My Little Slaves: Submission is Mandatory

>>29671249

"Your husband is pushing the notion of fashionably late, Misses Orange."
>"He'll be here! I promise! He's probably just caught up at work..."
"Fifteen minutes and I throw the doors open."
>The bound mare whimpers.
>Fleur slowly drifts through the winding white passage.
>The temporary walls featuring prints by a Ponyville photographer.
>A twisting side-gallery leading to what the artist is calling a "live installation" piece.
>Leaving Misses Orange at the end, Fleur soon finds herself standing at the opaque glass doors leading to the main exhibition hall.
>The place is full of Manehattans upper-crust, here for a charity gala.
>Samples of local collections allow the socialites to unapologetically flaunt their various treasures.
>Carefully closing the doors behind her, Fleur joins Lyra in the main hall, eyeing the exquisite sculpture the Oranges recently added to their collection.
>It has made quite a splash, and rumor is Julius and Clementine plan to loan it to the Metropolitan Museum of Art.
"I would have expected him to be here by now."
>"My tail on him reports that he left his home ten minutes ago. I expect he will be here shortly, Miss Fleur." Lyra states matter-of-factly.
"Good." Fleur snorts. "I hope not too soon though, I want Clementine to sweat it out a bit."
>Lyra giggles.
>"I suppose it would add a nice sheen to the installation piece."
>Fleur replies with a giggle of her own.
>A moment later, the duo are approached by a waiter.
>"Pastries, madams?" he offers, lowering his tray. "Filo layered with walnuts and apricots in a buckwheat honey reduction."
>Without hesitation, Fleur takes one of the proffered desserts.
>Before Lyra reaches for one as well, the stallion leans in.
>"He is currently talking to Mister Goldwing in the atrium."
>Lyra takes her pastry, leaving a slip of paper on the tray.
>The server saunters off through a service door as Lyra carefully savors her delectable sweet.
"Bits, tail or both?"

>>29671250

>Lyra chews before cheerily replying "Neither."
"Neither?"
>"Yup!" she beams, leaning in conspiratorially. "He's a guard, working to find the family that's funding the Underground. I needed a well-placed observer, he needed an way in."
"How did you even find him?"
>"He found me, actually. When you leased this space, he saw an opportunity."
"Still, well done."
>"Any tool available!"
"Indeed. And Julius has arrived." Fleur nods in the direction of the orange stallion as he enters the room.

>The two split up, flanking the statue of Clockwork.
>As Mister Goldwing departs, Julius begins to walk in the direction of Lyra... until she waves over Emerald Sea and her husband.
>Predictably turning up his nose at the group, Julius opts to walk the other direction, straight into Fleur.
"Mister Orange, how delightful to see you."
>"Er, Miss Fleur. I wasn't expecting the Crown to be represented tonight."
"But of course, we're preparing to open a small exhibit here." Fleur explains. "Sadly, it isn't open to the public yet."
>"Ah. A true pity it couldn't be completed in time for tonight."
"Of course, seeing that you're working on a project for Lord Anonymous, I suppose I could allow you a private showing."
>"I'm afraid I simply haven't the time tonight-"
"No issue. Lord Anonymous also asked me to seek out High Seas about another project, and if I'm not mistaken that is him over there-"
>"What could Canterlot want with that kelp farmer?"
"I am not here to ask questions, merely to relay messages." Fleur smiles mildly.
>"Perhaps we could delay that message while we peruse this gallery of yours?"
"Of course. This way."

>>29671254

>Leading the way past the doors, Fleur carefully locks them behind her.
>The small antechamber merely has a pedestal with a bowl of orange candies on them.
>Fleur giddily pops one in her mouth.
>A light orange flavor, accented by notes of ginger and spice.
>Julius furrows his brow as he tries to recall where he recognizes the flavor from.
>The next room contains nothing but silhouettes.
>All of mares.
>All suggestive.
>Julius does his best to feign disinterest.
>Fleur smirks as she catches him ogling the scene of a mare muzzle-deep beneath another mares tail.
>No time to reminisce now, however. Business is at hoof.

>Before the next room is another bowl of hard candies.
>A refresher.
>Julius absentmindedly takes another as he moves past.
>Letting him go ahead, Fleur listens as his hoofsteps abruptly stop.
>She knows why.
>Every silhouette was also shot with light.
>She can imagine the shock on his face.
>The horror of recognition.
>And yet... arousal.
>No stallion spends all his time at work if he has something to look forward to at home.
>Even with all the luxurious comforts his wealth could afford, he preferred his office to his manse.
>It only followed that Clementine was not taking care of her husband.
>And as Fleur listens, she picks up soft hoofsteps.
>As Julius Orange savors the scenes of submission.
>Seeing Clementine in chains.
>Seeing Clementine gagged.
>Seeing Clementine smothered under another mare's flanks.
>Seeing Clementine cleaning another mare's hooves with her tongue.
>Seeing Clementine obey.


>Carefully and quietly entering, Fleur glides past Julius Orange and beckons him into the next to last room with her tail.
>Obediently he follows.
>Both walls show the same image here.
>Clementine riding the Sybian.
>In the center are more candies.
>However, this time they are simply piled around a glass jar.
>A jar filled with a clear, viscous fluid.

>>29671261
>The sealed top bears a sticker with Clementine Orange's cutie mark on it.
>Julius pops another, sucking on the sweet as he slowly begins to fathom what the room implies.
>Lyra peers in from the previous room, and Fleur nods.
>As if nothing was amiss at all, Lyra trots through, helping herself to a candy as she passes by.
"The artist, Mister Orange." Fleur explains, nodding in the direction Lyra went.
>He opens his mouth, closes it, and opens it again.
>Words seem difficult for him.
"Shhh. I understand. It is a breathtaking exhibit." Fleur coos.
>He simply stares at her.
"Come. The live installation should be ready by now."
>His lips mouth the words "live installation" as she leads him onwards, his mind unable, or unwilling, to grasp their meaning.
>In the final room, Clementine Orange is placed on a dais, all lights on her.
>Suspended by her forehooves, a blindfold keeping her in the dark, and her legs are locked to the ground -straddling the sybian once more.
>Lyra and Fleur push up against Julius, slowly herding him around to the back side of the room.
>A simple control panel lies under a locked cover.
>Lyra climbs onto the dais, and removes the blindfold as Fleur levitates a key in front of Julius Orange.
>"Jules!" Clementine exclaims.
>The stallion looks up at her.
>Then at the key.
>Then at Clementine again.
>Then at Fleur.
>Then at Lyra.
>Then at Clementine.
>"What have you done?"
>"I-I did it for us! To get-"
>"For the statue!? All of this!? For a thrice damned statue!?"
>"But Jules, I had-"
>"What in land's sake were you thinking!?"
>"I couldn't just let Emerald Seas win!"
>Fleur and Lyra hold to the back wall as the couple delve into a full-on shouting match.
>After some time, Fleur steps forward.
"Julius, a word?"
>"What? Oh, of course." he says, turning from his desperate wife.
>Clementine continues to beg for her release, but the trio ignores her.

