Alone in Equestria Girls Verse, #10: We big time now! Again.

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>>29651197
first post best post, jk

>Sighing to yourself, you hop in car and prepare your smoke materials.
>You roll a filter and place it in the end of the skin.
>Picking a bag, you take a whiff before carefully placing buds in the grinder.
>A few twists and turns and it's ready.
>Happy with the grind, you pour it onto the skin and place the grinder back in your tin.
>A quick lick of your fingertips and you're ready to roll.
>Carefully picking it up, you roll it between your fingers, spreading it out evenly.
>You lick the gummy and finish the roll, perfect as always.
>You grab your lighter and spark it up, deeply inhaling.
>Now that your blunt is rolled, what the hell are you going to do about Filthy?
>He's not letting up with this "business deal" of his, and now he's involving Sombra and his goons too.
>Not to mention they said that Sombra will be seeing you soon, which is just perfect.
>You seriously need to sort some sort of defence out.
>You do have a half decent security system, but you can't just hide in your house everyday.
>Taking a few more deep tokes, you hold it in for a few moments before blowing it back out.
>You could invest in a couple of guns, although you do have a handgun at home.
>Taking another toke, a thought suddenly hits.
>Rusty said something about Filthy and dirty dealings.
>Maybe he's working with Sombra, laundering money or something.
>And with all kinds of shady business, there's always a trail to follow.
>Or a few computer's or phones to hack, whichever.
>You toke some more, feeling the substance flow to your head.
>You should get more of this strain, definitely.
>Breathing out slowly, you blink as someone taps on the car window.
>It's Twilight, probably wanting to ask more questions about some little detail or something.
>Checking everything's in place and put away, you step out the car and lock it behind you.

>>29651287

"what's up Twiggles? Enjoying yourself? Have you been chatting everyone's ear's off about every litt-"
>"Anonymous. Rusty told me to find you, you need to fix one of the bots; The engine's broke and you're the best and the fastest here."
>Twilight scrunches her nose and adjusts her glasses.
>It's always when you're having a smoke you get asked to fix something or other.
>Might as well get it over with.
"Alright, let's go then," You grumble.
>Taking a few tokes, you walk with Twilight to the workshop, eager to get things fixed and ready to roll out.
>Twilight takes a side glance at you before speaking up.
>"So Anon, I know you're not the most sociable person, but I was wondering if I could-"
"Help out here? Hover over me while I work, that sort of thing?"
>"Umm, maybe?"
>She gives a cheesy grin and looks away.
>Normally you would instantly say no, fuck having more people interfering with your business.
>But you have been getting busier, with the popularity of the Robot Wars rising, you're going to need a few more hands to help even the workload.
>It might as well be someone who's at least interested and has some technical know-how.
"Maybe, I'll have to think on it though. Rusty and I could do with an extra pair of hands every now and then."
>"Really? I would love to help you out and-"
"Yeah yeah I get it. So which bot needs fixing up?"
>Twilight flips through her little notebook and skims through a page.
>"Roadblock, I believe the battery sorted out so they need a replacement and a little fix up."
>A battery change?
>Doesn't seem to hard, assuming you can find a replacement.
"Nice one If you want to help you can do, but don't pester me with questions, okay?"
>"Okay? I can ask a few questions though right?"
>You give a deadpan, before rolling your eyes.
"I suppose, maximum of five though."
>Twilight froms a little before smiling again.
>"Okay, deal."
>You chuckle to yourself and enter the workshop.

I know its a small update but better than nothing I guess

>>29651197
Fuvk that drawgag is good

>>29651312
nice green bump

>>29651312
Thanks for the update m80.

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So, i know how Axiianon,YFNanon, sci anon and my anon look like
But what about the others?
I can't give all of them hoodies

Already sobbering up, surprised how quickly i recover from tequila

>>29652726
Uhhh, green skin with muscles?

>>29652726
It's the alcoholism in your blood.

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Work is boring so, here is a quick one
What do you think lads?

>>29653490
A bit abstract to get to into, but from the looks of it...this may be your most badass pic yet. Sci reminds me of the "Stuck in the middle with You" song, damgnyorb is just the right amount of peeved, Axii is has a good "Really?" face, and you get the general gushing. I cant wait to see the finished product so I cant set it as my wallpaper...even moreso when someone gets a color version.

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>>29653490
It looks like it's coming along pretty great, I'm surprised that many anons actually set decently into each other with room for Saber and giest mama.

As for a description of Fate, I've kind of danced around it so far beyond basic attire.

He can be bald or with hair, whichever you prefer. I've imagined him both ways, as a traditional Anon and with a short anime 'do. That might make him look to similar to your anon, though.

For clothes, your first pic did a nice job. His default outfit is a dress shirt and either jeans or black slacks.

I like that coat. For cuteness, any chance of it being Trixie's?

>>29653560
Trixie likes to wear only a fleece jacket in the winter, says it feels good on her nips, now she managed to get Anon to wear it all the time, without him knowing that little tibbit at least.
>tfw Trixie tries to mark Anon with her breast scent.

>>29653575
I was just thinking more of that disgusting couple things teens do, though it's normally the girl with the guy's jacket.

>>29653593
That's true, never had that problem myself, still the less sexy option of having a kinky Trixie.

>>29653560
I can do the anime hairdo
Also the coat, sure, let's roll with it
my anon has a chia pet like hair, kinda like ryu post SF4

If the others can help me with their looks that could help

>>29653605
Not* having a kinky Trixie. Fixed it...I think.

Hey guys, just quick update, starting Monday I'm free so expect an update soon
>>29653490
I really like how my Anon look at the other.
"Who the hell are those guys? And why do they all look like me?"

>>29653633
My anon isn't really too complicated. black messy hair, tall, wears those cargo/builders pants like pic related, long sleeved top with the sleeves rolled up.
You could stick a hat on him since I imagine him wearing a woolly hat to keep his hair clean.
That's pretty much it, I never gave it alot of thought.

I like the way mine is looking at sci, its brilliant

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>>29654343
Fucks sake forgot the pic

>>29651197
>somebody used my original design for SciAnon
Oh boy that feels good.

>>29653490
>geist, "what are they doing over there?"
>cookies, "nothing personnel kid"
>damynorb, the fuck are you doing there? fuck off"
>Axii, "umm..."
>sci, "get your filthy hand off me you mouthbreather"
>YFN, "ey baby like what you see wink wink."
>Fate and saber, "what?"
>Nagota, "yeah its that big."
>Monologue, "hmm, needs more tentacle."
>Fapman, *muffled words in the distance*

>>29653490
>no paranormal Anon

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>>29654448

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>>29654448
>*Muffled words in the distance*

>>29653490
>>29654343
Shouldn'y he wear steel toe cap boots as well since he's basically a mechanic?
Also he should have a blunt in his mouth, maybe.

>>29654448
Yeah...sounds about right.

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>Running after Sunset, your medallion tugs at its chain making you skid to a halt.
>Just ahead of you is the large circular room that serves as Sombra's throne room.
>And speaking of Sombra; there he is sitting in his damn chair.
>Holding your arm out, you catch Rainbow Dash.
>"What is i- oh..."
>"Welcome home Anonymous." the man says.
>Sunset stands to his left and smirks as the cause of your medallions reaction appears across his right.
>Exiting one of his portals is the Doyen, the little bell at his side chiming with every footstep.
"Sombra."
>"You have been causing some trouble for me haven't you?" Sombra asks.
"Kidnapping my friends will do that." you retort, glaring at Sunset.
>"Friend? It's been a very long time since I've heard any of my witchers refer to anyone as a friend."
"Things change. Now let Sunset Shimmer and Twilight Sparkle go."
>Sombra's expression remains neutral. "I'm afraid I can't do that."
>In response you draw your sword, which Sunset does the same.
>"Sunset come on! We're your friends!" Rainbow shouts.
>The brainwashed girl doesn't say anything, instead moving in front of Sombra with a defensive posture.
>"It's no use girl." Grogar cackles, "Sunset Shimmer has given up all ties to her previous life."
>Rainbow Dash grimaces.
"She's not doing it of her own will." you point out, "It's obvious you have her under some sort of spell."
>Grogar takes a step forward as if to tell you off when Sombra cuts the sorcerer off himself.
>"And what of it?"
"Well, first we're going to break her free then stop you."
>"So ungrateful." he says with disdain, "Can't you see I'm trying to make our lives meaningful again?"
"By kidnapping adolescents, submitting them to horrible mutations and sending them out in the world to hunt for scraps?"
>Sombra stands, "I will lead us into a new golden age."

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>>29656153
>You scoff at the "grand" gesture he's trying to radiate.
"There's only a handful of us left, our time is over."
>"Once the Conjunction is complete, our time will just be getting started Anonymous. But explaining this would be moot."
>"You can either choose to be part of it or not." Sunset says, "And I plan on staying by Master Sombra's side all the- th-... the way."
>Sunset wobbles on her feet for a brief moment as she grabs her head.
>The Headmaster gives her a concerned glare, "Sunset?"
>"I'm fine Master." she says unconvincingly. "Just still getting used to my mutations that's all."
>He nods his head, "So what is your answer Anonymous? Will you stand with your brothers and sisters or will you forsake all I have given you."
"I'll pass."
>Sombra scoffs, "So you figure your best option is going to die and play hero?"
"..."
>"So be it. I had a feeling allowing you Wolves to be independent thinkers would be a mistake.
"Yeah, lucky us."
>The man snaps his fingers, "Sunset?"
>"Yes Master Sombra." Sunset says.
>"And just to make this fair, you'll have some help."
>Grogar clears his throat, "Um... I'm not much of a fighter..."
>"I'm not talking about you." Sombra states.
>Snapping his fingers, a door from across the room opens.
>Out steps that teenage boy that was with Sunset when she ambushed you outside.
>But this time, he's dressed in similar gear to Sunset and his pupils have changed from their original sea-green to the iconic yellow, thin-slitted ones you and Sunset share.
>"Sky Stinger." Sunset mutters in a condescending tone.
>"I'm here Headmaster Sombra."
>"Help Sunset Shimmer and earn your medallion."
>The newly inducted witcher glares at you, "With pleasure."
>Sunset Shimmer protests, "But Master, I'm confident I can rid both of them by my-"
>"Consider this a safety precaution."
>"Bu-"
>Sombra gives Sunset a look that silences her.
>"Yes Master..."

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>>29656165
>Sky Stinger draws his steel blade as he walks next to Sunset.
>"Anon, what do we do about Sunset?"
"Leave her to me, you don't have the experience in disarming opponents non-lethally yet. But be careful, that other kid... he has a bloodthirsty look in his eyes."
>Rainbow draws her sword. "Gotcha."
>The two of you step towards the center of the room when suddenly the boy charges like a maniac.
>"Anon!"
>Without wasting any time, Sunset also takes this as her cue to pounce.
>But to your frustration, they both ignore Rainbow Dash and go straight for you.
>Quickly you cast Quen, only to have enough time to block and push away Sky Stinger's blade just as Sunset's own sword just bounces off where your abdomen would be.
>The two witchers stagger back as to not leave themselves open for a counter attack.
>So they're going to both focus on you first, is that it?
>"What are you doing loser?" Sunset asks with venom in her voice, "Anonymous is *MY* kill!"
>"Shut up! He ended Vapor Trails life so I'm going to end his!" he barks back.
>Vapor Trail?
>That... must be the girl you killed.
>"I don't care what your reasons are, he is mine!" she hisses. "Focus on Rainbow Dash. She's about your level anyway."
>Rainbow becomes indignant, "Hey!"
>The sorcerer clears his throat, "Will you two quit bickering and finish the task at hand?"
>Sky Stinger grumbles, "Fine. But as soon as I'm done with her I'm going after him."
>"If he's still alive that is."
>It bothers you how uncaring and sadistic Sunset sounds.
>You seriously need to find someway to snap her out of it.
>But how?

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>>29656174
>Your eyes peer over towards Grogar. Whatever spell he used could be one of hundreds, assuming he even used a spell.
>Suddenly Sunset dashes at you again.
>You deflect an overhead swing causing her to try recoil.
>The move leaves an opening you could exploit bu-
>Remember Anon, you aren't trying to kill her...
>Lunging forward you thrust your blade at her. Sunset narrowly manages to dodge before bringing her sword around to try and take off your head.
>Ducking, you tuck and roll.
>You internally curse.
>Sunset Shimmer doesn't have that issue.
>"Stay still!" the female witcher demands.
"..."

