I'll tell you this my friend, if what it is promises as much, this war will be over quickly."
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>>29757393
>"Is it chaos magic, Nether?" Light asked, keeping a straight face.
>You had no answer, it'd be better keeping him in the dark rather then letting him know who or what it is telling you of this. It matters not anyway, if this power source is as strong as the voices make it out to be, you'll return and make a hero of yourself!
"And if it is?" You say looking him in the eye.
>*Sigh* "I know this much, it doesn't matter what I try to say to keep you from going. Your stubborn flank wouldn't listen even if I did."
"Will you tell them where I'm going then?"
>Light cracks a smile, "Hah! And tell them what? You waltzed right up to me, told me your gonna find some super crazy chaos magic and use it?"
>He stops himself, preventing himself from getting too loud for the other guards to overhear, "Despite it being against the law and that I just stood there and said 'yeah go for it'?!" He says waving his hoof.
>Light is a good friend. Truly unfortunate this may be the last time you see him considering the re-assignments he mentioned...
>"As far as /I/ know, sir, last I saw you; you were on your way too see princess Luna."
>He gives a grin.
"Good pony." You say placing a hoof on his shoulders.
>Approaching the gates, you order the guards to allow you to exit.
>"Just, promise me one thing, Nether Star..." He says as you walk out, "Come back...still you. Alright?"
"Hah! I've never been known to lose my head old friend, thanks for the concern though."
>With that you leave the castle grounds, entering the brush of the Everfree.
>The promise of power, to save your homeland; was more then enough motivation for you to see this through to the end.
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>>29757402

A bit shorter then what i normally throw up, but I will likely have more up tonight.

As always, question, comment, concerns, all welcome

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>>29757044
Glad you liked it. I won't have anything this afternoon, but hopefully by this evening. Thanks for reading!

>>29756277
You gonna make "Pinkie Pie: Dream Warrior?" Cause I'd read that.
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Guys i just found this Image and its seriously fucking creepy.
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>>29755504
>You all want something specific, or shall I do my own thing?
Do you remember Silent Hills P.T.? Nothing has ever scared me more than this fucking game. Does this inspire you to write anything?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eq99ffZ9L_Y

>>29755154
Here's the main story involving Cy-Lyra: https://pastebin.com/u/sometwifag
It might be my favorite "Anon in Equestria"-type of green to ever come out of this board. It got just the right amounts of feels, horror and clop. Sometwifag never came back to finish it though, and knowing that he probably never will saddens me.
Those threads used to have a drawfag called Warpedhorse, but he deleted his Imgur album. Some of his drawings can still be found in the archives though.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/349580/the-legions-rest-incident
Horror story by the guy who did Upheaval. Fits this thread.
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>>29757412
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>Days had passed since leaving the castle. The thought of leaving home at such a crucial time weighed heavy in your mind.
>Leaving them all to fight the faceless armies without you. Despite the no doubt small contribution you would give, it still ate at you that you were on this fool's journey to a place that has never even existed on a map.
>Would there even be a kingdom left to save? Would Lightbreak, your only friend, survive; or even except you if you return with this no doubt dark power?
>Would the vision of your mother's death come true as the last one did?
>"You are getting close..."
>The voice, now your only companion; guided you on your way. Pestering you every so often, preventing even a moment of peace.
"I feel like this journey will never end, the Everfree spans for a long time." You let out a sigh "I'm also beginning to think that this promise is nothing but a lie."
>The supplies you had brought were running out, the rations running low, and drinkable water running dry.
>"When your are in Ny'alotha...your hunger for mortal things will cease..."
"And what does that even mean!? All you've been telling me are riddles, nothing but mindless blabbering about death and betrayal!" You say stopping mid stride, turning to yell and let out some frustration.
>The burden of their whispers was beginning to get to you, they were insatiable. Not letting you sleep, or rest.
>"Keep...moving..."
"Hugh! Damn you!"
>The whispers seemed to be growing louder, the dark voices rumbling in your mind as if to make your skull vibrate with each word. As if their powers were growing the closer you got...
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>>29760260
>"You will witness true greatness soon...."
>Coming up to a clearing, you stop and rest. Sitting on a log covered in small mushrooms and moss, you pull out what is the last of your rations, only a small red apple.
"Dammit...just what the Tarturas will I do." You think looking into your now empty bags, "My hooves ache with each step, you've been keeping me going for days!"
>Looking at the bottoms of your hooves you see how eroded they've become from the non-stop marching.
>"Your appetite will be sated...your hunger will cease."
"Just keep barking..." You say taking a bite from the red apple, the last bit of food you have.
*Sigh* "Maybe a little sleep would be helpful, I haven't slept since before talking with Princess Luna..."
>"Sleep? ...No sleep...only walk..."
>Insufferable voices...
>Finishing off the apple and going farther along you come up to a marsh, littered with dead logs and trees.
>Looking to the sun, you can see it was almost dark, and being this deep in the Everfree with no light other then your nearly exhausted magic, navigation would be difficult.
"Its dark now, I have barely enough energy to walk." Breathing heavily, you lean against a tree, sliding down against your back into the muddy ground, "I need to rest, I'm gonna be useless to you if I cant even move!"
>"You are near...the power calls to you...the power to control life itself...the power to save those you care about." The voice grows louder, "Surely you wish to save the last of your family?"
>You Rise back up, now covered in mud, leaving the bags and pressing onward.
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>>29760271
"I hate you..."
>The sound of your hooves stamping through the mud was the only thing you could focus on other then the voice, keeping you awake.
>"Good...it will make you stronger."
>It was nearly pitch dark. The light of Luna's moon could not penetrate this deep into the forest, only tiny rays of light that could barely provide enough sight for you to see your hoof in front of your face.
>Using only the feint outlines of the trees in front of you, you continue on still.
"I'm just surprised that nothings tried to attack, this place is supposed to be home to all kinds of predators. Come to think of it, this place has been completely dead since I got here..."
>"They know our presence, they fear our power."
"Of course they do..."
>Your attention is caught by a large hallow dead log that lay only a few yards in front of you, red dark light glowing from it's insides.
>"Stop here...the light....enter it and be taken to the place of our design..."
>Looking around, you take a deep breath and walk over to the log.
"Whats inside of this thing, looks like a dead log to me!"
>"Do It..."
>The voice boomed in your head, seemingly making your skull vibrate, sending a chill down your spine.
>Now only a few inches away, you shake off your doubts and enter the light. A feeling of temporal displacement overwhelms you. As if being dragged to somewhere else.
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>>29760285
>"Yeeeesss."
>The portal spits you out into the cold hard ground. The soil was black, as were the rocks, and plant life.
"I recognize this place..."
>"Enter, and behold our world...."
>The voices were no longer ringing in your head, but seemingly coming from the dark red-lit skies overhead.
>In front of you are great black gates, spires and twisted spikes protruding upward from the ground, twisting and curving into the clouds.
>They surrounded the gates, like a tunnel leading whoever is unfortunate enough to find this place into it. A deep red glow emanated from beyond the satin bars, radiating onto the black ground, giving the whole place an even more menacing appeal.
>The atmosphere made it hard to breathe, the heat and insane humidity filled the air. Making it near impossible to catch your breath after hitting the ground.
"Where...is this..." You say breathing heavily.
>"The entrance to our world...Now enter...claim your destiny."
>The gates open, creaking a loud pitched creak causing you to cringe and cover your ears and revealing a vast, seemingly unending forest of horror. Aberrations, monsters, phantoms, and hideous deformed creatures, all roamed freely.
>Taking in the view, you fall to your knees, breathing hard and shaking. Gritting your teeth and trying to keep yourself from having to see any more.
*gulp* I-is this N-Ny-alotha?"
>"A small part...yes. Now go, Your power is near..."
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>>29760295
>The creatures trucked on, not even noticing the opening gates or you standing there. As if you were invisible to their eyes.
>"They do not see you...not yet."
"And if they did?" You ask as you begin walking down the trail from the gate.
>"You would already be dead..."
>This place is certainly inviting.
>As you make your way down the trail, the sound of the indigenous wildlife can be heard. Constantly filling the dark atmosphere with a chorus of wailing voices and sounds of death.
"Just stay focused...ignore them..." You think to yourself, focusing on each step.
>After what seemed like forever, a clearing comes into view. Revealing a shrine, run down by time, walls cracked and broken, covered in vines. Spires protuded from it's walls, giving it a
menacing presence.
>"There....go there..."
*gulp*
>You make your way towards it's entrance, trying to control your fear as you walk in. Your steps echo in the vast, empty halls.
>You look upon the walls, decorated with skulls and bones of so many creatures, including that of your own kind. The ceiling depicted a large painting of a massive swirling void, taking in all manners of life around it,
the look of agony and pain depicted in the faces of those being taken by it seem so real.
"Just what is all this...who could make such a place?"
>"The main hall....go to the main hall..."
>Navigating the corridors, you find a large open room. Lined with candle stands, black in color. Green flames danced on the candles, only adding to the wickedness of the depraved shrine.
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>>29760318
>"Your prize lay before you.../take/ it."
>At the end of the inner hall, a book laid on a table. Wrapped in a brown and red stained cloth.
Approaching the table, you can almost feel being pulled towards it. As if it were made for you to find it.
"This is it..." You say unraveling the cloth, revealing a book with a series if symbols covering it.
>A Squid-like head at the top of the cover had it's tentacles twisting all around the center, where malevolent looking stars within a circle was etched in.
Dark runes were drawn around the outer edge of the circle, sending a terrible chill down your spine.
>The book's cover was made of some kind of leather. Giving a feeling of old rubbery skin in your hooves.
"No...this is the darkest of magic...I've-I've never seen anything like this..."
>"Open it...absorb it's knowledge and power. Take our blessing..."
"I-I can't! Th-this is...." You say as your body shakes in fear.
>"This is what you came here for...take it's power...you will become a force of reckoning on your enemies..."
"And if I refuse?"
>"Your spirit will linger here forever...as /they/ do..."
*Tortured roars*
>From behind you, twisted, mangled corpses of ponies, wolves, manticores, and so many others you could not tell; Were slowly creeping towards you. Shear agonizing cries pierced your ears as they creep closer.
>They had no eyes, only a white and red glow came from where their sockets. Bones and muscle tissue were showing across different parts of their bodies. Howls of horror filled the entire cathedral,
echoing throughout the halls and in your ears.
"Away with you!!"
>Your horn lights up, firing off a series of arcane missiles into the monstrous menagerie.
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>>29760331
"I-Impossible!"
>The missiles had gone straight through them, the holes left behind quickly reformed in a dark misty aura. They were but shadows, unaffected by your magic.
>"The tome...it is your only way to survive now..."
"You led me here! You planned to reveal me to them after I found this book to give me no choice!!"
>"Hm hm hm hm...You brought yourself here..."
"Damn you!"
>Looking down to the book, you knew that there was only one choice, it was right. At the end of the day /you/ made the decision to come here.
>Feeling desperate and not ready to die, you open the book. The dark symbols and drawings within begin lighting up as you turn the pages.
>An emerald aura surrounds you, giving off rays of light and energy, waving off the shadows.
"Arghhhhh!! What...is!?"
>An intense pain overcame you, it felt as if your very soul were being cast into an inferno.
>"Shhh...it will all be over soon..." The voice continued in your mind.
>Even through this pain, this heat. They would not leave you.
>Writhing in agony, the whispers continue. Being heard clearly through the sounds of your torment.
>"The pain will be short...the power will not be."
>It goes on. Every moment feels like an eternity, the burning inside your body grew only more and more.
"NGHHH!! I-I will make you pay for this!!" You scream, falling to the ground.
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>Green fires surround you, burning a symbol into the ground in the shape of two stars within a circle.
>The pain finally subsides, steam rising from your body as a burning image of the stars that were on the book cover surrounds you, burnt into the ground below in an emerald glow.
*pant* "Ughhh...is...is it" *pant* "I feel only...."
>The burning comes again.
"AhhhhhNGGGGGG!!"
>Your cutie mark, fading away as it is replaced by the green star. Dark runes skittering across it as it forms.
>"You will become the harbinger of our fury...Nether Star, the scourge of our enemies."
>You rise to your hooves, still breathing hard as if you had just finished a marathon.
>Looking up to the hall, the shadowy figures slowly began walking towards you, in a massive amalgamation of shadow, tooth, and claw.
>"Use the magic...feed on their life."
"Wh-what? H-how do I?"
>"It acts on your will...think it and it will act accordingly"
>One of the monsters lash out, leaping towards you bearing its claws and long sharp teeth.
"Dammit! How do I- AGH!"
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>>29760360
>The beast's claw meets with your chest, giving you a large gash. But still only a flesh wound.
>Leaping back to the wall, eyes darting all around seeing only masses of shadow of fang, tooth, and claw, you throw caution to the wind and begin to charge a magic missile as you normally would.
>Your horn lights up a magnificent green glow. It's light illuminates the entire altar, humming with power and sparks of green energy coming off your horn. As well as green flames dancing around you.
>The creatures are blinded by its glory, as a dim red glow comes to your eyes.
"Magic missile!" The bolt of energy fires with great force, detonating against one of the larger shadows in a violent display of emerald fire. Incinerating the beasts where they stood.
*pant* "In-incredible..." *pant* You say looking at your hooves.
>Examining your body, you see clearer, hear clearer. All your senses heightened. You fur and mane, even, were more prominent then before. Darker streaks of purple cover your body and white lines ran through your mane.
"I feel immaculate...this is...unreal. I-"
>A massive shadowy creature steps forward from the fire, roaring in pain as it continues creeping towards you.
"No way! How could it have survived!?"
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>"The creatures of this world aren't like that of your mortal world...they are much stronger..."
>The black beast continues forward, getting nearer. It's bony structure and large claws clattering as the fires continues to melt pieces of it's flesh away.
>"The fuel for your magic...is life...take this one's life and become stronger..."
"I just /tried/ to take it's life!"
>The emerald flames began dying down, as the creature's flesh started to mend. Gaining back it's strength.
>"No...drain it..."
"Drain? How do I?"
>"You took in the tome's power and knowledge...think...you know how..."
>The beast swipes it's claws at you, missing only by an inch as you leap away.
"Dammit!" Running to the side wall, you avoid another slash and make for the exit.
"Drain it's life?! What does that even mean!?"
>"TAKE it's LIFE! Drain it of it's essence and make it your own!"
>The voices echo loudly through the halls, giving away your position.
>Running out of the door, you are knocked forward and to the ground by the beast crashing through the walls behind you, letting out a loud roar while doing so.
"How!? How do I drain it!?" You ask in anger, getting back to your hooves.
>The beast takes another shot, catching you off guard and smashing you you into the ground with it's palm.
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>>29760377
"MHPHFFFF!"
>The monster grabs you in it's hand, bring you up to it's face and squeezes hard, crushing your body.
"H-HOW!?" You hack up blood, hearing you ribs break in it's grip. "N-no...I..."
>Your vision was fading as you struggled.
>"Come all this way...only to die here...you are weak..."
"I...am...NOT!
>You gain a final burst of adrenaline, your horn glowing brightly once again. Blinding the monster, causing it to drop you as it covers it's eyes and roars in pain.
"NOO!! I won't die here! There is too much left for me to do!"
>Quickly getting to your feet, with one hoof holding your ribs. You power up your spell.
"Not Yet!" You scream, eyes glowing red yet again.
>The creature begins glowing in a white light, white mist begins leaving it's body and flowing into your horn, changing to green as it does so.
"Your life is mine!"
>The creature's body begins fading, as if it's body were decomposing to a skeleton over the course of just a few moments.
"Not...by a stupid monster...I won't die..." You say standing up straight.
>You quickly realize that your injuries have suddenly healed, you were no longer in any pain or discomfort.
"My wounds...they...healed?"
>Examining your injuries, you couldn't see or feel them anymore.
>"Draining life...gives /you/ life...and power...with enough, you could be unstoppable...."
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>>29760389
>You look at the lifeless husk of the monster, fading into dust before you.
"This is certainly useful..." You say, still looking over yourself, "But how did I- wha-whoa!"
>The same feeling of temporal displacement overcomes you again. Pulling you from the nightmarish realm, back into reality.
>The portal spat you out back at the large hollow log. The voice, speaking to you once again.
>"Where you tread, death will follow. Use this power... /save/ your kingdom..."
"You may think me simple minded, but I am no pawn! I will use this power only to save lives!" You say barking in the dark.
>"Of course, indulge yourself, learn your new magical prowess..."
>The voice fades out. leaving your mind, for now.
"Hmph, I wont be made a servant. My loyalty is to my home, my friends...my family..."
>Looking into the trees, observing what small glimpse of the moon shining through that you can; your mind goes back to the vision of you mother's death.
"I won't let any harm come to them..."

