Princess Applejack

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First for best pony!

You know who.

>>29495142
...this is actually more clever because you missed it.

>>29495139
>>29495142
>>29495143
Jesus that speed

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>>29495153
I'm not too sure bout that, anyway I did a thing! Should we do something with this random something?

>>29495142
Shouldn't have stopped for the marchmalleys!

>>29495192
I thought that was war AJ for a second, now I'm just intrigued.

>>29495192
Evil pegasus? I'm listening.

>>29495153
Wait, nvrmnd, I got it now!

Blue-42 Hike!

>>29495192
Who is this supposed to be? She kind of looks like a saddle Arabian with wings.

>>29495192
Whoever it is, INTO THE WIKI IT GOES!

>>29495192
>Trottingham captain

First thing I thought of

>>29495253
HOLY SHIT YES

Unless he had an idea for her besides that. But seriously, look at that face, is that not a chilling fucking face that makes you reconsider your entire life up to this point?

But inside, she's terrified. That's hilarious.

...yes I know what that sounds like, but please don't point out that other character, you will set the poor boy off.

>>29495206
>>29495208
Well...
>>29495228
Close!

I was doodling when one of my favorite Sting songs came on. I put Desert Rose on repeat for a bit and this popped out of my pencil. I'm thinking Psudo-Egyptian themed, maybe giving us an excuse to do something with the Saddle Arabians.

>>29495253
...How?

>>29495274
Trottingham's Strongest Mare.

>>29495274
No idea what you mean, anon!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Les3UZaI1gs

>>29495277
>...How?
Haven't you been reading the story?

And I guess he thought of it because the armor looks kinda like a guards armor?

>>29495274
Her being tall adds to it too.

That said, I always prefer world building when it gets right down to it, so I would go with>>29495277 idea so we can explore them.

>>29495303
I have been, it just the eyes alone should throw Trottingham of all places out the freaking window.

>>29495331
>I have been, it just the eyes alone should throw Trottingham of all places out the freaking window.

....wait why?

Trottingham is the one who's causing everyone to piss themselves because she's not saying a word and just staring at them. The eyes are why I thought of it at all.

>>29495331
Schmoe, be honest, have you been skipping the Pommel stuff? Or did you mix up Trottingham with one of the other captains?

>>29495345
... I wonder if this is what it this is what my mom felt like when explaining things to me as a child... Mom I'm sorry for being a pain.

The make up /pa/l-o-mine, the make up is clearly Egyptian themed with the whole Eye of Ra motif going on.

How would that translate to Trottingham, a pseudo Caucasian themed pony settlement?

>>29495383
I only did it once, and I went back and read it afterwords once it appeared he'd be sticking around for a while instead of fading into the ether.

>>29495436
Damn tablet, why do you fail me!?

>>29495436
>The make up /pa/l-o-mine,

Oh, thought you meant the stare or something.

Don't have an answer to that, just saw that intensity and her being so tall and thought 'damn that would be scary... say!' I mean I guess we could stretch it so that she actually is Saddle Arabian and the gag at the end is everybody is being racist because she's a foreigner, changeling included but it was just a musing.

>>29495436
>I only did it once,

I meant the recent captain meeting stories, not the whole adventure. They're a treat.

>>29495486
I'm working in the Elton John pony that is the Las Pegasus, so of course I'm reading it. Are... Are you not reading my artistic musings!?

>>29495436
Wait, that's make up? Not a mask? Dammit, that nose dangly thing they wear is throwing me off.

>>29495496
Er... yes! That! Totally that! And it has nothing to do with me forgetting that little detail. I'm just ignoring! Yep! Way better!

Fuck

>>29495476
AND YOU!!!... Ok fine, I guess I made the eyes a bit too much, but that was the desire, a piercing gaze. The fact that it took the focus off the snake earings, the eye make up, the cobra booties etc... just means I did a good enough job on the eyes to completely distract someone from seeing the rest of the big picture... D-damn I'm good?

I'm crying on the inside... Design a new potential villain and instantly they want to make her cute by being scary on the outside and worse than S1 Flutters on the inside. All the sadness Yep... D-damn I'm good...

>>29495531
Awww, don't be like that, it's just recent enough I thought of it. We can still do desert evil pony! We can! And she can have a little snake minion she punches when he messes up and everything!

You want her to punch the snake, Schmoe?

>>29495531
I'll be honest, I didn't recognize that those things next to her ears were supposed to be snakes until you said it, I just thought that was really nicely designed armor.

And clearly, your many times drawing Two have tainted you on the inside, even your scary guys now we want to cuddle

>>29495549
Can... Can it be a dingus Jackal-Diamond Dog named Nubi?

>>29495568
Sure, buddy, sure.

And we'll get you some hot coco.

>>29495564
>And clearly, your many times drawing Two have tainted you on the inside, even your scary guys now we want to cuddle

I'll get to work on Cuppie the Street Urchin then... apparently I'm done as an artist of serious images.

>>29495531
>guess I made the eyes a bit too much,

Considering his first thought was apparently "Oh shit that gaze would make me shit myself" i'd say you nailed it.

>>29495502
It would look better from a side angle, also colors would help quite a bit.

>>29495511
Mhm...

>AJ
"Celestia"
~~

>Tia? Gotta question.

"And I'll have you know I was feeling love before you came up. Love. LOVE! I felt love in my heart and it made all things feel wonderful, but now everything is terrible and you should feel terrible."

>Ah' don't.

"That makes sense, you having no heart and all."

>Ah' do, and it beats like an apple grows.

"So, slowly, and only when it devours the remains of dead things."

>Pretty much. But mah' question is, what are the weapons the pegasi currently have?

"Beg pardon?"

>The Pegasi, what do they use to attack someone?

"Their hooves? Or wings, did you know they could cut stuff with wings? It's pretty cool."

>Is that it?

"Yes?"

>So if say, a dragon arrived-

"They'd try and cut it with their wings."

>So let me get this straight, your strategy for your pegasi, something that can move in a complete three hundred and sixty directions, iffin' mah' fancy math holds, something that can fly in every which way and up, in order to deal with any kind of threat what your battle strategy is to 'hit it with their hooves real hard'.

"Or wings!"

>Seriously?

"I never claimed to be a war tactician."

>Did you ever hire someone to be one?

"Uh-"

>DANG IT!

"I'm sorry!"

>Our fliers are literally charging dang dragons with hopes and dreams and it's all your fault!

"NO HEART, APPLEJACK!"

JUMP!
CRACK!

>And Ah' drained yer' pool!

"NO! HEART!"

>>29495575
>Cuppie the Street Urchin
Schmoe no!

>>29495626
Battle saddles don't work, AJ! They just don't!

Pegasi don't give the forward thrust moment of need it to compensate for firing a shot in mid air! Logic just isn't there!

>>29495642
I'm alright, really, just a little annoyed and I'm slightly immature at the best of times, this is not one of those times but its not the worst its been. HAH!

In all seriousness I just wanted you guys to look at this and see if you guys wanted to actually consider using it.

If so, I'd actually work on it instead of presenting a drawing that took me 10 minutes at most to do. If not, I'd just file it away for my own use, no harm done.

So until I get a solid yes, this Scarily-Cuddleable Mare is just an idea without even a name of her own.

>>29495690
I dunno, I'd consider doing something with it, but I don't want to fracture the plot anymore than it already is. If there is a good opening, I might look into it, thanks for sharing all the same!

>>29495701
fracture the plot he says, we only follow the show loosely now a days. I mean we haven't even done anything with Glimmer and we should have seen here once already.

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Pinkie Preview Prophecies

>Applejack is going to jack that.
>Pinkie chase after an ice cream cart.
>Rainbow Dash's mind is telling her no, but her body is having the urge.
>This isn't even Barry Punch's final form.
>Derpy feels a little cross-eyed.
>Blueblood has a princely moment...but still hates going to the Cowrean dry cleaners.
>Scootaloo lives up to her name.
>skin-tight fanservice!

I made DT chase after an ice cream cart, Cadence chase after an ice cream cart, and now it's Pinkie's turn. THE SET MUST BE COMPLETE!

>>29495733
Meant fracture as in send off characters in new side missions or the like, like having Twilight or Dash go over to Saddle Arabia to meet her, or send AJ off on a mini arc when Sunset is ramping up again. If there's a calm moment, like with the inevitably fun-arc that's going to follow this one, I'll see if there's a way to introduce her and do something with her, but obviously plans change.

>>29495685
You're only right to a certain degree Anon, Battle Saddles don't work on Pegasai and are redundant on Unicorns.

The fact is battle saddles are only effective with earth ponies and should be a Two-Pony job to operate. One to wear the saddle and the weaponry attached too it, and the other to operate it.

A Unicorn doesn't even need a battle saddle cause magic... well unless they're completely worthless in combat, then you send them along as operator/technicians for the battle saddles and their armaments.

Pegasai should stick to low recoild or recoilless weaponry. Auto-Crossbows would work best and can fire a wide variety of specialized bolts for various purposes...

Sorry, I nerded out a bit there, I've been giving pony combat a lot of thought over the years.

>>29495761
Actually, I was going to suggest we send Celestia out as the main focus. I want her to be bad enough to get Celestia off her beautiful white rump and out and about.

We could also get the Sun-Terrorist back into the picture for a bit, either seriously or comically.

>>29495736
>I made DT chase after an ice cream cart, Cadence chase after an ice cream cart, and now it's Pinkie's turn. THE SET MUST BE COMPLETE

Cue the one time we don't get unlocked.

>>29495828
Might be interesting, but why would she investigate a Saddle Arabian affair? Aren't both their countries on thin ice with each other?

>>29495894
Might be an Olive Brach affair. Because you know ponies have to solve everything around here.

>>29495894

Actually I have this half formed idea about this mare leading a cult of Saddle Arabian Uni's and they're going to use ancient and powerful magics in contrast to everyone going technological, to try and steal control of the Sun.

So Celesta being the one to deal with a would be usurper seems perfectly sound.