>As Anon and Sunset duel, you look towards that other kid staring you down.
>Nervously, you bring your sword up and prepare to defend yourself.
>You really hope this guy isn't as good as Anon is...
>Your opponent is clearly waiting for you to make the first move judging by how he hasn't changed his stance.
>Calm down Rainbow Dash. Just remember everything Anonymous has taught you.
>...
>Okay...
>You're drawing a complete and total blank...
>Just like whenever you have a big test and you haven't studied.
>So... like every test.
>Crap...
>You take a deep breath and grit your teeth.
>Well first things first then Rainbow Dash.
>Just gotta kick this kid's ass then help Anon get Sunset.

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>>29656182
>...
>Easier said that done...
>Wiping each of your hands on your jeans, you tighten the grip on your sword's hilt and run forward letting out a battle cry as Sky Stinger does the same.
>The first attack he makes you just barely manage to block before he follows up with another swing.
>Stepping back, his tip of his swing grazes your jacket and slices the fabric.
>That was too close...
>But before you realize, a fist collides with your cheek causing you to stagger back.
>The taste of metal fills your mouth when a boot goes into your gut taking all the wind out of your lungs and sending you onto your back some distance away.
>"Is that it?" Sky Stinger asks. "This'll be quicker than I thought."
>You bastard...
>"Fuck!" you hear Anon curse.
>Looking over, you see Anon cupping his right shoulder and Sunset holding a wicked grin on her mug.
>This isn't right.
>They shouldn't be fighting like this.
>Rainbow, you can't half-ass this now when Sunset and Twilight are still in trouble. There's no doubt in your mind they would be doing the same thing if the positions were reversed.
>And the only way to stop it is to stop these guys.
>Though you couldn't be there for Sunset when she was kidnapped, you can damn well be there for her now.
>All of a sudden a glowing blue light wraps around you.
>Though Sunset and Anon are too focused on their fight, the others in the room give you strange looks as you can feel a familiar feeling coursing through your body.
"Aw yeah!"

>>29656210
>Here we go! Finally something to even things up.
>"What in the name..." that old wizard asks himself.
>Sky Stinger takes a step back, unsure of what he's seeing.
>As your transformation finishes, your new wings begin flapping making you hover a few centimeters off the floor.
>Sky Stinger looks incredulous, "Are you shitting me? You part Harpy or something?"
>"This is that magic of friendship Sunset has told us about Grogar." Sombra says.
>Leaning forward, he looks at you with interest, "Let's see how much this changes."
>"You think a pair of wings are going to help?" Sky Stinger taunts, "Well fuck that!"
>He casts the Aard sign at you, sending a shockwave of energy in your direction.
>Taking flight, you fly back far enough for the energy to dissapate.
>Like a bird watching its prey, you circle around above him.
>"GET DOWN HERE!" he demands. "This ain't fair!"
"Rule of nature buddy!" you retort, "Life isn't fair!"
>Tucking your legs in, you point your body down and dive straight at your opponent.
>He prepares to cut you open as soon as you make a pass, but strangely enough, as you speed towards him, his movements seem a lot slower to you.
>Almost like he's moving in slow motion.
>Veering to the left, you steer clear of his attack and circle around him.
>Flying past his open back, you just drag the edge of your sword below you and let your speed and gravity do the work for you.
>The guy lets out a cry of pain as a large red line appears on his back.
>Skidding on the ground, you run at him while he's too distracted by the pain and slide tackle him, sending him off his feet and onto his face.
>Getting back up, Sky Stinger glares at you with a look of pure malice.

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>>29656232
>"I won't be bested by you until I get payback for Vapor Trail!"
>He means that girl in the forest right?
>Sorry, but you have your own friends to worry about right now.
>The two of you clash again, trading sword strikes and holding ground.
>The room echoes with the sound of metal clashing against metal as both you and Anonymous do your best to try and stay alive.

>Both you and Anonymous pace around in a circle as Sky Stinger takes care of that Rainbow haired bitch.
>Part of you doubts Sky Stinger will be able to handle that "ponied-up" transformation. While the kid was never that good in the first place, he already seems to be unable to overcome the challenge.
>You've already drawn first blood much to Anonymous's annoyance.
>The sight of him gripping his bleeding shoulder makes you smile.
"Give up Anonymous, out there in the wilds you just got lucky."
>"Sunset, I know you're still in there." he says, "You're stronger than this."
>You roll your eyes at his efforts.
>Glancing back at Master Sombra, he slumps back in his throne with his hands tented together.
>Better take care of this quick.
>Dashing forward, you aim a strike towards Anonymous's center of mass, fully expecting him to block it with a vertical positioning of his blade.
>And like you thought, he makes for a vertical block.
>Predictable.
>You suppose that's just the side-effect of him teaching you most of what he knows.
>You're able to recall any specific patterns or habits he might make.
>"Sunset. Please."
"Shut up." you retort.
>It also probably does him no good as his eyes dart between his blade, your's and yourself as if he's struggling to decide what his next move should be.
>Well, you'll take advantage of his hesitation.

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>>29656244
>Twisting your body, you guide his blade away from you and slam an elbow into his wounded arm.
>"Augh!"
>He breaks away and stumbles back.
>And right there.
>Anonymous delivers a look of tranquil fury. One you've only seen before a handful of times.
>Casting Quen, you prepare for his counter attack.
>"You know, despite every instinct telling me I should just put an end to you right now... I can't."
>What is he babbling on about now?
>"You're my friend Sunset." he says, lowering his sword. "I'm not going to lose you and Twilight to *him*. Not if I can help it."
"How touching." you reply in a mocking tone, "Anonymous cares for me."
>Grogar chuckles to himself, "Does our Wolf witcher fancy the young spitfire?"
>Anonymous shoots Grogar a cold glare.
>"Shut the fuck up old man. I swear, when I get the chance I'm going to personally gut you for this."
>The old wizard's face turns red.
>"You insolent dog! I sho-"
>"I've seen enough. Grogar, we should check on Miss Twilight." Master Sombra interrupts. "Our window approaches."
>Standing up, he walks down the steps of his throne and walks towards the door nearby.
>You can't help but do a double take.
>H-he... he's leaving?
"But... Ma-Master Sombra. Don't you want to watch my victory over Anonymous?"
>Looking over his shoulder, he hovers his hand over the doorknob. "Do not disappoint me."
>The two men exit, leaving you, Anonymous and the sidekicks alone in the throne room.
>That's it?
>That's all he has to say?
>Well then...
>Lifting the weapon your hands to the ready, you resolve to do Master Sombra's bidding.

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>>29656256
>The two of you meet swords again, this time neither of you saying a thing as you go through the motions, trying to one-up each other for the upper-hand.
>But regardless of the mutations given you, Anonymous has far more experience and skill.
>Anger begins to build up within you as all your attempts to break through Anonymous's guard fail one after another.
>Come on... you can't disappoint Master Som-
>DAMMIT!
>NO!
>NO! NO! NO!
>Making one last horizontal swipe, Anonymous ducks under your swing and sweeps for your legs.
>Jumping over, you try to jab your blade downward to skewer him but he uses Quen to block the blow.
>The recoil from the attack gives him just enough time to grab your both your wrists.
>You wince in pain as his grip tightens to point where he forces you to drop weapon.
>"Yield."
"Ne-never!"
>"Then sorry about this."
>Pulling his head back, your eyes widen in shock as he swings his head towards you.
>Suddenly you're seeing stars.

>Sunset falls to the ground, and lets out a yelp of pain.
>You rub your now throbbing forehead.
>Ow...
>The girl grasps her bloody nose and looks at the red stain on it.
>Gasping, that look of contempt she's recently been sporting returns.
>"Why... WHY?! WHY CAN'T I KILL YOU!"
>She rises to her feet, picks up her discarded sword and runs at you.
>With her in a berserker like-state, you easily maintain control over the flow of the fight as she's too focused on trying to hurt you.
>However, concern grows more and more as she keeps slamming the edge of her sword into yours. Your blade, thanks to the runes inscribed by Mjolna, is more resistant to blunting but Sunset's is starting already showing the damage.
>At this point, Sunset is treating her weapon more like a cudgel than a sword.

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>>29656267
>You continously block and deflect each of her attacks as they start becoming more wild, desperate and frantic.
"Getting sloppy there."
>"SHUT UP!"
>Dodging a thrust aimed at your face, you slide your sword's edge along her's and twist.
>Withing half a second, Sunset Shimmer is disarmed.
>"NO!"
>In retaliation, her arm extends with the Igni sign formed.
>Magical fire erupts from the palm of her hand forcing you to counter with Quen.
"That won't wo-"
>Almost as quick as she cast the sign, Sunset leaps up from her prone position and rams herself into you.
>Your friend seems to discard all sense of reason, instead opting to use her fists to try and finish you off.
>"I. WILL. NOT. LOSE. AGAIN!" she screams, emphasizing each word with a punch to the jaw.
>As she lay on top of you, your vision distorts after each painful strike to the face.
>Grabbing a fist before it makes contact, she struggles to assert her dominance over you.
>You can see her fingers trying to open and form another Igni sign, but you just barely manage to keep them from completing the gesture.
"SUNSET SHIMMER, SNAP OUT OF IT."
>"SHUT THE FUCK UP! JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP!" she says, trying to use her other arm. "THE GIRL YOU KNOW IS GONE!"
"NO SHE'S NOT!" you retort.
>"THEN I'LL PROVE IT!" she yells, yanking her right hand away.
>Reaching for her boot, Sunset grabs the knife sheathed to it and jabs it into your left shoulder.
>You struggle not to let out a cry of pain as blood begins seeping out of the wound.
>"Hehehe are you sure I'm the same person?" she asks with a twisted smile.
>She digs the point deeper and deeper, twisting the weapon left and right to inflict more pain.
>Shit! Shit! SHIT!
>"ANON!" Rainbow Dash screams.
>"Oh no you don't!" Sky Stinger counters.

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>>29656299
>Despite being unable to lay a finger on Rainbow Dash, his attempts are enough to thwart her from coming to your assistance
"YOU'RE DONE!" Sunset yells right in your face with a crazed look in her eyes.
>Her unhinged behavior stirs feelings of genuine fear into your being.
>Pulling the small hunting knife out, she primes it over your head.
>SHIT!
>Reflexively, you will your injured arm to shield yourself, only for the knife to wedge itself in your forearm.
>Your nerves feel like they've been lit on fire as the pain shoots through your left arm.
>"Oh, now that would have been a good time for Quen." she says twisting the blade as she pulls out.
>Yanking the knife out she tries again, knocking your bleeding arm to the side.
>"NOW JUST DIE ALREADY!"
>Panting, you grimace and close your eyes.
>This is it...
>You... you failed...
>The knife twitches in her hands and begins it's drop... when a few seconds go by and nothing happens.
>"N-NOT AGAIN!" she says through gritted teeth.
>You open an eye to see what's stopping her.
>To your confusion, her right eye... her right eye is crying tears.
>Not only that but the sclera has returned to a more normal white.
>"No..." Sunset says in a hushed whisper.
>Her hand shakes, like it's trying to fight something off.
>"Let GO!" Sunset screams.
>"NO!" she answers herself.
>What...
>"I'M GOING TO KILL HIM FOR MASTER SOMBRA!"
>"ANON'S MY FRIEND! I WON'T LET YOU!"
>Sunset...?
"Sunset is that...?"
>"Anon! You have to stop me!" she pleads.
"You have to fight it!"
>"I-I'm trying! But sh- augh! She's fighting back hard!"
"You're tougher than this. I know you can do it!"
>Clutching her head, Sunset lets out a high-pitched wail.