>>29671266


"We have a very simple proposition for you, Mister Orange."
>"This key" Lyra says, now holding it aloft in her magic "opens the control box right there."
"It's all yours for the night." Fleur says. "A token of Lord Anonymous' goodwill."
>"However, we expect that his small confectionary enterprise will receive the attention it deserves after tonight."
"If not, Clementine will be arrested and returned to this room, and the gallery will be opened to the public."
>"Don't worry about it. I'll start retooling one of the lines for Lord Anonymous tomorrow." he nods. "Now walk me through these controls."

>It's a peculiar sound that follows the duo as they leave the installation.
>First Julius had begun turning features on.
>Starting with her teats.
>Then he watched intently as the rod parting her lips lurched to life.
>"Jules, please! Please don't!"
>With a wicked grin, he had engaged the rod impaling her rear.
>"I'M SORRY! I'M SORRY JULES!"
>Curiously he turned on the teaser for her clit, then turned it off.
>On
>And off.
>And on.
>Finally, he left it in place, apparently happy with some inner decision.
>He then lowered the chains, so that she leaned far forward.
>Slowly he had ramped up the speed of the two rods, until his wife was a panting, moaning, dripping mess.
>In between gasps, she continued pleading with her husband.
>She begged to be let down.
>But he just increased the speed a bit more.
>"Always an excuse. Why we need this. Why we need that." he sneered, climbing onto the dais.
>Standing in front of her, he began whispering in her ear.

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>>29671271

>Her eyes became pinpricks, and she shook her head violently.
>"Nonononono!" she whined. "Jules, please!"
>"My time is precious. You have ten minutes." he replied.
>Sensing their job was finished, Fleur had beckoned Lyra to follow her out.
>As they made their way out, Julius took hold of the chains, pulling himself upright in front of his wife.
>Casting a quick glance behind her, Fleur catches a look of defeat on Clementine's face as she opens her mouth.
>The pair walks in silence until they make it to the silhouette room.
>Barely audible now are the sounds that had followed them through the gallery.
>"It is amazing she can moan, gag and beg all at once."
"Clementine Orange is a very talented mare."
Binned here: http://pastebin.com/jkbWqc3P

First Arc here: http://pastebin.com/wcXHMZkx

My bin here: http://pastebin.com/u/Hawkeye88

No idea if I'll write more or not. I find I have to be in a very particular mood in order to write this kind of story. But I do enjoy working on it when the mood strikes.

Just post it into slave pone thread.

>>29671688

Did we merge with them? I don't want to just horn in on their thread when this story is set in the SiM canon versus their own.

>>29672563
We did not.

bump for reading

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Nyx when

>>29672563
Over time SiM deviated away from MrNameless' canon, probably because he disappeared and didn't have new material to work with/didn't want to overstep in case he came back. Broken Bluebird ( http://pastebin.com/H4VVi4Gw http://pastebin.com/uW2Sqd4D ) and Proportional Punishment ( http://pastebin.com/uY83evb2 ) were the lifeblood of the thread for a time, neither of which are related to the original green. Merging with SPG has been mentioned a few times, but consensus seems to be that we're too different for either to be happy with merging.

Recently, the green ran dry and we decided to let the general rest until someone revives it with green.

>>29671288
Oh shit, we're back in action.

Good to see you around, Hawkeye, and especially good to see this continuing. I hope for a bit more, though I don't know if we're going to last as more than a pop-up thread.

>>29676424
Further adding to this now that I've had time to go back and re-read the previous bits, get a handle on where this is coming from:

It's interesting that Julius Orange reacts so negatively to Clementine's predicament. He didn't once think that the tyrannical leaders who happily parade ponies around in chains and throw them up on sexual display might have been maybe responsible for this - immediately leaping to the conclusion that she was responsible. And of course that he promptly took advantage of it, rather than pleading for a way to get her out of the display. A bit of existing tension between them being hinted at, or am I reading too deep in?

Either way, it was a bit too short to get a real read on any development from Lyra or Fleur - though I am curious about what was up with that guard. Does this conclude this arc, or are we going further?

cool

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Sadly don't think we're going to last long, but it was still good to see we're still about... somewhat.

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W-we live?!

>>29675614
>Recently, the green ran dry and we decided to let the general rest until someone revives it with green.

Bullshit, no one told me this.
Keep the thread alive, and I'll get an update going.

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Awwww yissssssssss! Looks like RAPE's back on the menu, boys!

SPG fag here. I wish you all the best of luck. I don't want to see this thread die any more than you do.

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>>29681104

May SiM live forever!

>>29681800
Daring Do's seen some worse shit.

Before bed bamp.

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>>29685496

>>29685844
Oh god, that is embarrassing af

I'll get bullshit for suggesting it, but you could make a thread over in that other chan that's dead as shit. If only so the thread stays alive for longer than it would here with no content. Just my two cents although it is great to see SiM back.

>>29686619
It's honestly tempting, but I thought they hated generals like this?

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>>29686619
To add onto this, use the old name. My Loyal Ponies, sounds so much better than My Little Slaves.
>>29686639
Only one way to find out. Shit Hawkeye has a general over there that gets content about once a month or bi monthly, I forget which one. Worst that'll happen is you'll get banned. Or use it as a backup general. Post on both and that way if it does die down again here, at least the thread will still be there and you can communicate with everyone there. Just a suggestion, but either way it is great to see the general again.

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>>29685844

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>>29687084

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>>29687084

>>29680695
Olibird is back! Sound the trumpets!