>SA
"AJ"
~~~
"Are these chaps tight on me?"

>And there's the loaded question, everyone! Put your hoof on this shiny trigger, what could possibly go wrong?

"Ah'm serious."

>That you think I'm not shows you might not know me as well as you think you do.

"Ah' don't mean in that way, ya' dang perv!"

>Says the mare shaking her flank in my face.

"What Ah' mean is... uh..."

>Heeere it comes.

"Ah' just wanna know if, ya' know...smsmsm."

>Beg pardon?

"If it'smsms."

>...What?

"If it's fat, okay!? Is it.. jiggly?"

>Hmm...

SLAP!

"YOU! DID! NOT!... ENJOY YER' TRIP TO THE MOON, APPLEBUCKIN' STYLE-"

>Yes.

"...w-what?"

>Yes, it's jiggling, a lot. So...

"Oh mah' stars."

>It's not muscle.

"Oh. Mah. Stars."

>It's fa-

"Don't say it!"

>It's fa-

"Don't!"

>...it's nothing you can't handle.

"DO-oh. Wait, that one's nice. Ya' think so?"

>I know so. You want to go for a run? I always do some rounds, keeps the dad-bod from forming. You can join me, it'll be fun! Trust me, burns off things you didn't know could burn.

"...Ah'd like that.... But Ah'm still gonna buck you to the moon-"

>No you're not.

"Oh yeah? Call mah' bluff-"

SLAP!

"..."

>And I'm not on the moon. Why? Because you just saw the reflection in the mirror, didn't you?

"...yer' dang lucky you timed that right."

>You want to talk, or do you want to feel some burning?

"...first one ta' lap the castle gets chocolate."

>Kind of defeating the purpose-

"Thenyoudon'tcareifAh'takethelead!"

>OH NO YOU DO NOT!

"Ha ha! Run Shiny run!"

>Apppleejaaacckk!

"GAH!"
ZOOM!
>...Was it something I said?

"NNnnnoooo..."

>At least she's burning off calories...

>>29496067
I don't know how to feel about this...

>>29496067
Why must you make me feel things, anon!?

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>>29496067
>SLAP!

http://vocaroo.com/i/s1DbbMny5wmD

>>29496234
That jingle is familiar, but sadly I can't place the tune, so the joke is lost on me.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f_WNnHQXsfw

Watch a few of these and you'll understand the meme.

>>29496067
I'd say he should stick to only slapping his wife on the ass, but I understand you don't want to break his leg

>>29496502
Yeah, then he'd have to go behind the castle and off himself with the stick.

>>29496557
Man, walking back there going to be hard enough, you really going to make him of himself too, give him a break.

>>29496663
What is Teleportation?

>>29496057
OK, say we do this, what's to stop Celestia from just simply Sunny-Disintegrating her? You know besides morals or whatever? Celestial out classes most mortal beings as is, broken ass Changeling Queens not included, though that was more what she could safely use in a populated area full of her citizens than being unable to.

A potentially magically empowered Pegasus should be child's play, right?

>>29497107
What if we have her powers focused on maintaining control over the sun gradually taking more and more effort until she left at the same level of strength as her foe? Then it will be a battle of equal strength. Plus you can have her go with the Guards, let them actually do something besides trying to keep their crumbling city from crumbling further?

>Draw a Saddle Arabian
>Say she's from Trottingham
>Make an Arab-expy a native of Middle England-expy

Well at least we're being true to real life

>>29495192
I, for one, welcome our new Guardsmare with the horribly intimidating glare of death and look forward to writing stories about her.

King Engine, ho!

NC
>Evo Corp Employee
“ECE2”
~~~~

>Okay seriously that glowing is worrying me-

“It’ll be fiiiiine.”

>We could all explode or die or worse-

“Fiiiiiine.”

>Or we get vaporized like a character we don’t know-

“Fiiiiiiiiiiiiine.”

>…

“Fine.”

>…You are really assuring.

“Well I am a psychiatrist.

NC
>FS
“???”
‘???’
~~~~

>And welcome everyone to another episode of Fantastically Fixing Friendships, Featuring Fluttershy. It’s during this time content doesn’t matter, but you do, all of you do. Our next guests are a pair rarely seen apart, but might just split. Please welcome Roseluck and Flower Wishes.

“There’s nothing to talk about, she wants to ‘branch out’, whatever!”

‘Yep! Nothing to say! I’m not stagnating in the ground because she wants to overshadow me!’

>It sounds like you both have something you want off your chest.

“No, it’s fine! Screw me over on Harvest Season!”

‘Yeah, because it’s not like if I want to establish myself, I need to actually go harvest my own supply and sell it!’

“Right, and you pick now to tell me! When it’s too late to hire any help!”

‘I didn’t even decide until yesterday!’

>But you were considering it, right?

'I have for a while.’

>Wouldn’t it have been fair to include her in that? Tell her you were thinking about it? That lets her prepare if you make either choice.

‘I guess… but it’s been really hard on me.’

“Oh, poor you!’

>Do you think one of the reasons she didn’t ask you is that you’re being very confrontational, and not very supportive? It seems like you don’t want her to succeed.

“Of course I do. It’s just… I can’t believe she wouldn’t tell me.”

‘Roseluck, I just didn’t want you to hate me for leaving.’

“Are you leaving town?”

‘Well no, I’ll be across the street.’

‘Then why would I want to stop you? You’ve always been good at it, you deserve a chance to prove it.”

‘I guess I was being silly.’

“And I guess I over reacted and didn’t make it better.”

‘I’m sorry.’

“Me too. Still a trio?”

‘Always.’

>It’s so nice when friends can come together… andthengohaveraginggoodbyesexthatwrecksthebed

“What?”

‘I said that’s all the time we have today. As always, stay kind.

>>29498236
So damn chill.

>>29498490
Looks more hot and randy to me.

>SA
"AJ"
~~~

"The missus still leaving you high and dry?"

>As a bone. Apparently she doesn't want me anywhere near ontop of her. She claims babyfear.

"What about her bein' on top? Or do ya' gotta problem with that?"

>This may surprise you, but no. However, she says it's too much work.

"What about her bein' on top and you do all the work?"

>Again, she claims no. She thinks my grip will slip.

"Would it?"

>It would not, I would hold on for dear loving.

"What about, ya' know, spasms?

>Trained to handle them.

"HAW! If that's what you want ta' call it. Thoooough."

>Though?

"Can't she just give a little, ya' know, milking attention?"

>HA HA HAAAA!

"Not a fan?"

>Not a fan.

"Dang, that sucks. Do you-"

>Plenty. Love doing it, in fact, she loves it.

"See, now Ah'd at least reciprocate there, that's not fair."

>I'll admit, I'd rather not press the matter.

"Well that was obvious!'

>Walked right into that one.

"Unlike her!"

>Ohhhh.

"...ya'll think it's weird we can talk about this now? A year ago Ah'd be redder than an apple iffin' Ah' tried to talk about it."

>At some point, I just found discussing sex with you way too easy.

"Should we question it?"

>Sure.

"..."

>...Well?

"Mah' apple smoothie needs a refill."

>Bingo. Anything else?

"Tell her it's made of candy."

>She'd bite down.

"Best ten seconds of yer' life, guaranteed."

>...having trouble arguing that.

"HAW!"

>I'm noticing a patter with the mares I hang out with....

>>29499461
L E W D

>>29499461
Now that is weirdly chill and randy.

>>29499461
>"Dang, that sucks. Do you-"
>>Plenty. Love doing it, in fact, she loves it.
>"See, now Ah'd at least reciprocate there, that's not fair."

Wait, I thought Cadence was still averse to sex in any and all forms?

>>29499708
I assume he meant either on the two rare times he actually did it, or back before they were married when she was a sex-fairy.

Seriously, apparently she and Shiny used to bang ALL THE TIME before they got married, they even made a sex-tape that broke 42, but after marriage it suddenly stopped. Apparently in that time, he used to enjoy some cotton candy, but she never tasted the cremesicle.

>>29499743
>they even made a sex-tape that broke 42
???
>but after marriage it suddenly stopped
but why???

>>29499743
It also the reason they got banned from the Gala, or at least our joking reason why they didn't exist before they existed. Apparently they got drunk and tried to have sex right there.

>>29499743
Cotton candy seems more a Pinkie ting, I'd go with some strawberry sherbet

>>29499756
>>they even made a sex-tape that broke 42

Ta daaa http://desuarchive.org/mlp/thread/17077404/#17125905

>but after marriage it suddenly stopped
No idea, but they were always vanilla in sex. They did it plenty but they never did anything too weird.

>>29499805
>{...So, just so we're all clear, we can in fact at last confirm it was Chrysalis who was bad in bed.}

This made me happy

>>29499976
Well, obviously she's bad in bed. She was a virgin.

>>29500020
>She was a virgin.
I keep forgetting that fact, since I keep forgetting none of the changelings in her hive are her own.

So, in the end, Chrysalis is essentially that one whiny 13 year old who brags about having sex with the hottest girls three times a day we all have come across in our lives.

Feels good, doesn't it?

>Celestia
"Twilight'
~~~

>My most faithful student! How is everything coming along over here?

"I've set the entire laboratory on fire."

>...and this is-

"This is amazing."

>...I see?

"No, seriously, they've completely revitalized the use of firemagic in the spellcasters book, this new theory could lead to us recreating Starswirl's legendary Spire-Melting-Flame! Named so because of the legend surrounding it that he once used it to destroy a grander weather spire, and melt it to the ground! All by accident, of course."

>...

"Princess?"

>You um... you can stop trying to recreate that spell.

"I don't... what?"

>It's... not a spell. And Starswirl never did that, kind soul he was.

"So then it never happened? I guess you'd know."

>It happened... but it wasn't a spell.

"What? Then what was it?"

>........a... 'misused' weather rod........

"..."

>...

"...I'm going to let them dream, and while that happens, I'm going to take a nice, long shower..."

>It doesn't make the shame go away.

"But it hides the tears so well."

>...I've taught you all I know.

>>29500134
Brilliant.

>>29497482
>let them actually do something besides trying to keep their crumbling city from crumbling further?

Do the guards even bother with anything anymore? I mean, nothing happens. Crime was already in the minimal range before this, and now that they've got robots it's not like they're going to fight a lot of ponies. The city isn't that bad off anymore, and hasn't been for a while.

>>29500428
>Guard 1
"Guard 2"
~~~~

>Is there anything to report?

