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Stranded on the moon edition.

Previous thread: >>29375273
Pastebin: http://pastebin.com/He5X50m6
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>>29530302
https://youtu.be/mbv-LcdLY-Y
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I wish it was still wintery here at all. Cozy looking winter Luna is one of my favorite things.
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>>29530302
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Is there a better waifu than this?
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It's tuesday now but who cares.
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>>29531819
It was posted before midnight Central time...barely.


But your right, whi cares?

Praise the Moon!
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>>29531959
>your
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>>29532528
Oops...you're* & also who*
Need to wake up before I post.
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>>29532560
Moon will give you power to wake up
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>>29532681
That's the problem. The moons power wakes me. But the damn sun is out right now.

Go away sun
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>>29533081
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>>29531705
nee
jo
laa
votch
xeyir
ez
He
na
ne
nann

ma hoke phu / hmar te
no
pù shi

ne
ne
nej
kheyr / na
nee
no
ne
ei
ei
non
nee
non
ohi
non
lo
nahin
nem
nei
tidak
no
iié
ahneo
no / na
bo
minime , non

ne
neen
ne
le
kaore
ugui (Yгvй)
nei
kheyr / na
nie
não
na
Heт (niet)
no
ag
ne
nie
ne
no
siyo / hapana
nej
aita
ไม่ (maï) / ไม่ใช่ (maï chaï)
hayir
oevoel / ug
Hi
nage
cha
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Just got done reading BT Paste on the Luna story.
Is he still on hiatus?
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Is the Discord still a thing?
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>>29534355
It is merely "no" in a few different languages
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Best Princess!
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Had a rough day, but you make it all worth it.
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http://pastebin.com/e5RGWe2B