Holy fuck that was alot hah, But anyway I think a couple of the posts may or may not end up being a little messed up because my internet pages closed out on me in the middle of editing and if thats the case I apologize and will makes sure the pastebin at least is good to go
As always, questions, comments, concerns are welcome.
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>>29760405
Here ya go Pastebin:https://pastebin.com/x87MRzsH
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>>29759897
God, I am so sad I missed out on that game. I've watched it, and it looks so damn good. I'm sad they cancelled it. If I could write something that spooky I would be so pleased. I'll see what I can do.
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>>29760591
Workin' on it. No guarantees. I had to finish a presentation today.
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>>29761057
Octavia climbs onto the train and makes her way slowly through the car until she finds herself an empty seat. She places her cello in the seat next to her next to the window, and hopes the train wasn’t going to be too busy. She could have checked it, but the last time she did, it had gotten damaged. She’d tried to get the train line to pay for the damages, but they weren’t willing to do so, and a lawsuit would have been far more costly and time-consuming than she was willing or able to deal with, so she’d bitten the bullet and paid for the repairs herself. The only frustrating part of taking it on the train with her was that when it got crowded she would be asked to pay for the seat her cello was taking up, or have it moved to baggage. If today was going to be one of those days she was probably going to go off on the poor operator.
She’d come to Manehatten for a performance, and although she’d gotten paid, she hadn’t actually been able to perform. She was supposed to perform in between this stupid asshole solo guitarist, and the big show, who was some band she’d never heard of but were apparently really popular among young colts. AP..Q…49, or something? Unfortunately, the stupid asshole had gone over his time, and nopony had pulled him off stage. By the time he’d gone through his fourth unasked-for encore and left the stage, her time was gone and they weren’t going to let her perform when their big moneymaker pop group was up next. Oh, she’d tried to get someone to get him off stage so she could perform, but every stage hand she’d bothered about it said they had to go find the manager, and he couldn’t be found, and then they had to consult the timetable, which had coffee spilled on it.
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>>29761317
The whole thing was completely unprofessionally handled, she didn’t get any exposure, all she got was the money. That was great, but it didn’t help her position at all. Her band back in Ponyville would be expecting her, at least. It was a solid source of income, and sometimes they got to perform in Canterlot, but she wanted more than that. She wanted to make it big. Her roommate Vinyl had her back, at least. They’d been working on some stuff together, and it was apparently a pretty big hit with Vinyl’s crowd, so maybe that would take off somehow.
She leaned back in her seat and closed her eyes. The murmur of the few ponies around her in the car was a pleasant drone, supported by the backdrop of the sounds of the train idling on the tracks. It wasn’t long at all before she found herself drifting off to sleep.
“Miss, I need to see your ticket, please.” The operator pony asked.
Octavia pulled out her ticket and hoofed it to him. He looked it over, nodded, punched it, and moved on down the rows. His voice repeated the same line as he went, sometimes replacing ‘miss’ with ‘sir’. Octavia stared at the roof of the train, and leaned back once again. She felt the easy rocking of the train car as it clicked down the tracks on the ride to Ponyville. It was a trip she’d made many a time, and although it was several hours long, she knew exactly where they were just by peeking out the window. It was evening, with the sun low in the sky, and judging by the scenery, they’d just left Manehatten proper, and would soon be leaving to the countryside. They’d probably be stopping at Hollow Shades after they passed through the North Foal Mountains. That might result in a couple extra hours, but it’s not like she had anywhere to be.
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>>29761318
Octavia stared out the window for a short while, then reached in her saddlebags and pulled out an old book: Les Misérables. She’d always wanted to go visit Prance sometime. She’d even been practicing her Prench, but she always seemed to never have the bits, or the time. Usually both, sadly, but it was the price she paid for trying to make herself known. Maybe when she finally got popular enough she would be able to schedule a performance over there. Maybe even ride there in one of those fancy airships she’d heard so much about. Pinkie Pie had her balloon, and that was fun for what it was. Octavia could only imagine how much more amazing it would be to ride in a massive airship!
Octavia sighed and realized after a short while that she was staring at the pages, but wasn’t actually reading them. She closed the book and stuffed it back in her bags. She hated all this traveling alone. With no one to talk to, it turned into one interminable introspective journey that ended up going to the same place every single time: She wasn’t good enough, she wouldn’t ever be good enough, and she certainly wouldn’t ever be popular enough. Sure, she had everything she needed, and she could easily keep it, but that wasn’t going to be enough for her. Rarity had managed to break out of the trap that was Ponyville, but she was one of the elements of harmony, and she was friends with a princess, who had contacts with the other princesses. How fair was that? Meanwhile all Octavia had was friends who were in the same situation as she was. Nobodies who had difficulty connecting with anyone who wasn’t a nobody because who would want to talk to a nobody? Much less hire them to perform.
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>>29761322
Octavia travels home.

I may not be able to update tomorrow. I have to read several proposals and have my own research proposal critiqued, so it may be later in the day again. I also have a presentation on Thursday, so I'm scrambling to make sure it's all done. But I'll keep writing so long as people keep reading.

Updated my journal: https://pastebin.com/XMGF9vQB
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>>29698360
holy shit i drew this picture so many years ago, what a fucking blast from the past
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>>29761356
horseshit.
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>>29761409
why..would i lie about that...
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>>29761623
No no, he saying it looks way better than horeshit
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>>29761356
Well it's a nice pic, if you did indeed draw it. Thanks for doing so. You got any more like it?
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>>29762565
Alright, too much schoolwork to write at the moment. Continuation later tonight.
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Boop.
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>>29763263

Really interested in where this one goes, the last one you did was on point.
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>>29755867
That was pretty awesome. Thanks Wax. Can't wait to see where this new Octavia story is going. Godspeed for your exams/presentation/whatever btw.
>>29714013
Just read this too. Good shit Anon.

Time to binge read Mshakezilla's and Lukedaduke's stories now.
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>>29765141
Once we finish digging out our crawlspace for the let I should be able to continue properly.
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>>29762565
never did a huge amount of pones, pretty much just that one and this
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>>29760405
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>7 days had passed since you last saw Nether Star. Trying to remain focused on your current duty, you could not help but wonder where he could have gone.
>The disbanding of your Overwatch was eating at you as well. Being dropped into a normal guard battalion wasn't something you were accustomed to but, you really had no choice.
>Not to mention being separated from all the other friends you had made during your time in the Overwatch. And the fact that Nether was...absent during the re-assigning caused quite a bit of commotion.
>Of course, he was a friend, and you denied knowing exactly where he had gone. Luckily the investigation didn't last as long as it should have, only a few days. With the war being the main focus of all the Royal Guard's higher ranking officers chasing down ponies going AWOL wasn't their highest priority, thankfully.
>Since then each individual guard of the Overwatch was re-assigned to different infantry battalions, splitting the group indefinitely.
>Nether, however, is now wanted for questioning in light of what he had told Princess Luna along with his sudden disappearance.
"Ugh I cant believe they would put a mage with my skills in security detail, I belong on the front!" You say scratching your ear in annoyance.
>A small unit consisting of 12 guards, 6 Pegasi and 5 Earth ponies, including yourself as the only Unicorn, were stationed in a small garrison to guard a farming village.
>Not the most exciting thing to do, but it made you feel better knowing the locals felt safe with your presence.
>And on top of that, this village was supposedly where Nether was born. His mother still lived here, least thats what the description in the briefing of the village you received had stated.
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>>29765682
>It was a small quaint little place, not much more then a handful of house constructed of straw and logs, along with a small river running through it's center. A small bridge connecting the two sides of town.
>A few larger buildings stood at the edges of the village as the town hall and storage houses for various farming tools and equipment. The crop fields took up most of the space, consisting of mostly corn.
>Small canals were dug up leading to the crop fields from the river, rather efficient form of growing food.

>They had also stated to bring Nether in for questioning should you see him there, by force if necessary...
>Be Light Break, and this place was ever so dull. How you longed to fight against the shadows that threaten your homeland.
>Word of the destruction of so many towns and outlying posts had spread quickly. Causing much fear and even distrust to the Royal Guard force in the larger cities of Equestria.
>Walking through one of the few roads of the rather small village you are caught unawares by one of the guards ponies stationed here with you.
>"Lieutenant Light Break, sir! We've received a message from a nearby combat patrol unit! They're under attack from the faceless and have requested the nearest security detail to assist!" The guard says in a panicky tone, accompanied by a messenger Pegasus. No doubt from the patrol under attack.
>That would leave this place completely defenseless, whats the point of trying to keep trust in the citizens of the kingdom if you were just going to abandon them anyway?
"How can they expect us to protect this place and assist them at the same time? We don't have the bodies for that!"
>As much as you would love to, going off and fighting would mean that these ponies would be left wide open for any sort of attack.
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>>29765651
Well they're both very nice. Thank you for sharing.
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>>29765686
>The messenger Pegasus approaches you with an angry look.
>"Sir, under Equestrian noble law, when a guard unit requests reinforcements, you are obliged to-"
"Don't lecture me on the law!" You say now pointing at the Pegasus, "You are the messenger, correct?"
>"Yessir!" He says snapping to attention.
"Very well, I and 6 other of my guards will join you."
>The messenger looks surprised, he obviously didn't know of you pony-power situation.
>"Such a small amount? Were gonna need-"

"Its all we can spare," You say cutting him off, "we weren't given much in the first place. Too many resources are being spent to protect the larger cities and towns to mind small places like this..."
>"I understand sir, I apologize for my rudeness!"
>The messenger renders a salute.
"Don't worry about it," A grin grows on your face, you've been waiting for another crack at these faceless bastards, "Besides, I'M more then enough reinforcements, I'll have you know that I was one of Celestia's prized pupils!"
>"Ex-excellent!" He says with his face lighting up, "with your help we just might be able to push them back!"
>Nodding in agreement you call out to every guard in the village. Luckily being in such a small area meant you didn't have to scramble looking for the guards under your charge.
"Guards ponies! We've been tasked to assist our fellow warriors in battle, I and 6 others will be going, the others will remain here and safeguard this village!" Placing a hoof to your chin, you point out the Pegasi in your unit, "Which one of you is the fastest?"
>"I believe I am, sir!" Said the most slender of the pegasi.
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>>29765695
"You will be one that remains here, Aircutter, should anything go awry during our absence you are to seek us out at the battlefield and bring word of whats happened."
>"Yes sir! I won't fail the kingdom!" He says giving a salute.
"3 Pegasus and 3 Earth ponies, thats what I'm taking. The rest of you, maintain air and ground patrol. Don't grow complacent!"
>"Yessir!"
>"Are you all leaving us?"
>A deep purple coated, pink maned colored unicorn asks with concern in her voice, approaching you.
"My apologies miss, but we are bound by law to assist our fellow knights." You say humbly taking a bow, "We are leaving some to stay though. If anything happens we will be able to have word sent and return and defend your homes."

>"I see, just be careful out there. Come back to us safely, your presence here makes us all feel at ease." She looks back over the village with worried look, "No pony here is trained for combat or warfare, were just a small farming village."
"I understand ma'am, we will return as quickly as we can." You place a hoof on her shoulder, in an attempt to put her at ease, "Though, just out of curiosity, why is a unicorn living in a farming village of earth ponies?"
>"Well you'd be surprised at how much a little magic can help the irrigation flow to the crops during the drier months."
"Heh, right. Well anyway, although I can't make any promises, you do have my word that once the battle is over we will return with all we are able." You say to help put her at ease.
>"I know what obligations you have as military ponies, as a mother of a son in the guard I know the duties you have."
>Hold on, she has a son? And shes the /only/ Unicorn in this village. Don't suppose she could be...
"You son's name...what is it?" You say staring at the ground then back to her.
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>>29765690
sure, i'm just warming up now, you want a draws?
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>>29765703
>She gives you a curious look, but answers nonetheless.
>"Why, my colt Nether Star. Do you know him?" She asks, eyes going wide, no doubt hoping to hear of her son.
>What are the odds, the brief was correct. Nether's mother really was a resident of this little village. You had paid no mind to a lone Unicorn living here before now.
"Yes, I uh, served with him for a good while. We were both students in Celestia's school for gifted unicorns. We quickly became friends."
>"Oh! You must be Light Break then!" Her face lights up, "Its so nice to finally meet you! My son had written about how you and him had become two of Princess Celestia's favorite students."

"Haha! I'll have to scold ol'Nether for not introducing me to his family sooner!" You say placing you hoof behind your head.
>"Sir, we should get moving." Said the messenger, meeting this kind mare almost made you forget entirely.
"Yes! Of course! Make preparations to depart, gather your weapons!" You turn back to her as you issue the order, "I never got your name miss...?"
>"Starsurge, thank you for asking. I look forward to seeing you return soon!"
"Heh, definitely!" Before departing you leave her with a few words, feeling as if you should remind her that her son is okay, "Miss Starsurge, your son is by far one of the most dedicated ponies I've had the privilege to serve with. I'm sure where ever he is in this conflict, hes no doubt doing great things."
>She wipes a tear from her eye, "Thank you, Light. Please, if you see him before I do, tell him his mother misses him. And that he needs to send more letters home!"
"Of course, we will return!"
>With those final words, you depart for the front. Ready to fight.
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>Emerald fire and flame engulfed the area, burning down everything it touched. The Hydra's body laying half in the water, the other half chard and smoking on the muddy ground. Only ash and bone remained of the once mighty predator.
>It was nothing but a chard husk, withering away into the wind as the ashes fluttered away like fireflies in the night.
>You stand triumphantly over the still burning corpse, the green flames not showing any sign of being extinguished until what its burning is no more.
"This chaos magic is incredible...it didn't take much to take down a full grown Hydra." You say watching the ashes float away.
>The emerald light surrounding your body begins to fade out as you power down and take a breath.
>"The more life you drain, the more powerful you become..."
"Oh, your still here? I hadn't noticed..." You say leaving the hydra's corpse behind.
>"The essence in the stone is now in you...we see what you see."
"Be sure to /not/ remind me of that the next time I have an intimate moment."
>"Your impudence, will be your death..."
"Mindless babbling as always."
>It had been only 2 days since you left the black forest and started making your way back to the castle. You hadn't eaten or slept in that time, as if the life essence you had been draining from whatever animals in the Everfree were unfortunate enough to cross your path had been sustaining your body as well as your magic.
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>>29765716
>Strangely, all manners of indigenous creatures to the Everfree were active now.
"Strange though, why are the natives of Everfree now so much more active then from before?"
>"Our presence has dwindled, only a lingering slither compared to before. Bringing you in and out of Ny'alotha took much power. They will fear you...as they do us, soon."
"Teleporting me twice took that much from you? Perhaps your not as strong as you make yourselves out to be."
>"Our current strength even within the black empire is but a mere whisper compared to what we could be if manifest into the mortal world..."
"The longer you linger in my head, the more I want to get you out!"
>"Our souls are merged...we are one forever."
"Thats just grand..." You say continuing your journey through the forest.
>Hours go by, trecking through the murky waters, mud covering your hooves as you leave the marsh behind to more solid ground within the forest.
>The tall trees with low hanging branches and vines no longer seemed as menacing as before considering what you had been borne witness to, you were only more concerned more with arriving at the castle.
>What will they all say when they see what your capable of? Will they cast you out? Imprisonment? ...Death?
>No. They should revere you and your power. For soon it will make you a hero among them all.
>The nightmare of you mother's death still lingered in your thoughts. Dictating your next move.
"I should visit home first, at least make sure shes safe."
>No way that vision would come true...you can't let it come true.
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>>29765717
>Finally exiting Everfree, you are greeted by an open field. The rolling green hills and fresh air feel so refreshing since having been in such dark and gloomy places the past week.
"Ahhh, finally. Fresh air, away from that damned humidity." You say taking a deep breath, felt as if the very jungle itself wanted to suffocate you at times.
>You look towards the horizon observing the sun, now beginning to set to the west.
"Lets see...the castle is directly west of here, which means home is...that way." You say pointing to the south.
>Before starting for home, you notice a large red glow off in the distance. The telltale sign of a large fire or battle...
"Must be a large battle, this is my first chance to see what I can do against those faceless abominations!!"
>Changing course directly for the red glowing horizon, you full on sprint towards it. Feeling invigorated by the confidence you have in your newfound power.
"Hah! The chaos magic has made me so powerful! I will slay so many of those faceless mongrels as they have done to my people!!" You say, still picking up speed.
>Your pace continues to pick up as your galloping grows more intense, running even faster as en emerald glow emits from your horn down to your hooves.
"Haha! Wh-wha? What the..." You say floating through the air, picking up more speed, "This is incredible! I can fly!"
>A trail of green flames follow your hooves as you gallop through the air, only making you more excited to finally join the war.
"They will see now! They will see just what I can do!"