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>>29656311
>She drops the knife onto the floor and rolls off of you.
>As you get up, Rainbow Dash finds an opening and kicks Sky Stinger into heavy bookcase.
>The heavy wooden furnishing collapses over him, pinning the boy to the ground.
>With the latter is out of the picture, the athletic girl uses her wings to zoom over to assist you.
>"Anon!"
>She looks in horror as Sunset thrashes about on the hard marble floor.
>You reach into your potion bag and down a White Raffords decoction.
>That should hold you for now...
>Rainbow can only watch helplessly, "What do we do? What do we do?!"
"I... I don't know..."
>"How can you say that?!" she cries out in disbeleif, "You're Anon! You know like a whole bunch on magical stuff!"
"I told you I don't know DASH!" you shout. "I..."
>You honestly don't know how to help Sunset as she tearfully rolls around in pain.
>In the periphery of your vision however, you see Sunset's discarded hunting knife.
>You crawl over and take the tool in your hand.
>"Anon what are yo-"
>Rainbow's eyes widen in shock as she puts two and two together.
>"No. No way..."
"..."
>"You can't seriously be thinking of..."
>You look at the bloody instrument in your hand.
>With the damage to your arm, you don't know if you could handle Sunset Shimmer coming at you again.
>You still need to stop Sombra and Grogar.
>Sunset's body slowly calms down. The struggling ceasing as her breathing normalizes.
>You have no idea who's going to be in control right now.
>"Anon. Please." Rainbow begs. "There has to be a different way."
>Could you do it?
>If Sunset can't regain control, it would be a mercy killing...
>But regardless of that, ultimatly you would...
>You would be killing a friend.
>As you contemplate your choices, the room rumbles.
>"What the heck was that?!" Rainbow asks.
>Another shockwave runs through the building.
>Did Sombra...?
>Are you too late!?
>Suddenly the wall on the other side of the room explodes inwards.
---

>>29656316
I swear if this ends in yet another cliffhanger.

>>29656316
Had to cut off for now. Something's come up and I'll post a little more later when I'm able.

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>>29656316
Sombra done goof'd it seems

>>29656232
>RULES OF NATURE!

>>29656336
Sweet, I can live with that. I'm guessing we're almost done now and while I'll be sad that it's over I'll be much happier that it gone an ending unlike some many stories before. You can also bet when it's all done I'll be going backing through and reading cover to cover, so to speak.

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>>29656336

>>29656336
Twilight in her magic Iron Man suit? Yes please.

Bamp

>>29656311
Anon would rather die than hurt his friend... Noble I guess, more like idiot imo.

>>29657181
Same, I disliked that too. Anon needs to stop jobbing to everyone.

bump from 9

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>>29651312
>>29656316
>more self insert shit

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>>29656232
Nice.

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>>29656316
shiet it's coming

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Almost yhere
I just need to finish Geist, Gray mother and Monologue
Btw Geist, more references of Gray Mother?

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>You find yourself floating in some sort of void. The only thing visible are the massive cluster of stars in the distance.
>Dear Celestia... your head is throbbing...
>Feeling your body, you're wearing the full witcher gear Sombra gave you.
"Where am I?" you ask yourself.
>The last thing you remember is...
>Anon! He was hurt badly!
>All because of that other you.
>"Yeah, all because of me." you hear yourself say.
>Looking towards the source of the voice, you see another version of you standing with a sword drawn on a platform made of light.
>Suddenly, you start feeling the pull of gravity from somewhere as your feet touch a solid surface.
>"You've been a thorn in my side ever since we became a witcher." the other you states. "Actually, no even before that."
"This is my body. You're just a perverted manifestation brought about by magic given control."
>Your counterpart sneers, "Or maybe... just maybe, you're talking about yourself?"
>She begins pacing around, holding the sword in her hand over her shoulder.
>Her skin tints to a dark shade of red and her hair color inverts itself.
>That's... that's you during the Fall Formal, after you put on the Element of Magic.
>"After all, you only became the "goody two-shoes" Sunset Shimmer when Princess Twilight and her little group used their light show on you."
>...
>"Don't lie to me and say the thought hasn't occurred to you." she says pointing to her forehead. "We share a mind."
"I know you're just trying to unnerve me. The old me would never have followed someone else. She wanted power."
>"Oh but I still want that, I just realized there are other ways to get it."
>You move to object, but she interrupts you.
>"And I'll still get power if I follow Master Sombra. Maybe not as much as I want, but I'll get as much as I need."
"You'll just get bored being under his thumb though."
>"Maybe. But if it helps, he isn't that bad to look at."
>She licks her lips, causing you to wretch.

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>>29659595
"Whatever the case, whatever your reasons, I'm not letting you keep control over my body anymore."
>"As if I'd let that happen. I still have a lot to do and a lot to catch up on."
>Not if you can help it.
>Brandishing the longsword in hand, the other Sunset flourishes the weapon.
>"Besides, how in the hell are you going to stand up to me?" you hear her whisper right next to your ear.
>Instinctively, you jump away as she stands there laughing to herself.
>"Just give it up. I'm the real you."
"Never!"
>You reach behind your back for your weapon only to instead grab air.
>Looking over your shoulder, you see an empty sheath attached to your back.
"Oh come on!"
>"Looking for this?"
>Turning back, the other Sunset Shimmer is twirling around a second longsword identical to the first.
>You grit your teeth.
>Thinking quickly though, you pull out the hunting knife attached to a sheath in your boot.
>Better than nothing you suppose.
>Letting off an evil grin, your other self charges at you with both blades drawn.
>Avoiding the first slash, you almost lose your head to the second sword coming from the opposite direction.
>Rolling to the side, you thrust your arm out with the knife in your grip...
>Only to see it getting knocked out of your hands and into the void.
>You hear your own laugh echoing.
>Kicking "yourself" in the side, the other you stops laughing and glares.
>"Lucky hit."
"Luck has nothing to do with it." you reply.
>Flipping one of the blades in her hand into a reverse grip, your opponent closes the distance between you two.
>You really hope that the training Anon gave you holds up...
>Though you doubt any intention of that involved fighting *yourself* in the center of your mind.
>Narrowly ducking under a sweep from one of her blades, you feel a sharp sting across your cheek.
>Dammit!

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>>29659602
>This isn't working.
>"You can't keep this up forever."
>She- you're... right... you can only fight like this for so long.
>All you're doing is avoiding attacks and maybe getting one blow in between.
>Casting Aard, the other you braces herself only to look on in shock as you follow up with an Igni.
>She avoids the fire by rolling to the side only to see you running at her.
>Growling, she charges again.
>Instead of trying to fight her head on though, you dive to avoid her thrust, tapping the invisible floor beneath her.
>Purple sigils manifest around her when she realizes what you've done.
>Her movements slow down to a crawl as the first thing she tries to do is retaliate before the sign can take full effect.
>"GRAHHH!"
>Quickly, you grab the closest sword and yank it out of her hands.
>Now to finish this.
>You can see the fear in the other you's face as you prepare to end the fight.
>Without warning though, the world begins rumbling.
>"What do we do? What do we do?!"
>"I... I don't know..."
>"How can you say that?! You're Anon! You know like a whole bunch of magical stuff!"
>"I told you I don't know DASH!" you shout. "I..."
>Those voices...
>Distracted, you don't realize the time on the Yrden sign running out until it's too late.
>Your other-self unleashes her rage and tries to cut you in half with her remaining weapon.
>In a flash, your own blade intercepts her's with a loud clang.
>Her eyes narrow.
>"It's our fault you know."

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>>29659606
>She's using "our" now? What is she getting at?
"What are you talking about?"
>"Anonymous. He's only hurt that bad because of us." she taunts. "Anonymous is making mistakes he would have never made before. And it's not because he was just holding back."
"Obviously, he was trying to disarm me."
>Evil Sunset chuckles, "No, that's not it. He's gotten soft. His reflexes aren't as fast anymore, neither is his battle intuition."
"You're lying."
>"I managed to get the drop on him just by using a basic feint. If this were the Anon when you first met, we would have been on the ground in a heartbeat."
"..."
>"Face it, he's become wea-
"Stop. Talking." you say pushing her sword back.
>Staggering her footing, you proceed to lay out your own series of attacks.
>Come on Sunset, keep the pressure on...
>Thin cuts begin adding up on both of your bodies the further you two continue, in addition to the headache getting worse.
>It's becoming harder to concentrate on the fight.
>As you two lock swords together, you feel a sudden fatigue overcome you.
>Because of how suddenly tired you are, you realize this isn't just because of the sword combat.
>Those signs didn't take that much out of you... did they?
>Your arms and eyelids become heavy and the ache in your head starts getting worse by the second.
>Looking at the Sunset opposite of you, she's looking no better.
>"If we keep this up, we're both going to die. Your body can't handle the stress of two minds trying to take control like this."
"..."
>"Manticore got your tongue?" she sneers again.
"I'd rather suffer a brain aneurysm than let you stick around." you say, "But I don't plan on dying. Not to you."
>Evil you snorts.
"I have friends who care about me, friends who are in trouble and need *MY* help."
>Your thoughts turn to Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Anonymous, Vinyl Scratch and Octavia and Twilight.
>You feel a light sensation in your chest. Something that doesn't go unnoticed by the false image of you.

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Soundtrack be like
https://youtu.be/EDr_krEQNrU

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>>29659625
"I don't have time for this anymore."
>"Guess we finish this now."
>Taking up your stance, the other you does the same.
>Letting out a battle cry, you two run at each other.
>You have a strong feeling that you know the other you expects you to do in this next moment.
>Whether this works or not...
>Maybe it'll be for the best.
>Plunging your blade forward, you both run yourselves through with each other's sword.
>She looks down at the sword sticking through her chest.
>"What are you doing?! You could have dodged that!"
"But then we'd be going on forever with this fight of ours. I can't risk you winning."
>The other Sunset begins panicking, "You purposfully took my blade to kill me?"
>"I win so long as you don't. But are you ready to die with me?"
>The other you grits her sharp teeth before smirking.
>"Fine. You win this time." she says, "But I'll always be a part of you at this rate."
"I'm think I'm fine with that."
>Your other self vanishes in a flash of light when everything turns pitch black.

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>>29659665
>The pain in your body cause you to snap your eyes open.
>You groan in pain as you rub your aching head.
"Oh man... what happened to me?"
>"Sunset? Is that you?" Rainbow Dash asks.
"Dash? I... I think so?"
>"Awesome." you hear before being enveloped by a hug.
>Looking to your right, you see a bloody and bruised Anon looking at you with an expression of pure relief.
"Anon..."
>"Sunset."
"I'm so-"
>He shakes his head, "Don't worry about it. Just glad you're okay."
>"What about the... other you?"
"..."
>"Sunset?"
"I don't think she'll be a problem for now."
>Anon stands, and offers a hand.
>"That's good to hear."
>You notice a giant hole in the wall as you get onto your feet.
"Did we...?"
>"No. That came from the room Sombra and Grogar went in."
"Then that means..."
>"Twilight." Anon finishes.
>Rainbow, the ever impatient one, runs towards the hole.
>"Well what are we waiting for? Come on!"
>Anonymous looks at you, "I need to talk to you. We'll discuss it on the way."
>You nod your head and pick up your sword before the two of you follow Rainbow Dash.
---

There, now the update that was supposed to be uploaded all at once is finally done.
Sorry about that everyone.

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>>29659668
And she's back boys!!

>>29659668
Now that was an update and we've got one of the problems resolved, now there's freeing Twilight and stopping Sombra and that's it. I sense maybe we'll get an epilogue but this ride is coming to a close and I've enjoyed pretty much every minute of it.
It also feels like you're back on form and then some, I hope you can keep this up without burning yourself out.

>>29660809

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>>29659560
Sorry, she was base on that one picture I found online

page 9 bump

>>29659984
With hisstory ending soon it'll put a bit more pressure on the other writefags to keep the thread afloat. I have enjoyed the ride though

>>29662268

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Really makes you think.

>>29664447
Its cant be Friday soon enough?

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Bumping from 8.

Update tomorrow.

>>29665016
Based.

bamp

This thread/general is still alive?
Gee, I remember it from months ago.
Really shows how dead the board is

>>29659665
>"Fine. You win this time." she says, "But I'll always be a part of you at this rate."
"I'm think I'm fine with that."
>Your other self vanishes in a flash of light when everything turns pitch black.

What fuck is this FF7 Advent Children shit

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>>29659595
>>29659665
>"Maybe. But if it helps, he isn't that bad to look at."
>She licks her lips, causing you to wretch.
>"Fine. You win this time." she says, >"But I'll always be a part of you at this rate."

