Rainbow Dash Thread

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Quick shout-out to Church, Rosen, mobius, Riggy and Guts (who doesn't have a Pastebin yet), you haven't been forgotten.

I love you Rainbow Dash. Pleassee marry me.

>>29581444
i want to cum inside her

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>>29581444
I'm checkin this thread's trips.

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>>29581444

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Nu bread is a go.

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>>29582114
Not Rainbow Dash
get that piece of shit out of here

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>>29583055
I'll bet she can out bench you, Anon.

>>29583055
>Not liking your waifu regardless of what she looks like.
I think you should leave, we don't want shallow fucks like you here who are pretending to like Dash and would only want her for her looks.

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>>29583354
>Pretending that a completely different character from a different franchise, with a different personality and a different back story is your waifu too
If you think that the only thing that defines your waifu is her name and any character called "Rainbow Dash" is the same, you don't give a fuck about her. You're free to stay, but at least don't pretend you like her, because it's absolutely obvious that you don't care about pony Dash.

This. It's ok to have a preference for one form over another but being all "hurt durr da humans aren't rainbow dash" is moronic and cancerous to the thread and Dashfags in general. You may as well go off to the NRDT seeing as you're almost on par with that fit how bad you're making us look.

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I don't know why, but I love the way Selenophile draws faces.

>>29581444
chromatic horse a cute

>>29583671
there's lots of detail on the eyes, and less elsewhere.

Page 10 bump for Dashie

>>29586047

>tfw your old rickety ass will never be fucked so hard by a spry Dash that she breaks your pelvic bone.

>You're jolted awake by a force being applied to your chest. Your eyes fly open and you sit up. You start coughing up the water you swallowed, coming close to losing your breakfast.
"Dash! Thank Celestia yer OK! You were barely breathin' when we pulled ya outta the water."
>Applejack says, putting her foreleg around your back to help hold you up. She must have been the one coaxing the water out. You stop upchucking pond water, wipe your muzzle and look around at your friends. Rarity and Pinkie Pie look just as relieved as Applejack that you didn't drown, but Fluttershy has tears running down her cheeks.
"Rainbow Dash, I'm so, so sorry! I-It's all my fault that you almost...!"
>She tries to get out, before sobbing.
"Fluttershy dear, it's not your fault. It's nopony's fault. Just be glad our friend Rainbow is alright."
>Rarity comforts her.
"We were all super scared that you might've drowned, Dashie! But now we're really happy that you didn't!"
>Pinkie Pie adds, still smiling her trademark smile. You would take offense to her smiling after you could have died... but you have the feeling that when she says she's happy you're safe, this is how she expresses it.
>"Thanks, guys. Really... I was just being dumb down there, that's why I--" you start, before AJ cuts you off.
"It's alraight, Rainbow. We understand. Heh, on the braight side, ya know it can't get any worse than almost drowning, huh?"
>"Yeah... you might be right about that. But uh... mind if we try this lesson again tomorrow?" you ask.
>Fluttershy backs away from the group and hides her face.
>"Fluttershy... it's OK. Like Rarity said, it's not your fault. I'll do better tomorrow, I promise. So... don't be sad..." Ugh. If anything is motivating you to do better, it's avoiding any future feelsy moments like this; you're awful at this kind of thing.
>Fluttershy stands there for a moment, then moves over and hugs you. The rest of the group "Awww"s. Geez. You're glad she cares about you, but this is embarrassing.

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>>29586474
That was a nice update. Keep it up, Writer.

>>29586666
After seeing those digits he's got no choice but to keep it up.

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>>29587554
Fug, synced bump. iloveponypussy draws some adorable (and surprisingly, completely non-sexual) Dashies.

>>29581465
Y'all haven't been forgotten either! TC will continue. I'm working on a major update since work keeps me from doing smaller, more frequent ones. I'll update ASAP. See y'all soon! (^_^)

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>>29587593
Those are great news, Rosen. I'm looking forward to it.

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>>29588760
She knows what she's doing, sucking that straw.

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PSA, we're having a RD wallpaper dump at >>29588766.

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Here's a Rainbow Dash I drew

>>29589710
I have a really HD Rainbow Dash I drew that I can't really convert into a wallpaper at the moment, but I could try to fuck around for a little bit and see what happens.

>>29581444
Why do you guys like her?

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>>29590668
REEEEE

>>29590885
She flies fast, is very ambitious, and cute.

>>29581444
Which is worst?

She has a romantic interest with Zephyr Breeze

She is force to watch Sorin have sex with Spitfire

She crashes into a tree and get impaled by a branch

No episodes of RD for the entirety of by Season 7 & 8

You have sex with her but only because she can't say no

Scootaloo cuts both RD wings off

>>29592081
Or nerdlove with Quibble Pants

>>29592126
elaborate.

the one where she has to date a green mop with the personality of a faggot

>>29592081

I'm having trouble understanding how the fifth one is a bad thing

>>29592157
Apparently in some places if you have sex and if they didn't say no it's consider rape.

Which of course I think that complete asinine.

>>29592157
She can't say no, because she doesn't want to say no. Also, she's dead.

>>29581465
Thanks! I haven't written any more OC, but a few days ago I got to thinking about one anon who mentioned that I should post the story to Fimfiction. So I started reformatting and breaking it down into chapters to post. I'm also rewriting some parts as I go along to improve the flow and continuity, so if anyone wants to check out an improved version head over there.

I haven't forgotten about the request for a quick prologue either. I'll get to that between my editing.

>>29590885
Because I have a thing for tough gals who have a soft side for those really close to them. The idea that she embodies loyalty. And because she's fast and cute and has a scratchy voice.

>>29592169

It's not rape if you like it. Even simple IWTCIRD newfags should understand this.

>>29592131
Ball pit sex. Or Daring Do LARPing that leads into sex.

>>29592261

I'm having trouble understanding how that's a bad thing.

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Reminder that SoarinDash is cute and perfect.

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>>29592570
It's cute because he's a big lug like Ed, so it makes her seem clever in comparison.

>>29592643
Soarin is voiced by the same guy as Ed, no? It sounds like him. I could Google it I guess, but fuck that.

>>29592787
He is voiced by ed.

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>>29592835
I did not want to post that in a proxy...

https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=1&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=0ahUKEwjohoeWlLfSAhVP2mMKHRToCe8QtwIIHDAA&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.youtube.com%2Fwatch%3Fv%3DBFqSXOm-d4o&usg=AFQjCNEOlVXDwjBKGxzIZUPAnsq55rEawA

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>>29592835
You think he likes being known as "the guy who did the voice of Ed"? I've seen him in interviews, he looks like a pretty chill dude. But that's like all anyone knows him from even though he's been in a ton of shit.

>The next lesson with Fluttershy went a whole lot smoother. You were able to keep your breath held, and even got your whole body under the surface a couple times. Fluttershy tried to show you the way the beavers taught her to swim... but you didn't really get it. You guess you had to be there.
>Today, Rarity has volunteered to show you some strokes. You imagine she'll be a lot easier to understand than Pinkie Pie. You and Rarity enter the pond; you decked out in the floaties she made, and her in a one piece swimming outfit with frills and sparkles. No wonder you never really hung out with Rarity before, she's pretty frou frou.
"Now pay attention, Rainbow Dash! I will first teach you how to tread water. This will keep your head up without you having to float on your back. Handy for keeping your mane dry as long as possible!"
>Rarity states. She steps out deeper in the pond. She moves her forelegs out from her chest and pushes them out and downward before bringing them back and repeating. Through the clear water, you see her hind legs slowly kicking while pushing upwards.
"Do you see? I'm pushing down with my front legs and up with my back legs. Come out and try with me!"
>You trot out until you're near Rarity, just barely touching the pond bed with your hooves. You shift your body to put your forelegs up near the surface, and start mimicking Rarity's stroke.
"Good, good, dear! Why, you might not even need my floaties after we're done today!"
>"You really think so?" you reply, looking down at them. It's true, if you got good at treading water, you wouldn't need them. This move really works!
"Of course! In fact, if you're feeling daring, we could even let you try without them now."
>"Uhh... I... think I'll keep them for now, Rarity."
"Ah ha ha, only kidding, dear. I still have a few more things to show you first!"
>The rest of the session Rarity shows you a few more strokes, even a couple showing you how to swim under the surface. You're really starting to learn a lot!

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>>29590123
Nice. Thanks for drawing stuff for the thread, man.

>>29592195
>one anon who mentioned that I should post the story to Fimfiction
That was me. I also said that I don't lurk much over there, so thanks for telling us that you decided to do it, I probably wouldn't have seen it in a long time otherwise. And, well, actually thanks for doing it, I think it was totally worth a reread, so the new format and knowing that you're rewriting some stuff are perfect "excuses" to read it again.

>>29593202
It makes me happy to think of her satisfaction when she realizes that she's actually overcoming her fear, it's really uplifting. Also, this left me thinking that I'd really like to see Rarity swimming while trying to keep her mane dry. Not to laugh at her, I think it'd be something graceful.

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cutest pone

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Is this not the most beautiful girl in the world?

https://derpibooru.org/1377709

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>>29581444
Excellent digits

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So starting tomorrow, updates might slow down on Dashie Learns to Swim. I want to write as much as I can later tonight, but I don't think I can finish.

Why am I slowing down? The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild will be at my door tomorrow. I've been waiting literal years for this game since it was announced, and I want to give it the attention it deserves. Hope y'all understand.

Bump before bed

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Too lewd?

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>>29598845
Ah, shit, I'm too tired to write anything coherent tonight. Maybe I could get some done after work tomorrow afternoon, before I start BotW. Sorry if I got anyone's hopes up.

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>>29599657
This image makes my Dash Shaft confused

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>season 7
>Rinbow Dash cuts her hair for good

How do (You) react?

>>29600066
I don't hate it. Not really sure I like it more than current look though.
also Chek'd

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>>29600039
Why, Anon?

>>29600066
i dont know, im partial to long hair. whenever i see RD with a long mane it does things to my special place

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>>29600342
How about a short tail?

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>>29600011
Hey, don't worry. Your green is much appreciated, but don't ever think that you "must" write every day. If you start thinking of it as an obligation, rather as something you do for fun, you'll stop enjoying it.

>>29600066
Probably the tail should be shorter too, to match the mane, kinda like pic related. But I like it anyway, she looks cute. I don't think she can look non-cute desu, even her messy mane in ELTSD was cute.

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>>29587593
Missed your post, looking forward to it!

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I colored an old sketch drawn by (the artist known as) Rainbow.

I also colored a drawing by Thy. The original monochrome version has been posted here a few times, I know for sure that Church used it, and I think it wasn't deleted. But the colored version looks a bit riskier and I'm a pussy, so I posted it in
>>>/trash/7983651
(as usual, both pics are on Derpibooru too)

First time ever posting green, hopefully it doesn't end up being too fucked up, criticism is much appreciated and wanted, here goes nothin!

>7 hours...
>8 hours...
>9 hours...

>feels like this damn patrol wont fucking end. Cant wait to get back to the FOB, smok a Cig, and bullshit with your buddies in 2nd platoon.

>You hear a beep, it was the radio. You were fortunate enough to able to overhear the CO getting orders from the FOB, apparently a small compound
of what sounded like a weapons testing warehouse was discovered via satellite close to your patrol zone.

>And your patrol is lucky enough to have been tasked to find and clear it out for any possible foreign weapons or documents. Fucking jihadists....
probably just a drug manufacturing plant.

>The CO takes his radio and rogers up with all the vehicles, "Viper actual, all patrol vics..."

>All vehicles roger up. 6 in total, 6 HUMVs, damn things were so old and decrepit. Rusted and used up from when the war was in full swing.

>"We got orders from higher to raid a compound not too far from here, we were the closest patrol so were fortunate enough to break the monotony a bit!"

>Some of the other vehicles team leaders give an audible grunt or "Rah" as accustomed to the Maine Corps.

>"Cpl Anon!"

>The CO's sudden mention of your name catches u a bit off guard, hard to stay awake when its this hot and you've been riding to the sound of the nothing but the road for so long.

"Yessir?!"

>"Get everyone ready, well arrive at the rally point in approximately 20 mics."

"Yessir!, Hey you heard him boys, time to get tactical and fuck shit up!"

>You signal the other trucks form the gunner's turret, telling them to get ready while the Lt. lets the others know the ETA through the radio.

