JoJo Thread #12: Deadman's Questions Edition

>>29674671

And our patented not really SUTANDO GENERATOR!
http://www.pages.drexel.edu/~dft29/Stand_Generator/Stand-Generation-Overdrive.html

As ordered by our fellow Sonic Youth, replace the ability you get in "Description" and write your own description of how your Stand looks and works!

And do post the song or artist you're referencing in your Stand. That'd be sweet.

Stand Proud!

Also I messed up, previous thread is here: >>29535491

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>>29674671
New to the thread and don't know what stories to read?
Then have a look to what you may find on these stories:

>Rammstein's Bizarre Adventure: (Ace_Sorou)
Erich Rammstein is a NatSoc and stand user living in Canterlot that gets often dragged to battles against other stand users.And his sister is a cute. A CUTE!
Status: ONGOING
All chapters here: http://pastebin.com/u/Ace_Sorou

>Dimensional Link: (A-non moose)
Pinkie Pie stabs Anon with the Stand Arrow, thus granting him a stand. And everything is fine and dandy, until said arrow becomes Twilight's stand. Now Anon and his pony friends need to find a way to create a new arrow and give it back to Pinkie's family because tradition... or is that all?
Status: ONGOING
All chapters here: http://pastebin.com/u/A-nonMoose

>Stan(d)on in Equestria:(AusAnon)
Rainbow Dash misteriously develops the stand of ｢ANONYMOUS｣, which has its own will, and quickly become friends. But when the ｢NIGHTMARE｣ returns to Equestria, it is up to them to fight it and any other stand user that gets in their way.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters here: http://pastebin.com/u/AusAnon

>MY LITTLE JOJO: STANDS ARE MAGIC: (Cameo)
After Twilight and Starlight prod Anon's soul in an attempt to give him magic, his "Soul Stone" shatters everywhere, granting anypony in contact with it a stand. Anon also develops a stand, but a new threat comes to Equestria, trying to get a hold of the soul shards and get rid of Anon and his friends in the process...
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Creamymemedaddy

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>>29674747
>Care Root's Bizare Adventure: (Ditherer)
Care Root is your average student in Canterlot High, which nowadays means he is also a stand user, but do to the nature of his power he is rather unlucky... until he meets Dernier "Derpy" Piege.
This encounter may be the start of a good future to come for Care Root... if he survives the conspiracies and alliances forming all around Canterlot.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Ditherer

>Coco's Bizarre Adventure: Nothing's Kingdom (Ditherer)
On the night King Sombra reconquers Equestria and sends the Elements into comas, Coco Pommel falls off her balcony, sorts out her life, and gets saved by a mysterious power before she hits the ground. With the power of Stand, she ventures beyond Manehattan to foil Sombra's plans, save civilization, and - most importantly - revive Rarity.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Ditherer or http://www.fimfiction.net/story/328442/cocos-bizarre-adventure-nothings-kingdom

>French Anon's Bizarre Adventure: (FrenchAnon)
Anon is an intern in the SpeedWagon Foundation, but after a terrorist attack during an experiment with a stand arrow, he is transported to Canterlot High...
Status: This story has not been updated in a long while...
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/Bun2pUFy

>Anon's Bizarre Adventure: Canterlot Escapade: (FriskyBits)
Anon and Pinkie Pie get stabbed with an arrow and develop stands of their own. After meeting with other stand users, they decide to investigate who is responsible of going around town giving powers to random people.
Status: This story has not been updated in a while.
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/QivjKsiH

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>>29674797
>Stand by Me: (FuckFaceMcGee)
Anon Y. Mous, your slacker green weeb, becomes really close with his purple neighbour Twilight Sparkle. After watching Jojo toghether, Twilight develops an "Evoker", which is capable of granting a stand to whomever is shot by it. Flash Sentry, in a fit of jealousy, steals the Evoker and starts creating an army of stand users to get in the way of Twilight and Anon's relationship.
The OG story!
Status: The author is on a hiatus.
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/515d4KLQ

>Anon's Stando Adventure: (Omnee)
Anon gets invited by Celestia to check the "Sovereign Arrow", an ancient relic said to grant powers to whomever survives being stabbed by it. After messing with it, Anon is able of weilding the power of stand, but apparently a shady group is coming for his life. And either by bad luck or destiny, his friends get stabed with the arrow and get stands of their own.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Omnee_Potent

>Kira Visits Horseland: I Want It All (Omnee)
Yoshikage Kira, after the events of Part 4, awakens in Equestria with a downgraded version of his stand. Now, under a false identity, he plans to get back his powers and his quiet life.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/u/Omnee_Potent

>Friendship's Bizarre Adventure Part one! The Dark Side of the Moon (Phase 2)
Jovial Journey, a.k.a. Jojo, is a talented psychiatrist in Equestria assigned to council Princess Luna. But after she becomes Nightmare Moon, it is up to Jojo, Celestia and other ponies to stop her from resurrecting Discord.
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/DNZ6FD9q

>Daring Do and the Arrows of Marapore.feat Ziggy (StarAnon)
Mild-mannered Ziggy Stardust is sent to negotiate with A.K. Yearling on behalf of her publisher, only to become embroiled in a Daring Do adventure featuring some especially magical arrows.
Status: Complete
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/9fSMNBDh

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>>29674887
>Interview with a Stand User (StarAnon)
Featherweight is a sick child staying in Canterlot's Hospital.His condition gets worse quickly and so does his hopes of living, until one day his mother brings a quirky character to visit him.
Set after the events in "Daring Do and the Arrows of Marapore"
Status: Complete
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/dqnGFj3m

>Cat Armed Phenomena (StarAnon)
Flitter and Cloudchaser, the Stand-wielding Storm Sisters, find their occupational luck changing when they get a job tracking down a very special missing cat. Unfortunately, they're not the only Stand users trying to get their hands on "Princess Blue"...
Set before the events in "Daring Do and the Arrows of Marapore"
Status: Complete
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/WP4W1KNm

>JoJo Green? It might be a thing: (Superkeaton)
Anon, a self proclaimed PSIE-ntist, wants to uncover the misteries of Canterlot City, but he may be in more than he can handle.
The story is supposed to feature the stand [Beautiful Liar].
Status: This story has not been updated in a long while...
All chapters: http://pastebin.com/jLVdFdQV

>JoJo's bizarre adventure part 9: Cars & Chaos... and JoeJoe: (Writroplex)
JoeJoe is a student in Canterlot High that doesn't get along with anyone else, but after discovering he is part of the Joestar linage, bizarre events may happen.
Status: This story has not been updated in a while.

>Shizuka Joestar in Canterlot High (not the official title): (FightingPen)
Anon, a normal student in Canterlot High, is tasked to show the new student around the school. But not long after meeting Shizuka, he gets involved in a stand battle...
Status: ONGOING
All chapters: Please provide a pastebin.

That is it so far. Although different, all the stories provide something you may like and sometimes they may even reference each other, or they are in the same universe so read them all and STAND PROUD!

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>>29674671
>>29674687
Also, give it a shot and participate in the 「ALL-STAR BATTLE」

Many stands were thought of or generated in these threads, so why not have them face against each other and see who comes up on top?
>Pick any stands from these threads and come up with a battle!
>Example: [BENZIN] vs. [Rocket Man]
>You can use as many stands as you want. They could fight in groups or be a huge battle royale.
>Example: [Fortunate Son] and [Saturn's Children] vs. [GRAND CANYON]
>Try to describe a reason for the fight, the flow of the battle and who wins and how.
>Example: [GLORIA DEO] drops rocks from the moon, [TELL ME BABY] dies miserably.

We had many ASB's.
The battle of the greens: http://pastebin.com/nYizqLre
Or the Triple Pink Ponkdown! http://pastebin.com/0GKTJbDC
We've seen team-ups against powerful foes http://pastebin.com/AUjwjBcF

But we still ask ourselves... do we stand a chance against the Jojo protagonists?

>ASB: Jonathan vs. Fire in the Church http://pastebin.com/si7M9A9f

>ASB:Giorno Giovanna VS Erich Rammstein
http://pastebin.com/Atks9007

2 done, 6 to go...

WHO'S GONNA WIN?

>>29674671
Beautiful choice of OP pic Omnee-San

You know with all these JoJo anime adaptations and part 5 soon (hopefully) to be announced will the JoJo anime and its fandom continue to grow and get the recognition it deserves alongside the original manga?

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ZA WARUDO

On today's "It just works":
Paisley Park
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aw5hrKAyhx4

>>29675796
Thanks, I made it myself.

As for the anime getting the recognition it deserves, I'd say it's already picked up a reputation like that among the entire fandom. As for the anime fandom growing, I'm not particularly keen on that. As it is I'm not the biggest fan of memes like kono Dio da and Sheer Heart Attack has no weakness, and most of the tumblr-tier humor that accompanies these memes. And then there's the fact that I can't discuss shit ahead of the anime without accidentally spoiling someone on something like __Trish___ dying, you know? I'm pretty sure that's why "read the manga" became a thing in the first place. Mangafags got irritated by animefags getting in the way of their discussion of the later parts or something.

I also detest fandoms in general because of the way they act about their source material. I like the part of the mlp fandom on 4chan though, you guys are cool.

Koichi Hirose. A story in 3 ACTs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Jy5slPMrOo&t=0s

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>tfw you will never sacrifice your life for your friends and have your spirit live on as a quiet but strong stand.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jm2D7ohWos0

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>Things you don't expect Jojo or MLP characters to say.

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>>29675105
I was gonna pull the full roster for reference, but since Desu's down I don't really remember who's writing what now. tfw 3 of the ASBs featured are by me

Also,
>JoJo vs. Green Score: 1 - 1

>>29676225
Gotta agree. Although I'd like to see Narancia vs. Clash & Talking Head, and Doppio vs. Metallica animated, the most important things to me are the format of the fights and Araki's personal eccentricity, and those wouldn't be lost even if no one liked JoJo. Plus I'm naturally a hipstery dick who avoids things other people like.

>>29676202
Paisley Park is a great Stand. I don't think it'd surprise anyone if I mentioned Yasuho was my original inspiration for Derpy. It's interesting how powerful and versatile Araki can make all of his Stands now, without worrying about how to match them up against powerful opponents.

>>29674687
Stand: ｢Ocean Man｣
User: Sea Swirl
Ability: The user can unearth hoofprints and other evidence of life, which will animate themselves and move towards whoever left them. Anything which can fit within or on affected prints or materials can be carried along with them.

>Swirl has a tea party riding an abandoned vehicle towards its owner
>Deposits a dagger in a hoofprint so it stabs the owner's hoof.
>Sends aid to allies or supplies to herself circuitously.

Stand: ｢Paperback Writer｣
User: A.K. Yearling
Ability: Replaces the user's left eye except when in use, and resembles a typical glass eye apart from the word "DARE" above the pupil. When activated, replaces the left eye of any target within line of sight of the user, allowing them to see through it at any distance. The user has an eidetic memory of anything seen by the Stand while active - e.g. in someone else's head. Invisible to non-Stand users.

>Can also jump into anyone an affected target sees.
>Hides in inanimate objects with eyeholes.
>Anyone who looks at it funny is a Stand user.

>>29678151
Mlp : Yare Yare Daze
JoJo : Friendship is magic.

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>>29677046
If the characters knew exactly about eachothers stories.

Which JoJo has the saddest / tear jerking story, Johnny is my first pick and followed secondaly by Jonathan since he also had a shit upbringing and life in general.

I'm getting some good work done on both my ASBs, but I'm going to Ireland for the weekend so I won't be able to update anything. Sorry lads.

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>>29680229
Wow Omnee. How come you are writing 2 ASBs?

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>your waifu will never stab you with a magical arrow to test if you're worthy

>>29680395
I'm working on the Jolyne vs. [Saturn's Children] ASB, and I'm also doing a 2v2 ASB with Shizuka Joestar and Anon with [Metropolis] vs. Jovial Journey and Punished Kira

I am a font of good ideas but I can't write stories in a timely or efficient manner to save my life.

>>29680720
She can only gain her stand if she shoves that whole arrow up her urethra.

What would the dazzlings stands be?

>>29680720
>she will never nurse you back to health as your stand develops to its fullest potential.

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>>29681441
>ywn develop a Stand with Acts
>ywn see her unabashed excitement at your progress
>ywn reach your ultimate potential with her cheering you on

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>>29681435
>>29681441
>>29681774
>Not being on the brink of death
>Not having cheese puffiness come across you grinning while wielding the stand arrow
>Not listening to her propose the idea of surviving on via becoming her stand but at the cost of being just that a stand.
>Not realising how much of a bad idea it is since you're essentially entering a purgatory waiting for your user to die.
>Not getting stabbed right in the heart by her anyway.
>Not as your soul merges with hers hear her evil intention for world domination and how you will help her reach it.

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>>29682241
This nigga right here.

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>>29680720
>>29681435
>>29681441
>>29681774
>>29682241
So... who here has Adagio as his/her waifu?

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>>29682241
>As you progress as Poof's Stand the two of you grow closer
>Poof's loneliness since being abandoned has been filled by Anon
>She never wants the feeling to end
>She goes on a quest after she found info relating to a certain mask...

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>>29683198
I do.

There any mystical object in the MLP universe or just the amulet unicorn and that book in inspiration manifestation?

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>>29683881
There are plenty if you take the Daring Do novel into consideration.
Oh, and the Elements of Harmony.

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>>29683881

You count the daring do books canon?

>>29683913
>>29683943

Maybe I need to give a look to those books to get some inspiration for future greens

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Stand: ｢Supertramp｣
User: Sweetcream Scoops the Get Rich Quick Pone
Ability: On touch, accelerates the effects of time on a target. Negative effects, such as decay, are staved off for several minutes.