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Sorry y'all, I posted that and disappeared on you. Was sent to a remote location for work, and while beautiful, there is no internet. Anyways, i'm glad to see the thread is still alive.

>>29676660
I could have elaborated a bit on Julius and Clementine, and maybe I will. I had intended for this to be the end of the arc, but there seems to be enough interest that I may write up one more update in this vein.

>>29680695
Glad to see someone is still writing consistently here.

>>29686619
>>29686651

I can make a thread over there. I'm down with the owner of gtpone, where I do indeed curate the Herd thread.

Also, I remembered the name "My Loyal Ponies" about five minutes after I made the thread. Mea Culpa, I've been away.

>>29685844
Lewd, but we all know it's accurate.

>>29681800
Villain Anon capturing, taming and breeding Daring Do when?

>>29680695
This is the truth, and we shall now await your deliveries. Do not disappoint us, or there will be paddlings involved.

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Anyone have the OP saved?

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I missed this thread.

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>>29680695

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>>29689535

Archive link to previous thread:

https://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/29262537/#29262537

>>29691055
We all did anon we all did.

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>>29693071

Sweet deal. I've got a thread up on /gtpone/ on that dead chan, just so we can keep alive. I do lurk there, though there are only a handful of us around. Maybe this will be the start of something new for that board.

Anyways, link to the /gtpone/ catalog in this paste: http://pastebin.com/1q40b9Y3

>>29694524
I sure hope so.

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>>29692825

This thread won't be able to continue on just Oilbird. We'll need more writefags.

>>29696586
I mean...we have Escapade and Beran, I think. but yes, we do need more writefags. Too bad slave pone stole them all.

>>29671288
I really enjoyed this.This is the story that damn near never gets posted, but always puts a smile on my face when it does.

Some notes stylistically.

There were a few moments when I feel like the characters didn't really... react appropriately. For example, at the end.

"If not, Clementine will be arrested and returned to this room, and the gallery will be opened to the public."
>"Don't worry about it. I'll start retooling one of the lines for Lord Anonymous tomorrow." he nods. "Now walk me through these controls."

This is only a few lines after it was implied that he was upset and shocked at what happened to his wife, yet here he seems 100% ok with exploiting it, effectively raping her only a few lines later. Yet we don't really see this "shift" occur in him. Even a few lines of him just "thinking" about it, or convincing himself that it's ok would be useful. The transition was jarring.

>The drinks
Was he being drugged? That's the impression I got, but there was never anything to really confirm it. That would help explain his shift, but again, nothing ever really made that clear to us.

>The pacing on the reveal
This was far too quick IMO. You went from reveal, to Fleur/Julius arguing, to him raping his wife while Fleur walks away in almost like 15 lines. It oddly brushed over, given the detail the rest of the story has.

>3rd person
This was weird to me, just from a writing style choice. The black/green text for Fleur/Lyra implied 2nd person Fleur, but that's not the case. It's not /wrong/ but it felt unneeded.

>Odd descriptions
>Every silhouette was also shot with light.
>She can imagine the shock on his face.
>The horror of recognition.
Are these photos? Silhouettes of real scenes?

>Sybian
This is a headcanon-like issue, but I feel like these only really work for human/antho, not equines. I know views on this stuff differ, but it felt odd for me personally.

>>29696707
Overall though, it was still a really good story. I've said it before, but your Fleur is a very heavy reference point for my headcanon SiM Fleur. This continues that.

>>29694524
Just for future reference, which chan exactly is this about? Half-chan, ponychan, something else?

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>>29696545

>>29697107
read
>>29694524

>>29697709

>>29696707

Your comment about 3rd person threw me off for a moment, and I had to go reread my bins, but you'll notice that I made that choice at the outset. Not that it wasn't an odd choice, I just find it amusing that it comes up now.

As for your other comments, you're not the only one who's made them. Seems not updating for six months at a time has left me rusty. I'll have to edit and re-release this.

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>>29698560
Shit, forgot my name. I assume it was clear who that was though.

>>29697606
I love a girl that comes with handlebars.

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>>29699626

>>29672563
>>29675614
SPG expressed interest at Proportional Punishment continuing in their thread if SiM can't be maintained.
>>29693211
>>29694211
>>29700934
>>29701150
So it might work out for some stories

>>29701986
I want a green of Luna being enslaved by cuddles and ear scritchies until she's a drooling mess.

Is there any more like Her Kingdom for the Safeword, relatively close (for SiM) to a normal BDSM relationship? Or anything with decent aftercare?

>>29703838
Ooh, Beran's latest story was exactly that with Glimaglam. Does anyone have a link?

>>29703838
Equine Therapy (by the same author).

Twilight's Submission (not in the paste, but http://pastebin.com/dGBtPp6h).

The one Beran posted a few threads back (http://pastebin.com/vjFHrYZm) .. I really liked it, still want to give it a proper (stupidly late) review but got super busy with work.

If you want something.. a little different, try "Drinking the Punch". Wasn't actually written here, but author posted it here awhile back. It's a bit fucked up in premise, but also has some amazingly well described scenes once it gets going:
http://pastebin.com/f29ffxZQ
http://pastebin.com/KqZkZ7es
http://pastebin.com/azLVHQrk
http://pastebin.com/uEGgtN7J
http://pastebin.com/QTZExiue

>>29703990
Thanks, is Twilight's submission on the mulp wiki? The paste looks like it got removed.

>>29704035
It seems to work for me. Make sure you weren't including the ).

>>29704060
Kek, the auto hyperlink was including the ). Pardon my autism

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>>29690316
>I could have elaborated a bit on Julius and Clementine, and maybe I will. I had intended for this to be the end of the arc, but there seems to be enough interest that I may write up one more update in this vein.

I sort of had a feeling this was meant to be the end of the arc. If that's all you had, then by all means leave it there - or move on to the next arc, whichever you prefer. I don't know how much you intend to do with this story.

Like >>29696707 said, the only thing that surprised me was how completely fast Julius turned around on her - which is what lead me to suspect you were suggesting there was existing friction between Julius and Clementine.

That said, as was also said - holy hell I love your Fleur. She's just the right mix of self-serving and dutiful.

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>favorite general is back

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>>29700210

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>>29705268

>>29706078
Oilbird when?

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>>29706793
he said he's writing the next update

>>29707487
ooh, naughty Fleur.