>The marines in the truck all start getting ready and waking themselves up, checking thier weapons and their gear, looking each other over makeing sure they have all their shit ready to go.

>You do the same, rifle, k-bar, 6 fully loaded magazines, flak and kevlar, all ready to go. The 20 minutes fly by as your patrol stops.

>Fire teams from each vehicle dismounts and forms up.

>"Team Leaders take one last look at your guys, make sure were good to move, Higher say there wasnt any recent activity here but always expect a fight."
>"rah!"
>"Gonna fuck shit up!"
>"Get some!"

>You were getting yourself pumped as was everyone else, when in reality, your could tell everyone was nervous as shit, other then training you had never really done anything like this before,
the war was pretty much over in this part of the nation, and patrols had become so mundane that you actually timed when you could fall asleep and when to stay awake.

>"Team 1 your gonna move in on side bravo, team 2 side alpha..."

>The CO was assigning positions and points of entry, you had clear view of the compound form where you were in the brush just a few hundred meters from it.

>You could feel the seriousness and uncertainty in his voice, he was just as nervous as all of you though he was doing his best not to show it.

>Lt. White, best damn Platoon commander you ever had. Though this would be a real test for all of you.

>You begin moving towards your objective, the entire compound seemed.....dead.

>"This is bullshit, why the hell are we here, probably just some goat fuckers moving through the area and command wants to shit its pants..."

"Shut it Lopez, maybe if we /do/ get contact you will have a shiny Combat action ribbon to put on your dress uniform..." You say to your saw gunner in a sarcastic manner.

>"Aye Cpl..." He replied in a snarky way.

>You got into position, fourth team ready to breach the south eastern entrance to the compound, just awaiting the command to go...

>"All teams make entry, watch your asses!"

>You order your team in, clearing the halls and immediate rooms and entryway, nothing...

>The hell? this place is totally empty, not a single piece of furniture or a single soul inside.

>A good while later all teams roger up and the building was cleared.

>"Well so much for our C.A.Rs boys..." said Lopez

>"Got some news gents," Said the Lt., getting everyone's attention.

>"Theres a sub-level to this place, team 2 found the entrance on the outside western wall."

>Your hopes raise, as much as you hated the risk of being labeled a "ribbon chaser", having a C.A.R or even having a story of something other then "yeah we would patrol for hours at a time
and find nothing..." would be nice.

>The squad makes its way to the entrance, cracking jokes about what might be down there
>"i bet its ol'Osama's long lost goat fuckery room"
>"Heh, i'll bet its a whole lot of nothin!"

>"Cut the banter, were gonna make entry through this door, 4 man teams at a time, 5 sec in between each other"

>All at once you respond "yessir."

>You have no clue what could be down there, but going off the emptiness of the compound its probably a heeping load of "this is a waste of fucking time..."

>Each team makes it through the storm shelter styled doors, do they even have torna- oh right...desert....dust devils and sand storms'n shit.

>You make entry, shortly behind the third team.

>Holy hell....this place was loaded with computers and all kinds of electronics.

>But still no people, where the hell did everyone go? why would they leave all this shit?

>"No...this is no weapons facility..."

>you here Lt. White saying under his breath

"Come again sir? What is all this, if you know i mean..."

>"Well, going off by the age of these towers and computers, it was an old Soviet compound. Probably a communications facility..."

>that explains the cobwebs now that you think about it...your not the sharpest crayon in the crayon box as they say. Least you can shoot? Whatever...

>"Sir! you might wanna take a look at this!"

>you here from the very back of the basement, a large eroded and frayed tarp, covered in dust and sand was drooped over a large...thing.

>"Cpl Anon!"

>The Lt. motioned for you to take the tarp off, it comes off kicking up large amounts of sand and dust making everyone put their arms to their mouths with hacking coughs.

"Oh fuck! *cough* "thats been there for a fucken minute!" *cough* You say taking a step back.

>"yeah but just what the hell is it..." Lopez said inspecting the large round and black device, small knobs and wires protruding from its base into one of the clusters of old computers.

>"Looks like a bomb...We should get EoD out here!"

"Yeah no joke, thing looks like it can take an whole city blo-"

>The device kicks on whirring and glowing a white glow as bolts of energy shoot out from its antenna.

>"Out! get the FUCK OUT! FUCKEN MOVE!" Lt. White begins screaming, causing everyone to dead ass sprint for the exit.

>there was panic as everyone was vacating the basement, the sand on the ground causes yo to trip and fall face first into the dust littered ground, fuck that hurt.

>You turn and try to stand at the same time, the device still glowing, blots of energy still shoting in all directions.

"Son of a bitch! Son Of A Bitch! SON OF A BItCH!" You scream trying to run, just before hitting the stairs you feel a...tingly sensation hit your backside.

"Whoa, What The FU-!"

>"ANON!"

>The look of fear and panic on Lopez's face was the last thing you saw reaching for his arm when your felt it hit you.

>>
"Ughhhhh what....w-what the fuck just happened...."

>You were flat on your ass, laying a field of what felt like grass, before you can say anything else your lean over and vomit. the trauma of what happened caused your body to react with puke.

"Ugh....wonderful...fucken fuck my fucking life..."

>You pick yourself up, still gagging, "hey guys *cough* did you see all that crazy shi-....."

>You weren't at the compound anymore, your were in a forest of some kind, your hadnt a clue where the hell you were. The trees, the plant life, none of it looked familiar.

"Okay Anon, think. You were zapped by god knows what and now... now your...here. Question is, where is 'here'?"

>You inspect your gear, Rifle; check, Day pack; check, Nasty ass MREs; check, Ipod, iphone and portable Bose speaker; check. thank god it didn't get fried.

"Thank god. Phone still works, just gotta get a signa- theirs no signal...damnitall!"

>After Re-packing your gear and getting ready to move, you begin walking, where to you have no idea.

"Lets see....sun sets to the west, most cities are to the north...or something....fuck it ima just walk in the direction of the setting sun and hope for the best."

>You were still groggy from the shock, walking was a chore for the first few minutes, but your eventually snapped out of it.

"Least it isnt a hundred and twenty degrees..." you think to yourself, wherever your are, it isnt the middle east anymore.

>A few miles in, you notice an odd flying...thing, in the air.

"That a drone? no...too small...and fast. But, first living thing I've seen since i started walking, better follow it!"

>You give chase, holy shit this little bastard was quick, zipping around, no way it could be military, maybe some kind of bird? it had wings...

"*pant* *pant* Ugh...Fucken Flak..." you say as you chase the fast little bird-like animal.

"Uh-oh...Thats a big tree up ahead, does it notice-"

>you hear a thud in the distance, followed by snapping branches, now curious as to just what the hell it could be, you run to where you heard the crash.

"Whatever the hell it is, *pant* maybe it has an owner! Yeah! i could make contact with'em and see if they have a phone!" you say running toward the crash site.

>You come upon the tree where you saw the crash, must have been easily the oldest tree in this forest as it was much larger then the rest, prolly 5 feet in diameter, tall as fuck.

>Your excitement is quickly replaced with a healthy dose of "wtf" as you examine the small, blue, rainbow maned creature.

>Taking off your Kevlar and use it as a seat, you think to yourself.

"A....Horse? No, wings....A Pegasus? ...No fucken way, THEY'RE REAL!?"

>Then it hits you, maybe this thing doesn't have an owner, maybe its the only one of it's kind and you can get a big ass reward for turning it in for study!
oh the possiblities! Should probably make sure its alive first, would suck to find the only pegasis on earth for it to have died already...

>You closely inspect the tiny blue horse, not seeing and tags or markings, save for the Lightning clouds on its hind legs.

"Just what the hell....maybe it DOES have an owner, these markings cant be natural..."

>You look down to its front right leg, it was bruised and swollen, it looked broken, along with one if it's wings.

"Whatever you are, your flyin days are over little guy..."

If anyone is interested in more, just give a heads up, as i said, hopefully it isn't too fucked up in the posts.

>>29600396
I'll keep that in mind, thanks for being patient.

I'm pretty burnt out tonight as well, I've done nothing but play Zelda since it came in. But I swear that sometime tomorrow there will be a big update to the story!

You can tame wild horsies in Breath of the Wild. And you can pet their mane while you ride them and feed them apples to make them love you.

>>29605021
Sure why not, you should keep going.

>>29605021
continue

Are we really gonna see her parents in canon? Where was that announced?

>>29605021
Thanks for the feedback, will post more now.

>Contemplating what to do with this tiny blue horse, maybe you can wait for it to wake it up and follow it to it's owner? Seems like the best option.
Better then walking aimlessly through the damned woods.
>"Ungh....mmmmghhh..."
>Its waking up! Holy shit its alive! Those don't sound like horse noises though...
"Whoa easy there little fella, your alright, your alright." You say as if talking to a frightened dog.
>The creature opens its eyes and looks up towards you. Jerking itself awake and backward.
>"BWAhhhh! W-What are you!?" The Creature yells trying to sit up and cringing from the pain of its broken appendages.
>Holy shit it talks, sounds...female?
"Holy shit you can talk!?"
>"You better get away from me! You...Y-you, whatever the tartarus you are!"
>The little blue horse said taking an aggressive stance, still holding its broken hoof and folding it's broken wing to keep from hurting it anymore.
"Whoa, easy, easy im not gonna hurt you! Calm down!" You say gesturing with your hand for it to settle down.
>"Why should I believe anything you say?! I've never seen anything like /you/ in the Everfree forest before!"
>"Everfree Forest"? Never heard of it...regardless, you gotta prove to...whatever this thing is that your friendly, gonna be hard considering what your wearing and the gear you have.
"Alright just calm down, I'll explain, i was watching you fly above when you hit this huge tree, once i saw you go down i came over to see if your were alright."
>"How do i know you weren't the one who made me crash?" She said with a glare.
"And just how would i do that? I was on the ground, no way i could've made you hit anything. Listen, my name is Anonymous, i uhh....ended up here i don't know how exactly. Whats your name?" You say extending your opened palm hand to her.

>>29607097
>She looked a bit more calm now, hopefully you could get her to trust your as far as taking you to a phone.
>"My names Rainbow Dash, but instead of names maybe you could tell me just what you are? how do i know you wont just try to eat me with those sharp teeth when i don't expect it huh?"
>Is this girl serious....eat her? What in the actual fuck.
"Okay, well first of all, i don't eat horse. And second-
>"Pony!"
"What?"
>"I'm not a horse i'm a Pony! A Pegasus to be exact!"
"Uh well alright i don't....eat pony either. You okay? how are your injuries?"


>>
>Be Rainbow Dash, and that was one hell of a stunt you failed too pull off, the Wonder bolts reserves quarterly meeting was coming up and you needed some new moves to show your not slacking.
Too bad it kinda landed you here....in this situation, with this....Alien thing.
"My leg, I hurt it really bad, and my wing its-I think its broken..." you say looking at the ground in shame, Wonder bolts wouldn't like that you hurt yourself performing a new stunt,
but dammit you need to prove your worth!
>Thoughts for later...
>"Can you walk?"
"I-I think i can i just gotta HRNG!"
>You fall back onto the ground from trying to put pressure on your broken leg, you couldn't walk, what a mess to be in...
>"Hey listen," the alien said, "I'll make you a deal, I...carry you back to the nearest town, and you point me in the direction of a place i can make
a phone call."

>>29607109
>Whats a phone? Whatever it is, you've never heard of it, probably some weird alien terminology for food. Either way, you cant walk, cant fly, your wings hurt too badly,
and you need your legs for balance in flight.
"I-I still don't trust you, how could I?" You say, backing away from the Alien.
>He scratches his head, "Well....what can i do for you too?"
>Placing your good hoof against your chin you contemplate what you can make this thing do.


>>
>Be Anonymous, and damn this girl is being difficult, even as injured as she is she wont let you help out. Smug little....pony.