Future updates may come a tad slower as I want to really make sure the next few parts are ready to go.
As always, questions, comments, concerns, all welcome!

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>>29765705
Sure! I definitely won't say no. If you're asking if I want something specific, how about Luna with spooky Nightmare Moon face. Y'know,cat-like eyes and sharp pointy teeth?
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>>29765766
sorta like this yeah? gimmie a bit and ill paint it up proper
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>>29765885
Yeah! Perfect!
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there you go. thanks
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>>29766026
Niiice. I like the detail on the eye. You have done good work this day, and I am grateful.
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>>29766026
Dang that's really good.
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>>29761329
Octavia watched the trees and occasional shack go by. The clacking of the tracks a familiar beat to the rhythm her life had taken on. She saw the mountains looming larger and larger up ahead and closed her eyes. She listened to the train rumbling onward, the setting sunlight coming in warm through the window. Then, with a muted roaring the sound echoed back to the train as the tunnel enveloped them in a cocoon of darkness. A small bit of light spilling back from the train’s headlight, just enough to outline most of the objects in the darkness. She heard muttering from some ponies and smiled to herself. They were probably new to the Friendship Express and hadn’t ever gone through the tunnels before. She had to admit, it had been a bit unsettling when she was new herself, but she’d gotten over it pretty quickly. It actually felt rather comforting in its own way. A sort of chrysalis of darkness, where nopony knew you were there. This tunnel was rather long, taking about fifteen minutes to fully pass through, but then it was only another hour to Hollow Shades.
Octavia stared into the darkness. There was some more muted whispering, and a few ponies decided to try to get up and walk around. They giggled as they stumbled about. Octavia figured they were probably special someponies. They seemed to be clinging to each other pretty tightly as well. They wandered about the car and bumped into Octavia while they went.
“Look, I understand, it’s dark, it’s quiet, and it’s maybe a little spooky, but you twats obviously can’t see where you’re bloody going, so if you could kindly bugger off and sit down until we exit the bloody tunnel, nopony else needs to get hurt, alright?” Octavia said with a frustrated sigh.
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>>29766905
“Geeze, lady, fine. We’ll go somewhere else.” The stallion said.
“What crawled up your flank?” The mare muttered. “C’mon sweetie, let’s go to another car.”
The two giggled and muttered as they left, and Octavia could only assume they were talking badly about her as they left. She didn’t really care. She was tired, angry, and she certainly wasn’t going to put up with any shit she didn’t have to. So long as they weren’t going to be bothering her anymore, that was fine. They could go bump into other ponies elsewhere. She heard the separating doors open, and the roar of the runnel’s wind and the clacking on the tracks grew louder for a brief moment, then the door shut and everything got blissfully quiet once more.
Octavia waited in the darkness until the train pulled out into the fading light, and she looked out the window at the passing landscape. The mountains encompassing Neighagra falls to the north, and the Foal Mountains to the south. The tracks would split up ahead, and they’d be stopping in Hollow Shades soon enough. She looked around the car she was in, seeing how many other ponies were there. She was one of only three ponies that remained in her car. One bat pony, who was likely getting off at Hollow Shades, and a pink mare who was either an earth pony or Pegasus. No horn, but she couldn’t see anything more. The couple hadn’t come back, thankfully. Maybe they’d stay away.
Just as she thought about it, she saw a mare and stallion making their way toward her car from the door that had been opened earlier. It was probably them, so Octavia made a studious effort to glare out the window with only occasional disapproving glances their way. They opened the door, slipped in past the wind of outside, and made their way back to their seats.
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>>29766912
The couple were continually muttering to themselves, drawing a frown from Octavia. Something about lovely trains, and nice scenery, and how Canterlot was going to be wonderful. They said something about sightseeing, and Octavia heard the word ‘orchestra’ and her mood darkened. She’d tried out a couple times, and although they had sung her praises at every audition, she’d never been chosen. It was a constant source of frustration. If they didn’t want her, they could at least explain what she was doing wrong, but no, they just told her she was great, and sent her on her way, happy as you please. That was no bloody help.
Her gloom perpetuated itself until the train arrived at Hollow Shades, and she didn’t even look up as ponies stood and walked out of the car. It was a nice city, and especially with the dark of twilight and the canopy overhead, the city itself was really quite lovely, but their music was… not to Octavia’s taste. Unique, in its own way, but not something she enjoyed. She certainly never got asked to perform there, that’s for sure.
“All aboard!” The operator shouted.
A single pony scrambled across the platform and dove inside one of the cars up ahead, then the doors shut and they chuffed on their way out of the station. Just a few more hours to go and she’d be in Canterlot, then it was a short jaunt to Ponyville, and home. They’d be arriving quite late, but Vinyl always left the door unlocked. More for herself and forgetting or losing her keys, but it worked in Octavia’s favour as well.
Octavia looked around the car once more, seeing if she was alone. She saw no other ponies, but there was a bag left in one of the overhead compartments. She’d let the operator know, but she leaned back with a smile, and started humming happily to herself. She enjoyed being alone on the train.
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>>29766914
Octavia enjoys the ride.

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>>29765732
You're doing well. I think I see where you're headed with this.
To critique it though, if you are going where I think you're going, you should drop a few more signs that he's being corrupted. As it stands, it feels like he's just getting superpowers, and if I'm honest, it feels a tad... cliche? There's no obvious downside beyond the fact that he's going to be shunned by his peers, but the reader needs some sort of sign that things aren't going to go well for him. We /know/ that, but we need confirmation in the story. Maybe he doesn't notice the sickly green light coming from his eyes. Maybe his appearance is changing.
He's enjoying his transformation and new power too much, even though they're evil, and if he's not going to feel bad about it, readers need to see that he's going to get some sort of comeuppance eventually. We want confirmation that he can't just get away with it. Try to include something obvious for us to bite onto.

Does that make sense?
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>>29766026
Mighty fine, drawfriend
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>>29766026
Nice. Thank you based drawfriend.
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>>29722068
>that little bee smiling
Marguerite isn't so bad.
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>>29766961
I hear you, right now he's just high on chaos energy, reality will hit soon as everyone finds out what he's been up to. thank you for the critiques, they help me be better at this!!
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Boop.
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>>29766961
Octavia sang quietly to herself, humming some of her favourite songs and generally enjoying herself. She pulled out her cello and inspected it a little bit while she idled. She attempted to read her book again and made it a little bit further, and she even took another little nap while she waited. As she closed her eyes, she made a little note about how much further it might be before they finally arrive at Canterlot, and thought about her bed back at home and much more comfy it was than these bloody seats.
Halfway through her nap she was jolted awake by the train experiencing a bit of a bump. Not unheard of, but still unexpected. She glanced around blearily, and noticed a couple of ponies standing and talking on the other side of the door to the next train car. They didn’t look her direction, and with a mumble of complaint she closed her eyes and went back to sleep.
When she finally woke up, it was the dead of night, far past sunset. She sat up, clearing her throat and smacking her lips. They obviously hadn’t yet made it to Canterlot, which was a little surprising, but when she looked out the window she couldn’t make heads or tails of where they might be. A fog had rolled in while she was asleep, and it clung tightly to the windows, roiling in the reflected light from the headlamp of the train. Candles had been lit in each of the train cars, giving a soft but meager light to the interior. A little confused, Octavia first checked her cello and saddlebags, making sure they hadn’t been tampered with while she was asleep. Once she was satisfied everything was in order, she leaned forward and looked around the car. She wanted to ask an operator how much further until Canterlot.
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>>29768656
Unable to spot one immediately, she looked around her car, and seeing nopony in here with her, she left her cello and saddlebags on the seat and stood up, moving toward the next car. She peeked through the door, and saw a couple of ponies sitting in their seats, but no operator. She moved to the car behind hers and peeked through that window. She saw an operator in his blue and white uniform standing near the back, looking out a window. She tugged open the door, the cold and damp air of outside spilling in, making her fur bristle, then quickly slid open the next car and hurried in, closing the doors behind her.
“Brrr!” She shivered, giving herself a little shake to try to ward off the cold. “Pardon me, sir?”
Octavia moved closer, slowly trotting down the aisle toward the operator. He didn’t respond, but just kept staring out the window. His cap was pulled low over his eyes, and he was looking slightly downward. As she got closer, she could hear him mumbling to himself.
“…tracks go… should be… maybe more to the… rain or shine…” he muttered.
“Pardon me, can you tell me how much longer it may be until we reach Canterlot?” Octavia asked, stopping just outside hoof reach of him. She was a little put off by his behavior.
He went silent, but he didn’t look at her. “Oh… not long.” The operator said.
“That’s… great to hear, but can you give me an estimation?” Octavia said, a little put off.
“Oh… not long.” He said again.
She took a step back, looking at him askance. It wasn’t unheard of for ponies to sometimes dress up as operators and try to scam others for payment, saying they hadn’t paid their ticket. If this pony didn’t know how much longer until Canterlot, which was something every operator should be keeping track of on their mandated watches, then Octavia was willing to bet this pony was a scam artist.
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>>29768663
“Thank you for your time.” Octavia said curtly, and hurried away from him. She noticed he turned to watch her go, and tried not to quicken her pace.
The cold night air blew across her fur and whipped her mane about her face as she transitioned between cars, and she made her way quickly back to her things. They were both still there, thank Celestia. She quickly picked up her saddlebags and balanced her cello on her back, with the strap going across her chest. She didn’t want to be near that stallion any longer, and she felt she should probably report him. She had foolishly taken a seat near the back of the train, and that was where the least number of ponies congregated, making her a prime target for any ne’er do wells who might want to rob her. Cursing herself for a fool, she glanced back at the operator she’d left in the car behind her and felt her panic rising as she saw him staring through the door window. His hat was still too low to see his eyes, but now she was definitely frightened.
Octavia wrenched the door leading to the forward car, and carefully slipped through, trying not to bang her cello on anything, but hurrying as much as she dared. She slammed the door shut behind her, which earned her a ‘Shhh!’ from somepony sitting nearby.
“Shhh, your bloody self!” She muttered darkly back.
She favoured the shady operator with another glance, and saw him entering her old car, and cursed silently. If he caught up with her and called her a thief or crook or whatever, without a true operator around, none of these ponies were going to defend her. That’s what she gets for being a bloody wanker. She scurried down the aisle, trying to avoid the eyes of all the other ponies in the car and squeezed through the next set of doors, trying to keep herself ahead of the false operator following behind her.
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>>29768671
Octavia encounters an operator.

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>>29761322
I was listening to https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7lhJ0LZtv3w while reading this and it made perfect sad lonely traveling music.
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>>29768680
>Octavia encounters a rapist.
That's the vib I got from him.
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>>29768680
Octavia continued down the line of cars, the dim candlelight wobbling back and forth to the rhythm of the train. She looked backward again, and saw the operator pushing his way past several ponies on his trek through the cars to presumably catch up with her. She noticed he was carrying something. It seemed to be a suitcase. It was probably that one up on the luggage rack in her car. Why was he carrying it, though? Was he going to blame her for stealing someone’s luggage? Why was he following her in the first place?
Octavia pushed through another set of doors, the cold air of the in-between blowing on her face as she moved to the next car. She quickly scanned the area and gave a grunt of frustration as there was yet again no other operator to be found. She blindly pushed forward, past the very occasional pony, through door after door after door, until she came up to the next set of doors, and saw that the next car was dark. No candles were lit in the next car, and the light from the current one prevented her from seeing into it. She looked behind her to see if that operator was still following and cursed when she saw he was. She looked back at the darkened car ahead of her warily, then looked back at the stallion behind, and with another grunt of frustration, she threw open the doors and slipped into the pitch-black car.
Once inside, she was pleased to note that it wasn’t as dark as it had seemed. She could actually see, albeit rather poorly. She pressed her side up against one row of seats and moved slowly forward, her cello bumping against the edges of the chairs as she passed by them. Her shoulder bumped into something warm, and she jumped a little in alarm.
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>>29773127
“Oh, I’m quite sorry. Please forgive me.” She apologized.
There was the sound of movement, but the pony she’d bumped didn’t say anything. Octavia was hoping she could find another operator, or barring that, she guessed she’d settle for the conductor. She continued along the car, until she found the door at the far end. She slid it open and reached for the door on the other side of the divider, but her hoof swung against empty air.
“What…?” She said, swinging her hoof around in the darkness.
The fog, combined with the lack of interior light in this car, made it impossible to see very far ahead, but surely there should be something ahead. Something pulling the train! Was she at the engine and it was just a bit further away than the rest? She really wished the lights were on in this car. Octavia felt a hoof on her shoulder, and jumped a little. She felt a rush of adrenaline as she jerked forward slightly, trying to get away from the hoof touching her and ending up leaning a bit more out the door. Once she’d gotten a good grip on herself, she turned to look at whoever had grabbed her.
“May I see your ticket please, miss?” The operator said. He was holding that suitcase, and she still couldn’t see all of his face.
Octavia jerked out of his grip. “Yes, you may. Just a moment. It’s in my saddlebags.” She said curtly.
Octavia shut the door and set down her cello, keeping an eye on the operator while she dug a hoof into her saddlebags. She shuffled through her items, and eventually came up with her ticket. She held it out for the operator to look at. He reached out a hoof for it, but she pulled it back.
“As you can see, it has been punched.” Octavia said curtly.
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>>29773130
“Ma’am, this is for Ponyville. I’m afraid that’s not one of our stops.” He said.
“Don’t be ridiculous. I ride this train all the time, and I know for a fact that you stop in Ponyville. Where is the conductor or a different operator? I would like to speak to one of them.” Octavia said.
“Ma’am, the conductor is busy driving the train, and in his stead, you will need to speak with meeeeeeee.” He replied, holding the final sound.
Octavia felt goosebumps crawl up her spine at his words.
“Now, since you’re riding a train you don’t belong on, I’m afraid you’ll have to get off at the next stop.” He said.
“Surely you’re joking! It’s the middle of the night!” Octavia said indignantly.
“It’s either that, or we turn you over to the guards when we arrive.” He said, tilting his head down even further.
Octavia swore his grin was getting wider. He was trying to hustle her or something. She wasn’t certain what his game was, but it was clear the entire train was in on it. No operators but one, and he wouldn’t let her speak to the conductor. She’d spoken to the conductor before on this trip. This late at night, it was probably the same fellow. Stallion by the name of Steel Driver. Something was wrong, and she didn’t know if she wanted to find out what awaited her at the far end of a hijacked train. All she could see was the top of this stallion’s hat. There’s no way he could possibly have predicted when she would start noticing his little game, so he probably wanted her off the train so she couldn’t raise a fuss when he sprung whatever trap he was planning.
“Fine. I’ll get off. When and where is the next stop?” Octavia said.
The train screeched to a halt, throwing her against the door.
“Right now.” He said with a wide smile.
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>>29773135
Octavia reaches her stop apparently?