You know what that means? Side stories of evil Sunset dreaming having her way with Sombra and Sunset secretly enjoying those dreams

Based axii

>>29667052
It also means the majority of Nayaa's drawings could be considered canon.

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>>29667076
Axii found a way and i love it

>>29667052
>>29667229

Best girl there m8...

Hey guys I made a stupid thing. Hope you enjoy it.

"Hey girls, you ever wonder why Anon is always alone?"
>Your eyes turn away from the table where he is sitting
>The six girls around you look at each other confusedly before one responds
>"I don't mean to be rude dear, but...Anon?"
>Your eyebrows come together
"Anon! You know that kinda cute guy who always sits by himself?"
>Pinkie pulls a notebook out of thin air and starts leafing through it
>After a few seconds her eyes flick up to yours
>"Sorry Twi, but there is no Anon at the school that I know of. Is he new? SHOULD I THROW HIM A "WELCOME TO OUR SCHOOL PARTY"?"
>You stare back at them all blankly
"Girls! He is at the table right over there!"
>You turn and point to the table where he is currently sitting and reading a book
>They all turn and look at the table
>"Ohh! That Anon. Strange enough I don't seem to remember seeing anyone talk ta him before"
>AJ finally seems to recognize him
>"Huh. I remember seeing him around...but that's it. Though he is kinda dorky Twi. Seems like a good match for you!"
>You roll your eyes at Rainbow Dash who turned back to shoot you a smirk
>"But. But! BUT! How can I not have any notes on him! OHMYGOSH! I dont know when his birthday is, or when his first day was, or IF HE EVEN LIKES PARTI-"
"PINKIE!"
>She shuts up as all the girls turn back to you
"That isnt important right now. What's important is why is he always alone?"
>"Why is who always alone?"
>You look over at Fluttershy who seems to be confused
"Anon!"

>>29667616
>"Who is Anon?"
>You turn back to AJ and give her your best "WHAT THE FUCK" look
"Anon! We were just having a conversation about him."
>Pinkie stops leafing through her notebook again
>"I dont know any Anons Twi. Is he a new student?"
>You stand up about to shout when you see the mixtures of shock and confusion on their faces
>Something weird is going on here
"I am going to get to the bottom of this."
>You swiftly stride over to Anon's table and stand next to him
>As you sit down you swear you hear a voice say "OH! That Anon!"
>You shake your head and look at the boy in front of you
>He is tall. Even while sitting he is almost as tall as you
>His hair is short cropped and dark
>His face is cute but-
>You stop yourself before you think the word forgettable
>His hands cover the title of the book he is reading
>All you can see is the author "René Descartes"
>"Hello Twilight."
>You nearly jump when he says your name
"Hello. Umm you're Anon right?"
>He nods and with out looking away from his book he motions to the chair next to him
>"Have a seat if you want."
>You watch his eyes scan the book in front of him for a second before turning back to look at the girls
>They all seemed to have went back to eating lunch without even glancing this way
>"Don't worry about them. Its normal."
>You turn back and sit down on the offered chair
"How that that be normal? They don't even remember your here."
>He shrugs

>>29667624
>"It isn't new to me. No one remembers me for long."
>You are starting to feel frustrated by how little sense this makes
"I remember you!"
>He looks up into your eyes for the first time
>It seems to hold you in place as its almost like he is staring into your very being
>"You remember a little."
>He turns the page on his book
>"For now"
>This is insane how could you forget this? Is there some sort of magic or something going on here?
>Why is he being so nonchalant about this
"Why?"
>He seems to mull this over for a bit
>"Why is a very deep question Twi. Why is what drives the pursuit of all knowledge."
>You frown at him
>When he looks up at you again you see the briefest glimpse of a smile on his face
>"Ahh why dont people remember me? Good question. I will get back to you when I have an answer, but by then however you wont remember the question."
"I am not going to forget this!"
>You almost shout the response
>He closes his book
>"You already have Twi."
"What?"
>He sighs and runs his hand through his short hair before he answers
>"Six."
"SIX DOESNT TELL ME ANYTHING!"
>He looks over at you again with what seems like a pained expression
>"This is the sixth time this month we have had this conversation."

>>29667632
>N-no that's impossible!
>How could...you forgot
>"It goes about the same every time. You trying to figure out why I am alone. None of them remember and so you get frustrated and come to me, but I cant give you any answers. I don't know myself. Every time you vow to remember, vow to help me, and even vow to save me from whatever is causing it."
>He puts his hand on yours
>"Every time you forget. As soon as you stop thinking about me you forget. Though for some reason it takes you longer to forget than most."
>You dont know what to say
>The idea that you keep repeating the same actions but forgetting
>It's kind of terrifying
>Not nearly as terrifying as the idea of living in a world that doesn't remember you
"How can you live like this?"
>He shrugs
>"Its not that bad. My name is in the records and teachers remember me as they read my name and grade my work so I can at least go to school. My family keeps the fridge stocked so I can feed myself even when they don't remember me. The hardest parts are crossing the streets and...it is pretty lonely."
>He smiles again
>"Though I do have our little conversations to look forward to."
>You stare at him with a mixture of shock and pity
>You wrap your hand around his
"I wont forget you this time. I WILL help you! No one deserves to live like this. Anon I will save you from this"
>He smiles and squeezes your hand gently
>"If anyone can it will be you Twi. I know you will try your hardest."
>Gently he pulls away from you and picks up his book.

>>29667641
>He stands and starts walking to the cafeteria exit
"Hey wai-"
*BRNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNG*
>The bell rings marking the end of lunch
>You let out a small shriek as the sound catches you off guard
>Looking around you realize you are sitting at a table by yourself
"Huh...that's weird. I thought I was with the girls."
>You go and grab your things before heading to the exit
>On the way out you pass a tall guy holding a book
>You briefly remember his name as you walk by
>Anon. He seems like he is kind of lonely
>Maybe you will talk to the girls about him at tomorrow. He could definitely use a friend.

Hope you like thing. Have a nice day friends

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>>29667647
Damn

>>29667647
Well done, good sir!

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>>29667647
I fucking hate you. Why?

>>29667647
DELET THIS!

>>29667703
>>29667788
I am glad you like thing
>>29667920
>>29667926
I am sorry you dont thing. I know feels arent for everyone but I have had this story in my head for a couple of weeks and finally sat down and wrote it


Also holy fuck got my new mechanical keyboard and it is so fucking comfy to type on. Why did I wait so long to get one of these?

>>29667973
Don't take it the wrong way, I liked it. Just sucks how Anon is doomed for be forever alone.

>>29667999
Dont worry Anon. One day Twilight will save him. You just have to believe in her.

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>>29667076
We have yet to see what axii says abput this but i like the way you think, my anonymous friend

Also >>29667647
Damn son

>>29668144
Background pony?

>>29667973
>>29667647
Alright added this to my pastebin http://pastebin.com/REUCkd4i

>>29668136
>>29668144
>>29668189
Neat I had never actually heard about this I mostly hang out in Anon threads. I will definitely give this a read

>>29667052
>>29667229
>>29667076
kys

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>>29668454
There's the sunsetfag
missed ya buddy

>>29668454
Your life ends when cats domesticate

>>29667624
>"How that that be normal?
uh....

>>29667647
Hmmmm, that is an excellent story sir, is there going to be more?

>>29668479
Did...did that witch make a carlos level pun? KILL IT WITH FIRE!

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>>29667624
>Descartes

>>29668528
Something tells me that is going to be the opposite of that Adam Sandler movie where she's gonna film herself and anon spending time together to always remember him

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>>29667647
d-delet this

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>>29667647

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Lost my job so updates are going to be all over the place while looking for another one.
drug money can only get me so far unfortunately

>>29670295
Shit man, good luck.

>>29667647
Why is everyone sperging out?!

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>>29656316
>What if: Anon & Sunset's fight ended differently?

I don't regret anything.

>Clutching her head, Sunset lets out a high-pitched wail.
>She drops the knife onto the floor and rolls off of you.
>As you get up, Rainbow Dash finds an opening and kicks Sky Stinger into heavy bookcase.
>The heavy wooden furnishing collapses over him, pinning the boy to the ground.
>With the latter is out of the picture, the athletic girl uses her wings to zoom over to assist you.
>"Anon!"
>She looks in horror as Sunset Shimmer thrashes about on the hard marble floor.
>You reach into your potion bag and down a White Raffords decoction.
>That should hold you for now...
>Rainbow can only watch helplessly, "What do we do?"
"Dammit, it looks like we don't have any choice." you say.
>Immediately you rip off your shirt, revealing your well-toned body.
"We have to exorcise the fuck out of her."
>Dash goes wide-eyed at your idea...
>But that instantly changes to a sly grin as she yanks her friends shirt open to reveal her ample bosom.
>Sunset, clearly in a dazed state, opens her eyes.
>"Wha-? What's going on?" she says starting to panic.
>"Darn, I think she's coming too." Rainbow says, slightly disappointed.
>"A-Anon... Dash? W-what are you two doing?!"
"I don't buy it. We gotta make sure it's really Sunset."
>"I don't object." Rainbow replies, pulling a dildo from nowhere.
>She already has both her shirt and pants off already.
"Where did you get that?"
>"I was using it the entire time duh."
>"Guys, wait! S-stop! I'm back to nor-"
>One flex and your pants explode.
>Sunset Shimmer blushes and bites her lower lip.
>"Nice." Dash approves with a thumbs up.
>Some blood dribbles out of Sunset's nose.
>"Be gentle...?"
>Both you and Rainbow grin.

>Meanwhile behind a painting with a peephole.
>"Oh yes Anon! Exorcise me more!"
>"Dang it Grogar, stand up straight! I'm trying to watch this!


Just for fun.

>>29670693
That was funny, I like this ending.

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>>29670693
you legend

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>>29670693
Not even joking, I just jizzed my pants without even rubbing

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>>29670693
>mfw

>>29670693
KEK x 10000000

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>>29651197
B u m p from work.

>"Hey girls, you ever wonder why Anon is always alone?"
>"Ah wouldn't talk about Anon Sunset, he's a queer one."
>"I didn't know he was a homosexual!?!"
>"No Pinkie, ah meant that he's strange."
>"What is strange about him Applejack?"
>"He's always got his head in his computer, he never socialises or goes to School events. It's so sad, ah don't think that anybody has even heard his voice!"
>"Surely you've talked to him Pinkie!"
>"Nope! He's the only person in the entire school that I know absolutely nothing about!"
>"I tried to get him to join the soccer team once, but he just ignored me!"
>"He obviously is not that much of a ruffian to join a silly sport team, look at his wonderful suit!"
>"Well, he does seem to be a bit of an egghead anyway."
>"What sort of grades does he get?"
>"I dunno Twilight, it would seem like he gets good grades, but nobody has ever asked him how well he does!"
>While contemplating the situation, Sunset comes up with an idea.
>"I have an idea, to help with my friendship training, why don't I try to make friends with Anon!"
>The other girls except Twilight immediately make funny faces.
>"Sunset dear, ah I don't think that'll work."
>"Anon won't say a thing!"
>"Only if nobody tries to talk to him!"
>"Everyone has tried! It's a lost cause dear, don't even try."
>"Not with that attitude Rarity. If there's anything that I've learned from Princess Twilight, anything is possible!"
>"I've got a bad feeling about this."
>"I agree with Pinkie, if he doesn't talk to you don't try to make a scene."
>"Trust me girls, I know what I'm doing."
>Groans and sighs come from Sunset's friends, as Sunset makes her way over to you.

>>29672199
>You are just reading from your computer, when you hear Sunset talk to you.
>"Hello! Your name is Anon, right?"
>You ignore her, hopefully she gives up like the others.
>"Anyway, I was wanting to get to know you. I haven't talked to you at all before, even before I turned into a... she-demon. You don't still hate me for trying to turn you into a zombie, do you?"
>You shake your head sideways.
> Sunset smiles, ignorantly thinking that she has made the first human contact with you.
>"Ha ha ha, that's great! Well, do you have any- I mean do you want to be friends?"
>You know what she's trying to do.
>You ignore her and continue to read.
>"Hey, Anon?"
>You click your mouse a few times and learn further forward towards your screen to make it look like you're extra busy.
>"Are you even listening to me?"
>Sunset probably said that a little too loud.
>A bunch of other kids start to notice the what is happening.
>Rarity shakes her head, while Pinkie drops her face into her cream pie.
>You continue to ignore her.
>"Come on Anon! You can't live your life without talking to anyone!"
>By now everyone nearby in the cafeteria has noticed, even Granny Smith in the kitchen.
>Applejack hangs her hat over her face in shame.
>Sunset realises what she has done, and blushes.
>You try your best not to blush, but of course you fail.
>Luckily your laptop's screen is big enough for everyone not to notice, except Sunset of course.
>Sunset nervously takes another step back.
>"Look, we'll talk about this another time, okay?"
>You say nothing and continue to read from your laptop.
>Frustrated, Sunset returns back to her friends table.
>Everyone else returns to their lunch like nothing ever happened.