>"I uhhhh...hmmmm....what could i make you do...." A grin appeared on Dash's face. "I want you to hit your head against this tree, really hard!"
>lolwut?
"Come again..." You say, now glaring at the tiny blue mare.
>"Hit your head against this tree, if i see you hurt yourself like that because i told you too, i'll trust you!" She said with a smirk.
>This bitch....
"Okay first off, What, and second, The Fuck!? Im not doing any of that garbage..."
>"Alright well, have fun being lost without that phone thing u seem to want so badly..."
>Fuck life...shes got you by the balls. Regardless of how much a headache this would cause, you needed her. Even if she needed you it wouldn't matter if she didn't trust you...
"Alright! Fine!"
>"What?" She looked surprised.
"I'll hit my head...." Not the first time you did something painful to gain someone's trust, hell it was common in the military.
>You brace your arms against the tree and lean backward, ready to pound your head into this big ass tree, it'll hurt, but worth finding a way out of here and away from this psycho.
>"WHOA! Stop i was only kidding!" Dash said causing Anon to look back. "I uh mean uhh...you don't have to do that, i'll lead you too town..."
>Thank
>God

>>29607116
>You weren't above doing stupid shit, but that was pushing it, really pushing it, you just hope if there are more of these pony things, they aren't this sadistic.
>Dash was giggling covering her mouth with her good hoof trying not to laugh, her grin quickly turning into grimace as her hoof twitch in pain.
>"Alright very funny. Now about this town you mentioned?"
>"Ponyville isn't far from here, only a few miles, C'mon! I'll sho- NGNGHH!" She says trying to stand, quickly reminding herself of her broken leg.
>She must've forgot about her injury in her enthusiasm, gonna have to carry her. Ugh, as if you didn't have enough shit to carry with your gear and only what looked to be a few hours of sunlight left.
Hopefully she doesn't weigh much...
"Alright, how you wanna do this"
>"Do /what/?..." She says in a stern voice, knowing what you were about to ask.
"You cant walk obviously, and I'm gonna assume you cant fly because you probably would've taken off the minute you saw me, so....how do you want me to carry you." You say with a hand behind your head.
>"Ughhhhhhhh....just...pick me up in your....arms or something." She said with a slight pink in her face and rolling her eyes. Clearly embarrassed.
>You shift your rifle to be slung on your back and you adjust your pack so it wont swing back to your front, and lift her up from the front of her chest and use your other arm to support her hind legs,
doing your best to mind her leg and wing. Once you have her close to your chest makeing sure shes comfortable, she looks at you and put her good hoof in your face.
>"Dont get any ideas! This is just Because i cant move on my own you know!"
"Yeah right, whatever. Which way then?" You say rolling your eyes.
>Dash looks forward and points to the south.
>"That way, about 5 miles."
"Okay, lets get this over with then."
>Dash gave an audible grunt in your arms, clearly dreading the trip, it was....cute.

Thats all i got for now, Will have more up soon i hope!

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>>29592643
A goof but not an idiot.

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>>29592570
Lesbian > Age difference

Just my personal preference.

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>>29607458
Look at that male slut, very hot.

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>>29607089
New York Toy Fair, about 2 weeks ago. There were a few comments about it in the previous thread >>29510853. I'm still mad.

>>29607758
Fuuuuck.
Just make her a goddamn orphan.

>>29607125
I like this so far!

>>29581444
What would RD's both FIM & EQG react to 4chan let alone this board?

>>29607125
>>
>You've been walking for about 30 mins. your tired, real tired, but you cant show it in front of your new acquaintance, cant look weak in front of a female...even if it is a pony Pegasus thing.
>Every couple minutes you hear a rustling in the forest around you, you brush it off as the breeze or just some squirrels getting it on, or whatever.
>About 10 more minutes go by and low and behold, there it is, a clearing and what looks to be a small village beyond it, cant be more then a mile you think.
"How bout that, were almost there-"
>You look down at Dash's face, she was passed out asleep in your arms.
"Poor thing, must've really gotten hurt." you mutter.
>With a new sense of purpose you pick up the pace being careful not to wake up the sleeping pony.
>More rustling, closer now, louder...
"Okay, just what the hell is that?"
>You turn your head to try and see if u can spot it, nothing.
"Hmph, damn trees n'shi-OOF"
>Something hit you, something big and made of wood, tackled the back of your legs as your turned your head back to the front. You fell forward dropping Dash in front of you waking her up.
>"Whats the big idea- *gasp*" She said looking behind you, holding her injured foreleg.
"What the hell, who hit me?!"
>You turn around, wolves? Made of...wood? What the hell...there eyes were glowing green, creepy as shit.
>Before you can say another word you hear Dash yelp as another one leaped from the brush to bang its head against her, forcing her to the ground hitting her head against a rock, knocking her unconscious.
>"No way you little fucker!" you say grabbing the dog thing by its hind leg and throwing it back to the rest of the group of them.

>>29609154
>You shuffle to shoulder your rifle and take 3 shot at the nearest one, hitting it twice in the head and once in the shoulder.
>one down...2...3..4... more to go, you aim for another shot and your weapon jams, fucken great.
>As if they can sense the hesitation, one of them leaps at you, you butt it with your rifle as hard as you can knocking it backwards. Tenacious bastards.
>Not having enough time to check for a malfunction yo throw your rifle off to the side and pull out your knife from your flak.
>The wolves had circled you by this time, your took a stance and looked at them, now having you circled and stalking your like prey.
"Heh, i don't have all god-damn day, LETS GO!"
>2 of them jump at you, one for your arm and another for your leg, you kick away the first but the second bites down on your arm.
"AHHHHH you mother FUCKER!" you stab it in the backside and throw it off your arm, seeing it bleeding some kind of green goop from the wound.
>You re-assume your stance, now hampered from the injury, this is gonna be a fight for your life...


>>
>It was a beautiful day in Equestria, and your were off to see Applejack about Appleblooms new bow tie for her hair.
>Be Rarity, trotting along happily to the farm.
"Yoohoo! Applejack, darling!"
>You grab AJ's attention, as a cluster of apples fall from the tree she just bucked, one of wich hit her in the head
"Oh dear, I'm terribly sorry! Your not hurt are you"
>"Heh, nah, not the first time an apple hit when ah wan't look'n, ah assume your here about Applebloom's new bow tie?"
>You pull the pristine new pink bow out of the saddle bag on your right flank with your blue aura of magic covering it.
"Have it right here darling, I would've given it to her myself but her and her friends are out and about doing Celestia knows what."
>"Hehe, yeah they sure do get around, thanks a lot Rarity! This was very kind of y-" Applejack cuts herself off when she hears a noise.
*POP* *POP *POP*

>>29609174
"...Don't suppose you know what that could have been dear?" You say, both your and AJ's ears perked up towards the sound.
>"Haven't a clue, sounds like trouble if ya ask me!"
>Applejack runs off to find the source of the strange noise.
"Applejack! come back! you don't know what that was! Ugh, shes always getting into something!" You say now running after her.
>>
>Be Anon, wolf fighter extraordinaire! Okay not really, but these bastards were hard to bring down, seems like no matter how bad you cut them up they just get back up, healed.
Well, save for the one you shot in the head. Maybe they're like zombies? Who knows, just aim for head stabs now.
"C'mon you little bastards! Ima stabstabstab the shit outta ya!" You yell gesturing with your knife.
>You were exhausted, panting and sucking in air hard, you legs were shaking and your arms were bloodied up from the bites, uniform partially shredded and your flak frayed up from their claws and teeth,
as well as blood running down your arm from a bite on your left shoulder.
>One lunges forward, you fall backward, catching it by the throat and stabbing straight up into it's head, you hear it yelp as it goes limp. Yup, head stabs it is.
"C'mon you little..." 2 more jump forward,one biting down on your foot, grabbing the heel of your boot, you manage catch the other with your free leg and kick it to the side,
leaning upward you bring the knife down into the wooden skull of the one on your foot, causing green gooey blood to spurt out.

"God! NHGNNNNNNNN!" You could see blood coming from your foot now, fucken awesome. Least theirs only 2 left.

>Wouldn't be too difficult...if you weren't ready to pass out, before you can breathe again they both come at you, one catching your arm at the bicep and the other going for the throat.

>>29609190
>It doesn't let go but its bite loosens for a second, all you need to grab it in a headlock, twisting and jerking as hard you can, listening for a snap, all you manage to do is piss it off.
No bones, right, made of wood.
>You muster up the last of your strength and throw it as hard as you can, about a good 6 feet, and leap back towards your rifle, slinging the bolt of the rifle back fiddling with the double-fed round inside
which caused it to malfunction.
>The wolf, now sinking it's teeth into your leg, biting down, blood seeping from your fresh wound, you bring the rifle up and jam the muzzle into its eye, pulling the trigger at least 5 times,
trying to make sure you don't shoot yourself in the leg.
>The bite releases as it's corpse goes limp.
"*Pant* ughnn....guh...god....*pant*...bite on that u fucken...." Too out of breathe to finish the sentence, you drop to your elbows, looking back toward your blue pony friend, still knocked out.
>You smirk as you look over her, not seeing any other injuries other then a lump on her head and her injuries form the crash.
>With a sigh of relief, you manage to whisper "good...least your okay...".
>You can hear voices, and galloping, sounded like 2 or more sets of hooves. You pick your head up to try and see, vision blurring and only seeing two globs of grey running towards you, along with
a couple of panicked voices, the last thing you hear before your vision goes black, and your head drops to the ground.

>>29609200
All for now, will have more later tonight probably, Saturday night aint got shit better to do!

>>29609200
*EDIT* Messed up when i was copy pasting, missed a line, hears the right way

"AHHHH!" You manage to get your knife into the lower jaw of the one leaping at your torso, hearing the crack and scraping of wood still biting at you, and push it upward towards what you assume is its brain, pushing it off,
and leaving the knife in its head.
"GOD! GET OFF YOU FUCKEN BASTARD!" You swing your arm as hard as you can onto the leg of the wolf biting into your arm, who thought wooden teeth could hurt so much?
>It doesn't let go but its bite loosens for a second, all you need to grab it in a headlock, twisting and jerking as hard you can, listening for a snap, all you manage to do is piss it off.
No bones, right, made of wood.
>You muster up the last of your strength and throw it as hard as you can, about a good 6 feet, and leap back towards your rifle, slinging the bolt of the rifle back fiddling with the double-fed round inside
which caused it to malfunction.
>The wolf, now sinking it's teeth into your leg, biting down, blood seeping from your fresh wound, you bring the rifle up and jam the muzzle into its eye, pulling the trigger at least 5 times,
trying to make sure you don't shoot yourself in the leg.
>The bite releases as it's corpse goes limp.
"*Pant* ughnn....guh...god....*pant*...bite on that u fucken...." Too out of breathe to finish the sentence, you drop to your elbows, looking back toward your blue pony friend, still knocked out.
>You smirk as you look over her, not seeing any other injuries other then a lump on her head and her injuries form the crash.
>With a sigh of relief, you manage to whisper "good...least your okay...".
>You can hear voices, and galloping, sounded like 2 or more sets of hooves. You pick your head up to try and see, vision blurring and only seeing two globs of grey running towards you, along with
a couple of panicked voices, the last thing you hear before your vision goes black, and your head drops to the ground.

>>29609249
the new lines causing what probably should've been green text to be regular text is my only nitpick
>You muster up the last of your strength and throw it as hard as you can, about a good 6 feet, and leap back towards your rifle, slinging the bolt of the rifle back fiddling with the double-fed round inside
which caused it to malfunction.
other than that it's been great

>>29609549
Noted, thank you

>>29609249
Nice

>>29609583
Hopefully this time the normal and green text don't mesh...