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I like trains.
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>>29773135
https://youtu.be/8WJSwqngedY
This 'Steeldriver' song gives me spooky chills. Probably not relevant to this thread but i thought if it when you named the conducter.
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>>29760591

You could download it on your PS4 if had it in your library.
There's instructions on how to do it online.
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>>29774460
Sadly I do not own a PS4.
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>>29773141
Octavia looks out the window, then at the operator. “Where have we stopped?” She asked.
“Your stop.” He said.
“No, I mean where are we?” She said.
“Ma’am, you’re holding up the train. Please exit the car in a timely manner so that we may keep to the schedule.” He replied.
“I’m not bloody getting off this train, until I know where the bloody hell I am!” Octavia screamed in his face.
Without a word, he grabbed her by the hoof and started dragging her to the door. She struggled against him, but his grip was like iron, and his hooves were very cold. He dragged her to the door of the car and pulled it open. She pushed back against the door frame, but she was no match for his inpony strength, and without much effort, she ended up tumbling out the door and onto the train platform, her saddle bags spilling everywhere. He tossed that suitcase he’d picked up out after her, and it slid across the ground.
“Good luck, miss. I am sorry you missed your stop.” He said with that infuriating small smile. She tossed a stick of lip balm at him but he shut the door and it bounced off harmlessly. She had to sit and watch as the train started up again, the engine still obscured in darkness and fog, and it soon disappeared into the night’s mist.
Octavia pulled herself to her hooves and gather her things. She packed it all roughly into her saddlebags, cursing to herself. “Operator can go and bugger himself. Bloody wanker says I missed my stop. Not bloody likely. Tosser probably has friends waiting to mug me.” She muttered. “You tossers out there? Come get me! A lone mare all by herself on a train platform in the middle of Celestia’s knickers-knows-where!” Octavia shouted into the mist.
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>>29775261
When nothing happened she was almost disappointed, but she lifted her cello on her back and took stock of where she was. It was a bit surreal, and she’d be lying if she said she had any idea where this lay between Hollow Shades and Canterlot mountain. She didn’t know how long she’d napped before waking up, so she couldn’t even guess based on time. The fog prevented any of Luna’s light from reaching her, and the single lamp on the platform provided minimal illumination. The platform itself stretched off in both directions, but the only lamp that was currently lit was the one she was standing under. Something smelled wrong with this whole mess, and Octavia didn’t like it one bit. Missing train cars, no lights, shady operators, and why in the bloody hell couldn’t she see the engine? Somepony was taking the piss out of her, and she didn’t like it at all.
Should she wait here for the next train? It was the middle of the night, and the fog was making things quite chilly. She might end up waiting for hours until morning, and this really wasn’t the place to be doing it. If she could find an inn or hotel or something, that would be preferable to this soggy mess. She started toward where the exit was likely to be when she saw the suitcase the operator had thrown at her. He must have assumed it was hers and she’d left it behind. It wasn’t, but she might as well take it. See if she could maybe find the owner, or maybe it was contraband and full of bits. Either way, it belonged to her now. She lifted it up, and balanced it on top of her cello, then started away from the tracks, moving through the fog toward the opposite side of the platform.
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>>29775267
She found the wall and looked both ways, trying to decide which way might have the exit, when she saw a figure sitting on one of the benches in the mist. She trotted toward them with a smile, pleased to have finally found a local to ask about where she might be. As she got closer and the figure became clear through the fog, her smile faded. It appeared to just be a pile of clothes, filthy and abandoned on the station platform. She walked up and poked it with a hoof, only to have it collapse. A few cockroaches crawled out of it, much to Octavia’s disgust. She continued walking down along the wall, feeling a little bit nervous when she reached the edge of the lamp’s light.
The darkness ahead of her was absolute, filled with nothing but the swirling fog and the occasional noise of the wilderness that must surround the station. That told her she was on one of those many stations in the countryside that were unponied, and you just bought your ticket from a machine nearby. The fact that she was surrounded by wilderness did nothing to comfort her, what with the single lamp being her only companion. How far away would the nearest village be?
The thought gave her an idea, however. If there weren’t any ponies nearby, nopony would mind if she borrowed the lamp. She turned around and went back to the center of the light, where the lantern hung in from a pole far above her. It was pretty high up, so she definitely couldn’t reach it without some help. She would have to climb it, or find something to stand on. She first tried jumping, but that obviously did not work very well at all. She didn’t even make it halfway up to the lantern.
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>>29775273
Octavia gets kicked off her train.

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>>29773672
Well, it's a good song. Not really horror, but still good. It certainly gives me an image of that frontier-style that I love so much about old trains.
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>>29775283
getting a sort of Silent Hill type vibe from this story so far, fuck'n awsome
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LE BUMPER
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>>29775283
I finally got hold of the Tails of Equestria RPG pics that some kind anon snapped. I'll be getting my own copy of the book eventually, and hopefully a better .pdf, but this is amazing and awesome. Who might be interested in playing a horror game of Tails of Equestria?
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>>29776811
I'm going to pick it up to play with my kids. A horror game would be fun if i can remember to keep them separate. Where is the best place to buy it?
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>>29777068
I'm in North America, so I bought it online and get to wait until sometime in April for them to ship. If you're EU you can get it at generally any shop, but if you want the pics until then: http://iwatchitfortheplot.romesilvanus.io/Pony/Games%20%28Official%3B%20Pen%20%26%20Paper%2C%20Tabletop%2C%20Card%2C%20and%20Board%29/Tails%20of%20Equestria/

That chap has it all online there.
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>>29698360
death is alowed, yes?
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>>29777108
Allowed in what? If you're referring to when I run a horror game in Tails of Equestria, in which death is not the norm, yes.
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>>29765732
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>Smoke and dust filled the air, clouding out the night sky. The only light available was that of the flames dancing and flickering as homes and chariots burn to the ground in the streets of the once thriving town.
>Breathing was made difficult due the intense heat and lack of oxygen in the battleground, making every breath seem to burn as it entered the body.
>There was little reprieve, only constant carnage as the battle rages on. The sounds of blades and spears carving into flesh filled the atmosphere, as did the roaring of the faceless monsters.
>Bolts and sparks of magic filled the air, exploding in violent displays of power. Golden rays and flashes of dark energies illuminated more fighting in the thick dust and smoke enveloping the area.
>So much yelling and screaming echos in the distance as your fellow soldiers and guards attempt to communicate over the carnage of the battle.
>For every one faceless abomination slain, so many more soldiers were lost. Numerous corpses littered the ground, staining the dirt with blood.
>The glow of amber in the eyes of the faceless beasts made them easy to target, thankfully. Their size didn't help them either. They gave themselves away with each move to attack they made.
>"They're coming! They're coming back!" A voice shouted in the distance from atop one of the ruined structures, alerting you all to the group of faceless entering the streets.
>"Light, orders sir?!" Asked the Unicorn standing beside you behind a crumbled wall.
"Wait for it! Wait! Don't attack until you see the amber in their eyes!" You shout back.
>Fortunately for you and the rest of the guards you brought with you, you were able to join in and take charge of a platoon of guards in a section of the town.
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>>29777145
>Hiding in the alleyways of the long gravel street behind debris and within any still standing structure, your new platoon only awaited the order to spring the ambush.
>A rumble is felt in the ground as they walk, each vibration growing slightly as they grow closer. The smalls pebbles and rocks on the ground move and shake with every step they take.
>Beads of sweat run down your face, both from nervousness and the heat from the fires surrounding the area.
>"Come out come out..." A deep voice echos.
>Faceless began slowly making their way into the open street, knocking aside any piece of building or other debris in their path. Few in number, thats really all it ever takes a few to wreak havoc on unprepared opposition.
>"Your cowardice will only make killing you more enjoyable, ponies..." The same voice says again, growing in volume as they get closer.
>"Light, we should-"
"Not yet, give it a few more seconds, just a little closer..." You quietly whisper to the unicorn hiding with you, powering up your magic.
>"We will find you. Your deaths will be especially painful." The faceless creature continues on, scanning the area for any signs of life, "We are the very things you fear, the monsters in your nightmares..."
"Thats right you bastard...just keep talking, let me know exactly where you are..."
>The deeper into the streets they got, the closer they grow to your ambush. So many Pegasus, Unicorns, and Earth ponies alike were awaiting the order within the shadows.
>Their footsteps grew louder, and shook the ground more and more the closer they got.
>The tension began building up in your body, causing you to develop a nervous shake.
>footsteps grew closer still. Taking a deep breath you position yourself to surprise the encroaching faceless horrors.
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>>29777151
>"You should all just give up and give in. Fighting death itself is so-"
"Take those words and choke on them!" You yell out, firing a radiant beam of golden light from your horn over the wall.
>The beam makes a direct hit against the head of the beast. The ground shakes with it's fall, blood now pouring from it's open wound.
>Luckily the arrogant monster's bragging gave you enough time to charge such a spell.
"Now, everyone! Do not let them regroup! Bring them down!" You cry out, ordering the attack.
>Guards began emerging from the shadows and smoke, war crying and raising their weapons and shields as they assault the beasts with great fury.
>Unicorns all fire off magic missiles and beams of light, striking the creatures from all directions. Pegasi and earth ponies work in unison bring the beasts to the ground with long grapples and rope, wrapping up and tripping the creatures over.
>"On it! Get on it and slay it!" Shouts one of guards as they begin climbing atop the beast frantically impaling it over and over again with so many their swords and spears. Black blood poured from the wounds, draining into the roads as the amber glow in it's eyes fade out.
"Don't relent, keep fighting!" You shout as you continue firing bolts of magic at the other creatures being brought down in similar fashion.
>Dark black blood began to fill the streets from the bodies of the fallen creatures, pooling in large puddles on the ground and flowing in the cracks of road like rainwater.
>The others would follow in suite. Using this strategy was rather effective, considering their size and the environment you were in. Seemed something would finally go in your favor...
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>"I won't be brought down by you mortal filth!" Shouted one of the faceless, breaking the rope bindings. "Shadows will take you all!"
>Wrapping a nearby carriage in it's tendril, it hurdles it down the road. It crashes into one of the crumbling buildings, causing it to collapse. Killing two of your soldiers.
"NO! Bring it down, quickly! Before it can wreak any more havoc on us!" You call out as the creature continues to lash out.
>"Die insects!"
>The faceless forms a bright purple orbs in it's arms, pulsating and radiating a dark aura. Throwing it to the ground it detonates with enough force to knock you and every other guard back a number of feet, knocking the air out of you.
*cough* "Ugh, damn chaos magic using..." You mutter to yourself, shakily getting back to your hooves.
>"Your kind's end will come soon, we will take this world as it's true masters!"
>It raises it's tendrils over it's head. A deep purple light begins to emit for the tips of it's arms. A ball of chaotic energy forms and grows, humming with raw power.
>"We won't survive a blast like that!" A guard yells as the creature prepares another attack.
"UNICORNS! Missile Formation!"
>The other unicorns and you line up and each fire off a barrage of magic missile spells at the beast, each one stopping just before impact and being absorbed by the dark orb, growing in power.
>"Send me all you magic, I will take it! This one blast will go off with enough force to wipe you all out! Will any of you try and stop me!?"
>The orb of chaos energy over it's head was growing, raw energy and darkness emitted from it. Giving off a deep purple glow, illuminating the road way.
"No...we won't just roll over and die! Rise my fellow soldiers, rise and face death with honor!" You call out to your fellow guards ponies, attempting to rally them.
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>>29777168
>"We're with you!"
>"We'll die with honor!"
>"For Equestria!"
>"Your tenacity is admirable, BUT POINTLESS!" The large beast cries out, "You fight against death itself! The dark shadow descends on your world, and it will devour you all in a wave of torment!"
"Take him down! Show that we won't go without a fight!"
>The guards all rally into one group behind you as you kick the dirt behind you getting ready ot charge.
"Charge! Wipe him out!" You say now leading the charging formation, preparing a magic missile.
>"Yes, YES! Bring your rage to bear, TRY to stop me Ahahahah!
>The massive creature raised his arms higher over his head, The mass of chaotic energy shining even brighter in a blinding light.
>"This one blast...it-will-TAKE YOU ALL!" His voices raises as he laughs in triumph.
"Do not fear! Keep up the attack!"
>The platoon continues it's charge, the sound of hooves hitting the dirt echo off the building walls as the gap closes.
>"Die, DIE!! AHHHHAHA- UHg...AHHHHHHHH!!"
>A mass of green light pierces through the creature, giving it a wide burning hole in it's now smoking chest.
>The mass of energy over it's head quickly dissipates into the air as it loses it's balance, writhing in pain.
>"NGGGGHHH! Wha-what is this!?" It says turning to an emerald glowing pony.
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>>29777178
>"I-impossible..." It says falling down on it's backside, shaking the ground on impact.
>The platoon stops the charge, looking in awe as the creature collapses.
>The faceless monster's eyes fade out, and its body begins to glow. White mist, it's life energy, leaves it's body.
"What in..." You think to yourself as a familiar voice begins speaking.
>"Your life will bring much power...as will the /rest/ of your kind!" Nether says as the life energy is fully drained, leaving a grayed out withered husk.
"I-I don't believe it..." You say to yourself, looking in shock having seen Nether slay one of them with seemingly little effort..
>"Who is that? And where the Tarturas did he get such...power?" One of the guards ask.
>The guards all begin talking among each other of what they just witnessed. It took so much to defeat only a few of them, yet here Nether stood taking one down so fast.
>"Maybe hes using chaos magic?"
>"I think he turned to black magic"
>"Could it be rune magic?"
>"look at his eyes, he must be a demon!"
>Nether looks to the sky, and begins to yell into the dark.
>"No more, fools! No more lives will be consumed by your dark crusade on our lands!" Nether boasts, reveling in his triumph.
"Nether? No...it can't be." You say talking to yourself.
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>>29777187
>His eyes were glowing with a dim red. He had dark purple highlights in his fur as well as white streaks in his now wild an unkempt black mane. His cutie mark had changed as well, resembling some kind of rune covered circle with two stars inside of it.
>"Light, is that you?" He asks looking to you and the other guards, "Looks like I made it just in time then."
"Nether...so it /is/ you..."
>"It is." He says as the red light in his eye fade to a dim glow, "With this power I can turn the tide in this war and save our kingdom Light!" He said walking towards you.
"What happened to your cutie mark, what is that runic symbol?"
>Nether looks to his flank as grin grows on his face.
>"The symbol of my new power..." He turns back, the grin growing on his face, "I told you, Light. I would find a way to end this war quickly, and with this chaos magic I can do just that!"
"At no heed to the cost? Look at you! That red glow in your eyes! That...mark..." Your tone grows more serious as you try to reason with your old friend. "We've go to get you to Princess Celestia and Princess Luna right away, to cleanse the corruption from you!"
>"What corruption do you speak of? I may look a little different but-"
"Look at yourself..." You say pointing to a shard of broken glass.
>Nether walks over to the shard and looks down, actually being able to really see himself for the first time since coming back. He put a hoof to his face and looked into his glowing eyes, the streaks in his mane. Even his teeth had changed, they were more...sharp then before.
>His expression turned to one of anger as he continued looking at himself.
>"I..."
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>>29777197
"Please, old friend, see reason!" You pleaded, as he continues staring at himself in disbelief, "Your obsession with trying to find a way to use chaos magic has made you lose sight of who you really are! I should have stopped you while I had a chance..."
>"If I have to sell myself to save my home...I would do so and I have!" Nether stomps on the glass, breaking it apart, "And I would do so /again/!"
"Nether, think! Right now your a wanted pony! And /this/" You say gesturing at the drained corpse, "Will only confirm any suspicion that the royal courts have that your dabbling in dark magic! Even when the war is over you'll have to face trial for going AWOL, /and/ for using chaos magic despite that it is forbidden!"
>"Trial?!" He shouts in anger, "Did you not see me take out the faceless?! Did you not see how easily I-"
"Yes! I did!" You look to the battlefield, the faceless one's husk now turning to ash and blowing away in the wind, "But at the cost of your soul?! Your very being!?" You turn back to face Nether, "Did you think this is what Celestia, Luna, or even your mother would want?!"
>"M-my mother..." Nether says falling back on his haunches, looking at the ground. His angry expression turned to one of grimace, "I-I became so obsessed with the thought of protecting her and everpony else..."
>Nether looks back to the broken glass, seeing himself in small pieces.
>"I never even realized the darkness now lurking within me..." Nether continues staring into the broken glass reflection of himself, "Di-did I make the right choice?"
>"Light Break! Sir!!" A Pegasus yelled flying to your position. His mane had black marks along with his fur, like he had just been in a fire.
"Aircutter?! Why aren't you back at the village, what happened!?"
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>>29777212
>He lands and immediately falls to a sitting position, breathing hard.
>"W-we were ambushed, *pant* by a dark, shadowy figure, *pant* it was massive! It destroyed the village, killed everypony!" The Pegasus turns back to the direction of the village. "I...was the only one who made it out."
"Oh no...DAMN!" You say stomping a hoof to the ground, "I told the civilians there that we..."
>"A village?" Nether whispers to himself, seeing the direction the pegasi came from, "Thats south of...no that can't be..." His eyes go wide and jaw drops when he realizes exactly where your talking about, "NOOOO!!"
>Nether jumps back up and begins running towards the south, green fires appearing on his hooves as he takes flight.
"Flight? But how in...wait." Your eyes go wide and you heart sinks, knowing what he just realized. "That village was where his..."
>You collapse to your haunches. Heart sinking even further into your stomach as you stare at the fading trails of emerald fire.
"I'm so sorry Nether...I am...so sorry..."

All for tonight, will likely have more tomorrow night or possibly the afternoon.
As always Questions, comments, concerns all welcome, hopefully this part didn't feel rushed like the last battle scene I had.

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>>29777082
Cool, Thanks.