>Mirror to ｢Crazy Diamond｣, but implies a desire to skip all the hard work instead of generosity.
>Scoops starts building something and then accelerates it into a short-lived finished product.
>Heals people, but with the same need for adjustment as a natural recovery.

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>>29684019
Seems like the kind of character I'd like to see interact with the Storm Sisters.

>>29684091
I can see that.

>Sweetcream and Sea Swirl run a rival retrieval company
>They play Scanty and Kneesocks to the Storm Sisters.
>They're eventually defeated because their fancy tricks and schemes don't match up to the bond of true sisterhood.

Or maybe
>Scoops is one of the Sisters' friends, brought on to help with a very expensive case.
>This somehow involves indefinitely crashing on their couch.
>She proves invaluable against a powerful Stand user.
>The Sisters still have to exhaust most of their profit to make her leave.

Also, I just imagined a remake of youtube.com/watch?v=K8Vlrv1jVpo with Cloudchaser narrating.

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>>29684465
I love these ideas! Rival characters are always fun.

>Sea Swirl unearths the traces of losts objects, but Cloudchaser cuts them before they reach their destination.
>Flitter tries to locate a target, but Scoops begins to create fakes ones and accelerates the process, thus making Flitter's locations inaccurate.

I've never seen the english dub of Get Backers, but it does sound hilarious. And now I can't help but picture the sisters reenacting the opening.

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>>29685326

I JUST DON'T KNOW WHAT WENT WRONG

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>>29685400

>>29685834
[Spoiler]Dorararararararararara- DORA![/spoiler]

>>29683221
>She becomes the ultimate poof form WITH a requiem stand. (Now that would be unbeatable)

I wonder what happens if a requiem stand is stabbed with the arrow so basically a third contact with the arrow

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>>29686006

>>29686038
Chibi adagio is top cute

>>29686888
Trips confirm.

Even Anonymous is afraid.

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>>29680720
>>29681774
>>29682241
>>29683221
>>29686006
What if the opposite happens?
>The Dazzlings, unwillingly, become your stands.

>>29687785
>The dazzlings will never moan as you force them to fight other stands.

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>>29688282
>Or most likely this could happen...

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>>29688282
>>Force them to fight other Stands.
>Not fighting enemy users unaided in the name of purity.

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>>29688500
>Fighting enemy users unaided... while the Dazzlings laugh at your expense.
It's not easy to be a stand user...

What's the deal with Holly's Stand?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DeMuvwlGvio

>>29689220
She was too weak to handle it mentally so its all fucked.

page 8 bump

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Care Root's Bizarre Adventure, Episode 7: Trouble

>Be Silver Spoon.
>The hallways are just about empty around lunchtime.
>Getting to the auditorium is child’s play.
>You glance over your shoulder at Diamond.
“Sure you want to join?”
>Her reaction’s muted, considered.
>”Yeah.”
>Diamond’s not how you remember her.
>Not in a bad way, either.
>It’s like she’s… more than she used to be.
>Anyway.
>You find them in the auditorium, sitting together onstage.
>The lights are off, but you can't miss their silhouettes.
>They didn't used to stand together constantly.
>Now that you're a Stand user, you can feel the bond between them even more strongly.
>Maybe their Stands work together?
>Either way, the musty dusty mess of the auditorium lets out a creaking echo when you push open the doors.
>They don't react.
>When you walk close enough to make out which is which, they see you too.
>Scootaloo speaks first, around an egg salad sandwich.
>"Look who it is."
>She's not quite looking at you.
>Bloom pipes up.
>"Glad you healed up so quick."
>Diamond doesn't answer.
>Sweetie doesn't turn her head, just staring out into the empty seats.
>"What are you here for?"
>You clear your throat.
“We’re looking for answers.”
>Sweetie smiled a little.
>”Does Care know you’re running around for him?”
>You pause.
>Then shake your head.
>Scootaloo picks up from there.
>”What are the questions?”

>The next few minutes are awash with exposition.
“What happened to Trixie Lulamoon?”
>”She stole something and ran off school grounds.”
“What?”
>”A magical artifact. It’s the only complete one in the set.”
>You’re about to ask how many others there are, but Diamond pipes up.
>“Why was it here?”
>”Safekeeping. Anywhere else would be putting it at risk.”
“Is she in danger?”
>Scootaloo shrugs.
>”Aren’t all of us?”

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>>29689859
>Then Belle speaks up again.
>”There’s a battle, a real one, and whoever gets their hands on all three stones wins.”
>Diamond asks another sensible question, even though she’s hovering around your shoulder.
>”Who’s fighting?”
>Silence, looks among the three, then Apple Bloom.
>”We don’t know. It’s about all we can do to keep our grade in order. Not that you two were very keen on helping us out with that.”
>Inside, you wince a little, and you decide not to press them.
>Diamond hmmms.
>”You are working for the Rainbooms, right?”
>Apple Bloom answers.
>”Of course! They’re our sisters, after all.”
>Before you can ask another question, Belle speaks.
>”If you want to help, there’s a house we were supposed to investigate. Maybe you’ll find a clue there.”
”Or something dangerous?”
>All three nod, once.
>You resist the urge to shudder.
>Geez, they’re creepier the longer you spend around them.

>But that’s how you get the address for an abandoned house.
>Derpy’s not going to be in tonight, and Golden’s already skipped half the day to go home.
>You and Diamond wordlessly agree on the plan.
>Calls to your parents asking to sleep over at each-others’ houses go off without a hitch.
>Diamond’s been spending a lot of time at your house anyway.
>And growing up with her hasn’t just taught you about lying, but the finer art of steering lies.
>Navigating through the web, never being caught without a ready response.
>And, of course, padding lies out enough to make people want them to be true.
>You feel downright Machiavellian.

>>29689865
>The lunchbell rang by the time everything was in place, and you both headed back for Civics.
>”Silver…”
>You turned to her.
“Yeah?”
>”Did they have their Stand out?”
>You shake your head.
“I don’t think so.”
>”I don’t trust them. I never liked them in the first place, but...”
“Yeah. I know. They seem too... together.”
>You only barely hear her mutter a response.
>”Maybe because I’m not.”
>You frown.
>Neither of you say anything else on the way to class.

>Be Care Root.
>It's been a little while since anything big happened at school.
>Derpy's been busy for a few days.
>Lots of homework, spending time with Silver and Diamond, and so on.
>You both know it's really your fault, but she never mentions it.
>Things have been cooling off recently, like the focus has shifted somewhere else.
>Every day that you don't need to use your Stand is a victory.
>You almost dropped a few grades in some of your classes, for once.
>You've also glanced around at a couple of martial arts dojos around the city, but you realized that even if you were Jackie Chan it wouldn't help in fighting off a Stand.
>You've just been trying to think of cheaper ways to use ｢Timbuk Three｣...
>And today, you're on a date to the movies!
>It's at one of the rich people theaters, too, with the five hours of before-previews commercials and its own radio station.
>The tickets are going to cost you, but you don’t really spend money on anything else.
>At least, besides gas and groceries.
>The point is, you’re due at her house in an hour, and then you’ll be on your way.
>And, more because you have time than out of any real need, you make a detour.
>Candy always tastes better when it’s bought in a chintzy dollar store and snuck into the theater.
>And Canterlot Mall’s dollar store is the absolute chintziest.

>>29689876
>Be Diamond Tiara, you guess.
>The last few days have been a whirlwind.
>You were in a coma for no time at all, but you feel like it should’ve changed you.
>Your dad’s actually paying attention to you now, and it’s almost creepy.
>No, not creepy, but, y’know, uncomfortable. Ish.
>He used to always react to you instead of trying to start conversations.
>You guess that’s what everyone else’s dads do.
>You don’t even know what you’re thinking now.
>A lot was involved in bringing you back to the land of the living, though.
>And oh, what a land it is.
>All of the other kids are ignoring you now.
>They’re on the Crusaders’ side, of course.
>You can’t really blame them, either.
>Silver’s tougher, too.
>You hadn’t noticed she was weaker before until you saw the way she stands now.
>Stands. Hah.
>It seems like everyone’s changed except you.
>Which is why you’re in favor of going to the creepazoid shack on the edge of town.
>Even if you’re stuck, the only reason you’re not having some nightmare is because of Silver, and her sisters, and Care Root.
>The thought that they saved your life and didn’t want something from you for it makes you feel...
>Guilty?
>It’s a debt, and you can’t stand those.
>So, today, you’re going to save them the trouble and the cost.
>Diamond Tiara always gets even.
>Even though it means riding a public bus.
>Silver’s with you all the way, still wearing her backpack.
>You hope that her Stand gives her some kind of protection this far out.
>She doesn’t act like she’s vulnerable.
>But maybe that’s just because she’s aware of the threats.
>For the whole trip, the two of you laugh about the lightweightiest person in your class, Featherweight.
>”Yeah, and then he did the, the-!”
>You mime the face he made when he tried to do a pull-up in PE.
>She points at your impression and covers her mouth to snicker.
>But eventually the bus lurches, and the door jerks open.

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>>29689891
>You glance out the window for the street signs, and Silver nods.
>Quickly, you dispatch yourselves into the afternoon air.

>Be Care Root, hunched over a display of movie-theater candy.
>You also have to buy some zipper bags to put these in, and then stuff them into your pockets.
>Do you dare go with something that could make noise when you walk, let alone melt?
>Or do you gravitate towards more varied but non-chocolatey fare?
>It’s hard to ignore how stained the carpeting of this store is.
>The sign above you says that cameras are watching you.
>You wonder, after a moment, whether you could steal this candy if you wanted to.
>No matter how much you spend, your Stand’s only ever changed your sum total happiness once.
>Are your decisions your own?
>Probably.
>You mean, Derpy has free will.
>It’s not like you could tell, but maybe your Stand only highlights the important things you’ll do anyway.
>It’s not limited by computing power or anything.
>Even if it’s dictating your path to you, you could probably throw off the path by leaving.
>Jump in your car, head in a random direction until you’d never see her again.
>Not that you ever would, of course.
>You have a core feeling that you could spend your whole life looking and never find a girl who would make your Stand change again.
>That day was the start of an incredibly happy moment in your life.
>But...
>Why didn’t ｢Timbuk Three｣ predict the switch in the first place?
>Even if you could have two destinies, one miserable and one bright, shouldn’t it have known?
>”Hey, Kid.”
>You turn your head.
>There are two students whose names you never knew to begin with.
>Lowerclassmen, orange and blue, tall and lumpy, ten feet away.
>The blue one’s got a nasty bruise on his forehead, and he does the talking.
>”Where is she?”

>>29689912
>You want to knock their skulls together for bothering you right now.
>But you just stare at them, quiet.
>Then you point, surreptitiously, to the cameras-are-watching-you sign.
>Blue sours.
>”We’ll talk more in the parking lot.”
>Then they fall back a few feet, and go mill around outside of the store.
>You go back to choosing your candy.

>Be Silver Spoon.
>You get off the sidewalk once you see your destination.
>The house hasn’t been touched by anyone in years, one of those that isn’t brought down because no one can muster up a good reason to trash it.
>The grass is up to ridiculous heights, and the structure itself is all wood.
>Darker splotches decorate it, some of the stairs are splintered, but everything’s locked and closed.
>It’s the yard you don’t want to lose your frisbee in.
>With Diamond behind you, you duck into another empty backyard and survey the house from another angle.
>Still two stories, but on the back of the second floor there’s one of those weird doors that goes nowhere.
>The front had a porch of some kind, but here’s it’s just a backdoor and the grass, staved off from where you’re standing by a sturdy fence.
>You try to get a look in through the windows, but it’s all dust, curtains and darkness.
>There’s a sudden creaking.
>”Get down!”
>Diamond hisses at you, pulling you into the grass.
>Through the slats of the fence, you see the backdoor open.
>Someone blue lingers in the doorway.
>Trixie?!

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>>29689930
>...No.
>No, Trixie doesn’t have hair like that, you’re just getting excited.
>She giggles, and it’s the wrong register, too.
>Then she leans in and kisses someone.
>When she comes closer, she has something hovering over her shoulder like a ghost.
>Except… it really is a ghost.
>Translucent, grey, wispy.
>You turn your head slightly to Diamond and mouth words.
“Do you see that?”
>She doesn’t answer.
>The ghost turns and surveys the area.
>You can see her better as she walks up to the front yard.
>Blue-raspberry hair against dull clothes.
>You saw this girl when you competed in the Battle of the Bands, everyone did.
>Diamond’s looking at you now, eyes serious.
>You remember the name from the tournament list.
>Sonata.
>One of three.
>You whisper, half to Diamond and half to yourself.
“Why here…?”
>Sonata abruptly stops walking.
>Diamond’s eyes widen.
>You shut your mouth.

>Be Care.
>When you leave, bags in tow, they’re still waiting for you.
>They’re both almost solemn.
>They don’t even speak, and you walk past them towards the parking lot.
>You could definitely get away from them if you were willing to shell out the price.
>But you don’t even try to run.
>Their footsteps pad after you on the linoleum, and soon the parking lot’s upon you.