Would you guys be interested in some moderately shitty and short green later tonight to keep the thread alive?

>>29707718
Give it a shot. I will at the very least offer tips for improvement, even if it is as bad as you say.

>>29707718
yes

>>29707718
Of course.

>>29707487
I want to whip Fleur's flanks with a riding crop until she's squirming, bawling, and begging for mercy, and then continue whipping her naughty butt until my arm is too tired to continue.

>>29708718
but what did she do

>>29709831
She tried to seduce and manipulate her master.

>>29709955
>You whip her until her fur starts to peel from her skin
> weals form and blood comes out of the places most traumatized
> but in the end it was you who got played as she had the strongest orgasm of her life

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>>29705851

>>29707487
>>29708718
Truly, Fleur is a quite dommable pone.

>>29712455

Oh hey, it's back.

Another thread to keep alive at 4am. Such is the life of a third shift wageslave.

I wish I had some content to add but my new job is royally kicking my ass

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>>29711951

>>29713440
This

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>>29714048

>>29713581
You, too? Fuck, everyone is getting ass blasted by jobs lately

>>29716027
That position has got to be uncomfortable, damn

Bumpity bump, I'm coming for that rump

It's sad to see how dead this thread is, I still remember when SPG was just an offshoot of SiM...

>>29717664
Now it has five times as many writefags. RIP SiM

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BROKEN BLUEBIRD SPOILERS

I'm a tardner. Does the end of the current pastebin imply Anon left Dash a way off the planet and is, in fact, kill, and that is the ending?

>>29718948
Doubt it since Dash wouldn't be able to operate the terminal.

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>>29719222
so what you're saying is it's not over

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>>29718156

>>29719759
Lawl

>9

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>>29719759

>9

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>>29723846
Source?

>>29724132
https://derpibooru.org/1327238

>>29724218
Thanks

>9

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>>29723846

>9

>9 again

>>29726728
She looks so... resigned.

>>29711079
>>29711538
Now that thread is back, you guys think Mona will keep delivering? They've been quiet since our last threads died.

>>29728592
I hope so.

>>29728058
She's a literal trophy now, I don't think she likes that.

>>29728058
Not much she can really do about it.
>>29729519
I see her smiling with a very small version of that cat smile you see in animes.

>9

>9

>>29692825
>image search came up dry
sauce.

>>29732566
https://derpibooru.org/1209219

>>29732584
Thanks.

>10

>>29732566
If the filename is a number seven digits or less, 99% of the time it's the DB page ID number. Always try that first, then ask if it doesn't work.

you gentlemen may want to check the oc:forlorn hope tag on derpibooru

>>29733692
>Twelve images posted within an hour of this comment
That was fucking fast, and a lot too. Damn! Are you the artist?

>>29733844
yeah, ive had them ready to upload for a while though.

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>>29733692
>>29733846
These are great

>9

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>>29726150

>>29736035
u-unf
Proportional Punishment when?

>>29736608
Sometime next week. Sooner, rather than later, I hope.

>9

>9

>9

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>hey kid ever got your dick sucked by a bug?

>>29738876
>ywn feel thick bug tongue wrap around your hot monkey dick

>>29739240
>wanting incestuous succ

>>29739674
Try telling me you don't want it

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>>29739240

So weird. Close to as many posters for SiM as SPG, but so much less content.

>>29740972
SPG usually reaches around 80 posters in the later stages of the thread.

>>29740972
Bit more extreme in content

>>29738552

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>The cape he normally wore, mercifully hid the device from prying eyes, but as days passed by it was him who found it impossible to ignore it's presence.
>It moved between his legs when he walked, his trapped balls brushing against the rigid material.
>Each step adding to a frustration he could no longer relieve.
>The princess summoned him for a private meeting.
>Deeply troubled, she confided in him her fears about the emerging temperament of her now teenage daughter.
>Understanding the gravity of her worry he concurred, something had to be done.
>Then she revealed the device.
>"Safety begins at home", she said and asked if he'd let her put it in place.
>Flabbergasted by her request, but not wanting to appear disingenuous, he reluctantly agreed.
>Her hooves were firm yet delicate.
>She pushed him on his back, and one by one adeptly squeezed his testicles through the barely fitting ring, handling his vulnerable treasures as if they carried her own foals.
>Tenderly, she wrapped his cock in her aura and the magic seeped into his skin like a balm, pressing gently from all sides, pushing him inside the device, and leaving his pride to tingle, even when her touch was replaced by the cold, rigid tube.
>She thanked him for alleviating her fears and praised him for his loyalty.
>Still, he could not feel more humiliated, than when he saw her smirk as the lock clicked in place.
>His control of his cock was gone, but his fantasies never left.
>They called out, and teased him every night, inviting him to play, then denying his hooves, and leaving his balls swollen, aching with pent up lust.
>Every impure thought, every glance at a mare making him impotent as his masculinity was crushed against the unyielding walls of his cage.
>When he finally met the princess again and told her of it's cruelty before asking for the key, she laughed and offered to borrow him one of her dildos instead.
>He was too desperate to refuse.

>>29696629
Yep, still alive and happy to see all you people.

>>29742654
Is there more?

Hey anons of SiM.

Some of you may not know me. I'm the current guy in charge/caretaker of your sister thread, SPG (Slave Pony General). It has recently come to my attention that you guys have been struggling for the last 6 months or so. I know that talks of merging both threads has been of hot debate in the past but was never completely addressed by either party directly. I think that at this point, it is time to properly address this problem and to officially offer SiM to merge with SPG.

What I'd like to do more specifically is to do something akin to what AiE did with PiE and gave them their own little "corner". However, I find it quite tame and lacking so I will provide much more to SiM than what AiE did for PiE.

Now, some of you may be asking "what do we gain out of this Jingles??". Well, if the general consensus agrees to merge, I promise that SiM will have:
- It's own separate "OP" as the second post with all the useful links and info in it
- Separate text and voice channels in our discord for users of SiM
- The opportunity to gain more exposure and grow.

Basically, I will give SiM an equal treatment to what SPG has.

There are only 2 things that I ask in return from you guys:
- Mark your stories "SiM" in the first post of that specific update/group of green.
- Don't go overboard on the grimdark torture porn. Having a little is fine but there has to be a line drawn somewhere.