What do you think of my story?
Should I continue?

>>29672201
Sure, continue.

>>29672199
Oh shit, new writer. Looking forward to Nazi the shit out of your writing...and read it of course.

>>29672201
>"Well, I tried."
>"Tried? You failed! Just like everybody else!"
>"Not completely Rainbow, he actually made a form of communication!"
>The table gasps.
>"What do ya mean, he communicated with ya?"
>"He shook his head when I asked him if he still hated me for turning him into a zombie!"
>"Well why would he? He wasn't even there at the fall formal!"
>Sunset realises her mistake and face palms.
>"Damn it! Why was I so stupid!"
>"It doesn't matter anyway, like I said before, it's a lost cause. He shows no emotion whatsoever!"
>Sunset sighs. She decides not to tell them that she saw Anon blush.
>"Maybe... you are right..."
>Pinkie wipes the cream off her face.
>"Cheer up Sunset! Don't give up straight away, I sure didn't!"
>"Yeah, but you still failed in the end!"
>"Doesn't mean that you will! Remember what Princess Twilight said: 'Anything is possible with the magic of friendship!'
>Princess Twilight.
>Sunset thinks of yet another idea.
>"That's a great idea Pinkie! We can ask Twilight for help!"
>Everyone smiles.
>"It has been a while since we last talked to her, maybe she knows what to do!"
>"Well go get your diary out sugar cube!"
>Sunset pulls out her diary.
>As she writes she speaks aloud for everyone to hear.
>"Dear Princess Twilight, it sure has been a long while, hasn't it? It's been a few weeks after the incident at Camp Everfree, and it seems that I have found a friendship problem that I do not think I can solve. There is this guy called Anon, and I don't think that he has any friends at all! He reminds me a bit about me when I used to not have any friends and I suppose he will remind you of yourself. I have tried approaching him, and have failed to get a single word out of him. I hope to hear from you soon, your friend, Sunset Shimmer."

>>29672258
You need to keep the POV person in black text, otherwise you haven't made any spelling mistakes.

>>29672210
I love it when people send my work to the gas chambers.

>>29672280
The POV person is always Anon.
Whenever Anon isn't around it's third person.

>>29672308
Even when he isn't there?

>>29672313
The POV switches to third Person when Anon isn't there.
I suppose I haven't made it clear enough, I'll fix that next time.
I do not plan to make the POV a character other than Anon's.
Anon will become more involved in the story until it will be entirely his perspective until the end of the story.

>>29672258
>Meanwhile, you pack up your laptop and walk to your locker.
>You think about Sunset trying to talk to you earlier.
>You heard about how she and her friends have these magical powers from another dimension, supposedly fuelled by the 'magic of friendship'.
>You honestly thought it was a load of garbage when you first heard it.
>But you didn't even see it for yourself until, much to your infuriation, you were forced to go to Camp Everfree.
>When you saw all the weird stuff going on, you decided to learn as much as you could about these past few events.
>Luckily hardly anybody notices you, it makes it easier to observe things.
>You wonder if you should talk to Principle Celestia about your discovery, but she probably already knows about it.
>As you reach your locker, you notice that a note has been shoved inside it.
>Talk to me after school, it says.
"Shit."
>The bell indicating that lunch is over rings, but you're already lined up, ready for another exciting chemistry class.

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>>29672426
Are you still writing/updating?

Cause the first part of my update is ready but if you're still writing stuff I could totally get some sleep right now.

>>29672448
Not at the moment.
I'm creating a pastebin but I plan to write one more post before I too will get some sleep.

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>>29672453
Okay, I'll let you get that last post in and then post my stuff.

I needed to watch the first episode of the new samurai jack anyways.

>>29672469
The first episode of Samurai Jack aired? Is it on any streaming site?

>>29672426
>A minute after Sunset wrote to Twilight, a reply is received.
>"Hey girls! Twilight's already replied!"
>They start chatting amongst each other excitingly, as girls do.
>Sunset reads out the entry.
>"Dear Sunset, I'll be there soon."
>"SHE'S COMING HERE? THIS CALLS FOR A PARTY!!!"
>Pinkie jumps away from the table, moving around the cafeteria telling everyone the news.
>The noise level in the room rises as everyone starts talking about the Princess's return.
>Sunset's table starts to laugh.
>"Typical Pinkie Pie, although I suppose that I have a few new dresses to try out."
>"That's good and all Rarity, but what I'm thinking about is why my other me is coming here? Surely she should be busy enough with her Princess duties? Whenever we've had minor friendship problems in the past she's just written down advice, but now she's just wrote something very brief saying she's coming here! And such a fast reply as well!"
>"You're right Twilight, this is very unusual..."
>But before the conversation could continue, the bell rings.
>Students start to leave their tables, heading to their lockers before they would go their next class.
>"Hey Applejack, do we have Science next?"
>"Yes we do Twilight, ah'll meet ya'll there.

Pastebin is here: http://pastebin.com/qxxXNVfN

I'll be back in a few hours after some naptime, but I don't know if I'll be able to immediately.
We'll see.

>>29672489
It's on KissCarton.

I use the most normie of sites for watching my children shows.

Though in this case, the new samurai jack is on adult swim.

I actually might just head to bed, I almost fell asleep while Jack was running over giant killer robot bugs with a motorcycle that had spiked wheels. that's when you know you've made poor life choices.

>>29672513
>Almost falling asleep on the Jack
SHAME, SHAME ON YOU SIR! SLEEP WEAKLING AND COME BACK LATER!

>>29672513
We all make bad decisions.
Goodnight mate.

Fate, update you motherfucker

>>29672510
>Celestia Anon
I expect some Celly or I will cut you.

>>29673558
There will be.
In fact, She's the main love interest

>>29674473
Neat, is this the Mercer Anon story we were hoping for, and will Moonbutt(vice Moonbutt specifically) get in on the action as well?

>>29674693
A qt

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From the pastebin http://pastebin.com/L7sgqV8k

“I think we should probably play a bit of catch up, but we’re pressed for time as it is. It’s gonna have to be brief.”
>Daring clapped a hand to your shoulder as you spoke.
>”Count me in on that talk too, kid. As soon as it’s over, we’ve got to start.”
>You just nod before looking to Trixie.
“Trix, wanna order us some food or something? We’re gonna be here for a while. I’d cook myself, but kinda got my hands full.”
>”Uhh...Sure, Anonymous. Trixie shall order us some pizza then?”
“Sounds good to me.”
>”Do...do servants have any allergies?”
>You give her a blank stare.
>”Okay, what about Miss Yearling?”
>”Just order whatever, I’m not picky. Also, you can just call me Daring.”
>”Oh, well thank you Miss-...Daring.”
>”That’s more like it. Now, shall we?”
>Daring flopped herself down onto the long couch in Trixie’s living room, leaving no room for anyone else to sit.
>Starlight decided to settle into a recliner in the corner of the room.
>Leaving no place for you to sit yourself.
>”Anonymous, would you like a chair? Trixie could bring one from the kitchen.”
“No, that won’t be necessary. This won’t be long, anyways.”
>You move over to the wall opposite of Starlight and lean against it.
“Well, where to start?”
>”I’m mostly interested in just who you really are and how you managed to get Trixie involved in The War.”
“I didn’t- You know what? Maybe I should just start be reintroducing myself.”
>You sarcastically extend your hand towards her in a mock greeting.
“Hello, my name is Anonymous. I’m an out-of-association magus participating in The Holy Grail War.”
>You drop your hand when Starlight Glimmer rolls her eyes at you, but you continue.
“I dislike my own kind so much that the idea of one of them getting a wish sickened me into joining The War myself to deny them.”

>>29675941
>“I dislike my own kind so much that the idea of one of them getting a wish sickened me into joining The War myself to deny them.”
>"I masturbate to the thought of one of them falling down a flight of stairs and breaking a leg."

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>>29675941
>You were starting to feel a little heated as you carried on, describing your background and the events that led up to you and Trixie teaming up.
>Before, you had gotten along decently with Glimmer.
>While you had only met because of Trixie’s forceful intrusion to your daily life, she had this snark and slightly jaded view on life you enjoyed.
>Most of the time.
>Right now, you didn’t have time for her to give you any lip.
>And her single mindedness at blaming was going to stop, now.
“...And so, in short, I was just as clueless as you when it came to knowing Trixie was a magus until a few nights ago.”
“I didn’t make the choice to go to her when I needed help, but I don’t regret Saber’s decision.”
>Starlight had fallen silent a while ago, and settled on listening to you with a neutral expression.
>A few seconds tick away with silence, the only sound coming from the kitchen where Saber, Trixie and Caster were talking.
>Finally, Starlight spoke up.
>”So...you actually had to live with Discord? My condolences.”
>Well, that wasn’t the reaction you were expecting.
>In spite of yourself and your situation, you feel the edges of a smile begin to take form.
>”Sorry if I was a bit testy before. When I realized Trixie was lying to me, I guess I just started jumping to all sorts of conclusions.”
>Starlight crosses her arms as she scowls.
>”And Discord was no help.”
“He very rarely is.”
>“He told me about you being a magus in The War, then started going on and on about this rare picture of a frog he found last night or something.”
“You’re telling me. He used to take the little sound chips out of greeting cards and put them under our welcome rug. I thought I was going mental and hearing music whenever I came home.”
>”I left my phone at the church once. He got into it and renamed all of my music files to other songs I had on it.”

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>>29676000
>Your irritation with Starlight quickly diminished as the two of you traded a few of your Discord stories.
>You’re interrupted as you begin talking about your mismatched socks by Daring clearing her throat.
>”As much as I’d hate to interrupt my fellow veterans showing of their war wounds, we still got work to do.”
“You’re right. Starlight, if you have any more questions for now I’d direct them at Trixie or even Saber.”
>”Actually, about Saber...”
>Daring stretched her arms as she stood up.
>”I was thinking about including her in our training.”
>You quirked an eyebrow.
“Really? Why?”
>Ah ah ah, Anonymous! That’s for your master to know...and for you to find out!”
>You were getting all sort of bad vibes from her tone, but whatever it was couldn’t be that bad.
>The three of you walked into the kitchen.
>Trixie and Caster were sitting at the table, while Saber was looking through the fridge.
“Couldn’t wait for the pizza, Saber?”
>”Just looking for refreshments, master.”
>She doesn’t even turn to look at you before she finds a sports drink and lifts it from the door rack.
>You notice something else catch her eye as she does so, as she hesitates and smirks for a moment before closing the door.
>”Did you require something from me?”
“I guess we do. Daring said she wants you to sit in on our training. What for, she hasn’t told me.”
>”Understood. Where shall you be practicing?”
>”Hey kid, we’re gonna probably need a bit of room. And outside is a no go for obvious reasons.”
>Can’t be practicing magic in public, no duh.
>”You could use Trixie’s basement. The floor is clear since that is where she performed the summoning ritual.”
>”Perfect! Thanks kid, where’s the basement?”
>Trixie lists off some directions and Daring jets off, Saber following after her with a nod to you.