>>29689936
>You wait until you’re a good distance from the door.
>Closer to the horizon, cars drift in and out of view against the sunlight.
>You stand between it and them.
>”We know you’re going to meet her. Where and when?”
“...”
>”Fine. Be that way.”
>A sudden headache affects you, and Orange darts forward, his Stand hovering out of his arm.
>It’s purple, bumpy, ogrelike.
>You throw up a hand-sized barrier, and it simply passes through it.
>He’s holding a tiny vial of something, and suddenly it passes through your skin and into your arm.
>It doesn’t even hurt.
>｢Timbuk Three｣ appears and roundhouse kicks him.
>Those purple arms appear again, crossed now, and he grunts as he’s pushed back.
>Your migraine subsides.
>”That’s poison. Real bad stuff. I’ve got the antidote, but it’s unmarked and there’s a lot of nasty stuff on me, too. If you want to live, you have to earn it.”
>Your heart rate and breathing start increasing.
>It’s like there’s something on the verge of your senses...
>The headache returns, but it was there before, so it wasn’t caused by the poison...
>Something in your stomach does a flip.
>Where the hell are these kids getting poison from?!”
>Blue takes your silence for an answer.
>”Tch. Tell us or don’t. But you don’t have very long to make up your mind.”

>Be Diamond Tiara.
>Sonata Dusk, the finalist in the last Battle of the Bands, is only a few feet away.
>Listening.
>You cover your mouth, trying not to hyperventilate.
>Silver, next to you, is staring out through the fence.
>You see sweat on her face.
>Both of you are wondering whether it’d be best to run away right now.
>Could you pretend to be kids who lived in the neighborhood?
>Would she know if you were lying?
>Damn it, you should’ve been ready for this!
>Without any change in volume, Silver speaks again.
>”I mean, there’s not even a pool back here.”

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>It's a Ditherer update
I'm already stimulating myself.

>>29689947
>You slice a finger across your throat, but she doesn’t react.
>“And it’s next to a freaky Goosebumps house. What kind of party could some dork like Rumble throw here anyway?”
>Then she nods at you, eyes like dinnerplates.
>You realize it’s your cue.
“Y-yeah, what a loser. ...I bet his parents aren’t even leaving.”
>”Yeah.”
>Behind the fence, Sonata shrugs and keeps walking.
>Your face trembles as you hold in a sigh of relief.
>She walks across the street, gets into a sleek blue car in their driveway, and drives off.
>Only when you can’t hear the sound of it any longer do either of you move.
“Okay. What’s our plan from here?”
>Silver looks surprised.
>She was probably expecting you to tell her.

>You focus on your arm.
>Your Stand shines a powerful light through it.
>It’s like holding a flashlight to your fingers to see the bones.
>You make it out.
>”Don’t die for her, Kid.”
>You ignore him.
>You feel sweaty, like you’re about to vomit.
>Something’s… ringing?
>You don’t pay attention to it.
>A thought, and then a tiny glowing casket envelops the vial.
>Another, and it’s completely annihilated.
>It singes your muscles a little, but you’ve never been one for working out.
>Blue sees this.
>And he sees the look in your eye, now.
>“Snails, get him!”
>Orange comes towards you again, his Stand’s arm apparent.
>You throw up another shield, and the Stand goes straight through it.
>He smiles.
>You smile back, and push the shield past his Stand and onto his arm.
>His fist gets jerked backwards, and its knobby counterpart never reaches you.
>While he’s stunned, ｢Timbuk Three｣ smashes a foot into his face.
>Man, your Stand’s pretty good at kicking, isn’t it?
>He hits the ground, and he’s out.
>You turn to Blue.
>”...eep.”

>>29689964
>Be Diamond Tiara.
>It took a few tries to jump the fence, and you tore a line in your yellow jacket.
>There’s no helping the rustle of the grass, but you don’t think anyone’s listening.
>You keep an eye out for traps, or mosquitoes.
>Silver takes the lead, checking the door.
>There aren’t any locks on it, or a screen.
>When you stand just outside of it, your palms feel sweaty.
>She grips the doorknob, because she’s closest, and turns it all the way before she makes any move.
>The thing nearly screeches when she pulls it outward.
>She cringes with you, waits for someone to call out.
>No one does.
>Gently, gradually, you both test the limits of the hinge.
>She eventually makes an opening big enough for the both of you.
>Hoping you don’t wind up on the news, you slip inside.

>Be Care Root.
>Leaving two unconscious students behind, you take your candy and go on your way.
>Even if it melts, chocolate is the shit.
>Gosh, look at the time.
>You make the drive efficiently, paying attention to the encroaching moment of brightness in your immediate future.
>It’s big enough to be worth something, too.
>Swinging by to pick up Derpy takes only a couple minutes.
>She’s wearing a black shirt with gamepad arrows on it, and little red earrings that glint in the light.
>You hadn’t known you were tense until you just relaxed.
>She smiles and climbs in.
”How are the girls?”
>The way you say it makes you feel like you’re their dad.
>Shudder.
>”They’ve done some growing up, but they’re alright. How have you been?”
>Should you really mention being injected with poison at the start of your date?
>No, that would definitely nuke the mood.
>You shrug.
“Same old.”

>>29689972
>”What movie are we seeing?”
>Uh…
>Shit.
“I, uh, guess we still need to pick one.”
>She looks for starting times on her phone while you drive.
>You don’t know whether you should rush or waste time, so you try some kind of compromise.
>If you pay attention, you can hear her reading the names under her breath.
>”Fifty... La La Land, Hidden... Ohmigosh! John Wick 2!”
>You take your eyes off the road to look at her like it’s the first time you’ve seen her.
>”You’ve seen the first one, right?”
“Of course!”
>”Then we’ve gotta see this one! The showing’s in… thirty minutes!”
>You step on it.

>Meanwhile.
>Sweetie says what you’re all thinking.
>”I still think it’s dangerous to send Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon out there.”
>You shrug, although neither of the others can hear that over the phone.
“It is. But no matter what happens to them, it’s still better for us.”
>You’re not lying.
>If they break in and take another gem-shard, even if they don’t hand it over, things are still better.
>And if they’re never heard from again…
>Well, that’ll only bring the present situation to a boil even faster.
>Bloom speaks.
>”I agree. No point in worrying when it’s no skin off our backs.”
>”Do you really feel that way?”
>...
>Neither of you answer.
>After a little more discussion, you all hang up and enjoy your evenings separately.
>There are things you wish you could tell the other two.
>That it all really is for a higher goal.
>That it’ll all be okay in the end.
>But then she’d erase their memory of the conversation.
>You doubt even you’ll know the truth for much longer.
>What matters for your future are the gems.
>And making Care Root stay desperate.

｢To Be Continued｣

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>>29689978
>And making Care Root stay desperate.
Dang, he just can't catch a break, right?

Ditherer, Jojo Fridays are the best thing ever since you came here and I thank you deeply for that.

As for the chapter, I like the new dynamic between Diamond and Silver. How something as subtle as "You hadn’t noticed she was weaker before until you saw the way she stands now." is amazing.
And of course, we saw more of the "factions", how the whole situation makes them act the crusaders are awfully grim and we have a hint of what they are all looking after. I'm gonna guess they are the fragments of the pendants the Sirens had; although, this being a Jojo story, I could see the Red Stone of Aja being also part of it. But then again, I'm just pulling at straws here.
I'm looking forward to the next episode!

>>29680738
>yfw Kira is gonna get rekt
https://youtu.be/a64u7bOWT5s

Bump za dusto

>>29690590
>Whatifpart1didacrossoverwithpart5PNG

Welp after a hiatus of 'being creative' and 'what direction I want the story to go' it's time to GOGO JOEJOE!

>You are Zac Zeppeli, student of Crystal prep and you've just faced a out of body bizarre experience.
>More importantly you must find JoeJoe and explain this out of body experience to him.
>Stepping outside of the closest you get your mobile out and ring JoeJoe.
>Thankfully it still being lunch most of the students were either eating or outside.
>"Zac?"
>Making your way down the hallway you quickly reply to the voice.
"JoeJoe, where are you, I must find you!"
>Your usually cool demeanor was gone as nothing could explain what you've just been through.
>"Alright Zac Sheesh, it sounds like you've just had a out of body / near death experience."
>...
"Just tell me where you are so I can find you."
>Stupid JoeJoe making you seem like you're exaggerating; you knew about Hamon and the spin but this 'thing' was the work of neither of those.
>"Alright Zac I'm by the car park, just get out of the school, the place is a shit hole."
>You hang up and make your focus escaping Canterlot high.
>Heading towards the nearest door in the main hall you think of a genius plan.
>Instead of going through the main hall where the most people will be, why not just go into a classroom and sneak out through a window instead, avoiding any problems.
>You truly are a genius brain.
>Avoiding the large doors you head towards the nearest classroom door.
>Without peeking inside you just barge in seeing a open window.
>"HEY WHERE'S DO YOU THINK YOU'S ARE GOING?"
>Stupid brain.
>"LOOKS WHAT WE'S GOT OURSELVES ERE'"
>You turn to face your intruders and see them.
>"I AM NOT A MEM-MEM OF CRYSTAL PREP..."
>There was 3 of them, two quite large and one rather small.
>The three shout in Unison.
>"CRYSTAL PREP!?!?!?!"
>The collar wearing students seemed to be of low intelligence and rather rebellious in their dress code.
"Mamma mia, looks like i'll have to beat some sense into you."

>>29692462
>Assuming your battle pose the three simply chuckle.
>"YOU'S IS PRETTY STUPID, YOU'S CANT BEAT'S US BECAUSE THERE'S 3 OF US TO 1 OF YOU'S!"
>The other two laugh and nod in agreement.
>The biggest of the three step forward first.
>"YOU'S IS IN DETENTION FOR BEING IN THE WRONG SCHOOL!!"
>His fighting style was rather simple, it was an all out thug attack swinging and merely hoping to land a blow.
>Chuckling you decide to let him have some fun, stepping back as he fails to hit you.
>"COME ON FIDO, DON'T LET THIS CHUMP WIN!"
>Your assailant or 'Fido' grunts and starts swinging more wildly.
>Even though you easily avoid these attacks if one was to land on you, well you'd be in a pretty bad shape to say the least.
>Deciding to not get hit by the grey, almost animal like being with arms like tree trunks you continue strafing his blows.
>"STOP DODGING AND FIGHT'S ME LIKE A MAN."
>Fighting was a last resort but he was backing you into the corner.
"I'll give you one chance to stop now Fido, otherwise you will be on the floor crying in pain from a broken arm."
>The two bystanders merely laughed at you.
>"YEAH RIGHT FIDO AIN'T AFRAID OF NOTHING!"
>Fido was too close to use the spin on so you decide to get close and personal.
"If you won't listen to me then listen to the pain you're about to be in!"
>Grabbing one of his flailing arms you use the nearby wall as a platform to flip over him.
>As he lays on the ground, his arm on the brink of being broke you give him a final chance.
"Fido, look at you, one moment you were attacking me and now you are facing the consequences of your actions."
>You stare at the other two as you continue.
"I will let go if you let me leave peacefully otherwise I will break your friends arm."
>The small one of the two pipes up.
>"ME'S DON'T BELIEVE YOU'S SPOT WILL BEAT YOU INTO GROUND, SPOT WILL HELP FIDO!"
>Becoming a human projectile he launches himself from the other grey skinned student right into your direction.
"I warned you idiota."

>>29692532
>While still holding Fido by the arm you raise your leg without any effort crushing the pathetic attempt of an attack from 'spot'
>As Spot flew into your boot face first you dragged him right into the floor next to Fido.
>Applying your boot to his back and pulling you broke Fido's arm leaving him writhing in pain as you let go.
"2 down one to go, you see your friends? do you want to be like them?"
>The third of the group merely chuckled.
>"ME'S DONT SAY MUCH BUT CAN TELL YOU'S THIS, YOU MESSING WITH THE DIAMOND DOG'S!!"
>As he finishes his sentences he pulls out a switch blade.
>You were wondering why all three wore dog collars with diamonds on their necks.
"Alright I understand, but I never came to fight you, I've just got to get to my friend."
>The last Diamond dog screeched ignoring your peace offering.
>As the last of the Diamond dogs charges towards you a voice interferes the tense atmosphere,
>"Dear god Zac you can fight but you can't negotiate with these special ed students."
>You recognised it as JoeJoe but you couldn't see him, even by the window.
>The voice didn't phase the last attacker at all.
>"DI-"
>As the lunging switchblade draws closer to you a crashing sound interrupts the sentence of your attacker.
>"Especially when it comes to Rover..."
>JoeJoe just threw a chair at Rover like a pencil.
"JoeJoe, I was about to make him stab himself with that knife, thanks for saving me the effort."
>You exchange a hearty chuckle as you ignore the three defeated diamond dogs.
>"That's Alright Zac now let's get out of here."
>Getting out of the window Fido shouts through his pain.
>"WE'S WILL GET YOU'S BACK JUST YOU WAIT ZAC!"
>Welp the only thing those 3 got off you was your name.
>"Out of all the classes you could of gone through you chose detention, damn Zac I thought you'd know better."
"Yes I thought it was a fool proof idea at first and then well, that happened but how did you know I was in trouble?"
>JoeJoe chuckles as you get to the car park.