I'm in the US. I see several sites, including Amazon, have it for preorder. Just wondering if there is an official sorce or more reliable retailer to buy it from.
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>>29777255
I preordered it here: http://sodapopminiatures.com/preorders-17/my-little-pony-tails-of-equestria
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if you want to try a pony based horror game you can checkout poor unfortunate foals
https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Poor_Unfortunate_Foals
never played it so not sure if it's any good
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>>29777433
I've played it. It's missing a lot of mechanics, but I filled them it. It's pretty fun, but is unfinished.
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>>29775283
I like where this story is going.
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>>29777458
oh
do you still have the parts you added
I'd like to give the game a try
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>>29777854
Oh my, that's a tough question. I'll have a look and see if I can find it again. No promises, though.
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>>29776811
How do you play that game?
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>>29778229
It's a tabletop RPG. Make a character, and the GM runs a story. Like D&D, but officially with ponies. By Hasbro even.
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>>29775283
Octavia jumped a couple more times, but was unable to reach the lantern, even with a running start. She thought about standing on her cello case, but didn’t want to risk damaging it or the cello inside. Her saddlebags weren’t solid enough, and the suitcase she was given was too thin. She’d have to climb the pole, then. She looked at the pole, and the ten-foot distance up it to the lantern out at the end of its arm, and she felt a little wary, but nopony ever gained anything by avoiding challenges. She jumped as high as she could and latched onto the pole, then attempted to scramble up the rest of it. She made it a couple inches before losing her grip and sliding back down to the bottom. She tried again and made it slightly further before sliding back down.
“Celestia’s solar arse!” Octavia cursed.
She kicked the lamppost, shaking the light, but it didn’t fall. Not that she really wanted it to. She still wanted the damn thing in working condition when she got her hooves on it. She left her luggage under the lamppost and walked about the edge of the light, looking for something she could use to get it down. She saw the benches, and she considered pulling it out to the post, but it was bolted to the platform. She grabbed it, pulled, yanked, and even bucked it, but it wasn’t giving way.
“RAAAAAH!” She yelled, shaking it as hard as she could, the metal rattling loud in the darkness.
Still nothing. Not even after that outburst. She looked around the rest of the area near the bench. Wall in both directions, disappearing into the darkness on either side. That inky, terribly, foggy darkness she loathed so very much. Not even a pony here to guide her to a hotel or anything. Absolutely terrible service.
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>>29779328
She wandered over to the bulletin board, looking at what was on it. It wasn’t going to help her get the lantern down, but she was still curious. Most of the messages were torn, tattered, faded, or otherwise damaged beyond recognition, but from what was still there, somepony was looking for his or her cat, which had gone missing some time ago. Likely a decade or more judging by the condition of the message. Somepony else was teaching piano. Somepony was looking to hire workers for something she could read, and somepony had gone missing. She fiddled with the postings, seeing if there was anything telling her where she was. She pushed a few illegible messages out of the way, and stopped when she found a message behind the rest, that for some odd reason looked newer than the others. It was written on one of those flash cards used in school all the time. Octavia used to use them to help her memorize different notes when she was younger.
“Exit on the rails.” It said.
Octavia looked back at the yellow line that indicated the edge of the platform. At this station it was faded and patchy, not appearing to have been upkept by anypony at all. ‘Exit on the rails’, it read. But what did that mean, exactly? That she should get onto the rails and walk in one direction or the other? That would be stupid. Not only would it head for a very long time without directly hitting a town, it would likely not even intersect with most roads. She’d ridden the train before, and those kinds of intersections were sparse. Most happened down at the frontier near Appleloosa. Did it mean that she should just wait for another train to arrive, because that looked like that’s what she’d be doing. She couldn’t see a bloody thing, and getting lost in an unfamiliar place was a bad idea.
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>>29779335
That lead Octavia back to her original goal: Get that lantern.
If she had the lantern, she could carry it with her, make sure she was still on the road itself instead of mistakenly wandering off into the wilderness in the dark. Good way to get eaten by a timberwolf, that. Octavia walked a little bit further down, until she was near the edge of the light, just past the pile of dirty clothes. She squinted as she looked out of her little bubble of light. The fog made it look like more things were moving out there than there actually were. Maybe those were ponies, or maybe those were swirls of light. The most likely option was that they were swirls of light reflected off the fog. If there were other ponies here, it was more likely they would be hanging out underneath the single working streetlamp.
…Unless they liked being in the darkness…
Octavia shivered and stepped away from the shadowy edge. She’d successfully given herself the shivers. Paranoia about the dark sped up her spine and into her throat. She coughed quietly and glanced quickly out into the night. With just a little bit of hurry in her step, she walked back to the streetlamp and stood directly underneath it, waiting for nothing in particular. If a new train came along, would she even be allowed on it? She had no ticket, and she couldn’t find the bloody ticket booth at the Celestiaforsaken station. If this even was a station! Nopony to help, nopony watching the platform for ne’er do wells and other unsavory characters. Maybe if she promised to pay the difference upon arrival? Surely they could make some sort of leniency for that. She had the bits, but she just didn’t have the ticket. She’d happily pay if they could just make it more convenient.
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>>29779343
Octavia tries to acquire a lantern.

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2 am lack of sleep scary reading time bump
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What a strange and wonderful day.
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>>29779347
Octavia sat down next to her luggage and waited silently. At first, all that could be heard was the occasional whistling of the chill wind. As time passed, however, Octavia would have sworn that she could hear something else. It was rhythmic, and only happened sometimes, but it seemed to her to be hoofsteps. Light hoofsteps, but hoofsteps nonetheless. Her ears twitched as she strained to hear better, but just when she thought she had picked it up, the wind would whistle, causing her to lose it.
“Is somepony out there?” She called, not sure if she wanted a response or not. “Is there a hotel nearby? Or do you know when the next train will arrive? Please, I’m trying to get to Ponyville.”
When she got no response, she huffed in frustration. It sounded like there was somepony out there, but nopony was responding. The initial fright had given way to immense frustration. If something was out there that wanted to hurt her, surely it would have done so already. Octavia paced back and forth out of boredom, trying to fill her time until the next train’s arrival. After a while she stared up at the lantern again, then kicked the lamppost, then walked in circles around it.
Nothing happened the entire time she was there. Hours must have passed, but nothing gave way to anything interesting. No trains, no gang members out of the fog, no extra lanterns, nopony showed up. Absolutely nothing happened. The worst part was that the sun didn’t rise, nor did the fog dissipate. The fog itself, from her time standing in it waiting, didn’t seem like normal fog, either. It swirled and danced in what felt like wind, but all of it didn’t seem to be going in a single direction. She could see the whorls it made in the lamplight, and it kind of moved in what seemed like a circle.
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>>29780080
Octavia went to the edge of the lamplight and looked inward at her luggage. She observed the fog for a moment as it moved sluggishly about her hooves. It moved inward, toward the lantern, but the clouds moved around the right side of the lantern, then turned around and disappeared into the darkness out over the tracks, following a curve that would push them back around to behind her if she had to guess. Which would then push them back under her hooves and into the lantern light. That should only happen if she were inside some sort of room, and not out exposed to the wilderness.
Maybe that was why the sun hadn’t yet risen! She hadn’t seen any grass or anything either! But then where in Tartarus had the fog come from? Was there some sort of accident that was causing the fog? And why did she hear somepony walking about? It seemed to make sense, but there were too many unanswered questions. The only way to answer them would be to… go outside.
Octavia walked slowly back to her luggage, breath caught in her throat. She still hadn’t managed to acquire the lantern, and it was still absolutely pitch dark beyond the edge of her lantern’s little aura. It made her extremely uncomfortable to think about leaving the light, but waiting here wasn’t accomplishing anything. With how thick the fog was, would she even be able to find her way back if she needed to? What if the train came while she was gone and she couldn’t get back in time to get on? It would seem silly that she couldn’t, but the fog prevented her from seeing much, and it really muted what meager light there was to begin with. She could test it though. She could step outside the ring of illumination down the platform in a straight line, then see if she could find her way back from a short distance. That should be easy and safe.
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>>29780100
Octavia opened her saddlebags and rummaged through them. She had an ugly scarf that Vinyl had given her as a Hearthswarming gift. She wore it because it was a gift, but at this point in time, she needed something to guide her back. She wasn’t going to take chances. She pulled out the scarf, looking at it solemnly for a moment, thinking about Vinyl. She really wanted to get home. She felt tears welling up, but shook them back. She had to focus, and now was no time to get emotional. She was about to tear it when she remembered: The pile of old clothes!
“Of course!” She exclaimed.
She didn’t have to destroy her own scarf at all! She could just use those moldy old clothes instead. Depending on the material they were made of, of course. She put down the scarf and trotted over to the edge of the light, where the pile of clothing sat on the bench. They were still as disgusting as the first time she touched them, but she hoped most of the cockroaches had left. Gingerly she reached a hoof out and poked the pile. It made a moist sound when she touched it, but nothing else spilled out of the gross mound. She lifted off the top article, and dropped it to the side. That one wasn’t going to be of any use to her, it wasn’t the right type of material. It wouldn’t unravel like she needed. The next one was some sort of thick, material that was extremely tough in places, but cracked in others. It smelled incredibly foul, and had a sheen of moisture on it from the fog. She didn’t know what it was, but she definitely couldn’t use it. It didn’t even seem to have a weave to it at all.
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>>29780123
Octavia prepares to venture out into the darkness.

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>>29780011
That was a quite a day. Amusing at first, but it got old quickly. Glad to be back.
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>>29780139
Thread save before bed. Too much afterpol.
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>>29780685
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>>29780685
Ya
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>>29780139
Octavia pulled cloth after cloth out of the pile, looking for one that might unravel like she wanted. Most were too rotten to be of any use. One of them unraveled well enough, but the thread didn’t stay in one piece and would be no use to her. She didn’t want to get out into the darkness and not able to find her way back when the thread snapped at the slightest gust of wind. Finally, however, she found a sweater that looked like it had been hoof-knit, and pulled it out of the pile. The rest of the clothes collapsed sadly as part of their support was removed. She stepped back as the musty mound flopped onto the platform, spilling out a single remaining cockroach. She held up the sweater in front of her and looked at it carefully. Hoof-knit, tight weave, but loose enough to come apart, and… it had her cutie mark on it?
“What in the…”
Octavia looked at the treble clef adorning the front of the sweater, and felt a chill. She shook her head slowly, fear tugging at her, but forced herself to calm down. It was a treble clef, that’s all. It was musical notation, and nothing more. It wasn’t exactly her cutie mark on the sweater, it was just a treble clef. She draped the sweater over a foreleg, kicked the remaining pile of clothes under the bench, and went back to her lamp to work at pulling it apart.
When she approached her luggage, she noticed that her saddlebags had spilled, trailing a line of stuff out toward the darkness. That surge of fear over the sweater came roaring back and raced straight up her spine. She also noticed her scarf was missing, and felt a surge of anger in addition to the terror of something being out there.
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>>29783252
“Oh give me a bloody break! It’s bad enough that now I know for certain you’re out there, you tosser, but you feel a need to rob me of a personal bloody gift? If you got a beef with me, bloody show yourself!” Octavia raged. She didn’t leave the safety of the lantern’s light, however.
After she had yelled her peace into the darkness, receiving no response, she plopped down with a huff, put her items back inside the saddlebags. She took a quick accounting of what was there and what was missing, and after a quick mental assessment she determined that not much had actually been taken, if anything other than the scarf. With it being so unnaturally chilly, she could understand why that item had been nabbed first. As she thought about how chilly it was, she realized that she now no longer had her scarf, and she was getting rather tired. There was going to be no way she could sleep comfortably with some sort of protection from the cold. Octavia looked ruefully down at the sweater she had pulled from the rotted pile of clothing. It was big, and felt to be made of wool. Definitely big enough for her to wear comfortably. Maybe even fit her hinds into it if she stretched it a bit, and compared to the rest of the pile, it was fairly clean. She looked over at the pile she’d kicked under the bench, and as if to illustrate her point, it toppled over.
“Ugh, fine.” Octavia said. She slipped on the sweater, pulling it over her head, and slipping her hooves into the sleeves. Her head popped out the far end, and she looked down at herself in it. The treble clef sat directly in the middle of her chest, and the sleeves extended out past the ends of her hooves.
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>>29783261
“Feels kinda greasy, but not bad.”
She resolved to take a quick nap, then unravel the sweater and investigate the darkness. She didn’t know how well she could sleep with something out there watching her, but if whoever it was wanted her dead, they would have bloody well done it by now. She wasn’t going to be able to function if she didn’t have sleep. Not to mention food and water. She didn’t feel particularly hungry or thirsty. The thirsty was probably thanks to the damp fog floating about, but she didn’t know what she would do when she got hungry. Eat a cockroach? She gagged at the thought. Either way, she wanted to sleep, so she set her luggage up next to the lamppost, crawled on top of her cello case, and put that stupid suitcase on the outer edge of the pile. If that thing out there wanted to steal something, the suitcase would be easy to take instead of her personal effects. She curled up, pleased that her hinds could fit inside the sweater like she thought. She closed her eyes, cracking them open a few times as she watched for whatever was out there, but she eventually fell asleep.
She was awoken by a scraping sound sometime later, and her eyes snapped open to see some…’thing’, running off with the suitcase she’d planted. It had unnaturally long legs for a pony, and its tail was also strangely long and hung limply down her flank. Its mane was similar; long, limp, and covered the sides of its face, so she could only see it holding the suitcase in its mouth, but nothing else. One thing she did notice, however, was her scarf. Wrapped on top of the tattered and filthy clothes covering its body was her clean, hoof-knit scarf that Vinyl had given her.
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>>29783266
Octavia sees some...'thing'.