"A child stole a candy bar."

>BREAKING FUCKING NEWS!

"Right? Worst crime wave to hit this city since the great litterbug of last month."

>Will the horror ever end!?

"This is why the city needs us. This is why we're here. This is why we are... Equestria's Finest."

>Damn straight.

"..."

>...Did you bring the booze?

"My peacetrotter caught on and replaced it with applejuice."

>NARC

>Stormy Flare
"Spitfire"
~~~~

>Sweetie!

"MOMMY!"

They hugged.

"What brings you down here?"

>Oh, I just wanted to see my little Itty-bitty-spitty again, you know how us old mares get sometimes.

"Ahaa, ahahah, if that nickname catches on, I'm blaming you."

>Feel free! And then send whoever said it to you over to me, I'll deal with them. With cookies!

"..."

>The cookies will have-

"I can imagine."

>Then I've trained you right.

"Well, I'm glad to see you again, we never get to talk anymore."

>Too true! So, do you have a special someone I should meet?

"What? No, why would you... oh dang it mom."

>I want grandbabies!

"And I don't want to get knocked up."

>Are you even looking? Surely you've met someone.

"I have not."

>I'm getting older, sweetie, and you're getting older, and something is going to break!

"I'm not dating anyone, mom!"

>...I'll accept-

"Don't."

>I will absolutely accept-

"Don't!"

>...

"..."

>...I will absolutely accept Spike if-

"I'M NOT DATING SHINING A-wait, Spike?"

>Yes? He seems nice, has a steady military job, and those funny little radio hosts say he's single, so...

"...wow. No. That's... stomach churning. He's like, yay high?"

>Isn't that normal for dragons?

"I... don't... know. But no, I'm like ninety nine percent sure we can't crossbreed. You're shooting yourself in the hoof here"

>Darn. I'll drop that.

"Phew."

>...but anyone else doesn't seem so bad now, does it-

"DAMN IT MOM!"

>>29500945
Ha ha! It's funny because someone was actually planning to do that.

>>29501103
Realistically, and I said it only slightly sarcastically, if we did want to bring back the Harem for him who would we even include?

>>29501134
Everyone not already in Shining's, I'd say.

Except AJ. Boss bitch like her only needs one stud to make the perfect power-couple.

>>29501152
>Everyone not already in Shining's, I'd say.

Plus Twilight, we have to append. Who though we occasionally like to make a joke of, have firmly established it's not... creepy!

>>29501152
>Except AJ

Why did you add that? You already said everyone already not in Shinings.

obnoxiouswink

>>29501152
>Everyone not already in Shining's, I'd say.

So that leaves, what, his mom?

I kid I kid...

>>29500428
What I mean by
> trying to keep their crumbling city from crumbling further?
Is that they can only react to a danger already causing damage to the city. If they go with Celestia it might give them that extra bit of kick to turn them into the steadfast Guards they should try to be.

>>29501152
>>>29501134 #
>Everyone not already in Shining's, I'd say.

The pool is way thinner than that. The griffons are out of the question, there is not a chance in hell that we can match the Ghostbusters development this late in the game, Pj has her boys, Arana likes Blueblood better, The married/engaged ones are out of bounds, and most of Ponyville is an unknown to him.

Who is actually left, outside of the main four?(Since AJ and Twi are out, obviously.)

>>29501260
Clearly, he needs to sway Lightning Dust to the path of good to get Dashs job back!

With his dick!

And then Dash will be so appreciative that she won't mind if LD finally works out that tension, so long as Spike gets to join in.

So damn cash

>Chrysalis
“Changeling’
~~~

>Stop.

“But I-‘

>Stop. I don’t want to hear it. I don’t want to know.

“It’s really interesting-“

>And I don’t want to know about it.

“Really, it’s pretty cool-“

>Don’t. Want. To. Know.

The changeling let out a huff of indignation, adjusted his fuzzy gloves, hiked up his suspenders, made sure his bow tie was straight, and with a tip of his baseball cap he waddled out the door on big red floppy shoes, his pure white nose pointed up to the sky in a dignified strut.

>…what the fuck is Maretonia even like?

>>29501401
...wait.

Was that Pinkies costume!?

>>29501401
It feels like the Lings are starting to actively try and piss Chrysalis off, just to see how far she'll let them go...

Oh my god! They are past yheir moronic, testosterone fuelled adolescencr and are finally reaching the rebellious phase!

>Cadence
“AJ”
~~~

“Still wanna do something whacky with me?”

>HA. HA. HAAAAA.

“Ah’ thought so.”

>Never get pregnant. This is awful. This is the worst. This is what Tartarus is.

“That saying don’t make a lick of sense when Ah’ can literally walk over there and it’s not even that bad of a place.”

>It really did lose a lot of it’s bite after Celestia desensitized it. No fires at all!

“Not a whole lot of wails of the damned either.”

>Really just doesn’t feel like a near-eternal imprisonment.

“Seems more like just a concept of ‘put the badguys here’.”

>What’s even the rehabilitation training like over there?

“Does it have one? Ah’ve never heard of it. Ah’ just know it’s guarded by a big scary dog.”

>Well, surely Auntie Celestia would do something more than just put a big scary dog up there and call it a day… right?

“…”

>…Ah’ think Ah’ve got another question for her.

>>29501884
I can't tell if that last line was a mistake, or if she's mocking AJ there.

CD

~~~

excerpt taken from the holy book of the Church of the True Goddess
book found ca. 730 B.D. in a ruined temple by independent explorers
dating the age of the book has proven to be neigh impossible to this day

~~~

Once upon a time, in a magical land before Equestria...

...there was a kindhearted goddess full of compassion, who sought to bring life to all of the world. But Equus was barren and devoid of any life. To fulfill her desire, she shed her tears upon the desolate land and used her powers to create the sun to bring the the world its first dawn; when she brought out the moon to begin the first night, her tears had allowed the seeds life to blossom into living beings on their own.

Thus, the Firsts of all those who were and one day would be were created, be they blessed with hoof or claws, feet or fins.

But as time went on, other things emerged from the dreadful void of light beyond the stars. The Firsts all relished and thrived in the glorious sun- and moonlight they goddess had given them, but there were beings from before even a time Equus itself existed, who shunned and sought to destroy all the goddess had created.

One fateful day, these beings, who had once been One, came and laid devastation upon the first buds of civilization. The goddess tried to reason with them, but the beings of the Void were beyond reason. Even as separate entities, they represented nothing but despair, pain and suffering.

The goddess loved all life equally, but when she heard and felt the despair of those unable to defend themselves, she vowed that she would protect the fragile, budding flowers of life she had helped create. Reluctantly, the goddess harnessed the most powerful magic known to her and used it to defeat and seal the Horrors away, banishing them to different corners of the world.

All was well again.


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>>29502112
Yet, while her children rejoiced, the goddess grieved.

She had slain and inflicted pain where she only wanted to bring light and joy. In the wake of the Horrors and her battle with them, entire species and nations had vanished without a trace. The goddess took on responsibility for her actions, and vowed to never again directly intervene in the matters of the world again, until a time when the Horrors would return and she was needed again.

As she ascended into the the realm far beyond the reach and understanding of even the Firsts, six droplets of her blood from a wound struck upon her divine hide by one of the Horrors mingled with the trail of tears she left in her wake, creating a new form of life. A life infused with her divine essence; beings with her immortal blood in their veins, brought to life.

Two fell upon the land of ponies, taking the shape of divine sisters who would one day guide the sun and moon to create harmony in all the land. Two fell upon the devastated lands of those who were no more and absorbed their remnants. Twisted with the essence of the Horror that had wounded her, they spawned as broken, shattered and confused amalgams of Chaos and Strife that sought to oppose all the regal sisters represented.

The last two seeped deep, deep into the earth, falling into a slumber from which they could not be awakened... awaiting the day the Goddess would return, to join with her at her darkest hour.

~~~

Hoofington Valley...

~~~

Light.

Light is the first thing a living being sees the moment it is spawned into this world, shortly followed by hearing its own, shrill cry of surprise and loss as it is taken from the safe haven it had been in before. A child, mewling pathetically, unable to comprehend what it was and why it had been taken into this cold, harsh world full of bright lights and sounds.

Light.


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>>29502123

Light was the last thing those who still remained in the sprawling tunnels of the Alternative Energy Project EVO had set into motion beneath Hoofington, when the true goals of those who headed it finally came within their reach. As it came near them, they heard unearthly beautiful whispers. Their psyche eroded, their mind vanished while their soul was whisked away with the light All that remained were comatose bodies, devoid of everything that had once made them an individual.

It was an all-devouring, gentle, blue light.

Diffuse like mist, but opaque like a glass pane that had been vandalized with sand paper. It moved, coiled, twisted, crawled, like a living being. Wandering along the walls, dragging itself forwards over the ground at a breakneck speed no cart nor machine from this world could match.

The light took.

The light consumed.

The light became everything those falling prey to it knew.

Once touched by the light, they wore torn from this world that had brought the happiness, sadness, grief, love... and whisked them away to join it. To become one with eternity. To become one with divinity. To once more return to the one who had once given them life from nothing but clay and tears.

The light couldn't think, for it had no intellect.

The light couldn't be judged for its actions, for it had no understanding of morals.

The light was, and would always be.

But with each living being it touched, it began to grow. With each being that found itself caught in the inescapable vortex of of souls it was accumulating, it matured. It was becoming a being of its own, with a vague understanding of what it was supposed to be and what it needed to do.


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>>29502135

But as pure as its origin and drive may be, every being it consumed affected it, changed it and made it less an individual and more of an unorganized amalgam of souls. Souls that had known nothing but fear, sadness and loss in the last moments of their existence. Every soul cried out within it, roaring in defiance, sobbing in fear or babbling from madness. They lacked their bodies to be individuals again, and It lacked the means to make them whole again. They couldn't understand what It was, and It couldn't help them, no mater how badly It wanted them to know that they were safe at last.

But It began to realize a solution to this, muddled and diffuse as it may be.

It needed more. It needed far, far, FAR more. It needed all of them. It needed all and everything. All it had once given, all It had once created. To fight. To protect. To defend. It was the means to an end, part of a greater whole.

IT didn't know why, for IT lacked the means to know history or its own origin. All IT knew was that IT had awoken. And that meant that it was time to return. Return to the origin, return to fight once more. Return to destroy the horrid darkness that sought to snuff out all light in the universe.

So IT pressed on, uncomprehending, further and further aggravated, enraged and confused with every life IT took into ITSELF.

By the time what the souls within IT considered ITS bottom reached the native caves of the Diamond Dogs, thriving with life scrambling to escape from IT, IT merely contained seven unlucky souls.

IT would soon grow by a hundred-fold.

Then, finally, IT would be ready to break free of ITS

bed
PRISON

in the cold, silent earth and

become One with mother
KILL EVERYTHING

once more.