>You are Luna, reclining on a cushion in your study reading the latest Daring Do book.
>Don’t judge, a Princess can indulge.
>Anon reclines on a sofa near by, reading some random book on transmutation magic. You briefly wonder why he would be reading that but only for a moment, He always reads strange things.
>Suddenly there is a flash of light and a hollow pop, a scroll bounces off your nose and lands on your book.
>You look down in surprise and see the dark blue ribbon, you know immediately who it’s from.
>Grabbing the scroll in your magic, you unroll it and read quickly. Glancing at Anon you see him watching you expectantly.
“She is fine. She needs to speak with me as soon as I can. I’ll give her time to get good and asleep and go visit her dreams.”
>You mark your place in the book with the ribbon and rise, stretching your back.
“Let's go get some air Anon. I need to stretch my wings.”
>You head for the door, waiting for Anon to place his book back in its spot on the shelf.
>He’s always so neat and tidy, never leaving things out of place.
>You watch as he slips his sword into his belt before walking out the door.
>No matter where he is or what he is doing that sword is there. If not on his side or in his hand it is within reach, he even sleeps with it.
>You gave up a long time ago trying to convince him he didn’t need it ‘all the time’.
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>>29536287
>Later. Stretched out on your belly in the grass. You and Anon came to rest somewhere deep in the gardens.
>Just sitting and watching the night go by, smelling the night air and enjoying the sounds.
“Trixie should be asleep by now Anon. I’m going to go check on her”
>”I’ll be here.” Anon replies, snapping to attention and going on alert.
>You reach out with your magic and pull him down on the grass beside you.
“Will you relax. Nothing is going to attack us in the middle of the royal gardens. Besides, nopony even knows we are out here. Just...sit.”
>You close your eyes. Reaching out to the dream realm and feeling for the familiar bit of magic you know is your student. It doesn't take you long to find her and you slip your consciousness into her dream.
>You find yourself on a snow covered field. A few yards away sits Trixie's cart.
>A small fire burns outside and lamp light shines through the windows.
>You taught her how to dream her location if she needed to, this looks to be somewhere in the far north, past the borders of the Crystal Empire.
>As you approach the door it opens to allow you entry. Trixie is sitting at a table, a book in front of her. She looks up at you as you enter.
>Rising from the table she bows to you. “Thank you for coming, master.” she says with humble reverence.
“If you don’t get over here and give me a hug I’m going to wake you up, violently.”
>You stomp a hoof on the wood floor to punctuate your statement.
>Trixie springs from her bow and flings her hooves around your neck, almost knocking you over. You return the hug, wrapping her in your wings.
“It’s good to see you little one, you look well.”
>”It has been a while Lulu.” she releases you, dropping her formal attitude and addressing you normally.
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>>29536300
>”How are thing’s going at home? Is my brother behaving?”
“Everything at home is fine. Anon is in perfect health, except for the permanent worry line he’s developing in the middle of his forehead. You really should write more often, just so we know you’re ok.” You flash her a stern look and she sighs.
>”I know, I just don’t have the time to think about it anymore. Since I received this.”
>She points a hoof at a large book lying open on the table where she was sitting.
“And what is this, Trixie?”
> You walk over and glance at the page. Neat and tiny writing covers every available space on the both pages.
>”It’s my mother's journal. I don’t know who sent it to me but I got it about a year ago. There was a letter with it that told me it belonged to my mother and to ‘follow the clues if I want the truth.’ So that is what I have been doing, and why I am here.”
“And what truths have you learned?” you ask.
>”Lots. My mother lived quite a life before she had me, and she was not what she appeared to be. Judging from the spells she has written down in here, she was quite the mage. Some of this stuff is over my head, and some of it is downright scary.”
“What do you mean by scary?”
>”Like eldritch, dark, other-worldly, and almost necromantic type scary.” She levitates the book and shows you a drawing. It’s some kind of summoning circle you’ve never seen before
>”I can’t reproduce the spells here because I can’t understand enough, but from my mothers descriptions of them I’m starting to learn. I don’t like what I am learning.” she closes the book and sets it back on the table.
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>>29536318
>”Anyway, the entries have led me here to the place where my father disappeared. There is some special location here that allowed them to open a portal to some other dimension. When my father went through it closed before mother could follow. She didn’t have the reagents to open the portal again so she had to go back to civilization for more. By the time she was ready to return, she had discovered that she was pregnant with me. According to her writings it was hard, but she decided to give it up and have me here where it was safe.”
“So, I assume you have the reagents and you intend to open the portal yourself?” Trixie nods “You know I can’t let you go alone.”
>Trixie rears up on her and legs and lays a hoof across her chest, holding the other out to you.
>”The Great and Powerful Trrrrixe will accept your assistance, kind Princess.”
>You fall over laughing. Trixie holds her pose for a few seconds before joining you on the floor.
>When you both catch your breath you get back on your hooves and help Trixie up.
“I will gather some things to help you and come to where you are. I can teleport to the Crystal Empire and come on hoof from there.”
>You get the information and a promise from Trixie to wait for you before casting the spell to leave the dream.


>When you awaken you feel a weight pressed against your side. Turning your head you see Anon leaning against your whither, sword across his knees and staring off into space.
>You poke his ribs with your muzzle causing him to jump and roll away. Chuckling lightly you get on your hooves and head for the castle.
“Come on Anon, we need to pack.”
>”Pack for what?” he asks, following you “Where are we going?”
“To meet your sister.”
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Aha StanZeMan still pumping out.

Am so happy I find this thread again.
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coffee bump
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>>29540816
>And then Celestia disappears and Luna almost gets assassinated.
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>>29541324
nope, they both die from being poisoned by the other
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>>29540593
I think this is the cutest thing I've seen this week
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I just can't get enough
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I'm Luna's biggest fan.
(Bigger than pic.)
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>>29542851
I always feel sad for luna with this comic
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>>29542894
Indeed.
That's why Luna is the bestest pony.
Because she still manages to be the nicest!
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>>29542851
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>>29543085
>insert sad music
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>>29543895
>insert penis into anus
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More like /mu/-nday, amirite?
What have you guys been listening to lately?
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>>29544803

https://youtu.be/gvCmtHDDuu0
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>>29544937
Court is one of my favorites by them.

>>29544803
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RhJKCW2_w3k
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>>29544803
Cat's foot, iron claw,
Unicornians scream for more.
At Discordia's poison door,
Second millennium schizoid mare.

Love rack, bugged wire,
Lunar Princess' funeral pyre.
Innocents raped with friendship fire,
Second millennium schizoid mare.