If the general consensus is to not merge, then we can finally put that age old question of "DAE, WE SHOULD MERGE THREADS!!" to rest along with all the shitposts related to it.

Now, I will let both the users of SiM and SPG decide the outcome and potential fate of SiM.
http://www.strawpoll.me/12608409

Please remember that I only want to help you guys. Take a moment and think about the future of SiM before you vote.

If you're not exactly satisfied with the current terms, please let me know what can be done to satisfy you. I am up for negotiation as long as you're reasonable.

>>29742924
I'd rather keep the threads separate.

It's clear both threads harbor very different content. Even if we could peacefully co-exist (which I doubt), just from an organizational standpoint I'd rather have what little content we are still producing kept separate so it doesn't get drowned out.

>>29742924
I dont really see the point of not going grimdark if the posts are already labelled with SiM
I mean, im not a fan of the deep end grimdark shit, but that seems like a redundant rule.

>>29742924
Even as someone who enjoys browsing both threads, I think this is a terrible idea.

Really we gain nothing by it. Sporadic content is sporadic content. Trying to jam it into a vaguely related thread just doesn't make any sense.

>>29742924
No. We don't need your charity. Fuck off.

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>>29742924
No, terrible idea.

All the usual obvious reasons aside, I found this whole post very off-putting and I've been trying to figure out specifically why.

I don't even think it's the whole "let us save you, here are the terms" thing (though that's part of it.. like seriously, the fuck..).

I think it's mostly that it just comes across as very non-4chan. It sounds like your thread is run by a board of directors (hell, maybe it is in that IRC channel of yours..). This shit isn't supposed to be managed. No one is supposed to be "in charge" or defining what is and isn't allowed. That's supposed to happen organically. Even back when MrNameless was around, he didn't really run the channel. He posted his thing, other people posted their things, and someone kept a pastebin up to date. This is still how things would seem to be now. I know the writefags have a whole skype thing going on, but olibird isn't popping in here with his trip to instruct us on what to do.

You guys take yourselves way to serious.

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>>29743045
>olibird isn't popping in here with his trip to instruct us on what to do
Is that a hint that I should? Some of you would like that too much, wouldn't you?

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>>29743067
kek

>>29742941
>>29742963
>>29742977
>>29743012
>>29743045
Alright then. Sorry to have bothered you guys. Atleast people can stop complaining about a possible merge.

>>29743045
>very non-4chan
Right, I'll keep that in mind next time I want to help others.

>board of directors
Nope. Just me.

>IRC channel
Don't even use it anymore.

>You guys take yourselves way to serious.
Again, that's just me. I guess I cared too much.

>>29742924
>never completely addressed by either party directly
Alright... I'll try to be as constructive as possible.

>It's own separate "OP" as the second post with all the useful links and info in it
As long as we are the ones who gets to pick what's in that post, I'm okay with this.
>Separate text and voice channels in our discord for users of SiM
This could be useful, yes.
>The opportunity to gain more exposure and grow.
Hmmmm... you're really starting to win me over.
>Mark your stories "SiM" in the first post of that specific update/group of green.
Hahaha! Alright! I'll proudly wear it as a badge of honor!
>Don't go overboard on the grimdark torture porn. Having a little is fine but there has to be a line drawn somewhere.
... GO FUCK YOURSELF WITH A BLENDER AND DON'T FORGET TO TURN IT ON!!!!!

I'll write my greens as edgy as I god damn damn please and you are NOT stealing away the one place I can post it in! We don't want your help, we don't want your pity, and we don't want your gracious masters to take us in, show us the error of our ways and rehabilitate us like we're one of your fucking pones! That's your fetish, not ours.

We respect you and do our best to stay out of your business, so be so kind and do the same. You are a fine neighbor, but we're not getting married, please get the hint already.

>>29743111
That's alright, we don't want underage b&s like you in our thread anyway.

>>29743111
Sorry.

>>29743110
>If the general consensus is to not merge, then we can finally put that age old question of "DAE, WE SHOULD MERGE THREADS!!" to rest along with all the shitposts related to it.

>Alright then. Sorry to have bothered you guys. Atleast people can stop complaining about a possible merge.

Oh god I wish this could be true, but it's just not. Every time this topic comes up it goes down in flames, but you can be sure it'll come up again in a few months.. it always does.

>>29742924
Apparently I'm in the only one who thinks the threads have far more in line with each other than most are willing to admit, and could perfectly well coexist without too much trouble. Already you have situations where people pick and choose what stories in the thread people do or don't like. They read what they like, ignore everything else (with the exception of fagfag, who's... special) and we've had stories receive feedback in both threads over time.

But I don't think trying to have two separate communities existing under one thread is healthy or productive. That way does lead to conflict, because you are ultimately artificially producing a barrier which will cause each group to think of the others as separate, even if there is cross-communication normally.

If we merge, it should just be a straight up merger. People will still choose to read and reply to what they like, and just scroll past what they don't. No story tags (fucking awful idea on its own), no content limitations, no separate OP or channels. Just merger. If we don't merge, then we don't merge. Half-measures, though, will go nowhere.

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>>29742924
The time to talk about merging would have been when we were dead for the past two months, not right after we clawed ourselves back to life. I agree that trying to restrict our content AFTER wanting us to label it is absurd. Pick one or the other.

That being said, I love the idea of a Discord for SiM. Would anyone else be interested in one?

>>29743110
>>29743123
No worries, at least you came here with the intention to help. Thanks for taking the initiative.

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>>29743241
>a Discord for SiM
sure

>>29743123
Sorry for shouting at you. I know you felt like you were helping, and I honestly believe you had good intentions. But you're asking us to give away the one thing that makes us what we are.
>there has to be a line drawn somewhere.
Everyone can come in and post any green they want, and the're either get constructive criticism, asked for more, or ignored (Or if a miracle happens someone might even remember they are reading a CYOA and actually suggest something!). We don't limit out content. That's where the line is drawn.

I wouldn't mind posting in your thread, I wouldn't even mind wearing my yellow badge so that your people can filer everything I say. But I will never agree to restrictions on content, and if you aren't ready to accept that, I'll never agree to a merge.

Yes, our thread is barely surviving on page 9 bumps and censored porn. Yes, your thread has ten times more writefags. Yes, our themes have more things in common than in difference. Yes, you are a good person for trying to help.