~~~

In the Alternative Energy Project control room...

~~~


“Sweet merciful Faust above, what is that thing...?”


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>>29502146

Two dozen sets of eyes stared openly upon the viewing screen that switched to another camera whenever the previous fell victim to the strange phenomenon they all had witnessed come into existence a little under five minutes ago.

“It... it looks like some weird sort of light, doesn't it?”

“Who cares what it is, look at what it is doing!”

Some watched, in awe, wonder and amazement. Others, with horror, disgust and revulsion. Some few averted their eyes. But none of them could ignore the reality of another one of them, a technician meant to perform some last routine checks, spotted the light, turned, tried to run and was swiftly caught within it.

The stallion screamed, eyes wide, then stiffed and fell over, white vapor seemingly pouring from his eyes and ears. His body was left unharmed, that much they could tell before the light reached the camera and short-circuited it.

“It's... it seems to be traveling along the power lines, doesn't it?”

They all turned their heads and stared at he gryphon who had spoken up.

“Wouldn't that mean it will eventually pass through here, to the generator... and then up to the surface?”

As tough as some of them claimed to be, due to a life of hardships, and as resilient as the mind control that kept some of them much more calm over the last few months may be, everyone in the room felt as if a weight had been dropped into the pit of their stomach.

“Oh no... Oh God, oh no... we... we have to contain it, don't we?”

“Forget it. The AI is still locking us out for some reason.”

“So... what can we do...?”


5 / 6

>>29502155

All of them briefly turned their heads to one-another, seeing similar insecure looks of fear and on-setting desperation. Then, they slowly turned their gazes towards the screen... to where the sprawling light washed down the corridors like a tidal wave of liquid light, passing through doors, gates and walls without even slowing down, the single, massive main trunk that traveled along the hidden power lines inlaid into the walls of the tunnels guiding it.

Only one of them spoke up. The oldest, most experienced and most rational of them all.

“We beg whatever Devil or God we have slighted for forgiveness... and hope that any mercy it grants us will be swift and painless.”

When IT reached their unexpected prison moments later, IT turned it into a tomb full of breathing, soulless bodies; a new collection of souls full of despair and regret forming another facet of ITS emerging psyche.

And if anyone would've paused and listened closely enough, instead of scrambling and screaming in abject horror, they would have heard the barest, gentle whisper of of hundreds of voices telling their life stories as they awaited to pass on into the realm beyond the reach of the living.

~~~

>>29502135
>As it came near them, they heard unearthly beautiful whispers. Their psyche eroded, their mind vanished while their soul was whisked away with the light All that remained were comatose bodies, devoid of everything that had once made them an individual.

it's getting WORSE

I KNEW THERE'D BE A FUCKING BODYCOUNT

NOW WHAT THE FUCK ARE WE GONNA DO

WE GOTTA PIVOT THE FUCKING MAIN CHARACTERS OVER TO THIS SHITE

OR WE'LL HAVE GONE OFF THE DEEP END AND ARE JUST CHUCKING PONES AT COSMIC HORRORS LIKE FOCKING CANDIES

>>29502190
I love your accent.

Talk dirty to me, you unwashed, country hick rogue~

>>29502202
If you're the one who wrote that then fuck you

>>29502211
Nay. I am not. But I am willing to think up ways to counteract or improve this situation. We all have a bit of a writer in us.

>>29502165
Yeah, see, this is what I was talking about. This comes out of nowhere, makes no sense, completely conflicts with the plans that were set up before it, contradicts several things in the lead up, would be a problem if it was the main focus, and now we've introduced a body count in a horribly mismanaged and transparent way to up the stakes. This is all something that would have to be written AROUND, not built up on.

What a mess.

>>29502165
>Hi, I know you had something going on, and my premise doesn't fit with the light as it's been used and describes up to this point, and you have this invasion thing going on, but can we just haphazardly jam in this fucking thing that came out of nowhere and make IT the main focus now?

Ha.
Noooooo.

Unless we want to retcon that everyone is suddenly now super effected by that light and undo all those confrontations with Spike and Sunset so we can focus on this.

>>29502250
>conflicts with the plans that were set up before it

I agree with you on all accounts but this stuck out

What

What plans?

What was expected of the Blues Clues glow?

It was something to do with the Heaven's Door or whatever, and I'd be happy to kick the "woogidy woogidy meesa Hermaeus Mora" eldritch fuck off back to whatever the feck.

But what is the "correct" route?

>>29502250
>This comes out of nowhere
For you, apparently.

>makes no sense
Because you don't know where this is going yet.

>completely conflicts with the plans that were set up before it
Whose plans? Yours?

>contradicts several things in the lead up
Which?

>would be a problem if it was the main focus
How so? The fact that you don't like it personally aside.

>now we've introduced a body count
We have? That's kinda news to me. And I wrote that story.

>horribly mismanaged and transparent way to up the stakes
The stakes of what exactly?

>This is all something that would have to be written AROUND
Do you even write?

>undo all those confrontations with Spike and Sunset
Nice hyperbole. let me jsut call KKKAnon so he knows his story has been retconned. No, wait. That's dumb.

>focus on this
I do believe the focus is Sunset trying to fuck over God, Chitania near death, and the A-Team waddling into something they are starting to lose control over. Oh, and maybe AJ. Or not. Depends.

>>29502165
I'm actually going to disagree with the others and say I love the idea of an all encompassing soul absorbing thing that is completely benign at heart but causing misery without meaning to, and it's written in such a way we could theoretically bring back all that it killed at the end of it so this can add in steaks without necessarily making it permanent, I love the base idea, and it could be cool, but I sadly have to agree that the execution of this introduction was mismanaged. It doesn't make sense with Sunsets plans, prior descriptions, wasn't hinted at except in The most rudimentary way in the preview story you wrote, and now it takes away from the central focus of Sunset and Chitania's plan coming to fruition. This explanation of the light was not built up or planned out at all, and it shows.

Fantastic concept, love it to death, not so great execution.

>>29502281
>>29502289
Sunsets plans!

SUNSETS PLANS

>Princess Applejack general! We really really shouldn't try to write the mythos!

>>29502300
>it takes away from the central focus of Sunset and Chitania's plan coming to fruition
You know, I do keep hearing that worry, but I seriously can't imagine how it does. Well, unless what KKKAnon has planned is abso-fucking-lutely out of left field and couldn't be predicted in any way.

>>29502311
...wow, you know Sunset's plans, down to the details! Did you read one of our writer's secret notes! Praytell, let us know!

WHAT.
EXACTLY.
IS SUNSET.
ABOUT TO DO.

>>29502332
WELL IT PROBABLY AIN'T ANYTHING TO DO WITH [CTHULLU ENTER STAGE LEFT]

>>29502338
Oh, sorry. I shall more subtly introduce unexpected events the next time someone PLANS TO PUNCH GOD IN THE FACE BECAUSE THEY DON'T AGREE WITH HER.

>>29502289
>For you, apparently.

Oh yeah no I'm sorry clearly I'm the only one who-oh wait!

>don't know where it's going
Fantastic! Still completely contradicts every detail of how this light acted up to this point, and also now is in a completely different location and doing something to others it touches it's not doing to the main characters because it was clearly pulled out of nowhere!

>Which?
How quickly it progressed(the one behind the others were so slow that they could outpace it) what it does (do I need to say it?) how it effects others (come the fuck on with this soul bullshit)


>How so?
... you want to know how dealing with this would suddenly be a problem?

>What stakes?

The one now including all expanding asspulls that absorb souls and apparently can't be stopped.

>hyperbole

How else could literally anything we've seen this glow do work? You showed doing exactly 2 things, and both of those things involved it harming people or taking their souls. I don't see how that could at all sync up with what we've seen, or are you implying that this is a completely different unrelated even more out of nowhere glow?

And yes, that's the focus!

So maybe throwing in this other new tears who made energy bullshit from no where in creating a being that absorbs the very essence of who ever it touches might have to be written around a bit, not added to!

You know what?

I openly invite anyone to improve on or correct or even work against what I have written. I wouldn't even be a slightest bit mad if you took what I wrote and turned it aroudn to suit your whims. DO SOMETHING.

If you can't, won't or don't want to, that's fine. You may go on complaining, but since there's little productive in it aside from 'I DON'T LIKE THE WAY THIS IS EXECUTED' I can't help you. I write the way I do. I try my best, it isn't perfect, but it brings me a little bit of joy.

But I don't really feel like stopping to have fun and write stuff I like because some of you feel like I stepped on your sensibilities or preferences. If ANY of you... a SINGLE one of you would have said 'Hey, this goes against what *I* have written/planned', I'd concede that it was rude and that I may need to overthink it after hearing your criticism out.

But all I currently hear is 'I don't like reading this'. And that's fine. You don't have to. Move along. You are free to do so.