Babs seed, blind mare's greed,
Poets' starving, fillies bleed.
Nothing she's got, she really needs,
Second millennium schizoid mare.
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>>29544803
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aXpZdCdF6l0
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>>29543068
She is best pony
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>>29542851
>>29543085
muh heart
stop this!
NAO!
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>>29544803
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AVmR877JRTI
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>>29544803
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OO8To_XZsFE
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Always makes me happy as Pinkie Pie.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_3Mo7U0XSFo
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>>29544803
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qLVKkDhi-F0&index=1&list=PLeFvpVGHUnLjNsrWHZJr8Yy6a7N6NeovF
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>>29535739
Yes indeed! discord.gg/dnPcpPk
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>>29546977
This is the girl next door, best friend since diapers, always there for you even when your gf cheated on you with James that fucker. Someday she will get tired of waiting and awkwardly confess her love for you.

You will..

A) Tell her she is like a sister and you don't love her that way.
B) Realize that your soulmate was right there beside you all along and feel so guilty for not noticing you go into a deep depression and die.
C) See her as she is: The future Mrs. Anon and mother of your 20 children.

Your choice friend.
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>>29547297
Dream: C
Reality: B

Stop doing this to my heart.
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>>29535739
Unfortunately.
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>>29547760
^^
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>>29547760
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>>29547894
That scene...
It is a terrible day for rain.
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>>29547760
I'm sorry, I don't understand why the third panel is blank
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>>29548421
She's alone in the bed.
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>>29548435
AH...thanks. sad now
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>>29547933
>>29548588
Dubs confirm this is now a sad Luna thread.
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>>29548631
No please
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>>29548631
What have we done?
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>>29542851
>>29543068
>>29547760
>>29548631
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>>29549058
you shutup
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big sister loves you
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>>29549670
big sister also loves to fuck with you
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>>29549670
>>29549878
Wouldn't have it any other way. Loving sisters with ongoing griefing of each other is the best.
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>>29542851
Idk attached a horse cock to it and put it to the high setting. She may have a new bf
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For the Luna fags

http://pastebin.com/iviTxT6X part 1
http://pastebin.com/8Y8MmbGj part 2
http://pastebin.com/VkjN5hVi finale
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>>29550347
Its a constant struggle
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>>29551337
not again
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>>29544803
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nIpyMi6R3nw
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>>29551337
But she is always relevant
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I feel like shit right now, why I can't be with her in some place alone in quiet?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sQcjMDl8GWg
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>>29553229
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>>29551337
This was terrible
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>>29553929
>mfw
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>>29551337
kys mario
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>>29534380
I wouldnt expect him to come back, he posted again recently but not many people seemed to be reading.
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>>29554747
Sad.
One day we will find out where Celestia went and who tried to assassinate our beloved nighttime Princesses.
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>>29554926
He will return. I have Faith
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Alright which one of you lucky bastards was this
>>29555555
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I'll see you soon
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>>29546572
I wanna join it but the link expired!
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>>29556420
>I wanna join it but the link expired!
no, you really don't.
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>>29556420
>the link expired!
Um... No it didn't.
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>>29557513
Sisters never change
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Blood Moon.
http://pastebin.com/u/DontWannaKnow

Mother. Fucker.
That was a hell of a ride.

If any of you faggots haven't read this yet, go and give your feels a workout.
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>>29558426
I loved this


Painkiller update when?
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>>29559036
Hopefully never.
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>>29558426
I liked this. Much.

others are: The Sky’s The Limit, A Second Life and the one where anon plays guitar
I wish I could forget all those greentexts and read them again.
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Just went back into an old flash drive of mine and discovered the beginnings of a Luna fic. There's really not much, but should I post what I have? If you guys like it, I may continue it in the future, but I'm just not sure if I'll have the time.
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g'night, I hope I'll see dreams with her tonight.
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>>29561531
Sure. I'll read it
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>>29561593
Alright. Give me a minute to get it formatted. Anyone else interested?
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>>29557153
That's weird, it told me the link expired the first time I tried it.
>>29557063
But everyone seems nice there.