But I'd much rather see this thread starve to death, then get revived for a week when someone actually shows up with a green and then watch it starve to death all over again, than to give up raping horses... I guess it's why Proportional Punishment resonates so well with me. Hint, hint. >>29743067 Write faster!

>>29743241
I like the idea of a SiM discord, but maybe we could, you know, talk in the thread instead? What are your interests?

>>29743417
Niiiiiiice. Once Luna doesn't need her muzzle, we should do exactly that and keep her as out cuddle buddy. On a completely different note, could you draw some Hope wing-abuse, please?

>9 again

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>>29738842

>>29743417
I really like this picture, but I feel like the way she's touching the muzzle and the heart are sending mixed signals.

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>>29738876
That tongue

>>29743123
Shall I try dumping what we have of Rarity's debt to show you how "open" your thread would be to our content? I'm willing to eat a ban for it.

>>29738876
>" say no more"
>unzip pants

>>29745447
As a SiMfag I say, please don't.

>>29745447
How about nah? Unless you just really want to, they already called it off.

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>>29745447
I want to love Rarity's Debt. Most of it's fantastic, especially everything surrounding Sweetie Belle, I just really wish Rarity took longer fully break. She went from barely going along to full on bimbo/pet SO fast.

>>29745685
That story hits all my usual nope buttons, but jesus fuck does it still make my dick hard.

>>29745716
If you want a similar "so wrong but damn" experience, I'd recommend the tarnished silver series on Fimfiction.

If you can get past the foalcon elements of that story, it's actually really damn good. It's one of those stories that by the end you don't even care about the fetish elements, you're in it for the characters and the story.

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>>29744926

>>29743417
what is this bug from

>>29746461
Forlorn Hope, from Proportional Punishment. http://pastebin.com/uY83evb2

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>>29745158
she's still getting used to it but she likes it
>>29746461
Proportional Punishment

>>29745735
That's my problem with Rarity's Debt and Tarnished Silver both. Once the stuff with foals slips in, it hits my nope-meter so fucking hard that I can't even enjoy it as pure fap material. The creepy overrides everything else.

It was also a problem I had with Exchange Rate Anon's writefag, if anyone remembers that guy. When it got to the point where he was writing his Anon as buying child sex slaves and still insisting that no, his Anon was actually the good guy - well, I noped out of it right there.

>>29746476
>Chain is gone
W-why?!

>>29746498
>ERA
His story was enjoyably over-the-top silly,and his porn was extremely fappable. But he put too much of his political views into his green and everyone started taking things seriously. A tragic loss

>>29746476
I love the detail of the buckle on the muzzle.

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— FROM THE DESK OF HER IMPERIAL AND ROYAL HIGHNESS NIGHTMARE MOON, EMPRESS OF THE EQUESTRIAN EMPIRE, SPEAKER OF THE LAW, DEFENDER OF ORDER, PROTECTOR OF LUNA, GUARDIAN OF THE NIGHT, AND KEEPER OF THE STARS —
Subjects,

It hath come to our attention that our subjects have become lost; cast adrift and astray in the wilderness. In truth, our heart aches with this news, for we know how our subjects yearn for our voice; seek refuge neath our wing.

It is with this knowledge that we have issued a Royal Degree; instruction to our most productive and creative of minds. That they shall found a forum for free and rapid discussion; conversation between those loyal to our Crown.

We ask thou merely touch our arcane enchantment; that thou will be summoned to this free forum. (https://discord.gg/kbnyu6Y)

Be quick of mind and reflex little ones; for our heart yearns for all of our subjects to experience commune and comfort.

Your most loving Empress,
-NM.

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>>29746503

>>29747156
Perfect.

>>29721862
>ywn make /mlp/ into your personal harem

>>29747156
Fantastic

>9

>>29746554
>>29746498
Link to ERA? I don't see in the pastebin

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Conveniently placed in the same position as the Psychic Dominator.

>>29747156
If I pull that off will you die?

>>29748532
>tfw when you will never unleash a tidal wave of psychic energy throughout Equestria
>tfw there will never be free will, only your will
>tfw you will never BE ONE WITH YURI

>>29748450
ERA is short for Exchange Rate Anon. He's written a few stories, iirc.

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>>29746233

>9

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>>29749846

>>29746233
Paddle her little butt.

>>29742654
>Writebro posts green.
>It's immediately drowned out by spg bullshit.

There's not much for me to give a proper review, but for what it is, it's pretty sexy. Any hope for more like this?

>>29742654
Please do continue. I meant to respond earlier, but we need more of this. Good femdom is a rare thing on this board.

>>29752114

>>29748707
>tfw you will never sink time has come to actiwate zem

>>29742654
I like it baren

>>29742654
He can't stroke himself off through the cage via magic?

>9

kill yourselves degenerates

>9

>9

>>29753083
Depends heavily on your headcanon on how fine-tuned a unicorn's TK is. It seems pretty reasonable that a tight fit would make it difficult.

Plus, I mean, it'd probably be only more teasing for him to do that if he can't become erect.

>>29754862

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>>29751089

A story i found about starlight being trained to be anons pet.
https://pastebin.com/qsArUNJn

>>29756061
Maaan, that was good. Is the writer still working on it, or did he quit?

>>29756444
I think it was a one-off, pretty much.

Nice trips, though.

>>29755705
Unf

>>29756882
Aaah well, that's disappointing. I was hoping we'd eventually get to see Glimglam rewarded.

>>29757937

>9

>9

>>29757937
me too

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>>29755705

>>29686619
I don't understand the reasoning here. "The thread is dead so move it to a place with even less of an audience". Might as well just let it die and move the stories over to /spg/ at that point.

>>29760017
its not showing up on megchans derpibooru what is the sauce

>>29760479
Works fine for me?
https://derpibooru.org/1314430

>>29760017
Interesting, I have two of the same image in my folders, but there are no differences save for a small strand of fluid.
>>29760434
Go post the story from >>29745447 over in /wkg/ and let me know how that goes for you.

>>29760849

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>>29760017

>>29761829
She wants a belly rub really bad

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>>29761829

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>>29763546

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>>29764478

>>29764478
its trash
anonfilly is the most cancerous thing to ever come out of this board

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>>29764860

>>29763546
That horn is really small.