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>>29676031
>”Anon? Before we leave tonight, Trixie would like to speak to you...alone.”
“Yeah, sure thing Trix. Be sure to take some time with Caster and Trixie, though.”
>You give your back and left arm a stretch.
>They were still a little sore from your sleeping arrangements earlier that day, but it wasn’t anything serious.
“Consider a nap, too. You were way more behind on sleep than I was, and considering how we slept last night I can’t imagine it was that comfortable.”
>Trixie’s face began to redden as she averted her eyes from you.
>”I’ll, uh, Trixie will keep that in mind.”
>Starlight looked at Trixie.
>Then at you.
>Back to Trixie.
>”Did...did you two fuck?”
>Trixie shoot up from her chair like lightning.
>”WHAT?! No, we did no such thing!”
>Back to you.
>”Anon?”
“Nah, we just cuddled.”
>”ANONYMOUS, why would you tell her?!”
>”Really? So you two are going out then?”
>”That is OUR business, Starlight Glimmer!”
“I’m pretty sure we are, yeah.”
>”ANON STOP TALKING”
“You got it.”
>You give a quick mock salute to Trixie and Starlight, who had a devious grin.
“I’ve got magic to learn. I’ll see you two later.”
>”Just go!”
>You can’t help but laugh at Trixie’s flustered expression as you chase after Saber.
>”And master told me not to tease Miss Trixie. Such an unfair double standard.”
“You say that like I can actually stop you.”
>”Ah, but I am a dutiful servant, bound by her honor to be loyal to her master’s orders.”
>Her voice took on a dramatic, weary tone.
>”Even if such orders leave her unable to toy with the hearts of young maidens. Such is my lot in life.”
“I never said you couldn’t ‘toy with the hearts of young maidens’. Just not MY young maiden.”
>”By god, you are right! Now, which maiden should I set my sights on...?”

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>take some time with Caster and Trixie
Caster and Starlight, fuck me.

>>29676048
>Your inner chaos loving Discord began to stir as you thought.
“Saber, I would legitimately pay you money to flirt with Fluttershy.”
>Images of the meek girl with Saber doing flirty, lewd things to her made you laugh.
>You reflect on how you were terrible person as Saber began to walk down the stairway to the basement.
>”Ah, an excellent choice Anonymous. Though you may keep your money. What use does a King have for riches?”
>The question hangs in the air for a moment before the two of you even realize what she just said.
>Did she just?
“Saber...”
>”I...apologize, Anonymous. I allowed myself to become too relaxed, and was unable to catch myself before I spoke.”
>Saber doesn’t turn to talk to you as she apologizes, though you see her looking down.
>She just gave you a clue to her identity.
>She...was a king?
>How did that even make sense?
>No, you needed to not think of this as much as possible.
>Before, you didn’t want to know Saber’s true name due to mages like Chrysalis having a talent for information extraction.
>Now, Chrysalis herself was a master.
>And she already had a history of getting into your head.
“Don’t apologize for being comfortable around me, Saber.”
>”I-”
“Saber, I silently thank The Grail every day that I ended up with you as my servant. One slip of the tongue isn’t going to change that.”
>”...Thank you, Anonymous. Even so, I’ll be sure to mind myself in the future.”
>You lay a reassuring hand on her shoulder.
“Just don’t let it get in the way of our talks. I’d hate to be the cause to the death of your witty tongue.”
>Saber perked up a bit at your touch, and she turned and grinned at you.
>”Master, there is only one way to still my witty tongue...but, you seem happy with Miss Trixie so I would not recommend it.”
“That’s my servant. Now, lead on. I’ve got a life threatening technique to learn.”

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>>29676085
>It did not shock you in the slightest that Trixie had a basement.
>Almost all mages who lived among humans did, it made an ideal location to practice magic.
>A few of the richer ones used attics, as some rituals required being “closer to heaven”, but these were mages that lived in gated mansions.
>And even then, you could rarely go wrong with a basement lab set up.
>Even just the briefest of glances at the seals around the room told you Trixie’s grandfather recognized it himself.
>You particularly admired the actual sealing seals that decorated the room.
>You had similar, slightly better ones back at Discord’s place.
.>They were the ultimate “Uh oh, I just messed up the ritual and now a wraith is trying to eat my soul” protection button.
>Just activate and boom, automatic magical quarantine zone.
>You scratch a bit of the blood off of one as you enter the basement fully.
>Yearling was clearing some more space as you walked down.
>”Okay kid, first let’s get you used to what going full speed feels like. Start up your circuits, like normal.”
>You do so, mentally striking the match as your circuits thrum to life.
“Done.”
>”Kay, now for this to work you’re going to want to make your circuits visible.”
>You frown.
>You always hated making your crests visible.
>Certain spells required it, but most of your go to attack spells didn’t.
>You extend your arm out, keeping it straight before closing your eyes.
>You trace the feeling of the energy moving through your circuits and open them.
>Now decorating your arm was three magical circles, shimmering in a pale blue light.
>Two of them were around your arm, while one was floating in front of your hand.
>”Now, focus on spinning them. The sensation of spinning gets hard to discern sometimes, having a visual guide will help not mess it up.”

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>>29676114
>You coax your circuits to do as your master commands.
>Your body starts to feel warmer as the circles around your arm begin to increase in speed.
>After a moment, you see what your master was talking about.
>The rushing, warm sensation of the circuits getting faster in your body sort of peaked at a certain point, making it hard to tell if you were actually making it faster.
>However, you could still see the circles around your arm picking up in speed as you egg it on.
“Okay, I’m spinning as fast as it will go. What now?”
>”For now, just focus on the feeling. It’ll make it easier to hit full spin, though keep in mind it’ll take longer the more magic you use beforehand.”
>You don’t nod your head this time, instead you close your eyes again.
>Over the sound of the circuits reverberating in your body, you can barely hear Daring whisper something to Saber.
>What were they up to now?
>The moments pass on in silence afterwards before Daring spoke up again.
>”Okay kid, that was the easy part. Now, keep your eyes closed and open your hand to me.”
>You comply, even though you were confused.
>That was until you felt a familiar, cold metal placed in your hand.
>You opened your eyes to see Saber carefully giving you your new sword.
>Unsheathed.
>Meanwhile, Saber’s own blade sat calmly in her other hand.
>Also unsheathed.
>”Now, you mentioned when we talked earlier that you had been training with Saber...and that gave me a little idea!”
>Oh no.
>”See, I figured that when you need to use this technique, you’re probably in a bit of trouble. So, why not practice holding full spin while in combat?”
“Is...is this such a good idea?”
>”Come on, Anon! It’s safe, just don’t ACTUALLY turn them off. Just focus on keeping them going.”
>Saber smirks.
>”I shall take it easier than before, in light of your new handicap...At first.”
>You gulp.
>This is what you got for promising her a training session later.

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>>29676144
>Meanwhile, at the Canterlot gardens...
>Ugh, this place was a maze.
>Yeah, it made for good place to keep a low profile.
>And it wasn’t like you were getting lost, you had a little slip of paper with directions on it.
>But the constant turning right and left made for an obnoxiously long walk.
>Oh well, all it really meant was that the food you were carrying in a greasy brown bag would be cold by the time you finally reach the shed.
>You should still have a few hours until Sombra arrives.
>This wasn’t your main base of operations, just a convenient place to leave Shimmer and a good place for a trap.
>In the meantime, someone had to feed the prisoner.
>Okay, you didn’t NEED to feed her.
>If Anon was a no show, Sombra would kill her long before dehydration and hunger started to affect her.
>Still, you might be able to earn some points to steering Anon to your side if you actually took care of her.
>And nothing says “well taken care of” like the nearest fast food place’s dollar menu.
>...You may have grabbed a few things for yourself as well.
>They were a childhood weakness of yours, from a time where money did not come easy.
>A much darker time, one you were not keen to go back to.
>Finally, the hedge walls surrounding you peak open into a wider clearing.
>A stone fountain, a few benches and most importantly, the shed tucked into the corner.
>You grabbed the key from your jacket pocket, giving it a couple of flips between your fingers as you walked over and unlocked the door.
>”Hello again, my master.”
>Assassin greeted you as you entered.
>The room was filled with cobwebs, though you could tell hers apart from their telling shine.
>Shimmer was at the far end of the room, completely restricted by Assassin’s webs in a snug cocoon.
>Only her face was even visible, which allowed you to see that she had her eyes closed.
>However, whatever Assassin was doing was far more to your interest at the moment.

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>>29676167
>Her admittedly near-flawless and fine dress had already put her in contrast to the dull, dusty and boring cabin.
>You had similar thoughts before when you came to visit.
>But somehow, she had procured herself some archaic looking device.
>She fed her thread into the device, moving it back and forth in intense concentration.
“Is that a spinning wheel, Assassin?”
>”Indeed it is. Now that the girl has stopped crying and shouting, and I am feeling much better, I decided it was time to indulge in...an old hobby of mine.”
>You honestly had a bad habit of forgetting that these servants were people once.
>They were all just so larger than life, it felt strange imagining them doing things like hobbies.
>”Besides, this type of thread is special. And very useful.”
“I thought your webs were absolutely perfect as they were? Why tend to them with such care?”
>”My normal webs ARE perfect, but unsuited towards artistic work. I need to create more of this kind if I want to complete my tapestry.”
“Your...tapestry?”
>This was new.
>Assassin does not respond, but instead simply nudges her head at the floor behind her.
>Something was laying there you hadn’t noticed before.
>A long, colorful but tragically unfinished tapestry
>Examining what was complete, it seemed to be segmented into different sections
>The letters were Greek, you recognized them, but the pictures themselves seemed to take place in...Spain?
>It isn’t until you reach the end of the pictures, following the tale of a soldier’s rise to grace that the principle soldier takes on a form you knew.
>A form you had just became rather acquainted with.
“Assassin...this is...”
>”My noble phantasm. Once I am finished, the greatest moments of that Saber’s history will be laid bare before us, from the beginning to present.”
>Your eyes widen.
>This was huge.
“So...when it’s complete...”
>”We’ll know exactly who this Saber is, and most likely everything she is capable of.”

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>>29676179
That's all for now.
Next time, Chrysalis feeds Sunset! Also maybe a BloodborneAnon update, I don't know yet.

>>29675989
>“I dislike my own kind so much that the idea of one of them getting a wish sickened me into joining The War myself to deny them.”
>"Seriously, if they had puppies I would kick them. And I like puppies."

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>>29676179
We need more.

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>>29676085
>She...was a king?
That old Sombra is no match for the king!
Gotta draw that asap

>>29676916
Can you make one where Sunset kills Sombra like the "You killed me." scene from Zelda CD-I?

>>29676206
Okay, in Anon's defence, if a magus had a puppy, then it probably already has some unholy abomination infesting it and or its actually some malicious demon that prays on little girls.

Whenever I see that OP pic I think of this

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2dA_I8uEz5g

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>>29676785
I have tomorrow off from work, thank fucking god,so I'm hoping to write enough tomorrow to get an update for FateAnon and maybe Blood too. Priority is still on Fate, though.

>>29676961
>Can you make one where Sunset kills Sombra
Unless Axii story hints it
Yeah nah, >>29677125
son
I'll just make more sunbra

I'm working on the next part of my story.
Do you guys prefer several small updates, or a big one later this week?

Whoops
Didn't meant to quote the second post

bump before bed

>>29676048
Embarrassed Trixie is the cutest Trixie.

>>29676179
....oooooh, shit. She can get info by using arts an crafts. That is OP as shit.

>>29677680
Uh, why did you respond to this>>29677125
and what are you even trying to say here about it?

>>29677682
How big is a bunch of small updates and how big is one large updates?
>>29677690
ah, nevermind this then>>29678469

>>29651197
>Still not in the pastes
Hey! I may not be the quickest, but I'm still here.

Update coming sometime today.

>>29679410
I distinctly said at the end of the last thread to post your shit at the 500 hundred mark, if you weren't there then try and do it this time, so you can be added to the living list.

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>>29677125
... Sounds very Cthulu to me.

>>29679457
WRITE GODDAMNIT, OR TAKE OFF YOUR NAME! ALSO, GET A FUCKING UPDATE OUT BY THE END OF THE THREAD, OR YOUR ASS IS GOING TO THE GLUE FACTORY!

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>>29679493
Ok! Ok! Jeez. I have a day off tomorrow and I'm preparing to go work. Hence, expect an update tomorrow. I'm gonna try to wrap the story as fast as possible, because I have an another idea for story for this thread.

>>29679421
That's... really fucking weird. Why would anyone think this is a good system? What if I'm asleep and the thread archives? What if I'm busy IRL? This seems very inconvenient, especially for me.

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>>29674518
Yep.
You know what they say,
The moon follows the sun[/spoiler

>>29679546
>failed spoiler tag
XD

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>>29679547
>XD
Wow. What is going on, newbies?