In any case, here's a mini woona for the time being.
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>>29561818
Alright. Here goes nothing.

>Night has fallen over Canterlot.
>A sweet chill is in the air, and the moon is shining brightly over the plains below the mountainside city.
>You are Anonymous. It’s been three days since your sudden arrival in Equestria, and you haven’t gotten a sufficient amount of sleep.
>Things happened so fast. One minute, you were driving through a torrential rainstorm on your way home from vacation, and the next…
>Your thoughts are interrupted as a sharp jolt of pain crosses the center of your chest.
>A very small amount of blood begins to soak through the gauze. It’s not comfortable, but your injury is nowhere near as bad as it was when you first arrived.
>You’ll forever be thankful for the ponies who helped to save your life, and you’ll forever be indebted to the one who found you before you were taken by the embrace of death…
>...the guardian of the night herself, Princess Luna.
>You stare through the giant arched window out into the night, mesmerized by the darkness and the comfort of the pale blue moonlight.
>A prominent tower resides adjacent to your quarters, standing tall towards the sky and slicing through the clouds. Near its peak lies a balcony… from which she stands to illuminate the night.
>Her bodily figure is but a silhouette against the indigo sky, but her horn shines a powerful and brilliant blue.
>As her horn surrounds itself in a magical aura, the full moon slowly rises to its peak in the sky, shrouding Equestria in a mystical sense of tranquility.
>You watch in awe as it finally halts at the edge of Luna’s balcony. As the aura around her horn dissipates, her wings unfold and spread from her back as she leaps into the heavens.
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>>29562135
>She floats through the crisp night air with a gentle elegance and glides through your open window, landing on the carpeted floor of your bedroom with nary the slightest sound.
>The goddess comes to a stop at the end of your large mattress; a small but gentle smile lies on her face, and she seems very content.
>This is the first time you and her have been alone together since you first regained consciousness.
>”You’re still here...” Luna says, with an audible hint of relief in her voice.
“I wasn’t sure if I would be,” you groan.
>A single tear falls from her eye as she trots to the side of your bed.
>”Neither was I,” she replies. “I thought for certain you would succumb to your injuries, but I’m truly thankful that is not the case.”
>She leans over your incapacitated body and places a light, tender kiss onto your forehead.
“Luna?”
>”Yes, Anonymous?”
“Your magic… you’re able to ent-aAAGH!”
>Another shock of excruciating pain cuts through your chest, forcing your upper body to curl inwards towards your stomach.
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>>29562162
>Luna almost immediately drapes a wing over your back in response.
>Thankfully, the agonizing discomfort quickly subsides.
>”Do you need me to get Nurse Redheart, Anonymous?” Luna asks.
“N-no… no, I’ll… I’ll be okay.”
>You lean back on the head of your mattress, returning to a normal upright position.
>Luna watches with concern as you take a few deep breaths in an attempt to regain total composure.
>With a heavy sigh, you allow your muscles to relax as you look to Luna with a reassuring smile.
“As I was saying,” you continue. “Your magic allows you to enter the dreams of others, right?”
>”Yes, indeed,” she confirms. “Why do you-”
>She stops as another bit of blood permeates through the bandages around your chest.
>”Oh…”
“Luna, I’ve barely gotten any sleep since the accident. I nearly lost half of my body during the collision, and I’ve used what little strength I have left just trying not to think about what happened,”
>Another severe jolt of pain, but you manage to fight it off.
“I… I don’t know if my body will be able to make it until morning.”
>More tears fall from the alicorn’s beautiful eyes.
“Promise me, Luna… if I fall asleep tonight…”
>You take in a deep breath.
“...promise me you’ll do what you can to keep me here.”
>Luna places her left foreleg on the mattress, adjacent to your elbow. Tears continue to stream down her face.
“Of... of course, Anonymous,” she sniffles. “With Celestia as my witness, I will not fail you.”
>As she makes her promise, your vision begins to blur and the back of your spine is gripped by the weight of exhaustion.
>Thank you, Luna.”
>You close your eyes and drift into the darkness as the heavenly comfort of slumber envelops your body.