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>>29783266
Went from ominous to "WTF", its a good thing!
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"I've got to make sure! I-sh-she! NO! She /will/ be okay!" You say trying to re-assure yourself, hastily soaring back to your place of birth. Speeding through the air, trails of bright green fire trailing behind you.
"Damnit Light, why did you leave them, WHY!?"
>A dim light glows in the dark as you grow nearer. Your mind races thinking of what could have happened, the vision once again flashing in your mind.
"There! I can only hope I'm not too late!" You say descending down to the ground.
>The small village lay in ruin, razed by whatever abomination had come through the area.
>Landing near the village center, you see what has become of your once humble home.
>All the homes and farmhouses lay in ruin, embers and fire still burning all around.
"No...this...this cant be happening." You think to yourself, scanning the area.
>Observing the damages, you try to get your bearings. Trying to remember exactly where your old house was. Everything was in ruin, it was hard to tell.
>Following the stream running through the center of town, you see the bodies of so many dead, laying out in various places on the ground. You can only imagine the panic when they were attacked.
>Looking into the river glowing in the moonlight, you see your reflection.
"Can't let her see me like this..." You say looking for something to cover with.
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>>29783996
>Seeing a tarp caught against a wooden pole sticking form the ground, you grab it and drape it over yourself like a hood.
"They left this place...left it open and vulnerable." You say gritting your teeth, muttering to yourself, "They /knew/ something could happen...and they still left..."
>You start recalling the layout of the now ruined village. Coming up to the bridge as you continue walking, quietly thinking to yourself.
"The bridge is here, which means town hall was to the west side of town," you whisper to yourself as your heart begins to race from memories beginning to flood your mind of your childhood. "Which means home is...oh no."
>You spot your old house, a crumbling waste of it's former self. Only small pieces of the frame and chimney still stood, the rest was but burnt wood and ash all over the floor.
>Wasting no time, you go straight for the ruined farmhouse, calling out for your mother, Starsurge. Wanting to make sure she was alive.
"Mother!? Mother are you here?" You ask as you dig through the rubble in frantic desperation, "Where are you? Answer so I know!!"
>Tears began filling your eyes, blurring your vision as you keep digging and throwing aside pieces of charred wood and debris.
"Damnit, where is she! C'mon! C'mon..." Your digging slows as you begin to weep, "I-I cant..."
>"N-N....Nether...is that you?" The voice faintly calls out.
>Ears perking straight up, you look towards the right half of the house. There was mom, still alive.
"Mother!" You cry out running directly towards her, taking the fallen planks and rocks off her legs and torso. She winced in pain at this, her hind legs were bruised and swollen. Broken by the weight of the house when it collapsed.
"I'm here," You say pushing aside the debris, "I'm here..."
>"Nether! My dear, beautiful colt!"
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>>29784007
>She immediately embraces you in what felt like the longest hug. You could feel a wave of relief wash over you as you felt the warm embrace. It had been so long since you had actually talked to her. It almost felt surreal.
>"You've been gone so long Star, I thought..." She says breaking the hug.
"I've been...busy since you last saw me." You say holding her upright in your forehooves, "I've gone through a little...change. I won't let these monsters wreak anymore havoc against our home!"
>She looks down in surprise at the fur on your front and hind legs, seeing the dark streaks of purple running down from your shoulders. Taking the hood off your head as she inspects your face, she rubs her hoof against your cheek and through your mane.
>"Your coat, your mane...Nether, what happened? You look so...different." She asks, looking into your eyes.
"I've been through Tarturas and back...but don't worry, its going to be okay. With my new power I will protect all of Equestria, no more of this will have to happen." You say with a smirk.
>"But...your eyes."
>Her expression turns to one of worry as she sees the red in your eyes, glowing ever so faintly.
"My appearance may be different, but...I-I did what I had to to be able to save our land." You say trying to hold back anymore tears, you were unsure as to whether you were trying to convince her, or yourself.
>"Your as determined as your father once was..." She says, a smile growing on her face.
>"He always believed, that doing whats right is whats best for the world. And that protecting what you care about is most important."
"Seems I'm more like him then I thought, heh..." You look down and away, "Even if I did the wrong things..." You think to yourself.
>She wipes the tears from your face.
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>>29783266
>Feels kinda greasy.
I can relate.
I had to wear my old sweaty workout clother after a formal meeting.
Just too hot a day for a suit.
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>>29784019
>"My Nether Star, your father always believed there was greatness within you. He always said how proud you would make us..."
>You try your hardest to hold back anymore tears rolling down your face, your mother didn't talk much about father, and you only had feint and vague memories of him when you were a colt before he died.
>"He knew, as I knew, that you would make us both proud, if only he could see you now..." She says looking over her right shoulder to an envelope, covered by ash. "That was a letter he wrote for you. I didn't want you to see it until I knew you were old enough to understand it."
>Starsurge reaches over trying to pick it up, not being able to reach.
"Here, I got it." You say leaning forward to pick it up off the ground, tilting it to the side and letting the dust fall off.
>"I kept it safe for so long and while we were attacked, I think your ready to read it now..."
>Gently setting your mother back down, you stare at the envelope, reading on the front: "To my son", the back of it only read his name: "Shining Flare"
>Opening the seal on the front, you slowly take out and unfold the letter, reading:
>"My son, I write you this letter, knowing that after today I may not ever get another chance to see you. We have lost much in this conflict against Discord's kingdom, and now we venture to search for the fabled Elements of Harmony within the Everfree. All our life, we have lived under his rule. A world I hope you won't have to see, where chaos rules and there is no peace. Princesses Celestia and Luna say the Elements of Harmony are the key to defeating him, but until then, we can only struggle to maintain our very lives in hostile lands. I have no doubt, however, that when this is all over and you grow up to become a stallion of your own..."
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>>29784038
>You lose your place as you begin shaking, words blurring as you can't withhold your emotion. Taking a deep breath, you compose yourself and read on.
>"You will bring pride to your mother and I, and if you stay true to yourself and become one of the royal army, Equestria will be a better place because of you. But, my son, do not ever let desperate times cloud your judgment and beliefs. Do not ever allow darkness to take hold of your heart in trying times. I know, preserving harmony and protecting what you hold dear, is the noblest aspiration. But forsaking oneself to do so is never an option. Honor and spirit, my son, now matter how dire the battle; never forsake it..."
>You drop to your haunches and get lost in thought at your father's parting words. You had done exactly what he said not to.
>You had sacrificed your own soul for power.
>Looking down at your new cutie mark, you think of how you had changed; you begin to question every decision you've made till now.
"I did everything he said not too..." You mutter as a feeling of heat begins rising in your body in anger. "I did everything he said not too!!" You yell into the sky, stomping your hoof into the ground and breaking through the floor.
>"Nether, what are you talking about?" Starsurge asks, grabbing your hoof.
"He told me in the letter...don't let your judgement be clouded. Look at me!" You say gesturing at your body and eyes, "I allowed darkness to take hold! I-I allowed..." You say collapsing back down.
>"Nether, you did what you thought was right." She places her hoof back on your cheek, "Whatever happens..."
>She brings you in for another hug, which you return.
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>>29784045
>Getting caught in the moment, you don't notice the mass of shadows gathering around. Beginning to manifest.
>"I love you, son..." She says as a figure emerges from the shadows.
>"Touching...." A dark voice says, echoing in the night.
>Your mother's embrace is broken abruptly by a large tentacle wrapping itself around her, pulling her away and into a large claw.
>"Nether!! HELP M-"
>"She is mine now..." The monster says as she is swallowed by it's claws.
"NOOO!! MOTHER!" You scream, collapsing onto the floor.
"You...damn you...DAMN YOU!"
>Tears now stream profusely down you face as the pain grows and grows into a roaring fire in your heart.
>"Hmph, how easy it was. Tearing apart this pathetic little spit of land you call home to pieces." It takes a step forward, shaking the ground with it's massive size, "Soon, all will suffer the same fate..."

Kinda glad that the mlpol thing happened yesterday, gave me time to go over this again, hopefully it isn't too fucked up hah.
As always, questions, comments, concerns, all welcome!

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Bedtime bump.
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>cooking dinner bump
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>>29787074
What you cooking for dinner?
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>The beast takes another step forward, fully revealing itself.
>It had appendages growing out of it's back, claws with gnarled spikes for hands, and like every other of the faceless; a squid-like head was on it's shoulders complete with the same burning amber eyes.
>"I can taste the essence of her spirit...I can feel her fear and despair." The beast squints it's eyes, "Shes asking, why you didn't save her?"
>You sit staring at the ground as he continues on with his speech. This was without a doubt the same one you saw decimating Firespark's brigade that day.
>"I am called Korthax, the future ruler of this world! With Discord sealed away, we have a new opportunity to make this world in our image..."
"Stop talking..." You mutter, still looking at the ground.
>"Hmhmhmhahaha! Under my rule this world will be ushered into a new age of strife! Your kind's rule will be short lived as you see what a /real/ empire looks like!" Korthax looks down on you, seeing the symbol that is now your cuties mark, "Ahh, /they/ gave you chaos magic. Tell me, what did you think of Ny'alotha?"
"Shut-UP! I'm done listening to your damned voice!"
>Your horn lights up, emerald light emanating from your body and eyes as an orb of green fire grows at the tip.
>"Hah! you think to implement chaos magic, against me? Hahahah!"
"Die!"
>A bolt of emerald fire shoots from your horn, directly aimed for the massive creature's head.
>Korthax knocks away the attack with his massive claw, laughing as he does so.
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>>29787550
>"Hmhmhmhm, Yes. They certainly gave you a powerful form of chaos energy, but I wonder, how well can you use it!?"
>Korthax raises his claws over his head.
>"You cannot control such magics! You don't even know how to use it!!"
>He brings his claw down upon you, smashing into the ground, destroying all that was left of your crumbled childhood home.
>"Hah, so weak...what!?"
>A green bubble surrounded you, managing a barrier at the last second.
"I wont be brought down so easily! I will-NGH" You cringe in pain, despite the barrier the impact of that attack still hit with a lot of force.
>"How long do you think you can prolong your pathetic life!?" He says raising his claws over his head yet again.
>Korthax smashes his claws into the barrier again and again, hammering you into the ground. The thunderous impacts can ring in the distance and echo off the distant mountains. The pain from each impact can still be felt form the shear force, booming in your ears and causing your legs to shake with each hit.
"D-damnit! I cant...AHH!" You cringe in pain as the hits start to overwhelm you, cracks in the barrier begin to form as your power wanes.
>"You don't know how to use your power..." A voice rings in you head, the same oh so familiar voice.
"Wh-what do you want?! Get out of my head you damned deceivers!"
>The claws reign down again, the cracks in the barrier grow even larger.
>"Let us show you what you are /truly/ capable of..."
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>>29787553
>You begin feeling a sense of weightlessness. Your vision fades to black only for a second as control of your body is lost.
>"I will unmake this world, for MYSELF! Rivers of blood, roads paved in skulls, walls decorated with the corpses of your bravest warriors will stand testament to my power!" Korthax raises his claws yet again, leaning back to finish you off in one final blow, "I, Will, Have, MY, WORRRLD!"
"Its not your world to take, fool."
>"EHHAHH!" Korthax brings his claws down, as a bright green light lights up the entire area in a radiant glow.
>Your body shoots up into his arm, going straight through his shoulder. Causing his claw to explode into a mass of green flames. Black blood and bits of flesh rain down all over the ground.
>"NGAHHHH! How!? Not possible! Where did you get this surge of power?!" Korthax says holding his severed limb as the fire still burns into his body, stammering back in pain.
>Your body hovers directly behind him, as he turns to face you. Green fire surrounds your entire being in an aura of raw chaotic energy.
"Your deceit is unforgivable Korthax, you've spat in the face OF GODS!" The Old God's spoke through your body, in a chorus of horror.
>"That voice...NO!" Korthax says, taking more steps back, still holding his shoulder where his limb was severed.
"Have you forgotten who we are? Have you forgotten, what WE can do!?"
>Your horn glows brighter then ever before, as white mist begins draining from the faceless leader's body.
>"No...NOOOOOOO!"
>For the first time ever, you see fear in the eyes of one of these creatures, as well as in it's voice.
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>>29787556
"Your life will ultimately contribute to our return..."
>Korthax's body fades as the life from him drains, directly into yours.
>His husk collapses to the ground, uttering his last words.
>"I...travel once again...to.....Ny'alotha...." He says as his body turns into a withered, dried out husk.
>"Follow his path, or fail us...and you will know eternal anguish..." The voices say, fading out.
>You feel control returning as you fall to the ground. You land hard on your hooves, you frantically feel around your body, making sure you aren't dreaming or still under their control.
"What the Tarturas was that? How did I..." You ask yourself, breathing heavy and ecstatic.
>"That is a small glimpse of what you can do at your fullest..." The voices rang in you head.
"My...fullest? Wait, you...you took my body!?"
>"A small piece of our essence is within you...we may take what remains of your soul at anytime we desire..."
>This power was becoming less appealing by the minute. What point is there in having it if you are only a slave to another's will? If everyone thinks of you as a monster more willing to sell his soul to make a dark pact for power?
"Never again My body is my own! I told you, I /won't/ be made a puppet!" You say banging your hooves into the ground.
>"Your will is no longer your own...you belong to us, forever."
"I'd prefer my own will thank you, I just witnessed how you would handle your servants..."
>Nothing was making sense. If Korthax was a general in the Old god's armies, why would they want you to kill him?
"Why did you use me to kill him anyway? Sounded like his vision for a world was what you wanted..." You say looking at the husk being taken in small pieces by the wind.
>"It is as we said. Our power won't be used unless to benefit us. The fool believed he could stray from our sight and take this world for himself..."
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>>29787560
"So, what will become of the faceless armies still roaming around then?" You ask, looking off into the distance.
>"With Korthax's death, they will sense the absence of their leader. They will return to the earth and their power will return to us..."
"They will go back to the black forest, thats what you mean?"
>"Yes...and with them gone, /you/ will be the one that brings about our second coming..."
>No, you took this power to save your world, not end it...
"You...you betrayed me! You only wanted me to kill him so that you had nothing to take the world you wanted!"
>"Pitiful stupid creature!" The voice echos in your mind, growing louder causing you to fall to the ground from the pain in your head, "You /will/ serve us, there is no choice for you in this matter!"
>You cover your head with your fore hooves, trying in vain to block out the pain.
>"Your friends have deemed you a monster, your kingdom has turned it's back on you, the only family you had left is GONE! You have /nothing/ left!"
"I...I have lost everything..."
>Your mind goes back to only what just happened. The sudden realization of the loss of your only family.
>It hit you like a cold wave crashing against your back, every memory of her returning all at once. Every day she took care of you. Raised you, on her own...after your father's death.
"I-I don't even..."
>"Fill your heart with rage...it was your friend who let this happen, your would-be nobles who didn't care enough to keep your home safe, the very same who would have you hunted, the very same who you had dedicated your life to protecting..."
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>>29787567
"But..."
>"Your hate is just...hate them...HATE THEM!! All you've accomplished and sacrificed, and they would still look down on you for doing so. They are blind to the truth of things..."
"I...d-did what I had too..." You whisper to yourself.
>"You could be a king in our world, answering only to us. You /should/ be king. They are unwilling to make the necessary choices to preserve their own homes, they do not deserve to rule..."
"I know what it means to sacrifice whats necessary to protect, I-NO! I can't just betray my home, my friends!" You look to the sky, filled with stars and Luna's moon shining brightly, giving the grass a teal tint as it glows. "I...did it all for them."
>Seems like every choice you make only makes things go from bad, to worse...

All I got for the rest of the night. Might have more tomorrow evening.
Always though, Questions, comment, concerns are welcome.

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>>29783270
“H-hey…!” Octavia blurted, and immediately regretted it.
The thing slightly turned its head, allowing her to see a single eye. The eye, such as it was, was covered by some sort of secondary eyelid, and it squinted as it gazed back at the light and her, there was a noise something like the hissing of steam escaping a pipe, then the thing loped off into the darkness. The clopping of its hooves was muted and seemingly far away as it disappeared into the black, taking her scarf and the suitcase with it. Octavia was silent for another second, frozen in horror and confusion at what she had just seen, but then she realized it was getting away with her scarf and the suitcase.
Octavia opened her mouth and almost shouted after it, but she had no idea what that thing was capable of. Sure, it could have killed her, and it seemed completely unnatural, so who knew how dangerous it was! It was like, twice her height! And if it could survive here, then it must be prepared to live out in that pitch blackness, so it would have the advantage on her there. Should she just sit here, impotent, until it slowly began taking everything away from her? There wasn’t really much she could do about it, really.
Octavia gripped her head in her hooves, trying to think, and she came to yet another realization: This wasn’t an actual train station, this was something far more sinister, and whatever it was, that thing out there knew something. Could it talk, would it talk? Why hadn’t it killed her? Why take that suitcase and her scarf? What was in that suitcase? Why hadn’t she looked? She really should have looked inside it. Maybe it was a bundle of yarn she could have used, or maybe it was some magical artifact that would have helped her escape! Celestia, she was a fool!
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>>29788140
Octavia wrung her head in her hooves and felt more tears building up behind her eyes. She tried to hold them back and think clearly, but she was just a mess right now. She started sniffling, and felt tears coming. They were on the edge of her eyes when there was suddenly a bright flash of light out in the darkness. It was coming from the direction the thing had gone. There was a second flash of light, and a low moaning sound. Was something in the suitcase doing that? It sounded like the creature was getting hurt. Maybe there was something to defend herself with in it, and she’d let the creature take it! Octavia looked down at herself, in the frumpy, greasy sweater. She had intended to unravel it and go out there with some way to get back, but if something was happening out there, she couldn’t let this chance go by! Another flash of light and a higher pitched groan came from the darkness, some distance away. It was now or never.
“Alright you tosser, be ready, cause Octavia’s coming for you, r-ready or not!” She said, her voice barely shaking.
She rolled up her sleeves, took a deep breath, and when the next flash happened, she oriented herself, took a look back at the lamppost and started toward the flash. She was nearing the edge of the light when she caught herself slowing down, and forced her pace to quicken, she was almost there when the long sleeves of the sweater slipped down below her hooves, causing her to trip. She fell, tried to catch herself, and cracked her head on the platform. Her vision swam, and she tried to orient herself, but the pain and disorientation was a bit much, and she tripped on the sleeve again, falling head over hooves.
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>>29788142
When next she opened her eyes, Octavia found herself on the very edge of light cast by the lamppost. She pulled herself to a sitting position and glanced frantically about. Where were the flashes? How long was she out? She gave herself a quick once-over, and found that she was still intact. No injuries, and she was still in that ugly sweater. Much to her dismay, there were no more flashes, either. She waited, straining her eyes trying to see in the murk, but there was nothing there. No flashes, no noise, no cries of any kind, and no hoofsteps.
“Well buggerfuck!” Octavia muttered, kicking the ground. She made her way back to the lamppost, cursing herself for a fool.
She sat down next to her cello and stared grumpily off in the direction she thought the thing had run with that suitcase. She didn’t know, and could barely tell anymore. She couldn’t even see which direction the rails were.
Octavia did a double-take. She couldn’t see the rails! She used to be able to! She looked in a circle around her, she couldn’t see the bench anymore either! Everything around her was just black and foggy! That meant… the lantern was going out! That was not good at all, that was the worst thing that could possibly happen! If the lantern went out, she’d have to stumble around blindly in the dark with that thing hanging out watching and waiting for something to happen to her. Or maybe it would finally make something happen to her. It hadn’t seemed really keen on the lantern light, so it might be sensitive to it. The flashes seemed to indicate that as well, given that it was crying out in pain. Or what passed for some sort of pain. She didn’t know if that was actually a pained noise or not. The path was clear, though. She had to get that lantern down and move on before it went out completely!
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>>29788144
Octavia makes a decision.