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>>29674693
>tfw people notice subtle hints in your writing
>>29679560
>pic related

>>29679547
>XD
Obligatory >>>/reddit/

>>29679539
Either post it in the 400 to 450s then, that way it should be easy to get everyone I miss without having to take the time to go through everything. If it makes you feel any better I will be sure to throw you on this time.
>>29679515
Fine, whatever, finishing your story first is the more important part of that comment.
>>29679546
Well...its nice to know we got best the Cougars in your story, but that doesn't answer the other big part of the question. Blacklight or no Blacklight?
>>29679560
Can it.
>>29679576
Speaking of the topic of getting in the OP, try to keep up till the 400 mark and post the name you want used and your bin. You will be added next thread.

>>29679594
>taking the bait
God bless you Anon.
>>29679599
What do you mean by blacklight?
I plan to stay until the thread dies. I'll be sure to post the details before the thread does.
In case I can't my pastebin is: http://pastebin.com/edit/qxxXNVfN

>>29679617
Your bin is noted, but I wasn't asking if you planned to stay or not, just that if your here to post at the appointed time as it would be close to wrapping it up. As for the other half of the question.
>What do you mean by blacklight?
The main super power in the Prototype series.
A basic rundown of it(as in the power itself) is here
http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Disease_Mimicry

>>29672510
>Everyone is lining up for chemistry class.
>You're just standing there thinking why she wants to talk to you.
>Maybe she figured out what you discovered.
>Everyone seems to be talking a lot louder than usual.
>You overhear that the Twilight from the other dimension is coming back here.
>This could actually be a good opportunity to check out if the portal actually works.
>The teacher arrives. He yells at the class for being too loud instead of lining up quietly.
>After his rant, he lets the kids in.
>You however, lean against the wall as the other students pass by you to enter the classroom.
>The science teacher stares at you angrily, but you show him the note you got from your locker.
>However, you put your index finger over the part where it says: 'after school'.
>"All right Anon, but you better go straight to her office!"
>Yeah right, like you would waste your time going to listen to her ramble on about your problems.
>You want to observe Twilight coming through the portal.
>The teacher walks into the classroom and slams the door behind you.
>You walk in the completely opposite direction to the office, towards the entrance of school.
>Once you reach outside, you decide to hide in the bushes west of the horse statue.
>How ironic, that the portal to a land full of horses was accessed by a horse statue.
>Luckily your green skin and black suit makes it easy to hide.
>Your mum is gonna kill you when she sees the dirt you got on it.

>>29679599
Alright, that sounds a tad more useful, thank you.

>>29679629
Interesting.
I planned to not give Anon any powers. (For the sake of him not becoming the stereotypical OP OC). But maybe if the story gets too boring I could change it up a bit.

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>>29679617
>taking the bait

>>29679695
Well if you weren't going to do a Mercer Anon story and just want to have the best Cougar sisters in it then just do that. I wouldn't be opposed to it being a Blacklight victim, but if its not and its just a normal Anon then that's also fine. Also there aren't any OP OCs here, just different flavors of Anon's(not saying the Mercer Virus isn't an OP ability, it totally is) but every Anon here has gotten their shit pushed in hard at one point or another, or multiple times. So the worry of a stereotype like that is unfounded here unless your just shit at writing.

>>29679688
>Applejack and Sci Twi are in chemistry class.
>Twilight tries her best to pay attention, even though the rest of the class is still talking even after the teacher yelled at them.
>"You shouldn't be talking when I am!"
>Applejack, usually not very interested in science, is leaning back in her chair with her hat over her face.
>"Hey Applejack, isn't Anon in this class?
>Applejack leans forward, making a noise when the front chair legs hit the ground.
>"Applejack! If you learn back on your chair again I'll take it off you!"
>"Sorry sir!"
>Applejack frowns, and then responds to Twilight's question.
>"Uhh, yeah ah guess he is. Don't know why he ain't here now. Usually he's got his face in his computer."
>"Hmm, what could he be doing on that thing?"
>"Ah don't know, it's probably pretty important for him to be on it 24/7, it can't be healthy for him."
>Twilight rolls her eyes at Applejack's last comment.
>"Doesn't the teacher ask him any questions?"
>"That's the thing! No teacher has asked him anything! It's like they've been told not to talk to him at all!"
>"Maybe he has magical powers to remove people's memory?"
>They start to giggle.
>Just then, Twilight got a text message from Sunset.
>"Hey Applejack, I just got a message from Sunset, apparently she estimates that other me will be here in a few minutes!"
>"That's great! We'd better find an excuse to leave then."
>"But how do we-"
>Applejack presses her finger on Twilight's lips, then she put her hand up.
>"Hey! Uhh, sir?"
>"What is it Applejack? Haven't you interrupted the class enough already?"
>"But sir! Ah really need to go!"
>Some of the students at the back of the room snicker.
>"Applejack, I will not be humiliated in my classroom! This is your last warning!"
>"But it's that time of the month!"
>The class roars with laughter.
>The teacher's face flushes red with anger.
>"Alright, but be quick!"
>Applejack and Twilight then sneak off as the maddened teacher rages at the class

>>29679846
You forgot your name mate.

>>29679786
It sounds like a cool idea, and maybe I could use it instead of Anon's problem I originally had.. I don't consider myself to be a shit writer, but I have never read a good story where the main character was OP. (Or cringeworthy)
>>29679850
Yeah I know, my bad.

I'll post one more in a minute and that'll be it for now.

>>29679846
You misspelled lean.
>"Applejack! If you learn back on your chair again I'll take it off you!"
also, take it off you?
other than this>>29679850
you did good. Also kek at the Raggedy Redneck joke.
>>29679857
I am actually pretty curious as to what you would originally have Anon's problem as, and it is an unfortunate...fact. That the mercer virus lends itself to edgy oc stuff. But I figured if there was ever a place to get a good one it would be here.

>>29679860
Thanks for being my spell checker, I'll fix that in the paste.
Back when I was in Middle School a lot of people in my class would lean back in the chairs. For some stupid reason the teachers got really upset when they saw it. One time a friend of mine was being autistic and the teacher took his chair away. He had to stand still for an entire hour. I found it funny, so I decided to insert it into the story.
I don't want to spoil Anon's problem, as to be honest, I have a few ideas about it and I still haven't really set it in stone.
I promise that it won't be edgy, and that I'll only use something as edgy as mercer virus as a last resort.

>>29679876
Fair enough. And the Mercer Virus isn't that edgy per say, its just that the OCs I've read had them unnecessarily...chaotic/evil/stupid. The series just has psychopathically evil characters in the series, so edgy mchardedge looks okay in comparison. Just a thing that comes with the story for those that want to do a hack job by making an easy snuff stroy.

>>29679886
story*

>>29679886
I never actually finished prototype 2. Why does Mercer turn into a moustache twirling villain?

>>29679936
I believe it was explained in a comic series after the first game, gonna have to look around to find out.

>>29679846

>Twilight giggles as she and Applejack make their way down the hall.
>"Where did you learn that one Applejack?"
>"Rainbow taught me that, it works well especially when the teacher's under stress."
>Soon they are joined by Rarity and Fluttershy, leaving from their cooking class.
>"Hello dears! Oh I can barely keep my emotions to myself! I am so excited!"
>"Me too, I guess..."
>The girls laugh as they exit the building, Rainbow and Sunset are already there waiting for the long awaited return of their friend.

>Unbeknownst to them, You are hiding in the nearby bushes.
>You watch as the girls gather around the back of the statue.
>Then, a woman walks out of the portal, she doesn't look like Twilight at all.
>She falls to the ground, and you blink your eyes and lean forward to try and get a better look.
>You see a shocked expression appear on Sunset's face, before she breaks down into tears.
>The rest of her friends appear to be confused, but then she stands up, and your heart skips a beat.
>She's beautiful.
>Her clothes are that of a Greek Goddess, in fact she looks like if Aphrodite had long rainbow hair.
>Her body is a perfect hourglass.
>Oh god, what you would do to get a taste, of her peppermint creams.
>You decide to slip back away from the bush and run around to the back entrance of the school.
>After almost killing yourself, you head back to Chemistry.
>The teacher doesn't even acknowledge your existence as you open the door.
>After you sit down you open up your laptop, only for the bell to ring.
>Everyone scrambles from their desk so that they can get ready to meet their new visitor before going home.
>Unfortunately for you, you will not be going home just yet.

Time for some sleep. I'll be back later.

>>29679976
Is it just me or does this story skip and jump at places? Like one thing is happening then suddenly it shifts to something else too quickly. Plus why did Anon leave so quickly, I assumed he would have stayed a little longer.

Oh yeah, any of the anons in these stories can go OP, besides Axii since the story's pretty much done.

>>29680784
If you like axii so much then marry him, you insufferable faggot

>>29680995
It's not about Axii, his anon isn't OP since he's just a decent witcher, quite a few times he's been fucked up and had help from the mane7.
The other stories however, can have the anons go OP, we won't know though until further into the story. Try thinking about it.

>>29681081
You could have said it without mentioning axii, and the criticism would have been the same
I get that you like the green but stop being a faggot

>>29681183
Okay I apologize. Ignoring his story then, the other anons do have the potential to become OP. I don't know about Fate or Geist because I haven't read them. YFN's anon got pretty strong with that pin he had, so he could easily get OP in the future, depending on the circumstances. Celesta's anon is uncertain because it's very recent.
By the way I'm not 'that' big a fan, I merely mentioned his since it's near the end.

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>>29679976
>>Then, a woman walks out of the portal, she doesn't look like Twilight at all.
I KNEW IT

HORSE CELESTIA IS HERE

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>>29681327
MAN THE BOATS

>>29679976
WHAT A TWEEST

As a Celestia lover, I'm now very invested in where this goes.

>>29680784
It switches perspective fast I know. I don't really know how to combat that.
I was writing that last post pretty late at night, I'll probably think about rewriting the end of it.

>>29610996
>You roll around in bed, clawing at the sheets for a way out.
>Stupid... alarm clock... guahah!
>You emerge from the bedsheets wearing only your classic wool sports undies and slam your fist against the bed counter.
>Ha! That'll show it who's boss.
>Now... sleeee-BRING-BRING!
>Oh for crying out loud!
>You slam your fist against the stupid alarm clock, shaking the majority of the bed.
>"Dashie! I know today's not a school day, but that gives you no excuse to laze around in bed! Get down here and get breakfast before it gets cold!"
>Oh crud, you slept in.
>At least there's no school...
>"Dash! Right this instant or I'm pulling you out!"
>Oh no! Nope nope nope nope nope!
"Er... eh... OK OK! I'm coming!"
>You scramble out of your sheets and slide down majestically into your used pile of shirts, pants, and the like.
>Oh~haha! He forgot about laundry~!
>You dig deep into the pile, pulling out what you hope to be the oldest pair of shorts and shirt you can think of.
>Daring Do's never felt so welcoming.
>Pulling the shirt on, you burst through the door trying your best to pull your shorts up before making it to the stairs.
>Ahahaha! Success!
>You sprint down the stairs and zoom past whatever's on the TV to smell the sweet auroma of breakfast in the morning.
>Hehehehe... there's Dad...
>Three two one-!
"HEY DADDY!"
>You give your old man the biggest bearhug you can muster at near mach speed.
>Of course, he doesn't budge much, being the sheer grizzly that he is.
>"Hey Rainbo-bumbling wonderbolts! You smell like Na'an on Thanksgiving!"
"Love you too old man! Now where's lunch! Where is it! Where!"
>He balances the pan and skillet over to the counter as you fall back to the ground.
>You always loved your Dad, as tall as a statue and strong like a bull.
>He also cooks! But you'd probably expect that from a former athlete.
>You look at whatever's on the pans and nearly faint right there.
>You wouldn't mind another nap, but this is too good...