And that's all I've got. Thoughts? Critiques? Comments? Should I continue in the future?
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>>29562173
Ah, shit. Forgot a greentext marker on Luna's last line. Oh well.
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>>29562185
Its pretty good - I'm interested.
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>>29562327
Thanks! I'll try to work on it some more, but college is a bitch, so who knows if this will ever get done.
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sup beeches
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>no hooves
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>>29564186
>Manager_Luna.jpg
>"This is a job interview."
>"Take off your clothes"

what do?
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>>29564200
Manager Luna was an old prompt about Luna going through the portal and owning a somewhat successful business in the EQG world.
After seeing how much of a hard worker Anon is, she takes him back to Equestria to be an indentured servant for herself.
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>>29562185
Yes continue. Hopefully.
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>>29564275
Thank you SpoonFeederBot9000, for that barely relevant information that literally nobody asked for.
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>>29565510
That's a nice one
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>>29564200
Take off clothes.

I really need a job.
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>>29567166
>she ridicules you
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>>29558426
That was less of a feels workout, and more of a year in the hyperbolic feels time chamber.
But thanks for posting, glad I read it.
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>>29564847
the wow made me chuckle
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>>29567501
>D-do I have the job?
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>>29562173
You should definitely continue
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>>29572319
That spaghetti looks too plain.
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>>29570855
>No, but thou hast the most ridiculous penis We have ever seen!
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>>29573268
It's not spaghetti, it's udon. Pipsqueak is really into Neighpon.
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>>29574108
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best pony
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>>29562173
It's good dude it's something I can relate to I almost died at night and something like this went through my mind when I was bleeding out
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>>29575146
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>>29530302
Why do you guys worship her?
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>>29578237
Because she a cute.
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>>29578237
She's the only thing that makes me happy anymore.
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Are there any good Nightmare Mom greens?
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>>29575228
Jesus Christ, Anon. What happened?
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>>29578237
Because she is the night.
She is the shade from Celestias burning sun.
She watches over us as we sleep.
She keeps the bad dreams away and fills our nights with happieness.
She is the Princess of the moon.
She is the Godess of darkness.
She is the patron of the outsider.

She.
Is.
Love.

Bow before her might!
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Why is this hidden? Some excellent moon worship going on here.
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>>29579555
Sweet trips
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page 9 is not fine
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>>29578237
I literally live the night. Every night slaving away during that graveyard shift I have hope that she shows me a bit of mercy.
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>>29578221
Holy shit , loving this
Where did you find this?
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>>29580575
In a feels thread.
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>>29581637
Up
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>go on nightwalk
>imagine her walking beside me
>feel sad
every time
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>>29583828
>what are we going to do on the bed, anon?
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>>29584524
I do this almost constantly. i've never had a character get in my head quite like this.

It doesn't quite make me sad, I guess. Wistful, I guess, but it's an impossible dream, so I guess it doesn't hurt as bad as it could. I just try to focus in on dreaming about her, and keep her in my thoughts.
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StAnon stop masturbating and write more green!
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>>29580755
Who ever wrote that knows how to aim straight for the feels
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>>29586146
God damn that is an old meme
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>>29581637
Nice. That is a powerful image.
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best pony bump
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>>29588031
Yep
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>>29579040
my stepdad tried to kill my mom and I stopped him and he stabbed me 5 times for it
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>>29589263
Oh that is the best!
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>>29590332
Did you at least get him with any hits?
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>>29590484
I only was aiming for his face I did manage to get my hands around his neck and started to choke him but he Stabbed me in the left nipple puncturing my lung
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>>29590332
>>29590553
Holy shit. Thank God you're alright.
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>>29590332
>>29590553
Is your stepdad OJ?
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>>29591225
His stepdad isn't Orange Juice you retard.
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>>29590332
>>29590553
Fucking hell, anon. I hope you know that you're a hero.
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>>29591457
That's the problem I don't feel like one I still wish I could of found a way to kill him but as I was choking him I looked into his eyes and realize what I was about to do and gave him that split second to kill me
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>>29591501
Holy shit man
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>9
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>itt: /moon/ gets fucking real
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>>29591501
what a crazy world
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>>29562173
>Thoughts? Critiques? Comments?
On principle, I don't read AiE
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bumparoo
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>>29594699
Oh boy, THIS faggot again...
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>>29596285
ellipses...
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>>29596285
I'm not, I just agree with the argument from last thread. If we don't let them know how will they ever realize there's an audience outside the quagmire of AiE?
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>>29596426
>10
This is not good.
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>>29596426
By realising that they already know. Just because they prefer to write AiE, doesn't mean they don't realise that other kinds of green exist.
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>Pg 8 no h8 just tryna bump m8
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>>29598869
>she will never be your co-counsel
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>>29600236
Never seen this before - I fucking love it.
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>>29535739
>tfw too ashamed to go in it
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Would she enjoy this?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Nj1D2y-PY8
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>>29600835