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>>29788144
Better learn how to fly and get that light quick.
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Here's something really scary.
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>>29790126
>Jew ponies
Horrifying
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>>29788148
Nothing from me until much later tonight. I just got some very disturbing news.
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>>29790550
Hope everything is okay.
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>>29791420
It was about my summer comprehensive exams. I went out and bothered the fuck out of them until it got figured out, so it's all good, but I had to put off writing until it was taken care of.

Now I have class in two hours, so I'm working on homework, but we're all good for tonight.
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>>29791497
Oh good, I thought it was something horrible like you got cancer or something.
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>>29791742
Thank goodness not. Just my educational future hanging in the balance. It is sorted, and everything is back on track.
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>>29792476
I was about to ask if your name was based off the film, but that's "Waxwork".
Actually, I guess it could be the 1924 German Silent film that wikipedia tells me exists? That'd be a crazy though.
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>>29723965
Are you still here?
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>>29793963
Wax figures and museums are one of my favourite horror fixtures that do not get quite enough attention as I would like. Wax in general is fascinating to me, so I made me an OC that works with wax, and there you go. I suppose you could say I loosely based it off the movie, but I had never heard of that german film before. I must go watch it now. Thank you for the suggestion.
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>>29793986
Yes yes i'm just trying to flesh it out.
I have the beginning and the end. I just don't know how to connect it to the end. I just got laid off from 2nd job so I should have more time for thinking/writing.
>>29794016
Can we see your OC?
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>>29794070
Hope everything works out for you bud.
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>>29794077
I'm fine. Just hard to connect the dots without making it look forced.
2nd job was just to satisfy my Jew side of loving money.
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>>29794106
>Jew
Have you forgotten who our new allies are?
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>>29794070
Hah, I don't have any drawings of her. I'm a writer, not an illustrator. I did try to make her in OC Creator/chatroom. Pic related. However, here's what I wrote:

"Off-white coat with a cream-coloured, limp-haired mane that spills flat over her head and neck, no bounce or body to it at all, down to the bottom of her chin. Her tail is the same, limp and flat, going down to the top of her fetlocks. She has green eyes and a burn scar that covers her left cheek and crawls up her face to her forehead, skirting around the outside of her left eye. She usually lets her hair dangle down that side of her face to try to cover it. She is generally rather quiet, her job as candlemaker and lamplighter not conducive to much interaction, and she is fine with that. She is not a pushover, however, and will fight back if pushed to it. Her cutie mark is a small half-melted candle in a holder.

The purpose of the scar is cause fire is hot and accidents happen. She literally works with flammable substances.

>>29794070
Nice! I was wondering where you'd gone. Glad to see you're still working on it. You'd just gotten to the good part when you disappeared.
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>>29794137
What do you Meno?
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>>29794154
I Meno that Waxworks is the one that isn't blue. I was chatting with Meno when I took that screenshot. Hence the name. It's the three other ponies in there.
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>>29794137
She's cute AF. I used to complete requests for the draw thread before it turned into a shitposting general. I have a very busy schedule for the next few weeks, I can't promise you anything, but I'll eventually give your OC a try if I manage to find some free time, and if these threads are still up of course.
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>>29794423
That would be bloody amazing. I don't intend to stop writing anytime soon unless something huge comes up, so it'll likely still be here. If you do draw her, don't use the Special Snowflake Simulator pony as a base, please. Just use the description. I don't feel it does her justice, but it's the best I could do.
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>>29794106
>Jew

I still love you, Luke
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>>29787570
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"Every decision I've made...its only led me here." You say staring deeply into the night sky, "I failed to prevent her death..."
>Your gaze turns to the of your home, nothing but a memory now. A burnt away memory turned to ash and ruin.
"My home...my only family, my friend..."
>"You have lost everything...they won't care, they only will see what you can do, they will see your power, they will see...your greatness, and fear it."
>Even in your darkest moments they torment you, whispering words of despair and madness at every turn.
"Maybe I should just sit here..." You think to yourself, "Maybe if I just sit here and do nothing for the rest of my life, nothing else bad will happen. Maybe everything will work itself out."
>You rambled on to yourself, trying to rest feelings of doubt and despair as the world around you seemed to crumble.
>"You belong to us, Nether. Now and forever more you will always be the harbinger of our wrath."
>The voices bellowed and rumbled in your mind, the only thing they seem to be good at other then enticing carnage, was darkening your mind with their whispers.
>"If you look to defy us as Korthax did, you will take your place among the destroyed, the used, and the damned..."
>Gritting your teeth and growling, you confront the shapeless entities.
"Just who are you anyway, all you voices ever speak of is deception and death! Always speaking in metaphors and nonsense!" You stand back to your hooves, raising your voice, "Who are you? Why do you want in this world so badly? You seem rather contempt in your 'Ny'alotha' prison! You never seem to shut-up about it!"
>"We are eternal, we are outside the cycle of life and death. All conflict and chaos feeds us and makes us stronger...we inhale courage, and begat fear..."
"If you are so mighty, then why are you so seemingly dead?" You ask in a condescending tone.
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>>29794825
>"Even your fullest potential with that tome of magic we bestowed to you, is but a mere whisper of our great power..."
>Do they think you a fool? Yes, they took hold of your body and used it to kill the faceless leader. But possession isn't an impossible thing to do, even with arcane magic.
"It is as I said before," You stomp into the ground, emphasizing your will, "I will not be made your pawn!"
>"We can see into your heart, Nether. It is not your will, but cowardice, that keeps you from leaving this damned village."
"How so!" You say turning, as if to face the voices in your head.
>"You know what fate awaits you should you face your brethren again. That change in your body as well as that mark on your leg is a constant reminder isn't it?!"
>Your heart sinks at their words, for they carry the stench of truth...
>"Because you know what judgement awaits you at the hands of this world's rulers, and you tarry here; so as /not/ to meet it..."
>You could not deny it. As long as you lingered here, defying these entities, you could only postpone what you believe to be your inevitable fate.
>"It matters not, your soul is ours. We can make you feel agony and anguish in ways you can't even imagine. If you choose to defy us, you will languish with us for eternity..."
"Enough! I will face my people's judgement when the time comes!"
>"That time may be sooner than you think, Nether." The voice says as it fades out.
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>>29794826
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>Through the open field to the west, a line of dim flickering lights came into view, they were lanterns. It must be Light, and the army he was with. They're approaching quickly...
"Seems that /that/ statement at least was true..." you mutter to yourself, seeing the guardsponies getting nearer.
>You can hear them talking among themselves when they arrive, seeing the devastation that happened due to their absence
>"There, is that...Nether Star?" Says one of the guards, pointing over to you.
>"Where? Show me!" Light says as he pushes his way to the front.
>There he is...the one who left your home to burn...who would judge you not knowing what you know...
>The one who would leave your home and family for the flame to devour.
>"Nether! I'm glad to see your alright, something incredible has happened!" He says with a smirk.
"Incredible? Yes, incredible is a word that can describe it..." You say just loud enough for him to hear.
>"Nether Star!?" A familiar voice calls out, "Where is that insubordinate traitor? Where is tha-" He stops himself. His jaw drops and he gawks at your changed body.
>It was Major Quartz, the arrogant fool who seemed to have still not gotten over how you got the better of him when Luna spoke with you.
>"Easy sir!" Light says, trying to calm Quartz down, "He came back here after we heard it was attacked, he only wanted to make sure that..."
"My village wasn't gone? That the last of my only blood relatives was dead? That the only place I ever called home other then the castle," You raise your voice, shouting the last part, "Didn't Lay In Ruin!?"
>"Nether, I had no choice! We were bound by royal law! We-"
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>>29794838
"Bound by the laws place by our oh so benevolent rulers, the ones who would let so many die when they had the means to save this world!"
>"You will not speak of the Princesses in such manners!" Quartz interjected. "Light, are you sure he can even be reasoned with? Look at him," He gestures at your cuties mark, "he is corrupted by an evil no better then what we have been fighting!"
>Light turns to face Quartz, defending the last shred of honor you had left.
>"He only did what he thought was right, he would never become a monster by his own will." He turns to you, "R-right?"
"Like I said, I did what I-"
>"Look at the size of that faceless corpse!" One of the guards shout out, seeing what was left of Korthax's massive husk of a corpse.
"That was their leader." You say turning your head to the corpse, "The faceless armies will dissipate in time, and the healing of this land will be able to start."
>You turn back, declaring your deed to the judgmental guards standing before you.
>"With my power I was able to slay the beast, I have saved this kingdom!"
>"Nether, you used chaos magic to do so! Your traveling down a dark path, please, let us bring you back to the castle." Light pleaded.
"For what? To be judged by the rulers who had hoof in leading me down this, 'dark path'?!" The red in your eyes glow brightly as your anger builds up.
>"Light," Quartz interjects again, "You would reason with this..thing? This...demon? Would you??" He steps forward, "No, he is too far gone, he has become a threat to the kingdom and must be dealt with accordingly..."
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>>29794847
>Quartz nods at 2 unicorns behind him. They bring out a ring, a magic nullification ring. Specifically crafted to be applied to the horn of any rebellious unicorn. Having the ability to even render chaos magic useless.
"I am no such thing!" You scream lashing out, "How dare you affiliate me with those abominations! All I have lost to defeat them and save our world, all I have sacrificed! You know /nothing/ of what I've gone through to make this kingdom safe!"
>"Hmph, did your mother tell you that before she died? That you were /saving/ this world?" He says provoking you, "I'm sure that whatever hell that whore is rotting in she looks on what you really are and regrets ever having to endure the pain of your birth!"
>"Quartz!!" Light shouts out to stop his insult, but it was too late.
>That did it. The red glow in your eyes radiates brighter then ever before. Rage takes hold as your horn lights up, humming with power as a ball of green fire builds up around it. This bastard will regret his words.
>"NOW! Use the ring, lock onto his strain of magic and contain this traitor!"
>The fire bolt fires as the unicorns enchant the ring, causing it to vanish and reappear around your horn, completely nullifying your magic.
>"Quickly before- AHHHH!"
>The ball of chaotic energy hits Quartz, it hadn't fully dissipated before making contact with your target. Burning away his body ever so slowly. The guards and Light look on in horror as their leader dies, screaming and writhing as his body is turned to a smoldering heap of flesh.
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>>29794865
>"Seize him! Before he can make another move!" Another guard shouts out.
>Within seconds, you are restrained and detained by 2 large earth ponies, taking you to the ground despite your struggle and applying rope to your hooves. rendering you immobile.
"Release me damnit! Let me go!!"
>You struggled on the ground against the force of the larger ponies.
"Let-Me-GO!!!"
>"Hold him still!"
They pin your head to the dirt, soil and gravel get pushed into your mouth from the vain fight you put up against the physically stronger ponies.
>The last thing you see is the larger of the two raising his hoof and bringing it down on your face, knocking you out cold.


Shits going south, hah!
Next part may not come until Wednesday night, got a long ass day tomorrow and probably won't feel like writing.
As always, Questions, comments, concerns all welcome.

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>>29788148
Octavia looked up at the lantern, pondering. She needed that thing down from there. She had only so much time before everything went dark, and she needed to be out of there. She assessed what she had at her disposal: Sweater, check. Cello, check. Saddlebags… saddlebags? Octavia couldn’t find her saddlebags. She looked under her cello, behind it, and even opened it up briefly to look inside, but all that was in there was her cello and bow. That tosser out there must have taken them while she was unconscious!
“You can just go and bugger yourself, you know that? Why not take the whole mess instead of being such a cunt and stealing one item at a damn time, huh?” Octavia shouted at the darkness.
There was no response, but she could hear hoofsteps out there. Slow, steady, and not too far away, which was actually a little scary. She picked up her cello and hugged it to herself, warily eyeing the swirling fog where it sounded like the hoofsteps were coming from. This was her livelihood. Her work, her hobby, and her talent. Without something to make music with, Octavia was just another earth pony. She could sing, but so could many others, and she wasn’t as good at singing at some ponies were. Her cello was what she had settled on years ago as her instrument of choice, and she’d be damned if it was taken from her without a fight.
“If you want my stuff why not just kill me and take it?” Octavia shouted at her invisible stalker. “You’ve had so many opportunities, just kill me, and then you can have it all! Why are you so desperate to keep me alive? It doesn’t do you any good, and it’s only preventing you from having what you want!”
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>>29795257
After saying that, Octavia stopped. Reasons for why started flitting through her head, and all of them came to one conclusion: She was needed alive. For what reason she didn’t know, but she was needed alive. That’s the only possible reason it hadn’t killed her yet. Octavia strapped her cello to her back, looked up at the offending lantern far above her head, then turned to the darkness. There was only one way to test her theory, and she wasn’t going to find it here. She slowly shuffled toward the darkness, until she was at the edge of where she could see her hooves. The fog obscured portions of her vision as it drifted lazily about, thicker clouds wafting here and there. Octavia lifted her hoof and brought it closer to the edge of the light. She jumped as a crash suddenly sounded from behind her, and the sphere of illumination she was in flickered. Octavia spun around quickly to see what had happened, eyes frantically casting about the area she could see.
The lantern had fallen.
Her one source of light in this Celestia-forsaken place had dropped from its hook and crashed to the ground. Thankfully it hadn’t gone out, and in fact was blazing slightly brighter than before, but as she hurried over to it and picked it up, she was alarmed at the implications of that. The remaining oil inside had splashed upward out of the reservoir, and was quickly being consumed by the flame. Octavia opened up the lantern and reached a hoof in, trying to smother it just a little bit, so that it wouldn’t burn down so quickly. She had no success. Worse than no success, she managed to get some of the oil on her ugly sweater, which immediately caught the flame and lit on fire.
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>>29795275
“Oh shit!” Octavia yelled, and almost dropped the lantern. She put it down quickly and started patting at her sleeve, trying to smother the flame.
It didn’t go out with the first few pats, so she stomped about a little, trying to get it under her hoof. She dropped to the ground and put her hooves underneath her, then tried to roll. She was stopped by her cello attached to her back, so she unclasped it, sliding it to the side, then rolled about frantically. After a few rolls, she looked at her sleeves, and was relieved to see that the fire was gone. She stood up and looked over to her cello, to see the thing lifting it off the ground where she’d thrown it in her flailing! She didn’t see the suitcase, but it had her saddlebags on, her scarf, and now it was taking her cello! It blinked at her, its violet eyes sparkling eerily in the light, then turned and bounded into the fog.
Octavia had forgotten her fear. It was taking her cello and she was not going to let it get away without a fight! She grabbed the lantern and took off after it! She didn’t know what direction they were headed, and she frankly didn’t care. The train platform had offered nothing except a false sense of security while this beast robbed her of everything. She could hear its hoofsteps just ahead of her, and she followed doggedly after it. The lantern illuminated nothing except the ground, and she dimly registered the platform of the train station changing tile patterns as they ran. She kept following the sounds of the hoofsteps, not noticing the light of her lantern flickering and shrinking until her vision of the platform below her disappeared entirely, leaving her in a small sphere of light, just around her head. The flame flickered pitifully.
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>>29795288
Octavia finally takes action.

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>>29794883
Well man, I appreciate that you're still writing, and it's getting better. There's still a lot of spelling errors, the kind that won't be noticed by a spellchecker, so I recommend you go through it to double check.