>>*BANG*-*BANG*-*BANG*-*BANG*-*BANG*

"Did you hear that? Its was louder that time! were getting close!"
>Be Rarity, struggling to keep up with Applejack as she sprints toward what you can only assume is some terrifying monster.
>"Yeah! Ah heard it alright, ah think were right up on it!"
>You both gasp as you see the sight before you, sliding to stop from your sprint, panting hard, both from the running, and the shock of 5 dead timber-wolves, as well as Rainbow Dash laying on the ground.
"Oh no! Oh Dear oh no no NO!" You say examining Dash's broken leg, "How could this have happened..." You closely examine her wounds "I-I dont see any bite marks...maybe she took them out before-"
>"Rarity! Looky here!"
>Applejack points toward another body, whether it was dead or not you couldn't quite tell.
"Wh-what in Equestria is that...thing?"
>"Ah dont know, but ah reckon we don't wanna stick around to find out, ah'll grab Dash and we can get her to the Ponyville Medical center!"
"Yes of course!" You say in agreeing with her.
>"Ughnnn ugh...jeez i need to stop hitting my head today....*gasp*"

>>29611236
"DASHIE! Oh thank goodness your okay! We were so worried!! Whathappenedtoyourlegwhathappedtoyuorwingwhywereyouontheground-"
>"Slow down! My head really hurts." Dash looks over to the strange creature, eyes going wide at the site of it lying there bloodied up, "...Anonymous! Th-the timber-wolves..."
>"Easy there darlin', we'll get ya back to the Ponyville hospital and ya can explain everythin' to us there, but for now we gotta get you some help!"
>Applejack picks up Dash onto her back.
>"W-wait! He...uh...h-he i mean the alien, err Anonymous..."
"Dash, try to save your strength!" You say sternly with concern in your eyes.
>"NO! We cant just leave him here! what if more show-up!"
>"What are you goin on about Dash?" Applejack begins walking away form the scene, bodies shrinking in the distance.
>"I'm talking about the big green alien! He uhh...helped me after i got hurt from crashing, he was carrying me back to Ponyville because i couldn't walk or fly."
"Darling are you telling us that.../thing/ helped you?"
>Dash simply nodded.
"Oh dear...well we cant...leave it here, i suppose."
You glance over to the weird monster, "Applejack, i'll carry Dash, you carry the uhh...whatever it is, i don't know if i can carry him."
>*Sigh* "Okay fine, i'll carry'em, reckon i'll grab his spear thing and other stuff too."
>"Thanks AJ..." Said Dash, "I just...wouldn't feel right knowing that he helped me and then we just-"
>"Its alright Dash, now c'mon, lets get you and your new friend here to the hospital."
>With Anon and his gear in tow, Applejack carries him on her back, with Rarity now carrying Dash on hers. Making their way towards town.


Much less then i normally been posting but the next part needs further review before i feel like i wanna post it.

>It's been about a week since you started your swimming lessons. Your friends have showed you so many things, even Pinkie Pie slowed down enough for you to learn something from her the other day. You wonder what's on the agenda for today since it seems they don't have much more to teach you.
"Mornin', Rainbow!"
>Applejack greets you, and the others wave.
>"Hey guys. So what am I learning today?" you ask.
"Actually, Rainbow Dash, we don't have anything left to show you."
>Fluttershy replies.
"Indeed, darling! You're a very fast learner and we've taught you all we know!"
>Rarity adds.
"You even followed along when I showed you the Super Cinnamon Swirl Stroke! You have no idea how long it took ME to learn that one."
>Pinkie says.
>"Really? So... does that mean I'm done?!" you ask, a hopeful smile on your face.
"Not quite. Ya still got one thing ta do before that."
>AJ says, before pointing her hoof at the floaties you're wearing.
"We need ta see ya do some swimmin' WITHOUT those."
>"Uh... Uh..." you stammer. You start to remember the day you nearly drowned. You were WEARING the floaties then... if it happens again now...
>Applejack walks over and puts her hoof on your cheek, making you look right at her.
"Hey. Don't worry. If anythin' happens, all of us will be here for ya."
>AJ smiles. You look over at the others and they smile too. This is gonna be horrifying for you. But... knowing that your friends will be around to save you makes it a little less horrifying.

>...Just a little, though.

>>29607555
Kind of like saying shit > vomit. Not much of a difference.

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>>29611253
I'm interested, I'd like to read more of this.

>>29611533
Nice, looking forward to her first unaided swim.

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>>29611253
continue

>>29611253
>>
>Be Anonymous, Waking up in a daze, not knowing where you are. You sit up slightly.
"Mmm...where in..."
>You hear a voice pierce the darkness.
>"Oh good, your finally awake."
"Mom? Mom is that you? Ugh I had the craziest dream..." Bringing your hand up to your head, rubbing your temples eyes still closed. You had an intense headache.
>Felt like someone was yanking on the tendons in the back of your eyes, as well as a steady pounding feeling in your brain.
>"There there now, you've had a traumatic experience, your safe now..."
"M-mom what are you talking about, safe from what?"
>You don't remember the last 24 hours, that you were awake at least, last thing you think you can remember was being at home on leave, before deploying.
>"You don't remember?" The voice said, "Must be a side effect..."
>Okay, what? You begin snapping out of your daze.
"Mom, what the hell are you talking about? Side effects from what?" You say slowly rising from the bed. You feel a scratchy fabric on your arm, are these....bandages?
>"I'll explain, here, let me get the window."
>The curtain slowly opens, causing you too squint from the sudden daylight.
>This wasn't home...this wasn't your room back home....this wasn't even Afghanistan...
"What the fuck..." You whisper, "W-where the hell am I?!"
>You start to feel panic setting in, breathing getting harder, eyes going wide, beginning to shake. A pair of white hooves come up to your chest and gently push you back into bed.

>>29614431
>"Relax now, don't want you doing anything too hasty, especially considering the condition you were brought to us in,
I'm nurse Redheart, your at the Ponyville medical center, luckily we were able to find a medical magic spell that was suited to your...constitution."
>It all started coming back in waves, the patrol, the compound, getting zapped, Rainbow Dash....the wolves...
"God my head hurts...uhm, nurse." She looks over to you, having been adjusting the devices monitoring your vitals, they weren't even plugged in to anything, the fuck? Whatever, questions for later...
"Was i brought in with anyone...else?" You say nervously, secretly hoping she was okay, you didn't know why but you felt obliged to make sure she was safe.
>"Yes! Young Rainbow Dash, poor thing had an injured fore hoof and a fractured wing bone, as well as a concussion. Luckily our medical magic heals such things in a few days worth of recovery."
>A /few/ days? no fucken way, whatever this "medical magic" was, it was pretty efficient.
"Thats good..." You say with a hand rubbing your forehead.
>"I'll come back later to check on you, in the mean time, please get some rest."
>She left the room, letting silence set in once again. Leaving you to figure out what the hell you were gonna do, how do you get home? How do you make contact with your command? Is this even your fucking world anymore?
>You notice a wall locker of sorts directly ahead of you at the end of the room, your gear, all there, rifle in all.
>"Really?" You think to yourself, either these "ponies" are really trusting, or they have no idea what a gun even is. Come to think of it, Dash called it a "weird looking spear" while you were walking,
before she fell asleep anyway...

>>29614449
>An hour passed, still thinking a million thoughts a minute, a good sign you think. Least your headache was going away, somewhat.
>"I think ima try to walk..." You lift up the sheets and swing your legs outward, noticing the bloody bandages on your legs and foot. You had gotten bit more then you thought.
>Unhooking the machine from your arms, you begin groggily walking towards the counter, using it for balance. Your legs are still shaky, just how long were you out?
"Fuck I better not need physical therapy..." You take a few more steps, towards your gear.
>A quick self exam in the body mirror, (which only comes up to your waste) looking at all the bandages on your body. You take off the bandaging on your arm, wanting to know just how bad it could be.
>Removing the blood stained cloth from your arm, you notice the lack of any scaring, you bite wound had healed completely, not a scratch remained....how?
"What the hell...this magic stuff is really useful" You think to yourself, now removing the other bandages, curious to the status of your shoulder and leg.
>To your surprise there is a small scarring on your leg, where you had been bitten the deepest.
"Guess having /some/ scars are alright, makes for a great story at least..."
>Looking down you see your day-pack, reaching down and opening it up, you begin inventorying everything inside.
"Lets see, MREs, speaker, phone with no signal, headphones and iPod, 2 canteens, fucken half full pack of smokes."
>Everything seemed to be here, you reach into the large pocket and pull out a skivvy roll, an olive green pair of shorts and t-shirt, wrapped in 2 boot socks.
"Glad I packed one of these..." you say taking the gown off and getting dressed.

>>29614471
>The door to your room opens.
>"M-mister Anon! please get back into bed the recovery still must take effect!"
>The same nurse from before, white fur, pink mane wrapped in a bun, and a red cross on her hind legs.
"I think whatever spell you guys used, it worked, I'm feeling much better now." You say smiling at the pony and glancing at your arm and shoulder.
>The grogginess seemed to fade as you examine your tattered, bloody uniform. Oh god... this is all you have to wear? Fuck...
>The nurse looked at you inquisitively.
>"Hmmmm, maybe the spell works faster on your kind, but regardless, has your headache gone away?"
"Yeah just about, only a nuisance now." You say before drinking from your canteen.
>"Well, in that case, would you be willing to have visitors?" She said with a wide smile. "Somepony important wants too meet and thank you for saving young Dash..."
>Important? Visitors? Well, you ARE kinda an alien, you guess a lot of important peop- err ponies...would wanna meet you.
"Uhh, yeah sure, whenever they're ready i guess..." you put the bloody uniform back down and pick up your trousers, not gonna look as bad wearing it without the blouse you think, though they weren't in any better condition.
>The nurse leaves the room excitedly as you sink onto the floor back against the cabinets behind you that acted as your walking guides just moments ago.
>"Here you are your highness." You heard the nurse's voice in the hallway, along with an unfamiliar voice accompanying it.
"Your.../highness/? Oh fuck...royalty..."
>"Its okay, nurse, you can keep calling me Twilight." The purple pony said, entering the room with an entourage of multicolored ponies, one of which you recognized right away.
>This magic stuff was really no joke, Dash looked completely fine.

>>29614484
All for the time being, will have more later tonight though.

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>>29614494
waiting for more

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>>29614494
I'm liking this so far.

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>>29614494
this is some good shit
How about you get a pastebin if this will evolve into a longer story

>>29616238
This

>>29607555
Who's talking about age difference? Yeah they probably didn't attend the same class together. Age difference usually means about 10 years of difference.

>>29614494
>>
>The purple pony enters the room with the rest of her group, she must be their leader, makes sense, seeing as how she has a horn /and/ wings...
>"Greetings Mr. Anonymous, I am Twilight Sparkle, princess of friendship."
>"Princess" of friendship? what the hell kind of world is this anyway?
>You look at her not knowing what to say, sitting against the cabinet. Looking around you see that there were a total of 5 other ponies with her, each a different color.
The whole thing felt surreal.
"Uhhh...hey- or hello princess, I'm Anonymous, or I mean, you knew that already apparently..."
>"Only because of Rainbow, she told us how you were carrying her back to Ponyville-"
>She was interrupted, Rainbow quickly jumping in
>"Only because I couldn't do it myself, I probably could have..."
"You could barley stand..." You say with a laugh.
>Dash looked over to you with a glare, no doubt still embarrassed she had to be carried, whats the big deal anyway?
>"Uh well anyway" Twilight continued "I think proper introductions are in order! You already know mine and Dash's names now." She gestures towards the Orange pony wearing a cowboy hat.
>"Howdy there, names' Applejack, I'm the one who carried you here." She said taking off her hat, holding it to her chest.
"Th-thanks, you uhh, really saved my ass." You to say casually, hand behind your back.
>"Aw don't mention it! I was only doing it after Dash told us it was you who protected her from them Timber-wolves." She said with an embarrassed look.
"Right..."

>>29617048
>The pink pony jumped to the front of the group, hopping in place, damn she was too happy.
>"HI! Im Pinky Pie! but you can just call me Pinky, anyone who saves my friends is a friend in my book! which reminds me! we still have to do your 'welcome to Ponyville',
and 'thanks for saving Rainbow Dash' parties!!"
>Jumpingintensifies.
>"Its gonna be SUPER FUN! I CANT WAI-"
>"PINKY!!" They yell altogether to get the tiny pink horse to calm down.
>She was stopped mid sentence still floating in the air from all the jumping and bouncing.
>"Hehe, sorry, party planning makes me so excited!" She says sinking from the air to the ground slowly, clearly physics don't apply the same here.
"Uhhhh, thank you?" You have no clue how to respond.
>The white pony stepped forward "My name is Rarity, I was with Applejack when we found you" Her attention immediately turns to your pants. "Are those...things your wearing all you have darling?"
"Well yeah, its all I brought other then my blouse which is kinda..." You lift up the blouse, one arm completely tattered and the left shoulder was all but a mangled hole, the camouflage pattern ruined by the blood stains.
>"Oh goodness gracious this simply wont do! You must come by soon so I can make you something more presentable!"
"Your a Taylor? That'd be really great! was wondering just where I could get more clothing!"
>Your mood lightened, at least /that/ problem would get solved.
>"Its the least I could do dear, after what you went through to save our Dashie..." She says glancing over to Rainbow Dash.
>Dash looked toward the ground trying to avoid eye contact.
"Looks like theirs still one more..."
>You lean over to see a yellow pink maned pony, trying to hind behind Applejack's tail.
>"OH! Uhm...hi, my names...F-Fluttershy."
>"Shy" was right, she must be the introvert of the group.
"Hi."
>You put on a friendly smile and wave.
>"EEP!"
>She sank lower behind Applejack's tail.