Not TOO far off, but probably a bit too soft.
Luna is an interesting trope-reversal when it comes to what one would traditionally associate with the night. She's flashy, flamboyant and temperamental, while Celestia is the calm, scheming and collected one.

Take it with a grain of salt, but the personal songs often incorporate instruments and styles that are rather fitting for the pony. RD pieces for example often include an electric guitar, AJ's bits are heavily country-inspired, and so on.
For Luna, I think all we have is:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_rDT2GIvh8Y

So, I'd say not dark and ominous enough. Something like the Imperial March would probably be closer for Nightmare Moon in particular. Dark orchestral in general.
Given that her musical tastes developed 1000 years ago, and her song is heavy on string instruments, she'd at least appreciate the Buckethead song you posted a lot more than she would most more "modern" styles.
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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=7-MGJIZKTY8
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>>29601232
Maybe she would learn to like new stylish music. Hopefully.
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Listening to this at night is a profound experience.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z682l95YTC4
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>>29600835
Fuck man why is this tune giving me such feels. Why why why can't she fucking be real?
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You can run, but you can't hide!
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she is best pony
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>>29602241

bitch...?
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she is best pony
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>>29604065
Was there every any doubt?
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>>29604498
Nice thumbnail faggot
https://derpicdn.net/img/2014/10/1/733231/full.png
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>>29605655
Now is not the time for whining, that comes later.
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>>29605836

Neat.
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>>29605655
For you.
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>>29607029
kek
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>>29607868
Only 1 is pure.

The rest are pure shit.
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>>29589476
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>>29609381
Time to shove Tia off and give Luna the jar of treats.
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>>29530302
What would Luna think of us?
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>>29530302
go away noctis
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>>29609409
She would think of us as degenerates
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>>29609409
Pity.
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>>29609409
doesn't matter
I love her
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>>29609755
>Double numerals of truth.
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>Didn't you know, Anon?
>"Princess" is nothing more than a title here in Equestria.
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Reminder that Celestia > Luna.
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>>29613096
IE she has a huge fucking horsecock between her legs.
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>>29613283
>>29612218
No! Fuck you! Fuck both of you faggots! You will burn in hell for your sins!
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>>29613577
Sure, let's fuck. Bend over.
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>>29613773
Ugh.
You thread is somewhere over here >>>/trash/
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>>29613577
)))
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>>29609409
Considering that all she ever wanted was too be loved, I think she would like us.
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>>29619582
>alicorn magic aborts fetus
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>>29617251
Why her tail comes out of her mare parts?
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>>29619675
Ponies don't actually have tails, just extremely long flowing pubic hair.
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>>29619582
What the hell is the context of this?
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Do we have anyone writing green anymore?
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>>29619805
Stan is lurking ded and Brownie is mia
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>>29619805
I am, albeit at an incredibly slow pace. I want to make sure the whole thing is finished before posting.
Writing in second person is fucking weird
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I've been gone for 6 months, I missed you /moon/
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>>29621040
post the right one at least.
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>>29621316
Don't post that here
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>>29621316
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What if Luna was a jerk?
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>>29621547
..."if"?
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>>29621547
Third panel
What is her horn connected to?
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>>29621316
Glad to see that you're still the same
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BEST PONY!
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>>29622782
Indeed
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>>29620170
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big sis bump
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Ain't no question if I want it, I need it.
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>>29619805
I've been wondering the same thing, StAnon's Starlight has grab my attention. I hope there's more.
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can I have a (You) for reasons?
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>29628268
No
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>29628268
(Me)
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>>29628276
>>29628290
But you will get something in return!
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>>29628318
Whats intheboxAnon?!? Huh?huh?huh?tellme!tell meeee!!!
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>>29628410
You know those RPGs where you pick up weird items that prove to be essential later on?
1x mysterious spark
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>>29619805
Somewhere
>>29620393
I am live lurking
>>29626992
There will be more the original idea I had for this story turned out to be stupid the more I thought about it. I'm trying to find a new direction, one that will kick up the action. Also, Trixie is my waifu and I'm terrified of not being able to write her correctly. I'll get there I promise!
Thanks for reading.
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>>29619805
Going to do an editing run on my work, and finally wrap it up wthin the next month or two.
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>>29628444
repeating integers say don't sell that item
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>>29628268
(You)se it wisely
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>>29628726
I will.
Thank you, kind soul.
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>>29628444
Is this going to be like that dwarvin sphear of atunement that I've been lugging around Skyrim since 2011?