I have a couple of complaints, though, and do take this as one person's views, I do not represent anyone but myself here.
It feels too much like an action movie. That's great, by the way, and I would still label it as horror based on the material, but it's more like Dead Rising than Resident Evil. I'm not sure if that makes sense, but let me try to explain.
Your hero, Nether Star, started out as a normal Unicorn. he was having bad dreams, and he was seeing demons, then they suddenly came to life. He thinks he's having visions, so he goes to talk to the princess of dreams, but long story short, he gets super demon powers that he has inevitably ended up abusing. It's a tried and true formula, sure, but there's no real suspense involved.
If you give a character a weapon to fight the evil with, it immediately becomes less frightening, because the hero can fight back. In Resident Evil, if you've played, you have guns, and so you know you stand a chance fighting them. If you're good enough, you'll win, that's all there is to it. It's still scary to see the zombies and other beasties coming at you, but you KNOW you can fight back.
In Amnesia, you have a lantern. You can't fight back, and your lantern, even though it helps you, actually reveals you to the enemies that you can't fight against. It's much more horrifying to be defenseless.
At this point in your story, I'm not sure if you want me to be rooting for Nether Star, or Light. Even if there's a bad ending coming, the audience needs someone to follow, and Nether isn't coming across as a sympathetic character.
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>>29795587
>It feels too much like an action movie
Not gonna lie, I came to the same conclusion some time ago. However I wasn't really sure whether to just let it die and wait for a more suitable thread to start or not so I decided to just roll with it.
And as far as the spelling errors go, your right. I try to double check as best I can, but I should try reading backwards to read each word individually and not get catch myself reading and missing something.
>I'm not sure if you want me to be rooting for Nether Star, or Light.
Up to this point I've tried to make Nether's dedication to duty and protecting home that it would make him more easy for him to be manipulated. Mind you I don't want him too seem like an emotionless character, however in his eyes sacrificing anything and everything is better then letting Equestria fall into chaos. As for Light, I've been trying to make him the voice of reason in all this. He doesn't want to see his longtime friend go down such a long dark road but he doesn't know just how engraved it is in Nether's head that sacrifice is a necessary evil (for lack of a better term) I hope I was able to clear things up a bit and if not then hopefully as the story continues to flesh out I can further develop these 2 in a more clear way. Sorry for the confusion and I greatly appreciat the concern, constructive criticism is the best way for anyone to learn so thank you for that my friend.
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>>29793963
I have found the 1924 film, and will be watching it tomorrow. Thank you again for the movie's name.
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>>29796528
Well, I've been busy running about campus, but I now get a chance to chill and watch the film and write some more. Halfway through, and it's a cute old movie so far.
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>>29796528
Octavia couldn’t see much of anything anymore, but she could still hear the hoofsteps. As she stopped relying as much on her eyes, and more on her ears, it became clearer which direction her assailant was going. She glanced down at the light she was carrying in her mouth and snorted derisively. It was no use to her anymore.
She tossed the lantern aside, and plunged herself into darkness. There was a brief flare of light as it impacted the platform, then, blackness. She opened her eyes wide, thought it helped her not at all, and listened for where the hoofsteps were coming from.
There!
She turned and chased after the sounds of hooves besides her own clopping on the smooth tiles of the station platform. How long it must be, to harbor a chase of this length. She wasn’t going to lose the monster in the darkness, though. Her cello was on the line! That was HER cello, her livelihood, and the thing she cared about most in all of Equestria. It symbolized who she was more than anything else, and she didn’t want some beast getting its hooves all over it.
Suddenly the hoofsteps stopped, and Octavia ran to where she last heard them, but found nothing. She quieted herself down, breathed slowly and carefully, and listened, perking her ears up. She swiveled them left, and right, alternating, trying to hear something, anything, that might give away the crook. She thought she heard a noise, and leaped in the direction it came from, snarling and waving her hooves wildly.
Nothing.
“Damn you! Give me back my things!” Octavia shouted, losing her temper.
She stamped her hooves, yelled inarticulately, and screamed at the fog. It was everywhere, and now it was dark, and she had no idea where she was. She could be on the tracks for all she knew, or she could be in the middle of a town. This infernal fog made it impossible to tell.
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>>29800809
Octavia stopped and sat down, trying to relax. She breathed in slowly, then exhaled, calming herself down one breath at a time. She was freaking out and really needed to relax a little bit. Panicking would get her nowhere. As she breathed, she thought about what she could do.
She was in the middle of the fog. She couldn’t see a thing. She could only currently hear wind.
The wind itself, as if to add further insult, was getting colder. It might have been just her imagination, but Octavia felt like the temperature was dropping. The loss of her only light might have something to do with that. With nothing to see anymore but oppressive darkness, it was making her feel like she was colder than she actual was. Still, it would have been nice to feel warm instead.
Octavia’s ear swiveled around backward, and she turned her head. She thought she had heard something! She stood up and carefully stalked toward where the sound had come from. Her head was tilted to the side, since she could only rely on her ears at this point, and she kept the side of her head trained to where the sound was.
She heard it again! A quiet shuffling sound, as if somepony was sneaking about. She carefully and quietly tiphoofed over, and when she thought she was close enough, she struck, leaping at the sound!
She landed in a pile of something soft and slightly slimy. She felt a few small creatures crawl over her in a bid to escape the sudden intrusion of a large pony in their disgusting home.
“Ewwww, gross.” Octavia complained.
She extracted herself from the nasty mess and flung scraps of cloth off her hooves. She reached out and gingerly touched what she had jumped into.
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>>29800823
It was a pile of clothes, though that term could only loosely be applied to what she had found. It was a pile, yes, but ‘clothes’ was a maybe. She prodded at it and pulled a few articles free, trying to feel them and see if they might fit. She was still getting really cold, and the sweater just wasn’t doing the job. Even if the items were dirty, she could bathe once she was free of this place and safe at home. She groped and prodded, pulled and subsequently threw away many items, but she found a few that worked. She even took one that was torn and wrapped it around her neck as a makeshift scarf. It felt kind of gross, but she wasn’t cold anymore, and that was one positive thing in this mess she was in.
Now that she was warm, she sat back and listened again, trying to find somepony in the darkness through hearing alone. She sat and waited with her eyes closed, trying to remove the unsettling swirling of the darkness in her vision so that she could better focus on just one sense at a time. There was nothing for quite a while, but eventually she heard an angry voice in the darkness. It sounded impatient and frustrated, but she wasn’t going to complain, that was a voice, and it was a target. If it wasn’t who she was looking for, maybe they would know of some way out of here. Her own little spot at the station was long gone, and she didn’t think she would ever find that post again unless somepony lit the damn place up, so a new place would work fine.
She loped easily off into the darkness. The platform was flat enough that she wasn’t really worried about bumping into a wall or tripping. Her hooves clopping on the tiles gave a nice little echo whenever there were walls nearby, so she could pretty easily avoid them.
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>>29800832
Octavia can't see a bloody thing.

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>>29800793
What a fitting image for my current story.
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>>29723965
>"And what about them?"
>Copper motions a hoof to the two Saddle Arabians who are idly standing beside everypony else.
>With an eager smile the younger one gives a little wave to the group knowing they were being talked about.
>The older one dons his keffiyeh.
>It covers his stoic face leaving only a slit for his eyes.
>He nods readily awaiting a new assignment while the younger half puts his head-wear on also.
>Roadwind gives out a silent groan.
"Ugh. We don't have time to foalsit two untrained rebels. Their kind were helpful causing havoc and confusion during the landings so we could disable those cannons, but they have no place in an infiltration. One wrong step and all this would be for nothing."
>"Well we can't exactly send them home now can we?"
*Sigh*"I have an idea, have them set up base here in the storage house. They can keep an eye on the courtyard and your precious gadgets or whatever you brought."
>Copper gives out a small smile.
>"That would be perfect."
>As Copper goes to talk to the two Arabs, Light walks up beside Roadwind.
>"Orders for me Sir?"
"Ah right, you'll be scouting ahead of the main group since you are the most light-hoofed one out of all of us."
>"Hmph! Barely."
>Ignoring Velvet's comment Light listens on.
>However a smug smile crawls on his face.
"They are most likely going to keep our stallions in the lower floors so search for stairs. Direct us to take cover if there are any patrols. We'll be a good ten paces behind you if anything goes wrong. Stay out of sight and stick to the shadows."
>"Yes Sir."
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>>29801109
>As Copper returns, he's wearing two large saddlebags and the same light leather armor you met him in.
"That all you're wearing?"
>"It would be hard to stay quiet with heavy metal plates stomping about don't you think?"
"Not for my team. You'd be surprised how quickly ponies drown out the accustomed sounds of a barracks."
>"Suit yourself Captain."
>He motions a hoof to the entrance door.
>"After you."
>The two glare into each other's eyes for a moment.
>Roadwind tries to get a read on Copper who stands there stone faced. Not letting anything show other than a small smile.
>This lasts the entirety of ten seconds before Roadwind steps forward towards the door.
"With pleasure."
>Giving a nod to Onyx, he gives the door a nudge and it creaks open slowly.
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>>29801119
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EGNMuKTO15E
>A wave of dust falls from the door frame.
>Down the side of it, a little spider scurries its way back up the door and disappears above it.
>"This entryway seemed like it hasn't been used in months. Years maybe."
"Good, that means this wing might be deserted. Alright file through."
>As the team moves through the doorway, Roadwind looks back over Marble checking on the two Arabs.
>While the older stands beside the window keeping watch, the younger is sitting by himself sharpening a jambia with a whetstone.
>His keffiyeh is pulled down to make it more of a scarf.
>Most likely so he can concentrate easier.
>He notices Roadwind staring and he gives another cheerful smile.
>Hearing the sound of stone striking blade stop, the older gives a call to the younger who then quickly returns to sharpening.
>If Copper is scheming something, they definitely aren't part of it.
>Roadwind ponders over his thoughts.
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>>29801127
>No.
>Marble's paranoia is just getting to you.
>Distrust with Copper is just because he's being so secretive.
>But that's his job after all.
>Keeping secrets.
>He's just doing his job just like how you are doing yours.
>Maybe after all this you can all share a cider together?
>However, why does the Ministry even care about a couple of missing scouts?
>"Sir, something wrong?"
>The voice draws Roadwind out of his train of thought and he turns to see the source.
>Marble is standing beside the door waiting for him to enter so he can take his place at the rear.
"It's nothing Marble."
>He gives a nod and they both leave the storehouse.
>As Roadwind makes his way to the front where Copper is, Marble carefully shuts the door.
>*click*
>Light is already up ahead looking about the hallways while everypony else stands in their respected positions.
>As he gets to the front behind Onyx, he turns back to get a view of his team.
>All stand ready and awaiting orders.
>Turning back around Roadwind sees Onyx crouching down with his sword and shield at the ready.
>His great Halberd slung over his back.
>All fine soldiers.
"Let's move."
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>>29794515
Stan. Where is Moon-butt story?
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>>29801566
in the trash, where it belongs

Not really. Work, Ryse son of Rome, my kids, and keeping up with this thread are all verry distracting. I'm also writing a Fallout Equestria story. Trying something differennt to try and find my style. I have a lot to learn. I'll get back to it eventually
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>>29802289
Word of advice from one Anon to another.
Put the spoiler around the words you actually mean and leave the funny comment unspoiled.
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>>29800847
Her long legs carried her easily through the darkness, loping along with quiet taps as her hooves lightly hit the platform tiles. She could hear the shouting and angry cursing as she got closer to the source, though she couldn’t see anything yet. She didn’t know if the fog was too thick, or if the pony that was out there didn’t have a light. It wasn’t too far-fetched to assume they didn’t have a light, since her own had burned out after not too long. If they did indeed come from this area, then they would likely have only so long before their own lantern gave up the ghost.
She slowed down as she got closer, trying to triangulate exactly where the pony was at. They didn’t sound like they were too far, so she had to run into them eventually. She stalked around, and around, walking back and forth, back and forth, listening carefully, until she had their position exactly mapped out. They were standing there talking to themselves about something she couldn’t quite understand. The pony was talking really quickly and had a heavy accent, but they seemed confused about something according to the tone of voice. She couldn’t quite be sure if this was the pony she had been following, but she didn’t want to take chances. That thing she had seen that stole her stuff was strange and misshapen, and she didn’t know that she could take it in a fight.
She was about to speak when she heard something that she didn’t think she’d ever hear again: The whistle of a train.
A train was coming? A train was coming! Finally something good was happening! She could leave, go home, albeit without her stuff, but she was going to be safe again! Her friends would help her out with bills until she could get back on her hooves after this miserable experience, and she could start working again. It would be lovely. She just wanted to be gone from this awful place!
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>>29802993
She turned her head toward the whistle, but she realized then that she had no idea where to go. All she could see was black, and the whistle was so loud, there was no good way to figure out where it was coming from! If she didn’t find the platform, she was going to miss it! She couldn’t stay stuck here, she needed to get to the train platform! She had assumed she was on it, and the tiles under her hooves had stayed roughly the same since she’d arrived, but was this where it was going to stop? Why was there no light anywhere?!
She focused her ears again, trying to find that pony she had been stalking. She could hear it speaking, sounding relieved and grateful that the train was finally coming. She focused on the voice alone, and walked slowly toward it. If this pony sounded relieved, they were probably in a place they could get on when it arrived. She moved closer, and closer, slowly but surely.
She could hear the train clacking ever nearer, but still there was no light to be seen. Just when she was curious if there ever would be, she took a step forward and a searing pain hit her as a blinding whiteness filled her vision. She snarled and finally heard the voice properly and understood it.
“Hurry the bloody hell up, you tossers! It’s almost bloody caught me!” A feminine voice said.
She heard the train pull up and slowly come to a stop, and she pushed forward again, but the painfully bright light burned her eyes. She blinked, but it did nothing to help the pain. She squinted, and suddenly the light was not quite so bright, and she could faintly see what was happening.
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>>29803002
Octavia got on the train, her cello strapped to her back, and her saddlebags affixed to her sides. Vinyl’s scarf was wrapped tightly around her neck as she pushed onto the train, the operator welcoming her inside to safety. In his hooves, he held a bullseye lantern he had trained directly onto the creature following her.
“You buggers took your sweet time. The bloody thing almost caught up with me. Was that the purpose, there, lettin’ me get caught by it?” Octavia said accusingly.
The operator slid the door shut and locked it, then slid the hatch shut on his lantern. His hat was still pulled low on his head, but he smiled out the window, and didn’t say a word.

The creature watched the train forlornly as it slowly pulled away from the dark station. She had no idea what she had just seen, but she knew somewhere, deep down, that she had lost something incredibly important, and she would never get it back. She remembered faces, activities, and other things she knew were important, but were quickly fading from memory.
She wanted to cry, but her new eyes wouldn’t let her, so she just let out a mournful whimper and trudged away into the darkness. Her long, spindly legs carrying her quickly nowhere in particular. She wasn’t cold, her filthy clothing kept her warm, but she didn’t know where to go. There was no sound, no light, and not much beyond the platform itself. Her eyes slowly adjusted to the darkness, and she could see shapes, but there wasn’t much to see. She had been abandoned in a horrible place for reasons she did not understand.
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>>29803015
Nothing happened for a time, she just walked and walked. She saw a couple other creatures similar to herself, but she didn’t want to meet them, and they didn’t seem interested in meeting her. She did not eat, drink, nor sleep, and her body never seemed to need it. She just lived, and forgot. One day, she heard a train, and although she didn’t quite understand what it meant, she knew she had to go see it. It was important. Deep down, she knew the train was important. She raced through the darkness, her long legs easily carrying her across the darkness to where the whistle had sounded. The featureless blackness gave way to her, and her eyes guided her eventually to a small pinprick of light, sitting on a unnaturally long train platform placed conspicuously in the black void.
Upon arrival, she saw sitting there in the middle of the pool of light a single pony. Alone, with her luggage stacked neatly under the single lantern in the darkness, she sat. Her silver mane shone in the light as she adjusted her glasses and collar.
There, sitting next to her on the ground, was a single suitcase.
The creature watched, waited, and bided her time. Soon, the silver-haired pony would have to sleep. She could be this pony. Then she could leave this place. All she needed was to dress up as her, and get on the next train out.
So the creature watched, and she waited. And when the pony slept, she crept closer, and took her glasses. She knocked over something and the pony awoke with a start as she made off with the item.
“H-hey…!” Mayor Mare blurted…

THE END.
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>>29803023
Bad end.

Updated my journal: https://pastebin.com/XMGF9vQB

I got excited and couldn't wait to post the ending. I hope you all enjoyed it.

If anyone has any ponies they want to see, let me know.
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>>29803122
Also, I'll make a new thread tomorrow morning if no one else does by the time I wake up.
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>>29803122
What a twist, i hope there's also a good ending for Octavia?

Anyway, i enjoyed the story, we'll see were it goes from here.
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>>29802889
But that's what I did

>>29803122
Nice suprise this morning. I was expecting silent hill but got something good instead. Good job Wax
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>>29803122
I loved the twist at the end. Great story as usual Wax.
Ending theme? Ending theme.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hji18AkC22g
>>29801155
Glad to see you're still writing. Love the story so far.
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NEW THREAD
>>29805086
>>29805086
>>29805086
NEW THREAD
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>>29805097
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