>>29692706
>"Well that's quite simple, I could hear the fighting coming from the open window, and the big door right there just happened to be the exit."
>You mentally grimace at your mistake, but you kicked some ass so you're content with your choice.
"Let's just get going JoeJoe, I got a lot to explain and not a lot of time to explain it."
>"Let me give you a ride, repay your kindness from yesterday."
>Hopping into the Fiat you start explaining your day.
>You skip the badass parts of putting Sugarcoat and Indigo zap into their places.
"So essentially I was on lunch minding my own business and then I heard the voice of her..."
>You're mind recollects the correct details.
"Aryanne Hoofler, a student like any other however she is extremely prejudiced towards people of Judaism religion or appearance."
>You tap your nose to get your point across.
"I am very rarely afraid of anything JoeJoe but her persona and beliefs as a person sends shivers down my spine."
>JoeJoe nods whilst tightening his group on the steering wheel, he was visibly pissed off.
"Then as a hid, I heard the second of the voices... Erich Rammstein."
>JoeJoe could see the hairs on your neck standing in fear.
"He was going to attack me, I have a qualms when I hear or see either of them. I can only imagine what would've happened if... something didn't get me out of there"
>"We're here Zac, show me where they hang out."
>JoeJoe was on the brink of ripping his steering wheel off.
>"I don't judge people for their religion, appearance I judge them for how they act and treat me."
>He points towards crystal prep.
>"And NO ONE fucks with me or my friends!"
"Wait JoeJoe we haven't got a lot of time, i've got a better idea."
>Sneaking to the car park you find Aryanne's car .
>JoeJoe smirks.
>"Huh, and I thought your car was shit."
>Grabbing onto a nearby rock his smirk turned into a maniac smile.
>"Those assholes want a 'Crystal night' well we'll give them something better."

got to go and do some shopping be back later friends, another writefag can feel more then happy to write if they want.

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>Reading all this

ZA BUMPDO!

>>29692896
Writroplex is back!
More JoeJoe and Zack!
JoeJoe is gonna wreck Aryane's car! That can't end well... but I want to see JoeJoe and Zac vs. These versions of Aryanne and Erich.
Good to have you back man.

How does one join in on this thread? I've seen it a few times but haven't had the time to participate.

>>29694049
If you want to read some stories then check these posts
>>29674747
>>29674797
>>29674887
>>29674951
You can also comment on anything Jojo/Mlp related.

>>29674687
Well. I got an interesting roll. Disturbed for the Band, because i'm a horrible being.

Stand Name: This Moment

Stand Ability: [Transcendent Homo Superior Physiology](http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Transcendent_Homo_Superior_Physiology)

Power - E

Speed - E

Range - A

Durability - B

Precision - E

Potential - E

Description: The power to be a superhuman/metahuman/mutant of godly power. Advanced version of Homo Superior Physiology. Variation of Transcendent Physiology. Not to be confused with Mutated Godhood Users are superhuman/metahuman/mutant so powerful they can be considered first rate deities. They can intuitively manipulate many if not all aspects of reality on a gigantic scale (planetary, cosmic, universal, multiversal and even omniversal), and enhance their physical abilities to nigh infinite levels...

How would you name a stand that lets you morph into a pony at will?

Good news I've got my green ready for tomorrow to dump.

Bad news I'm currently in a bathroom stall at one of those formal parties where using your phone would offend the host with my mother, what s bizarre change from your regular shopping trip.


I'll hopefully be away soon, it's weird being a +1 I can only compare it to being a body pillow to someone during a lonely night.

>>29694509
[Wayward Son]

Because you've strayed too far from God's light

Hey, you guys know why the end of Part 6 is so good?

Because Jotaro finally fucking dies

goddamn I hate Jotaro

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NOOOOOOO!

>>29695049
Bizarre...
Is it a new green or a new chapter of an already existing one?
Being a +1 is an important thing man. Make your mom have a good time!

>>29695432
Welp the grand plan of things is to wrap up chapter two which is around 75% done from what I've written and then chapter 3 will be the chapter where JoeJoe finally discovers the true 'power' when it comes to his favourite song and his soul (he will acquire his stand)

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>>29695687
Oh boy! [End Credits] is coming!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_d1bWjPcwlQ
If the Passione guys and the Elimination Squad had joined forces, would they have been the strongest group in all of Jojo?
What if all of them had teamed up against Diavolo?
That would have been a great ASB.

>>29694509
「GOODBYE HORSES」

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>tfw will never live quietly in Equestria
>tfw mane six and the gang just gonna fuck it up
>tfw even if they don't can't fullfill hand fetish due to hooves everywhere

Kira can't catch a break can he?

>>29696592
Kira's gonna have a really hard time adjusting to his new home in my story.

>>29696592
Would diavolo enjoy a second life in equestria escaping Giornio and the infinite deaths of GER

>>29681435
the dazzlings wouldn't have stands
they would be the pillar men (minus santana)
https://youtu.be/VoOW1Vvl2oU

>>29697285
I don't think so, because for one, everyone would have seen his face and morphology, and would instantly be able to identify him as Diavolo The Human if any of them knew his name. Additionally, he would probably miss his lucrative mob business and, if he was stupid and desperate enough for power, try to restart it under Celestia's nose.

He could try masquerading as Vinegar Doppio for a time, but eventually some unfortunate situation would force Diavolo to take over, exposing him to the ponies.

King Crimson, even with its time skipping ability and the predictive powers of Epitaph, wouldn't be able to keep him hidden forever, and one day some stallions might come across a lump covered in blankets in some back alley, mumbling to itself before disappearing completely. Other ponies might report seeing a strange minotaur off on the edges of the town, which suddenly vanished when it saw them. Twilight would probably get the Elements to investigate it and would most likely be able to track down Diavolo with some sort of magical trick. Then he'd use King Crimson to escape again, and they'd probably be back to square one.

>>29696592
>>29696720
>Twilight can summon hands fine, but they're furry and only have four fingers.
>The only other path to satisfaction is to fight a minotaur.
>The Cutie Mark Crusaders are constantly poking at him.
>The Princesses expect him to be kept track of because he was discovered on a Map jaunt.
>Visitors to Ponyville stare at him.
>He gets desperate enough that he tries to clip his nails by holding them close to his Stand's bombs.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rprfFVW8ahA
Opinions on Jojolion's new chapter?

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>>29698443
>mfw Yasuho shows up to Dolomite's pond

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>>29460406

Chapter 13: A ｢SLAVE｣ To The Power

I know I posted this last thread but I am actually still working on it and it'll probably most likely be worth the wait.

>>29694364
So, this gave me a couple ideas. I might try and do some Greens. Depends on how things go. Not much of a writer, so might just be throwing around oneshots, and having some fun with ideas. Up for help, if anyone wants to throw thoughts in.

>>29699501
Sure, hit me with what you got

>>29699501
How about... the CMC are the only ponies without a stand, so they try to come up with ideas on how to get one.

>>29699501
>The EQG talking during lunch break, imagining what sort of stands they or the people they know would have.
>Little do they know that stands are real and the characters ITT are defending the school from a strong stand user at the same time...

it's a bit late but take this bump while i get ready to write (i should concluded chapter two today)

Boop za dusto

>>29699501
>>29699809
[This moment] vs. [Planisphere]?

>>29701018
Damn I'm a mess get writing and I mean really stuck in writing and then my friends desperately need help installing some simple emulators they could of found the tutorial for on YouTube. Trying to tell them the basics is like trying to tell an elderly person how to use the internet.

Yare Yare Daze at least I can announce chapter is finished but just to make up for the lack of content will be posted in Iddy bits here and there.

It will be filler while the real bigger writefags take the stage.

>>29702050
It's been a little while since I've read the green here, can you refresh my memory on [This Moment]?

>>29702148
It is this guy
>>29694364

>>29702228
I'm incredibly retarded, sorry.
If [Planisphère] fought that thing it'd lose outright without the element of surprise. Unless I were to introduce its extra powers early, anyway, but I can't do that.

>>29700616
>The mane 7 discuss their favorite stories and what ASBs they want to read.

Guys, I have a very important question. How the fuck does inertial negation/manipulation work? And if I were to negate someone's inertia, would their momentum continue to carry them forward? If so, would they slam into me and drop us both on the ground or would they slam into me and stop where they are before falling down? This is assuming I can't manipulate my own inertia.

>>29702497
it just works

>>29702497
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Inertia_Negation?comments_page=1
Check the "limitations" part.

>>29702373
>"Man, Erich is the greatest! He is the stongest stand user ever!"
>"Excuse you darling, but Care Root could defeat that gnarly natsoc with just a beam of light."
>"Rarity, I reckon Care Root would loose a great deal of time thinking if it is even worthy to throw away his happiness on that Erich fella. [Saturn's Children] on the other hand..."
>"Uhmmm, I like [Feathery]."
>"Oh Oh! I really really really like [Metropilis]! Isn't it greathowitmakespranksandillusilnsandthegenderrolesarereversedand..."
>"Statistically speaking, the strongest stand should be the one with the most Development Potential, and [Planisphere] still has unshown tricks according to his author, so it is safe to think that..."
>The girls keep talking about the stands in the greentexts they like so much.
>Meanwhile, Sunset keeps eating her sandwich and listening to the conversation while thinking to herself "If they know [FITC] is my favorite they'll think I'm a pervert."

>>29702879
Hmmmm I'm trying to think from each member of the human 7 (and spike) what each of their favourite stories would be.

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She is the Yukako of the EqG series, prove me wrong

>>29703424
Well... she didn't have a crush on anyone, she didn't kidnap said crush and later didn't change her face in an attempt to like her non existant crush.
She was just comically bipolar.
Also, no hair powers.

>>29702879
>Sunset liking [FITC]
She has good taste

>Twilight liking [Planisphère]
She has shit taste, whatever loser made that Stand should be kicked out of these threads

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>>29703106
>>29703553
If you guys think they'd like different characters, or you'd like to come with more EQG characters talking about the stories feel free to share it.

>>29703638
Unrelated, but, idk why but I really like that cadence costume. Even though I know it's a guy I'd definitely hug her/him

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Josuke finally fucking said it, 22 years after Kira first did.
Thank you based Araki

Quick update: I am actually in the right mindset to work on the Jolyne ASB, so that might finally become reality this month. Look for it in the upcoming weeks.

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>>29703935
You can do it man!

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Stand: ｢Bangkok Night｣
User: Diamond Mint
Ability: Prevents anyone in range who is not traveling at a rate of one foot per two seconds from breathing.

>Tires out opponents from a distance.
>Traps them by forcing them to stand still or move towards danger.
>Has to take precautions for allies, can be forced to switch it off if one of them can't move.

>>29704556
That'd be the most dangerous game of Red Light, Green Light ever

>>29704556
So depending on the range, one could fight it by holding its breath or fighting at a distance, right?

>>29703469
But IF she did... turn you would literally have twins.

I'm a newbie at the whole "writefag" thing
> only made like 6 complete greentexts
I'd like to ask if I can partake in this thread? I have a few good ideas I want to get into motion.

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>>29705433
Don't let your dreams be dreams man.

>>29705433
Of course friend, what questions did you have? The more writefriends the better

>>29705433
>Only made 6 complete greentexts.
Could you give us a link?

[Diver Bump]

LET THE VOICE OF BUMP TAKE YOU BACK TO PAGE 1

>>29706397
"It has the ability to enter a thread and rearrange its position on the board!"

[Bump Report]

BUMP EXPERIENCE!!!

Stand Stats Wheel from part 5!
https://youtu.be/FGolhrtVbM0

>>29709450
>Dude Looks Like A Lady
gets me every time

>>29709450
Man I'm even more hype for part 5 now ever since prince's death and starting to listen to his stuff good experience is a beautiful song!

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Stand: ｢Id Engager｣
User: Cherry Berry
Ability: Creates bursts of incredible hedonistic pleasure with its kicks, equivalent to a strong opiate.

>She wanted a Stand that would kill things.

>>29704771
Yeah. I intended the distance to be pretty broad, but the effect is no danger as long as you can crawl at a decent rate or find a means of transportation. It's only deadly if the user can force their targets to stop moving somehow. Although it's also a decent anti-Hamon measure.

>>29710272
Stand Name: [Livin' La Vida Loca]

Ability: Subtly alters the target's heart rate either up or down, and at such a slow pace that the victim cannot detect the change until it's too late and they either enter cardiac arrest or die of arrhythmia. This ability only activates if the Stand touches the victim and only stays active if the user stays within range.

>>29710731
Heh, I had an idea for a faster version of that. It was called ｢Tag You're It｣, and I had it planned for Lyra in Bon Bon's Bizarre Badventure.

wait, what the fuck, how long has this general been existing.
Just started watching JoJo and now this thread pops up out of nowhere and I have never seen it before

>>29710772
Around six months, I think.

Welcome in.

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>>29710772
For a while actually...
But it wasn't visible for those not initiated in Jojo

>>29710788
>>29710803
huh, alright then, guess I was blind

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>>29710772
>yfw the thread is only visible for stand users.

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>>29710964

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>>29710964
That explains everything, actually. The thread itself has a Stand.

Stand Name: [Livin' In A Box]
Stand Master: JoJo Threads

Ability: This Stand renders the JoJo Threads invisible to any non-Stand users, and forcibly perpetuates itself through symbiosis with the users that can see it. Each time the thread "dies," [Livin' In A Box] activates and forces one of the users to create a new thread, which the Stand inhabits, and the cycle repeats ad infinitum.

Can you guys imagine how horrible self-perpetuating Stands could be?

>>29710765
I guess great minds think alike.

Not like I'll ever achieve your greatness though

>>29711091
>I guess great minds think alike.
>Coming on next... [Planisphere] vs. [Timbuk Three]

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For the record, I wrote 1800 words of Coco's next chapter the same time I put up E7 of CRBA. I had work, reading and applications since, but I want to finish it before my shift tomorrow night.

>>29711309
>Opening volley of ten needles, each fired a half-second apart
>Stands aren't limited by normal human reactions, ex. the pause between sneezes
>Care's heart stops for ten seconds and he can't intake any air.
>Anonymous brains him with a blunt object before he can recover.

>>29711091
You should aim higher.