>>29681558
>"Help yourself Dashie, and for Pete's sake take a shower before you head out."
"OK Dad!"
>You scrape the pile of fried vegetables and chicken onto your plate and take a free banana from the counter before taking a seat in the living room and digging in.
>Oh jeez, he has it on the news channel!
>"Well Newspaint, it is safe to say that this amount of arson is bound to have contractors in quite the grip..."
>Cmon, where's that remote?
>"... can only be thankful of the unknown flood that went through the town today, unrelated to the amount of property damage that awaited..."
>It's gotta be here somewhere...
>"... Twenty six members of a well-known crime syndicate found dead or worse according to-zzt-GET READY FOR SOME X-TREME RACING!"
>Ahhhh yeah! Now this is your type of jam!
>You wolf down your food as ladylike as you can and realize that you've forgotten a drink to go with i-!
>You hear the glass of orange juice fall on the table as Dad goes to his couch seat in the corner to watch with you.
>You take it graciously and begin chugging furiously, belching something fierce.
"Hahahahaha! If only Applejack heard that one!"
>"I'm sure she'd be in quite the pickle my little speedster."
"Heck yeah she would!"
>You go back to your food and finish it up with a gulp that could echo through a stadium.
>With a satisfied sigh, you lean back and take it all in.
>The stadium lights... the number one athlete walking on through the silver hall... Rainbow Dash! Rainbow Dash! Rainbow Dash!
>You can imagine it now as you relax into the couch.
>"You still have that shower Missy."
>Your eyes pop open and you quickly jump off the couch.
"Right! Shower! Of course... just..."
>You run up the stairs like lightning and barge into the bathroom, starting up the waterworks before looking at yourself in the mirror.
>Bedhead with one side sticking completely up.
>Lookin' good!
>You can't help but giggle at the situation.
>That is...

>>29681567
>You plop your hand on the sides of the sink and wipe away your salty goodness.
>Cmon Rainbow! You're practically the pride of Canterlot High!
>You can't let this get to you, not even in your darkest moments.
>You pull off your rank clothing and push yourself through the hot waves of relief.
>Feel good for her!
>Do it for her!
>Quit sobbing!
>They will find her, you just have to keep a positive attitude and everything will be fine.
>They will find her... you know it...


>You hit your hips against the tree.
>A little shake, a moment of silence, and a shiny red apple comes falling down to meet your basket with open arms.
>"Nice one Sis!"
>Heheh... now if only Rainbow Dash could've seen that.
>You have her on the ropes, she's just gotta admit it to ya.
>Getting up the earliest of the bunch has it's benefits you keep telling her, but she just won't listen.
>And neither does she listen when it comes to body strength.
>A good hard worker in the field can be plenty stronger and more efficient than some hippy with a death wish for a diet.
>You empty the basket of apples into the barrel and give the basket to Applebloom.
"Alright Applebloom, that should be all the tall ones. Now I want you to take care of the rest, got it?"
>She takes the basket and nods happily.
>"Sure big sis! You can count on me!"
>Running off with glee, she swings the bucket to and fro as she approaches more apples for the harvest.
>You can't help but smile, oh it brings a tear to your eye everytime.
>She really does make you proud to be a big sister.
>You take the barrel and head towards the truck with fervor in your feet.
>A little long the way, you spot Big Mac not too far ahead.
>Carrying two barrels no less, you can always count on him.
>You set the barrel on the back of the truck, followed by Big Mac, who wipes his face in exhaustion.
"How are ya doin' big guy? Tired I reckon?"
>"Eeyup."

>>29681575
>He walks over to the driver seat and gets inside, starting up the truck before you can make it to the front as well.
>He puts on the gas and you both head out on the road.
>It should be the normal route to the market before the two of you go your separate paths.
>You can always count on Big Mac when it comes sales and the like!
>Now you just have to make your way to Sugarcube corner.
>You're positive that Pinkie will need all the support she can get for this next party, so you aren't gonna miss it even if the world exploded.
>Down the street, past avenue, left on the intersection, right into the parking lot.
>You both get out of the truck and load barrels out onto the sidewalk, being careful not to leave any unattended.
>You wipe off the sweat and look to Big Mac.
>He nods understandably.
>You smile and wave him good luck.
>Knowing Big Mac, he'll have everything situated and all that.
>Now to get to the Corner!
>You jog at a breakneck pace, making sure not to strain yourself in the process.
>You pass a few townsfolk, who turn their heads out of curiosity, but you don't mind the attention.
>Gotta get there! Gotta get there in time!
>Ah! There it is!
>You sprint straight towards Sugarcube Corner and barge through the doors, making a chime noise combined with a neat slam at the end.
>"Mrs. Ca-!?"
>Oh no... they aren't at the counter.
>You look around the area, hoping for any sign of her, but...
>No party favors, no prep, no... cupcakes...
>Wait a second, footsteps!
>You look towards the door and it slowly opens wide, revealing a...
>Oh... yikes...
>Mr. Cake certainly hasn't had the best night.
>"Sorry, but-"
"Let me take guesses. Closed today?"
>"Yep."
"Up all night?"
>"Yeah."
"Pinkie?"
>"Nnnnngh..."
>He runs his forehead out of pain and lack of sleep, clearly distraught.
>"Taking shifts. Maud arrived. Quiet since. Sleep needed. Thank you Apple."
>He nearly falls over on himself before you're able to catch him.

>>29681577
"Get some rest Sugarcube, everything will be alright."
>He starts fumbling on his words, but you shush him and lean him on the counter.
>A loud stomach churning gulp and a step further, you make your way up the stairs.
>You'd say that Pinkie has the nicest room in this place, but you can't imagine how she looks at the moment.
>You turn right and head past the stair railings towards Pinkie's room.
>Plenty of sleepovers to know where it is by now.
>You rest your ear on the door for anything of coherence.
>Nothing...
>You... really hope it isn't as bad as they say...
>You open the door and brace for impact.
"Pinkie?"


>This doesn't add up!
>You dip your cotton swab back into it's container and wipe the sweat off your face.
>No sign... no evidence... no nothing!
>You slam your fist into the table, causing it to shake a little, but not enough for anything to fall.
>You can thank Shining for letting you help with the investigation.
>Though it isn't as sophisticated as a CIA institution, your basement has the best of the best equipment for anything and everything you need for research and the like.
>And unbeknownst to your brother... you really really really like playing detective!
>But this... is leading to the most painful headache you've had since the games.
>Even with all these blood samples, testing and turning through the files he lent...
>Nothing matches! Nothing! Zip! Notta!
>How can this even be!?
>Surely at least one victim at the crime scene would be registered in the database, but it feels like none of them were even human in the first place.
>And even worse than that...
>Sunset isn't among them.
>You were hoping that at least a tiny speck would match her DNA and confirm the suspicions, but everything is coming up inconclusive.
>Which means that all you have left to hope for is this...
>You pull out a case from the shelves up above and snap it open, revealing plastic wrap and casing, keeping everything in one piece.
>Sunset's school supplies.

>>29681583
>Youve refused to touch them for the most part, hoping that you'd come across straight core evidence that she was harmed in some way or another.
>But now you'd have to rely on simple swipes and prints to get a clue as to what happened.
>.. You sigh and pick up the top of the stack, placing the paper thin journal onto the safe counter for evaluation.
>All lights off, goggles on.
>You switch on your goggles, shining black light onto the object.
>Nothing too apparent, the smudges of liquid and vibrant puddle that leads off of it tells you that she doesn't enjoy her academics very much.
>Applying the padding, you can spot several fingerprints strewn about, mostly on the left side.
>She carries her supplies with her right arm.
>Several smudges and the like as well.
>It'll be difficult to identify a foreign fingerprint, but there is a chance on the right side.
>A fewer amount and quite possibly more visible.
>You take a magnifying lens and carefully place down the sheet with dye.
>Carefully, you lift it back up and place it on a completely separate counter, away from the supplies.
>Alright, first the stray fingerprint here.
>You take the free metallic structure, spreading it out to reveal a camera at the end, aiming it directly on the fingerprint.
>A few matches, and narrowing it down through the grooves and extremities, it is indeed Sunset's fingerprint.
>Now that that is out of the way, you can narrow down the foreign matter.
>You eye everything over, down to the very core, and notice something.
>Out the corner of your eye, you can spot a single fingerprint bigger than the rest.
>Perhaps Sunset used her thumb to hold this once?
>What kind of question is that!? Of course she'd use her thumbs!
>Which can only mean that one, Sunset has small hands, and that two, this is most likely not Sunset's fingerprint.
>You focus it down under the camera and take the best picture of it that you can muster.
>Being under two other fingerprints is annoying, but not impossible.

>>29681587
>You scan the fingerprint under the scope for quite a period of time, separating arches and grooves to pinpoint something amongst the debris of tangled substances.
>After a specific search using the isolated left side of the foreign fingerprint, you... think you have your... match...
"Question mark question mark question mark? What kind of name is this!?"
>Looking further into the profile, the height and weight are... SMUDGED!?
>You don't even know how that's even possible with a pixelated display.
>And any and all information is practically scattered around the screen.
>There's even wrong symbols on here, who has the chemical symbol for water has their gender!?
>And apparently you're supposed to believe the abbreviation for milliliters is their race...
>You oh so gently let your arms fall to your sides as you let out a very feminine groan of pain and agony.
>Worthless information for a fruitless endeavor.
>You've never felt so useless in your life up until now.
>Forget it! You'll just ask Shining about this, he'll know what's wrong for sure!
>You get up from your rolling chair and run up the stairs.
>Opening the door, you look both ways before cringing at the morning lights.
>Hoping to escape, you head for the living room, but you're only met with the worst blinding imaginable.
>Ack! It's like stadium lights! Get it away!
>"Twily? Holy moly, I know you got a day off, but the least you could do is get some sleep."
>You make out the sanctuary of shadow blocking the light to be your brother.
"No time... tell... something wrong... need help."
>Wait no, don't come closer!
>"Your eyes are telling me a completely different story. Cmon, I'll tuck you in."
>You block the hideous light, preventing you from resisting Shining's assault.
"Put down... nooooooooo...."
>He carries you upstairs as you try and combat him with fists.
>But it does little to nothing.
>Ugh, you may be tired, but you will get to the bottom... of...
>Nnngh....

>>29681587
*You've
Ran out of character space, unbelievable.

>>29681596
http://pastebin.com/gVG1KJpP

For those who want to catch up and/or are confused as to what might be going on.

This is a rewrite of the end of >>29679976
>Unbeknownst to them, You are hiding in the nearby bushes.
>You watch as the girls gather around the back of the statue.
>Then, a woman walks out of the portal, she doesn't look like Twilight at all.
>She falls to the ground, and you blink your eyes and lean forward to try and get a better look.
>You see a shocked expression appear on Sunset's face, before she breaks down into tears.
>The rest of her friends appear to be confused, but then she stands up, and your heart skips a beat.
>She's beautiful.
>Her clothes are that of a Greek Goddess, in fact she looks like if Aphrodite had long rainbow hair.
>Her body is a perfect hourglass.
>Oh god, what you would do to get a taste, of her peppermint creams.
>By now you have left before they might possibly find you, but you're so mesmerised by the woman.
>You watch as she hugs Sunset.
>Maybe she knows her.
>You really want to know her.
>You think about going out and talking to them, but the thought of talking to her scares you.
>'Stop being such a fucking faggot Anon.'
>Even bullying yourself in your mind does not convince yourself to leave.
>Fucking hell, out of all the things that could be wrong with you, why did you have to be so fucking scared of talking to a girl?
>After mentally punching yourself, you think about leaving.
>However, your tent just got set up right after you saw her boobs jiggle a bit.
>You might as well dismantle it before you leave, you never leave a campsite until you've packed up your stuff.

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>>29679629
>Mercer Anon

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>>29667647
>tfw everyone forgot me irl

Bump from 9

I might be going out tonight, so update will either be at it's normal 3-5 AM timeframe due to my sleep schedule or like around 3 PM tomorrow. West coast time.

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How would you guys feel about a Nocturne/ Persona/ DDS anon?

>>29684263
>Depends on what Arcana Anon gets.

>>29684596
probably the fool since he's an idiot

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>>29684263
>Will he be a silent protagonist?
>Will it have CYOA elements so that we can chose the alignment and ending?
>Will it feature Dante from the "Devil May Cry" series? Or an Anon from another story ITT as a hidden character?
Coming from the previous Persona CYOA that came out a few years ago, I'm always up for these kinds of greens.

>>29684596
the hermit, duh
>>29684826
Yes
Yes
Maybe

>>29681484
Switching POV to the people relevant in the part, so it isn't Anon all the time since he isn't even there long enough to justify that style might help.