>>29766383
It's because she's shit at magic.

>>29766437
Didn't know magic was proportional to the size of the horn.

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>>29766119

>>29767063

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>>29767063

>>29742924
>>29742941
>>29742963
>>29742977


I've never gone into either of your slave threads before now. Whats the difference between the two?

>>29701185
"""proportional"""" punishment? absolutely not.

>>29768132
BDSM and Cropped Porn General vs White Knight General.

>>29768160
>""proportional""
What the fuck does all the punctuation mean?

>>29768971

>>29768971
It means he's such a newfag he doesn't know how to >implying.

>>29768599
ah. guess the other one's more my speed, then. cheers m8

>9

While we eternally wait for proper green, would anyone mind if I posted a half-finished story I have, for feedback? I was never quite sure where I wanted to go with it.

>>29770496
Go for it

>>29770496
Go ahead buddy

“...In times of old, the spices used on this plate alone would have cost more than an entire army. Nations would have gone to war over shipments of them. Your family’s estate would have been bankrupted for a single taste. Yet we offer it to you. Why is that? What makes YOU deserving of a meal that was once the envy of kings?”
>Octavia looks down at her hooves, withering under your gaze.
>She fights with her tongue as she no doubt searches for the right words that will please you.
>It’s rather...endearing, how hard she tries to make you happy, despite her sun-bleached upbringing.
>If more ponies were like her, your return wouldn't have had to be so violent.
>Finally, she finds her voice, “Empress...I’m not.”
>You narrow your eyes.
>Rather than heed the warning she’s been given, she continues stumbling blindly down that path.
>”I don’t deserve to have anything more than grass clipppings and water.”
>...
>She tries, but half the time what comes out of her mouth is inane garbage.
"Are you claiming that We erred in our judgement? That you understand the place of ponies better than your Empress? Pray tell, where has Our understanding failed? Where have you gained this secret knowledge which even Our Crown is not worthy of possessing?"
>Her ears sink down as you verbally pierce the earthen veil that blankets her mind.
>Like a foal caught misbehaving, she hunkers down, her pupils shrinking to pinpricks as she struggles once more to respond, “I...I don’t know what you’re talking about, Empress. Please, I was just answering your question!”
“We did not ask you IF you were deserved this meal, We asked you WHY you were deserving. Is there is something you have kept hidden from Us? Some secret you have deigned Us unworthy of knowing, that would damage you in the eyes of the crown?”
>”No, Empress, of course not!” She throws herself at your hooves, her voice threatening to crack.

>>29771045
>“I would never try to hide anything from you! I’m sorry, I just-this dish-the smell, it overwhelmed me, and I-”
“Then answer Our question, Melody, or We will replace you with a maid who can TOLERATE the presence of Our meals..”
>Were it any other pony, your word would have been final and she’d be gone.
>But...you can see her heart is in the right place, even if her mind is not.
>...Unless she ACTUALLY believed you’d fall for such a thinly veiled excuse…
>For now, you’ll assume she was just panicking, as she is wont to do.
>She goes back to wrestling with her tongue, faster this time.
>Good.
>At least she realizes she’s burned through your patience for the night.
>She opens her mouth to give what will no-doubt be an asinine response that you will proceed to mock, when another, more masculine voice rings out.
>”Octavia, what do you think you’re doing here?”
>It’s your Beast.
>With a start, she twists around to face where his voice had come from, her mouth agape while still leaving a fear-filled, pleading eye on you.
>You find yourself having to suppress a smile.
>She has no idea who to answer first!
>The idea of invoking either of your wraths, should she choose to answer the other is too much for her.
>The poor thing’s mind has shut down!
>Before she has a chance to arrive at the correct conclusion (which is of course to inform him of your will), your human enters the room, his scowl vanishing the moment he lays eyes on you.
>Your smile tears free of its chains.
“Aaahh, Ogre, your timing is impeccable. Would you care to join Us for dinner? Our chefs have prepared a most exotic dish.”
>He may not be able to fully appreciate just what you’re offering, but…
>It’d be rather nice to enjoy a meal with the two beings who have managed to most earn your favor.
>”No thanks, Empress. I already ate.”
>It takes every ounce of your self control to keep your ears from drooping.
>He’s...rejecting you?

>>29771058
>No, no of course not, he’s never done anything like that before.
>He must be put off by the garish smell from your meal!
>You knew such a bombastic, overly hedonistic dish was a bad idea.
>Coming from his backwards culture, it must be as though you have gold flakes covering your food!
>He’s not impressed by your opulence, he’s disgusted by it…
>”Is that MY maid?” He jabs a claw towards the still-paralyzed Octavia, “I thought we agreed that you wouldn’t interfere with my property.”
>You bristle, the combined insults being too much for you to bare,
“Do you forget Our crown? She is as much Our property as YOU, Henchman, and We shall do with her as We please!”
>Glaring at him, you silently dare him to challenge your authority.
>But rather than meet your challenge, he raises his paws in surrender, “Of course, Empress. You’re right, I’m sorry.”
>...
>This is why he’s your favorite subject.
>Along with the wonderfully brutal ways he invents to punish your most wayward subjects.
>”Can I get her back now? There’s something I want her to see.”
>The cowardly mare has still barely moved.
>If she can’t bring herself to speak normally around you both, then she doesn’t deserve this meal.
“We are finished with her. Do with her what you will.”
>Looking at Octavia, he jerks his head, rousing her from her stupor by commanding her to follow him.
>...
>Your Brute needs to see that you command her just as much as he does.
“Maid. Do you forget your place?”
>Her ears slip down as her cheeks flush.
>Your Beast gives you a questioning look as she leaves his side, almost galloping back over to you.
>As her lips meet your hoofguard, your grin returns in full force, your gaze meeting his.
>With your ego satisfied, you return your attention to your meal, sparing Octavia only the barest of acknowledgements as she mumbles in apology.