>>29699501
>"Snips and Snails' ｢Odd Future｣
>A pony with a Stand visible to everyone really just has a changeling friend and some basic magic. She has to fight a real Stand user.
>Four overlooked background ponies with secret talents perform a heist of the deepest chasms of the Royal Archives.
>Life when Ultimate Adagio rules the world.
>Svengallop has a distorted version of ｢Pearl Jam｣ and fights crime on the side.

>>29699501
>Daring Do has to track down the goddamned magic arrows after they flew out of storage for the fourteenth time.
>In Chrysalis' totalitarian reign, Stand user insurgents are the biggest enemy because Stands can't be copied by disguised secret police.
>The writefags develop Stands and have to duel their main characters to the death. Said characters have mixed feelings about this.
>Sunburst finally lives up to his name and learns the ancient breathing techniques of his father when a vampire stalks the Empire.
>A filly gets a cutie mark that's only visible to Stand users. The implications of this will change her life forever.
>Gloriosa Daisy found a curious arrowhead in a cave. After it gives her a supernatural ability, ｢Nothing But Flowers｣, she suspects Mr. Rich wants to buy up her camp for more than spa-building.
Bedtime bump.

>>29711309
>Jovial Journey vs. Brave Shores' [The Wall]

>[FITC] vs. Fido's [Sweet Thing Reprise]

>Toccata and Fugue vs. The Storm Sisters.

>Pseudonymous' [YTSE JAM] vs. Coco's [Something for Nothing]

>Erich's [Benzin] vs. Ziggy's [Starman]

>Applejack's [Rawhide] vs. Rarity's [I'm Designer]

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Goodnight bump

>>29699501
>A peaceful Anon is stabbed by the Arrow, and develops a Stand which slowly kills him over the course of a week

>One of the Anons gains a Requiem Stand for all of 3 minutes, and uses it for the most mundane shit possible

>Celestia gains a Stand and flies off the handle, leaving the world under permanent scorching sunlight. Twiggles and Co. must get her back by any means

>One of the earth ponies, maybe big mac, gains a Stand and uses it as his drinking buddy because he doesn't know what the fuck a Stand even is

>Rarity and Applejack temporarily switch Stands, much to each other's extreme discomfort

>Twilight gets a Stand that allows her to simulate the feeling of tickling behind a pony's ears. She uses this Stand to overthrow Celestia in glorious communist revolution

>Anons compare their attack rushes while posing in the gayest way possible and calling each other faggots the whole time, then go out for drinks afterward

>The dimension of darkness inside Cream and The Hand's scraping ability both lead to Equestria, causing quite a few scares when Avdol and [Killer Queen]'s air bombs manifest along with several tons of stone, part of a steel gate, a shitload of air, and Avdol's arms

>>29712929
Is this Yurwryyyyyyy?

Just had a totally random thought how would of each JoJo react to their own OP's i.e Jonathan - Sono chi no sadame, Joseph, bloody storm and jotaro stand proud etc...

>>29712107
>[Benzin] vs. [Starman]
I so want to write this.

>>29714009
Do it StarAnon-san

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Alright, work soon, but first it's storytime!

Coco's Bizarre Adventure, Episode 7: Drops of Jupiter

Sweetie Drops was born in peacetime, but never really appreciated it. She had always idolized the tacticians of the past, more for their accomplishments than how they thought. Weaponry, technology, conspiracy, all of these appealed to her with its own special charm. There was so much versatility in those ideas, so much care and attention paid into finding unique and novel ways to go to war. The moment she was allowed in a military history museum was one of the best moments of her life.

At least, before she had entered the Empire, a few days ago. Magic was a convenient thing, especially in a world absolutely thick with it. It made understanding the situation, adjusting to her power, all of the processing that would’ve taken days or weeks, completely automatic. That didn’t mean it didn’t take some getting used to, but within a few days she was jumping into enchanted cave pools with the best of them.

Some of her other selves just noticed two children with Stands of their own, staring and then beating feet into the distance. She had a good idea they were heading for sanctuary, and with a quick nod she sent two of herself after them. A little mental push, and ｢Technologic｣ dissipated from above her and moved to them.

Then, advancing, they began to search for good targets.

***

>>29715227
“She’s following us!” Button yelled, head glancing back at their two pursuers and the Stand hovering between them. One had a suitcase tucked under one fetlock, and both of them were expressionless.

Diamond was ahead by a good margin and could hardly hear him, but she got the sentiment. Her Stand pushed further still, in case this was a game of fatal keep-away. The path they were cutting through town was going to be fast, but demoralizing, full of torched memories and things she didn’t have the time to mourn.

Her heartbeat resounded in her ears, and ahead she saw a body, slumped over against the earth like it had fainted from all of the excitement. It was no one she recognized, and briefly she wondered if it was some other enemy that somepony else had already vanquished.

Button saw it too, and rushed forward so she could hear him, spitting out the words. “C-Coco. Scootaloo’s, friend. Is she…?”

Diamond tried to tell if the pony was alive or dead, and couldn’t. “I might be able to carry her, but we’d have to stop.” Then she glanced over her shoulder.

The two Bon Bons were fiddling with the suitcase, but they couldn’t do it successfully and keep their pace. Their eyes were focused on the item between them, and they moved in almost perfect unison. Despite this, they had only fallen a couple yards behind.

The foals looked back at their opponents, then at each other, and ran for the burnt ring of houses where Coco Pommel lay.

When they reached it, Button spun and leapt on the spot, ｢Electric Funeral｣ appearing in his hooves. He skidded to a halt on his back, firing at one of the Bon Bons. She clearly hadn’t been expecting this, because she made no move to dodge, and then he front right hoof gave way under her. While the other one took in what had just happened, he counted the seconds to himself.

>It's Ditherer time
I'm stimulating myself again

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>>29715237
As he loosed another shot, Diamond knelt beside Coco and felt for a pulse. One came, but the jostling didn’t bring the mare to consciousness. ｢Misery Business｣, already occupied, tried to rearrange the Element of Kindness and the bunny already in its grip. Like so many delicate things, it stretched on endlessly against the measure of her heartbeat.

The Bon Bon he’d shot rolled to the side, and the other one fell low to the ground, suitcase still in tow. Keeping her hooves behind it, she fiddled with the mechanism singlemindedly, and it popped open.

From inside came a great rumbling, the sound of many parts connecting themselves in sequence, and the barrel of a weapon swung out and above the lip, extending like a telescope into a long cannon. Bon Bon gripped a string in her teeth and pulled.

Button cursed and hit the ground as a cannonball arced over his head and smashed into the crumbling woodwork of a broken-up house. Diamond held against the ensuing gust, dusty ash drifting back to earth around her wards. Still, Coco was unmoving.

A flicker of movement in the corner of her eye, and Diamond saw the second Bon Bon snapping off an exposed beam of blackened wood in her hooves. Her enemy looked at it hungrily, and strained for a moment before what was evidently a Stand coalesced above her.

Suddenly, the lion’s share of the wood slipped loose like overripe fruit, and a clean, shiny, sharpened blade lay beneath it. The Stand fizzled out as quickly as it came, and Bon Bon fidgeted with it in her hooves before balancing the machete properly.

As one charged and the other seemed to reload that long barrel, Button saw the whole scene unfolding in front of him. In the time frame available, he could get off one solid shot. Below, Diamond was all but dropping Fluttershy and the rabbit onto the road and getting ready for combat. Beside, another cannonball waited, the barrel swiveling slightly closer to him.

>>29715251
Self-interest won out, and he turned his Stand onto the cannon. It wasn’t a difficult target to hit, and he got the shot out in a half-second.

Nothing happened.

Eyes widening, he tumbled onto his legs and galloped towards a safe distance. It was too late, and as he dove forward out of the trajectory the metal ball thundered into the earth behind him, and he went flying, his limbs waving frantically in search of ground. The subconscious clock implanted by his Stand and trained by its use reminded him that enough time had passed that he could fire another shot, and as he soared for a well-ravaged wall he managed to line up the sight.

Just before the crash, he squeezed the trigger.

It hit.

With a gasp like the dead awakening, Coco Pommel sat up.

>>29715257
***

Scootaloo’s trip back down was arduous, maybe annoying, but not stressful. Her Stand could do nothing at all to make things lighter, and so it had required more work than she would have liked to carry another mare back to ground level. The moonlit castle echoed around her the whole time, while she anticipated some new Stand user or hidden trap to spring from the dimness of the far hallways.

｢Go Zone｣ hovered over her albino foe through it all, poised to deliver another barrage of kicks at the first sign of stirring. Whether by luck or wise acting, they all made it to the doors without trouble.

The fires had stopped in the distance, and the town seemed more peaceful, as if it were possible that everypony was really just asleep and not upstairs. She wondered how far away would be far away enough, and how she would tell. Flashes of the battle with Jewel Joy rippled on the surface of her memory, and she remembered that her most recent friend was still out there, possibly.

Flying straight up, she searched for movement further out among the buildings. It existed, in pockets. Tiny ponies ran this way and that splitting from a large group in the distance. There was other activity closer than that, but she couldn’t guess at its meaning. Unless a band of survivors had tromped out of the Everfree, she was almost certain nopony should be in the area at all.

She decided to kill two birds with one stone.

With a few exerting thwacks, her Stand knocked out the hinges of one of the castle doors. She stood a few hooves back as it toppled to the earth, and then she pushed the white mare onto it. With a deep breath she hopped on herself, and then the whole chunk of glass and wood jetted forward.

***

>>29715264
“Coco!” Diamond yelled as she backpedaled from the blade. The Bon wielding it swiped for her like she was clenching a broom in her teeth, frustration clear in her face.

“Wuh...?” Coco mumbled, trying to overcome the complaints of her inner clock and the pounding of her head. Whoever was talking to her knew her name, so surely it was important, but part of her insisted that she was just about to have really restful sleep if she would just collapse back to where she’d been.

“Help!” Diamond’s voice cut again into the haze, deeper now. Bon Bon lunged with the blade as the filly turned her head to Coco, swinging it down like the edge of a guillotine.

Before it could connect, ｢Misery Business｣ clapped the blade between its hooves. Then, with one thick twist it shattered, and the Bon Bon wielding it jumped away. Coco realized that she’d slept through something important, and finally got a good look around.

The pink filly was charging back against her attacker, now with an upper hoof.

Button Mash, who she’d spoken to not very long ago at all, was now unconscious and bruised, surrounded by sawdust and debris in the burnt-out center of a house.

Furthest away, an exact replica of the sword-slinging mare was working a long metal cannon. This drew her attention the most, because then it spat out a cannonball, arcing towards the house where Button had fallen.

“｢Something for Nothing｣!” Coco’s Stand lifted itself from her aura and let out a leash of fabric, grappling it onto Button’s barrel and pulling him closer. He landed on a cushion, and the house finally fell into a mess of bad timber.

>>29715268
Close enough to see it happen, Diamond advanced. “What’s your next move going to be?”

Her enemy sweated and gritted her teeth, already exhausted from working with three legs. Jumping into the window behind me and finding the first available weapon ｢Technologic｣ can provide.

Diamond kept silent. She realized now that it was childish to tell what she did and didn’t know, to announce it as an intimidation tactic. That never would’ve worked against half of what had happened tonight. So instead she smiled, quietly, as if she’d just been given a small, inconsequential gift from her father.

The Bon Bon kicked up some dirt in the filly’s face and leapt through the square hole where a window had once sat.

Then she paled as she bumped into ｢Misery Business｣, which was already hovering inside the ruined first floor. With one good kick she collapsed, and then… disappeared.

Diamond processed that.

Running back into the center of the fire-damage, she saw Coco. With no time to intuit what intricacies lay within the mare’s Stand, the filly just pointed at the sheet tied around Button and said, “Throw me!”

Coco had the funny, half-awake, hungover thought that she was becoming far too used to being told that, and perhaps she’d be better off building a catapult for easy use. It only lasted until she could see the look in the filly’s eyes, that same expression that the world now seemed to cultivate so well...

Diamond Tiara soared towards the artillerypony like a skipping stone about to touch the water, and the fake Bon Bon lifted the cannon away from its original, unconscious targets to keep it level with her. With one mighty and satisfied tug, another iron ball came crashing across the sky and into her trajectory, ready to pulp her.

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>>29715271
｢Misery Business｣ reached out with its thin but powerful limbs and clutched the ball at its oncoming apex like a tiny planetoid. Then, simply, it bounded off, and Diamond along with it, both falling down towards their foe.

Bon Bon strained to summon her Stand, maybe to activate something, but it didn’t come. Diamond dismissed ｢Misery Business｣ and merely kicked, landing all of the force of her fall through her back leg and into the skull of the cannoneer.

Her enemy’s eyes widened, and in a wingbeat, she was gone.

Diamond brought her Stand back out and ignored the fatigue that came with it. Coco approached from below, full of silent questions.

Before she could ask any, Diamond looked her in the eye and said, “We have to get back to Princess Twilight’s Castle.”

Whatever the mare saw in her face, she agreed immediately.

>>29711715
Nah, it wouldn't happen that way. I'm going to introduce some limitations on [Planisphère] in the next update to make things a little more fair for Anon's opponents.

I'm starting to think you're rubbing off on me. I've been creating really wacky Stands for the past couple weeks now.

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>>29715276
***

Home was nothing like Equestria. Not nearly so idyllic, although Drops wouldn’t be able to appreciate that given when she came in. Certainly not as pacifistic. Her home knew guns, missiles, anti-tank munitions, complex political ladder-climbing. Even in Canterlot High, nothing was as easy as saying what you wanted out loud. No problem worth mentioning was solved within twenty minutes. Few liked this, but it was altogether tolerable.