If it is then screw you
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>>29628834
Can't spoiler it.
Don't sell it!!!
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>>29628444
I accidentally threw mine out. There any way for me to get a duplicate?
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>>29628523
Well, for what it's worth. I like what you've setup so far. I don't like gore. I've read one too many fics where gore is used more for shock value that story progression. I think you've achieved an excellent balance in the description of the fight sequence and following scenes.

I like the relationships you've established. I know there's other Trixie/Anon sibling fics but this is the first I've read and I am impressed. I also like how they both are Luna's students. I hadn't come across that dynamic yet and find it quite intriguing.

Being a Luna fan, I've read a few LunaXhuman ships. However, i can't recall reading one where the human is a member of her guard. Nice twist. You've touched on a potential conflict already. Don't stop; I think there is more to be explored there.

Finally, I haven't been a big fan of Trixie but I think you have done her justice here. At least in what little you've revealed so far. She being Luna's student was an excellent idea. So much so that I just may substitute your headcanon for my own regarding her in this aspect.

So, gather your thoughts. Sketch them out and let loose. I look forward to reading what you come up with.
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>>29628958
You screwed up.
If you are lucky you can get one through a rare event.
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>>29628997
Wow. Thanks for your feedback. I didn't think anyone was paying that much attention.

This is my first attempt at creative writing since highschool, whitch was a long time ago. I'm learning as i go and constantly rewriting and tweaking stuff before i post. I think i revised that fight scene 6 or 7 times and I finally just posted it to force myself to move on.

I've read a lot of Trixie stories and Luna stories and I wanted to try something different instead of the same old stuff. I couldn't bring myself to write a Trixie x Anon fic because I'm not BrownieTown, so I went with siblings. I have 2 younger sisters so I figured that relationship would be easier.

I wanted to convey a more mature, less haughty Trixie and I figured the best way to do that is let Luna work it out of her. I think with Luna's guidance the Trixie in the show could stomp Twilight's flank without an amulet, but she probably wouldn't because she would have more restraint.

I got the idea of Anon being a guard from Twisted Desires. Thought it would be a nice spin to have him be useful instead of some weakling that Luna takes pity on. That gives me room to have a slow building romance under the action and adventure.

This is all just my dream and it may not work out like i want but i will give it all I've got.

Thank you again for the feedback. I'll take all i can get, negative or positive. It makes me happy to know I'm even a little bit entertaining.
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<3
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>>29630278
Greetings sister!
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>>29545328
Holy shit this is amazing
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Good night, /moon/. I love you all.
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>>29630949
We love you too
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>>29630916
>>29630919
>>29630923
>>29630928
>>29630934
>>29630940
>>29630941
>>29630946
>>29630949
I just wanna pick her up and snuggle her to make all her troubles go away. But I can't, and it fkn hurts me in ways I didn't even know I could hurt.
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>>29628444

1x Si

Two hours later you're overburdened and have 84x Si
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>>29631167
Its the thought that counts anon, I'm sure she would understand.
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>>29631167
shhh... don't listen, it's just semiposting.
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>>29630865
hey
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>>29629654
My pleasure famalam. Remember we can be our own toughest critics. It is easy to find yourself in a circle of rewrites. Good you recognized it and moved on.