>>29617073
>"Hehe, c'mon Fluttershy, aint no reason to be afraid..." Applejack says looking behind her.
"Well, now that we got that out of the way, uhm, your highness?" You look towards Twilight not really knowing whether you should stand, kneel, or stay sitting.
"Can you please tell me, where in the world I am exactly?"
>"Oh Thats right, Rainbow said you didn't know how you got here..."
>"He said he wanted to use a 'phone' or whatever that is" Dash says waving her hoof in the air.
"Heh, guess your hoof is all better huh..." you say looking over at her.
>"Huh? OH! yeah, it wasn't /that/ bad!" She says looking away with a smirk, sounding confident.
"Well next time you need a taxi you know who to call." You say raising an eyebrow.
>"Sh-shutup!" She says glaring at you.
>Heh heh, got'em coach.
>"Well anyway, its important that we get you ready to meet with princess Celestia, no doubt she'll have questions for you."
>Twilight looks over to your gear and weapon.
>"And of your...origin..."
>Celestia, she must be the highest rule of the land or at least for this country, if you were even in a country anymore...

>>29617083
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>After hashing out some of the details, Twilight tells you that you will be meeting with this "Celestia" in 3 days. From what you could gather she was pretty much god of the sun
and queen of the damn world. Or princess, guess they have neither kings nor queens.
>You gather your things and proceed to check out of the hospital. No one has said anything about your weapons. Good thing, never know when shit might hit the fan. Would suck to have your only means of defense confiscated.
>"So Anonymous, what does your kind eat? ...Is it really these, 'telephones' like dash says it is?" Twilight asks you as you and the whole group walks down the dirt path.
"No..." You glance towards Dash, giving you a 'what did i do?' face, "But speaking of which, I forgot to follow up with my question earlier, where in the actual fu- uhhh, heck am I?" Don't cuss in front of the princess,
you SUCK at first impressions and don't want to fuck this up.
>"This here town your in is called Ponyville, an' the 'world' you keep talking about is Equestria!" Applejack said waving her hooves in the air.
"Yeah alright thats fine but where on Earth is Equestria?"
>"Well theirs 'Earth Ponies' like Applejack and Pinky. But i don't know what your talking about for a /planet/ called that!" Rainbow says floating at shoulder height.
>Damn, seems you were farther from home then you could've ever expected. Could probably forget about that phone call....
>"I'll Explain as much as i can when we get to the castle, until then your hungry right?"
"Why do you keep bring up foo- *mrrrmrmrrgrmgm* oh..." You were starving, taking in the fact you had no way home and that you were an alien made you forget about your appetite. Probably been living on whatever they had
been no doubt spoon feeding you at the hospital while you were out.

>>29617093
>"Because thats been happening since we started walking!" Twilight says pointing towards your stomach. "Its okay, I'll have spike make something when we get to the castle, most places are closed now thats its gotten dark
anyway."
>Restaurants must close early, it was early in the evening still, barely just turned dark on the way out of the hospital. Come to think of it, everyone in this town seemed to check in early at night,
almost no one in the street.
>You arrive to the castle, it was a....tree? Made of crystals? This pony filled world just gets weirder and weirder. Regardless, you were hungry as hell and there was food inside. So, whatever, tree castle it is!
>"Well I suppose we should get going" Rarity says with a yawn "I must get to work on some /actual/ clothes for you dear. Goodbye Twilight, nice meeting you Anon!"
"Yep, you too Rarity."
>The other ponies follow in suite, each saying their goodbyes, save for Dash, hovering with her hooves behind her back.
>"Are you and Dash going to stay out here and talk?" Asked Twilight opening the door.
>"Uh yeah, I just got some more questions for our new big weird alien friend, thats all..." Said Dash.
>"Well OK, don't be too long, Spike can cook pretty quick you know."
>With that she walked inside letting the door close behind her, a few moments go bye before you notice Dash's nervous expression.
"So, whats up?" You ask, breaking the silence.
>"I uh, wanted to say thanks for...y'know." She floats down the ground, looking away, still not wanting to make eye contact.
"Totally saving your skin? Not that I'm trying to sound rude, but why did you wait to tell me, looks like you've been wanting to get it off your chest..."
>"Cuz its lame okay? Getting all gushy isn't cool!"
>She crossed her hooves and huffed, falling back on her haunches. Still not wanting to make eye contact.

>>29617109
"Ohhh I get it, you didn't wanna ruin your rep of 'I'm the tough one' huh. Don't lie!" You say with a big ass smirk.
>"I don't have to prove anything! I'm the fastest flyer in all of Equestria!" She places a hoof to her chest, closing her eyes, sounding as confident as she could.
>You raise your brow.
"Till trees are involved right?"
>She jumps up to face height, "The only reason I hit that tree was because I was testing a new trick, I just looked away and didn't see it, thats all!" She says forelegs crossed fluttering confidently.
>You reach up to ruffle her Mane.
"Of course you did." you say laughing.
>As insecure as she was, her crassness made it kinda fun to talk to her, easy to make jokes with.
>Hey! Whats your deal any-" You cut her off
"Dash, real talk, Initially I only wanted to get directions to a place where I can get means to get into contact with someone. Why did I risk my life to help you out, I don't know, just felt like the right thing to do.
Besides," You pick up you gear from the ground. "you would have done the same wouldn't ya?"
>You ruffle her mane again
>She grabs your hand and throws it down to your side "Of course I would have! I mean I wouldn't have just left some pony out in the Everfree. Even if they were a big dumb alien." She closes
her eyes and raises an eyebrow, putting on the confident face again.
"Well there ya go, no need to thank me, all in a days work and all that shit, just don't go tree tackling anytime soon, ok?"
>You open the door and begin walking inside.
>"Hey I'm not done with you! I heard that tree comment!"
>You could almost feel the daggers she was glaring into you from behind. But it didn't matter, you both had your moment already.
"Night Dash!" you say closing the door quickly. "Alright...food time."

>>29617125
Thats gonna be it for a couple days, probably until Wednesday, because of my work schedule, but there will be more.

>>29617133
Well this was great!
Looking forward to seeing what happens next

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>>29617125
Not enough people who tease dash in their stories. Loving it.

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Popping in to bump the thread and say I'm not dead!

>>29617133 is doing some good work while I slack off, but don't worry, I'm still brainstorming the conclusion for my story. If I can pull myself away from Zelda long enough tomorrow, I'll try to finish it up and update the paste with the whole story.

I agree with the other posters by the by, this new green deserves a paste of its own.

>>29616875

Dash is a young adult, going by Pinkie Pride she's either 20 or 25. Soarin' shares his appearance with that of middle aged ponies, literally old enough to be Dash's dad.

We're not talking about 10 years of difference in this case, more like 20.

>>29581444
Do you guys hate Newbie Dash?

>>29621627
We tend to be kind of divided on it. I myself didn't like it too much (but didn't outright hate it) but I'm not really allowed to say that without faggots saying bullshit along the lines of "lol ur just mad becuz it didn't portray your waifu as a perfect angle lmao"

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>>29621627
I wouldn't say that I hate it, but it was extremely disappointing. I said it a couple of threads ago, I like the premise of the episode, I think that turning something that hurts you into something you're proud of is something great. Compare Dash in Sonic Rainboom, when she's annoyed after the bullies call her "Crash" with Top Bolt, when it's a name she embraces. It's a development that deserves recognition. But the episode itself had a terrible realization. The tone was outright mean-spirited, and it didn't even feel like an episode from the show. They should never have given an episode like this to a newbie writer.

>>29621627

Mild dislike.
It had some good moments (some of the ones with Scootaloo, mostly), some bad moments (especially the resolution and "lesson"), and lots of forgettable ones.

Nowhere near as bad as MMDW (which is awful throughout) or 28 pranks later (which actually treats RD surprisingly fairly after the full-retard introduction. Once the "zomponies" appear she's prepared to sacrifice everything to save those few ponies left around her rather than just fly away), and of course nowhere NEAR as good as for example Testing Testing 1,2,3 or Sonic Rainboom.

bemp

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>You take off the floaties and step gingerly into the pond, taking one last look back at your friends. This is it. The moment of truth. Time to remember what they all taught you and put it to good use.
>You walk into the pond until your hooves no longer touch the bottom. You start treading water... OK, doing good so far.
>You swim above the water using the strokes you learned. Hey... this is easy! Maybe you really didn't need those floaties after all. Your friends are cheering from the shore as you start showboating a bit, getting fancy with your moves. Heh, Equestria's best flyer now Equestria's best swimmer. You like the sound of that.
"Rainbow! Let's see ya swim underwater!"
>Applejack calls out.
>You slow down a bit and tense up. OK Dash, get a grip. You can do this. And even if you can't, your friends are right over there... but no, you can do this!
>You take in a gulp of precious air and slowly lower your head and body under the surface.

>Your eyes fly open under the water. After a few seconds, you start to move forward, pushing back with your forelegs and kicking forward with your hind legs. You still have plenty of air, be chill, you tell yourself as you swim around slowly. The strokes the girls taught you definitely let you move... but boy are they slow. You wish that you could swim as fast as you could fly.
>Fly... You turn your head and look back at your wings folded against your back. You unfold them and give them a flap. The water gives a lot more resistance than the air... but in combination with your stroke, you started moving a lot faster. You smile despite your puffed up cheeks from holding your breath.
>You imagine yourself flying through the air, dipping and rolling through the clouds. As you compare swimming to flying, you realize they're a lot more similar that you thought!
>Suddenly, you move quickly through the water "flying" nearly as fast as a torpedo. The feeling of the water rushing against your fur feels tingly. You make a few laps around the pond before realizing... you need air.
>You look up to the surface and rocket upwards, exiting the water with a splash and flying up into the sky.
>Your friends are cheering wildly! Time to give 'em a real show! You dive straight down into the pond, letting gravity do most of the work. With a splash that would put the mother of all cannonballs to shame, you enter the lake again, spinning around in a spiral formation leaving a water trail behind you before jumping out of the pond again, slamming down on your hooves in front of the group. Your wet mane droops down in front of your face briefly before you reach up to fix it.
>"How'd I do?" you ask your friends with a grin.

"Wow, that sounds AMAZING! I really wish I could've been there!"
>Scootaloo shouts in excitement.
>"Yeah, it was pretty awesome. You shoulda seen the looks on those ponies faces, heh heh." you reply.
"What happened next, huh huh?!"
>Scoot asks, waiting to hear the rest of the story.
>"Well, after my display of awesome swimming ability, my friends said I was done, meaning I finally knew how to swim. Then Pinkie Pie insisted on throwing that swim party again right there!"
>You look over at a framed picture on your mantle before picking it up to show Scootaloo.
>"We took this photo before the party. See? My mane is even still wet in the picture." you point out the detail in the photo as Scoot watches with rapt attention.
>"You know, it's funny, the whole reason I started learning to swim is 'cuz of Pinkie wanting to throw that party so I could get to know all of them more. But really, I was able to hang out with them way more when I was learning from them." you say, smiling.
"Kinda like how me, Sweetie Belle and Apple Bloom are friends because of all the stuff we do together?"
>Scoot asks.
>"You got it, squirt. No matter what you're doing, it's always better with friends. You remember that, alright little buddy?"
"Right!"
>You give Scootaloo a light noogie as she giggles. You didn't expect to be telling this story today... but it was fun to revisit those memories. Sometimes you need to remind yourself just how much your friends mean to you, and hey, entertaining your little friend was a nice bonus, too. Maybe you'll invite her and her friends the next time you go out swimming!


THE END

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>>29625005
This was a really nice green. I'm not the original requester but I enjoyed it a lot. And the "epilogue" was a nice touch, too. Good work, Writer.

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>>29625666
Checking those digits

>>29625005

What a nice read, I really liked this one. Thanks!

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>>29581444
I've wondered that sometimes. Would quite enjoy an episode focusing on what she might get up to on her occasional flights.

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>>29625666
Thanks Satan!
>>29626262
And thank you as well!

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>>29627568
Hnnng.

>>29625005
That was great!
I liked the little transition to rainbow telling the story to scootaloo in the end, sweet.