These were the changes she’d been conditioned to expect. The difference that still irked her, even as she crumbled buildings with well-placed explosives, was the size of the whole thing. There had been a map shown to her of the world she was helping to conquer, and she had marveled (to herself alone, naturally) at how incredibly small it was. This world ponies called Earth was hardly an island to her, and yet the great and rightful King needed extra help to find a paltry piece of jewelry and burn down a couple towns?

Perhaps Drops only felt this way because her home had been composed almost entirely of “islands”, brought together only through human ingenuity and military might. She had been taught from birth that her city was only a small part of a much larger whole, that there were thousands of cultures she would never even learn about as technology progressed across her planet. She had never known anything else, never thought of any world itself as fundamentally comprehensible.

So, here in this world, she couldn’t help herself expecting to find the edge of this tiny landmass would just dip off into the endless roiling wind of all the others, to think that she wasn’t really gone from home at all, only on some distant part of it. But she had fallen through into this world, and she had the evidence of new physics on her senses, and she knew this wasn’t Jupiter.

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>>29715307
Maybe this was why she didn’t seem to react when she saw an orange filly carrying one of her associates, a native she’d never met, while sliding through the grassy landscape on a glass door. This demented toboganner only registered in her mind as an enemy, and she marshalled her selves to prepare a counteroffensive.

They threw down bits of metal, frames, snapped-off drawers, nothing very useful. One threw her a comedically large hairbrush, and as she concentrated it snapped open down the middle, revealing a small, naked dartgun. Grimacing at its relative tininess, she pulled at the trigger with her lip, another her keeping it trained steady.

The filly came closer, oblivious, yelling into the wind as she approached. Whoever had incapacitated the DJ had to have been powerful, and she was probably some messenger looking to negotiate terms for a peace. Sweetie Drops couldn’t allow that to happen.

“Now,” the nearest her hissed as the filly was upon them.

She fired.

The door suddenly stopped cold, as if it had never moved in the first place, or had just been caught animate and hoped not to be noticed. The filly stopped with it. But above her head, the DJ kept soaring. Momentum pulled her forward, and her body tumbled forward over the filly like a ragdoll into the path of the tranquilizer.

The Dropses took a moment to process that.

And then the door started moving again, pushed by a Stand that was only visible for a split second, and indistinct orange shape. It “ran over” three of her selves like bowling pins while she scrambled in the detritus for another weapon, and even those who dodged it collapsed to the ground like the strength had left their legs.

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>>29715318
After a moment, the filly had swooped back around and grabbed PON-3 in her Stand, only to head off in an utterly random direction, past them and towards the forest. Drops threw a crookful of nuts and bolts after her retreating figure, but none landed anywhere close. Fuming, she realized that this was going to be work after all.

“There are still ponies here,” another self said.

“She came from the castle. If we don’t focus on it, we’ll get more skirmishes,” one more added.

The original nodded. “We have to do this right. Hit their base, track down stragglers later.”

They double-timed it.

***

Spike came to in a very cramped room, chockablock with the dazed and distressed, and around him there was a great murmuring like the misty beginning of the world. Time had not seemed to pass for him, as though he were under some sort of anesthetic, but he recognized the room and the time better than most of its new occupants. Regaining his bearings, he stared dumbly at the ceiling and realized that Scootaloo must have won. For a moment he laughed, glad that her promise hadn’t been in vain.

Then he noticed Scootaloo wasn’t present, and remembered Rarity was now in Canterlot, and his face became sober.

Of the other ponies in the room, most of whom were slowly exiting through the door, most were familiar. The sleeping forms of Twilight, Pinkie and Applejack were left where they lay, for fear of disturbing them, but the other Elements were absent.

Nearby, through the legs of standing adults, Spike saw Sweetie Belle gazing into her Stand, the mechanical clacking of the changing slides drowned out by a wall of whispers. She pulled it away, looking like someone who overslept an exam. It wasn’t over.

He pushed past a few errant discussions and attempts to look out of the windows and eventually made it to her.

>>29715328
“Is there still danger?” he asked.

“I’m seeing multiple of the same pony, destroying things! Ponyville’s being ransacked!” Sweetie said this almost as if it were her fault, and not just to him but to the room at large.

It didn’t hear.

Spike glanced around, sucked in a large breath and frowned deeply until he spat an impressive ball of dragonfire at the ceiling. Everything in the room was illuminated green for an instant, and everyone hushed and turned.

Spike bowed and waved an arm at Sweetie, giving her the floor.

***

Coco came to the castle, carrying Button in a large bag to one side of her and Diamond Tiara to the other with her own payload. The filly had explained everything up to now, although with the lack of clarity that came from a young and excited recounting given during a swift gallop. The bag itself wasn’t a comfortable arrangement for Button, but he wasn’t conscious to notice. Despite this Coco, who privately considered herself the unofficial princess of the rushed job, still worried at it, and was relieved to make it inside and deposit him where Diamond might find a place for him.

Of course the completely missing door had been the first clue that something had gone wrong, but the sheer emptiness within was astounding. It was so entirely not what they’d hoped for.

“They were just here, I know they were!” Diamond said, scrambling around to find some note or hint to their disappearance. Coco didn’t know what to say to her, but studied the building, as if there might be some secret passageway revealed in the right alcove or fixture.

Then there was the explosion, and the shaking, as a rocket collided with the side of the castle. There was no visible damage, but the structure shook with the force of an earthquake, as if pulling against some root structure deep in the mantle of the world. A second later, when it stopped, Coco ran to the entrance to take in the number of enemies they would have to face.

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>>29715340
She didn’t get the chance. Three came in, auras strong and pulsing, the Stand stationed above the front of the triangle. She was holding a gun large enough to pull the trigger with her hoof, and the other two had matching models and suitcases on their backs. There was a dull thrumming roar, maybe the Castle’s reaction to being invaded, maybe just the fear affecting Diamond’s eardrums.

The frontmost Bon Bon motioned the two Stand users together and backwards with the gun. They backed carefully further into the castle, into the center of it, where the high ceiling ended in a giant mass of crystal and a slab of grey stone formed a large table among chairs marked for the Elements of Harmony. The sight was breathtaking, but Coco had none to give yet.

When the Bon Bon spoke, she sounded terse, gruff, almost like the real candymaker were in the room putting on an act. “If you and the other ponies you’re hiding here don’t surrender, we’ll chip away at this castle until there’s nothing left.” Wisely, she kept the gun pointed on Diamond, and the other two of her set the suitcases against the table, popping them open to reveal steady countdown timers.

Another impact from outside, and more shuddering, but no sound. They weren’t breaking through.

“You’re lying,” Diamond said, near-sneering, “You’re going to break everything you can no matter what anypony does.”

That was the whole of their conversation. Not even giving a sign she’d heard the words, the stonefaced Bon Bon squeezed the trigger.

>>29715355
Nothing happened.

Not used to being betrayed by her weapons, she looked down on reflex to insepct it, and saw a small pillowy cushion jammed between the trigger and its arc backwards. By the time she looked back up, ｢Something for Nothing｣ was already on her.

Its hoof struck forward, landing squarely on the materializing surface of ｢Technologic｣ and halting there as it bore the force.

“Get out, Diamond!” Coco called over her shoulder. “Take care of Button! Find out what’s happened to everypony!” By now the other two Bon Bons had drawn closer, and their fumbling guns were torn from their hooves by cyan-glowing strips of white bedsheet.

But Diamond ignored her, pouncing on the nearest disarmed opponent with ｢Misery Business｣ at the ready, grabbing the Bon Bon with it and shouting, “How do we turn off the bombs?!”

There was an echo, a condescending smile, and then Diamond threw the opponent into a wall and jumped towards the device on the left, ripping into it and pulling wires. Coco watched in awe, until the orb of the enemy Stand drove into her chest in a metallic headbutt, pushing her away.

Her enemy, who had finally unjammed the trigger, pulled it with relish. When nothing happened, and she saw the line of cloth clogging the guts of the barrel, she gave up and charged for Coco, carrying it like a blunt instrument.

The other Bon Bon still standing, who summoned back ｢Technologic｣, opened up the back of one of the chairs. Whatever she found there, ｢Misery Business｣ socked her in the face before she could make use of it. Like the one slumped against the wall, she popped out of existence like a military soap bubble.

>>29715363
Diamond ripped at the wires with her teeth, working as quickly as she could. She had no idea what would happen if an artifact like this was destroyed, and she didn’t want to find out. At last, the timer died, blinking, displaying “00:05”.

“Five seconds to go!” she said, and then realized that there was another bomb left.

By her actions, Coco realized this fact at the same time. She could’ve tried throwing it outside of the chamber, and risked hitting somepony. She could’ve wrapped it in some amount of fabric, although that would’ve done nothing for the explosion.

Using ｢Something for Nothing｣ to tackle and hold back her opponent, she turned and dashed for the table, skidding to a direct halt between the bomb and Diamond. Her front hooves were outstretched, to cover as much surface area as possible, and her eyes were calm as the edge of the stone pressed against her coat.

[At least I gave something back.]

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>>29715371
And then the table thrummed with sudden energy, and lit up with magical light. The sudden rush of magical aura in the room was so powerful that she took a half-step away from it, nearly shielding herself like someone anticipating bright light. It took her a little staring to realize that her Stand had withdrawn.

Darting her head to the side, as if it would reveal this all as a magnificent pre-death hallucination, she saw the bomb had a blank readout. Behind her, her assailant stared at the magic in disbelief, maybe even wonder.

Coco tried, and found that her Stand had appeared again. Diamond did the same. Together, they turned to the remaining Bon Bon.

Their enemy looked between them, clutching the useless firearm to herself, and then backpedaled out of the door.

And all at once, with that previously imperceptible roar resolving itself into knowing and angry voices, Ponyville came raging down the stairs.

>>29715384
***

The Dropses manning the rockets fell back as the wave of Ponyvillians descended on them. Some scrambled to open up discarded sticks into small knives, or tug grass up to reveal a bunker, but ｢Technologic｣ didn’t assist them. With those same sticks and bare hooves, the townsponies attacked. Many had lost days worth of time, and were all the more rested for it.

For some, it became a rout. The first one to jump past the edge of town also left the shared field of the enchantment cast by the mirror pool, and popped out of existence. Others faded instead of falling unconscious.

Very quickly, the numbers whittled down, as Ponyville reasserted itself. After a while, a fleet of small, well-armed planes chased and herded them, and the townsfolk attacked them in mobs of pans and trampling.

The very last one, of course, was the original.

***

Drops came to and saw she was outside, and the sky was tinged with the purplish hints of a sunrise. More prominent, she saw the pink filly standing over her, grinning down at her with unrestrained smug enjoyment. A few more seconds of consciousness, and she saw the Stand, too. It was a massive thing, from the ground.

Slowly, painfully, the truth came out.

>>29715389
The assault on Ponyville didn’t have any more members at the moment. Jewel, Berryshine, PON-3 and Drops had been necessary overkill in the King’s eyes. They didn’t have any way of communicating with him, although Drops didn’t know if that stopped him from knowing they’d been beaten. She had used the Mirror Pool, and was the only pony with a solid idea of its location. Sombra knew very distinctly where ancient magical artifacts were. She didn’t know the fates of the Princesses or the Elements. Stopping the Elements was important to him only because the forces of Harmony were so formidable, as far as she knew. Drops and most of the others like her came from another world. (Here Diamond tried again, wondering if her Stand had been damaged in some way.) They had been recruited through Sombra’s influence, drawn in by the power he offered and whatever their hearts desired.

When Diamond decided she’d finally had enough, she nodded to one side. Distantly, there was a plastic [i]ker-chak![/i], and then Drops lost consciousness again.

***

When Scootaloo came back to the castle proper, there was little of interest on her return journey. Inside, though, everything was alive and alight. Ponies stood and talked with small smiles, Spike ran to and fro with scavenged but appreciated refreshments, and everywhere foals either rested or held close to their parents. So many thought lost had been returned.

In one corner she found Sweetie Belle, who seemed a few years older in the pre-dawn light. Clearing her throat to announce herself, she asked, “Did anypony find-”

“Coco’s fine. She’s back there. We couldn’t keep her out.” Sweetie waved at the larger central chamber of the ground floor.

“Thanks.” Scootaloo flashed her a grin and found the nearest hallway into the chamber.

>>29715396
Coco stood over a large projection laid out across the table, leaning on the surface itself with her front hooves. She could have sat in any of the chairs, but she didn’t. She stared at it with the same intensity that had driven her designs and dresswork, trying to commit it all to memory and knowing that some of it would leak anyway.

Scootaloo came closer to get a better look, awed at the sight. She had to prop herself up on Applejack’s armrest to get a good look.

It took her a few seconds to convince herself that the Map wasn’t simply [i]broken[/i].

The surface had updated itself, showing tiny termite-lines of crystal on the railroad tracks of the land. Not all of the cities were as large as they used to be. The Crystal Empire was now prominent, as were Ponyville and Canterlot. But floating over it were large icons, cutie marks. Together they almost composed a journey, stringing their way broadly to the base of Sombra’s domain.

Here, in Ponyville, Applejack. Hovering outside of Canterlot, vanishing and reappearing in half a dozen brief flashes at different coordinates, were Pinkie’s balloons. Further down the line, Twilight’s star, still and fixed as any real one and in no clear location. Farther along at a great circular dip in the ground was Rainbow’s cloud, giving way to something purple and indistinct - the cloud was half-sunken into the table’s projection, and the shape of Fluttershy’s butterflies sat below it. And at the edge, Rarity’s diamonds, fizzling and becoming Coco’s hat, only to jolt back and repeat the process.