Also, don't be afriad to cut out something you love. If it is not truly serving the narrative then toss it. If you think it still has some merit maybe leave it off for a side story.

I can say; for me at least, the story is more than a little bit entertaining. It has sincerely caught my imagination.
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HEY, MOONFAGS

Nice waifu
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>>29633247
Thank you, I bet your waifu is pretty great too!
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I want to wear her cerebro helmet
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>You will never operate with waifu
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>>29636561
>>29637215
Am I the only one that cannot stand Magnaluna's style?
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>>29639191
You're not alone. Just figure that whining about it isn't going to do any good. If other people enjoy it, the. Good for them.
Really like you pic there though.
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>>29636058
>This is my waifu. There are many like it, but this one is mine. My waifu is my bests friend...
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>>29639688
holy shit did I suddenly enter derpibooru or something?
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>You will never oper8 with waifu and 50 caliber rifles.
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>>29640863
>not simply letting her destroy her enemies one by one, slowly and painfully, with her supreme magical prowess; fit of her unmatched wrath.
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>>29639849
IKR?!? As for myself I can appreciate all the different styles
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“I’m sorry, but it had to be this way.”

“What? You knew? You knew what she was going through and you did not tell me? You knew what I was planning to do and you did not try to intervene?! Why?! How?!”

“Because you do not know what she will go through up there, nor do you know how she will be changed when she returns. I do, and it is for the better of all.”

“She was my sister! I loved her like-“

“So did-… So do I. I love her, Celestia. With all my heart.”

“After what you have done today, I do not know if I can ever trust another thing you say again.”

“If you will not listen to my words, Celestia, then listen to my heart.”
A moment passed, and then there was a sound. A note came from his chest, and it was the most pure note heard before or since. It was as if complete silence had fallen, and your ears began ringing to fill the void. So light, so ethereal, one was scarce sure they heard it.
“What is that?”

“That is my heart, Celestia. It is broken. And so it shall stay for the next thousand years.”

“Thousand…”

“Yes, Celestia, that is the price for your ignorance. That is the price for your pride. That is the price for my inaction. And it is a price we both shall bear. Now, come. You have a Queendom to run.”
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And so passed a thousand years, each full of their own trials and tribulations. But whenever there was a moment of silence, whenever one was passing the other in the halls at night, or by the other’s chambers, she heard that sound still. That note, so pure and quiet, coming from him. A reminder of all he had suffered, and all he bore.

Then what he said came to pass.
The stars aligned.
The Nightmare was released.
The elements empowered.
The magic discovered.
The cage broken.
The Princess freed.
And the rest, as they say, is history.

Now, you all know the story of how the rest of the world recovered, but for the tale of one, solitary man.
She was brought back to Canterlot in the care of her sister, who looked back upon the long road that had brought her here, and was glad for its end.
She was brought to his room, and the door was opened. He looked up, and their eyes met.
A word was spoken. A word filled with a thousand years of pain, of sorrow, of loss, and heartbreak. But in that word too was a note of pure, unadulterated joy. A note that brought all the rest to insignificance.

“Luna.”

And he was standing up.
And she was stepping in.
And he was kneeling down.
And she was leaping forward.
And he was catching her.
And her momentum pushed him onto the floor.
And he was lying on his back.
And she was lying on his chest.
And there was a sound.

No, not a sound, the absence of a sound. In that room, the note which for a thousand years had rung from his chest, was silenced

His love had returned.
His heart was repaired.
And he was whole.
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>>29641415
aww, sweet.
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>>29641415
cute

i like it
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>>29632112
>tfw miss luna will never lecture you on biology through live "demonstrations"
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>>29639191
One thing I don't like in his her? style is horn.
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>>29641407
>>29641415
*Tears*
>tfw i will never be whole
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>>29641407
>>29641415
meh/10
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This was a great thread. I love you guys.
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>>29643597
y-you too.
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>>29643597
thx Little Boot
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>>29643597
You too kohai-chan.
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>>29643597
Love ya too. See you all next week!
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