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>>29620180
He's just tired, Anon.

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>>29592570
Reminder that RariDash is canon :^)

>>29628340
Got the rainbow dash thread guard admiring those sweet asses.

>>29625005
Good story, really nice seeing someone overcoming their fears like that, Liked the way then ending included scoots as well, nice touch

>>29617125
>>
>You notice immediately after entering the large hall that Twilight was behind the door.
"You weren't...listening to that were you?"
>Twilight seems caught off guard by your question, her eyes goes wide and her ears droop straight down. You swear these ponies are like dogs with thier ears.
>"Uhh..of-of course not! why would I do that! I was just...waiting thats all."
"Riiight, well anyway, you said you had like a cook or something waiting for us?"
>"Well spike isn't really a 'chef', but he does cook well, hes my personal assistant actually."
>"Spike"? What an odd name, even for a pony...
>She leads you down the main hall and towards the dining room, this place was way fucken bigger on the inside then the outside...
>As you enter the dining room Twilight begins calling for Spike.
>From the double swinging doors at the end of the room, a small, purple scaled, green eyed, dragon looking thing enters the room.
>"Hey Twilight, how did the visit go today, was he actually awake this time or wha-" He says with a ladle in hand, wearing a chef's hat.
>He looks at you, then back to Twilight.
>He shrugs, "Guess that answers that question."
>You are almost dumbstruck by what your seeing, a tiny, talking, little purple lizard thing.
>Twilight introduces the two of you.
>"Spike, this is Anonymous, the one who helped Dash, Anonymous, this is Spike, my personal assistant."
>Spike waves and says hello.

>>29628757
"Uhhhh, hey there....little...dude. Okay, dont take any offense to this, but are you like a lizard or something?"
>"Ha-ha! nahh, I'm no lizard, I'm a dragon!" He says placing his fist to his chest, proudly.
>"Yes but your still a wittle baby dwagon."
>Twilight says in a baby voice.
>"Huh huh huh, very funny..." He says eyes half open.
>Oh, ok hes a dragon...dragons are real in this world...holy shit.
>"What are you making for us Spike?" Twilight asks, looking back to the kitchen.
>"Its a pasta recipe I got from one of the cook-books in the library, should be ready in just a few minutes!" He says making his way back through the doors.
>"Well thats good, lets have a seat shall we?"
>You were still absorbing the fact that a little baby dragon was cooking your dinner. This world was gonna take some getting used to, kinda bad ass though, when you think about it...
>You pull out a chair, to your surprise they aren't any different then chairs on earth, albeit a little smaller.
"So uhh been meaning to ask, how long exactly was I out?" You ask hand behind your head.
>"4 days, But thats actually normal for magic in the medical field, it works best when the patient is asleep."
>Must be how you healed so well, being asleep.
>You make idle conversation with Twilight trying to pass the time until the food was ready.

>>29628769
>>
>The next day.
>The sun illuminates the room, waking you up in the process. You sit up in the rather large and nice bed you slept in.
>Twilight was kind enough to allow you to stay here in the castle for "as long as you like" in her own words. The room was nicely laid out, bed set-up towards the middle of the back wall,
with a small shelf sitting next to the bed, windows up higher then you can reach, and some kind of marble flooring. Even had it's own restroom.
>Overall the room must've been at least twice the size of a typical dorm room or barracks room.
>It was nice, by far the nicest place you'd ever lived in...
>With a yawn and a stretch, you make your way to the restroom, getting your morning scratch out of the way.
>You look at the shower, curtain open and ready for use, you stank. Being too tired and having ITIS from the surprisingly amazing meal Spike made for you and Twilight last night,
you skipped the shower and went straight to bed once spike showed you to the room.
"Okay...shower...how do I make you turn on."
>You look down at the shower knobs.
"Looks easy enough, which is hot and cold though? Fuck it, fortune favors the bold!" You say turning the farthest knob.
>The cold water hits you like a ton of bricks, jolting you fully awake and out of the morning half sleep feeling.
"Crap-crapcracpcrap!" You say fiddling with the knobs trying to get it warm.
>Eventually you figure it out and get the water to a soothing warm.
"Oh thank god..."
>Feels good man.

>>29628777
>After the initially unpleasant shower you get back into the only clothes you have, cringing as you put them on, getting all that sweat and nastiness back on your clean self.
>You sit on the end of the bed, thinking about the last week. Wondering whats going on back with your boys in Afghanistan, or with whats happening at home.
>You reach for your day-pack at the end of your bed, taking out your iPhone, still had 25% battery.
>You open it up, still no signal. With a sigh you unlock the screen and begin digging through pictures you had taken. Mostly memes and random ass stuff you thought was cool, along with pics of friends and a few of family.
"Maybe I'll show them these sometime..."
>You turn the phone off to save power, and put it back in your pack. You had a busy day today according to Twilight, in fact the next 3 days before meeting Celestia was going to be busy.
Classes on pony history, getting clothes from Rarity, more classes, and more classes....
>As much as your inner 3rd grader wanted to come out and say "Down with school!", you were excited about learning about the land you were in. Seemed like something from a child's fantasy to be honest.
>"Good morning Anonymous!" Twilight says as you walk into the make-shift classroom she setup in the library. Even had a chalk board and a desk.
"Morning your highness, and you can just call me Anon, for short." You weren't accustomed to hearing your full name so often, sounded kinda weird
>"No problem Anon, and you can just call me Twilight."
"Cool, so whats the first uhhh...lesson today?" you say looking at the chalk board.
>"Well, sadly the lessons are gonna have to wait, Rarity stopped by a little while ago and insisted I bring you to her boutique for measurements."
>Oh thats right, Rarity said she would make you some new threads.
>Fuck yeah, the idea of having only one pair of clothes and no money to buy any more, made you wanna hate life.

>>29628788
When i said Wednesday i really meant Tuesday night, Ha-Ha! But, anyway, here is more of it, Thank you for all the support so far, really enjoying making this story, and as far as the Pastebin goes, its in the works.

>>29628340
Reminder that all ships are shit and all shipfags need to be deported back to EQD.

>>29628807
One day early is fine in my book!
A great read

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I really like her shorts.

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>>29629087
Prrrbbt!

>>29629156
D-D-D-D-deported!

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>>29626270
To be honest, it's not my idea. When the previous thread was almost dead, I remembered that someone mentioned this some time ago, and I thought that it was an interesting topic. Instead of just posting it, I decided to save it for the next prompt. It was probably a bad idea, because the prompts are usually ignored, but at least this proves that what that Anon sad about the prompts with self-inserts were ruining the thread was an exaggeration, a thread with a pony-only prompt doesn't look any different than usual.

>>29630747
It kind of does, actually. Even if no one acknowledges the prompt itself and it never gets direct replies (as is often the case), it DOES help set the theme and direction for the thread. It affects the "mindset" of those entering the thread, and helps set up an expected behavior (which of course becomes self-perpetuating - in the most extreme example, a shitpost OP will attract shitposting, while a serious OP is more likely to spark discussion).

There's a lot less self-insert in this thread than the last, and whether you like it or not, shipping and shipping discussion has partially taken it's place. But yeah, I'd agree the anon in the previous thread was exaggerating.

>>29628788
>>
>Be Rainbow Dash, and you weren't gonna let some green alien gonna have the last word, no way!
>Relaxing on a cloud outside Twilight's castle you lye in wait, they gotta come out of there sometime, your argument wast done.
>A short while goes by and eventually Twilight exits through the front door, Anon following closely.
"Ah-hah! There they are, nows my chance!" You swoop down, stopping them in their tracks and point your hoof at Anon, "Think your gonna get the last word on me!? Think again! A still remember that tree comment!"
>"Hey whoa, take it easy I-I was only joking when I said that, c'mon..." Anon says waving his hands in front of him, clearly the element of surprise was in your favor.
"Yeah well...you smell funny!"
>Heh, beat that!
>Twilight faceppalms, while Anon smells his shirt.
>"Yeah...your not wrong." Anon says scratching his nose.
>"Dash we have a busy day today, were already behind schedule and we haven't even made it to Rarity's yet..." Twilight says looking at a clipboard hovering in front of her head, wrapped in her purple aura.
"Oh...can I come? I was getting kinda bored waiting for you guys to come out, and I don't really have anything else to do today anyway."
>"Well, sure but..." Twilight looks up towards the clouds over Ponyville "Isn't the cast supposed to be /clear/ today?"
>You look at Twilight eyes half open.
>Uh, hello? Fastest in Equestria....

>>29631785
>"Heh, right 10 seconds flat, sometimes I forget how fast Ponyville's best Weather Captain can get rid of a few clouds..."
>"Whats a 'Weather Captain'?" Anon asks, walking with the 2 of you to Rarity's.
"Oh its nothing really, it just means I'm awesome enough to control the weather for Ponyville is all."
>"Really?" He sounded surprised. "Thats....pretty cool actually, we cant control weather back where I'm from, only sorta predict it."
"Well here in Equestria, only a Pegasus like me can control weather clouds." You say hooves crossed, hovering over the two of them.
>"Thats pretty baddass actually. That, I'd like to see."
"Maybe, if I feel like it later." You smirk at him, "So what are you guys going to Rarity's place for anyway?"
>"Well Rarity came over to the castle earlier saying she has to get measurements for Anon's clothes, she insisted on making something for when he meets Celestia." Twilight says still examining her clipbaord.
"Hehheh, Rarity probably just wants Anon to parade her designs so ponies will see it in Canterlot and go to her shop."


>>
>Be Anon, and just what kind of designs are we talking here, god you hope thats a joke. You contemplate this as you approach the front door of a large, fancy schmancy Taylor shop.
"So uhh, what kind of Taylor is Rarity anyway? like what kind of clothes does she design?" You ask Rainbow as Twilight knocks on the front door.
>Oh, you know, only the fanciest /dresses/ in all of Equestria..."
>Dresses....oh god. Do all ponies wear dresses? Even the dudes? You haven't met any other guys here other then spike, he seemed normal enough...but then again hes a dragon. And he didn't wear clothes either, come to think of it, none of the ponies you saw last night wore anything.
>Oh lord, what if shes telling the truth...
>The door opens and Rarity greets the 3 of you.

>>29631790
>"Oh hello dears! Please come in! lets get these garments ready for our new friend!"
>The 3 of you begin walking in, Dash leans in and whispers to you with a cocky grin.
>"You'll have the prettiest dress ever..."
>Fuck, this might actually suck...
>Dash follows behind you and Twilight trying to contain her laughter.


Not the largest of updates,i know. However the next part will be up later tonight, possibly afternoon, not entirely sure. Just gotta
Get it typed up and made right. In the mean time, The Pastebin is now a thing:

http://pastebin.com/giAVYfbK

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>>29581444

I think she goes for long, leisurely flights during the nights, wherever the wind and her thoughts might take her. Given the way she normally focuses on stuff, it's a good way for her to wind down and just take in the stillness after her otherwise very hectic lifestyle. When there's no one there to watch her, what would be the point of showing off?
She probably circles around the fields of Ponyville, catches the updrafts from the nearby mountains, sails high above the Everfree, and things of that nature.

We know she sleeps in most mornings and still feels the need for an afternoon nap on most days, so she's got to be up on most nights. She only recently got into reading so it's not that, Ponyville is too small to have a very active night-life, and I think drifting across the sky lost in thought is more Dash's style than a hobby like stargazing.

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>>29631800
You should choose name and pastebin it.

>>29631892
Fuck I didn't noticed that you already did this.

>>29631800
Your added to the threads writefag pastebin.
Enjoying the story!

>>29632134
*you're

>>29631790
Just an FYI the word you're looking for is "Tailor", the way you're spelling it is a name.

>>29632252
...oh my god....

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>>29631322
I agree partially. I mean, the prompt is important and it can change the tone of the thread, and it's obvious that a prompt promoting shitposting would kill the thread. But I still don't think that having a self-insert prompt or a pony-only prompt is significantly different.

The thread was running without a prompt for a long time, and self-insert was always present. Having a pony-only prompt shouldn't be any different than having none. It's true that this thread has less self-insert than usual, but it's probably because some people moved the discussion to that other general, and I'd say that it started happening during the last thread, not now.