“Spike came in a little while ago.” Coco said softly to the table. “He told me that Rarity was in Canterlot now, at the Princesses’ castle. It was the only thing he could do to keep her safe.”

Scootaloo said nothing.

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>>29715400
“He also told me that the Map is only supposed to respond to the Elements. Someone or something must have had a plan for all this, but I don’t have a clue of what it’s supposed to be.” She slumped a little against the stone.

“What are you going to do?” Scootaloo asked.

Coco regarded the table at eye level, all of the mountains and forests and buildings blending together indistinctly into a choppy field of magical light. “I’ve got to go after her. After I know she’s safe… I guess I’m going as far as I can. I didn’t know until yesterday exactly how many ponies were affected by all of this, but… somepony has to try giving them back their lives.”

Scootaloo smiled. “Don’t say it like you’ll be doing it alone.”

“But I don’t have anypony to-... Oh.” Coco said, raising her head and blushing a little.

In the end she generated a map of her own, printed directly onto a giant circular sheet of silk as big as the table. She giggled a little as she made it, knowing it would’ve been completely useless as a map or a piece of fabric at any prior point in history.

She made and remade it, each point labeled with its floating marks, until she felt that she had the important details truly and fully memorized. Then, finally, she allowed herself some rest.

It was dreamless, but peaceful.

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>>29715410
***

On the outskirts of Ponyville, in the afternoon sun, two well-rested ponies stood and squinted out on the horizon. The Canterhorn Mountain stood in the distance.

“Are you sure you want to come with me?” Coco asked. “I’m sure there are lots of ponies here who could use somepony like you to help out.”

Scootaloo grinned and said, “I am helping out! The sooner we sort out the Crystal Empire, the sooner everything can go back to the way it was.”

Coco chewed on the words, and smiled softly. “Well, we’d better get going, then. First Rarity, then the Map’s directions.”

“We can make it in a couple weeks!” Scootaloo said, stretching her wings.

Coco nodded. “Let’s try.”

“Wait!”

Halted by the familiar voice, they turned around.

｢To Be Continued｣

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=78yioWJhUJA [Rush - Something for Nothing]

Stand Name: ｢Technologic｣
User: Sweetie Drops
Stats
Power: E
Speed: D
Range: B
Durability: B
Precision: E
Potential: E
Abilities: Improves existing technology based on the user's current needs; a suitcase will turn out to have a secret compartment which sprays paralytic gas, a pen will have a hidden tranquilizer dart inside, a watch will wind up doubling as a communicator. This effect only works once for an item, and the extent of the improvement is limited. Affected technology can only be worked by the user.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/328442/7/

Also:

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>>29715421
DECISION!

Coco and Scootaloo are in this journey for the long haul, but they won’t stay a party of two for long! While Ponyville can’t spare a whole squad of Stand users to see them to the Empire, it couldn’t object to any of its own joining up for their cause. Who joins is up to you, but bear in mind that dangers and enemy Stand users lie in wait, and whoever goes will not come back the same person. Which Ponyvillian should march into Tartarus beside these brave souls? Cast your vote at http://www.strawpoll.me/12579155

To let new readers catch up and careful thinkers mull it over, you have until midnight on Friday to decide.

>>29715429
That's a big update.

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>>29715448

>>29715429
>>29715421
Holy shit Ditherer, incredible update as per usual, but this goes above and beyond what you've done in the past. I'd say this may be the best thing you've ever posted. Fantastic work on the Stands and the combat, and I loved that piece near the end where the entire town teamed up against all the Bon Bons. Excellent stuff my dude.

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Is it too soon?

[Bump Chariot]

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>>29715421
>When another write-fag uses a stand name you had planned away to potentially use in the future.

RIP me.

>>29712107
>Jovial Journey vs. Brave Shores' [The Wall]
>Applejack's [Rawhide] vs. Rarity's [I'm Designer]

I really want to see these, but at the same time don't want to write it myself because my scheduled is shot because I'm curious to see how other writers handle the stands I've created.

>>29713064
>One of the earth ponies, maybe big mac, gains a Stand and uses it as his drinking buddy because he doesn't know what the fuck a Stand even is.

Now this though, I may be able to do something with this.

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>>29715429
Great episode as always!
I'll say, my favorite things were the different ways you used to call the horde of Sweetie Drops, and the explanation of where did these look a likes come from.
I've already voted so I'm waiting for the decision on the next Jojo Friday.

>>29714409
As much as I want to write it, and I may have already started writing down the order of the events taking place, I think I'd need Ace's permission before doing such a thing.

>>29712107
I like how all these "secondary" characters have a chance to fight. These could be the most bizarre and tricky ASBs yet.

>>29716727
i like that big mac idea, i'd read it.

>>29716727
Personally I'd love to see how people handle writing my characters and their Stands. It sounds like it'd be a learning experience for both of us, plus I really just want you to write something fuckin' awesome soon.


Please at least write the drinking buddy story.

>>29697953
I kinda want a green of this.
I kinda want a feelsy story.
Like the redemption of Diavolo or some shit.

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>>29717825
This poses the question:
>Do Jojo villains deserve redemption?

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>>29717893
Yeah, sure.

>>29717893
You already know what I think about Kira, but DIO and Diavolo are off the deep end with power and paranoia respectively, and Pucci and Valentine are just doing what they believe in even though they know the risks inherent in such plans. Pucci is certainly worse than Valentine with his motivation of risking the entire universe for the sake of one man, but Valentine could barely be considered a villain at all when taking his motives into account.
Kars is also mad with power and was willing to do whatever it took to get the red stone, and I'm willing to bet that upon becoming the Ultimate Life Form he was intending to slaughter all of humanity for fun. Jobin and Kaato are assholes who only really care about themselves, and as far as I know Jobin hasn't had any truly humane moments since he was introduced. Kaato murdered a child, which is something the other characters take surprisingly seriously for this kind of manga, but she is presented as sleazy and unredeemable, and I'm inclined to believe that she does not deserve to be saved.

Tl;dr IMO none of the villains deserve redemption, but Valentine was the least evil antagonist. He was cunning, pragmatic, and cruel, but it was all to protect America from misfortune and to keep the corpse out of the hands of Johnny, someone Valentine saw as unfit to wield it's power.

>>29717893
If the god of chaos does and bug queen then I see no reason not.

>>29718610
This.
The villians need a hug, especially Diavolo.
Shit made my stomach turn when looking at his last panels.
I never want to nor do I think anyone should ever experience what Diavolo went through.
He was screaming at that little kid to stay away, he fucking broke.

>>29719106
>Burns down his house to not be found out.
>Buries his mother, but keeps her alive with her mouth sown, just to not be found out.
>Does countless crimes as a mob boss.

>He just needs a hug...

>>29719106
Am I the only one who thinks it's weird how diavolo looks the same age as Giornio and the gang but is actually 33 he looks at most 18 / 19

>>29719787
It's just the art style; everyone looks like that from part 5 onwards.

>>29720166
I'll agree with part 5 but they do a way better job of not doing this in 6,7 & 8 I think araki made this like this since it was his first time making a whole part in his newish style away from his part 1/2/3 fotns look. So fair play to him using part 5 as a stepping stone to a really get his footing in his own unique mangaka style

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Imagine if Pinkie became Yukako like.

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>>29712107
A lot of these seem really cool. ｢Rawhide｣ vs ｢I'm Designer｣ seems very abstract, and I think it would need a complex environment to flesh both out. Tocatta and Fugue vs. The Storm Sisters also seems like a great one. Though personally, after two battles each I think I've come up with everything interesting I can do with the current models of ｢FITC｣ and ｢Benzin｣.

I'd love to see Indigo Zap fight someone. ｢Nails for Breakfast｣ is one of my best Stands.

>>29715448
The most difficult thing is to surpass yourself!

>>29715301
Glad it all came through well; it was an intense few hours! Now we've consulted the Map I have a decent idea of Coco's path, and I'm excited to see who's joining her on the road. Plotting E8 of CRBA while I wait.

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Stand: ｢Plenty of Paper｣
User: Blossomforth
Ability: Creates an "information dead zone" at a point of the user's choice within range. Besides the user, no person or instrument in the affected area will be able to process or retain meaningful information about what happens inside the zone while it's active.

>No destructive power.
>Good for stealth in plain sight, although those affected will still be aware that something off has just happened.
>Anyone out of range can still see and understand whatever happens in the field.

Hey wassup guys.
i'm not dead, i just have a stag on how i'm going to cleverly write something out.

i'm looking at having jovial do some funny shit but i've been sapped of imagination on how to truly jojo this. i haven't abandoned you guys.

i bet the other writefags share the same.

>>29721824
Dude, fantastic idea. It's like something out of the manga.

https://youtu.be/S1vZYU8EWks

>>29722050
I see and can understand the feeling, life's a bitch and living a normie life is fucking hard when trying to balance being a writefag into it honestly myself personally am trying to make the weekend my main update days and to really get my story movie.

I can easily make it all sound JoJo-esque but just having the time and motivation to do it is my problem - Anon

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I updated my Stand Ideas paste to make it current, and a little more organized. It's got a full 96 entries now, and it's at http://pastebin.com/SLYG60wr

Hope you other writefags are doing alright.

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>>29723556
Step up your game writefags. Ditherer is rocking this threads!

>>29724278
I'm stepping my game up so hard, you don't even know. Jolyne ASB is gonna be finished by the end of the month, I have an exciting and expositing update to both Anon's Stando Adventure and Kira Visits Horseland in the wings, and the 4-way ASB is coming along quite nicely.

Get hype.

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>I want an edit of pic related but with RD talking about Tank.

>>29724501
Gee Omnee, how come your mum lets you write four greens?

Speaking of writing though I'm FINALLY doing the final passes on the next chapter of Stan(d)on in Equestria, so unless I die in the next couple of hours expect it tonight.

Tonight my time that is.

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Stand: ｢Opposite of Thieves｣
User: Marble Pie
Ability: Consists of a swarm of silverfish-like creatures. When they cover an object, it "resets", returning it to its owner, moving it to an earlier position or erasing some recent use. Does not reverse damage.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wpFxBK3G61Q

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>>29724278
Yeah, Ditherer is really blowing us away. [/spoiler]I WILL get that Gappy V Care Root ASB done by this thread, don't you worry[/spoiler]
I just got a job so I've finally got some time to write up some stuff

Also, a Stand Idea for shits and giggles:

STAND NAME:
「EVERYTHING YOU KNOW IS WRONG」https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=KThlYHfIVa8

APPEARANCE:
•A slot machine with a constantly shifting color palette. It wears a top hat and has the words MR BONES engraved in its back. It sprouts legs and arms of bone when its ability is used.

STAND MASTER:
SCREWBALL

STATS:
POWER-N/A
SPEED-N/A
RANGE-N/A
DURABILITY-N/A
PRECISION-N/A
POTENTIAL-N/A

ABILITIES:
•「JUST FORGET THE WORDS AND SING ALONG」- When Screwball pulls the lever on EYKIW's side, one thing changes within 30 feet from the Stand. This can be quite literally anything; it I can change something mundane to something that bends the very nature of the universe. The change is impossible to predict.
•The Stand shouts "WHO WANTS TO GO ON A WILD RIDE?!" when its ability is used. If at any point someone within range shouts "I WANT OFF THE RIDE!", the Stand's ability ends, and the Stand points at wherever the voice came from and vulgarly insults at whomever it points to. For the next few minutes, everyone within range will utterly despise whoever the Stand pointed at, saying they ruined their "fun."


Admittedly long winded and memey-as-all-hell, but I've had this idea for a while now as a possible Stand for Discord. I ultimately decided that since he's Discord he wouldn't really need one decided to give it to Screwball instead.

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Stand: ｢DSCO｣
User: Vapor Trail
Ability: A person the user has touched experiences a surge of amazing luck, as if blessed, whenever the user is not conscious. High developmental potential.

A recent favorite: www.youtube.com/watch?v=p8MLqBcwJJY

Stand: ｢Down With the Sickness｣
User: Limestone Pie
Ability: Any harmful toxin or undigestable material ingested by the user has no effect; instead, it can be incorporated into their body, so that it makes up part of their breath, sweat, saliva, et cetera. If the substance is not depleted from the user's body after several hours, the user's immunity ends and they become as sick/dead as they would be normally.

>Limestone eats broken glass as an intimidation tactic and then yells shredding clouds of it at enemies.

>>29724278
>>29724501
>>29725130
I look forward to the dethroning!

>>29725554
About time we had a Weird Al Stand! There are lots of great old Dr. Demento songs that would make for excellent Stand names. My pick for Screwball is ｢Deteriorata｣ but I'm not sure what it does yet

I can see this Stand making a great distraction. Screwball's opponents have to keep coping with the changes and chasing her around deactivating it, on top of getting tomatoed by bystanders for Ending The Ride, but the whole time they're only getting further away from their ally / MacGuffin / escort mission / home-plate.

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>>29723556
>96 entries

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>>29723556
>96

Would your last name happen to be Ariki?

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>>29725394
｢Opposite of Thieves｣ vs ｢BEST OF YOU｣ reset off/ASB when?

Hold onto your butts, greentext incoming.