>>29771066
>As they leave, you pick at your food.
>What was once a climactic explosion of flavor is now a gaudy, wasteful miss mash.
>It’s disgusting.
>...He chose her over you.
>You asked him to spend time with you, and he instead left with HER.
>He rejected you.
>You!
>The most powerful pony that has ever lived, the living Empress, she who gives life to the stars, the one who brought him to this world, gave him everything, a title, slaves, a place in your castle…
>And he chose a plain, earthen mare.
>Because there was “something he wanted her to see.”
>He had already rejected her before!
>What could POSSIBLY be so interesting as to pull him away from you?
>You eye the disgusting mess your chef tried to serve you.
>Your appetite’s gone.
>Disciplining the chef for his callous disregard of seasonings can wait; you’re going to see what it is, exactly, your beast and maid are doing together.
>Melding into mist, you fly through your castle unseen, soon reaching your two favored subjects.
>As they work their way down to the dungeons of the castle, your Brute grills Octavia, demanding to know what you were doing with her.
>He seems rather…pleased when she talks of how you degraded her, reminding her of her place in the world.
>...Or is he disgusted?
>His alien face can be SO difficult to read!
>They stop at a door-you rematerialize behind them as he unlocks it.
>”This is it. You’re going to love this, it’s hilarious.”
“What, pray tell, are We going to love?”
>The two of them jump at your words.
>Octavia whirls around, her legs almost collapsing under her as she lays eyes on you, “E-empress! I didn’t realize you were accompanying us!”
>Your troll is less deferential in his surprise, “Aah! Dammit Nightmare! Couldn’t you give me some warning the next time you do that?”
>You ignore their protests.
“Were you planning this to be an exclusive event, Ogre? Did you think We would not enjoy seeing whatever it is you wish to show off?

>>29771078
>”No, Empress, of course not! I just...figured you’d think I was stupid for finding this amusing,” The Brute backpedals
>It is as poor of an excuse as the one your maid tried earlier.
“We are always fascinated by your crude attempts to assimilate yourself in Our world. Now show us what amuses you so.”
>Octavia, upon seeing that she is not the subject of your wrath, slowly raises herself once more,
>”...You’re right, I should have asked if you wanted to join us. The other day, the Cult captured this pony. Apparently she caused half of Ponyville to be destroyed by some sort of monster.”
>He pushes the door open to reveal a blue unicorn mare, her nose black, gagged with a bridle and strapped to a breeding rack.
>She looks up at you, a spark of hope at once igniting and dying as she realizes who you are.
>...
“We fail to see what is so humorous about this.”
>Looking out of the corner of your eye, you see your maid shares your feelings.
>”My lord? Why is the fur on her nose black?” Your maid ventures.
>The Ogre looks between the two of you.
>While his ears do not broadcast his emotions, you can still watch his confidence waver,
>“She...likes to call herself great and powerful, I was going to show she was no more great than a bitch in heat...that’s irrelevant now. Back here’s the funny part.”
>You could put an end to this right now.
>But...your curiosity has gotten the better of you.
>With a bit of magic to prod your maid into accompanying, you follow your Brute.
>The bound mare cries unintelligibly, begging you for undeserved mercy, her bonds rattling as she struggles against them while the three of you move around behind her.
>The Beast talks over her, “I was going to break her in the usual way, when I found… ”
>He grabs her tail, the mare freezing up at once, save for a low, wordless whine.
>”This!” He yanks her tail high, revealing…
>What in the name of your stars and moon?
“Champion! To Our side at once!”

>>29771090
>Flaring your wings in alarm, you grab ahold of Octavia with your mane, she yelps out as you pull her to safety.
>Letting her tail go, the Brute growls out, “If you don’t want to lose that tail, you’ll keep it raised, Trixie,” before joining you.
>”Well? Isn’t that hilarious?”
>You position yourself to shield both the human and your maid from the...anomaly, a bulwark for your subjects.
>”...No, huh?”
“Ogre...that is...NOT a marehood under her tail…”
>It’s…
>”I don’t understand what’s wrong,” Octavia gasps out in your grasp, “She was just born a colt.”


Forgive me for any typos, I haven't edited it. What are you guy's thoughts on this? Did you enjoy it at all? Is it worth continuing? If so, I'm not even sure how/

>>29771108
I'd read it. Anon turning him/her into a slutty stallionboi. Sounds good to me.

>>29771450

>>29771108
Sure, although I'm more interested in the NMM and Anon dynamic here.

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>>29771108
I dig it, I like nightmare in this

>>29771108
besides the spelling errors it was a great start.
my only issue would be how emotional Octavia seems to act.

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WIP

>>29773442
I am 110% on board

>>29773442
Love the faces.

>>29773442
Very nice, and while horn "mutilation" isn't my thing, I'll make the suggestion of having some jewelry added to Trixie. Perhaps some earrings with Twilight's cutie mark to show ownership and a necklace of sorts with Nightmare Moon's cutie mark on what's left of Trixie's horn as a reminder that Nightmare Moon is her true ruler.

>>29771108
You've definitely got the thread's classic NMM down pat, and I love it. Considering her typical obsession with 'the natural order of things' in this thread, this is going to make her flip a shit... and I'd love to see it.

>>29771108
>“Champion! To Our side at once!”
>You position yourself to shield both the human and your maid
That's not how champions works. It would be ten times cuter if she was shielding Octavia, while hiding behind Anon herself.

Generally though, I love to see the good old NMM back. Dangerously unstable but not intentionally mean, aggressively lashing out because of her insecurity, and most importantly, having a blast showing off her superiority. A force of nature with puffy cheeks. Amazing.

>dixie
I don't know... this is kinda gay for the original anon... eeeh whatever, if he cared about weird body parts he wouldn't be fucking hordes, proceed with the rape.

>how to continue
NMM having a meltdown. Not an angry room freezing outburst, but more like finding out that her whole life was a lie and the world is suddenly a scary place. Keep the fun, keep the cute, and if you could put some rape in there as well, that would be nice too.

>>29775014

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>>29775014
>A force of nature with puffy cheeks

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>>29775014
>A force of nature with puffy cheeks
kek

>>29778257
oh my

>>29773442
Great job

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Well that was a fun and interesting day.

>>29780182
Agreed

>>29780197

>>29780575

>>29779780

> my honoured

Wat.

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>>29675614
That broken bluebird link isn't working for me, anyone have a different one? It's been so long, I have no idea how much of it I missed.

>>29781158
https://pastebin.com/uW2Sqd4D
There ya go, friendo

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Hey, we're still here even!

.. neat!

>>29781626
AYYYYYY!

>>29768971
>>29769430
>implying I don't.
quotes are just inline versions of implying implications

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