And, well, the ludicrous amount of shipping in this thread is indeed something unexpected, but I refuse to be blamed for it. I don't like to be the OP twice in a row, but if this was truly my fault, I have no choice but to start the next thread too to be sure that it has a better prompt like "Rainbow Dash has invited YOU to her house, how and where will YOU fuck her?" I'm just kidding, please don't do this.

>>29632134
I don't want to sound like a controlling bitch, but if you're updating the list of writefags, neither Riggy nor Writer Anon are on it yet, and Rosen's trip is still missing.

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>>29632675
You know that someone probably will try to make next thread with prompt you suggested, right?

>>29632675
Wow I'm blind
All fixed

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>>29631827
I like this idea. I'm not sure if I can imagine her flying every night, it would be kinda purposeless if it was an habit, but I totally see her doing it from time to time, depending on her mood.

Also, I've just realized that Equestrian nights have always full moon (I think?), so there would always be enough light for her to fly whenever she wanted, which is much more appealing than thinking that she could only fly a few nights per month.

>>29631800
>>
>Entering Rarity's boutique, the first thing you notice is the pony shaped mannequins, all wearing...oh god...dresses. Its true!
>"Now darling if you would please just come stand over here we can get started." Rarity says trotting towards a dozen strips of measuring tape hung along a series of hangers.
>Twilight continues looking at her clipboard, muttering to herself when and how you'll be learning about parts of this pony filled world.
"Y-yeah, lets uhhh, get this show on the road..." As nervous as you were, you couldn't let it show, not after she was going to make you new clothes for free, cant be rude man!
>You walk to the fancy mane having pony, glancing back towards Rainbow and Twilight.
>"Well go on!" Rainbow says waving a hoof.
"Im gonna!" You pick up the pace to Rarity, preparing yourself for whatever design she has in mind for you.
>"Okay dear just stand upright and hold your....arms? Are they arms? Yes, arms outward." She says picking up 4 sets of measuring tape with her blue aura.
>You hold your arms up like a cross, as the tapes start fluttering around, straightening and moving all over your arms and legs.
>"Damn she works fast..." You think as the strips of tape move so quickly.
>The entire time this is going on you cant help but try to ignore the thoughts of yourself wearing a fancy dress out in public.
>Dash takes a seat next to Twilight, who finally stopped looking at her clipboard.
>"Heheheheh! This is gonna be awesome! Just wait till you see the look on his face when he realizes hes not actually getting a dress..." She says elbowing Twilight.
>"Dash...what did you tell him?" Twilight says in a stern voice.
>"Oh uh, y'know....that he was gonna have the prettiest dress?" She replies with an audible squeak.
>"/Daaash!/"

>>29634149
>"All done! I should have a tuxedo fit for a gentle colt like you by noon tomorrow!" Rarity says writing down the last few measurements on her notepad.
"Alright just don't make it /too/ prett- wait, a Tuxedo? Like a Suit?" You say, squinting your eyes.
>"Well of course dear, among other things for more casual wear, what else would I make a young colt such as yourself?" She asks flabbergasted by your question.
"B-but Dash told me that-" You were cut off by a loud laughter a few feet away.
>"Ahhhahahaha! Got you! Rarity make more then just dresses y'know..." Dash was tearing up from her laughing.
>Guess your even now...
"I got got..." You say looking at the floor in shame.


>>
>Today is the day, you are gonna meet Celestia and receive whatever judgement or decree or whatever she wanted to do with your green ass.
>Be Anon, and this morning was going a bit quicker then the other 3, day one was getting your clothes and a few classes on Pony history, the 3 different races, and the role of magic in everypony's life. With the other days more or less elaborating on those subjects.
>You exit your room and make your way to the kitchen, sporting your comfy new pajamas Rarity made. She was a miracle worker with this clothing thing.
>Spike greets you happily, cooking up pancakes.

>>29634156
>"Morning Anon, you ready for your big meeting today?" He says flipping a pancake off the pan onto a plate.
"Yeah, as I'll ever be I suppose, these classes on your world have been really helpful, learning pony customs and curtousies was probably the most useful." You say grabbing a chair pulling it up to the kitchen table, luckily the kitchen table was smaller then in the dining room.
>Eating alone in such a big room just felt...odd.
>"Well here ya go, and don't worry Princess Celestia is on of the nicest ponies you'll ever meet!" Spike says placing a plate of pancakes in front of you.
"Thanks little man, I feel kinda guilty though, having you do stuff for me when i just got here..." You say looking at your plate.
>"Ahhh don't even worry about it, I enjoy cooking anyway." He says leaving you alone in the room.
>You make it back to your room, damn those pancakes were bomb as hell, little guy can really cook.
>Using the mirror in the bathroom, you look at yourself, making sure you haven't suddenly developed a bad case of acne in the last 24 hours...
"Alright Anon, just chill bro. Gonna meet what can only be described as the sun god in this world...oh man..."
>Your speaking to your own reflection, the gravity of this meeting finally catching up to you.
"Shit, I need some music or something."
>You walk over to your pack and dig out your Ipod and speaker. Plugging them in and attempt to turn it on.
"Naww fuck'n A! Damn battery died..." You say trying to turn on the devices.
>You remember back to the hospital, those machine were monitoring you and looked electronic in some way or another, and they weren't even plugged into anything, maybe they ran on magic. Could /your/ stuff run on magic?
>Only one way to find out...

>>29634160
"Hey Twilight, quick question for you!" You say entering the library
>"Yes? what is it? Have /another/ question about cutie marks?" She asks putting down her book.
"N-no not that heh."
>Cutie marks are fucken weird bro...
"Just, can you charge my Ipod and speaker with magic? Its technology from my world and the battery is dead, I was wondering if maybe you can give it like a magic charge or something?"
>You present the Ipod and speaker, setting them down in front of her.
>"Hmmmm" She looks at them both inquisitively.
"I-if your not sure its okay, I was just curious-" She interrupts you, sounded happier then ever.
>"Of course! I'd love to test my magic on a foreign piece of this "technology" your always refering too, we have things kinda like this here also, but it runs on magic, not this 'electricity' you described. You know Vinyl right?"
"Shes the one with the blue highlights, always got headphones, and making techno music right?"
>"Thats her!" She says, with her horn illuminating slightly. "I'll only use a weaker charging spell, we normally can charge stuff like this for a few days, but I'm curious just to what will happen since its from another world."
>She sets her horn on the Ipod, then the speaker. The screen on your Ipod lights up and turns on, reading fully charged.
>Ho.ly. Shit. It fucken worked.
>The speaker then turns on as well, a small white light on the power button.
>You look in awe at the marvel that has just taken place.

>>29634167
>Magic is fucken awesome!
"Thi-this is the sickest shit I've ever seen!" You exclaim, picking them up. "Thank you so much Twilight, you have no idea how badly I've been wanting to listen to my music!"
>You pick up Twilight and give her a hug, catching her completely off-guard.
>"Uh-well yes uhh, anytime heheh. Just please start getting ready now, we'll be leaving in exactly an hour and a half."
"Y-yes of course!" You leave the room, happier then hell. you have your favorite thing in the world again...

Quick shout-out to the Anon who pointed out my spelling mistakes, thank bruh. Pastebin will be updated and corrected.

>>29634172
http://pastebin.com/giAVYfbK

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>>29634167
Reminds me of this picture

A while ago an anon posed the question of whether or not we only loved Dash because of her gender. This led to an interesting discussion as well as a link to a r63 dash green. I can't find that green and was wondering if anyone had a link to it? Also discussion time.

>>29634172
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>Be Rainbow Dash, flying by Twilight's castle getting ready to clear a few pesky clouds, when an odd noise coming from an open window on the lower left side catches your attention.
>Is that...music? Who was it though, never heard this stuff before...
"What /is/ that?" You ask yourself approaching the window peaking inside.
>Looking into the window, you see Anon's room, should drop in and say hi, maybe hes making the sound?
>You swoop in the mostly empty room, surveying the area, the sound of whatever music this was echoing off the crystal walls.
"There it is!" You walk over to the small silver box sitting on the shelf next to his bed, a speaker? You've seen Vinyl use stuff like this all the time, who would've thought Anon has one too?
"Hey Anon, where the he-" You look toward the bathroom, small amount of steam coming from the bottom of the door. He must be in the shower.
>Continuing to examine the little speaker, and the thing attached to it through a little black string. You sit up on the edge of the bed, trying to figure out how to use the little black rectangle.
>You fiddle around around with the tiny rectangle, it had a little screen and a circle in the middle of it, shaking it and watching the words move across every few seconds. Whats a "Metallica" anyway?
"How does he even use this stupid thi-" The bathroom door opens up, causing you to freeze. You didn't even notice the shower turning off over listening to the music.
>"Yeah, ooo yeah yeah!" Anon comes out of the bathroom door looking like hes playing air guitar and singing along with the song.
>He looks up at you, almost jumping out of his towel.
>"Wh-what the hell Dash!? Ever hear of knocking!?" He yells, bumping into the wall, grabbing the black dress pants, using them to cover his now almost falling off towel.

>>29637341
"Oh Crap! S-sorry! I was just wondering where this music was, uhh, I mean, the window, i-it was open!"
>You try to compose yourself as he quickly darts back into the bathroom.
>You begin giggling, hearing him muttering to himself in the bathroom, you go back to messing with the rectangle, pushing on the center of it, it was a button!
>The screen changes.
"Ohhhh, so /thats/ how you do stuff..." You whisper to yourself as the bathroom door opens again.
>"Okay, lets get some ground rules going here..." Anon says, adjusting his pants in the mirror. "From now on, you knock, got it?"
"Well Anon, if your window wasn't just wide open then /maybe/ I would have!"
>He exits the bathroom and looks up towards the window.
>"Oh...well damn, glad it didn't rain in the last couple days..."
"Yeah, your welcome." You say eyes closed in a smug voice.
>"Yeah right...hey what are you doing with my Ipod?"
>Oh crap, he noticed you messing with his rectangle!
"Uhh, nothing! I wasn't doing a thing!" You say, hiding the rectangle behind your back.
>He looks at you, knowing your lying. But forget that noise, you can keep playing with it if you want to!
>"Give it here, I know your lying Dash..." he gestures with his hand for you to hand it over.
"Nu-uh! How can you tell if im lying!?" You say glaring at him.

>>29637344
>"Becuase your ears droop down to the sides of your head!"
>Anon reaches up with both hands and ruffle your mane.
"Hey hey hey! Alright, alright! take it, its stupid anyway!" You hand him the rectangle thingy and cross your forehooves.
>Stupid ears...
>He stares at it for a moment then back at you.
>"What kind of music you lsiten to Dash?"
>>
>Be Anon, not exactly how you were planning on getting ready this morning but, it did kinda lighten up the mood. Having Dash around made things less tense it seems.
>"What kind of music? Well, anything really, but I'm kinda partial to a good rock'n roll song though!" She says standing on the bed, hoof in the air. Guess ponies cant do the devil horns, hooves and all...
"Right well, this is pretty up-beat, kinda gets me in the zone. Give it a listen." You say selecting another tune and setting the Ipod back down on the shelf next to the speaker.
https://youtu.be/boanuwUMNNQ
>You tap your finger on the side of your leg to the beat, glancing at Rainbow, gauging her reaction to whether or not she would like it. Hope she does...
>"Yeah! this is great!" She says fluttering up in the air, bobbing her head up and down.
"Well alright! Lets crank this shit up!" You turn the speaker volume all the way up, and on the ipod as well. The sound was now permeating the entire room, only being amplified by the walls and floor of solid crystal.

>>29637349
>>
>Be Twilight, getting ready for your meeting, gonna have to help Anon make a good impression! But, theirs some noise echoing through the hallway, what in Tartarus is that?
>You set down your brush and mirror, grunting in frustration as you make your way into the hallway.
"Im gonna find out what that is..."
>Making your way down the hall, the sound begins growing louder, your getting close!
>You stop in front of Anon's room, you hear the music clear as day now, you didn't charge his stuff for him to interrupt your day, he was gonna get a stern lecture later...
>Opening the door you see Rainbow dancing and flying in circles in the air, Anon standing in front of the mirror getting ready.
"Just whats going on in here!? When did Dash get here, and why aren't you ready yet?!" You shout over the music.
>"Hey Twilight! Isn't this great?! c'mon and dance!" Rainbow shouts back, seeing you in the doorway.
"Wheres Anon?!"
>"I'm over here! Getting ready still!" Anon shouts from the bathroom.
"Well turn this music down! I cant focus with this noise!"
>With a huff you slam the door behind you and make your way back down the hallway, the noise dying down.
>>
>Be Anon, and that just happened. Felt like a teenager again...
>Never thought in a million years you'd be lectured by a princess pony to "turn that durn music down!"
>"What a party pooper, Twilight is such an egghead..." Dash says floating down to the ground looking depressed.
"Well, if you want, you can keep listening to it, if you want to borrow my earphones?" You say trying to make her feel better. Sounded it had been awhile since she'd really cut loose like that. Maybe Pinky's parties weren't always the right type of party for her.
>Her face lights up, ears pointed straight up. Like it was the best thing you could have said.
>Like dog and cat ears man, so damn cute.