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>Compared to her extravagant lodgings in Ponyville the room that Rarity shows you and Rainbow Dash to is practically a closet, with a small, meticulously made bed, a single window overlooking the Canterlot streets and a small dresser along side vanity to fill out the room.
>”I know it’s not much but try to make yourselves at home.”
>After all that’s happened tonight Rainbow crashes out on the bed almost immediately and you take a seat in front of the vanity, standing (or rather, sitting) guard, waiting to be drawn into her dreams.
>Only it never happens.
>Though there’s no way of keeping time, watching the slow progress of the moon across the night sky tells you that you should have long since fallen into the dream realm.
>A knock echos through the room, snapping you out of your thoughts and causing Rainbow Dash to jolt awake.
>The two of you share a confused look, and tentatively, you rise and open the door revealing Princess Luna.
“Huh. That was easy.”
>”I am the warden of the night Anonymous, I know when I am needed in the dream world.”
“Hey. I wasn’t complaining.”
>”Princess, it’s worse than we thought. ｢NIGHTMARE｣ is taking control of ponies not just to attack us, but to get to you as well.”
>Rainbow Dash relays the events of the party to the princess, and you try to gage her reaction but you come up all but empty handed, with only a slight furrowing of her brow being the indicator her emotions.
>”So, what can we do?”
>Luna thinks for a moment before replying.
>”The mare you fought in Ponyville. The organisation she works for, S.M.I.L.E, is my sister’s creation, but it may be wise to court their knowledge if ｢NIGHTMARE｣ is to be rooted out.”
>”I will talk to my sister, and arrange a meeting. In the meantime you are free to return to Ponyville.”
“Return to Ponyville? If ｢NIGHTMARE｣ is here in Canterlot shouldn’t we stay?”
>Luna takes a moment, and you follow her gaze to the window and the false facade of the night sky beyond.

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>>29726366
>”Despite my doubts you two have been indispensable allies, but I can’t ask you to place yourselves in danger any more than you already have.”
>”Princess I’m an Element of Harmony for ponies sake. Danger is in the job description.”
>”Not this type of danger, ｢NIGHTMARE｣ is bey-”
“If not us, then who else?”
>”Yea, we’ve already faced off against his lackeys twice. We’re the two most qualified to face him.”
>Luna pauses, considering some way of convincing you otherwise only to falter at the sight of your sheer determination.
>”Thank you. I will be in touch.”
>Like a light switch being flipped Luna disappears, and you and Dash jolt awake to find yourselves blinking away the midday sun as it filters in through the window.
>The door opens a crack, and you jump to your feet only for Rarity to poke her head in.
>”Oh good, you’re awake. You have a visitor.”
>”A visitor?”
>Rarity pushes the door open the rest of the way, revealing…
>”Bon-”
“-Bon?”
>The mare seems taken aback for a moment at your simultaneous vocalization of her name with Dash, but recovers and gives the two of you a smile.
>”What are you doing here?”
>”I’m here to take you to S.M.I.L.E.”

https://youtu.be/aaojFmFnNKE

Chapter 13: A ｢SLAVE｣ To The Power

>Despite your late awakening, you and Dash make good time to your destination, time that Bon Bon uses to fill you in to what she’s been up to since you last saw each other.
>”S.M.I.L.E. has been in an uproar ever since ｢NIGHTMARE｣ took control of me and two other agents-”
>”Two?”
>”Yes, Giovi and my former handler; Ivory Spark.”
“Your former handler?”
>”Well I was retired, but seeing as I posses a stand of my own S.M.I.L.E. saw fit to bring me back into the fold. Plus, the bastard made it personal when took over my mind and used me like a puppet.”
>The sun continues its lazy journey across the sky, and you soon find yourself staring down the entrance of an absolutely massive hedge maze.

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>>29726376
“The entrance to your secret monster capturing organization is inside a maze?”
>”No, we’re just using this as a meeting point. It’s secluded, and now that it’s been sweeped and closed to the public for the day it means it's secure.”
”Makes sense.”
>”That’s what we aim to do.”
>A quizzical look you give her prompts Bon Bon to explain further;
>”To make sense of things. S.M.I.L.E.’s goal is defending Equestria against monsters, and to do that we make it our business to know what is going on; to make sense of the world.”
>Bon Bon casts a look towards the maze and sighs.
>”I just hope that this meeting gets us one step closer to putting an end to this. ｢NIGHTMARE｣ may be one of the worst monsters Equestria has ever known, and the sooner he’s dealt with; the better.”
“Agreed.”
>”Looks like Luna’s already here.”
>You and Bon Bon turn your attention forward just in time to spot the pony Dash saw dart inside the hedge maze.
>”That’s odd, Luna didn’t say anything about bringing Celestia’s royal guards.”
>You all reach the same conclusion in an instant, and take off after the guard.
>You only catch glimpses of them as they weave through the maze, staying just ahead of you at an almost distance teasingly, and only allowing you to catch a glimpse of them as they round every corner just ahead of you.
>”That’s it.”
>Dash takes to the air and shoots forward, the two of you leaving Bon Bon in the dust as you gain on the royal guard.
>The sound of approaching wingbeats seems to tip him off to your plan, and you watch as he pivots on his heel and throw himself back with a beat of his own wings.
>”｢THE TROOPER｣!”
>Much like it’s user the stand is clad in armour, though instead of a crested helmet it wears an ornate head dress, leaving the rest of its face free to display it’s empty eyes and angry scowl, along with its gaunt features.
>Features that are unmistakably human, like your own, even if they are a sickly shade of green.
>”ORRA!”

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>>29726383
>It’s appearance throws you for a moment, but the stand’s punch seems almost lazy in its speed and with a beat of her wings Dash kills her forward momentum, leaving it to come up short.
>You hear a cry of pain, and see a smile flirt across the guard’s features before you turn to see Bon Bon recoiling in pain.
>”What? How did Bon Bon get hit?”
“His attack was so slow… he must have some power he hasn’t revealed yet.”
>A harsh laugh turns your attention back to the guard as he stands there surveying the three of you.
>”Your fate is sealed now. You’re headed straight for Tartarus and it’ll be me, Eddy, that will send you there!”
>”Then you’ll have to try harder than that to stop us! ｢THIS AIN'T A SCENE｣!”
>If Bon Bon sustained any injury she certainly doesn't show it as she leaps over Dash and charges straight at Eddy.
>His stand appears to stop Bon Bon’s attack, only to disappear a moment later as he takes off in a gallop, hooking a left at the intersection ahead and disappearing.
>”Get back here!”
>Bon Bon charges after him, and you and Dash follow hot on her heels, surprised at the sheer speed she manages to achieve with what seems to be the help of her stand.
>”Man, why can’t you speed me up like that?”
“Like you need to go any faster.”
>What’s more surprising is that Eddy is able to say ahead of you all as he uses the maze to his advantage, turning you around only to pop up behind you and start off another wild goose chase.
>As your pursuit drags on even Dash starts to tire (almost in direct proportion to her growing annoyance).
>For whatever reason though the exertion seems to hit Bon Bon harder, and by the time you corner Eddy in an open cul de-sac she’s panting heavily, and thought it’s hard to tell you swear she looks paler than she did before.
>”Looking a little tired there, sure you don’t need to have a rest?”
>”I can easily kick your flank, featherbrain.”

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>>29726388
>Bon Bon takes a shaky step forward, and you and Dash move to her side.
>”Bon Bon, you can’t fight like this.”
>”I need to. After all defeating him will stop this, right?”
>You and Dash share a look, knowing that she’s right.
>”Alright, but we’re going-”
“-to help you beat this asshole.”
>”I was hoping you’d say that.”
>The three of you advance on Eddy, who despite being outnumbered just gives a cocksure grin.
>”Come on then, show me what you’ve got.”
>You and Dash launch yourself at his front while Bon Bon dukes to his side.
>His stand manifests just in time to catch your fist in its own, and in one surprisingly fluid movement it twists your arm and staggers you as it whirls around and meets Bon Bon’s attack.
>Her stand assisted blows beat fruitlessly against ｢THE TROOPER｣’s forearms, sparking against its gilded armor.
>You rush in to take advantage of the opening, only for Eddy’s stand to push Bon Bon away and swing at you, putting you on the defencive.
>Thanks to the speed of his swing you have plenty of time to cross your arms to block it, only to yell in surprise as the blow breaks through your attempt to block it, knocking you and Dash backwards with a square blow to the chest.
>Bon Bon, ignoring the stand, attempts to strike directly at Eddy only for the nimble pegasus to knock her hooves away.
>Again and again she attacks, relentless in her assault, and again and again Eddy matches her blows, the clop of clashing hooves filling the area.
>For a moment Bon Bon seems to gain the upper hand (or rather, hoof) as she slips past Eddy’s guard intent to punch him straight in the gut.
>Only for his stand to wrap its fingers around Bon Bon’s foreleg, pulling it above her head and grabbing her other hoof as she attempts a desperate attack.
>Posed as they are, them appear like a perverse pair of dancing partners as Bon Bon stares daggers towards the stand binding her.

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>>29726396
>A bloodthirsty smile stretches itself across Eddy’s features, growing alongside the angry grimace gracing his stand’s face and with a deft flick of its arms, it spins Bon Bon away.
>She cries out in pain, and you watch in horror as she simply decays before your eyes.
>Her skin grows gaunt as her fur fades and falls out in patches. Her mane loses its luster as liver spots break out across her body, and as her scream fades she collapses.
>Shallow breathing is the only indication that there’s any life left in her as you and Rainbow Dash rush to her side.
>”Bon Bon!”
>The golden sheen of her stand fades away with a haggard breath and you reach out a tentative hand only to stop, afraid that the mere act of touching her will somehow hurt her more.
>A ragged cough tears through Bon Bon’s throat as she turns her head to look at the two of you.
>”Kick his flank.”
>Bon Bon lays back, barely breathing, and you stand, staring down Eddy.
>”Why are you doing this?”
>”Why? I gave the best years of my life to the Royal Guard before they declared me ‘unfit for duty’. Well once I take down an element of harmony I’ll show them who’s unfit!”
>You press forward and strike low at his stand’s legs, and Eddy takes off, flying straight over you.
>Right into Rainbow Dash.
>Her hoof catches him in the jaw, and he lashes out with his stand, catching her in the side with a kick.
>Dash goes with the momentum of the kick, and you rush in, delivering a barrage of punches to his stand’s back.
>Eddy seems unperturbed by your attack, but as he turns his stand’s attention to you, you see that the gilded armour on its back is starting to show some wear and tear.
>His stand swings with another sluggish punch, and knowing better than to block it you weave under it and drive an elbow into its stomach.
>It soon becomes obvious that just as he can’t hit you with his attacks, you can’t seem to damage him with yours.

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>>29726404
”You can’t be that fit. Your stand’s so slow you need to rely on its power to weaken people just to beat them.”
>”You’re wrong on both counts.”
>Eddy draws his stand back, and you see the seams on its armour shine with brilliant light before it cracks and shoots off.
>”My stand can be pretty quick I want it to be.”
>It lunges forwards, faster than you thought was possible, and drives a fist into your gut before withdrawing.
>”And second of all weakening my opponents isn’t my stands ability!”
>You feel a lance of pain strike you between the shoulders, and swing your fist around to strike your attacker only to see it’s not you being attacked; it’s Rainbow Dash.
>Straddling her shoulders is a thin, wiry looking stand stabbing a needle right into the small of her back.
>It locks eyes on you, then withdraws the needle it holds in its spindly hand and launches itself into the walls of the hedge maze.
>”Too scared to fight fair, Eddy?”
>”There’s no such thing as fighting fair. To win you need to use every advantage and leave nothing to chance!”
“It just goes to show my point though. You really must be unfit to be a royal guard if you need another stand’s help.”
>Eddy gives you a scowl every bit as angry as his stand’s, and you see him tense.
>”｢THE TROOPER｣!”
>Eddy’s stand launches forward, moving to your left to attack your side, and you spin to meet its blow.
>Only it never comes as his stand passes your side, and you turn to see it circle around Dash as well before looping back.
>The realization of what he’s doing dawns alongside the growing ache in your chest, and you try to swing at his stand as it passes you again.
>Your punch catches his stands shoulder, and to your satisfaction you hear Eddy gasp in pain from the transferred blow.
”It’s the rotation. Every time we rotate that stand sucks away some of our life, that’s how it works!”
>”An acute observation, but even with that knowledge you’re a sitting duck for ｢THE TROOPER｣.”

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>>29726422
>”Anon. put your back to mine.”
>You turn, and feel Dash’s wings press against your back, and between them you feel something, a lump that writhes underneath her skin.
“Is that…?”
>”The enemy stand? Most likely.”
“I might be able to take it out…”
>”And leave us wide open for attack.”
“So what do we do?”
>Before Dash can respond, Eddy cuts in, launching towards the two of you as he does.
>”You die!”
>｢THE TROOPER｣ bears down on you, once again moving to your left.
>You try in vain to attack it with just your left arm, but Eddy’s stand ducks out of the way of your ineffective punch and jabs you right in the side of your stomach.
>And then his stand moves completely behind you, and you wait until Dash yells ‘NOW!’ before throwing a completely blind punch backwards.
>You feel a hand close around your fist, and with a quick tug is all it takes to spin you left.
>You go with the movement, feeling the insidious stand assisting Eddy draw out a deep ache in your muscles with each degree you turn, but instead focus on your right fist as you use the momentum to drive it into ｢THE TROOPER｣’s jaw.
>His stand crumples backward, and you spin again to face Dash, your hand immediately going to the small of her back and to the small mark that is the only evidence she was attacked by the other stand.
>Your fingers barely brush against her fur before an arm wraps itself around your neck and pulls you backward.
>You throw your head back, feeling it connect with the leathery flesh of his stand’s chin and causing it to release you.
>With no other choice you turn around and push the advantage, attacking Eddy’s stand just as Rainbow Dash launches herself forward, using the opening made by you attacking his stand to catch Eddy himself off guard and drive a hoof into his side.