You guys do this all the time. You piss all over stuff that's happening, someone writes or tries to execute, and then you wonder and whine why no one develops characters or abandons ideas mid-way.

>>29502355
So what, is she going to punch this new being? One that apparently did not exist before now because it's a soul absorbing light and if it got out before it would do what it does now?

That said, I don't write so I'm not torn. I wouldn't mind it being canon, but I think we're a bit too spoiled buildup wise. Were so used to revealing so much you can figure it out before it happens that when completely new elements come in with next to no explanation we just don't take it.

>>29502428
Well that feels kinda smug

Boiling it all down to "Oh you just don't like it"

When people have pointed out that there's a blatant fucking contradiction between what you're writing the Blue Light to do to characters compared to what it has done to them for the past.... two so threads?

Spoiler alert: No soul zapping

>You guys do this all the time. You piss all over stuff that's happening, someone writes or tries to execute, and then you wonder and whine why no one develops characters or abandons ideas mid-way.

Name 'em, archive-dive them, and I'll see your point.

>>29502377
>completely contradicts every detail of how this light acted up to this point
Are you implying I contradicted myself? In my own story? In a world full of magic and beings who can sustain themselves on a vague emotion that can only be measured by one individual in the entire world?

>How quickly it progressed
...was I too subtle in my previous stories about all the shit Sunset does? Huh.

>... you want to know how dealing with this would suddenly be a problem?
Still doubt you would deal with it by writing a story

>asspulls
Tirek wants you to know he's bored. Can he come out to play?

>And yes, that's the focus!
I'd be OK with 'the glow' not being the focus just yet, but I can make it the focus if you insist, I guess...?

>>29502440
>I wouldn't mind it being canon, but I think we're a bit too spoiled buildup wise. Were so used to revealing so much you can figure it out before it happens that when completely new elements come in with next to no explanation we just don't take it.
I know you propably won't believe me, given my previous tone in writing... but wow, you almost made me choke up.

Amen.


>>29502460
>Well that feels kinda smug
It is!

>Name 'em, archive-dive them, and I'll see your point.
I won't provide the narrative for your complaints. The fact that you actually want to talk this out almost makes me want to talk to you in person. But this is the Mongolian Mandaladrawing Board, so I guess we'll hiss and act like total dicks until one of us tires of it and goes to bed feeling like a dick for getting riled up about an internet argument.

>>29502477
>I won't provide the narrative for your complaints.

Nigga you claim that we REEE and shit all over Bold New Ideas and you're gonna have to prove that such a thing did in fact happen.

By the by, I am alright if the vocal majority votes the storys to be OUT... but then I'd propably stop writing alltogether. I don't want another writer to have to try and incorporate my ideas into something better-planned because they all ahve gotten used to his style to the point of him being the most dominant storyteller and plot-mover.

Plot, as in... main story. Not ass. That's LNPPAnon. He brings the booty. Or, well, tries to. Bless his pervy soul.

>>29502428
>but since there's little productive in it aside from 'I DON'T LIKE THE WAY THIS IS EXECUTED' I can't help you.

If that's what you hear when you read "this contradicts what the element you're using did before, it clashes with the central focus and tries to grab all the attention from the main focus, and you literally just infodropped a completely new element and expected it to fit in perfectly" then I don't know what to tell you.

We don't want you to stop or take over, and we don't mind what your future plans are, it's the now we're worried about. WE can't see what you want to do, we don't know where you're going, all we can see is the right now and judge it accordingly. If something's wrong, something's wrong, and the fact you kept firing back against it is not helping anything. We don't want you to stop, but we aren't going to not critique it. Did you not see how we tore into Apple-crazies buildup? We critique elements, it's what we do, and this is HUGE, we can't just ignore it. If you don't want critique, you're in the wrong place. That said, don't use the "have to be a cook to call out food" thing, it's bad form. But since this is effecting you so much, you know what? I'm going to stop. You have an idea, you're dedicated to it, and if this clashes, it's up to them to tell you.

>>29502460
As someone that's been here from the beginning and outside the current discussion/argument, I can say that, yes, it has happened before, people whining outer peoples idea into nothing because they don't like it. Some were justified, S-Anon trying to say that magic is all about intent and junk about the Elements of Harmony, it just rubbed people wrong. Others though, minor as they usually were were torn to pieces just because "Mmm no, fuck you. I don't like it."

>>29502487
Stuff you bashed and made siur for any writwr invokved just because you didnt like it? Off the top of my head?

Pommel's Adventure
Spike vs Pommel
everything related to Diamond Tiara
Chrysalis actually accomplishing anything
Applejack's lovelife

>>29502477
>Are you implying I contradicted myself?

...so this IS a completely new light that is in no way connected to the light that's been following our characters this whole time? It's not the one in the tower, it's not connected to the one in the tower, and it acts differently than the one in the tower?

You know what I'll take it. Sold.

>>29502500
>But since this is effecting you so much, you know what? I'm going to stop. You have an idea, you're dedicated to it, and if this clashes, it's up to them to tell you.

W-what?

Hey! Hey, wait! Where are you going? Don't leave! I want to argue some more! This gives me sustenance!

Oi! You can't just walk away! That's not what we do here on 4chan! Are you listening! Don't act like you can't read this! Heeeeeey!

...


...huh...


It's okay.


...he'll be back.

>>29502531
I'm trying to decide if I don't like that idea or not. On the one hand, it clears up every possible since it's a completely different entity from the one we all thought it was, and it's not connected in anyway shape or form to the light that we've seen so all the behavioral contradictions can be explained by it being just simply different.

...well, it would stop the debates?

>>29502543
>...well, it would stop the debates?

Why would we stop? Debated make Recap Anon a happy man. Give the poor guy some rest and let's argue some more!

>>29502519
... but all of those were finished and most of them got AMAZING stories from the critique, particularly AJ's love life and Pommel VS Spike for me personally.

>>29502531
Wow that was not made clear, but I'll take it.

Though... isn't that still "hey guys! New Cthulhu element!... cool!"

>>29502542
Alright fine, I'm back.

...you think KKA is in here? I'm worried if he is.

>>29502543
>by it being just simply different.
But this raises another problem

If it's naught to do with Sunse'ts portal...god....thing...

Then... where did it come from? Why now? Was there any lead up to this? Any discussion? Any background before all this?

Even if it's not taking-the-wheel of the OG author's blue light and making it something else I'm afriad it's still a problem,

It's an out of nowhere lore dump with an active bodycount (That I'm guessing isn';t meant to be connected to the bodycount we're going to get A-la Blackbill... somehow) that is on a direct collission course with a plot that's been at least a month in the making.

If the author wanted to make an eldritch soul sucking light monster thing, then sure! just... give it some build up, give it some place and room to breathe and get past the intial conceptual hurdles.

Don't throw it right into the path of an oncoming freight train of an arc, that's just being a daftee

t. writer who once tried to make 32 the true Keikaku of Flash Sentry's chainsaw thing in the aftermath of Chitania's first Canterlot rampage...At least I think it was then, it was set in a bombed out Canterlot then

>>29502592
I agree with this, if it IS the building light, it's doing everything brand new from how it acts to just how fast it is, and it requires this new lore we just learned not from a character, but via nameless text. Hard fit.

>>29502620
>but via nameless text

I think that's what set me off kilter with it

I read the entry part and then the actual bit and thought

"...Wait what"

>>29502575
Seriously. This has been planned out since Schmoe produced that 'Chitty in power srmor' drawing. Not built up a lot because I mostly just dropped hints and was waiting for a good point to inject it into another story without making it the main antagonist , like Cordyceps was. I tried to be subtle. I just MIGHT suck at subtle. I was told I am good at FIGHTS though.

Eh. I'll write Flash and Spike punching each other in the face next, so feel free to overanalyze that and give some insight into my writing from another perspective then.

>>29502585
>Alright fine, I'm back.
Aww. You DO love to hate me!

>...you think KKA is in here? I'm worried if he is.
To the contrary, I hope he is!

He's cool. I wish he wasn't trying so hard to be a mute recluse. I could prepare this shoddy piece of shit I call my writing g so much better if he and I were prepared for each other. Improve writing is HARD without having the audience notice the cheap seams and badly welded gaps between stories.

>>29502592
>If it's naught to do with Sunse'ts portal...god....thing...
It MAY be relevant or part of her plans, right~?

>Then... where did it come from?
The stars.

>Why now?
KKKAnon delivered a perfect stage for this part of the story.

>Was there any lead up to this?
Hints and background noise in other stories, yes.

>Any discussion?
Actually, yes! We once discussed why Hoofingtone Valely was in a crater... and someoen joked about AYYYliens. Remember? So, hey! This is coming back!

>Any background before all this?
Will be revealed in the next story parts.

>Don't throw it right into the path of an oncoming freight train of an arc
...I became part of this wonderful thread because I wanted to write together with others. Kinda fascinated me, the potential of doing so, the ideas to bounce off on.

>t. writer who once tried
It hurts when something you are invested in and enjoy doing blows up in your face or goes wrong, doesn't it...?

>>29502671
Alright, if it's brand new, I guess we'll just see where it goes.

>>29502671
>It MAY be relevant or part of her plans, right~?
Roll of the dice on how pliant the main arc is though, throw a screball with too much yaw and it derails the damn thing and no-ones happy.

>The stars.
What

>KKKAnon delivered a perfect stage for this part of the story.
Are you entirely sure that left-fielding a brand new and terrifying threat with a shit ton of force multiplyer during the onset of the most anticipated arcs in recent thread memory is a good idea?

>Hints and background noise in other stories, yes.
If there was I am having a beyond hard time reconciling them. Particularly when you started with "Third part lore dump WOO". I am not recognising a single beat of your thing apart from stuff that's come from KKA; that being "The Blue Light is bad for ponies health at some point"

>Actually, yes! We once discussed why Hoofingtone Valely was in a crater... and someoen joked about AYYYliens. Remember? So, hey! This is coming back!
Now? Of all times?

>>29502694
third party, not third part.

dumb cider

>>29502694
>Roll of the dice on how pliant the main arc is though, throw a screball with too much yaw and it derails the damn thing and no-ones happy.
I have faith in myself and my fellow writers.