>>29637355
Got more on the way, will probably have it up later this afternoon, or maybe in the evening.

heres the pastebin as well:
http://pastebin.com/giAVYfbK

>>29636901
Got u f@m
http://pastebin.com/hxbDbdhK

>>29637355
This is great with some cute moments

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>>29636901
I'm a few hours later and some other anon already gave you the link, but while I was reading your post I remembered that the green was linked in this pic that one of our drawfags posted when we discussed the story. I'm linking the pic anyway because I looked for it before reading the rest of the thread and realizing that the pastebin had already been posted, whatever. https://derpibooru.org/1340992
>discussion time
I would totally suck her dick right away to prove her that I still love her. *drops mic* *gets beaten after using asterisk actions*

>>29637355
This is nice so far. Just a little criticism, your grammar could be better, but either way I'm liking the story. Keep it up.

>>29581444
Do you guys worship her?

>>29638895
Yes.

Burp

>>29637355
>"Yeah! that'd be great!" She said, hooves covering her mussel, trying to contain her excitement.
"Alright, gimme a sec..."
>You dig through you pack, looking for you earbuds.
"Here they are!" You say untangling them, handing them over. "Alright, let me show you how to use this first though."
>You explain the buttons and little touch wheel, it was an older model Ipod, but 120 gigs and being able to survive being dropped more then one damn time was better then those new fancy "touch screens".
"And thats all there is too it, just spin the wheel and press the center button when you want to listen to a song, just make sure the volume isn't too loud all the time-"
>"OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH!! Thanks for the gift Anon!" She says jumping to your chest, hugging you. "Oh, heh, sorry I d-didn't mean t-to do that..." She says sitting back on your bed, with a slight blush.
"Nawww its okay Rainbow," You say messing with her "Hugs are nice!" You say ruffling her mane.
>"Hey I- c-cut it out Anon!" She says, face getting redder and looking at the screen.
>She began messing with her new toy, trying to avoid eye contact again. Seriously, whats the big deal?
"Alright well, I'm going to finish up, I have to meet up with Twilight out front in like 15 mins. She said there would be a chariot waiting..."
>Dash wasn't paying attention, her focus was on choosing the next song, already having the earphones in.
"Right well, wish me luck anyway..."

>>29640149
>>
>Be Anon, and you finally make it back to Ponyville tired as hell. Didn't think a simple yet surprisingly short meeting could drain so much out of you, maybe you were more nervous then you thought.
>Turns out Celestia really was as nice as everyone made her out to be, she gave the typical "welcome to Equstria" speech she was probably so used to giving, hell the worst part of the day was
riding in those damn chariots with no seat belts, seriously what the hell man.
>You didn't talk much of your own world, other then how you got to this one. But you assumed it wasn't very important, not like your going back anytime soon...
>"That went much better then I thought, and you did really well considering that was your first time meeting with the Princess." Twilight says as you both make your way into the castle.
"Yeah. wasn't the first time I had to talk to someon- err pony, in a high position. I once got blasted by my battalion commander for dropping ammo during a training op, told me he'd shove it up my ass if it happened again...good times." You say, feeling nostalgic.
>"That sounds...terrible, honestly." Twilight says opening her door.
"Heh, I'm sure the environment cant be much different when those royal guard stallions train or just talk among themselves."
>"Right, maybe..." She says as the door opens.
>Spike greets the two of you at the door, informing you dinner was already good to go.
>Salad with a side of salad, because ponies are vegetarians. You say your good nights to them both and make your way back to your room, not the best meal of your life, but getting in greens is always a good thing.
>Before leaving, Twilight informs you that the lesson tomorrow would involve revisiting exactly how ponies get there cutie marks.
>Fuck life. Cuties marks, you understand the concept. But what makes them so important? Guess labeling things really makes them mean more.

>>29640180
>Walking back to your room, you reminisce about earlier today. How fun it was.
"Time for a mandatory meeting with my mattress!" You say stretching at the door to your room. "Hopefully tomorrow is as fun as this morning was..."
>Upon entering the room you start throwing clothes off in all directions, and get into your comfy ass pajamas.
>Ah, much better, now to get to bed an-.
>Hold the phone. Is Dash really still here? And shes asleep...in your bed. Sprawled out not even under the covers, earphones still in.
"Great, now I gotta wake her up." You think to yourself making your way to the side of the bed.
"Dash, wake u-" You stop yourself as she tosses in her sleep. Looked so peaceful, compared to how she is when awake anyway.
>You sit on the side of the mattress, careful not to wake her up. Looking down to the blankets, you bring them up to cover her chest.
>"Mmmmm...ahh" She hums in content.
>Watching her sleep, you brush the hair from her face behind her ear.
>She lets out another moan as your brush her hair. Kinda hot actual-
>Oh fuck, what?!
>With this sudden realization you head into the bathroom, talking to yourself in the mirror.
"Oh dude you just thought a pony was hot! What a Fuh-reak man!" You say pointing at yourself.
>You turn away form the mirror.
"Well, shes one of the most genuine girls I ever met, and she fun to be with. I feel happy when shes around..."
>Your eyes go wide as you turn back to the mirror, pointing at yourself again.
"Ohhh man! your actually falling for her! Your not even the same species man, your going to hell!"
>You turn back away.
"No...screw this, not gonna complicate a good thing, were friends! Good ones I think...not gonna explore this any farther."
>You exit the bathroom and lay down at the end of the bed, leaving your legs hanging off the side.
"Night Dash..."

>>29640190
>>
>Be Rainbow, waking up with the sun illuminating the room, as it tends to do so in the reflective castle walls.
>You sit up and stretch, letting out a yawn. Wait, how did you get under the blankets? This wasn't your house.
"Oh yeah, I was listening to this thing and fell asleep. Heh, whoops." You say looking down at your new toy, and out from under the blanket.
>You look to the end of the bed, Anon laying there half on the bed, half off.
>Oh...crap. You fell asleep...in /his/ bed without even realizing.
>Taking the earphones out and setting aside the rectangle, you move over to wake Anon up.
"Anon...hey, Anon." You whisper, no luck, a big ass grin grows on your face. "ANON!! Its morning! Time for Wake up!" You yell next to his face.
>He awakes, flailing about and falling off the end of the bed. Now groaning and rubbing his head.
>"Ah, owe fuck! What the hell!?" He says getting up to his knees.
"Wake-up lazy!"
>"...Dash....thats not cool, dick move. Seriously." He tries to stand and trips over himself. "Yup...and my legs are asleep from the awkward ass angle I slept in last night.
Thanks Dash..."
"Your welcome, heheheh." You yawn and stretch. "Ohhhh I slept great, this bed is so comfy." You say fixing your mane.
>Anon slowly gets up and sits back up on the end of the bed. "Oh gee, really? /My/ bed is comfortable? Tell me more of this wondrous thing called sleep Dash!"

>>29640203
>Sarcasm? 2 can play at this game!
"Oh, just feels like you'll wake up, y'know, without having your legs still be asleep..."
>He glares at you, not saying anything. Got'em.
>"Well, this makes 2 mornings in a row that you've been in my room unexpectedly, wanna grab chow and relax before I gotta go to Twilight's class?"
"Yeah, I'm hungry."
>Breakfast sounded awesome, and begin free made it even better. Since you were at Twilight's place, good to have freinds like that, giving you free food...
>"Alright well, I'm gonna head to the kitchen then." Anon says with a yawn.
"I'll be right behind you, just gotta fix my mane." You didn't actually have to fix your mane...
>What you /really/ had to do was wash your face and get your thoughts in order.
>No one other then your parents had ever taken the time to tuck you in in your sleep...Anon is really nice.
"I hope today is as fun as yesterday..." You think to yourself.

Pastebin:
http://pastebin.com/giAVYfbK

Next parts are in the works, though they probably wont be going up untill Sunday night-Monday morning as i work this weekend.
As always thanks for the critiques, and the support, they are much appreciated.

>>29640221
this is a sweet story

>>29638301
Honestly I would also get intimate with a Dash with a dick. I don't go seeking it out, but the guts pics I've seen of her aren't off putting like they are with other characters. I don't know if this is like a gateway drug where I start being okay with gayer and gayer things. Personally I think my love for her has matured to the point that it doesn't matter, because I remember being put off by Gita pics of her years ago. Anyone else experience this or just me?

>>29637367
Thanks a bunch

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>>29640485
your welcome

>>29640991
*You're
And it was actually me who provided him with the link, doofus

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>>29640221
Nice update. Your pacing is really good. Waiting for next week, have a nice weekend Anon.

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>>29642325
Man she hopped on that bed like she wanted to get fucked.

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This may be of interest.

A couple of threads ago, we talked about dakis, and "cows and arts." After the discussion, I decided to order another $1 mousepad. While I was looking for cowpons, I also found a different one, an offer to buy a $1 cosmetic bag with a custom design, and I had this idea. The bag is supposed to have a different drawing on each side, but it's actually a folded piece of printed fabric. So I thought that I could print a larger drawing just splitting the design into two pieces and rotating 180º one of the halves. Then I'd only have to unstitch the bag and I'd have a nice piece of fabric with the design I wanted.

Since it was only $1, I decided to experiment a bit to see if I was right. And, well, I finally received my bag, and after some work here's what I got. The upper and lower halves don't match exactly, and of course it's much smaller than a real daki (it's only 38 cm. long, about 15 inches). But I think it looks nice enough, it was a fun craft and another addition to my best pony collection is always welcome.

I posted a few photos here, in case anyone is interested.
http://imgur.com/a/1figb
I also posted the pics I used as both sides of the bag (there's no need to flip them again, this is how they're supposed to look!). Btw, I thought that it was possible that they cut part of the edges, so I stretched slightly the union. It wasn't enough, so if anyone is going to print something like this, keep it in mind, it's probably impossible to be sure that both parts will match exactly.

>>29642577
That's quite the creative solution. Is it easily cuddleable?

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>>29642590
It's **really** small compared to the real thing, so don't expect it to feel similar at all. But I'd say that it's cuddleable anyway.

I have to say, I wasn't really sure if they would actually print this, or if my theory about printing both sides like I did would work, and I expected the fabric to feel much rougher than it actually was. My expectations were really low and the result was a nice surprise for me. If you see the pic I posted and you order it (or something similar) expecting something better, you could end up disappointed.

>>29581444
>chillax
I don't care if she says it; it's gross.

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>>29642754

I want a dakimakura for Christmas only a waifu rainbowdash will do don’t want the blow up doll no fleshlight lyra plush I want the dakimakura with boobies I can smush! I want a dakimakura for Christmas I don’t think Lauren Faust will mind, do you? Now Hasbro wont approve my pillow case design but cheap third party printing means that dashie will be mine! I can see me now on Christmas morning creeping up the stairs oh what joy and fake surprise when I open up my eyes to see a waifu pillow standing there! I want a dakimakura for Christmas only a waifu rainbowdash will do no rairitys or pinkies no twighlight alicorn rainbow dash is the pony whos in all my favorite porn! And I have almost as much as Scootaloo! Mom says a pony would bite me once - or more but what she doesn’t know is that im totally into vore! Theres lots of room for dash down in my base-a-ment she'd eat my cum and make her nest in Cheeto-dust and lint! I can see me now on Christmas morning jerking off downstairs oh what marvel and surprise in my pony waifus eyes to get another streak of color in her hair! I want a dakimakura for Christmas only a futa dashie one will do! No fluttershys no A.J. cause shes dumb rainbow dash is the pony inside whom I want to cum! And Dashie wants to cum inside me tooooooo!

>>29642333
I hurt inside knowing this pony will never be real.

>>29643191
>anthro daki
Kys

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>>29643683
“True love begins when nothing is looked for in return.”