>Are you entirely sure that left-fielding a brand new and terrifying threat with a shit ton of force multiplyer during the onset of the most anticipated arcs in recent thread memory is a good idea?
The alternative is an all-time low of stories-per-thread AND stories-per-day. Yes, I counted. Yes, the numbers made me sad.

>"Third part lore dump WOO"
Twilight read the entire history of Nightmare Moon and the royal sisters to us from a kinda purple-prose history book in the first five minutes of the first episode. Trust me. Bringing lore onto a story without infodumping is tough, unless you do it at a dribbling, slow, glacial pace.

>Now? Of all times?
I don't know what to say to that... should I have waited until the Flurryheart? Or maybe until the ghostbusters thing is resolved? I am unsure when a 'better' time would be.

>>29502702
>dumb cider
...am I making you drink in frustration? Now I feel bad.

>>29502720
>I am unsure when a 'better' time would be.
Not when Sunset and Chitania are entering their supposed "endgame"?

Cos it's kinda important

And I'm still not over the "Oh it's something different from what KKA wrote, totally"

Blue light, bad for your health, God's and stuff, unseen unknowable horrors and so on and so forth?

In the exact same building? The exact same timing and circumstances?

At this time of year, at this time of day, in this part of the country, LOCALISED enTIRELY in your kitchen?



I am struggling to believe you on that, at all!

>>29502585
>...you think KKA is in here? I'm worried if he is.

No, I'm not... wait. Ohhhh, nice trap, anon, you clever minx.

But yeah, I don't get involved in discussions like this. Not that I don't love to critique! I love giving some bits here and there, but never for anything serious. It's always more fun to try to figure out a way around plot holes and inconsistencies, but I understand that for a reader they're very frustrating because immersion means noticing strange irregularities to a set pattern that make what you saw before in question. I agree with his sentiment about it not fitting Sunsets plan because we haven't seen what that is yet, the possibility of reworking to make it fit is always there, don't think you have her figured out. I wouldn't be very good if you did, just yet.

Sorry, I'm rambling. I do that, likely another reason why I don't participate in discussions, I just go on and on. My point is, while I'm not going to pretend I could make everything fit, and I'm not going to rent I can make every out of nowhere action make perfect sense and make you wonder how it was ever left out in the first place, I can always promise I'll always try, so please do keep critiquing stuff like this, it helps me see when the audience needs a question answered, and what I have to plan into the big picture. Call out inconsistencies, but don't fear them. All of us, and there's quite a bit of writers here, we can make it work. See? Rambling, should have said point it out but don't fear it. Way shorter.

>>29502631
Recluse? I will have you know I was skipping through the field near my house earlier today.

And I'm normally reluctant to reveal the ending because a lot of times, it changes. But if you're really curious as to what my plans are, make a disposable email and when I get a chance I'll reveal it. No spoilers! You must swear on Twos marchmalley!

...Ah fuck, this makes sense if it's going where I think it's going.

NC
>Applejack
„Sunset“
'Chitania'
-???-
~~~

„So, what's going on?“

>They're arguing somethin' fierce in there. Ah dunno what got all riled up, but Ah heard a coffee table bein' kicked over and then some guy inna scuba suit crawled outta the vent an mumbled somethin' 'bout 'being outside the current discussion/argument' before enterin' the room.

'I sometimes wonder if the directors of this thing have completely lsot their marbles.'

“Eeeeh, I don't know. I think they're funny. Like one big, dysfunctional family who constantly fights and makes up again!”

>Ah don't mind, really. Ah met a hella wonderful folks over this, and Ah'd miss every single soul Ah've worked with iffin' this were to stop tomorrow.

-...hrm.-

“Gah!”

>Hey there, Forget-Me-Not.

-Mh.

>Y'all are worried about your future role too?”

-Mmmh hmm...-

>Really? They went an' offered y'all a bigger role? And, what'd y'all say?

-...mmmrm.-

>Ah can understand that. 's good to not accept just 'bout any offer tossed yer way just nilly-willy.

-Mh?-

>Aawww, shucks, yer a smart mare. Y'all can figure this out on your own, don't worry. But don't lemme stop ya havin' that walk outside ta think a lil'.

-...-

>Be seein' ya! *wave*

“...you've gotta be shitting me.”

'That pony really has one hell of an intense stare.'

>>29502764
You are too damn adorable KKA.

Ok quick question

You are gonna have a way to fix this, and by this I mean the god knows how many ponies etc having their soul sucked out.

Cos we already had an issue with one character being thematically needlessly being bumped off.

Now if you're dropping bodies left and right, please tell me you have a way to fix this

Otherwise I cannot support that story, I just can't, not in this thread

>>29502794
Thank you!

>>29502764
>. But if you're really curious as to what my plans are, make a disposable email and when I get a chance I'll reveal it.

*goes cross-eyed*
*turns around*

Hey guys, I am going to go where none of us has gone ever before! I am going to have a little glimpse into the mind of a madman!

If you never hear from me again... don't come looking for my body. And, by God, don't read the mad scribblings I will propably still clutch to my chest!

>Email
Eh... send it here. It's an alias. I might respond. I really need a second opinion on my plans BEFORE I write them.
[email protected]

>>29502850
Spoiler.

BIG Spoiler.

Like, I am talking MASSIVE spoiler here. Something so enormous of a spoiler, it'd ruin your everything. It's so enormous that you might-what it did is reversible.

Gotcha.

>>29502720
>Twilight read the entire history of Nightmare Moon and the royal sisters to us from a kinda purple-prose history book in the first five minutes of the first episode.

That kinda hurts your point, the lore was first introduced in a book with a voice over and that led us to wonder, "who's talking right now?" Then it flipped the standard of "Narrator" for "This is the main character, she really fucking loves books." It was a wonderful way to prepare us for the goal she had while also giving us a peek into what we would learn was a very studious character, ironically using talking in a case of show don't tell.

I get that lore building is hard to make natural, it super fucking is, but stuff like that is meant only for us, the reader, to understand a new element to the story that wasn't explained. It doesn't feel like a character is talking, it feels like the author is talking to us and telling us. Show, don't tell.

>>29502924
Great! I'll have it sent tonight when I get the chance.

So. To put a bottomline onto the recent discussions we just had:

What caused the debate?
and
What did we accomplish?

>>29502764
... b-butters?

>>29502943
Food for thought. I will work on this. Penned. Noted. Appreciated.

>>29503005
>What caused the debate?

A new element introduced that did not clarify itself separate from a very similar element in the story that caused a lot of plot holes with previous behavior and would lead to massive changes in the plot focus from a more anticipated area to a brand new one that hinged on an infodump, and the author feeling more personally attacked as it seemed this was focused primarily on him and his writing rather than the issues due to how the responses were worded.

>What did we accomplish
The author saw the issues, clarified, and previously separate authors will work more closely for a better coherance than one guy trying to work in stuff tossed in out of left field in a much more detailed plan.

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>>29503070
Thank you.

That's all for today.

Now go out and hug Two or something to vent all that pent-up aggression, everyone.

>>29501884
>AJ
“Celestia”
~~~~

>Hey, Tia? Gotta question.

“Yes, you would hate being pregnant, no matter what you think otherwise.”

>That clearly ain’t…

“…”

>…Ya’ think so?

“You’d hate it.”

>Ah’ don’t know, Ah’ always did want a big family.

“Hate it.”

>It’s just kinda run in mah’ line, Ah’ guess. We like big families. Shoot, Ah’d probably have about three more brothers or sisters if… why do Ah’ gotta make mah’self cry in the inside like that.

“Haaaate it.”

>Ah’d obviously only start with one, get a feel for it, but Ah’ think ah’d be a pretty good-

“You’d hate and resent and neglect and then create a new supervillain, one hundred percent.”

>Ah’… Ah’ just saw Applebloom-

“Before or after she went on a city-threatening rampage?”

>…

“Now multiply that by ‘mother’ instead of ‘big sister.’”

>…oh.

“Yeah.”

>Ah’… Ah’ guess Ah’ should think a little harder about it.

“Little bit!”

>Really should examine mah’ choices, yeah.

“Yeah! I’d say!’

>Ah’ mean, it’s not like Ah’ was plannin’ anytime soon-

“And now it’ll be later, because you’re smarter.”

>…thanks Celly.

“Anytime.”

>…Well, guess Ah’ll go now. This got awkward.

“Best be off!”

>Bye.

“Bye… phew, managed to-“

>WAIT A DANG MINUTE!

“SHIT!”

>>29503221
Just have to have a top-tier dad.

...so for sure not Spike. The kid would go through their dark face and he would think, you know what this kid has a point

>Worker
“Worker 2’
~~~

>…So is Miss Pinkie ever coming back to check on the construction of Partyland 2? I think we’re almost done.

“If she ever stops sucking the prince’s dick.”

>WHOA!

“We’re all thinking it, I’m just the one with the guts to say it! Nobody could get taxation like this and be willing to let her build another one of these PR nightmares if she wasn’t chugging his stallion gravy like it was an all you can eat buffet, and the buffet is DICK!”

>It’s just rude is all.

“I’m not knocking her, she pulled it off, but let’s not kid ourselves here.”

>Damn dude…

“...she’s actually probably just throwing a party.”

>THANK YOU!

>>29502764
>>29502924
I want in on this too if you don't mind, wanna get back in muh action groove and this is what I was waiting for to get it, I'll keep from clashing this way.

>>29503731
Whoops,
rhymecatATmailinatorDOTcom

>>29502924
Annnd, finally sent. Get your reading glasses.

>>29503739
You too.

No. Spoilers. Don't even reply with a spoiler, just tell me and I'll make another dead-email if you want to send it back, this ones about to expire.

>>29503972
Damn dude...

>SA
"AJ"
~~~

>...

"...'

>...Why are you looking me-

"HUG YOUR CHILD!"

>Okay.

POP!

~SHINY!~

HUGS!

"..."

>Are you going to question it?

"No."

>Good mare.

>>29503269
One of the rules of this series, anytime somebody becomes a dad, they are amazing at it.p

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Figured I should finally scan this one, much better than the one taken by my tablet. Having some trouble finding some of the other ones though... mhm.

Might do a small dump tonight, who knows.

>>29504836
Maybe too good, we can see the writing on the back of that.

>>29504856
Not the first time I've drawn on paperwork actually, funnily enough its oddly fitting.

>>29504888
.., it is clever when you think about it.

>>29504912
To be completely honest with you though...I had already finished inking it and everything when I realized I had done it on paperwork instead of printer paper like normally do.

Found the short haired Chitty, cant seem to find the longer floofy haired though.

Do you guys think you'd be interested in seeing some of the scraps?

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>>29505005
whoops

>>29505005
Sure
>No floofy Chitty

You've dashed my hopes quite expertly.

>>29505005
>Do you guys think you'd be interested in seeing some of the scraps?

Sleep is calling me, but I'd be happy to wake up to a bunch of new art!

>>29505005
>Do you guys think you'd be interested in seeing some of the scraps?

Is it stuff we haven't seen yet? If so then obviously.

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>>29505104
Alright, mind you some of these might... make you a bit peeved, as they are glimpses into things that... haven't been completed yet. Some are old but some are relatively new.

Here is the very first image of Alterjack, she popped up while I was just style experimenting, I find it funny in hind sight that she's standing next to a doopy looking AJ.

>>29505233
Hi, you got the stare down right away and what the fuck is that

What is your do and why is God crying

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>>29505233

Here is the second that went into her more refined conception. And here you see that not only does she have a vest... shes also got some pants, that haven't been shown in another image before and shoes that will never be added in at all.

>>29505243
Yes I did, its actually what kinda spiraled the entire thing and wtf is what?

>>29505253
>Aj
>In pants
Some things were not made to be hidden from the world

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>>29505029
Found it, it ended up in another pile.

>>29505233
>>29505253
Funny thing about these is that these are the only two I did before making the one that introduced her to you all. The one with them glaring at one another.

>>29505271
Alterjack is weird like that.

>>29505279
I guess you were like, this Pony will have exactly one look, and I have nailed it.

Awesome, awesome, I got my better definition floof

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>>29505281
Technically it was all I needed since she was meant to be the stern, relatively cold version of our AJ that was just going to be very disproving of everything.

Now here we have one of the first solid incarnations of Chitty's Momma, the original sadly was lost to a "Cat"astrophic Coffee spillage a long time ago, but it wasn't much, just some fiddling with the facial structure then.

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>>29505298
Here is the second one, its was more or less me trying to finalize her scars, armor and such-n-such. I had the bobbles on the crown removed when I thought it would look better if it was kind of like how Aurelia's was.

>>29505298
>>29505309
>>29505309
The second one makes it look like her horn is broken, which is actually kind of cool

>>29505298
Damn, she would look impressive all on her own, even without the history.

>>29505298
I'm kind of sad we never really got a whole lot of her.

I wonder what she would think of Sunset...

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>>29505312
I guess? I mean I already had the horn I wanted done in the other one, >>29505298, and it would have just been in the way when I was figuring out the crown here so I left it out. Though as of now, I think the mention of broken horns would be a trigger considering the movie.

Now here he have some side by side of Momsie and Chrysalis. I just did this so I could show the similarities between them, but it was never posted.

>>29505253
>"Ah've got one mode, pissed off. You don't like that? That pisses me off!"

>>29505334
Holy shit her crown is huge

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>>29505335
Ha! Yes.

>>29505339
It actually is, it wasn't added right in this picture, but if you look at the original one for her, you'll see its quite large.

Here we have the first concept for Chitty's new armor, its actually the only concept, all other changes were made on the fly during the drawing that her new armor was introduced.

>>29505358
Can't wait until we finally see that in story.

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This one... well this one was more for me than anything else. I've always felt like... one of the parents of Chitty. While I never wrote a word for her that wasn't only meant to be a cute/funny one off. I did give to her, her image. So during everything that's happened since and up till just after Rarity's colossal fuck up, I've kept track of the damage that's been healed over and forgotten. I wanted a reminder of how much she's been hurt through all this so I did... this.

>>29505371
Damn, dude.

And now I am remembering that behind that close mouth, there is a charbroil esophagus...

>>29505371
Jesus fuck her damage count is higher than Chrysalis!

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>>29505378
>>29505392
Mhm, I really couldn't finish it after a point.

Here was a planned update on The Bitch, but I just don't like her enough to finish it. I just couldn't take Deidranna's voice speaking evil into my brain for that long.

>>29505399
>The Bitch
Variolus?

>>29505371
"What?,, something on my face?

>>29505419
That's my nickname for her, and I can only hear Deidranna's voice when I read her speaking, which is worse and another reason I call her that.

Ok, now we've come to a bit of a check point.

On one hand... I could show you all a few somethings... get you excited for the finished products which will be coming soonish.

On the other... it's showing you guys parts of those somethings a bit early...

Another option though, I could do a slight... Teaser so to speak for both.

>>29505432
Can't speak for everyone, but if it's a preview for something that's going to come, I'd rather see the finished project. Me personally, but living with diet that something's coming and then seeing it in all its glory is way better.

>>29505432
Save it, show it at your best.

>>29505432
Full glory, full stop.

>>29505432
I wouldn't mind a teaser so long as it doesn't show too much.

>>29505424
That something is called "EEEEEEEEEVIL~!" /pa/l-o-mine.

>>29505447
Does anyone second this agreement?

>>29505450
And there is our second, motion carried!

Skipping the "OMG!" and "THE HORROR!"... let's see... I don't think I've got much else that's specifically /pa/ related. I guess the dump is done... Hope you all enjoyed!

>>29505458
Do you really want one Anon? I'll do it just for you, an imgur link that will then be deleted asap, but you will have the burden and to make sure its not crushing... A choice.

The "OMG!" or "THE HORROR!"?

>>29505478
Nah, it's fine. They've got a point, teaser will make me hungry for more. Best to save it all for one glorious load.

That sad, I feel special, and I want you to know you made somebody happy

>>29505495
Very well, also Yay~! I did a good thing!

OH WAIT! DAMN IT!

I'm apparently full of shit... I found more... the new sketch book slipped my brain ha ha! Give me a sec...

>>29505530
I'll have to see them in the morn, it's LATE

>>29505530
>"But wait there's more!"

Thank you Billy, bless you where ever you are.

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>>29505538
You go ahead then, sleepy sleep.

>>29505547
YOU THOUGH! BILLY BLESSES YOU!

>>29505556
Hrm. Hmmm. Mmh hmmm... That picture is making my typing fingers twitch.

>>29504836
>>29505015
>>29505233
>>29505253
>>29505279
>>29505298
>>29505309
>>29505334
>>29505358
>>29505371
>>29505399
>>29505556
Lord have mercy, we could fill an entire concept art book with your designs. 'The Evolution of /pa/'.

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>>29505556
I was so excited I forgot to add a description. Here we have Queen Chitania, The God Smiter.

Don't worry though, this is a Bad End in an entirely different universe. Our Chitania isn't even close to the level of brutality that this one is, she's basically what everyone here thinks she is, The Uncaring Monster.

And here we have Sunset, if she had lost the limb and was dragged back to Canterlot before she bled out. I kind of lost steam when it was decided not to blow off a limb... so sadly incomplete.

>>29505556
Lord empress Chitania?

Chitania, Super Mide?

Kaiser Chitania?

>>29505566
Worried hype, you're numbers scare me.

>>29505574
You mean the Evolution of Schmoe, literally
from The Toilet till now!

>>29505585
Aww... I wanted this sooooo badly and its beautiful.

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Did this for obvious reasons, I'm almost fearing the chances of it being prophetic.

>>29505566
Write! WRITE!

>>29505574
Concepts, I have many, most of them just aren't for /pa/ though.

>>29505587
I love the sound of Kaiser Armor so much. I'm going to put that as the Armor Type. You are the bestest

>>29505603
I'm surprised anyone even remembered that was my first pic. And so did I /pa/l... so did I.

>>29505620
Yeah, he's doomed.

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And finally this... cause I thought it was hilarious.

>>29505630
All the Princess's Mares could not put him back together again.

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>>29505635
I just knew I would end up using this at some point...

>>29505635
Ahahaha! Is that Applejack getting caught guiltily enjoying a pear? Oh geez, her expression! She looks like you just caught eating a pony, hah!

>>29505635
There's no fixing that. No fixing.

Schmoe, you DO realize that you have the power to seriously influence the future path this story is taking through your artwork, right? Stuff like 'Sundered Shimmer' may not be happening right away, but how often did things you draw become reality or close to it? Your art gives some of us writers direction.

>>29503972
Okay. Blasted timezones... I read through it. And I ( >>29502924 ) have something to say. I'd like to put >>29503739 on board with this too, but damn, you guys and your near-paranoia with the disposable email addresses...

>>29505749
I think he does know though, a picture is worth a thousand words, right? What better way to convince everyone your idea has merit than with an image? Alterjack was nearly suggested on the spot if I remember right, with only a cryptic I have an idea just a bit before. Then blam! And if >>29505233 is anything to go by, she happened by random chance. I honestly wouldn't be surprised if he did all that in the same day.

Good morning thre-
>All that art
Nyomygawd...

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>>29505957
Yeah, we've been very... busy.

>>29502748
I asked this question last night hoping for an answer and still didn't get any

I am worry

>>29505987
I guess him and the others are still talking

>>29505976
Its unreal

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Non-Canon
>Pinkie
"Cadence"
'DT'
[RD]
{Fluttershy}
=Twi=
+???+
~~~~
>Welcome to Not Late Night /pa/ with your hosts the Pink Pony Club! It's during this time that content does matter, but you've been waiting for us!

"I'm the pretty one <3"

'I'm the grumpy one.'

>And I'm the crazy one!

>"'Now for our main segment...COPS AND ROBBERS!!!'"

Insert jet sounds as Rainbow Dash leads the formation with Twilight and Fluttershy on her sides.
[Alight ladies. You're Wonderbolts now. We're going to hit them hard and hit them fast, so keep up. I want them to feel it in the morning.]

{Oh my.}

=Ooooh if I knew we were going to do this I would have re-read famous Wonderbolt tactics.=

[Sometimes you can't do things by the book.]
They fly in on the pinks with Twilight and Fluttershy shooting lasers from their horns.
[Oh...uh pew pew pew.]

Pinkie fires flak from her party cannon as Rainbow Dash's group do their their flyby.
>Eat Flak!

"There's more of them this time! What do we do?"

'Go for the train tunnel. We can lose them there!'

The Pink Pony Club flies into the train tunnel with the Wonderbolts following suit.
>Extreme party power!
Pinkie fires her cannon and DT fires her rocket launcher hitting Twilight and Fluttershy.

{=AAAAAAAHHHHH!=}
*BOOOM*

Rainbow Dash dodges and flies through the smoke.
[To be a Wonderbolt, one must be willing to fly through the corpses of their friends.]

=WE'RE NOT DEEeeead!=

[Rest in peace.]
Machine guns pop out from under her wings.
[I'll avenge you.]
She fires
*BRRRRRRRT*
The Pink Pony Club cart begins to break apart.
*BRRRRRRRT*
Bullet shells rain down underneath RD.

>"'AHHHHHHH!'"
*BRRRRRRRT*
The cart begins to smoke and blind RD, but she continues to fire.
*KABOOOM*

[Wooohooo! Tango down!]
*CHOOO CHOOO*
[Wait what?]
Gets hit by the train.

"'Chugga chugga woot woot!'"
Pinkie and the gang are driving the train.
>Can't stop the party train!

Luna and Celestia are flying in the distance.
+If thou think thou will escape, think again.+

>>29506741
Crap, now that Six Flags theme is stuck in my head.

>>29505635
HHHNNNNGGG THAT
FACE

....Deep breath.

Ahem.
>>29504836
Into.
>>29505015
Intoo.
>>29505233
Intooo
>>29505253
Intoooo
>>29505279
Intooooo
>>29505298
Intoooooo
>>29505309
Intooooooo
>>29505334
Intoooooooo
>>29505358
Intooooooooo
>>29505371
Intoooooooooo
>>29505399
Intooooooooooo
>>29505556
INTOOOOOOOO!
>>29505585
INTOOOOOOOOO!
>>29505620
INTOOOOOOOOOOO!
>>29505635
IIIIIIIINNNNTTOOOOOOOOOOOO

THE WIKI

IT...GOOOOOOOOOOOEEEEESSSSSS!

Holy shit

>>29507851
I think Wiki Guy just came.

>SA
"2"
~~~

"Shiny? Can ya' help me with mah' homework?"

>Best dad is on the case! What can I help you with? Spelling? Math? That cursed monster... long division?

"Nah, it's history."

>Oh, I aced that hard in my day, this will be a snap!

"Kay. When did the great battle of the dulls to the glimmers happen?"

>...the what now?

"Ah' don't know. When was the great cold march?"

>What!?

"When did they stop usin' the crystal cutters on ponies?"

>WHAT!?

"Ya' ain't very good at this, Shiny."

>...I think I need to update some textbooks!

>>29508625
>"Kay. When did the great battle of the dulls to the glimmers happen?"

CE race war confirmed?

>AUJ
"Fluttershy"
'Luna'
~~~

>Ah' don't even know why Ah'm surprised anymore.

"Applejack... Applejack... you look silly."

'THOU LOOKS LIKE A TOOL!'

"Don't be mean. That's like, it's bad and mean, and you shouldn't do it, hug it out with me please. I just feel like we need hugs right now."

'Tooool! Like a screwdriver! Thou from now on are Applescrewdriver!'

"I could go for an Apple Screwdriver right now..."

'Ha ha! Alcohol!'

"...what?"

>Equestria's royalty, everyone!

"I'm not royalty, just stop. Stop with the... the stoppy hole. No more, pretty please."

'WE ARE!'

"No I'm not, I just said it."

'We meant the royal we!'

"Stoooop.'

>You both should have stopped a while ago.

"You're just mad we didn't share."

>>29505556
>While AUJ was away, a mining operation she put into motion before she left accidentally excavates something that was better left buried.
>CHITANIA IS AWOKEN ONCE MORE
>But when she makes her call, she finds nothing. No trace of her Sister, or her Hive, remains.
>No trace of any changeling remains.
>Her previous rage at all Queens for being backstabbing bitches is quelled, and she realizes she's truly alone in this world.
>But this is Chitania.
>She does not accept this lying down.
>If she cannot be the changeling's savior, she would be their retribution.
>So dies Queen Chitania.
>In her ashes rise KAISER CHITANIA
>All shall feel the true power of her wrath.

>>29509449
>AUJ still blames Celestia

And HOLY FUCKING SHIT SO MUCH ART

>>29509601
Right? It's so fucking amazing that there's so much to this world that it can inspire such a massive variety to an artists. Brings a tear to your eyes,

>>29508625
No! Updating Text Books to cut out history just to 'protect' innocent eyes is wrong!

>>29509804
I think he means "Update them to THIS FUCKING CENTURY"

>>29509814
...'

>Okay class! Today we're going to talk about our history, a whole nine hundred years ago!

"YAY!"

>Frozen in sadness.

"..."

>Next century! Wow we're going fast! Perpetual frozen sadness.

"..."

>Bam! We're knocking them out! Perpetual frozen sadness.

"..."

>Then, you know what, I'll just abbreviate if. PFS.

"...:"

>Double time! PFS and then PFS.

".."

>And here's the biggest turn, PFS.

"..."

>And then HOLY CRAP! PFS.

"..."

>And then just to mix it up, PFS.

"..."

>...Then we woke up.

"Okay, now we get to the good part!"

>Yes! Our robust, amazing, spectacular.. whole three years of history. Our history is about the gap between Spider-Pony movies.

"..."

>But no more living in constant despair after being enslaved!

"..."

>Things sucked.

>Applejack - Bright Mac and Pear Butter are Applejack's Parents! Old Grand Pear.
>Animatic of season 7 episode 13. Episode Showing AJ's parents. Oh my god. AJ's mom sings a new song! Episode seems to be a flashback to early in their relationship. Romeo and Juliet type story, AJ's mom admitted to her dad that she fell in love with him.

https://www.equestriadaily.com/2017/02/toy-fair-2017-my-little-pony-preview.html

REV UP THEM SUFFERINGS

>>29510139
FINALLY

THREE YEARS OF DANCING AROUND THE SUBJECT AT AN END

>>29510139
>Bright Mac and Pear Butter
>Pear Butter
>Pear
FORBIDDEN APPLE/PEAR CLAN LOVE!

>>29505635
*GASP!* It's in her blood! HOW DID YOU KNOW SCHMOE!?!?!?!?

>>29510332
OK I mostly talk about thread ghosts existing at all but even I have to admit that is super fucking creepy

>Gwendolyn
"Zephyrious"
~~~

>We should have turned around.

"And I say we were wise to stay on course."

It was going to be one of those talks.

>I've no need for these ponies on the whole, child.

"And we've no need to hide ourselves away from them, mother. If we can better the lives of the grander populace with a deal, it's always in our best interest."

>You always were a bleeding heart.

"Punch me there enough and it's bound to happen."

The Queen sighed, tilting her glass to her beak and taking a slow sip of the wine she needed more and more these days.

>We're doing just fine without them.

"Thanks to working with a pony, you should add."

>A business pony, not a royal one.

"What is a royal but a landowner with quite a lot of business ventures?"

>Someone with an inflated ego who think they're gods.

She needed an extra long drink when she saw his eyebrow begin to rise.

>Be silent.

"If only I could these days."

>The option is always there, if you'd only take it.

"Then I suppose I've no one to blame for you anger than myself, I'll have to accept the consequences."

Her flute came down, just long enough for a refill, and back to her beak it went.

"You really should cut down on that.'

>The day I take health advice from you is the day I mix in broken glass with my drinks.

"It can't be any less healthy for you in the long term."

>If you want to talk about long term, I'd think how long your beak will continue to function if you keep talking like that.

"If I must string it together and puppet my jaw to be heard, I suppose that's a fair sacrifice."

This glass didn't last nearly as long.

>Why are you doing this, really?

"I suppose I want a brighter future, is all. I've seen a lot of anger and strife and hatred, and I simply want it to end."

>You're too damn soft for this world, child.

"And perhaps you're too rigid to change with it."

Finally, the bottle was empty.

1/2

>>29510464

>...You should have brought your father, instead of me.

"I couldn't."

>And why, pray tell, is that?

Out from his regal robes, the gryphon produced salvation. Another, full bottle.

"Father always agrees with me."

She scoffed, turned up her nose at her flesh and blood, but she did not refused the offered drink.

>Is that why you didn't bring Hilda?

"Hawk above, no.... she'd have ripped your head off by now."

It had been far too long since the griffon had laughed. As bitter as it made her choke on her wine, it felt good.

"Do you suppose we're interrupting anything?"

She regarded her bottle, and she regarded her glass, and she swiftly discarded the latter.

"I hope so."

He didn't know if he should smile or scoff when she downed the whole thing.

>>29510479
>BIRB NEEDS DRINKY

>>29505796
>Alterjack was nearly suggested on the spot if I remember right, with only a cryptic I have an idea just a bit before.

Can I get a Diver on this? I could have sworn we talked about her before we saw her.

>>29510790
I've searched, and searched and searched, but I cannot find the original pictures posting. Schmoe? If you could, look up the date you saved the picture, and I'd appreciate some help locating it.

>>29505772
Awesome, just send it to captainmistake at mailinator dot com

>>29505772
Oh crap, I'm sorry for the late reply, I totally lost your reply in the sea of the massive reply storm from the arts! Just send what you're gonna send to bjnvpzgaATsharklasersDOTcom

And dude, it's 4chan, even aliases aren't safe!